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This is the go-to place to discuss (and produce) erotic fiction of all types, from the fap-and-go fics to porn with a substantial plot. Drawfags are also welcome- illustrated stories are the best ones! For drawing requests also check out the /d/raw thread:
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Writefags, consider pastebin/titanpad rather than dumping for your stories. You can also use 1d4chan for /tg/-related smut

You are advised to tag your stories so that people know what they're looking at. This will attract more feedback from people interested in the themes you're exploring. Consider quoting the OP when delivering. This will make it easier to find (and critique!) the new stories in a thread.

People appreciate it a lot when you give them constructive feedback and criticism, so make sure to do so. We thrive on it. Don't be afraid to speak your mind about a story that caught your attention. This will help everyone in the long run.

Requests are encouraged to promote a steady flow of new content.There's nothing like a good request to get the creative juices flowing. Try to expand your ideas - a bare-bones request doesn't give us much of a good idea as to what you want. Have fun with it! Keep in mind that it might take some time to get to yours, and each writefag is interested in different kinds of things.

Remember to post pictures when possible to keep the thread alive, but keep image dumps to a minimum so that more OC can be posted.

Requests welcome.

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So, for those of you who've picked up the 1k for Friday challenge, what are you writing and how far are you?
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>>7309587
Feel like shit because I'm not going to do it and all my friends are.

It's ever since I started writing for uni, all the fun's gone out of it.

I used to write because I enjoyed it (which in turn was because it's all I'm good at) but now it's got to the point where I enjoy *not* having to write.
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>>7309587
What is this challenge?
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A few thoughts to start the thread out. I saw this book somewhere recently.

1. V.C. Andrews was a real person who wrote Flowers in the Attic, but after her death in 1986, her name is being used by a ghostwriter to continue the gravy train. What would you think if this happened to you?

2. Broken Mirrors is apparently one of those books that changes first-person perspective from one of two characters in alternate chapters throughout the book, with the person being followed mentioned at the head of the chapter. I personally cannot STAND this technique. I only sort of liked it in Around the World in 80 Days, when Fogg was kidnapped and the chapter was about Passporteau trying to find him. But I also seldom write from a first-person perspective anyway. What do you think?
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>>7309593
Here you go, chum.

>>7306149

Can't believe how many people actually responded to it.
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>>7309587
Warhammer 40k serf/space marine fluff/lewd.

I keep just writing worldbuilding and not making actual plot.

pic semi related?
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>>7309627
Yeah, that's a nasty trap that many have fallen into before now. See my attempt at building a high fantasy world so I could destroy it with space monsters.

I thought you had all your characters and so on set up already, though?

Or have you just thrown all that out.

Pic very much related.
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>>7309599

First person feels like I'm only reading half the story. So much that the protagonist can't see, thoughts and actions of other characters the go unnoticed, stuff like that.
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>>7309599
I've only read a few alternating first-person books, but the only issue I had is that if they don't explicitly state who the narrator is I never remember when I resume reading.

As for the first question, that's like the definition of success as a writer.
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>>7309645
The characters are established, the scenes and how to make it flow less so.
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hey, anyone willing to take up a 40k request?

a chaos lord captures an eldar banshee and a sister of battle.

He goes about tormenting the both of them using sex toys created by slaaneshi cultists and tries to break them.

He doesn't succeed with the eldar, so he kills her and stuffs her soul in the soulstone, while also summoning a daemon to possess her corpse and wear the stone.

meanwhile, both then gang up on the sister of battle.
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>>7309587
I've already got to write some lost-bet battletech incest, so I might as well say I'm in. I'm at ~200 words now
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>>7309587
i don't think i could restrict myself to one thousand words. last time i tried, i ended up with 18,000.
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>>7309627
>I keep just writing worldbuilding and not making actual plot.

gods, this. i can't write a fetish story about two or more people fucking weirdly any more. i have to come up with a rationale as to how they got there and why they're doing it, otherwise it just seems cheap to me.

i've reached the point where i don't even write the fucking scenes any more. fapping is better than coming, it seems, because coming means it's over.
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>>7310006
I didn't mean the 1k as a limit, just a minimum. However many words you've got by Friday, show us
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>>7309648
It's common to write third person in that style too (third person limited). I prefer it to an omniscient narrator because it's easier to identify with the main character when you're not distracted by information they couldn't know.
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I remember two writefags in the feminization threads, one was writing a story up a lesbian succubus who turns her partner into a trap, then other was a sequel to that animal crossing forced-fem story. I'm curious as to if either of those was ever finished.
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>>7310045
>sequel to that animal crossing forced-fem story.
sounds interesting, where can i find the first part?
for research purposes
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>>7310094

http://pastebin.com/e9uu4ERc

I do apologize to those who are waiting for the sequel. Since school started I haven't had time nor drive to be able to write anything aside from research papers. The writing I did manage to get done for it makes it about 1/2 done, and just not up to snuff of the first
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I wanna write a story about a slave girl who gets temporarily released. Her masters figure she be healthy longer if they let her take breaks from work every once in a while so they set her loose for like a week at a time. She has some of her intelligence and sanity restored, but she knows nothing of the outside world after years(?) of slavery. After the week it'll all wear off and she'll have to return. Sounds sad and fun to write.
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>>7309587
I'm writing a fic about one of my hybrid OCs set in my homebrew RPG world. I've actually just been doing the outline right now since it's been difficult for me to plan a good conclusion.
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>>7310031
ah, i got nothin'. last half-way decent idea i had was to re-enact the "wake up brother" flash using robots.
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>>7310456
>>>/f/3225205

for reference
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>>7310230
Go for it.
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>>7310133
Tags?
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Anyone have some good genital swap stories? Preferably between a dude and a lady.
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>>7310793
None we've made, sorry.
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Hey guys the Snek 4 Ebook is ready and you can download it here:
https://www.patreon.com/file?h=8466351&i=905178
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Is there any light femdom stuff here with small women dominating large, strong men (monsterboys, if possible)?
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>>7310133
Hey, I know this story was supposed to fulfill a certain fetish but this is one of the most sinister things I've ever read. It reads super well as a psychological thriller. Have you written anything similar to this before? Great work, btw.
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Hey, somebody called?
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>>7311867
yeah, how's the commission going? I'm the werewolf guy from a couple weeks back, and I was just wondering on account of the radio silence
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>>7309380

Here is the first chapter in a Highschool DxD fic I have been working on on and off.

>Tags: foot fetish, asshole fetish, feet + ass smelling, hs dxd

http://pastebin.com/xbPckN59
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>>7309599
Weren't the animorph books alternating first person?

Let me check...Okay pulling my Animorphs #3 off the shelf here, yeah.

I guess I was okay with alternating first person at some point. I don't see it too often now though. I don't like first person unless the story is balls deep in the mind of one person, and rarely do I want that in smut.
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Is anyone taking writing requests for traps, Monsterboys, orgasm play, orientation play, sex toys, medical, and dragons? Not all in the same thing, but any of those fetishes individually or together.
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Decided I'm going to continue writing what I want to see in the world, which in this case is elf shortstacks desperate for a wee.

So, a story no one asked for.

Xander and Zilli's First Mistake
Tags: Watersports, Desperation, Humiliation
http://pastebin.com/dewFseLV

(Pic is from an anime, that had another scene, that helped inspire the action of the story)
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would anyone here be interested in taking a futa on male request?
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>>7309648
Underrated opinion

From the last board I'd agree that the Queen's cir*cum*stances were unique, just that her actions seemed to have influenced many perceptions of her race.
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>>7311935
Those books were dank.
Also an easy excuse to write beastiality porn/interspecies sex.
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>>7312014
the moral of the story seems to be that "manipulation" is a really bad informed attribute to give an entire race that you don't want to be wildly unsympathetic
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>>7312021

I agree, but in the case you presented, even humans would have done the same for their people. Hell, put yourself in her shoes. If you knew rescuing all of your people at once off of your shithole planet was just a simple manner of seducing some cute human who obviously hasnt been laid in like a decade, would you not do it?

Especially when you know the human is going to be in for a good time and everyone wins in the end?
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>>7312081
it's not like a just cause has ever made a psychopath feel empathy, no matter what, for what that's worth
and at any rate, despite my personal hatred of russians, it's really obvious that the polars are playing a pure con game even if the mark doesn't mind
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>>7312106

Based off of one polar, acting for the good of her people, with literally all of the rest that were seen so far in snek's writing either doing no manipulation at all or straight up being altruistic.

I feel like you are making shit up in your head and using that as the basis to your argument. No polar we've seen has displayed any psychopathic behavior, and manipulation alone does not qualify as that.

There are more humans that manipulate on a daily basis for any number of reasons, and you better believe pretty much every human leader ever has done it and continues to do it. If we follow your horribly broken logic, all humans are psychopaths playing a con game because of the actions of their leaders/a significant portion of their population.
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>>7311623
>Is there any light femdom stuff here with small women dominating large, strong men (monsterboys, if possible)?
The best taste, but I don't think we have more than maybe one fic in the masterlist sadly.
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>>7311623
Wanna give more detail as to what you mean by light femdom?
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>>7311923
awful
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>>7311623
Unfortunately, we've got exactly one guy who writes femdom here, and his highly specific tastes are about the dead opposite of that
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Where'd AA go?

>>7312336
>exactly one
Except that's literally not true.
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>>7312127
Just low-end stuff like facesitting and edging and light restraint, really. Maybe some prostate play if the writer's into that.
I'm not at all into the full-time Dom stuff, what I like is stuff where the girl is in charge in bed, but they've otherwise got a nice equatable relationship

For what it's worth, one thing that electrocutes my damn prostate but I can't seem to find outside of manga is stories where a couple are having their first time together, with the girl taking the lead entirety because she's more enthusiastic/energetic rather than having any idea what she's doing. I am a complete fool for that stuff
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>>7312371
Haven't seen any stories of that sort, but if you put it in the request list, someone may take it up
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>>7312340
I'm still alive and lurking, just up to my armpits in work and a ton of other RL shit.

