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Reposting the fetishbait with small adventure bits from yesterday
Feedback, corrections, furious criticism welcome as always

>'Which waifu/evil opressor would you pick?' strawpoll
http://www.strawpoll.me/13914825

>Things I especially want to get (You)r advice on:
To people who seriously considered picking Eloise (if they exist) and Sylvia, but for some reason didn't: What did you like about Eloise/Sylvia? Who and why did you like more ? How would you like me to change her to make her your top choice?

>Things I consider changing in the 1.1 version
Sylvia: clarifying that she considers the player cute and wants to have fun with him • maybe allowing the player to look into Earth's past under certain conditions
Eloise: reword her experiments to make it clear that she considers the player more like a lovely familiar and less like a test subject • reword the last paragraph to make it clear the player will be showered with gently dominant love
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>>55366980
>Other changes I consider
Descriptions: reducing or removing the text glow entirely

>Changes I don't consider
Rewriting the characters entirely
Serious changes to Beatrice

I'll probably repost it one more time before waiting for the weekend.
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Shit, didn't see the Tok thread.
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>>55367015
Is Claire the one you thought would beat everyone, or did you think it was someone else?
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>>55367064
Don't worry, you didn't miss anything of value.
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>>55367361
Currently has more posters and is being used. Deal with it.
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Post some wip.
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>>55367600
>fuck a tree
>fuck a knife
>fuck a teacup
>fuck a person
Well that's an easy choice.
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>>55367665
>Not going for the classic ceramic
You have no taste.
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>>55367665
>fuck
Why would you purchase a fuck doll? Is that the only thing you think about?
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>>55367720
WRYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY
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>>55367706
>you care about this, therefore it's the only thing you are about
Are you capable of functioning in the real world?
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>>55367600
What someone posted in the last thread:
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>>55367197
>Pick A Quiet Morning
>Choose Shelter and Comfort
>Survivalist perk +free perk Found a Friend
>The good doggo as my companion obvs.
>Zombie attractor drawback
>Goal: Find the Truth

Surviving zombie apocalpyse is damn easy, provided the cause is natural. If however the cause are the likes of black magic/necromancy or human-made biohazard mutation virus, then the survival difficulty just shot straight to the sky.

Zombie, scientifically and biologically speaking, is nothing more than walking corpse. And a corpse, if you study medical, will enter putrefaction; the breaking down of a body of a human or animal post mortem (meaning after death). Protein decompossed, the corpse shall be nothing but skeletons. This decay stage occurs between 4 to 10 days after death. The more humid the faster the process.

To survive therefore, we simply just have to WAIT on some place with zero access for these walking morons.
Even better if you live somewhere on tropical place.
Turning on the heater too would work on close place, but beware of the smell. Use gas mask or simply flumask.

Next is to find any source of information. Look for recent newspaper and browse internet. Then after the zombies are completely decomposed, find my way through the TV station. There must be something they uncovered.

Gather canned food and sport equipment that provide defense. Thick leather jackets, blue jeans, high worker boots, and full-cover motorcycle helmet.

Finally, get settled down somewhere with open field for farming and nearby lake, do whatever, and wait for the inevitable ends.

If nothing else happened, my last goal probably is to take care of my doggo's descendant.
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>>55367665
>fuck a tree
>Well that's an easy choice.
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>>55367600
Ceramic of course.

Unless you are an animal that will do lewd things toward this delicate beautiful work of wonderful art.
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>>55367783
>anon makes an easy choice based on his penis desires
I just like to assume the worst about people.
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>>55368012
>Gehrman implied that the doll is ''anatomically correct''
Thank god he is stuck in that wheel chair.
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>>55368118
How do you think he got in the wheelchair in the first place?
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>>55367159
>Pick Occult Wizard
Perks:
>Fortune specialist
>Divination specialist
>Summoning


>Become a wandering magician who pushed the button of sanity to each 'unique' person encountered
>Observe as your new 'disciple/doll' unleashed chaos upon the cities
>Erect an apartment, twenty story tall
>Metropolitan interior design, affordable renting fee, flooding requests to stay
>Fill the place up with unsuspected applicants
>Experiment them all up and replace theor body with monotonous doll looping their action at their last moment
>Not even enough to reach Akashic record
>Brooding at the disappointing result
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>>55366719
>become a saber- all the worlds evils
>True Name: Dietrich Von Todsbringer
>Alignment - lawful evil
Personality:
>archetype- saber alter
>traits- cruel, apathetic, honorable, resolute, conflicted

Servant Class: Avenger (saber)

Physical features:
>Male
>Horrifying, normal
>adult saber
>ahoge less

Clothing:
>medium armor
>suit&tie, casual

Servant Parameters:
>Strength A(13)
>Endurance B(7)
>Agility A(13)
>Magic C (3)
>Luck D (1)
>NP A(13)

Class Skills:
>Magic resistance B
>Presence Concealment D (4)
>Avenger EX (26)

Personal Skills:
>Battle continuation EX (25)
>Eye of The Mind (false) A (15)
>Mana Burst C (6)
>Expert Specialization E (1) (martial arts)
>Disengage D (3)

Noble Phantasms:
"Infernum in terra, all of mans evil"- EX rank reality marble (15)
grants immunity to damage and effects of inhuman origin, when activated imposes "human reality" upon those within, rendering those within mortal and sealing and powers that contradict this truth
"Frieden and Ruhe"- A rank weapon/s (10)
paired weapons:
Ruhe- not a specific weapon but rather the legacy of the firearms wielded during his life, any ranges weapon wielded by him becomes equivalent to a noble phantasm of D rank and will disrupt the magecraft of Magi
Frieden- Cursed bastard sword, the blade severs magical energy - rendering magecraft, magical enhancements and projections useless. wounds caused by this weapon heal do not heal from supernatural effects

>inb4 3edge5me
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>>55367159
>Class
Gambler

>Specialties
Waifu
Entretainment
Acommodations

I know how this is going to end but i have to try anyways.
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>>55367159
Earth Wizard
Geology, Magnetism, Enchanting

Someone's gotta help rebuild civilization after all this crazy shit goes down. Any Life mages want to team up and make some eco-friendly cities?
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>>55367600
Oh anon, why. If this were a lewd picture, I would be humping the fucking table. Don't show me the WIP I want the fuckning CYOA you cuck HTE CYOA
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>>55368236
Ayyys
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>>55369251
anon had a stroke
rip 19x-2017
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>>55366980
amazing. great job.

(beatrice best gurl)
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>>55368236
If you defeat Gehrman, you too get s... WAIT OH SHI~~
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>>55367174
Ye she was supposed to take first and Irma or Sylvia were expected to take second place depending on which will be more appealing to anons who can't stand being weaker than their partner
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>>55366980
I considered picking Eloise, she was my third pick behind Claire and Irma.

Couple reasons I ended up not going with Eloise.
The whole "putting me into the bodies of animals" things feels like things could go south real quickly. What happens if I somehow get stuck in the body of one? I know it says she'll eventually stop using her experiments on me, but I'm just worried of something bad happening before I get to that point.
Now if she's teaching me to shapeshift into animals, that would be a different story, and make her much more appealing to me, but then you'd have to rewrite her quite a bit.
And like I've said before, it just seems like I have to give her total control, and while the motherly aspect is something I can get behind, I just think I'd prefer a little back and forth. With Claire it at least implies that we'd have a bit of a relationship that goes two ways.
Maybe I'd be more inclined to choose her if she had better art. It's not terrible, but that mole/beauty mark really brings it down a notch for me. And maybe if she had more milfy proportions to go with the whole mommy thing.

I don't know if any of these things are things you can fix (or want to), but I just thought I'd explain my reasoning.
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>>55367981
Guess Tim is really poplar with all the girls.
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>>55369370
>19x
He had a good 1800 years or so.
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>>55366980
That'd definitely move Sylvia towards being a better choice. If I wanted to be ignored by women I'd just stay here.
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>>55369560
kek
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>>55367600
I'm torn between shiny metallic and lifelike synthetic

Looks real good so far!
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>>55369600
I agree Too bad it is a dead WIP and it will never ever be completed
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>>55369706
I'm used to it by now.

Why would anything nice ever happen?
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>>55369523
>Maybe I'd be more inclined to choose her if she had better art. It's not terrible, but that mole/beauty mark really brings it down a notch for me. And maybe if she had more milfy proportions to go with the whole mommy thing.

I was worried Eloise's and Irma's portraits will be discouraging, as I had trouble finding good art for what I have imagined. Pic related was among the considered alternatives.

>Now if she's teaching me to shapeshift into animals, that would be a different story, and make her much more appealing to me, but then you'd have to rewrite her quite a bit.

Thought about shapeshifting but it would kind of contradict Taliana's description because it implies shapeshifting magic ("manipulating the form") is hard to do. Will have to buff it differently

>The whole "putting me into the bodies of animals" things feels like things could go south real quickly. What happens if I somehow get stuck in the body of one?

I guess stating that your soul will automatically return to your body if anything goes wrong would remove these fears. Didn't think the issue is big enough to affect people's choices.
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>>55367600
oops i did it again
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>>55370110
You played with my heart!
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>>55370110
Such sweet design hot damn.
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>>55370110
is the art a placeholder? because all the suits the companions have looks sweet while this one looks underwhelming
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>>55369995
See, that portrait now hugely improves my chances of picking her. Probably my favorite looking girl out of any of them honestly.
It helps that I like animals too, so her havin a whole sorta zoo might be fun to hang around.
Yeah, I can see why you wouldn't want to do shapeshifting though. A failsafe on the soul thing would probably help squash my fears though. Like just stating that my soul will always return to the original body if something goes wrong.
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>>55370152
The mobile suit is about 8-10x bigger though, allows you to fly around like a Gundam, and equip lots of heavy weapons for a short amount of time. It's one of the detachable "vehicles" you can use with the Dragoon class, and is what makes the Dragoon class unique. It's not that strong of a suit on its own (which is still highly capable in combat compared to the average soldier) but it's the only one that can pilot large vehicles.
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>>55370221
its not about gameplay

its that the art makes it look less cool than the other options, which is probably not what you want for a gundam
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>>55370264
I think it looks fine. I don't understand what you don't like about it.
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>>55370292
its almost blends into the background due to being so gray/brown- while theother suits stand out and look imposing

it also doesent convey scale well
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>>55367600
>All the people here hating on /clang/ and going Ceramic and Synthetic
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>>55370306
>its almost blends into the background due to being so gray/brown
That doesn't sound like much of an issue with me. It's visible enough to give an idea of what to expect with the option.

