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>What is /SALT/?

If you're looking for a place to post all sexual works, from pinups with exaggerated proportions to pornography, then this is the right general for you. Both Eastern and Western stylization can coexist peacefully here.

>Rules & Guidelines

(1) Any form of cartooning is welcome; so submit and receive feedback from others.
(2) Please resize your images below 1000x1000 before posting.
(3) Share your knowledge and
(4) Remember to not be afraid of asking for critique.
5) Remember all GB3 related content such as lolicon, shotacon, furry pornography, furry and bestiality are banned on ALL boards, including red boards, except /b and /trash.

Most importantly I encourage you to keep discussion at a civil level, but you're more than welcome to share your opinions.

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>Community Resources
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>http://www.asahi-net.or.jp/~zm5s-nkmr/
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FellowBro's Book Collection
>http://mediafire.com/?i44dwzkf9j9n8

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>http://pinterest.com/characterdesigh/
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>http://www.pixiv.net/member_illust.php?id=59317(0033)
>http://iradukai.com/

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>http://www.onairvideo.com/croquis-cafe-photos2.html
>http://www.eggazyoutatsu.net/eng/atarichan.html
>http://senshistock.com/sketch/
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I could use a second opinion on these.

1/2
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I could use a second opinion on these.

2/2
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>>5359325
Sauce on the pic? Image search yielded nothing.
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>>5359600
it's sexynomicon
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>>5359327
top part of pussy should be visible in this position and it should be visibly spread
stomach bulge looks like dick poking from below and not along vagina
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>>5359627
I still need to draw the clit hood and labia. I'll leave the bulge as it is, since I envisioned a curved penis poking at her g-spot.

Do her arms feel too short? It was mentioned and I thought so too.
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Do any of you ever feel bad about drawing sinful things?
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>>5359644
left is definitely too short, i guess right is whatever since it's hard to accurately measure it because of the bandages
also left thigh is kinda short too
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>>5359655
if i coom on one of your cheeks, will you turn the other?
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>>5359655
Do you ever feel bad for believing in retarded stuff like religion?
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>>5359731
>>5359766
How about distasteful as opposed to sinful. There's a reason coomer art is relegated to this containment thread and generally frowned upon by the decent people of /ic.
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>>5359775
"decent people of /ic" are either tumblr refugees from /co/ who hate everything that makes heterosexual man happy, stormfags who claim to fight degeneracy while praising blonde muscular men in black leather uniforms or plain retards who still can't draw after years and seethe about anyone with tiny slim of success, so yeah it makes sense it has to be contained to avoid posters like you
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>>5359775
If you think sex is distasteful, keep believing that. I can't stop you from being a narrowminded idiot.
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>>5359655
Not really but I feel weird when drawing porn of my waifu
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>>5359775
People have different sensibilities anon. I personally find "degenerate" things amusing, it's a draw for me even more than just fap-bait value (like that big-dicked TMNT from last thread, that got a good laugh out of me). At the same time, there's things that disgust me as well, perhaps even some things that other people would consider mild. All in all, as long as you're respectful to other people's sensibilities (f.eg. by posting in the containment thread here) then there's really no issue at all.
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>>5359796
Blow it out your ass, your own saltiness made you blind to the reality that exageration on a forum lacking a moral obligation to tell the truth can lead to posts like this
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I need redlining and direction on how to fix my error(s). Onegaichimachuu
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>>5359327
This would look much better without the cringe stomach bulge, also change the way she's getting choked.
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>>5359655
>>5359775
I do, personally. I feel that even if someone might not believe in a Great All-Father or his Terribly Bad Definitely Not Good Designated Antagonist, that doing this kind of stuff, bringing this kind of imagery into existence, irreparably erodes your being slowly but surely, with the added bonus of encouraging someone else's spiral into degeneracy. but I also agree a lot with >>5359859, and I think people operate differently when compartmentalizing the memories that shape their self-image. some people revel in debauchery and truly believe this is a normal part of human existence, and for them these scribbles barely register in their consciousness. others can't look themselves in the mirror without seeing some lowly creature who draws ninja turtle dicks staring back at them.

You have to remember that decency is subjective, and that most people aren't 'decent' behind closed doors. even that chaste saintly nurse who would lay down her life without a moment's hesitance for the children under her care has, on many hot and restless nights, begged her husband to absolutely rectally annihilate her to exhaustion. everyone has needs. some needs are publicly distasteful but privately innocuous. others are obsessions that overtake all rationality and melt the brain. the problem is, commissioners are more likely to have the latter than the former, which is why I think that worse than making such drawings is making them for money.

again, this is subjective. many people have zero issues whoring themselves out like this, and only see it as a straightforward transaction of skill for money. but some would find it impossible to reconcile their self-image with the fact that they draw smut for a living. fewer still go through with it anyway, maybe out of necessity. I think your question is basically asking whether this last subset of people exist, and the answer is obviously yes.
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>>5359766
you can hate both coomer "art" and religion, silly uWu
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How do I get top girl's torso/hips to look right?
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>>5360699
Diff anon, but thank you for this post. Cooler heads rarely prevail on this topic and you said it better than I could. As someone who stopped doing nsfw, It sucks to me that it has to be so contentious. Partly, the impersonal nature of it ruins it for me. Not knowing just who I'm influencing and how, And I just don't have the idgaf or dismissive attitude for it. In a way, It almost has nothing to do with the "what" it is.
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>>5360566
>This would look much better without the cringe stomach bulge
Commissioner's request.