Trying to work on my writing in the rare moments I have a chance to do so, but my current project isn't even close to being presentable just yet. In the off-chance I do manage to get a decent enough amount of writing done, I'll post it by the thread's end.
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Is the guy who was redoing worlds apart here? You mentioned an outline, mind posting it?
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Years ago I belonged to a Yahoo group that had erotic writing contests. It was an interesting place. The winner of one contest got to choose the criteria for the next. For example:

include the color purple
1,500 words
first person
war-time

and everyone would write a story incorporating those criteria.

Anyone know of a site doing something like that?
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>>7312424
We've apparently got a 1k one week thing going, if that turns out, such a contest might work here
Otherwise, try literotica, they'd likely be interested
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I've been fucking around with [spoiler]what I assume and hope is a girl[/spoiler] on my RP forums which focuses on weird fucked up fantasy erotica situations and we came up with this idea.

Its a parasitic flower that grows out of a woman's urethra, is extremely sensative to touch and causes powerful unbelievable orgasms. The way we described it in the RP as a weird fantasy world STD which is usually dormant most of the time but will occasionally flare up causing the woman to need to deal with it or wait it out until it wilts and disappears.

Anyway I was sitting around bored because [spoiler]one of my anime releases got delayed and now I have to wait[/spoiler] so I figured i'd come here and query to see if anybody was interested in reading or seeing an erotic fiction about this bizarre fucked up fantasy STD and what it entails?
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>>7312428
>what I assume and hope is a girl
It's never a girl.
Now as a bisexual man who has a thing for crossdressers, I like that shit very much, but I'm sorry if the truth ruins your erection
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>>7312433
I don't care if its a guy honestly, I'm on 4chan offering to write a story about flower STDs bro, I'm already a degenerate. I'm not turned off by guys who want to be girls at all.

Its just if its a girl its hotter.
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>>7312428
>>7312439
Out of curiosity have you ever played Drakengard 3?
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>>7312444
[spoiler]I have actually but I didn't realize that was actually a plot point in Drakengard 3 until after the RP, I literally only finished that ending the other day. Pretty funny coincidence, I guess I just subconsciously got the idea because I of the Image of Zero with the parasitic flower and it turned out to be the plot.[/spoiler]
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>>7312449
God damn it, I keep forgetting spoilertags don't work here.

I hope nobody is worried about Drakengard 3 spoilers.
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>>7312452
spoiler tags are turned off on all red boards
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>>7312418
He wasn't doing a rewrite, just what happened to her on Borealis.
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>>7312439
That's the spirit!
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>>7312418
>>7312455
Aye, that was me and I'll have the outline in a few hours once I get off work and on the whiskey

And I suppose that it was technically to be a rewrite of the second half, since the circumstances of their reunion were to be somewhat different then snek's
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Is it possible to write with the same fetishes but do something different, anons?

Say, for instance, a tentacle monster (something simple, you know). How could I do more than one scene with something like that and still keep it fresh?
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>>7312610
Well I'd say that's dependent on the circumstances.
In your example of the tentacles, say.
Generic tentacle rape would absolutely be repetitive, but say it's consenticles and the possibilities expand quite a bit, consider a woman trying out her many and varied fantasies on the tentacles
Different combinations of holes plowed for one, restraint of limbs or not, breasts played with in several ways, individual large tentacles or several roaming around each hole, internal finished or general glazing, knots or not
Lots of variety is possible, anon
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>>7312657
Hrm. I guess that's true, the hard part for me is figuring out how to expand on the different bits enough to make it noticeable.

Wouldn't really know what to do with knots, for instance, nor multiples of the same hole.
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>>7312657
Gender of the characters involved also can mix things up quite a bit.

You can even make it different by changing the characteristics of the involved characters. Pic related.
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>>7312664
>knots
Just make it so the tentacle inflates when you feel like writing the climax.

>nor multiples of the same hole.
You wouldn't have to be elegant about it.

>She didn't think she could fit two inside her, but the tentacle pushed forward. Stretching her vagina to the limit. With the second tentacle hilted inside her, both of them started to thrust, one always behind the other.

Once you get that over with, you basically treat both tentacles as one until you specify otherwise.
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>>7312691
Squib and Pumkin are the cutest couple and there's not nearly enough material of them.
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>>7312703
Yes, yes they are.
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>>7311623
Not from around here, but Taiyakisoba is writing a whole multi-part series about an elf girl dominating monster boys.
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Fanfiction is the only place for me
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>>7312887
Not him but that sounds excellent to me. Do you have a link?
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>>7312927
http://archiveofourown.org/works/7987012
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2000 word update, finished the first sex scene, new content at "He was going faster now"

Highway to Krell:
http://pastebin.com/hE1muHCb
Tags so far:
>oral, large penis, vaginal, size difference, maledom, sweat, muscle, long tongue, consensual
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>>7309587
I finished an old WIP of mine instead since I couldn't come up with an idea in a pinch.

"Busted!"
http://pastebin.com/90P3NirX
F. Ork x F. Elf. (Shadowrun setting, Oral, light Bondage, D/s, Role-playing)

Enjoy!
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>>7312962
Holy Fuck, that was EXACTLY what I was looking for
Thanks anon
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>>7311953
FUBOT, I just read The Odd Block Pt.3: Lurkers, and The Repairman, which I missed when it went up.
Thank you for providing my spider fix! I hope you keep up that whole series.

Not enough spiders, let alone M Spider x Human F. Though the other monsterous people in the building are neat too.
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>>7309380
tags: cock vore, futa, shrink
http://pastebin.com/1LxnQKfZ
http://pastebin.com/r7B3x8zT
http://pastebin.com/8YctEG2z
anon said they were going to continue when they got time.

tags: futa, giantess/shrink, vore, cock vore, domination, cyoa
https://www.writing.com/main/interact/item_id/1805839-Shrunken-at-home-with-Shemale-Sisters
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>Two bros, one a towering bucket of lard and the other a scrawny manlet, go to some SEA shithole to get exotic brown pussy
>Notice how cheap booze is and get so drunk they can't even walk
>Slimy bastard in a cheap suit offers them penis enhancement surgery for a "reasonable" price
>Do it because even when sober a cinder block is smarter than the two of them combined
>Wake up to find that they have gargantuan cocks that would make a porn star envious
>Along with fully-female bodies including a functional vagina and uterus
>The manlet is the kind of pure huggable kawaii that makes your heart soft and your dick hard, the fat one has sweater puppies so big a real puppy could easily be lost between them
>Neither of them notices because they're too focused on their enhanced manhoods to care about anything else
>Cannot find willing girls (still not understanding why,) slump off to hotel room with the strongest liquor they could find
>They get inhumanly drunk again, and decide to fuck each other
>Mutual futa fucking ensues, possible impregnation
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>>7313248
Thank you.

There is a third spider story lined up for that, but I keep getting lost when I start writing it. I'll manage to finish it sooner than later. Glad you like him.
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>>7313383
>There is a third spider story lined up for that, but I keep getting lost when I start writing it.
Maybe you need to use non-sticky spirals as guide lines?
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anybody got good stories with futa cbt/castration? very rare to find.
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>>7313400
Ey!
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>>7313404
>anybody got good stories with futa

(my ears perk up)

>cbt/castration? very rare to find.

(looks through folder to find the .gif of Abraham Simpson leaving the burlesque club)
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>>7313008

This was nice, thanks for sharing!
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>>7312273
What's wrong with it?
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>>7309587
A series short stories about a creepy shut ins adventures in an magical fantasy isekai.

Started my first chapter, spattered in the second, still working on the world.
It annoys me that I never played anything enough to know its universe off by heart.
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>>7313700
I'd read it.
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>>7312990
Snek, I have another idea for a Pinwheel story. If you are interested.
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>>7314139
Sure, I'm all ears.
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>>7314196
Not him, snek, but I've got two ideas.
Both are /u/, because you haven't done human&borlean girls together yet, and not taking an opportunity for lesbian catgirl stuff would be a crime
First one
>polar girl growing up in siberia is best friends with a tall, tomboyish human girl from the nearby town
>in their teens, they come to the realization that they're gay as hell for each other
>maybe the realization comes from the polar turning down a guy who by all polar social norms she should be jumping on, because the human girl is the only one for her
>high impact homosex happens, with the human taking the lead because she's more hot blooded
I just thought of this, but the two fucking at different stages in the polar girl's growth spurt would be hot as all hell
Also, future-tech feedback strap-ons would be amazing, especially if they were all Bad Dragon crazy styled. Maybe the human girl is a fan?
The second is equatorial
>thirty-something mustang officer and former massive lesbian seducer is assigned to command a borlean unit
>her wife jody'd her and left like two years ago and she hadn't been laid since
>one of the new recruits in her unit takes the order to treat her as an alpha a bit too literally and awkwardly offers her sexual favours
>she just can't resist a submissive young catgirl and she lets her old predatory lesbian instincts take over and fucks the borlean into the ground
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>>7314474
There's no such thing as lesbian/gay in Borealan culture really, though some individuals may have strictly sexual preferences (for example Ursi kept female concubines because they were better at oral than the males).
That lends itself very much to those scenarios though, a Borealan would see nothing unusual in engaging in same-sex relationships and that could be very liberating for a human who was struggling with their sexuality. Perhaps her parents are on her case so she starts spending more and more time at the Polar colony, eventually resulting in her accepting and exploring her feelings.

I like the first idea and I will add it to the pile, which unfortunately is fairly large right now so I'm not sure when I'll be able to get to it.