>it also doesent convey scale well
It's exactly the reason why I chose the picture--because it looks bulky. It conveys scale just fine for me.
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>>55370381
I dunno you (((SDA))) but I agree with him. It looks like a tiny toy.
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>>55370324
Look, if you gave me a choice of waifus I might pick any one of them if I liked the girl better. All other things being equal though, I see no reason not to go synthetic
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>>55370412
You're reply as if you don't know what /clang/ is.Or as if you didn't understand what I wrote.
What the hell DID you read?
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>>55370324
It's not that hard to see why, really.
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>>55370410
You haven't even seen the other modules around it, so I don't know how you're making such a judgment. The scaling is fine, especially for its section.
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>>55370442
My point is that I would go with the wooden clockwork/shiny matallic (aka the clang options) if I had a reason to, they just aren't my first choice. I don't see that as "hating on" them.
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>>55370522
There's only one people with strong opinion about the material. I don't think its enough for hating the other 2 options anon, but rather a matter of preference.

Ceramic material signify their extremely brittleness. Wood gouges and cracks can be repaired/hidden by DIY or skilled carpenter if major cases. So is with metallic.

But with ceramic? Oh no no anon, once a crack shows up then it is either broken or replaced as a whole. That's why the level of preservation and maintenance is much higher than other materials. And that's why ceramic doll have some more values than the others.
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>>55370661
Maybe that repairing ceramic with gold thing could be used on the ceramic doll?
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>>55370842
I just figured out how to make a tiger girl.
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>>55370381
>it looks bulky
it really doesent, it looks small and out of focus

you are good at graphical design so you should know you dont place things on background of the same color

>its visible enough to give an idea
an option that looks like its trying to camouflage itself is bad idea
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>>55370500
DON'T FIST THE ROBOT.
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>>55370905
>an option that looks like its trying to camouflage itself is bad idea
What if the option was offering camouflage?
Checkmate haterz XDD
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>>55370842
It depends I think. Porcelain doll must all be in pure white and undamaged. A 'perfection' if you will.

Kintsugi only being applied to imperfection aesthetic stuffs, mostly tea ware utensils such as chawan, bowl, plate, vase...

But rarely on human-shaped doll because as you can see.
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>>55370905
>small and out of focus
It's directly in the center and it's small compared to what? The text?

Do you really think that shoulder-mounted weapon is a pea shooter instead of likely a 20mm cannon?

>background of the same color
First of all, blame the artist. Second, it is easy to make out the shape on first glance; you have to be blind to think that this is a "camouflage option."

>an option that looks like its trying to camouflage itself is bad idea
The giant flying robot really doesn't look like it's trying to camouflage itself.
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>>55371101
*Screams in sullied aesthetics*
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>>55367015
I guess it's not your fault, but I dislike every combination of lifestyle and waifu and kink. I like Taliana's lifestyle (being her demon) and I like the look and general sense of her being dominant; not into BDSM, though :(
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Does anyone have the latest W.A.I.F.U. cyoa?
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>>55367600
Shiny (Dull) Metallic is the best answer. In the line of TARKUS TARKUS TARKUS
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Here you go.
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>>55371404
Thanks!
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>>55371404
Dorothy is a slut, them bobbies just boin-boin everywhere uncovered even in public.
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>>55371506
Nothing wrong with that. She should be proud of her corporeal form.

Now B'Ta'Nyie, on the other hand? Don't get me wrong, I'm not one of those purityfags who insists I should be the first cultist to summon an Eldritch horror from beyond time and space. That's just pathetic. But wanting other cultists to summon her while you're already in an apocalypse? That's just sick.
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>>55371404
The Nameless Clad in Gold looks like a man with those abs. I suppose the author did not have any images, or is the last section just HUSBANDOs-only?
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>>55371236
>camouflage itself.
its flowery language, but options should attract the gaze- that mech doesn't, it looks like its trying to hide.

sure- that might be the artists fault but you were the one who chose the image

>small and out of focus
because the mech is coloured how it is its outline isnt very well defined, so it seems smaller than it is compared to the box size

>out of focus
once againl because of its colour and the fact that it blends in with the background (also that hexagon pattern overlay) the mech doesn't seem like much of a focal point
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>but options should attract the gaze- that mech doesn't
It does, though. I'm genuinely confounded as to how you came to such a conclusion because the mech is very well contrasted against the monotone background. As I said, you have to be blind if you can't differentiate the tone of the mech and the tone of the background. It's the most contrasted part of the image; I find it very easy to pick out where the mech is in the picture.

>it blends in with the background
First thing my eyes go to is the mech. Get some glasses.

Here, I enlargened the image. Does this fix your issues?
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>>55371827
better

>monotone background
m80 boy, im not the one who needs glasses here- the background goes from darkish brown/gray to light brown/gray

rather similar colors to the mech
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>>55371101
I wouldn't mind a gold lined arm, or other extremity. I will admit I am shallow enough that on the face is a big no no.
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If you insist, here's the first page of Food Magican 2. Yes, I am aware that the background colors are ugly.
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>>55372083
If the background is not relatively monotone, then the mech is heavily contrasted and defined. The outline is very easy to pick out and the shading makes it stand out very well.
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>>55371827
The hexagons make it somewhat difficult to look at.
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>>55366980
How strong is the anti-magic from Claire?

Could I use it to negate female magic and bring down the matriarchy?
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>>55372155
>then the mech is heavily contrasted and defined.
the lightest part of the background coincides with the lightest part of the mech, and they are of similar enough colors

naturally you can see that there IS a mech there, that isnt the issue- its that it does nothing to attract the eye. its basic art 101- dont have the subject be the same color as the background
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>>55372165
I have two versions of the hexagon pattern overlay, one for regular images and one for characters. This is the one for characters, which is lighter; does this look better?

>>55372222
>the lightest part of the background coincides with the lightest part of the mech
The smallest part of the image. You literally have to be blind to not see the mech immediately. It's the first thing you notice.
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>>55372295
this is better
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>>55372295
Much better, it doesn't feel like you're looking through the hexagons to see the picture now.
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>>55372122
It has nothing to do with being shallow and whatnot. A perfection and imperfection is two side of a coin, and each state is equally pertinent on difference appliances, aesthetically speaking.
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>>55372295
I like this one better.
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>>55372154
wait, what's food magician one?
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Kinda just guessing that I'll get the order right on these. Can't organize files on my phone that well.
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Ah thank goodness.
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And the final page here.
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I really like this one but can never decide what cards to pick. I hope more like this get made. Maybe I'll try my hand at it later.
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>>55373613
DOC, XLS, PPT, PDF, and AI. The last one mainly just for fun.
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>>55373733
ESPer
The Old Bot
The Mad Scientist
Technopathy
ESPer's Aegis
Tinker
Know No Fear
Jury Rig
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>>55373613
2x BMP, 1png PDF XLS. Might as well take advantage of a few shortcuts to help me along my career path.
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>>55372154
So you intend Foci, which give spells & mana mechanics; Familiars, which give slots, a free unique spell, and a bound friend/servant; and Spells, and you pick 1 each of the former which determines what of the latter you get?
Anything else intended?
Perhaps 1 free spell of any school is a good idea?
looks solid so far.
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>>55372154
>Hardtack Tsukumogami
Well, I think I'm sold unless you have some damn good alternatives.
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>>55373613
does this stack with what you already know? also this is really missing SocSci (PoliSci is less common than Psych & Econ afaict) & Kines, and non-bio hard sci (Chem, rly). and engineering? thatd make it even

I really only point out Kines cause Muscle Memory points so strongly towards it.

Overall it's v nice & simple, & looks good.

You're probably not the creator, this is probably old, idc.

Build w current version, assuming it stacks
>Humanities, Art, Speech, Nutrition, Bio

With an expanded version
>Humanities, Psych, Kines, Art, Speech
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>>55374674
Yeah, it's from early 2016. I just posted it because I haven't seen it in a while.
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Why are there 2 active threads?
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>>55374759
Because you touch yourself at night
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Create-a-Saber!

Alignment
>Chaotic Good

Archetype
>Saber of Red
Traits
>Wrathful
>Conflicted
>Tomboy
>Immature
>Friendly

Servant Class
>Saber

Physical Features:
>Female
>Adorable
>Teen
>No Ahoge

Clothing:
>Light Armour
>Skimpy Outfit
>Casual

Servant Parameters:
>Strength A
>Endurance A
>Agility B (A with Equipment)
>Magic D
>Luck C
>NP A

Class Skills:
>Magic resistance B
>Independent Action A
>Self-Field Defense B
>Territory Creation D

Personal Skills:
>Instinct EX
>Golden Rule A
>Eye of the Mind (True) B

Noble Phantasms:
>EX Rank (Anti-World, Weapon)
Yep it's basically Ea. Fuck fairness.
>A Rank (Equipment, Anti-Unit)
Something like Karna's armour.

So yeah, this is basically a superior Mordred with Ea and Karna's armour. Which is pretty much perfection, if you ask me.
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>>55375005
...Should've probably quoted the relevant CYOA. >>55366719

I mean, no one's gonna miss it, but it's just common courtesy.
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>>55373613
AI x2, no more shitty stick figures for me
DOC, to maintain my English and creative writing skills because why not throw brain patches after years of college?
PPT to supplement it
XLS because I kind of regret not going into higher math.

Or I could be patrician and take XLS 5 times to gain 15 years of abstract mathematical knowledge.
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>>55373842
I remember this one. I really enjoyed it, too.

>Be: Justice
Be a judge and do my very best to make certain everyone gets a fair shake.

>Companion: The hanged man
He wishes to right his wrongs, whatever they may have been. I think we can help each other in this.
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>>55375694
An Emerald Shard
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>>55376268
The only other one anywhere near as good is 'Truth in Ruins' (IMO) and even that's basically the same thing, but on Hard mode. (You don't respawn)
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>>55367847
>Biotic

Does anyone seriously pick the cuckolded by worms option? I can't fathom it. If they were originally part of your body or something you could play at being a more exotic kind of tentacle monster, like Zouken.
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>>55376378
>>55375694

really? Lighted by the aurora is basically perfect. How is emerald shard better than that?

As for me, I choose Rebirth, and I make the world of Emerald Shard and Lighted by the Aurora and Truth in the ruins.
then off to make new worlds.
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>>55376576
I'd like it if the worms were under my control and part of me.
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>>55376585
Because I want to be an all powerful wizard. So, An Emerald Shard.
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>>55375694
Black Sun 4 lyfe

>>55376378
There's Rebirth, which is even better except you have to travel a lot and you have a job to do.

I'd rather just cruise from star to star, though. Maybe with enough alien tech, start reverse engineering my own properties to become a biomechanical mass of solar panels.
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>>55376597
fair enough, but that doesn't make it the only good choices. It depends n your priorities
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>>55374535
That's the bedrock of it, yes. There are also some peer magic users you can befriend, such as a pastor that will reward you if you use your conjuration spells to aid in his charity work and a witch that will reward you if you have combat spells to help her dungeon dive for reagents. I'm also planning on having some local points of intrest listed so that the player knows what there is to DO with their magic.
Hmm, I'm already concerned that I might be a little too generous with the spell slots and the free spell slot determined by the size of your focus serves that purpose just fine, as you can select from any school/element you want.
Thank you kindly.