>change the way she's getting choked.
Not sure what you mean.
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>>5360860
chocking is more like pic related, you did it as if the guy was squishing a tube of toothpaste.
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>>5360945
This is exactly the same grip I drew. The only difference is that he's holding her from the side instead of straight on and his thumb is pressing on her pharynx. Plus his hand is huge compared to her troath, because of size difference.
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>>5360748
considering that you're already copying reference photos, I say try to follow them more accurately
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booba
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>>5360699
>the problem is, commissioners are more likely to have the latter than the former, which is why I think that worse than making such drawings is making them for money.
yeah, but that's their problem, not yours. it's not your job to protect people from what they want because what they want might harm them. so fuck em.
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>>5359775
>generally frowned upon by the decent people of /ic
which kind? "decent people" who think the answer to the problems in the world is "everyone be nice to each other" or "decent people" who are actually /pol/ browsing maniacs?
do i even have to say it? fuck them either way. what's in their head is pebbles
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>>5359775
>decent people
>/ic/
>4chan
>internet
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>>5361007
Her shirt is a lot longer in the reference, covering where the hip flare starts, and her hips are narrower than I want to draw in any case. But I guess I'll just find a different woman in the same pose to check.
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>>5359327
Remove the incel fantasy bulge and its perfect.
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>>5361615
Your taste is irrelevant, sorry.
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>>5359327
Would be good if not for that bulge
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I'm having someone being fish hooked from behind and need a background but can't think of a reliable scenario of why people would have sex, aside from putting a bed which I find boring
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excuse me where do I learn to draw cocks
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>>5359327

do you have a twitter?
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>>5359775
how the fuck did we come to a point on 4chan where people like you are allowed to unironically post.
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>>5360566
>>5361615
>>5361937
Nice samefagging bulge hater.
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I edited this for for paheal
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>>5361322
Like
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how about this one?
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>>5361322
arm too short
hand too small
ass too flat
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>>5359775
>coomer art is relegated to this containment thread and generally frowned upon by the decent people of /ic/
what? non-coomers are the minority
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still having trouble with the face, and the body is a bit wonky
but im getting there
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>>5362253
@bbcchanart
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Do you guys know of any website to post your pics and gain more traction for your Twitter/Pixiv?

The only one that I know is rule 34,and someone recomended me reddit,but I'm not really sure about that.
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How do you add soul to your coom art?

This was more of a practice pic I did for fun, but I'm wondering how I could give it some more personality. Sort of a line between slutty and in a loving relationship. And at the same time, make it look like believable fellatio.

Only solutions in my mind are solely porny. I wanna add some eroticism to it.
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>>5364264
Take things like gesture and expression into considering. His eyes are kinda just creepily open and hes laying there in space
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>>5364275
Yeah, I was trying to have him eye the top, but the head might need more upward tilt to establish the contact. Also intended to have the two hands grasping the edge of a couch/divan, I think the perspective might be off though.

I guess it's an element of submission I'm thinking of. Kind of contrasting with the male ideals of domination, but also in an emotional way? I'mma need to do some research...
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>>5364290
You should study some gay japanese porn. The good artists excell at conveying expression
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>>5364300
Got any specific names? My first thought is Mentaiko, but I wanna see how some others do it.
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>>5364333
Not really since I dont look at yaoi but ill start you off with a link. Just dig around the site for gay and you'll find stuff you might like
https://danbooru.donmai.us/posts?tags=aus_vaka
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>>5362976
Whats wrong with her traps covering her shoulders and the small skull, long nose and the eyes being too far apart ijn the face
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>>5364480
I suppose that's a sweater, not the artist though it but even colored looks odd.
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>>5364484
Even if thats a sweater, the form of the traps covering the shoulders is there
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>>5359327
There is something about the way his hand is wrapped around her neck that doesnt sit right with me. It looks like he wants to draw her head closer to him or just holds the neck lightly rather that choke her or pin her down or something, unless that is what you were going for. I cant find a good reference for that angle but i hope this image sort of explains it.
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>>5365123
Image i talked about
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>>5359850
Kek
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>>5362233
doxy has ok stuff

