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Previous thread: >>3999506

Disclaimer: Please [-] the thread if you don't want your mom seeing this thread.

Share your pornographic drawings that you're working on and receive feedback, "blog ?" comments, and critiques. Please contain your autism.

>How do I get started drawing porn?
6 Steps to Improve
http://forums.hentai-foundry.com/viewtopic.php?t=963&sid=3a137456306d28694f62b26029814aeb
Read Loomis - /loomis/ link
https://mega.nz/#F!es1BSKQR!spODyd0iaQmMelGA2GscFw

References -
1. Google is your best friend. So is the Artbook Thread (ctrl+F artbook in Catalog)
https://onedrive.live.com/?authkey=%21APXa9KeUpBIoyWY&id=F9815D5579F67656%2111600&cid=F9815D5579F67656
http://www.artmodeltips.com/poses/
https://www.flickr.com/photos/sudoksa/
http://www.proko.com/art-model-poses-for-artists/
http://www.fineart.sk/photo-references
http://www.characterdesigns.com
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>>4007994
nigga that ain't porn
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>>4008012
Here!
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>>4009244
Blog?
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>>4009244
So good, blog?
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>>4009244
damn
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>>4009244
to be completely honest this is an amazing gesture drawing
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This is my first try at this, I need some feedback, please. Even better if you can edit it in order to show me how to fix it. Copypasted from the previous thread
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>>4009267
Looks like doo doo
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>>4009277
Well, I'm not saying it doesn't, but I would really like some advice and resources, particularly how to paint and render to make porn appealing.
I don't mean these are the only things i would change, i still lack lots of fundies.
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>>4009267
There are a number of structural issues with the drawing
the entire drawing is tilted, so she appears unbalanced and falling over. Complete lack of a ground plane is probably the cause of this. You don't have any defined planes anywhere actually, the only one you have is the plane of the paper.
The drawing is overall very flat. You have the general crime-scene-chalk outline of a person down but none of the form. Having an entirely stiff frontal-only view with nothing heading into/out of the page doesn't help. The cylindrical form of the legs/arms isn't there.
I will not touch on shading because that's not what you need to work on at this level.

tl;dr learn forms, draw a bunch of cylinders and boxes in perspective and you will understand how to place a body
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>>4009286
these are basic questions that belong in the /beg thread
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>>4009302
N-Nani!?
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>>4009244

Where can I give you money?
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Just finished.
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>>4009331
>>4009277
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I don't draw porn normally but I was inspired by this one artist whose blowjob faces I love totally. After doing the lines I just thought I'd try out some tones and things from manga to just think about how they're done. I don't think it's really good but it was more of an exploration/excercise so I'm fine with it.
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Posted this in the last thread as it was dyin. Fucked with this a little, still not sure if ill finish it or throw it into the graveyard of sketches.
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work in progress
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Thoughts?
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Bbchan marmalade and flintcock please come back?
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>>4009482
MODS!
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>>4009302
>ugly bastard
This hentai trope needs to end.
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>>4009482
You could have easily used that body type on an adult female, yet here we are.
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I really want a girl who will get fat for me... and who happens to be Irken
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>>4009482
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>>4009582
cartoon girls are amorphous blobs with vaguely human features
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>>4009693
As unappealing and annoying to look at as your art is I have to say I genuinely admire your work ethic you have multiple new pictures every single thread, that's impressive in it's own way.
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>>4009482
there's something about the face that looks off to me but I couldn't red line it. otherwise good job. make it an animated gif.
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all I ask for, is how id fix this, where am I lacking?
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>>4009803
you´ll find all the answers in the /beg thread
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>>4007994
Working on this motherfucker now
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How do I stop drawing the same 5-6 poses every time i draw porn? they all look the same except maybe the camera is a bit tilted or a leg is bent a bit different
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>>4009906
Search for photo references and shit. Pinups, porn shots and that sort of stuff.
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I can't seem to build an active following on Twitter at all, I'm posting fan art fairly regularly, I'm interacting with a few other artists age reposting memes but my followers only ever like my work and sometimes comment. Nobody retweets so it's slow work gaining followers.
What am I meant to do? I miss being reblogged constantly on tumblr without any effort
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>>4009941
Tumblr never worked for me. pyw
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>>4009941
pay twitter to advertise you
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>>4009893
tits too small
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>>4009954
You're saying cow tits would be the patrician choice?
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>>4009941
Sounds like your work isn't as good as you think it is.
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>>4009980