I really need to set aside a month some time soon and just bang out like six 10,000 word stories based on these requests, I have several waiting now.
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>>7314494
I wouldn't call it the polar being 100% lesbian, rather it being romantic monogamy, turning others down because the girl is the only one she wants
It would certainly be unusual, but it would make absolute sense as a piece of human culture she's wholeheartedly adopted from her friend/love interest
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>>7314474
>>7314494
I have an idea to add to your idea
What if the couple from the first idea hunt together and have since they were kids? A hunting trip, a campfire and a long history of only bringing one sleeping bag became it's comfier would be a really good backdrop for a confession/first time
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>>7314555
Brokeback Borealans? I like it.
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>>7314555
Oh, that's a good one.
Now I'm thinking of a polar in size 44 daisy dukes and a flannel shirt and her human GF in a matching outfit and I am extremely for it
Or maybe a blaze orange vest with only a sweaty, too-small tank top underneath....
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>>7314494
I've also had an idea. I've not quite read where the story went after Fineprint 1, just that the Polars got shipped to Russia. Maybe you could have UN involvement in the Polars, with concerns and general interest in the effects that a new planet's environment would have on the new generation's development Basically just regular medical checkups on young and growing Polar children, and long term studies on any psychological changes between the generations possibly caused planetary differences.
One of the young Polar girls gets all her checkups done by the same female doctor, and starts to bond and kind of view her as a fixed part of her life. As the Polar starts to grow and become aware of her own body, and the new thoughts that come with it, the regular physicals from the human kind of skews from what was once just something she had to do and got a lollipop for doing it, to something where she starts thinking about how the doctor is touching her and doesn't know why she enjoys the attention, to something that she actively seeks out and even starts making up illnesses and injuries to get more time with her doctor. Things progress from there as one would expect, with lots of exploration.
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>>7314598
Tell me, are you a pharahmercy shipper?
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2000 word update, new content at “That's why we couldn't find anything in the barracks,”

Highway to Krell:
http://pastebin.com/hE1muHCb
>no new tags

>>7314598
That's good too, but I'll probably only have time for one, so I'm gonna go with Brokeback Mountain featuring Polars.
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>>7314643
>so I'm gonna go with Brokeback Mountain featuring Polars.
Not the OP, but less angst please, because a Yuri story without it would be a fucking breath of fresh air.
I'm also going to beseech you to avoid the miserable cliché of "oh no, the woman I love is fucking other people because I haven't confessed yet and I am very sad" , because that's another terrible trope that needs death and your setting seems extremely likely for it
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>>7314652
How many times do I have to promise you guys I won't write NTR before you'll believe me?
Are you secretly trying to reverse-psychology me into writing it, is that it?
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What are some good monsters to include in a fantay story?

So far I've got mimics, orcs, giant spiders, tentacle pits, and mindflayers. I feel like I need a few more to expand the variety.

Any suggestions welcome.
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>>7314659
Is that a problem that you actually have? I'm new here from over in /u/ because I wanted to see if the writethread here had anything worth a damn yuri-wise
It really is just a problem that way too fucking many authors love for angst value, I don't even think it's a NTR fetish thing, and I been burned before by authors doing that crap is all
Why do people want/expect you to write NTR? I had no idea
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>>7314663
Werewolves, minotaurs, centaurs and satyrs. Maybe a dragon
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>>7314663
Minotaurs, centaurs, werewolves and dragons are pretty standard fare, and really popular in the 'monster dickings' genre. Beyond that, just picking a certain culture's mythology that you like works, there's not many that don't involve a bunch of monsters as allegories for something weirdly erotic.
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>>7314663
Golems are a favorite of mine, also Sirens and Harpys.
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>>7314663
Grab a Dungeons & Dragons monster manual, you'll have a wealth of choice.
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>>7314671
>>7314673

Thanks. I've decided to include minotaurs & dragons.

I think I'll include slimes / slime-girls too since they can be pretty versatile.
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>>7314663
Some non-rape orcs would be really damn nice and unexpected, and lizardmen, ogres and satyrs could be nice options
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>>7314664
Yeah a few people seem unreasonably paranoid about NTR, despite my repeated assurances that I won't write it, sometimes they'll refuse to read something if they so much as imagine an NTR scenario could potentially take place.

I would like to produce more /u/ stuff, I frequent the board a lot but I've only done one story so far that had specifically lesbian themes, and I've never posted it there for fear that it's too obviously written by a dude.

I'd love to hear your opinion if you're looking for that kind of content.

Spectral Bride:
>Vera finds more than she bargains for when she ventures into a haunted mansion in search of footage for her ghost hunting blog.
http://pastebin.com/za50YNR6
8,455 words.
Ebook: https://www.patreon.com/file?h=7752451&i=773410
Tags:
>lesbian, supernatural, bondage, oral, femdom, kissing, biting, riding crop, candle wax, strap-on, chocking, breathplay, french maid, turning, corruption

(artwork related, courtesy of lewdoblush)
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>>7314675
The victims for the monsters are all going to be female pretty much so I don't think sirens & harpys would work well, but I do want to include Golems.

>>7314686
Hmm, I was planning on just having regular rapey orcs but I may reconsider.

I suppose I could give the role of brutal rapist to the ogres and make orcs a more neutral race.
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>>7314689
As I said it's a far too common angst bullshit tool in Yuri and hyper-slutty aliens seemed a pretty high risk of such a thing
>MC's alien waifu fucks tons of dudes because that's normal for them and is confused when MC has a problem with that
Is a scenerio that entirely too many yuri angst writes would be salivating over the angsty possibilities of
But as you say, you aren't a Yuri writer so I shouldn't worry you'll do their kind of thing
As for Spectral, I can't say I'm into it, too dubcon for my tastes, but in technical terms it's petty good. What you need to think of for future yuri endeavors, especially this request is the emotional angle of sex. There really is something incredibly powerful about kissing or touching somebody you've loved for a long time and have finally gotten with
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>>7314689
The main thing that /u/ is likely to object to here is the use of strap-on, but provided that nobody is doing the stupid strap-on blowjob thing it should be fine.
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>>7314726
>but provided that nobody is doing the stupid strap-on blowjob
God, I hate that. I can kinda see the point of strap-on facefucking as a pure dominance-discomfort thing, but unless it's a magic discount-futa dildo it's just pointless, really
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>>7311882
Very nearly done, I've finally resolved my differences with the comissioner who has agreed to just let me work on the grounds that he be allowed to edit afterwards. I found this acceptable, so progress continues apace.
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>>7314721
Understandable, this one was pretty hard even by my standards, if I do a Polar lesbian story it'll be a lot softer than Spectral Bride (though it will be gentle femdom, that's the Polar's thing.)
Kissing is definitely on my radar, so I'm sure I can swing that.
I'm not into angst so that shouldn't be a problem, I do like some drama but usually outside the context of the relationship (unless it's specifically requested).

>>7314726
Yeah none of that. Maybe I'll post it on /u/'s story thread and see what they think of it then, thanks for the advice guys.
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How's a good way to describe fetal movement? Writing a bit for something where a woman's been knocked up by a tentacle creature.
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>>7314735
>I'm not into angst so that shouldn't be a problem
As I said, you aren't a writer of bad yuri and I shouldn't expect bad yuri problems. Mostly I twitched because you said "brokeback", which as a film was just about the definition of angst and fucking-other-people drama
>I do like some drama but usually outside the context of the relationship (unless it's specifically requested).
Again, I'm not the OP but I would suggest against family drama, because it's just so ubiquitous. Maybe the drama is just the russian government being russians in some way
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https://www.literotica.com/stories/memberpage.php?uid=292198&page=submissions


i figured i would drop this here in case it might be of interest to you guys. its an author on literotica whose writings is mostly about aliens or parasites taking control of women's minds causing ahegao and using them to breed
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>>7314555
>>7314735
Original requester here, I like the hunting/outdoors angle a lot, and I'm definitely against angst or much drama, I was thinking quite fluffy.
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Anyone got anything on the topic of parasites/worms/insects/tentacles going up a girl's nose to infect her brain to take control of her?
Kinda like the typical body snatchers trope
Looking for ones where the victim is tricked into believing another person and relaxes while the person drops something on her and begins infecting her (with the girl's sudden realisation that something went completely wrong)
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>>7314732
Ah, wow, that's taken some time, eh.
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if possible can someone do a story for this pic of living Armour if so thank you
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>>7314887
I can't even tell what's happening in that image.
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>>7314908
she is putting on or taking off armor that is a parasitic organism the piece on the ground is the chest piece
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>>7310230
Fuckers for Algernon?
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>>7314643
Well I caught up and I'm glad to see you're working a little more tenderness in to your writing, and a tiny bit more active participation from the 'submissive' partner; all the details of the Krell and Lena's interactions and guiding through the unusual coupling were a good departure from the "one side just lays down and becomes a sex toy" that is the stereotype of Boraleans.
Maybe it's just an illusion since it's a human female this time but I'll give the benefit of the doubt and hope for more mutually interactive sex like that (even if the humans are getting wrecked in the process).

On the topic of the Krell, did you ever come to any sort of conclusion on the clashing themes of Krell being romantic but also being very polyamorous?
I don't think they're as clashing as others have, because it can be written as them being very "free love" until they find a partner they want to settle down with, but it would be interesting to hear where you went with that.
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>>7314686
InCase seems to be working on something with non-rapey (but also clearly futa) Orcs. I can't wait for that.
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>>7314663

aggressively lewd fairies
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>>7314689
I accidentally did NTR in a story once. People were maaaaaaad.

I didn't even realize that was where it was effectively going.

I may as well have stabbed a few people in the dick.
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Thinking about writing erotic fiction. Took a run at it. Tell me your thoughts.

I now beheld her heavy breasts...then I used the back of my hand to lightly stroke her belly... I then gently rested my face her nave; her warmth steadily communicated with me. Her breathing immediately deepend, and I methodically sucked the slowest of kisses on her thick abdomen. She laid back sluggishly and submitted to trenchant erotic horror.

>"Here now! Who bites at my little toes?"

I quickly glided my warm tongue along the innermost sole curve. I fastly pecked light kisses on her little toes. A gold ring tightly encricled the middle one. She spattered giggles, and her big toe lurched back, so I ruthlessly devoured it. It well deserved a solid suck, so I pulled it in while my tongue shoved and muscled it around.
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>>7315051
I have literally never heard the word "trenchant" used before in my life. Had to look it up, which doesn't bode well for if you're trying to set a mood.

