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What is /ALT/?
If you're looking for a place to post your cartooning then you've found the right general. This is /ic/s 1st and only merged hub where both Eastern and Western stylization can coexist peacefully, hence the double title. However, by community demand and long history, this is favorably an Anime general.
>Rules & Guidelines
(1) Any form of cartooning is welcome; so submit and receive feedback from others. (2) Please resize your images before posting. (3) Share your knowledge and (4) Remember to not be afraid of asking for critique. Most importantly I encourage you to keep discussion at a civil level, but you're more than welcome to share your opinions.
>I came for anime. Why does the image OP say cartoons general?
To distinguish from the anime study thread (janitor supported). Please post your studies there and personal work goes here.
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>Community Resources
Hitokaku Index
>http://www.asahi-net.or.jp/~zm5s-nkmr/
List of active livestreams
>Use twitch #art
>yoshikadu2011 https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCUx5dpO6d5gQ4KWNPc24CKw
FellowBro's Book Collection
>http://mediafire.com/?i44dwzkf9j9n8
Tutorial & Reference Collection
>http://pinterest.com/characterdesigh/
Japanese Tutorials & Documentary
>http://www.pixiv.net/member_illust.php?id=59317 (0033)
>http://iradukai.com/
References
>http://www.onairvideo.com/croquis-cafe-photos2.html
>http://www.eggazyoutatsu.net/eng/atarichan.html
>http://senshistock.com/sketch/
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>>3967964
Huh?
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>>3967964
christ
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>>3967964
Pick a better op pic next time. Christ that looks awful
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>>3967981
>>3967969
>>3967966
>My piece of shit wasn't featured
Are you autists seriously going to make a fucking big deal about what's on the OP? Either fuck off or post your work cunts.
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>>3967983
Huh
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>>3967983
I haven't even posted once in the last thread or the thread before.
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Coming along.

>>3967983
Let me guess, yours get trashed in the previous thread.
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Just a couple of keyframes for a Sonia animation in the works.
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>>3968026
Have not posted my pieces in these threads for at least a couple of years now. Also please post in the appropriate containment thread thank you. >>3916858
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>>3967969
>>3967981
>>3967966
>>3967983
lol imagine getting this triggered over why your shitty work didn't get promoted on obscure 4chan board
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>>3968042
>Alternative Art/Stylization Thread
As opposed to...?

Well, I'm glad you're keeping porn in the Porn Threads. Thank you for exercising that discipline so far.
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>>3967929
Thanks dood, appreciate it. Spent probably 60 hours noodling it, most frustrating work yet by far. I'm mad at how I made the drawing/composition so simple and undynamic but couldn't really compensate with bg/value/color. Might make a new version later
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>>3968086
Animations belong in animation threads
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>>3968026
Look, it's the retard again with his muslim rules.
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>>3968105
>the JUST
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>>3968122
Well, I can also call her "the righteous ", just to say that she is a character with austere reputation.
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really liked the new pokemon girl
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>>3968251
her left eye is too small
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>>3967983
>>3968043
I haven't even posted in the previous threads but there's a few that are way better than this garbage

>>3968026
>>3968086
Post in the animation thread tranny.
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>>3967964
wtf I thought that was some new animu preview by the kemono friends guy
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>>3967964
Can we just call these anime and manga threads again? There's almost no difference between most of what's posted here and the draw threads
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>>3968505
Fuck no, we already have anime thread as a containment thread for crabs, we don't want them to invade here
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>>3968216
I like your middle-right design anon, not a big fan of your lower leg proportions but that's just me.
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>>3968507
You do realize they're not restricted to post in this thread too right
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>>3968105
>>3968216
That's very cool anon, nice work !
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>>3968567
Wtf?
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The Supreme Patriarch of the Ordos assembly
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>>3968670
Is it finished?
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>>3968678
The background looks unfinished doesn’t it...haha

It is meant to be finished but on a second look the background looks pretty splodgy
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>>3968691
Feet could use a bit more
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>>3968789
Just the front foot actually
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>>3968791
I’m still practicing feet, so this is the best of my skill unfortunately. Hopefully I’ll improve more with practice :)
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>>3967964
I didn't realize /beg/s were being welcomed into this thread
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>>3968800
Seethe
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How do you promote self?
Where can I find contests (not gonna win anyway everything is rigged) to join?
how do I get my name out there?