>https://prismblush.com/penis-basics/

scroll down for the readable image
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give me crits on this please, anatomy and gesture mainly, it's meant to be this wuya character teasing with her nails while tiddyfuckin.
also give me some input, I'm trying to change up my workflow, sketch, rough render with multiply to help place features and feel the form, and then line it again. it feels a bit wasteful though putting this effort in just to trace over it, especially when I prefer this sketcher style over super clean lineart. would it be better to try to refine what I've got here and add some plane turning hatching, detailing etc? what do your workflows look like?
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>>5359325
Any advice on drawing the upper female torso without the breasts? I seem to never get it right
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>>5361322
dude socials?
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>>5365986
You should give the boobs some proper physics. Right now they look like balls glued to her torso.
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>>5365986
the right hand should be pointing to the camera instead of pointing inward like your drawing suggested
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>>5362233
I'm more interested in how to draw some good cum. I was looking at a picture of a bunny girl jerking off her huge dick with her tits and the way her cum oozed down her cock and kinda stuck to her face was really good. But where the fuck do you even begin to start deconstructing it? I'd post it but people would get mad for furry.
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>>5359327
>>5359328
Blows me away that bbcchan posts here.
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I hate hands. I hate braids. I hate that I did this to myself.
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>>5366773
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>>5366781
This is good, thank you. At the top it says to reference it, but a lot of the really absurd cumshots are completely unrealistic. Where would I find refs for that? I guess I should just look at a bunch of porn artists and look for cum that appeals to me and try to work with it. Not sure why I'm worrying about this now when I have so much other important stuff to work on.
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>>5366776
I did some more work. I wish I could let myself care less about the line work but here we are.
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>>5366860
Great work on the hands, those thighs are looking very juicy too, but I gotta tell you man that face is looking a little creepy. I think maybe showing a little eye lid so she's resting her eyes a bit would help. Her face is draw too simply like an oval, try to add some indication of bone structure on the chin and cheekbones, it can be subtle and will add a more natural feel. not sure about the nose/nostrils but it may work out once you get to shading. and finally the lips are symbol drawn so they give off this uncanny valley vibe when everything else is looking more dynamic and realistic
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>>5366935
Thanks for the input, Anon. I changed the lips because they were pretty thin and didn't put enough time into it, clearly.
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>>5366938
Did some quick tweaks but I have to go to work now so will have to continue tomorrow. Is this better, though?
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>>5366992
don't hesitate to save the face onto a separate layer and redraw the whole thing, the minor tweaks haven't helped much imo. think about what kinda influence you want your work to look like, what kinda stylised faces you like and give it your take on copying them. the face is still very oval and needs and indication of a jaw, cheek bones etc or it just looks like a droopy mass.
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>>5359327
>>5359328
OH DUDE!
I jack off to your art all the time.
Nice job.
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> Have a nsfw account to post nudes/ecchi stuff.
> Wanted to post something after weeks of inactivity but I dont have any inspiration right now.
>I want to consult art friends from discord for ideas but I also dont want to be associated as coomer brain.

How do I find artists who are willing to discuss ero stuff without getting too cringe?
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>>5367027
cringe
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>>5367027
>imagine some dude during the Renaissance going up and saying that to a sculptor or painter that did a lot of nude figures
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Help
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>>5367133
They probably did that, but with a lot more verbosity.
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>>5367027
Keep it up. Pun intended.

<3
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How do you draw horse balls?
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>>5367760
look at pictures of horse balls dipshit
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>>5367114
might as well try those friends from discord. Most likely they too are coomer brain.
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>>5367114
Why not make fan art or just general ideas you like? There’s a thousands of other books, shows, videos etc to watch and fuel that inspiration. Even others artwork
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>>5360860
Do not listen to these retards, the bulge is fucking sexy. Commissioner's request or not I hope you keep drawing them.
>>5360566
>>5361615
>>5361937
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>>5360860
>>5360968
I think I get what the anon is trying to say. In your picture, it doesn't appear like the traditional way to choke someone, where you have your palm on the front of the throat, and you squeeze the sides of the neck. What you drew looks more like he's straight up trying to kill her by collapsing her throat instead of asphyxiating.

Also the bulge is hot and I love your work. Are you ever gonna draw more of that futa cow and brown elf?
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>>5367760
Google images of horse genitalia. If anyone looks at your search history, you'll be able to be honest and tell them it's for art :^)
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>>5367971
How the heck do I get better at drawing overlapping forms like this
I'm getting so bored and frustrated with my own art
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>>5359327
Does the girl want to be choked or not? The hand wrapped around his arm, facial expression, and limp body are giving me mixed messages. If she's lost all her body strength trying to fight back, I'd think both arms would be limp. Could've been comm'ers request though.
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>>5368087
I don't think the hand resting on his arm suggests struggle. If it suggested struggle, the form of the fingers would be much more stiff. It looks to me she's just trying to feel his arm muscle because she is clearly enjoying being choked.
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>>5367971
I understand the critique about the guy's hand, yeah. I drew his hand like that, cause I wanted to make it look like he's doing it effortlessly, to emphasize the size difference even more. I guess it doesn't come across like that. I'm going to change it.

>Are you ever gonna draw more of that futa cow and brown elf?
I will still draw them from time to time, but the comics aren't going to continue.
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>>5368087
I didn't get any specifics about the consensuality, but I tried to draw it as if she's enjoying it, while still being on the verge of getting unconscious (ahegao and tears).
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>>5368318
I get what you were going for with it. It's like he is holding her neck like a broomhandle or something. I think the confusion is just coming from it not being what is usually shown in choking porn.
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>>5365231
and just like that all soul is gone.how can I improve this?
>>5359328
this is the kinda style I'm gunning for eventually. a cleaned up lively sketch rather than the sterile linework. i worship the bbc
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nsfw bros this general has been too slow for me, where do you go for some viable crits and a nice mix of artists? I need a sense of community
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>>5369039
I want to know this as well. Where are some coom discords where nsfw artists hang out and swap techniques on drawing cum
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Damn this is looking kinda hot now ngl.
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New to this, sorry for /beg/ tier cringe, this was a comission.

Thoughts welcome, I have a LOT to learn, not just abut technique
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>>5369059
There's a weird tangent with the shoulder on the left side of the image. The way the hair covers the book makes it look like that's just the shale of her body and the hair is in the background, but that's my opinion
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>>5369059
the lips need work, you could probably lose some of the lines, lips don't have hard edges all the way around like that, those look like a sticker right now
the eyes look a little dead and don't fit the rest of her, at least pop some highlights on them for some life
not sure if you're done with the shading but having hard edges on the left side then soft on the right side of the face is a little jarring, same for right hand vs right shoulder just above it
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>>5369059
You did a good job on the left hand, but the right hand needs work. Also the shading on her nose needs work too. There isn't any volume there. I like the braid design and the fat on the thighs. Keep up the hard work on it.
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>>5369065
Will work on the boob on our left/her right. Thanks for pointing that out.