Also, I've never heard "spattered" used in that context before,I'd consider revising.

In short, this reads like something out of the 19th century.
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>>7315051
You're not trying to impress a school teacher here. Keep it simple. Read Orwell's writing advice:
http://www.orwell.ru/library/essays/politics/english/e_polit/
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>>7315067
Fair, but who cares if it's unusual and sounds old? Serious question.
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>>7315111
The reader. Clarity and being 'pulled out' are two big problem areas new writers can run into. This can especially be common if the only reading they've done is classics.

If your reader has to stop and go 'wait, what does that mean?' or 'wait, did they mean this?' then you are lacking clarity, and the reader gets bumped out of the story. If they are reading and a passage makes them stop and laugh where they should be angry, or aroused, or whatever, then that can be bad to.

It can also be a matter of audience, where the right audience will accept any version of what you want to write. But that is a choice the writer needs to make, and shouldn't be an accident as it were.
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>>7315119
Give me your take on this:

I love my house. Vials line walls. Toes, eyes, tails. I stuffed shelves with tomes. They're esoteric...they're mostly like stories you quietly, slowly digest, then terrifying magick blasts out of you.

The wood became green-grey. I know not how it happened. My dwelling, as a result, now blends into the surrounding forest. Cobwebs develop in corners, but I clean them. A witch leaves spiders alone...usually. I try to maintain an equilibrium with the creatures of the forest. Or beings, if you like. I only kill animals for food, or if they salivate after me.
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>>7315129
>I stuffed shelves with tomes.
"Stuffed shelves" sounds modern and informal. "Tomes" sounds old and formal. Put the two together and you have a probably unintentional comedic tone.

How does cleaning cobwebs qualify as usually leaving spiders alone? They can't catch food without webs.
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>>7315139
Thanks for the tips. Show me your writing.
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>>7315129

Almost poetic, good imagery, but probably like bringing a guided rocket launcher to a shooting gallery. But that's just me.
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>>7315142
Thanks. That's what I was going for! Out of context, it sounds overwritten. That's meant to be the punchline after a lot of punchy text.
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http://pastebin.com/UtLXYVk8 Have some giantess/tiny man, masturbation with feet and navel undertones.
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>>7311953
>Decided I'm going to continue writing what I want to see in the world, which in this case is elf shortstacks desperate for a wee.

Sometimes you just have to marvel at the human experience. We are the best species by far.
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Sup. I write mostly TG stories.

My current longest which has one full arc of story

>"Stuck as a Sexy Martial Artist in a Roleplaying Game."
>http://www.tgstorytime.com/viewstory.php?sid=3701

>"My Friend The God Incarnate"
>http://www.tgstorytime.com/viewstory.php?sid=3813

>"TG Superhumans: Sapphire vs. Marble
>http://www.tgstorytime.com/viewstory.php?sid=3838

A lot of writing TG fiction is finding a way to make the story last beyond the 'I'm a girl?!" phase. I feel I'm onto something big with my latest story (TG Superhumans) as I've been trying to crack male-to-female superhuman origins for a while.

One day I hope to make these in webcomics.
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>>7315502
How dreadful
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>>7315577
That's not nice anon. At least try and be constructive.
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>>7315492
La vie est drôle, hah?
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>>7315502
Webcomics are tricky to pull off, Cuteanon tried his hand at it once and it nearly put him off drawing completely.
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>>7314196
Give me some time. I have been very busy. I'd write it up on my phone but, I'm afraid that's go terribly.
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>>7315914
Which is unfortunate, it was really nicely done.
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Is that 1k words by Friday thing not happening? I was actually looking forward to seeing some new stuff...
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>>7316126
Belg already posted his. I think for the others, you may need to nag them harder. Lots of people tend to wash out without near-constant encouragement, at least at the beginning.
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>>7316126
I was too drunk on Friday to post mine, and forgot on Saturday. I'll post it when I get home tonight
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>>7316126
Editing got swept up in the whole 'weekend' thing and life events. Will post by tonight! Maybe even sooner.
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>>7315914
To be fair I'm a special kind of incapable when it comes to projects of any appreciable scale. Someone with even a little bit of real dedication will probably fare better.
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1300 words today, research ate up a lot of time! Please note that the weird gender shit starts here, if you want a strictly hetero experience you may want to wait until I can edit this version down. I'm pretty confident that I can produce two editions as I did with Outpost, although it's a little more complex this time as I can't just cut and paste scenes due to the gender changing being central to the plot.

For now I'm going to be updating the version that includes all the trap/futa stuff, and then editing those scenes down when it's complete.

>>7315036
Thanks for the review, I'm glad I've been able to break out of my usual formula, even if it's only a little. I'll try harder as I go forward.
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>>7315036
Oh and no, i'm still working on that aspect of their biology.
Still leaning towards the method I described.
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>>7316619
Are you planning on doing a story with a male human and a Krell?
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https://discord.gg/Zvxg6

We want degenerates
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>>7316758
What, like writers or is this just a /d/ general discord?
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>>7316758
Look in the OP, we've already got a Discord.

How about you join OURS instead, huh?
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>>7316754
Yeah I'm going to try and cover all the bases in this one.
Human female on male Krell
Krell female on human male
Human male on Krell trap
Futa Krell on female human
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>>7316763
Oh, okay.
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>>7316763
>Human female on male Krell
>Krell female on human male
>Human male on Krell trap
>Futa Krell on female human

I'm working on something similar, but instead of futa krells, it's futa humans, and instead of human males, it's human futas, and instead of female humans, it's...

Well, I guess there's a few of those around, but only under deep protest and with me closing my eyes and picturing them with Pringle can dongs.
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>>7316790
I've never written any futa before, and it's not something I'm really into, my futa folder being as paltry as it is.

What is it people generally look for in a futa story? Besides the 'chicks with dicks' aspect, is there anything people tend to fixate on specifically? Krell have internal genitalia so I won't have to worry about the balls/no balls controversy, nor the vagina/no vagina one.
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>>7316372
Even incomplete, it's still leagues better than a lot of stuff online if you ask me.
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>>7316809
large sweaty balls
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>>7316827
That will be an issue as their balls are inside their torsos.
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>>7316828
large sweaty torso balls
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>>7316809
I don't like futa so this is definitely biased, but it seems like it's an excuse to remove men as much as possible while still being able to have the erotic aspects associated with dicks.
I don't understand it and most major fans seem to fall into it to a degree that approaches mental illness in their insistence that every character be futa.
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>>7316832
This board is a testament to how annoying and spammy they got with shoving that shit everywhere and into everything too.
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>> 7305493
Sorry, got distracted with that "work thing".

CC: Credit card (as opposed as PayPal) on Patreon. It has less limitations.

Mamabliss (http://www.mamabliss.com/blog/) is the illustrator who did the covers for my two books.
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New to these threads, hello I suppose.

I feel like writing something for the first time in forever -- last time I wrote smut it was some dota 2 smut about Enchantress about a year ago.

Anyway, I'm gonna start writing something about an elf maid. That sounds kinda hot. Hopefully will have this ready for you guys in a bit.
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>>7316809
I like dick and I like pussy, I like boobs and I like butts.

I don't find a masculine body attractive in the slightest but I do find myself attracted to dicks, futa is just everything I want wrapped in an erotic package.
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>>7315502
I like the setting of the first story a lot, gonna continue it?

Also I wish you made the explicit scenes a little longer, they don't last long enough.
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>>7314853
Yeah. YEAH.

I've not been thrilled about it. I'll probably finish in an hour or two.
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>>7316847
>>7309380
Here's that elvish maid story I said I started writing! Enjoyed doing it quite a bit.

Tags; Fellatio, Master/Servant, light musk

http://pastebin.com/pL07Yz8f
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>>7316728
It's been a while, mind reposting that method? Sorry for digging up old arguments but I figure it's better to keep talking it until it's locked down in the writing.
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>>7316763
>no futa on male
Dang, that's the one thing I was hoping for from this
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>>7316809
Specifically for you, there's the issue that futadom is functionally indistinguishable from bog standard maledom
I guess a good thing to focus on would be the ability for a futa's lover to play with her penis and vagina at the same time
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>>7317019
OK, great. I promise not to bug or nag you regarding the werewolf request thing
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>>7317087
They go into heat about once every thirty years, their lifespans being multiple hundreds. That accounts for why this problem has never been encountered by humans before.

They undergo a powerful heat and subsequent mating frenzy involving many individuals, during which a few Krell will pair off with a preferred partner who is an ideal match for them.

Once paired, those two Krell will only mate with eachother during the following mating seasons, and have sex recreationally during the intermediate time. In that sense the mating frenzy is as much a search for a compatible partner as it is a breeding ball.

Next season the offspring of the previous mating frenzy will join the current one, along with the Krell who did not pair off in the previous season.

I think in that way there will always be new Krell being cycled into the frenzies, and a significant enough number pairing off so that they don't experience too much of a population explosion which might result in starvation/overpopulation.

I'm hoping that system is going to satisfy both my desire to make them mindless sex monsters, and the obscene fetish this general has for romantic handholding.

>>7317095
My plan right now is to have the team travel to the Krell homeworld and become embroiled in a mating frenzy, resulting in a "Woodstock hippies on acid" scenario in which everyone gets fucked by everything. Hopefully that will provide enough novelty to make it interesting.
Editing that into a hetero version is going to be a nightmare though.

>>7317091
I didn't think of that, but it's not really up my alley (pun intended).
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>>7317110
Not exactly the same, but great white females aren't able to get pregnant until they are 30 years old. It's not the same has having that great a time between heat cycles, but there is a basis for long lived species taking longer to have population increases.
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>>7317110
>and the obscene fetish this general has for romantic handholding.
All things considered, do you know how rare mutual defloration stuff is? Let alone mutual defloloration femdom, and even more so with catgirls and muscle?
It's exceptionally rare, so as the local absurdly prolific femdom catgirl guy, why are you surprised that people call you for that sort of thing?
You're a pretty arcane fetishist yourself, why do others of that sort surprise you?
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>>7317131
I have written mutual catgirl defloration!

