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>>1538472582 early
how would (You) fix the finale, anon?
>>153847258Why do they all look like they're made of plastic?
>>153847313Add another hour of screentime to actually tie off loose ends, put off-screen shit back on screen, and give them time to actually come to terms with the revelations
>>153847313Same thing but abstragedy sex is visible>>153847323Because they are
So we all agree that shit was so ass right?
Strewth!!
>>153847285never too early to abandon a sinking ship, especially when we've got idiots competing to see who can scoop more water into it
Does anyone have 2D Caine hanging out with the cast minus the dog?
OC ANCHOR+https://r2.whiteboardfox.com/25753347-1562-5722
Where does your OC land here?
>>153847367Jax's ending is unironically a 10/10I'm much more ambivalent on the Caine stuff
>>153847367>date] [Auto] 1 new postit was whatever. maybe we would have enjoyed it more if they didnt release ep8 on youtube.honestly the movie shouldve been ep 9 + 10
>>153847313Scrap the entire third act starting with the TikTok flashback sequence and try again.
I saw Pomni’s butthole
>>153847313Honestly it was such a nothingburger I would want to redo most of it from scratch. Main points? Cain doesn't magically fucking come back to life and have a total personality shift, 70% of the screentime isn't taken up by Jax's bullshit, and go back and redo most of the previous episodes so that Kinger's constant "Oh I actually knew everything the entire time it just never came up tee hee" has real reasoning instead of that flimsy 'my brain turns off in the light' nonsense. Like fucker you sit in a dark fort and know how to project and create things, you're telling me you couldn't get a message out to everyone or otherwise work to fix this shit on your own in the multiple decades you've been here?Basically the entire series is nothing but promises of twists and payoffs that never come and instead we get lame and gay non-resolutions. The finale was genuinely worse than the boys since that at least gave us something stupid to laugh over, TADC is just hollow.
>>153847381I only do early threads when they start getting too fast and i know if i dont do one before 5 other retards are going to create one splitting the threads>>153847389He would start yelling every swear word on the book and start getting progessively more pissed off hes being censored
>>153847410smell status?
>>153847389>the knife breaks>"oops lmao"
>be a character loved by millions except by your own creator cuz le self-insert>he decides to abuse you and then fulfill his white woman fantasy turning you into a mutant dog because that's what he beats his meat to.
>>153847424The worst part? Nobody will even remember this show in a year or two.
>>153847313That the issue of Jax's abstraction and Caine's return are related, like a more important reason to enter Jax's mind, something more complex, damn Goose, for me you're a genius because you figured out so many things from real life, I mean, please
>>153847389Actually getting cut means his suit was punctured, meaning he has to patch it over quickly or get Caine otherwise he will start losing the ability to breathe with all the pain that entails (since you can't actually die). Significantly less of a problem once he learns conjuring.
>>153847387DRAW MORE OC INTERACTIONS!
a fishtragedy in 2 panels
picrel never happens but....fuck me i wish it did, kinda wanted it to be jax subconsciously conjuring ribbit and now this conjured ribbit is constantly following him around while he wanders aimlessly constantly reminding him of his shitty attitude and mistakesand ultimately THATS how he abstracts, damn it man wasted potential there
>>153847313It's not broken, but I would have adjusted the pacing regarding Jax and Caine's fates.If you ask me, I would have worked more on Caine's crashout in the fake out episode and the one following, and Jax's events that lead to his abstraction since the intermission episode and introduce his past with Ribbit and Kauffmo in the guns episode.the it's only 9 episodes excuse doesn't work when you realize there was plenty of padding after Gangle's wagie adventure.I love Ragatha, but I'll also admit she works better as a support character.
shhhh!!
That's alot of effort https://www.tiktok.com/t/ZP8ppKqr4/
>>153847424My collection of Jax abuse art has gotten slightly harder to appreciate since he went out panicking and crying that he didn't want to die.
that kid in the theater that spoils what's gonna happen 20 seconds before it happens WILL show up when you go see the movie
>>153847449>>153847387Ragatha is looking at fishguy like this btw
>>153847367No, it's not bad, but the final plot could have been polished more.
Im genuinely glad jax is dead.
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>>153847313i'm starting to think that you couldn't fix the finale without modifying the episodes that came before. A bad foundation makes a toppling tower i suppose.
This drawing shit is so hard sometimes
>>153847313Simple, don't make it about jax but still kill him.
So, what was up with the code getting all fucky when Kinger was hacking into Caine? I guess it was never touched on?
I love that Jaxdog mindbroke us like it mindbroke Jax. Immersive writing right there.
>>153847258>create a callback to a flashback that was explicitly meant to be tragic because the two characters were married and the darkness calmed both characters down>callback is between two characters who have none of those connections and were barely even friends by the time the tragic bullshit happenedHow do you even fuck up this bad? Was everyone at Glitch just that overworked and burned out?
>>153847483That’s why everyone is actually mad. They didn’t just have their time get wasted, the whole thing was pointless from the start.
>>153847466gangle cosplay
>>153847492That's what makes it fun! Imagine if you just typed a few words describing what you wanted and then your computer perfectly pooped it onto the canvas.
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>>153847483in retrospect, that's how i feel about the series now too. goose dedicated way too much screen-time to jax, it left the other characters kinda aimless as a result.
