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Constructive critique and/or praise for my latest photo handiwork?

I've titled this piece. "American Exceptionalism"

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Why hasn't /p/ torn this thread to pieces yet?
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>>3132470
What's wrong with it?


Bump
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>>3132470
because we know better.
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>>3132470
Bait, rated 10/10
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>>3132495
>>3132497
OP here

Genuinely asking for feedback. It seemed pretty solid to me.
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>>3132503
Well then, genuinely, what is the message of your artwork?

I cant really critique you, because I cant base it on anything, but that eagle is weirdly photoshopped for a start.
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>>3132292
Turn the saturation up. My eyes aren't quite bleeding yet.
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>>3132511
Here's a less photoshopped version.

The message is really capturing the relationship between America and our northern neighbor Canada, and my perceived dominance hierarchy between our country and how we are the more dominant power. This the title "American Exceptionalism". The bold colors is to represent the shining beacon that is our country in a world of darkness. The eagle could have been a bit better I'll concede. But overall I still think it's pretty solid.

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>>3132518
>The bold colors is to represent the shining beacon that is our country in a world of darkness.

Hahahaha im fucking done. No way this isnt bait. Decent job on it too.
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>>3132523
Why can't I be a patriotic amateur photographer? Don't shun me /p/...
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>>3132525
No way someone is this un-self-aware

Btw thank me for bumping your shitty thread
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>>3132518
>really capturing the relationship between America and our northern neighbor Canada
it's just a shitty model holding a flag in front of a different flag lol
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>>3132528
This is why I need help. Thank you btw
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>>3132538
She is not shitty.
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>>3132572
weird facial expression, staring directly down camera, doesn't know what to do with hands
>but muh heterochromia
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>>3132571
Okay. Maybe its not my thing, but if this is all genuine, do your thing, man. Thats potentially super cool :)
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>>3132292
oversaturated
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>>3132292
Why does that girl need to be in the frame?
It's a little heavy handed and relies too much on the title.

>The message is really capturing the relationship between America and our northern neighbor Canada
It doesn't capture anything.
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>>3132518
>the shining beacon that is our country in a world of darkness
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>>3132518
>the shining beacon that is our country in a world of darkness
your shining beacon has a president who's in bed with russia and white supremacists
so good luck with that
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>>3133810
>being this proud of yourself for this shitty post
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>>3133846
It's copy pasta
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>>3142292

She's kinda hot for an implied Canadian
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>>3133861
Yes he started an entire thread for it elsewhere. Most people ignored it so he's trying again here. Hide it




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