I notice the number 1 thing that seperates good from bad artists is the amount of followers they have, and you get followers by either having some famous artist artist shill you or spamming everywhere to get your name known

how do you go about this?
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>>3968891
abuse hashtags
interact with your followers
keep a steady stream of work flowing
don't fill your feed with reaction pictures

most importantly, learn and speak in moonrunes because jap artists creates waves better than the western twitter community and will give you a shitload of new followers if you manage to make them retweet your work.
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>>3968891
The way I go about networking is to become friends with artists but try and be genuine along the way. People can always tell if you’re being contrived, if they feel like you’re only sucking up to them for their following then they’ll keep away. To become mutuals with a bigger artist I try to support their work, but in a way that sets me apart from their other followers (giving detail when commenting on their art instead of just saying “I like the hair.”) Occasionally start conversation with something that relates to them personally, like a meme about something they brought up before, and become friends with them. Eventually, they might share your art to their followers when you post it. Try to comment something ‘ecks dee relatable’ on big pages so that people become interested in seeing your page. Do this enough and you’ve got yourself a following
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>>3968903
yeah i noticed some random dude went from a couple of 100 followers to thousands overnight as a doujin artist retweeted his work

Cant twitter just die already so we can get a decent platform
thanks for the advice famalam
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>>3968906
>The way I go about networking is to become friends with artists but try and be genuine along the way. People can always tell if you’re being contrived,
I kinda feared this
to be completely honest I dont care at all about making friends and the related drama that comes with friendships
I get what youre saying though and Ill do that
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>>3968891
>I notice the number 1 thing that seperates good from bad artists is the amount of followers they have
This is an objectively idiotic point of view. Plenty of fine artists die in obscurity and been discovered after death. Does that mean their work was bad and then, magically, their work became good post-mortem?
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>>3969063
I was being sarcastic, theres plenty of artists who are below /beg/ tier but theyre popular so you cant call them out, and great artists that struggle to get noticed
Shad is a good example, although I admit hes at least above /beg/tier
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>>3967964
These OP pics have been trash recently.
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>>3969129
How about you post your work and maybe it would be featured next time
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Trying to do a style thing. Lucky for me E3 gas given some inspiration.
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>>3969336
It's stylised. Just because Nessa doesnt have a huge rack doesn't make her a kid. The OC is questionable though so I'll delete that.
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>>3969348
>The OC is questionable though so I'll delete that.
Grow a fucking pair.
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>>3969348
You just let the cancer redditor silence you. How does it feel?
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>>3969352
>>3969353
Not good. You're right.
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>>3969353
this isnt even lolicon
her boobs are huge
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>>3969353
>draws porn
>bends over at the sight of a SJW trying to win brownie points
Why do people do this? Never fucking apologize or retract yourself it just gives incentive for more of the snowflakes to hound you so they can step all over you and virtue signal even more. This is why we end up with mundane content from fear of offending someone.
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>>3969374
Didnt you get a ban like 2 days ago?
Or did the mod just delete all of your posts and let you off with a warning? Either way doesnt it kind of give you the hint that pushing your agenda isnt really welcome here? Why do you have to shit up another thread, just let people draw.
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>>3969374
Jesus christ I just wanted people to tell me my art was neat. I was being cautious before because a friend got banned for a similar thing but fuck you. These characters are clearly above board
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>>3969379
Banned under global rule 3, which is precisely what these posts featuring under-aged characters flal under.

We have had similar incidents where an under-aged charatcer of the Pokemon franchise was depicted engaging in bestiality, not in the Porn Thread but in this general, just days ago. I brought up the issue, yet the moderators never acted upon it, despite it being a violation of global rule 3 regardless.

We had another incident where several pages, as well as a link, to a shotacon comic featuring Christopher Robin from Winnie the Pooh. The moderators did nothing, despite it violating 4chan's rules.

And now this poster is posting lolicon on this general.

I repeat, delete the posts and do not post this content anywhere but /b. These are not ft for even the Porn Threads.
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>>3969374
>>3969387
What the fuck is with the moralism. I get tired of people getting mad and being Puritans about lollicon shit. I can understand being against Guro and beastiality but lollicon. Come on now.
>We had another incident where several pages, as well as a link, to a shotacon comic featuring Christopher Robin from Winnie the Pooh.
Lol that sounds more funny and a great trolling tactic that worked if anything. If you learned to ignore it than engage the trolls you would find out that they have no power on the board.
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>>3969387
If i remember correctly, the actual sex pictures were just linked to, not posted.
And whats in the thread now doesnt look like loli to me.
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>>3969374
“This is your last warning”

Does this not fall under “impersonating a mod”?
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>>3969387
woof woof :)
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>>3969391
By the drawfags own words, the character is underaged.
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>some lolifag posts drawing on a taiwanese knitting forum
>not a single thing changes and no one is worse off for it
>some autist spergs about loli on 4chins
>thread derailed
wow
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>>3969398
>not even lolicon
>drawfag admits to it
>rules are old and busted

Great job giving yourself away, degenerate.
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>>3969405
the pokemon gym leader? or the girl with the huge tits?
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>>3969374
>>3969390
Back to your hugbox, snowflake. We'll draw whatever the fuck we want.
>>3969406
This is what happens when you bend the knee for these moral fags/Social Justice Warriors. Don't call it a grave, this is the future you chose.
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>>3969390
was meant for
>>3969387
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>tfw hate the woof woof complainer but hate the toddlerfag just as much
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>>3969381
It doesn't even qualify as oppai loli. If you post something (remotely) borderline and get banned for it, who gives a shit. Acknowledging some random cocksucker who orders you to take your "degeneracy" down is a complete failure and it has a chilling effect on the entire community. The only ones in charge are janitors and mods, nobody else can say shit, never forget that. You're better off not even posting in this place if you're gonna let people step on you and give them influence by being obedient. Don't worry, I'll take the ban for you if it happens. Wew dude.

