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Previous thread: >>3755405

Porn Thread
Thread for those who enjoy drawing pornographic images

Rules and Guidelines:
-Hide images you don't wish to view, etc, etc.
-Please refrain from posting NSFW images of underage characters(loli/shota)
-Refrain from replying to trolls that give no valuable input.
-Post finished works and W.I.P's here for critique.
-Any questions in regards to reference materials will be answered.

Dedicated thread sticky- https://docs.google.com/document/d/1uwaXKU7ev6Tw_or__o8ARpUb6r2rCZYJGqwSFV9AD98/edit#
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Would you put your dick in this imp's mouth?
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>>3786876
yes, I would also marry her and have half human half imp children
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>>3786876
I'd reach for the twelve gauge.
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>>3786889
Is that what you call your penis?
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>>3786909
a loaded god complex, cock it & pull it
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>>3786853
her eyes make her look stoned kek
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>>3786909
Nah, the extension of my fist.

>>3786876

This overweight transvestite is fucking hideous; market this to body horror aficionados instead of whoring it on the front page.
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how do I draw porn in a similar style to this?
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>>3786954
Don't.
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>>3786956
y?
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>>3786941
WE'RE GOIN DOWN DOWN IN AN EARLIER ROUND
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>>3786949
>overweight transvestite

Fucking kek, can you tell me how this is body horror though?
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>>3786964
BUT SUGAR WE'RE GOIN DOWN SWINGING
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>>3787027
>>3787030
>lipstick
what is this yuri?
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>>3787038
yes
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>>3786954
>how style
Get good at drawing. once you got that you can replicate the style pretty much by looking at it because you know how to break it down.
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>>3786853
Somebody's a fan.
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>>3787059
Yes, i've always like the eeriness of his drawings.
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Sup, I'm still /beg/ as fuck, drew this during the weekend.
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>>3787249
Also this, not really porn, though. I still need years to learn how to draw decent hands and feet.
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>>3786876
Is that Morbi's imp?
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>>3786876
I'd suggest you to use cell shaded hard shadows until you get a better understanding of how soft vs hard shadows work.
Cast shadows produce a hard transition, form shadows/self shadows produce a soft gradual transition.
With your stuff everything is soft and it's simply wrong.
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>>3787260
It is better than you make it out Anon.You do need to refine your anatomy but I would like to take a moment about your color choices.

The entire image is way way too bright. You picked quite saturated and bright colors for the skin and the hair and very dark ones for the clothes.

Why is this bad? To convey shape and form one needs to use a wide variety of colors in relation to each other. It makes it very hard to add shading and lighting to the picture because it is already on the extremes of all the color selections that are possible. Which makes any even slighty dark colors instantly pop out way too much and you cannot add highlights either because they remain invisible. It even shows on how hard you found to shade the skin, the shading is weak and barely noticeable.

When picking your base colors consider picking some that are closer to the center of the color map instead of the corners that way you leave yourself enough space to move around. and limit the cases like pure white and pure black to small areas like highlights or lineart. Same goes for the over saturated colors.

A good rule of thumb for beginners is to use a curve on the color map when adding shading and lighting to something.

If you haven't watched Blender Guru's "Understanding color" video yet I highly encourage that you do. It is highly informative and short to cover the basics for a normally huge subject that is coloring, also includes what I said.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Qj1FK8n7WgY

Keep practicing!
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>>3787460
Great post.
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>>3787284
I've been defaulting to softness for a bit. I definitely see where more volume could've been had with the right hard strokes. Thank you.

>>3787272
Yes it is
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I'm actually gonna color it
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>>3787460
Wow, that's really helpful, thanks for your kindness!
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>>3787059
Oooooh this is good. Lethal and mysterious.
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>>3788076
fix the broken anatomy first
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>>3788122
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I don’t think I can take this one much farther. Haven’t been drawing as much as I should recently
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>>3788076
>>3788142
Is she an chimp?
The back of her hand is twice as long as it should be, the left hand also looks like a foot lmoa.
Left shoulder is also messed up, makes it look like the has 3 back sides.
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>>3788245
Glad to see you carried it through. You cleaned up the skin shading nicely.
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>>3786876
Mate you have got good linearts but please understand that the lineart is just as much part of your image as everything else. At its core the lineart is signifies a hard sharp edge between two very distinct values/colors, meaning you can use lineart can be used as an extremely sharp shadow like it is done in comic books. You can make your lineart thicker at places of shadow and thinner at highlights maybe even erase it at points. OR you can just create separate layer with a mask and add color to the linearts to make them pop out less. And please turn up your stabilizer a bit the wrinkly lines with the full black color stand out a lot and disturb the picture.

Then think of the actual surface of the body's area and use more mid tones to show that there is volume there, the light is positively blinding at certain places. Use hints of highlight spot to draw the attention to place you want to show like the tongue.

Also look at what surface is reflective so that you can add those shiny spots, like the hair is very much a reflective area, wet skin like lips and tongue also. The eyeball is also glassy reflective area, use these to your advantage.

Yes, I know it is a hassle to do all the, fingers, toes, hairs, teeth etc but that is what will make your artwork better and also give you practice.
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>>3789041
You're right, I could've gotten much more from some areas as you did with some simple highlights.
The reflectiveness of each surface is also something that I shouldn't take lightly.
I still need to tackle much more so it's never a hassle. Thank you for the help.

