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>>9551038
The fuck is with that pose?
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>>9551031
I don't usually like big roses on top of the head like that but she pulls it off pretty well.
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>>9551031
The dress looks cheap and the shoes don't match, but she's pretty...
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>>9551031
Whats the point of the second picture? Its not highlighting anything.

But we get it, youre vain
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>>9551058
You could have picked this one >>9551043
and reply the same thing. They just want a square picture, your salt is showing.
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>>9551037
This is horrible. She looks like a mess. First coord I seriously dislike.
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>>9551038
Aw, this is cute.
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>>9551031
God damn that's a pretty picture.
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>>9551037
Not sure how I feel about the big straw bow (kinda goofy), but I love this 4th of July coord, I like how it isn't as in your face as some of the other coords that were posted for the holiday.
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>>9551153
Just noticed the necklace: not a fan, it would probably do well with the JSK itself but it kinda clashes with the festive vibe.
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>>9551041
Jojo. I assume.
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>>9551058
Everyone posting photos of themselves online for other people to like and comment on is vain by default.
Sorry you're jealous that you're not as pretty as she is.
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>>9551163
ABANDON THREAD
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>>9551045
What's the name of the print she's wearing cause holy fuck I'm in love
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>>9551202
Krad Lanrete Transilvania Moonlight
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>>9551058

Well the second one is closer enough that it made me do a double take because that design on her chest now looks like some kaleidoscoped hamster face that mated with a spider, so there's that.
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>>9551038
That limp greasy wig, ew
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>>9551117
Not really, the second one is just there to make it a square for Instagram whereas the first is a close-up just because. Not that I care though, it's nice to see details.
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>>9551031
is this Claire???
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>>9551038
hahah she's cute
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>>9551040
This dress looks like a replica, on top of this being a terrible coord
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>friendly reminder to report and ignore shitposts
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>>9551678
Yeah it is

>>9551684
That's what I thought too, looks wrinkly and really short.
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>>9551041
she said she was joking in the cof post
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>>9551040
iron your replica, at least. and gdi if you're going to wear a blonde wig, at least tame those caterpillars. This looks more like a tsumugi cosplay
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>>9551742
It is from Jojo, but idk why she didn't just say it..
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>>9551032
Petticoat is a bit deflated, but otherwise it's fine. Petti is so flat it nearly looks like no petticoat at all. The clothes all go well together, though.
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>>9551038
I like her bonnet and outfit... but
- her nails don't go with her outfit, neither do her rings.
- Her wig looks limp and scruffy - needs some maintenance.
- Eye makeup could have been Gothic-er.
-What's with the pose? Not good for showing the outfit, and that's what CoF is about.
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>>9551043
Outfit matches (but I don't like the primary red and royal blue, but that's me), but that dress doesn't suit her figure.
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>>9551045
Pinks don't match, which irks me. But I like the skirt, very pretty :)
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>>9551034
This is cute, I like it. Nice use of mint and pink, and super-sweet without too many ridiculous hair things. Sauce on that parasol?
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>>9551037
If this is a 4th of July co-ord, why is she wearing an English crown rosette? I like the co-ord, but that irks me.
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>>9551032
She still needs to lose weight.
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>>9551058
People do it to balance the overall image, make it square for Instagram, or make the composition more interesting. I swear, cgl invents the most pompous nitpicks.
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>>9551032
I usually like Voldies coords more than I'd want to admit, but this looks sloppy.
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>>9551037
I think this is really cute. Color coordination is on point yet not OTT. What about it do you dislike >>9551142 ?

>>9551040
This is just plain ita.
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>>9551032
You can tell she lost weight.
She has the cutest facial features.
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>>9551990
Why are there always the same weight comments when this girl is posted? Is it some inside joke or what?
>newfag is showing, sorry
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>>9552017
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>>9552027
I'm dead serious. If I wanted to bait you, you wouldn't see it coming.
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>>9552039
ok solid snake

think of this more like a sneaking mission and lurk more, my guy
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>>9552015
she's a notorious tripfag who would get majorly defensive whenever she was criticized and derail threads
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>>9552017
A replica is basically a knockoff in lolita terms, an item (a dress, a purse, shoes, etc.) that tries to copy the exact design of a brand item and usually fails due to cheaper materials etc.
It's looked down upon for many many reasons but honestly, wearing cheap knockoffs in a luxury fashion scene is trashy.
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>>9552017
lurk more, peasant.
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>>9551040
I think this is one of babby's first coords. She has a cute face and I think she has potential, don't be so hard on her.
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>>9552090
Ooh, sounds like replica-chan is a wee bit butthurt :^) sorry you're a tacky bitch <3
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>>9552090
Experience, mostly. When replicas are discussed, it most often refers to "print replicas", which directly the unique printed fabric of lolita brands. Because the goal is to make them cheaper, the replicas often have mistakes in the print, cheaper materials, or details that don't look like the original (most often bows or lace).

