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Previous thread: >>5438206

>What is /SALT/?

If you're looking for a place to post all sexual works, from pinups with exaggerated proportions to pornography, then this is the right general for you. Both Eastern and Western stylization can coexist peacefully here.

>Rules & Guidelines

(1) Any form of cartooning is welcome; so submit and receive feedback from others.
(2) Please resize your images below 1000x1000 before posting.
(3) Share your knowledge and
(4) Remember to not be afraid of asking for critique.
(5) Remember all GB3 related content such as lolicon, shotacon, furry pornography, furry and bestiality are banned on ALL boards, including red boards, except /b and /trash.

Most importantly I encourage you to keep discussion at a civil level, but you're more than welcome to share your opinions.

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>Community Resources
Hitokaku Index
>http://www.asahi-net.or.jp/~zm5s-nkmr/
List of active livestreams
>Use twitch #art
>yoshikadu2011https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCUx5dpO6d5gQ4KWNPc24CKw

FellowBro's Book Collection
>http://mediafire.com/?i44dwzkf9j9n8

Tutorial & Reference Collection
>http://pinterest.com/characterdesigh/
Japanese Tutorials & Documentary
>http://www.pixiv.net/member_illust.php?id=59317(0033)
>http://iradukai.com/

References
>http://www.onairvideo.com/croquis-cafe-photos2.html
>http://www.eggazyoutatsu.net/eng/atarichan.html
>http://senshistock.com/sketch/
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how do you guys advertise your work? is it acceptable to just find a discord and spam your work there?
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>>5483533
Whenever I finish something I upload it to Twitter, rule34, HentaiFoundry, SankakuComplex, FurAffinity, my Patreon, and whatever subreddits the content is relevant to.

>>5481310
Yeah, you're right with both of these. I've tried to make some changes to both. I wouldn't say the wrist is "fixed", but it feels better. I'm struggling with the line between thick/chubby hand/wrist and outright blobby formlessness. Hoping I can fill in the gaps with rendering, because fatty wrists are difficult to define with lines alone.

>>5482823
Yes! I was actually thinking that she looked creepy as fuck yesterday, but I couldn't put my finger on why. I still need to fix up the mouth, but thanks for your advice.

>>5482906
Most of my life I only drew with a pencil and only picked up digital 3 years ago. I've never had any formal education or training in art, and was pretty retarded as a kid, so I used to think that studying things like anatomy was "plagiarism" and that if you were a "real artist" you would just automatically knew how to draw things well. Basically I poured all my points into the lineart talent tree. I started a course last night so I'm hoping I'll see some improvements soon.

Anyway, it's still wip, but it's a 3 year redo of the second piece of art I made digitally.
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I get so impatient with my workflow and every iteration looks like a different artist's take. each layer does help forming the next one but 5his is a retarded and time wasting way. I can't stick to my original construction cause it's either rushed or I start to change it half way through. is this just a part of /beg/dom?
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>>5484904
if it makes you feel better, you improved with each new layer
I think you just need to draw lots and at some point you'll be able to immediately pick up a style that works the best for you
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Trying to draw a vagina from ants POV
Need a reference similar 2 pic related
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>>5485162
giantessfag?
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>>5485162
kinda hard to find references, you can always use a 3d poser and increase the focal point or some shit if you got desperate, or use some images if you have that too.
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>>5485162
this might help too.
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>>5485114
I like it but I'm not a fan of that blur, then again I rarely am. I want to look at the line art but it just fucks with my eyes.
Still, it might look good with colors so take that for the massively subjective criticism it is
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>>5483924
Penis is looking a lot better
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>>5483924
> I used to think that studying things like anatomy was "plagiarism" and that if you were a "real artist" you would just automatically knew how to draw things well
Please delete this retarded mindset from your brain ASAP. Its legit hurting you more then you realize.
Study anatomy. learn real anatomy. Stylize it for your coom. EVERYONE does this.
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>>5485242
>I used to
>Please stop ASAP
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>>5485216
danke
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>>5485226
just slapped blur and color on to make it a little more something because i had no plans on coloring it anyway. spur of the moment idea i wanted to get on paper, havent used my computer in 2 weeks and im really excited to paint something proper though :)
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>>5485242
Anon, I don't know how to tell you this, but "used to" is past tense.
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>>5485242
........
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>>5485025
thank you, I'm trying to improve so that I can construct once and rough line over it, what you said is very true though I've improved already just by warming up doing quick figure gesture and construction studies
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>>5483508
Gonna bust a nut to her feet. Black nails get me diamonds.
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>>5486693
her tibias are longer than the empire state building
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Meh, I think I'm done with this
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>>5485245
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>>5486392
Im too busy drawing to read the entire question. I shitpost on auto pilot, my brain is always occupied with drawing
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>>5487583
woah this looks great! More specifically I really like the pose, linework, and the screentones. Trynna find your handle isn't giving me any results though which sucks cause I'd love to see your other stuff!
if ya don't mind me asking, how are you getting that super nice texture in your screentones? That shit rocks.
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>>5488124
Thank you! There's this really neat trick I picked up from one of my friends. What you do is:
you overlay a noise texture after you're done with everything and bring the opacity down to your liking. I use CSP so I make a new layer, filled it with black, applied perlin noise from the render menu and sharpen. I switched the blending mode to overlay then brought the opacity down to like 10% then boom, nice texture to finish up a piece. Really staves off that artificial digital feel. Nicer to look at for sure
I didn't use any screentones, just G-pen and brush
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>>5488173
i think you should be learning from the life studies and using that knowledge to supplement your own work instead of adapting your style into the life studies. you're usually very good with flow and balance but it looks like you've focused too much on the realism here and without attention to S curves and curved vs straight it has an unfortunate lumpy effect
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>>5488283
i'm unhappy that you posted this
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>>5488283
I like the rounded shapes you use
Also those highlights look stellar, Do you have a site, friend?
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>>5488283
This is actually good though
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>>5488270
Honestly anon I just like fat
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>>5488286
I'm sorry anon

>>5488289
Aw, thank you!
https://twitter.com/StellarnyArt

>>5488292
Thanks anon!
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>>5488314
you can like fat stInky my boy but theres still rules
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>>5488386
Name of this book, pls?
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>>5488408
Figure Drawing: Design and Invention - Michael Hampton
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>>5488411
Thank you very much, fren
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>>5488386
No rules, only tools.
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>>5488449
no, there are rules actually. you dont have to follow them but there are rules.
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>>5487637
based
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>>5488386
Nah u right. Thanks friend
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>>5488851
dont forget gonna eat ur hair one day :)
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Hello I need some help with a sex scene that I'm drawing.
Basically this girl is fucking her crush in her room and her dad is on the other side of the door.
This isnt ntr btw, the dad and daughter have no romantic feelings for another, the girl loves the dude, just thought I'd clarify.