I'll see what the fuck is up with the stabilization of my tablet, maybe its just me.
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>>3788245
nice pedo art
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>>3789041
the feet...uuhh..
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I tried my best. I hope this is better
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>>3789454
>>3788142
>>3788076
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what's the verdict? brain damage or just NGMI?
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>>3789507
she is cute
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>>3789454
what in the fuck is going on with the leg? is that intentional?
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>>3789550
you <- -> the joke
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>>3789558
>you <- -> the joke

you <- -> the sarcasm
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>>3788245
*ahem*
You are breaking rule #2 in the thread OP.
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What are some things I should keep in mind if I want to draw god futanari porn
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>>3789569
Make sure you're passionate about it rather than doing it to cater to a specific audience
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>>3789572
oh, I wouldn't worry about that
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>>3789569
I still don't get the appeal of futa i'm pretty sure the people who like I are gay but are scared to admit it and that they like dicks
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>>3789579
But the rest of the man is gross looking and unappealing. It only looks good on women (futa)
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>>3789579
nice meme Anon, good job! Here is your (You), you have earned it!
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>>3789582
Ya don't like twinks? Or twunks?
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>>3789579
Im straight as they cum and I can't deny futa turns me on but I can't be aroused by an actual man.

The brain is processing something that is like 99% woman while the remaining one percent is male(the penis)
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>>3789579
/d/ has got you covered

>>>/d/8357997
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>>3789569
First learn to draw a woman you dingus! Drawing a dick is easy as fuck.
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>>3789579
I like women and I like cock. That's it. I don't give a fuck about what people classify me as. It gets me hard and I go for it.
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>>3789588
What do you mean...?

drawing a woman is kind of essential if you are drawing "futa" otherwise it would just be a man.
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>>3789585
no. if it looks like a man its not good. and i mean bone structures and stuff.
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>>3789569
>no vagina behind the balls
Dropped.
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>>3789582
>>3789586
>>3789591
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>>3789608
yeah ok.
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>>3789609
yeah u gay
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>>3789613
>t.roastie
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>>3789620
>specifically seeking male genitalia as a man isn't gay
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>>3789628
And No gayer words were ever said
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>>3789629
Butts are anatomically incorrect, the glutes attach into the legs they don't just form spheres. Arms lack gesture, are too small, and hands are too small. Woman on the left is looking too far to the right.
I recommend doing some studies of more anatomy and then seeing if you can push normal proportions to get what you want.
I also recommend tilting the upper bodies more, as you have done with the woman on the right, because that will make it more dynamic and let you see more of a sideboob.
Thighs and back anatomy are good.
Keep at it, anon.
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>>3789633
How do yo know what is gay? Are you gay?
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>>3789648
NO I am straight so I know what is straight and not straight you scrub
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>>3789648
I'm gay and what he said was gay.
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>>3789651
Based gay anon
At least they admit they are gay
While those that like futa want to live in denial
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>>3789606
This. I like that artist's work though but I've never seen him draw a "real" futa, it's basically just shemales.

>>3789628
Hmm so wanting to fuck men with vaginas is straight?
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>>3789680
Cuntboys are not women, so no.
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>>3789715
so are futas
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>>3789740
>IT'S MA'AM

Back to your containment board, homo-kun
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>>3789785
>opens the door to the containment board for you like a chad straight gentleman

this way my good sir, I have been told there are free futas inside
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Wasn't expecting my question to turn the thread into a shitfest
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>>3789792
>source of the faggatory returns
you need to take responsibility for this anon kun, tell the other anons futas are gay
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>>3789809
*leans into mic*
*clears throat*
No
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>>3789818
you are in as much denial of your homosexuality as much as the rest of these sad dopes, good grief
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>>3789821
>implying there is anything wrong with being gay
>implying there is anything wrong with liking futa
Why are you kinkshaming in the pornthread you classic faggot?
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>>3789829
I never said anything is wrong with being gay. there is nothing wrong with being gay or liking futa but there is something wrong with not admitting futa is gay and that you are for liking it.

if you tell people you like futa and you don't care if that means you are gay then that's true power and confidence in my books
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If you like watching futanari porn like pic related, does that make u gay? Or you gotta enjoy watching some black guy dicking the girl you want to dick while a man (yourself) gives you a handjob, to be straight?
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>>3789832
>I never said anything is wrong with being gay.
Do you not know what "implying" means you sucker
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>>3789838
i just wanna know where the gay line is
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>>3789846
Let me know when you find it
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>>3789838
yes that's still pretty gay, also no straight person pays attention to the guys in porn they just self insert.
getting a handjob from yourself is the straightest thing when it comes to male exlusive intimacy everything else involving a second man or a penis that is not your own is gay that also includes using dildos.

>>3789838
yeah i was jus re instating the facts, just checking that you're keeping up to speed, got to look out for an autistic person when i can you know
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>>3789850
>>3789837
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>>3789837
>adding unnecessary penis to lesbian porn
>not simply self-inserting as the man and focusing on the woman

Yes. With futa you're a) focusing on penis and/or b) self-inserting as a woman. Gay!
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test
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>>3789859
this anon gets it as based and redpilled
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>>3789821
>>3789832
>>3789850
>>3789859
shut the fuck up
god you're all so insufferable whiny cunts
there's a dozen boards you can let some steam off and bait all you want, especially on kinkshaming futafags, out of all of them you choose /ic/?
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>>3789889
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>>3789889
We're just worried about you. No need to be a bitchy queen.
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>>3789859
you self insert as the penis, not the woman. Kinda like girls fucking machines or using dildos. Seeing/hearing another man come into the picture just makes the porno super cucky. Just enjoy giving yourself a handjob while watching cuck porn and insist how straight you are.
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>>3789893
>>3789894
don't reply to me you insecure cucks
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>>3789910
>says the insecure futafag that won't admit they are gay
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>>3789579
yeah is pretty gay and your mental gymnastics wont do shit
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>>3789897
By that logic it's still cuckoldry because the penis isn't your penis.
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>>3789913
>"dude ur gay lmao"
>spams smash normalfaggot memes
a literal 12 year old brain inside the body of a grown man
if the mods did their fucking job half this thread would be gone by now
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>>3789639
> woman
Anon, I...
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>>3789919
God ordains strength out of the mouth of babes
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>>3789919
jokes on you i don't even play smash i just saved these because i like ness
but i'm glad they triggered an in denial futafag like you.

all according to keikaku!
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This thread is going places...
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first time drawing anything at all basically, followed some basic tutorials online but I really struggled with feet, hands and face, enough with the face that I eventually gave up due to the smudge I couldnt get rid of, any tips for how to not make the feet look like squares?
proportions are a bit off I think
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People that kink shame are cancer.

