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Previous thread: >>5483508

>What is /SALT/?

If you're looking for a place to post all sexual works, from pinups with exaggerated proportions to pornography, then this is the right general for you. Both Eastern and Western stylization can coexist peacefully here.

>Rules & Guidelines

(1) Any form of cartooning is welcome; so submit and receive feedback from others.
(2) Please resize your images below 1000x1000 before posting.
(3) Share your knowledge and
(4) Remember to not be afraid of asking for critique.
(5) Remember all GB3 related content such as lolicon, shotacon, furry pornography, furry and bestiality are banned on ALL boards, including red boards, except /b and /trash.

Most importantly I encourage you to keep discussion at a civil level, but you're more than welcome to share your opinions.

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>Community Resources
Hitokaku Index
>http://www.asahi-net.or.jp/~zm5s-nkmr/
List of active livestreams
>Use twitch #art
>yoshikadu2011https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCUx5dpO6d5gQ4KWNPc24CKw

FellowBro's Book Collection
>http://mediafire.com/?i44dwzkf9j9n8

Tutorial & Reference Collection
>http://pinterest.com/characterdesigh/
Japanese Tutorials & Documentary
>http://www.pixiv.net/member_illust.php?id=59317(0033)
>http://iradukai.com/

References
>http://www.onairvideo.com/croquis-cafe-photos2.html
>http://www.eggazyoutatsu.net/eng/atarichan.html
>http://senshistock.com/sketch/
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Should i proceed with this one?
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>>5514552
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>>5514741
It's looking quite nice, reminds me of those old horror book's covers, which is a good thing lol
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>>5514580
how is the op remotely sexual? its just fucking tits
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>>5515023
And a leash. Sorry you’ve got the gayness, faggot.
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>>5515023
Stop being a faggot and you might understand
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>>5514741
Feed me Seymour…..Feeeeed meeeeeeeeee…
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>>5514741
I posted this one in the last thread. Something seems off with the shoulders.
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>>5515089
Mother fucking piece of shit.
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>>5515023
lol, coombrain
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beg here, WIP, trouble with the shading
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>>5515190
ref
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>>5515089
>Something seems off with the shoulders.
Well yes, when you put your arms up like this your shoulder blades actually move forward and don't just stay in neutral position.
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anons, i beg of you, please take a while to get a grasp of the basics of figure drawing, anatomy, and composition before you try to jump straight into porn.

Porn relies so much on technical skill, raw appeal, and both intentional and unintentional style choices that going straight into porn as a /beg/ is going to be a disaster.
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>>5515267
lmao no
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>>5515192
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>>5515267
On the one hand I want to say you’re right but on the other hand people will still fap to /beg/ tier art if it caters to their fetish so idk. Great porn is hard to do but bare minimum porn is easy to do.
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>>5515267
>muh anatomy
Oh fuck off.
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>>5515267
Shut up, you gate keeping retard. Crabs like you would have people grinding boxes for 1,000 years before daring to do anything else without doing it perfectly. Fact is you learn better and faster by moving on to shit you’re not quite ready for than by mastering x before going on to y.
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>>5515676
If you don't study the fundies at some point you won't grow.
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stoody or something
ref https://files.catbox.moe/8slry1.jpg
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>>5515192
imagine the smell
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If the artist is shit at anatomy
then tracing real porn is a real strategy
you can tell it was traced all the time (the feet give it away)
Sometimes they make it off model using toon heads
they are stuck looking for tracing scenes an many look for them in porn vids at random timestamps

I hate them and love them at the same time.
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>>5515272
i feel like the bottom 3 panels should be at the top
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>>5515839
That's the idea
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>>5516171
hmm, i see what you mean but it also leads into the kiss at the start of the next page, i think it might read better as is but i'll certainly do a side by side to see
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>>5516171
fuck, it did it again, this pic was meant to be attached to >>5516670
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2 in one night
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What are your opinions on funny nsfw comics? (besides cringy twitter OC's that are horny all day)
pic is mine
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>>5517821
How do you have any leg to stand on calling anybody else's work cringey? Just say you're jealous you don't have the courage to present your own creative ideas and like being able to hide behind established characters lol
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streamin some coomer shite

https://www.twitch.tv/quotexcurlybrace
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Anyone knows some "big" NSFW artists on twitter who retweet fanart of their OC?
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I can draw literally everything except a good looking penis. There are no tutorials for drawing super meaty cocks, kill me bros
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>>5519167
https://steemit.com/art/@kookyan/the-nsfw-illustrator-s-guide-v1
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>>5515192
redid the shading, is this better? I like it better
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>>5519839
Try learning to draw figures anon
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>>5517752
i've always admired your line economy
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>>5520231
be more specific
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>>5520532
The arm grabbing the butt is wrong. That's what really stands out to me. In your reference the fore arm slightly blocks the bicep so where they meet to make a y shape towards elbow the forearm should be overlap not meet.
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>>5517308
the body in the top right is good but the head is terrible. either move her body so the top is leaning against something so her neck isn't at that impossible angle, or have the head at a different angel. her head doesn't look attached to her body at all like this.
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Made a HE!HE!HE! (hurgh, get it?)

>>5520796
>>5520697
>>5518921
>>5518618
How tf do you draw so fast.

>>5517752
Looks great. You gonna line this?
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>>5521195
oh shit good point, didn't notice that
>>5521222
i have no answer fo you other than 'super motivation'
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>>5521222
what kinda brush is that for your lines?
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been sitting on this for a couple of days. I have a hard time coming up with interesting looking poses sometimes.
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>>5521440
this one is awesome, very dynamic and there's a clear line of action through both of them from top to bottom. her left tiddy is very balloony though. share blog pls
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>>5521358
Can I have some of that motivation?

