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Previous thread: >>5402347

>What is /SALT/?

If you're looking for a place to post all sexual works, from pinups with exaggerated proportions to pornography, then this is the right general for you. Both Eastern and Western stylization can coexist peacefully here.

>Rules & Guidelines

(1) Any form of cartooning is welcome; so submit and receive feedback from others.
(2) Please resize your images below 1000x1000 before posting.
(3) Share your knowledge and
(4) Remember to not be afraid of asking for critique.
(5) Remember all GB3 related content such as lolicon, shotacon, furry pornography, furry and bestiality are banned on ALL boards, including red boards, except /b and /trash.

Most importantly I encourage you to keep discussion at a civil level, but you're more than welcome to share your opinions.

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>Community Resources
Hitokaku Index
>http://www.asahi-net.or.jp/~zm5s-nkmr/
List of active livestreams
>Use twitch #art
>yoshikadu2011https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCUx5dpO6d5gQ4KWNPc24CKw

FellowBro's Book Collection
>http://mediafire.com/?i44dwzkf9j9n8

Tutorial & Reference Collection
>http://pinterest.com/characterdesigh/
Japanese Tutorials & Documentary
>http://www.pixiv.net/member_illust.php?id=59317(0033)
>http://iradukai.com/

References
>http://www.onairvideo.com/croquis-cafe-photos2.html
>http://www.eggazyoutatsu.net/eng/atarichan.html
>http://senshistock.com/sketch/
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>>5438206
>/beg/ quality op
>meanwhile /beg/
>>5435580
Embarrassing.
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>>5438209
If you think amount of details = quality or skills, then you are a complete idiot.

Both of these clearly aren't beg, dumbass.
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>>5438209
Tbh I find it more embarrassing how white bread the coom art here you niggers need to unironically have good sex
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Spare me the drama. Just post some pron already.
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>big ol' Hogarth hands

wip because I need to fix those hipbones. Deciding whether to fill in the sword or leave it blank. Might just do an overpaint.
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Thoughts?
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>>5438264

Not that anon, but you have to fucking kidding.

Unironically, the OP pic in /beg demonstrates stronger fundamentals in form, anatomy, and perspective than nearly everything that has been posted here and the prevous /SALT thread.
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>>5438348
Not only is he good, he's consistently good >>5438121>>5436524
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>>5438330
Looks like something you'd find on exhentai, and it wouldn't look out of place there.
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Recently filled Commission.
Someone's Futa OC being hyper insertion fucked. Comm requested very veiny.
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Birthday Gift for my Catboy loving Discord mate.
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And finally here's some Aeromorphs I'm working on for another comm.
still sketch wips at this stage. Will probably ink the first one today though.
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>>5438370
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>>5438376
gonna wrap these and do another /aco/ server request next.
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>>5438370
>>5438376
>>5438377
I can't never understand this airplane thing.
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>>5438209
just pyw, stop derailing threads with your bullshit. No one cares about your desperate attempts to shitpost.
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>>5438366
>>5438369
Much better in the thumbnail
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a bigger artist retweeted a couple of my pieces and I'm getting some nice engagement, do I make a post to thank him, comment on the pics and tag him or just message him? I don't know the twittettiquete
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>>5438589
retweet and thank him
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>>5438589
If they have DM's open I'd hit them up with a short message, something along the lines of "Hey, know you're probably busy, but I just wanted to thank you for the retweets. Probably don't have to explain how big of a help its been since we all started from the same place, but just wanted to say that I really appreciate you lending me a hand up the ladder".
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>>5438209
You shouldn't put 2 anons in such a tight spot like that anon. You are singling them out.
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>>5438330
guy gets surprised before girl being slapped by cock, shouldn't it be the other way around?
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>>5438206
Does the guy who made the OP Pic have a blog or something? I really like it
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>>5438264
>op isnt /beg/
Lmao
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>>5438539
jack off to the thumbnails then I guess
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>>5438369
Disgusting
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>>5438651
He is warning her
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there's a strong beglet smell on this thread
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>>5438593
>>5438601
thanks I just messaged him cause I didn't wanna be making a post/retweeting and tagging him, too awkward 5 me
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>>5438977
Why the fuck are you posting his art? You realize furry is not allowed here, right?
Also, he's always on a shizo trip. The guy is clearly mentally ill.
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>>5438348
You have no idea what you are talking about. PYW.
>>5438715
I'm pretty sure you re the beg lol.
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>>5438366
>>5438369

>>5435580
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>>5438396
It's an acquired taste lol
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Does masturbating help or hinder the production of coom art?
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How do I fix this pose?
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>>5440391
I mean is this pose look right?
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>>5439456
the word you are looking for is autism.
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>>5440391
I think it's the arm that stands out too much.
i know what you were going for but the hand makes the arm seem detached.
Either leave out the hand or put it below.
Also deltoid and bicep too small.
I'd also try to move the head a little and see if it makes it less uncomfortable to look at.