I certainly recognize not only this general's penchant towards romance, but the overall positive reception my more romantic stories have had as a whole. It's definitely beneficial to include that element, even in places where I have to shoehorn it.
People just seem to eat it up.

I probably won't do any more mutual defloration though, without the childhood romance subplot it's very unusual/difficult. You'd never encounter a virgin Krell or Borealan under any other circumstances for example.

>>7317122
Cool, that's useful to know. I read some interesting stuff about sharks storing sperm for later use too. There was one shark in an aquarium in California I think it was, that gave birth three years after its last contact with a male.
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>>7313400
So that's how internet works in Australia.
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>>7317141
>I probably won't do any more mutual defloration though, without the childhood romance subplot it's very unusual/difficult
What about that /u/ one upthread? It fits all the criteria and I get the very strong feeling that's what the requesters had in mind
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any tricks to get pen to paper? i'm suffering from lack of motivation, both academically and lewd writing
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>>7317145
Oh yeah, I didn't even consider that because 'penis in vagoo', but the human at least would be a virgin in that scenario, yeah. That would work.

>>7317146
Try giving yourself treats or little rewards for reaching milestones, like "if I hit 1000 words today I get a can of coke" or something.
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>>7317146
There's really no single answer. Everyone has there ways. Sometimes you just have to force yourself to write.
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>>7317146
In all honesty my answer is whisky. I read and watch a bunch of lewd while pouring bourbon down my throat and it's really the thing that gets me in the zone
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>>7317147
>but the human at least would be a virgin in that scenario, yeah. That would work.
I am going to warn you right now about this became I know a thing or two, but it had really better be both of them or there'll be hell for lunch worse then Worlds Apart. Just to preempt any issue when you get to writing it, because I'd rather not see another thread blown away becaue people expected one thing and got another
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>>7317159
Virgins just don't interest me, they're honestly pretty useless for smut if you're portraying them accurately in that they just aren't experienced and don't know what to do. They're also not fun to write because you can't do anything novel with them. You have to retread the same steps every time.

It's far more appealing to me to have one inexperienced character, and then an experienced one who blows their mind. The exploratory factor is already covered by the characters being different species.

The way I envision it, the Polar would be moderately experienced due to that just being a factor of life for them, and would be well placed to help the human girl discover and explore her sexuality.
The dynamic would then be this overtly sexual alien who doesn't have any hangups and sees same-sex relations as completely mundane trying to coax this girl out of the closet.
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>>7317170
>Virgins just don't interest me, they're honestly pretty useless for smut if you're portraying them accurately in that they just aren't experienced and don't know what to do. They're also not fun to write because you can't do anything novel with them. You have to retread the same steps every time.
>It's far more appealing to me to have one inexperienced character, and then an experienced one who blows their mind. The exploratory factor is already covered by the characters being different species.
Sir, if that's what you think, then I'd honestly suggest dropping the request entirety, since you seem to have a fundamental disagreement with the people requesting this. I know a thing or two about the /u/ crowd and as a drunk bastard I'd bet a year of sobriety that they wouldn't be interested in that
>The way I envision it, the Polar would be moderately experienced due to that just being a factor of life for them, and would be well placed to help the human girl discover and explore her sexuality.
>The dynamic would then be this overtly sexual alien who doesn't have any hangups and sees same-sex relations as completely mundane trying to coax this girl out of the closet.
Sir, I would severely recommend that if that sort of thing interests you, that you design a story around it rather than adapting a request that isn't for that to it.
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>>7317188
The requester never said anything about them being virgins, with the human it's obviously assumed because the plot is about her discovering her sexuality, but I don't see why the Polar has to be one. In my opinion that works against the theme because the Polar would be perfectly placed to be her guide, and the conflicting culture/values of human and Borealan society would be interesting to explore in that context.

I don't share your fixation with virgin romances and I'm not interested in writing that. My aliens are by their very nature promiscuous and are the least suited to that theme, not to mention my own unsuitability for accomplishing that.

Ultimately if I take time off my usual workload to do a request it's because I like the pitch, if I don't like it and won't enjoy it, then I won't be motivated to write it and the time would be better spent on other projects.

If you want such fine creative control over the plot and characters then you would be better served by a commission.
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>>7317170
>me, they're honestly pretty useless for smut if you're portraying them accurately in that they just aren't experienced and don't know what to do. They're also not fun to write because you can't do anything novel with them. You have to retread the same steps every time.
I wouldn't agree, because the idea of people who know a lot 'in theory' became they're huge lewd enthusiasts but don't have any practical experience fucking and trying to do things they want to do but only halfway know what about is hot ad hell to me
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>>7317203
That can still be accomplished with a single virgin though, can't it?
>virgin wants to try a thing she read about
>experienced partner laughs as she messes it up
>virgins mind is frazzled when the more experienced partner teaches her how to do it properly
>lewd ensues

I'm totally putting that in actually.
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>>7317202
>If you want such fine creative control over the plot and characters then you would be better served by a commission.
As I already said, I'm not the requester, just a guy who knows /u/ and knows you and doesn't feel like another fight starting here
I don't want to get an argument going because this isn't even my fetish, but I'm just saying that I'd bet a lot that the requester will want that disagreement
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Well, if the backlash from Worlds Apart taught me anything it's that I should write what I enjoy, and what I know will work. Trying to appease people whose interests don't align with my own simply resulted in serial miscommunication, and ultimately a failure to deliver what they expected but failed to communicate, under the assumption that I should intrinsically know.

It was a great success with my regular readers, but for the people who got angry that was of course the problem.

I'm sure I will get the same reaction with the lesbian story if I make a second attempt to cater to that crowd, not that I have any inclination to do so anymore.
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>>7317218
Do you at least understand why we didn't like it and how you subverted our expectations?
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Well, I guess habitually checking 4chan while waiting for breakfast to cook was gonna go this way eventual
Ah Christ, the original requester here. I didn't intend to cause wreckage like this, I just didn't really know snek's interests and limits that well
Yeah, I had mutual first time-ness in mind in the request, should have mentioned it explicitly, forgot that non-/u/ writers wouldn't assume that as a matter of course
Actually the idea of a member of a promiscuous alien species holding out for the girl she loves even though everybody thinks it's weird as a big part of why I made it borlean rather than generic in first place, the subversion being cute as hell to me.
If that isn't what you want to write it's no skin off my back, though I may try somebody else or doing it myself if you don't mind that. As has been said before, you're a specialist
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>>7317248
Well I do after the fact, yes. There's a minority of people whose interpretation of what constitutes romance is very narrow, and if writers don't stick to that they seem to see them as Grinch-esque monsters with hearts of coal, which couldn't be further from the truth.
I only tried to steal Christmas that one time and the charges were dropped.

The problem occurs when people fail to take into account differences in taste and then don't properly communicate what they want, assuming that the writer should intrinsically know what their interpretation is as they see theirs as the only correct one.

It comes down to fundamental differences in taste that need to be adequately communicated, as to 'assume' makes an 'ass' out of 'u' and 'me', the fecal product of that ass of miscommunication being something like Worlds Apart.

>>7317258
I see your angle, and I like it, so now I'm conflicted.
I wonder if I can merge the two ideas, I'm still not really interested in writing mutual defloration again for the aforementioned reasons, but maybe I can find a way to incorporate elements of that to bring it more inline with what you want.
I'll have a think about it.
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>>7317272
I don't follow your stuff became I'm not into femdom, so I dunno the details, but what about the alien girl knowing a lot more though second-hand from actually watching fellow aliens fuck rather than just watching shitty porno as the human did? A gap in knowledge and ideas they want to try could be as sexy as a gap in actual experience
I dunno, I would just kinda assume that slutty aliens would=public sex
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>>7317272
>>7317292
Combining the two with femdom, the borlean girl getting highly sexually but not romantically frustrated became all her borlean friends are starting to ride the casual sex train while she's happy waiting for her best friend to realize things and, post-confession telling her she's got a LOT of backlogged arousal to take care of since she didn't admit it sooner, and the human GF happily trying to 'clear the backlog' with extensive cuddling and sex would be absolutely perfect
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>>7317272
>I'm still not really interested in writing mutual defloration again for the aforementioned reasons,
Why would you think that lesbian mutual deforestation would have anything at all in common with the same thing but straight? I really encourage you to read some girl/girl fic with that fetish and get a feel for how different it actually is before deciding what you do and don't want to write
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>>7317316

>deforestation

works well. all proper tribbing is done skin to skin
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>>7316905
Yeah I think I'll do a redraft to make the plot make more sense and just have a better level of writing in general. I wouldn't want to move onto the next arc without liking the beginning.
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>>7317322
Autocorrect strikes again
Though a story about the butchest borlean, the only actual lesbian there and an equally butch human woman falling in love during a tree-cutting contest would be absurd and amwxing
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>>7317272
Hey Snek, is there any chance of you writing another queen-like character like Ursi was when Dennis first met her in Fineprint? Really enjoyed reading about how he came to realize that he liked serving her. Sadly that kind of died pretty quickly after they exchanged names. Her commanding but not really too aggressive nature was pretty great.
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>>7317272
Except that the objections had nothing to do with that and everything with the "muh genetics" asspull that came out of nowhere and affected a character who had zero indication of acting as she did.

I really wonder if you learned anything from that debacle at all, save for how you can get your way with enough tangled justifications.
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>>7316809
>What is it people generally look for in a futa story? Besides the 'chicks with dicks' aspect, is there anything people tend to fixate on specifically?

That is the question, isn't it?

There's a Latin phrase, de gustibus non disputandem est, which means "manners of taste can't be disputed." So there's a certain point whre I can only say that I like futa because I do.

