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Welcome to /salt/ Disco dance edition!
If you're looking for a place to post all sexual works, from pinups with exaggerated proportions to pornography, then this is the right general for you. Both Eastern and Western stylization can coexist peacefully here.

Previous thread - >>5732187

>Rules & Guidelines
1) Any form of cartooning is welcome; so submit and receive feedback from others.
2) Please resize your images below 1000x1000 before posting.
3) Share your knowledge
4) Remember to not be afraid of asking for critique,
5) Remember all GB3 related content such as lolicon, shotacon, furry pornography, furry and bestiality are banned on ALL boards, including red boards, except /b/ and /trash/.

>Community Resources
FellowBro's Book Collection
>mediafire.com/?i44dwzkf9j9n8
>characterdesignreferences.com/character-anatomy
>>>/ic/artbook

>Timed drawing gallery
line-of-action.com
quickposes.com/en

>Image reference
modelindexdatabase.smugmug.com/browse (pw: croquiscafe21)
hegrehunter.com
pornpics.com
pinterest.co.uk/daijoubudesuka/drawing-references/(not mine, has nice variety of photo/pose ref)
pixiv.net/howto
>>>/s/
>>>/hm/

>Japanese Tutorials & Documentary
http://www.asahi-net.or.jp/~zm5s-nkmr/
http://www.eggazyoutatsu.net/eng/atarichan.html
http://www.pixiv.net/member_illust.php?id=59317(0033)
http://iradukai.com/
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>>5743872
the one time where khorn and slaanesh decided to get along and have a party
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>>5741032
>HF banning loli

The guy who moderates the site and Discord (DarkShadow777) peddles underage porn on his baraag account while "living it up" with his mother, and judging by the testimony of a friend who used to moderate there, he is not the only hypocrite working for them with a private account like that.
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>>5743937
Nigger
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>>5744086
numb body?
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Doe really artists produce coom or is that just a beg trap?
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>>5743937
jesus christ what the fuck are you doing
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>>5743937
that's fucking disgusting dude, take it to /trash/
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>>5744252
well the chaos gods gotta make use of their new wives somehow
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>>5743994
Are you really surprised? It's not the porn community that's actually against "problematic" draw porn, it's the motherfuckers at Visa and Mastercard threatening to block funding for your platform if you allow it.
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>>5743994
It's not hypocritical at all, this stuff happened at the same time that there were major witchhunts and you could get shut down. It was at the same time that many boorus had to crack down on loli and shota or risk getting deleted or locked out.
It was pressure coming from outside that made people react like this, so if people want to protect their sites from third parties, that often hold the financial strings, they have no choice.
It's either remove the content or risk your site getting targed for destruction.
A lot of the same shit happened with patreon and paypal, people who drew even teenage characters that were clearly not children in any way were targeted.
Why do you think people use baraag and pixiv in the first place?
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Trying to get better at coloring. Any suggestions for books to help such an entry level?
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>>5745021
stop tracing, learn how to draw figures, and THEN try to draw coom again. Read Bridgman or Hampton or something.
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I don’t window wha tit oaks winter
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thicc girl best girl
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old sketch, probably gonna redraw faces
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>>5744618
Blog?
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>>5745645
fuck off
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I made my first oc. I'm like, obsessed, I wanna make a comic.