Also, how do I into anime better? I think it looks better when I don't shade the faces so much, but then the bodies look off imo. Any advice about this issue.

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People that kink shame are cancer.

Also, how do I into anime better? I think it looks better when I don't shade the faces so much, but then the bodies look off imo. Any advice about this issue.

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>>3789997
Simplify the shading on the bodies as well.
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>>3790003
It's really not that easy. I like the current style I'm doing, so I'd prefer to keep that.
Also, I think what bothers me the most are the noses. I guess I should just drop the whole dot noses stylization and from now on just go with regular nose anatomy with nostrils and all that (pic attached).
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>>3789995
>>3789997

people who are kink shy are the true cancer
admit your kink is gay already
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>>3790011
You're asking the man to jeopardize his livelihood
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Any example of porn artist with a western realistic style? All I see is basically amerimango
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>>3790010
how long have you been drawing? :o
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>>3790024
admitting futa is gay is not that hard as these people are making it out to be.


to be honest i would respect them more if they just admited it with confidence.
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>>3790011
Futa really isn't my kink. I just don't mind drawing it, cause I think I can capture the appeal. I mean, I try to draw attractive women with a penis.
My personal preference for drawing kinks is: lesbian >>> straight >>>> futa on futa >>>>> male on futa >>> futa on trap >>>> male on trap. I don't draw male gay cause I can't really capture the appeal.

I still think kink shaming is cancer and whoever practices it is cancer. Cry me a river now.
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>>3790024
Not really. All of my clients and patrons know what I like or don't like to draw. Most of them (the ones that are active in my Discord) also know Futa isn't something I'd beat my meat to.

>>3790033
All my life as a hobby, seriously for about 15 years, professionally for 9.
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>>3790096
that's fair
but why is yuri your first preference in kinks asking out of curiosity?

that's fair but if your going to have a kink you need to own it, like mine is muscle girls and if someone called me out on it I would be like yeah so what in the most coolest way. which is something the futa fans in this thread don't get, if your kink is gay then just be gay as long as it makes you happy and it's what you like and your cool about it when confronted about it to just admit it's what you like regardless of it being gay.
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>>3790128
I just love when female bodies interact passionately. It's probably mostly an aesthetics thing. I just find female bodies more pleasing in general and also I consider them representations of tenderness and beauty. Male bodies can be beautiful too of course, but it's a different kind of aesthetics. They represent roughness and power. That's also why I personally can't find male gay appealing. To me two simbols of power and dominance acting tenderly just seems wrong from an aesthetic standpoint. I guess I have some sort of homophobia ingrained in me because of my upbringing. And no matter how much I try to have an open mind about it, I simply can't stomach two males being intimate, whether it's sex or just a kiss.
Females on the other hand to me seem like the perfect beings for romance, intimacy and tenderness.

I think about futa in a similar way. Like, to me two females being intimate is the best, but real dicks are always better than strap on dildos. I'm just a simpleton lol.
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>>3790139
yeah I get where you're coming from but for i'm the opposite I like my boys pretty and tender and my girls tough and powerful because of the contrast it gives on what they are normally supposed to be like. the contrast is an aesthetic in it's self. there is something appealing something that is supposed to be tender being able to dominate you and being more powerful than you that gets me.

I think that's why tomboys also appeal to me for similar reasons I like muscle girls.


I discovered trap stuff and that helped me be more open to it though it's not my thing so I don't look at trap porn outside of just stumbling on it when browsing online sometimes, maybe you should try looking at male on trap stuff maybe that might help. but I would not worry about it as long as you don't carry real hate towards gay males irl.

when you explain it like that I sort o have a better understanding on why futa is used instead of just drawing strap ons
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Working on comic
https://www.deviantart.com/succubushusband
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>>3790096
>I don't draw male gay
>lists 4 variations of male gay