I can say that I'm not attracted to men or men-shaped people. I like women, I like boobs, and I like dicks. Or at the very least, I appreciate the function of a dick.

A little while back, I tried writing a straight sex story... and then I chickened out and made the woman a futa... and then I still didn't finish it because I just wasn't interested enough to finish.

I wonder if giving futas huge dicks is my own sort of power fantasy or something. I don't know, but I sure have fun writing it.
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>>7317495
Shhh, don't make him mad or he'll angrily make more dumb things cannon in revenge, like krell being vore monsters to anyone who fails to be their ideal partner.
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>>7317496
Futas without a huge dick just aren't the same. In futa on male it's just a nice way to make them superior. In futa on female it's the awe factor. And in both it's just hot.
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>>7317495
>zero indication of acting as she did.

You wanted the character to behave in a very specific way, but never communicated that to me, instead assuming that I should intrinsically know. Again, people have very different tastes, if you want something specific you need to tell the writer or he's just going to do what feels right to him.
The interpretation of what constitutes romance and how people should behave is highly subjective. Specific results require specific instructions.
(And it's not an asspull I designed them for that exact purpose)

>>7317311
I could definitely incorporate elements of that.

>>7317292
You'd be correct, there is indeed a lot of public sex. There's nothing sacred about it to them, and they're universally bisexual, basically big furry bonobo monkeys. Problem is that also means they don't place any value in virginity, so the concept of saving themselves for someone wouldn't really exist. They could be introduced to it, but the dynamic is wrong here, as that would require the human to pursue the Polar rather than the other way around.
They're monogamous where romance is concerned though, for example in my Fineprint books Queen Ursi is romantically entangled with her human partner in an exclusive sense, but regularly involves her underlings and concubines in their sex life because that's just part of their culture. Not saying I'm gonna do that here, but it's an example of how they behave.

>>7317399
Absolutely, I'm still formulating plans to flesh out the Betelgeusian queens, it's early days but I'm leaning towards a similar theme. Probably /gfd/ with elements of slavery and harems. Again the running theme will be culture clash, and the queens being perplexed by humanity's inability to adapt to hive life. Tend to the larvae and copulate with the drones you hairless monkeys, it isn't hard.

>>7317496
I definitely agree that there's no point including a dick that isn't impressive.
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>>7317638
>Probably /gfd/ with elements of slavery and harems. Again the running theme will be culture clash, and the queens being perplexed by humanity's inability to adapt to hive life. Tend to the larvae and copulate with the drones you hairless monkeys, it isn't hard.

Huh, well I'm not sure if that's exactly what I wanted but I guess as long as the mc turns into that queen's favorite servant/lover/significant other/whatever it could be pretty nice. Do you plan on making him the only male in that harem and the rest female or will it be lots of males? Really don't like more than one guy with a woman, even if she is a queen.
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>>7317638
>They could be introduced to it, but the dynamic is wrong here, as that would require the human to pursue the Polar rather than the other way around
Wasn't the original idea that the couple were childhood friends and that the borlean was heavily exposed to human culture? It would not exactly be difficult for one to pick up on the whole thing about the vast majority of humans having this thing about sexual fidelity as part of a romantic relationship
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>>7317638
Not that guy, but isn't the burden on you to ask the requester those things instead of assuming he should be able to read your mind and approve of anything you do without knowing what it might be?

Pretty hypocritical of you to suggest that, if you ask me.
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>>7317645
Yeah just one male, some hapless captive they don't know what to do with and try to include in their daily routine.

In ant colonies everyone is female, the workers are female, the queens, the warriors, the only males are the winged drones who fly the hive in what is called a "nuptial flight" in order to fertilize queens from other nests.

If we use that model then the male captive would be alone with thousands of females who wouldn't ever have had access to a male before. Obviously there's a lot of tweaking to do in order to make those drones and warriors interested in sex at all, but it should be a fun scenario to work with.

We can have /gfd/ queens and /fit/ warriors and curious drones, all kinds of shit.

>>7317660
Yeah but I've written that scenario once already, not really interested in retreading the same ground there.
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>>7317673
>I've written that scenario once already, not really interested in retreading the same ground there.

You know, there's no shame in just saying you're not interested and suggesting he ask somebody else. He doesn't seem to want what you would prefer to write, so you'd both be better suited to having him look elsewhere for his lesbian catgirl needs.
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>>7317673
Fuck yeah. Gonna be the first of your stories since Fineprint that I'm actually excited about.
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>>7317671
Well it wasn't one requester, it was a compilation of maybe a dozen different ideas people had pitched. I get so many requests that I often just meld them all into one story, which tends to work out well.

>but isn't the burden on you to ask the requester those things

Nope, the requester tells me what they want and I try to incorporate it, I don't have the time nor the energy to play psychotherapist. If you don't tell me what you want then I can't write it, am I supposed to be possessed of psychic powers that inform me when someone has a desire they haven't communicated to me?

Anyway enough talk about Worlds Apart, I know very well why some people didn't like it and how to avoid the same situation in the future.

>>7317678
Might be a couple of months yet, my backlog is large but I'll get around to it. I wanted to maybe condense my stories down to a 30k limit so I can get to more of them faster, but that isn't working out so far with Highway to Krell.
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>>7317638
I don't think it's rocket appliances that when people show their interest in a story about a borlean who grew up on earth and wasn't the classic borlean personality type, they do not in fact want a story where a borlean isn't like the others but is forced to become one in the end anyways
>>7317671
I think part of the problem was that there wasn't any one requester, it was snek throwing elements of several ideas/requests into one story of his own design, and he happened to write the first half of the story in a way that was what people were hoping for and was surprised when people didn't like the second half that was entirely his own creation rather than what people had asked for
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>>7317694
Can't say the Krell story appeals to me but you shouldn't force yourself to write shorter stories just to pump out more stories. Tell your story until you're satisfied with it.
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>>7317696
They didn't ask me though, again we're coming back to this problem of a subset of people assuming a story should proceed a certain way based on their own views of romance, while not actually checking with the writer to see if that's what he has planned.
At no point was I given any instructions as to how their reunion should play out, I wrote what I 'always' write, and my characters behaved the way they have been established to behave.

That was only a problem for people who don't like my flavor of femdom and don't like how Borealans behave to begin with, and why those people want content from me specifically I can't fathom.

I don't think it's any more reasonable to be so offended when a femdom writer includes elements of femdom in a story involving the aliens he designed specifically to facilitate femdom. The Borealan character behaved in the way they have been well established to behave, and expecting me to deviate from that formula with zero input is nonsensical.
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>>7317496
>Writing lines on the chalk board in school
>Teacher has her use "that" instead of "who"
What is our education system coming to these days?
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>>7317713
>and my characters behaved the way they have been established to behave.
No, they didn't and that's exactly the fucking point. The Liz character who came back from the separation wasn't the same one who left at all, and that's exactly what people had a problem with. Nobody asked for that kind of change, nobody at all and they didn't like it being sprung on them. It isn't about femdom or any of that, and I'm not telling you now anything you weren't told then
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>>7317734
Isn't "that" right if you're talking about things? Clearly a cumbucket isn't human.
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>>7317735
I honestly don't get how all those people made that mistake. From the outline snek was talking about for worlds apart it was going to be a Borealen raised on Earth going back to her homeworld then coming back a full Borealen to claim her human love she left on earth years ago. That's what I expect and what we got.
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>>7317741
You make a solid argument, anon.
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>>7317673
Alright snek, can I just formally withdraw my request? It's obviously not your thing and what you're interested in writing isn't my thing, either
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>>7317735
Then they should have COMMUNICATED what they wanted to happen instead of ASSUMING I would just do it with no input from them.
It's especially boneheaded to take established characters with a very specific modus operandi and then assume that they'll behave completely differently while never actually explaining what you want. How could that result in anything besides disappointment?

We're just going round in circles and there's no point talking about any further, why you seem to think that there exists only a single, monolithic, objectively correct way to write a romance I can't imagine.

Some people like Romeo and Juliet and some people like 50 Shades of Grey, if you don't tell people what you expect then they can't accommodate you.

>>7317747
It was well received with people who like my regular content, but why this minority of people who seem to hate everything to do with my characters keep coming to me for their content is a constant source of confusion. I'm the least qualified person here to write what they expect and it's been clearly demonstrated that I don't understand their tastes.
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>>7317769
It's not your fault man, the subject has just dredged up some residual Worlds Apart butthurt.

Well I like the pitch so I'm still gonna write some variation of it later down the line, I'm sorry I couldn't bring it in line with what you expected. Not suggesting your tastes are bad in any way, just that virgin romances aren't really my cup of tea.
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>>7317770

If you want to give a quick example of "snek can have his borealans act differently so long as you specify it in advance", just point to outpost. I had you make polars who had way more individuality than the norm despite being in a secluded pack, and it worked out beautifully.
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>>7317770
>Have character act in a certain way, based upon their birth culture's influence
>They move to another culture and find it at odds with their own
>They're very pointedly shown to resist the new culture from the get go with no signs of weakening resolve
>Cut to their return to their original culture as a completely different character
>The only given reason for this was "GENETICS" despite that being completely at odds to all logic and the previous elements of the story
It's not about people only liking one specific type of romance, it's the fact you set the story up from the beginning, with the help of multiple people all pointing in one direction, to be based around that type of romance, and then out of the blue utterly change it with nonsensical arguments. Many people, like me, assumed that you would write it that way, because there were no warning signs that it was ever going to be anything else.

That's not even the part that annoys me - and probably most others at this point. It's that you have the hubris to insult everyone who objects to it, and not only that, but you use hypocritcal shit like:
>you seem to think that there exists only a single, monolithic, objectively correct way to write a romance
When you're the one doing exactly that.
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>>7317805
If I'm given clear instructions and it makes sense in context, then I can generally make most things work. I managed to do a Borealan who was completely immersed in human culture and behaved like a human after all, the reunion was where some people had a problem.

