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I figured I'd just say screw it to proper proportion and anatomy and turn japanese. these are two of my new characters, super patriot and the hiroshima hot dog. they've held every title and, according to renowned wrestling journalist mark belzer, have put on 6 star matches in every bingo hall in japan.
I'm pretty sure I'm ready for my own manga series.
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Honestly anatomy and proportion are overrated as fuck and important if you want to impress other artists.

Ever since i learned proper anatomy i start to see anatomy mistakes fucking everywhere. Even in the most successful mangaka.

Time after time i see successful webcomic or porn artists with tons of followers making bank, and theres always a few bucket crab autists screeching about "hurrr anatomy rong" well maybe so dickweed but youre not the one earning 2500 a month on patreon.
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>>3515546
Tell me the story about them.
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>>3515546
Tumblr/blog?
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>>3515546
Honestly, good art doesn't require proper anatomy. Human forms come incredibly varied, but is some what limited when it comes to shapes. But art allows you to throw that out the window. This shit is good, and those dudes look freaking awesome so keep it up.
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perfect for a bara series
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>>3515546
I already want to read your shit.
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>>3515561
Nice blog fag, get back to drawing
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Is it yaoi tho
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Honestly OP, you need to stop posting some poor beginner artist's work for shitposting purposes, it's an extremely childish and mean behavior
Does it supposed to make you feel better about yourself or what? What did the poor sod even do to you?
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>>3515561
You're right. Anatomy is like the lowest easiest way to critique something while pretending you can actually draw. Nobody gives a shit as long as you can fool people well enough.
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This thread is a shitpost. OP made a thread more or less exactly like this about a month ago.
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>>3516119
No, I drew this the other day for a laugh because I'd never tried anything in that style. I did post it as a shitpost and honestly wasn't expecting any positive feedback, even if they were also shitposts.
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>>3515561
>>3515991
Is this your not-so-subtle way of saying the anatomy sucks?
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This is reigning and defending 3X BHGP Brass Knuckles champion DANGER Yamamoto, just moments before his Barbed Wire Razor Wire Light Tube Gusset Board Alligator Death Match title defense against recent rival and young up and comer Butcher Baba.

I also came to the sad realization that even though I am just fucking around and being shitty just because I'm bored and it makes me laugh, if I treated it even half-assed seriously there's probably a good story and decent book in here somewhere.
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>>3515546
Here's the most recent roster addition to Pro Japan Wrestling, the young and unfortunately named referee Butch Watanabe. Butch's father "Jack" (Yoshiro) Watanabe is a major lifelong Westaboo and thought "Butch" sounded tough and American.
Again, yes it's shit but I did follow triangle face guy's advice on the mouth.
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Maria Rosales was a rising star in the world of Lucha Libre who went on a 2 year excursion to run the bingo hall circuit in Japan. After bumping her neck to sawdust in under a year thanks to poorly trained joshi girls, she announced her retirement from the ring.
Thanks to her fluency in Japanese and her popularity with middle aged salaryman perverts and /asp/ weebs she immediately got hired by Pro Japan Wrestling as the in-ring announcer and the rest is history.
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>>3515546
>>3517847
>>3517912
>>3518093
You're going to make it OP
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>>3515546
you are unironically talented. Keep drawing and keep improving.
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>>3515546
Anatomy does not matter
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>>3519110
I know they're just shitty scribbles for the most part, but it is fun basically just making stuff up, adding new muscles that don't actually exist, things like that. If I actually learned how to make the anime/manga style faces it would likely help though.
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For a laugh I made up a quick storyboard for what a possible first page could look like. I know it doesn't flow well, it was all just done on the fly.
I guess the main focus would be the dorky referee, who is kind of a screw up, and his daily and work life, including his undying infatuation with the mexican ring announcer lady.
If any real manga style artist wants to take my ideas and do something better with them feel free.
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You need to learn how to use space better. Drawings don't become better the more shit you cram in the background sa
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>>3519834
>You need to learn how to use space better. Drawings don't become better the more shit you cram in the background sa
post your work, learn2loomis, triangles, gain height, etc
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>>3519834
Post your Loomis
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>>3520454
>>3522413
indeed




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