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Tiny Anon's Adventure: A Tale of two Writers Edition

Previous Thread: >>32600805

Completed Pastes:
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>Part 10: https://pastebin.com/BmpPQqYd

Welcome back everyone! Tiny Anon's Adventure continues, now featuring two writers, which means more activity for all you loyal readers and participants.
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The show begins within 15 minutes or so, so settle in.
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>>32635053
>>32635056
Please cum in my mouth, master
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Morning dawns over Twilight's castle, and long, warm streams of sunlight beam through the many windows, and find themselves refracted throughout the crystalline halls.
One such beam washes over you, causing you to slowly awaken from your slumber, recalling briefly the previous day's events. Your head is fuzzy, and it almost feels like weeks ago, but you remember more clearly the more awake you become. There was a grand celebration at your return, with Gabby and Zecora hanging by until the evening to explain exactly what happened.
Rarity fainted as the tale of your encounter with Gabby was relayed to them, and Twilight found herself becoming both more impressed by you and worried for you, as your heroic fight was told... before your not-so-heroic consumption. They were all filled with relief at the relaying of your recovery with Zecora and, with everyone gathered together, Twilight had sleeping arrangements made for everyone in the castle, yourself included. seems you have a dollhouse all to yourself, set up in a room adjacent to Twilight's, housing a sleeping, purple reptile in a small woven bed.
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>>32635141
Check out our bed. Is it just plastic or something resembling comfort? If it's less comfortable than Twilight's fur, I see no reason to stay here.
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You take a moment to inspect your immediate surroundings. It seems the bed you are currently laying upon, unlike the rest of the plastic furniture located around your "room," is made of balsa wood, with cotton and cloth delicately turned into an actual, tiny bed. Based on the detail, you'd chance a guess and say that Rarity likely made it at some point last night.
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>>32635141
Lightly poke him to rouse him from his sleep. We've seen him before but haven't been introduced
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Looking over at the room's other occupant, you believe it may be wise to try and awaken him. After all, you and he have never really been introduced. You stand up, and stretch, ready to go poke him, before stopping yourself, right on the edge of your "room." Right... Size. He appears to be pretty far away. Assuming you got to the bottom of the Dollhouse, It'd be a decent trek to head over to him, but perhaps that's just what you need.
your suit is hanging in the plastic closet, as you stand with your pajamas on, looking over the area.
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>>32635267
Well time to get dressed, might need to thank Rarity for the bed next time we see her.

Get out of our PJ's and into our suit.
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>>32635286
First impressions are very important.

Anything around the dollhouse we can re-purpose as a gift?
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>Twilight decides to test a new shrinking spell on anon
>She evidently put too much power in it
>Anon completely disappears, she begins to panic
>Anon wound up becoming microscopic and finds himself inside twilight's body
>He teams up with the cellular six to take on the tiny threats that assail twilight
>Will anon rise to the challenge with his new friends? Will twilight learn of anon's fate?
>Find out on this episode of Osmosis Pone.
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>>32635302
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You quickly change clothes, donning your iconic suit, and folding up the Pajamas. Just as you were thinking about a gift, and a way to keep your Pajamas, you notice another object hanging with your suit: What appears to be a simple elastic net. It's the food catching net you asked for so long ago! Twilight must have comissioned it for you. as a bonus, seems it can be folded just so to make a handy backpack. Neat.

Placing your pajamas in the net pack, you look all around the dollhouse for some form of gift for the large lizard. Seems to be various plastic furniture, simple cloth horse doll clothes, little brushes, a few gems sprinkled here and there, as well as a watch for a clock.
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>>32635329
He won't need a brushie, take the gems
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>>32635329
Ah! Gems, dragons hoard them and gold things, it's perfect. Wait, is that racist? Guess we need to find out.