By the way I've been brainstorming some stuff for your commission, how do you feel about the pair being stalked by a local predator, maybe some kind of bioluminescent cephalopod that periodically emerges from the subsurface ocean to hunt them?
I figured there would be no fauna on the surface, and they have to fish to get food as it's been established Polars do on Borealis, which could attract the monster.
Might add an element of urgency to the plot, and it could end in a confrontation at the mining base so I could write some action.
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>>7317846

He made it pretty clear that he writes femdom and romance the way he prefers, and if you want something different, either pay him for it or ask someone else. I don't see how you keep getting confused on that.
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>>7317853

That would be perfect for solving their food problem(for a week) in an explosive way and allows for plenty of character development in showing how they handle it too.

Count me in.
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>>7317846
I acknowledge that there are many different styles of romance, but I'm only interested in writing the ones that appeal to me. Do not come to me for vanilla sweetheart virgins, I don't know how to make that any clearer. I don't like it and I'm not good at it. I don't know why you would expect that of me, nor why you seem adamant that I be the one to write these scenarios.

>>7317859
Cool, I'll add that in then. I should really go write some more Krell before I run out of time tonight.
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>>7317855
>He made it pretty clear that he writes femdom and romance the way he prefers, and if you want something different, either pay him for it or ask someone else. I don't see how you keep getting confused on that.
He wasn't really explicit about it until *after* worlds apart, is the thing.
Plus it came right after he did Outpost and Purple Heart and was doing Grave Goods, all of which were quite different from his standard stuff, as you just noted.
Somebody who came into the thread around that time could have very easily gotten a skewed view of what snek does and doesn't do
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>>7317855
Because he made it anything but clear at the time. If someone asks you to do a certain task, giving outlines of their preferences for how it is to be done, pointing to examples where you had already done it the way they wanted, and you not only don't say anything to show that's not how you operate, but blatantly agree that you will perform that task to their preference, the fault isn't on them. It's on you.
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>>7317902

I'm going to be writing up a set of scenes and equipment that will be going into the story. It'll be more like a set of tools you can use to write it the way you want, where you get to choose which tools to use where so long as you use them all. Do check your email when you get a moment by the way.

>>7317918
Hey, I don't disagree. If someone just walked into the thread for the first time or two, that could have easily happened. Snek isn't denying that, he admit Worlds apart was not entirely up to the intended expectations. He's just trying to explain why he did what he did, not justify it.
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>>7317939
People asked for the childhood sweetheart plot, which he delivered, and everyone was happy with it. From there he did his own thing and people assumed it would be more of the same, which it wasn't.
Should Snek have been more upfront about the change in tone? Probably, but he was clearly confused by the negative reaction which suggests he had no idea people would respond that way.
Similarly people should have known what kind of content he likes to write and should have been more specific in their requests.
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>>7317770
More then one person suggested keeping the seperation short for the exact reason of Liz not changing much, so I would say that desire was in fact communicated to you
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Everyone's here arguing over what exactly snekguy should write in his own stories.

All I'm thinking is, "I'm okay with small dicks on futa, to be honest."

But then again twink bodies or hard bodies are the only male bodies I like anything about. The in between, the 'average', not so much.

So I guess that transfers to female dicks too.
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>>7318021
I'm pretty good with anything size-wise with futa, aside from stuff with size comparison with men, became it's too much like SPH, which I thoroughly dislike
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>>7318045
That's one of those tertiary fetishes that I can't even form an opinion on. Like 'two girls fused into one body' or 'skinsuits'. I have zero reaction to the content, water off my back.
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>>7318021
Small dick futa don't make any sense to me. Don't you have a futa in a story, cause you want a woman with a dick fucking someone? Then why would you put a useless small thing on her? Might as well just use a woman.
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>>7318021
>>7318045
>>7318063
I prefer large in general, with futa and men being the same size
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>>7318063
Since I'm more humiliation and control focused, it is honestly about the experience (and sometimes lack thereof). Most stuff related to massive dongs just leads to fetishes that turn me off, protruding stomachs, ahegao, blood, prolapse, vomit. I'm getting extreme, but yeah. A dick can only be so big before silly stuff starts happening in connection with the imagined girth of it.

On the other hand, a normal or small dick can still get hard without the futa wanting it (like out in public), can still ejaculate at the worst time, can lead to confusion and joy as they experience their first penis orgasm, be teased or trapped (like with a chastity belt). All without it looking like someone strapped three polish sausages together and wrapped them to their leg.
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I want to make a request with consensual public use, maybe with orcs and an elf
Would anyone be interested in writing that?
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>>7318085
Funny story about that, back in the days of Ancient Greece having a large dick is what got you laughed at, nobody cared if it was small.

>>7318093
Won't know unless you say what it is, right?
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>>7318093
I might get on that later tonight if I'm up for it, enjoying writing again after I wrote that elvish maid story I posted a bit further up.

Anything in particular you might want out of it if I do decide to go through with it?
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>>7318085
I guess I'm just the opposite. Cum inflation / stomach bulges and ahegao, to a certain degree, is hot. Blood and vomit I don't like but since it's fantasy these don't happen, unless the author wants them to, which is rare.
All the things you list as good things don't appeal to me at all, cause I like Futas dominant and, as such, in control.
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>>7318098
Fair enough.
>party of orc adventurers come across an elf village in their travels
>they notice a naked elf in stocks in the town square
>they're getting set to rescue her when she cheerfully explains that she's here to provide sexual relief for travellers passing through because she's into that stuff
>the stocks are because she just likes then
>she invites them to fuck her silly, and they do
>later, she comes to their room at the local inn for round two (maybe other patrons join the orcs or one of the tavern maids decides she wants in also)
I was also thinking that the elf could be a trap instead of a girl just as easily
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>>7318117
Head and hands are called pillory, stocks are for feet, just so you know.
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>>7315952
>>7317853
So I finally have some time to pitch my idea. Seems someone else took the time to do so instead.

Seeing how awfully that went and how much space it ate up. I'll just wait until next thread. Fuck.
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>>7318155
so in a week or two?
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>>7318157
Probably yeah dude. Its pretty frustrating.
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>>7318142
Durr. Yeah, I meant a pillory
>>7318100
What do you think of >>7318117 ?
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>>7318117
Have you seen incase's new thicc futa orcs? They'd be perfect for this
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>>7318155
Honestly as long as it's within snek's area of interest everything will be fine
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>>7318220
Yes, I have and I agree. If anyone who's interested in taking this one on likes futa, I'm down for that
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>>7318155
>>7318246
I apologize if having to further reiterate my stance on Worlds Apart had made me appear hostile to requests, that is not at all the case and even if I don't like the pitch itself, I can try to incorporate elements of it into future stories.
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>>7318293
Snek, >>7317769 here.
This sounds a bit weird, but if you do use elements of my request, could you change it somewhat? It would just feel really odd seeing like 75% of my request but with stuff I'm not into added
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Input for an aspiring WriteFag? Specifically how to write?

Not sure if right place for this, but I've attempted becoming a wrtiefag. I Technically started back in 14, but only became serious about it recently.
I get some good feed back from HF and FF, but i think i can get more concise input here.

My First story, multi chapters, just finished

http://www.hentai-foundry.com/stories/user/KrystalKross23/14658/Thawing-Frost


First few chapters were god awful, mid-school tier shit, but i'd never attempted to write anything.

So far its just League Of Legends stories, i like the characters and the lack of a definitive narrative helps for creating plots imo.

Pet-Play, Enslavement, Yuri, Humiliation. My go to fetishes.

Couldn't think of a picture.
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>>7318370
You really should try to write original work. From what I've seen here, fan fictions are almost entirely ignored, regardless of content.
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>>7318293
Yo snek, I got an idea for the short stories pile
>two borleans in the coalition military hear rumors about humans being amazing at sex
>they decide they'll get a human to teach them the secrets of fucking like a human
>they find one, and they fuck while the human watches and gives them orders (while masturbating furiously, of course)
>they start to actually get it, and after watching them fuck for a while the human can't stand it anymore and orders them to get over here and show them what they've learned
The genders are totally up to you but I personally like a human woman and two borlean males for the scenerio
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>>7317027
Seems pretty nice.
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>>7318378
Well i was hoping to start with FF, since it gives me a nice comfort zone to start with, but i wouldn't mind making some OC in the future.

But question, where would i post that? I only really have the FF and HF accounts (and tumblr but let's not talk about that)
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>>7318389
Well, you could post it here for starters, and there's also literotica
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>>7318389
Pastebin is free and easy. Other people post with HF accounts. It's not that big of a problem. From what I've seen, /aco/ is much more attracted to fan fiction. Outside of the rare MtG fic by an old regular, I don't think I've ever seen FF draw any attention, positive or negative.
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>>7318396
Never even heard of /aco/. It's just western /h/?
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>>7318402
It's an unholy combination of that and a bunch of stuff that got pushed off /d/ for being "too western". They usually have a few writethreads, though, including one FF.
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>>7318402
It's trying to be more like western /d/, only the problem is it's overrun by the /co/ crowd
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>>7318396
Pastebin has a community? I thought it was just a shared notepad platform.
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>>7318420
No. We are a community that often uses pastebin as a place to stick things. It's free, convenient, and established.
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>>7318415
>/aco/
>/overrun by the /co/ crowd
Gee fucking wiz. It's so /co/ - a worksafe board - can post NSFW /co/ stuff, and the rejects of /d/ got swept into it as well as a byproduct.
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>>7318389
AO3 lets you post original work if it's "fannish", which in practice means whatever you want.
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>>7318425
Funny enough a lot of the /co/ crowd hate it too since it's run by the /co/ mods who ban things randomly or if they don't like the characters. To the point /trash/ is seen has doing /aco/'s job better than /aco/.
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>>7318392
Imma just lurk for a while i guess.
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2000 word update, new content at "As if on cue the man walked into the lab"

Highway to Krell:
http://pastebin.com/hE1muHCb
New tags:
>trap/futa

Also I just realized I left a random URL half way through a sentence in Snek 4, which makes me look like an absolute retard, so I've corrected all the versions I've posted and I've revised the Ebook, you can download it again here:
https://www.patreon.com/file?h=8466351&i=912472

Maybe I should take a break for a couple of days or something, might be working too hard.

