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last thread got deleted.

>work in progress
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fuck off, /pol/-nigger.
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>>3756815
>last thread got deleted.
Lul. Get fucked.
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>>3756831

post your wips
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>>3756815
this was comfy until i saw the face
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>>3756913

thats okay. nothing wrong here. bye.
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there's no comic thread to post in so this'll do

>>3756815
those clouds are very unconvincing OP
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>>3756920
i wondered about em too. probabaly change up the perspective on them. tanx anon.


that looks hot af.
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>>3756920
I'm not an expert on porn but I don't like how little movement there is between the two panels where he sticks it in
I've never even seen that position
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>>3756928
It's not the perspective, it's that they're too regular.
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>>3756815
>poltard can't into drawing
poetry
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>>3756934

what?
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>>3756920
can an erect dick even bend like that
it'd hurt the guy wouldn't it
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>>3756913
its not a pol thread, its a wip thread.

feel free to post your work. (dont worry too much about the pic)
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>>3756920
The last panel looks very good anon
I find the way the thigh and shin are bent around the hand in the top left panel a bit distracting though.
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>>3756815
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>>3756920
my dick just shriveled just thinking of my dick bending like that. obviously drawn by a girl.
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>>3756957
Is this going to where I think it's going? You might be cringier than OP.
>muh critiques
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>>3756936
I hate that you're a poltard but man those colors feel nice.
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>>3756936
I like the vibe and inking.
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>>3756936
nice

>>3756931
>I've never even seen that position
that's because it's 100% unrealistic. i found this out after i'd already done thumbnails and rough sketches for the pages though. i don't have time to completely rework them all.
learning as i go

>>3756937
maybe. i'll attempt straightening it out a little bit

>>3756958
thanks for the laugh anon
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>>3756920
Blog? That's fuckin hot
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>>3756959
The critic sign was for IC, I plan to do an empty template
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Thy and make face expressive, eye floats off face.
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>>3756989
i haven't posted it anywhere yet- getting a backlog of pages ready. i'll be shilling the hell out of it on my nsfw twitter when it's up though (@NSockFW)
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>>3756815
Drawing from life.
Anatomically correct skull cast from human skull sitting on a rare 200 year old book I got several years ago.
All of it is sitting in a shadow box with a hole on top to let the spotlight hit it.

If it turns out to my satisfaction, I’ll probaby attempt to paint it in oils.
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>>3757011
Here’s a photo of the thing, not the exact angle, but you get the idea.

I’m going to take my time and do the block in right and go super careful with the values at every stage.
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>>3757014
Oops. Here’s the pic
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>>3756920
>>3756974
That's fucking hot anon, I guess the dick is still floppy and it will get fully erected in the next panels, right?
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>>3757008
I'll watch for it cause I love that style and softness.
And not just because I haven't masturbated in a week.
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>>3757011
looks promising. keep going.
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>>3757015
Ignore the embarrassing first image:)
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>>3757030
Thanks anon, my last drawing I got the initial shape/form contours wrong and it warped the perspective/believability.
I went thru with the value application to see how well I would do and to see how well I could hide my mistakes.

This time I’m not moving forward on anything until I get it right.
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I started painting without lineart for the first time and it ... it feels awful. But I can't start over... Guys...
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>>3757039
Keep going, anon. It's always like that the first time, but it's worth it.
Erase and Blend your rough into the crevices, turn it into your Ambient Occlusion. Consider masking it to your color layer too.
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>>3757070
Doing that now and it's working out great. I wouldnt say it looks like AO, but it looks good, heh
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>>3757039

kawaiii

guys the wall is coming along pretty nice. just needs more guns and flags?
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>>3756920
real nice but her mouth could me more open the show pleasure
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>>3756831
haha this still makes me kek'l
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Some wholesome shit on 4chan for once
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I was just wrapping this up.
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>>3757018
kek, it'll break/slide out
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I still have to fill in the little details of things in my room, and fix the flooring/ add detail
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>>3758219
Damn blog?
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>>3757216
i love you
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>>3758222
https://baraag.net/web/accounts/98273
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>>3758226
That's not a public URL, its internal to logged-in users of baraag.net. Here's what the URL you should have posted looks like: https://baraag.net/@adoneru
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>>3758248
im dumb
thanks for telling me
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>>3756815
opinions anyone?
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>>3758287
Here's another
>how many wheels are there?
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>>3757008
>mfw I actually liked what i drew
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>>3758223
Thank you
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Nice wall OP

Currently working on this big boi.

