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Archives and other things: https://pastebin.com/vrqYhnpu
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DSA is dead and all of the other authors I loved are also dead. Imaginos,Celt,Italitcs,SDA,Fox,Space Future(I think). All dead
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>>62446926
SDA is
e
a
DSA
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>>62446901
Nice move having Rangiku's cleavage right above the word "Bombardments".
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>>62446926
Italics was posting in just the last thread you dumbass. He posted a CYOA just a week or so ago.
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>>62447290
Doesn't he have the cancer?
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>>62447303
I don't know. How does that change any of what I said?
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>cancer
In the ass.
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>>62447314
I was counting him as being dead literally, glad to see he is okay then, Italics lives as the sole survivor of my favorite authors
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Doll
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Phone
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>>62447371
Nice spoilers!
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Talisman
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>>62447436
A
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Rolled 8, 34, 24, 12, 7 = 85 (5d50)

>>62447458
>Deals
God of StabilityX3: 10 - Regeneration from any wound or illness within day, 19 - Gravity Affinity, 41 - Perfect Physical Body.
God of True Chaos
No more deals: Rollan
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>>62447503
>>62447458
10 - Regeneration from any wound or illness within day, 19 - Gravity Affinity, 41 - Perfect Physical Body, 8 - Flight, 34 - Best LOL player ever, 24 - Single Shadow Clone Creation, 12 - Ice Affinity, 7 - Emotion Sensing. Hmmm, Flight is redundant with gravity, and the gamer skill is worthless for me, but I have a team member on my side already, so there is that.
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Rolled 45, 50, 8, 23, 33, 25, 28, 20, 31, 8, 11, 18, 30, 26, 10 = 366 (15d50)

>>62447458
Deals: God of True Chaos. God of Worlds. Rolling.
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>People who post builds but not cyoas.
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Rolled 18, 10 = 28 (2d50)

>>62447537
Nice, no dupes, and 2 extra rolls. Rolling the other 2 before listing prizes.
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Rolled 20, 10 = 30 (2d50)

>>62447548
dupes, rerolling
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Rolled 40, 9 = 49 (2d50)

>>62447554
>>62447537
Dupes again, rerolling
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Rolled 36 (1d50)

>>62447537
>>62447559
Just noticed a dupe 8. Rerolling for that.
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>>62447572
>>62447458
Perfect, no dupes now.
36- Best Guitar Player ever, 40- Master Juggler , 9- Teleportation to anywhere I've seen, 45- Insert Mental Suggestions, 23- Telepathy, 33- Genius Computer Programmer, 25- Lie Detection, 28- See through Eyelids, 20- Magnetic Manipulation, 31- Skill Thief, 8- Flight, 11- Air Affinity, 18- Animal Affinity, 30- Invisible so long as I hold my breath, 26- Change Hair Color at will, 10- Regeneration. Huh. I can be the devil down in Georgia.
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>>62447436
B
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Rolled 29, 8, 39, 50, 36, 50, 50 = 262 (7d50)

>>62447458
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>>62447733
>3 50s
Well done anon.
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>>62446926
>DSA is dead and all of the other authors I loved are also dead. Imaginos,Celt,Italitcs,SDA,Fox,Space Future(I think). All dead
most of that is good
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Rolled 2, 26, 40, 6, 26, 27, 41 = 168 (7d50)

>>62447458
Let's go.
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Rolled 1 (1d7)

>>62448239
>2, 26, 40, 6, 26, 27, 41
Wow, what are the chances. 26 and then 27, and 2 26's.
>Superhuman sight
>Change hair colour
>Master juggler
>Astral projection
>Never have to release bowels again
>Ideal physical body
Pretty bad desu - could be better, although astral projection is cool
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>>62447710
Powers:
>Blood brother
>Basic Upgrade
>Healthy living
Vampire build. I just chose because blood brother stacks, so it's pretty good.
Clothes:
>Footwear
>Watch
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>>62448333
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>>62448342
What's the deal with Lady Asha
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>>62448363
she wants the d
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>>62448333
>>62448342
Little neat generic fantasy CYOA, just like I love 'em. More, similar, or more from author?
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>>62447791
>>62447798
connect your posts you bastard
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>>62448426
I'm pretty sure it's by spadesy. there's a folder of his stuff in the mega.
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Is there a CYOA out there where I am the little girl and I use my cuteness and charm to make Waifus want to be my friend and I reject them, declaring my hatred for their disgusting nature; all the while, I still use my charisma on them ultimately tearing them apart and sending them into despare?
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>>62448543
nah, no ones sad enough to write that

but you could be the first anon
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>>62448543
Be The Yuri-Shaming Little Girl... I know CYOAs tend to be pretty niche, but this is on a new level entirely...
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>>62448622
It's the one waifu-abuse I can get behind. Yuri waifus exist to be abused, then either straightened out or discarded.
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>>62447436
A
No bulli anon
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>>62447323
>Max bedroom skills and housewife capabilities
>High loyalty
Italics may not be the most charming or the cutest waifu, but they got some stats.
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>>62449001
Italics is really dedicated
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>>62449001
>TFW you are the opposite
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>>62447791
Fashionista

Favoured Material: Leaf Dragons
Guild Member

Rivers' Edge

Archibald Winthrope
Nessa Brand
Marcel Locke
Tanya Sunaster * (Guildie)
Vermillion the Drake

There's no function without form. I'm gonna set up Apple with dragon parts.
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>>62449112
>Apple with dragon parts
Jump into the well and don't come back
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>>62449080
You were made for each other
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>>62449080
Seeing this shit made me a little curious so I took a look an- Dayumn. I would be a little annoyed at how "Loyal" I am but then I realized how little time I've spent working on CYOAs and figured its accurate enough.

In more CYOA related discussion: Eternal Breakfast needs ideas. I've got pre-breakfast snacks, drinks and post-meal niblets for the most part but I'm running blank on breakfast deserts. Y'know, stuff like a block of chocolate to go with your waffles or something along those lines. Need ideas, anons.
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>>62447710
Basic upgrade
Temporal sight
Times 10
Watch
Socks
Height (gain that extra inch to be 6'3 master race)
Build (get dat peak Schwarzenegger build)
Issue fix (undo years of liver snd lung damage)
Home (go back to being 25)
Pretty great desu
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>>62449332
Try exotic locales' breakfast.
Moroccans have this nice type of bread made out of semolina dough smeared with copious amounts of butter, then layered onto itself several times. Goes excellent with honey.
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>>62449332
And try some Chabakia. Sweeter than sweet, more delicious than any dessert.
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>>62449332
Crepes?
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>>62449332
Pop tarts usually do it for me.
And what's Eternal Breakfast gonna be about? Aside from the food I mean?
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>>62449446
Results.
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>>62449453
>spoilering an image with those dimensions
it's literally easier to turn off spoilers in the options than bother with opening this lol
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>>62449332
Wait, weren't you working on sword waifu academy or something akin to that?
I remember you saying this a bit before releasing eternal adventure.
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>>62449446
'Twas a joke I made once upon a time about how one day I'd find a topic I could make a CYOA about without turning it into 5+ pages. Some anon told me to make "Eternal Breakfast" and, due to having not touched CYOAs or photoshop in a while, I've decided to actually make it.
As to the CYOA itself? Nothing to write home about. It'll just be a pre-cyoa addition you can add to any Eternal CYOA for the ability to create foodstuffs and the utensils required to make breakfast once a day, maybe sprinkle some lore inside it.