>>5369086
Shading is very much a work in progress. I'm heading off for the night and wanted to get feedback on what I've done today. Thanks for all the advice. :)

>>5369092
Thanks, Anon. That right hand (I assume you mean our right, her left?) has been an absolute ball ache but I think it might be better once the shading is in. As it is now it does look very weird.
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>>5359325
So does this artist actually post here or was it a random pic? It's heckin hot
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Anyone mind helping me with legs in general? Maybe to understand them more or what trick helps you construct them. I know my drawing has a lot of problems but I’d like to focus on the legs for now
I’ve done a few studies in the past of legs, not in pic related those are just quick stuff I did because I’m frustrated but, I feel I end up drawing them too chunky looking when it’s a side goes, and the perspective gets really wonky when the character is kneeling, I try mapping out the ground but still can’t get it because I keep messing up the orientation of the knee. I really like how some artists draw stronger angular kneels and more shapely legs. I also draw figures from reference almost every day but when it’s time to do a drawing that relies less on reference, it feels apart in some areas
Maybe the only answer is to draw a lot more legs with good reference
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>>5369494
Here's the ref of the feet btw
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>>5369497
Anon bls I'm looking for help not shitposting
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made this one a while ago
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>>5369062
dawns face in panel 2 is unironically funnier than the pikachu's face
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>>5359325
The one on the left is so hot. More?
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>>5369805
agreed, I tried to copy both from hetai reference and the original image. I bloated her cheeks to look like she's choking like the original image but took the eyes and moth from the some hentai, but between my extremel poor resolution and my shitty linework it came out really sloppy. I think it gets the point across but it's definetly not sexy
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this general is so dead wtf I thought ic was all about porn and coomers
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>>5370335
fuckin nice, followed
>>5369511
looking great but I'm not sure about how that vagina looks, or the angle of insertion, the tentacle should be going in from a lower angle and pointing towards her belly button
>>5368445
I've gone and changed the pose a bit last minute, do you guys think this works better? I can't get the boobas to look squished right
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>>5370303
Very little critique goes around too
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Any advice on drawing nipples?
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I feel like I've done all I can with this, but I wanna know if there's anything you guys particularly like or dislike.
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>>5370350
I post at least once a day giving some constructive crit but most of the thread 'action' comes from either ripping on or worshipping the extremely bad or extremely good, everything in between largely gets ignored. I really need to find some kind of discord or even a forum for nsfw art crits
>>5370357
Good job finishing this up, the hands are very dynamic and the colours you chose for the skin are really nice. I would just recommend some practice drawing faces with ref to get a better grip on proportions and the forms, and some value studies focusing on cast shadows, shadow shapes and hard vs soft edges
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>>5370386
Yeah, trying to force an anime face into a more realistic style was a mistake. I still can't decide whether to relearn to draw weeb shit or not.

And yeah I intend to spend the next little while just learning to do a bunch of the things I did here quicker, including the shading etc.
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What do you guys draw when you are tired?
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>>5370405
I usually doodle. Sometimes I'll play around with brushes or layer settings, sometimes I'll practice eyes or hands, and sometimes I'll just treat the canvas like my highschool maths books.
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>>5370405
Blog?
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Working on my next drawing at the moment. Concept art focusing on brapness. I'm forcing myself to try and draw one finished work a day to improve fast. Setting deadlines to stop that laziness
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>>5370434
no blog just draw
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At what point does coom art become actually coomable?
I can never seem to get any sort of good appeal going for any of my drawings, not to mention getting fast enough to even think about rolling out commissions
I could clean and clean and I still won't end up satisfied, so what am i missing?
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>>5370522
Mileage pure and simple, you just need the experience. Frustrating yeah but just grind the hours out,
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>>5370346
went back to the first pose, gonna fix some shit and call it finished, any crits?
>>5365231
it looked better here
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>>5369494
you are in the wrong thread. go to /beg/
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I made another edit, mainly in the vagina area, which one is better?
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>>5371078
I think aesthetically I prefer the right, but the left makes more sense with the pose you've done here, I think.
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>>5370357
If you want to be a coomer artist, please spend time to study anatomy properly. The right shoulder looks disconnected af.
Your lineart is too thick and it makes the drawing even uglier.
The overlay/hardlight on thigh overexposed the drawing, which makes it very unpleasant to look at.
Stop using softbrush on everything, it doesnt cover your weakness at rendering.
The biggest advice is stop asking for critique at every stage of your process, people are only interested at the end result and dont care about wips. You yourself should be the primary critique for your work. Go look at some proper art and get an abstract idea on why each piece looks good.
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What’s wrong with my art and why is it bad?
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>>5371078
havent you literally been making slight edits to this image for like over a year now?
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>>5371534
You should try making full polished images. Take your time.
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>>5371456
I'd say it's mostly about your bad taste. Landwhales aren't pleasant to look at.
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>>5371534
Calfs are broken, balls and dick base are too low on the thighs.
But most of all
>>5371542
THIS
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>>5366992
I feel like the pinky on her left hand is folded inward at an unnatural degree of motion. I think the final joint of each finger to the finger tip is too long of a length for many fingers. Lastly I thing the middle, ring, and pinky on her right hand are 'floating' - disconnected from her palm.
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>>5366992
>>5371585
All the best though; I like a lot of the lines including the braids.
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>>5371453
The over-exposure is taken directly from my reference; I actually toned it down in the end because it hurt to look at. I used softbrush on the basic shading and highlights because it looks more pleasant than what I was doing before. I'm still finding a balance which is why I'm asking for advice.