>>5743937
Holy shit lol, no words. You're too powerful lmao

>>5745385
Agreed. I like the kind of thiccness where its not just hyper exaggerated curves, but the subject actually straight up looks like a brick. Something homely and maternal about it
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>>5745664
oh hai ortamom
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>>5745664
Here I am trying to come up with interesting shadow shapes on a shitty boring pose on something that looks like a screenshot off one of those porno games and artists like you keep all the appeal with simple, soft shading and up-close compositions. I'm focusing on the wrong things man, this is great
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>>5745645
i just want critique
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>>5745779
you're pretty good and the higher skilled you are the less likely anyone is better to give you viable crit
there's a tiny patch on her right middle finger that's shaded like the sweater
that's all
do you use ref for these?
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>>5745664
That's not how balls work on our bodies, sweetheart. Ball sacks don't squish around our thighs like that for whatever reason you want to portray, unless you want to claim it as "muh style and muh imaginashinz".
The look on your OC's face looks retarded like it's suffering from cerebral palsy from taking a vax shot.
The arms look like they're digging right through the tail, making the tail look like it's part of the background and not even part of its body.
I'd show you how to fix it, but you're way past the point of no return now.
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>>5745808
thanks anon, ill take what I can get. this was all from imagination
>>5745827
damn anon
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>>5743937
It was only a matter of time before you sunk this low, even for you. But a critique is still warranted.
Your same face still exists even to this day, you still can't draw hands, and what is that little thing doing to the back, is that fucking a hole that doesn't exist? I love the Scooby Doo paw on the left, though. The whole birthing thing is new for you, and I'm glad you chose this route for yourself and your art. Both you and the bookseller are exactly where I imagined you'd be with your artwork.
That's fantastic. Keep it up.
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>>5745827
>heterochromic demon twink boy with horns and tail
>"waaah the balls are stylized"
really anon.
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>>5744618
Your style of anime is nothing new, in fact it's boringly redundant at this point so I don't see any reason to compliment you on that. Your gradients are nothing new either, I've seen better professional Japanese artists portray that in such a way that they use the offset of gradients to white where it makes the panel come alive. This is just flat.
Dragon cocks may float in your imagination, but it makes absolutely no sense in this.
The fact that your drawing is borderline shota only adds to the report. If you like drawing kids like that, that's your thing but don't try to normalize the sexualization of children for the sake of being edgy and cool.
That's sick. Grow up the fuck up.
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>>5745852
>Heterochromic.
Yeah, that doesn't exist either, just like balls slithering around thighs like that.
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>>5745865
>>5745838
>>5745827
You know the reason everybody knows that you're larping as some pro is because people with actual careers in this industry don't have time to sit around on forums all week waiting for specific posters to show up so they can deliver the cringe monologues they've been gestating in their heads the last week. Back to /beg/.
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>>5745876
(The reason he keeps coming back is because we reply every tim)
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>>5745879
If that's the case then I'll happily waste his time.
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>>5745876
What the fuck are you talking about, it's just a fucking critique. Grow some balls and take it like a man.
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>>5745871
YES THATS THE POINT YOU BRAINDEAD IDIOT
ALSO MY BALLS WERE PERFECTLY CAPABLE OF DOING THAT WHEN YOUR DAD FUCKED ME LAST NIGHT
HE HELD ME IN HIS ARMS AND SAID "SON, I LOVE YOU MORE THAN MY REAL IDIOT DUMBASS FUCKHEAD SON, MICHAEL, THE RETARD WHO SPENDS ALL HIS TIME ON 4CHAN"
FUCK YOU
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>>5745883
you must be new.
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>>5745884
That word doesn't exist. There was no need to flip out. It's called reality, make friend with it.
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>>5745886
I'm just here to give honest critiques. :)
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>>5745888
Heterochromia? Isn't a word? Are you telling fibs on the internet again?
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>>5745891
Post work, or give critiques. :)
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>>5745115
I'll wait until you finish this so that I can give you an honest critique. Right now, this is nothing.
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>>5745865
<3
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>>5745893
>>5730330
Crits please!
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>>5745827
>>5745865
>>5745838
seething permabeg, always shit talking but never redlining
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>>5745898
You're welcome. :)
>>5745899
Nice bait.
>>5745911
No one asked for one. Yet.
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>>5745664
I like him
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>>5745916
Redline something itt then.
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>>5745896
Even when I finish something you cocksucking nigger faggots don’t say shit go you can go fuck yourself, asslicker.
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>>5745926
staymadbro
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Damn where were all these crits the past like 3 threads.
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>>5745664
thanks orta, it was originally gonna be a solo piece but then i decided to put Isha in there
>>5745838
lol c'mon, it's nurgle, SOME part of it has to be disgusting or else there's no point, as for the face thing, i guess? i'm literally drawing them with 2 different head shapes and eye shapes, and the nurgling is fucking the crease between the columns of the back muscles, te birthing bit is merely an expansion of my content and not a shift in focus
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>>5745779
Hey I'm that anon you're replying to. That piece you posted is extremely solid as it is.
As for critique, I'd say you could improve the indication of overlapping between the dildo and the butt by making the left buttcheek overlap over the dildo, as if it was in between the cheeks. Also I think the dildo needs a sense of mass which could be achieved with a stronger contour or tonality to its form.
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>>5745998
Ohh, thank you! I agree and it never crossed my mind; that dildo had been lasso'd around so much while playing with composition of elements that I got too sidetracked with application.
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>>5745981
Nigger
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>>5746064
numb body?
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>>5744618
I.. I love you..
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>>5745827
you're such an unbelievable faggot. it's not even your critiques it's just the way you talk "sweetheart"
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>>5746459
Oh yeah well you’re such a gay homo you probably want me to suck your dick and let you fill my mouth with your baby batter and force me to swallow it down while calling me a filthy jizz slut and then pound my ass so hard I faint but that doesn’t stop so you keep pumping harder and harder until you come.
You’re so degenerate.
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>>5745664
Ikr? Thicc character just seems really soft and cuddly. Though femboy/twink are also bussin too
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>>5744618
>>5745998
is this sketched work or line work?
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>>5745926
So let's start with the fundamental flaws in your work and then move our way down the list, asshole. That thing you call a slime monster can get away with looking ugly as shit, but what about the redhead? Is that how hands are supposed to look like? And why is she looking down? What emotion is she trying to convey; oh my god, there's this stupid slime monster about to do naughty things to me but I can't get past the fact that I can almost reach the ground with my giraffe legs, oh no. Rigid tits. 'Nuff said.
And then you somehow manage to put the mangled eye candy in the background ON it's own ACTUAL background plane, like she's rising up from the lower left hand corner to share her breast implants with everyone.
And that abysmal word balloon; how did you think this was correct comic book lettering and placement? The light source is wrong, the shadows are wrong. This is considered finished to you? How low are your standards?
Don't like the critique? Fuck your feelings. You know I'm right.
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Goblin hotdog wip.

