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Excelsior true believers! Welcome to the Superhero thread, formerly Spider-Shim and her Amazing Friends. All mlp/superhero green, art, and discussions are welcome.

Last Thread: >>30022666

Story list:
treppahcs:
Infamous - http://pastebin.com/ps2Ts8J1
Tonic - http://pastebin.com/xShn5AbX
(one-shot) What Tonic Does in his Spare Time - https://pastebin.com/cMN76iPS
Therapist Anon - http://pastebin.com/0cit7eXM
(one-shot) Wardrobe malfunction - https://pastebin.com/iU3yLLkE
(one-shot) Meeting Myself - https://pastebin.com/LS1m1tMC

Defiant:
Probability Anon - http://pastebin.com/3Myw3t0h
Darkest Anon - http://pastebin.com/gQyK64G2
Elemental Anon - http://pastebin.com/ty0rTQYR
(one-shot) Hearths Warming - http://pastebin.com/caHJZndf
(one-shot) 4/20 - https://pastebin.com/UfRTDYwk

RooRooRoo:
Black Cat Anon - https://pastebin.com/VkBgWFvG

untitled 7:
Spider-Shim ch1 - the Superior Spider-Man - http://pastebin.com/P4Mawhsw
Spider-Shim ch2 - Meet the contestants - http://pastebin.com/pGJV6pUZ
Spider-Shim ch3 - The great and powerful - http://pastebin.com/fYHRDTA3
Spider-Shim ch6 (possible future timeline) - Guardians - https://pastebin.com/edF8p43K

Turve:
no pastebin yet


drawfriends:
mamorukusanagi - http://mamorukusanagi.tumblr.com/tagged/my-art


Superhero Storylist and Thread archive:
http://pastebin.com/AiBP87Si
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Ahhhh, feels good.
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hey jamal
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>>30098673
This thread is sponsored by H I P S™
Hyper
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Powers and
Shit.
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>>30098889
sorry mate, a CYOA beat you to it
>>30098888
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>>30098900
I wasn't even trying.
I just thought of something funny I wasn't paying attention to digits.
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>>30098889
And? This isn't anything new
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>>30099332
Just like there is nothing new in your stories.
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>>30099461
And?
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>>30098673
Where would take your Spider-horse girl gf to dinner?
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>>30100745
I'd cook for her
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>>30100859
What would you cook?
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>>30100859
Same here
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>>30100878
Omlette du Framoge
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>>30101041
You watched Dexter's lab didn't you?
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>>30100878
home made lasagna, not store-bought

>>30101041
*fromage
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REPOST ON REQUEST
>>30059707
>Be Agent Sweetie Drops.
“Is it ready?”
>“You know I arrived here the same time as you did, don’t you?”, Dr. Turner shouts back, continuing to modify some data on two separate screens. His concern then goes upward to Misty Fly, “how are you holding up?”
>“It’s coolant, not water, but I’ll manage!”, she shouts back from way up above in the hall.
>She’s standing on her surfboard in the middle of nowhere.
>To an unknowing observer it might look like she was not doing anything at all, but in fact she was propelling coolant through the plumbing surrounding the structure.
“The Tesseract never acted up before, did we trigger it by transporting it?”
>“I highly doubt that. We’ve been experimenting with it for more than a year.”
“But we can get it under control, right?”
>He bites his lip and keeps typing.
“Right?”
>“These readings are higher than what we’ve seen before. Way higher than what happened when the Equestrian envoy arrived.”
“That’s not an answer.”
>You know what uncontrolled energy means.
>An explosion.
>And as he doesn’t respond respond you know what’s up as.
“Shouldn’t we evacuate?”
>“Hah, with the Tesseracts energy output? We can’t clear the entire midwest.
“That bad?”
>“Well... It’s worse, the energy is like... a lot, you know... Have you contacted Spitfire?”
“She’s not happy.”
>“U-oh...”
>You see another surge in energy on the readings Turner had on his screens, and before you could even say anything a pulse ripped through the containment field.
>Like a shock wave it pushed things outward, and you almost from your feet.
“Misty!”, you shout up
>“That wasn’t me!”, the woman immediately defends herself, while barely hanging onto her surfboard.
“No, I mean- are you alright?”
>“Uhh... holding up,” she states as she was indeed only holding herself up, if barely so.
“Turner?”
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>>30101876
>Dr. Turner wasn’t responding, but going through his science machine, looking desperately for something. A way to fix this, you hope.
“Is there anything we know for certain?”
>“Whenever I pour in enough energy to shut it down it comes back with more.”
“You’re having a power struggle with a thing.”
>“We have no idea what this ‘thing’ is.”
“Misty, your thoughts?”
>“It’s hot!”, she shouts as she’s forcing coolant into the system again.
>The cooling system had taken during the shock wave just now.
>“Not useful,” Turner shakes his head, “I do have a hunch, though.”
“Well, share.”
>“Someone’s trying to force open a portal.”
>You nod and turn around again, once more contacting Spitfire.
>She must know if the Equestrians expect an addition to their escort.
>You know why she had the Tesseract transported, but not if more people are invited.
>“Agent Drops, status report.”
“Are we expecting more guests?”
>Another shock wave rips through the air, much more powerful than the last one.
>This time it wipes you off your feet, but you weren’t the only one.
>Having hit the floor, was the least of your problems judging from the sounds behind you.
>Misty Fly’s scream as she was taken from the air was bad, but the crunching sound metal makes your stomach turn.
>If the machinery holding the Tesseracts energy back fail...
>You heave yourself up.
>“BonBon, talk to me! What happened?”, you hear faintly from your phone a few feet away.
>Worrying about your immediate safety is more important right now though.
>You face the source of the explosion, the Tesseract.
>Only to see a woman as she was just standing up, she was dressed in a tight silky clothes, a cape and a... stereotypical wizard hat.
>In her right hand she holds a sort of spear adorned with a glowing gem.
>You take a few steps back, your hand goes to your gun, and you speak loud and clearly in hope Spitfire would catch up on it.
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>>30101880
“Ma’am, I’m going to have to ask you to please put down that spear!”
>The mysterious woman takes on a better stance, she doesn’t look like Starlight who became a human for the first time.
>She carries herself more like the Princess – unused to being human, but having had past experience.
>Soon her eyes fall on you.
>“You dare make a demand of a god, puny human?”
>She’s was smiling, full of confidence.
>You’d want to say she was full of herself, but her voice carries a sort of confidence and something else... something more ominous, something that sends a shiver down your spine.
>In retrospect, draw your gun might have been a bad idea.
>She aims at you with the and accumulates some blue lightning.
>You only had a split second to decide to dodge for cover as a bolt of exploding light flies where you had stood.
>After reorienting yourself you peak behind the safety of your cover.
>Misty had sent her surfboard hurling towards the hostile only to have it bounce harmlessly off an invisible wall.
>The same happens to the coolant she was now redirecting to splash right at the enemy.
>Before you could even comprehend the movement, the self proclaimed god was right in front of Misty and pushes the spear into her chest.
>“No!”
>As opposed to penetrating Misty’s chest, it only sent out a small ripple of blue energy over the her.
>Misty goes limp... no, she’s... relaxing?
>The assailant offers her hand and Misty takes it with a smile to stand up from the ground.
>In the meantime Dr. Turner, who had realized the Tesseract having powered down, bagged it into it’s suitcase and-
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>>30101886
>“Please don’t- I still need that,” the newcomer gently asks, her spear once more lighting up with energy.
“This doesn’t have to get messy!”, you shout, leaving your cover to direct her attention away from Dr. Turner.
>“I’m sure it doesn’t,” she smiles, “and it won’t, will you just obey my orders.”
>She spreads her arms, making herself as big as possible.
>As on cue her cape waves in non-existent wind, multicolored balls of light dance around her, and, just like Princess Sparkle, a horn and wings of pure light emerge from her body.
>You’re captivated and stare in awe as the goddess before you spreads her wings and lets you bask in her light.
>“I am the Great and Powerful Trixie of Equestria!”
“Equestria?”, you ask after you find your words again, “Are you with Princess Sparkle?”
>“Sparkle...”, she grinds her teeth, “The faux princess Twilight Sparkle can never fathom the powers we had already possessed eons before she was born.”
>The way the light bounces off her body still makes you unable to focus on anything else.
>You know, by now, her appearance has seared itself into your mind.
>It doesn’t bother you at all.
>The image of a true beauty is something to relish, something not everyone can claim to have ever seen in their lives.
“And why have you come to Earth?”
>“We have come with glad tidings, subject. You are free to kneel before me and profess your love onto me, your new god!”
>You feel your body being heavy, light pain from jumping to cover was still noticeable.
>It would be so much easier to kneel down in a more comfortable position.
>Doing so would even be the respectful thing before a god, and you do hold yourself to a certain etiquette.
>Only when you saw Misty Fly go down on her knees saying, “my goddess,” towards Trixie with a longing expression you can feel yourself coming to your senses.
>You look to Dr. Turner who seems to have had a similar experience.
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>>30101891
>“My subject...”, Trixie extends a hand to Misty once more and let it be kissed.
>She touches Misty’s face, caressing it like a lover would for a moment before letting go and returning her attention back to you and Dr. Turner, “You have heart.”
>Her words sound like a compliment, but her tone was slightly annoyed.
>“But I’m still in need of your services.”
>Once more she moves faster than you can comprehend and has already pushed the tip of her spear onto Dr. Turners chest.
>Just like it did with Misty Fly, blue ripples spread out over him, and he immediately relaxes his body.
>You have a faint idea what it might be like to touch her, if only standing in her presence makes you want to obey her orders.
>Dr. Turner kneels down, “my goddess”, he offers her the suitcase with the Tesseract.
>“Hold onto it, dear subjext,” as she did with Misty Fly she touches his face as well, giving him an encouraging pat, “carry my burdens for the moment.”
>This is bad...
>You manage not only the courage to take a step back, but also raise your gun at her once more.
>Trixie smiles, “You will come to see I am a generous goddess,” she says as she’s approaching you, “not only will I forgive you your transgression of raising arms against me, I also give you a purpose.”
>You’re unable to move as she draws closer.
>“I shall let you be my prophet.”
>Her hand was dangerously close to your face, as was your gun to hers, but she doesn’t seem to mind.
>“Go now, far and wide, and spread the word of my arrival,” she commands you, “leave out no detail of the Great and Powerful Trixie!”
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>>30101876
Thanks m8, will review when I am done working.
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>>30101903
>review
I get a review? really?
So far I've only gotten nitpicks and proofreader comments
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>>30102152
Same thing.
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Y-you mean you're not going to tell me what you think of the story and what could need improvement, if it's dialogue, characterization, pacing, or anything of that kind... only typos?
It... It's okay... I didn't really want a review anyway... idiot.
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Darkest Anon pastebin updated and the next update is probabyly going to be on Darkest Anon. I am trying with Probability Anon, but I need to figure out another long term complex event that is caused by Anon's power.
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>>30102859
Step 1: make sure Sunsets identity doesn't get flung around, she was just... cosplaying! Yes...
Step 2: figure out how to pimp vinyl out as a superhero and get in a regular food source from criminals (enough to keep her alive but o little to endanger them)
Step 3: ???
Step 4: True Harem Ending
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>>30102712
Well, I can multitask that into to I guess, but its more of a thread discussion thing. Don't worry I'll treat you right, by holding your hand.
>>30102859
Hype
>>30102949
This could work, maybe figure out what the Sunny Time Ghost is going to lead to.
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>>30098673
I can't believe it's been an entire year
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>>30103816
...Oh...It's you...
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>>30103830
It sure is
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>>30103841
Game over people.
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>>30103848
Did I miss some end of days prediction?
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>>30103854
It's just you coming back, that's all. How's it going?
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>>30103854
The bringer of ultimate FEELS returns. And you expect me not to react accordingly?
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>>30103871
More or less good. Uni took over my life for some time. I've been thinking of coming back here to write again soon. I'm actually planning of writing short stories and publishing them on cruddy e-zines. What's been happening with you?
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>>30103894
Who are you?
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>>30103884
Oh, you flatter me so
>>30103899
I used to write here. I came around the third thread i think
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>>30103899
One of our past writers.

>>30103894
I'm doing fine. Been writing here go 3 greens going and Mamarou is a cyborg now
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>>30103910
Huh, never heard of you. Do you got a bin?
>>30103915
why isn't he on the OP?
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>>30103915
Is the old gang still here? Beans and Keaton and untitled ?
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>>30103922
He stopped early on and took his story down.