Which of these sounds the best or hottest?

I was thinking of making it standing sex, with her leg up over the dude and her foot on his shoulder, they have a saliva trail from their lips while the pant looking lovingly at another Her back is leaning against the door, her hand against the doorknob, the dad is wondering what the noise is and trying to open the door but shes blocking it. I feel like I can do this better though.

Another option I had is that she opens the door slightly not showing the guy behind her while she's being fucked from behind and tells him she's doing yoga or something and wants some privacy. I don't really like this one because this is kinda cliche.

Another option I had is that the dad opens the door at the moment the dude cums inside the girl, and they're both on the bed. It's kinda hot almost being caught not actually being caught, plus I kinda want him outside the room.

If have any suggestions or changes I'd like to hear them.
Thank you.
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>>5488851
Get this book. Just a bunch of good fat reference
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>>5487637
I forgive you.
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>>5489060
I have it. It's great
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>>5488151
damn super helpful thank you so much! Great explanation.
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Some anon told me to add some background, but I want to be a little minimalist

What you think?
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>>5490309
check your lineart, is too stiff and also thr gesture try twisting a bit the hips
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=g94Z1Emccr8
read vilppu manual pls
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>>5490309
I agree that your lines are too uniform and blunt. Unappealing especially where the thighs meet and the thigh/hip crease. That's where you want it thinner in the middle to emphasize that these two forms are pressing into each other and are soft and to taper at the ends.


Aslo, your shading is veering into the lane of pillow shading. Please consider using more solid shapes with edges in your shading to define the lightsource more.
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>>5483924
Really adorable. Your drawings make my pp feel funny…
>>5485114
This is good, bud, love the balls getting squashed.
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any tutorials/references for pussys?
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>>5491690
Porn
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I don't know if i should post this in beg or not, but i need some guidance on how to make her arm touch her breasts, i'm still a newbie, the ref i'm using does not show the arm. the foot i neglected because it might get croped off. but if you want to tackle that i'd appreciate it. anything helps
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>>5491736
Always draw the hand/end point first. I’m no “red-liner” and I’m sure someone could nail it better. Also, your dick is upside down…
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>>5491759
>Always draw the hand/end point first
*before tackling the arm/forearm
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>>5491759
>>5491763
Thank you, i'll try that, also she's sitting on top of somebody, so i'll try to make that more obvious next time.
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>>5490470
>>5490665
Thanks!
Great advices
Gonna apply in next works definetly
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>>5490309
i think tilting the hips would make the composition sit well too. the tilted composition doesnt make sense to me though, the angle of it is too extreme.
the nipple placement looks strange too.
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>>5491477
well, the rendering is not half bad, you have some good shape language, but did you mean to shade with black ? even some simple hue shifting could help. unless you are going for the street art appearance?
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>>5491690
think about the anatomy and of simple geometry instead of looking at a reference of a pussy and just "uh..trying to ..hmm. what am i looking at?"
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>>5492776
>well, the rendering is not half bad
Thanks. I just shaded with a darker shade of the base skin color, I know I’m shitty at coloring/shadow shapes and aim to address that this summer. Could you explain what hue shifting would do? Thanks for the criticism
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>>5493305
not a single thing about this is good
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if you post and always get completely ignored, does it mean you're gmi?
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>>5493809
No. You're ngmi
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>>5493809
That means your work is unappealing, not interesting and nothing worthwhile clicking on.
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>>5493305
this is well made but it is kind of ugly for my taste no offense
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>>5493817
I got ignored for nearly two years. it just means you have to get gudder
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wip.

>>5493004
>>5493219
Love these!
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>>5493814
>>5493307
is it abs or huge tits? I personally wanted smaller tits and less defined abdomen, but commissioner insisted
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>>5493826
please tell me you're gonna include an alt where he's cumming through the outfit Orto
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>>5493826
Love it. You should draw Morrigan too and have their wieners touching… :)
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>>5493835
That is absolutely an alt that currently exists in a folder on top of the set folder.

>>5493841
Sure but you can draw the muscles for me cause I'm garbage.
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>>5493830
if you are getting paid for it just roll with it
the client's opinion is what matters

only objective opinion I can give you is that the tits kind of look like balloons. it doesn't look natural. but I can imagine someone might find this appealing.

in my personal opinion she looks like an old woman with manjaw with eyebrows that are too thin and the pose is not very interesting or sexy and this comes from a muscle girl enjoyer