>>62449421
Crepes feel a little too much for a breakfast dessert, as I know people who swear on making crepes for breakfast. I'll probably give it a special "Dessert + Main Course" tag.
>>62449387
Never heard of it before. I shall now add it to the list of things I want to eat. Soon. Like, tomorrow soon. Oh, and to the CYOA of course.
>>62449413
I've had those before but never knew what they were called. Thanks for reminding me, anon.
>>62449478
See the main part of this reply. I posted about it two threads ago. Basically I'm unsure if I can do a spy CYOA to the standard I want to do it at due to not being too into the genre itself and Sword Waifu Academy is far larger (At least, the planning document estimates it as larger and those tend to be under-estimations) than the other CYOAs I've made which is intimidating me enough to just not attempt it.
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>>62449446
>>62449453
First page is basically entirely unnecessary because the results have about nothing to do with what you pick or the connection is so irrelevant that it might as well not exist
It's obviously made as joke but it's not very good one since it boils down to "make some picks, ok now none of that matters good job wasting time reading all that, here's some random stuff"
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>>62449541
Aww. And here I was, hyped for bulking up and murdering witches...
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>>62449612
This is all why Eternal Breakfast is being made. Trying to shake the rust off and hopefully the drive to create gets reignited and I go back to working on OC like a good little author instead of being in this rebellious phase where I refuse to do any work.
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>>62447303
>I haven't had cancer in 2 years.
-Italics upon posting Apocrypha Advent
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>>62448333
Gods: Olympic Parentage
Ariella

Gifts: Giant's Brawn
Mantle of Steel
Grace of the Deer
Marlin's Quickness
Polearm Master
Lothario
Commander
Angelic Pinions
Bulwark
Weapon Summoner
Beast Slayer

Companions: Lady Asha
Ayme
Mek'Kem

Adventures: Boss Monster
The Kyphian Mines
Whales in the Sky
A Peaceful Village
The Fire Witch
Incredible Vegetable
Door to Door
Devil Without a Cause
Always Read the Manual
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>>62449328
>*Pomf*
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>>62449541
>Sword Waifu Academy is far larger (At least, the planning document estimates it as larger and those tend to be under-estimations) than the other CYOAs I've made which is intimidating me enough to just not attempt it.
But eternalanon, your cyoas are already some of the biggest, so I would you say you shouldn't worry that much about the size.
Or maybe you could even try to do like a main cyoa then a dlc with the content that was left over.
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>>62447323
>>62449080
>tfw you're NTR material
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>>62449711
Honestly that's probably where I'm going with that specific one. Release with 3-4 waifus and all the generic classes/training options I can think of and update with DLC as I figure it out more, kinda like how Branching Heart went with it. In fact, you can kinda think of sword waifu academy as "What if EternalAnon mixed Branching Heart and Hero Academy".
I should also clarify, I'm less concerned that the size of it will intimidate other anons and make them not want to go through the CYOA (I gave up on caring about that a long time ago). The reason I'm intimidated by its size is because *I* would have to make all of it and just thinking about all that work is what's crushing my productivity.

>>62449770
Just don't bring me into your NTR-aura and we'll be fine. I don't want any trouble. I want to stay loyal, dammit.
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>>62449770
>High stats on absolutely everything BUT loyalty
I might be an useless waifu but holy shit
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>>62449637
Oh well, if you're half the perfectionist I am, you won't resist the urge.
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>>62446926
>Imaginos
Nice to be mentioned for once, but I did answer some questions about a week ago when someone reposted Dream Prince. Still here, still working on stuff, just excruciatingly slowly due to RL things.
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>>62449332
For main breakfasts some of the tastiest are German Pancakes or their smaller version called Dutch Baby pancakes. Google them, they're tasty.

Sides are any type of pastry for breakfasts from Bagels and Croissants (more a bread really) to eclairs and puff pastries. Dishes of mixed fruits are good too for a more healthy conscious person. https://www.bonappetit.com/recipes/desserts/slideshow/breakfast-pastries.

Classic drinks are fruit juices (orange, apple, cranberry, mixed etc..) teas, coffee, hot chocolate.
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>>62447710
>Powers
Basic Upgrade
Times Ten
Fists of Fury
>Clothes
Footwear: Sandals
Backpack
>Body Type
Physical Age: 19
Gender: Male
Skin, Eye, Hair Color: White, Blue, Black.
Height: 6:3
Muscle Definition/Fat: pic related
Issues Corrected
Sexual Characteristics: Big dick mode go.
>World
The Cycle Never Ends
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>>62450085
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Ancient>Ancestor>Grands
Dhampires>Lycans>Humans>Vampires
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>>62450170
>Ancient>Ancestor>Grands
Ancient is a shit and destroyed his world and the Grands are shit. The Ancestor is actually the only decent one doing anything good.

>Dhampires>Lycans>Humans>Vampires
Dhampires are half-breed mongrels, Lycans can yiff in hell, and Vampires are just niggers. Only the Humans have done anything constructive and good. Get out of here with your shit taste.
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>>62450393
why so mad?
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>>62446926
>tfw not mentioned
Who the bleep is Fox?
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Rolled 30, 8, 34, 44, 26, 10 = 152 (6d50)

>>62447458
>>62447733
Wow. Time to roll the extras.
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>>62449080
This has to be Celt.
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>>62449637
>Trying to shake the rust off and hopefully the drive to create gets reignited and I go back to working on OC like a good little author
>actually believing this
You're pretty funny, at least.
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Rolled 23 (1d50)

>>62450723
Rerolling that 8.
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>>62449570
Is someone seriously triggered a poptart CYOA isn't serious enough/about poptarts enough? Is this what you're reduced to?
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>>62447458
>>62447733
>>62450723
>>62450783
In Order:
$20 a day
Flight
Master Entertainer
Best Musician of an Instrument of your choice (I'm going to choose the trombone, bitches love trombones)
Invisible while holding breath
Best gamer in a single game (Chess if available, Dota 2 if not)
Immortality
Change Hair Colour
Regenerate from any wound or illness in a day
Telepathy

With this roll, I have become an immortal with a bunch of comfy powers. I'll make a career out of my new skills, and invest until I'm able to just retire forever. I'll do some dynasty building on the side, but I'll mostly just be accumulating capital to fuel a life of quiet luxury.
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>>62445707
>https://nhentai.net/g/177013/
What the heck CYOA could you make from this?
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>>62449570
I just pick the flavors I like and enjoy the accompanying bonuses.
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>>62450741
Get fucked.
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why have the last few threads been namefags talking about namefags?
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>>62451058
are you merely pretending
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>>62450697
I'm stating the facts. Apocrypha is a redpilled cyoa about humanity fuck yeah in a totalitarian world.
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>>62450955
Maybe a cyoa about not using garbage tier doujin site
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A mystery wizard offers you a sword and one enchant for it. He says youre gonna need it.
After you take it, you are transported to the most dangerous game: HeLLaPVP[Br] Online, a deadly show where people must battle eachother to escape from this place.

Which do you take? Also if your last name begins with C, F, L, Q, or X you get to take along with you a bottle of your favorite drink.
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I love waifus
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I love waifus(male)
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I love waifus(Celt)
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>>62451879
the fuck is Riot Blade?
one part per million 300% damage AoE?
Is that just a 0.0001% chance of dealing damage per swing?

