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What is /ALT/?
If you're looking for a place to post your cartooning then you've found the right general. This is /ic/s 1st and only merged hub where both Eastern and Western stylization can coexist peacefully, hence the double title. However, by community demand and long history, this is favorably an Anime general.
>Rules & Guidelines
(1) Any form of cartooning is welcome; so submit and receive feedback from others. (2) Please resize your images before posting. (3) Share your knowledge and (4) Remember to not be afraid of asking for critique. Most importantly I encourage you to keep discussion at a civil level, but you're more than welcome to share your opinions.
>I came for anime. Why does the image OP say cartoons general?
To distinguish from the anime study thread (janitor supported). Please post your studies there and personal work goes here.
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>Community Resources
Hitokaku Index
>http://www.asahi-net.or.jp/~zm5s-nkmr/
List of active livestreams
>Use twitch #art
>yoshikadu2011 https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCUx5dpO6d5gQ4KWNPc24CKw
FellowBro's Book Collection
>http://mediafire.com/?i44dwzkf9j9n8
Tutorial & Reference Collection
>http://pinterest.com/characterdesigh/
Japanese Tutorials & Documentary
>http://www.pixiv.net/member_illust.php?id=59317 (0033)
>http://iradukai.com/
References
>http://www.onairvideo.com/croquis-cafe-photos2.html
>http://www.eggazyoutatsu.net/eng/atarichan.html
>http://senshistock.com/sketch/
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reptile from mortal kombat
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>>3972123
cute OP
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>>3972139
Blog? This is really cute style you got there
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I have no idea why this looks bad on phone and fine on desktop.
Is it just my dunning kruger perhaps ?
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>>3973189
Either
>thumbnail looks worse than when you worked close up in the image
or
>your monitor is badly calibrated
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Is there anyone who's willing to help me with arms?
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Hand is probs too large idk
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>>3973497
close arm needs to be foreshortened more. It looks held out to the side, but the gun shows it should be coming more towards us.
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>>3973189
The thumbnail from afar looks ok. Once you zoom in you can see a lot of your mistakes.
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Update from the line art from last thread. Thanks anon for the eye advice. Because of that I got the idea of it lighting the inside and around the head case.
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>>3972575
https://twitter.com/Alaingruetter
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>>3973854
woof woof
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>>3973854
Lmao what a retard
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>>3973854
eww no I dont wanna go post my work to the pedo thread fuck that
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>>3973897
>My efforts in turning the porn thread into a stealth pedo thread worked

Mission success.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7cKh7OSF85I
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>tfw grinding Loomis in /beg/ but the magical stylization fairy hasn't touched you yet
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>>3973901
silly anon that's what hampton's for :^)
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>>3973901
have you tried doing studies of art that you like and incorporating the aspects that appeal to you into your own work?
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Quick rough, roughly around ten minutes. Thoughts on the composition in this early stage?
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>>3973854
lol no. Does it make your pepe funny? you fucking pedo
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Made a lot of small changes, mostly with the position of her arms. hopefully this looks more natural. redid ray's hair. The thing i'm most unhappy with is probably the way the canopy looks but I dont know if its that bad or I have been staring too long.
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index card
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Something I made sort of on accident. Was originally meant to be a completely different character. Probably not going to work on this further, but I like the character enough to draw her again.
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>>3974049
Get back to your classroom. The special needs teacher is worried sick.

>>3974097
All you did was add a barely visible flower when your floaty lighting needed a complete overhaul.