but again your client's opinion is what matters
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>>5493825
Epik
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>>5488386
I don't get where exactly what the picture he posted gets this wrong
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>>5494142
I'm the one who drew the picture. To be fair there are some redundant shapes in it, and something of a focus on minor shapes over major curves. Ex: outside of the raised arm which has 4 distinct masses on the way down to the forearm. What I was intended was a feeling of heavily stylized volume of say tod0231, but it does lose the dominant, flowing feel of say a Bruce Timm or Shane Glines type (who actually has a book called S Curves).
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Advice for skimpy outfits? I feel like outright exposure is too tasteless. It needs to be lewd or lewdable without being explicit pornography.
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>>5488173
soc stop
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>>5493865
Ok, I hijacked your idea, but I’m 100% positive you can do it way better…
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So, let's see what the cream of the crop from previous NSFW/Porn threads has been up to, though I imagine none of you have gained any significant progress since I've been away. Looking through the thread, I'm glad to see that several of you have not disappointed those extremely low expectations.
>>5483534
This by far, has to be, a considerable and blatant cesspool to both your style and technique. Honestly goblin, your work from five years ago, though rough in its nature, bared some promise in terms of finding some common ground between your infatuation with The Legend of Zelda's Link, and your own "style". Sadly however, you have achieved neither, and how you continue to pump out this abhorrent display of art still boggles the mind. I'm convinced, that after years of displaying your work here, you were neither given a proper beat down of your work, or you continue to live out the fantasy in your head that you've become better. For the latter, ignorance is bliss, I suppose.
>>5483924
It's incredible and fascinating to see your work deteriorate in real time. You at one time, had some moniker of soul to your work despite the obvious anatomical flaws, but this new, upgraded version to your "style" not only points out the obvious flaws in your work, but your facial expressions have developed this creepy, molester vibe to them. The drawing on the left, though overtly exaggerated in terms of the nerdy look, at least had some form of validity to it. The same goes for the anatomy in general, while your new attempt, shows this, broken, soulless degenerate. If you think I'm kidding, take a look at your most recent submission here >>5493826 and you tell me, with a straight face, pun intended, that your art hasn't developed this ugly, underlying tone to it. Be that as it may, after what, six years of drawing, it was only a matter of time before you took this turn for the worst, right?
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>>5494849
pyw
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>>5494849
Uh huh.
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>>5488151
The worst thing you could have done for yourself, and your artwork, was make this transition (pun clearly intended here) into drawing some half-baked, uninteresting attempt at a Japanese art style that you are clearly not familiar with. There is no clear assertion of femininity in your work despite your attempt to do so, what with the separated breasts as if they were implants and the overused and redundant peace sign that only weeaboo draw in their artwork nowadays (Japanese artists have clearly caught on to this sickening trend and have steered clear away from it now). Your "style" of highlights suffer from the dreaded pillow shading technique once touted here by the now defunct Hardstones McFlintcock. You are both clearly disciples of the same area of mistakes and I'm sorry to say, that no amount of noise layers will distract from that obvious flaw in your work. Though I will give it to you, Adam Warren would be proud of those Empowered lips, if you can call that a compliment, really.
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>>5494856
The everlasting, be all, end all cope here for /ic/ amateurs. I'm glad to see that hasn't changed, and thanks for the (You). :)
>>5494862
Uh huh...what. Are you going to offer some form of rebuttal to the observations I made, or are you just going to sit there and think that uh huh, was the only answer you could muster? Thank you, for the (You), too. :)
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>>5494876
Pyw or shut up faggot
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>>5494876
have a bad day drawing, bud? start with perspective, makes everything so much easier down the line...
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>>5484731
>>5485401
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>>5491736
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>>5493219
Can you at LEAST try to make homosexual artwork to some appealing degree, or do you consider homosexuality such a degeneracy that you'd much rather showcase it in such an ugly light? You'd think that as aspiring gay artists yourselves, you would hold yourselves up to a MUCH higher standard than that of a regular smut artist, but for some reason or another, you chose not to. I'm a straight male, and to be completely honest with you, I find this kind of homoerotic work, insulting to the LGBTQ+ community. If that isn't a "Yikes" moment for you and lights a fire under your ass to learn your craft, please, by all means, continue to make fun of a community through your disingenuous work. Don't be surprised if that artwork comes back to haunt you years from now. Mark my words.
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>>5494880
Seethe harder, please. The more you screech at the keyboard, the more genuine my observations become more and more apparent to those who are willing to make the effort to get better at drawing both regular and gay smut. Your hands are shaking, fingers ready to respond to my reply, but really, we both know who's winning. Fun fact, it's not you. :)
>>5494885
If that apu reply picture is any indication of how genuine your reply is, consider your thought and opinion discarded.
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>>5494922
Are you implying that African Americans can't read with your reply picture? Keep digging that hole deeper for yourself, please. Racist. :)
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OH SHIT BROOOO
he just called you the "R" word! now what you gonna do?...
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>>5494935
counterpoint! the image only says AIN'T not CAN'T, thus in your haste to dunk without reading in full you've proved yourself the racist by revealing your inherent biases
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>>5494763
You not only hijacked the idea, but you also hijacked the attributing creepy, underlying tone that made the original picture, just as uncomfortable to click open to view. I'm not sure if you intended to draw bucktoothed versions of a classic Capcom game, but tout this picture in Darkstalkers (how funny) forums and see if you get the same kind of pat on the back most amateurs here will give you. Much like the other aspiring gay artists here whom neither contribute to a community with inspiring quality or pleasing aesthetics, you too, have done a disservice through your soulless rendition of Morrigan and Lilith. You are correct, though. That other artist may end up doing, 100% of the exact same thing you did—dreadful takes on characters that are neither anatomically pleasing, or on model, because of, well, you know, "muh style".
Now imagine Lilith saying that in a low tone voice, "It's muh style", and you can at least have a hearty chuckle from all of this. I know I am. ha.
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>>5494950
Point counterpoint. "Ain't" isn't a word commonly used in the English language unless you're describing African Americans in an ugly manner. The proper English term would be to use,would be, I'm not. The same goes for the unabbreviated MM MM sounds and the word nigga, plus the word, Dat. So the proper way to have said any of that caption, would read, "No, no, my friend, I'm not reading all of that."
My assessment of your racism is spot on, despite your failed attempt at humor.
>Slam. Dunk. :)
>>5494943
Not use the Power Glove to play any Nintendo games, that's for damn sure. Use a controller like any normal kid would. Freak.
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>>5494972
>ain't isn't a commonly used word in the english language
lol oh you ain't from round these parts are ya?
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>>5494972
This is all assuming you expect the African American woman to abandon her heritage and way of communicating for “white” vernacular. Sit down, you bigoted colonialist.
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>>5494973
Now you just look stupid trying to distract for my observations. Quit while you're behind, please. Any further attempt at trying to make fun of your glaring stupidity from this reply forward will only strengthen my resolve.
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>>5494978
>abandon her heritage
That's hilarious. I don't have to do a damn thing, you morons practically shoot yourselves in the foot at this point, literally tripping over your own word vomit just to to sound virtuous.
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>>5494978
Tripped over your word vomit and I typed to twice. Thanks moron, I caught your stupidity.
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>>5494992
Ok, it was funny at first, but now you’re being incoherent and sputtering your own words. Take a hike.
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>>5494920
But anon, if bad and insulting, why does my pp get hard looking at it? Checkmate
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>tfw when the only feedback you get is from a schizo troll
Now I remember why I stopped cuming to these threads.
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It’s the two year anniversary of my first slime picture and you people telling me I should stop drawing altogether. So fuck all of you. I hope you die horribly.
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>>5495423
I really really love the idea here (probably cos I'm a sucker for mom-son smut), but please work on your anime faces and proportions and anatomy.
That little valley you did on top of hinatas hair seems to be an intuitive thing to do but I guarantee you this is very rare in real life, sometimes a simple circular shape is better. Also features like kneecaps don't get bigger with more fat.

