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>>3166308
trite
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>>3166315
:(
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>>3166315
im only a beginner :) would appreciate some tips
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>>3166317
lurk more
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>>3166318
i dont have much pictures though :/
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>>3166308
Hey. You still might be around I might as well give you some piece of advice since I am already fucked as my paper is due in couple of hours and I havent really started yet.

The pic is honestly pretty average and not interesting in too many ways, perhaps apart from the silhouette in front of the flag or the contrast of the flag and Chinese characters in upper right corner. Exposure is okay - nice, vivid colors and underexposed just right.

Overall, too much disturbing stuff is going on in foreground and background too. Isolate your subject, know what you are focusing on before pushing down the shutter button. Use primes, zoom with your legs, work on your composition - lines, shadows, colours, geometry.

My pic is four years old, so I am not too content with it now, just to show you what can be done.

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>>3166560
>giving advice to someone with a photo better than yours
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>>3166317
Just rotate and correct perspective. Whatever you did with the colours was good. Nice clean, crisp edit.

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>>3166308
why no exif? i wanna know which you used
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FB: ozzy editings

Just add me y'all
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>>3166957
how about you fuck off, why would i add you
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Now rate my photograph.

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>>3167251
stop trying to hijack other people's threads, martin
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>>3166308
too noisy. It would be good without the gold and red light. It needs more contrast.

the narrative between the asian letters and the US flag is good but there should be more narrive than that


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All feedback is very valuable to me given that I have stage 3 bone cancer. I am really trying to live life in the photography "fast lane". Just because I have cancer doesn't mean you have to be nice in your comments, I want the complete human experience. Happy photo taking.

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>>3170202
>too noisy. It would be good without the gold and red light. It needs more contrast.
literally none of those things are true, you're bad at this chosis.
>the narrative between the asian letters and the US flag is good but there should be more narrive than that
you really need to look up what the word narrative means, you're constantly misusing it lol
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>>3170202
Bone cancer man strikes again!




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