On your art: it's neat but one easy area of improvement would be to not lose line weight in places where lines approach each other, like in this spot. The line also disappears for no good reason sometimes, like on her right leg's heel in the same upper shot.

>>3969396
Probably does
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>>3969420
You're more than welcome to leave with the complainer fagtron.
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>>3969387
>I brought up the issue, yet the moderators never acted upon it, despite it being a violation of global rule 3 regardless.

Because it's a pink/peach (nsfw) board and the mods probably don't care as long as anons aren't spamming stupid bullshit and staying on topic?
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>>3969423
Nah
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>>3969422
Well hey the actual criticism is appreciated. I'll probably still post here though. Didn't think this would blow up like it did but I feel like if I let this affect me I wouldn't have learned anything today. So thanks?
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>>3969414
Looks borderline. Wouldn't post porn of her here just a precaution.
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>>3969444
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I’m so confused. Ok so I can’t draw older versions of younger characters now? If I draw a Pokémon trainer with wide hips, add boobs and a foot in height, it’s still bad? So basically you’ll still get shit on if you draw older versions of younger characters?
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>>3969306
I love the gesture and line quality, my guy. Keep working
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>>3969458
Nobody but that sperg is making a big deal about it, what's so upsetting is how you faggots bend the knee at the sound of an offended cunt with sand in her Bagina. Grow a fucking pair or don't bother posting at all if you're so afraid of offending others.
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>>3969458
its bad because turning lolis into adults is a bad idea in general
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>>3969458
As long as you're not drawing actual children having sex i doubt you'll have any problems. That guy talks a big game but he got banned the other day for being annoying so I wouldnt worry too much about him.
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>>3969462
Might as well post while we still have our freedoms before the Internet gestapo arrives, was having trouble with this one any feedback would be appreciated.
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>>3969458
She does not look like an older version of the character. Not even close.

Thank you for admitting both images featured underage characters.
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>>3969469
It's lolicon, which falls under global rule 3 (not allowed on any board but /b).

Not even the Porn Thread
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>>3969458
Do what you want. Why do you care about what an annoying piece of shit thinks?
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>>3969336
>>3969374

Shush it retard
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>>3969458
You can. It's just one retard sperging
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>>3969469
>>3969458
both are not bad it is just a fucking drawing ffs
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>>3969516
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>>3969516
>keEp THe p0Rn on tHe poRn tHReaDs waAAa
>RePort UnDerAged cOntent oUtSide Of /b uGUuuU
Yeah no. We like it here as long as it bothers you so much
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I had no stake in this until bestiality was thrown in
Gimme as much as feral on womans you can put out my dudes
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>>3969530
Go crazy, anon
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>>3969515
anon can draw whatever he likes, i agree with you. but posting a drawing of an actual child would probably get him a ban. whats in the thread now doesnt look like children though
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>>3969534
true that
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Mods please do something about this moralizing redditor!
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>>3969547
I'll give you an upvote!
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>>3969516
>>3969476
>Global rule 3
>Lollicon is porn because my headcanon says so
Fuck off faggot. Lollicon is love and lollicon is life. Only a sperg like yourself can never see artistic value in anything.
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>>3969552
based lolichad
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This thread was shit from the start. Go here for actual art talk >>3969583
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>>3969585

fuck off and use up this thread first
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She's just of legal age. Dilate harder faggot.
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>>3969590
Suck my cock
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>>3969458
Just draw it normally, if roasties getting mad then you're doing it right and gonna make it.
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>>3969603
Wax my asshole
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>>3969516
This guy has managed to turn to shit every thread he has ever posted in. Like a Midas' touch of shit. Hope you die of AIDS soon buddy
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>>3969599
Sauce?
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>check thread
>60+ new posts
>It's all just shitposting instead of artposting
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As someone who draws mainly SFW and don't even like loli, this redditor is a gigantic faggot for shitting up the thread because MUh GaTeKEEpINg. I bet you're an actual pedo trying to cope and project his frustrations in this thread
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I fucking hate each and every one of you.
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>>3969599
Fanart isn't proof. The lolicon artist style does not help you, either.

>>3969590
Agreed.
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>>3969625
ARF ARF
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>>3969625
Aw love you too
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>>3969626
>lolicon because I said so
Probably because not only you're an actual pedo like the other anon stated, but you're also racist for infantilizing us asians with petite build. You're worse and nastier than I thought.
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>>3969626
Assuming this is still Hardstones bitching, you need to grow up and accept that your work is unappealing, stagnant shit and fuck off.
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actual pedo huh..
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>>3969638
>Hardstones
he was the fucking sperg all along?
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>>3969642
Yep.
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>>3969625
Well, that's adorable.