By the way, would you get angry if, lets say, I stole this idea and posted my own drawing of it somewhere?
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>>5495918
fuck I hate anything guro/torture.

anyway, don't use pure black for the background, reserve the darkest darks and lightest lights for the focal points.
the logs(?) in the background shouldn't be that red, not in that lighting and not even in warm lighting. they also blend with the girls hair. you gotta seperate foreground and background clearly.
don't make the lower lip protrude more than the upper lip, it makes her look like a neanderthal or something.
and don't listen to /ic/, this is the worst place when it comes to seeking advice.
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>>5495950
So, then, not take any of your advice? Done and done.
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>>5496187
youre a dickhead :)
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>>5494962
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>>5494849
This faggot really loves /ic/

I’ve never seen such heart and effort put into shit posting. In all my years on this board, these posts have the greatest soul I’ve ever seen. This poor faggot is trying so hard to be cruel and say something mean, but I can only smile at how happy it must make him feel to pour his heart into these posts. Constantly refreshing to see if he got any yous. I truly believe this is the happiest faggot on the entire board.

I aspire to obtain your state of bliss - such wholesome satisfaction derived from such a shit life.
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>>5483534
dude how have you not gotten better
>>5483924
i like your work and the way you exaggerate but i think this is "too" exaggerated, it feels metly and weird

why is literally everything here gay?
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>>5496248
>why is literally everything here gay?
It’s only gay if you’re a faggot
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>>5496239
kek'd and wrecked. if he just left it at the first analysis it would have been sort of based but he took it too far and it got faggy
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>>5496250
>can't jerk it to female body unless she has a dick
>i'm the faggot
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>>5496248

again, you people are just blind, if you have any redlines or something i'm open, but if not your babble is less than useless
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>>5496248
Literally there are multiple pieces of chicks without dicks on on here. Chill out man. Not to mention everyone here isn't into just chicks
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>>5495935
thanks for the critique
i dont like you stealing my ideas but i can't really stop you can I
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>>5495950
>and don't listen to /ic/, this is the worst place when it comes to seeking advice.
B-but you said … ?!
Thanks for the crit anyway. I’ll keep it in mind. I have a bad habit of getting lazy at the backgrounds.
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>>5496261
You're a fucking retard who is immune to help

>>5496262
Disgusting (also just bad) stop posting.
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>>5496239
>>5496252
It's fascinating to see how none of the observations made have been refuted to any extent, but are instead gently brushed aside with as nothing more as a whimper which means, said observations hold some validity to them. You see, in all of the years YOU spent on this board touting your adolescent skills like you owned the thread (which clearly for some time you did, but you no longer do), you should have instead learned, that no amount of empty cope and devoid praise will ever substitute for the lack of progress in your work. This is why you replied back in such a manner that reeks of defeated, complacent and downright docile thought. See, all I had to do was let life do the work for me, rather than constantly badger any of you thread after thread, month after month, year after year to see if any of you would ever amount to anything—which clearly, you haven't.
Let this sink in for just a moment. My state of bliss, is in turn created, by your crippling degradation of your artwork over the years. I have you to thank for that; you were once proud and invincible. Now, you're all just, vapid renditions of your former selves.
Glorious. :)
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>>5496261
And see, the truth hurts. I got inside of this head before, and now, look at how this ego continues to perceive it can do no wrong. "You people are just blind," it boldly explains...but if you have a solution through your point of view (i.e., a red line) maybe, MAYBE I'll consider your thought as to what I need to fix and change in my work before it's too late. But see how if nothing is inferred, nothing is taken. The amount of ego on this is absolutely horrifying, I wouldn't be surprised if this amateur suffers from anxiety and panic attacks from the constant barrage of truth over its deficiency in proper art skills. And why offer any real advice, much less a red line, if you're first met with this kind of unwarranted reply? No, it's much better to watch this artist fumble around in the darkness for its narcissism and let it create yet another fumbling piece of artwork that neither inspires, nor creates anything worthy of value. These are the kinds of artists you leave to their own devices, and watch them implode over the years.
It sounds cruel, I know. But research back in time to see how this artist has replied to criticism and see if the punishment doesn't fit the crime. :)
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>>5496262
And see, nothing ever changes. They in turn, or rather instead, attempt to redraw the same vomit they threw up years ago in order to show, "Look, look, I'm improving, see? That schizo is WRONG I tell you!"
Is this a cry for help thinly veiled as a quote, unquote, "redraw"? Perhaps. But how many times has this particular artist been given, time after time, countless tips on how to improve, only to have those legitimate concerns over their artwork be discarded like they were nothing?
This is a prime example for those of you willing to take the red pill in your own work and learn what NOT to DO, in your own progress towards your own personal artistic journey. How funny, that this particular NPC was amply named "Gains Goblin" and made a mockery of by several anonymous users here, only to realize that no gains, were ever made? How funny. ha
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But I'm not all doom and gloom. Some of you in this thread show promise, and to you I say, keep going. You're on the right path. Don't let your ego...well, you already know. :)
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>>5496692
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>>5496733
just give crits and post art dude, noone is going to read all that shit
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>>5496725
Read this. You write teenage.
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>>5494962
Master sensei, I have tried to redeem myself in your eyes, and the eyes of the darkstalkers community. Please bestow upon my garbage art your wise musings, and perhaps amusements.
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>>5496751
“On Writing Well”
Uhm, sweaty, that should be “On Writing Good.”
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>>5491736
Hi guy's, i'm having a brain fart with the nipples, do i have the right guideline with the pink lines, i don't have that much experience drawing nipples, i know the foot is basic, but i have an invisible crop line where the mountain ends so nobody will see it.
Also should i use a layer mask for this? or is layer mask only used for simple pictures? i have a hard time with layer masking. thanks guys'
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>>5495910
Is that a leech on the dick? If so the reaction I think should be more distressed, no?
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>>5497259
this is what i'm working with..., maybe you guy's have a tutorial on how to draw attractive girl nips?, i'm lost. captcha hard,,
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>>5497331
Dude, there’s always that set of dicks/tits/vagine tutorials kicking around, go to one of the beg/int threads, I’m sure someone will post it.
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>>5497345
i'll try that. btw, what's the "int" thread?
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>>5497259
The shoulders are quite off and it's having a knock on effect on the tits. Her arm in the back shouldn't be as visible from this angle. And here's a pretty expansive tits tutorial. Good luck my dude
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>>5497369
intermediate
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>>5497397
>>5497421
thank's guy's, i didn't realize that the left shoulder doesn't line up with the right. that should be easy to fix.
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is it worth having both sfw and nsfw social media accounts under the same pseudonym?