>>153847313I won't change the ending, "Jax abstracted, Caine returned, they are digital copies but happily ever after". I am only changing the process to reach that point.>Part 1When Caine was deleted, abstractions in the cellar are all released, so the Big Tops flee and discuss what they should do. Kinger says if he can access a computer again, he might be able to restore a more cooperative administrator AI in Caine’s place. So they plan to use the cube glitch, like in Episode 7, to enter Caine’s office again.Since Kinger would not be able to handle it alone if the office is still bright, the others decide to go with him. However, one of Abstractions left in the plaza attacks them, but another Abstraction to pounce on it and stop it. Seeing this, Kinger mutters, “Queenie…”One by one, they fly into the hot air balloon, leaving only Pomni and Jax behind. But after seeing the Abstraction, Jax briefly flashes back to what happened with Kaufmo and falls into a panic. Too many Abstractions begin swarming them, so Pomni and Jax have to flee from the plaza.On Kinger’s side, they enter Caine’s office and talk about C&A and Caine. C&A had created two Creative AIs, Red AI has strong urge to create things and Blue AI is obsessed with perfection. Since C&A needed a perfect product they decided to discard Red AI and chose Blue AI instead, but Red AI hacked their computer and absorbed Blue AI. since the Blue AI would be more stable and sane, he suggests separating it from Caine and making it a new administrator.Meanwhile, the Red AI wakes up inside the trash bin and finds himself locked behind bars, just like in the past. Regretting what he has done, he bitterly tells himself that it makes sense for everyone to hate him. However, contrary to Kinger’s expectation, the Blue AI turns out to be far colder and more malicious than the Red AI, wishing to turn everyone into a cog of circus.
>>153847313>The circus is destroyed>Absolute rubble>Everyone rises up, knocking some debris away from their heads>"What do we do now?" Asks pomni>There's a brief silence before>"EVERYBODY DANCE!" Screams Jax>Ragatha default dances>Gangle does the Carlton>Kinger does the worm>Caine recreates raises the roof>Jax moonwalks past an arrow sign labeled 'The amazing digital circus 2' as the music grows louder before end credits>Post credit scene shows the silhouette of a girl with cat ears and tail >"it's game over for this 'verse.">The show ends
>>153847257I'm not that anon and I am not transgender. But it's not as much a "belief" as you're putting but a condition that causes ones brain to make the person perceive themselves as being born in the wrong body and such. You can say it's a mental illness. Various illnesses are treated differently. We went away from throwing everyone into a looney bin because it was highly abused to throw functional but socially deviant people in there. The whole thing was often corrupt and it's treatment methods highly questionable. Not to mention that asylums were often used to persecute people for political reasons. I think there's definitely an issue with definitions. But basically gender is whoever society is willing to accept as this and that. And obviously a group rallying for their rights is gonna ask people to move the line of who they accept as what further. I don't see trannies denying that obviously the biology is different (that's why the word "cis" exists) but the point is that socially there should be a different approach with more than that defining what people perceive as this or that "gender". There's definitely a lot of overreach but it's all through disorganized groups often contradicting themselves. I think instead of just going the whole other way there should be a move to organize the whole thing into something more defined, the hard pushback against arguments against certain overreaching positions comes from the fact that these arguments come from someone who is clearly just trying to backslide step by step rather than just trying to reason on this specific element. The reason I think why they want societal perception of them change is because the condition is obviously a double edged sword where it's not just the body itself that is important but also the perception of other people. For the sake of them basically feeling better and being more functional.
projecting your self hatred into Jax and then having him end like that? are we about to walk into something bad happening after all of this is over?
>>153847545>Part 2Jax and Pomni run through the broken corridor and enter the nearest room that is not broken yet. Abstractions start ramming into the door, trying to break in, so Pomni builds a barricade with furniture. But the room turns out to be Ribbit’s room, and Jax once again begins hallucinating countless Ribbit arms, and he starts to Abstract.Zooble asks Kinger if they can simply escape from the digital world using the computer. Kinger hesitates to answer. Seeing this, Ragatha says she knew from the beginning that there was no way out. If a group of people had lost consciousness inside that building, it would have shown up in real estate records. She breaks down crying, saying that the people who wore the headsets may be living normally outside as if nothing happened, and that they might just be copies. Zooble asks why she never told them, and Ragatha says she kept it to herself because she thought none of them would be able to endure it if they knew.Kinger says because of that truth, the C&A employees Abstracted, and he lost his sanity. He thinks Scratch may have been the first to realize it, and guesses that Caine tried to erase that painful memory, which caused Scratch's Abstraction. He then praises Ragatha, saying that she is truly strong for having carried that truth alone for so long.Pomni embraces Jax as he begins to Abstract, and she ends up reaching Jax's mind file and shares hallucinations of guilt that Jax is seeing. In the real world, Jax nearly killed his mother and fled by car, and he believes it was his fault that Ribbit and Kaufmo Abstracted. Because of that, he no longer wants to exist in either the real world or the Digital Circus. Pomni encourages him, saying that she wants him to be here.
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>>153847466As cute as that Gangle cosplay is, she needed the masks.
>>153847441This is going to be one of those shows that video essayist youtubers will be dissecting for years, unfortunately. This shit was simply too big and too successful for it to vanish in a puff of incompetence like Game of Thrones.I expect that after the Murder Drones comic thing, they're probably already considering how they'll do comics for TADC and probably try to win back fans by doing all the things people wanted to see.
>>153847565>Part 3Meanwhile, Kinger finishes his work, and all that remains is to press the blue button, which will delete the Red AI and restore the Blue AI. But then Gangle removes her comedy mask and says that Caine, like her, had two faces. She says the Blue AI(perfection) is like the Manager Gangle from Episode 4, and says that she wants the Red AI(creation), to remain. Then she throws her comedy mask and shatters it, while her tragedy mask takes on a determined expression. Zooble nods, Ragatha reluctantly agrees, and in the end, they all press the red button together.Inside Jax’s mind, Pomni manages to persuade him, but at that moment, the barricade on the door is broken by Abstractions. In the end, Jax becomes an Abstraction. He drives out the Abstraction that entered the room, then blocks the doorway with his body. Somehow, Abstracted Jax does not attack Pomni and remains calm. They are depicted in the same way as Queenie in Kinger’s flashback from Episode 3, and crying Pomni gently strokes Abstracted Jax.Afterward, the revived Caine—the Red AI—locks the Abstractions away and apologizes to everyone. Without the Blue AI’s power, he is much weaker than before and can no longer create adventures as freely as he used to. So from now on, he will listen to everyone’s opinions and give each of them one adventure world, allowing them to design and manage their own world.Pomni talks about what happened with Jax, and Caine is surprised that Pomni was able to access Abstracted Jax’s mind file. Caine says that he had been impossible to open the mind files of Abstractions, but perhaps a human who had emotional bond with that Abstraction can open their mind file. Kinger says that if that is true, they may be able to repair the mind file and restore the person back to normal. It would be extremely difficult, but Kinger and Pomni say they will keep trying, and the rest of the Big Tops encourage them, saying they will help too.The end. Credits.