>>3974160
Cool concept, anon.
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>>3974225
There's a lot of changes there, this is what I had last posted. Basically redrew most of Ray, Emma's arms and shirt. Lots of lighting tweaks.
It's not a whole new painting but it's slot more dialed in than what I had
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>>3973854
ARF ARF *knots you*
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Thought I might start posting here instead of the drawthread
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>>3974269
Reminds me of darkest dungeon, excellent shit anon. Very unique style.
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>>3974217
Cute! Interesting, eh... maces? Maracas? Blunt weapons?
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>>3974217
Excellent lining, colour, posing, etc. The only thing that irks me a bit is that the forearms look a tad janky
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>>3974254
based
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Pretty happy with how this came out. I love cute robots!
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>>3974269
looks awesome
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Composition looks a bit off because I started this spontaneously only to practice the face. Planning on making this some sort of alien androgynous creature, I really wanna do an ambitious background but I don't have any ideas
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>>3974097
This has a lot of atmosphere and emotion to it, I feel like the other anons aren't giving credit where credit is due
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Does arm look better now?
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>>3974511
Yes. But the figure overall got much more stiff. You had a nice C curve going on but now you've lost it.
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>>3974389
Corpses. You can never go wrong with heaps of corpses. Blood, death and fire everywhere.
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>>3974526
Yes ! that's actually a brilliant idea :D
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Where can I find good poses to trace it?
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May as well post yesterdays work before I start todays.
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>>3974587
>>3974644
Faces look Western if that’s something you’re concerned about, otherwise cute stuff.
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>>3974271

I read this as

>Reminds me of darkest dungeon, except shit anon.

This board's usual bad attitude has clearly made me incapable of reading positive things.
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>>3973444
>>3972298
Although the shading makes it look cheap, this is good wank material for Linde. You really iknow how to draw a good ass.
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>>3974654

Thanks. I'm okay with it I think, It's just the pen style I ended up with.
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>>3974587
cute! I'd say practice clothing folds/drapery, the way you draw clothing makes everything look really stiff.
and watch out for tangents, like the way her hair touches her arm in the bottom left one
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>>3974743

Good advice, thanks anon.
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>when the only comment you get is some dude shit posting at you
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Should I do an illustration based on the far left sketch or the one to the right, below it? Which one has the most personality?

Animator-kun
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>>3974397
hey thank you anon
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>>3974808
I think you should do both.
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>>3974808
I did the same thing anon, the one on the right
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>>3974277
Lollipops!

>>3974280
Thanks! Yeah the forearms ended up p bad. They looked sort of alright in the sketch stage and then I forgot about them til it was too late. Always have that problem
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>>3269148

Do you have some notes of what I did well and what I did bad here?
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thanks for the help guys, i'm calling this one done.
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>>3975284
I like the other one before desu, it had more soul.
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>>3973444
>>3972298
Although the shading makes it look cheap, this is good wank material for Linde. You really know how to draw a good ass.
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>>3973160
dancer of the boreal valley?
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>>3975288
>more soul
goddamnit every tiem,
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Is this appealing and/or accurate ? I drew this straight with pen from imagination. I tried to use a bunch of stuff that I learnt, like anatomy and gesture.
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>>3975309
you made her legs a bit long and her face have a thousand mile blank stare but this looking pretty solid from what i can see
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>>3975326
That’s good to hear, I do need to practice legs though- you’re right.
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>>3975309
>hiding her feet
>thinking we wouldn’t notice
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>>3975309
aside from pic related it's quite nice considering you went without ref. One thing to note is that those palms are paper-thin and you should thicken up the base (where the meat of the palm is, as well as the tendon ramp) so they don't look like CD cases.

Although you didn't draw them, the same thing goes with feet. They're thicker where they connect and kind of taper out in height towards the toes.
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Trying to be more experimental
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>>3975371
Actually, I’m even more pathetic because I avoided drawing them altogether! Take that!
>>3975375
Ohh this is extremely helpful, I’ll take this into consideration. Thanks for taking the time to write this
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I realised that I needed to start painting in general shapes before going into detail and that my tunnel vision partly led to the downfall of my art. With this experiment I'm trying to go for a really dense tension and slight eerie atmoshphere
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>>3975430
Not finished by the way
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WIP
>>3973203
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>>3974511
Ear looks a little odd but I'm /beg/ so take it with a fist of salt.
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Rough character design. Took twenty-five minutes; went through a lot of changes.