>>3969637
...ooookay?
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>>3969642
It's not him, that anon is an idiot. They just have a similar generic looking artstyle.
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Does mr redditor feels his pp hard on """lolicon""" works? Is he projecting his lust on little girls?
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>>3969516
Cry more roastie
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>>3969638
>>3969643
A few threads ago, in the middle of his outrage high and policing what people can and can't post, the guy mentioned he's an ''animator and draftsman'' and posted WIP animations
>>3965577
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You fags still shitflinging? May we please receive critiques before some of us get our posts deleted and banned again?
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AAAAAGGGHHHHHH
JUST POST SOME WORK
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>>3969651
Step on me NGMI-chan!
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>>3969656
Footfags get the day of the rope.
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>>3969651
God I want to have sex with Nico. I want to put my nii in her nii and make her happy. I'll be happy, too! NICO NICO KNEEEEEEEEEE!
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>>3968507
this thread is 90 percent anime anyways
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>>3969654
POST YOUR WORK FAGGOT
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Based mods moving the other thread to >>>/qa/
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>>3969659
That's the point newfags, /asg/ attract begs as much as possible and leave some good shit to us.
Battle tactic 101
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>>3969661
I CAN'T IM AT WORK AAAGGHH I WANNA DRAW IM WANT TO DRAW SO BADDD
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>>3969650
Correction it was one thread ago but the guy (shit)posted before. It's not Hardstones but some autistic animationfag that's working on animations of Little Mac, Sonia and one for the new Pokemon.
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>>3969654
What's the point when none of you apes are talking about art?
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I just want to see more cute Nessa fanart :c
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>>3969673
Draw it with what we've been teaching you faggot you literally have no excuse to not be able to draw at this point.
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>>3969676
I will im just lurking right now and im at work aaaaaggghhh
I won't let you down anon kun
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>>>/qa/2789535
Guy is LARPing a moderator with no power
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So how good do i have to be able to post here
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>>3969683
Just post anon and we'll probably give you a crit or redline
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>>3969683
Just post your goddamn work that's the whole point we've been trying to get across. Stop letting the thought police tell you what to fucking do that /beg/ thread shouldn't even exist just post your work and stop being a beta male about it, if you have mistakes we will tell you and own up to them.
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>>3969683
We're the most elite artist of /ic/
Anything below that and we will laugh at you
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>>3969683
They are going to destroy whatever you post. Bloods in the water now more then usual
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>>3969683
preferably better than the op but its not like anyone is going to stop you from posting if your art is bad. just post, if someone can help they will
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Man I'd pick Jimmy over this sperglord
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>>3969698
Now that you've mentioned it, this sperg is making me miss Jimmy. He's the one that used to avatarfag with paintings of meme reaction pics right?
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can't believe we live in a time where /asg/ is now more productive than /alt/
>>3969698
was that the guy with the acrylic paintings
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If only chico was here
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If only illustrat was here
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>>3969708
I miss Chico so much bros....
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I actually miss yev tho
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>>3969713
What are you, a faggot?
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>>3969714
Umm back off??? 》:(
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>>3969708
>>3969713
Quite frankly I don't blame them for leaving. You fags manage to spoil, and chase everyone out who contributed to these threads and the board in general. This is why we can't have nice things.

Who you should really be missing is Teal.
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you fags didn't know how good you had it until it's all gone.
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>>3969716
Didn't Teal leave because some puritanical faggots like the loser that ruined this thread were shitting on him incessantly?
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>>3969717
It wasn't about the grind, it was the friends we shit talk the whole time...
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>>3969719
I wasn't here a few years ago but I do remember/co/ trying to get rid of him too
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>>3969715
yev was fucking awful and almost worse than malaysia
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>>3969717
We had it real good with Teal, you can't reiterate this enough he was a treasure trove of redlines and personalized critiques. But then just like right now some buttmonkey who sperged out each and everytime Teal posted we would have a shitstorm very much like this one.

>>3969719
Yes exactly.
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>>3969722
So it's business as usual, always these kinds of people destroying everything. It's always the people that get the most morally indignant, outraged and controlling, that turn out to be the worst rotten apples
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>>3969726
They have no actual control in real life, so they want a taste of power even if it's in the most pathetic ways possible.
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So this thread has gone to trash basically?
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>>3969742
ref used
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>>3969741
Yes, and the culprit is smugly gloating over it in the other one.
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>>3969742
Eh Let him post there. Just resume posting here and ignore everything from the retard
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>>3969754
Meant for >>3969745
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Fuck it someone need to combobreak this craziness

Trying to put this together so I can work on rendering shiny curved materials. I want to put something on her head right of the eye, like a model number or something but anything I put there takes away from the whole head.

Any thoughts on if I should add more complexity and details with her parts or keep her as is with the more “smoothish” style? The whole point, as I have not added text yet, is for her to say “you brought me more parts master?” To show she’s not a complete set yet, hence some of her looking like she was built from older parts (the arms and face)
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>>3969761
I like the parts a lot, good work. The eye is a little jarring, it reads flat. Might be a good idea to experiment with changing up the head on different layers. You can make a few copies and try adjusting the shape, mouth, eyes, maybe a vague model number that won't stand out too much after coloring.
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>>3969783
Wowzers the eye does look flat as hell now that you mention it. I’ll for sure try out some different eyes. They do look unnatural for a robot. Trying to figure out how to get expression but I can only do that with “realish” eyes. No idea how to translate that into a more robotic look other then flatlining the lines in the eye. I’ll I need to get more creative on that part for sure.

