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Previous thread: >>5300387

>What is /SALT/?

If you're looking for a place to post all sexual works, from pinups with exaggerated proportions to pornography, then this is the right general for you. Both Eastern and Western stylization can coexist peacefully here.

>Rules & Guidelines

(1) Any form of cartooning is welcome; so submit and receive feedback from others.
(2) Please resize your images below 1000x1000 before posting.
(3) Share your knowledge and
(4) Remember to not be afraid of asking for critique.
5) Remember all GB3 related content such as lolicon, shotacon, furry pornography, furry and bestiality are banned on ALL boards, including red boards, except /b and /trash.

Most importantly I encourage you to keep discussion at a civil level, but you're more than welcome to share your opinions.

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>Community Resources
Hitokaku Index
>http://www.asahi-net.or.jp/~zm5s-nkmr/
List of active livestreams
>Use twitch #art
>yoshikadu2011https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCUx5dpO6d5gQ4KWNPc24CKw

FellowBro's Book Collection
>http://mediafire.com/?i44dwzkf9j9n8

Tutorial & Reference Collection
>http://pinterest.com/characterdesigh/
Japanese Tutorials & Documentary
>http://www.pixiv.net/member_illust.php?id=59317(0033)
>http://iradukai.com/

References
>http://www.onairvideo.com/croquis-cafe-photos2.html
>http://www.eggazyoutatsu.net/eng/atarichan.html
>http://senshistock.com/sketch/
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>>5321186
i really like this. Not even as a porn piece, but as a work of art
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>>5321163
>>5321186
But that's Mipha, I think? She was sidon's sister or something iirc
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image is a little fucked in ways im aware of but this was more of an exercise in trying to find a simple, expedient style that i could replicate easily
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>>5321254
that picture is fucking gay. yes thats a bad thing, gross.
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i drew Oga from elf yaserarenai takin a shit.
pretty sure i fucked up the leg anatomy on this pose but had trouble finding ref for it so i said"fuck it i'll wing it
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>>5321339
Make her torso longer. It should be three heads tall. Also, she has no curves. If she’s supposed to be a shortstack then make the limbs smaller. Good job on the muscles tho
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>>5321163
Congratulations on the title of the thread, dumbass.
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>>5321339
This artwork is a really nice depiction of your skills, literally and figuratively.
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Haven’t been here in a while, Is /salt/ usually this dead now?
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>>5321243
Her left (our right) thigh is too long and if his hand is holding up the leg, it would be visible from this view. Also, the perspective on the knee itself doesn't seem correct if the leg isn't straight down.
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I drew a booty
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his hand is massive, I know
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>>5321339
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>>5321339
Kek, this whole post.
You could just go to /s/ or /hc/ or even Google and just look up reference for a pornstar squatting. She's definitely way too short in your pic.
Then just follow your heart and add the rope to it by hand or study a separate reference.
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finally a new thread
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>>5321339
So this is what autism looks like.
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>>5322959
i love this
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Is there any wheel I can spin to decide what character to draw? is twitter the only way to check what's trending?
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>>5322959
crotch is waay too low
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>>5322959
pussy is not properly positioned and head looks pasted on from another drawing
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>>5321163
god something about mipha does it for me
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I sketched these girls from FNF but I'm not feeling too confident in it.
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>>5324423
they look like drag queens
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Should I stay with cel shading or render?
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>>5324423
the girl on the left is behind AND in front of the bottom girl, check her feet.
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>>5324427
Crap.
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>>5324434
I see what you mean.
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please help me with her other hand
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>>5322543
my thoughts exactly
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>>5322438
This artstyle is megasex, tried to do er justice
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>>5324517
Have her fingers penetrating her crotch
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I am attempting blending, do any kind anons have any CSP-compatible blending brushes to recommend or art tutorials?
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>>5325790
judging from the skin tone and clothes i thought that was bara squidward
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>>5325263
I feel like my style's still in the development stages (mostly with line control, but also anatomy) but seeing someone call it "mega sex" is pretty great ngl thanks anon
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>>5325263
titty is botched, but otherwise hot
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>>5325790
Hard round brush, seriously, with varying/pressure-bound opacity
It's more about technique than the brush
Get some good rendering finished pieces as reference and study where they use soft and hard edges
Haven't got any on my phone sorry
Textured brushed aren't gonna necessarily look good on the body, save those for quick painting, scenery and adding texture after rendering
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>>5326098
nice lineart, but you missed the hair. the lack of line variation or shadows on it makes it looks flat. also his left toe is looking weirdly chubby
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>>5321339
The pose is not that important in this case, i think you could have more interesting images if you use more simple angles or... like... a better foreshortening, of the shit. Maybe a more interesting composition, and only with that, if you keep the same level of drawing, is gonna look a lot better
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>>5324423
they are fine. If you want to make a real drawing with that image, then work in the composition and is gonna look good.