>>5521378
It's a brush I made myself for the base version of Sai. Pic related are the settings.
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>>5521184
Oh, yeah, sorry, should have made it clear that's just a placeholder for now, I'm gonna go back and clean up the arm later.
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>>5519797
Any suggestions ?
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>>5522011
the chick is hovering in front of the dude given how low his limbs are. lower her and raise her legs. also show more of the guy's hair/head, it's very hard to read right now. her left shin looks broken, like it's sticking out as straight tube/in a cast. her expression is a bit derpy because it looks like an inbetween, choose an expression and exaggerate it.
overall it's kinda hard to read what;s going on, it's a good idea but the execution is kinda poor. with all good intentions, I wouldn't attempt a complicated, interacting pose unless you have solid ref or a solid understanding of anatomy and perspective. keep it up, I like how you shaded her lips and nose, it's very minimal but very cute
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>>5521784
i'd share but i also have an idea backlog in the double digits of stuff i wanna draw
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>>5521222
did you finish your lillith pic?
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>>5522686
NOOOO IM CRYING ELMER FUDD WOULD NEVER DO THIS DELET THIS
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>fart art I did of another artist's OC got 45+ RTs and 300+ likes
BRAAAAAAAAAAAAAP
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>>5521222
ew
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>>5521222
Why is your art so creepy now?
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>>5523209
What an ugly spiral to your chicken scratch.
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>>5517752
yeah, when are you going to line art that broken left foot?
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>>5518152
but you don't point out the fact that there are kids being drawn so, chomo art must be okay with you, faggot
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I got a boner today from looking at my own lewd drawings
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>>5515833
Torso and butt are ok, but the legs are too pinched at the bottom, and the head is too small.
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>>5524535
I think it's just the overexaggeration of the mouth, the 'creepiness' is toned down a lot if you make it more proportionate.
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>>5524689
big improvement
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>>5524689
Aww, I liked the creepy
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>>5524958
I like it too! Not saying anything was wrong with the OP's picture. I was just trying to explain to that Anon where I thought the creepiness came from.
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I would like some help with the lineart. I've always felt it's a bit dirty. It doesn't look very attractive.
Besides of changing the brush, maybe it would be good for me to try some new methodology, as far as making the line is concerned.
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>>5524547
pic related
>>5525079
there's a few different things to try; mask the linework and paint over it with an airbrush, colouring according to what it's containing, you can try to add some lineweight variation, heavier in areas of shadows, where forms are compressed etc. messy lines can work, but I think they need to be worked into the rest of the piece so stark black doesn't always look good imo
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>>5524689
>>5524732
If orta would just draw big, plump, juicy lips, she’d (he’d) be in the big leagues already, but I don’t wanna tell her that cause then she won’t post here anymore… :(
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>>5524689
Have you watched the music video? The girl is meant to be a psycho bitch personification of the dude's porn addiction.
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>>5525344
that is creepy as hell and doesn't suit the rest of the style at all
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>>5525344
Fucking why
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>>5525371
>Have you watched the music video?
of what?
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>>5525461
>drawn by different person
>doesnt look like original drawer
we got a big brain here...
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>>5514580
are legs too short? not finished ofc
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>>5525479
The music video that that drawing is based on.
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>>5525371
Original wasn't unsettling due to context, it was just uncanny due to bad stylization choices, there is a difference. The edit is an improvement and offers good insight for future drawings
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>>5526021
2/2
any critique appreciated
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>>5525482
still looks like shit
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>>5525612
yeah the music video was better than this trash
>>5525344
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>>5525612
>>5526116
not all of us are twitter trannies that monitor every fotm meme character that comes down the drain, which music video is it?
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>>5526126
You are so obviously out of touch, it's painful to witness
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>>5526168
whoa, cool little secret club you got here, can I join?..
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>>5526279
>trying this hard
cringe
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>>5526279
Anon it's not some secret lmao it's extremely well known if you dont live under a rock
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>>5521450
I wasn't really happy with this set at the moment so I am just sitting on it for a while.

twitter @ac120rfw
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>>5526279
No, you may not. Our secret club is very selective. And it’s secret. And some can’t handle the strenuous rites of passage which test a man’s limits of endurance, morality, and skill.
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I think I draw my futa's way too masculine.
They are getting bookmarked by barafags almost consistently and I think that is a good indicator that im not drawing them with enough feminine qualities to attract hetero coomers.
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>>5526872
>futa
>hetero coomers
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>>5526882
yes yes I know it sounds contradictory.
"how can you be straight if you jack it to girls with a dick?"
New information in Sex Psychology and Cognitive Neuroscience shows that this is the case
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qMoEs7eQeZE
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>>5526872
>>5526882
>>5526889
you don't need to make an aaron sorkin speach complete with blocking to tell us you want to draw feminine futa but can't figure out how, just post the work and ask the question
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>>5526898
Dont know who aaron sorkin is, but I dont see any harm in starting a discussion pertaining to an interesting topic with a question n a dead general like this any ways.

Granted, the solution should be obvious:
Just draw girls with a dick.

But im trying to draw a specific type of girl, but its attracting the wrong audience.

Basically, I should just practice drawing women, and slap a dick on the figure once im done.
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>>5526126
They literally posted a pun of the title in their post. Jesus christ.
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>>5526989
>some tik tok zoomie garbage
lol should've guessed it was some faggot shit...
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>>5517341
really nice dood
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>>5519335
i like this
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how to draw an anime vagina?
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>>5527039
>tik tok zoomie garbage
please, you are so clueless, you are embarrassing yourself
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>>5527133
draw a V, then a line in the middle
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>>5526889
Cope. The only difference between futa and female is the dick, if anyone has a reason to prefer futa it’s because of the dick. Being attracted to dick makes you gay.
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>>5527214
So since Buck Angel has a vagina, being sexually attracted to them means you're straight?