>>5745679
Hiya.

>>5745724
I used to do the same thing too and was constantly overpolishing art into turds. I think there's an aspect of art that's underappreciated if not just not able to be understood unless you've tried to execute it yourself, but there's a real skill involved in trying to balance a feigned simplicity with appeal. I'm not quite there myself yet, but it's a really enjoyable process that I recommend anybody try, because you'll inevitably learn stuff that can be transferred to your more high-effort art.

>>5745917
I like your boy too, he looks bitchy.
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>>5745981
That's not praise you're getting, moron. That's a direct fuck you to your work from the unemployed, former bookseller. But I'll grant you both this, you two do a fine job of mangling the male anatomy on a constant basis. And you're finally coming around to acknowledging your same face problem, so, I won't point out the mirror image/copy and paste you do now like in OP pic. Look at the lens flare, ooooh. And would it kill you to learn how to draw a disco ball rather than Photoshop one in?
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>>5746876
You can't draw hands and you can't draw dicks, sweetheart. Get that through your thick 'ead.
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>>5746876
Look at your own damn tits and tell me that's how they're supposed to be drawn, self taught. Jesus fucking Christ.
This is the work that supposed to represent you? This can't be real, you can't draw something like this and think it's passable as art. There's no fucking way.
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>>5746881
>>5746888
ah yes, nothing like a deranged lunatics offering free accommodation inside their heads, the privilege only the greatest artists on this board can afford
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>>5746876
And your advice...
>I used to do the same thing too and was constantly over polishing art into turds.
You still are, you do know that, right. And you can't draw the male anatomy. But now I know why...
>I think there's an aspect of art that's underappreciated if not just not able to be understood unless you've tried to execute it yourself, but there's a real skill involved in trying to balance a feigned simplicity with appeal.
I typed that out that thought vomit word for word, and that shit still doesn't make any sense. Feigned simplicity? You mean, by definition, simulated or pretended simplicity with appeal? But wait, there's more.
>I'm not quite there myself yet, but it's a really enjoyable process that I recommend anybody try, because you'll inevitable learn stuff that can be transferred to your more high effort art.
So let me get this straight. We need to simulate or pretend simplicity, with appeal. Read that back and really ask yourself, did I really just give out this FEIGNED advice?
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>>5746914
>I typed that out that thought
Your retarded rubbed off on me, holy shit.
>>5746905
Don't kid yourself, there are no great artists here.
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>>5746881
>>5746888
>>5746914
>typing out three crab posts in quick succession to a single poster
holy shit crab-kun's reaching new heights of autism
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>>5746606
I went straight to this, but I can rarely achieve it. I also whittle away with eraser if there's messiness obviously.
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>>5745981
Do you get off on being disgusting or something?
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>>5746868
pyw
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>>5747093
pay what you want
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>>5746880
lol you think i'm the one who made the edit of my pic for the OP?
>>5747089
nope, i draw just as much 'vanilla' content for this setting
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>>5746876
the way the butte cheeks are shaded make them look like they're made out of something semi-transparent
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>>5746881
She draws much better hands than you kek.
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>>5746868
Fucking kikes.
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I'm finally getting around to redoing the perspective of the left pic to be less janky, I feel like I'm losing a lot of the character in the process though (the bitchy lean and smug feeling), any ideas?
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sketch
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>>5747715
his dick upside down
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>>5747762
Lmao I knew something was off, thanks
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>>5743872
I am selling my soul to Satan (Vtubers). Draw for food and retweets.
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>>5746876
>only in recent years that I began* experimenting in digital
fix the patreon bio and I'll give you a quid
when are you gonna post some shoulders to quadruple the follower count? Srs question
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he's supposed to be working another dude's dick. Does it look ok? Kinda unsure about the curve of the dick vs the motion/placement of the hand I guess.
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>>5745827
>t.woman who's never had loose balls after a warm shower before
when will wome return to the kitchen?
they keep acting like people wann hear what they have to say
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>>5746876
Revised my gob a little.