Grab whatever gems we can carry, and stuff them in our pockets. Then head over to the dragon.
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>>32635329
Set the clock to the funny weed time. Classic.
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Thinking rationally, you reason that the glittery gems decorating the dollhouse would likely be a pretty good offering. After all, there were a few missing anyway, nobody would miss a few more. So, that in mind, you spend a few minutes harvesting the precious stones from the walls and accents of your tiny living space, Tossing 10 good ones into your backpack. Figuring that's a pretty decent number, you take a deep breath, and set off, down the plastic steps, and onto the crystal floor, starting your journey towards the mighty slumbering creature.
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>>32635401
Walk over to the dragon, taking a good look at him once we get closer.
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>>32635401
We're going to have to climb him, or throw pebbles/gems at his face until he wakes up.
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>>32635401
Boop him on the nose, and when his eyes open hold up a gemstone.
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It is a lengthy journey. You take the time to pace yourself, walking across the vast plain of the room's floor, a true span of just a few feet, but a very significant distance for you.
Yet, your progress does pay off. In a fair amount of time, you find yourself staring up at the enormous slumbering form of this lizard. Did they ever explain what he was? You can't quite recall. As you look him over, you can see a deep purple coloration across his body, with green marking his spines and accents.
Seeing this peaceful creature easily many times your size, you come to a logical and reasonable conclusion... you should throw stiff at it.
You toss two of the jewels, and he begins Groaning... but fails to awaken. Drat.
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>>32635474
Gotta be more logical with our approach then simply throwing things at him. Instead we throw things him in sensitive spots like the eye and tip of the nose. Don't forget to collect the wasted ammo first.
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Reasoning that you should go for more sensitive areas, you scramble up alongside the slumbering beast, locating with precision his face, and grabbing up the thrown stones in the process. After finding it, the task of climbing atop his snout is simple enough, booping his nose. He merely wrinkles his snout as you boop him, leading to plan B. You take aim, and toss a ruby at his eye, instantly causing him to flinch.
As his emerald green eye opens wide, his pupil narrows, and, upon seeing you standing there, the dragon screams aloud in shock, forcing you to fall and land on the pillow.
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>>32635546
Whoa whoa whoa hold on there buddy. I'm not gonna hurt ya. Hold up the gemstone. I come bearing gifts.
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"Whoa whoa whoa hold on there buddy, I'm not gonna hurt ya," You assure him, holdind up the bundle of gemstones. "I come bearing gifts."
The lizard looks perplexed for a brief moment, before his eyes fall on the gems you carry, and he slowly settles down.

"Oh. You're the Human. You scared me, dude," he expresses, leaning down to get a better look at you. "Those are really for me? I can just have 'em?" he questions, a forked tongue just barely peeking from the size of his mouth.
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>>32635606
Yup. I don't need 'em. Go on, take them.
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>>32635606
Nah, you're going to have to take them from me.
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>>32635621
What exactly are you, if I may ask?
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"Yup. I don't need 'em. Go on, take them," You offer, holding them out.
You assumed he was going to take them and maybe stuff them under his pillow or something, but, as he begins opening his jaws, you stamd very mistaken. He holds open his mouth, many sharp, reinforced fangs lining his maw, as his reptilian tongue beckons for you to throw in the jewels. Shrugging, you comply, and throw the stones inside, watching them disappear one by one down his throat, until they're gone.
After he pulls back with a very happy expression, eyes shut in savoring, you pipe up again. "What exactly are you, if I may ask?"

"Me? Why, I'm a fire breathing dragon!" He declares with a prideful smile, puffing out his chest for a momenr... before he lets loose a burp and short burst of green flame, somewhat undermining his prideful undertones.
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>>32635672
A fire breathing dragon? We ask skeptically
Ok so you breathe fire but where are your wings? And you're also kind of little.
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>>32635672
Anon, calm your urge to immediately try to fight the dragon for all that sweet, sweet glory. We don't even know his name. Also we have no weapons or armor which is just as if not more important.
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"A fire breathing dragon?" You find yourself asking skeptically. "Ok so you breathe fire but where are your wings? And you're also kind of little."

"Hey! I-I have wings! I actually just grew into em!" the dragon suddenly says defensively, jutting out a pair of small, admittedly proportional reptilian wings from beneath the blanket. "I'm... still getting used to them. I'm also small because... well... I'm a... baby dragon." he forces out reluctantly, each pause making his voice slightly quieter.

"BUT! Not as much a baby anymore, now that I've grown my wings!" he defends at the last minute.
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>>32635719
If you're a dragon then where's your hoard, we say teasingly, dragon's got to have a hoard.
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>>32635719
So Twilight has not only put us up in a doll house, but also a nursery. Good to know what she really thinks of us. Welp, time to become a hobo.
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"If you're a dragon then where's your hoard? A dragon's got to have a hoard," you say teasingly. He actually averts direct eye contact for a moment, sighing heavily.

"Well... as a baby dragon I... don't exactly have one... I've collented jewels and gems before, I do it all the time! But... that usually disappears when I get hungry," he admits, looking a bit sheepish.

"So Twilight has not only put us up in a doll house, but also a nursery. Good to know what she really thinks of us. Welp, time to become a hobo," you exclaim, partially joking, but with a bit of feeling behind it.

"Hey! Don't let the term "baby" fool you, I'm over a decade old! I'm nearly a young adult in pony years! This isn't a nursery," he tells you, mildly offended.
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>>32635742
Good thing we already put all our stuff in a bindle.
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>>32635763
I'm just picking at you. Hold out your hand for a shake. It's nice to meet you.
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"I'm just picking at you," you admit, backing down, and holding out your hand to the dragon. "It's nice to meet you."