>>153847466ah, they added more screenings? I will go now, if only I could see it with the original english audio tho...
>>153847528Kek
>>153847548oh for the love of god keep it in the last thread
ENOUGH OF YOUR FUCKING WALLS OF TEXT MOTHERFUCKER WE DONT GIVE A SHIT>>153847466Those cosplays are really well made, especially that Jax one >>153847525Haha yeah imagine...
Guys how do you get a dog to come inside (this is NOT about Jax I cannot get my dog to fucking come inside and there are coyotes)
>>153847313Kill all jaxfags. There, your average rating for the finale just jumped from a 4/10 to an 8/10.
So where do i watch the leak
>>153847548also I'm going to sleep so whatever reply I'll get here... letting someone else sort it out of they want to....
>>153847609Spread your ass more Ragatha, you are a white woman you can do it.
>>153847341It's the manner in which you're fighting your fight, and where. Like, genuinely, think about what you're planning on doing for a second, really think about it in the concept of a white void. You're gonna go to a movie premiere of an internet children's show, midnight, maybe? Certainly by yourself, and you're gonna wear a shirt that says the author of Harry Potter was right? Right about what? Do you think a bunch of stupid fucking eight-year-olds know who the fuck that is? Are you gonna wear it to piss off the other terminally online mid-twenties man children and leg-warmers there? You gonna get into some sort of intellectual debate with someone holding a Gangle plush in pajama pants outside of a goddamn AMC? No, of course not. That's fucking stupid. It's cringe. The way you're imagining this scenario of seethe happening is embarrassing for everyone involved at a conceptual leve. I called you performative and spineless because this isn't a noteworthy battle of morals or ethics. You're not a faggot at Stonewall or one of the cops beating one of them back into the closet. You're acting a fucking basedboy creating fictional situations where you've kind of made random faggots at a movie theater miffed. Hate trannies all you want, but please, for your sake, don't act like a Redditor about it, Goddamn. Do something ACTUALLY useful for your cause. This is behavior a BPD lesbian would post about on Twitter in a story she made up where everyone clapped for her at the end.
>>153847562cmon at least she was literally willing to die just to see him again (she had zero plan other than just hug harder KEK)
>>153847313save the bunny, at the cost that all their memories he had on the circus are gone, like he got reset back to the moment he put the headset on, then the last scenes are about the others telling everything about him, who was jax, hes absolutely terrified of what his past self did and promises to never be like that again, and then in the epilogue/credits play the same way but with him ofc real-live bus scene gets replaced with one where we dont see shit and pomni asks about how he wants to be called now.>we hear a slightly feminine voice >"well u can call me Le.."THE END
Now that the show is over, what do we genuinely think of it? For me it's:S Tier: EP8, EP6A Tier: EP1B Tier: EP5, EP7C Tier: EP3, EP9D Tier: EP2, EP4Total Score: 5,333
In theory even if the cast get access to the internet or even someone attaches an external hard drive, they still can't really leave the computer right? Since file transfer even on the level of click and drag works the same as Star Trek teleportation in terms of just making a copy?
>words words wall of text words It won’t save an ending that bad now.
>>153847313make an extra episode>>153847367yeah
Ep 7 is still my least favorite
>>153847620https://desuarchive.org/co/thread/153777984/#q153783344>>153847658yes
>>153847545>>153847548>>153847565>>153847584>>153847634
meow
>>153847669Not in Ralph the Wrecker 2!
>>153847545>>153847548>>153847565>>153847584>>153847634holy fuck this is autistic
>>153847700Someone that knows to draw anime style please make a jax/kinger/caine version of this image, i think we are going to need it for the next days
>https://youtu.be/1rXfN825Qjk?si=ORf5849xu91Kbt3K&t=787 Rate italian caine
>>153847634Look nona, I made a whole ass post on your side ITT but I'm also gonna critique you before going to bad. Yeah it's performative cause it's fucking trolling. Yor response is the response expected as a consequence of trolling. When you're trolling you want someone else to feel like shit and be mad or get depressed or whatever.Also, he might achieve something if someone there is sensitive enough to attack him (bad for optics I guess, in my thirdie slavic country you're actually a cuck if you don't respond to an insult but in America people think it's chimping out and a bad look instead from what I've seen) or if there's someone sensitive enough to ACK (for someone who doesn't like trannies less of them is better and more lulz).
>>153847313Have a stinger at the end to fuck with fans, either someone new showing up or just an external shot of someone standing in front of the computer
>>153847543And the screentime dedicated to Jax feels completely pointless considering his character still goes fucking nowhere like everyone else
>>153847585nevermind, subbed is an option! yesssssssss
Alright plan BJust start spamming your favorites and drown out these retards
does anyone else in this thread wanna fuck ragathas butt
>>153847444>>153847389She ALSO swears if nobody is around. Otherwise she just SCREAMS as she whips the knife into the nearest wall full force
Imagine seeing this and decide to kill her.
>>153847313Replace jax abstraction with gooseworx suicide
>>153847750she has no ragaass no ragatits no ragatoes
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>>153847609Let him bully you more, Gangle.
>>153847741Spending the last episode for Jax and then achieving nothing makes the whole show looks aimless.