>>55374639
I'm pretty proud of her, I'll admit.
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>>55376585

For me, basically Emerald shard is comfy mode. You have literally all the time in the world to learn how the universe works and make it work for you. Where as with 'Lighted by the Aurora' you're basically still under the control of others.

I'll fully admit it's a personal choice, but that's my reasoning.
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>>55375694
>>55376378
Truth in Ruins also offers something no other option in this CYOA does. They offer answers, this one offers a question. What's at the heart of the ruins?

I want to know the answer. That's why I pick it over the others.
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>>55376576
Why is everything about cuckoldry with you? Why can't you just infest things with monstrous parasites without thinking about it sexually? Is this some kind of sick fetish of yours?
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>>55376797
thats' what I thought too.
But then I thought, that as much as I like being alone an eternity of loneliness would drive me mad.
And I won't have the mental fortitude or the focus to study and learn enough magic to create other people to keep me company.

On the other hand lighted by the aurora you are reborn with an improved body and mind, which keeps getting better everytime you die, surrounded by people who love you in a nice world.
Definitely the comfiest choice, for me.

But I went for Rbirth because it's the easiest way to power, and i get to make many new worlds the way I like.
It's the cheap version of emerald shard I guess.
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>>55376835
I want to infest things with mostrous mindcontroling parasites to do sexual things to the infected. Is that alright?
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>>55376835
It's a fetish CYOA.
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>>55376869
>I want to infest things with mostrous mindcontroling parasites to do sexual things to the infected. Is that alright?
Only on Tuesdays. Tuesday is parasite day.
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Hello again /tg/, last time i posted this it was very much unreadable. I going simple, is this fine or still an eyesore?
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>>55376585
Aurora has two major flaws. First, the world you come to is not of your choosing or design. While it may be a "great" world, it will not be "perfect" (self contradictory description not withstanding). Second, you must move on. The world you go to when you die here might be even better, but you are leaving behind anything in the previous to get there.

With Shard, you can create a world of your own design, and remain there as long as you like. It might take a great deal of time and effort, but the goal is worth it and there's no rush.
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>>55376949
looks alright apart from the orange. its all readable though
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>>55376949
Consider lowering the saturation of the background color a bit.
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>>55376949

It's certainly better, but I think you should probably go for something other than orange. That one is still a bit of eye-fuckery. Otherwise I think it's fine.
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>>55370500
That is a man who's never heard of soft robotics. Clearly doesnt keep up with the technological times.
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>>55371101
It looks like they could have done a better job of removing the excess gold. It's protruding quite a lot.
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>>55367600
Hurry the fuck up that looks fantastic
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>>55377030
>If you enter into a relationship with another woman.
>Parsee is okay with it. Don't worry she'll be fine.
>She will kill that whore who tried to steal you from her first.
>Then kill you out of love so you don't ever leave her again.
>Then she'll kill herself.

>Parsee is okay with it. Don't worry she'll be fine
Why is this contradiction in here if she knife's you.
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>>55377426
Sorry, anon, but you have Aspergers.
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>>55377565
I mean, that is contradictory. It serves to illustrate a point, but I think that anon is correct in his/her oddly greentexted way
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>>55377565
Just because someone is correct doesn't make them wrong.
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>>55377426
I think it might be one of those new-fangled 'joke' things.
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>>55377663
Mystery Box
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>>55377426
Italics is being sarcastic.
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>>55377718
When is Italics never sarcastic. Be nice if they delivered new fucking OC.
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>>55377663
I like it. It's simple, but actually pretty well done. I took the mystery box. (I'm a sucker, what can I say?)

That being said, I think I can be happy with the mystery box, at least for a while before the great ennui begins to set in.

8/10
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>>55377869
>>55377886
do you happen to know who the artist is?
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>>55377900
Look at the font.
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>>55377933
Now look at your shoes. Now look back at me. I'm riding a horse.
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>>55377964
The artist is now diamonds.
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>>55377933
i think he means the artist of the pictures not the author of the cyoa
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>>55377663
>Stats_personal
>enable_traceon
>Set_Value_Bank

I can live with this.
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>>55377900
Italics here.
The artist is: Masikakuma
Pixiv ID: 4192524

Thank me later.
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>>55377663
>DEFY_APOPTOSIS
>STATS_ALTERPER
>STATS_ALTERPER
Now I have eternal youth and I can significantly increase my int values as well as my health values to increase spacefaring tech as well as medical tech. Colony ship here I come.
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>>55378095
>he does h-work too
what a goldmine, thanks man
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>branched out
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>>55377663
Console_WXEdit_Administrator, and Stats_Personal. Anything else I'd want can be handled with enough time and Console commands, although I'll need to track down a 5100 first.
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>>55373079
I wasn't in time to repost my build in the other thread and I wanted to make sure I had it saved this time, so I'm posting it here.
[Perks]
>Orb of Life
I’m not typically the kind of person that goes for the immortality or eternal youth options in CYOAs because my life is already kind of difficult as is and prolonging is not something I’m super keen on.
But in this case, the more time I have to work with, the better.
Plus if it heals my cornucopia of mental illnesses, that would be just lovely.
>Dream Home
I live in a stupidly small room in my family’s house at the moment, so a mansion would definitely be an upgrade. I also need as much living space as possible for my end goal to be possible.
[Perks With A Catch]
>Employment
Mediating human-supernatural conflicts sounds like a dream job to me. Plus, $400.00 for only 25 hours a week is a pretty sweet gig. It’ll also allow me to spend plenty of time getting to know Miya, which is both important to my plan and something I want to do anyway.
[Roommate]
>Fei La
Honestly, can’t decide if it was brilliant or idiotic for Beri to put the best girl as the first option in the CYOA.
She’s fucking adorable, sweet, and just the perfect partner for my grand plan.
Her dietary needs will also save me a fuck ton on groceries.
I will dutifully keep her safe from the bunch of Van Helsing Wannabes and hold her close her close and comfort her whenever she has a nightmare about turning evil.
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>>55378590
[Responsibility]
>Homemaking
We’re going to be living in a big fucking house, I highly doubt I’m going to be able to keep everything clean and tidy while also working for the OSCI. On top of that, a succubus housewife sounds like one of the most wonderful things in the world.
Especially if she’s willing to wear a maid outfit…
[Contract]
>Demon Sight
First of all, she can be as clingy as she wants. Just means I won’t have to be.
Secondly, I dig having enchanted eyes that glow though I do wish they’d glow yellow instead.
The ability to see and befriend demons is a bonus, but the ability to see and incite lust is a power that I couldn’t turn down even if it wasn’t central to my plan.
[Heirloom]
>Love Potion #14
This right here is the single most important element to my plan. A single bottle would probably be enough, but the fact that I have the recipe along with it makes everything even easier. And my ability to see and befriend demons thanks to Demon Sight should make getting the no doubt rarer ingredients much easier.

[Deal]
>Accept
Why the hell would I even bother picking the Succubus if I wasn’t planning on making love to her? I don’t mind a needy lover, either. In fact, I adore them and have a habit of being one myself.
>Lovemaking
I’m a man with needs and if it means I can make my adorable little roommate well fed and happy then there’s absolutely no downside I can think of. Aside from a sore pelvis and aching abdomen of course.
>Lustonomicon
A book that will make me one of the greatest lover of all time?
Even if it didn’t simply improve the chances of success with my plan, I’d have to be an idiot not to take it. Besides, I’m fairly confident in the girth and length of my dangly bits, so there’s no need to worry about using Sex Drive to enlarge myself when I can make up for size with skill.

And with that all settled, the stage is set for my sinister scheme…
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>>55378614
[Master Plan]
>Step One
I’ll add my saliva to the potion and take Fei La up on her offer to drink it. The submissiveness is a key factor in all this as I will require her to be as obedient and loyal as I can.
>Step Two
While we “grow closer” and settle into our new home, we’ll also construct a laboratory to begin manufacturing large quantities of Love Potion #14. I’ll begin seeking out demons to procure any rare ingredients and task Fei La to work on brewing it every day while I’m at work.
>Step Three
While at the office, I’ll take every chance I can to get close to Miya between working on my cases. I’ll make small talk on breaks, see if she needs any help whenever I have a slow day without many appointments, and regularly offer to bring her something whenever I go out to grab lunch or coffee.
>Step Four
Once we’ve become friends, I’ll day inviting Miya out for drinks on a semi or weekly basis. I do genuinely want to be there for her because she seems like she really needs a friend, but I can’t afford to be a complete saint if I want to succeed.
>Step Five
Once Fei La and I have stocked up a respectable inventory of potions, I continue my routine of spending time with Miya, but I’ll also begin adding small doses of the potion to every drink I bring her. The effects may take a while to appear, but I’m perfectly happy to wait.
>Step Six
Though my morals scream at me not to, once Miya has placed her complete trust in me, I’ll invite her out for drinks as usual. But on this night, in particular, I’ll buy every round and put as much of the potion in each of her drinks as I can without her noticing. I’d rather her come to love me naturally, but I need to be completely sure everything plays out as I need it to or everything up till now will have gone to waste.
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>>55378632
>Step Seven
Once she’s gotten good and drunk, I’ll use my Demon Sight to inflame her desires. The submissive nature of the potion should allow me to easily convince her to take her home with me and that night I’ll give her the greatest sex of her life.
>Step Eight
When she wakes up the next morning I’ll tell her that I love her (which won’t be a lie) and that nothing about last night was a mistake. Then I’ll ask her (though her submissive nature should no doubt make it difficult for her to refuse) to move in with Fei La and I. I’ll convince her, however I can, that my heart has more than enough room for the both of them and, if need be, threaten to leave them both if they can’t agree to share me.
>Step Nine
Now that I have Miya wrapped around my finger, I’ll convince her that I’m the only one trustworthy enough to look after all the other girls that haven’t been taken in already. Between my words, the potions, and her trust and obedience to me, she’ll no doubt agree.
>Step Ten
Fill out all the paperwork and welcome all the girls who haven’t found homes into my mansion with a nice cup of Love Potion #14.

>Harem End: Achieved
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>>55374655
>No one took Incarnation, Energy Sense, or Cataclysm.
Version 2 had a small revision, but I did remember energy sense and cataclysm being picked at least once.

Very impressive work by the way, needs a little more data. You could include reddit builds.
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>>55378590
>>55378614
>>55378632
>>55378657

This all seems fairly legit, except for one part. What happens if the other girls have already 'flown the coop', so to speak?
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>>55378679
If he started tracking builds after the latest revision, I wonder if he was able to curate builds that were repeated but slightly altered. God knows I've done 5 or 6 Monster Hunter builds that are all mostly the same but different on several points
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>>55378694
>>55378694
>What happens if the other girls have already 'flown the coop', so to speak?
I tried to address that:
>to look after all the other girls that haven’t been taken in already.
But it's still entirely possible, so I'm banking on at least some of the better ones still being around and I don't think there's going to be a shortage of girls in need of home stays at the OSCI anytime soon.
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>>55366980

This is really, really good. One of the more absorbing waifu pickers.