Current wip of mine.
Yay or nay?
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>>5440391
Your problem is with the boobs. they should splash much more in the horizontal plane especially the right one that is not supported from the side by the forearm. And you made them too firm in general - they look like two air balloons filled almost to the max.
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Trying to achieve a petite hourglass figure without making the proportions completely retarded. Any advice on that front?
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>>5440525
-Also its certainly cartoon-grade. Trying to retain a bit of that style too.
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>>5438325
How do you do such smooth, creamy lines? Mine always look like chicken scratch, or even worse when I do an overpass it looks like a bad trace...
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>>5440560
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>>5440560
Unironically.
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>>5440640
How to practice?
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>>5440642
What you should ask is
"Why I'm not practicing right now instead of asking dumb shit on 4chan?"
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>>5440640
I aim to practice, but I literally cant draw on a tablet, its like scratching on glass (I have a texture protector/cover too)
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>>5440656
How long have you been using the tablet? If you say less than 2-3 months, I'm going to fucking spit in your face.
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>>5440656
1. Lower sensitivity
2. If screenless, stick a piece of paper on it.
3. Draw until you get use to it.
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>>5440658
on and off since last summer
>>5440693
>3. Draw until you get use to it.
I'm trying, just looking for any tips.
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how the background should be done? what are the general rules to not fuck up
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>>5438206
>gay orc with human femboy
Good.
Good shit
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>>5442088
>buff women and bdsm
Post more anon, it’s good
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>>5438325
Did you drawpile under the name insomnia at one point?
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>>5440560
I spend a lot of time on my lines. Like, hyper zoom and go over every one, adjusting line weights and density here and there. I think when you're predominantly a lineartist, your lineart is the thread that holds the entire fabric of the piece together and is what ultimately makes or breaks it. Whether you're going to slap the whole thing in a bunch of colour afterwards and drown out the lines is irrelevant, because ultimately they'll guide you though the entire process and outcome of the piece. It's different if you're an artist that renders directly over sketches obvs.
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>>5442662
I did not! Kind of curious to see their stuff though.
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>>5441864
>what are the general rules to not fuck up
Here are the steps.
1. Learn to draw

You are welcome, you lazy piece of shit.
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>>5442771
>It's different if you're an artist that renders directly over sketches obvs
At first I was trying to do that to hide my bad lines and to look “painterly”...
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>>5442857
But I realized I like seeing some lines in the illustration. I most likely just probably need to work on my lines more like you said, I usually do them very fast and sloppy...
Thanks for your advice, I really admire your art :)
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>>5442786
rude crab
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>>5442862
the sketch looks good but the colored version is repelling, also fuck trannies
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>>5442917
agree on all counts. also, thats not a trannie, its just taylor swift with a dick
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>>5442857
grotesque, uncanny, pillow-shaded, muddy colours and not enough undertones
>>5442862
expressive, well-stylised with great appeal, feeling the form, fuckin A
I think if you paint over the sketch and just get rid of a few stray lines to clean it up a little you'll have a much better finished product. But stay away from airbrushing everywhere and just using a dark brown to shade. Try hard round painting shadow shapes that follow the form with a cool-coloured multiply layer and airbrushing soft form changes. And add some yellows, reds and blues very faintly for a more human, living look
blog???
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>>5442862
I'm not sure if I'm really qualified to give advice on here, but if I had to comment anything it's that the finished work lacks any hard definitive lines between the forms, and because of that they kind of flow into each other, and that the pose is a bit stiff overall.

Do you practice gesture? Some mornings I like to wake myself up with some fast, loose figure sketches, either from reference or imagination. It's like a morning stretch for your brain.
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No dicks or anything but I guess this counts as sexual.
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>>5443182
I don’t think his drawing looks stiff
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>>5443182
Maybe compared to your drawing a little stiff but it’s just because your style is very dynamic which I like btw
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>>5443182
god i love how dynamic your shit is
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>>5443345
>>5443349
In fairness I did say I'm not qualified lol, though you're right, all my figures are made of wet spaghetti so it's an unfair comparison.