>>5324430
cel shading is fine, since you aren't really using a full "render" in the top one. Also it could look better if the lines If the lines had better definition. I know you might like the textured brush, but if you are doing cel shading it simply does not give it, at least in the shadows, in the lineart there is no problem if it is more subtle

>>5324517
just draw a loosing hand there, could be in the left side of the image, or in the right side, you could also make it in that side but make it like leaning, and so you can have a more balanced composition perhaps, or develop a background more easily because that hand would easily define a surface.

>>5325790
just use the oppacity, or use the watercolour kind of brushes, or make a new layer and work on that, on top, or use some of those default blending brushes of CSP, they are pretty simple.

>>5326098
the background does not contribute anything, you could leave it blank and it would be the same, you could take advantage of the perspective you generated and apply a simple shadow on the surface
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Any advice on drawing convincing sex? Its all about good gesture right?
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>>5326233
do gesture drawing using porn as reference
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>>5326233
exaggerate the gestures if you dont wanna end up with coom as spicy as the missionary position
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>>5326098
In that pose and perspective, you would see the soles of the feet head on. Right now both ankles are broken.
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>>5326098
>>5326154
Thanks and yeah I totally forgot about the hair and thanks for pointing out his left toe. I was sure something wasn't right.

>>5326193
Thanks, I decided to change the background color and added a simple shadow.

>>5326723
Ah dang, you're right anon. Thanks for pointing that out. I tried to fix it.
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Any tips on cleaning this up or improve it so its more boner worthy, for the next time(This image has run its course).
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>>5327092
this is ugly but I am at a lost at what to tell this anon to work on
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>>5322438
b-b-blog?
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how ugly is my rendering, and how do I fix it?
trying to learn a shorthand to start quick-commissions with
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critique/thoughts?
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>>5321339
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>>5327194
https://twitter.com/dankniwa?s=09
though I haven't posted any of my recent line work yet
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>>5327092
this looks like something jazza would draw
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>>5327820
thx, saved your latest pic
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depressing thread
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Nigga what’re you doing?!
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>>5328163
Thanks anon
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what tips do you guys have for growing on twitter?

compared to instagram/tumblr/deviantart/newgrounds it feels impossible to grow from 0
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>>5328262
if you know people with a following who could retweet your work that helps

interacting with other artists who tend to retweet certain things too
like if they have an oc and retweet fan art of it

catering to a niche and drawing mostly for them

but the end all be all is posting consistently and often while also improving your skills
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>>5327190
Well telling me it’s ugly actually does help believe it or not. I appreciate not sugar coating it. I’lll just use this piece as an example of what not to do.
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>>5327190
>>5328315
Proportions are the most glaring issue.
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>>5328262
i got to 2k in a year by doing fanart, posting it on reddit and dropping my blog in comments
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>>5327425

Either go with cell shading or use a bigger soft brush. The uneven blending is looking like cellulite. Also your skin color is looking a bit dull, needs one pinks.
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>>5327633
Slit starts a bit too high and the lighting on the under butts a little distracting.
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Is there any safe way to draw size difference/short characters without angering twitter mobs? I swear to fucking god i can give the girl gigantic tits/ass and it's still gonna be called a pedoshit just because she's short
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>>5328987
Easy, don't get americans as your main fanbase
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I wish I had listened to the crabs I’m NGMI.
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>>5328987
Unironically >>5330061
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I think i'm still in /beg/ category, i did not use a reference today. would anybody be willing to red line this. i can change the color if it's too hard to see.
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>>5328601
Heads are too big and the feet to small, now that I look.
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wheres a community i can make hentai art friends who want to improve
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>>5330551
Deviant art
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Sorry I’m a beginner but can I get an general help with this? Not gonna add the hair and other details yet until I figure out how to improve the bodies a bit more, same for breasts
I think it lacks energy? When I line art it I can try to make some parts thicker but other than that I’m not sure
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Where do I start on coloring?