Thank you kindly for the feedback.
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>>3969306
I like it. Got a blog?
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>>3969835
(・∀・)イイネ!!
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>>3969883
Not yet. But thanks for the interest. Just developing my style a little bit before I do.
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Some sketches to try and revise and oc's design

>>3969836
Cute Roll, anon. I think it would help a lot if you cleaned up your lines, instead of going over your lines several times with a small brush, you could try using a larger brush to make more confident strokes. I think that might look well with the style you seem to be going for
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>>3969925
Thank you!!, I set for these months the goal of making good gestures, but I will set line on it asap, also, are there examples in how some art can have confident strokes while having this "messy" feel on it? (like the art of Dorohedoro) I have been in this question for a while, if my work would benefit from being messy but with confident lines, or purely confident lines and clean look to it?
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>>3969913
Aw that's alright. This looks pretty nice as well.

>>3969925
Nice expressions!
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>>3967964
>mikufag in the OP
nope. see you next thread.
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Stalker (1979)-Tarkovsky
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>>3969991
Needs more polishing senpai
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>>3969995
this was more meant to be a joke so as long as its readable im content
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>>3969995
*curbstomps you*
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>>3970009
*kisses you on the cheek*
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>>3969925
blog?
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>>3969835
Blog?
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>>3970015
wtf hold still i'm trying to curbstomp you
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>>3969991
very nice,
i was worried before that the kemono friends stuff you did would just be one off
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>>3967964
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>>3969925
That's pretty fucking good, long lab coat, glasses and short skirts are a godly combination
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>>3970150
*grabs your dick*
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>>3969991
would retweet and save/10

it would be easier to get the joke if you polish the bolt on a cloth.
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>>3968691
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>>3968797
>I’m still practicing feet, so this is the best of my skill unfortunately. Hopefully I’ll improve more with practice :)

That foot was literally painted for you from scratch by another Anon >>3967532

This was yours >>3967318 you lousy little cheat.
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>>3970313
Phrased myself badly, that’s my bad. I tried to study what the other anon improved about the foot and applied it, I didn’t just crop his exactly over my own.

Ngl you have a right to call me out for the way I phrased it
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>>3969991
Low.
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Can anyone help me critique this drawing? I feel like it's bad but I don't know why. Bad colors choices? Composition? I'll be able to rest in peace once someone tells me
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>>3970422
I think it’s partly bad colour choices bro, the objects don’t look like they’re in the same environment
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>>3970282
*its a hologram*
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>>3969400
The woof poster is quickly starting to become a favorite
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>>3970178
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>>3970112
Thanks anons
I have a twit here: https://twitter.com/NessieFynn

>>3969939
>examples in how some art can have confident strokes while having this "messy" feel on it
Just going off the top of my head, Demizu Posuka has very rough and messy lineart but it displays a lot of confidence and skill, it's a bit different from your style but perhaps you could check her out?
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>>3970523
i had a feeling you were that guy.
Glad to see your faces are getting better!Before they were a bit off and lopsided
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I feel like I'm getting closer (to being good, not suicide)
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>>3970538
Your lighting is so good. Fuck
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>>3970538
whoa nice
I suggest using a different bg color other than light green since that's already your character's main color
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>>3970538
This is a really cute Gargoman, I love the coloring and pose. Blog?

>>3970532
Thanks, man, I'm glad to hear that. I've been practicing but I still have a long way to go.
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>>3970538
>to being good, not suicide
Should be the opposite for degenerates that lewd digimon
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>>3970549
Le degeneracy
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>>3970549
Woof
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>>3970553
dog fuck young girls > digimom pedo
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>>3969836
wow anon, you're on a roll!
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>>3970648
Not this again
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>>3970654
Composition is good
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>>3970648

>>3964176
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>>3970549
ARRRR ARF ARF ARF ARRRRRR
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>>3969713
I miss ChumBum. Not really though.
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>>3970523
that's right anon! that's definetly an art style to look up for, thank you, forgot to say that your poses are always so natural and have really good flow!
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>>3970435
Nice, blog?
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>>3970707
based jimmy btfoing anon talking shit
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We must prepare ourselves for even crueler warfare
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>>3970908
what program do you use? or is that not digital?
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>>3970913
all naturale'
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>>3970916
I'm guessing it's marker, no? and how do you get such clean pictures to post online?
Newfag to these threads asking
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>>3970916
How big are these drawings? They look potentially tiny
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>>3970922
I used a marker and I scan it to my computer and touch it slightly

>>3970933
very very tiny hah
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im free im free
never taking commissions ever again. im so shit at estimating how long it'll take

>>3970538
shapes on this are pretty nice anon
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help
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>>3971018
gross
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doodle from today
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>>3971069
and another
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done with the lineart i think, does anything need fixing?
>>3970998
really like this! got a blog?
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>>3971096
Shift that left eye clockwise a bit
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>>3971104
like this?
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>>3971108
My nig nog.