>>5443589
ty
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>>5443077
>expressive, well-stylised with great appeal, feeling the form, fuckin A
wow, thanks dude. yeah, I'm ditching the "carnival portrait" painting cause I blow at it. do you have an example of the "shadow shapes" you're referring to? I remember marco bucci did a video on it and I didnt really pick that up...thanks for your advice, I really appreciate it. I dont have a blog yet.
>>5443182
thank you too for the comments, your art is an inspiration to me :)
>Do you practice gesture?
man, I try, but lately I've been so busy I jump into a request or what-not before warming up. lame excuse I know, I'm just rushing...
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>>5443888
More recent...
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>>5443892
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Thinking of lining and going full color with this. Any fixes before I commit?
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>>5443931
I love it. the arm/shoulder is too bumpy and the right shoe perspective is weird, but those are really nit-picks... good face
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>>5443944

I appreciate it, thank you. I'll get to fixing them right now
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>>5443892
Please dude, soften up your faces. It would mean the world to me.
>>5444101
I may be seeing it differently than you but the hip/oblique might be a little more visible overlapping the cage.
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>>5443894
these look like the caricatures they'd put next to dumbshit celeb opinions in Cosmo or something, you don't think these are actually hot do you?
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>>5440442
Finished it.
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>>5443888
I thought I saved it by can't find it, you might have seen the tutorial before, it's of a figure drawing being painted step by step in black and white. you apply a base layer, then paint over all the big shadow shapes in one go, then ambient occlusion, reflected light etc. I think you do this already so maybe it will just come with practice and a few figure value studies. let us know when you do get a blog dude
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>>5444251
Pose is stiff, she looks like she's squatting to take a piss. Why did you remove the arched back from the original pose?
Also hair looks like bundled hay. Has no real shape or 3dimmensionality
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>>5444197
>you don't think these are actually hot do you?
last I checked this board was for critiques and advice, why would I post here if I thought these were in any way good?...
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>>5438369
meu deus
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>>5445568
I think most of the original reference got lost in trying to make the lines and changing the proportions. I did widen the hips and change the breasts size and position. Although, i get it now why its stiff. I should have followed the gesture of the reference. Maybe should have titled the lower body and upper body outwards a little?
I am starting to spot way more mistakes now.
My focus with this was rather to practice my lineweight.
Hair is shit, i agree on that. Can't do better than that right now.
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>>5438370
>>5438376
>>5438377
Holy shit, I am fucking CRYING with laughter
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>>5444251
i tried agen
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>>5445621
I didn't ask if you thought they were good, I asked if you thought they were hot. Why draw porn if you don't think it's hot, anon?
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>>5444251
This one is better. Study colors bro also do gestures. Anatomy and where the joints and muscles connect. I do 10-15 a day from refs. Usually these are foreshortened or full of motion etc.
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>>5446592
Alright, noted. Thanks, Anon.
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the based tonyo mega is back up lads
https://mega.nz/folder/Sa5GHIQJ#SUHSAgsuGc_JF0IWwZhEZA
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>>5444188
>>5443944

How's this?
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>>5447862
I hope it gets taken down soon. Thieves should get what they deserve.
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>>5448104
i dont understand where the left leg is going. if it is slightly pointing forward there should be some kind of foreshortening.
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>>5443325
>No dicks

why not?
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>>5448269
Thank you! I REALLY appreciate the redline
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I feel like the arm connected to the hand under dude's chin is weird but idk how to fix it
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>>5448391
there is no easy solution to your problem because you created sth that does not exist in 3d space. he is leaning backwards while her body is pointing forward. her hand can´t reach him without a very big twist of her upper body.
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>>5448587
Oh yeah! You're totally right
Thanks anon
I wasn't paying attention to their overall positioning. I'll workshop something else for the armthen post results
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>>5448647
Why not draw something pretty?
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>>5448789
Because Jews are bad and I need to show this to the world, there’s no way to make Jews look pretty, fortunately I’ve acquired many more exp today and will be able to draw regular humans more prettied now
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>>5448391
This is super appealing. GMI
Stop posting in here asap.
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>>5438206
I have been practicing dicks
I don't know if I put toomuch highlights but I think they look good
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>>5449270
lol those look like ren & stimpy close ups, good shit
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>>5446082
HOT
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>>5449321
lmao
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>>5449270
Incredibly unappealing. I think its the mainly the colours you chose ( I know people say black people have shit dicks but you dont have to take that literally)
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>>5438689
Someone answer this man
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is fan art a good way to try out new styles?
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>>5449472
Also posted here cause /fag/'s sfw I believe
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>>5449472
why don't you just learn to draw normally first before you try and start making money or whatever.
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im usualy quick to finish stuff