And okay, I'll stop posting as many Works in Progress; I got more input for the final product anyway. As I've not drawn anything even remotely coom for the past 10 years I wanted to be sure I was heading in a more-or-less correct direction.
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>>5371672
post your reference so we can tell you what went wrong in the translation process
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>>5371680
Ah, good idea.
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>>5370357
>>5371681
Shit I just noticed someone photoshopped her shoulder. No wonder it looks janky to you guys.

Aw fuck I'm so retarded.
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>>5371750
I really just liked the pose and didn't focus in closely enough to notice the (now very obvious) shooped shoulder.

Thanks for the tips, though. Definitely gonna look a little closer at any image I decide to take inspiration from.
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>>5371682
protip: do NOT use nips for reference
japs fucking photoshop everything into amorphous blobs and perfect protractor-drawn curves, likely because their brains are fried from all the beg-tier weebshit anatomy that they're raised on from fetal stage onwards
bodies look like silicone fuckdolls with zero anatomical landmarks (perhaps a good thing if that's the look you're going for)
if you're going to use japs, go for screencaps instead. and marvel at how different the squeaking muppet looks compared to her JAV photoset

>>5371755
I wanted to add, but you already responded: look at the ABSOLUTE BEG-TIER WEEBSHIT anatomy of that cleavage. forget the shoulder, her entire body is fucked all the way to her circular ass.
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>>5371759
Yeah, I keep seeing new problems that I can't believe I didn't notice before. Even the over-exposure is (at least partially) an attempt to hide the editor's meddling.

I feel so fucking stupid now. Holy shit.
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>>5371769
your eyes get sharper with exposure. look at that retarded anime chin too, completely deleted and makes no sense with respect to the direction her face is pointing
even her pupils are cartoon sized, which should come as no surprise. her left pupil is so large it's sticking past her lower eyelid and taking some sclera with it
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>>5371769
>can't believe I didn't notice before.
You are a beg tier tracer. Stop pretending that you know more than you actually do.
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>>5371769
You're as /beg/ as they come. There's no need to try and save face, it's normal to be this bad starting out.
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>>5371781
Yeah I did wonder why I had so much trouble not making her face look like a breast with eyes and a mouth. I kept going back to the reference and expecting it to make sense.

>>5371782
Pic related. I can notice shit after the fact and still be a bad artist. And I don't trace but I do compare my linework to my reference to know where tweaks might be needed. Every line is drawn away from the photo, however.

>>5371791
See above. I know I am bad but I'm not "starting out" and I am not saving face. I have flaws and am quite clearly admitting to them.
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>>5371769
I should add, I have to agree with the other guy with regards to jumping directly to tracing for easy coombucks. exposure is one thing but the best way to train your eyes is by actually learning anatomy and perspective. all the photoshop errors stuck out as immediately and glaringly in the reference as they did in your finished piece.

I would rather trust my own judgement than rely on the model's wonky anatomy/amateur photographer angles/photoshopping interference.
I dunno, people have different priorities and maybe you desperately need the quickest road to coomer funds. but it's a low ceiling.
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anyone else here just autistic as shit?
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>>5371807
Not tracing, but I suppose it's similar enough. For anything I'm not used to drawing - like a sexy lady sitting in a moderately seductive pose - I use references quite heavily just to save time and energy.

>>5371817
Me! Me! I am!
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>>5371794
never mind, you say you didn't trace. still, it will help a lot to sharpen your understanding of anatomy/proportions before spending all your time polishing and signing a terminally defective piece.
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>>5371821
Cheers. I'll do that and come back with something truly sexy and coom-worthy.
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>>5371817
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>>5369059
>that monkey face
>hot
Anon if you're gonna draw anime, use an anime face as a reference and not a 3d one to try and convert to anime.
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>>5371887
Yeah I have since come to hate nearly everything about that drawing. I did play around with the nose a bit after posting but the image is too fucked to save at this point.

I have a whole bunch to learn still.
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>>5371534
I actually like the finish of this. but yeah the calves are broken and the skirt belt rounds too much
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>>5371889
I've be there too where you get rose tinted glasses over your drawing and don't see the flaws until you post it. best thing to do is not get too precious about your drawings no matter what stage you're at and either start over, or make a new layer and draw a new version you like better. keep iterating to maximise gains basically
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>>5371817
The pixie's head being proportioned like a regular adult human is rather uncanny
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>>5371907
Aye, cheers. I'll perhaps re-attempt that drawing a few weeks/months from now and see if I've improved any in that time.
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>>5371759
Hey listn here buddy, don't you ever-- an i mean fuckin ever talk shit about my slant eyed sideways slit gook girls asshole or i'll fuckin turn you into an amorphous blob and turn your anus into a perfect protractor drawn reenaction of a Francis Bacon if he painted Goatse
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>>5371085
Thanks.
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Half of these images belong in /beg/
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>>5372347
you reckon thats why it's it's dead here? nobudehs postan anyen
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>>5372347
Won't people get mad if you just fill up /beg/ with a bunch of porn, though?
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>>5362976
Face had no form
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>>5372433
cute tummy
>>5372508
I like them lines, super simple and effective
>>5372790
face looks adorable now and the boobas look great

was looking for crits on this, someone's muscle girl OC but the torso especially looks off. I'll be adding more muscle definition with rendering
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>>5367027
kek, based
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>>5372508
What pen? Super nice
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Man, the stuff on this thread is so good I'm almost scared to post my own.
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>>5372797
I think it's something to do with the perspective that you're not taking into account. POV seems to be from below horizon, but the way you drew her makes it look like she's being looked at from above, giving off that weird feeling you have about the torso.
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>>5372790
Diggin this biggly, good work anon.
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I got a little sloppy with this one at the end. I don't have the patience to commit to one piece for too long.
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>>5373724
Wow thanks, a futa SoB