I feel reasonably confident in my ability to draw "manga style" with tones or just plain gray areas, but I feel like the process if completely different when going for color.

What's a good resource to start on?
I have no blue about values or anything.
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>>5331727
guy's upper body is too small, their heads being on the same levels kills it
also you can try make him more involved, hunch him forward or backwards, hug girls leg with both arms or put second arm on her hip
also girl looks like she is in pain, not feeling any pleasure
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>>5331756
No they're both girls! But thanks I'll try to tweak that stuff
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>>5321163
Do you guys have two accounts for NSFW and normal artwork or just one?
Because today I made a Twitter account to post normal my shit and I don't know if I should post porn there too
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>>5331779
A lot of people do. You don’t want your mom to see your piece of a futa having someone shit in its mouth, do you?
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>>5332608
Do you have brain damage? How about you look at them and then draw what you see?
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>>5328315
well, I appreciate that you are not super defensive about it, but I dont think its a matter of proportions

when something has even the most fucked up proportions, it doesnt necessarily instill disgusts. What that actually comes from its from the quality of the lines, and your style of making them. And I dont think working on proportions, or drawing a 1000 boxes is going to improve your lines that much (boxes does, but for straight lines, therefore inorganic shapes, but you draw organic subjects). A exercise which would help you, I believe is one which forces you to draw curvy lines.

For example you could practice cursive writing. Everyday, half a hour or so, or as a warm up before drawing. Write some centences in cursive, or the alphabet several times. And focus on beauty of lines first, then try to speed up a little, but by loosing as little quality as possible. And important, do it with the same tool you also draw, and when drawing afterwards, try to imitate the why you do the lines when writing in your drawing, otherwise you practice this for nothing.
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Wip but do you guys think I can build a coom artist presence on twitter and make some pocket money
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something i did a little while ago.
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would I fit in with the anime kids?
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>>5333427
you already posted this elsewhere on the board, kill yourself faggot
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>>5333429
do you really need to be rude about it man? did somebody touch you in the wrong spot when you were child?
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Trying to do more difficult poses, how's this?
Might not make this coom art in the end though.
>>5330242
Nananah you gmi. I really like the looseness of your sketches.
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do you redo the line art for a alt version of a pic?

i mean i feel soulless having a alt that doesnt change much
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>>5333618
I just take a duplicate of the lineart layer and change the specific parts. I get what you mean about it feeling kind of cheap but I think people who like alts actually like the cookie cutter look it creates. I had to admit that there is something pleasing to me about seeing different skins on the same template, so I just went with it.
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Advice on how to color/shade gooder? Always struggled w/ hair especially.
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>>5334155
honestly the colors are good, can you do 3d poses instead of 1 point perspective?
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is pixel porn a good niche?
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how do you make non retarded looking faces
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>>5334681
Just don’t have black pixels with the white pixels. Not that I’m racist or anything.
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how do i draw booba as a /beg/? i assume for fundies i can study spheres, lighting, and shape manipulation. perspective is probably needed for doing any anatomy, as well. where do i go beyond that?
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>>5331779
>Because today I made a Twitter account to post
Name?
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>>5335370
https://mega.nz/file/ed0QxKKL#uN7cJyqZA6SxNCNhyTqxDxyfdwNN1nLIsA9eb-bzoqQ