Hey Red, you wrote the green where Anon was hunted by Kraven and Deadpool right?
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>>30103930
Brans not so much. Keaton is lurking and Untitled is still writing
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>>30103934
Nah. I wrote the one where there were sharp contrasts between the fun and happy times with the depressing and edgy times that all spiraled down into a meta narrative. You know the one
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>>30103934
All I remember is 'Something something brain injury'.
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>>30103956
Not really, it doesn't exist anymore.
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>>30103956
The one were Anon was the Green Goblin and in the hospital while Sunset git the symbiote right?

It's been a long time so some details are a bit sketchy to me
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>>30103942
Good to know. Any new clones hanging around? Also I never really took the story down. It's been in my pastebin this whole time
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>>30103978
Sure it does. I'm looking at it right now
>>30103979
That's the one, yeah
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>>30103983
Guess I'm thinking of another writer, my bad. No clones but we do have new blood in a sense
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>>30103991
Not in the OP it doesn't. Ergo, it doesn't exist.
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>>30103996
I'm happy that the thread is still alive and well. Even more so if more people have joined in. Brings a tear to my eye
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>>30104006
Look in the storylist then
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>>30104014
I hear you. I'm doing some crazy story were Anon is a therapist for some villains
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>>30104027
More like advice boyfriend, but functions the same.
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>>30104027
I should catch up. Actually I have been thinking for some time of coming back here with something new. This summer for sure
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>>30104036
Yeah. Can't blame me for trying something different
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>>30104014
Woah, hey Red! Welcome back. Will you continue the story?
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>>30104048
Its fun.
>>30104045
Well, looking forward to finding your stuff and reading it then.
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>>30104045
That'll be great to have you back.

>>30104062
Thanks
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>>30104053
Continue? Nah. I was poking around just to see if everyone is fine. I got the feels for the old times. I might come back in the summer with something new though. Anyways, how have you been?
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>>30104086
Pretty good thx
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>>30100878
>>30101517
>You will never stay up at 3 am making Sunset homemade lasagna so as soon as she gets home kicking ass you can open up the oven to give her it.
>She will never say.
>"Oh tiger, you don't have to do that for me."
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>>30104228
>You will never help Sunny with putting on bandages and wrap her bruises after the late dinner.
>She will never tell you what happened that night where her highlight was wrapping a robber to a newspaper post.
>You and Sunny will never share a laugh as you carry her to bed.
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>>30104228
>>30104336
>You will never cheer for Sunny from the sidelines, knowing that she'll pull through eventually.
Why live?
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>>30104387
So you can shoot your girlfriends big bad before he wins in the back.
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>>30104387
I would but, I don't want to be in the crosshairs of a villain.
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>>30104446
>I would but, I don't want to be in the crosshairs of a villain.
On further evaluation, my comment doesn't seem to be smartest move.
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>>30104446
>>30105227
I prefer to stay at home and make her a nice homemade meal when she gets back to the apartment.
Unless I get kidnapped or we go out to dinner.
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>>30104006
here: https://pastebin.com/hTFVft7x
he was dead for ages, ergo he's not in the OP, but in the storylist

>>30103930
beans died a forever ago, went off to a sleepover and never came back

My memories of the thread are mostly treppahcs, keats and me carrying the thread, but keats died half a year ago

but we got Defiant who stayed,
and our newest addition who seems serious about writefagging is RooRooRoo

Nice to know you're still thinking of us.
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>>30101897
>Be Anon.
>“You shouldn’t slouch, Anon.”
“Hmm, what?”
>You look up to see who’s addressing you.
>It takes a moment for your brain to process the identity of the person sitting on a bench in the shade outside your dorm.
“Synergy?”, her name comes out as a question.
>“The one and- well, one in an finite multiverse.”
>She stands up, now towering over you due to the use of fancy high heels.
>One hand goes to throw her hair back, before she remembers it to be cut short now.
>Shorter even than yesterday... and red.
“Makeover much?”
>She’s wearing designer clothes with a waist high belt-thingy to accent her hourglass figure.
>At first your eyes move down, over one of her hands on her hips, straddling over the fabric barely thick enough to hide her panties underneath.
>The skirt ends in the middle of her thighs, but she wasn’t showing a lot of skin, as soon after knee high stockings.
>Your eyes go up again and you notice another feature of hers accented.
>That...
>That has to be wearing a push up bra...
>What began as simply trying to figure out what’s wrong with the image you’re used to have from her turns into checking her out, and even staring.
>“You’re not subtle, you know?”
“I- not? I mean, hey. Hey! Hi! What are you doing here?
>“Looking for my lil’ sis, you know?”
>You nod, going in on the lie which would make the most sense to random students knowing Sunset.
>She was speaking loud enough for other students to hear after all.
“Sunset, she- yeah, she left early. She said she had something to take care off at home.”
>Don’t focus on her body, she has a pretty face too.
“Like, home-home, you know? Not- you know, right?”
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>>30106008
>She’s wearing make-up.
>More than usual.
>“Yeah, I think I get what you mean. You talked her into it?
>No, Sunset was wearing a natural look/minimalist type of make-up.
>Synergy had been more rugged, you don’t think she had worn make-up.
>Well, neither of them had at the camp.
>Now she’s actually wearing some.
>Eyeliner and eye shadow to accent her eyes, slight lipstick, slight blush.
>All still, very discreet, but you just weren’t used to it.
>“You’re still staring.”
“You’re still pretty,” you retort, which catches her off guard, “What? Do you expect me to be able to just turn that off?”
>She gives a weak smile, “You started out with a nice compliment, but then went on with a stupid joke. You’re barely collecting any positive points with that.”
“Yeah? Well, I’m not trying to score with you. I’m still trying to get over a harsh break up, which, to be honest, I haven’t even properly processed yet.”
>She looks off, “I guess,” then shrugs, “follow me.”
>You tap your foot
“Is it important? Because I usually barely sleep during the week, and last week was just fuuuuucked. I want to take a nap to refuel a bit for my job.”
>“Job?”
“Yeah.”
>“You’re working?”
“Mhm.”
>“Why? You’re stupid rich.”
“Maybe, but I didn’t know that until this Saturday.”
>“Just ditch ‘em.”
“Maybe,” you turn away from her, “but only for some fate of the universe type thing, okay?”
>You begin to walk in direction of your dorm, but hear he on your tail.
>“What if said fate of the universe thing is already ongoing.”
“Is it?”, you ask without turning around.
>“Well... not that I know of,” she admits.
“Then I have a date with some bed sheets.”
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>>30104086
Just what we need, another zombie writefag making promises
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>>30105970
>here: https://pastebin.com/hTFVft7x
Oh yeah, that story
I didn't read past the bundle of raccoons
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>>30080988
Cont line 694 of https://pastebin.com/VkBgWFvG
>As you drag yourself back towards your apartment, you glance towards the sky.
>Small rays of sunlight spill from the cracks in the nightscape.
>You curse to yourself as you remember that tonight was a school night.
>Well, there are a lot more things you should concern yourself with now.
>You're going to need to stitch the costume back together.
>Again.
>The webshooters will have to be refilled.
>Again.
>There's a lot of unexplained, strange frustration that you want to vent, but don't know how.
>...Again?
>As you walk up the steps to the front door, you realize that you don't have your keys on you.
>You lean to your right to look at the window leading to your room.
>If you had any webs left, you could easily swing your way up.
>Sighing, you rely on the last tool in your arsenal.
>You jump over the railings and walk underneathe where your window is.
>Inhaling deeply, you recall the familiar motions.
>You place the fingertips of one hand onto the brick wall, and do the same with the other.
>Pulling yourself up, your feet makes contact with the wall.
>Placing one hand one after the other and replicating the same movements with your feet, you begin to scale the wall.
>Reaching your window, you left out a sigh of relief as you find it open.
>Adding "replace your window" to the to-do list wouldn't be particularly enjoyable.
>Hopping through the window, you're greeted with the familiar setting of your bedroom.
>You groan to yourself as you take note of the unfinished homework and dirty laundry pile.
>Pulling the mask off and plopping down on the bed, you begin to write up a mission report in your head.
>The only positive to come out of this is that you're still alive.
>You've failed the objective and came back wrecked.
>You probably now have the newspaper and police on your ass because what you pulled back at the museum.
>The encounter with Black Cat can only be described as a catastrophe.
>Catastrophe.
>Cat.
>Heh.
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>>30107068

>You pick yourself up and walk to the bathroom.
>Looking into the mirror, you wince as you take notice of your scars.
>You look at the bottle of rubbing alcohol and then the shower.
>...
>You're a big girl.
>You can handle the pain.
>After thirty minutes have passed, you've come to the scientific conclusion that you were in fact, not a big girl.
>Slipping on a pair of PJs without toweling off, you toss your battle-worn costume in the corner.
>You don't even bother to hide it.
>Throwing yourself onto the bed, you hope that sleep will ease the aching pain in your joints, muscles and everything else.
>The warm embrace of the bedsheets and the softness of the pillows lure you into a deep, dreamless sleep.
>No more worries.
>No more school.
>But most importantly, no more Black Cat.
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>>30107073
>...
>As you pull yourself back to world of the living, you begin to ponder the possibilities to why your alarm is going off so early.
>Ignoring the blaring of low-quality audio file, you open your eyelids and look around your room.
>Sunlight pours into your room from the window you left wide open last night.
>Any plans of sleeping in are disrupted as a cold breeze blows through your bedroom.
>You groan, pulling the bedsheets over your head and shutting your eyes as tight as possible.
>Despite your best efforts of reinforcing your defense, the chilly wind sends a tingling sensation down your spine.
>All this while the alarm continues trying to replicate the loudness of a Vinyl Scratch concert.
>...
>You know your neighbors won't be hesitant to exclaim their fruitful opinions on being woken up this early in the morning.
>This you know from experience.
>You forcefully kick the bedsheets off of you, sending them flying into the wall.
>At least it wasn't the lights this time.
>You snatch your alarm and spam the off button way more times than you need to.
>Begrudgingly, you sit up in your bed.
>You hold the alarm clock to your face.
>7:32 on a Wednesday morning.
>Returning to the bathroom, you peform your three S's ritual.
>Scandalous Spider Stuff.
>How secretive!
>After making yourself look halfway presentable, you pop two pieces of bread in the toaster.
>Seeing how little time you had left to make to it to school on time, you decide to bolt out the door with the pieces of toast in your mouth.
>Like a reponsible young adult, you lock the door and remember your keys.
>Miraculously, your breakfast doesn't fall from your mouth as you frantically nibble on them on your wayward sprint to Canterlot High.
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>>30107074
End of this update. I know it wasn't very action-packed but I wanted to write something fun. Peace out for now.
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>>30107083
I liked it. It set up things to come and showed the human side of Sunny.
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>>30107195
Thanks. I want to make make sure she's relatable and likable by establishing a grounded personality. Y'know, before I take her and plunge her into a world of pain and suffering.
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>>30107234
Can't wait to see what's next.
I wonder if Anon and Sunset bump into each other on accident and slowly realize who they are.
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>>30107234
I can't believe you're using that cliched anime trope. Anyways good update and I'm hoping she does bump into Anon
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>>30107486
I actually found it endearing and was waiting for it, then again I barely watch anime
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>>30107594
Understandable and i don't hate it. I just a crap load of Sailor Moon and it had that in almost every episode.
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>>30098673
>Sunset will never have the suit in the car just in case during a date with you.
>It will never be your year anniversary together, things are going well in a fancy restaurant.
>Some shit will never go down when men with rifles and shotguns come in she has to try to run to get it while wearing high heels.
>She will never curse as she trips multiple times knowing she shouldn't have wore high heels but, Rarity had to keep insisting to wear them for the year anniversary.
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Does anyone mind if i post the one shot i worked on when we had problems posting green? Kinda want to see you all make fun of ut
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>>30108640
Justdoit.gif
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>>30108640
Bring us the green.
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>>30108640
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>>30108669
>>30108674
>>30108696
Here it is then.