I hate it
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>>5372347
most of the good coom artists pissed off to other places, so now it's mostly /beg/s trying to 'make it' by tracing pornhub screenshots and copying other artists.

One of the most depressing threads on the board, honestly.
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>>5373091
I can't nail the pose at all, I'm not selling the hunched over towards the viewer perspective. also the torso looks really short in comparison. attached the ref
>>5373724
I can only see the thingy on the strap that doesn't fully follow the form and looks like it's stabbing her on the peen. everything else is super shapely and smooth as ever, I hope I can get my forms to be as soft and squishy as that
>>5373084
so am I but you best get used to being open to crits and whatnot, though they're a bit rare here. if you wanted some for this I'd add more of her arm going behind the headrest, add some definition to her toes and maybe re-line some parts cause it looks weird to me having both a hard edged fine line and the blurry thick line. keep posting we need more art in this general
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yeah i know i kinda dont fit in here
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>>5359325
I'm doing a strip of 5 images

My question is,what's better social media wise ; posting each one individually or wait to tweet them together in one?
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>>5374249
Copy Merryweatherya format https://twitter.com/Merryweatherey
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>>5374108
>>5374108
Have you tried tracing over the main shapes in the reference (or just eyeing it as close as you can) and then comparing them to the main shapes in your drawing? That might give you a hint of what's going on. It's what I would do, regardless.

Also, I'm the same anon from the futa drawing. Thank you for the crit! I don't think I'll be going over that piece again but I'll take it into account for future pieces. The thing is I want to keep the lineart sketchy-looking, but I haven't found the correct balance yet, so I'm still trying stuff out.
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>>5371472
Blog?
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>>5374118
Interesting choice of brush, anon.
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>want to redraw pic related character
>no idea what past me was going for with that hair
What should I go with instead?
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>>5374548
>orange slice in her pussy
[spoiler]>that one conversation from The Ricky Gervais Show[/spoiler]
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>>5374315
Yeah I'm going with it
Dividing it like that looks pretty good for Twitter
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>>5374340
I've been struggling trying to fix it and this has really helped, fuck that's clever thank you
and same here I wanna evolve to being able to clean up a sketch and preserve some of the expression rather than get rid of it and add some sterile linework, cause I'm shit at it and would prefer a more painterly style, cliché choices but kinda like sexyrobutts' or bbc
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Someone keeps reporting me and mods keep banning me
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>>5374713
think you got the wrong thread frend
good shit tho
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depression regression
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>>5374743
big mouth would be a nice play on words
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>>5374764
bro it was supposed to be wide mouth wendy you can see in the file name

im just so fucking tired
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>>5374743
Imagine getting all dick flavours shoved in your mouth at once be like...
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>>5375257
Ive been obsessed with oral lately idk
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>>5375316
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>>5375318
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>>5375257
>imagine being a faggot
no
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Drew Karin (or Karen?) from Angel Blade. Never found proper fanart of the character, so I made my own.
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Did this one some time ago, I'm still trying to find a comfortable way to paint
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>>5376523
Did this get good reviews on whatever soc media you posted it on?
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>>5359766
go back reddit atheist.
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>>5376523
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>>5359325
Pretty nice OP, does anybody has sauce?
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>>5377030
nips lookin sus
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>>5377045
A M I N G U S
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>>5377012
Kys, brainwashed imbecile.
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>>5377249
No wonder your art sucks. You don't believe in the soul.
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>>5372797
this is difficult, does it look believable or have any appeal? Idk if I should just make the rendering super soft and subtle instead
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>>5377365
Rendering is like the last problem that should be tackled in this image. The whole girl is messed up. From shoulders to arms, to hands, to legs. And if you are actually using the left image as ref you should be able to see it.
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>>5377365
You need to fix your values. They're compressed and not in an area that looks good.

Pick your dark, mid, and light tones and place them next to your art. Look at how close they are.
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>>5377923
This but also post ref pls :P
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>>5377923
>>5378076
thank you both, I still haven't got the pose or anatomy quite right but ill have to call it around here or I'll never post it. I'm coming back to it in a couple of days with fresh eyes but this already looks better to me, much appreciated
>>5378305
coming up champ
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>>5378345
>>5378305
nvm I posted it earlier >>5374108
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>>5378345
Those values are looking much better now. You could stil push those darks darker. I recommend you try to learn how to do value keying, where you pick what value ranges youll be using on each focal point or fg/bg area of a piece before you start putting in the values. Value keying is very valuable and will help you overcome your problem, also it helps set the mood.
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>>5375320
heyy thats pretty cool. where else do you post your stuff?
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>>5374743
Blog?
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>>5378644
>>5378975
having difficulties right now maintaining social media presence but you can find me at Twitter.com/Honeybot
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>>5377321
No wonder your art sucks even more. You believe in retarded shit like soul. NGMI.
Btw, I already made it. Now pelase seethe, religious dumbass.
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>>5362976
blog? it's cute
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Can I get a critique?
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>>5379954
Shit
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>>5380451
Noice rendering m8
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>>5380503
Get your eyes checked, beglet.
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>>5380613
Roighto then.
>>5380451
Nice two tones there, m8
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>>5380451
>>5380503
samefagging
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>>5380635
Last post to defend Phat tits study.png
go fuck yourself
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>>5380646
You begs should die of cancer.
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>>5380695
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Can't get slammed for rendering if I don't render
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>>5381091
But I can slam you for that stiff ass pose, nigga
the hands are nice tho
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>>5381091
Pretty good. Got a blog to follow?