I dunno twitter follows to art skill seems pretty arbitrary.
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>>4009302
blog?
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>>4009941
Draw ocs of other porn artists that shit works
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>>4010000
not him but that seems creepy, just drawing someone elses character out of the blue
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>>4010009
Don't you understand? It's all in your head.
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>>4009980
I'm average. I know that my work is interchangeable with many other hentai Twitter artists and that there can only be room for so many of us, but I don't know how the ones that have such big follower activity got it in the first place.
I'm not even trying to get big or push a patreon, I just want to interact with a few followers between drawings like I used to on tumblr. Also the fact people only like my stuff and don't share on Twitter makes me feel shitty, I almost wish they didn't bother liking it at all.
>>4009947
I don't want to out myself about how pathetic I am kek
>>4010000
I've seen people go it and worried it looked too try hard but I guess I'm desperate now

Are there any good discords for the hentai crowd? I just want to share memes and get the occasional pat on the back.
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>>4010039
>I don't want to out myself about how pathetic I am kek
My man, the first you need to learn is that you need to grow a thick skin and be willing to show your awful, pathetic work to the world. You will make a lot of bad shit but once in a while something good will come out and you'll keep learning. If you don't stop giving a fuck you won't grow.
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>>4009302
>>4009996
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how much do you think i can get from something like this?
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>>4010195
Shit, from what I've seen, if you keep it up you're destined for dem big patreon bucks.
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>>4009693
Why not try improving instead of just churning out work? I made the dubious choice of encouraging you years ago on /tg/ thinking you'd get better but you haven't.

You have to relearn the fundamentals of faces because the pseudoanime face isn't working and you always do everything from the side and it fails to convey any energy. I don't even draw but if I tried half as much as you did I'd statistically have to get better with how many years you've been posting this shit.

Why?
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>>4010355
>I don't even draw, but
This should be the official banner for /ic/.
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>>4010195
Looks good, but I would refine the nipples and the area around a bit more.
Personal opinion: Less to no carpet.
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>>4009482
that's a cute kiddie butt, me like
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>>4010373
That looks like a disgusting bubblebut that belongs to a Roastie brapper, what are you talking about?
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Any anon here like drawing muscle girl but don't actually workout irl?
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>>4010377
It looks chubby, that's all. Chubby butt is a change of pace sometimes.
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>>4010378
Why is her vagina so fucking wide
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>>4009851
good point, I'll move there with this then
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>>4007994
a lotta gay in here.
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>>4010366
lol true
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>>4010009
>>4010039
Follow them and rt their stuff first so they're gonna think you are a fan
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>>4010355
>I don't even draw
kek
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did this today
i'm new in the nsfw art world lol (kinda)
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>>4011083
>>4010366
I'd be willing to start and post my humiliating attempts here if it meant that this guy would stop wasting his life thinking that's an acceptable level of skill.
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>>4011243
hey man, spite can be a good motivator so go for it
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>>4009906
Read hentai. Try John K. Pe-ta.
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>>4009779
What about his work ethic is admirable? What he is doing isnt work, its what he does for fun. He hasnt improved his garbage since he's been here. People with a work ethic improve. He's a shitposter.
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>>4011265
Not unless you take the time to fucking get better that's the point.
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>>4009851
All threads on /ic/ are /beg/ threads
this is just a more specialized beginner thread
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>>4011362
you would need to define better first, but then, you'd also need to make me care about internet randos who likely think i'm part of some jewish conspiracy enough to start over entirely from scratch
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>>4011233
Solid form, the hand hand looks like its curling in too much might just be the placement of the fingers. Expression is what makes it work though Id like to see how you plan on doing the nipples.
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>>4011233
Noyce
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From what I see males seems to have less attention than females. I plan to make new blog + patreon and role play as female, what can go wrong?
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>>4011675
Intergalaxy Travel Log - Fifth Eon of the Great Flash: male humans have a propensity to be attracted to their female counterparts. I do not understand why they have not created artificial wombs yet, but I will continue to investigate this strange behavior. I need what they call 'mony' to buy metal alloys for my ship repair.
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>>4011675
Don’t exaggerate the girl character too much. If you go too far with the persona of “Teeehee xd yes I’m a girl lol, yes I play vidya lol” people might just find you annoying
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>>4011384
Even accounting for your stylistic choices you really do need to work on your lineart.
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>>4011384
I've been seeing your art for like 4 years and it's crazy you still draw Jewish people that suffer from microcephaly.
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is there any hope for me here or do i have to /beg/
the tits arent popping out, i think theres a problem with the shoulders and the color pallette is dull
someone please guide me how to fix this i want it to look cute and sexy
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>>4010719
This doesn't even make any sense, why would a tough fighter type give a boneless cryptid a blowjob in such an uncomfortable position for herself, also her top wouldn't stay pushed up if she's leaning forward like that and those dust particles are both dumb and cheap.
You guys need to go give some head before you can draw it correctly
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>>4012054
There's hope for anyone, bro
A nice advice would be for you to experiment more and play with human anatomy
Fat, muscle, gravity
Use references, practice nude females, maybe even use porn scenes to guide yourself a little
With the color pallette thing, what i do is search for them in google, or use colors from other animes to help myself
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>>4011958
I feel like the interaction between the characters could be more interesting or emotive.
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>>4012068
you sound really mad for some weird reason
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>>4012108
dude can you please redline
also if you can can you color the tit and hip area i really dunno what im doing
heres the sketch just in case
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>>4012121
Stop begging to be spoonfed you illiterate fuck use a fucking reference
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>>4012116
At first, I didn't realize you meant to say they should be having sex instead of having a pleasant conversation afterward.
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>>4012125
That's actually not what I meant at all. They could actually be touching each other or making eye contact like people actually do after sex, rather than staring off awkwardly into space.
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>>4012123
dont reply with shitposts, retard
be constructive
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>>4012108
holy shit am I glad I didn't follow this guy's tutorials when I was a beginner
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>>4012129
You already got your advice and you should also learn to fucking read. Do it yourself or you're ngmi you fucking retard /beg/
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>>4012121
>>4012129
>WAAA WAA SOMEONE REDRAW MY SHITTY DOODLE SO I CAN TRACE FROM IT
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>>4010000
>>4010486
What are some good artists to do fanart that retweet stuff?
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>>4012443
Did you just rip off that background from a VN
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>>4012505
Did you use reference for that? That's amazing.
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>>4012537
Draw from life muthafakka
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>>4012505
Why does he have 3 boners?
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>>4012539