theres a couple of boob infographics on how they behave
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Sketch>lineart>flats>Shade>???
What's is the workflow i should go for on the layers side
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I think theres a problem with her right arm, oooh well.
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aspiring coom artist here.
Is quality > quantity if trying to make money? Would animating a piece with sounds and shit be worth or should I just do multiple variants of the image to be done with it faster?
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>>5335841
highlights and extra details if required.
>>5336096
steady quality unless it's a niche fetish.
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>>5336096
Make sure to do feet lots of followers almost immediately
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i don’t know if we have any overlap with /sci/ but i’ll try anyway. basically i’m doing a personal no fap/nut challenge where i abstain from porn or sexual activity of any kind for at least one month. problem is, i don’t want to lose focus on drawing. something as basic as referencing a woman’s bare chest could be considered sexually stimulating, which i’m avoiding entirely. do i have no choice but to read scott rob the whole time? how can or should i study characters without being horny?
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Thoughts?
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>>5337819
bad
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>>5337865
Fuck yeah, an honest opinion. Thanks for the feedback!
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>>5334681
animated, definitely
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>>5337705
>how can or should i study characters without being horny?
why do you think you are / should be able to do such a thing when it's going against your biology? it's like asking how you can go without food for a week and not be hungry
maybe try a chastity cage you cuck. that's where all you nofap freaks are headed anyway. being told off by a maternal figure for touching your weewee and locked in a cage for months. 100% mom issues every single one of you
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>>5338122
you aight bro?
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>>5338122
lol, but there’s a difference between horny and having coombrain. “coomer” is a pejorative on this site despite lewdshit and waifuposting for a reason. all i meant to say in my post was i’m giving my mind and dick time to relax. i’ve been in denial for a long about possible addiction. there’s absolutely no harm in what i’m doing and i’ll only see benefits.
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>>5338185
the question is if you are alright, dickbrain.
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>>5338820
you aight bro?
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Coomer bros what tags do you use on twatter? Is there a recommended guide on promoting nsfw art?
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>>5339063
Wario nose
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>>5326953
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>>5338949
make fanart, post it on reddit/discord, shill your blog in comments
tags don't do shit unless it's some trendy meme or challenge (and even then the effect is minimal), twitter is not an art-focused website
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>>5330242
I'm pretty sure people already told you - draw bigger.
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>>5336433
i lost myself into a downward spiral of layers
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>>5339063
this is how i would change the image:

make his shoulders and his chess bigger
foreshorten his arm
change position of the other arm to make it look symmetrical
change the position of his fingers and her thumb
cover his lower body with her stomach
change position of his leg
change her feet
give his hat slightly more volume
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>>5337819
>>5339230
its art but this is stylized art, no sexual art. you are in the wrong thread.
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>>5330366
it is useless to redline sth that is wrong on so many levels. Take an anatomy course and go to /beg/.
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>>5333612
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>>5339072
Wah! You're right, haha.

>>5339156
Ahaha, damn anon, I love this, cool!

>>5339964
Damn, so many changes. Thank you so much, it definitely looks much better now. Looks like I still have to learn a lot of.
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Have this PP Bizon I did for a drawthread. Disembodied dick I know but I think I'll try a bit harder for my next draw.

>>5335024
Who's this qt from?

>>5338949
Tags are pretty redundant a lot of the time. Adding too many tags can actually hurt you in the algorithm because twitter thinks you're a spambot (don't quote me on this tho), so usually past 3 tags you get diminishing or negative returns.

That said, some tags (such as tags for vtubers) are incredibly active. Also you don't have to include the literal hashtag a lot of time (for instance, if you wanted to add #pixelart you can just write "Did some pixelart of X and Y" in the text
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>>5340018
Thanks anon! I changed it some based on your redline, I think it looks better now.
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>>5340361
vag is way too far from the asshole
virgin mistake#1
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>>5340362
k
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>>5340370
ignore the advice just because it contained an insult at your own peril retard, go look at pictures of actual women doing that pose, her cunt is miles off course
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>>5340372
kk
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>>5340361
>>5340370
>>5340392
Bro.. if you're focusing on anatomy and redlining, that's fine, but if you're gonna draw her naked from the waist down you have to deal with being told that her vagina isn't in the right spot and is a little too big.
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>>5340361
>>5340362
>focusing on that
>missing that her lower body is still disproportional and way too long and the perspective is wonky
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>>5338829
Of course. I'm not the one that can't draw porn without getting a hardon. I'm not the dickbrain here, buddy.
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>>5340600
you aight bro?
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>>5338185
>>5338829
>>5340607
oh no, it's retarded.
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>>5340788
bro, you aight?
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>>5340802
oh no, it's retarded.
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>coomazoid fedoras will get into incredibly invested bitchy catfights because someone dared to mention that they're trying to stop masturbating
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>>5340788
you aight bro?>>5341330
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any major mistakes?
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>>5342928
The leg coming on the viewer is bad
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>>5342928
Looks good, just like other anon said fov of leg closer to viewer is little off.
But whats bothering me more is your composition choices, bet its intentionally tho.
His left leg line up with humerus of right guy, this make composition less intresting.
Same with guy on couch, he line up almost perfectly there giving less organic feeling to pose.
His left arm looks uncomfortable.
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>>5339617
not a problem if you're still learning, once you get more confidence you'll even be able to do everything on the same layer. There's no magic number just what's comfortable and fast for you.
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>>5343266
thx for the feedback. i made a stronger foreshortening on the leg and changed the arm position.
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>>5321339