This really isn't the appropriate thread for this though. If you have questions, take them to the general or help thread.
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>>9552205
Jfc stop taking the shitty bait. Sage for OT.
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>>9552207
directly *copy.
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>>9551043
I'd probably add some matching wristcuffs or a bracelet because her arms look a little bare compared to the bright socks but it's still cute as is.
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>>9551251
Getting in pink was a strange choice.
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>>9551855
Hurrdurr she looks like she has. I know you hate Voldie but her weight looks fine here.
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>>9552015
Because she used a tripcode and it buttblasted some of the more autistic members of this board where as the average user has learned to get over it and move the fuck on.
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>>9552317
I only ever hated the Drake meme. That makes me think she's fucking cringey to hang out with and that she probably posts memes with her friends on normiebook. She sounds like a boring hole.
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>>9552234
>I'm a male I don't wear any of this at all.
why are you even here.

aside from needing to troll
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>>9552015
I think people are still under the impression that she lurks here and they think they're gonna get to her by calling her fat nonstop.
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>>9552409
We're here to discuss outtfits, not what memes she may or may not post
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>>9552415
she does lurk here though; she comes out every once in a while
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>>9552409
>she probably posts memes with her friends on normiebook
wait but that's half the point of normiebook
you're missing out anon
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Guess who's back, back again
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>>9552461
You sound just as lame.
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>>9552457
How do you know its her? Wheres your proof?

you're as delusional as the people who thought they could get to Claire by talking shit about her here.
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>>9552447
>doesn't know that she used to post drake over her face
I appreciate you wanting to not talk about memes though
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>>9552501
Fro-lita's back, tell a friend
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>>9551747
Eugh, I thought this was a replica, but I wasn't sure because I didn't bother reading her post. I did see the likes on it though. What the fuck. Asspats?
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>>9552501
you seem mad, anon
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>>9552501
I think this coord is cute? Not understanding the bow and hat though. They don't seem to be connected from what I can tell. Not a fan of the overdress in sweet, but that's just my opinion.
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>>9552560
because she puts her trip back on and posts, you fucking idiot
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>>9553294
Posting Anon must be at AMW this weekend.
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Last one for now
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>>9553314
This girl got hit in the face with ugliness.
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Back at it again.
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at least her room is cute...
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>>9553383
Those eyebrows. She looks like a witch.
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>>9553315
Is this a joke
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>>9553399
The dress equivalent to hot topic strikes again!
Honestly, why everyone looks so basic coording it?
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>>9551043
That bag is absolutely precious with this outfit
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>>9552501
Fro-lita is cute. Socks seem too loud with the dress being covered by peignoir and thus toned down.
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>>9553294
I love this co-ord... except the necklaces (pick one). Skirt is lovely <3
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>>9553295
Wig and giant glasses ruined this co-ord. Wig is too cartoony looking, and glasses are silly fake ones.
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>>9553303
This is cute :) I like this. It's an adorable magical girl outfit, and I will excuse lack of head ornament due to hood on the cape.
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>>9553306
Those photographs are doing her no favours :/ She needs a better bra, and maybe not having the strap of her bag cross-body like that.
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>>9553308
Very cute, nice simple, and elegant. Some of the photos are a bit washed out, but the co-ord looks like it's nice. I'm not 100% sold on yellow shoes, but that seems like a nit-pick at this point.
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>>9553392
Her pose is so awkward. Different socks, and this would be super cute casual.
>two pairs of socks though
Why? I can kind of see that with tights, but not so much OTKs.
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>>9553314
She has an unfortunate face, but short of extensive plastic surgery, it's not like she can fix that, regardless of what she does with her make-up, so it feels mean commenting on it.

Onto stuff she can fix...
That dress doesn't fit her properly - the 'lacing' on the boobs just looks weird, as do the 'straps'. The belt is actually suitable for the theme here, but sadly it just accentuates how her dress really doesn't fit her properly. The print also looks really faded out, and the materials cheap - it's just not a good dress in general.
Her blouse's neckline isn't appropriate to the style of the dress.
Her petticoat is the wrong length/shape for the skirt of her dress.
Her wig would look better if it was styled more.
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>>9553380
This outfit looks classy, love the canottier - just feel the belt could sit a tad lower.
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>>9553383
Her facial expression in the full length pic would have been an appropriate occasion for a sticker. It looks like the photographer interrupted her.