.
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>>5518448
Nice, thats hot.
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>>5518539
Those lines are real nice. Keep it up!
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>>5527039
It's actually embarassing that you don't know the source of that for one, but also that you are unable to figure it out without getting spoonfed
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>>5527270
The only difference between people like Buck Angel and actual females are the masculine features, if anyone has a reason to prefer those people it’s because of the masculine features. Being attracted to that makes you gay.
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>>5527411
in the same sense, the only reason to prefer a futa over a normal woman is the cock, which is a masculine feature.

Meaning futa is extremely gay.
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First commission
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Wait, so if i'm gay and i like futa, does that makes me straight?....
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>>5527579
Billy eyelash?
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how's my linework? gonna color someday
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>>5527160
>>5527392
the fact you have to keep replying to get a "win" is probably the most embarrassing thing in this thread. pyw or shut the fuck up, this isn't your blog, dipshits
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>>5527411
>>5527561
way to miss the point entirely and completely contradict yourself.
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>>5527759
imagine letting a couple of anon (you)s making you this upset
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>>5527724
eh, ways to go. Don't get sucked into the little things like those candles. Spend more time working on the most important aspects. Spend less time practising what you can already do.
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>>5527812
what's my biggest weakness that you're seeing? i want specifics to fix my lines anon
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>>5527724
it's not bad, but I would say for the next piece you work on take a little bit of time to practice some gesture for more fluid posing, also anatomy, particularly hands and feet. Take time to observe and try to understand how limbs connect connect to each other, and don't be afraid to have some anatomical references on hand as well.
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>>5528061
Anathomy and proportions
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Any help would be appreciated.
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>>5528066
>>5528071
thanks for the feedback fellas <3 i didn't use a proper reference for either figure, i guess it shows
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>>5527712
yup
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people pay monthly to see 4 drawings/mo. at a 'skill' level like this
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>>5528322
prove it
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>>5527759
I'm so sick of watching you autisticly shit up this thread.
https://www.dailymotion.com/video/x4qn9ii

Here. It was extremely popular about 5 years ago and still is to some degree today.
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Does this look good?
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>>5528553
what the fuck am i even looking at, cruelty squad r34?
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>>5528566
Had to google that, and I still have no idea wtf that is...

anyways, i was experimenting with some challenging by doing a creative perspective drawing but I guess it doesn't translate well
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>>5514580
I was commissioned to draw this.
I kinda like drawing weird things now.
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>>5528576
What in the fuck.
What was the commission details, and how much did you charge for this?
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>>5528543
>simply ask source of video cause I don't spend 24/7 watching tik tok, netflix marvel shit with my time
>bunch of autistic retards jump on me like I said a no-no word and then blame me for what they're doing
check yourself.
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*sigh*
why do i even bother. GG scrubs. Enjoy your dead general
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>>5528674
*farts on your face*
take it bitch
*sighs*
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The state of this general
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>>5528694
*shits on your futa dick*
mmmmm
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>>5528646
104 USD, it is not your usual coom buck character it is some OC. Weird but fun XD
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Hi, guys, does anybody want to red line the left hand or both, i'm having a hard time getting a shape to be placed there.

also i'm to chicken shit to go back to this right now>>5514940
somebody recommended me to use paint and apply for more natural skin, i use it but i think there's a delay, i don't really know what i'm doing with the technology side of things. i can provide screenshots if needed
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>>5529039
the whole thing's fucked dude
>inhuman proportions
>stiff pose
>chickenscratched lines
>lopsided face with the eyes looking in separate directions
>tiny stick arms
>balloon tits
>those hands

Take a break from coom and go study drawing figures for a while, anon, you'll thank me.
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>>5529080
Thank, you i'll keep that in mind.
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>>5529080
Read the OP anon.
(also that picture is WIP)
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>>5528669
>still trying this hard
so fucking cringe
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i just want someone to tell me what I can improve with my drawing ffs!!!!!11111111
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>>5514580
Anons, do you have books,vids,courses to render like pic related?
I want to paint like that buy I cant,specially the hair,which for me, is fucking impossible to render.
I know grayscales and all that shit, but my works wont end like this...
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>>5529581
Fridays are always cursed
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>>5528553
Blog?
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>>5528576
>>5528718
you forgot to make her nipples purple
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first time drawing futa.
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How do can I learn refering?
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>>5530351
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>>5530351
Faggot
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>>5530147
>what are proportions?
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>>5530065
Kek, i didnt made a lot of things in that commission sheet as a choice. I just cant do purple nipples XD
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>>5529834
hmm let me think.....
no.
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Like my sketch

Kinda like my linework

Disappointed by the finished product.

Pic reads really poorly is it the color choices or my painting?
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>>5525344
Fight me.
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>>5531295
>>5525344
>both trying to improve on shitty art
why do you fucking bongs draw such ugly ass crap?
is everyone retarded where you live?
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>>5530762
the colors are the least of your problems, ESL
your fucking line work is shit
what compelled you to color that?
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>>5531312
Yes.
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>>5530522
good thanks for saving our eyes from your shit faggot
the last thing this piece of shit containment thread needs if your twitter
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>>5531312
despite his gayfemboyshit being cringy as shit, you gotta admit that the plumpness of his drawing has some appeal to it.
But in the end, it's all about taste, you know, beauty lies in the eyes of the beholder and shit
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Sexual art is a sin and anybody making it should ought to be ashamed of themselves and repent. Jesus will forgive, but you must ask for it.
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>>5531341
some bong cunt drew that shit
faggots cant draw dicks worth shit
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>>5528397
are you some nigger with a bed wetting fetish?
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>>5531427
no to both accusations
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Do I have any chance of getting commissions in the future?
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>>5531426
>bongs
>can't draw dicks
elaborate on that if you would, anon
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>>5531426
>faggots cant draw dicks worth shit
Females are shit at drawing dicks too.