Every time I come to this board I end up asking myself why.
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>>5343600
woah nice. any tips on how to properly draw bent/crouched legs?
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>>5343600
hot
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I think I know how that six months schizo feels now.
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First animated piece.
Gonna add some audio to it.
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Sketch. May finish it
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making this for a draw friend.... anything helps...
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>>5344162
her neck is twisted beyond anatomically possible, because you didnt portrait the traps correctly, you drew the left shoulder outline inwards as if there were no twist of the traps all of this makes her neck look broken, mouth should be more to the right and the eyes are not looking at the viewer if tyou were going for that
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>>5344270
Thank you, I now see where I went wrong. And god tier for the red line.
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>>5325852
can't unsee
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>>5343600
>>5322959
>>5321243
blog?
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>>5343600
His upper body is leaning backwards you indicated that by the lower curvature of his clothes. Therefore his shoulders should retrack and the heart shape on his chess would be "squished". Even if he pushes his neck forward the curvature of the neck piece is too strong. He spreads his legs but they are still slightly showing towards the viewer (tried to indicate that with contour lines) and should be slightly foreshortened. The lower legs would first overlap the thighs and then his heels would push against his butt. The arms are a bit too long. His whole weight is resting on his fingers and toes so they should bend. His dick is curved a bit too much but maybe that is just my preference. You can enforce the perspective by bringing his tail to the front.
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>>5343768
Thanks and I'd like to give any tips but I'm so bad at drawing a proper body, so better ask others about it.

>>5343898
Thanks!

>>5344414
https://www.pixiv.net/en/users/67166382
https://stellarny.newgrounds.com/

>>5344695
Holy moly, thanks anon! This looks so great and far, far better than what I did. I guess I suck at drawing so much that you had to redline the whole drawing. Still, looks amazing and thanks again.
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>>5344726
>I guess I suck at drawing
i think you already knew all that and just did not pay attention. You created a great slut charecter that needs to be fucked to insanity.
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>>5343910
>>5330242
>>5328207
Your work oozes soul that 99 in 100 generic coomshitters don't have, you're improving by the week, and I enjoy every time you post your work, but stop acting like a little pussy, stop being desperate for (You)s, and get the fuck over this slump. You're better than the discord trannies swarming this board that want /ic/ to be a place to blog about depression and """burnout""" first and actually post art second
i'm not going to praise you again
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>>5344845
Thank you for the feedback and sorry for being a whiny bitch.
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>>5345031
Good man
now draw a close-up of one of your pretty ladies looking disgusted (emotive facial gesture is a strong point of yours) with her face pressed up against some fat orc's unwashed cock as penance
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>>5344796
Nah, I really didn't know how to draw him better, thanks again! And awww, I'm so glad and happy now, thank you so much for these words anon!
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>>5345213
cute
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>>5345415
Perfect! Thank you for this anon,
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Some mandragora pole for the soul.