Any proportion errors or odd tangents in need of a fix?
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This is some progress with a girl but i think im not satisfied with her face.
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>>3975326
>>3975371
>>3975375
>replying to the literal 16 year old
hownew.ru
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>>3975466
Better?
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>>3975480
The face is way cuter, anon
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>>3975464
Because there's such a strong difference in each colour, I suggest using a slightly coloured light source to tie them together
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>>3975480
Oh anon, that actually looks better.
Thanks!
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I finished unusually quickly
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>>3975296
Dancer Casca yeah
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>>3975404
I like this. Nice colours. Although I feel like it becomes less dynamic in the legs compared to the upper torso. Other then that, pretty slick
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Trying out a new style with some rough sketches.
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>>3975805
Very cute
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>>3975805
>>3975404
>>3972139
I love these keep it up
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Does the head/face look weird? I can't tell...
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>>3976071
Left side too out there
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>>3976071

Looks cute to me, you can get away with some flexibility in anime faces.
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Figure sketch.
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A character from Sdorica add game
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>>3976306
Nice and cute!
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>>3976173
Your stuff is really nice and clean, keep posting
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>>3976306
Nice and traced!
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>>3976564

Traced off what my own OC I drew like 4 months ago?
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>>3976173
draw her showing her cute fangs
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Grinding on with commissions
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>>3976586
>>3976306
Not him but I think it gives off the impression of being traced from a 3D model because the pose is very stiff and the anatomy doesn't make sense in some places, like the connection between the deltoid and pectoral especially. I feel like if you even just gave the hands a more natural and expressive pose that would help make the piece look better. I think it would benefit you a lot to do more gesture studies and read Force if you haven't already.
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>turn pen pressure on opacity off
>linework becomes actually fun and loose and free
i'm not even worrying about slight mistakes, this is epic. opaque gang rise up
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Making progress on the linework.
>>3975464
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>>3976626
Source?
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>>3972139
how do I learn to draw like you bagboss ree
I can't tell if you got to where you are from fundie grinding or just drawing for fun a lot, put me on the right path
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Wip.. probably going to add a few more nick knacks before I do the final line art.
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Threw this together a little while ago, I’m decently happy with it
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>>3974743
what is a tangent?

also, i really need to stop drawing from imagination
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>>3976851
That whole left arm and shoulder are jacked...
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>>3976862
could you redline, i tried fixing it multiple times but never reached something i liked
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>>3975284
This looks so much better
Good job
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>>3976865
thank you, i will work on these. i knew something was wrong with the arm but being told it made it much more glaringly obvious to me for some reason
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>>3976796
Don't beat yourself about where you are just having fun along the way. Getting "better" is not just actively drawing, but exercising, eating healthy, and learning/reading constantly.

Pic related used to be me
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>>3976748
I drew it, or are you asking for a blog?
Gerddraws on Instagram if you are
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>>3976809
Update

Cleaned up Lines and added a bit more detail.
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>>3976881
i really like the face and the hair
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>>3976079
>>3976304
ok thanks frens
>>3976555
love love LOVE this! so cute. I wanna see the cleaned up/finished version
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>>3976864
not him and not capable of redlining because /beg/ but we are viewing the ribcage from nearly profile view, and slightly towards the front, whereas your shoulders are viewed from nearly a 3/4 rear angle. Draw them pointed backwards instead of hunched over forwards.
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>>3976555
I like this composition and am eager to see how the cooler colors reflect in the curves of the shiny golden brass when you get down to it. I have a love for computationally complex lighting with refraction/multiple bounces.
Mouth might be a bit too far forward on the chin? although that is stylistic choice.
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>>3975466
man i guess i went through to redesign her face/hair but here it is now.
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>>3976851
oh my god!, you are good, WHO ARE YOU!?
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Basically done i think, gonna sleep on it to see if there's anything need to fix.
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>>3976679
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Golden girl for fun
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>>3976555
Cute
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>>3977246
dont bully me idiot
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>>3977252
I think I liked the plain linework better. Your color choices are nice though
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how do i get better at inking/linework
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Denizen of the deep
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>>3977561
I like simple styles like this
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>>3975468
>16 yo is better than me
any cope for this feel?
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>>3974217
looks good but hands could use more work
>>3977728
way cool. reminds me of video game illustrations in guide books from way back.
>>3975512
really good but the hair feels underworked

uploading reference sheet of an oc
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>>3977728

Bagbosse?
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>>3977738
just about how there are many 10 years old that are better than him too
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>>3976555
Gib blog
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self portrait
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>>3977817
what's up
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>>3977840
neat
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>>3977879
I like this
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>>3977931
This is top aesthetic
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i didn't draw this

>>3977293
cute
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A drawing I did for fun between studies.
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>>3977982
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>>3977984
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>>3977985
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>>3977982
>>3977984
>>3977985
>>3977987

Very cute, also good line confidence. Got a blog?
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Getting there. Thoughts on the design so far?
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>>3977976
not anime
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Why do some styles just look so porny.