Also
>>5531312
PYW. I know you wont, cause you are a crab. Instead post something you consider good.
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>>5514580
You think drawing 2 hands is hard? Try drawing eight of them.
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>>5531312
>>5531426
This thread is full of the saltiest craps everfuck.
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>>5531319
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hello, i'm new here where do i start?
I have some mileage already.
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>>5531542
the head is too small, it might work if it was a dude, is it MTF?
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>>5531940
>the head is too small, it might work if it was a dude, is it MTF?
This single post here is the culmination of the subversion between a Male and a Female when you actually have to ask if it is a Tranny when it was clearly a simple proportional mistake from the Artist. Gabriel, sound the fucking Trumpets already.
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>>5531295
do you use one of those huge tablet displays? I want to do these kinda super gestural formy forms like you but I get claustrophobic working on my s6 lite. I love it but it's only like 10". do you ever work in trad to like sketch etc? I study from your stuff all the time, you're doing so well!
>>5531749
i'm sure the commissioner is happy with all the detail but this looks kinda hard to read, especially around her neck area, I think some forms to outline the trachea, collar bones etc might help. but im guessing you're finished now anyway. great work!
>>5531542
I've been commissioned at a lower level than yours anatomy wise. yours is getting there but needs some appeal, generally the waist tends to be slimmer in contrast with the shoulders and the hips to give off a more feminine look. the hands and face definitely need work though, they are way underdevelopped in comparison to everything else. you fix those things and you can definitely start making some side money dude
>>5530762
I really like this, the lower half especially. I would nitpick things like her serratus standing out too much with those three lines, her shoulderrs look abnormally muscular compared to everything else and her left hand looks smaller than the right. the rest is subjective but I' say the face is a little long and a bit symbol-drawn; the eyes and mouth especially. get some more flowy, organic shapes going on, do some studies etc. there's great potential here

i only have this shitty wip out of about 10 that I just can't seem to finish. I refine over and over again, dont like something, start over, change everything from construction onwards, repeat, never finish anything. i think i need a break
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>>5531795
Their craps are salty because they eat too many crackers.
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>>5531465
i think you are, prove me otherwise
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>>5531579
>bongs cunts can't draw dicks
you fuckers really are retarded
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>>5531698
seethe harder faggot
it's not my fault you can't draw worth dick
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>>5532116
>waste your time trying to prove a negative to an internet rando
yeah no
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>>5531795
this containment thread is full of nothing but niggers, trannies, faggots and retards that can't draw worth shit
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How do you get good enough at this to start making some modicum of money out of it, through commissions or patreon?
Like, where is the biggest draw (ahah) here?
Should I begin with color theory?
Is anatomy all that matters?
Should I ditch normal anatomy and learn porn coomer anatomy?
Is it just a matter of finding an art style that by the luck of the draw becomes popular?

I got some good basis for character concepts, though my drawing style is equivalent to a deviantart sonic fan, so basically I'm wondering on what I should focus first in my studies.
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>>5531812
>frogposter
fucking cringe
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>>5532126
>trying to sound cool by calling it internet rando
okay nigger weeb
i believe you
lol
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>>5532018
motherfucker who the hell are you to be giving our advice with the chickenshit you're posting
this is some dunning-kruger tier reply
god damn
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>>5532145
This post should be the new banner
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>>5518539
Oh shit, it's pic related come to life!
But in all seriousness, not bad. The style's cute.
I'm more drawn to the lighting on the tits. I could never figure that out myself, and I draw coom for the hell of it.
The one arm looks short, though.
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>>5532145
it's a very rough wip my boy
and begs can still give objective advice
we get blindsided sometimes and it doesnt take a pro to point out our flaws
im just trying to post some fuckin work, and some fuckin crits, cause we're all artists and we all like our work getting attention, and this general is pretty dead, and I'm trying to be the change I want to see in the world
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>>5519167
It's like the genderbent version of my art problem. I can't draw a decent vagina to save my life.
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>>5532150
>draws coom for the hell of it
>pic related
your shit sucks too faggot don't kid yourself
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>>5532157
Do us a favor and stop giving your "advice", better yet stop trying to post your work all together and don't come back after a year of knuckling down fundamentals.
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>>5532157
>trying to be the change i want to see in the world
yeah faggot retards in this thread are going to take advice from some piece of shit nobody LARPing as an artist to better muh skills
get the fuck out of here with that shit
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>>5532162
1, it's a joke
2, I didn't draw this
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>>5532176
>muh reference
lol
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>>5532171
What kind of person seethes this hard at the thought of someone daring to not be an asshole like them. This is top tier crabbing, I guess.
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>>5532171
>>5532174
idk guys i'm all about the chan culture and being negative for the hell of getting "based" (You)s but this is a little on the nose. I would try things like being fake positive/encouraging, irony, something that really adds some flavour to your posts rather than just explicit negativity. great work though! I can see you're well on your way to get one of those really epic 4chan posts that get screencaps and all the replies.I believe in you!
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>>5532121
I'm not that anon you dumbass are arguing with.

>doesn't post work
As expected from a beglet crab kek.
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>>5532220
>daring
so stunning so brave
do you get off on reading your own replies, cuck?
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>>5532229
found the bong cunt
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>>5532252
>that esl reply
no ones talking to you peru, get lost
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Thoughts?
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>>5532134
>unironically using the term "frogposter" in 2021
i didnt know it was still 2016
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>>5532267
>moving goalposts
another crab specialty. keep going beglet.
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>>5532384
>using the word unironically
lol
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>>5532396
what the matter esl better you I reply this way so you may understand?
lol
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>>5532397
>using the word unironically
yes who tf even uses "frogposter" any more
neck urself you lame bastard
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>>5532402
>seethe harder lol
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>>5532402
>that reply picture
my fucking sides holy shit
it doesn't take much to piss you faggots off does it
hahahahahahahaha
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>>5532400
all I see is a crab that barks like a dog and has no work to back up his claims.

you talk like gains goblin draws kek.
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>do you use one of those huge tablet displays?

I FUCKING WISH, I'm super poor irl lel. My laptop was released in 2014, my tablet is a Wacom Intuos (the connector is being held together with tape), as you can see my desk is to small to accommodate my laptop and tablet, I have to prop one side up on books because my floor isn't level, and my chair is literally falling apart. It does the job though.