You drew her while holding her ass? Impressive.
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>>4012121
anon, your art have the spark, the style and the lines in some areas is pretty good.

Now, your lack of anatomy knowledge is the bad thing, also the chicken scratch kills the appeal.

You have 2 options. learn anatomy or directly focus into style. in both you have to learn anatomy, but in the second you can hide it some shit with stylization.

also, stop being a fucking pussy, dont come here like this is kindergarden ass time. if you have a brain, you need to be able to spot the bad shit in your art. you are a beg, yes, but dont let that hold you.

i used your face in pic related, i think that isnt that bad, just need the right combination of features. i already post this on twitter, so dont be a buffoon and trace to call it yours, stupid.
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>>4012505
>when you can't reference the clothes
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>>4012638
What is your Twitter? I am not the person you were critiquing by the way. Just a random person that is interested in your art.
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>>4012772
https://twitter.com/RonmeruArt
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wip for tonight.
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>>4009482
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>>4012856
As Anons in /gif/ say in a ylyl thread, I came here to fap not to laugh.
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>>4012505
>>4012777
>goes on a tear about how he’s not doing porn anymore, porn is for degenerates and he’s going to become a “””””real””””” artist
>back to doing porn 6 months later
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>>4012863

What a retarded stand to take ever wow
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Thougths? I'm still experimenting with colors and fluids
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>>4012892

If you're gonna do X-ray just do the whole thing and don't show a ghostly penis jizzing at nothing it's not hot.
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>>4012863
Why are you making stuff up? He said he doesn't want to do porn, cause of his own addiction issues with it. Not because he's looking down on porn.
Why are you crabs so toxic, jesus christ.
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>>4012863
He took off because he suffered from addiction and he did not like the stuff he drew for money. Now hes doing his own thing. Stop being a faggot.