Is it the lips? The thick lines?
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>>3977982
>>3977984
>>3977985
>>3977987

Lovely little sketches. Reminds me a lot of Skullgirls.
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>>3977696
>I liked the plain linework better
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>>3978165
Just work at it a bit more anon, its just really smudgey, it doesn't have the soft blends of actually blending it, but it doesn't have the nice crisp edges either. It has a subpar blend that looks more like a mess.
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>>3978109
Is pic related what you want to emulate or do you mean something else?
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I draw anime every now and then
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Just watched Zootopia again the other day. Here's some sketches.
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>>3978200
I mean why does that pic look like it belongs in porn.
Nothing I care about emulating, though I do like that guy's art. I was just reading his manga and I was thinking to myself it has to be porn. But its not.
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Vast oceans swell with human trinkets
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>>3978208
Instagram?
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What brush size do you usually use?
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>>3978040
Very nice. Her right eye looks off, like its looking in the wrong direction. Also eyes are a bit too close together for my taste. Really good overall though! especially line quality
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>>3978220
https://www.instagram.com/bagbossart
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>>3978203
haha, wouldn't it be funny if you drew her getting fucked by that bear. just as a joke you know?
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wip
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>>3978389
Your stuff is always so cool. you should try adding more effects to the surrounding, maybe some explosions or missiles being fired
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Final version.
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>>3977712
Lineweight before fills.
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calling this one done for now, not completely satisfied with the background
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>>3978463
I'm not convinced by your light source. Shit's coming from everywhere. Shadows feel too soft, makes it feel muddy. I'd go hard lines for shadows to make this piece feel better.

If you don't want to redo that, at least throw a drop shadow by the feet n shit to make it feel grounded.

Silhouette isnt the worst. Keep at it m8.
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>>3978389
A building would sag and literally turn to dust if it were being carried like that.
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>>3978637
the hair looks like offset wrong on the head, pushed too much to the right
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>>3978578
I really like this, I do think some of the edges (like on her arm and neck) should be hard
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>>3978656
thanks
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>>3978640
and a human that size wouldn't be able to stay alive, what's your point faggot
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>>3978413
nice linework
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>>3977330
hope this helps!!
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Grind grind grind
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>>3978200
Stuff that you draw affect your style
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>>3978637
I like your sketch! give blog!
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>>3978826
This is really cool, anon ! :D
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Me me here yeee
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Hoo
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Is anime holding me back...?
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I'm an anime illustrator myself but, why do people draw meaningless illustrations ? I just don't get it.
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>>3978921
what do you mean?
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>>3978921

elaborate
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>>3978921
>meaningless illustrations
What new meme is this crab spewing?
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>>3978921
Post meaningful art
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>>3978826
Finally getting to where I’m happy with it.

>>3978873
Thank you wholesome anon
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Thoughts?
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>>3978946
soul
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>>3978923
>>3978932
>>3978937
>>3978939
Sorry, let me rephrase then ; What's the point of illustrations ? Is it just to look at illustrations then go that looks amazing ?
When browsing boorus It's just that there are millions of anime girl doing some random pose without context and that's it, meaningless.
They look good though.
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>>3978941
How long did it take you to get this good? (you don't have to answer but just now that I love your art, and I want to draw heroic fantasy WoW-ish stuff like you do)
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>>3978971
Tbh dude, I’ve been drawing since I was like 9 and I got the Warcraft 3 demo on the side of a cereal box.

That being said. It’s all mileage. The grind is the only real thing that’ll teach you how to draw, and don’t accept anything less than perfection from yourself in terms of your style.

Like the client wouldn’t have noticed if I highlighted all the scales on the tail or not, but I knew I’m getting paid to notice the details. And taking the time to do it means I get more mileage in my art.