her outfit and room are cute. I do think maybe she looks a bit old for an outfit that hyper-sweet, but maybe that's just because I'm an oldfag that now only wears Classic and sometimes Gothic...
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>>9553321
Is it mean if I say her face sort of reminds me of Miss Piggy..? And not even because she's fat.
>>9553304
Why does she look so miserable
>>9553306
Lose the gloves, maybe a different headpiece. No cross body bag, it's usually unflattering on people with her amount of chub.
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>>9553390
Not bad, just needs longer socks and black shoes. Maybe a black kitty necklace.
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>>9553391
I think that's the girl in yellow's umbrella...
She looks cute - her clothes seem a bit big for her, but she's got it right. I think her and the girl in yellow are quite young and new. They're doing well for newbies.
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>>9553392
This doesn't seem like Lolita to me... more like fairy kei or something. Pastels, J-Fashion, just not actual sweet Lolita.
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>>9553315
Looks like that middle-aged mom that posted a "lolita" coord a couple of months ago and threw a fit when people tried to explain her that her outfit isn't lolita at all.
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>>9553380
She's so pretty!
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>>9553519
Pretty sure losing 50lb might fix that unfortunate chin fat and lack of any facual bone structure at least a little. But yeah, the money she saved by eating less food would then have to go on a decent cosmetic surgeon.
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>>9553519
I've seen this dress in person on someone else and it's extremely flimsy. I wouldn't suggest it for someone with a decent amount of body fat, since it doesn't hold it's shape well at all.
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>>9553419
Oh look. Summer.
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Oh look. I don't know how to respond so I make a meme.
It's the mix of holy lantern and that AB's cat-bat headpiece that is too much for me, it just looks cheesy.
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>>9551163
Wow anon you got me there. It's not like she could have chosen a better balanced photo or one that highlights accessories. I'm just jealous
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>>9553383
>barely any poof
>cheap Bodyline OTKs
>twintails that are reminiscent of a teenager
>Soccer Mom makeup

How can you make a simple print like Romantic Rose Letter look this awful
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wow wow wow i actually love this
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>>9551040
Needs to brush and style her wig, and if she decides on a blonde wig, she needs to thin her eyebrows. Dress looks ill-fitting, and needs ironing. If this a newbies first co-ord, hopefully she'll learn. Also, that camera angle in relation to where the sun is coming from casts really unflattering shadows on her face, and she needs to pose her head better because she's clearly not fat, but her chin looks like its melting into her neck.
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>>9553383
I feel like she is doing absolutely no justice to that gorgeous JSK. I don't even like that series but it deserves better than that style blouse, braids, those utks and shoes.
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>>9555022
As this OP doesn't exactly have a particularly interesting bodice, and the bodice clearly doesn't fit her chest well (boob-loafing) she'd probably do better with that print as a skirt, as the skirt portion looks nice on her. If she was wearing a blouse that fit her with that print as a skirt, she'd look pretty cute... and adjusting her beret, it's sitting a bit flat. She has a pretty face and I like the ringlets with this co-ord - she just doesn't fit that bodice.
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>>9555032
Person on the left looks incredible as always, person on the right is twinning and is usually well dressed, just somehow their face doesn't seem to go with their outfits, and I never get why (it's not so bad here, but in other co-ords of theirs its more pronounced) - and I can't find a logical reason for it. But this is goals-tier ouji. I LOVE the patterned stockings, especially.
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>>9555044
Now I am seeing this with a big pic, I can see she's blurred out the bottom part of her face, and is not wearing a surgical-style mask XD

I really like this co-ord - this is shiny fabric and black x purple DONE WELL.
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>>9555040
This is so perfectly cute :) No grey sky can dull her sunshine.
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>>9555041
That's more than just boobloaf. She has the whole goddamn bakery on her chest.
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>>9553399
Why does everyone put bat things with this dress when it has NO BATS on the print. It has crosses, stars and chandeliers - isn't that enough to work with?
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>>9553967
She doesn't look bad, but this looks more like a vintage normie outfit than a Lolita outfit. I actually like the dress, but the way it's been co-ordinated, it just doesn't look Lolita. Cute normie outfit utilising Lolita dress, rather than Lolita outfit utilising normie elements.
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I'm >9553306 thank y'all both for your concrit, I will take it to heart. I'd insert a smiley face for sincerety but, you know, 4chan.
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Potato-cam, and bad lighting. The fact that that the boards either side of her mirror are relatively focused and not that grainy, but the image in the mirror is really grainy would indicate to me that her phone-cam does not deal well with varying light levels, and it tries too hard to glean information from shaded areas, to the point where there's just loads of sensor grain.

Maybe she should have stood facing that bright light so she's well lit (but it will have harsh shadows) and got one of her classmates to take the picture.