>>4013016
Anon gets it
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>>4012336
Anyone "big". If you are drawing their oc (and the drawing is good) they will retweet
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>>4012475
And fucked with it a bit yes
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>>4012863
who is he?
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Export is not working on ipadOS (i know it's a beta, i was warned, im such a retard) i need psd without background fuckfuckfuck
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>>4013437
lurk moar. -stones
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>>4012505
her cloth wrinkles looks weird. do the basic zig zag pattern and apply the wrinkle force to simplify the form
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>>4012505
>>4012777
>>4013610
Your art feels like you spend almost 2 days just doing that lineart and instead of saying "how skillfull this guy is" the only thing on my mind is "what a waste of time".

Is kinda funny how the more you advance your projects, the more it lose appeal. its like a high tier artist do the perspective and the sketch, a mid-tier one did the lineart and a beg paint it.
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>>4007994
>imperial guardsman
>UFO Defence XCOM soldier
Who's the guy with a turban?
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this is the fourth time I am drawing a human for money

I am mostly a furfag artist, so humans are sort of not my strongest

I am quite happy with it, it´s the first time I feel I got the face right.
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my imagination ends at about three poses and angles and I just keep drawing the same shit over and over again (which is a relative expression too considering how rarely I draw)
what do I do? I already read enough "reference material"
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>>4013859
You practice drawing other poses from reference until you've internalized them.
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I know that the bottom one is missing a neck but other than that I’m pretty satisfied.
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>>4013692

All three are the Pillar Men from Jojo's Bizarre Adventure in guard uniform.
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>>4009482
And prayers.
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>>4013587
You can just use a cloud storage service for that. I use dropbox.
Just save the psd and share it on dropbox. Then save it on PC.
It's cumbersome, but it works.
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>>4012892
Yeah, I was thinking the same

Here another one I'm working on
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>>4013915
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>>4013804
Isn’t a lot of furry work just a human face with a weird nose? A lout of people don’t even give them a proper lengthened muzzle.
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Trying to get the light family and shadow family down before the inks and the flats.
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>>4014091
My kind of furry are basically people that instead of anime heads all have animal heads.
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Gonna try rendering this. Course I have no idea even remotely how to do that but why not, yeehaw.
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>>4014120
I thought you were going to fix it later but you forget to add some part of the guy body, unless you wanted the hands to be floating, which is not bad, because it's not like people are going to focus on that anyway
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>>4014193
make differents tries to learn something
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>>4014209

That's the plan. Thanks anon I will try.
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>>4014212
dont worry if you fail, you already have the lines done so is no problem, a new layer and is all fine, even you can fucked up intentionally, make a mess, then focus
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>>4014312
You got issues.
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>>4014372
incorrect, i got fetishes
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>>4014375
You have an irritating need to keep bringing attention to yourself and your shit art.
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>>4014312
That shit is disturbing
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>>4014120
Is it night on beyond the window? If yes why is it so bright, if no why is the lighting on the girl from the right side of the picture?
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>>4014400
my dude it's a thread on a board meant for posting porn art
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>>4014439
I really can’t stand your muzzle faces. They fuckin suck.
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>>4013587
Got a blog?
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>>4014439
WHERE'S THE TRIGGER?! WHERE IS IT?! YOU'D NEVER GIVE IT TO AN ORDINARY CITIZEN! WHERE IS IT
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>>4014477
i broke you, and yet you've come back?
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>>4014545
I think you may benefit from more traditional practice, ideally with pen. It will help you execute lines more easily, resulting in less wasted time and more appealing forms. I can see from an earlier post that you are starting to learn body landmarks as well as understanding why the landmarks are there, and traditional practice will help you refine and deepen that understanding.
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been a while since ive drawn
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another
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>>4014375
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>>4014468
nah it's just i watched porn and somehow ipad ended up in my hand so i copied this, but thanks i guess
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>>4014011
Finished with the backgrounds. Thoughts?
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>>4013665
Post art
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>>4015133
You have a pretty good grasp of anime stylization, the girl (and even the guy) looks appealing. You got a blog?
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>>4014603
Someone be brutal, I’m in a rut
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>>4015649
Go die in a fire, dumbass.
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>>4011958
i love it for some reason
as art not as porn
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>>4014603
>no visible ass
>something about the face just isn't good
>can the hands be doing something? right gripping edge of stockade?
>legs not doing anything
>pointedly ambiguous male character is caught in that fun zone where looking normal/soft makes him look gross (after getting used to main characters looking like porn stars and superheroes) but any detail makes him the focus
Genuinely nice hand, by the way
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Extremely WIP but I think Im figuring this out.
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>>4013804
Check her right leg. I can't even say what happened to it - looks like part of it slipped in another dimension.
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>>4009482
My Nigga
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>>4015649
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>>4010195
Needs work on the composition and values
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>>4015823
Thanks!
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>>4016129
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Guys I have this problem where I cant finish my work because I keep jacking off to it what do
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>>4016433
It's nice to be young. Enjoy it while you still can.
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>>4016439