I am illustrator who likes to draw fantasy shit like dragons and monsters and such, but i also like to do erotic fantasy pin-ups type illustrations. Sort of like Frazetta. It makes sense to me that having a separate nsfw account would mean that I could post repost all of my erotic stuff there, as well as go full coomer bait if I chose to without it scaring away my followers who are mostly interested in sfw.

I am confused also on how that would work for Patreon too. I guess lower tier for SFW art, higher tier for NSFW?
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We need a separate /SALT/ thread minus the futa faggotry. 70% if the pictures posted in this thread are futa trash.
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>>5497529
Nobody cares, nobody is forcing you to be here.
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>>5497531
Must be nice not to have someone forcing you to read threads.
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>>5497859
nice sameface faggot lol
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...do you guys nut to the stuff here? I feel like it would be wierd
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>>5497890
i nut to ideas
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>>5497892
i nut to eyes, dear
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>>5497890
I think this guy prints out his (You)s and makes cum tributes on them. I hope he squeezes off a hot sticky load on my reply.

>>5496733
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/SALT/ is consistently one of the worst threads on /ic/. almost nobody improves, it's just the same 20 people posting their shitty porn with no sense of appeal.

Just look at gainsgob, we told him since the beginning he needs to ditch the excessive lines and work on his anatomy, but he just comes back every month and posts the exact same shit as before. More microcephalic anime imitations.
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>>5498670
pyw permabeg
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>>5498670
Couldn't of said it better myself, those threads are void of any appeal
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my disgust aside, i just want /ic/ anons to draw well. It hurts to not see improvement. Please practice, anons, if not for my sake, but for yours.
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>>5497529
considering I draw futa for 80% of my commissions I'm not surprised anymore, everything has to be so overtly sexual that whatever char/OC it is has to have ass tits AND dick. I just want to draw pure female forms, even if it loses me 70% of the engagement
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>>5498791
I could argue that yours looks worse
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>>5498850
you could, but you'd have to post your work first
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>>5498854
See, the problem with your redraw is that it's in your own style, at a different angle, and no help whatsoever is given to the original artist. Your knowledge of anatomy and proportions is flawed.

Here is my redraw. Same angle and I tried to stay faithful to the original style. OP, you need to give your characters larger foreheads, when your constructing keep in mind that the face is much smaller on the head than you think. For your line art, you need lay back on that muscle definition, silhouette matters much more and the lines are just too strongly defined giving it a more grotesque look. You should try making lines thinner on the interior of the silhouette as well, all your lines are the same size and give a flat appearance.
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>>5498930
gains gob doesn't take help, i'm not giving it to him. I drew his character differently because it's bad.

If i was trying to help gains gob i'd explain what i did and why.
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>>5495405
>cuming
Your problem wasn't the cuming, it was the posting.
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>>5483508
I really don't understand how I am supposed to draw this girl's face...
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>>5498935
i dont disagree, but for fuck sake what a crab
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>>5483533
drawthreads
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>>5499052
practice your art anon
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>>5498930
I've looked at enough art to realize the fundies aren't priority.
The most important advice you can give to an artist is regarding stylistic choice and unfortunately those are highly subjective.
If people actually wanted 100% technical accuracy Disney wouldn't have an entire research department dedicated to making their 3d models look less stiff and more lifelike.
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>>5498935
Post some art you think belongs here please, I’m serious.
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>>5499172
sorry anon, but most of my coom is furshit
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>>5499176
see, we out here busting our ass for you guys, and youre in the wrong thread!...
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>>5498791
ears are a bit too big for what i'm going for, they don't stick out as much as go back, also his face is way too soft, you wanna go for a sharper look, the wilder hair is a good idea and i should play around with that tho
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>>5499301
that's a good rendition of what a younger firnez looks like