>>5748013
>quid
u brit m8? Better be Norf like.
And yeah, I need rewrite my bio. I wrote it when I was first starting out, sub 500 follower count, didn't know what the fuck I was doing. I'll revise the whole thing today, cheers for pointing that out.

Please tell me that shoulders is slang for something.
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>>5745865
Not even trying to pretend you’re not a crab lol
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>>5744618
Pls post more I think I’m in love
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>>5744618
pls post less i think im in hate
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>>5748530
nah m8 east mids innit
I mean showing literal shoulders, selfies etc for the extra followers. I had just seen Beta's inferno started doing onlyfans, which is at the extreme end, but business wise it was a great move. I thought about doing the same but im ugly as sin
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>>5748530
Ortmaw, my droog, how do you achieve this lines? they are so neat.
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>>5748589
Nice. Sorry to hear about your region getting cucked out of HS2, though I think we all knew it was never going to happen from the start, otherwise they'd have started building from the North down instead of from the South up.

But nah, I won't be posting any selfies or pics of my bod online. I know it makes sense from a business perspective, but I'm a private person irl and for me I don't think the permanent loss of my anonymity would be worth the gains. I don't mind struggling along like everyone else because I if I get followers I want it to be because people like my art and not my tits (not that I care if other women/men utilise that strategy of growing their presence, you should use what you got while you got it).

You should do it if you're comfortable though. People seem to like having that personal connection with the artists they like.

>>5748612
I use a textured brush that mimics a pencil (Sai settings are on my twitter if you want it), and after doing preliminary lines over my sketch, I'll zoom in on the canvas and go over most of the lines again, adjusting for factors like perspective, movement, depth, weight etc. Recently I started doing this thing where I whittle away at lines using the eraser. I actually think my most used brush atm is the eraser because of how much I'm doing the whittling.