He looks mildly confused for a second, before realization dawns, and he holds out a single claw for you to shake, shaking your hand thusly. "Oh right, names. I'm Spike, Twilight's personal assistant. Do you have a name? They all just keep referring to you as Human. Well except Pinkie, she addresses you with a yell sometimes," Spike inquires, finishing off the claw-shake.
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>>32635794
That name'll do for now. You're Twilight's assistant? That's pretty cool.
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>>32635794
Odd. I'd expect a dragon to have a name like Skurge or Slavin'krath. Did the ponies name you?
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>>32635820
If he looks confused by this, tell him humans gave a ton of lore revolving around dragons.
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>>32635830
*have
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>>32635830
Fuuuck. Now we GOTTA play DnD with him, and this adventure will get very meta as soon as that happens.
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"Odd. I'd expect a dragon to have a name like Skurge or Slavin'krath. Did the ponies name you?" You ask as he pulls his talons back.

"Yeah, they did. I kinda like it though, it suits me," Spike says, before redirecting to his query. "But You still haven't answered my question. what do I call you? Just, Human?"

"That name'll do for now. You're Twilight's assistant? That's pretty cool," you respond, immediately switching the subject, as you typically do when your name is brought up. Luckily, he seems fairly eager to move on.

"Oh yeah, it is. You're looking at the #1 assistant to the Princess of Friendship! I do whatever she needs, whenever she needs it, from cooking to cleaning to book-fetching, I'm a pro!" He speaks with a real pride in his voice, seems he rather likes his office.
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>>32635844
>Fuuuck. Now we GOTTA play DnD with him, and this adventure will get very meta as soon as that happens.

(Doesn't help that I actually run DnD on a regular basis IRL).
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>>32635846
Oh, sounds lucrative. How much does assistant to the Princess rake in a year? You'll be making a hoard soon enough I bet.
Que Anon realizing he is not being paid jack shit and this is not just a nursery, but the slaves quarters.
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>>32635857
We can roll dice to see how well Anon rolls his own dice to get his character to perform a gambling check using dice.
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>>32635846
You cook and clean? is that what guys normally do around here?
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"Oh, sounds lucrative. How much does assistant to the Princess rake in a year? You'll be making a hoard soon enough I bet," you ask, genuinely curious.

"Rake in? Oh, like... how many bits I make. Well, Teeeeechnically, I'm uh... not paid... But I get to sleep here, and the food is free, plus I get nice stuff every so often so, there's that," Spike explains, gesturing to the room around him, his bed, and the halls outside.
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>>32635896
So, your her slave? No, wait serf is probably the more accurate term. That's kinda terrible either way, imagine how much money you could make if you got paid or did something else with all that time that'd get you money. You could probably afford your own place by now.
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>>32635896
No. What? No! Screw that! No one treats my best friend Spike like that! You know what I'm going to do? I'm going to march up to your boss right now and tell her you need a raise.
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"So, your her slave? No, wait serf is probably the more accurate term. That's kinda terrible either way, imagine how much money you could make if you got paid or did something else with all that time that'd get you money. You could probably afford your own place by now," you begin, starting to get fired up at the idea of serfdom still existing.

"What? No, no, no, I'm not a slave! I mean sure, I do what she says, when she says, even if I'd rather be sleeping... and sure, I don't get paid. And yeah, maybe sometimes I have to go into dangerous situation, But--" Spike begins to explain, before you interrupt, really feeling it now.

"No. What? No! Screw that! No one treats my best friend Spike like that! You know what I'm going to do? I'm going to march up to your boss right now and tell her you need a raise." Spike seems shocked at your demand, and his eyes widen, as he scratches the back of his neck... then the back of his head in thought.

"...You really think I could afford that much? Like... maybe a cartload of gems?" he inquires, curiously.
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>>32635971
If she can afford to furnish a dollhouse with precious stones I think she'll manage. You have back pay for sure.
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"If she can afford to furnish a dollhouse with precious stones I think she'll manage. You have back pay for sure," you assure him, attempting to grow his resolve.