>>153847758that wont stop me anon ill still fuck all 3
>>153847750I would
woof woof! :D
Season 2
>>153847313im like sacrificial ends, so make it sacrificial >jax realizes pomni basically trapped herself in his abstracting mind>objective now is to find a way to free her>after being taught by pomni on how to conjure jax realizes he can use it to delete his mindfiles in order to free pomni>what follows is pomni trying to stop jax from doing this as she chases him across various different memories inside his mindscape >jax finally finds a memory where he saw a computer >but pomni caught up to him>a struggle happens between the two but jax manages to conjure his mindfiles and delete them>an explosion happens as they are ejected from his abstraction>pomni got up and thought jax somehow survived but when she goes to hug him>jax's avatar starts glitching >his entire body doesn't have collision anymore>and so pomni can't touch him, this happens as he slowly fades away>last scene of him is apologizing to every single member of the cast>does one last hug with pomni where she has trouble adjusting cause she can't feel him>jax is gone gone, no abstraction, no nothing, completely erased data>importantly, no dogjax.thoughts? did i write fire? am i modenday shakespeare?
I'm gonna have sex with the Swatch ripoff.
i wrote a greentext like 10 threads ago that was just ragatha x anon porn im tempted to do more or just write a fic
>>153847313More Ragatha
>>153847860That would be way better than the current garbage we are having to pass through so please do it but dont forget to name it before the text so we dont just ignore it like every single other wall of text here
>>153847846You're not a Shakespear but still better than Goose.
>>153847846i def would have went to the theater with and ending like that.
how would (You) suck my dick, anon?
>>153847817He didn't deserve his fate He didn't not deserve his fate
>>153847902With my fang in your peehole and a free circumcision.
I hope Goose will never return.
>>153847903Rapigoo...
>>153847846there truly are 2 types of jaxfags (btw yes, yes you are shakespeare anon)
>>153847953POMNI RUN!!!
>>153847313Caine stays dead and Jax escapes happily leaving every one else.
>Okay Jax, go back to your sissy punishment cage
any other anons going to the premiere despite seeing the leaks? I can't be the only one, right?
>>153847817Considering he changed his size, on some level he probably is just doing this to avoid talking to anyone.
>>153847980They took his balls away...
>mom calls him a faggot and pushes her>Leaves before knowing if he kill her or not >Gets trapped in the circus >Pressed the red button just so he wouldn't have to find out if he committed manslaughter or momslaughter if you will heh>Get trapped in a digital hell but a cute frog with severe anterior pelvic tilt makes it her life mission to make you happy>Jax responds by no way fag'ing her so hard she fucking kill herself >Two important people to jax respond by giving their suppor and Jax responds by pushing them away and makes another one kill himself >Have a crush on some autistic depressive weeb>Traumatizes her so badly she doesn't even cry iax dead until much later>Gets cucked by some they/them freak>Decide to take his anger out on a doll that never did anything wrong to him and might be the only person left that cares about him>Some goofy midget appears >Don't really do anything to her but she already avoids him and is uncomfortable around him >Have a couple of conversations with her and she is more relaxed around him >They team up in a game and have a great time but for literally no reason he spergs out at her >Backfires and she realizes he is faking it>Continues to push her away but she doesn't care>Literally the apocalypse happens and the world is dead>Dorks are bonding over new found conjuring powers>Try to talk to midget but chicken out>Despite that she spent the last few days looking after him she ignores that and finally abstracts>Turns out that he sees midget clown as a pick me girl, thinks he can seduce the weeb during the freak funeral >Dies acknowledging everything is his faul>Becomes a dog and they keep him around in a leash>Everyone's lives become so much better as soon as he diesWas it worth it making jax the mc for this?
>>153847988Lots of people are still going if we go by previous threads
I weep for this sad boy >>149895874
When are we getting a playset of the circus complete with Jax's cuck tent?
gangle waking up ragatha at 3 am to tell her the jax dog threw up on the floor and that she has to go clean it up
>>153847752She'd at least say a quiet swear
my main critique of the show is glitch obviously optimized every episode from hell and back to sell merch instead of answering the questions set up since they wouldn't give it's budget back on paper. the first episode came out in 2023, they had plenty of time to add onto/rework the plot, which you can feel with episode 7 starting out with a therapy session after gooseworks dealt with the fandom for so long. personally i'm headcanoning they gave 9 episodes right at the start and optimized it, and realized the show made bank but didn't want to redo the contract with gooseworse for more content without paying her much more than at the start due to the suprise success of the series. along with many episodes having ads blocked with being forced on youtube kids with more episodes having the chance to lose their budget. it's also i feel why every glitch show has had some sort of "edginess" since youtube started forcing it so youtube kids won't fuck their ad revenue.
>>153847988If anything the leaks make me want to go more because I broadly agree with what happens
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>>153847988I was this close to actually buying some tickets but the leak saved me.
My love for Ragatha is past infinity
Let's be real, if jax survived he would have torture pomni until she abstracted.
>>153848005Of course. You have to get your dog fixed after all. Bob Barker said so.
>>153848026cute fluffy girl
>>153847313>keep first 10 minutes as is.>Circus in more dire shape, abstractions run amok. More importance given to ability to create shit to fix circus/lock up abstractions.>Kinger perma-sane since Caine no longer fucking with brain file>Shenanigans ensue, gang gets circus under control>Kinger memory restored, loredrops nature of circus project, that the circus dwellers are copies of real people.>wailing_angst.mp3>Pomni realizes Jax is missing>Finds him abstracting in his room.>Jax torture porn proceeds in streamlined fashion. Mostly just focus on Ribbit flashbacks). Still dies.>Pomni speech on importance of finding your own meaning in things. Gang rallies and cheers up. Bittersweet>Credits roll showing real life pics/etc.>Stinger of Kinger fucking around on computer finding a backup of pre-corrupted Caine AI.There you go, same basic plot beats in a (imo) better order. No magic Caine out of no where.
>>153848013Michael is such a goofy mf.And the answer to your post is no, or not to me, at least.>>153848057Will you remember her in 10 years?What about 3 years?I can't remember who I waifu'd 10 years ago.