I think the straight spit and hair drop doesnt go well with the dynamism in the drawing but other than that the composition is fine.
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>>5381005
What are you even trying to accomplish? You are defending a fucking sub par beg drawing and calling the rendering good. Get a better critical eye instead of posting screenshots, brainlet.
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>>5381091
>I can't get slammed
>That fucking hair
>That fucking stiff pose
Lel
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>>5381187
I think they are literally statues.
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>>5381356
>>5381187
Yeah now that's a weird fetish huh
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>>5381459
I've seen too much fanart of Asuka pegging Ugandan Knuckles while milk shoots out her tits to think this is very weird. Pretty tame. Almost wholesome, really.
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>>5379954
kinda looks like you're too focused on drawing individual muscles and not enough on the basics of gesture and line of action
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>>5374723
Looks neat. Is that Kat from Gravity Rush?
Blog?
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>>5374572
Can you post the strip version in a bigger resolution, please?
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>>5365346
https://twitter.com/deooxido i'm late lul
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>>5361322
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>>5381800
>American sized
>condoms look like shit
come on man at least get the condom packaging right those are simple squares
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Plot twist: pussy is a weapon and he's the "real" slave
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>>5381657
Here
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I would appreciate a second opinion on this
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>>5382412
Is the one slapping her a shota? The hand is really small.
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>>5382421
thank you, i had a feeling it was off haha
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>>5382412
Umm sweatie isnt Squiggly like 13?
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>>5368445
idk what you're talking about, this looks fucking great
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Hello /ic/, sorry if I'm too /beg/ for this thread but whatever. I'm trying to do some fanart of Gigawix's demon boy. Anyone mind showing me how I can improve the face and dick before I start cleaning up the sketch? I feel like I know what kind of changes I need to make when I do the lines for the rest of it (tail, cloth bunching pretty much everywhere, etc.) but I don't do a lot of human faces or uncut pps.

References are
https://twitter.com/gigawix/status/1390302174668722188
https://twitter.com/gigawix/status/1389571779304304658
The idea is that he's pinning his dick, which popped out the leg of his panties, down with the front of the maid dress from one of the refs. (I'll add some text and rearrange the angles and such later.)
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>>5361367
>earth
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Does this look ok? I always think the line art looks ok but then when I color everything becomes muddy and nasty. I havent even started coloring and I was just wondering if my unfinished lineart was ok. Im sorry if this is worded weirdly, its early where I am and my brain isnt really working lol
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>>5382881
>>>/beg/
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>>5382929
Shut up bitch

>>5382881
No
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>>5382966
Absolute state of /ic/
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Any feedback on this?
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>>5382580
Don't be gay.
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>>5382583
thanks man, I still think it's shit, but I'm always too cynical and that's why I end up taking so long finishing anything
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>>5382412
fantastic forms, except for the hand on the left, it looks a bit like a claw and not as dynamic as the right one
except for a couple of rare apparitions this general doesn't have people above your skill level to give you viable crits
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>>5383253
Thank you, and yeah that was my attempt at her bony hand, I agree it could use some work.
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>>5374511
You just mogged that poor soul
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>>5359325
Can someone clean those white pixels artifacts around each characteR?
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>>5381091
I'll join the others in saying this is pretty stiff, would work good as a statue though
could have this thing lying around in your garden
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What do you think?
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Am I worthy to be one with the COOM?
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>>5382808
if you wanna have the dick being pushed down you gotta make it more apparent the front of the apron/dress is in contact with it.

As an aside, you've made the whole torso a bit too long and skinny, I suggest practicing proportions and figures a bit more. Good face though anon.

shitty redline 1/2
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>>5384086
>>5382808
Shitty redline 2/2

I think you've got at least something to work with anon, just keep studying how bodies and skeletons are put together and function and you'll be able to make better 3D figures.
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>>5384086
>>5384088
Thanks anon, it's late but I'll try to go over it again with your notes tomorrow.
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how do you draw this haircut from the side?
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>>5380635
>>5380695
>>5381180
What's wrong with you guys btw
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>Try to draw porn
>Never use references because I'm a fucking moron
>"Gee, why does this look so awkward?"
>Put the pen down and don't attempt drawing again for another week
Happens every time. Guess there's just too much cum in my brain for me to think straight.
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>>5359325
I hardly draw anime stuff but I work on it now and again, I'd like to broaden my commission repertoire. Any critique? Note: She's sitting on something soft, her butt is sinking in a bit - hence the line overlapping it. My background rough wasn't worth including yet.
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>>5384223
Can you post your anime then? Your japanese animation
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>>5384227
Oh whatever, everyone IRL just calls it anime and we both know it.
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>>5384223
looks fine, just need more work in some places, like the hair, making good looking hair takes a little of time so dont worry about that, just keep practicing and eventually is gonna come up
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>>5384235
Thanks anon. I'm with you on the hair. I think I can do new lines on the whole head / hair and salvage the body. Glad the hair coloring is its own layer stack.
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>>5360748
Top one is actually the beat one. Learn to use proper construction first