Latent homophobia is one hell of a drug.
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>>3789579
It just means you’re into women with dicks
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>>3790166
I used to be like this but now I'm at the point where I like both my boys and girls as androgynous as possible.
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>>3790010
why do you always ask for critique but never give some back?
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>>3789997
These are really good but they are a bit off from anime here's somethings that could help
a) Shade the face more. the opposite of what you said is true. there's barely any show of the actual planes of the face, it almost makes it look like a board.
b) take time and study the anatomy and landmarks of anime. your work is stylized and has features seen in anime, but misses some key features that make it anime. You can look up on sketchfab 3d anime faces and put them on matcap or wireframe to study how they actually wrap around.
3) your bodies are fine, there are things here and there but the only way to get better at anatomical subtleties is practice. I really like the expression in the first one's pose and the foreshortening in the second one.
4)Your shading overall needs to be more grounded, You are putting shadows where they shouldn't be just to have something and it throws things off. and example is the shadows arouen the edges of some of the first's limbs and some of the lighting on the second's tits.
Hope this helps.
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>>3789995
This is >>3790214
I overpainted it to put my finger exactly on it. I want to emphesize more what I said in the first one, really think about the shape of the head and skull and where the eyes and features should go when drawing these things
Instead of thinking about having 2 ears 2 eyes, 2 cheeks, lips... make extra sure you are following the3d of the shape.
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>>3789997
Last one from:>>3790214 & >>3790249
The second one is the same thing. The cheek was purtruding too much for that position and the nose was in the wrong place I flipped the image so it could be seen more clearly.
(one last thing I forget about the first one is that it's important t think of them as floating in the sky and draw them appropriately to give your sky real depth.)
Hope this helps, other than that great stuff, keep up the good work!
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>>3789569
>learn where the pussy is on the human body. I recommend: https://prismblush.com/pussy-box/
>Learn how to draw the various aspects of dicks and pussy correctly. In case you want a more art directed diagram I have made on myself last year: https://twitter.com/EiGiBeast/status/1048048856057962496
>understand the parallels on parts and location the cock would be more or less where the clit is, the balls and taint would be where the vagina and labia would be.
>Understand what you are trying to draw. If you just throw pussies and balls everywhere there would be a mess, make sure you know your priorities.
>where does the urine come from ( urethra or shaft)
>does the futa have a vagina and a dick clit or both reproductive organs?
>how would you like to engeneer around the area and make it look appealing or real

These are things to keep in mind
goodluck! hope this helps
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>>3789507
Looks like you are just a beg. It's not even a bad starting point, just keep at it. Also you probably shouldn't be asking people if you are gonn amake it, most people are horrible at seeing through someone's potential Nobody can tell you if you will succeed of not besides you. Hearing ngmi's thrown around probably doesn't help either. Keep practicing and try seeing the positives in your work, work hard to improve on the negatives.
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>>3788142
>>3788076
These are alright. The shading is a bit iffy, try to make sure you know where your light is and shade only where you sure you need it. The anatomy isn't amazing but it's subtleties that would be fixed through practice. Those hands are feet though.remove the ankle and add a thumb.
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>>3790269
>>3789507
I should have said I'm looking for critiques, I figured that was implied. Since I'm /beg/ I post my things here so others can spot mistakes and I can fix them.
I'm not confident about the upper body in its current state, and I was hoping someone would point out anything blatantly wrong with it
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>>3790249
>>3790251
These look awful. Destroyed the appeal.
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>>3790304
They asked how to make it more anime and I did.
If you think this should be done differently feel free to make your own paintover.
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>>3790173
Look, I'm not debating whether futa is a gay kink or not. That's totally not an issue for me. If it's gay, then cool, if it's not, that's cool too.

With male I was referring to a guy that doesn't resemble a woman in any way. With futa I refer to a character that resembles a woman in its entirety except for the genitals.

Now maybe stop trying so hard to derail the thread and maybe post some art?
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>>3790214
Nice tips, thanks.

>>3790249
>>3790251
Thanks for these, but I honestly prefer my versions. Especially the 1st one. The second one I like more, but I don't think any of the stuff you proposed or "fixed" really makes this any more anime. Maybe it's just me, I dunno.
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>>3790105
9 years fuck, thats a long time
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>>3790264
you really put a lot of effort into this crap
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>>3790197
>why do you always ask for critique but never give some back?
>always ask
lol
>never give
lol

I very rarely post my stuff here for critique. And I do critique stuff from time to time. I definitely give more tips and critiques than I ask for them lol.

Why the assumptions and why the negative tone? Just because you are on 4chan you don't need to be an ass, anon.
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What's the best (and fastest) way to get good enough do draw half-decent porn from barely being able to sketch?
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>>3790392
1)No problem

2) Donno what to say about that besides that I might have accidentally added too much of my own touch into it? Oh well who knows
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>>3789582
>But the rest of the man is gross looking and unappealing.
(you), literally and mentally. Peak man is not ugly fucking landwhale Amerimutt.
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>>3790427
a) learn fundementals like 3d shapes and colors
b) use very simple designs with thick lines, preferably with some interest like texture. This will put your skills at making an attractive image to test more than just stumbling on the less important stuff. Long before I could draw a detailed face well I used a simplified facial style to make hentai.
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>>3790403
Hope this helps. I wish one day my hentai would be so anatomically good they would give it to gyno students as reference.
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>>3790432
Peak man best man
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>>3790444
just make fetish art, no one really cares about your perfect anatomy. you make art for normies, not for artists
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>>3790442
oki, thanks! How long did it take for you to get decent at it?
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This one took me about 3 hours. Getting the squirls with sand over them was the tricky part. I called it 'If Winter Comes in the Summer. What you guys think?
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>>3790096
>using "kinkshaming" unironically
Die.
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>>3790458
A few months
although everything depends on how much you practice, what you practice, and how.
By the way this is the video that I watched that got me to wrap my head around art begin 3d and understanding the fundamentals, this might be useful to you too: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=iLaqYCrkmEA&t=150s
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>>3790510
Hmm, okay. I watched the video and it seemed really solid, thanks :)
Ive been doing the opposite of what he says though haha, Ive been copying sketches I like and then redoing the parts of them that Im having trouble with (like hands or feet) over and over to get them down
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I've never drawn anything lewder than a pin up before, so this was weird for me. Trying it for a social media experiment though. Cheelai x Broly, should I just ink it now? Was thinking of adding a close up of the dick insertion and her face in empty spots on the side.
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>>3789507
Got a high res of that logo or do I have to blow it up myself?
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>>3790411
Still a proper dick I see
Clearly you're in a shitty mood and gave an aggressive response as a consequence so there's no point in arguing with you, hopefully you'll be more generous with crit from now on
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>>3790607
this is the highest res i have, i just used an online generator but it doesnt produce big images
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>>3790614
Well shit, and I'm not a graphic designer.
What does everyone use for life reference for sexy stuff? I use gravure idols but that's sorta limited to one body type and most other references I find are generally a boring pose or focused on a single body part.
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I'm too poor/stingy to pay for a personal domain. Would it be too old-fashioned to upload my porn drawings to Blogger or Wordpress? I'm not quite sure if they're okay with porn, though.
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Holy shit. Stop making these threads. Your art is bad and ugly
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>>3789986
It's gonna suck, but sit down and draw a page full of hands and a page of feet. Look up pics from different angles and types of hands/feet and just practice drawing them individually until you're comfortable.