>Be a very tired and nervous Anon.
>You’ve been running for a good while now and you don’t want to stop.
>It was about thirty minutes ago when everything was going smoothly.
>You were at a bank with a few other guys, ready to rob the place for some money.
>It wasn’t for some nefarious reason like revenge or that the bank fucked you over.
>No, you were literally kidnapped and forced to do this.
>They handed you a gun, a mask and a well worded threat that your family will die if I fuck up.
>You didn’t try to argue or fight back.
>Not with a shotgun pointed at your skull.
>Anyways it was like those movies were a gang robs a bank.
>Yelling “Get down”, tying up a few guys, opening the safe and taking the money.
>It was almost disappointing to see.
>It’s like they just watch a movie and decided to copy it.
>Good news was that no one was stupid enough to run so no deaths.
>But with every bit of good news, there’s always bad news that follows.
>Once they robbers got there money, they got in the van, roughly pushing you inside, and drove away.
>It almost looked like they would get away scott free if it wasn’t for one thing.
>The van just passed a few traffic lights before it suddenly stopped and was tipped over.
>Most of the robbers tried to make a run for it and were captured for their troubles.
>As you left the van, you pulled off the mask and began walking away.
>You didn’t even make it to the sidewalk when you heard someone telling you to stop.
>Looking around, you were surprised and afraid to see Super-Woman staring at you.
>It seemed like an eternity before you did the only thing that you could do in a situation like this.
>You ran.
>Might have been the dumbest thing you ever did, but you didn't want to deal with a woman that could turn you into a human pretzel.
>Anyways you ran through many stores, parks, parking lots and alleys just to lose the alien superhero.
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>>30108808
>It didn’t work as she was able to keep up with you and called for some back up.
>It’s the only explanation on how a few spells were shot at you, the batmobile started to chase you and a few pink energy blasts were shot in your general direction.
“Have to thank Sunset for talking into those classes,” you said, breathing heavily while leaning against a warehouse wall.
>Spending about twenty minutes to run from heroes wasn't what you envisioned you would do today.
>But it happened.
>You were tired and needed a breather before you could head home.
>You were hoping that Super-Woman or her posse wouldn’t find you.
“Not how do get to Canterlot High from here?” you asked, trying to find your phone.
> “Just walk Gulley Drive for about ten minutes. You can’t miss it,” a motherly voice said from behind you.
“Really?” you asked, turning to thank the person for the directions.
>You instantly regretted it as the person behind you was no other than Super-Woman, floating there with her arms crossed under her chest.
>It was strange seeing her just float there with her bright pink, green, blue colored hair swaying in the wind, staring at you.
>She looked intimidating yet not all at once, not moving from her spot.
>Holding your hands up, you began to walk away from her while keeping eye contact.
>You didn’t even take five steps when you bumped into something.
>It was strange to feel two bumps on your back and warm air on your neck.
>Taking a huge chance and risk, you moved one of your hands to your back.
>The moment you felt warm skin, you heard a gentle giggle behind you.
>You slowly moved your head to a woman with pink and yellow hair with glowing pink eyes, wearing pink thigh highs and an unusual swimsuit.
> “Hi,” the mysterious woman said cheerfully, causing you to back away from her.
“I'm sorry. I didn't mean to do it,” you said, a bit too quickly with your hands raised while backing away slowly.
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>>30108819
> “That’s what they all say,” Super-Woman said, floating next to the other woman with a smile on her face.
>Suddenly a black bat themed hero and a woman in a blue cloak with white and purple hair landed on both sides of the other two heroes.
>You instantly recognized the newcomers as Batwoman and Raven.
“I'm so fucked,” you whispered, seeing Super-Woman giggle as you take a step back.
>You were debating on whether it was better to run or not when you heard something.
> “IT’S MORPHIN TIME!!” a bunch of voices yelled, making you jump slightly.
> “MASTODON!”
> “PTERODACTYL!”
> “TRICERATOPS!”
> “SABER TOOTH TIGER!”
> “TYRANNOSAURUS!”
> “DRAGONZORD!”
> “WHITE TIGER!”
>You turned just in time to see seven girls, in tight spandex, land and start to pose.
> “We're here to stop your reign of evil,” the black suited ranger said in a raspy voice.
> “It never pays to be a meanie pants,” the pink suited ranger said in a bubbly voice.
>At this point, you just tuned them out as you were wondering what was going on with your life.
>This kinda stuff shouldn't happen to you.
>You wondered if you pissed off some god, goddess or deity in a past life.
>It would certainly explain what the fuck is going on in your life right now.
> “Cause we're the POWER RANGERS!!” the group of spandexed girl yelled, posing as an explosion went off behind them.
>...... How?
>You saw Super-Woman fly towards them while clapping slowly.
> “That was great girls. Perfect execution with your speech and poses. Unfortunately you're not needed for this,” Super-Woman said evenly, landing on the ground.
> “Oh come on. We've haven't had any action for a while now. Can't you let us take care of this for once?” the black ranger asked, pointing at you.
>You felt somewhat offended as Batwoman walked towards the colorful group, pulling out a few papers from her belt?
>Not what you were expecting, but you stood there.
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>>30108828
>To see where this goes of course.
> “In our contract, it clearly states that all criminal activity falls into the superhero category. Unless he's in league with your nemesis, Empress Starlight, then you can fight him,” Batwoman said, putting the contract away….somewhere.
>Where does she keep everything and how?
> “Well you butted into our battle last Thursday so we should have this,” the red ranger said, hands on her shapely hips.
>Why did these rangers and heroes have great asses?
>She sounded familiar to you, but it was hard to tell from here.
>The other rangers were nodding to their leader(?) as they pulled out weapons from nowhere.
>Did they just pull weapons out of their shapely asses?
>Why are you thinking this?
> “Your battle destroyed a few buildings,” Raven said, appearing from the shadows.
> “We had it covered, darling. If you just gave us a little more time, we could have defeated that ruffian,” the white ranger said, looking away from the older heroes.
> “Just like you were made into a giant pizza,” Super-Woman said, grinning at the younger heroes.
>That seemed to be the last straw as the black and yellow rangers tackled Batwoman.
>Raven tried to use her magic to help her comrade, but had to dodge a sword and dagger.
>Suddenly a pink pterodactyl appeared and started to fight lasers at the other heroes.
>An explosion went off as a Batwoman held a hand to her ear and said something you couldn’t hear.
>The next moment a knock off Godzilla rose from the waters as a giant green fist hit it.
>Soon more heroes flew in and started to fight giant robot dinosaurs that appeared out of nowhere.
“I’m not sure what’s even going on,” you said, slowly backing away from the battle.
>You really wanted to forget what happened today.


That's it. Now make fun of it or something
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>>30108834
They're like one huge, loving and dysfunctional family.
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>>30108834
>Turn out Anon has a chaos aura that activates when he's under extreme duress
>That's why all those heroes had to intervene to catch him
>Everyone tries to keep him relaxed and happy so things don't get fucked
>They can't even put him in jail, because it might rain chocolate milk or something

Anyways, it was a fun read trepps.
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>>30109030
>Turn out Anon has a chaos aura that activates when he's under extreme duress
>That's why all those heroes had to intervene to catch him
>Everyone tries to keep him relaxed and happy so things don't get fucked

>The Humane 7, Principal and Vice Principal constantly being around him inadvertently causes him to be even more distressed.
>Has to brush off their failed attempts at making friends.
>Harassed for getting attention from the popular girls and principals.
>Cue Mob Psycho 100 scenarios?
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>>30108993
Saw that after i posted it in pastebib

>>30109030
Thanks

>>30109030
>>30109083
Was thinking of doing something likethis for a new green i thought of
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>>30109149
Anon Psycho 100?
Guess it could be interesting. The Body Improvement Club fits well with the /fit/ Anon stories.
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>>30109174
Never saw mob psycho 100. Is it good?

But I'm thinking about doing a new green soon since Infamous Anon is dead
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>>30109185
It is fucking terrific, imagine if Saitama was psychic and wasn't used to his powers yet, then pair him with a lovable con-man that is so insanely helpful by accident it could legitimately be considered a super power. Still sad about Infamous Anon being dead.
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>>30109185
Well, depends on your taste in anime. The show explores contemporary art and animation that can be very offputting to people who like the traditional anime artstyle. Many of the show's humor is based in absurdism and strangeness. The focus of the show is definitely the characters and their relationships. It provides commentary on what it means to be "unique" in a modern day setting.
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>>30109200
I saw a few clips and liked them.

>>30109194
Thanks. Yeah sadly I've been planning the ending of Infamous Anon but i can't write it. Gonna try a new idea for a green
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>>30109219
Sounds good. IMO your best story right now is Therapist Anon and I would like to see where it goes.
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>>30110101
Thanks and Therapist Anon isn't gonna go anywhere bad. I want to try my hand at a My hero acedamia like idea
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>>30098889
Somebody say "HIPS"?

>>30103930
Oh, I'm alive. Busy with real life, but alive. And it's almost done. It really is. I mean, I'd post more and talk, but what's the point if people are gonna yell at me about how I'm not posting green?

So when it's done, it's done, and you'll receive it all in a massive, stinky dump. I'm, not dead. I'm alive, I'm here, and I lurk.

>pic related
I rewrote the scene that describes Spider-Shim herself. I tried not to cap the massive segment on hips, though. It was a bit...much.
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>>30110416
Hello beans. So nice to see signs of life from the gang.
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So how are you lads enjoying Injustice 2?
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>>30110672
I could say the same, based drawfriend. You're a god.

>>30110690
Looks fun as fuck. I haven't played a video game in several years though, but I'm serious;y considering buying it along with that new Friday the 13th Game thats coming out
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>>30110768
Gotta play injustice 1 to understand 2
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>>30110779
I'm aware. Gonna have to buy the other one.
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>>30110816
No need, just watch this
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=G2hBMRob5_M&vidve=5727&autoplay=1
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>>30098673
Beans' story will come out the same time as Half Life 3 and Prey 2.
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>>30111070
SHOTS FIRED! Critical hit is now logged.
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>>30111070
>>30111272
Hey, it's hard to write green when you also do voice work for Hasbro.
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>>30111326
Fake and gay
-ign
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>>30111406
Nope. Hasbro is making a Micronauts cartoon.

The main character is a kid, Cameron Ruck. Script dates back from 12-15-16, or at least the draft they gave me does. It's silly.

I don't think they'll be hiring me for anything major, but baby steps.

The writing is kinda "eh" as you can tell
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>>30111455
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>>30111467
Kek
I don't get it.
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>>30111488
Beans waifus Twiggles.
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>>30111488
Twi is Beans' waifu.
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>>30111494
>>30111496
Dat hivemind.
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>>30111070
>>30111496
>>30111494
The pain stops when I get my green beans
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bump
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>>30110768
Well it's good to hear from you.
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>>30111537
>beans
>green
he's imageposting his stuff now to make it harder to give line by line criticism
if I had part of his ego, wow
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>>30113148
>ego
What ever do you mean?
He is but a humble actor who feels the need to tell us every detail about his life, career, and symbolism in his stories
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>>30101880
>but the crunching sound metal makes
flip metal and sound around,
>>30101886
>draw your gun might have been
drawing*
>She aims at you with the and
rod*?
>>30101891
....Didn't Trixie already get her ass kicked and the bullshit artifact she looted taken away?
>>30101897
Well, she pulled off arrogant first contact Loki style pretty damn well. It was like looking at Rule...was it 64 or 63? Ah well, at the very least she doesn't have a single subtle bone in her body.
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>>30102949
Wouldn't it be Vinyl's harem ending with Anon being the only dude?
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>>30114008
regular harem means all loving one person
True Harem means everyone loves the one another
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>>30098673
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>>30114173
Ah, did not know that. Still sounds like a comfy sex pile.
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>>30114623
A pile like that would always be comfy
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>>30115353
Probably sticky though...unless cat Limestone gives everyone a tongue bath.
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*blocks your path*
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>>30115390
FUUUUUUUUUUUUUCK YOOOOOOOOOOOOOU GOOOOOOOOOOOD!
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>>30115390
Something something refrigerator plug.
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>>30106008
>“You’re not subtle, you know?”
know that*
also unf to that description.
>>30106016
Bring her in on that date with the bed sheets.
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>>30107068
>Placing one hand one after the
redundant one*
>>30107074
Animu Sunset Spider Woman was not a thing I knew I wanted, good work.
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>>30115388
Thanks for reminding me to jave her reveal soon
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>>30098673
Do you think she has a web shooter no matter what she wears?
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>>30108819
>“Have to thank Sunset for talking into those classes,”
talking me*
>“Not how do get to Canterlot High from here?”
Now*, do I*.
>These character discriptions
Hmmmm, I have no idea who these people are, well the person their impersonating anyways. I know the supers.
>>30108828
Oooo, old school power rangers, classy.
>You wondered if you pissed off some god, goddess or deity in a past life.
Well...there are actual physical gods in a super verse, doubly so if Marvel AND DC are involved. Actually that brings to my attention a important question, does Zordon count as a space wizard god?
>>30108834
>started to fight lasers at the other heroes.
shoot lasers, unless your megazord somehow grew arms with the wings, and started punching lasers.
But this craziness, I need moar.
>>30109030
>>30109083
>>30109149
Hype.
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>>30115404
>>30115431
But first, you're gonna have to catch me, Flash
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>>30115444
>Bring her in on that date with the bed sheets.
Ayyyyyy

Also, nice trips.
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>>30115542
I DONT HAVE FUCKING AIM, YOU BETTER RUN BITCH! I PUNCH OUT NUCLEAR WARHEADS!
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>>30115556
Trips confirm that Anon is going to get the spider-horse girl puss.
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>>30115540
I was trying to make Celestia into Super-Woman, Luna Batwoman, Cadance Starfire and Twilight Velvet into Raven.
I figured the old school rangers were the best option since i remember them the most.
I know but Anon is a normal guy who doesn't become a super or ranger. AT ALL.
I would be lying if i said i didn’t imagine that when I was writing.