btw, if bbc is in this thread, which you somehow always are, thanks for the advice. You were right on that recurrent problem I had with the thighs. They're not perfect yet, but they're better at least
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Why would you draw porn?
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>>5347022
>Why would you draw porn?
Money
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>>5347022
why wouldn't you?
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>>5347021
Nice. What was the thigh issue out of curiosity?
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Advice on really nailing perspective correctly? I can tell a lot of my forms arent actually built properly.
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Barney
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>>5347584
I like it, give us more. Only suggestion is the top left, decide if her head is facing forward an eye sockets looking up... or her heads looking up at us.
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>>5347641
Any why would you go and do something like that?
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>>5347727
making troons seethe is its own reward
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I need to figure out a different workflow or something. My lines are confusing the fuck out of me. Still, better than the last time I tried “painting.”
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>>5348413
I like the 80s bikini clad girls in trouble with ugly monsters aesthetic you have
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>>5348420
Yeah, I might be in a little bit of a rut. At least it’s not inflation stuff.
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I feel like shit knowing that my skills right now are high /beg/, enough to get commission frequently, the only thing that make it less grimm is the hope to improve in 1 Year way faster than i have ever done before
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>>5348517
This is an English-speaking site sir
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>>5348519
Sorry lad is kinda late,
I feel bad at the moment on my skill level, i like to believe that in the future i will be better
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>>5333014
Yeah totally, I do and I'm worse but her face it's not that cute maybe you can try doing femboys or loli or something it attracts people who pay.
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If anyone here draws ugly bastard shit you should kill yourself. Tired of going on pixiv and seeing smoking hot babes getting fucked by pot bellied retards.
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>>5348681
i don't remember ever seeing western artist drawing ugly bastards
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>>5344845
>Your work oozes soul that 99 in 100 generic coomshitters don't have, you're improving by the week
You need glasses.
No, I won't post my work.
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>>5347022
Why would you ask dumb questions?
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>>5347734
>>5347727
If you don't have good enough drawing skills, then you have to create drama to get noticed.
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>>5348860
deleted any new social media profile yet, shizo?
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>>5342928
i still have your sketch from 2 months ago. Busy life?
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>>5348860
glad to see you back in action
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>>5348930
stop acting like a creepy stalker jfc.
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>>5349024
just askin why it's takin you so long to finish
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>>5349040
not that anon but

WHY THE FUCK DO YOU CARE

(no, it wasn't a question)
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>>5349043
just curious. Maybe it's just a really difficult image to get right.
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>>5348930
yes, very busy.
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>>5348860
Overall great but the head of the fox looks disconnected from the body at first glance, I’d watch out for that if I were you
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>>5348927
Almost on several occasions
>>5348947
Thanks
>>5349217
Yeah I’ve been having trouble with that, I tried to indicate the upper torso is leaning in towards it but it’s hard to convey when so much is hidden by the collar fur
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>>5348860
left shoulder looks dislocated. i would bring it more towards the body.
angle of right arm is weird. changing it a bit looks better in my opinion.
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>>5331464
this isnt half bad. learn to overlap forms better. Hide the ribcage with the abdomen, then the abdomen with the pelvis.
>>5333014
You just need to post semi finished work and youll do great.
>>5333612
>>5339230
>>5343600
Blog?
>>5348860
Fox head looks kinda disconnected.
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i know there are a lot of issues with the feet/legs but I can't pinpoint what
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>>5350168
>>5348860
>>5347584

Seriously nice work duders.

I went pretty hard on this one but I'm kinda noticing a lot of my stuff ends up kinda... statuesque, if that makes sense? I really gotta figure out how to fix that, so I'll probably do some studies once I get the time
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>>5331464
Holy shit i thought this was a scalpel from the thumbnail
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>>5350946
blog?
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>>5350946
Everything in this looks good, just smooth the outlines and you're golden
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>>5350946
Out of curiosity - all those squashed doodles you have in these compilations, do you draw them like this in the first place or do you draw them normally and then squash them with a transform tool?
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how do i draw cum without looking like shit?
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>>5351736
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>>5351742
need cum not owls
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>>5347021
<3
Love this.

>>5351736
Use white instead of brown?

Sorry, I had to.
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>>5351736
It just so happens I have a page on that.
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>>5352597
Well shit that could have helped early