I'd be happy with all of them, except for Taliana - she's the hottest... or second hottest, after the alternate version of Eloise >>55369995 .... but the BDSM is an obvious deal breaker.

>To people who seriously considered picking Eloise (if they exist) and Sylvia

I'm one of those people. I'd probably rank them like this: (1) Claire (2) Eloise (3) Sylvia (4) Irma (5) Beatrice

Eloise would be my first choice with one minor tweak. Warging sounds awesome, for one thing. Any (literally any of these changes by themselves) of the following: (a) if she has a compassionate side and doesn't forcefully make you her "test subject," but tries to persuade you. (b) Tone down the "mommydom" side of it a little... perceives me as a "vulnerable little thing?" (c) Honestly probably even if you just used the other pic if I'm being shallow

Sylvia... dipping back into the past sounds really cool. I'd like her more if (a) there were more things to do during all that downtime then just like, "play sportsball with the local boys," which sounds boring. (b) "Rarely wants it" is probably worse than being just friends with her.
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https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=WGOohBytKTU
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>>55378849
Hi, Tok.
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>>55374655
Also, you should include Culling Y/N to the spreadsheet, perhaps their threat levels on pie charts and if you really want to look hard, their defining playstyle (Melee, ranged, defensive, trickery, perception, mobility, etc). Again, really well done. I Bliss, love it
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>>55378833
>perceives me as a "vulnerable little thing?"
I mean, this CYOA does turn you into a shota at the start.
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>>55378928

Yeah, that's why she's a close runner up to Claire even with that facet of her personality.
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Yo cuntss, I got roughly twelve more companions to make and I'm just aa little tipsy an thought this would be a good idea. post some pics for companions or don't, ya can take a look at what i got done so far instead and criticize shit.
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>>55379047
I think it's the main cornerstone of her appeal, anyway, or at least the intended appeal.
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>>55366719

I'll buck my own trend a little here and do a build I normally wouldn't:

>Become a Saber
>Neutral Evil
>French Saber
>Cool
>Dutiful
>Resolute
>Cruel
>Proud
>Lancer
>Male Saber
>Sensuous
>Mature Saber (Like mid thirties early forties)
>Ahoge-less
>Heavy Armor
>Casual Clothes
>Suit and Tie
>Strength=B
>Endurance=EX
>Agility=A
>Magic=B
>Luck=EX
>Noble Phantasm=A
>Magic Resistance=EX
>Territory Creation=D
>Instinct=EX
>Disengage=EX
>Noble Phantasm rank=EX
>+3 Modifier
>Weapon
>Anti-Army


I feel like I fucked it all to hell, Criticisms please.
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>>55377663
I got curious, took the mystery box, was much better than I had feared. Time to set about searching for boredom relief mechanisms.
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>>55378095
Where is Pokemon Personified Plus+. Did Pasille really cheat on Adios with the predecessor and why does she want hero cock?
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>>55379113
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>>55379113
>aster
Is that teddie?
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>>55373762

>Gained
Reactive, Last chance 20 x Hp
Booster (3)
>Lost
Kryptonite, wood for a day (6)
>What happens?
The entity retains their original form (5)
When lost they may choose (7)
Remembers all actions (9)
>Advantages
Extended life (8)
Skill tap I (7)
Skill tap II (6)

I am confused about the Network-Television advantage, if I dont get it I dont know what the hive feels? just know what the hive thinks? if I get it the entities still talk to each other or is like negating the television inhibition?
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>>55379236
yes
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>>55366854
>>55366870
>>55366878
>>55366892

>NATO
>M16A1
>Lightning
>EXPLOSION!
>Fougasse
>Napalm
>Camouflage
>Movement Simulation
>Scrying
>Slow Time
>Conjure Blade
>Major Tracking
>Muffle Gunshot
>Value Detection
>5.56x45(20) x 10
>9x19 Luger(34) x 1
>24 hr rations (Wet) x 3
>Water Filter Cartridge x 15
>Fleur
>Sophie
>Holly


I could tell you; but then I'd have to kill you
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>NATO

I've only ever seen one person pick communism. Anyone got a good commie build?
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>>55379113
Pick better names for Pete & Ira maybe?
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>>55366843
>>55379430
Red
Weapon-
>SKS Carbine
Spells -
>Lightning, Explosion,
>Blind. Jam, Exhaust,
>Purify Water, dust Shield,
>Camouflage,
>Heal Flesh,
>Magnetic Shield, Muffle Gunshot, Mechanical Failure
Equipment-
>39mm (60), dry rations (6), Water (2L), Heating (3), First Aid, Frag (2)
Companions-
>Nika, Klara, Aglaya

Stealthy Saboteur, dabbling in a variety of other roles. Not especially Red-Specific but I like it, the spells are more useful than economancy and the slightly less equipment didn't really matter. I just hope they're not ALL tankies.
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>>55379138

That's fine. Then I suggest making one of the other two small changes.
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>>55379113
>Most of the girls are female romanceable
>Many are female romanceable only
>Only a few are male romanceable only
Why? This CYOA's companions come across as really gay for no reason.
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>>55379677
>Two girls are many
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>>55367159
>Life wizard

>Healing specialist
>Enchanting
>Plant specialist

I'm going to go to the most barren, toxic hellhole I can find and start enchanting large stones to basically radiate an aura of energy that will encourage plants to grow. I'm going to make that aura as strong as possible, making sure to take my time and get it right.

I'm going to fill the entire wasteland with these 'life stones' in which any life, but especially plant life, will be incredibly hardy. Then I sit back and watch my work take root and blossom into the most verdant, beautiful, and deadly jungles on earth. Afterwards, I harvest and sell poisons.
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>>55379113
I can see Aster's cute panties!
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>>55379605
If they are, I think they've got more problems than the red faction to deal with. Namely maintaining an army made exclusively of tanks.

You need at _least_ a few dps in there.
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>>55368248
I just read about Akashic record today.
Requesting more occult sources and media.
Who's pic related?
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>>55379677
i have 12 more to doo, and I have 4 male only, 4 female/male, and 4 female only. and i'm randomly picking which each are. it's balanced
3 females are male/female, 2 are female only, and 2 are male only and that's because I slightly fucked up and added an extra chick on this page.
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>>55379677
most characters being bi/pan is strictly better gameplay. Having some not be makes them all seem more like actual characters. Having all characters be attracted to men ruins the latter on top of being idiotic

LGBT people can enjoy the fact that its overall gayer than your average CYOA, explicitly, without being oversexualized

Straight girls are unaffected

As for straight guys, non-assholes can be chill with dating bi people & appreciate not-oversexaulized LGBT being prominent in a cyoa, while assholes can at least fantasize about MFF threesomes
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>>55379770
heh

(to anyone not aware, tankie is a marxist-leninist, specifically one who apologizes for the shitty actions of shitty governments ruling under of the name of "we'll try to do communism eventually maybe", named after soviet tanks busting a Hungarian(?) revolt)
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>>55379837
Tumblr talk aside, I think he's saying that it seems a bit silly, what with most people being straight irl and then having them being outnumbered 2-1 without a discernible reason.
Personally I don't care. I think leaving it vague so you can romance whoever you want whatever gender you are would be best. More options and all that.
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>*cracks knuckles*
>smiles like a fucking smug moron
[The Following Rankings Are Completely Subjective And In No Way Reflect The Overall Quality of The Companion]
>Audrey
>Grade: C+
A perfectly servicable waifu and/or companion.
Her quote, while slightly cliche and simplistic, resonates with me because I often play characters who follow similar ideals.
Plus, her wanting to retire and live a simple life is something I secretly fantasize about even in fantasy settings.
>Pete
>Grade: C+
Another perfectly serviceable husbando and/or companion.
The money obsessed character archetype is common because it works.
I also applaud you for making him fuckable to both male and female players.
I don't fuck gold diggers, but he is a pretty sumbitch.
>Cereza
>Grade: B
Ah, here's one I'd definitely consider for my party.
A lazy witch is actually a rather uncommon archetype and I think it works to endear her here.
8/10. Would snuggle.
>Arthur
>Grade: B+
Holy shit, I actually really like this guy.
I prefer to be the "King" in my parties, but this guy's views and willingness to stick to his ideals despite his naysayers is commendable.
I tip my hat to you. You made a likable Lawful-Stupid bro.
>Lili
>Grade: B+
Oooooooh. I really like your witchs, man! I'd definitely pick h-
>Counts as 3 Companion slots.
YOU MOTHERFUCKER
>Enzo
>Grade: C
This guy's very much passing grade for me.
He's your typical "I'm a devil," character, but he's interesting enough not to fail in my eyes.
His most defining feature seems to be that he's gay, which is commendable, but not really ideal.

First half final score: B
To be continued.
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>>55379892
I agree
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>>55379913
>Lawful-Stupid
Do you hear that? It's the sound of someone about to get smited.
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>>55379430

>Warsaw
>PKM
>Makarov
>Cool metal
>Reduce burdens
>Reduce Recoil
>Fear
>Magnetic Shield
>Purify Water
>Heal Flesh
>Repair Bone
>Restore Blood
>Cure Disease
>Automated Reloading
>Blind
>7.62x54r x 10
>RPG-7
>9x18 Mak x 1
>two of each rocket
>4 Water
>4 grenade

The issue with team Cyka Blyat RushB is that they're not quite as flexible, and their point buy for ammo is confusing.
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>>55379605

>the slightly less equipment didn't really matter

I agree, but like I said here>>55379956 it's a little confusing.

>the spells are more useful than economancy

I agree, but every other school of magic that NATO gets is far more versatile and more fun to create around.
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Alright.
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>>55379698
It's a small selection, so yes.
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>>55377663
>the mystery box names itself

Well, I had to take it. The fact that any avatars I make are essentially no more than finger puppets in my eyes kind of sucks, but maybe I can play with them so long that madness sets in and they start feeling more real.
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>>55379892
Leaving it vague is good, but making most explicitly bi and a few straight/gay is more... immersive

I'm not saying the lesbians should outweigh straight girls but the way that guy was talking came across as (a milder version of) REEE GAYS, since it was noted to be only half of the planned companions.
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>>55379956

Honestly team Commie gets more ammo and supplies in general if you've got at least one person in your team who took the

>Reload ammunition

spell. Which should, frankly, be a staple of every soldier. If you take

>Purify water
>Small game trap
>Minor tracking
>Reload ammunition

You've got both food and water taken care of for a vast majority of any environment you'd be dropped in. And you'd still have (8) spells to throw around. So that leaves you with most forms of ammunition for far cheaper than [capitalist pig dogs], and little need for food or water supplies. (Still best to buy at least one dose of each, for safety.)

But the rest can be spent on

>MOAR DAKKA!