idk if it'll help but you can have the lineart for my gob if you want.
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This thread I can't handle it.
>"Mate""cheers""brit""m8""aight"
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>>5748619
As an artist I am conflicted. Your line quality is nice but I think I prefer sharp lines. Much like bearhand.
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>>5748695
u a'ight m8?
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>>5748619
thx for the answer, and thx for the gob art line too, started following you on twitter. Cheers.
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>>5748695
gab dat to my face not online see wot comes about
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Does this look off in any way
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>>5748816
Oi nonce where's me quid. I'll fook u up.
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>>5748972
the hair on the side of the face that is held by the hand looks a bit lazy compared to the other side.
teeth on the lower jaw also look a bit to simple.
Aside from that I really like it, the bitemark and drool are nice details
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>>5748972
The shoulders seem to slope down a little too much, and the eyes are different sizes (not just because one is squinting a bit)
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>>5748972
where is the sexual salt?
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I’ll take any advice i can get on this piece. It’s just practice so I’m not going to put in color or anything. I used reference for the torso and part of a leg and shoulder
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>>5749285
Minor critique but his pectorals are sloping off his ribcage to the left. Even though his right arm is raised, be sure to have them follow the contour and perspective of the ribcage. Love that right hand + forearm btw.
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>>5749307
Thanks for the critique and the compliment anon
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Can someone Help me? i don't know how to draw plumpy body types and i really need some advice or guidance.
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>>5749426
stop trying to reference photos when you have no clue how figures work. Read bridgeman or hampton and then try to draw fatter figures after you actually know what you're doing.
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>>5749426
??? this is so confusing
are those your trad studies? if so, it looks like you've got some grasp of 3d forms, but then your digital stuff is just pointless
dont just trace the outline, draw through the forms, draw the boxes and spheres as if their bodies were see-through.
or just jump a few steps ahead (if you're not a total beg like those pencil sketches suggest) and do some studies/copies of how coom artists draw thicc bodies
pic rel is the only thing i have saved but it's not too dynamic or interesting, but it could be a good basic start.
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>>5749514
>Draw from imagination.
OMG YOU FUCKING RETARD YOU’LL NEVER LEARN BY DRAWERING FROM IMAGINATION!
>Use a reference.
OMG YOU FUCKING RETARD YOU CAN’T USE A REFERENCE U R DUMP!!!
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>>5749550
nigga what, you do both, they aren't mutually exclusive. You draw from imagination to get your ideas in order, and you use references to get the details right. Stop being a fucking retard and use your references.
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>>5749571
It's no use trying to reason with the draw-hesitant, uncertain beginner. With time they'll learn what works, but til then they project the same, black-and-white, ref-all-bad, imagination-all-bad insecurities every artist goes through
>>5749550
That's right sonny, all this conflicting, confusing information, it hurts doesn't it? It's alright little one. Let your mind rest and take up a pencil or pen when all those thoughts quiet down and just enjoy the process. You'll naturally pick up on when it's time to study, get reference, or use your imagination
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>>5749589
No I won’t and you can’t make me you faggot. Go suck your mom’s dick!
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Is this thread dead? i'd like to know if there's a fast tutorial for shading and highlights made easy?
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>>5749426
Mal malloy gang
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>>5744618
kys faggot
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>>5749920
Idk any from the top of my head. But I will say that shading/highlights largely comes from understanding forms and using intuition/reference. Unless you already knew this and were looking for a tutorial on a specific style of shading?
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>>5743872
Was browsing my gallery, saw this old goodie and realized I didn't post it here. I drew lots of weird and cursed shit but this was the most bizarre commission I ever received
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>>5745935
>implying
>still bootyblasted about being btfo forever for being a non-drawing-lgbtranny
Except for last time, I don't post in the generals.
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>>5750019
Just something faster and easier.
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>>5750144
Add eye lashes to your females so they don't look like a dude. Also work on your same face syndrome.
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HALT! You've been accused of horny! How do you plead? (wip)

Think I should arc the arm + baton more? I'm not sure if bending it any further will break the flow.
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>>5750382
Not sure I agree with this. I very rarely add eyelashes to my own female figures. Contrary to popular believe both men and women typically have an even number and length of lashes.
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>>5750382
>NOOOO IT DOESNT ADHERE TO MY ATROPHIED VIEW OF WOMEN
lmao do you work for disney or something
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>>5750561
You'll probs figure it out as you develop it but the baton and arm holding it seem to be out of place. And for such a intense wind-up pose maybe the expression should match the anger/threat, it looks a little neutral, maybe when you add eyebrows it will bring out more emotion
>>5749920
If you mean shading fast technically, then a large airbrush pillow shading, with a cool colour on multiply is pretty common. If you mean a tutorial to understand *how* to shade quickly, do some shading studies of primitives, still life etc, study what shadow shapes they each tend to have

usually I reply to everyone who ptw but most times they dont really ask for specific crit so idk if you want help or just want (you)s (which is fine) but in which case I dont wanna be giving crits for something already posted and forgotten about
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>>5750561
imo bending will improve the flow
You have curves but then you have a straight arm
Also yeah, actually show the baton
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>>5750625
Yes! Right after I posted this in a discord somebody pointed out that the baton she be overhead. I'll fix the expression too though, ty ty>>5750625
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>>5750561
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>>5750647
lmao she's perfect, thanks anon.
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>>5750144
nigger
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>>5749918
nigger
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>>5751193
>>5751195