But I need to actually draw not just jack off to wip titties
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>>4016433
With time you'll get a more competent artistic eye and you'll realize that your stuff isn't worth fapping to.
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>>4016467

Man I've fapped to worse things.
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>>4016475
Then I guess you are just a clinical case of dickbrain and you'll never get over it. Some people just aren't born with enough brain matter. Sorry dude.
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>>4016487

Anon, follow me on this. I have fetishes, sometimes *scenarios* are hot if the art is only minimally competent.
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>>4016489
stop masturbating
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>>4016501

Harsh but fair.
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>>4016259
Even I can tell who you're tracing
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>>4016911
>drawing clearly drawn from memory
>tracing
crab, pls, btfo.
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>>4016911
real jelly, draw more ;0
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>>4016911
what part of her drawing points to being traced?
Its just a generic pose is at most what I'd say
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>>4016954
it is incredibly generic, better posing is something i need to severely work on, something i hope thinner lines and this much more simplified form of construction will help me achieve

>>4016911
legitimately curious as to who you think i'm ripping off, i'm always on the look out for more artists on the off chance it's someone i don't know
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>>4015869
Here is the completed picture.
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Tracing 3d models was a mistake
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>>4017341
Love the rendering.
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>>4007994
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>>4017343

Why do crablets always make this accusation at random and with no direction
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>>4017341
How often do you use reference?
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>>4017376
Yes.
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>>4017343
why?
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>>4017038
ear
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>>4017594
are you ever going to link your actual blog?
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>>4009568
This is probably one of the most disgusting pics i've seen from you, and that's saying a lot. Congratulations.
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>>4009568
Can you put on a trip so I can filter you?
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>>4017594
>screen tablet
richfag af
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>>4017604
when i'm good enough

>>4017650
ipad 6th gen is 249 ameridollars plus (minus?) the employee discount a friend let me borrow
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>>4017645
no, the weak should fear the strong
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>>4017731
Channel that spite into grinding your fundamentals. If you're going to horrify /ic, do it well.
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>>4017594
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>>4011958
Wow I really like it! Some anatomy issues (particularly the dude's hands, maybe his legs too) and the the rope looks more like sausage but their expressions are nice and the scuffs on the girl (+those tear trails) are a great touch
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What do you think guys?
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>>4017922
I think the torso on the first one is a little long, i really like it anon, blog?
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>>4018020
Why are those toes so fucking long. This wont even appeal to footfags
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>>4013804
How much for this anon?
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>>4018321
>This wont even appeal to footfags
you'd be surprised
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>>4017376
Not often. Typically use one when I'm drawing a pose I'm unfamiliar with.
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how to simplify this shape?
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>really satisfied with sketch
>time to move on to lining process
>start a new pic instead
HOW DO I BREAK THIS CYCLE AAAAAHHH
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>>4018692
Don't do lineart, just clean the sketch layer
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>>4018655
Here you go, anon! c:
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>>4018020
>>4018321
I changed the feet as suggested, also, should i draw her with a penis or keep it straight? hmm
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>>4018831
Just do a penis alt. Best of both worlds, bb.
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>>4018759
I sketch with an ugly muddy pencil tool, i dont think cleaning is an option
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>>4018878
Can we see?
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Is /aco/ only for females and futa? I don't get the purpose of the board and I didn't know where else to ask.
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>>4018918
https://www.4chan.org/rules#aco
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>>4018692
grow a functional brain?
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>>4018911
I should maybe try using a different brush to sketch but the pencil is so ingrained in my process now
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How do I make something like this look more porny without adding actual sex acts? Is that possible?
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>>4019019
Okay, so instead of using an eraser, just make it so your brush is on alpha mode. You should be able to do this in Clip Studio, PS, and SAI.
Here it is in SAI. It basically just inverts the properties of your brush, that way when you erase you'll still have the same effect as when you draw.
Best of luck!
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more practice