>>5498935
you're incorrect, i just might not take *your* help because it might be something unhelpful like 'change your whole style and stop drawing gay stuff i don't like' or you might be that one poser going 'i'm too famous to redline cause you'll recognize me and i'll get cancelled' like this isn't a community of maybe a hundred people and marmalade mum doesn't have like 70k followers
>>5498930
speaking of which, thanks for this pic, i'll try to study it and see how i can use it to make my foreheads look bigger, that honestly might be my biggest stumbling block, been trying for years and i keep going higher, just not high enough
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>>5495910
i think i recognize your art style.
are you that one artist that made those Fiona drawings from shrek?
if so you need to make more she is underrated.
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>>5499609
not him but are you thinking of NGMI?
https://ngmi.newgrounds.com/
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>>5499546
You don't have to change your style, just get better. How's about drawing some folks with craniums for a while eh gob?
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>5497897
I don't make cum tributes; you're either seriously projecting, or just downright bizarre. Your reply does not deserve a (you). Moving on.
>>5498930
Commendable efforts, and I'm surprised Marmalade; you going out of your way, to help the goblin? That was unexpected. Interesting.
>>5498791
You captured the elf look more than goblin. Still, your attitude could use a little more work. Good luck with that.
>5499546
No goblin, again, you are incorrect. You ego is beyond saving at this point, and even with critique redraws, you're still a dick. I'm convinced you're autistic to some degree, and no one should ever bother helping you, ever again. And it's so funny, I can see the mistake you're making and it's such a SIMPLE one, but your ego won't let you see past your own nose. I would tell you what you need to do, but I'd rather help someone else. Oh, and >5497859 ? How boring is that rendition of Zelda and Link. Suffer for seven more years in the quagmire you created for yourself.
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>>5498950
ok retard
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Now, don't get anxious, I'm just going to try to help you with what you're asking. I hope you receive this critique with an open mind, and in good faith. Thanks for posting your work by the way, it's refreshing to see a novice post something, genuinely asking for help. So, you don't understand how you want to draw the girl's face, so, I take it, you're trying to draw the picture on the left, or on the right. It's confusing, really, so my suggestion to you would be to use one reference picture at a a time. Maybe one picture has features you'd like to put into the MeMeMe pose girl, but having both up like that can confuse. Simplify. Just use one.
I found a reference to the facial expression you want to draw in the picture I provided. What I would suggest, would be to look up real funny face/ tongue sticking out photos to give your mind, a better idea of how to draw the tongue sticking out. Maybe bring in the left eye in just a little bit closer to the nose, but just a hair. It looks really out of place if you squint your eyes, give it a try, and you'll see what I mean. Be careful with the breasts, they don't look right (the bra strap on the left, see how it cuts into the breast?), and be careful with your feet/shoes. The MeMeMe pose girl has similar drawn feet, and if that is what you were going for, then I'm wrong in that assessment. Be careful with the shoulders, they're too pointy, and draw more flow in the hair behind her, like in the the reference picture to your right, the one with the ponytail.You can often convey movement with just the flick of the hair. Give that a shot when you can. Be careful with your hands when you finish the drawing (this looks like it's still in some work in progress, I assume?), and really, if you have any more questions, don't be afraid to bring them up. Good luck, and I hope this critique will help you. Enjoy your drawing. :)
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>>5499785
again, you're either blind or an idiot if you think i'm incapable or unwilling to change or learn, i just typically change in ways that help me draw what i'm wanting to make better
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>>5499611
yeah that's the guy i'm thinking of, sorry for mistaking you but you bath have similar styles
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>>5499949
oh no lol when i said not him i meant i'm not the person you were responding to who posted the art the art
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>>5499815
Yes Anon, we know. It's just what you want is atrocious and is affront to all artists worldwide.
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>>5499815
>you're either blind or an idiot if you think i'm incapable or unwilling to change or learn
You are absolutely incapable of understanding what is good or bad, because you lack understanding of aesthetic appeal.
On top of that you lack talent. Your art is improving at a snail's pace. It's pretty ridicolous lol.
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>>5494920
But anon there's nothing in this image that says this is LGBTQ+. This could be a straight young man exploring the joys of self love before making love to his also heterosexual girlfriend in the missionary position solely for the sake of procreation.

>>5493826
Thank you! Still a big fan of how animated and fluid everything feels in your work. Something about the flow of your shapes keeps my eyes moving around the piece


I completely forgot I had to redraw the hands to make sense
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>>5483508
I almost never know what to say about it when I post it somewhere. This isn't the usual way I color, experimenting with dense watercolor brush. This looks more complete if the background is left blank, but I wanted to include it this time, hopefully I can focus on it long enough to finish it.
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>>5500659
Yo dawg that's a big butthole
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First time posting here, I don't make a lot of colored stuff but here is one.

Sometimes I think that my lines aren't "stylized or fluid" enough
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>>5500659
>the joys of self love
The dude is flaccid as fuck. I dont think he is enjoying that at all
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>>5500760
Very nice, my lines looks like Michael j fox drew them
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>>5500771
They look fine you stupid prick
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>>5500719
I'm way out of my depth with coloring but for what it's worth I like this chunky paint look
One small thing, the figure looks off balance to me like she would topple backwards but maybe it seems more balanced without a background

>>5500738
I was aiming for gape after a huge insertion but if I overdid it please lmk Also general butthole-crafting tips are always appreciated

>>5500760
Absolutely not, your lines get the job done for sure. Only thing that may improve them is varying your line weight a little more for certain places. Ryo Agawa is pretty good at it and also in a similar ballpark as far as stylization. Would make if POP a little more

>>5500771
I have the same problem when not making dedicated lineart for a piece but even still, coloring lines is a godsend for this kind of thing and I think your style would benefit from it
Also small nitpick, avoid just using darker version of x color. You avoid doing it around the cock/thighs but the breasts and abdomen feel a little muddy because of it
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>>5500789
>I was aiming for gape after a huge insertion but if I overdid it please lmk Also general butthole-crafting tips are always appreciated

Well for starters it doesn't look wrinkly enough. There's this chick on Pornhub who does these types of videos where she wrecks her asshole with these giant dildos and yanks em out real fast. Just watch a few of those. Just search for "siswet wrecking my asshole"
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>>5500789
Oh I see! maybe my lines looks thinaf overall, thank you
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>>5500789
>coloring lines is a godsend for this kind of thing and I think your style would benefit from it
Thanks bro, I’ll try that.
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>>5500779
Oh, thanks mike.
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>>5500791
Holy shit you weren't kidding, thanks for the ref!
Making the rim more puffy would definitely sell it more I think
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>>5500805
>Making the rim more puffy would definitely sell it more I think
Yea people who do that shit to their assholes have really swollen assholes.