Yes. I'm working on a new green. I just need to pick a power for Anon
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>>30115597
Need the randomizer or do you have something in mind already?
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>>30115647
I'm using the randomizer but i seem to just get useless stuff or crazy op stuff. I do have a few ideas but I'm playing with them to see how it'll work before i write anything
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>>30115667
You could try for a theme build or something then? What about having him be the....final character of a Darksouls 3 playthrough+dlc, could be pretty cool, and its not like there isn't plenty of reference material about it on youtube. Anon would be a stepdown from galactus but above damn near everything else, in terms of power.
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>>30115758
I played the game and know about the stuff, but you raise a good point on the theme thing. When you say it you mean something like Ice powers or something along those lines?
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>>30115978
Sure, that works. Anon could be an ice guy, maybe the punisher, he could be some mythical creature in human flesh, he could even just have cock magic. Give me an idea of what kind of story theme you want to do, and I can get at least 15 options for you to work with.
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>>30116016
And by story theme I mean the general genre of sup thing you want to do, not Anon's theme power...yet.
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>>30116016
Ok. So the idea is that Anon goes to a school like in Xmen and My hero acedamia, but he doesn't want to go. He only went so he wouldn't get his family in trouble.

Working on the idea
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>>30116062
Well, do you want him to warm up to the idea of it, or do you want him to try to avoid it, or at least only finish the mandatory parts of the school? Because if this is the one where you planned on having Anon be powerless will have an effect on what my power recommendations would be...which would be none at that point. Although looking at your idea...I can look for a few things that could work for that, just one question, why would his family be in trouble, did he do something wrong on purpose or gets found out an drafted to the job, or bad people that need an ear on the inside?
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>>30116079
The idea I had was that Anon doesn't like Super powered heroes and students even though he is one. He learned how to control his power and stay off the radar until one day, a couple of students fighting. Basically there's a law saying anyone with powers has to go to school.

Like I said, I'm working on an idea sinse this is a draft idea
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>>30116120
Hmm, so something powerful enough to be counted in the rules and can stop bullies being dumb, but low key enough to learn quickly, or at least subtly enough to get away with it for awhile. let me finish up the last few paragraphs of a story Am reading an I will have the 15 options for you in about 30 minuets. I wont ask any more questions for fear of spoiler territory, be back in a bit.
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>>30116141
Thanks
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>>30116425
No problem, I'll make sure you get a mixed bag of powers, speaking of, do you want the page links too?
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>>30116450
Sure.
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>>30116461
Will do.
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>>30116461
Wikipidia is being a computer breaking piece of shit, and just deleted the list I made, will be back in a bit longer...if it doesn't crash again.
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>>30116691
Still thanks
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>>30098673
>You will never cuddle with Sunset during a rainy day.
Do you think Sunny love cuddles after her web-slinging shenanigans?
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Remade power list:
1: http://powerlisting.wikia.com/wiki/Accelerated_Body_Development
2: http://powerlisting.wikia.com/wiki/Limiter_Removal
3: http://powerlisting.wikia.com/wiki/Disease_Mimicry
4: http://powerlisting.wikia.com/wiki/Regenerative_Healing_Factor
5: http://powerlisting.wikia.com/wiki/Dermal_Armor
6: http://powerlisting.wikia.com/wiki/Bone_Manipulation
7: http://powerlisting.wikia.com/wiki/Demon_Physiology
8: http://powerlisting.wikia.com/wiki/Electricity_Manipulation
9: http://powerlisting.wikia.com/wiki/Darkness_Embodiment
10: http://powerlisting.wikia.com/wiki/Light_Embodiment
11: http://powerlisting.wikia.com/wiki/Ninjutsu
12: http://powerlisting.wikia.com/wiki/Elemental_Combat
13: http://powerlisting.wikia.com/wiki/One-Man_Army
14: http://powerlisting.wikia.com/wiki/Hypercompetence
15: http://powerlisting.wikia.com/wiki/Dragon_Physiology
All right, I can keep going and drag out more if you need them. Picked as many that could be reasonably hidden while powerful, ones with links to how powerful you could want the ability, or a ultra power that could easily be hidden...and maybe another test tube baby Anon.
>>30117005
Its cool, seems like it stabilized. It doesn't crash the other pages now, just exits the wiki completely like I was never there...not sure why as of yet.
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>>30117104
Think I should pick out a few more?
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>>30117654
Add in http://powerlisting.wikia.com/wiki/Enhanced_Combat, and I'd say that you've got a decent spread.
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>>30117104
A good list. Thanks

Gonna eead about them before i make my choice
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>>30117104
Well I'm gonna start on the first part and see where I go from there.
Will pick a power later once I get going
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>>30118813
Hype!
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>>30118840
And I'm working on therapist Anon as well
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>>30118947
Nice. I can't wait.
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>>30117063
Of course she does. She needs something to unwind with
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>>30118813
Looking forward to it.
>>30118947
Sweet.
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>>30117063
>>30119509
Do you think she keeps her suit on a bit when she gets home or takes it off right away?
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>>30120035
Depends on how stressful of a time she had. Sometimes it was slow and she's too lazy to take it off, sometimes she does but will need some help
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>>30120043
Does she wear anything under the suit?
Either way I want to cuddle her non-sexually so she can relax.
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>>30120064
I say that's dealers choice, but i see her not wearing anything underneath the suit. Makes it better for her to just unzip it to air it out then cuddle Anon
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>>30120079
>You will never cuddle with her sweaty body after she takes off her spider suit.
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>>30120107
Or she could want you to give her a bath and clean her
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>>30120107
>You will never snuggle up her.
>You will never move your hands to her butt while cuddling just to hold it.
>She will never giggle and say.
>"Woah there, tiger."
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>>30120187
>You will never wash her hair and smell her raspberry shampoo.
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>>30117690
Just found this and it reminded me of that super sad Anon super short.
http://powerlisting.wikia.com/wiki/Apocalyptic_Force_Manipulation
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>>30117104
I am pissed it took me this long to find this.
http://powerlisting.wikia.com/wiki/Incubus_Physiology
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>>30120221
You’re right. That would fit that sad Anon idea

>>30120272
I'll take this into consideration with the list you gave me. Thanks again
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>>30120367
How do you plan on picking, rolling dice?
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>>30120452
Well I'm writing the first part now and it's mostly an introduction to Anon.

Anyways I'm playing around eith the ideas in my head at the moment. Trying to see how and what will happen with each power while taking notes on them. I'll say i shortened the list to about 4 or 5 powers to pick from
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>>30120482
Sweet, any of the 5 going to be comboed together? Looking forward to what you pic anyways...I'm tempted to see which ones but I also want to see it in green beforehand.
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>>30120499
The only ones to be combined would be the armor and healing cause it would remind me of Greed from FMA.

I did think about giving Healing Anon an edge if i pick him though and maybe a small secondary power for some
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>>30120516
Greed was badass, damn shame what happened to him in the end. He was my favorite Homunculus. And yeah, healing factor would need a little extra, I only put it in on its own because Anon could get really injured or something by the bully. Having regen and the body building power would have been a pretty simple combo...he would just have to wear thick clothes to hide his gains. But a Greed style Anon would also be pretty cool, especially if he knew Kung Fu.
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>>30120549
Agreed with everything you said. My idea for healing Anon was that he gets a weapon. And no he wouldn't be a Deadpool clone, i would just gove him a weapon cause healing factor vs optic beams/element control/etc really doesn't seem fair to me
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>>30098673
>You will never have a picnic on top of a building with Sunset when the sun goes down.
>You will never say something cheesy like.
"That's the second most beautiful sunset I have seen."
>"Flattery will get you only so far tiger."
"Well, I am up on skyscrapper with you so something must be working."
>"Touché."
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>>30120574
Just had a thought of Anon losing an arm, growing it back then using the old arm as a weapon
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>>30120853
That would be pretty freaky, but if he is going against a bully it would need to be pretty bad if he has to do that. Regen and One Man Army would make that severed arm a deadly weapon.
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>>30120904
Still would be fun to see
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>>30121408
True that, I just got the idea of Anon being treated like Mr. Potato Head, and getting blasted apart each week.
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>>30121480
And Pinkie steals a body part or two. Sunset obviously stops her from getting his head though
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>>30121724
kek, now I just want Anon to have portal powers on top of that. Pinkie and Anon could have fun literally anywhere.
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>>30121758
What kind of fun?
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>>30122168
Anon and Pinkie have public portal sex without anyone noticing, when Pinkie feels like it Anon can put a portal to her pussy, and Pinkie and can rub it in her. Anywhere. Any time. May the shenanigans begin. And Anon has Incubus powers too for shits and giggles.
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>>30098673
Sunny in choker is probably one of the best things.
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>>30122201
Now you gave me the mental image of Anon fighting like Gargos from Killer instinct
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>>30122652
Hmm, that would be neat. Want me to find the portal power wiki page? I still have the power wiki up. And portals a hole in front of the bullies fist and just beats the shit out of himself, and for shits and even more giggles he can shoot lasers out of the portals.
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>>30122666
Sure, this could help me pick the final idea
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>>30122679
Looking for it now then.
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>>30122737
>>30122679
Got it mang.
http://powerlisting.wikia.com/wiki/Portal_Creation
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>>30122767
Thanks. Now I need to sleep then i'll continue writing once I wake up and choose what Anon gets
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>>30122786
Looking forward to it.
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So I just got a commission slot. Anyone got a suggestion for what I should have the artist draw?
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Who else has been here since the beginning?
Who ever though these threads would last so long?
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>>30122856
Hmmm, what about a pic of the scene in therapist Anon with Anon, Vinyl, and Octi hiding out in the changing room.
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>>30122874
Ehh, not really a fan of therapist Anon. Not that I think it's shit or anything, it's just not to my taste. Still, it's an idea, so I'll keep it in mind. Though, I might not be able to get that in particular, as there is no real agreed upon number of characters.
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>>30122968
Who's drawing it?

How about just someone as a villain or hero?
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>>30123704
>Who's drawing it?
FantasyBlade.
>How about just someone as a villain or hero?
I might just do that; I'll wait for them to get back to me about a character limit before I make a final decision.
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>>30123740
*cough* Trixie *cough*
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>>30124027
hmm, maybe Trixie and Sunset? Oh! Even better, Trixie /on/ Sunset
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>>30124032
I was more thinking of.... >>30101876
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Just got a response. Looks like it could be a colored commission for one character, or uncolored for three.
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>>30124116
Go for color
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>>30124175
Will do.