You can realistically get here to where I am in like a few years of structured study.
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>>3978960
They may be meaningless to you but to the artist there’s likely a reason they imagined that character in that pose. It’s good practice too.
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>>3978803

It conveys something other than what I was going for but like it the idea. It certainly doesnt hurt.
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>>3978803
>I'm going to radically change your illustration to completely change the composition, intention, and style of the image
>I'm not going to explain the changes I made because I'm definitely doing this for your benefit and not to wank myself off about how superior an artist I am compared to you
>hope this helps!!
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>>3978803
i'm guessing you're "rush" from twitter
you improved the face but now left leg is broken and missing a foot. Also her left arm is completely fucked.
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>>3979103

Wait who's this rush guy
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>>3974097
blog? love it
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>>3977879
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>>3979053
and with that the discussion is closed. I work as an illustrator and for me this board is just an outlet to post casual work and some sketches for fun and occasionall honest critique. Sometimes you just want to draw some "meaningless" stuff to get it out of your mind.
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>>3979294
kyute
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You're so fucking annoying
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>>3978612
I’ll try harder shadows on my next bot work thanks anon.
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>>3978389
based and sizpilled art. Keep up the good work yilx!
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>>3978109
just a guess but it is probably because of the no pants girl sitting down at an angle that barely hides her crotch
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>>3978960
had this thought today coincidentally. all the shit i've done is pretty meaningless, or i only did it for mileage so i could get better in order to draw the things i want to draw. guess that's why im soulless now and i only live so that i can become superior to everyone else one day
i gotta draw stuff thats meaningful to me, or has some story behind it
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>>3979478
>circles and lines shit for steps 1-5 like you're laying down a foundation
>steps 6-9: just draw the eye lol

is this supposed to be a joke?
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>>3974269
I enjoy this
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>>3979505
>is this supposed to be a joke?

Yes, you fucking retard.
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>>3979505
The rest is drawing along the sphere using the perspective you deduced in steps 1-5 and applying a bit more simple perspective to draw the iris. You can't go more simple than this.
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>>3979539
>You can't go more simple than this.
you can remove steps 1-5, for one.
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>>3979546
I'm no furry but this is pretty damn good anon.
Keep it up!
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>>3979161
mymoonjelli on insta, tumblr and twitter
going to try and be alot more active on my accounts
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>>3978389
Better with the atmosphere but anatomy still feels stiff and somewhat off.
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>>3977931
give blog now
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why does /ic/ hate furry?
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>>3979743
-the stigma that furries are sick fucks and that whole "you can tell this guy draws furry porn"
-it's a perversion of the human anatomy, so people will naturally be turned off by most of the furry shit because of how "anthro" it is.
-more stigma that furries are just fucking weirdos, and if you're an especially skilled artist you would have that opinion due to first-hand experience dealing with people with outlandish fetishes
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forgot to port this here in the morning
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>>3979294
ur trying too hard
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>>3979595
Gorgeous, are you going to render it?
>>3979780
Did you make your brush?
>>3979752
I draw it cause I assume it's a lot easier to get patreonbux. Waiting until I get to a higher skill level before I start charging for my stuff
Furries are fucking freaks and losers though, but I would think that's most social media users in general
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>>3979652
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lmao the state of crabs
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Does this look good?
I feel like I'm lost with the lighting here, mostly on the legs.
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>>3979808
so far only western furries are weirdos, asian kemono furries are better in that regard
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>>3979743
>why does everyone hate furry
ftfy degenerate, your kind are not welcome anywhere
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>>3979841
You didn't answer his question though
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>>3979450
It always looks like porn though.
Even the non sexual pages look so pornographic.
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>>3979812
I dont like the darker shades, I dont know if that's the style you're going for, but it's the style of lifeless zombies. Shadows should have more saturation, they should actually be more saturated than the lighter colors just due to the value offset. Also pillowshading, dont be afraid to have large areas if shadows and light. Theres no need to have everything go through a gradient.
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>>3979874
the only part of this to me is the random blushing and some of the way the eyes are drawn when teary