Also, what if my favorite drink is a potion of omnipotence?
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>>62452171
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=FjW0VViUeFE

Also potion of omnipotence isnt your favorite drink, you've never consumed it. Potion of impotence might be, and considering how much you love waifus(tiles) you might have already drank the s o y
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>>62452212
>Video (and anything googled) have exactly no relation to the enchantment description
Oh, you're just being deliberately obtuse.

I don't have anything better to do, though, so
>Are there any minimum damage values after armor?
>What's the power scaling like?
>How common is other healing?
>Does KO always = death?
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>>62451879
Green Healing blade. I'll outlast everyone merely by surviving my wounds.
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>>62452346

You still have to get the KO. It's not horrible, but it's only going to be really useful against hordes of enemies or in multiple back to back fights against others in back to back fights.
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>>62452171
I guess PPM stands for Procs Per Minute. Depending on how it's coded, it could just mean that you have basically guarenteed chance to trigger it on your first swing and then it's on cooldown for the next minute or that the probabilities of triggering it are adjusted up or do so that you'll get about one proc per minute when over short time
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>>62452413
>You still have to get the KO
That goes for every blade, really.
>it's only going to be really useful against hordes of enemies or in multiple back to back fights against others in back to back fights
That assumes that there are health potions and that rest heals your wounds, which isn't even implied, since this is a "show", not a video game or even a VR. Over time, no matter how many victories you score, you'll succumb to your wounds or exhaustion. My healing gives me a better chance in the long run.
And there's nothing that says I can't loot a more damaging sword for fighting, then just use the healing blade for the finishing move.
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>>62449770
You just made me realize how absolutely vital loyalty is holy shit. The single most important factor for a waifu, literally the line between a waifu and a prostitute
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Post the most visually repulsive and bad CYOAs, I'm making a guide to making CYOAs and I need examples of "what to not do".
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>>62452621
I don't save bad cyoas, the glorious glory unto the sweet is an exception because it's a meme
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Hopefully the rapists are asleep. Ahem:
P R A I S E B E T O _V, F O R S H E P R O M I S E D O C
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>>62452875
Rape
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>>62452875
Think again, chump. Let's see what hasn't been tried yet...
>Strawberry Slice
Force feed it to the witch, then carry her to my van while she's blissfully serene and passive.
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>Orange Sponge Slice
My manly spear shall never shrink, even while the hole it's inside turns deathly cold (like a corpse).
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>>62452919
>even needing cake to rape
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>>62452970
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>>62452981
I prefer my prey nice and tender. Tough meat causes indigestion.
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>>62449541
>E says his next CYOA is far larger than his usual.
>*sighs*
>Opens Word Document
>Spreadsheet
I am ready for the sword waifus.
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>>62449943
He liiiivessss
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>>62451879
Blue Sword + Aura Sword and I'm taking Root Beer as my drink.
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>>62451032
That’s his stats when stoned.

What’s his stats while not stoned?
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>>62452621
Anything by Tok will do.
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>>62453073
Probably all zeros.
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>>62450170
Pasille>Arios
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>>62447710
>Powers
Basic Update
Times Ten
Tech Head
>Clothes
Cape
Coat
>Body Type
17
Female
(Rest is in the picture)
>World
Self Insert

I wish it has a mind control power but the rest is good.
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>>62452621
Post the in progress guide.
Is the guide for InDesign or Photoshop? Or is it more of a general help/guideline?
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>>62453226
This is true.
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>>62451879
>Red Bling sword
My superior style is going to lead me to victory
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>>62453382
I see you are a skeleton of culture as well.
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>>62451879
Blue Bling Sword.
High speed means that I can spin it at high speeds. I will become a disco ball.
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Someone please post woadhiem.
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>>62453557
>>62453588
FIGHT
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>>62447329
Human looking Phoenix/Jellyfish hybrid (80)
Brown soul
Earth magic, water magic, white magic, beast master, technomancer (30)
The choice, then go into the talisman picking Gwendy

I'll add my follow-up for the choice
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>>62453631
Why fight when we can team up and style on everyone until we're the only ones left, and then fight to the death?
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>>62453880
Hello Dante.
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>>62453921
He is not wrong though
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>>62453929
I didn't say he was, but you know how Vergil feels.
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>>62453860
For my secondary, this is effectively outfitting me for my fight against scylla
>>62452849
Gazer with the gazer orb and omni-goggles, can't really take the groups and jobs with me. I just think it's a fitting addition since I'll be a technomancer

The plan is to win the fight, build the land in a weird nature and future tech balanced in harmony. Teach my new waifu water magic while we build up defenses and resources, and it's not like I'm going anywhere being the oddity I am. Just hope to reach technological immortality soon for friends and loved ones.
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>>62451879
If >>62452521 is accurate in his assessment, I pick
>Red Riot Blade
150 damage, once per minute. Ain't nothing blingier than a massive explosion.
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>>62447541
>Bubsy
I love baby carrots too! And talking to myself...
Come pup, a life of comfy naps and human food awaits.
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Rolled 43, 25, 18, 28, 35, 34, 40 = 223 (7d50)

>>62447458
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>>62446926
Gothic Revival
Upper Floors
>local businesses
Bar Between Floors
The Apartment Gym
Irregular Grocery
Bodega de Demonio
The Lost and Found
Abandoned Store
BlockBuster LLC
Gunrunner's Depot
>furniture and appliances
Ex-Tenant's Journals
Sentient Microwave
Occupied Mirror
Veteran's Pillowcase
Vending Machine
Sun-Kissed Cabinet
Painter's Memento
>friendly tenants
Girl Behind the Door
Yarn Spider's Nest
The Changeling
Arm in the Basement
Apartment Gargoyle
The Housefather
Apartment Maid
Apartment Janitor
Veteran Kowallski
Nurse Erika
>paranormal phenomena
Your Secret Admirer
The Stairs to the End
Bashful Haunt
Odd-Jobs Listing
Hokousha Tengoku
The Night Fair
Open Door Day
Hallway Balloons
>hostile phenomena
Message on the Wall
Indoor Livestream
Hole in the Wall
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>>62447710
Basic Upgrade
Times Ten
Multiply

Socks with sandals

Make myself fatter, make myself shorter, and have a monster dong

Use Times Ten with multiply to be 50 Danny Devitos running all over the fucking world in socks and sandals.
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>>62447329
Fated
Black

Titanic Strength
Black Magic
Power of Love
Regeneration
Power of Hate
Fire Magic
Earth Magic
Water Magic
White Magic

Crown

>>62447400
Artistic Pursuits
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>>62453596
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There was this spaceship cyoa that was kinda bummer because it was about being alone in the ship over vast periods of time, it mentioned many pilots having multiple degrees due to the spare time they had and one of the food options was McDonalds (or some other fast food chain) with timelocked food containers so that you could enjoy the promotions at the same time as the rest of the galaxy. Anyone remember the name or could post it?
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I'm still looking for a scifi cyoa where you had to configure your own space station, if someone have it.
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Anyone have resonator?
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No one has that
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So I made this, can everyone stop sucking now?
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>>62456493
Looks and reads like shit.
Exactly what I've come to expect from the Swedish cuck-ball.
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>>62456493
Did you forget to put images in the Destructible armor boxes?