Would you guys be okay with Sunset stripping out of a costume?
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>>30124188
>are you okay with sunset stripping?
Where do you think you are?
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>>30124188
Sure but tell me what you mean.
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>>30124211
I mean some tasteful lewd of Sunset stripping out of her costume after a long day of fighting crime. Or maybe someone else's?
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>>30124221
Sounds good. Which suit would she wear though?
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>>30124228
That's the only question that I have. I'm leaning more towards Spider-Gwen's, but I'm open to suggestions.
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>>30124242
Spider-Gwen's outfit and the black and red one might be the best. In my opinion anyways.
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>>30124245
>>30124242
as long as its tight and hugs her just right, I doubt it matters which version she is wearing.
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>>30124245
>>30124253
So Spider-Gwen's it is.
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>>30124274
This is a nice thing to wake up to.
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>>30124441
It's always nice to imagine Sunset in a tight suit
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>Sunset is now Mane-iac.
Well guys... What now?
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>>30124942
"Sunset, don't you think you should... star Spider-Woman in that play, not as... your arch nemesis?"
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>>30124960
No one can think your Spider-Woman when you play as a villain.
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>>30125086
Kek.
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>>30125086
Sunset playing the long con
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>>30125086
>Mane-iac crashes the movie set and take everyone hostage, except Sunset because "This one nailed my character in the play."
>Sunset walks out to 'freedom' then a couple minutes later Spider-Woman shows up.
>Works every time.
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>>30124942
Where is this from?
>>30125086
Clever girl.
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>>30126094
EQG special. It's only in Poland for now but it should be in Burgerland sometime during the summer on Netflix.
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>>30126240
Hope it gets here soon
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Quick question. What should I call people with powers? a non offensive term
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>>30126966
...Capes? Supers? Metas? Plenty of options. Also checked.
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>>30127012
Thanks. Didn't want to use mutants cause it sounded insulting
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>>30127045
It is an accurate term though, so unless mutants/supers aren't that uncommon then mutants would still be more appropriate, at least outside the school. Inside the school it could be whatever.
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>>30126240
>Burgerland
wait what?
>pic related
...
oh it's an "r"
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>>30124942
Spoiler stuff like that dipshit
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>>30127303
>Implying that anyone knows what spoilers are actually for.
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>>30127386
for semi-banwothy lewd
and snapes killing dumbledors
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>>30125086
>>30125375
Sunset is playing 4D chess.
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>>30124942
I just noticed that her mane-iac hair has the squiggle.
HHHNNNGG
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>>30126966
The term will only be offensive if it is in universe. For all we care, if you write it as being such, calling somebody a "filthy mutant" will be positive.
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>>30127045
Superhuman
Mutant
Paranormal
Evo (Evoluted)
Charged
Morphed
Boosted
Enhanced
Amplified


anything can be an insult
>pic related
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>>30128101
....I don't know whether or not to be impressed by the quality of the insult, or disappointed in the school system in general.
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>>30128101
>>30127991
I get it
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>>30128101
>Hanzo Main
What the fuck is this, my autistic English class?
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>>30128101
I got a good elementary story for you if you want me to greentext it.
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>>30128892
don't be a beans and make us beg for green
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>>30128892
>>30128941
>>30128892
>>30128941
>13 years ago.
>Be in first grade.
>Be a cripplefag not tard level, but have Cerebral Palsy that affects only half of my body. Basically one half of my body is normal the other is partially paralyzed.
>A kid was giving me a pencil and I grabbed it with my shitty hand because I was drawing or some shit with my good one.
>I don't know how it happened but somehow the way I grabbed it caused the head of the pencil to poked the kid hard enough to cause him to bleed.
>The kid is screaming because of the blood.
>Our teacher wasn't there instead a old haggy woman was our sub.
>She grabbed me by my bad arm and dragged me to the principal's office. I tried to explain to her that I really didn't mean to hurt the kid it was an accident. I asked to please let go of my bad arm and use my other one at least. She didn't.
>She kept calling me a delinquent and I will be trouble.
>By the time I got to the office my face was red from crying.
>The receptionist is my mom's friend so she was worried why I was there.
>The old hag told her "This punk was trying to maliciously murder another student." (Exact words)
>She finally let my arm go and went out.
>I was a blubbering mess at this point because of this.
>I told the receptionist what happened.
>She said "It was a complete misunderstanding and said nothing bad will happen to you hon."
>She gave me a hug. She had some big tiddies by the way.
>Then the principal came and didn't even give me a chance to defend myself then suspended me.
>That moment is when my mom came in and asked the staff.
>"Are you all fucking retarded?! You all know my son doesn't have full control of his body and you let some old bitch drag him yanking his bad arm across the school then you're suspending him over an accident?"
>I forgot what else she said but, I have never seen my mom that mad before.
>My suspension was canceled but she let me stay home for three days.
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>>30129127
>My mom then got me Metroid Prime, took me to the fancy ice cream place in town and made me dinosaur chicken nuggets. when I went back after the weekend I found out the old hag was fired.
10/10 would get dragged by an old lady again.
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>>30129127
>>30129169
What I will never understand is why schools value cunty subs that are only there for a paycheck over basic student records.
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>>30129127
>old bitch drag him yanking his bad
redundancy detected.
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>>30129240
I got one of the best vidya experiences and ice cream out of it. So it was worth it.
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>>30129247
>arm.
Thanks based grammar anon.
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>>30129276
Neat, been there before, bit different. Shit still sucks though.
>>30129292
Its what I do.
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>>30129344
Yeah but, it's been 13 years so what's done is done.
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>>30129127
It's a nice green, but the question is: why here? It doesn't have anything to do with the thread's topic.
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>>30129514
Well I asked
>>30128892
And I got the green light.
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bump
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>>30130705
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How would you go about a Flash themed story with time travel shenanigans?
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>>30132227
By not having Flash.
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>>30132227
>Anon with time traveling powers.
>Sunset doesn't believe him.
>Anon first tells the events that are going happen during the day.
>Sunset think it's a lucky guess.
>He does the same with the week and month.
>Sunset still doesn't believe him.
>Anon shows her footage of the Kennedy assassination but the camera zoomed in the crowd showing our loveable emerald jackass carrying an umbrella.
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>>30132231
Something something timeline fucking.
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>>30132294
Ooooh, that could be cool, Anon as the thin man of Marvel, just always there, observing as the time guardian of the world.
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>>30132349
I have literally no idea what this is supposed to mean in response to my comment. What? If you want to do timeline shenanigans then do something like this with Anon>>30132294
>>30132351
if your still into Flash then don't bother with it, does this help you? If you need more help I can go an look up timepowers or something while I'm at it.
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>>30132294
>the camera zoomed in the crowd showing our loveable emerald jackass carrying an umbrella.
D E E P E S T
L O R E
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>You’re Headmistress Celestia de Sol and today started off great.
>The weather was sunny with a few clouds and a gentle breeze.
>There were no interruptions in any classes.
>Best of all, none of your students caused any property damage to the school.
>It seemed like it was gonna be a peaceful day for once.
>Unfortunately you weren’t able to enjoy today once the city police called.
>Whenever they called it usual meant they needed some help with a villain or a couple of your students caused some trouble.
>Mostly it’s the later than the former.
>Officer Shield told you that three of your students were currently in their cells and waiting to be released.
>That was why you were currently reassuring the officer that you'll handle the punishment for your students.
> “See to it that they understand the consequences of starting a fight in the middle of the road, Miss De Sol,” Officer Shield said venomously while handing you a few forms.
“I'll see to that,” you said tiredly, looking at the first form over briefly.
>This isn’t the first time you had to do this and it certainly won't be the last.
> “You better. The department is getting very tired of breaking up these fights,” Shield said, crossing his arms while leaning back into his chair.
>You decided to just sign the forms and get out of there.
“What happened?” you asked, wanting to know how much this'll bite you in the ass.
>The officer taps a few keys on his computer to bring up the incident report.
> “From what we gathered, two of your female students, a miss Lulamoon and miss Shimmer, started a fight near a gas station. Those girls seemed to just jump all over the place, dodging each other's attack till they got to the intersection,” the officer said rudely, clicking his mouse a few times.
>Flipping a few pages, you saw the mug shots of two familiar students and couldn't stop yourself from sighing.
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>>30132445
>It was Sunset Shimmer and Trixie Lulamoon looking a bit roughed up in the photos.
>No doubt they tried going all out against each other.
> “And then there's the boy,” Shield said, taking his hat off.
“A boy?” you asked confused as you flipped to the next page.
> “Yes, the boy. We have his file right there and it needs to be updated,” Shield said offhandedly.
>He turned his monitor to show you the image of a young man with all his background.
>From what you can tell, his name’s Anon Yates Mous and about the same age as Miss Lulamoon and Miss Shimmer.
> “We have eyewitnesses saying that he did some strange things when one of Lulamoon’s fireballs was sent his way. No one know what happened but the fire just vanished,” Shield said confused, shrugging his shoulders.
“He made the fireball vanished?” you asked, not entirely believing it.
> “We questioned the witnesses and they said the exact same thing. The only problem was that all of the witnesses didn’t get a good as he had his back facing them and by a sign,” Shield said, pushing a few keys. “After that we looked at all the security footage and couldn’t see what he did, but we noticed nothing happened.”
>Nothing happened?
>That didn’t make any sense.
>Seeing the confused look, the old officer said, “When i said nothing happened, we watched the surveillance cameras to see if we could piece together what we were told. The feed showed us Miss Lulamoon’s fireballs would explode on contact when it touched anything. The fireball heading towards the boy didn’t do anything. No explosion, no fire, no nothing. The sign looked like nothing even touched it in weeks. We took these images from the security cameras.”
>He turns his monitor to show you a few images.
>You could see Trixie shooting a fireball in one image while the next one showed scorch marks on the ground.
>Nothing unusual, but the last few images were the ones you were looking at with interest.
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>>30132455
>The first one was of the boy standing near a sign with a fireball a few feet away from him.
>The next image showed the fireball was just about to hit Anon.
>The last one had Anon just standing there with the fireball nowhere to be seen.
“So he’s like my students?” you asked, connecting the dots.
> “It’s the only thing we can think of, but the boy is proving to be uncooperative,” Shield said, standing up and motioning you to do the same.
“Is he demanding to be let go or yelling out threats?” you asked, wondering which happened.
> “He hasn’t said anything important. We threatened to have him dragged to court, locked in a cell and a few other things, but he hasn’t said anything besides wanting his phone call. Unfortunately we can’t release him just yet,” Shield said, leading you out the room and down the hall.
>You stop and look at him with a sad look which he returns.
> “You know I don’t like to do this, but I have to uphold the law,” Shield said tiredly.
>The law he was talking about made it were any mutant had to go to any school to help them control their powers.
>It was an unnecessary law, but you understood it was somewhat needed so the kids don’t lose control and blow up a park or something similar.
>He brought you to the cells holding two of your students.
>They were just laying down on the flimsy cots as Miss Lulamoon complained about their current situation.
> “Why did you have to move, Shimmer,” Trixie said angrily.
>Miss Shimmer didn’t move as she was trying to get comfortable by your guess.
> “Maybe I didn’t want to get hit by your fireballs? It’s common sense to move out of the way when something is coming towards you,” Miss Shimmer said as she yawned.
> “I can’t believe we’re stuck in here till the headmistress gets here,” Miss Lulamoon said, shoving a pillow over her head. She instantly threw it away and said, “Oh the smell!!”
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>>30132471
“You won’t have to wait any longer girls. I’m here,” you said causing your students to look at you.
>Officer Shield opened their cells, releasing them into your custody.
> “Thanks Headmistress Celestia,” Sunset said gratefully, walking out of her cell.
> “I can’t thank you enough. I’m sure this will teach me a valuable lesson so there shouldn’t be any punishment, right?” Trixie asked, smiling hopefully at you.
“I believe we’ll have to discuss this in the morning girls,” you said evenly, looking the younger girl in the eyes.
>Both girls flinched but nodded and said, “Yes Headmistress.”
> “Now both of you head back before it’s curfew. I’m letting my sister know to expect you and she’ll know if you’re late,” you said tiredly causing the girls to pale slightly.
>The girls said their own goodbyes and ran out of the station, almost knocking a passing by deputy on their way out.
> “One of these days those kids will learn not use their powers as if it’s going out of style,” the old officer said grumpy at your student’s disrespect.
>You couldn’t help it and started to giggle at that.
>Turning back to you, the officer said, “Now with that taken care of, you’re free to go.”
“Actually there’s one more thing,” you said as he started to walk away.
>He stops and looks at you curiously.
“I want to talk to Mr Mous,” you said simply.
> “Celestia, I know what you’re trying to do and I can’t let you,” Shield said, pocketing his keys.
“Just five minutes. That’s all I need and no one will have to know,” you said, a bit to sweetly.
>Shield groaned while rubbing his head, but motioned for you to follow him.
> “You really want to talk to him? I told you he wasn’t saying anything,” Shield said, stopping at the interrogation room door.
“I’m sure I can get him to talk,” you said, grinning at the thought of how easy this could be.
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>>30132491
>Taking his keys, the old officer unlocked the door and glanced at you.
> “....Good luck. That’s all I can say,” Shield said, opening the door and letting you inside the room.
>Once you were inside, the officer closed the door behind you while you looked at the only other person in the room.
>Sitting at a small table was the boy that Shield briefly told you about.
>He had his head down and his eyes closed.
“Mr Mous?” you asked, not moving from your spot.
>He opened his eyes to look at you while moving his head off the table.
>Taking a good look at Anon, you gotta say he’s pretty handsome.
“Am I gonna get my phone call now?” he asked, trying to rub the sleep out of his eyes.
>You clear your throat and take a moment to compose yourself.
“Mr Mous, I’m Celestia De Sol, headmistress, and I would like to offer you a place at my school,” you said, offering him a friendly smile.