Nice
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>>3970998
This might sound dumb but I really like the shadow on the straight leg, the dark brown and black look very good in contrast to the bright skirt and skin.
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>>3970802
https://twitter.com/itsukarine

currently in twitter jail for calling a pajeet worthless though
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>>3969835
rush, you need to be posting in /las/ not this shithole
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i feel like i need something in the center in front of their bodies, like a focal point. maybe another flower idk. Also cant for the life of me get ray's shirt to look right. (kid on the left)
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>>3969360
its okay man, you tried but ya gotta just shrug em off. draw whatcha wanna draw cause you do a good job. dont let em take it from you.
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>>3967964
did something for ya
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>>3971153
give emma a giant glowing futa cock
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>>3970654
your pieces are fun to look at
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>>3970954
i dont like your work. it always looks so awkward. however, i like how you use colors, tgis one not so much, but i normally really like the colors you use. keep practicing and doing your best!
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>>3971018
her genitals are too high up. i know youre doing an anime style, but looking at photo references would do you a great service! keep practicing!
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>>3971216
id love to see how it looks colored!
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>>3971230
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>>3971232
based gentle and kind anon(s?)
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>>3971237
Lurk more.
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>>3971237
i drop by /ic/ once and a while to give a bit of a push i would want for me. cause i love you guys and i want us all to make it, even if we cant.
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When you doodle something you are pretty happy with but its to lewd for your humble PG13 blog
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>>3971241
been here for four years king
>>3971244
:-)
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good to see everything is peaceful again woof woof :)
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>>3971231
thanks bby. I wanna draw the best porn
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>>3971288
make an nsfw blog you moron
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>>3971153
bUt I dOnT wAnT tO kiLL tHe DeMonZ :,((((
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>>3971288
post it on your sfw blog pussy
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>>3971322
thats too damn bad
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I need guidance please.
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>>3971339
Don't crab too much anon, i'm sure you can get into the OP if you try!
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>>3971153
I don't like the shadows, it almost feel like it's floating, like when retards put drop shadow on Photoshop
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>>3970998
Something feels off with the contrast, too much mid tones, idk, have you tried seeing it on B&W?
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>>3971153
She fucked up the lighting hard. She knows she messed up the composition, but to change it she has to redo the coloring.

Honestly, just redo it or move on to the next piece.
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>>3971524
Well most everything, including the lighting, is on separate layers so changes aren't that difficult. If you have suggestions beyond 'everything is fucked' , I can probably use them
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>>3971153
I really love this
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>>3971319
I don't draw enough nsfw for that not to be a big waste of time.
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>>3970654
Interesting use of color, nice composition, looks gorgeous babe
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>>3971652
It feels as if there are five different light sources on the trio. One is above and pointed towards Emma, two are coming from opposite sides, and two are casting light from behind them onto their shoulders. It looks very inconsistent

Assuming the light source is above pointed towards Emma, redo the light to point towards the center of the trio. For help, rough in a couple of lines showing the direction where the light will hit the forms.

For example, the light would bounce off Emma's skirt and the front of the boys' shirts at this angle.

You can solve the triangle/pyramid composition easily this way, and if you add a larger flower in the center of them,
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>>3971359
Is that a fucking vector tool
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>>3971752
what? that says sfw not sjw doofus
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>>3971774
Yup, I want to replicate the style of anime on screen.
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>>3971774
Garbage
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>>3971761
Oh damn ok, thank you anon. Yeah im definitely going to do the flower in the center then. I'll take a stab at all this and post back later.
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>>3971153
Not the OG artist but at least make it look like they are under the trees you have them in.
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>>3971153
just put the title of whatever these characters are from right below them
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>>3971864
no can do
its going to be a print i'm selling in artist alley at anime expo, adding logos and official anime names is just asking to get a c&d because it infringes on the trademark
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>>3971834
left eye and left hand look weird to me
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>>3971846
Dude you just made them look muddy, not the artist you’re responding to
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>>3971881
muddy is a meme for retards
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>>3971831
Just to follow my critique up here >>3971831
, focus on the lighting first, then worry about the flower. It will do wonders for this piece.