Does that make this a WIP?
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>>62456493
unironically not bad advice
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>>62456446
I got you senpai
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>>62456525
>Did you forget to put images in the Destructible armor boxes?
No, this is the censored version. I can't show nekid grils here.
>Does that make this a WIP?
FUUU ANON! I don't post WIPs!
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>>62456493
based tok being based like usual
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>>62456493
This is actually really nice basic advice, thanks for sharing.
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>>62456568
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Rolled 21, 27, 36, 41, 5, 19, 27, 50, 17, 30 = 273 (10d50)

>>62447458
True Chaos baby. Lets make a world of super heros
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>>62456576
>I don't post WIPs!
I can't tell if you're just fucking retarded and have a bad memory, or if you're just a bad liar.

https://archive.4plebs.org/tg/thread/55198185/#55205379
https://archive.4plebs.org/tg/thread/54981150/#54982216
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>>62456568
It's not that one, but thanks anyway because I'm saving it as well anon
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>>62456493
Hey Tok. Fuck you. Too bad that image is shit and your examples are also shit.
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>>62456740
Even if you think their work is shit, they made a lot of decent and even some good points.
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Rolled 2, 41, 31 = 74 (3d50)

>>62456635
Lets see what my re-rolls turn up.
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>>62456493
Heh, let me show you some better advice
Nah, good shit. Only part I really disagree with is variance simply for sake of variance. If you can figure out some layout that really adds to the cyoa, that's great but simple text boxes with text in them is functional and easy to follow, which is never a bad thing.
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>>62456554
>>62456591
>>62456595
>>62456766
Either provide specific examples of what is good advice or put your trip back on, Tok.
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>>62456766
Points other's have made for years and are in the pastebin. Hell points SDA made years ago and are in the pastebin.

The layout is poorly done on that whole thing. Stuff isn't aligned, there's no overall direction to the feel or sections. it's poorly crafted crap with some partial good advice floating in that sea of shit.
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Rolled 30 (1d50)

>>62456770
One more... immortality baby
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>>62456446
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Rolled 42 (1d50)

>>62456799
Ok have to re-roll again...
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>>62456774
>A grading system is better advice than an actual tutorial.
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>>62456822
Nope
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>>62456568
>Centrifugal Force
>can't control it very well
What?
>if the station stops for any reason
Yes, this would be a giant fucking problem, if, you know, your massive fucking space station just suddenly fucking stopped. Is there no inertia or something in this universe?
Real problem with centrifugal force is that you'll have functional gravity only in the rings. Also, as curiosity, unless your rings are really massive, things don't fall straight down.
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>>62456774
I had almost forgotten how pretentious SDA was.

Also, long cyoas are borderline dogshit. Hardly an A.
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>>62456493
>can everyone stop sucking now
You should try leading by example.
And I'm not just talking about CYOAs.
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>>62456780
Not Tok, (goodness gracious who the fuck makes a whole CYOA just for their self-made waifu), but I know some stuff about design, so I will advocate for at least that much.

>Readability Matters
>Title vs Body text fonts
This is a pretty common concept in good typography. You can use fancier headings (though you want them to still be legible), but keep the body text simple so that people can read it. I would even argue that the font he uses for the header on both sides of the example is too fancy, but it still functions.

>Color contrast text vs background
Legibility matters. In general, it's also just a good idea to contrast colors.

>Playing with the font
This isn't super important, but there is definitely value in having related ideas be color-coded, as it helps the reader easily associate the concepts at a glance.

>Visual Design
This is a matter of taste. I don't especially like either of his examples, but the one on the right is more stylistic and less ugly than the one on the left.

>Formatting
I don't care what he says here. Them looking same-y isn't very important; looking more unique is icing on the cake that is function.

>Your images should help convey the thing being chosen
If your pictures help demonstrate the idea, then that's your parts working together better. Otherwise, this is an issue of "the thing works" and "it can be done better." To make the whole thing more cohesive, you should strive for somewhat similar styles.

>Censored himself
Flippin' goof. If he was gonna post a SFW version, he should have built in an alternate example so we're not trying to compare two blanks.

>Pointless Options
I half-agree with this. You definitely want every choice to mean something, though that doesn't mean everything needs to be high-impact. Some CYOAs are just chill or low-tier whatever. Save the little things for the end as little bonuses on top of the things that you should be putting more thought into.
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>>62456493
Hey Tok in Dungeons and Deviants if you take the lone adventurer option are you precluded from the Guardian mission or is just a guaranteed mission fail?
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>>62456875
>forgetting that sandra has already released multiple tutorials that cover everything yours did and more, and all that was ages before you
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>>62456822
Man, the cloning part caused so much autism back then
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>>62456970
That's a guaranteed mission fail.
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>>62456822
Found it.
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>>62456822
Post the rest.
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>>62452875
do you keep posting this because you're upset you didn't get an oc? cause this is from last year.
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>>62447710
>Powers
Basic Upgrade
Times Ten
Fists of Fury
>Clothes
Skull Cape
Backpack
>Body Type
Physical Age: 20
Gender: Male
Skin, Eye, Hair Color: White, Blue, Black
Height: 6,4
>World
CYOA
>>62455658
>Motivation
Righteousness
>Skills and Traits
Combat: Swords, Brawling, Shield.
Mental: Unflinching, Tactician.
>Demonic Runes
Chastity Rune(free), Efficiency Rune, Comfort Rune.
>Enchantments
Weapons: Sword(Avatar Slayer, Against All Odds), Brawling(Cast Fist, Atlas), Shield(Repulsor, Boomerang)
>>62455668
Armor: Feather, Supporting, Blood And Guts
>Avatar Form
Titan: Strength lv2, Speed lv2, Toughness lv1 free.
>Avatar Form Abilities
Strength lv3, Speed lv3, Toughness lv3, Regeneration lv3, Raw Material lv2
>Magical Spells
Spell 1: Fortify only. Totem Method.
Spell 2: Heal and Ward. Totem Method.
>>62455684
>Factions
Good: The Band of Friendship and Fellows
Neutral: The Everwalking Knight
>>62455936
>Companions
The Battlemage, The Longbowman, The Sister, The Atoning Knight, The Repenting Samurai, The Kings Daughter, The Living Wall.
We shall march together, and fix this poor world. Then I am going to go take a nap.
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>>62456446
Skills:
>Golden Touch
>Sealord
>Master of Whispers
>Offensive Strategist
>Engineer

Units:
>20 scouts
>100 pikemen
>80 halberds
>50 swordsmen
>10 engineers
>4 cogs
>2 galleys
>50 swashbucklers

Warbeasts:
>2 cave trolls
>Sea beast
>Artillery Construct


Lieutenants:
Armundus
Meriel
Gujong

Infamous Regiments
>Vamberg Musketeers
>Guild of the Red Death
>Treasure Crew

Drawbacks:
>Nemesis

Contracts
>Unconquered Fortress
>Plague at Seas
>Siegebreaker
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>>62457057
Location: Outer Realms

Purpose: Military

Architecture: Shiny

Facilities: Armory
Outer Defenses
Fighter Bay
Medbay
Bar
Expedition Center
Cargo Bay
Hydroponics

Residents: Humans
Telaris
Azura
Voidborn

Companions: Veteran (Friend)
Admiral (Delegate)
Noble (Assistant) [Lover]
Hotshot (Defiant Subordinate)

Adversaries: Space Pirates
Syndicate


My station serves to protect the frontiers of the region from pirates and other scum and also as a starting point from where exploration fleets travel to the unknown, so if something happens to them I'm the one who has to respond to their help calls.
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>>62456774
>>62456875
When someone's trying to learn a feature of whatever program they're using, tutorials are vital. It's simply a self-guided lesson in how to use it. A rubric is best used afterwards, to review aspects of what you've done that you might not have thought of earlier (or recently), and gives you the chance to improve it before submitting it, rather than waiting for feedback (which you can still get anyway).
In summary: Tutorials are for before. Rubrics are for after. Both are useful.