"...Well... Let's say I believe you. What would you habe me do?" Spike asks, genuinely curious. Seems he's nibbling at your revolutionary idea, comrade Anon.
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Spike, what'd you call your money again. Oh, right. Got it. Twi. Hey, Twi! Wake up. Whoa, nice yawn. Twilight, we demand bits. No, don't ignore us. We wanna see bits right now. Listen. If Spike and I don't see bits in the next minute I'm gonna lose it. I'm so frustrated, Twi. You have no idea. Show us the bits and you can go back to bed. Do you have any idea what he does for you and you can't do this? What, you think Spike is too young to hold bits. He can hold bits. Trust me. Where are you hiding your bits Twi? Show us the bits! Show us the bits! W-what are you doing? Twilight, put your vagina away and focus. Spike needs a pay raise.
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>>32636012
First we ask nicely. Can't solve a problem if you don't know there is one.
After that... I don't know. She is a princess, so guillotine could work.
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"First we ask nicely. Can't solve a problem if you don't know there is one. After that... I don't know. She is a princess, so guillotine could work," You recommend.

"Twilight's pretty understanding, so talking to her ought to be fine. At least, I hope so, because I don't even know what that second thing you said is," Spike explains, rolling out of his bed and standing up, stretching as he towers above you. "Oh, right. You can explain this stuff better than I can, so climb on," he instructs, lowering his palm just beside you.
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>>32636062
It was a joke about royalty of my home. I could explain it if you want but it's a pretty dark joke, are you adult enough to handle it?
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"It was a joke about royalty of my home. I could explain it if you want but it's a pretty dark joke, are you adult enough to handle it?" you offer, climbing aboard.

"I'm adult enough! Don't let my small stature fool ya, I'm tough as nails!" he gloats, putting his free hand on his hip. As he urges you to tell him, he pulls you up near his chest, and begins slowly walking down the hallway, his footsteps echoing through the emptiness.
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>>32636092
How to talk about a political murder machine and explain that we just joked about killing his pseudo-mother? We don't.

"I like the spirit kid but no way am I going any deeper than that. Tough as nails. Ha. You might actually do it to. No way am I telling you how to build one now."
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(I got about 15ish more mins before I fade, just a heads up).
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>>32636092
Well, a long long time ago in a old country the ruling class had lost sight of what the people wanted, They paid them poorly and when a famine struck they did nothing. With nothing to eat the peasant went to the king and queen and begged. Telling them they had no meat no fish, no milk, and no bread. Not even fruit or vegetables.
And you know what they said? Well, if they don't have any of that, then let the peasants eat cake!

This didn't go over well. A revolt soon started. And the prisons soon all filled up with angry people, with no more room to store them the royalty started to execute the prisoners. The headsman worked day and night but he couldn't keep up with the amount. So the king and queen commissioned someone to make it easier, and he did. A gigantic blade held up by a rope and mounted to a wooden frame, it had one name. it was a guillotine.

It worked great, it chopped through the prisons like butter, in fact it worked so well when the peasants finally succeeded and captured the royalty they used it to lop off their heads.
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>>32636129
Stopping before Twilight's bedroom is a fine cliffhanger I suppose.
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"I like the spirit kid but no way am I going any deeper than that. Tough as nails. Ha. You might actually do it to. No way am I telling you how to build one now."

"Build one? Aww... Well, if you ain't gonna tell me, I guess I can't force you. Well, I mean... I cooooould, given your size, but for something so unimportant as a word I don't know... nah." Spike gives a shrug, and aims for the stairs.

"Fair warning, apparently there was something of a sleepover, so there'll be a lot of mares up there," he informs you.
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>>32636150
>there'll be a lot of mares
Groovy.
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>>32636150
This is good enough I guess.>>32636158


>>32636140
You know, I should really listen to myself. I have to stop writing these.
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>>32636168
(Well, if that'll do as a stopping point, then I'll hope to see you all tomorrow. Hope you've enjoyed tonight's session, and sleep well).
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>>32637156
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>>32637572
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>>32638785
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>>32636017
Her mare bits
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>>32638822
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(Hey Gang. Gonna try and start up relatively soonish. sorry for being late, stuff going on. Said I'd be here tonight though, so by jove I'm gonna be here tonight).
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>>32640477
While we're here I just want to let y'all know I'm working on editing my previous words and adding them to a pastebin.
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Spike, carrying you carefully in his palm, ascended the stairs carefully, making sure to keep you from falling over with each shift.

as he finally comes to the top of the stairs, you see that he really wasn't kidding. Spread out throughout the room, in sleeping bags, lay your friends Rarity, Twi, Zecora, Gabby, and even the grey one.

" Guess they must've really been tuckered out," Spike whispers down to you, holding you up to observe the room.
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>>32640670
Have him lay us on Rarity. I want to snuggle into her fur,
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>>32640670
What do we do then? I'm not tired, I just got up. ...You feel like messing with them a little?
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You point towards Rarity, making no sound, gesturing you wish to be laid on her fur.