New beginning for an Anon in super school. Hope this part is good
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>>30132505
Awesome I'll read it once I have time.

>>30132370
Sorry, it's a shitpost in the TV Flash fandom. I'll try to keep that shit on the low from now on.
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>>30132532
I think there is a bit misunderstanding here. When you said Flash people thought of Flash Sentry not the DC character.
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>>30132569
this
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>>30132532
What this guy said>>30132569
DC Flash is totally cool, Flash Sentry is shit and undeserving of a story.
>>30132505
The captcha is being screwy so don't worry if I don't spell check it, looking forward to what you do with Anon next.
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>>30132455
>didn’t get a good as
good look*
>>30132505
Only one little sentence error and the rest are perfectly fine. In any case, I am now very curious as to what power you used for Anon. Can I get a hint as to whether or not it was from my list? I want to try and figure it out before your next update.
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>>30132455
Hmmm, now how did he do it?
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>>30132728
Thanks and i did chose from the list. If you look real carefully at the last few lines, you might guess what i picked.

>>30133738
I'll be explaining that sooner or later
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>>30134144
Incubbus.
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>>30134226
And one other power as well
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>>30134528
It's portals, I'm calling it now.
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>>30134549
Yes it is
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Green of super villain Sunset when.
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>>30134753
dude, we had a movie about it
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>>30134947
I wouldn't exactly call a highschool bully a super villain; besides a villian Sunset would make a nice change of pace from her having to be Spiderwoman.
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I'm writing on like 5 different scenes right now and am stuck at all of them because I messed up again

I'll have to redact Trixies entrance only to put it in a little later in the timeline.
I have to plan my story out better. While I know what should happen approximately I still mess up.

Another reason why there were barely updates this week is because I'm a lazy fuck as well and rather read than wrote
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>>30134979
Kinda what i'm gonna do in the new green
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>>30135707
>Sunset finally not Spiderwoman, and maybe not a hero at all.
Treps you're a trendsetter and a saint, please keep it up.
I'd still like to see a green with a normal Sunset for once.
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>>30135958
Sorry but if you read my new green then you can guess Sunset has powers. Also thanks
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>>30135958
Sunset wasn't Spider-Woman in Purpleanon
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>>30136049
You ever gonna return to that?
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>>30136000
Don't worry about it man, it's something I'd like to see but I'm not going to get all bent out of shape if it isn't the case.
>>30136049
I don't see a paste for that and I can barely remember it.
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>>30136066
I'm playing with the idea, but making it utterly different.
But I'm playing with 2 other superhero story ideas as well, and 2 for other threads
my story in this thread also gets not many (You)'s so I'm not entirely loyal at the moment either

>>30136081
>I don't see a paste for that and I can barely remember it.
it ded and will certainly not return in this fashion
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>>30136108
I hear you.

What you think of the new green I posted?
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>>30136123
have yet to read it, but I guess I have the time now. Gimme a sec.
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>>30136108
>my story in this thread also gets not many (You)'s
I'm not a writer but I'd take that as a good thing. In general people only tend to speak up when there's an issue, more often that not you'll hear someone complaining when something goes wrong rather than talking about positive things; take driving tests for example people mention that bad rather than the good.

I can't speak for the rest of the thread but I only tend to comment if there's something that's an issue to me or if I can point out where it could be better. I also think posting for the sake of posting is a waste, just posting something like "I like this" feels hollow and disingenuous.

Finally, and this could be seen as being petty and may not actually apply to this thread but I tend to flat out ignore writers who come off with a holier than thou attitude. If a writer rocks up thinking we should be worshipping the ground they walk on, thinking they're doing us a favour by writing and just flat out demanding attention chances are I won't provide any feedback, constructive or otherwise.
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>>30136210
yes, I know what you mean, but I also cannot help but feel ignored
I'm only human, I also need motivation to bump out content. I'd certainly be uncomfortable with being worshiped, and writing bad smut gets you a lot more attention than putting effort into your work. There is a huge difference in effort/reward ratio.
I want to write, but I can also use my time doing other stuff. I'm not asking to be worshiped, but some acknowledgement for my existence would be nice, you know?
So... yes, I do want some extent of attention, but you guys also want the story, right?
I totally understand the hollowness of "I like this" but there are "keep going", "eager to see what's next", or speculate about what's next, or if you're one of the nitpickers then say you haven't found anything to nitpick, I dunno.

I understand you but I hope you also understand me here
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I love this thread.
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>>30136656
Me too.
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>>30136123
you almost manage to stick to past tense, but still slip into present sometimes

>>30132455
>“He made the fireball vanished?”
Well? Did he made the fireball vanished?

>>30132471
>“Is he demanding to be let go or yelling out threats?” you asked, wondering which happened.
Silly innocent bystanders, always demanding to be let go from unjust confinement or yelling out threats.
I guess you have a type of Mutant registration in effect?
...
never mind, it got answered a few lines down

>>30132491
>“I believe we’ll have to discuss this in the morning girls,”
I also want to discuss something inside a morning girl
You need a comma when addressing someone. It's a common mistake. also: "Yes, Headmistress."
Although you do it correctly when the person addressed is in front of the sentence.
>> “Celestia, I know what you’re trying to do and I can’t let you,” Shield said, pocketing his keys.

>>30132505
>“Mr Mous, I’m Celestia De Sol, headmistress, and I would like to offer you a place at my school,” you said, offering him a friendly smile.
I think you should add the name of the school and what it does here.

you blacktext Anon beginning in super school, but you hinted that he wouldn't like that, so that feels kinda weird.
well, you have 2 active stories again, congratz.
I'm not captured, but you only just begun
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>>30137055
Yeah. I'm working on that

If you read it then they don't know what he did yet

yeah

Thanks

Haven't thought of a school name yet but I will
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>>30134728
>>30134528
fuck yeah.
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>>30135196
...That's fair.
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>>30137076
Want a random super school name randomizer?
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>>30137460
sure
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>>30137464
Got it. There is a randomizer for everything.
http://www.fantasynamegenerators.com/school-names.php#.WSHznhUo7IU
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>>30137510
literally the first thing I got was
Sunset Charter School
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>>30137510
Eastwood University
Summit Institute
Diamond School for Girls
Foothill School
Ravenwood School for Boys
Eastview School of Fine Arts
Patriot College
Grapevine School for Girls
Enterprise High School
Panorama School for Boys
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>>30137510
I got Darwin Academy
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>>30137607
Kek, that is what I imagine Magnito naming his academy. DO IT!
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>>30137076
Celestia's Academy for Promising Empowered Students
CAPES
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>>30137642
Ooooh, that's a clever one.
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>>30137642
I second this.
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>>30137642
That's a good one. Might use it
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>>30137665
>>30137658
>>30137652
lulz

We're the Strategic Homeland Interferance, Enforcements and Logistics Division, what does that mean to you?
It means that someone really wanted our initials to spell out SHIELD.
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>>30137692
I'm just not good at naming things.

I guess so
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>>30134528
>>30134728
Does Anon know he is a incubus? And does he only have control over portals?
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>>30138673
He knows of his powers and learned how to keep in control of them. To a point
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>>30139098
I cant wait to see where you go with this. On another note, is there a Tonic update in the future?
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>>30139142
Just so you know, he's not gonna be the definition of patience. Tonic will be updated sooner or later.
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>>30139168
Neat, aside from Untitled we don't see many super Anon's do that. Looking forward too it, but if your still having trouble with what to do with the scenes for I can wait, for now. What are you going to update next?
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>>30107074
>As you near the tall, imposing entrance of the school, you notice the lack of students outside.
>That's a telltale sign that you're late.
>You recognize the remaining stranglers as delinquents of the student body.
>A few faces you are familiar with.
>Those are the same ones you aim to forget.
>Shoving the doors open, your legs sprint towards your first period class with Ms.Cheerilee.
>Though she's been pretty forgiving of your tardiness, her forgiving smile falters more and more every time it occurs.
>Out of the corner of your eye, you spot someone else running.
>You wonder who it could be?
>Your curiosity overpowers your desire for timeliness, and you steal a glance towards the figure.
>The first thing you notice is the silver hair, seemingly pure white.
>From a distance, it appeared to be perfect, flowing silk.
>Accompanied by a pair of lime green eyes, staring forward fearfully, yet retaining their determination.
>He's male with a slender build. Not exactly skinny, but also not Buff Biceps.
>His choice in wardrobe is a t-shirt and jeans, seemingly hastily slipped on.
>He seems to be maintaining a pace that matches yours, despite your super-agility.
>Strange. You don't recognize him as a member of the Track. Or seen him around the school in general.
>He bolts past you and makes a sharp right.
>Your heart sinks as you realize which teacher resides there.
>Mr.Sombra.
>Just the thought of his tall, intimidating figure and deep malicious voice is enough to send a chill down your spine.
>That could explain that dude's spooked expression.
>Poor guy.
>You silently give him your prayers as you head in the opposite direction towards Ms.Cheerilee's classroom.
>You scarf down the rest of your toast and burst into the classroom.es. Germaney's invasion of Prance in 1940 was a sign to the Allies that..."
>You tune her out in record time.
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>>30139241
>Ms. Cheerilee pauses in the middle of an explanation to direct a awkward smile at you.
>"Ah. Sunset. Why don't you take a seat."
>You silently nod and follow suite.
>A few snickers and mumbles are directed at you as you make your way over to a desk.
>Once she sees you finish getting situated, she begins her lesson again.
>"Now then. Where were we? Ah, yes. Germaney's invasion of Prance in 1940 was a sign to the Allies that..."
>You tune her out in record time.
>After failing to internalize Ms.Cheerilee's lesson, the ringing of the bell signals you to drag yourself to your next class.
>You feel distanced from your daily activities, on account of your lack of sleep.
>You attempt to give your best efforts to pay attention to your lessons.
>However, every time you make out a string of words coming out of your teachers' mouths, you space out.
>It would be in your best interests, since finals were just around the corner.
>One things's certain, and it's that Twilight wouldn't be happy to see your grades drop again.
>You can still remember her being absolutely devastated when you demonstrated the effects of your affairs as Spider-Woman on your scholarly grades.
>The situation hasn't gotten any better, with more and more villains popping up in Canterlot.
>You remember the simpler times.
>When it was just Doc Oct and Shocker.
>Simple villains that only needed a good beating and a few one-liners to keep in line.
>Then the Vulture showed up.
>Her crimes are usually vandalism and robbery.
>Honestly, it's more annoying than anything.
>And then Mysterio.
>Ugh, you're already getting a headache.
>And Black Cat.
>The name alone causes a pang of anger in you.
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>>30139249
>You're not even sure what to make of him.
>If you call him a villain, why did he help you?
>Does that make him a good person?
>No.
>Definitely not.
>He's violent and he's a thief.
>But, if what happened last night meant anything, then you know that he has the capability to be a hero.
>So why doesn't he?
>He doesn't exactly come off as the person who would easily give into greed.
>Then again, you really don't know anything about him.
>You don't know anything about his motives.
>Or why he takes a joking attitude towards everything he does.
>...
>Every other villain was easy to read.
>Outcasts.
>Thrill seeker.
>Delinquent.
>But how do you label Black Cat?
>Romantic interest?
>Nope. Nuh-uh. Definitely Not.
>The ringing of the bell draws you out of your inner monologue.
>As the last class before your lunch comes to a close, you realize that you barely payed any attention to the lesson.
>...
>Crap.
>Sorry, Twilight.
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>>30139262
That's it for now.
I'm thinking about doing a revising the story once I reach 1000 lines, like removing/adding certain words and sentences. Mainly to maintain a consistent tone, setting and character traits. How do you guys think?
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>>30139287
Looks pretty good, will go through more in depth when I am done eating.
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>>30139210
Figured it would be the best idea since no one can teach him.
Anyways I'm gonna work on another Anon school part or 2, at least till I get to a good point, then finish off the Therapist part. Once that's done, Tonic will get an update