(Or something else, if you'd like? Not sure what else you'd buy with more points.)
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>>55379913
>Eliza Come on dude, you only changed one letter in the character's name.
>Grade: D
I'm disappointed in you, man.
You barely even changed the character's personality by making her exclusively gay.
I guess you get points for giving her the original backstory, but this is disappointed compared to the ones that came before her.
I know you can do better than this.
>Angela
>Grade: C
Slightly better than the last.
Interesting concept of an arrogant divine being who can't actually back that arrogance up.
Would have been a C+ if I could give her the D.
>Ira
>Grade: A
Ah, goddamnit.
You just made the kind of character I would, you fuck.
>Hakunami Okay, you at least changed the second half of the name here, but you need to work on your original names my friend.
>Grade: A+
...
Did... Did you make a Chuuni priestess?
...I never knew how much I wanted this until just now.
>Aster
>Grade: S
Top tier.
No need for other waifus.
Give me hopeless romantic boy pussy now please and thank you.
>Freya
>Grade: B
Interesting.
I like her.
Her goal has some flaws, but I can empathize with it.

Second Half Final Score: A-

>Final Score: B+
There are a couple here I really don't care for, but overall this is a nice varied and interesting collection of companions.
Keep up the good work.
Also if you make Aster a Chuuni too, I'll take back every negative thing I ever said about any of them.
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>>55377663
>Stats_Alterer
>Stats_Humanity
>Stats_Universe

I am sure no one will mind if i make some changes here and there...
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>>55380105
>is more... immersive
I disagree. The vast majority of people are straight- if anything as is, it's more immersion breaking than leaving it vague. If the author really wanted it to be immersive, it would be, what? One in twenty or so aren't straight?

But that would cut down on options quite a bit. So why not just leave it to the reader to decide?
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>>55380124

I think that the creator needs to go create more missions with better defined parameters. That would compel me to look deeper into the various options layed out in front of me. But frankly, curses are boring and I feel far to slow for military action, and the School of Suppression heavily favors the PKM. Also I don't like the vodka girls as much as I like the burger girls.

And yeah, creating spells that make one third of your spells non choices isn't as fun.
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>Where is PPP+
Soon. 100 something companions left to write up.

>Did, Pasille really cheat on Arios with the predecessor.
>Why does she want Hero cock?
No. Pasille grew a crush/close-friendship with the previous Hero during the Era of Ruin and Reconstruction because she is into people with pure hearts, have big destinies, and who are able to bring out the true good in the world. After, Arios left her, Pasille was free to try and romance the Hero and was rejected by them.

Once you arrive, (If you side with the Imperial Thrones) she is able to pick up on pure heart and begins to develop a crush on you and wants to be your helper, and if you let her, your wife. Though you can always reject her and pick whichever waifu you want.

Pasille was inspired by Tamamo of Fate.
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>>55380201
not accounting for homophobia-induced closeting, some studies find 5%, but considering that it keeps getting higher almost everywhere that they're willing to admit there's gay people and not regularly arrest/beat them. I doubt that represents the true percentages. It's also significantly higher among young people. This also doesn't account for 'heteroflexible' people.
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I had an actual reply to this, but the system apparently thinks its spam and won't let me post it. So basically I'll just ask what kind of build you're trying to go for.
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Are monstergirls other than dragon girls allowed?
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>>55380486
You're not accounting for 'college sexuality', where stupid kids act out for four years then never do it again because rebellion stops having its charm.
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>>55380399
>100 something companions left to write up
>Soon
How many companions have you written? Holy fuck.

>Pure of heart
>Me
Do you think so?
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>>55380525
I don't understand how spam can continue to exist when it's basically the archetypical inedible, unidentifiable trash food in american culture.
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>>55380399
You mean she begins to develop a crush on the idea of you as a clone of the old hero.

>>55380566
She betrayed her first wife, don't trust her not to do the same to you.
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>Do you think so
Yes.

>How many companions have you written?
Over 200. A lot of my future OC will not have shitloads of companions and will be heavily focused on building your character.
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>>55379913
>>55380139
Tbh, this some grade a shit dude, makes my 2am pretty good. I still got the 12 peeps to make, which'll be done before next week probabblly, so hopefully they're fine too. Anyways, I made a few changes so Lili costs 2 again, Eliza is now Aria and is pretty new overall cuz why not, and I changed Hakunami to Shion though that was before you posted. Again, this was cool.
>>55380529
yes
>>55380201
i, mean, i'm probably not changing it simply because I already have some of the shit written and am lazy and think having it relatively balanced is better. But I can understand this actually, I guess i can change it so its at least 12 straight peeps and 6 bi and 6 gay. not really in the mind state to conteemplat shit like this desu
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>>55380578
I blame Hawaii
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>>55380613
>You mean she begins to develop a crush on the idea of you as a clone of the old hero.
Yeah, Anon. Like how Ciel, Anastacia, Decadence, and every other girl develops a crush on the idea of you as a clone of the old hero.
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>>55380662
Didn't all three of the girls you named not like or know the previous hero? Unlike Pasille.
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>>55380630
That is the nicest thing someone told me on the internet. Thank you.
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>>55380634
Always glad to autistically grade waifus and companions.
I've done it for both PP and Order to help me decide which faction to join, so I'm fairly used to it.
I'll be back to judge the next ones when you're ready and I've been looking forward to this CYOA for a long time.
Keep up the good work man.
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>>55380702
Anon you missed the point of the post.

>Didn't all three of the girls you named not like or know the previous hero?
Ciel just didn't like the previous Hero, but respected them for doing their job. Anastacia found them to be an okay individual. Decadence never knew the previous Hero (In person).
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>>55380775
>Anon you missed the point of the post.
I don't see it. Pasille is the only one who wanted to fuck the last hero, and thus she's the only one with the capacity to project them onto you in the context of romantic interest.
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>>55380799
Anon you're killing me. Pasille will not project the idea of the previous Hero on you. I even made this a point in a previous update.
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>hakunami
>eliza
>arthur
>angela
kek
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>>55379168
>Magic Resistance=EX
>>Territory Creation=D
you should have some points left- you get B magic resistance free
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>>55380831
The way she instantly gravitates towards you puts her in doubt, is what I'm saying.

Her being willing to betray her wife does too, in a different way.
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>>55380486
Five percent's /about/ average in most countries that don't wildly persecute such people. In countries that do, it's lower. And I'm not willing to leave additional numbers to guess work, particularly with the glorification of different sexualities, not to mention the seven hundred genders and sexualities that people are assigning themselves now.
But, even if you're right? Straight people are still the vast majority. Unless you're really going to claim the average margin of error is over forty five percent?
>>55380634
That's fine. It's really not a big deal one way or the other, to me at least. I'm more concerned about whether the characters are good, and what the rest of the CYOA looks like than a single line of text.
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>>55380947
Honestly I think the majority of people are/would be without homophobia heteroflexible, which is to say, straight under 99% of circumstances. Covered under the mantras "I'm straight but shit happens", "I'm not gay but $20 is $20", and "I'm straight but [that one celebrity]..."

Which would mean that the majority of relationships by a lot would be straight, but most people could still be considered attracted to the same gender for the purposes of a protagonist with plot magnet.
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>>55380201
I'm pretty sure he's talking about immersion in the sense of that one character's personality being immersive, not the world at large.
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>>55381069
Ohhhh.....
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>>55381112
Wishful thinking, dear.
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>>55381112
It just depends on culture. A really pro-homo culture would produce more gay behavior & vice versa.
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>The way she instantly gravitates towards you puts her in doubt.
Anon she is a Ho-Oh. She hangs around people with good future and fate + who are pure of heart all the time. Its one of her things. Joining up with the Imperial Thrones will have Pasille gravitate towards you no matter what, especially since you got dumped out of the sky on to the ground as the Hero.

>Her being willing to betray her wife does too.
I see where you come from, but won't make this a long drawn out argument. Pasille may have developed a crush on your predecessor, but she never acted on it (Though she did cock block him more than once.).

The problem that ended her relationship with Arios was: Bad communication between the two, Arios being a possessive yandere, and most of all rumors people started that claimed Hero and Pasille were intimate and a couple because they hung around each other which made communication worse. When Arios ended the relationship, Pasille then tried to do something to move on (Raise the trio) and tried to date the previous Hero, but got rejected.

The heart is a fickle thing and people make mistakes and move on.
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>>55381113
yeah, plus immersion doesn't even really correlate with realism
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>>55381270
Not all mistakes should be forgiven. Some require you to be an innately corrupt and evil person to make in the first place.
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>>55381270
>crush
Pretty sure it was confirmed that she was flat out yandere at times, though she may have mellowed with age.
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>She was flat out yandere at times.
I will not deny Pasille had tendencies of one in the past, but she is harmless. Its all good now.

Pasille is obsessive yandere.
Arios is possessive yandere.
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>>55369523
>>55378833
>>55369995
Is the mole really that big of a turn off? I too didn't like it at first glance but thought the picture is a good fit for the character and now I even got used to the mole and don't consider it ugly.

On a slightly related note: I have an idea to make Eloise a more exciting choice. Will have to work the details out, but I'll probably allow the player to warg into her under certain conditions. If I'll have enough space, I'll also mention that the player will get to have a telepathic bond with beings he had warged into in the past.
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>>55377663
Choose the box
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>>55381596
Yes, the mole is a big turn off.

Being able to warg into her is definitely a neat idea though.
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Who is Imaginos and why do I want to know more about him?
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Araya Souren from Kara no Kyoukai anime series.by Type-Moon.

Be warned, the genre is SEINEN dark fantasy, mythical, drama, and mystery: few of death scenes, but once they appear, expect disturbing blood, and gore scenes. Don't watch it while you eat.

The story, music, character development, drawing, color, and everything is solid 10/10.
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>>55381934
>10x as potent as marijuana
>Solid writing.
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>>55382041
We want GOOD time, not DEAD WASTED time

Dank weed everyday.
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I don't really think she looks any different with or without the mole, but then again I'm one of the guys that thinks it needs a lolidom option so I'm probably not the target audience to judge.
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>>55382176
>>55369995
shiiiit now I dont know which one is better, thanks

>it needs a lolidom option

You can pick Sylvia, run away from her and get yourself caught by a gang of lolibullies.
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>>55380578
Spam did nothing wrong.
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>>55371404
Rosa is probably soft and good-smelling
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>>55380578
It's just potted meat, which has existed for centuries, anon.
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>>55377663
Stats_Alterper
Defy_Apoptosis
Console_Pstats

Ok, so the main limitation to Stats Alterper is that very high stats will conflict with very low stats in self destructive ways. You can't give yourself super strength because it will destroy your body, and there might even be things you need to modify beyond "toughness" to make it work.

Enter Console_Pstats. By making one or more stats arbitrarily high with Stats_Alterper you now have an arbitrarily large amount of "stat points" to move around with Console_Pstats allowing you to effectively be super everything
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>>55381112
You are kind of right to a certain extent. I've read that studies show that nearly all women show some sexual attraction to other women, which makes sense given how female attractiveness is at the forefront of everything. It might be much less for men though.
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>>55382213
>You can pick Sylvia, run away from her and get yourself caught by a gang of lolibullies.