Also, why is there a mirror in her classroom?
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>>9555078
To be more specific on the photography thing - the portrait/selfie's not too bad, it's the full body photo. Firstly it's blurry, and secondly it's taken from quite low down - that angle makes your legs look disproportionate (plus your pettis are showing). A slightly higher angle would probably be more flattering (and also make your jawline a little more distinct). The weather's clearly windy, which is making it hard to see what sort of shape the skirt portion of the dress has, plus again the issue with the petticoats. I'd adjust the pose, too, so your body isn't quite so side on.

I think the dress is cute, and I agree with the anon who says a different headdress would be appropriate. I figure the gloves might be because it was cold out (if it's that windy), and I don't think they inherently clash with the co-ord.
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>>9555080
I feel like the t-shirt is /too/ casual for the skirt print. A nice mint cutsew would have been perfect. (Haven't seen this on CoF itself yet, so if there's a reasons she's wearing the t-shirt, sorry). I actually really like that wig.
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>>9555083
This is SO elegant, I love it. She looks really classy.
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>>9552311
Not really. She's always been a classic lolita, but tries to go gothic for a bit, didn't work, so she kept the gothic motifs and went pink and it suited her better.

She has great outfits and color palettes, but it's annoying to see her post double- she posts on CoF and then the same pictures again on her FB always with added details like "friend designed this" or "I miss [designer], hope to see her again soon"!

Humblebrags ruin her for me.
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>>9555102
Deciding whether to bless this cood with my like was a dilemma because it's really cute but I also fundamentally object to accessories like wings outside of cons and OTT events.
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>>9555120
I don't see anything wrong with posting to CoF to share with the community but also your personal Facebook so non-lolita friends and family can see.
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>>9551742
It doesn't show her outfit - that's fine to do for your personal FB or whatever, but with CoF we want to see the co-ord, and this pose makes a lot of the details hard to make out. But maybe this is the only full body pic that came out right? I dunno.
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>>9555120
Her pinks don't match - that's not a great color palette to me. It's not a terrible outfit, but it would be improved greatly if she had matching pinks, even if it's 1 light pink and 1 dark pink with black.
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>>9553964
I really like this but feel that the makeup/ hair/ pearls combo are too mature for the cuteness of the dress and shoes.

>>9553967
This is nice. I just wish a little makeup were used to accentuate the face more (Its not unattractive, just a little boyish - not in a bad way)

>>9555012
I would punch babies for that dress just to frame it and hang it on a wall

>>9555013
Not a flattering top half. Perhaps a blouse and cardigan combo. And a hairstyle or wig that frames the face rather than sits on top. It looks like it may have been a summer day, so i can see why a short sleeve shirt/up-do of sorts was chosen.

>>9555022
I love coffee, so i am biased as hell toward this skirt.

>>9555032
I don't know how to judge menswear when it comes to this style - BUT at least i can say the fit isn't off-putting on either person.
>>9555052
Same. Do you think its something that a light amount of makeup would fix? Like a bit of brown eyeliner or something?

>>9555066
Makeup maybe? The face looks unappealingly somber but it isnt unattractive.

>>9555074
I want to give this some praise because it isnt generic white girl trying to be "elegant japanese-desu" or whatever it is that always fails. I wish the skirt was bit longer to match the way it sits on the mannequin, but that cant be helped. Tights > socks. I like this though.

>>9555080
Longer wig to better compliment the face maybe

>>9555087
So squinty! But I like this outfit. Maybe brown lens sunglasses in a pink frame would have been a helpful item that day

>>9555096
Super cute

>>9555104
I really like this. The headpiece threw me off until I saw the wrist piece that matched.
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>>9555188
Jfc, you summerfags are even more annoying than normal.
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>>955218
You do know where you are, right?
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>>9555040
There is something about this that is unsettling with me, but I don't know what it is.
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>>9555216
makeup on cheeks too high?
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>>9555216
maybe her wig/hairstyle?
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>>9553313
Cute! I like seeing girls wearing older AP prints (2012 and under).
It feels so nostalgic.
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>>9555218
I think that's it. She looks like she has pink eye
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>>9555216
extreme symmetry?
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Why she keeps doing this to herself?
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>>9555457
the last pic, ew
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>>9555457
Almost the same coord. It's cute and all but it wasn't necessary to share it again.
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>>9555476
>>9555457

I actually wanted to say you can lose track of your outfit combos, especially if you've done a lot of them (ie- if you've been in lolita for a while and forgotten that you've done a similar combo many years ago, or if you just wear a lot of lolita and go through many different coords).