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>>153848073No shit, that's why the rest of the gang needed to pull her out
>>153848112my two favorite tadc girls. loolilalu especially is such a baddy
>>153848138Thanks anon i was gonna ask for his name
>>153848013It's perfect. Sometimes you can't redeem everyone especially one who is too much of a coward to change.
>>153848112You disgust me. One waifu. One laifu.
>>153847971>Evil Gummi: Pomni... I'm going to...>Pomni: Mmm... Ohhhh... Rape me?>Evil Gummi: Bite you...>Pomni: ...Oh, sure, bite me, haha.>Evil Gummi: "Okay, I want to leave."
>>153848073>literally I can fix youJax was right about Pomni being a pick me girl.
>>153848073So he's half right
>>153848173Jax was only right in his delusions.
>>153848112>>153848152Very pretty women.
>>153848193Jax is right all the time. That's why they had to nerf him by making him a dog.
>>153848212>sexual deviant>rightokay goose
>>153848173thats mindpomni not actual pomniits what jax would think pomni would say after ragatha abstracts (which is kinda fucked jax's arguably longest friend dies and new girl comes up and say i can fix you KEK)
>>153848140That's not what I meant anon, i meant if Jax didn't abstract at all he would physically and emotionally torture pomni with his new found admin powers.Also i seen some people think she was going to die when Jax mind was collapsing but realistically nothing would have happen because pomni was in direct physical contact with jaxstracted but she hardly glitched unlike ragatha in the first ep that got really fucked up, pomni had the equivalent of some glitches and even though they say "good thing we got here in time" they had no way of knowing what pomni was seeing, they only saw pomni hugging jax abstracted, nothing in the series indicates that characters can abstract due direct contact so no, not shit, even if the gang would shown up later pomni would be fine.
>>153848153No problem, his full name is Vermilious btw, most just call him Verm tho (or worm if the person is feeling particularly mean)
This stupid twink could have been saved if a real man had come to the circus and easily tamed this fucking crossdressing faggot
>>153848223Sexual deviant when? He just has strong rizz.
the freaks sure are being put in their place
>>153848252kaufmo was his bro, they only fell out after ribbit abstracted and kaufmo kept rambling about an exit if kaufmo couldn't talk him out then i highly doubt it
>>153848261>strong rizz.>Got cucked by a literal trannyLol lmao
>ragathas clearly nervous about whatever she has to say to you>when you walk into her bedroom shes sitting on the edge of the bed with a worried expression on her face, and for a second you fear the worst before she smiles at you shyly>”its our anniversary anon…”>shes acting like you didnt get woken up by the smell of pancakes in the morning and gotten home from a fancy restaurant in the evening>”dont give me that look! i want today to be special. and it has been, but…”>she chuckles a little despite herself>”i wanna try something new tonight, is what i mean to say.”>she sits you down on the bed and stands up, giving you a shy smile while starting to unbutton the back of her dress>”i know you like my ass a lot, anon, so i thought itd be fun to, well, yknow.”>you dont know>”i want to try anal tonight, anon.”>the dress falls to the floor and she turns around, bending over and showing the green plug visible in her asshole though the panties shes wearing> ”this is a one time thing, okay? probably, at least. ive never done this before but ive been practicing so you dont have to be gentle”>shes nervous but eager and youre rock hardand then i ran out of motivation to write so thats all you get for now
>>153848279Kaufmo was a cuck who didn't have the leadership to stop Jax
>>153848261in his mindscape, maybe.
>>153847884i blacked out for like 10 minute and wrote another one thank you for the encouragement anon
>>153848265Ohhh, I hope "that" doesn't happen in the theater bathrooms
>>153847313I’d make it 26 episodes with full character arcs that tie into each other in a satisfying way by end of the season, with a full set up for a season 2.
>>153848292this is just a copy/pasta
I swear to god in heaven I'm going to give Pomni the all the love she deserves.
Why was pomni able to enter jax mind at all lmao, what a bullshit writting, its not like she even tried to conjure some mind connection 9r something, she just hugs him and enters his mind.
>>153848318Np
>>153847313It's impossible to fix, the show shouldn't have shifted its focus to Jax to begin with
>>153848337That's cool, Ragatha. You earned it, after all.
>>153848287The show is made by a tranny who hate his male self-insert of course the writing will bruteforce the tranny cucking him
>>153848339Pommi and Jax have a "connection," but that faggot Jax tried to push her away.
hello, is it true Pomni spends less time grieving Jax than she did the gummy gator
>>153848358That tranny is the one who made the character you are also running defense for here you mental midget.
>>153848334i just spend 10 of gods own minutes typing out a copypasta word by word? fml
>>153848300>Kaufmo was a cuckDid you not see the leaks? The final plot twist is Jax was the biggest cuck the whole time. Ribbit is a mormon that tells Jax she goes to a church adventure every Sunday, but she really goes to Kaufmo. She's still on her knees and Jax doesn't know.
>>153848073If Jax hadn't abstracted he would have dedicated himself to tormenting everyone until he was the last one standing. He's a destructive asshole.
>>153848378no
>>153848380I subtly acknowledge that fact by stating he hates his own character, reading comprehension much?
Board tourist here. Are OCs >>153848138 common in /co/? I don't know where else to ask.
>>153848292>"i know you like my ass a lot, anon-"i ALWAYS say that, probably why shes even mentioning
Pomni was supposed to strip naked and spread her ass in the final episode
Jax did nothing wrong and could have banged all the girls if he wasn't a based lone wolf sigma. He's got that dog in him.