The main issue I see with it is the anatomy on the legs. They're very thin and the gap between them is a little unrealistic. The torso and shoulders are probably the stronger part of the drawing.

It's pretty good for your first attempt though, I'd definitely keep trying!! Reference pics are your friend.
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>>3790611
not anon, but I think /you're/ the one being a dick. who cares if they're on here a lot asking for advice?
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>get a DM on an account I hardly use
>some dude is looking for the hi-res files of all my drawings of one particular character
>ask him why
>says I wouldn't believe him if he told me
>wut
>says 'I just want to have them'
>hmm
>don't reply
>follows up with 'So why don't you believe me?'
>doublewut
>tell him to fuck off

Fucking furries are insane sometimes. Bet he wanted to do some freaky shit with my stuff
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>>3789579
they're gay, they go out of their way to find porn of "women" with dicks, usually topping and using said dick. If they believe it isn't gay then they're buying into the dumb, "not all women have vaginas!" tranny shit.

If I found out a man I was seeing watched futa or trap porn I'd dump him, I'd assume I'm just a beard. Who watches futa or trap stuff unless they're using it until they're comfortable accepting actual gay porn? It's the beard of porn genres.

It's not hard to see through.
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how the fuck do nipples work
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>>3790596
There's merit to master studies but if you don't have your fundamentals and these stuff down first then it doesn't really mean anything. Those stuff only helps if you understand why you are doing it.
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>>3790600
Cute
That pose is relatively tough too.
good job!
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>>3790643
I have a ref pack of cute girls I find hot online from twitter and got their pics ( cosplayers and bodybuilders)
you can have it:
https://drive.google.com/file/d/1U39XFfsAP1G_eb8ixXS3xcPBhVejl3P-/view?usp=sharing
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>>3789986
Alright start but you won't get much far following anatomy tutorials. Sit down and learn your fundies. Learn how to represent space and 3d shapes on your piece of paper
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>>3789579

if you like big clits, does that make you gay? Like, if you enjoy seeing lesbians tribbing or women who can stuff a vibrator up their pussys while having their assholes filled and fucking a flesh light with their clits. Is that too gay? Or is there actually a very wide spectrum of perversions and putting everything as gay/straight is completely subjective and stupid to argue about.

What about the bisexuals? No one ever thinks about the bisexuals.
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>>3790841
they are hard to master, btw those look fake
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First actual porn ive drawn thats not just a lewd, realized my posing made no sense so I added a little post thingy lol
Still a newbie and just having fun, gnight /ic/
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>>3790611
>Still a proper dick I see
I don't think I'm the dick between the two of us here anon.
In your opinion somebody is a dick if they reacto to somebody being a dick in the first place? I honestly don't think so.
But at the end of the day, who even cares. We are on a critique board supposed to be talking about artworks. You are just trying to provoke a reaction from me, to try to show me in a bad light. None of this has anything to do with art.
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>>3790823
>roastie feels threatened by feminine penises
could you BE more insecure
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Got bored, not gonna finish it.
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>>3791535
>calling others insecure when you can't even admit you're gay
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>>3791535
damn this HIV diseased nigga desperate to get their asshole torn apart
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>>3786853
Stop using your grotesque unappealing scribbles as the OP you big ego fuck
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>>3791535
feminine?, you mean leg sized, like 99.9% of all tranny futa hentai?
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>>3791548
gross line art, no wonder why and no soul.
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>>3789505
Holy shit that's gold
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>>3789639
Stop responding to him/her, they'll never learn
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>>3790841
Nips and titty are hard. Grab some porn and take lots of screenshots til you have a decent ref folder.

Unless you are going for that bimbo fake tit look add some weight to them when they are free.

As for the nips they are rarely ever perfectly round, even when you see them straight on. Remember that the center protrudes out so the top edge of it wont be in the center unless looking dead on. A good way to help visualize how they would look in perspective is to think of them as contact lenses with a tiny cylinder on top.

Good Luck anon
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Stuff
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>>3792674
Not the guy that drew that and imo the bigger problem is the shape of the breasts in this case. This said, please let's see your version.
Instead of being a total asshole, why don't you instead contribute something? Or, even better, just shut the fuck up instead of spreading hate and bad vibes?
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>>3792674
>2019 still using the virgin insult..
>>3792638
cant you make its dick smaller, all these futa faggots and their leg sized dick fetish
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>>3792858
>>2019 still using the virgin insult..
>draw what I like instead of drawing what you are requested to draw or what you want to draw
The fucking irony.
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>>3792304
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>>3792858
It's a commission
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>>3792805
The hands seem a mite small, friend. Foreshortened fingers are tricky but I think you can do it!