On the note, what do you think about this draw?
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>>5350946
I'm so fucking jealous that your Delia looks so effortless and has so much elegance and style. I'm literally going to scream if you don't share your blog.
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>>5350168
>>5349328
>>5349217
Thanks for the input, I tried to fix what I could but the end result is kind of a clusterfuck. that’s what you get when you put two characters with identical colors and patterns together
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>>5353059
>tfw no foxboy gf
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>>5353059
This is fantastic anon would fap to keep it up
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How do you make a character look like they're leaning forward, like they are being shy or awkward? I try that pose a lot but it never works and I have to just scrap it or hide it behind giant boobs.
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first ever drawing with drawing tablet, any opinions or tips?
my style is seeping through, i'm trying to learn to draw more anime-esque
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>>5353059
I still think this guy's version of the arm looks better and more natural >>5349328 (as in, having the arm bent away from the body more and the forearm more vertical), but on the other hand the coloring mostly fixes the problem with the fox's head. As for the clusterfuck factor, the only area that really seems messy to me is the top of both the character's heads (including ears). They just seems to blend into the background fur too much (esp the human's), I would really thicken the outlines and clean up the color spills in that area.
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>>5353282
Love this one.
The style is intriguing, and the colouring is well made for a first time.
Got more? Or an account to see more of this?
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Thick thighs
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>>5352590
no volume
arm on the ground in unnatural position
hand on the ground too small
no foreshortening on the legs and belly
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>>5353402
this is what happens when people jump to rendering before learning anatomy.
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>>5353596
I'm the OP and realised the broken anatomy just after posting it and seeing it on a smaller screen
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>>5353683
what's your rendering process? do you paint on the same layer as the lineart or on one above? it looks nice
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>>5353856
First I do my sketch with basic pencil brush on the first layer. Then I add a second layer where I do the lineart/contour loosely with the basic brush tool on Sai using a dark color (dark brown for the skin for ex). Then paint and render everything else for an ungodly amount of time mostly with the brush tool, on the same layer. Often the contour gets lost so I re-render it either with the basic opaque pencil tool or the brush with max opacity and 0 blending (still on the same layer). This one was done in two layers for example (sketch layer and everything else layer).
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Her cervix is aching from the tentacles hammering into it for 3 days.
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>>5354005
this look like shit

no offence but what up with the head and arms?
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>>5354151
care to elaborate?
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>>5354005
I think it looks great, the shading on the belly is great.
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>>5353939
Sounds like a comfy workflow, I like how the result looks
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>>5354005
>>5354180
Not that anon but looking at it the anatomy's pretty good - only mistake I can find is her left art has the elbow too high up, but it doesn't stick out. A bigger issue is a kind of... lifelessness to the piece? I mean you talked about the cervix, 3 days, etc. but I really don't feel it at all, neither from her body nor her expression or anything. Most of it stems from her head imo, the perfectly straight position facing the viewer plus nondescript expression is just kinda uncanny.
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>>5353333
thx, it's my first digital besides unfinished sketches. i don't have accounts anywhere, where should I make one? deviant art, pixiv? still a beginner on this online thing
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>>5353574
no offense dude but this looks worse
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>>5351155
Thanks guys
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>>5354190
>>5354151
it's shotashit anon, he can't draw anything but stiff, corpse-like women in their 50s
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>>5354005
looks gud to me
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I know theres tons of room for improvement but im at a point where Im not really sure how to get better from here
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>>5354784
study anatomy
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>>5354005
how do i get arms like that
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>>5354790
His anatomy is okay, even really good. If he wants a way to improve I would try to make more interesting and dynamic poses using perspective, so not every fucking drawing is just you cute slut standing up looking cute at the camera.

I really wanted to say something useful to him, but since I'm myself far from active anything remotely decent to even post it I though it would better to stay quiet, but his anatomy is fine, there is room from improvement but he would find way more success by trying what I just say...I think...
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>>5354005
Didnt know vilppu likes naruto
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>>5353330 I'm an idiot, I was looking at the wrong arm in the original post. This look better?
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I see most art here is straight so hope mine isn't some sort of no-no but I'm an amateur lewd artist and any feedback is appreciated
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>>5354848
Did you just say most of the art here is straight just bellow the big faggy kitsune and his big faggy furry friend?
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>>5354813
nah the anatomy isn't that good, spaghetti fingers, one calve is sliding to the right and the other looks like a tumor, arm holding a ''egg''? is made of jelly and the other arm's muscle instertions are fucked up, neck is way to thinn even if it's a stylization choice it makes her head look like a chibi, feets seems to be facing a direction that would be really painful to be stand on
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>>5354851
I admittedly glanced over it because at it just looks like a girl when passing it by
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>>5354863
Went through and did a more cleaned up pass hows the anatomy look so far?
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>>5354878
You going to need to draw feet at some point, anon, there is no point trying to avoid.
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>>5354901
Im planning to dedicate a whole day to it so Im not bothering yet
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Any advice on how to feel the form anons?
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>>5354929
just have sex