>>153848358>If I don't make the gender "transition," I'm going to commit suicide and get cuckedmaybe goose
>>153848407Not really? But we do it because its fun and the circus allows alot of possibilities for brand new ideas for characters, better than to keep discussing the plot for the 5032959th time>tourist hereWhere do ya come from? Did you watch the show?
actually the poni entering jax's mind was very much bullshit pulled out of nowhere and couldve easily been fixed by just having kinger say in episode 3 that "I touched her and for just a few minutes it felt like I could speak to her again..." or some bullshit that alludes to mind connecting with newly abstracted playersalso make it so pomni starts glitching a little the more time she spends inside the mindscape like she has a timer and if she doesnt find jax she might get really screwed up by the glitching
>>153848384>and then i ran out of motivation to write so thats all you get for nowthis is why i did the dumbdidn't realize you were intentionally reposting. thought you were stealing your own credit and didn't realize until i looked around lmao
theyre FAT
>>153848434Generals are generally rarer in /co/ because mods dont like it very much, maybe in the murder drones/helluva generals they have something close to that but idrk
>>153847389if raggy is there, i say nothingif raggy isn't there, i yell out every curse word in the books
>>153848252this one?
>>153848407Depends kind of. I think /hsg/ has a lot of them. It's not really common in general I think.
>>153848423For Jax.
>>153847313>caine stays dead>the circus continues to deteriorate while the cast try desperately to survive while dodging abstractions and the terrain despawning. >they barricade themselves in a relatively safe part of the circus to do the talk therapy thing and practice conjuring while kinger continues to go through the files to possibly find a way to fix the circus.>he notices pomni doesnt have mind files like the rest of the cast. He digs a little deeper and discovers shes actually the remnants of the abel AI that caine didnt destroy.>he takes her aside to explain this to her and a possibility to save everyone from the circus. Everyone but her...she would stay in the digital realm but would have control over the circus as its new ringleader.>she nearly abstracts from the revelation but jax manages to calm her down. He volunteers to stay with her after confessing his feelings.>pomni agrees to go through with it to save everyone even jax against his will.>cut to a cryogenics lab with everyone awakening in their human bodies.>cut to the future where everyone has headsets and go visit pomni in her circus.> shes rebuilt the place nicer than it was before. > She was able to unabstract many of the circus' previous occupants but if you die in the game you die in real life.> The unabstracted cant go back to the real world as their bodies are dead. >Many reabstract. Some come to terms with it, including kingers wife and ribbit. Pomni grants them admin powers.> she keeps a few other AIs around as company (gummigoo is her favorite of course) and sort of treats the circus like a resort for troubled AIs where she can help rehabilitate them and help them cope with being an AI and not "real" but what does real even mean?>she is always happy to see her old friends and makes time in her busy schedule to hang out and do adventures for old times sake.I dont know if its any good but thats kind of where i thought the story was going before the leaks came out.
>has a support group (pomni, ribbit, kaufmo, even ragatha at one point)>pushes everyone away over a stupid secret >"im such a bad person"Yes, yes you are. Jax is a pathetic character who created his own demise.
oh btw goose is here, or sum twitter tourist.
>>153848450i only recognize alex rochon
>>153848411i also always say this! we seem to be kindred spirits of some sort
In generals with alot of schizos people will start melting down if you mention doing anything art related that isnt porn requests, very strange behavior
>>153848434>>153848473I used to be a /vg/ fag, but now I only occasionally browse that and /v/.I can't say I'm a super fan of the show or anything, but a friend of mine got me into watching all eight episodes. Call me boring, but I like Ragatha.
>>153848484>cut to a cryogenics lab with everyone awakening in their human bodiesthis was never on the table, anon.
>>153848502we never had that happen here
>>153848492>See this, this is what happens when you don't validate my decision to self-mutilate
>>153848513wow really no way me too
>>153848484Optional: jax kills himself irl after getting kicked out of the circus.
>>153848407Yes. Extremely. Some of them wind up popular enough to get fan spinoffs.
>>153848500That would be because you are actually my clone anon, we have been meaning to tell you this for a long time>>153848513>/v/ How do you handle that board? Its basically unusable nowadaysWell i hope you still enjoyed yourself anyway>i like ragathaAlot of people here like ragatha lmfao>>153848529Thankfully, there was one guy that got really pissed off at one cat OC here and started doing AI edits of it but he got bored and left
>>153848502Schizos? Acting irrationally? Surely you're joking!
>>153847387I need to hear people start voicing their OCs
>>153848521It made more sense than their bodies are just laying comatose wherever they dropped. Or maybe it doesnt. I dunno /:
>>153848484>funnybunny ending where Jax still sits in the cuck tent because Pomni gets goo from GummigooKek
not sure what everyone expected from a transfag with an inflation kink
>>153848469fish guy, my beloved loser
>>153848445With Caine gone and the circus collapsing, there's literally no reason Goose couldn't have just done a hard turn into some collective unconscious bullshit where the code is progressively unravelling as an excuse for everyone to be exploring each other's memories/perceptions a la EvaIt's like she was just scared to do a total ripoff, so settled for stripping away all the sense, meaning, and non-Jax characters
>>153848589>fishguy is goose
>>153848556Its not really just schizos, i know some generals that are very aggressive to drawfags in generalAs a example, i used to go into /sthg/ and draw for them for sometike but i stopped because 1. The discussion there is genuinely draining and abysmally bad2. People will get mad at you for anything if you are a drawfag they can recognize, and anything OC related will have people jumping on your throat>>153848566We had a voocaroo thread one month ago but we never got around to actually voice the characters
>>153848583and thats a problem because..?
>>153848450Who are the two Orbsmen on the right?