otherwise it comes off as a generic comedy manga
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Where is a recommended location to post my online portfolio/website for critique and advertisement purposes?
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>>3978109
What makes it erotic for me is the lips, the eyebags and the deadpan expression. She basically looks like a tired slut.
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Here's a rough concept for a character I'm working on
What are your thoughts on this design?
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>>3979879
Yeah the shadows look really bad since I feel like I don't know where the fuck it's the lightsource coming from or how the shadows should look.
But the colors look like that because I'm trying to emulate the Danganronpa Style.
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Is no style an alt style?
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>>3979895
Personally I feel like the knee socks/sneakers clash with the rest of her design, which feels more fantasy inspired. You also have a few colors in the design that you only use once, like the cream on her pants and mauve on her shoes. I'd try to integrate those colors elsewhere on her design to unify those elements.
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>>3979932
Thank you, I think I see the color distribution problem. As for the socks, I feel like they helped break up the solid blocks of color on the legs? I also don't really have any ideas regarding the shoes, though I'll likely come up with something tomorrow.
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>>3978904
yes
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sleep
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>>3979667
https://twitter.com/boopkak
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>>3980059
no big titty nazi gf to call you a swarthy nigger
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>>3978389

Seriously dude.. I don't understand why people keep coddling and saying shit is good, but your work is honestly so muddy, messy. The faces are always the same and generic. It's been the same thing over these many years. I know ic is a place where you post work often, and there are several retards that constantly appraise and say it's good, but there really is huge room for improvement here. I mean.. Let me elaborate a little.. The way you draw the nose is a dot, the mouth, literally a straight line. Like, come on, at least add some shading or something.. You've been at this for many years and yet the face just consists of something a child would draw. Might sound like I'm hating on you, but I rarely come to this shithole, and seen your work several times, and just wanted to speak my thoughts in order to somewhat be of help to you. Take it as you will.
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>>3980107
he's a janitor, you're gonna get banned bro, happened to me on my work pc when i called it cringe at this point
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>>3980169
how do you know he is a janitor?
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>>3980170
because he takes his work seriously, despite not getting a penny.

nah its elementary.

here's to jannies tho, like you
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>>3980172

Dude, I'm not a janitor. I didn't draw that,
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>>3980176
Who cares whether he's a janitor or not. We'll soon see if he is or not if >>3980107 post gets deleted. I hardly doubt it though. He seems like a nice guy, but he's just hardstuck in his very "elementary" style for a lack of a better word. He simply refuses to improve into something better because for some reason, muddy, messy, elementary/subpar, and most of all stagnation are things that seem to please him.
Believe me, I'd honestly like to seem him grow as well, but people have to start realizing when shit is actually shit. If you're reading this, try to look at pic related, and/or other artists, and really try to focus in on how they draw things like the face, and hair. Because right now, everything is incredibly flat, and has no sense of depth apart from a poor attempt at drawing something that is supposed to resemble abs..
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>>3977956
>top aesthetic

kill yourself
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>>3980107
>>3980198
If you're going to criticize him in multiple paragraphs, you really should post your own work. And if >>3980198 is your work, you're really not much better than he is.
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>>3980562
did you draw that one comic that always get resposted where some girl prevents a boy from jumping down a bridge?
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>>3979578
Nice
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>>3980543
Nice. I dig your style.
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Wip

1st time trying to draw more then just a person/thing floating in white space with no context. Im still working on how I color and light things so I can already tell this is going to be challenging since I plan on maybe having multiple light sources.
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"Grish talk much for quiet friend, is good relation"
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>>3980236
Get your eyes checked bro.
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Satan again
Some changes
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>>3980543
Hey, that's really something. Keep up the cute work.
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>>3980575
Uhhh what lmao
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Too much?
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Got through art block enough to at least draw something today
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>>3980543
Do you have any recommendations for practicing making expressive characters? Everything I draw looks like a robot.
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>>3981007
not enough
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>>3980107
>the faces are always the same and generic
that's anime for you
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>>3980543
Blog?
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so clip studio ex is discounted, worth buying over pro or no?
doesn't really look like anything that great particularly, the extra page management would be nice but not really worth the any amount of money.
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>>3980669
Looks traced, in a very bad way. That parts fall in the right areas, generally, but the proportions are off and you have no form.