>>62456920
>Also, long cyoas are borderline dogshit. Hardly an A.
Which is why it says "not a grade" in the description of the Length row. The last box in the row is grayed out for a reason. Not really sure why it's even mentioned, but it was indicated as unimportant when grading.
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>>62456493
Where do you post un-censored?
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Why is there no new good author to replace the dead ones? There hasn't been any good OC in decades
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Post some good CYOAs without wish fulfillment
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>>62456822
>>62457113
No, it's because I was promised annual OC in exchange for making the author famous, and by hook or crook, I shall succeed!
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>>62457763
There are and there were.
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>>62456343
It was Starship Cabin and you are all useless
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>>62457977
I like how the mind death guy still can't let it go all these years later.
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>>62458044
>>62458070
>>62458080
>>62458114
>>62458130
Canada strikes again.
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>>62457763

I'm working on it. Quality takes time.

Some people lack patience.
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>>62447791
>>62447798

Elementalist: Lightning

Favored Foe: Water Wyrms
Welldrinker

Settlement: Port Katar

Raskar Cairn
Quiet Jax
Vermillion the Drake
Jameson Greaves
Caspian
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>>62447458
36 - Best musician - Piano
6 - Astral Projection
23 - Telepathy
44 - Almost immortal, do not age
50 - Two more rolls
33 - Genius Programmer
8 - Ability to Fly
32 - Master Chef
1 - Extreme Strength
An extremely skilled individual in the arts and Computer Science, I'll definitely live good from now on.
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Whatever happened to skeleton? I had a boner for his shenanigans
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>>62457763
Apocrypha Advent came out just last week.
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>>62458562
We skeletons await for Witches, Magi Bloodlines, and Echoes PSY skelebro.
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>>62457763
4chan is a decade and a half old. /cyoag/ is barely a decade old. OC not coming in decades is a horrid hyperbole, never mind that any cyoa you could reasonably claim to be "good" is even younger.
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>>62456493
Funny how most of it also apply to yourself.
Like you criticize BigAl of using the same templates(aka looking the same), but the same all apply to your CYOAs, since you just pick a box template off google and pick a color scheme, so in essence they all basically are just like the same. Specially since your backgrounds are generally just a single color.
inb4 the ddlc cyoa(since you always show it when people say that your visual designs aren't so great), in that one you just used paint to do some black rectangles, big shit. It don't even look that good since it's shapes are very regular and the white text ended up all inside the black area anyway(instead of the black rectangle not covering 100% of the text).

For images, you always complain about this and the example you give is just mixing 2d with 3d(which people have talked about since the birth of cyoa).
And you are also guilty of this in your CYOAs, in your Dungeon and Deviant images ranged from Cartoonish, to Anime to even Western style.
For showing the action, now that is very subjective, and from the looks of it, Dungeon and Deviant also suffer from this.

Now for pointless options, that is something incredibly common for your CYOAs, not just including bad stats systems.
In fact for the stat argument, you can also argue about the same about any kind of ability that is badly defined. As 'strength X' might be just as vague as 'elemental stuff' and 'improved elemental stuff'.
Also, body sliders can exist for reason of helping you imagine the character that is being created. Didn't you say it yourself that CYOAs are a form of visual storytelling?

Much of this is just the pot calling the kettle black(for bad authors) or for good authors, you saying that they suck despite being miles ahead of you.
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>>62458784
>Not waiting for Princess
What a bunch of fags
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>>62458876
cyoag is six years old friendo, that's not "barely a decade"
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>>62458914
Since Tok said he'll make it there is like an 83% chance of him releasing something else completely unrelated that he hasn't even talked about.
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>>62458932
You think this thread was always a general, or always on /tg/? Cute.
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>>62458914
why did you take your trip off, tok?
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Yessir, Tokie sama. I would very much like to be turned into a helpless girl and be violated by hordes of "immigrant" orcs and unhappy citizenry -all to be described in the vivid detail of the experienced- to prove my manhood to this bunch of faggots. Not wanting to be a girl and get raped by others? HA! I PITY THEM!
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>>62458943
>the general existed before it... existed
cute
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>>62459054
CYOAs originated on /b/, if you weren't such a newfag you would know that.
In fact I believe that they still post Order vs Chaos sometimes(a Roll version based on post numbers) and some other RYOA that are post-based.
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>>62458904
>Funny how most of it also apply to yourself.
>ToryXPage CYOAs look the same and so does yours.
Really nigga, really? Just look at this comparison I made.

>>62458914
Princess of culture!

>>62458979
> HA! I PITY THEM!
AS DO I!
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>>62459099
if you weren't a dumbass you'd notice we aren't talking about cyoas, we're talking about cyoag


please correct your dumbassery forthwith
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>>62457054
Also question. If you take Hero's Journey and Restart do you lose all your progress with learning your talents or perks you've acquired? I'm assuming so.
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>>62459114
>Really nigga, really? Just look at this comparison I made.
Oh shit, you picked some other box template off google and changed the color scheme and maybe the fonts.
How could it be?
It's the same fucking overall design, you shit.
In fact, you are even worse than Italics at doing the same thing. Anyone can recognize your CYOAs at a glance, since they are the same thing except you pick some different title font and boxes/border off google.
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>You mix western and anime in Dungeons and Deviants
Yes, but they have common ground in being cartoonish and having bright colors and many of the pictures are pictures of a style that is a mix of anime and western art, so you can't tell exactly what those hybrid pictures are. Those hybrids help to blend together those styles and bring unity. So in the end, it works out perfectly fine.

>For pointless options, that is something incredibly common for your CYOAs, I won't give you any concrete examples, so you just have to take what I say at face value
Not gonna take that at face value, unless you have examples and evidence. But of course you don't.
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>>62459210
>Hur dur your CYOAs are the same
Look here you little shit. Does this look similar to....
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>>62459231
This? or...
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>>62459241
This?!
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>>62459257
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>>62459212
Goalpost moving faggot. You need to fuck right off or get another banning. Christ your're so full of shit your eyes are brown.
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>>62459273
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>>62459274
>Christ your're so full of shit your eyes are brown.
Fucking hell, I haven't heard this phrase in years...
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>>62459241
>>62459241
>not all legions
come on man step it up
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>>62459231

Honestly
>The Little girl

Even without the fetish bait, infinite money is awesome. Like.... CURVED. SWORDS. level of greatness. Money is its own superpower.
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>>62459212
Are you blind niggah?
Battle-Priest and Nature Magic(both from Dungeon and Deviant) don't look like the same style at all. In fact Battle-Priest is fairly serious while.
As another example is just to look at the lewd ones and compare it to the ones that are more heroic like Flying Mount, which don't have bright colors or is cartoonish.

And clearly you haven't read your own CYOAs if you don't believe that they are full of pointless choices.
I didn't give any example, that since the whole section of pointless choice is so subjective that you will just outright deny, therefore doing the work of getting any example and writing an argument of why it is an exercise in futility.