But I think having these two together is pretty cool. It's so interesting to note how the feel of the coord changes entirely just by changing a couple of accessories. The one with the cat bag feels so much more casual and fun while the one with the black bag seems so much more formal. I think it'd make for a nice blog post to do one coord, and then change up one thing at a time and see how it changes the overall feel of the coord.
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>>9555460
Razoring down your eyebrows to this is still a thing? I haven't seen that since the peak of visual kei.
Solid coord otherwise. I usually don't like skirt coords, but I'm fine with this. I feel like her puffy blouse is balancing her skirt.
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>>9555458
Get a sense of humor
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>>9554119
>doesn't know how to reply in a thread
>thinks summer is just a meme
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>>9555096
omg that dress was my first brand dress!
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>>9555476
COF is for daily outfits newfag. Let's not get into this again.
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>>9553303
Cute coord, but I really don't get why this print was used for the theme.
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>>9553315
Serious question, how do I keep my bangs from doing this? Didn't really get a good answer in the hair thread. Sage for OT
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>>9555059

A couple of the motifs are embellished with bat wings, and the matching full set from AP is with the Horror Bat bag (AP has re-released the bat bag with every re-release of HL). Plus it's a Halloween release so usually it's either bat wings or witch hats for head wear.

I usually just just do basic bitch with the matching bow (that doesn't even match, lol), but it's kinda obvious why people like doing bats with Holy Lantern.
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>>9555062
I agree, I think it's the jacket that pushes it over the line (the belt would be forgiveable if she had, say, that IW bolero everyone owns in maroon) but she's cute and the outfit seems relatively well balanced from what we can see of it, so she gets a pass into "daily/casual" rather than "nitpick/ita"
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>>9555458
stupid question, but where can i find that simple kind of lace up boots?
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>>9555066
What is it with brolitas and not wearing a petticoat?
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>>9555716
...That's a female, Anon.
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>>9555716
I guess I should've posted the picture more flattering to my face that showed the outfit less clearly... Also I'm only wearing a small petti because old school.
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>>9555096
Bolero sauce? Or did she post it.

Cute coord!
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>>9555783
its meta!
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is this an insanely long JSK or an insanely short person?
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>>9555528
That's me in the picture. I actually don't razor down my eyebrows, I just have a bad habit of pulling them out so I don't have any. Do you have any suggestions for how to cover this up or draw them in? I've tried drawing them in with eyebrow pencils before but it didn't look good. Thank you also for your comments! I'm pretty new to lolita so any concrit is really appreciated, I'd like to improve. Thanks!
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>>9555837
She has some kind of dwarfism.
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>>9555858
NAYRT but try a shadow rather than a pencil first to keep the background light. Then maybe go in and fill with your pencil and remember to buff it out
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>>9555858
It can be a lot of work getting them realistic, but here is a good resource, her eyebrows look pretty decent: http://www.vogue.com/article/how-to-draw-eyebrows-tutorial-alopecia-hair-loss-carly-severn

The trick would be getting a pencil that has not a lot of pigment and a fairly hard lead to make sure that it's easy to feather the pencil well. Also make sure your product is cool-toned. A lot of people think warm tones work in brows, but generally they end up looking really fake.

I'm a diff anon btw, but I hope maybe this helps? Good luck!
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>>9555858
Solidarity from a fellow trich suffering anon
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>>9553314
If that's a nose ring then she should take it out or flip it up into her nose for photos (and take off her glasses while she's at it). I had to stare at it really hard to see whether or not it was snot.
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>>9555663
My bangs do that if they dry funny. I just wet them down to the roots in the morning for a few seconds and blow-dry them straight. Looks like her bangs dried at opposite angles and she didn't bother to fix them before leaving her house.
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>>9556085
>(and take off her glasses while she's at it)
You gulls really need to chill with this glasses hateboner.
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>>9555858
Oh I just mentioned the eyebrow thing because it made me feel nostalgic for ye olde days. It didn't bother me. I think the other anons gave you soild advice what to do if you want to change it.
For somone new in Lolita this a really solid coord. Given I like simple coords so others might find it too simple. If you want to be really nitpicky I'd say the lace and the big bow on your basket look a bit cheap as well as your socks. The whites are not super matching with your blouse and neither the red on your hat with the wine color on your skirt, but as said this me being super nitpicky.
I like it generally.
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>>9555858
Considering your eyeliner looks fine in those pictures, I think you are just reacting in a self concious way to people calling you out for something you can't help.

Just practice at drawing in your eyebrows. One day they'll be on par with your liner.
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>>9555022
Is she wearing her beret backwards? You can see the ribbon that's supposed to be in front peeking out. How can that happen?
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>>9555458
Bloomers. This is why we're supposed to wear bloomers.