I'm new to tablets.
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>>3758809
Looking good.
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>>3758809
A high elf paladin (alliance)?
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>>3757039
Keep going
Most artist have an extremely messy and unappealing portions of their art process that they have to pull through you might not see the results come together until 95% there but keep going you can do it!
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>>3757015
thats fucking hot. blog?
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>>3760065

Thanks!

>>3761660

Yes anon :)
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>>3761676
Really cool.
Can you tell me how to achieve similar effect with a brush? Is it just soft wet brush?
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>>3756815
Ignoring the main message, from perspective of an Euro, American depictions like this feel childish and cartoonish. A "Big Wall", made of "gray concrete" with posters of the "Evil man" flags and military stuff etc. That's something out of Saturday morning cartoon, not a picture of real life events that hopefully you want to be taken seriously. At best it's high school homework on contrast - evil American war vs bunnies, butterflies and happy burritos on the other.

Be more subtle about that, maybe?
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>>3762271
Hard round brush + blending tool. I just assigned the blending tool to "n" and I just switch between the two. I'm trying to emulate the brush Sinix uses in his "painting like a sculpture video"
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>>3762496
Credits and more info
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>>3756974
>maybe. i'll attempt straightening it out a little bit
don't do it, it bending like that makes it even more lewd
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>>3757236
lmao
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>>3757186
Are those ways supposed to be huge bridges? Because they come across as tiny. Doesn't help that you have visible grass strokes on the right which shouldn't be visible at all at that size
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Laying down a color foundation so I can start rendering
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>>3763882
really nice
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doing meme shit cause i have no original ideas atm
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What should I study if I want to maintain identifying facial features across multiple angles?
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I've stagnated in this one for a whole day, banged my head and couldn't move forwards. I'll do only studies today and try to make this one happen. (I'm aware of the tangent with the horizon)
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>>3758219
one shitter for 6 people....mein gott
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>>3757039
jahy-sama?
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>>3765326
wow it's really come along. good job!
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>>3761676
this looks nice
>>3762251
off to a great start! I like the hair especially
>>3765996
not really doing it for followers... I made my blog so i could push myself to draw with routine, because otherwise i won't pick up a pen for 6 weeks.
>>3763882
comfy
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supposed to be a demon witch with black eyes crying/oozing blood out of them, and scratches all over her face.
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I'm drawing my doggo. He's old and gonna die soon.

I usually hang around in /beg/ but I want to see this picture through.
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>>3766299
I'm sorry about your dog Anon
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>>3766310
Thanks. It's not unexpected, though. He's had severe osteoarthritis for nine entire years now. He's older than I ever thought possible.
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>>3766044
Thanks man
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>>3756815
heres a very early stage wip. i promise you it will become a masterpiece just give me time
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>>3763882
keep going. this looks great.

workin' on a comfy bus stop.
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>>3766650
cool anon. I gave up on the wall. it turned out to be just a boring mass of concrete.
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>>3765333
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>>3757186
Goliaths or those walkers from dawn of war
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>>3766743
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>>3766777
The d-d-d-digits
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>>3756831
Everything is fucking /pol/ these days. 4chan really is overrun by sensitive butthurt reddltors.
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>>3762479
>. That's something out of Saturday morning cartoon,
I honestly thought it was a subtle reference to Avatar the Last Airbender but I guess it was just a coincidence. But I guess your explanation is why I thought that about OP.
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>>3756815
I love it. Though you could use some variation on the landscape to the left of the wall.
Maybe some corpses or skulls. Something to let those shitskins know that they aren't welcome.