>>62459241
>>62459257
Those two are.
I do admit though that >>62459231 is different, but that is the only one which don't follow the rest of your template.
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>>62459231
Spaceship and Adventurer are the better options, despite my love for Fate series. And unless Spaceship eventually lets you travel into fictional universes through the warp, Adventurer is the best option hands down.
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>>62459231
Your

>>62459241
CYOZ

>>62459257
Dibella Corp
SocJus

Not mentioned are:
>Deus Vult, D&D, Infected, Mindslaver, Xes Magic
>Doki Doki, Seven Sexy Sins

And that's just the blatant similarity.
Look Tok, you make some nice concepts, and some of your executions are nice, but then you go and reject advice from others to try and put up a "based" front, when in reality it just makes you look childish.
>inb4 only authors can speak
Still waiting for the answer to my riddle, Tokie ;^)
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>Hur dur some pictures in Dungeons and Deviants were not drawn by the same artist!!!!!
No, retardo-kun it would be next to impossible make a CYOA with the exact same art style. Some art styles are close enough and fine to use. The pictures I used in the tutorial didn't either have the exact same art style, but they where close enough.

>Space Marine GF and Dark Ritual use the same template
Explain this bullshit
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>>62459475
Who else super-villain GF here?
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>>62459522
Synchronized evil laughs? HELL YEAH!
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>>62459487
>No, retardo-kun it would be next to impossible make a CYOA with the exact same art style. Some art styles are close enough and fine to use. The pictures I used in the tutorial didn't either have the exact same art style, but they where close enough.
Stop moving the goalposts, I didn't say that they weren't drawn by the same artist, but that they were obviously of very different styles, of which you just complained about in that 'tips' and in the past against others authors.
And only a retarded or dishonest would claim that some of the art in that CYOA are 'close enough' in art style.

>Explain this bullshit
Look Tok, you might use a different title font, color scheme for the background and different boxes but in the end, the result is very similar to each other.
I would call someone blind if they can't recognize your CYOAs from style after seeing one or two of them.
Maybe not Enslaved and very old cyoas, as they are before the time you learned to grab borders off google, and are even worse looking than the average cyoa that you make. But the rest of it? Extremely similar.

>>62459475
You forgot Eronomicon.
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>>62459475
>All the Tok CYOAs look the exact same
See this --> >>62459114

>Still waiting for the answer to my riddle, Tokie
Not go through the trouble of doing anything of the sorts, a worshiper of the lord of lies, does nothing but lie.
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>>62459664
Tok, I want to fulfil all their wishes.
I just want the cute girls to be happy.
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>>62459664
Tokie, I showed you the similar cyoa alongside each other. Not all of your cyoa are the same, but most follow the same set of templates. Don't misquote me so lazily, it's unseemly.
>Not go through the trouble of doing anything of the sorts
Excellent copout. Why go through the trouble of thinking if you can just claim the opposition is just a liar?
>a worshiper of the lord of lies, does nothing but lie
Btw, your Nemesis cyoa was pretty good.
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>>62459606
>Stop moving the goalposts
I never did, you set the goalpost for me aka strawmaned me.
>You're strawmanning me! I never said the images needed to be made by the exact same artist!
I can't even, that is too much retardation for me to handle, for each sentence you write I can feel my self getting dumber and dumber, like you're some kind of brain vampire draining other peoples intelligence and sanity. Like this is the reason no self respecting author takes listens to you anons and your stupid ideas. Like 90% of your "feedback", "critique", "suggestions" and "ideas" are just utter fucking garbage. A waste of time, so is replying to you, like I shouldn't even dignify what you write with an answer. But I do it, because I'm like Jesus, I walk among you worthless shit stains and try to bring you enlightenment and give you gifts in the form of CYOAs. You are totally unworthy of my generosity, but I still do that, because that is the kind of person I am. I am a generous god.
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Can the annoying fairy get pregnant?
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>>62459780
Tok, you are so retarded that I don't even know how you are still alive.
In the first place, I give no feedback, suggestion, critique or whatever, I was just saying that you do exactly what you just say that others do(and suck because of it).
The sad thing is that even if the entire post is just bait, you are just so retarded that it can't work.
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>>62459770
>I showed you the similarity of your CYOAs
You warpdust sniffing whore of Tzeentch, all you did was to write a bunch of my CYOAs names in a list. I am a child of Slaanesh and my mind is not a ever changing labyrinth of madness and lies. So I cannot possible comprehend why naming a bunch of my CYOAs, proves that they have the same design, when I can use the senses of my eyes that Slaanesh gave me and gaze upon my work and see that there are clear and distinct visual differences between them.
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>>62460003
Yuri literally has no downsides
she was best girl when I played the game and she's still best girl now
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>>62447458
>27, 38, 46, 28, 33, 43, 16
Never have to expel waste again, master dancer, growing and shrinking, seeing through my eyelids, master computer programmer, no need for human needs, and an affinity for nature to top it all off. I feel I won’t be one to die in a highlander-scenario.
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>>62459770
>>62460003
>whore of Tzeentch
I thought Slaanesh had a monopoly on your kind, Tokie.
>all you did was to write a bunch of my CYOAs names in a list
Um, yeah. Why are you stating the obvious?
>I am a child of Slaanesh
>my mind is not a ever changing labyrinth of madness and lies
It's called having dick on your mind.
>I cannot possible comprehend why naming a bunch of my CYOAs, proves that they have the same design
Ooh. Sorry, I may have been a tad "subtle". Let me try again:
>Choose One is similar to Your CYOA
>Space Marine GF is similar to CYOZ
>Dark Ritual is similar to Dibella Corp and SocJus
>Deus Vult is similar to D&D, Infected, Mindslaver, and Xes Magic
>Doki Doki is similar to Seven Sexy Sins
The above cyoa are those that are undeniably similar in layout and format. A case could be made for even more, but I'd rather not delve into that and waste time and posts.
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>>62447458
I don't know why I'm re-rolling.

I'm satisfied with my first roll but I can't stop.
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Friendly reminder that escapism is unhealthy
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>>62460188
And?
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>>62460087
>I thought Slaanesh had a monopoly on your kind, Tokie.
No obviously not, because you must have been fucked so hard by bird dick that you got a bird brain.

>Choose One is similar to Your CYOA
>Space Marine GF is similar to CYOZ
>Dark Ritual is similar to Dibella Corp and SocJus
>Deus Vult is similar to D&D, Infected, Mindslaver, and Xes Magic
>Doki Doki is similar to Seven Sexy Sins
Lies and more lies! Does your kind spout nothing but lies? Or are your bird brain so full of lies you can no longer see the truths. Because I am no reader of minds and even if I where I would not read yours, because I fear my own sanity would crumble to dust upon looking at the cluster fuck that is your mind. So explain to me in words like if I was but a man and not an avatar of madness and insanity. For example, why is Deus Vult design the same as D&D, Infected, Mindslaver, and Xes Magic. Point out the similarities and show them to me with words and not riddles and incoherent ravings.