That aside, her co-ord's quite nice. Lace on the veil might be questionable, but I honestly can't tell for sure in the photos.
I love that stained glass print.
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>>9556091
Ah, that helps a lot actually! I was trying to fix it with a hair straightener. Thanks!
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>>9552601
I could do that too. You haven't been on this site long, have you?
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>>9555141
If they do it on the streets of Japan, it should be ok elsewhere to do.
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>>9556236
>not wanting to get flashed at a meet
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>>9555663
if you've had a centre parting for ages and then get bangs you have to train them to grow forwards instead of sideways. Some people sleep with a headbang holding them in place, but I don't like to have hair on my face while I sleep. You can blow-dry them forward but I usually just use a straightener/curler.

>>9555764
I really like the way those shoes look with this, but oldschool dresses worn with low/no petti are usually in cuts that suit it (e.g. tiered skirt or a skirt which can't fit a large petti). Dresses cut for a voluminous bell-shape rarely look good with s small petti, even in oldschool, and oldschool had coords with very poofy skirts too.
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>>9556282
When did they start doing it on the streets of Japan? I mostly follow oldschool so I'm not that up on recent trends, but I've never seen a coord with wings on Tokyo Fashion or anything that wasn't shironuri.
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>>9555009
Her hair kind of reminds me of a poodle, but in a cute way.

>>9555070
I thought this was really cute and I don't even normally like leopardprint, it's rare to see a coord with it where the leopardprint is on a jacket and not the dress/skirt.

>>9555458
This is cute.b
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>>9555009
If it weren't for the tights it would be perfect. UTKs or even knee socks would work
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>>9555105

she has no feet at this angle
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>>9556382
You sound like one of those newfags who says old school shoes *only* come in black and white and peeking bloomers are compulsory.
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>>9551037
I like it, but I feel like there's one accessory too many on the head compared to the rest of the coord.

>>9551038
I'm a slut for Vampire Nocturne but I can't even see the coord.
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>>9555764
You know face stickers exist for exactly this situation right?
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>>9556085
Does the style of glasses matter? Is there a reason why >>9553314 is worse than >>9555047 or >>9553310?
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>>9556302
There are other examples but they don't belong in this thread - but you're right, it's a more recent thing. Still. Doesn't matter when it starts. It is a thing.
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>>9556830
This is a really well-done AP/larme crossover but also I hate larme so ??? hamfisted polishing turd metaphor
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>>9556654
Style doesn't matter. I was only adding the glasses comment since I was already talking about the nose ring (or snot?). Glasses can cause glare, can make the face look distorted and/or obscures features, so it's good practice to take them off for photos. Taking off glasses for a quick pic is only a split-second effort.

t. glasses-wearing anon
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>>9556272
Nigga you can't put on the same trip as her. Learn the difference between namefagging and tripfagging and lurk for a couple more years before calling other people new.
Your retarded is showing.
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>>9556838
It's always refreshing to see lolitas without bangs that look beautiful. I kinda miss Fanny's coords in COF now.
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>>9553380
Where's da poof?!
>>9555674
B-basic what?
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>>9556832
what is this a coord for ants
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>>9556825
hime's not dead!
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>>9557504
this is so cute
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>>9557667
I'd like to see her change up the bolero+jsk formula once in a while.
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>>9556750
I don't like the wings, it looks pretty dumb and costumey even in a simple coord
>>9556787
The fuck is that hat
The fuck is that dress
Is that a lemur plush
Just what
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>>9556400
Nah they just look cuter, it's just my opinion. I remember when sheer tights were considered ita, they still look strange to me outside of modern princessy chiffon coords
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>>9558122
if it ain't broke
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>>9558131
lace tights have been around since the beginning but ok
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>>9558133
boring af is a kind of broke
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>>9558067
Idk she looks like a crusty mom playing dress up.
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coming in with some crit in hopes that any of the following were in need. trying to do it in a way that doesn't shit the thread up