but i got a commission that i have no will to finish, how offen do you refund stuff
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>>5438282
tf u talking about...3/4 of the shit in these threads is futa faggotry.
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>>5440442
is that Candice B? aka Darina L? She's a great reference model.
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>>5450043
i dunno, i just got the pic in a ref thread
reverse img search is your friend
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>>5449570
i love it, do you have a blog ?
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>>5450104
thanks! i still don't have one
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Thoughts?
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>>5442048
you got more?
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hey i'm totally out the loop on what people are playing/watching and wanna make a poll for people to vote on who I make fanart of, any ideas? i'm not watching it but maybe something related to E3
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>>5450832
If you want E3 related stuff just go watch one of the 5 min recap videos where they blow through trailers and pick an ip to make art of.
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I've recently hit a stump in learning, would very much appreciate some tips/advice on what to fix
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>>5450882
ay alright I'll try. I see a lot of Fio from metal slug on twitter for some reason I might just draw her cause I loved mgs3
>>5450933
maybe figure studies and proportions, that pic implies her thighs are as long as her whole upper body dude
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>>5450949
Ty, I'll dedicate a bit more time to figure and proportion study
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I wanted a Patreon mascot but I couldn't come up with anything interesting like Mum's shibe or Krekkov's ball.
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>>5442048
this is my kind of shit
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how do i make ink lines more sharp?
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>>5450720
It's very creative and I would like to see more.
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>>5451891
just call her patty/pat. she's very cute and if you can recreate her easily that's a bonus. inb4 you make it real fuckin big out there
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>>5451891
How long have you been drawing? I'm not 7 months schizo btw, just curious.
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>>5452397
>inb4 you make it real fuckin big out there
Eurgh, please. I don't think I can go back to retail man.

>>5452401
I was kind of always the "art kid" growing up, but I stopped drawing completely for approx. 8 years during a period of my life. I've only really picked it up again within the last 3 years after I decided to get a tablet.
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>>5452783
your style stands out in the best way, you've already had a few pieces 'blow up and I assume you've got comm requests up to your knees. it feels natural at this point and you're well on your way. do you have any plans for a series, comics, animation or anything like that?
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>>5448858
This is the only place I can get clear and honest critique though :(
Can't go just yet unless I get a mentor or something
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>>5448391
giz ur blog m8
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>>5438325
I can tell by the way you draw that you have a cute tummy
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>>5453989
Stop being a fucking dickbrain creepster jfc.
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>>5454482
it's the power of /dad/
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>>5453989
All artist women are fat.
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>>5454559
THIS GUY THINKS THERE ARE WOMEN ON 4CHAN
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>>5454482
no
>>5454559
not true, even if she was that would make her tummy even cuter
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>>5454566
There are and hes not wrong
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>>5442088
cringe and tranny pilled
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>>5448264
congratulations you got yourself caught
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>>5452783
Show us your tummy
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>>5449270
Veins do not work like that.
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>>5438984
back
forgot to read rules kek

didn't realize furry porn wasn't ok outside of /b and /trash but anthro plane porn is apparently
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>>5450776
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>>5457669
Is that a highlight or a piercing on inner sideboob?
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Not near the level of most people here but uhh
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>>5458346
Why would you immediately criticise your own work seconds after its completion? Why are artfags like this? Trannies are so negative
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where I can get comissions? I need money for buy a tablet I am tired of drawing with the mouse
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>>5448391
It's fine. just bend your elbow see that your wrist comes higher up toward the shoulder than it's drawn in your picture.
Basically you got a short forearm issue.
So just elongate the male character and raise the forearm.
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>>5457724
have you already posted your blog?
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>>5458362
wym? I just meant I was a beginner at doing this type of sexualized art
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I don't do lewd often anymore, but the horny overtook me and I made this quickie
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>>5459798
shit, that's a huge file
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pinup I'm working on for a calendar. The girl is a selkie, hence her webbed fingers.
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>>5458276
It was a highlight but I legit forgot I wanted to remove, it was from when the boobs were gonna be stationary. I'll remove them though, thank you





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