Doing Gods work OP.
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More work on this commission.
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>>3766061
>one shitter for six people
I think he meant just one bathroom for six people, not followers
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>>3766659

ok i think im done. heres muh last wip.


>>3767434
holy shit anon
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>>3767317
thanks anon. i hope the rest of the world wakes up. illegal immigration is cancerous and so is islam in western society,
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Messed up the back as I was trying to even out my background values. Gotta get that right then do the dreaded teeth.
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>>3768389
Is that a skull on the Quran? Oh religion of peace..
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>>3768373
Hardstones? Is that you?
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>>3768389
Nope quite the opposite.
It’s a 200 yr old Greek to English lexicon used to study biblical Greek.
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>>3756936
I think the inking on the main plane is too heavy sometimes, it feels less like it's following a form and more like it is a bit random.
I suggest you think about the process and the form under the lines more, they aren't just a filler.
The color scheme and perspective is really nice, but the distortion on the right wing is too strong.

I remember when you were drawing this, you did good on fixing the perspective on the main body of the plane itself. Good job.
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>>3768247
Thanks anon.

Good that you finished it, I can see quite a few things that are wrong with it, mostly color choice though. The perspective looks nice already, but you should always crosscheck the size of everything. For example the benches in the bus stop are relatiely low compared to the overall size of the bus stop.
But keep going anon, it's really the mass of artworks that makes you get better.
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>>3756831
get over it snowflake.
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>>3768564
The benches were a big mistake. I foolishly rushed them at the last minute(that voice i ignored telling me theyre too small). I agree now, the colors are scattered and uncontrolled, the sky looks like a puddle of urine.
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>>3763879
I agree with this anon.
>>3757186
what is the reason for the dips in the ground? that would be Mexico's side right?

just wondering, its an interesting illustration. i like it. not even a pol fag
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>>3763882
Dude, what is your blog?
I recognize your style from the mansion pick about a month back.
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>>3768898
Was supposed to be a canel. I was going to add a lift bridge but the pic got boring i gave up
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>>3756831
Look at this pussy.

>o-oh my god his opinion is offensive
>m-mommy theyre being mean!
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>>3768906
Yea, that was by me. The name is ExitMothership
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just the walk on the left, the head could stay on model a lil more but anythinng else im not noticing?
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>>3764813
nice
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working on this while I still can before school overtakes me. i'm gunna rework that one wing that's pinching the side and make it look less rarted. same with the ear, cuz its weird. aside from that i'm going to add some elements of a battlefield to it to give it some context.
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>>3767434
Fuck anon, thats good. Btw, the stand right to the window, there is a brown line in the floor.
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>>3768247
comfy. well done

>>3767434
looks like cheap 3D. First time I see an uncanny valley on a drawn room
could also be a suitable background for a japanese VN
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>>3769336
stop working for so long while ZOOMED IN
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>>3756974
realizing i have no idea how to draw hands on tiddies. i've wasted almost an hour on this panel and i'll likely have to redraw it with reference anyway

i love this suffering

>>3762584
i'll compromise then. i just don't want to cause my readers dick pain when they look at my art. i'd rather have people point and laugh
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>>3769666
Damn you got me. I do use the navigator to crossreference though.
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>>3766302
where you learning to do shapes like this?
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Wishing the foliage could look better shape-wise, but I'm running out of time so as long as this gets finished, I'm happy.
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>>3769072
head and body are too static, the legs should push the body up in the middle point of the walk cycle. the spacing/timing is incorrect. and although not technically wrong, but id use 8 frames instead, for a standard walk cycle. please study standard walk cycle keyframes, you might see immediate improvement. the drawings by themselves are decent tho so u did nice on that, ull be able to do a decent walk cycle if u just study it more carefully and smartly. gl!
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>>3769363
Ah, thanks for pointing that out. The floor is not done yet entirely so I might have checked everything for errors but good catch on this one

