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Previous Thread: >>5094786

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When in doubt, post a censored copy here and link to the original off-site (e.g. catbox, imgur, etc).

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>>5130531

January prompt
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>>5130531
Can really feel the form..
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I want to draw loli but I feel scared of getting caught.
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>>5131183
By who
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>>5131190
My family, friends, and school art teachers.
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>>5131197
Love your work, do you do art for a living or is it a hobby?
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>>5131205
This website is 18+
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>>5131230
thank you, I wanted to do art for a living but I don't think I will make it
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>>5131197
post full
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>>5131180
I can tell it’s her first time on the job.
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>>5131252
Thats unfortunate, Anon. If you're able, maybe keep it going on the side, It could turn into something. I don't know whats happening in your life, but I hope you can keep drawing for as long as its possible.
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>>5130536
fucking creeps lol
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>>5131280
Huh?
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>>5131205
just own it, or use a separate sketchbook, most people aren't going to just thumb through your shit
I haven't taken an art class since high school so I don't have to worry about teachers but my family hates my loli daki and what few friends remain have questioned but are ultimately okay with my cunny drawings
I used to scan things at the university library and email them back to myself on the public computers
life is a lot better once you stop giving a fuck about random people's opinions
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>>5130536
how am i suppose to use this? just rolling?
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>>5131379
date
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>>5131379
Its like Inktober.
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Can somebody critique btw?
>>5131180
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>>5131416
You're trying to understand the use of overlapping forms which is good but some of them do not make sense such as where the pectoral muscle would be connected to the humerus is either illustrated improperly or you forgot to define it and just left what's left over from the ribcage. Overlapping forms work when you have a clear distinction between what's in front and behind something but when you have two forms in front of you the illusion fails and the drawing becomes flat.
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>>5131416
Why your lolis always looking so muscular?
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I don't always draw lolis
But when I do, I draw pokelolis
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This is one of my first attempts of drawing a loli, what do you guys think?
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>>5131491
How do i avoid making them muscular?
I learnt anatomy to draw better but I don't know how to apply it right
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>>5131512
Looks pretty good!

You should actually try drawing a loli next time too :D
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>>5131538
Passive aggressive cunt.
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>>5131538
Thanks! I was aiming for around 14, but I'll try for younger next time.
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>>5131530
From what I see, you're using too much T lines, for example, 4 unnecessary overlapping happen at the right thigh.
Also the limbs are too big compare to the torso, make them more thin please. And when drawing loli character, you should not emphasize the deltoid and calf muscles too much.
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I had fun with the hair. Help me out as usual (thanks to the guy from the previous thread btw).
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>>5131548
Thank you
People always tell me that my drawings lack form and to watch Vilpu, so when I saw that vilpu recommended using T lines to show form i went overboard with the T lines. Is there a way to show form without T lines, or how do I tone it down while still having form? I don't think Vilpu is wrong I feel like the drawing has form now and it helped but I don't know what the right amount of T lines should be.

Also yeah I'll definitely make the muscles smaller in the future, I made them bigger and more exaggerated to show form, it doesn't work.
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>>5131570
T lines are a good way to show forms, but for young characters, you should focus them where major twisting and bending movements happen like at the waist, or where limbs join the torso, also the more foreshortened the figure, the more T lines could be used.
I would also recommend you to use short hatching contour lines to emphasize forms, look at how Jap artists do and study them.
Those two things should be placed strategically on the body, like Vilppu said, treat them as tools, you shouldn't add lines for the sake of adding lines.
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>>5131619
alright I'll put them more sparingly
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Do you guys recognise this artist?
>>>/r/17755812
It reminds me of muk a bit but shinier and not as realistic.