>>9553295
wig just needs a good brushing of each curl so it looks softer and fuller
>>9553297
this styling is in an awkward betweenland of lolita and otome. the clashing pinks could be played up for good otome, with different shoes. for lolita tho white cardi would help this be better casual
>>9553306
bra is fine. people never seem to realize how full big boobs work and these are supported just fine. I do, however, not care for the headbow or wig styling. bangs should be cut and headwear should be majority blue. maybe another kc in blue behind this?
>>9553310
tights clash and would be better in more mature classic styling. can't go wrong with meta's fancy egg otks, or any of Baby or AATP's bxw diamond otks
>>9553314
not enough leather to balance the belt. a ribbon belt would have looked much nicer. needs to re-evaluate her poof.
1. the pettis are too short; 2. an a-line needs to be layered over a cupcake for a balloon skirt such as this
>>9553382
almost there but just too bare. more accessories on wrists and fingers for punk. the belt is unnecessary.
>>9553383
blouse murders this. the collar does not work with the oblique neckline, and even less so with the flutter cap sleeves. highneck or ruffled chiffon that blends with the jsk neckline but has nice long sleeves. hair would be cuter if she looped the braids
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>>9553391
agree with other anon, black shoes and ivory socks
>>9553392
fucking love this. could only like it more with pink bloomers and mintier ankle socks.
>>9553399
wow, is this the guy who did the insufferable coord spam in Feb? major applause. this looks good and so does the make. Only thing I'd change is the white blouse to a black one. it'll make the tights look better.
>>9553964
cardi is too baggy, unfortunately. nyx the cardi and change to a red necklace. love the apron. detachable bow should sit this one out.
>>9555022
very cute. flatten tilt and pin beret either to the side or falling back. needs an additional petti for better shape. and please oh please loliable legwear.
>>9555037
would have preferred white legwear but she looks awfully cute here
>>9555040
having this taken in a bit around the bodice would improve fit. only thing I don't like is the headwear and hairstyle. looks so bare. curling the ends inward would be cuter.
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>>9555047
this is cute af plus size. chill/10 would wear.
>I too shop at TJMaxx
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>>9556825
perfection.
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>>9558099
her creativity seems to be coming out in bounds lately! I adore this
I do wish she'd put more of these items up for sale. I'd def buy one of her mains if her dressform adjusted up to my bust. oh well
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>>9552501
The idea of a sheer polka-dot apron would be cute, like a circular one that ties around the waist, but a full peignoir looks really odd.
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>>9558140
It's a venn diagram, anon. All lace tights are sheer, but not all sheer tights are lace. She means tights that don't have cutwork and are not fully opaque.
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>>9555837
Dwarf-chan looks cute here.
>>9556847
I hate the shit out of larme but this is pretty cute.
>>9557660
Are her shoes navy or black I think I'm fucking blind
>>955809
This is lotvdesigns yes? I'm absolutely in love, she's so cute.
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>>9556787
>lemur plush
Are you fucking blind that is an octopus with sunglasses
I mean idk why it's there but that's what it is lel

Maybe a zoo coord? If so, with some improvements.... I'd dig it.
Dress and bag are okay. Lose the apple green shoes, lose the wrist cuffs. Wtf is going on with the socks? If it's the zoo, keep the hat. If not then I'm super confused and she should burn it.

Lolita safari meet, anyone?
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>>9558323
Her pieces have always been made solely for people with the same body type as her. Skinny, flat-chested, with a long torso. I had one of her dresses years ago and it looked so awkward on me because of how long the torso was cut. She is very creative and her sewing is top-notch, but she doesn't seem to know how to tailor for anyone of a different body type.
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>>9558331
I've been thinking of handmaking a simpler sheer apron like pic related for months, they were popular in the 50s too.
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>>9551043
Is that a dude?
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>>9555476
Does he has an insta?
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>>9555047
I really wish fat lolitas wouldn't wear food themed prints.
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>>9555059
How embarrassed were you when you realized there are actually bat wings on the print?
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>>9556830
>tfw this is really similar to a coord I have had planned since may

Mines a bit more OTT and I'm positive mine is better but I'm still fairly salty.
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>>9558875
Post yours to CoF after you wear it and we will see how much better it is.
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>>9558906
I probably won't post it to CoF to avoid looking like I'm ripping off someone else's coord, but I'll post it elsewhere. If it reaches my normal amount of likes/comments I'll take that as confirmation.
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>>9558792
Yeah! French Cafe is a bit of a busy print to begin with, but like the picture, it would look really cute with a less-detailed dress. Aw shit. Now I want one.
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>>9558875
Happens to me all the time anon, I've stopped worrying about looking if I've ripped someone else off. Helps if you have evidence you bought the pieces before their coord was even out.
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>>9555022
Why is she wearing her beret like that?
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>>9558331
>>9558792
What kind of material would this be made of, and is there any way for it to actually function as a protective apron? I like the idea but when I google it I get mostly fetish stuff.
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>>9558942
Well, considering the print I was going to use was released months before the one she wore and I have screenshots of receipts as well as screenshots of my planning process(i'm autistic and keep screenshots and notes about coords I plan) I would be good. I just don't want the hassle of posting it to CoF at this point, doesn't mean I won't enjoy the coord.
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>>9558410
Eep! I fully admit to having a bad habit of drafting bodices too long in the torso. I've realized that and made strong efforts to revise my patterns.