That's a copout excuse if I ever saw one.
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>>Mammalian Creature
>>Creature Power: Metal Fang
>>My Power: Bladeworks

Who wants some not!Pokemon Battle?
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>>55382871
> Humanoid - Faerie / Pixie
> Creature Power - Discharge
> Personal Power - Lightning Storm

To be honest, I'd rather not fight, but if someone starts something, we'll do our absolute best to finish it.
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>>55382527
Clever. But the question is, what stat are you going to make arbitrarily high?
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>>55382871
>Avian
>Lunar Cry
>Escherscape

Confuse hax bitch
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>>55366980
>http://www.strawpoll.me/13914825

>people unironically pick Taliana

did you skip the lines where it says you'll be subjected to painful experiments?
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>>55382871
Creature Type: Avian. Cute birbs are best.
Creature Power: Discharge. Incredibly useful with...
My Power: Bladeworks.

Think combinatorially, not thematically.
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>>55383052
>>55382987
>Wanted to create a Lunar Cry/Escherscape Faerie and give her a tiny sword
>Now it will look like i have no originality
Fuck me.
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>>55383097
Lightning Fae here, I liked the idea of being the modern-day chaste Zeus more than just gaming the system like I usually do.

Example:
Lunar Cry + Bladeworks = Near-constant Instant Wins.
But I didn't want to do that, so I decided to go BnHA, and have fun trying to figure out how to cleverly use one specific ability in creative ways.
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>>55382871
>Humanoid
>Lunar Cry
>Nightmare

People think they can go pure confusion, but confusion + blindness seems to be a much better way to go.
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>>55382871
Reptilian
Cyclone
Burning Field

I win. Have fun confusing my critter while you're roasting alive and panicking as you try to escape.
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>>55383045
It's a good question, but it depends on too many unknowns, what stats exist mainly. That's why you should use Console_Pstats FIRST, in order to read up on all your existing stats and figure out what can be increased independently of everything else.

All else fails though, I can take the example stat of "run speed" and then adjust things via console before even standing up. Though probably something like "charisma" or "beauty" would be even safer given that I don't actually interact with any people in the meantime.
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>>55383419
Can't you use Personal_Stats and then Console_Pstats so you can increase all your stats and then decrease them in the console leaving you a pool of points to use?
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How do you feel about sequels/prequels/dlc expansions etc? Are they a good way of expanding the world/bringing back characters or do they just generally muck things up?
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>>55383419
>increases run speed arbitrarily high
>legs tear apart the moment you shift slightly

>increase beauty arbitrarily high
>flesh splits as you try to give yourself physical features unsupported by your muscle and bone

>increase charisma arbitrarily high
>paralyzed because your nervous system can't handle the stress of instantly performing perfect body language
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>>55382527
You're very clever, and it would largely work, though it's implied that stats have a max value (hence being able to "Max out" anything) so while you would get a very good number of points to work with it may not be as many as you hoped.
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>>55383598
What if you use Stats_Humanity to increase the maximum cap of your stats because you are human?
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>>55383525
You could, but you wouldn't get nearly as many points to work with. The difference between giving all of your stats an increase of +2-10 and giving three stats an increase of +10,000 and then redistributing the points.
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>>55383638
Yes but you don't have to risk blowing up in to smithereens because you increased your heart capacity or something. It is also implied that humanity has an autistic amount of stats for everything so you get a lot of safe points.
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>>55383552
Usually they just fuck things up. You can look at Beri's recent expansion/sequel to Royal Revival to see how that happens. Even ignoring the "tragedy" aspect that I'm sure is naturally upsetting to some people (that's just how things go though), it creates certain assumptions/expectations about what your build did and didn't accomplish in the intervening time which utterly derails many builds.

A CYOA exists only at the moment of creation. Everything from that point forward is not part of the CYOA but only in the reader's head. You have no control or knowledge over how that plays out, so there's no way you can properly create anything after it.

Something you can do is add content to a CYOA, generally in the form of giving more choices during the same creation process. The simplest example being to expand a waifu CYOA with more waifus. You CAN still fuck that up too, but it's a lot less likely.

I won't deny that people frequently seem to want and even beg for sequels and such, it's just rarely if ever a good idea.
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>>55383747
>>55383552
Remakes are much more likely to work, but naturally they are going to be compared to the original and any "improvements" are likely to strip away some of the charm, so beware.
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>>55382871
Cephalopoid
Seed bullet
Bladeworks

Squid with a gun
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>>55383747
What does exactly RR2:Electric boogaloo railroad?
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>>55383747
I agree on pretty much all points, in fact that's one of my big concerns for Zodiac Brides despite the fact that I'm not really invested in it. It seems weird to go "you're now becoming god king, here's a sample platter, and a waifu" and then say "nope, some other asshole pulled the rug from under you and kidnapped all the girls"

I enjoy content DLCs like we have for Hero Academy or Dream Prince, but it is kind of annoying to do a 5 page cyoa build only to find out there's 3 extra pages of interesting choices. In both of the examples I mentioned, you pretty much have to go back and revise your build to accommodate the new information. Not that it's a bad thing, but it breaks the usual flow
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>>55383836
Or you can treat DLCs as optional.
They're called DLC for a reason, they aren't necessarily the path that happened.
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>>55383825
It assumes you "Beat" the challenges presented in RR1, particularly the war. Further, it assumes the war was won significantly on the battlefield -- Verend was 'beaten'. So if you wanted to be a diplomancer, or are that one guy who mentioned a build designed to betray Eclan and join Verend, things didn't work out as you planned.

That said I actually disagree with >>55383747 that RR2 is a textbook fuckup, I feel like it divided its base more than alienated it.
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>>55383877
It's more of a "best case scenario" fuckup. Obviously it could have been much worse, but I don't think it is possible for him to have done what he wanted with it and made it any better in those aspects. Basically it was doomed from the start.

Also there's the earth science/magitech builds bombing Verend to hell.
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>>55383877
Oh i see. I just assumed that Eclan beated Verend because thanks to your assistance in either Fucking shit up/Diplomancing the other contries in fucking up verend/Turning eclan in to a powerhouse. And there were implications that verend was messing around with dark evil shit and could not be reasoned with in the first one. Well in a nutshell i thought it was pretty open in how verend got fucked up but that is just my opinion.
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>>55383996
The final act for Verend which leads to all the shit happening involves Eclan sending it's forces to invade an empty castle while Verend sends everything it has left to kill you. This obviously wouldn't happen that way if their castle were a smoking crater.
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>>55384043
Nuking verend might be a bit unethical don't you think?
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>>55384142
Not him, but...

"Oh, sure it's potentially unethical, but someone might still have planned it as their endgame from RR1 and be left with that scheme incompatible with the opening of RR2"
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>>55384142
Who said anything about nukes? Conventional explosives empowered with crystals and magic. Cleaner and more directed, with potentially even more power.
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>>55384182
Well sure. I was just saying that that might not be the best thing for PR.
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>>55367774
truly, this is the best twist, made all the better by the serious tone of part one.
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>>55372154
Oven OP, baking bread is not THAT difficult. It can take a while tho, depending on what you use as a levitating agent.
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>>55384330
Compare it to crushing fruit, drinking milk, or going out and buying a slab of ribs and feeding them to a tombstone one at a time.
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>>55383552
I rather cyoas that reference or include characters from (your) other works. I loved seeing the two archangels in Battlemage 2
It makes the world seem more alive, bigger
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>>55384462
Half disagree. I don't mind having referential characters, but trying to directly link universes is probably bad. Even in the same universe, consider the reaction to dusk city 2 and the kitsunes.
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>>55384462
>An archangel and an archdemon from the angelic/demonic roommate
Heaven and hell are a thing in the SDAverse confirmed.
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>>55384413
>>55384330
I think in general the large foci seem overpowerd. Mana is easier to gain AND they have more spells. I suppose the downside is supposed to be that they aren't portable at all, so I guess we'll have to see how the spells turn out.
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>>55384554
Ah, the Cuckening of '16
It was amazing
>>55384564
He's also said some shit like Battlemage is either in the future or a world in star dust. But nothing is written down so take it as random ramblings.
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>>55371827
those hexagons gotta go, makes it look terrible and ruins the aesthetic.
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>>55372295
ditch the hexagons entirely they don't really do anything besides get in the way, the sci-fi theme is already conveyed in the surrounding framework.
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>>55384591
Considering apocalypse is going to be a thing, it might be canon and everything.
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>>55384697
I'm pretty sure it goes

Battlemage in the past, Magic mentor modern day, Stardust/apocalypse in the future.
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>>55379430
I made a build, back when the CYOA first came out.

Side: USSR
Main Weapon: AKM (7.62x39mm)
Sidearm: PM (9x18mm)

Magic:
Survivalcraft – Purify Water, Minor Tracking, Dust Shield, Reload Ammunition
Spirit of CQB – Conjure Blade, Iron Skin
Healing – Heal Flesh, Repair Bone, Restore Blood, Cure Disease, Raise Dead
General – Major Tracking

0/80 Supply Points

RPG-7 (40mm) – An anti-tank rocket launcher

KS-23 (23x75mmR) – A pump-action shotgun with high stopping power

7.62x39mm (30) x 4 [20]

9x18mm (8) x 7 [7]

40mm PG-7VL (Anti-Vehicle) x 2 [10]

23x75mmR (Slug) (4) x 2 [10]

24hr Rations (Dry) [6]

Water (2L) x 2 [10]

Flameless Heater [1]

First Aid Kit [6]

Fragmentation Grenade x 2 [10]

Companions: Syuzanna, Aglaya, Parvana

With Reload Ammunition and Raise Dead, I can keep the battle going far longer than it should, I specified another medic, for healing when the healer needs healing. I recover my entire team, and press on into the hostile desert.

Forward comrades! Liberation awaits!
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>>55384697
That requires it to ever be finished. We'll see if that happens.
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>>55384892
It will be as finished as the other great SDA titles. Like Audit and Wet Pussy CYOA.
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>>55382871
Pick
>Insectile
>Cyclone
>Whiteout

First, imagine yourself a HUGE blender.

>Every creature's breath creates summoning multiple cyclone
>Eventually creating multiple-vortex tornado
>narrow arcs of extreme destruction lie right next to weak damage within tornado paths


And wait there is more....

>Whiteout create dense blizzard
>You can't see any objects due to poor visibility
>Including my monster's whereabout
>Not to mention the temperature drop by the ice and snow


You know the danger of tornado? Flying debris, Rock and similarities will be absorbed instead.
Second most dangerous? Waterspout.

All your water attack is ineffective against intense columnar vortex.

Against fire? It only makes the tornado even stronger by absorbing the fire.