Apologies if these aren't lolis, they look like loli's from their heads.
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>>5131183
are you at least of average attractiveness? if not, don't follow >>5131366's advice
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>>5131808
Its Muk, you got it right.
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>>5131811
Above average. I wouldn't follow that advice though, loli is illegal where I live.
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>>5131862
really? thanks
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>>5131863
unfortunate, theres not really much to advise once it hits legal territory. you should probably keep it to yourself because someone will inevitably consider it worth reporting, even if its just to harm you instead of for moral reasons.
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>>5131808
I think that was some game I played once.. it was really short and only had that one scene.
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>>5131980
I want to draw doujins about cute lolis getting impregnated by ugly bastards.
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>>5132127
That’s a fine goal.
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>>5131512
Not even loli.
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Do you guys have a goal?
What artist would you like to draw like the most?
I wanna reach Muk levels but I'd be fine with yuizaki kazuya or kantoku as a goal.
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>>5131543
14 is the best body archetype anyways, so no loss.
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>>5134114
Id wanna reach Alke levels but with the addition of still being able to draw adult faces just as competently
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completedogshit.jpg
https://files.catbox.moe/61cqx0.jpg
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>>5130536
Trouble with the PC today, gonna upload this as is just in case. Thanks for the OP by the way; the edit is really nice.
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>>5134231
A little lanky compared to the usual lolis I see on this board but it makes for an interesting design of the character you got there.She supposed to be close to pre-teen age I assume? Very good start though anon, a good chunk of artists have issues making there figures actually feel like they're sitting on the object they are placed on but this doesnt have that. Nice clothing choices as well.
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>>5134164
Man, the foundation of the drawing doesnt seem too bad either but the quality of the rendering gives huge /beg/ levels. Do you do digital work often? Also, like I said, the body isnt bad but the head looks completely rushed. Given that the foundation of the body isnt too bad you really gotta step it up with the foundation of her head too. It just screams like you gave up once you reached to that part of the drawing. Also get rid of the transparent robe. It doesnt really add anything.
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>>5134231
Her neck looks off, it looks like it's pushed to the left of the top of her torso, put it in the middle back of the top of the torso, since that's where the spine is.
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>>5134337
male gyno titty?
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>>5134337
why are her legs so long from the knee down on the left side drawing?
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>>5134257
I just rushed it and tried out painting. I've never done it in my entire life.
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>>5134159
Alke is impressive, I just wish I liked his style.
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can someone critique the form?
https://files.catbox.moe/o7wiii.jpg
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>>5134337
just give hher sexy flat chest
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>>5134337
cute i have no idea why none of the replies are being kind to you but i guess this is /ic/ haha
only thing i could nitpick are that the legs look a LITTLE off in the left image
>>5135162
dont listen to this retard, budding tits are cute
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>>5134337
In the right picture the lower tit is a bit too low
Good overall though.
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>>5134247
Thanks Anon. I was going for preteen, although regrettably I didn't refer to the many charts posted here when I really should have...

>>5134349
Hopefully she make a full recovery from her spinal realignment. I appreciate the feedback, Anon.

https://files.catbox.moe/1mfwn6.png

>>5130536
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>>5136713
I'm short but right handed, I don't know about IQ never did an IQ test.
I just love lolis and want to fuck them lovingly.
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Not having "clean" lines is finally bothering me.
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This is me doing as close of an Alke impression as I can at the moment. Realizing now I have to fundamentally change certain aspects of my methods to get his kind of rendering(on top of just being better).
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>>5130536
i realise i made the guy too stuff, but i didn't know what pose to give him.
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>>5136872
Oh no no no
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>>5134159
>Alke
Where does he post his latest stuff? I wanna see.
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>>5137322
>hand not around the boys neck

Missed opportunity
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>>5137322
The one in the middle, is that supposed to Ganyu?
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shit, I'm getting hard looking at my drawings
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>>5134164
I'd say its an improvement, Its less lumpy then your previous work.
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>all bin links are private
So how do I get actually paid for this if everything bans cunny?
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>>5137956
Time to go to the deepweb.
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>>5137240
pyw
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>>5138055
No need for that, normalfags just need to pay me in Monero.
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>>5137956
/hgg2d/ has an ipfs repo for their stuff
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こんにちは4ch、かわいい女の子の描き方を学んでいます (^_^)

https://files.catbox.moe/aae4ot.png
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>>5138799
Her right arm is absolutely massive compared to the normal looking left arm dude.
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>>5138813
私は英語を話せません(人•͈ᴗ•͈)(^^)
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>>5138823
わたしは、あなたを愛しています。
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>>5138826
可愛い!私もあなたを愛してます (。•̀ᴗ-)。。。。(≧▽≦)
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>>5138799
right arm's too big
foot placement feels kinda painful
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>>5138823
>>5138826
>>5138832

わたしは
私は
私も
babies first jap?





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