Lets just have a normal thread
Also, currently working on a log based story, what would you guys request me do. The main premise is that a girl goes under a artificial pregnancy, impregnating her with an artificial egg. What would be some good scenarios in a log format
I love the ass/belly expansion combo of hyper preg... just not the idea of it being, well, preg.
>>9899610Oh yea, I should preface by the egg is more a way to say them exiting won’t cause any consequences of having children. The eggs exist just as a tool for getting her knocked up
I have been working on an idea where Mimi and Kari compete for TK. I keep going with the idea that Mimi is mobile, but appears immobile to keep up with appearances.
>>9899617But the pregnancy is the best part
>>9899665Ignoring that a nice big belly is filled with a lot of squirming babies and fetuses which is already a turn off, the entire concept is retarded. These women giving birth to dozens if not hundreds of children. They wouldn't even be able to take care of them all. And even if they were rich enough to be able to afford to and had servants and shit, having that many kids... they'd be like surplus. You'd never love all of them, definitely not equally.
>>9899672I gave my OC Mona college aged daughters to avoid this. She loves her adult daughters just fine and embarrases to them by acting younger than she appears. Also gave her a husband
>>9899682>I gave my OC Mona college aged daughters to avoid thisAvoid what? They missed out on their entire childhoods by being born adults?
>>9899688They have childhoods. Li Li has ten children and juggle them just fine. Mona has 5. Not my fault hyper preg has commitment issues
>>9899691I just don't understand what you meant in the last post then
>>9899693I am not really lore person like other creators. I feel like it's easier to convey the pressure that my characters get from their relatives to pump out grandchildren instead of Lore.
>>9899695What's going on in this pic? She's pestering them for grandchildren but they're already pregnant?
>>9899698That's Li Li's strict mother wants more grandchildren from her daughters. It's more about multiplying and keeping the family going.
thought I'd keep this one alive, from my pixiv, Xenexia
>>9899610Daily activities made complicated by her pregnancy.
>>9899695Look I get you are really dedicated to this character you came up with but she's just not all that interesting visually or personality wise. The concept of Li Li is just an amalgamation of cliches you probably saw in anime with the only twist being you incorporated your fetish into her. You've been posting pictures of Li Li for literal years and yet I couldn't really give you a definite description of who they are apart from their appearance or profession. Visually her design is pretty standard with nothing really making her stand out among other OCs, maybe it's because of the artists you commission but a typical ninja in a leotard with no discerning facial features just doesn't provide much desired flair. She just isn't interesting and none of the characterization you mention ever seems to come through in the image apart from her being stereotypically slutty. Maybe if you posted some stories then we'd be able to get an Idea of who these characters are but until then they leave much to be desired. Don't take this post as an attack, I genuinely want to provide constructive feedback to you on this character so that you can improve her.
>>9900047Li Li having a simple works to her benefit. Time is Money and I cannot waste time giving an artist carpel tunnel syndrome trying to design a needlessly convoluted concept. Li Li is more cost effective by making her a ninja
>>9900091So in other words your characters are cheap?Usually that's not a positive trait when describing characters. Regardless none of that addresses the lack of personality or character appeal that Li Li brings to the table.In short what does Li Li provide that other's do not?
>>9900093She can fight and teach others how to fight mystical brings like a a Hyper Preg Senju Kanon. I am not exactly writing the funny papers. The Superhero and Manga Industry is cheap and easy, Westerns were cheap. Wuxia is still Cheap. It's not wise to waste film on opulent things. Not everyone needs an eccentric personality.
>>9900093The problem is that you are trying to be vicarious in developing Li Li without actually putting effort. Why would I need advice from Coomers who can't get their lore off the ground?
>>9900069Holy shit, you really need to stop huffing your own farts and get over yourself.
This is a very cringe way to react to constructive criticism, yikes
>>9900200>Again, you are one of those boring people who try to get into to industry, but then get rejected because you are a lousy critique.Yeah bud keep thinking that
>>9900211You're talking about Li Li as if she's a person and not a cartoon character. Anyone can make a hyper preg 3/4 front, view character. The problem is that a lot of OCs have no dynamics. Part of the fun of Li Li is that she's customizable and flexible.
>>9900218I wasn't even that anon. I'm just a bystander seeing your response. You can't handle criticism and excuses like "it's just a cartoon" is the same reason there's so much crap entertainment these days.
>>9900231All those shows still had enjoyable characters with interesting and distinct personalities even if they were one note. Which is why people could forgive the cheap presentation. That's the thing you're not grasping you are giving us cheaply designed characters with cheaply designed personalities which is why we don'tcare about them. At least with other Hyper Preg artists and writers they give us interesting designs or distinct personalities, with you we get neither.
>>9900240You're just chasing clout and projecting something that's there. What's a matter anon, are you suffer from unaware self importance? Maybe if you stop dick riding and humbragging other artists, they would find time to improve.
>>9900240The hard truth is that there's no such thing as talent. Just like how Athletes train to be the top of their field, Creators have to train to be the best. Part of your problem is that you are a groupies hanging with them for clout, but don't contribute. Your relationship with artists is shallow and superficial.
>>9900256So you're a no talent Idea guy who's ideas are so bad that he needs to commission other people to draw it for you? That doesn't help your case, if anything it proves how bad your ideas and characters are.At least if you were a writefag you'd have something to stand on but you're just some loser paying his way to clout and still failing.
goddammit I knew this wasn't gonna be at the top for a good reason. Kisame, shut the fuck up. You're an asshole. Everyone fighting with him, shut the fuck up, you're assholes too. Y'all ruining the threads every fucking time.