Against electric? Hide into the earth first thing in the battle. Earth is a good negative insulator, I heard.

Enclosed-place tornadoes + debris + ice shards +snow = a smoothie of my opponent.
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>>55384904
I'm still waiting to figure out when he'll make that CYOA with the Shellshock waifus.
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>>55383377
Your own cyclone will put out the flame.
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>>55384987
Do you mean Hetza Hellshock waifus?
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>>55384950
Ends up blending itself against >>55383097, >>55383170, and anyone else who picks Bladeworks. Also probably by >>55383377, because heat > cold.
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>>55384987
Well, Apocalypse has Hellshock waifus ...
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>>55385009
>Hellshock
Shit that explains why I can't find the damn artist! Thanks a bunch anon!
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>>55385025
He showed some waifus he had written/half written, with art by Hellshock. Is that for Apocalypse?
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>>55384989
>A fire whirl – also commonly known as a fire devil, or, (in many cases) erroneously, as a fire tornado, firenado, or fire twister – is a whirlwind induced by a fire and often made up of flame or ash. They usually start with a whirl of wind or smoke. Fire whirls may occur when intense rising heat and turbulent wind conditions combine to form whirling eddies of air. These eddies can contract into a tornado-like vortex that sucks in burning debris and combustible gases.

>The literal fire tornado is a rare phenomenon, much more powerful and destructive than the a typical fire whirl, in which the wildfire generates a pyrocumulonimbus cloud that then spawns a tornado. When this tornado forms in or enters the fire zone, it fans flames enormously, draws flame and burning debris into itself, and scatters burning debris over a wide area.
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>>55382835
a-are you saying its good or bad?
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>>55385043
hetza_(hellshock) on boorus. Good taste.
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>>55385058
Yeah, I think so. There are at least two in it.
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>>55379430
>>55384875
As did I. not because communism mind you, but because the Survivalcraft tree is fucking OP.

>>55366843
USSR
PKM
PM
Purify Water
Minor Tracking
Dust Shield
Reload Ammunition
Cool Metal
Reduce burdens
Reduce Recoil
Automated Reloading
Major Tracking
Magnetic Shield
Muffle Gunshot
Camouflage

180 7.62x54 casings
2x 2l water 10
2x wet rations 12
40 9x18mm casings
RPG-7
2x 40mm PG-7VL 10
3x Flameless heater

Aglaya
Parvana
Klara

It was never very clear, but hope to manage a continuous stream of fire between automatic reloading and reload ammunition. Survivalcraft provides most of the food and water. I'd honestly rather not carry the RPG but I think it's a waste not to have one with so many casings.

Squad consists of a medic, a sniper, and magic artillery, while I bring the heavy firepower.
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>>55384950
>Against electric? Hide into the earth first thing in the battle. Earth is a good negative insulator, I heard.
So...umm, funny thing.

Blizzards can cause lightning, the effect is known as Thundersnow. With the swiftly moving small particles and increasingly dry air due to the cold freezing up the free water vapour in the air, you've actually made it easier for those with lightning based abilities to use them.

>>55385023
This is not my actual build: >>55383170
This is: >>55382987

Apologies for the mix up, I was just showing that I could have tried to game the CYOA, but I wanted to just use lightning.
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>>55385023
Bladworks only summon sharp swords on the ground. It will only damage of your monster get thrown onto those blade. Against the strong wind vortex, the blade will get absorbed into the spinning arc, increasing the danger.

>>55385076
Science 101: Bigger gust of wind CAN put out fire by knocking out the source of combustion. Do you ever have a birthday party? Ever blowing out the candles? Same principal.
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>>55385113
Good luck discharging those built-up electricity when the target is within the ground anon. Zero negative insulator = the lightning hits something else nearby with negative insulator.

Again, science 101.
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>>55385083
They're so fucking high quality. Plus guns make them hotter.
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>>55382871
Humanoid
Shadow orb
Nightmare

Humanoid because I can. Shadow orb because it will be the least visible of all attacks in total darkness. Even another Nightmare user would probably have a hard time seeing my attacks
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>>55385135
>Bladworks only summon sharp swords on the ground. It will only damage of your monster get thrown onto those blade. Against the strong wind vortex, the blade will get absorbed into the spinning arc, increasing the danger.
It turns the area into Steel, causing anything with a small-enough edge to slice like a blade. It's right there in the description.

>>55385155
Science 101, true, but Lightning brings other effects as well, like Thunder and Heat.

Heat high enough to fuse sand into glass. Thunder loud enough to rupture ear drums and cause property damage through the shockwave. And a Lightning User can summon a localized lightning storm.

So, yeah, it's never the things you can see that can kill you.
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>>55385178
This is true.
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>>55385251
>It turns the area into Steel, causing anything with a small-enough edge to slice like a blade. It's right there in the description.
When I read the landscape part, I only assume the most exterior earth crust, and beneath the steel is still soft earth. Insects are exoskeleton, anon. They have different pain receptor than mamalia. A bug can still move even when missing limbs. Therefore, as long as the Insect manage to push in beyond the steel part, it will be fine.

If the whole earth crust turned into pure steel, there is tons of tectonic implications I don't bother to list. This need further clarification by the CYOA maker.

If yours is true, then I admit defeat.

>Heat high enough to fuse sand into glass. Thunder loud enough to rupture ear drums and cause property damage through the shockwave. And a Lightning User can summon a localized lightning storm.
Heat as explained above is no problem in tornadoes

I don't know any insects that have ears. They instead have antennae, anon. I don't think the loud noise matter much.

Property damage is useless if the target hides in the safety of earth below. Not to mention the debris will be sucked into the cyclone, increasing the mixer destruction.
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>>55382871
>Crustacean
>Discharge
>Acid Rain
Fun fact: acids, being heavily ionized substances, tend to be very good conductors.
As such, this is a surprisingly synergistic build - the acid does constant passive damage, and increases the range of electric attacks. All IoniCrab has to do is hold its position and electrocute its enemy whenever it comes near.

This has a positive matchup against:
>Fire: can't burn very well in acid
>Wind: every attack also throws acid around, hurting them as well
>Grass: Area effects, at least, are inhibited by acid rain
>Darkness: Lightning illuminates and hits a large area and prevents them from moving away from where I know they are, and acid deals undodgeable damage.
>Metal: Acid corrodes and metal conducts.
>Mental: see Darkness
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>>55385473
CycloDer counter the argument that each acid rains is still liquid in substance, and has light mass. And even a weak wind current will change its drop projectile.

Therefore against mini-tornados, which a large scale air mass that rotates, the acid rain will never reach the ground and hit its target.
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>>55385473
Darkness removes light itself, not light sources. Lightning won't illuminate anything for you
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>>55385473
Depends on the acid, really. Some acids are incredibly flammable or produce gases that are themselves explosive.

Fantasy acid only has the slightest correlation with actual acid, but there's certainly a potential for it to cause unintended reactions. Even if we use hydrochloric acid as a baseline, since HCl can produce explosive reactions with a series of anhydrides or metals
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>>55384413
You can bake multiple at a time, getting 20-30 or even 200 depending on size in less than half a day.
Heck, if you are a professional baker you may have more mana than you'll ever need.

It's kind of the "slow build-up, huge returns" option.
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>>55375005
>Ea as only weapon for a saber
enjoy trying to whack people with a traffic cone
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>>55385135
>Science 101: Bigger gust of wind CAN put out fire by knocking out the source of combustion. Do you ever have a birthday party? Ever blowing out the candles? Same principal.
This is why a little knowledge is more dangerous than none. Have you ever tried to blow out a campfire? No, you blow on a campfire to flare it up. We're talking a football field sized conflagration; a cyclone isn't going to put it out. It's just going to make things hotter, and make you deader.
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>>55385676
getting 20-30 mana*
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>>55385719
Ever pointed a leaf blower at a campfire? Redneck 101
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This doesn't bump the thread. Maybe it has reached autosage?
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>>55385737
>autosage?
Bump limit*
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>>55385538
Hurricanes still get the ground wet, anon. They redirect any given raindrop, but that just means you're getting hit by different ones at different angles - angles likelier to include your eyes.

>>55385541
I assuned there was some sort of counterplay - outside light is entirely removed, but light from inside travels a foot or two before it vanishes.

>>55385581
Yeah, there's a lot of different possibilities, but I figured I could either make some determinations now or specify further when my creature evolves.
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>>55385737
Check the number of posts. If it's in italics, then it's either softbanned by the mods or over bump limit (here, it's around 300).

You goddamn newfag.
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>>55385729
You mean like this?
https://youtu.be/7LG0eKwVMYQ
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>>55385719
Speak for yourself.
Are you implying multiple vortex of tornado is equal to your breath? Do you even know what a tornado is? Do you think fire on campfore just magically combust our of nowhere without
the log? Or whether the fire still ignites even after the log as it sources were blown away?

You can use a mountain Everest in your argument. Level the mountain, and the fire will die out. Especially when there's mountainous of DEBRIS that also help to put out the fire.
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>>55385774
Usually it took a deluge to lure out the insect from its nest underground, and the way I see it, wet ground is not enough to flood CycloDer out of its hole.

Especially when the majority level of water are still on the air, blendering along with your monster and the debris.
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>>55385799
thank you for the info,

grandpafag.
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>>55385826
I know what a tornado is. Do you know what a tornado is? Do you know what a fire whirl is? And are you implying that a small tornado to an acre of flame is equivalent to a breath to a candle? Because I think you've got your proportions backwards.
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>>55385801
Exactly. Add some gasoline and you have my childhood bonfires
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>>55385801
Oh god the embers. That's like "how to start a forest fire 101"
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>>55385926
what part of redneck did you not understand?
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>>55383092
That poll, like so many, is so flawed. There is no none of them option.
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>>55381813
Imaginos did the following cyoas.
strange coins
hygienic magic
dream prince & dlc
drunk santa & drunk santa vday

he also worked with bliss on...
stronghold defender
domain master v2

he's also imigified some stuff for other anons, like 4+, like meetchsticks and minor & moderate conveniences and some greek god one which i can't remember the name of now...maybe a few others too.
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>>55386051
Hey he also did that a new dark magical girl one in Beri's style.
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>>55385913
No, you clearly don't know what a tornado is.

First mistake: You are comparing a ONE-WAY STREAM of wind blowing with large scale air mass that ROTATES AROUND THE CENTER.

Second mistake: Tornado CREATES DEBRIS in HUGE AMOUNT, creating a destruction path along.

Thirdly, fire whirl generated from turbulent wind, NOT a large mass of wind that spiraling tornado. Do you seriously thinking you can keep up the intense fire for the heat when you have NOTHING to burn for, as they are being blown away? Do YOU know fire whirl is?