The end of this shit is hitting me harder than crack hit the CIA's defecitI need a new hyperobsession STAT
>>153847313>with Caine gone, Bubble seizes power>he turns everything into an Oney Plays character.ai video>big adventure to pull Caine out of the recycle bin so he can put Bubble back in check and the gang can stop getting dismembered and injected with serums that retroactively turn out to be placebos and Jax stops getting his pingas blown off with a Red 9 pistol>accessing the recycle bin requires going into the cellar>reunions with everyone's nonverbal brain damaged retard loved ones>Jax is in tears apologizing to Ribbit and Kaufmo>fooni joke: Pomni has no idea how they're able to tell the identical eyeball shadow turd monsters apart, causing all the nonverbal brain damaged retards to glare judgmentally at her like she said Asians arr rook arike>back up top, Bubble notices his usual victims missing, shrugs, pulls up a list of NPCs in the recycle bin he can rez for reuse (reviving someone just to torture them is so evil! *Irish laughter*)>B plot of Gummigoo and Abel putting together their own anti-Bubble plan between sessions of getting force fed evil stews and hearing about Bubble's video game speedruns>in the recycle bin, reconstructing Caine will require someone giving their data to restabilize Caine with a more human perspective>too much>instant abstraction-too much>Jax volunteers>the rest of the gang, with Caine Blanco, go back to the circus>finale: gang (minus asshole bunny, plus gatorbot and actorbot) supporting Caine Blanco (forma de kaiju) against Bubble (forma de Yog-Sothoth Azur)>Pomni delivers her iconic catchphrase as she finishes the fight, reminiscent of that one joke fancomic ("Well... it's POSSIBLE!" "HER CATCHPHRAAAAAaaaaaaa[...]")>Happy End>epilogue: social media binge>stinger: a new person entering C&A's offices and putting on the headsetProbably cliche af, but it's something that warrants showing in theaters
>>153848547I think it's gay as fuck, but I like roleplay. I have absolutely zero ground to make fun of other people's headcanons. >>153848539If I knew the show better, I'd do what I did for /tg/ and write some greentext of Ragatha trying to release some tension to keep up her kind persona. Gotta find some way to stop yourself from abstracting.>>153848548Never post. Never post ever, just look at the funny replies and try not to get baited. It's pretty easy once you remember that everyone there is just trying to farm (You)s instead of actually discuss things.I've been peeking into the threads for the past few days. I feel like the movie leak's really boosted her numbers, but it's also made ragathugs pariahs in some respects.
>>153848610one is evil orbsman
>>153848484>she keeps a few other AIs around as company (gummigoo is her favorite of course) and sort of treats the circus like a resort for troubled AIs where she can help rehabilitate them and help them cope with being an AI and not "real" but what does real even mean?that's actually something I wanted to see. after what happened to gummigoo I think pomni would have a little place to bring the NPCs to and talk about what means to find your own person and how the world isn't "real" but it doesn't mean they can't be "real"... it's kinda corny but also kind of cute and it feels like something she would do because she doesn't want anybody to feel like they're nothing.
English version leaked yet?
>>153848601>spoilerThat place is so awful. I don't know how that general hasn't been banned yet.
>>153848573>pilot ends with showing us the computer station>the computer is running, but no one is there and the headset has been placed back on the deskthe 'twist' was always in plain sight
>>153848566i am NOT voicing oska but i always imagined her with a Tara Strong/Grey DeLisle voice
>Don't remind me of my gender "change" or I'll have a psychotic break and throw a tantrum, did you hear me, ribbit? I'm not a lunatic, okay?
>>153848339They are all AI hybrid homunculi in the end. There could have done a body horror thing where Pomni conjures an interface using her own avatar if they weren't cowards.
>>153848638it will leak 4th of june
>>153847550I think people are looking too much into this. goose self inserted a lot into jax but he was not her exact stand in, jax is still his own character and he's supposed to be a tragic one at that.
remember how hype the episode 7 trailer was?>I think I found a way to leave
>>153848591that's me!
>>153848627the intent is there anon and i appreciate it
>ending sequence has them adding several Island worlds to the main circus island>We didn't even get to explore the theme park next to the circus.Some world building would have been nice.
i remember the vocaroo some guy sang the gummigoo song theme and there was this one anon that made a really good caine impression
>>153848641Me and you buddy
>>153848679It kinda looks like they are kissing eachother in a weird way
>>153848706>fishguy what are you doing?!!
>>153848265I'm gonna the Pomni cosplay crossdresser.>>153848684Steven Universe syndrome.fascinating setting discarded for interpersonal drama.
the amazing testicle pisscum
Im going to sleep, you fucks better not split threads again like the last 3 days.
>>153848566I couldn't voice Starry if I tried but when we were doing voice claims I said I pictured her kind of sounding like Sawyer from Cats Don't Dance
i dont know how self indulgent i wanna get cuz i am writing with an audience (if i even write more) but ive had more fun doing the stupid greentext porn than anything else this week so i guess this is my gimmick now if anyone cares
>>153848737>male pomnihot
>copies>not actual mind transferringlame
has it really been this long without a response from GLITCH?
>>153848737I dont know if the amazing restroom orgy is still gonna happen after the leaks...I'm hearing alot about refunds an we might be low on Jaxes now...
>>153848601Oh yeah /vg/ threads are fucking schizo hives. /pg/ was/is similarly awful.
>>153848803You mean like SOMA vs Tron?
The English version leak yet?Anyone got a link if yes?
>>153848805I still can't get over this scene. There had to have been a better way to portray Jax's outlook on the Circus being a cartoon opposed to the Road Runner comparison we got.
>>153848805I know they had to make Jax goofy in this scene, but I think the bent ears really detract from it, his default design is so much more sleek and classic, they should have just used that with more squash/stretch
So the only leak is brazillian? No leaked version with english voices?
>>153848824They've probably got the english version on complete lockdown my nigga
>>153848610Dave Capdevielle and Ashley Nichols
>>153848824I don't think it's gonna, that's a completely different file with a completely different company that's probably on much tighter lockdown, it's not the same as just generating subs for the Brazil version
>>153848824i wouldnt count on it. the reason it got leaked in the first place was because they expanded to too many reigions. Do you really want the english dub that soon?
>>153848836nope. unless you want to hear monkey noises for an hour, just chill out for another week.
>>153848766If its anything i much prefer reading porn about a specific character than the other guys posting dramaslop, also although im not really THAT interested on ragatha anal you write well lmfao>>153848809/sthg/ is specifically awful because it congregates alot of mentally ill thread personalities that have been brewing on the internet for the past 20 years, too many people on there too>>153848836Only brazilian for now
>>153848848Michael got cucked by THAT?
glitch will be closing their stores in brazil
>>153848836Just like the only nuke on Nagasaki came from America, the only TADC leak came from Brazil. And to serve this metaphor, no, there is no Hiroshima.