>>62460188
>Friendly reminder that escapism is unhealthy
Shut your mouth, there is nothing unhealthy about escaping from your life by writing pointless builds to pointless CYOAs that gives you pointless dreams that will never become reality.
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>>62460188
Yes, and...?
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>>62460188
without CYOAs life isn't worth the effort to live
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>>62460188
Daily reminder that you are in escapism general in the autist forum of australian bird watchers.
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>>62458784
I honestly want Italicsposting and discussion cyoas/lore over Tokshitposting any day of the week.
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>>62460261
you had Apocrypha discussed and posted for about 15 threads straight after it was updated
stop complaining
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>>62460261
Pray for the mods to ban that faggot.
Whatever CYOA that he creates don't compensate for the shit that he gives this thread.
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>>62460188
I know. I hate myself.
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>>62460288
What does that have to do with the fact that Tokposting is shit?
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>>62460226
>No obviously not
Then that just proves the superiority of Tzeentch over Slaanesh, since he can impose on her supposed domain, but she can't even approach comprehending his.
>Does your kind spout nothing but lies?
I did say Nemesis was a good cyoa.
>Point out the similarities and show them to me with words and not riddles and incoherent ravings
Sorry if I broke your mind with my simple riddle Tokie. I'll try to elucidate with an example:

>>Dark Ritual
>>Dibella Corp
>Build or become the <insert being type here> waifu
>In-depth pussy options
>Some useful options
>Some useless fluff options
>Personality tropes aka your flavor of dere
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>>62460360
make your own OC before complaining about Tok posting his
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>>62460188
So is most good food, stress, not exercising regularly in intensive sessions, and loneliness.
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>>62460397
The pact is sealed....
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>>62460291
>Whatever CYOA that he creates don't compensate for the shit that he gives this thread.
You ungrateful swine whore! I give and give all the time, I am a paragon of generosity, but all I get in return for my wonderful CYOAs and wisdom, is ungracious and unappreciative insults. But I am better than you, so continue my generous ways and ungrudgingly continue to grace you unworthy sacks of shit with my blessings weather you like it or not. Because maybe, just maybe on of you unwashed and uncultured swine fuckers will have the intellect required to appreciate my gifts and give me the praise that I deserve for tolerating the things you I do.
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>>62460415
Now all that is left....
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>>62460427
is for all of you....
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>>62460445
to choose your own adventure.
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>>62460397
this CYOA has the Charles II seal of approval
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>>62449770
>NTR material
>charm
NTR material is almost always stupid fuckmeat.
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>>62460373
>Tzeentch is superior to Slaanesh, because he is so fucking mad that he is incomprehensible!
You're saying that like that was something to be proud of? What kind of inbred redneck logic is this? Are you proud your god is mad and mine is not?

>I did say Nemesis was a good cyoa.
>See I'm not a liar
The best liars never outright lie, they wrap in the lies with the truth and the truth is that... Nemeis is the not a good CYOA.... It it the best fucking CYOA that has ever graced this hellhole and you fucking know it! I achieved perfection in my first CYOA. So stop your fucking lying, it is not good, it's a mother fucking master work!

>>Dark Ritual
>>Dibella Corp
>Build or become the <insert being type here> waifu
>In-depth pussy options
>Some useful options
>Some useless fluff options
>Personality tropes aka your flavor of dere

LIES! Here is the truth:

>>Dark Ritual
>Choose an android model
>Chose an AI to your android waifu
>In-depth pussy options
>Spend the points you gained from which model you chose on sex options, robot options and weapon options.


>>Dark Ritual
>Build your succubus
>Choose your succubus personality
>In-depth pussy options
>Gain points based on how demonic your succ look from body options and spend them on demon powers
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>>62460397
>Albino
>Haemophilia for +10 GD and total body failure for SS
I'll be a bard of renown in all of the realm, singing songs about myself and other inbreds
>Mental prowess, savant for musical skill and basic combat prowess
>Duke and influence for the bard's guild
>Mental awakening
I'll be a bard renowned for singing about myself, other inbreds and against incest in general.
This is better than anything Italics has even done btw
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>>62460566
Original:
>that just proves the superiority of Tzeentch over Slaanesh, since he can impose on her supposed domain, but she can't even approach comprehending his
Tok version:
>Tzeentch is superior to Slaanesh, because he is so fucking mad that he is incomprehensible!
Anons, I give you: Tok's reading comprehension.

Tok statement:
>The best liars never outright lie
Another Tok statement from >>62459664
>a worshiper of the lord of lies, does nothing but lie
Anons, I present to you: Tok's consistency.

>LIES! Here is the truth:
Tokie, I highlighted the similarities, you highlighted half similarities and half differences. What is your point?
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>>62447458

Rolled strength of ten, ideal body, skills of master entertainer, skill of master gamer, ability to sense lies, ability to plant suggestions, superhuman sight.

No Gods chosen. This is a pretty incredible package for what I want to do with my life. I am amazingly strong, gorgeous, have skills to make a living.

No idea what game I'd chose to be an ultimate master at... probably something classic like online chess? MTG Online? I could be a mega popular streamer, even though I've never really wanted that.

Man, suggestions would be hard to deal with though. Too much power over people for my morals!
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>>62460716
you got the rest of that?
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>>62460716
>that just proves the superiority of Tzeentch over Slaanesh, since he can impose on her supposed domain, but she can't even approach comprehending his
Slaanesh do not need to comprehend Tzeentch labyrinthine domain to fuck it! Slaanesh powers are so great and terrible that she only needs to unzip her pants and unleash her cock, Slaanesh cock is so long and so big it will worm it's way through the crystalline labyrinth of madness and find its way all the way to Tzeentch and fuck the madness out of him. He will be so fucking sane that he will no longer understand his own domain and get lost. This is the power of cock! True fucking power!

>incomprehensive babble
Ignoring this

>Tokie, I highlighted the similarities, you highlighted half similarities and half differences. What is your point?
Dibella Corp is more rigid, you get a model and you get a pree-programmed AI. While in Dark Ritual you build your succs body and her personality. Also your list pretty much summarized all waifu CYOAs. Choose a body, chose a personality and choose boons and drawbacks. Yes both of those CYOAs are Waifu CYOAs Sherlock so they might share some similarities, but they are not the same.
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>>62460291
Won't happen unless people report him.
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>>62456493

There is not a single penis in this whole CYOA. I just left feeling confused.
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>>62460397
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>>62460716
>>62460803
Here

>>62460806
>muh porn logic trumps actual logic
>in a non-porn setting
Okay~
>Ignoring this
Translation: You have no answer. No rebuttal. Some truths even you cannot dispute, or to use your words: "fuck into my liking"
> your list pretty much summarized all waifu CYOAs
Not really true. It summarizes waifu builders (and even those have some variation). If you looked into others' work, you'd see that they try to vary their concepts and methods, try keeping things fresh. You believe that you're infallible, which is the first step to anyone's downfall.
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>>62457057
>>62457078

>Location
Untamed Lands

>Purpose
Research

>Architecture
Green

>Facilities
Cargo Bay
Mining Deck
Medbay
Expedition Center
Gardens
Security Center
Engineering
Outer Defenses

>Residents
Kelites
Gardeners
Telaris
Azura

>Companions
Adjutant
Scout
Magnate
Envoy

>Adversaries
Smugglers
Bureaucracy

We're among the first sentient beings to visit this planet that's been lost in time. We're here so we can research every single aspect of this place, from the ore and the soil composition to alien taxonomy, alien horticulture, you name it.
Life here is pretty structured--the Telaris make sure of that. Sometimes I'll watch them practicing maneuvers on my lunch break. Our government recently deployed them along with substantial outer defenses after a smuggler came through with half the galaxy chasing after him. It seems he stole an idol of incomprehensible religious value and climbed in the first cargo ship he could find. After the destruction he brought upon this facility, the lives he cost us, I'm glad they wiped him.
So do you want to be a member of the security detail? Train with some of the best paramilitary forces in the galaxy?
Would you rather be a scout and head on expeditions with the Kelites? Help us to draw as much knowledge from this verdant land as possible?
Maybe you're looking for some respite. Our gardeners are very accommodating and always welcome an extra pair of hands.
Or you can with the envoy and the magnate. Shake hands, schmooze, and use every trick at your disposal to keep us funded and sponsored.
The choice is yours.
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>>62460397
Silly plan:
>Monstrosite
>All except Ataxia and Total Body Failure, all give me GD for 115
>Savant (Science, Neuroscience if I need to be more specific)
>Regenerator
>That leaves 110 points to dump in Mental Prowess, for 1100 extra IQ points!
Regenerator keeps me alive to bless the world with my >1100 IQ!
And if I end up near the modern day (Hell, maybie even if not, I mean 1100 IQ) I can bend that sheer mental power towards creating mind uploads, letting me ditch this unkillable cage of a form.
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>>62456493
The first vampire is better tho
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>>62460941
>Slaanesh cock can't do that, that is porn logic, not real logic
YOU FILTHY UNBELIEVER! Such blasphemy! To doubt the power of my queens cock is the most preposterous thing I have ever heard in my entire life. Such baseless lies will fall on deth ears, because I have beheld the glorious might of Slaanesh cock with my own eyes and my gaping asshole has given testament to it's power! It is truly infinite in its size and beauty, I have never seen such stunning beauty in the entirety of my life. You cannot even comprehend such splendor and yet you insult it!