>>7318322
Sure, I understand.

>>7318383
That sounds interesting, I think I got a request about a drunk Borealan at a bar or something that I could maybe merge that with.
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>>7318378
Not always, but they need to be something that already appeals to a lot of people. Since a lot of the writers emigrated from /tg/, stuff along those lines is more likely to get their attention.
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>>7313008
Well done anon, I hate non-consent, but you twisted it right when I was about to stop reading. You've also reminded me how much I want to play shadowrun (not ERP) and cant find a game.
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>>7318441
>I think I got a request about a drunk Borealan at a bar or something that I could maybe merge that with.
There's the one of mine with scarface, runt and schafer getting drunk and cuddlefucking, but I don't remember a bar one
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>>7318441
Thanks snek
Actually I just thought of something. Rather than childhood friends, the scenerio and dynamic you have in mind might work really well with the two of them as university roommates. Maybe they're both attending school in america/canada (so you don't have to go and research russian university system) and get put together since they're both russian speakers and things go from there
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any of you fine folks know any good human male x female turian works out there? read brioche's a few days back, liked it.

i'm hoping that since vetra is romanceable more people will start writing that sort of thing.

also
>that fade to black
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>>7318544
People will be too busy laughing at all the glitches, weird/bad animations, horrible writing, and other shit in ME:A to even notice that part
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>>7318544
Sadly I haven't, because I like that stuff too.
The old ME kink meme might have some if you can cut through their mess of a filing systrm
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>>7318547
you're probably right
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>>7318552
>>7318544
This one is pretty good, though the lewd scenes are a bit lacking.

https://www.fanfiction.net/s/8600201/1/A-Matter-Of-Race-And-Character
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>>7318547
Indeed. I haven't even seen a waifu fight yet. From Mass Effect fans.
They really shit the bed on this one
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>>7318564
>using one half of the game's second best background couple with an OC
Thanks but no thanks, men
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>>7318566
>I haven't even seen a waifu fight yet. >From Mass Effect fans.
Remember when bioware had to delete the entire character and romance board because it was just that bad of a dumpster fire?
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>>7318596
Good times. And now they couldn't recreate that kind of thing if they've tried.
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>>7318293
>>7318441
Well its not that its just that I didn't want to flood you with requests. I mean its not like my idea is going anywhere. You have a bunch on your plate already.

I was hoping the thread would be slow this weekend. Guess just my luck.
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I did it. A couple days late, but I added in some more words to compensate!

[Currently Untitled!]
http://pastebin.com/xwWnjiZn
Current tags:
>40k, yes that one, serfs, a lot of pining after a hot space marine

The last bit needs me to go over it some more, but I at least wanted to get it posted.
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>>7318938
Making the jump into writing, Prote? I approve.
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>>7318938
A fine start, though you used 'aquitaine' instead of 'aquiline' to describe Sergeant Antonius.
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>>7315952
I did the phone writing thing once, when I was briefly without a pc. After, when I wrote c it would immediately suggest cock
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>>7318835
OK, I need to know.

What is this .gif from?
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>>7318487
Glad you guys enjoyed it. And I definitely feel you about not having a group to play!
>TFW

>>7318938
That's a pretty solid beginning, Prote. You might want to try to go a little more into how Eclair feels about what is happening around her while you describe it, but it's definitely a nice start. Keep it up.
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>>7319319
Monster Musume no Iru Nichijou
I think.
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Check your email Snek!
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Hello.
I'm trying to write something.
The gist is that that it's basically monmusu-verse, with MC going back to a notCathyl in heat at the farm after a week.

The only thing is, extra-species is kind of a mouthful to describe MGs but I'd prefer avoiding that term as well. Anyone use another term for the group without specifying the exact species/type of the individual?
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Anyone want to post this bad boy?
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>>7319867
Didn't you just do that, cockwagon?
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. I drew her on me by her legs. I pressed in hard. She pulled me in, and IN and OUT I battered her. Her fingers gripped the sheets. I felt wicked. I tortured her. I let it out, and shoved it in. Globs pulsed out of me. She sucked it up into her. Her wild wailing was deafening. I shoved it in and out more, relentless.

. Visha grabbed her tiny breasts and slid her fingernails off her nipples. Her jaw slackened and her slick, pointed tongue unwound from between her fangs. She throatily hissed and dragged the blasphemous tongue up Lio's leg, across her slit, and stabbed her navel. Lio whimpered. Visha cackled.
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2000 word update, new content at “You're certainly...willful, aren't you?”

Highway to Krell:
http://pastebin.com/hE1muHCb
>not sure how to tag this, I guess the best description is vaginal sex with the hermaphroditic transitional form of a reptilian species with a dick and a thicc ass, make of that what you will

>>7318540
Something like that could work, I was thinking maybe going full outdoorsman and having them meet while tracking the same game.

>just got a ban warning using a name I've never posted with
wut
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>>7319948
anyone else using the same IP has you like if you live in an aprtment?
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>>7319942
this is awful, what were you actually planning to accomplish?
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>>7319951
Nah, and the ban length was the 10th to the 11th of April. Must be some kind of glitch.
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>>7319953
Be more specific.
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>>7319956
All of it, it's incredibly short, the sentence structure could be better, We have no idea who these characters are or why they're fucking. There's no visual cues if this visha is a monster or not besides fangs. there's no reason to post something so insubstantial. what were you hoping with something as stupidly short as this?
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>>7319960
What's wrong with the sentence structure? Did you not understand what was happening?
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>>7319962
>ignoring the other points
You literally just wrote an abridged sex scene. There's no feeling, no setting, and again, practically non-existent characters because it feels like an incredibly short excerpt
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>>7319968
I'm sorry.
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>>7319975
You should be. It's literally less than nothing
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>>7319948
>I was thinking maybe going full outdoorsman and having them meet while tracking the same game.
Oh, that'd be good
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I'm new to this thread, and I've got a question
I've got a request that involves giants, but none of the stuff usually associated with the giantess threads here. Should I still ask them or would here be better or should I try the /h/ writethread (if there is one) because the request is kind of /m/ related?
Thanks
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>>7319988
I've written giantess. What's on your mind?
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>>7319992
Like, it's literally two giants fucking in the woods, and also at human size
Are you familiar with macross/roboteh?
It's related to that
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>>7320025
Not my thing. Can't help.
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>>7320026
Fair enough. Thanks anyways man
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>>7320025
I don't know if I understand this.
But I'm also not familiar with Macross.
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>>7317110
>romantic handholding
yesssssssss
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>>7319975
Don't be sorry, be writing something that probably took you no more than two minutes to pull out of your ass.

Now get back here and turn that into an actual fic or forever be mocked as the laziest writer on the thread.
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>>7320122
I already did. I wrote

>>7315284

Which contained

>>7315129

To which someone said

>>7315142
>almost poetic

The bits I posted I cut because they didn't fit.
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>>7320132
Oh, then why the hell didn't you specify that?
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>>7317110
Little bit late n responding but this is basically ideal if you keep to it.
Also consideration for individuality and some Krell just not settling with any partner; you get both love crocks and free love hippie monsters if you break away from one-personality aliens here.
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Guys, I intend to re-write the terminator series but set in an erotic fantasy world.
Does anyone know the legality of doing such a thing, considering I intend to publish it?
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>>7320492
Considering they once made Sperminator, a porn parody of the original movie; I'd say you don't risk too much as long as you don't blatantly copy names and such.
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>>7320498
Thank you, this is information I needed desperately.
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Just a few questions. Is it too late to make a request in this thread (Should I wait for a new thread to be put up before making such a request? And what is the allows/not-allowed for the request (Tags/content).
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>>7320876
It's never too late to make a request. You can always repeat it next thread.

As for content, anything goes; but the more extreme fetishes or hyper-specific requests without any wriggle room tend to get ignored.
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>>7320111
>>7320463
Cool, I'm relieved the idea seems to be going over well.

Gonna be busy today but I'll have more lizardfucking ready tomorrow, and the Runt/Osha art is basically done and should be up by tonight.
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>>7320879
Appreciate it.

And here is the request(truth of the matter is, I don't know if it could be counted as a fanfic or not considering the character in question is originally developed for the mikumikudance program and isn't mine, but I have a strong attraction to the character.)

>A princess is to be made an example of in front of her people.
Tags
>Humiliation, tentacle rape, stomach deformation, come inflation,
Pic related (character in question)
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>>7320915
>Humiliation
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>>7320936
Is there a problem? Too much?
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>>7320949
You have tastes that don't align with his and he feels the need to voice it. Not much of a problem.
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Didn't this place used to have a pastebin on how to write?
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>>7321092
It did indeed. I'll need to speak to someone about that, but for now, look here.

https://1d4chan.org/wiki/Smut_Writing_Tips_for_Aspiring_Writefags

https://1d4chan.org/wiki//tg/%27s_Smut_Index#Guides_and_Tips

Anything else, don't be afraid to ask here.
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>>7321179
I could have sworn those pastebins were still active, but no matter.
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>start writing
>subject verb complement point
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAH
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Is there any other good place I can get my fix of futa smut

Tried Hentai Foundry, but not that many stories there
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>>7321576
Literotica has SOME, if you can beat it out of their atrocity of a search function
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>>7321589
It's not like HF's is better.
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>>7321597
True.
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>>7321576
Is it that hard to get futa smut written? Seems like it would be about as common as the drawings.

I guess Futa doesn't have the same allure in written form.
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>>7321747
>Is it that hard to get futa smut written?
There's exactly one person here who does it, and he only writes certain sorts of futa on futa and rarely futa on female, and is currently busy anyhow
He's a real specialist, which is kind of a recurring theme here




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