Lastly, you monster is still dead as it is being blended along with the massive amount of debris that caused your massive fire.
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>>55386051
>some greek god one which i can't remember the name of now
And here it is now. Page 1/2.
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>>55386139
Page 2/2.
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>>55386139
Yeah that's the one! Thanks for posting that.
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>>55386137
A MINI tornado. Your sense of scale is way off.
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>>55386213
>Every single breath caused mini tornado
>Single
>Breath
Do you breath only once, anon?
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>>55386137
Oh, hey, you're the autist from >>55383691 who thinks randomly capitalizing words makes your points more valid. Fancy seeing you here.

Anyway, like I said back in >>55385076, fire tornadoes are an existing phenomenon. A vortex is going to fan the flames, draw burning debris into itself, and scatter that burning debris around. Meanwhile, my critter is comfortably immune to the flames, which means it's no worse than dealing with the normal level of debris after using Cyclone. Which it's clearly capable of surviving, because otherwise Cyclone would be marked as a suicide attack.

So piss off and sperg elsewhere.
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>>55367015
Taliana's the best of the damaged lot, and that's mainly because you get an out after a year.

Regarding Eloise, what the heck is "warging"?
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>>55386139
>>55386159
Athena and Hephaestus. Time to lead humanity to a golden age.
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>>55386292
You are so mad that you confused me from >>55383691

Nope, I am not him. Bet you didnt believe me over those frothing anger

So angry that you forgot what a tornado is. Your critter is immune to fire, but is not to physical attack from the debris sandwiching your critter along in the wind path.

Maybe if you have cooled your head off, you can see how idiotic you have been and try again.

Although your critter is definitely dead.
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>>55386292
Also, this is me >>55386357,in case you mistook my identity again

You also forgot that I have Whiteout abilities. Your fire is now dead thanks to the blizzard and ice.

You know, Ice + heat = water? In case. just in case.

Now go mad, again. Because your critter is ABSOLUTELY dead.
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>>55386357
I'm not the one capitalizing every fourth word, guy. You might want to calm down before you blow a gasket.

And try reading what I wrote. Cyclone is an option for an attack you can pick. It doesn't note that it kills or injures your monster when used, which is kind of an important oversight if it's meant to. Therefore, we can assume that your monster is able to withstand its own cyclones. And since it's immune to the flames, the attack is no worse than if it used it in an ordinary setting.

So I've clearly thought about this more than you have. Try wiping up the froth and making another argument.
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>>55386387
Blizzard + Fire = Rain, kiddo. And not even that bad, considering that on average you need thirteen inches of snow per inch of rain. And that level of rain, while unpleasant, isn't even remotely cataclysmic. Meanwhile, you're getting boiled like a lobster.
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>>55386509
>>55386447
>>55386387
>>55386357
>>55386292
>>55386251
>>55386213
>>55386137
>>55385913
BANG! BANG! I got you!
No you didn't!!!1!
Did too!
Did Not!
Did TOO!
DID NOT!
MoooOOOMmmmM! Billy's cheating at Cowboy's and Indians again!
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>>55386447
So mad that "once" now means "every".

Lovely.

Also, you are the one that need to wipe up the froth and calm down, dude. Don't skim whatever I read.

I never said cyclone IS the problem. Do you read the "DEBRIS" part? Definitely not, those froths are covering your eyes, anon. Take chill pill, read properly, and try to make another argument.

Also, you know as I have written above: my Whiteout's ability? Blizzard! Ice! Heat! Water! Fire no like water! Fire dead with water!

Or you know, admit your losses? Don't need to further your embarrassment, but whatever.

>>55386509
>So mad thinking rain is not made of water.
Not cataclysmic but enough to kill your little fire

Lobster? I don't know man, from the sound of your irrational argument, everyone knows who is the boiling lobster here. I am having a fun time putting you down every single time.
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>>55386552
Welcome to PvP, sperg
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>>55386552
Piss off Timmy! Go have autistic fun elsewhere! I have Jimmy to eat here! That's why nobody invited you for fun ever, because you are mommy's pet!
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>>55386559
I'm not either of those anons, dipshit. Just making fun of them.
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>>55386587
Truth hurts about your little spergfest.
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>>55367159
Air Wizard here. Weather, Lightning, and Enchanting. I'm moving to the Caribean. Oh, is that a hurricane? I'll just shift its course away from any inhabitted land. No, no, no need to thank me. Well, a modest stipend pooled from all the major governments in the area wouldn't be inappropriate. Say, 75K a year? Call it 'storm insurance'. I'm sure I can find some like-minded mages from the Gulf Coast to take up the mantle of Hurricane Hunter with me, too. Not a bad life, considering we'd only really need to work an average of 2 days a year.
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>>55386587
I am Billy>>55386557
You are Timmy >>55386552
He is Jimmy>>55386447
He is... Benny?>>55386559

Big family of autists.
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>>55386587
I wasn't saying you were, idiot. You're a sperg for what you posted and an autist for thinking what you posted was making fun of them.
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>>55386618
Aww someone's had their jimmies ruffled.

>>55386616
Heh and this guy's >>55386618 Eustice.
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>>55386557
>I never said cyclone IS the problem. Do you read the "DEBRIS" part? Definitely not, those froths are covering your eyes, anon. Take chill pill, read properly, and try to make another argument.
Cyclones will always kick up debris. So you're claiming anyone who selects cyclone will always lose. Except you.

>Also, you know as I have written above: my Whiteout's ability? Blizzard! Ice! Heat! Water! Fire no like water! Fire dead with water!
I just don't even know how to respond. So you're saying my creature, which is an animal, will be extinguished by the rain? Do you know how biology works?

And you really need to calm down, man. People are staring.

>>55386552
Having fun?
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>>55386779
> So you're claiming anyone who selects cyclone will always lose. Except you
Keep making these nonsense man, I am not even need to do anything.

You're probably saying "You're claiming anyone who did NOT selects cyclone will always lose"
Nope. Against the frothing in your eyes man! You can't read for shiet!
Cyclone, in my opinion, to me was the best option because given the circumstances and good strategy will have the best possible winning chance. >>55384950

At least until someone PROPERLY pinpoint my mistake, then I will admit my defeat.

Proof:>>55385419

Because you see anon, I am not as pathetic as you to go throwing tantrum around embarrassing yourself like that over internet game.

>I just don't even know how to respond. So you're saying my creature, which is an animal, will be extinguished by the rain? Do you know how biology works?
Conveniently forgetting the fact that debris will sandwich your critter to oblivion so that you can win?

Jimmy, please. Wipe out the snot and the froth properly, and try again.
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>>55385861
It seems like you think of different scales for each monster - you say that my acid rain only creates "wet ground", but that your monster can create whirlwinds that "blender" everything while simultaneously hiding in a deep enough hole to be unreachable.

Remember that whirlwinds are your monster's power, which implies (by looking at the other powers) that it has to actively create them from its position, and that they dissipate after a short period of time.
Ergo, if your bug burrows into the ground, it has to blow whirlwinds out of its entry hole (limiting the targetting range) and let the other ones die off.

And if snow and acid rain are both at the same level, it isn't hard to assume that they combine into a slightly caustic slush uncomfortable for both parties - though if your burrowing causes a stalemste, the surroundings being uncomfortably cold is less dangerous than them being uncomfortably acidic.
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>>55367847
Technology, Receptive+SuperAgent, Nightclub. Those flashing lights and pounding beats? That's me slipping inside the minds of the clubgoers. The regulars always coming back for more and bringing their friends, especially college students who should be studying, yet always do better on tests than they should.
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>>55386876
No, I mean what I said. You keep saying that my creature's own cyclone will crush it to death because it'll "crush it in debris." And I keep pointing out how illogical that is. If my critter's own cyclone would always crush it in debris, taking cyclone means you lose. Because there will always be debris, which means it'll always crush your critter. Game over, come back and don't pick the suicide attack.

Do you see why that's an insane position?

And it seems like you can't even remember your own posts anymore. Let me refresh you:
>Also, you know as I have written above: my Whiteout's ability? Blizzard! Ice! Heat! Water! Fire no like water! Fire dead with water!
How is rain going to kill a critter? Do you think the fact that I can summon fire means my critter is now a living fireball? Or is it just allergic to water somehow?

You're getting completely incoherent. I know 4chan is always a game of "you're mad!" "No you're mad!", but I'm legit concerned now. Maybe it's time to close the window and go for a walk.
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>>55386876
Your mistake is still in the assumption of scale and relative power. Cyclone is a breath attack creating a mini tornado. One can safely assume that using it will take some amount of effort on the part of your monster, and given the means it should be roughly the size of your monster at best.

More importantly, you have to realize that the different powers are intended to be balanced against each other. Each with their own niche and some might be more versatile and effective than others, but in terms of overall power Cyclone cannot be much stronger than seed bullet (the only power with a direct real-life comparison)

It does however seem to me that personal/field powers are MUCH stronger than monster attacks, Compare Lightning Storm for example with Discharge. One is a painful, paralysing electric bolt scaled to the creature, whereas the other is an entire storm of real lightning, especially "intense" lightning at that. The difference between a souped up taser and a condensed major thunderstorm
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>>55387003
Seed Bullet is probably balanced by range. A good .22 target rifle is pretty effective against small animals from a hundred yards or so, while the others are much closer range.
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>>55373613
AI, XLS, XLS, GIF, PPT

So, I guess I'm a respectable programmer, animator, Mathemetician, and digital artist. Not a bad skillset to make a living with.
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>>55387077
True, each to it's own niche, but if Cyclone could turn the entire battlefield into a blender that would be horrendously out of place.
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>>55386887
Well, you are the one that says hurricanes will make the ground wet (during your acid rain). So I just continue from that conversation.

But anyway, you are right. was going to choose for acid rain instead of whiteout. But I gave it up assuming the acid may corrode the earth and reveal my hideout.

The strategy of this mixer is supposedly to create a bunker in the middle of the field, with tiny holes from sides that I can blew the tornado directly from the side.

This will be a battle of time, whether the slush is enough to corrode my bug into a pool of mesh, or your monster get squashed first by the incoming.

Maybe if I made the tunnel like this, like some sort of toilet sink.
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>>55386989
>>55387003
Yeah yeah, you critter win. Whatever.

At this level, I am tired of thinking. My autistic level has dropped beyond the comfortable zone, making less imaginative.

CycloneDer rulez.

Now off to another CYOA. Argue again sometime, nerds.
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>>55387143
Waddle on, little aspie. We will always remember your deeds here today.
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>>55387240
Aw thank you gigantic aspie. You're the true inspiration of us autists.
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>>55386552
Agreed.
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>>55387284
>>55387240
So will any of you winner of autistic championship gonna make a new thread, or what?
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>>55387328
I don't want to rain on Go Hog Wild Guy's parade.
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For skeletons only.
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>>55385718
>basically Ea

Basically is not exactly.
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>>55387824
so is yours blue or?
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>>55388220
>red saber
>blue NP

Don't be silly anon.
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>>55388375
so its a red Ea

so regular Ea?
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>>55382871
Humanoid
Metal Fang because I'm boring and I like passives
Nightmare




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