>>4018021
possibly, proportions are hyper hard with thin lines ;-;
i’ll link twitter again when i’m better, being a ghost relieves a lotta my anxiety related to art
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>>4019076
God I wish I could draw dicks even half as well as you. Why are dicks so fucking difficult?
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>>4019034
Change the face to have more blush on it or make her tongue sticking out with some saliva dripping down. Just add more/less of that depending on how much of the porny aura you want.
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>>4019044
Oh Krita does that by default
I guess I could try using it to clean my sketch layer though
Thanks for the help
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>>4019034
Worry about improving on your shading first. Looks like her coat is metal instead of fur.
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>>4019187
They are literally super easy to draw.
IF YOU KNOW HOW TO DRAW. I am sure you suck in general, and that's why you can't draw dicks.
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>>4019187
lots an lots an lots a ref

>>4019291
pardon the pun but stop being a dick
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>>4019034
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>>4019816
What I said is not wrong though.
Drawing a dick is just as easy as drawing an arm or a leg. If you know how to draw in general, drawing a dick is nothing special.
Only a complete /beg/ would say drawing a dick over anything else is a hard thing to do.
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>>4020040
This is the most retarded thing I've heard. Just because someone has studied human anatomy thoroughly, but not the penis, they will not know how to draw one. Just because you're a master at drawing the head, hands or feet, it doesn't mean you'll automatically be decent at drawing other parts of the body.
If someone hasn't specifically studied a penis, they won't know how to specifically draw one.
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>>4020904
Spoken like somebody that isn't good at drawing. Obviously you can't understand.

If somebody is good at perspective and gesture in terms that they have internalized it through years of experience, then all they need to be able to draw a dick is knowing what it looks like.
If you know perspective and gesture, then you can draw literally anything.
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>>4020904

Bitch if you know form you can draw anything including dicks.
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bah!
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Used different reference for the feet and the legs. Some parts are not fully colored
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when will i learn to have decent lineweight and not make everyone squint to see fuck all in my work
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>>4009244
Ok, now this is epic.
>>4009267
>>4009286
cute stuff, but very uninteresting. It seems like you're hiding hands to avoid drawing them.
>>4009302
VERY nice.
Cute, sexy and funny.
>>4009331
Anatomy seems off.The torso and right leg of the blue girl specifically.
>>4009345
Not erotic, no really worth anyone's serious analysis. Actually try next time and then we'll talk.
>>4009355
Alot going on in this one but i remember your lineart from the last thread.
you made it worse trying to add color.
>>4009482
Very cute.
>>4009548
Good stuff as always. The one on the right is especially cute.
My one and only gripe is that the vagina on her looks kind of weird.
>>4009568
>>4009693
Im ashamed to admit this, but some of your stuff is quite erotic, but most of the time its really unappealing and stupid. The traps and futa you drew in this one >>4011384
are pretty hot, but everything else is atrocious.
The dialogue is too absurd to take seriously and on top of all that, everything i'm telling you is falling on deaf ears since many anons have tried helping you for the past 5 yrs and just refuse to listen.
>>4009803
Lots of errors in this one overall. You should should use a reference( if you can find an appropriate one) in the future to help you.
>>4009995
Terrible. Just awful.
>>4010378
>>4010420
>>4010719
>>4011033
These have potential, but are still pretty bad.
>>4011233
Solid anatomy and linework. , but its still pretty boring.
>>4011240
Not really my fetish, but those breasts could have use some work.
>>4021407
Cute, but haven't you posted this before several times already....?
>>4021426

The anatomy and perspective are its glaring flaws, and the face you drew is just plain unattractive.

I'd give you a redline, but im at work right now and once I get off, I probably will be too tired to even bother so take my critique as a grain of salt.
I feel as if you can do better than this, though. Just seems like you got a bit over ambitious.
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>>4021532
>tfw mass critique-sama doesn't reply to you
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>>4021532
Thanks for the feedback, anon! It was indeed something very far from my comfort zone. I'll focus ln the basics of anatomy and construction but will keep trying to do extreme angles from time to time.
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>>4021426
How are you so bad at drawing feet as a footfag?
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>>4021511
Lmao dude this is REALLY bad foreshortening on her arm
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>>4021648
It's bad on the whole body, not just on the arm.
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>>4021556
dont be greedy sips
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>>4021648
>>4021728
thanks. i tried to double-triple check if i could do better, but i suck at perspective
can i get a redline of a boxman or something to see how it could be fixed?