>>30139287
I thought this was good with the inner thoughts and makes me wonder what Black Cat is to Sunset
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>>30139491
All right then, sounds like a good plan.
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>>30139287
Can't wait for more.
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>>30139663
I like to think so. Now I need to figure out if I skip Celestia's talk or not
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>>30139241
>Sombra is a teacher
Poor bastard.
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>>30140285
Don't see a reason too, could be pretty interesting to see her reaction and maybe Anon's too the offer, and the rebuttal.
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>>30140285
I dunno. It could be a way to introduce a plot points and Anon's powers.
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>>30140785
And don't forget Anon could find out the names of the two..."heroes" that got him caught.
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>>30140648
>>30140785
You have a point. I'm just wondering if Anon should come clean about all of his powers or just say the portal creation?
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>>30141254
He doesn't need to tell her anything, but if he gets pressed I don't see any reason not to just say portal abilities, keep some of his cards close to his chest.
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>>30141269
Good point, also i can't really see anyone saying they can turn into an incubus.
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>>30141290
Depending on how often magic shit is brought up in the universe your running, being a demon might just be seen as a joke from being bullied. That way Anon doesn't have to say it...unless there is a holy crusade raid on the school. There might be some awkward questions on why he was burned with holy water.
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Test post
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>>30141303
Magic and demon forms will be a uncommon to rare thing. I'm making it were it depends on the forms and levels of magic depend on the person.
Trixie, for example, can do magic but she only does stuff out of RPGs and some magic tricks
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>>30132505
Love it
>>30139287
Very guud
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>>30139287
>I'm thinking about doing a revising the story once I reach 1000 lines, like removing/adding certain words and sentences. Mainly to maintain a consistent tone, setting and character traits. How do you guys think?
If you try being perfectionistic about it you're going to have a bad time.
I understand the impuls, but dont live in the past... move on and continue your story, it's good
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>>30142733
Alright, thank you.
I'll just quickly skim through it then. Maybe I'll catch a mistake or two somewhere.
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>>30098673
I wonder what would happen if Groot and Rocket somehow crash land on Earth and Sunset (since she is the nearest hero) and Anon have to look after them for a bit.
"Sunny, I may don't have any powers but, I can handle a talking trash panda."
>"RRRRRAAA!"
>Rocket pounces on Anon's head and start punching him.
"Ahh, Sunset help!"
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>>30143329
Sounds like a sitcom to me.
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>>30143329
>>30143711
>Sunset shoots a web trying to get Rocket off of Anon.
>"Groot, you know what to do."
>Baby Groot extends his arms to roots wrapping around Sunset's legs causing her trip.
"Sunset why are you not fighting back?!"
>"I can't hurt him!"
"Why?!"
>"He's too adorable!"
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>>30143771
>"He's too adorable!"
Now Rocket is really gonna kill him.
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>>30143800
Sunset was talking about baby groot.
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>>30143817
Oh no! I'm retarded.

But can we all agree that if Anon had called Rocket cute he would've been one dead son of a bitch.
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>>30143871
Anon would be so dead that even the dead would be shocked
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>>30143948
He'll be so dead that all there will be left of him is a shell of a former living being. So dead that it'll shock everyone.

Guess you can say that's a bit Shell shocking.
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>>30144114
Nice one. I'm terrible at this kind of thing
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>>30143329
>I may don't have any powers
may not*
>start punching him
starts*
>>30143771
>Very true, baby Groot is too adorable...huh. Wouldn't that make Rocket like a bad uncle that always teaches the kid about dirty magazines, how to hit on women, proper beer and gun usage, and how to swear so hard Thanos blushes?
Huh, now I want Rocket to raise me.
>>30144114
Clever...but fuck you on principle for that Carlos joke.
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Sometime i want to kill myself.

Where is the killing myself thread 3 months ago?
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>>30145098
it's okay, sometimes I want to kill you too
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W I T N E S S
M E
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>>30145727
Witnessed
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>>30144114
ba dum tss
this wasn't even remotely funny or clever
I'm ashamed of you, Roo3
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>>30145800
>this wasn't even remotely funny or clever
lol what are you my friends and family
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>>30146173
Sounds like a quote from mortal kombat and injustice
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>>30146687
Sounds more like /r9k/ to me.
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>9
Keep the thread alive while I'm asleep, guys.
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>>30147794
it'll stay alive
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Anyone else turned on by seeing Sunset in the Mane-iac outfit, of is it just me?
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>>30149189
Nah, her pics look sexy as shit.
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>>30146173
>what are you my friend
yes

>>30149189
there is something wrong with you
but with me as well
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>>30149575
Anon gets cajoled into being their henchman for favors, such as driving them to their crime spots because their parents and big sisters are busy.
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>>30149731
In exchange for free tendies ofc
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>>30149909
And sex
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>>30149934
C-can we have hand holding too?
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>>30149934
You're a sick man.
I call dibs on Sweetie Belle
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>>30150052
Oh absolutely, they wont let go after they cum.
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>>30143329
Why did marvel have to make Rocket so sexy?
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>>30150063
Rocket is a raccoon, he isn't sexy you retard.
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>>30150113
By your logic, ponies aren't sexy either
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>>30150125
One is a magic alien, the other is a robot from an insane asylum. There isn't a comparison here.
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>>30150171
I want to be hopeful and assume I got you at robot.
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>>30150187
>I got you at robot
Wut?
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>>30150197
The thing turning him on...the robot part.
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>>30150062
L-lewd.
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>>30150228
They ARE semen demons after all. The just need Anon to drive their "Totally not a rape van". Funnily enough is that they do it so they can fuck cops that investigate. When everyone ignores them they need Anon to comfort them. Usually ends in them ruining the backseat then snuggling in a giant pile while Anon gives them head pats and tells them they can do it next time.
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>>30150197
Never mind I am retarded, thought I responding to someone else.
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>>30150113
I believe you mean trash panda
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stupid sexy trash pandas
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>>30149731
I can see this being a funny green were the cmc would want Anon as a big brother and try to hook him up with their sisters
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>>30151177
Dub dubs mean they aren't for sexual, may we all weep for what could have been, and take solace in the fun shenanigans that happen next.
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How do you guys live with yourself knowing that your waifu is going to war every fucking day and you can't do shit?
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>>30151296
With that attitude I imagine being a little bitch. Get a gun, knife, pipe, 2x4 with nails, a bat, a fucking sword if you have one and go to town too. pic related, Lets fucking go.
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>>30151447
Yeah, good idea, so you can get in the way and she has to chose between saving a bus full of people or you.
Great idea Anon. It's as if you never watched a cape movie, ever.
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>>30151513
>Chooses not to fight anyways even though there is still a high chance of a villain linking you and your waifu together.
Then don't suck at fighting, you cant get attacked if you use a sniper rifle and blow out someone's brains from the next three blocks over....well expect the cops might have a few questions for you if your caught, but that just means your slightly less likely to be shot.
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>>30151513
This is why i would just get a gun and stay home
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should we make a discord or something?
I'd like to hang out with you faggots
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>>30152149
Absolutely not. All relevant content is to be kept in thread. Shitpost somewhere else.
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>>30106016
>Quite a while later...
>On one hand you’re exhausted like hell, on the other you didn’t even manage to sleep properly.
>You still lay in bed until about half an hour before you need to.
>Might as well use your time properly, and as you still have no mobile phone you may as well go to buy one.
>Even though it’s mid Spring, the sun was mercilessly burning down on you, even further contributing to your bad mood.
>Your former phone, may it rest in pieces, had been old anyway and the version number of the new model from the same company was twice as high.
>Even though you don’t need to look out for money anymore you still buy the one from last generation.
>Nice and clean, empty phone.
>A new beginning.
>You sit down on a park bench near the Flimdustries Tower and begin to install all the things you need.
>Nightly, some adblocker, onions, music player...
>Just as you were collecting some ancient Lemon Demon shit for nostalgia’ sake the phone starts to vibrate in your hand.
>Action Movie Hero Boy has got to wait.
>Incoming call: Spitfire.
>With a picture of her in casual wear and sunhat at a lake.
>You stare at it for a while, trying to make sense of it.
>This is personal.
>You pick up the phone.
“I’m more surprised about the picture than you getting my number 5 minutes after I bought a new phone.”
>“If you’re in my profession you learn what kind of bait works.”, she answers.
“I guess so,” you admit, “I wouldn’t have picked up had it been an unsolicited nude.”
>”I’m not that kind of girl, handsome,” she chuckles before taking on a more serious tone again, “Mr. I’d like to ask something of you.”
>You have no idea what to expect.
“You know, usually I’d tell you that ‘asking’s free’, but Treehugger might not like you contacting me. So you really have guts calling me.”
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>>30152258
>“Thanks for the compliment, but I’m getting quite desperate, and I do have an unspoken agreement with your aunt. Asking for your help just might be free of consequences.”
>You look around for a security camera.
>“Mr. West, the reason why I call you is because of Miss Shimmers judgment of you.”
“Sunset?”, you bite your lip, “So what was her judgment?”
>“That you are not a super villain, that you are a hero who has had a bit of misguidance, but a hero after all.”
>You don’t respond, but you don’t need to, as she keeps talking.
>“I constructed yourself a super suit, and, while you were only trying to impress a girl, you went out, putting yourself in danger, to help people. I’d like to believe that you are not like Treehugger.”
“And what if I am?”
>“Then I would have no other choice as to classify you as a super villain, Mr. West. But you care about more than just yourself and your immediate friends and family, you care about the world. You are more like Miss Shimmer.”
>You have no real words to respond with.
>“I can only work on the intel I have, and, as sad as it is, I have to keep the worst case scenario in mind.”
“So... What do you want?”
>“The world, save,”, she says, “but for starters I’d like you to know that the Wonderbolts are not the bad guys.”
>If only you’d know...
>“Your aunt, she ran her entire live from the law and responsibilities from her actions, and she is powerful enough to do so. But more importantly is that she has the mindset to do so. She’s a lone wolf, cornered and only trying to protect her pub, I understand that. You, however, you are more compassionate, more empathetic. You still need the bridge you are in process of burning, Anon.”
>You notice her saying your name, not ‘Mr. West’.
>You don’t like her, you like Sombra.
>But you also know whom you rather back.
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>>30152263
“What do you want me to do...”
>“I’d like to reopen channels for communication. You and I, we desire everyone’s safety. She desires your safety. Our goals do not contradict one another, they align. She may be used to doing everything herself, but-”
“Yes, yes, there is strength to find in alliances, or something.” You finish her sentence, “That’s what you were about to say, weren’t you?”
>“Yes... something like that.” She pauses for a moment. “I’m not in business of being liked, Mr. West. I don’t need you to like me, but I implore you to do what’s right.”
>Do what’s right...
>What you want to do is warn her that there is a Hydra in her Wonderbolts.
>There is a lot you’d want to do, but...
>This is all so fucked up.
>Silence is the best option, and this isn’t even a Telltale game.
“I don’t like you, but I don’t dislike you either,” you eventually say. “I even understand why you tried to use me as leverage to get Treehugger to talk, but you underestimated her or she celled your bluff, I don’t know. I can only tell you that I’ll do what I think is right, but things are complicated right now.”
>“Things will only increase in complexity, Mr. West. That’s the nature of... ‘things’,” she tells you. “Hmm... Originally I wasn’t going to ask this of you, but...”
>Spitfire pauses, as if to wait for your permission.
>As you see no reason to at least hear her out, you confirm.
“Sure, go ahead.”
>“Thank you. I’d like to save resources and minimize complications. Resources in this case being valuable time of people I still trust, and complications being... people asking questions I am not at liberty to tell.”
>Get to the point.
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>>30152269
>“You see, two people fell sick during their shift last night. Paranoid as I am I opened a small investigation, which did not bear any fruit. Now I can officially close the case, or I can issue the inventory of the warehouse in question to be counted. To speed it up I’d like inventory to start at the items which have been seized from hydra twenty years ago, you know?”
>How the fuck did she connect the points towards Treehugger and you?
>“If I would know the guilty party and their rough motivations I can rest more at ease, but if I don’t know that, I have to worry about a fifth party on the playing field, and I don’t like that... you understand?”
>You remain silent for a moment, but you know silence would speak volumes in itself, so you answer.
“You have nothing to worry about,” you confirm, “but how..?”
>“There are only so many equations to be had. One plus one and two plus two are easy. However, if you have a complex equation and variables are obscured, then you sometimes have to ask yourself who has the ability to obscure them.”, she tells you, “It’s only a guess, but it can lead to a viable theory.”
>You let her words go through your head.
>It’s your fault, really.
>Had Treehugger gone in, guns blazing, it could have been anyone.
>By trying to be smart about it you practically told Spitfire who it was.
>Treehugger should have seen through that... or are you giving her too much credit?
>Spitfire is no amateur either... but she’s head of a spy agency... not using all her resources and going after you by herself.
>“Anyway, thank you, Anon.”
“Hey, wait. Uhh... why are you not officially investigating?”
>“These reasons are my own, Mr. West.”
>And we’re back to ‘Mr. West’
“Okay... then... Bye, I guess.”
>“I’ll be in touch. Bye”
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>>30152275
>She hangs up and you slowly take the phone away from the side of your head to stare at the remaining image of Spitfire until the screen goes dark.
>So... that just happened.
>Okay...
>Now you’re in a love triangle between Treehugger, Spitfire and Sombra.
>Square... no. Tetrahedron, yep, that’s the geometric shape you’re looking for.
>You sigh.
“The nature of ‘things’ is that they increase in complexity, huh?”