>thanks for the ref
np
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>>5500805
>starship troopers 2 - return of the brainbug
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First time posting here. I draw shortstack stuff.

Im working on improving my line quality and occasional proportion/anatomy error. Oh and leather is hard, i should have studied it before trying it here
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Hello I am new to tablet and this is one of my first actual drawings, I posted in another thread. Does this look good? Anything weird with it, in terms of lighting or just general concept? Anything I should add especially, including what for a background?
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>>5501004
Someone give this poor anon some comments. He's been posting his stuff for days
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>>5501004
Love the concept, but you gotta hit some morpho anatomy books, dude. Keep at it!…
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how would I achieve skin textures like lewdcactus?
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>>5500659
blog?
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>>5501126
small brush with opacity + making stroke with the form
and resizing your fucking shitty coomer images
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Can I get some critique, specifically on anatomy based on these? Any tricks or techniques to fix the places I’ve fucked up?
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any anatomy\perspective fuckups I'm not seeing? Gonna line and color this bad boy tomorrow, don't wanna be polishing a turd cause I my eyes are too used to the mistakes. Mostly concerned about the faces in perspective.
>>5500719
Might sound like wishy washy bullshit, but after I started thinking in terms of lighting objects instead of coloring I saw the biggest improvements in my rendering.
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>>5496692
didn't read lol i'm happy for you tho
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how do you throw away paper with your hardcore cartoon porn drawings on it? I am cleaning house right now, and have accumulated a lot of drawing paper over the years, and I am not sure how to throw away some of them. Its unlikely these drawings can lead to some sort of legal trouble, but it is still weird to put them in the recycle.
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>>5493826
twitter?
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>>5502711
This is why you never sign your work
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for a friends birthday
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>>5500779
Based aggro-poster
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>>5501469
Idc what the rest of the thread says I'd definitely coom to your art anon
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>>5502711
Shred them or tear them up. Soak them in water or something if you're super paranoid.
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>>5502729
I don't, I just dates them.

>>5503998
I guess it can't be helped.
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>>5498791
Imo art is just a loss cause, no one anymore wants to be raped in the ass when telling them to improve and everyone now just hugboxes and excepts mediocracy. I think being an anonymous person basically ruins authority here, hence the bad moderation. It's a double edge sword, outside of 4chan you either have the power to force people to improve because you have credentials to back yourself up with, or you just get canceled under the wrong circumstances. or you're here where none of it matters, power or no power nothing you do or say matters because it's just a discord tier hugbox now.

At least you pyw, that I can respect. People getting upset by words is the worse state of humanity, it's just a fucking shame how far human thought is now. We used to literally bomb people just for existing/having the wrong opinions. Now it's just "durr you mad, fuck off".
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>>5498930
While I understand what you're doing, the source is objectively unappealing. That's the problem with this board, it lacks appeal awareness. The middle just looks better, visually, contextually, and confidentially. Yours, while still an improvement to the original, completely feels limited and compromised because you're stuck trying to say faithful to something unappealing in the first place

It's like trying to stay faithful to "tumblr art". You know the one.
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Can I get some eyes on this?
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>>5504719
I feel sorry for the fucker who considers this sexual.
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>>5504857
not fully sexual, but the bulge would seem NSFW for sure
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>>5504710
The problem with this board is people don't draw.
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>>5504719
gains goblin, this is a new level of fucked up!
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>>5502957
Sorry, is she supposed to be rather masculine or a tranny?
The combination of low square jaw, thick neck and low brow ridge immediately read as a dude, even from the thumbnail.
The non existent upper lip also exacerbate this.
I'm not saying you should go full on feminine, just adjust some of the parameters a tiny bit.

Feel free to ignore if the look is as intended.
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>>5504872
sorry, are you unacquainted with the other stuff i draw?
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Is this a nice style?
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>>5505082
It's shit
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>>5504887
I like your monster stuff much more than your sexual stuff.
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>>5504719
Study perspective. All your environments are flat as fuck. There is no trace of perspective applied to that cabinet or stool. Every surface looks like it's drawn at horizon level, except for the ground.
You've been stuck at this beg level for years now. Put some effort into learning fundamentals, ffs.
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>>5483924
Post feet/tummy please
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>>5505170
KYS dickbrain.
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been trying to work on my lineart
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>>5505082
not bad, the anatomy needs some work tough
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>>5504887
drawing some monster is one thing having someone literally pulling off the flesh of his own leg is way more creepy.
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>>5505181
Is this meant to be as unappealing sexually on purpose? The commissioner into granny titties on shortstacks, fungal nails on hand toes etc? Crossed-over flaps of skin over her pubic bone? And that fucking knee though. Jesus christ. Though the fucked up forms are putting me off there are some nice rhythm lines and some line weight variation which is nice
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>>5505090
that's cause the background to this is just there as a step up from the graphic design color squares stuff, i do perspective when i wanna do an environmental piece
>>5505399
fair, but how is he supposed to achieve his transhumanist dream if he doesn't work on himself
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>>5505655
>i do perspective when i wanna do an environmental piece
It's wrong in all sorts of ways. As I said, learn perspective. Those cylinders don't work like this in a proper perspective.
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>>5505425
post nut clarity sure hit you hard huh
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>>5505425
imagine not knowing what nail polish is
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>>5505655
That's not how perspective works. You literally have a worms eye view with boots being at different elevation. That's only possible if your floor is round like fucking Earth and we see its horizon.
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>>5504873
Better? I felt the face was a bit masculine too but didn't feel it was that pronounced
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>>5483508
Wow. Her lower legs are long af.
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>>5485401
Sigourney, I know that's you. You gotta learn some appeal (The feet are awful), man. Also, stop drawing ugly gay shit lmao.
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>>5500771
Also, Sigourney. The lips and teeth are a dead giveaway.
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>>5498930
What's wrong with the middle one's anatomy?
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>>5498935
Cope!
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>>5505811
Yeah! So much better for such a small change yea?
I'm a fan of square faced women like Jolie and Olivia Wilde too, but as hard as their jaws are they always still have this softer look to'em.
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>this is a thread for alternative porn art
>Remember all alternative porn art is banned on al boards
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>>5506293
Yeah, I think so. I just wish /ic/ was a little faster so I could have made the edits before I published it. Its going to be bothering me forever now probably.