>>3769522
Yeah, it's a VN background. I have to keep these backgrounds sorted in layers and groups as a requirement which takes away from a lively look I guess. Would love to simply paint them but from experience it's a hassle if something needs to be moved/changed. Maybe it looks better when I fill it with stuff and add the last tweaks.
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>>3765211
shapes.
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>>3768872
Don't be so hard on yourself anon, everyone needs to start somewhere. If that's your thing maybe study backgrounds in animation for a while. There's a lot of valuable information to take away from
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>>3766777
I like the shading it's pretty comic book-ish
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>>3769685
Love this, blog?
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>>3769684
It's a combination of the methods I learned from studying Asaro heads, Peck, Proko, and moderndayjames.
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could someone redline this for me? I'm having a hard time on the perspective especially on her hand.
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>>3770174
it is my thing. my stuff never has any people in it either, its all stage work. i would follow you if i had social media, but im not really into it, it's too distracting and a waste of time for me. do you have a site?
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>>3770517
Im working on it, but i have a question: is she above the viewer or lying down?
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>>3770517
anyways here is the transparent version if you find that useful
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>>3771018
and here is the other way
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something seems off about the anatomy of my drawing can anyone lend some insight? Maybe its the angle because I'm trying to learn to draw at angles...
[spoiler]no bulli pls[/spoiler]
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>>3768389
is this bargue method?
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>>3769685
Don't worry about it, anon, it's pretty good already. Loving the girls and overall vibe
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>>3771185
I drew a few Bargue plates and watched the DaVinci Initiative vids on YouTube to figure out what the hell to do..how to even start.
I got a book called Lessons in classical drawing by Juliette Aristides and am going thru her exercises.
I alternated between the book and Bargue plates.
I tried drawing a plaster cast bust I got from amazon and failed miserably.
I finally just got this iPhone box, a bowl, and this foam snowman blank that I didn’t paint , oh and a styrofoam cup...all of the objects white, so I could just see the storms and shadows clearly, and used the knowledge I learned about measuring from the books and vids and determined to draw the most boring still life in the world, but do it accurately. I decided to enlarge the drawing more than the objects, a thing she says in the book not to do.
It was a mistake. The elipse is off on the bowl and cup and the box is out of perspective.

This skull and book I’m doing sight size and this time I told myself I could not do anything else until the initial block in of the shapes were accurate. And that took me a couple of days and much of the integrity of the papers surface.
I got impatient and didn’t also include ALL of the shadow shapes in the initial block in, causing a lot of revisions.

One of the things she says in her book is...The longer you keep you lines light and the longer you keep everything “open” the more accurate you drawing will be in the end. I tried that but failed with the shadow shapes.
Anyway all the stuff about notional box, cutting into the drawing, putting a line down first and THEN measuring, the envelope drawing what you see and not what you “know” , and everything else is kinda starting to make sense and is giving me at least a place to start.
But the big thing for me was to first determine that I was going to learn this shit no matter what.
Here’s the latest with the background values evened out a little and a salvage job with the values on killed paper.
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>>3771252
I’m afraid of the teeth:(
I could hype myself and believe truisms and tell myself they’ll be the strongest point as a result, but shit, it is what I make it.
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>>3771172
I can't do hands apparently.
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>>3771158
>chicken scratch
more things wrong here than just anatomy my dude
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>>3771289
not this again.
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>>3771252
cool but you should finish the teeth and jaw, chin. looks like your avoiding some areas anon.
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>>3772028
>cherry blossom petal falls in tea cup
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>>3770755
And it doesn't need people, I barely draw them too. You can make an environment the character and tell a story.
And sorry, I don't have a website. I got instagram, tumblr, deviantart and artstation but apart from that, no real presence.
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>>3769666
>>3769683
devil lies in details, but he'll deceive you if you loose the bigger picture
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I just wanted to draw some flowers and then my idiot brain took over
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>>3756815
going to render some more in a couple other sittings.
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>>3772660
God, I love it. Especially the sculpting of the blunt end of the boat.
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>>3771834
You know what WIP means right?
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>>3772660
is it heavily referenced by chance?
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>>3756815
beg tier here
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drawing a scene from oldboy. going to paint with watercolour later.
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>>3773547
by chance yes.
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>>3773681
Looks good. No black!





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