>>4021774
i'm sorry who? ;)
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Just delivered this commission
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been thinking about drawing porn again
do i have potential ?
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Hows this desu
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>>4019984
Thanks anon very helpful.

Not sure why my pic got deleted tho
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>>4021407
>>4009482
Same """artist"" btw
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>>4019321
Done with this but if anyone gives me some advice ill go back and change it.
Probably.
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>>4022296
potential and talent are just motivation and how willing your are to work hard and think tons. as long as you're willing you can get there. drawing porn is just a different set of rules regarding appeal compared to more "serious" art.
your sketch is rough but not bad looking, keep at it

>>4022719
wojak isn't hand drawn but just copypasted in, 0/10!
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What do you guys think?
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>>4023678
I like it.
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>>4023577
True
Thanks anon. Just wondering if my art is jack off material
Anyways here's progress, fiddling with the arms a lot
>>4023678
This is really really nice
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>>4023678
proportions are fucked
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>>4024006
How?
>>4023761
>>4023975
Thank you, guys :)

>>4023975
If you're going for femininity try thinning the waist, the neck and the trapezius.
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>>4023678
the pussy looks pretty horrid, looks like he's fucking an axe wound, The rest looks pretty ok. Just practice drawing pussies in the future
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>>4024106
Thanks for the feedback, I'd thin him but I wanna keep him chubby and thicc. Do you have any suggestions on the anatomy or does it look gud for colouring?
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>>4023975
sorry to say but your sketch looked better, you seem to have misplaced some proportions here?
the hips were large but had better shape, these look like he has obese thighs. the arms are also weirdly fat and the torso is more rectangular now.
it looks like you fattened him up in the process sort of? i can't tell if that was intentional or proportion mistakes.
the collar bone is gone too (i assume thats just because its a WIP though). also very minor but i feel the navel is too low, remember the navel is placed more or less at the start of the hipbone
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>>4024207
Deadass? I'll resketch it then. Thanks for the feedback and yeah I did decide to fatten him up
thank you anons!
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>>4024148
>axe wound
lol I gotta study em, you're right
>>4024160
Listen to >>4024207 and don't forget to look at reference.
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>>4024148
>fucking an axe wound
So he's fucking a tranny?
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>>4023678
really like the way the tummy an hair are rendered
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>tfw no one critques you in these threads
>been posting for months
I should only post in a discord server from now on holy fuck!

At least there people would be willing to tear me a new one after i ask them.
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>>4024335
That's pretty cool. How can improve this?
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Has anyone ever jacked off to another anon's work?
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>>4024322
Thank you :D I've been pushing to understand the anime style but it's still not where I want it to be.
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>>4024397
I think your lines are lacking fluidity because of all the stops. Also try changing the line weight in some places, unless you're going for that specific line style. I think you'd benefit from gesture studies and maybe the line training in Dynamic Sketching (Peter Han).
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>>4024397
This looks like good potential, could you post the sketch for it?
I agree with >>4024422
The butt a bit weird and the top of arm should be erased to connect to be part of shoulder.
Maybe try add more folds on corners (not sure if work but should try anyway)
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>>4024444
Here's the previous layers.
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>>4024322
The pecs are placed a bit too high. Just lasso them and move them a bit lower.
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>>4017341
exposed. get outta here!
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>>4024490
Hah! Well, he said he did use reference some times.
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>>4024494
heh that's cute. Mind sharing your blog?
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>>4024490
how are her hands holding on those rails.. maybe that guy just lifting her.
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>>4024549
the heel of her shoe.
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>>4007994
thoughts?
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>>4024629
Is he supposed to have a delitized tongue
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WIP
Can I get some critique?
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>>4024667
you seem to have drawn the characters out of perspective. try to draw the characters in a box next time.
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what group of subjects should I study if I just want to draw porn and scantily clad characters? I'm going through the traditional learning route but I feel like I don't need some of this stuff I'm learning.
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>>4024679
you should study to become a good illustrator and draw porn as an exercise. It will lead to much more success.
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>>4024667
What did you use for the background?
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>>4024490
Do you really think I traced it?
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>>4024629
Very bear. Where do you get your clients?
>>4024679
All fundies, no exception!
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>>4024679
fundies like what you'd do if you weren't a porn artist, just add in study of porn artists you like and put passion in illustrating what kinks you enjoy
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