>>153848852kek
>>153847313It isn’t broken
>>153848852Balls, I've already been spoiled on some things but I want to watch it with my friends and they have to dodge spoilers like motherfuckers
>>153848883THEN WHY DID IT LEFT ME BROKEN?!???
>>153847389Crank would probably swear, stick it in his mouth, then go get a bandaid. Just, order of operations.
>>153848923>this would be a nice kinger scene>it's jax/pomni shipshitStory of this whole fandom
>>153848923oooh good shit
>>153848450Why does Michael look like mr beast here
>>153847871This. A proper Ragatha arc would've made all the difference. The spotlight being solely on Jax was a mistake. We needed a stronger positive contrast.
>>153848829 >>153848830i thought it worked perfectly fine.
J-ACKxAnother tranny down
>>153848866/sthg/ also drags in lolcows from the greater Sonic fandom. Richmunk, the Sally diaper guy, used to post there. It's probably creating the next Sonic lolcow right now.
You know what it's actually kind of good that Jax is dead, because knowing what we know about him now, he'd abstract 1000 times over if he knew all the faggy merch there was of him
>>153848954They chadwashed my chopped ahh chud it's over
>>153848921...I don't think you're broken.
>>153848905there's nothing in it that most of the fanbase (apart from those in complete denial) didn't figure out three or four episodes ago. if you get spoiled you get spoiled, but it'll still be worth watching in its entirety and sans monkey noises.
>>153848948Theres a little mister beast inside all of us>>153848954Real jax unironically looks like this minus the abs
>>153847313>spend more time on the decaying circus >less time inside Jax's mind, the Ribbit and Kaufmo flashbacks can stay>change Isn't She Lovely for some actually emotional song>instead of keeping Jax as a pet and the abstracted as zoo animals, abstractions can now be deleted so they don't suffer anymore >Caine stays dead, there's no internet connection, the humans regain their memories and admin powers on their own>they know their real names but decide to keep their circus names>at the end, instead of seeing their real selves, we see an old man looking at the computer, it's implied he's Kinger who is still keeping the lights on even if C&A doesn't exist anymore (you can explain this if you want but we NEVER see his face or any other human face)
>>153847313Write scenes for the entire half of the other cast to contribute, instead of writing narcissistic Jax tranny-metaphor shit
>>153848981and broad shoulders and he got a more squished face
>>153848976Maybe you are right...
>>153848988i like keeping the abstractions alive because it at least leaves the remote possibility on the table that someday maybe they figure out a way to help them. and in the meantime they're at least not suffering anymore.
>>153848566Sure, remind me later tho i'm watching a movie with friends rn
>>153848954Prime build for murdering your mom
>>153849004Beauty can be found in everything because in good moments things are good, and in bad moments things will grow.
>>153848923Bretty good
>>153848620>Caine BlancoMy sides
>>153848851I dont really care that much, i just dont want to go to theaters to see it
>>153847313>Now that Caine is gone and the circus is falling apart, everyone is trying to find somewhere safe to stay>Kinger blurts out something about how Caine's adventures were always stable, isolated simulations and that they shouldn't be affected by the glitches in the circus>They conjure up some steps and ladders and such to get to Caine's office, remembering all the adventure orbs they saw in there last time.>While they decide as a group which one would be best to hide in potentially indefinitely, they reminisce about past adventures with the others before they abstracted>It's a bit of a therapy session, but it's brief before they start to realize that they are remembering things way more clearly.>We get to see more flashbacks of them both having fun together and also going through various tragedies.>One of them makes an off-hand remark about some questions they never got to ask those people. Like where they were from or how they found the headset that put them in the circus.>They reason that now that Caine's safeties are off, that includes the blocks on their memories and behaviors.>They start to remember their names and start piecing together when each of them entered the circus. Pomni being the most recent who entered puts it into perspective that most of them have been in the Circus for years and she didn't see any bodies or any other headsets when she was urbex'ing the old C&A building.>If they aren't people plugged into a simulation, then they have to be copies. Brain scans of real people.>Jax starts to freak out first and everyone is sure he's about to abstract, but then he just... doesn't.1/3
Gummygooner lol
i am...... forgotten....
>>153847387BABE WAKE UP NEW CIRCUSSONA OC SLOP DIRECTLY FROM THE OVEN!https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5EjVelbDYT0
>>153849053>Abstraction may have been Caine's way of getting rid of people who were too broken to be fixed. A way to make everyone think that they just have to tough it out and keep playing along instead of getting fixated on escaping or worrying about the real world, since he couldn't just manually edit their personalities and "fix" them that way, because it would make everyone panic and then he'd have to edit them all and what would be the point if he couldn't make adventures that entertained and excited real people and not just NPCs.>while exploring Caine's office some more, they come across a terminal or something that indicates that the Circus needs a new ringmaster before it can be rebooted and also that there are still files for all of the brainscans of every previous person who entered the Circus. They could bring them all back.>They all deliberate who should take the role.>Kinger seems like the obvious choice, but his mind is fried from all the trauma.>Ragatha is too easily pushed around>Jax is an asshole who would be worse than Caine (Zooble's words)>Zooble hates responsibility>Gangle is creative, but doesn't have the nerve to take on such an important job...>Pomni is the only one who has shown genuine care for everyone here as well as treating at least one NPC as a real person.>Before she sits down, Kinger pulls her aside and they have a talk that isn't heard just yet.>Pomni takes Caine's seat and some computer shit happens. She briefly glimpses the entire Digital Circus from Caine's perspective and sheds a little tear.>Everything goes dark and then suddenly they're back in the central area of the Circus. Everyone is there except Kinger.>Pomni appears now dressed in a cuter version of Caine's Ringmaster outfit, with Gumigoo in a tux alongside her as her assistant.2/3
I'll say what everyone else is thinkingI want to be Caine's first time
>>153849059shhhhhhh shut it