I draw on pretty big canvasses though, like 3500px min., and I like to zoom in and go over all of my lines in detail, adjusting for elements like weight and form and such as I go. I do sketch traditionally sometimes, but not so much these days. Super flattered to hear somebody is studying from me though!
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>>5532413
you should place a dragon dildo in that hole next time before you sit down.
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>>5532411
>compares me to some nigger
m...muh feelings
hahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha
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>>5532416
Can you buy me a dragon dildo.
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>>5532419
i could in exchange for feet pics
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>>5532422
Okay I don't actually want a dragon dildo I wouldn't use that shit. I do need a new chair though, so how about it? A Herman Miller for say, a toe pic?
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>>5532418
>arf arf bark
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>>5532413
>britbong cunt shows off her shitty work station
>doesn't cover up seat where dragon dildo goes
FUCKING
GLORIOUS
hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha
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>>5532430
shut the fuck up argentina no one gives a shit about you
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>>5532428
>A Herman Miller for say, a toe pic?
For that kind of money, i could get hundreds of toe pics.
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Why is this thread so full of catty bitches? Remove that dildo up your ass and shove it down your suck hole.
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>>5532438
Yeah, but, these are rare female, digital coomer toe pics. The nastiest of all feet. Extra prized.
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>>5532440
>Anime poster
Your opinion can be discarded
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>>5532440
it's full of catty trannies, faggot negroids and that one favela queer obsessed with muh styles
they cant draw smut worth shit
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>>5532444
>female
trannies don't count as females, sweety
try again
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>>5532462
;)
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>>5532457
That explains every time you glance over these threads there isn't one shred of appeal anywhere and it's mostly the obnoxious woke anime hybrid tumblr style that keeps getting posted.
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>>5532413
fuckin hell man I respect that, I'm never complaining again. I think in about a year's time you'll be making sweet patreon bucks and working on those big boi tablets, maybe even earlier given how much you've be growing
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>>5532492
Yeah, ngl, the setup is so patently un-ergonomic that it's destroying my body just to sit down and do the work everyday, but I worked as a bookseller before losing my job in le global plague, so if I can at least get to a point where I'm making min. wage I'll honestly be happy. Can invest in that big boi tablet.

Pro-tip to everybody in this thread btw, if you're not doing some kind of regular yoga, pilates, running outdoors or hitting the gym regularly already, start. Start now. I'm serious. Chair life will fuck you up like nothing else and you'll hurt so much that you'll wish you were in retail.
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>>5532506
eat a fucking salad every now and then, you fat cunt
that poor chair hasn't seen your fat ass under 200 pounds since 2013.
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>>5532511
I'm a vegan, all my meals are some variation of salad.
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>>5532492
>soicucking this fucking hard
she's not showing you her lobsided tits much less her fucking fat ass toes creep
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>>5532514
>variations of salads
>still piling on the dressing
>drink a diet coke
>sits on her fat ass drawing 6 hours a day
>calling it chair life
disgusting
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>>5532529
No fizzy drinks either, it's basically bathing your teeth in acid for the rest of the day. My chair is fucked because I like to sit cross-legged in it at my PC. Stay mad tho, the rage is actually entertaining.
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>>5532506
eventually you should look into one of those sit/standing desks, I'm improvising with an ikea stool on top of my dresser and it is good for when your back starts to ache. I can never be arsed for a full yoga sesh but I do that child's pose with your arms out for 5-10 mins, shit's glorious
>min wage
>with own artwork and crowdfunding
I literally have no other dreams rn
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>>5532549
how fucking poor are you that you have fucking BOOKS propping up your table?
did you move back in with your parents, or worse, your grandparents? are they supporting your giant, collossal failure of a life while your fat ass sits around drawing tumblr caliber shit? this can't be real, you life can't be real
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>>5532565
this is fucking delusional
holy shit
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>>5532574
My life is pretty good, I have a partner with a good career who supports me. After I lost my job I asked him if I could give the art thing a go rather than go back into retail and he was happy to cover expenses whilst I gave it a stab. I didn't want to ask for an allowance or anything like that though so I said that if I needed anything I'd find a way to pay for it myself, so stuff doesn't get replaced as often as it should atm.

>how fucking poor are you that you have fucking BOOKS propping up your table?
What should I be propping them up with? Bad Dragons? Should I ask our landlord permission to dig up her floor to have the foundations repoured lmao

This is the weirdest cope.
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>>5532628
>orthomaw has a bf
of course.
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this is always the worst thread on the board, christ
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>>5532658
pornfags are the biggest shitposters.
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>>5532628
no cunt, the weirdest cope, is you posting this >>5532413 followed up by this >>5532506 and then this >>5532514 and now this >>5532628
you want to talk about cope, nothing screams out COPE more than what you posted and you know it
you're a fucking broke ass bookseller who lost her shit job because you fail at life, the sweet and sour sniffles did you a favor by exposing you for the fraud that you are
the curtain is drawn back and these faggots can finally see you for who you are
nothing more than a talentless hack who relies on her beard to pay the bills with his job at McDonald's
fucking
glorious
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>>5532638
she has a beard not a boyfriend
there's a difference
that idiot's a simp and he's going to realize that when the rent is due, there's hardly any food to eat but hey
>i draw coom i'll make it i swear
if this isn't a giant wake up call for the rest of you i don't know what is
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>>5532628
You need to stop blogposting.
Who the fuck comes to 4chan and start telling their life story to autistic faggots on the internet?
No one gives an actual shit and
no one is gonna give you money, retard.
holy fuck
>>5532713
You need to gtfo my board and go back to your discord server, tranny.

These threads become worse and worse every day

bitch ass zoomers don't know how to get attention on themselves except by being fucking retarded
An hero, all of you
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>>5532738
>that reddit spacing
opinion discarded
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>>5532440
There's been a spammer trying to kill /salt/, and any sexual thread for that matter.
Every year, same shit.