>A few minutes later you enter Flimdustries like a zombie.
>Music helps to shut out the world around you.
>en_livstid_i_krig.mp3
>You only wave your hand to the receptionist and pass the gate with your ID card, not saying anything to anyone.
>Not because you’re rude, but because you simply don’t want to interact with anyone.
>Prototyping some machinery should be fine.
>Halfway on your way to the elevators you’re stopped by a security guard.
>He taps your shoulder and points towards the receptionist running after you.
>You sigh and take out your ear buds.
“Hmm?”
>“Mr. West?”, the receptionist was a bit taken aback by your behavior.
“Sorry... I mean ‘good evening’. Is something the matter?”, you regain your politeness.
>“Sir, yes,” she gives a small curtsy, “Mr. Flim wants to see you in his office immediately.”
>You sigh and nod.
“‘kay...”
>Afterwards you simply turn to the elevators again and go to pick your ride in the express one.
>You plug your ears again and shut the world out once more, even closing your eyes.
>Only by the time you feel the elevator come to a halt do you open it again.
>Talking to someone... what a pain.
>At least Flim’s a scientist and businessman, he wants to make money, you can respect that.
>Nice and simple.
>No secret world-takeover scheme... you hope.
>You make your way to his office, take out your earbuds, and knock.
>“Yes, come in,” Flim’s voice directs you, “ah! Mr. West. Anon. Welcome.”
>Flim stands up to walk around the desk and greet you.
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>>30152280
>Thankfully you prepared yourself.
“Dr. Flim! Good evening, how are you, sir?”
>“Quite well, quite well... What about you, and ah.. your girlfriend? She- I mean, I saw the news, and I wasn’t able to get a hold of you.”, hes talking very fast, “Not of Chrysalis either.”
“Oh, yeah, that... uhh...”, you should have thought of something.
>You can’t just say that you broke up with your super hero girlfriend to sent her back into her home dimension, now can you?
“It’s ahh... things have a nature of being complicated?”
>He frowns, “What does that mean?”
“To be honest, I’m not even asking too many questions anymore and am glad with the few things I have control of.”
>“I’m afraid you lost me.”
“Things are just complicated, okay?”
>“Things have been complicated since my brother turned into a literal monster, and now my head of security is missing, apparently it’s all connected, and you’re the only person to know anything about that, Anon.”
>He looks desperate.
>Kind of like you feel.
>You hope you don’t go gray as early in life as he did.
“I- I don’t know what I can tell you... Chrysalis, I- I haven’t been able to contact either. But I think she’s...” you point upwards, “you know?”
>“What..?”, he frowns, “Dead?”
“What? No!”, you shake your head, “ET gone home.”
>“She’s an alien?”, he asks.
“I probably shouldn’t have said that...”
>“She’s an alien?!”, he repeats once more, in desperation, grabbing onto his head and pulling his hair. “What have I gotten myself into again?”
“For the record, I think she likes earth. So she’s... friendly?”
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>>30152286
>He goes over to some minibar, shaking his head.
>“You drink?”, he asks as he pours himself a glass of amber liquid.”
“I-” huh... “only socially.”
>“Heh...”, he pours a little in a second glass, “This is not obligatory because I’m your employer.”, he extents it to you.
“Yeah,” you approach him and take the glass, “not gonna tell you any more secrets either.”
>“That- that wasn’t my intention,” he tells you and takes a large gulp of his own glass.
“I know...” you look down into the glass, “I guess getting my blood alcohol up can help to cope a little.”
>You take a sip.
>It’s... bad.
>“It’s good, right?”
“Mhm...”, you take another small sip.
>Having some toxic liquid burning your throat’s a nice change to your problems...
>...
>You’re on your way to become an alcoholic after only two sips.
“What is that even?”
>You reach out for the bottle and turn it to read the label.
>Moonrunes.
“Like sake or something?”
>“Oh no, it’s-”, he reads of the Japanese, pauses a few times before going on (also in Japanese), then proceeds to tell you about Asian brewery (in English).
>You listen intently.
>He’s clearly passionate about the topic, the seemingly banality of it and his genuine smile make it very easy to listen to.
>There was no hidden agenda, no fate of the world bullshit.
>Just one guy knowing his liquor.
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>>30152290
So you got your timeline set up right now? That's good, see, this is better than timeskips, makes it easier to keep everything in line on the long run. I'll spellcheck when I get some time.
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>>30152293
>So you got your timeline set up right now?
kinda
This is a hotfix, not a solution to the overarching problem.
An overarching problem I think I don't want to invest time in to fix, because it's just a greentext and I'm lazy.
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>>30152317
That's fair, as long as it makes some kind of sense I doubt people will mind. Also, mind telling this idiot to piss off too?>>30152149
Too many generals go to shit when an idea as bad as this is implemented. Plus this guy is right>>30152191
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>>30152290 >>30152351
pastebins updated with Trixie-scene at the end where it should be right now, timeline is all caught up now
Spider-Shim ch1 - the Superior Spider-Man - http://pastebin.com/P4Mawhsw
Spider-Shim ch2 - Meet the Contestants - http://pastebin.com/pGJV6pUZ
Spider-Shim ch3 - The Great and Powerful - http://pastebin.com/fYHRDTA3
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>>30152351
>Also, mind telling this idiot to piss off too?
Chat format makes it easier to talk without spamming a thread, this devolution seems to be a trend.
I'm not a purist or "This is how things are supposed to be", but we don't need a discord, we're not nearly large enough to warrant anything like that.
I'm in the /d/egenerate fiction discord if anyone wants to find me.

so here it goes:
>>30152149
nah
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>>30152149
First off, I think this is a bad idea. It didn't help /dzg/ and I think it will only hurt us more.
>>30152258
>>30152263
>>30152269
>>30152275
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>>30152290
Second, Nice update, will read when I get home tonight.
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>>30152484
>Nice update
Thanks, I-

>will read when I get home tonight.
...
Thanks for appreciating my size though
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>>30152504
If it makes you feel any better you are the largest updater in the thread. So there is that. Also that is a lot of words in the updated bin.
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>>30152468
Good update senpai. Glad we got some characterization out of Spitfire and Flim. Kinda curious about how the Spitfire dynamic's gonna turn out.
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>>30152290
I'll say this. It was a little strange to see Anon talking pretty casually to Spitfitlre, but i liked it. Can't tell if this is a ploy on her part but it was nice to see. The Flim part reminded me of what i do at times and it was enjoyable to read.
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in case anyone is wondering
>>30152258
>>Just as you were collecting some ancient Lemon Demon shit for nostalgia’ sake the phone starts to vibrate in your hand.
>>Action Movie Hero Boy has got to wait.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=J5R78nfJ2Bw

>inb4 your music taste is shit
it's nostalgia, I was a kid.

>>30152280
>>en_livstid_i_krig.mp3
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=y8jki4i4raQ

english version:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zvdbDw5bXnQ

>>30152559
>Glad we got some characterization out of Spitfire and Flim. Kinda curious about how the Spitfire dynamic's gonna turn out.
Well, Spits is important to the story, but Flim is for my Spider-Shim origins (you know, the one I don't write on)
They both are threedimensional and have fully worked out backstories.
Flim's older brother turned into a monster, can you imagine what that does to a man?

>>30152661
>It was a little strange to see Anon talking pretty casually to Spitfitlre
He reached "fuck it"

>Can't tell if this is a ploy on her part but it was nice to see.
There is a reason why I don't post in Spitfire POV anymore, it would give away stuff.
So much I'd like to say, but can't to keep it interesting. But right now I'm capitalizing on the fact that the audience doesn't like Spitfire.


>The Flim part reminded me of what i do at times
>>> http://www.aa.org
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>>30152860
Sabaton is always good, though I am impressed lemon demon is actually a thing. I wonder what the band was doing when they came up with the name.
Its been awhile since I've thought about Flim though, reminds me of the good ol days when Anon was just a nerdy fanboy that got the shit blasted out of him...fun times.
And good to know you catched on to Spitfire giving stuff away.
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>>30152902
>I wonder what the band was doing when they came up with the name.
it's the same guy who made the harry potter puppet pals and this comic, and like the ultimate showdown of ultimate destiny
so... drugs were involved, I'd say
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>>30152934
....sounds about right.
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bump
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>>30152934
Like all good band names.
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>>30152934
I can believe it
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>>30152504
Finally got bak home, and I gotta say, I was right to give this update praise. So, again good job Untitled, it's good to see the story progressing.
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Bump
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>>30152934
>filename
...unf?
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>Sunset finds out she is pregnant.
>Now she knows she can't fight and websling for nine months.
>The Powerponies take her place until then.
What happens?
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>>30157090
You're right to question that
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>>30157602
>Sunset tells the girls don't tell anyone Spider-Woman is pregnant because the villains could use this opportunity to strike.
>An interviewer asks Fili-Second during the middle of a fight.
>"Miss Second do you know where Spider-Woman and why she been gone for nearly a month?"
>"Because she is pregnant sill- uh oh."
>Goddammit Ponk.
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>>30157602
The nicest break she has had for awhile, with being able to have sex marathons before her pregnancy really starts to show early on, to going on dates without having to worry about being attacked, or having to go stop crimes, catching up on some much needed sleep, cuddling on the couch.
>>30157641
Probably this too...then investment in a few guns. Or at least grabbing one or two off some random criminals supplies.
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>>30157641
>>30157659
>Be Sunset.
>Be stuck in the apartment because all the villains attack the city at once, the power ponies are having trouble handling it and now the Avengers are coming to help.
>Well can't do anything about it, might as well catch up on Sex and The City.
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>>30157090 >>30157603
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_nH6ya5g2-s
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>>30157738
That was weird
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>>30158216
Acid does crazy things.
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>>30157602
>>30157641
>>30157659
I wonder how many times Anon has stop Sunset from suiting up.
Also what would be the weird cravings of a spider horse girl?
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>>30158570
It would happen every other time.

I say mostly hamburgers covered in pudding and broccoli with ice cream.

I'm more worried about the mood swings to tell the truth
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>>30158570
Tiger.
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>>30158832
>Sunset is eating her ice cream hamburger pickle.
>She suddenly stops and gives you a death glare.
>"You did this to me."
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>>30158570
>Sunset starts staring at a fly buzzing around.
"Sunset, what are you doing?"
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>>30158877 >>30158879
"Sunset, what are you in the mood for?"
>"Tiger."
"Hmm?", you assume she tries to get your attention.
>"Tiger meat."
"Wha-?"
>"I read there are more tiger's captive in Texas than free in the world, because Cats breed better in the comfort of captivity."
"I- okay? And what... what are we going to do about that?"
>"There has to be some crazed druglord I can beat up and then-"
"What? Eat his Tiger?"
>She suddenly stops and gives you a death glare.
>"You did this to me."
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>>30158902
Does Anon brave the crazy to give her a hug and...find some actual tiger meat?
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>>30158902
"Sunset you can't just eat an endangered species."
>"So?"
"That's it I'm calling Flutters."
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>>30158946
>"Holy shit you're right, I could have had some monkey meat this entire time!"
...nevermind, I'll go get the gun and you can pick which tiger you want...actually, who the hell do you fight that has a damn tiger anyways?
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>>30158946
>>30158978
"Just come here quick Fluttershy."
>"Oh, Anon I would like to help but,"
"She wants to eat monkeys and tigers."
>"I'm on my way."
>Her voice got deep for some reason.




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