Ended up making a sfw version so I can use the two images as my phone lock -> unlock backgrounds.
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>>5505082
dude its just anime we´ve all seen it a billion trillion times, what are you expecting me to say? nice and original?
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Hi guy's, i'd like to know what's an all around good brush to use for coloring skin and stuff, that i will blend later.
for example i used "fixed value" blur for the right leg. it doesn't blur or blend hard enough for me with the amount of surface area i have to cover.
i'm sorry for posting this so many times, i'm still a noob.
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Do you prefer A or B?
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>>5508508
doesn't matter both are pretty shitty, keep grinding
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>>5508543
Don't be a faggot.

I prefer B because it's tidier, and the curve in the arm is more dynamic. It's better to go in that direction as A seems a bit too flat and straight and kinda lacking in the natural curves of a person's body.
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Can you coom to this?
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>>5508595
the pic
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>>5508596
Looks super qt, share blog
I would only add a couple of shadow and/or highlight shapes across her body to accent some areas
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>>5508793
Thank you, it's pretty empty yet, here https://twitter.com/shofixi
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>>5508596
blog please!
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>>5508595
>>5508596
no, make her nude
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>>5508801
What happend between two posts?
>>5508809
If you zoom close enough you can see a nipple
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>>5508812
make her nude god damn it!
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>>5508543
If you have a problem you should be able to point it out.
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>>5483924
the fact that you tried to take brekkist style and addapt it to your own style is the worst approach posible, also the render in some areas is more detailed than others and give this feeling of "yeah i dont care anymore"

go full brekkist copycat or just stay with your old style.
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>>5508508
A sucks, B is qt.

A's chest is oversized, and the lower body is tilting downward. Head is drooping, arms are stiff, fingers too thin, and shading seems a little off in places.

B is a huge improvement, and I don't know how you could possibly pick A instead. B has a much better stance (head, arms, legs) and the tilt of the pelvis is clearer.
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Angry floppy cock.
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First “finished” piece. Any criticism welcome.
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>>5493826
What's your gear for art? your lines are really good
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>>5509221
are you shitposting right now?

Try learning to draw at all before doing porn anon, you're going to thank me later. This looks like you traced a still from a porno, and badly at that.

Go to /beg/, start working on drawing humans, and once you understand what you're doing, THEN come back here and draw porn.
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>>5508980
Looks nothing like brekkist.
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>>5509430
Not shit posting. It wasn’t traced but I am well aware it’s not good. I am doing studies and grinding fundies as well but I thought I’d spend some time doing something I wanted to draw as a break from that. I’m just going to keep practicing.
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>>5497859
their abs look like they were made in a waffle iron. Lineweight can fix that
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>>5509649
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>>5509649
oops, dunno why >>5510258
didn't save what i typed as a response, meant to respond with yeah, i'm real bad at remembering to vary my brush size when doing muscle, gonna try to make an effort to experiment with that while inking my comic once it's all sketched
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>>5485114
>feet on futa balls while getting railed from behind
steeling this pose.
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>>5509171
Ahahhahahahhahahahhahahaha
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>>5510931
Oh /ic/ you're so fucking useless.
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>>5504719
it makes me angry that sometimes you draw something good, but at the end you're a fukcin degenerate
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>>5498791
i can tell that youre a woman in their 20s. sadly you are ACTUALLY actually a bed. dont get delusional faggot.
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>>5504734
proportions are off, work in your gesture, also practice poses while using references, this one looks a tad stiff
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>>5509221
practice controlling your pencil, use your elbow as a pivot if needed and start thorwing more confident lines, do anatomy studies and make grids to figure out the direction of the planes of the body.
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>>5512202
Thank you. I'm currently focusing on drawing with my shoulder as I have heard that is best but I think trying to control pen pressure at the same time is what made my lines all wobbly. I've done some of Loomis: figure drawing but I found the method not that useful for drawing perspective (for a beg like me anyway). Going to try Hampton instead as he seems to break the figure down more.
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>>5509583
Keep practicing and keep posting.
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>>5494849
>moniker of soul
the word you're looking for is modicum
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>>5497331
>>5507889

could use more cranium, or make the back of her head bigger. could just increase the volume of the hair.

>>5500789
>like she would topple backwards

yeah, it wasn't very clear that she was sitting on some sort of seating in that shot.

>>5502263
sounds about right.
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Can’t get the shoulders right.
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>>5500719
Wow, I'm honestly surprised anyone but me remembers that series and cares about it enough to want porn of it.
Good stuff though.
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maybe its not the heat
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>>5511782
>thinking that abortion has anything good about it
Jfc, how much of a beg are you?
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>>5513879
Perverted trash
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>>5513886
>>What is /SALT/?
>If you're looking for a place to post all sexual works, from pinups with exaggerated proportions to pornography, then this is the right general for you.

hmm
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>>5513896
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>>5513899
Imagine believing in Jesus in 2021. LMAO
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>>5513516
Thanks i'll try to tweak a few lines and see if it looks better.

>>5507889
the struggle still continues... i decided to use the airbrush and a marker instead of what i was doing before, but it still feels like a struggle for me.
i watched this video, but i don't think it applies to an anime centric picture like mine.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=VXL4QyDXht4
i dread the thought of having to do the hair with the airbrush, any suggestions help
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>>5514580
>>5514580
>>5514580
>>5514580

new
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>>5513912
imagine not in 2021 when you are seeing bible prophecy unfold in front of your eyes



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