>>9900225>>9900231>>9900256>three replies to my single postYikes>Boomer>Steven UniverseHoly shit your ramblings are completely nonsensical. And no, actually, I like SpongeBob. At least the pre-movie seasons anyway. I think it's one of the best animated shows of all time.>>9900261I don't really hang out here, I didn't know this fag was a regular. I'm sorry.
>>9900284>charactersThat implies they have.... character
Do not engage with Kisame. Simply report and hide his posts. Keep the preg content coming.
>>9900304Who is the dude that is obsessed with hyper preg of this one girl? Also nice breast size.
>>9900335Please don't engage with Kisame.
Op here, can we just have a thread without persistent arguingI just wanna post preg women
>>9900069>I'm a fashion designer>I'm a psychologist>I'm the king of the IRS>I'm happy with my blackmailing behavior>I have an associates degree>I'm the glue that holds the hyperpreg community together>I have the only good OC on earthI've made a decision. From this day forward, I'm going to post a piece of art private art from an artist that has threatened to stop making art every time Kisame says something stupid or narcissistic. If an artist leaves, it's on him.Pic unrelated, I'm not starting yet.
>>9900608>>9900613>>9900614>>9900617>>9900619>>9900622>>99006307 posts? You must really be raging this time, pussyboy. Didn't bother to read, you're not worth it, just starting here.SaburoX said he stopped doing hyperpreg art as much because it was always getting leaked right away. Thanks to Kisame here, were keeping that trend going.
>>9900694This behaviour is why I always leak his shitty Chounyuu pics as soon as possible, fuck SaburoX
Clean house, at least for a little while.
>>9900273>>9900299Let's laugh at these Anons who want to watch Cartoons
>>9900936Let's laugh at Zdemian still lusting after Goth Girls, like a Reagan Era Boomer
>>9900582If you do, can you leak any of maternalreads recent works? Kemono is not giving anything past March
>>9901318Its not a goth girl, its a parody of a generic companion character from Dr Who
>>9901406I honestly think the Visitors is the best one, but it goes nowhere. It's too timid
>>9901469to this day this film astounds me with its pure effects
>>9901318Remember when Zdemian drew a nazi?
>>9901543>At least Life with Kurami and Rosebuds is at least funnyThey're cute comics for sure. Based tastes, anon. Here's a hyperpreg Ana I found.
>>9901762That definitely looks more like ilikapie's style trying to emulate Z's sameface.Also, nice attempted Mandela Effect, there, pie.
>>9901762Those fingers are way too long to be Zdemian. That's an ilikapie posing as such.
Oh, yees, the stories link thing.Here:https://www.dropbox.com/sh/2g9o8ux0712huys/AABtskPr6VrsF8rGzsfiE4iha?dl=0)
>>9902115Not sure if you're the guy in charge of maintaining this but I wrote another story, I'm the writer of the Tabitha and Princess Peach ones. Also maybe I'm just not seeing it but I can't find Part 2 of the Tabitha story in the dropbox, I can repost it if you need it.https://ghostbin.com/paste/L1vo9
>>9901774Is the full series uploaded somewhere that isn't paywalled?
>>9902115This is a huge stretch, but does anyone have the two stories "Technical Problems" and "Technical Support" written by Darien Shields like, a decade ago? Wayback archive can access the first one, but the second one is kill.
>>9902430I have them, though I think the art paths are fucked in my copy. I'll check when I'm back at my PC.
>>9902466>>9902430Turns out, I only have Technical Support. Sorry.
>>9902430I have both in PDF format, photos included!Here you go!https://mega.nz/folder/yn5SgAAT#qVwEEpxNnt0if20O7yYBWQ
>>9899594I like how the drawings are in two different styles, as if drawn by two different people, but the face is still the same.
>>9900719Source? Google and Saucenao gave nothing.
>>9903052Saburox patreon piece, probably nicked from kemono.party.
>>9902210>>9902430Sorry, Im just a random guy that copied the link from previous thread before it disappears. Just trying to help all I can... By the way I'm interested and hope to see those stories soon
I wish Maternal Reads still actually, y'know, wrote stuff. The stories he's got on his DA are great.
>>9903284>Name is MaternalReads>Makes pictures>A picture is worth a thousand words>...?Science?
>>9902511I mean, that'll do, if you're willing to share it
>>9902870anyone got this uncensored?
>>9903885>>9903886Never thought I'd see preg content from Carmessi.
>>9901762Looks more like that dude from DA who drew mpreg Pinocchio pics and loaded it with dumbass politics like that's something anyone wants to see.
>>9900306I want more like this. Pregnancy where the girl is being examined by a doctor is so cute and hot
>>9901762God, you're pathetic
>>9902227>>9902115The whole series is in the community dropbox. I just exported the images with Acrobat.
>>9904572Don't suppose there's any movement on the "Extra Credits" story mentioned in part 3.
>>9904572You got a link to it?
>>9904740Oh sorry I missed the other post my bad
JADF doing some genuine hyperpreg, how about that?
>>9905074>movement in my ovariesSomething about this seems fishy Robin
>>9905074most of the stuff I've saved from JADF looks like hyperpreg, but they're really just pregnant with a horse foal
>>9906528You ever just knock up the ovaries directly
>>9908746I mean, I’m willing to do some writing requests possibly if that spices things up. Currently working on a story about a girl going through a whole college year getting hyper pregnant, with each part being a month. If anyone has ideas, I’ll be glad to try them.
>>9908750have her be in a sorority, during greek week make sure her sorority has a major recruitment drive, they do things like a dunk contest or an eating contest or how many people can you stuff into a phone booth, maybe a stupid skit, etc. Also, have her get stolen by a fraternity as a prank, like a revenge of the nerds type of prank, or animal house.
>>9908750Shopping trip where she discovers she's too big for the largest maternity clothes.