Post your """reference"""
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>>3981131
TVs are traced because I was not trying to deal with all that. Everything else is refs and imagination. Thanks for the input though.
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Holy fuck I think I'm finally finished with this, the lighting was really a challenge. Thoughts?
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Did this in illustrator, actually have a degree in art, but it was mostly from 3d work, so drawing isn't my strong suit. Also, would like actual constructive crit, just calling it dogshit isn't helpful.
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>>3981261
A degree you say...
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I like how it turned out (better than expected & learned some important things) but I literally have nobody to ask if it's any good in their opinion. I just want to know what somebody honestly thinks about it. Should I go forward with this style?
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>>3981271
I don't like the nose or lips very much, but goddamn this style is actually pretty attractive despite the strange body proportions. Good coloring and I love the oversized shoes, keep it up.
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>>3981261
Above all it's just not that interesting to me. The colors and shapes, just the design as a whole feels lacking, a bit like stock art. You could say it's a problem of anatomy but it's not like you need insane technical skill to make an appealing face, especially if it's toon or stylized. Just look at some higher level anime artists for proof of that.

I would ask myself," What is my intent with this design?" I don't get much out of it as of right now. If it's fan art, I'm having trouble telling who of. If it's about conveying, say, a certain facial expression, that's one of the toughest parts in drawing faces. Might actually need to study hard for that. But to start, maybe think about the shape of the hair for instance. How could you play around with it to make it as interesting as possible? Be more deliberate about it?

Pic related. Shows it really only takes simple but very intentional shapes and values to design an interesting face/hair.
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>>3981271
The face has sharper lines and features compared to the curvy and smooth body. Maybe a more cartoony face would fit better, I think it would match well with the proportions.
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>>3981285
>>3981300
Thanks guys, really. If you noticed the shoes I must have done that right at least. I'll pay attention to my faces more.
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Hello im anime artist looking for relationship with fellow artist, if u are interested post discord id and i will be shortly with you.
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I call it done, I really can't work on a piece for over 2 days without fucking it up if I haven't done so already, it's my first time doing anything remotely lewd

>>3981316
I'm in dire need of art friends as well but I fear that like in other instances, the conversation will fall into silence and i'll be too anxious to start a convo or reply with something that won't make me sound like a complete retard

>>3981271
i love the colors and the body type and the shoes especially, the hair could be more simplified imo

>>3981187
it looks like something that would come out from those generic browser anime character creators which is good if you were aiming for that?

>>3981022
i really like this, just the messy lineart is already looking finished
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>>3981007
never enough dakka
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>>3981007
i think you might need to ground her more, imo the lower body's mixture of pose and perspective isnt communicating any sort of ground plane and thus making the character weightless
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Mem girl
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>>3981432
This would have been useful to read earlier blegh
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>>3980198
Nice shit but some heads are positioned weird
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>>3980682
i know youre a fat balding manlet but i would bone you
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>>3981330
Oof, that wasn't the vibe I was going for. It's supposed to be a poster, but I understand that the frontal view and the overall style makes it look like that. It's sort of funny desu.

Anyway I can improve on it?
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>>3981271
Wow, this is really nice.The eyes and nose could be tweaked to fit the overall image better. Perhaps you could make the nose bridge shadow less prominent.

>>3980543
Your characters are really nice, what will you be making out of it? An animation or comic? I need to learn how to draw freely like this.
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>>3981330
There's something off with the nose that's been bugging me, so I tried to draw over it. The perspective of the nose in the original might not be consistent with the rest of the face. I think it will benefit from making the eyes smaller, while adding more definition to the area around the eyes.

If you're really done with the image, then move on to the next piece! No point dwelling on it and causing a burnout.
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>>3979005
That's so inspiring. I wasn't feeling like drawing but now that I've read your post, I'm grabbing my sketchbook right away.
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working on this
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New

>>3982154
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>>3978389
the right arm look weird, it reads like the lower arm is in a hole in the middle of the building and it is shorter than the upper arm.
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>>3979546
I don't like the subject but the style is nice
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>>3978803
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>>3980059
Blog bitte
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>>3979111
an Arabian prince who draws anime
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>>3979930
looks cool

>>3972123
can I use this as my profile pic, op? I'll use it anyways cause it looks cool too
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>>3983514
oh I'm not an artist so don't worry on me stealing your credit, I just think it'd be a cool profile pic



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