Otherwise, the composition is pretty appealing. Thanks for sharing!
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>>3790841
I dunno but here's my take on it, if it helps
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please please please leapesa plesas plase please please please pleas pelas please
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>>3793360
Thanks for noticing! It gets even more tricky when using a 3d model, which isn't anatomically correct but helps to understand some parts
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>>3793410
lmfao.
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>>3793696
well she look funny but how dood
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wow this thread fucking sucks even the art is shit. where did it all go wrong?
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>>3793721
thank you for your valuable input, now fuck off
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>>3793721
Pyw or dont even bother talking shit
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>>3792866
Based blueliner
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>>3793721
The good ones left, some off the site and some quit porn for their personal health.
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>>3794254
As I thought you can't back your claims. Stop replying if all you can do is spout shit.
GTFO.
>>3794260
>this level of butthurt
For the second time, GTFO.
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>>3793443
what is going on with the second girl?

Is she being licked by a disembodied mouth or is her futa cock getting enveloped by a slime...?
What even
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>>3794260
did you even read your original post? xd
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>>3794257
You want me back that badly?
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>>3792866
This is pretty bad.
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>>3793761
>>3793725
I don't need to be a top tier artist to know what art is shit. I'm here to learn from others and expand. All i see is shit post with bad anatomy and rendering. Stop kidding yourselfs.
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>>3794453
Sounds like you're stuck in a rut and lashing out against everyone.

Dragging people down isn't going to better your work, or bring more attention to your galleries.

Or you can continue to piss and moan, PMSing like a bitch.
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>>3794453
based ESL-tard
now it's clear you don't think your art is good enough to post it
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>>3794453
>I don't need to be a top tier artist to know what art is shit.
Of course not. But what's the point on shitting on people you aren't even better of in the first place?
Knowing that some art isn't good it's not the same as being a complete asshole, asshole.
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What can i improve?, first time drawing futa
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>>3794390
The dude who drove failures such as this ray of sunshine >>3794257 to stalking and long winded rants.
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>>3794580
Pick up Hampton, Loomis, Bridgeman, and Robertson books over by the art book thread. Study them, cover to cover.
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>>3794612
That's some good shit, i allways wanted to read loomis books, thanks for that
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Just finished this, pretty proud of it, but I know I still have room for improvement. Any pointers?
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>>3790823
That's not how it works. A gay guy likes men, goes to /y/, and then clears their history. Why would they bother with futa when no one's around to see them fap? It's clear people just like futa for its own sake. It wouldn't have such a high output of content if it was something no one genuinely liked. Also traps are their own can of worms.
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>>3790179
>I like both my boys and girls as androgynous as possible.
This is the point that i'm at now, oh god help.
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>>3794741
Based femorc anon
The one critique I have is that the arm she is raising is a bit weird, it looks like she's raising it behind her but not being able to see the forearm at least slightly makes it seem like she has a stump... Unless that's what you were going for?
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>>3792866
this is pretty good
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>>3792866
worse
based blueliner
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>>3793687
What program/model is this? That seems like a pretty decent model.
I use design doll sometimes and the model that came with that is garbo
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>>3794725
Anus is too low, it's placed right at the end of the the vulva
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>>3794725
Have you seen the film "The Untamed"?
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>>3795065
gotcha, thank you. I rarely actually draw anuses so this is good to know
>>3795074
I have not seen the whole movie, but I do know the premise of it
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>>3790841
Ellipses in perspective is the key for nipples, if you can't imagine them you'll be guessing until you get something that looks passable.

Tits look fake because they have no indication of weight, just round objects jutting out of the chest. Too high as well, by default you should be sure to give room to pectoral flesh, when you learn to manipulate anatomy for stylization you can get away with this.
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>>3795054
Looks like DAZ3d, fun program
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>>3789505
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delivery for the One Piece threads
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>>3795691
her neck could take twice as long
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>>3794741
Post blog.
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>>3793721
they are all in /d/ drawing futa shit
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>>3795443
1k followers on Twitter, on par with Zion. Barely advertised anything yet; which is soon to change.
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>>3795691
I know it's not supposed to be that way, but she looks like some sort of entity that's just a head with giant boobs. maybe just draw a bit of the shoulders?
Also avoid shading with gray
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https://www.twitter.com/gigawix
thanks for the interest :)
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>>3795881
>>3796178
woops
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>>3796134
>1k followers on Twitter
>>3795443
>So, a complete nobody then.
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>>3796138
she's sort of just a gray person, i wasn't satisfied with the colors but i wanted to wrap it up.

also you're right about the shoulders, i did this on stream so i kind of rushed it
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>>3794580
is that vayne?
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>>3795337
i download this program and i have no idea where to go or how to get the program started
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>>3796512
Did you do any other nsfw?
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>>3796441

2k on Tumblr, through the shadowbans.

Let's see...

It'll take one month to establish an online presence on the various socials and to get back into the good habits, two to double the follower count on Twitter alone (potentially triple). By the end of the third I'll have significantly improved my fundamentals and build a pipeline of content production to suit the demand. On the fourth I'll seal a deal with a modest comic project and a few animations, and a fifth will be where I breakthrough.
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>>3790823
By that logic fapping to Buck Angel is straight, but somehow I don't think you'd be fine with it either, you hypocritical fuck.
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>>3789715
So dickgirls are not men? Glad we can agree.
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>>3794325
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Could someone help me fix this drawing?
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Hey bros, if it's not asking much, can someone tell if I'm in the right direction and what the hell I need to do to make that feet look right?

My previous stuff was >>3787249 and >>3787460 , I have less than a month trying to drawn bodies, anatomy and stuff. I think this current drawing has better lineart and pose, but I'm still a complete /beg/, I've spent months only drawing characters heads and now even with references I'm struggling with feet and hands.