"An excellent choice, my little friend. I don't blame ya," Spike agrees, gently tiptoeing over. After come careful claw steps, he gingerly stands over her form, and slowly places you down upon her chest, letting his own claws mindlessly pet the region... before pulling back, and shaking his head.

You find yourself mildly sunk into the soft, flowing fur, the tender, well-maintained flesh beneath your feet, giving an all around gentle and clean feeling.
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>>32640710
Rarity, wake up. We're starting a coup.

I understand you own your own business, so I thought you could help.
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>>32640710
Walk over to one side and slide off of rarity.
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>>32640710
Plant tiny kisses on her to tickle her until she comes awake.
I hope Spike doesn't get too jealous.
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"Rarity, wake up. We're starting a coup. I understand you own your own business, so I thought you could help," you quietly shout, Waking her from her light slumber. She wakes up, staring down at you, nestled in her fur.

"Little Darling? What on earth are you talking about? and how did you get here?" she inquires, glancing at Spike, and scoffing at the idea of being touched while sleeping.
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>>32640767
Sit down and get ready for a long talk. "I have no idea what a bit is worth, so I need you to negotiate payment for goods and services.Oh and Spike brought me here. It was much faster than walking."
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You sit down and get ready for a long talk. "I have no idea what a bit is worth, so I need you to negotiate payment for goods and services. Oh and Spike brought me here. It was much faster than walking." As you explain, you pace back and forth, Speaking as if you were a general revealing a strategy.

"payment? for goods and services? However do you mean? have you gotten yourself a job, little darling?" She inquires, eyeing you suspiciously.
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>>32640860
A job, no. I have a mission. This dragon has been wronged and I intend to see justice done. But first, I almost forgot how warm you are. Why'd you put me up in that cold dollhouse? I'd much rather sleep here.
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"A job, no. I have a mission. This dragon has been wronged and I intend to see justice done. But first, I almost forgot how warm you are. Why'd you put me up in that cold dollhouse? I'd much rather sleep here,"

"I-- Look, we put you there so you'd be safe! besides, it's improper for a lady to lay with a gentleman without proper courtship," she says with a giggle. "But, in all seriousness, how has Spike been wronged? I intend to see to it that justice is served!"
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>>32640923
I know you'll help. You're a good pony. You see, Rarity. Walk closer to her face so we can get serious. Spike is a slave. Not just that, a baby slave so that's doubly wrong for sure.
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"I know you'll help. You're a good pony. You see, Rarity..." You trail off, walking closer to her face so you can get serious, "Spike is a slave. Not just that, a baby slave so that's doubly wrong for sure."

"A--" Rarity nearly shouts, her face growing in anger, before clearing her throat, and turning to a harsh whisper. "A slave?! Who has enslaved my little Spikey-Wikey? Who would have the gall, the audacity to shackle him and force him to work?" As she speaks, she gets defensive, obviously quite defensive of the little dragon.
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>>32640984
Point at Twilight.
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>>32641010
I can only expect Rarity to burst into gigglefits over this.
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>>32641018
Same
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With a serious, solumn expression on your face, you point, in an extremely jerkey motion, towards Twilight, sleeping in the distance.

Rarity's anger smolders, shifting, twisting her face from one of fury to one of confusion... then one of surprise... and finally, one of realization. She lets out a snort. Then another, covering her mouth and snout as yet more of these snorting giggles escape her throat, and bubble out of her face. Indeed, she has been sent into a giggling fit.
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>>32641038
Hold tight to her belly 'cause it's about to get bumpy.
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You go to ground, bracing yourself as best you can against this giggle-induced Earthquake. You grab onto fur bundles, trying to keep a tight grip, as everything violently shifts. What is to her a quiet giggling fit is, to you, a massive shake-up.

"I do apologize, little darling, but... Twilight hasn't enslaved Spike! He's her assistant! She hatched him from an egg you see, and ever since has watched over him as his charge." As Rarity elaborates, she calms down a bit, and the tumult comes to an end.
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>>32641090
An assistant gets paid. She's been doing little more then exploiting that he can't leave.
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>>32641090
Oooooh, Twilight hatched you, which would maker your,,, I;m so sorry, I completely misread the situation,
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"An assistant gets paid. She's been doing little more then exploiting that he can't leave," you begin, processing what she had explained, before the full implications dawn on you. "Oooooh, Twilight hatched you, which would make her his... I'm so sorry, I completely misread the situation." You feel a little flustered, looking over at Spike, who sits, cocking his head to the side.