- Animator-kun, or whatever I decide on
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>>3970538
cute. what's this character's name?
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>>3971897
>Animator-kun
oh no
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>>3971991
damn angel u just brought dishonor to your trip by responding to him seriously i guess you have to seppuku now :/
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>>3971359
this needs to be the next OP
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>>3971818
Your fucking stupid if you think animators use a fucking vector tool too draw. Don't you have a containment thread and board that you should be posting in?
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>>3967964
You all seem pretty good in here so I have a question. What did each of you start learning first when drawing?
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>>3972072
Unironically Loomis.
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>>3972072
proportion and gesture, very basic anatomy.
i need to study more
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>>3972069.
>Containment thread.
Nope since I'm not animating or studying anything, just drawing.
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>>3972069
>Anon thinks animators don't use vector.
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>>3972089
Japanese animators don't use vectors to draw, but their drawings do get vectorized later on in the production process.
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>>3971897
ARGGG ARF ARF ARF
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Coming down home stretch.
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>>3972117
There's an animation general please refrain from posting any form of animated pieces in these threads thank you.
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>>3972117
Damn anon, it looks really good

Would recommend looking into timing a little bit more, I would put more emphasis into the pause before he punches, because as it is it doesn't look quite right, maybe add a few more frames to the wind up.
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>>3972125
why?
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>>3972130
How the fuck can you go wrong with a simple doodle, it's not porn related so spergs wouldn't shit up the thread, it's stylized so it meets the criteria of these generals and its cute to appease all the autists and manchildren who flock here. Contain your autism.
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>>3972135
Jesus christ calm down. Im referring to the fact we're on page 1 with 300 posts
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>>3972141
Once we hit around 296 posts these threads begin to autosage.
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>>3972117
Leave and don't come back faggot
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>>3972145
that isnt how this board works at all
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>>3972150
Go complain about it on /qa/, in the mean time grab your stylus, gently insert it up your rectum, and hold your breath.
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>>3972145
A thread only dies after it is pushed off of page 10, so you should only make a new thread when it gets close to there, unless you want to leave this one up for days as it slowly slides down the pages until finally reaching 10. And the bump limit is at exactly 300 posts
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>>3972153
what are you talking about
Threads dont autosage until 500 posts, and until it reaches page 10 it its still usable.
thats how its always worked.
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>>3972145
>This newfag
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>>3972155
Not him but
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>,"bump_limit":300
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>>3972154
Nobody posts or monitors a thread after it hits the bump limit, if you want to continue using a dead thread to make you feel special go right ahead.
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>>3972159
So what? We access /alt/ by the catalog, we all do, it has nothing to do with sage limit
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>>3972159
shit 300? I thought 500 was minimum for boards.
still though, no reason to move until it reaches page 10
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I miss choco
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>>3972148
>>3972127
Thanks for the salt, faggots.
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>>3972162
>Nobody posts or monitors a thread after it hits the bump limit
This is absolutely false, have you ever been on a slow board? You are only digging a deeper hole for yourself and making it more apparent how ignorant of imageboards you are
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>>3972164
I wasn't arguing for anything, just correcting a number.
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>>3972171
If you observe all previous threads, most of them stop at around 300 despite being before the 10th page. If what you're saying was true we would see threads with post counts up to 500
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>>3972175
>we would see threads with post counts up to 500
No, because they would never get that high since new threads are being made at a decent pace. Also it's only natural that the old thread is left off at 300 when a new thread is always made at that time, because you might as well migrate if there is a new one. However that doesn't mean that the old thread won't stay up for several days. On boards like /i/, threads can last for months on page 10. So all this means is that you don't have to panic or hurry to create a new thread when bump limit is reached because you have days before this one expires.
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>>3972170
That's all you're going to get from now on, salt. Get used to it.
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>>3972181
>Also it's only natural that the old thread is left off at 300 when a new thread is always made at that time, because you might as well migrate if there is a new one.
Exactly, so why are you lying out of your ass by saying we've always waited until we were near page 10 before creating a new one? /ic/ is not like /p/ or /t/ where threads remain before page 10 for years. A thread remains on the first page for around five minutes at the most as opposed to weeks like other boards with fewer activity.
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>>3972170
You tried your darndest through endless shitposting and derailing threads to get as many people as possible to hate you, well mission accomplished animation nigger. Congratulations
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>>3972189
Point to where I said ''we've always waited until we were near page 10 before creating a new one''. Go on. I'll wait.
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>>3972189
busier boards like /co/ make their generals wait until page 10 before rebooting. its just common courtesy
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>>3972194
>>3972154
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>>3972201
That post reads
>you should only make a new thread when it gets close to there
Which is my personal opinion, and which is not
>we've always waited until we were near page 10 before creating a new one
Did you read the anarchist cookbook or something? Accusing others of what you're doing yourself? Lying yourself and then accusing others of being liars? Hahahahaha
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>>3972202
>that backpedaling
So now it's only your opinion, thank you for letting us know you're full of shit.
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>>3972203
Why is it crazies like you always pretend you're some kind of group when you're just a lone deranged loser making pennies working minimum wage in a cafe and making scribbles for a clothing store?
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>>3972193
Time's ticking until they find out you have nothing to offer but shit in return. The board's getting restless against the pornfags and pedophiles.

So, as the clock counts down and enough people start reporting this shit off the generals on sight, work on your fundamentals. You might actually learn to draw a box.