Also, can someone point me a guide to how use halftones on sai/photoshop/clip paint? I'm gonna try to experiment a little and see what I can get.
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>>3796900
done
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>>3796620
So, you're a complete nobody. We've established that. My friend has over 5k followers on Twitter and she takes pictures of cats lol.
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>>3796620
>shadowbans
lol
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>>3796992
Draw feet baka
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>>3796620
I'm afraid reality will soon kick you in the face.
For achieving something like this you need to post daily and you have to have good art already.
Post your work. Redpill me or let me redpill you.
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hol up
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Hello, I'm making a western erotic game and would like to find another artist to help me out (mostly with the sex scenes, since I can more or less do the sprites) I will do the sprites, backgrounds, writing and coding. You will only need to draw the sex scenes.

if you are interested contact me at rimelo1997@gmail.com

Payment is 40% of whatever we can make on patreon.
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>>3797077
>cats

Yeah, kind of the gold standard on the net.

>>3797079
>shadowbans

All the signs, like most NSFW content up until the purge.

>You can’t see posts directly reblogged from you.
>You can’t use the message function.
>Whenever you try to search your username on the search bar, the blog preview doesn’t show up.
>Your posts don’t show up on tags you typed in.
>People can’t @ you either.
>You’re basically invisible to everyone except your followers unless they go on your blog to look at your posts.

>>3797142
>need to post daily
>good art covered

Got it covered. Just set up shop again and already got a waitlist.
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>>3797421
>good art covered
Let me be the judge of that. By how you are acting to me it looks like you are suffering from the dunning krugers.
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>>3786853
blog?
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>>3789940
what manga? really good artwork!
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>>3797281
>Payment is 40% of whatever we can make on patreon.
So basically nothing hahahahaha
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>>3797549
twitter.com/Boltss_

Most of my drawings have cocks, so beware if you don't like them.
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I realize most people on this board have no idea how big and perky tits work. The red liners are also awful.
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>>3798551
satanic tranny midget fetish
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>>3798579
Yeah yall need to actually study your tiddies
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>>3796892
aaaa i see whats going on now
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Anyone got any guides or handy tips for drawing glossy surfaces?
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>>3798799
white shading.
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>>3798812
>Never shade with black
Reeeeeee
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>>3796992
Annnnd done with the lines. Quite happy with what I've got, maybe I'll finish the half tones later on clip paint, I just used a half assed texture for now. Heard somewhere you can do those fancy gradient textures with the program.
I'm so fucking shit with feet that I probably took more time looking at how to draw them than what I've spent drawing everything.
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>>3798868
im going to rape her
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>>3796576
just did, it's another one for the boys on /a/
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>>3798585
That is quite accurate.
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>>3796512
>did this on stream
you have a blog somewhere?
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>>3798931
nah, I just do requests for one piece threads on /a/ and occasionally stream some requests when I have free time to burn.
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please yell feedback at me, i'm new to coloring and have no idea what i'm doing
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>>3799003
Why does she have a dick and huge man hands?
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>>3799004
i'm too zoned out on adderall to give you a coherent answer for that one
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>>3799003
Unappealing
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>>3799003
Check this post from /beg/
>>3797118

It should cover your basics.
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does this look any better? (i know i need to tone down the pink on the dick and fix the forms on the neck, also probably render a bit more on the stomach and hips area/erase some of the misc. inside detail lines and replace em with more rendering/lines disguised as terminators (and fix the godforsaken knees) but i need to lay down before my soul exits my body)

>>3799031
unironically please elaborate, even tho it might just be a difference in taste i don't want to miss out on the chance of receiving good feedback on how to improve this piece, i'm trying really hard to push myself in terms of color work.

>>3799034
i have watched countless tutorials and tried to read several books on the subject, i'm worried i might be too stupid to learn that way, never the less i will try these as well so thank you.
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>>3799147
Man, that hand is super big, like giant big, I don't wanna be jacked off by that thing, no sir. The way you composed everything makes the hand the first focal point that anyone will see. Arm seems off.
There's also the way her body is bending forward, looks a bit unnatural considering the rest of her pose, but eh. Pretty nice art, anyway.
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>>3799147
Okay Anon >>3799034 here

You need to elaborate a bit more on your problem with coloring because

>i have watched countless tutorials and tried to read several books on the subject, i'm worried i might be too stupid to learn that way, never the less i will try these as well so thank you.

This indicates that there is something you are really lost about despite studying the material. Saying "I have no idea what I am doing" doesn't help either you or us to help you.

So please try to be a but more precise here.
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>>3799214
get what you're saying about the awkwardness of that arm, i spent way more time than i wanna admit on it but still can't get it right, but in regards to the hand i just like chunky proportions and those usually involve proportionally big hands and often feet, sorta like street fighter, the forward bend was just my attempt at adding some kind of motion to the image, like they're whizzing forward on the skates but i'm not very good at conveying motion in still images yet. hmm, staring at it more maybe if i remove the lil knuckle bump for the middle finger it'd feel a bit more natural...

>>3799223
i struggle with picking appealing flat colors, even if i limit myself to just picking from two or three. i don't think i'm color blind, i'm able to do those tests relatively well, but something about value i can't wrap my head around, even when it's all in gray scale, i don't know what it is. i also tend to like really bright and saturated colors, which i know i have to desaturate things for them to pop but i can't seem to balance things properly. i know people like craig mullins and a ton of others say things like "color doesn't matter, as long as the values are right you can put any color in there and it'll work" but when i attempt that i tend to get very muddy unsatisfying results. i know i want to try to save higher saturation for darker areas and lighter areas have less saturation unless it's some kind of super reflective material like plastic etc. but i have a hard time wrapping my head around it because color is so relative that changing one color changes every other color in relation to it. i think it's balance that i really struggle with in regards to hue, saturation and value.

apologies for the walls of text.
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>>3799147
dick would look better coming out of unzipped shorts rather than out the leg ew
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>>3799605
it feels too late to make a change as major as that, at least i don't wanna put that much work in on redoing the lines on this piece this late but just for you i will draw a dick coming outta some unzipped shorts next
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>>3799628
Hells yeah my dude
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>>3799574
> "color doesn't matter, as long as the values are right you can put any color in there and it'll work" but when i attempt that i tend to get very muddy unsatisfying results.

this is umm... half true tindigital art his video shows you
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=lJitss58XKc
Value makes it look good ye sand value should be the thing you practice the most to learn form but grayscale value alone it is not completely enough for coloring. Your muddy results are appropriate result in digital art.