"She's not a slave master little darling, she's closer to his mother. And, as any good mother, she gives him little tasks around the house to do," Rarity clarifies, sighing as she looks down at you, the warm air rushing past your body.
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>>32641141
Send Spike back to bed, there will be no revolution tonight. We'll see if we can negotiate an allowance of some sort instead. Wish Rarity a good night before we hop off to the next pony/zebra/griffon in our path to Twilight.
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I manage to comment first for once and I still get screwed. This is... Somewhat irritating.
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After a disappointed sigh, you wave spike away, and announce that there will be no revolution tonight. He seems disappointed, but, after assuring him you'll argue for a bigger allowance, he seems satisfied, and trods off.

Shoot. He was your ride.

You look across the vast landscape, to see just how far ofd Twilight is... And she's on the opposite side of the room. Spaced in between you and her, is quite literally everyone else present here, Starting with Zecora, then going to Gabby, Followed by Derpy, and finally Twilight herself.
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>>32641213
Go over to Zecora.
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>>32641198
(Oh dear. How did you get Screwed, Anon?)
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>>32641220
Specifically her hooves. Are ponies ticklish?
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>>32641221
Doing both posts essentially makes my one meaningless. If I hadn't made my comment the only difference would be that the first part of the last post would be gone.
It just feels like I can't make any impact on the story.
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I am >>32641220 I did not post >>32641231 Do not do >>32641231
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>>32641242
If we approach her butt something is going to stop us. Where should we go instead?
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>>32641235
(You make a good point... I am terribly sorry for the misunderstanding, I'll try and find a way to resolve diometrically opposed ideas rathrr than combine them).

(That in mind,

>>32641242
Do not execute?)
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>>32641251
I'll be honest, I'm entirely against going to her hooves purely because you made it seem like I posted it as an afterthought.
I don't mind going to her hooves, just remember to link to the original post when you make a post. Or at least do something to make it clear you're not the same anon.
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>>32641273
(So, we're clear on: Head to Zecora, Check Hooves?)
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>>32641273
Whatever man, I just wanted to see if she laughs in iambic pentameter.
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>>32641277
Sure.
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>>32641286
(You get bonus points, because that thought made me chuckle).

You sigh, and give a very professional salute to Rarity, before sliding down her side. "oh--be careful!" she protests lightly as her soft skin and fur whiz by you. After a short sliding descent, you land harmlessly on the floor below, and make a dash towards the next closest pony: Zecora.

It takes you a few minutes of jogging to get over to her. More specifically, to reach the closest outstretched part of her: a front hoof. Slowing down and resting for just a moment on the lower pad, you sigh, and hear the rhythmic, measured breathing of Zecora up above. That makes you curious...

Starting off slow, you decide to attempt to tickle the center of her hoof, in the more sensitive flesh, sliding your arms and fingers all across it and listening closely... But yes, yiu think you hear something... possibly her giggling, but it's very measured...
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(A warning note. I got about another half hour before I must away, work and all tomorrow).
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>>32641320
Start to climb up the stripped legs.
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Attempting to get closer to the source, you grab onto the short fur found along the side of her hoof, and begin climbing, pulling yourself along with measured movements, and a determined goal. By the time you reafhed the top of the leg, and begun to climb quickly upwards, towards Zecora's face, you notice that she has a thin smile worn upon her lips, and, though her eyes remain shut, her breathing has changed subtly, and blows over you in short, consistent waves.
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>>32641376
Try to calm her back to sleep by rubbing that stripy belly.
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You can't risk her waking up! Not yet! You have to think fast. Looking around, you try to think of something. You could hide under her arm, jump under her chin if you run fast enough or... Aha! you could jump over to her belly, and give it a good rub! This seemed a good idea, and so, bracing yourseld, you take a mighty leap off of the foreleg and...

Land with a bounce on her abdomen. Nailed it. Nestling into the striped fur found within, you slowly roll around, feeling the mattress-like surface beneath you indent with your weight, as you rub and roll along her center. Luckily, this does indeed seem to chill her out a bit, and just as you've found yourself in a fuzzy spot, the hairs around you like blades of tall grass, she returns to her standard sleeping rhythm. Funny, now that you're here, it seems to match perfectly with her heartbeat as well.
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>>32641427
Give that heart a good listen. Is she asleep or laying in ambush?
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You decide to get a good listen of that heart, just to see if she really is alseep, or if she's jist pretending... You slowly stalk forward, tip-toeing across the tender surface of Zecora's torso, letting the sound and thrum beneath your feet guide you, until, after a short measured trek, you arrive on her chest, just above that massive thrumming metronome.

You lean down, and place your ear to the ground, noting that the constant beating of her heart is measured and steady, holding at 60 BMP almost exactly. It's moments like this when you wonder if she may be under some kind of curse or spell, but as you feel warm breath across your back, you may just have your answer as to her wakefulness.

Her words pour over you, as you look up to meet her gaze, and wide grin.
"Well well well, my little one.
Thought you'd sneak over; have some fun?