numb body?
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>>5750704
Wait one fucking minute....I thought I recognised that dick. Nellipher? Come back to us bby.
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Wow shit man have people actually moved to discords and shit? Dont leave us behind, share some links
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>>5751333
leave this festering place behind and just be a drawfag for a porn general of your choosing.
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>>5751361
But i want crits too :(
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>>5751333
>>5751373
me kinda yes, i'm trying to get commissions but it's not going so well. i don't think i'm the worst artist but i'm not the best. i did move to a discord and they love me very much. but they kinda ignore me. i'm the oldest in the discord at 28 soon. i kinda don't fit in because i'm not a weeb anymore; but a oldfag weeb. my top trending picture is fatass dog with 10 likes. i wish the rest of you best of luck. remember to flip your canvas if you are in doubt about corrections. if you need critique you can probably do it yourself. i use size relationships comparisons like hand to face ect.
i wish niggerfag find solace and purpose,
>>5751361
is drawfagging worth it. last time i slave'd away really hard for a month, i don't think they have twitter.
>last one for the road
Your Bold look like Dolbie! A'ight Cheerio's Mate!
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>>5751233
Sorry to dissapoint, but I don't know who that is.
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>>5751233
No, it's a much worse artist than that.
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>>5751622
ouch. that hurts, anon.
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>>5743872
Wtf Loomisbros, after years of grind I finally have FUN with a pencil
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>>5751787
Keep it up, a few more years and maybe you'll even stop sucking.
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i want to get better at shape language and good flow through highly stylized anatomy
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>>5751945
I think I saw you on twatter.
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>>5751947
unfortunately, yes
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>>5751945
do you use smoothing for your lines, or do you use the pen tool and adjust the lines?
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>>5751979
I start with csp's colored pencil and sculpt the lines, then do smaller details with a grease pencil brush
My stability is turned down/off for the colored pencil but for the grease pencil I like to put it a bit higher
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i wish i could render like this

i downloaded painterly brushes but when im like rendering ,it doesn't seem to be doing the rough crosshatchy/painterly look that I'm going for. it all kinda blends in together anyway like I'm using any other kind of brush, i'm not using the blending tool or anything. maybe i need to find rougher brushes or something.

i'm willing to buy brushpacks if anybody knows of a good one for this style
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stuff?
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all drawings i prepared before leaving
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>>5752500
the drawing for today's slutvember
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>>5752485
Nat lurks /ic/ and has posted about her process before.

>I use Sai, the outdated version. As for brushes, any blocky opaque one with a bit of blend, like watercolor, will do the trick. Really depends on what you find comfortable to paint with though
>>5142222
>It always feels good to finish your linework, until you realize that now you have to color it in

>You could try sketching loosely, doing flat colors on a layer below the lines and then merge them to render everything together. Refine the lineart at the very end by painting it on top of the brushstrokes as a final touch
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>>5752485
Do 80-90% of the rendering with regular round brush, finish off with bristle/rake brush marks that follow the form
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>>5752621
this was my initial thought, but it felt so forced, like i was reproducing the effect in a backwards way. if that's how they do it then that's fine, looks cool regardless.
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>>5752654
she posts in the oc thread and made a post earlier today, just ask her how she did it
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>>5752658
i call bullshit on that.
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>>5752692
see>>5751805
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>>5752698
also, she's super shy about being called by her twitter handle and just goes as 'foxanon', guess she doesn't like the attention of being a very big fish in a tiny, shitty pod
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Is there a guide for nipples?, i'm having a hard time. i want to be able to draw nipples like in manyuu hikenchou
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>>5752717
it's probably because of all the insane schizoids that hang out on this site. being a big artist here is just a target for weirdos.
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>>5753076
can anyone critique this?
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>>5753015
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>>5751945
Her standing on her toes doesn't work at all. Other than that, this is great.
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>>5753353
Always with the straight on point of views. Your stuff is so boring to look at that it hurts. Yet again you aren't applying any of the critiqe you get.
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>>5753514
it's really funny to see people get really mad at this guy, especially because he draws more than any one of you does
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>>5753524
gainz draws more than anyone else in the thread, makes more twitter clout and gets more commission and mostly seems to have fun, but crabs will seethe, me too i remember getting crabbed on because of my daily challenge i post here, but seriously this board's mentality isn't about drawing, it's about shaming anyone who is drawing, it's hilarious
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>>5753524
>>5753597
I'm only mad at him cuz he wouldn't say hi back :(
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>>5753353
Boring nigger
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>>5753621
i understand your vilain backstory now, gainz, say hi back to him or else he won't behave like a good boy
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>>5753015
>>5753111
they're too high & the nub should be facing outwards instead of upwards
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>>5753712
numb body?
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>>5753524
Why do you think I'm mad at him?
I'm just saying it as it is. He got a ton of good critique over the years, yet he applies almost nothing to his art. A thread or two ago I told him to try to vary his compositions and povs more, cause otherwise the comic panels all look too similar and boring. He even acknowledged that.
And here we are now, with the same old boring straight on povs.
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>>5753353
Effective composition. Not boring. Not every page and panel needs to be le heckin reddit drawing comics the Marvel way.
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>>5753847
Spoken like a true NGMIer.