>i know i want to try to save higher saturation for darker areas and lighter areas have less saturation unless it's some kind of super reflective material like plastic etc. but i have a hard time wrapping my head around it

For color the highest saturation should be in the midtones (which is the middle uppper way pf the color scale) upper way of the color scale, the lightest area still loose saturation as you go lighter the light's color (and white) becomes the dominant one. White will start to dominate every color value as you go brighter and brighter no matter what color is your light

Same goes for dark after you go darker than the midtones the shadows will start to loose its saturation quickly and becomes desaturated as well, dark becomes desaturated too.

Painters often use that the slide the hue slightly towards colder colors when painting shadow and slighting towards warmer/brighter colors when painting lights to make it more natural looking ( as I see you did on >>3799147 as well) but this is not the absolute rule there are man factors that govern that however it is a good rule of thumb.

>super reflective material like plastic
Super reflective materials obey the same principles, just have less mid tones and more highlights.

>have a hard time wrapping my head around it because color is so relative that changing one color changes every other color in relation to it.
This is correct and it is good that you know this.

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>>3799147

>>3799647 here again, here is more advice

Based on your picture I would say that the main thing you are missing is not being brave enough to pick darker colors. Your picture in general, especially the background is super bright, it is almost blinding to the viewer so and thus it makes it hard to pick a darker color that doesn't pop out way too much. The same thing happens when one tries to paint with a pure white background and tries to eyeball the colors. You are trying to make the picture work while using only a small fraction of the entire color spectrum that is available to you.

Do not worry tough Anon this is common issue that newcomers face, and the solution is straightforward.
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>>3799778
I would start by choosing a color that is more of a midtone, way less saturated and has less value, compared to the bright blue you had. This is way easier on the eyes and instantly makes the character pop out well compared to the environment and it "highlights" (pun my have been intended) how bright colored she is.

I choose a green because that is a complementary to the pink/red the character has but that doesn't really matter that much..
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>>3799788
Once that is done it may be a bit easier for your to add way darker colors to the body. I marked the base color you had with the white circle.

As you can add more darker midtone colors to it the body, the shape of her body finally have a chance to pop out more.

Did this help your confusion?
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>>3799805
Whoops I missed the white circle it should have been the top most color from the series but it serves to show how bright it was.
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>>3799805
Not that guy and that's good advice but you made the dick look diseased
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>>3799815
Thank you for your pointless input Anon.
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>>3799823
Okay then by over saturating it and bumping the contrast up like that, you made the dick look diseased. But other than that it was good advice.

How is that pointless? Nobody wants to look at a syphilis dick.
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How does this look so far
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>>3799846
Why is her head so small
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>>3799849
It looks fine to me.
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>>3799003
I guess it's subjective, but I feel if you made the face cuter it would help a lot. Maybe make the nose a little smaller and play around with the nostrils. Something like cyancapsule's Emelie is a good example.

Sketch I did. Anything way off?
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>>3797447
Here you go. WIP.
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>>3800290
Oh that's you lol.
If you couldn't make it with porn, you won't make it with SFW. Not with this kind of skill.
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>>3800338
Not that guy but he could garner a good amount of popularity with art like this
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>>3800431
Not really. Maybe if he improves a lot. Right now his stuff is still beginner-mediocre tier. There's no depth to it and it's very stiff. Plus his colored stuff is still atrocious to look at.
Previously he was gaining some traction just because he was drawing porn. Now that he doesn't do that anymore he'll struggle much much more.
Mark my words.
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>>3800587
normies don't really care about "depth" or any of that technical stuff. These are details that only people here obsess over.

What non-artists and normies really care when it comes to making art is themes they enjoy or can relate to.

Cute girls
friends having fun
young love/romance etc.
As long as you can illustrate these with moderate competency, you'll get positive feedback from them.

From the sounds of it, however, you have a bit of personal grudge against this guy so I doubt no matter what he posts you'll find some kind of issue with it.
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>>3800645
>As long as you can illustrate these with moderate competency, you'll get positive feedback from them.
This is where you are wrong. If you can't capture good mood, which is what normies get hooked on, you will never be popular. And Flinstones is really bad at this. And I don't mean mediocre bad. I mean beginner tier bad.
One thing is selling porn, which is consumed by literal dickbrains, a completely other monster is making appealing SFW art that shows really good mood.
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>>3800645
Forgot about this.

>From the sounds of it, however, you have a bit of personal grudge against this guy so I doubt no matter what he posts you'll find some kind of issue with it.
I have absolutely nothing against Flinstones. I'm just performing a reality check, cause I believe he really needs it.
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>>3799805
this will take me a while to process but thank you, this is really good advice
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>>3801062
you are awesome bro
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>>3801062
Nice stuff. I really dig the coloring.
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>>3800736
>i have nothing against flintstones

Well could have fooled me. Your posts were pretty passive aggressive and didnt sound at all like you were trying to actually trying to help him. Just sounds like you got annoyed by his "dunning kruger" and wanted to put him in his place so to speak.
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>>3802231
Well, that's part of it for sure. He needs to have more realistic expectations. And with that attitude he's bound to hit the ground real hard.
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