Threads eventually peter out then come back again once the autist gets put down. Eventually a new one comes a long and the cycle repeats.
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5532742
lurk moar, faggotron
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>>5532747
>drawing its own fucking meme
hahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha
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>>5532747
you may be right.
This is some aggressive autism
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>>5532749
welcome back to your containment thread nigger
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>>5532747
Don't tell me it's the same whitebox fag or whatever his name was that had a board wide sperg a couple years ago.
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>>5532747
The /b/ tier flame posting isn't even the problem, it's the fact that it gets replies like they want
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>>5532747
>quick google search on name
>deviantart
>tumblr
cyka blyat
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>>5532780
well then stop feeding the trolls you moron
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>>5532790
I don't reply
Alternatives to salt to post work and get crit?
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>>5532800
Discord
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>>5532812
What Discord? I'm tired of posting my work here without any good crits.

Please help?
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>>5532812
Im in dad but i never post, it's quite cozy but their nsfw channel is dead. And you just get an emoji related to what you drew as a response
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>>5533298
that's a copy of frank frenzela, my eagle eyes are surpassed by none,
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>>5533301
no actually i just googled 'golf swing' and used the first back shot i saw as reference, i wish i knew there was a frazetta to reference
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>>5532628
How the fuck you have 30k followers and don't have any money?
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>>5533530
It doesn't work like that.
You have to market and monetize your art. It's not enought to have fans that like your stuff.
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>>5533298
gains goblin?
Pretty cute. Never thought i'd see you draw something this tame.
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>>5533571
ye it's me, i kept it a bit more subdued cause it's art for another artist's thing, i'll be back to the weird sex shit soon enough, tho currently i'm working on inking my ff7 comic and there's a few more pages of that to go till we get to the porn
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>>5532018

You need more line confidence in your sketchwork. Don't pick up the stylus until you've drawn the shape you want. If you fuck up, draw it again. Leave the erasing as another tool to refine your shapes.
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>>5533576
Only gripe I have about your golf drawing is that its a bit odd that she's cumming for seemingly no reason.

Maybe add a vibrator attached to her upper thigh?
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>>5533576
You work pretty fast, that's good for a comic artist.
You might want to choose one thing in your drawings you want to improve at. And the next page really focus on that aspect.

Hands for example
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>>5533597
I appreciate it. I don't use undo enough and I get too impatient and lazy, it's been worse before and I'm working on it slowly
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>>5533541
Yea and how you retarted you should be to not be able to monetize 30k followers? She makes whooping £74 per month from patreon, didn't take any commisions this whole year (people literally ask her and she refuses) even though she lost her job and leeching off her bf rn, like WHAT lmaoo
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>>5533678
You sound like a salty incel. Did she refuse to send you nudes or something?
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>>5533680
>>5532780
this guy is not even trying and you are feeding him the yous he wants, can we fucking stop?
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>>5533680
Nah, maybe my language is too strong, but I'm actually perplexed.
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>>5533692
Let people humor the village idiot in peace
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>>5533678
>didn't take any commisions this whole year (people literally ask her and she refuses)
how would you even know that unless you approached them for a commission and she turned you down?
Salty coomer coomfirmed.
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>>5533712
>village idiot
>troll
>salty coomer
>salty incel
Y'all can keep calling me every insult you can come up with, but at least it's not me who can't monetize 30K followers and prefer to leech of her bf instead

>how would you even know that unless you approached them for a commission and she turned you down?
i literally went on her twitter page, opened last post and saw one of the top replies. Didn't even scroll further
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>>5533784
Why do you even fucking care.
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>>5533791
Because they're a salty incel
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>>5533678
>nooooooo! How dare you strategise your time for maximum growth instead of spending all your time grinding low-price, low-appeal commissions leaving no time for personal development! Not fair, not fair, not fair! You stinky pussy leech!
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>>5533791
It's mindobogling to me how can someone live like that. She doesn't want to work a regular job, fine, but she would rather stay "super poor" and suffer from poor working conditions with furniture that's unfit for her work or falling apart instead of milking golden cow that stands right beside her all this time.
She don't even need to draw weird things, people will pay her money to draw her usual stuff just with the characters of their choice. Man, if she doesn't care about herself, she could at least make her bfs life easier, but no
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>>5533812
Again, why do you even fucking care, because this is starting to feel like it's somehow personal for you. Do you know this person irl or something? Otherwise why tf do you care about the state of her boyfriend's welfare if they reportedly have a good career.
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>>5533806
oh no not the basedjak face noooo

She could name the price she wants, she could turn down commisions she doesn't want to draw, she could take any amount of commissions she wants. She's isnt playing some 4D chess by drawing on an old laptop in the broken chair for 7 months and refusing to take commisions or even listen to them while her bf works and pays for all expenses