Crawling on giants is not very wise,
so what punishment for you should I devise?"

(And we'll leave off on that cliff hanger for now! Sleepless, You're it until I come back).
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>>32642287
I've yet to come up with a good name for it. Any suggestions?
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>>32642367
A good name for what? Your story?
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>>32642378
Yea
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>>32642388
How about 'Dad anon, the tale of two twins'?
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>>32632222
You are now Anon
It's been quiet here in the womb. No movement gently shook your comfy little water bed, no ambient noises reached your ears, except for the beat of the mare's heart and faint gurgling noises coming from somewhere in her body. You lie awake, having awoken sometime in the night, or what you guess is night, given the inactivity of your host. You contemplate how you got here, and what fate might have in store for you next. You found two eggs yesterday planted into the uterus, small, almost imperceptible, but there nonetheless. It had once again filled you with emotion, seeing the very start of your progeny at their conception. You had dared not touch them, for fear you would disturb their development. So you left them alone, instead napping towards the entrance, occasionally fondling yourself.
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>>32642711
Try escaping again.
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Now might be an opportune moment to leave this place and venture out to meet the mother of your children face to face, so to speak. The journey will be long and arduous, and you can't be sure of what happens once you leave here or if you can return.
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>>32641141
>tfw Twilight will never be your slave master
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>>32643316
Try and find the cervix, see if it's still sealed shut.
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>>32642423
Her Majesty's Secret Cervix
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Hoo boy, I've had a busy day.

You idly wonder if the gateway out of here is even open. There was nothing more you could do here, leaving would probably be the best option, but if the the door remained shut, there was no chance of escape. You unsteadily get up yo your feet, and wander up the slope to the cervix. You give it a cursory poke, then a soft rub, to determine if the hole was soft enough to crawl through. Apparently, the period of tightness had ceased, permitting you to make an uneasy, and cramped exit.
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>>32644364
Good. Good.

We leave now before one of the twins absorbs us into it's being. If we go slow, maybe she won't notice our departure and clamp down.
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>>32642711
It's a close fit, but you manage to squeeze your way through. It's moist inside the vagina, but nowhere near as it was. You slowly crawl through the tight corridor, treading lightly to avoid triggering arousal.
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>>32644452
Didn't we ditch our clothes halfway in? Keep an eye out on the way.
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On the way you feel around for your lost pants, but do not find them. They must've slid out when you made her orgasm earlier. Looks like you're going to have to go au natural for a while. Midway through your crawl you feel the tunnel sway a bit. Look's like the sleepy head finally awoke from her slumber. You're going to have to be even more cautious now that she's fully conscious.
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>>32644612
Hold still for a little while then very slowly continue to crawl forwards.
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Crouching low you hold perfectly still, holding your breath counting to ten. A small glimmer lies at the end of the path. too small to illuminate but bright enough you can still see it. That little glimmer is your goal, and your way out of.here. Starting from your crouched position you proceed even slower than before, stopping at every major sign of movement. You laugh at the irony that in order to get in here you had to make her cum, and to get out you have to avoid sexual arousal altogether.
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>>32644906
Try to keep our laughing under control as we head towards the light.
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Tamping down your giggling you press onward. Eventually the glimmer grows much larger, until it's a full blown circular hole of light. Finally, you reach the entrance to the vagina, pushing aside the gigantic flaps and peering outside.
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>>32645134
Push ourselves out a little farther and take a good look around.
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From your limited point of view you see a familiar braided tail wag in the distance, shaking to and fro while the mare walks. The ground far below is covered in flagstones, and you can hear faint voices drifting in, letting you know that you're outside back in that town again, and that the mare must be out running errands.
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>>32645196
That stone does not seem like a nice place to land, stay where we are for now waiting for a good opportunity.
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Falling onto the hard stones while climbing seems... less than ideal. You bide your time until the mare moves onto softer terrain.
It's going to difficult to reach back up to the dock with the sparsely furred backside providing few hand holds. The tail is also out of reach save for a mighty jump. You could attempt to make your way into the flank, climbing up onto the back, navigate down and try to cross her underbelly fur, or wait until she sits down to make the journey safer.
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>>32645303
We didn't get where we are by being scared. Try to climb and make our way up her flank.
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You didn't get where you are now by being scared. By being a crazy thrill-seeker, yes, but not scared. You decide to ascend by climbing the flank, grasping one of the labia and hauling yourself up onto it. Grunting, you swing your body, hurling yourself into a thick patch of fur. Grinning, you begin climbing at an angle to save energy and shave off a bit of time. The way things are going, you're probably going to need it.
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>>32645418
Continue climbing quickly, take small breaks when we need to we don't need to rush.
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Continuing to climb, taking small breaks to conserve energy. you come across several patches of off-color fur, not really close close in hue to the area surrounding it/ Curious, you reach out and touch it. A sudden torrent of images and vague feelings flood your mind, leaving you unprepared and temporarily making your vision go blank. When next your eyes open shadowy shapes dance in your vision, along with dozens of faint whispery voices that all seem to say the same thing: "My name is Gilded Lily. and painting is the core of who I am."
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>>32645654
Let go of the oddly colored patch of fur quickly and grab onto another a normal looking patch of fur.
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You hastily release your hold and grasp a normal patch of fur. The voices cease. What the fuck was that? Did you achieve some kind of telepathic link with the mare? Shaking your head you press on. There would be time to worry about this when you were in a safer position. Things just keep getting weirder and weirder.
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>>32648918
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>>32649597
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>>32646908
Continue the climb to her head. Considering we are alone and probably don't have the best hunter-gatherer skills it is probably best we stick with these ponies and mooch off of them borrower style.
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After that short trip you are finally on the rump. The route to the head is a long one, all the way across the back and up the neck, and the back might as well be a desert, providing little shelter, and being buffeted by winds that, to her, probably feel like a gentle breeze, but to you, feel like 15-20 MPH winds. If you're going to do this, you're going to have to mentally prepare for the journey ahead.
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>>32650740
Rest for now in the small of her back until we get indoors or she stops moving.
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You elect to backtrack to the tail, to hide in the long hairs and bide your time until she either goes indoors or stops.
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>>32650877
https://tgchan.org/wiki/Advice_for_Running_a_Quest
>If a switch is pulled, it's best not to have the result be that nothing happens.
>If the current location or scene has no real options, go ahead and move the plot forward automatically.
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>>32650877
>>32651041
>(Suggesters) are often paranoid. Even if you're running something lighthearted, people will sometimes be afraid to do something that might lead to consequences.
>They are easily distracted. If no effort is taken to guide the story, they will happily have the character faff about getting nothing done until they eventually lose interest in the quest. Having a quest about faffing about is fine, but make sure there's something interesting to do and that they are guided to it!
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>>32651041
thank you anon I'll take tha under consideration.
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>>32652673
I just realized what name you settled on
>>32644357
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>>32653393
Yeah, I thought it was pretty funny.