>Not every page and panel needs to be le heckin reddit drawing comics the Marvel way.
The problem is that NONE of his pages are any different than that.
Are you fucking blind?
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>>5753828
they could've been sketched out before that advice, maybe he's gonna use different composition/perspective for specific panels, maybe that's not what he's prioritising, it could be a bunch of different things. his line quality is slowly improving and doesn't look as busy and messy as before, sure he needs improvement like everyone else but we can't expect him to improve everything at once/listen to and take on board *every* bit of advice that he gets
post your work I will give you some lovingly honest critique and feedback xxx
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oh boy i sure missed some convo by falling asleep immediately after posting
>>5753514
i've been trying to play with compositions through ntrvember, but to be fair to me like >>5753860 said some of these were sketched out a while ago, and it can be tricky making entire new pics almost every day so sometimes i decide to go with content rather than visual flair and as for the comic mentioned in >>5753828 i've been so busy with other stuff i haven't yet had time to work on the pages i roughed in using the advice of more low/high angles but i did listen
>>5753621
>>5753746
if you're the person who says 'hi gainz gob' then i've tried to remember to say hi every time, sorry if i missed some lol
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Why does the sketch look better than the line art? do the nipples look ok now?
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>>5754009
what brush are you using? it looks very nice
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>>5754058
the shape & implied lines are better, they're still a bit high and facing upwards.
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rate this barbarian 7 ft babe
her face is meant to be a little masculine but she looks straight up ugly right now
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>>5754058
idgi, why don't you just look at an image of large breasts?

And if your sketches look better it means you've taken the wrong course with your lineart. Sketches are usually visually preferable because they're looser and undefined and what's being communicated through them has yet to be set in stone. They leave more to the imagination, to project your own imagery onto. Lineart takes that projection and says "no, disregard everything you were imagining, this is actually how it is". Ideally you should be aiming to have your lineart look better, if not at least equal to the appeal of your sketch.

imo the problem. With your lineart is that the lines are all largely uniform and the lineweights have virtually no variation. You've drawn the lines around the head thicker, but what is this communicating to the viewer? Is her head closer to the viewer? Is there some factor in it intending to draw us in?

These are some of the factors you should be taking into consideration when lining:

Heavier mass, ex. the bottom of the breasts) = thicker lines
Lighter mass, ex. the underside of the nose = thinner
Closer to the viewer = thicker
Further away from the viewer = thinner
Projection/depths = thicker up until the apex of the projection, e.g., the nose, the penis
Merge points, ex. cleavage, body parts pressing against one another, thicker, up until the apex of the merge, at which the point the line should thin dramatically or disappear
Silhouettes/form = thicker, but should be applied where stylistically appropriate, e.g. you can use thicker lines when drawing around the out lines of the body, but disregard elements like hair, clothes etc.
Motion = thicker, looser messier around the points of movement, thinning out around the apex of that movement.

Light contour hatching should also be employed to illustrated around areas of concealed anatomy such as the sternum, clavicles, knees, knuckles etc.
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>>5754324
Not keen personally. My problem with this specifically is that a lot of people get it into their minds that amazonian women = more muscular, more curvier, but if you look at actual female body builders they're not too dissimilar from men.