I also see that you are the fucking autist that rename CYOAs and name them after weird things like lyrics and poems. Somehow I am not surprised that the turbo autist was you all along.
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>>62461123
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>>62461123
Do you not know how to spell deaf because you choked on a strapon that was bigger than slaanesh's puny dick?
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>>62447710
Basic upgrade
Fists of fury
King’s shield

Footwear and coat

Corrected issues: astigmatism and allergies
Height increased by 2 inches

CYOA
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>>62456493
So uh... as someone who wants to make cyoa's, do you guys think this is advice that should actually be followed?
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>>62447710
basic upgrade
successful probability
the noble path

coat, backpack
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>>62461273
yes
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>>62461273
The actual content seems like solid, if generic advice.
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>>62461273
>So uh... as someone who wants to make cyoa's, do you guys think this is advice that should actually be followed?
No, yellow text is perfectly fine on a white background, perfectly readable.
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>>62461123
>my gaping asshole has given testament to it's power
Oh. I see. Goodbye Tokie. Hope I can see you again when you've sobered up.
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>>62461308
but who the fuck would purposely use yellow text on a white background when you could just change the colour of either the background or the text to make it easier to read?
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>>62461348
>>62461348
>but who the fuck would purposely use yellow text on a white background when you could just change the colour of either the background or the text to make it easier to read?
Or you could use a white background and change the yellow text to white, to attain the ultimate readability.
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>>62461123
Do you have a link to your drive? Is it up to date?
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>>62460397
I really appreciate how autistically written some of these are fits the premise. This isn’t even a diss, it helps my immersion to imagine old Charles painstakingly slurring his way through the CYOA.
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>>62461417
>Do you have a link to your drive? Is it up to date?
Yes, my drive is awlays up to date! There is no date my drive is not up to!

https://drive.google.com/drive/folders/0B1CwO4KqTgloRXVUV19DR19hdEk

>>62461333
Your words hold no power when I can clearly hear the jealousy in your voice. But jealousy is only natural! Because Slaanesh cock is so bountiful and think that.... I cannot even describe it in words, so glorious was my ass pounding that I simply cannot give voice to such experience.
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>>62461521
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>>62461539
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>>62461551
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>>62461273
Go look in the pastebin and read the various info/tutorials that are linked there. You can find most of them on the mega too in the CYOA Tutorials, Info folder.
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>>62456493
Besides some of the basic text legibility formatting, who cares what a CYOA looks like?

These are spring boards for imagination, and my imagination far surpasses the superfluous graphics many authors use.

"MS paint"-like style with random images is fine. Plus, they are faster to roll out and way more accessible for new authors to make.
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>>62461521
Just to be clear, Slaanesh is the chaos god from Warhammer, not your orcish roommate's nickname?
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Tzeentch > Slaanesh > Nurgle > Khorne

>tfw no proper 40kyoa
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>>62461937
All the proper you need right here >>62459770
There's also Rogue Trader.
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>>62461937
this one isn't great but it exists
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>>62460043
>Your waifu self-harms
>Her self-harm turns her on
>Her arms will be bleeding while you fuck

That's a downside. It's horrible.
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>>62462364
whenever you make it
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>>62461937
>>62461970
>>62462035
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>>62462372
you first
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>>62462376
Here.
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>>62462373
Am I the only one thinking about making a AGP party?
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>>62460806
Man, this sitch bites.

>Take Impure, because I can let that slide. >Don't like disgusting. Being able to responsibly spend money is important. Being faithful is important between a waifu and husbando. Fading is cruel to the waifu.
>Put one point into each of the three categories
>Be relatively unsatisfied because mediocre personality means we still basically don't mesh.

You got anything where you don't have to sacrifice as much happiness or simple reasoning to get a decent waifu? Drawbacks can be fine, but these are rough if you have a sense of decency.
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>>62462392
>Shows picture of Sister of battle
>Don't actually have a choice to become a sister of battle
>MFW
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>>62461569
I require the creator's wisdom once more. Does lone wolf in Dungeons and Deviants affect the demons you summon with demonology?
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>>62462638
>North-East
It's right fucking there.
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>>62462827
>>62462827
>>62462827
go hog wild
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>>62447710
Tech head
Times Ten
Limit break

Create an autobuildable A.I that is loyal to me with technology 10 times more advanced than current human peak organizations and think tanks could (implies even shadow governments or any corps) in less than a tenth of the needed time. (use limit break to reduce it to the -10x10), faster even using godhead. Create inventions that allow me to emulate the rest of the powers, digitize my mind or repair aging.

Backpack and hat, to keep a low profile if needed and have mobile access to the web.

I'm choosing home because it's a more controllable universe with less variants to worry about, although I'm tempted to go for self insert both for synergy and potential gains.
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>>62457867
wish this had some drawbacks.
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>>62456446

>Skills
Well-Read - Knowledge is power!
Polearm Master - Best melee is best.
Defensive Leader - HOLD THE LINE!
Engineer - Walls, traps, and various defenses.
Mesmer - It often works best if people can't see all of your tricks before it's too late. Or, see more tricks than you actually have available at the time.

>Units (95)
Scouts x20 - Forward eyes, for when scrying isn't an option.
Halberdiers x80 - The Line. The can be a wall of sharp things to hold off attacks, or a charge of sharp things ruining your day.
Archers x40 - Everyone needs archers.
Musketeers x25 - Some things have armor that archers have trouble with.
Engineers x25 - Build walls, build traps, destroy walls, dismantle traps, repurpose everything.
Scholars x10 - More information is always useful, every corner of the world has it's own secrets that are just waiting to be discovered for advantage.
Healing Mages x10 - Attrition will favor those who can get back up.
Purple School Wizards x4 - More illusions to hide how many, what they're wearing, and what weapons they carry.

>Warbeasts (100)
Artillery Construct x4 - BOOM!

>Lieutenants (35)
Theodric the Tactician - Sometimes, experience is a great teacher.
Sofia the Weird - Supply lines are so last century. And scrying magic is very useful to have on hand.

>Infamous Regiments (30)
The Vamberg Musketeers - Stopping cavalry charges is kinda important. Stopping them at range seems better.

>Drawbacks (+60)
Nemesis - I was holding a keep on a previous contract, they were hired to assault it... it didn't work out for them. Now he's bitter, and trying to use underhanded tactics to ruin me.

>Contracts
Siegebreaker - Every contraption has a way to put a wrench in the works. Constructs doing the siege actually makes this easier.

I'll take a new Automaton schematic for saving Mazzano.
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>>62462687
Also the East





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