Also nice implication that there's no personal development if you draw for money instead of drawing for free, very good
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>>5533838
Why. do. you. even. fucking. care.
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>>5533820
That dumb cunt shared her fucking furniture picture on here in hopes of getting the sympathy reply from any of her dumb ass followers that lurk here, and she failed to attain that miserably except for that one idiot who tried to simp. On top of that, she added more fuel to the fire by letting everyone in on her dumb life choice for employment as a bookseller, and still, no one cared. She added some kung flu tears that her beard is taking care of all the debt they're both incurring, but somehow, that glaring mistake of a life, is somehow our fault for pointing out.
The only thing that exemplifies, is how incredibly stupid her life has become, despite prancing around these threads for months and YEARS touting the opposite. This is a MASSIVE wake up call to anyone interested in trying to make this kind of art, something viable standing alone lest you suffer the same fate.
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>>5533820
I don't care about her or her bf, I'm voicing my bewilderment about this situation and interested in knowing the mindset behind it
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>someone bored out of their mind is routinely checking back on a porn art thread to cause drama
>gets guaranteed replies every time and is engaging in conversations with people who shoo him away
>it's presumably a frustrated artist/beginner who is drawing arbitrary lines in the sand saying "if you have x followers you should be making y money"
>literally like the stereotypical mother-in-law who chastises and criticises her son's wife
>besides all this being obvious around 30% of a thread about porn art is dedicated to entertaining his bullshit, one sole poster who is trying very little to troll for the sake of attention
I can't even call you 16 yos because from the accounts posted we're all 20-30yos entertaining this shit. fucking hellfire. just stop replying. let the attention die down and watch the crab posts get no replies. don't feed the fucking cockroaches
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>>5533843
>>5533844
This is it lads, we've reached peak autism.
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>>5533576
Okay you fucking moron, let's see if your storytelling skills are any indication of your progress now that you're attempting to branch out into something you're neither capable nor qualified to do. I'm assuming you read this retardation from left to right, because you're some western weeaboo and you can't into Japanese.
Square one - So in the first "panel", you have a bell chime to a door swinging open. Why is there no movement to the bell signifying the echo of the "ding"? Is that a crude joke that the bell somehow, became this sentient being and cried out ding on its own? Is that how thinks work in weeaboo land?
Square two - There it is, yet another sameface wearing a wig pretending to be some Final Fantasy Seven character. If the bell chimes in the first square announcing her arrival, why does she need to knock again? Shouldn't the bell crying out ding, imply that she's arrived?
Square three- Yet another sameface wearing a wig. There's no variation in facial expression whatsoever; just plaster another stupid goblin grin on the face making it smile. How boring.
Square four- What happened to the glass she was holding and cleaning? Are we to believe that goblin Tifa just dropped it, in her haste to somehow try to jump out of the "panel" at the reader? Why is she trying to jump out of the panel? Is that supposed to be a thin bar she's working behind, with a thin counter?
Rectangle five- What's going on here. Are they breathing in air? Are they subliminally telling each other, hey look, my shemale cock is THIS big! Is that supposed to insinuate a hug? Does the hug finally materialize in the next "Square", pun intended? Where's the background? Are they in the construct of the Matrix? Weren't they in a bar with a sentient bell croaking, DING? Where's the bar? Where's the door? And how is her left arm, now magically holding a basket of bread and one attempt at a flower when in square two, she was holding it in her right arm? How does any of his make sense?
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>>5533576
consider changing Tifa's hair style to a "bang to the side" look because it conform to the silhouette her character design better, because it didn't really read as Tifa as is.
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You're not qualified to draw ANYTHING goblin, and your poor attempt at trying to draw something remotely storytelling proves it. That's not a comic, unless you consider it a comic by today's standards. Face it, you've drawn for five years, and you've accomplished nothing. This abhorrent rendition >>5533576 is your coup de grâce. The only thing you're good at, is same face, and over-exaggerated muscle tone. That's it. That's your legacy. You can't draw, you can't tell a story, you can't even draw dicks. Quit while you're behind.
And Ottomawhamaw, I knew life would take REAL good care of you, and this post here >>5532413 proves it. When your landlord kicks you and your "partner" out for not paying the rent, you're going to look back at this very same picture and wonder what it could have been, to have a real job, real money, something steady rather than waste your existence on a seven year old laptop that probably overheats. This picture is a great indicator of your life. You're old, barely functioning, running on old hardware. How funny, the bookseller having books propping up her life.
Call me salty, call me an incel, call me a crab, call me whatever you want in order for that dopamine fix to kick in so that you continue to exist in your precious little bubble.
At least I don't live like either of you. :)
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>>5533876
Putting lipstick on a pig still makes it a pig. Changing the wig on goblin's same face shemales, still makes it, goblin's same face shemales.
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This guys asperger's fuelled meltdown is the funniest fucking thing I've seen on this board in years.
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>>5533914
>being here for years
gross
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>>5533865
>>5533902
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>>5532457
they have internet in favelas?
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>>5533902
So I realise the mistake I'm making is replying to you at all, but you've got me fucking rolling at this fantasy you're jerking off to that I'm a scullery maid living in abject poverty.
Let me spell it out for you since you haven't quite twigged it yet—"I'm" poor as shit, but I do not have a poor lifestyle. You honestly think I could afford to turn down commissions for almost a year if I had any fear of it affecting me financially? I turn them down "because" I can afford to. I run my workstation into a pit in the ground because I'm a frugal, tightarsed fuck and I don't somebody bankrolling me completely because then I'll have zero incentive to work and get better.