but really study vilppus round gesture method thats the easiest way
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>>5354913
I m planning on thinking of scheduling a day for it sometime tomorrow next year later
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>>5354949
Why are you people like this
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Is it gay if I look up pictures of wieners to learn to draw them better I don’t want to be gay
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>>5355137
Just look for women penises, still gay, considerable less gay, tho. But if you are looking for porn ultra realistic penises is not really the answer here, most penises on porn are quite stylized, you could learn from other pictures.
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>>5333382
i like this
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Did this for a frien.
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>>5355167
Another color scheme, I think I like this one better. The design itself is kinda lame, some stupid MOBA character, I don't like my stile with lipstick, but seemed an interesting challenge, should had done semirealistic style, not this more manga style.
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>>5354838
Yeah, much better! I was wondering myself why the original looked off, then I looking in the mirror to recreate the pose - and I came to the conclusion that you simply cannot bend your forearm in that direction, or at least not comfortably.
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>>5321163
any have a decent nsfw artists discord?
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>>5347830
beautiful rouge. Blog?
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>>5354838
why is there almost no hardcore stuff from you? are you afraid to post it on twitter?
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>>5354519
no it looks better.
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>>5355759
Nah, i don’t draw anything hardcore because I honestly have next to no interest in sex itself. It can be a fun challenge and I don’t have a problem drawing it but it does nothing for me personally.
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>>5355137
Super gay man, super gay.
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>>5355763
>its better because now the arm makes no sense in the perpective, the pose is sterilized, and the character has cankles
Whatever makes you feel like your redline was worth something. I'm done arguing about shotashit though, neck yourself pedo
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>>5355945
See, that's why those fucking people ant-(whatever type of art they dislike) should not be allowed around here, the faggot can't turn off his stupid redneck brain for one second to appreciate the technical aspects of someone works and acts like a little bitch on his period.

Can't you really see how much better that redline is or are you just fucking blind?
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>>5354005
You know, when I look at this picture I don't think about her suffering, it more looks like the Mr. Tentacles is the one who is out of steam.
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>>5354519
ngmi
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Could I get some feedback on this WIP?
I'm mostly looking for some direction regarding the tits, not sure if i should just leave them as minimal as possible or add more shading idk.
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>>5356365
right leg is way larger than the left, even if the left is being foreshortened
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>>5356415
I fucking knew something was off. I think it’s just the shin though, the foreshortening gives me a little flexibility with the thighs
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>>5356365
phone position looks wrong. i would change it to sth like this. Also the arm seems a bit too long
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>>5354005
make the face more realistic or the body more stylized. You are stuck in the uncanny valley right now.
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>>5356466
that wouldve looked better yeah. i need to study more hands holding common objects or make a reference set for myself with phones
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>>5356365
>>5356466
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>>5347584
Someone's a fan of gingrjoke. These look good tho, good work anon
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>>5356577
yes looks better. his other hand is not on the phone picture though.
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>>5356470
Yeah, I suspected that. Thanks for the pointer, I'll work on that.
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Recommend me a niche I can start making money off of quickly
Would slime girls be a good nice?
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Commission

>>5357156
How do I keep missing these things
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>>5358192
What's him supposed to be the twink cock-sleeve one? Looks more like Ralph with those shoulders.
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>>5358195
I don’t know the first thing about tmnt honestly, I’m going off of sprites
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>>5358286
Well, I'm not sure if that's what the commissioner asked, but if it's from the latest series he is quite small compared with the rest. I'm just finding weird because it goes more with your type of artwork.
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>>5358290
Oh I would’ve preferred that. This is what I got for reference
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>>5358300
You should talk with the guy, see what he wants. Normally people give plenty of reference material, but must be one of his firsts.
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>>5358304
Oh, wait, I just got what you meant. Lol, he probably prefer the 80's version, personally I prefer the new designs, but people can be attached to those things.
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>>5358308
He seemed pretty happy with it, the new designs seem more interesting though
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>>5358332
love your stuff lambrey. do you have any process videos?
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>>5356577
Your linework is so energetic. I dig it.
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Hi guys! does anybody know where i went wrong with making the screen tones? any critique helps here, i'm making a comic.
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>>5358820
the source material i'm copying... is this even a screen tone or not?
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>>5335572
too late now but Aamrin10

I got almost no pics so not really worth to check



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