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can I post my comic on here?
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>>562036
>"can I post my comic on here?"
>gets no answer

>posts it anyway
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>>562036
>>562037
>>562038
>>562039
>>562040
>pastel colors
>calarts face shape
>ice cream tits
>egg eyes
yikes
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>>562049
also all those symbols in their speech bubbles are extremely obnoxious
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>>562051
it's like they're trying to do emojis in real life. are you this fucking bad at drawing nonverbal communication that you have to resort to drawing emojis in your text
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Not my cup of tea, but it has an interesting uniqueness. Some people might like it.
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I like it.
I detest pink but this is cute and fun. I love the doodles in the bubbles, there's a lot of potential for extra detail there, like hints at unspoken character opinions, what they really mean when they say X, whatever. Even the seemingly useless marks can add a lot of meaning, suggest quivering voice, etc. And they are just fun by themselves.
The designs are fine, they have nice variation - face shape, eye type, etc.
If you ever post this to Smackjeeves or the like, tell us the name.
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>>562036
i dont get it at all
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>>562036
Only if I can post mine
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i feel like this was made by a person with genuine autism
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>>562712
I think it's just teenage girl
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>>562654
almost 10 times worse than OP
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>>562713
Is there a difference?
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>>562036
What is your comic called and is there more??
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>>562036
hey, i know you from /trash/
god tier
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>>562036
>I want to fugg Patricia's Pakistani girl pucci and make Mattie lick the cum out with her snake tongue.
>tfw you pull on Courtney's hair while she makes loud nerd snorts and begs for her inhaler
10/10 please post the pages where the sex scene starts
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>>562105
Dumb high school girls being dumb high school girls is my take-away from this.
Maybe the artist is going for slice of life, and watches way too much Loud House.

Gonna go ahead and ask the important question here: when do they make out with each other?
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>>562036
Of course you can - just don't be too discouraged by the opinions of the graceless /b/tards (disguised as /i/diots) tearing your down without offering actual criticism.

Draw every day, enjoy!
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>>563048
>Of course you can -
Yes, you can post anythin in the sense that nobody can stop you on an anonymous imageboard (except for mods but everybody knows /i/ doesn't have any), but that doesn't automatically mean you will be warmly welcomed.
>just don't be too discouraged by the opinions
If you don't take constructive advice (what you like to call """"opinions"""" because that makes the facts look more like a subjective thing) you will never advance, and this applies to any hobby or profession. Fact.
>of the graceless /b/tards (disguised as /i/diots)
Nice boogeyman, literally made up some bullshit about anyone on the internet saying mean things belonging in the same hate group thus making it easy to just discard everything they say that you don't like.
>tearing your down
Offering critique and giving attention (what OP obviously seeked when making this thread).
>without offering actual criticism.
You're blind to criticism because you have god complex but that doesn't mean everybody is.
>Draw every day, enjoy!
This is naive and immature apporach and encouraging it on the greater scope will result in everybody drawing ms paint tier dicks because they just "want to have fun" instead of getting better. This will inevitably lead to all art slowly disappearing from the face of earth.
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>>563061
>If you don't take constructive advice, you will never advance, and this applies to any hobby or profession.
Considering hobbies are usually performed for enjoyment rather than arbitrary "advancement," this point is moot.
There are a number of styles that ignore established anatomy rules, laws of physics, or even logic itself, in multiple accepted mediums of art, ranging from multimillion dollar priced paintings to modern day animation; so yeah, any sort of "advice" given is purely subjective to the viewer's opinion. There is already a board for critique, artists looking for critique will just go there.

>Offering critique and giving attention (what OP obviously seeked when making this thread).
Critique. Look over that word carefully, and compare it to this board. Now, compare it to the next board over.
Which of these boards do you think critique belongs in more? [spoiler]The one that literally has critique in the name.[/spoiler]

>This is naive and immature apporach and encouraging it on the greater scope will result in everybody drawing MS Paint tier dicks because they just "want to have fun" instead of getting better. This will inevitably lead to all art slowly disappearing from the face of earth.
Speaking of boogeymen...

That aside, there will always be people who do this for fun, and do this for money, and do this to better themselves, that's the thing about humanity; the people who want to better themselves will seek advice, and will go to the proper established places for advice.
If you go to the board with a built-in function similar to MS Paint, that has a bunch of goofy doodles using that tool, you shouldn't expect people to tell you how to make the next revolutionary, award-winning piece of contemporary art, and you shouldn't expect people on that board to take such advice seriously, or even give it the time of day; especially when there is a separate, clearly labeled board devoted to critique.
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>>562049
>ice cream tits
What's that?
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>>563661
I've never heard the term either, but I assume they mean the tits look like scoops of ice cream put on a flat body.
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>>562036
the comic is really cute! ignore the edgelords <3
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>>563662
yeah I think your right.
>>563686
the comic look's generic and hard to follow.
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>>562049
This board is literally made for doodles bruh
OP's comic fits perfectly.
If that upsets you, you're on the wrong board. Hide the thread or leave.
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>>563814
Not the Anon you replied to, but just because this is a doodle board doesn't mean a drawing won't get criticized at any given moment. Otherwise, this comic wouldn't get berated for its gaudy pastel colors and obnoxious dialogue bubbles.
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>>562040
it's a smidge hard to follow but you'll probably get that ironed out soon enough. keep making comics, this is cute and fun.
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Better than 90% of drawings on this board
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>>566882
I belong in the 10% btw
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>>566882
>>566885
>I belong in the 10% btw
Prove it by posting your work.
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Nice comic, now draw porn of the characters
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Wait a minute, isnt this that one artist who drew characters that kinda looked like this, and they were into some weird kink shit, like one was into guro and one was into diapers or sumn
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>>566909
I'm not the same poster
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>>562036
See
>>566929
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>>562839
One grows out of it
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>>562036
The dialogue is dull and the character design is meh; the pastel colors help to give the cute vibes but the symbols do almost nothing. Overall a solid needsmoreloomis/10 (that’s a good rank). Keep trying and keep studying the fundamentals, it will help you greatly even if you’re only aiming at cartoons.
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>>566929
>>562036
better yet just finish kinkshame you son of a fuck
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>>562036
You know posting this here is just going to encourage someone to hijack your shit and make porn out of it right?
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>>569085
Good
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>>569085
No ones done it yet tho
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>>570197
I am going to lewd it
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>>570198
Based
I look forward to it
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I actually really like the panel layout, and I like the way hands are simplified, by the way the hands are always drawn in the same pose makes it too less like a choice and more like you just can't draw hands
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I like how you went about the stylistic choices. Not the thing I like the most, but I really like how you put ti all together. Especially how the text i nthe speech bubbles is just like what a young schoolgirl woudl have in her notebooks.
The papercut feel is also neat. You should post more.
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>>562036
Please continue kinkshame
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>>562036
Looks good OP. Where do you post this usually?
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>>571224
Based and genericpilled
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>>562040
i don't get it
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>>571224
more.
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>>574586
Maybe I will do more
But only if like two other people post their own



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