https://youtu.be/gpH8T2CRlLI
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How's my art?
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>>5384385
Potential, but that left hand is jank and so is her pelvic region.
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>>5384088
you drew the skeleton, does anyone actually do that? It seems maybe unnecessary, but pretty great for redlining/teaching
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>good, bad, recommendations
>>5384629
proportions and anatomy look good but
it's very boring and flat
push values and stylise a little
>>5384385
cute face, body is okay
hands and lower body need reference, hair is flat
study some pics to improve rendering (cast shadows, hard v soft edges) and anatomy
>>5384223
nice shapes on the rendering,
body looks a little too realistic for manga and the head is too long
/asg/ for anime studies, gesture drawing to relieve the slightly stiff pose
>>5384117
with reference! great dynamic hands
>>5384093
interesting concept, I think? her face is very expressive
not sure about the proportions though, the guys pose is a little awkward
finish it!
>>5384035
nice colours, you have some base understanding of form and clothing folds but
they are still very underdeveloped, get some ref and do studies of similar poses. that camel toe looks like it's bulging out due to the rendering. also watch out for making brush strokes that are too even, it makes the body look too geometric and the shading pillowy
do some value studies of figures using only 2 values, then add a third. clothing studies too
>>5383983
good cartoony style, anatomy not too bad but
the right hand and wrist are broken, same for abdomen and pelvis. head looks huge too but you could get away with a 'stylistic' choice
anatomy studies!
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>>5374614
on personal taste i'd like her more with a slightly smaller bust without nipples but this is good :)
Those thighs are spot on tho
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How do I get less shit at backgrounds?
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>>5385004
Draw tonnes of scenery. Alla Prima book would be a great start to get on backgrounds.
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>>5385004
I'd say use references to start... if backgrounds weren't always my weakness
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>>5385054
>>5385074
Good advice. Cheers, fellas.
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>>5385004
Don't do backgrounds in a different style than the character as it distracts from the character

furthermore, you also have to measure if the background is really necessary. In a lot of cases, it isn't and distracts from the focus of the image. if it isn't serving a narrative purpose than it isn't serving a purpose at all

generally, I'd say focus on creating appealing shapes moving forward. There's a lot of strangeness happening with her pussy and her right arm that makes it feel like you traced it. I don't care if you did or didn't, it's just something you rarely want to convey. I'd also say knock it off with the hard black outlines altogether, or at least keep it consistent with the inside of the body too, but I also want to add that consistent black line outlines aren't my style so if its what you want to go with do your thing
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>>5385156
Thanks for the tips, Anon, those are greatly appreciated.
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How do you make the pounding seems moving and powerful? Here's my take on it but I dont think its good enough.
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>>5385182
Could add some directional blur to the parts that are moving the fastest, maybe?
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>>5385182
I dunno, I think you've done a good job here conveying the movement of the powerful thrusts. The breasts are bouncing extremely plus you have all those action lines that help convey the intense motion.
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>>5384638
redline dude here, I personally draw the skeleton so there's something "concrete" holding my characters up, it gives me guidelines on what I should and shouldn't do for certain poses or positions. It isn't really necessary, but it can help make your figures feel more solid when used right.
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>>5385182
pick the color of their skin, pick a brush with size pressure and 100% opacity, draw sideways Ms on the edge of their bodies going outside
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>>5385004
Try tracing those as well.
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>>5385185
I dislike blurs, its look artificial
>>5385306
I think I get you mean, rather than use black or white colour actionline, we use their skin colour?
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>>5382808
Changed up the stance a bit and foreshortened the dick, it's still pretty messy (think I need to pull the hands up on the left and adjust the stance on the right) but it's probably a better base to work from. Thanks for the help!
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a little ankha
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I tried a weird angle, I'm afraid it looks wonky though
>>5385451
what a surprise!! thanks for drawing my demon, looking forward to the final product :D
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>>5385640
The orc girl's feet are too big for this angle.
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>>5385640
Oh shit I didn't know you posted here, now I actually gotta finish it! On your pic I think it's the perspective on the dude below the shoulders and the sword that are mostly off in relation to the other figures, but I suck at perspective.
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>>5385640
How come with loli everyone loses their shit but straight shota gets a pass?
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>>5386810
In this case it's probably because of the size difference between humans and orcs. And no, shota doesn't get a pass. It's both pedophile garbage that is not allowed on ic. But mentally ill people gotta mentally ill of course.
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A work in progress. I'm trying to be more interesting with my lines.
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>>5385451
blog?
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>>5385182
penis bigger
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thoughts on this rendering? I want to be commission worthy but I don't know what the fuck I'm doing
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>>5388036
The rendering is not the weak point of this
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help with this pose? redline is ok.
i just need general pointers in making this perspective and stuff look better ahh ;__;
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>>5388052
what am I doing wrong? I just want to improve
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>>5388057
personally i think this looks fine, dont worry too hard. hips are a bit too rounded imo
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>>5386850
she looks like she has fetal alcohol syndrome, her lower eye lids are too droopy. give her sharper, more downward-facing eyes. also her head looks huge in general, and so does the hand holding her phone



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