Anon, if you still have the dress I'd like to offer to shorten the torso for you. For free of course. I always want my customers to be happy.
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>>9558843
anaphrodisiacs
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>>9555022
Girl's in desperate need for a diet
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>>9559097
Her midsection doesn't look all that huge. If she lost weight, she'd probably still have really big boobs
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>>9559101
>her midsection doesn't look all that huge

You have pretty low standards
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>>9558956
I doubt it would very protective, the weave of the fabric is probably too light to do much. Chiffon would be cute.
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>>9559010
What an edgelord name.
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>>9558126
>costumey
This is pretty much just a buzzword on cgl now.

No one cares what you think of it. It's something that happens on the streets of Japan.

People like you don't really follow the fashion and ignore it's roots.
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>"concrit accepted"
>rejects concrit

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>>9559194
"Mary Janes/flats? Idk"
Mary Janes are a key bloody staple in most Lolita outfits. Fucking learn your shit. While we're at it. What's the point in wearing a shirt with a slogan if the high waisted skirt cuts it out.
Just throw on any old trash anons and call it Lolita. This monstrosity clearly did.
Yeah. I'm mad.
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>>9558131
Oh hey, that's me. Guess that's what I get for posting a photo that isn't high-res enough to see all the details of my coord, but I can confirm that they are indeed fishnet/cutwork/crochet/whatever you want to call them lace tights and not those modern flocked/embroidered sheer nylon ones.
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>>9555032
the guy on the right has a serious career opportunity as a John Lennon impersonator because holy crap...the glasses seal it.
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>>9559217
The way she responded so negatively to all the useful crit was..... frustrating, to say the least.

Basically every comment was "lol no you're wrong I did GREAT it's EXACTLY what I was going for"
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>>9559500
all I can say is keep try. she's clearly just starting out. hope she gets a full coord soon.

on that note, really wishing people spent more time studying the fashion before parading around in just a main piece. get a whole coord together, however simple, and then put it on. that's the best experience to start out with.
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>>9559581
How to get poof this nice???
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>>9559553
nitpick but I hate the shade of blue on that kc. wish it was that bright sax of bag/shoes, or even purple or black.
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>>9559566
feeling like the legwear could use some lace because there're such beautiful details up top.
that aside, fuck me this is gorgeous. always love breathtaking uses of moitie
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>>9559594
I think he uses a hoop skirt as a petti.
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>>9559581
I could see him do an ero coord in the future.
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>>9559656
It's actually a bell petticoat layered over a pair of small pocket hoops. The hoops only add volume to the sides so the shape looks a bit flat in profile, but it's great for photos and they're a lot easier to sit down in compared to hoop skirts.
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>>9559546
oh man. what is this dress and tell me it comes in other colors?
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>>9559194
is it possible to put together a more hip hop looking coord?

Hers isn't good, but it makes me think it's possible.
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>>9559550
>dat feel when you end up looking like a potato next to a cuter friend when you twin
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>>9555448
Is this in the Ita thread already? Nothing in this outfit goes with anything else, and the gloves and choke are bad quality.
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>>9555501
As her square pics are pretty much the same pic mirrored, she could have got away with compiling one of each in the same collage and shown them off side by side. Separate is fine for Instagram, not so much for CoF.
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>>9559890
But those two are BOTH cute.
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>>9559607
I think there are matching MmM socks that would perfect that outfit.
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>>9559550
>>9559581
These are both super cute, CoF back on top form.
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>>9559580
Top left screams autism.
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>>9559930
Mhmm sure they are
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>>9559154
Ignore its roots? I'd love to see how you react to a coord using oldschool fishnets over tights instead of retarded wings. You're just trying to justify ugly kids dress up accessories by saying muh n-nippon. Some things should stay there. Wings don't look street fashion at all. Docs and fishnets do, but they don't suit modern lolita either
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>>9559580
This is hideous. The whole concept needs to be scrapped or redone with nicer pieces and better hair and makeup
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>>9559572
oy. this looks way more like a scene kid outfit than anything even remotely ouji. just wearing shorts doesn't make it ouji. although it'd probably look a lot better if the light blue shorts weren't completely clashing with the dark colored blouse, socks, and shorts.
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>>9560153
So there is this other thread going on right now
>>9556396

There are ton of people discussing exactly what you're talking about and the consensus is that people like you are fucking annoying and honestly, kind of detrimental to the lolita community.

>my nippon
That is where the fashion is from. Are you sure you're not just trolling?
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>>9560407
I believe those are gray shorts, not light blue. I don't really see how this looks looks like a scene outfit though. Seems like pretty standard ouji.
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New thread >>9560787
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>>9560139
One on the left's face looks a bit pointy (like an elf or manga character), but I think that's just the way her wig frames her face/jaw, but neither are un-cute. I think one on the right has more of a natural looking adorableness, even if her smile looks a little half-hearted. Both cute.
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>>9559010
Thank you!




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