You've been in these threads for years though, like, plural years, trying to flame other users, and I help but feel that if you spent less time filling up the board with your tears, maybe you could concentrate on becoming a better artist? Maybe that's why you're so pissed all the time.
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>>5534390
he got a reaction out of you, you gotta give him that. played right into his hands
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>>5534521
He can have my reaction. This is just something I'm doing to fill the time in-between FFX-2 Via Infinito floors.
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https://youtu.be/3nu6aGcDeAg
im going to dream of a better /salt/ and the next thread will be better I beleeb it
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I don't visit salt very often but is it normal for the only posts that get replies to be ones that have personal vendettas/histories against them?
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>>5534729
Most work gets, on average, about 0.7 replies. Outliers tend be the really good or really bad ones, everyone else gets little to not interaction. This is usually on the poster for not asking for specific crits, but even the ones that do can get ignored. Most comment chains are people bickering, arguing semantics, flaming etc. Thought-out crit/comments are rare and most comments are quite vague. Some work seems to be posted either for collecting some attention, self-promotion, or both. It's not a hugely productive general for work or crits, ironically so given the general cliché is that /ic/ is loaded with porn
And sadly it's the only place I've got to post work and interact with fellow aspiring nsfw artists
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>>5533865
ok cinemasins
>>5533876
i've been considering this all day at work and i think i'll take your advice here, don't think i'll go with the immediate straight down look you've got there but something close, at least get rid of the upward tilting ahoge she has now, also gonna round her chin a little cause i wanted to try a softer look but forgot yesterday cause i was working through the end of a fever
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>>5534390
After a great day of work, let's see what you wrote down and see if you didn't double down on your complete and utter stupidity. To no one's surprise, you didn't disappoint. Let's reply to the tripe you wrote.
>So I realize (fixed that for you) the mistake I'm making is replying to you at all
You reply back to me because I'm the only one in here telling you the truth, and you know it. Not even your partner is this honest with you, or else you wouldn't be coming back to check on this thread while playing your video games.
>"I'm" poor as shit, but I do not have a poor lifestyle
Wrong. Your lifestyle is being provided to you by some idiot whose working his ass off to support you. Your delusional mind pretends that everything around you is yours, but there's nothing you own other than that busted ass laptop that overheats and those books propping up your table. Don't kid yourself.
>You honestly think I could afford to turn down commissions for almost a year if I had any fear of it affecting me financially?
Wrong again. You don't have a job. You have no financial responsibilities of any kind. Everything is being provided for you—your rent, your phone bill, your vegan lifestyle, you pay no bills. You're a bum. Plain and simple.
>I turn the, down "because" I can afford to.
If your partner ever found out about this, he'd kick your ass out on the street knowing you could have helped pay for something with your commissions. There are people literally asking you for your shit art, willing to throw money at you, and you instead decline them, ushering in this crap. Way to alienate your supposed fans by typing this garbage out your worthless cunt, watch them get directed to this thread and see if they support you any longer.
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>>5534892
look at this faggot who doesn't know about the British S in realise
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>>5534870
That person showed you another method on how to make your wannabe style at least a fraction better, and then you answer with this garbage—
>don't think I'll go with the immediate straight down look you got there but something close
You're a fucking idiot full of dunning-kruger. You're like that stupid black kid at conventions who goes around showing off his work to people and asks for a critique, and when he gets told the truth, gets all fucking butt hurt and walks away.
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>>5534899
That's because I'm not a bong, you faggot.
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>>5534523
So rather than work on commissioned work, or get a real fucking job, your fat ass sits around playing Final FantasyX-2—a game that was released, in 2003.
You sit around doing nothing all day, playing a game that's literally, 18 years old. They fired your ass from your bookseller job, didn't they. This is beyond pathetic, girl. You're the equivalent of a dead beat guy, sitting around playing 18 year old video games while his girlfriend is out killing herself at her job, just to maintain his sorry ass. Thanks for proving me right. :)
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>>5534911
neither am I
>>5534908
yes correct, a consideration without just copying
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>>5535052

You ever wonder how much time you've spent by not looking at your own work critically?

Like how much you might've improved in the last couple of years had you swallowed your pride and realized you keep making the same mistakes.

You probably think it looks fine, it's your style, or maybe (hopefully) you think it's the best you can do but you never took the next step in wondering why this is the best you can do.

I'm not even trying to be mean, it's just a peculiar mind set that you have.

Like take a mirror and try to replicate any of those images. That can't look right to you, right?

Anyways good luck with it all.
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>>5534936
Yeah, with every reply she seems more disgusting

Imagine being so self-righteous while being deadbeat, playing games all day and refusing to be financially responsible. Girl, grow up
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>>5535052
you're a fucking virgin who can't even draw percolating BOILING WATER correctly without it looking like the fucking shitty CUM you draw, you pathetic piece of shit you can't draw chairs right, YOU CUT AND PASTE the same salt shaker to the other side and is her fucking tongue sticking out on that last square like she's fucking retarded?!?!?! look at that hand holding the sign!!! HAHAHAHAHAHAHA
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>>5535112
are you playing dumb or did you legit not catch that she's eating an egg on toast?
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>>5535052
I don't think I explain my suggestion very well, but if you are still drawing Tifa, its probably a good idea to draw her in deep side part hair style with bangs.
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>>5535165
ooooooh, i get you now, fair point, i'll consider a 3rd round of redoing the hair
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>>5535072
>ew, video games are for bums and deadbeats and you're not allowed to play them
>grow up!
absolute state of this board.
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>>5535185
Seems like doing nothing all day fried your brain, all you can do is greentexting strawmans and parroting a number of same npc lines. Poor thing

Video games are cool, but if you're only playing games all day and refuse to work while someone else is taking the role of responsible adult around you, yes, you are a bum, and yes, you need to grow up. Ask anyone else in real life if you don't believe me.
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>>5535230
lol, I do work, but if I were in a position where a wealthy person was offering to let me live rent free in their place and gave me unlimited time to work on my artwork and hobbies, you wouldn't have to ask me twice. you and every other person in this thread knows they'd do it too, and if you try to deny it you're a liar.

let's not pretend we're saints and martyrs because we choose to whore our bodies out to billionaire capitalists in some dead-end, soul destroying job for minimum wage. the work cycle sucks and i'm happy for anybody that manages to escape it.
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>>5535185
that reminds me, i still need to rough out that parody of poor little white boy staring tidus with all the other party members behind him
>>5535165
man doing this style of hair part is weird for me
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>>5535258
What makes you want to keep drawing every day?
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>>5535266
no one else is gonna draw the stuff i want to make how i would want them to
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fuck me running, there, got all the hair shots redone to a point that i'm good with and now i can keep going with the comic
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>>5535310
Why'd you decide to handwrite the text instead of typing it with a typical manga font like AnimeAce? imo it would look more professional if you typed it
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>>5535368
paint tool sai doesn't have a text function
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>>5534870
>ok cinemasins
>draws
>>5535258

he got a reaction out of you, you gotta give him that. played right into his hands
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So what I've gotten out of the tail end of this thread is that apparently this artist has a really supportive boyfriend and for some reason some guy is seething over it.
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>>5535672
>xoxo, gossip girl
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>>5535834
kek



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