After a couple of hours resting in the tail, you notice a subtle change in the air. It's not quite as bright as it was, and it's somewhat cooler. You pop your head up out of the bunched hair, and swig your gaze in a wide arc. You are definitely indoors, the light of the sun has been replaced by soft, artificial light, and you can see a ceiling high above. Groaning, you extricate yourself and crawl partway up the tail to get a better look. Ponies of all colors are wandering around, lying on tables while another pony beats on them with their hooves, or lounging in pools of water with steam rising from them, chatting with each other. If you had to guess, you're in some kind of massage parlor or spa. If the mare came here to get a back massage, that might spell trouble for you if you get caught in the middle of it.
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>>32653576
Get to the mane to hide. If she gets a shampoo we can fall into her ear for safety.
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You rush up the curve of the back in to reach the neck as soon as possible, before anything unfortunate befalls your tiny body. You make it to the very edge of her mane and frantically climb before she steps into one of the scalding pools, submerging her body all the way up to the withers.
If you had stayed put, you would've been swept away and boiled in your skin by the steaming water.
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>>32654390
Try talking to this one.
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>>32654390
You're not home free yet, you can still feel the hot moisture rising and coating your body. You cling desperately to the increasingly slick mane, climbing like your life depended on it, which in all honesty, it probably does. Pushing into the deep interior of her hair, you finally reach a point you can rest, unceremoniously flopping down on the ground and gasping for air. You fervently hope she doesn't decide to dunk her head or you're done for.
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>>32654550
After resting a moment and catching your breath, you get up, and continue navigating the dense jungle of hair. It;s unpleasantly hot and humid, and you occasionally slip on the wet underfur. After a short perilous journey you, walk out into the open air. standing at the peak where the hair parts the middle of her mane.
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Boop
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>>32635053
>you are now about to witness the strength of street knowledge
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Why is this place so fucking dead?
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>>32659633
Maybe it's that way because there are just two CYOA writefags that aren't always around. I would also guess that there are fewer vorefags on the board compared to any other time. I would like to write some non-CYOA things but I have not gotten to it.
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>>32660151
Actually, I'm nearly always in this thread. I may be not be good at the whole writing thing yet, but if you need your daily dose of horsewords I'm your man.
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>>32660151
Also, if you want to write something go for it.
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