>>3972184
>sees my work that towers anything he ever did
>admits getting salty

Thanks for being honest, faggot.
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>>3972210
you should use a tripcode. people being able to filter you would honestly help everything.
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>>3972205
That's not backpedaling friend, that's literally stating exactly what was posted, and pointing out you put words in other people's mouth. It's not a shame to admit you made a mistake. You just didn't know that this is simply good manners. You don't have to start listing off every term of rhetoric you know in order to seem like you didn't fuck up.
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>>3972210
We take it you're following the path of Dobson by being as repulsive and insufferable as possible to garner attention? You might as well stop posting on this board since you've pissed everyone off all you're going to get are shitposts and I mean that with an absolute sincerity.
>>3972216
Thank you for reminding us to filter you
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>>3972220
thats the whole point
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>>3972219
Look, if you're so hell bent in micromanaging /ic/ like the other cunt who spergs at the sight of skin go make a post on /qa/ and vent your frustrations there and maybe all that sand inside your Bagina would be lapped off by the metaposting.
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>>3972207

Plus an additional $1,500 a month doing character designs and illustrations for a private commissioner, along with a living wage for both of those jobs.

Pornfags and pedos have derailed threads outside of their containment threads ever since the split. The silent majority will make their frustration clear with enough of a push.
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>>3972230
Well I'd argue just pointing out image board habits, especially when addressing people who might be new, is not nearly as severe and much more helpful than the guy you're referring to. I informed you that you don't have to worry about when to make a new thread because you can count on the fact that one that hits bump limit will last for several days, unless crazy activity happens and new threads are shat out en masse.
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>>3972237
Thanks for the info sperg, though I know you're vastly over-exaggerating even this piddly amount. By the way you are completely delusional and alone
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>>3972230
it's the same stupid faggot, they have the same typing style
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>>3972253
You're wrong and you should stop replying to yourself
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>>3972241
Unless there's a rule that specifies your image board etiquette by waiting for a thread to be near page 10, kindly take your opinions on the matter back with you and keep them to yourself until somebody gives a shit.
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>>3972253
Please don't compare me to that other faggot.
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>>3972249
We have discussed three portraits, three full body character designs, and a full illustration for the next batch. With the animations taking center stage, along with plants to establish my portfolio in just weeks, I expect the second run to go much smoother. Hell, that was the reason I grew so fast the first time around. Now I'm following my passion and interests, which I am free to pursue.

I have good friends, the church I have been going to whom has welcomed me with open arms, a loving family, and an honest life I have begun to rebuild.

What do you have?
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>>3972202
pretty sure this is the baltimore faggot. They're the biggest cancer on this board.
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>>3967964
>>3971216

well, i finished it, what do you think!?
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>>3972256
you should get raped
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>>3971834
I like the way you did the lips.
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>>3972298
What software are you using ?
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lol so i got some time to redo the linework of this sketch one anon helped me with.
is anything still off, redoing the colors with only take like 30 minutes if i can get this right
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>>3972298
Dude, you forgot her headband.
I like Linde but I feel as if her hands and her hip to torso area needs a bit of work/ Definite fap potential tho
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>>3972490
Clip Studio Paint xp, really like a lot of things of it, but there are some thing i dont like that much, like the way the vector lines worked, and while there is an option to increase or decrease line weight, it causes the curves to get ''damaged'' (they became uneven) and even with my current PC setup which i updated, CSP still doesnt run at 100% without being a hog.

I admit that its been awhile since i abandoned SAI because of editing and image manipulation options that were lacking.

anybody knows all the new things on SAI2?
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>>3972563
off the top of my head there's text, shape tool (it's shit), and a ruler tool
i switched to csp recently and it's definitely better for editing so stick with that
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>>3972608
theres also 1,2,and 3 perspective ruler tool which is in my opinion much more intuitive than CSP's but lacks the ability to add extra vanishing points.
The one good thing tho about it is the ability to easily deform concentric ellipse guides, which you can only really mimic with Lady nezumi pro. I haven't gotten Clip studio paint to be able to warp the edges of an ellipse guide in quite the same way
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>>3972538
-The positioning of her right hand looks better, but seems off, still
-her feet look literally broken. try to use a reference of a woman's feet in high heels( if you did, then go back and pay more attention to detail)
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>>3971883
I meant that in the literal sense. You made them look like they’re covered in mud
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>>3972563
And brushes? default ones?
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>>3970320
you literally just tilted the legs a little and smoothed the painting.....
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>>3972773
>woman's feet in high heels
i saw your comment and decided to redraw the feet and leg based on the critique. I also decided to go back and redo the sketch in a different program just to test some suspicions i was having. do you think the drawing on the left is better in terms of accuracy and style or the drawing on the right is?
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>>3973192
for lineart i used vector tool + customized opaque watercolor

coloring i used 2 custom brushes i made, but mostly air brushing,
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>>3973406
thanks
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>>3973406
>>3973421
can you show the sketch?
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>>3973423
you know, i will share the brushes i use, you can export them manually.

https://files.catbox.moe/foceru.rar
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>>3973444
2nd pass
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what the hell?

2 responses and stuck in page 10?
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>>3973254
Looks a lot better, good job
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>>3973468
Aw thanks, anon. Before you leave, I want to know whether or not the 2nd sketch has more potential than the 1st.
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>>3973471
I personally like the pose of the first sketch, but the hands, feet etc are better in the 2nd



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