You should look at how artists like Otto Schmidt draws his muscular women. They are straight up fridges, but still really sexy and appealing.

Narrow the hips, thicken the waist, and increase the delts, traps, quads, calves and arms a tad and you'll be A+.
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>>5754324
>babe
>has dick
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>>5754414
>>5754324
Fit women>>>>>>>>meme amazons
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>>5754433
Nah. Anllela Sagra is easily the hottest fit woman I've ever seen and she has no curves.
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>>5754414
thanks bbygirl, otto's figures are god tier, I saw you (I assume) recommend him before when I posted the sketch but I didnt find many muscle girls whe I looked him up. I gave those tips a try and I like how it's looking already, she actually looks stronk now. might push it farther if el commisionador agrees
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>>5754464
Ayyy, that's the shit man (and yeah I recommend him to a lot of people looking to improve form with minamalistic lines).
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>>5754464
Oh, one question though;
>bbygirl
How did you know I'm female, I don't remember mentioning it last time :'D
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>>5754444
shes still looks like a woman than could wear a dress and not be mistaken for a troon, shehulk is too masculine to be attractive and axeamazon is clearly overcompensating for being stealth troonshit.
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So feet aren't exactly sexual but they are a fetish so I think I can post them here. What do you think?
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>>5754574
This is hilarious
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>>5754574
/thread
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>>5753937
Christ, how can someone so disgusting be so fucking boring?
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Thoughts?
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>>5754459
Unnatural pose of the guy's hand on he ponytail.
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This feels like it looks like shit and I can't figure out why, please helppp
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>>5755020
probably bad perspective on frontal leg. it looks like it should go forward (into the camera), but the lines indicate that it goes "down", as if it was really short.
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>>5754904
that is the power of my stand
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>>5754919
Boobs look nice and I dig your style...I just hate the Bratz eyes that have zero definition to them
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>>5755020
Maybe too many black values makes it look like mud. The hair + eyepatch + mouth seems too dark. But I'm a beg don't listen to me
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connect back with the people
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>>5748619
>on my twitter
cant find anything outside of the csp one
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U will coom
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>>5755598
You will coom to this too
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I draw a character from a certain angle and then I have difficulty drawing them from any other angle. How do you guys figure out how to do 360 turnarounds and stuff like that?
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>>5755748
its less figuring out and moee practice leading to better visual library. do your consrructio and figure studies.

sure is DEAD here and I blame the shitty troll OP pic
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hi, i'm working on some fan art but i'm having a hard time with the eyes and face. can somebody link me to a reference please
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>>5756031
Don’t use loomis proportions for animu grills. Eyes have to be lower, more like an infant or child.
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>>5756031
source on that reference?
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>>5743872
what is OP image? is it like a gay alien rave party/orgy
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>>5756156
it's a rave edit someone did of this
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>>5755959
I think it’s just that most people aren’t nig brained coomers.
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post your twitters you pieces of shit. if i dont follow some people it will look like i dont care about interacting with the "community" (which i dont)
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>>5756151
Only if you retweet me. , lol
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>>5755271 is it still ntr if you wish it was the real ship?
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>>5756520
You are showing fast improvements while doing this challenge. If you are constructing these yourself ect. Have you missed any days so far. What's your speed?
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>>5756840
another /salter/ with great appeal and shapely forms... making it look so easy.... one day I too... will turntables...
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>>5754574
I vote this for next op
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>>5755020
You'll get there bro. Keep going. You're gona maek it ok?
Appealing forms. I would req you do more studies but you've already come a long way. I think you know how to get there.
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>>5756852
I know this artist.
they don't have speed
they are speed
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>>5756852
i missed no day, sometimes i could forget and just drew the prompt the day after with the other one, so catching up. and then i went to vacation for a week, i did a collage earlier on that thread of what i couldn't post in live. i also did some studies and gesture on the otherside but i dont post them here since it's not salt related.

i construct those myself, the only thing i look ref for is just color for when i do fan art, and today's drawing made me watch some scenes of the movie again to see how francoeur bends his legs and how he moves his two hands on the same arm.
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>>5757066
Thanks for the reply. I'd only say that your lines are muddy but that's only because I'm autistic. I'll give you another retweet when I get back home. Wink wink.





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