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Previous Thread: >>5741823

>Rules:
1. Don't post nudity or too revealing works.
When in doubt, post a censored copy here and link to the original off-site (e.g. catbox, imgur, etc).

2. **No Porn**.
No, not the retarded "anything with a body in it is porn" standard or "I see her underwear, MODSSS!!!" Use common sense.

3. Do not post sexualized child photo references. In fact, don't post pictures of children at all.

4. Due to the PPH (posts per hour/thread activity) of this general, please wait until the thread falls to around page 5 or 6 before making a thread. Use archived(moe) or warosu to retrieve the old threads.

>General Resources
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1dQGxsuqPxuu5V9vjgAWrMjnrMXcWfCFYX-d5imdnRgI/edit?usp=drivesdk

>Specific Resources
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1hVzfbqr-0UEck9ux9XBTmxUTGMZ4a-8T3DnBfOxv9iE/edit?usp=drivesdk

>Drapery to clothe your child
https://online-courses.club/anatomy-of-clothing-2019-by-ron-lemen/

>Abandoned(?) FAQ/Q&A
https://docs.google.com/document/d/15rON6jeKul-p89KF5ZYSo4eRLW1kdVaKv8CMt09UgXI/edit?usp=drivesdk
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>>5747657
Do you have a group o artists you study from?
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>>5747663
I love peko’s style.
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>>5747663
I dislike peko
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>>5747663
I study from real life
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>>5747879
Post work and/or ref
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>>5747903
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I want a real girl for posing
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>>5747903
https://youtu.be/yQzamV7u8rM
sfw but don't open in public I suggest
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>>5747919
schizo
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>>5747946
Where's the rest of her?
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>>5747949
out of the frame.
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>>5747953
Fix it.
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>>5747955
Working as intended. Won't fix.
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>>5747958
Continue to avoid drawing knees, the lower limbs, and having the feet planted on a ground plane you're doing a great job getting nowhere champ.
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>>5747946
UUOOOOHH
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>>5747946
I think it looks pretty good, my only issue is that her trapezius may bee to high
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>>5747969
Yeah, I noticed the neck was a bit misplaced when I was rendering but it was too late to correct it by that point.
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>>5747920
make one
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>>5747946
the way you shaded the left part in her torso makes her stomach look like its going up to her chest, also the hard shadow in the middle of her chest down to her ribacage looks like a dent making it look even worse.
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>>5748131
It's rare to see the use of form being applied, hardly say this but well done. I hope for your sake you'll leave this shithole.
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>>5748131
neat stuff
would fuck/10

https://files.catbox.moe/3qlji6.jpg
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>>5748145
Nice feet. Blog?
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>>5748148
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>>5748131
literally insane work, how long have you been drawing anon?
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if i sell loli art am i doomed to forever have to keep it a secret and never have any relationship with a woman ever?
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>>5748156
if I sold loli art I'd be more concerned about not ending up as bubba's onahole.
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>>5748162
One of you is bound to have your angus peppered.
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>>5748131
nice
now gib reference
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>>5748172
>>5747919
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>>5748156
yes, you can only get in relationships with little girls if you do that
that's how this works
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>>5748172
Just yandex little girl in bikini
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>>5748155
lol? It's just a bunch of sketches
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>>5748193
There's a difference between his sketches and your flat (no pun) formless copies.
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>>5748195
How can you tell when I haven't posted my work yet?
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>>5748204
>lol? It's just a bunch of sketches
your skill level is obvious when you say things like this
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Is it good to reference swimming ones? I think they're better at giving the pose I required.
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>finish the mannequin
>carefully measure up the facial features like sensei roomis taught
>start adding the lines
>suddenly the day is over and I haven't got past the hair
>remember why I always draw my girls with ponytails
I can't keep drawing ponytails forever. help
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Why little girls are so hot?!... I didn't notice it when I was younger. What the heck is going on with me?
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>>5748301
study from reference
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>>5748131
Cute... T-T
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>>5748038
can i have a detailed response on what this means please?
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>>5748021
>loli belly fat
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>>5748466
I am not the most articulate individual out here considering I am an ESL, but I'd say that her left leg should be more larger to that of her right because of forshortening/depth. Her legs should also be a 'tad' longer too and have more 'meat' since females in general store more fat around their lower frames to that of males even at a young age. One should also mind the knees too know that I thought of it. Along with legs, one should also mind her arms too and give it a bit of contour to show that she is not totally skin and bones but have muscles and the important fat that an ojiisan, oniisan or ojousan can peck at when kissing her shoulders.

All in all I'd say that you're already on the right track when it comes to cute female faces, but the body - admittedly - does need a lot of grinding, studying and practice.
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>>5748520
>baby fat. ;_; ;_; ;_;
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>>5747657
mfw lolicons are the only ones on this board to give you attention and compliments

I'm not even into lolis myself but, are they a good audience?
makes me think
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>>5748301
draw more
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>>5748654
What's the issue? If anything the problem is that loli attracts lots of haters.
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>>5748690
The level of hate is unbelievable. I'm kinda depressed, because I can't live without lolis anymore.
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posting my work. took into account all the tips i was given (apart from the "use ref" ones)

>>5748654
most artists and audiences of taboo subjects will tend to be nicer than people in other areas because they usually love what they are drawing more. Especially in the west where drawing and liking loli style art is frowned upon more than in other places.
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>>5748931
Says the person who takes issues with 'the nature of the subject'.
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>>5748984
Getting v& would be an issue, yes.
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>>5748984
What if he lives in australia or canada
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She so cute
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>>5748986
Is there a problem in Canada?
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like anything about it? is it cute enough?
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>>5749094
I'd lay out my mouse trap for her if you know what I mean. You know what I mean, right?
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i wish i was a loli
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>>5749100
Why?
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>>5748131
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>>5749094
not really
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>>5747946
How much of this was a straight up mammoth copy
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>>5749107
The failure to draw the knees would be telling.
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>>5749094
totes cute
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>>5749102
i want to have sex with grown men while wearing cute clothes
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>>5749100
Why? They don't have self-consciousness, it's like being a cat
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>>5749107
None of it. I only referenced very punctual things like the eye highlights or the bellybutton rendering but those aren't copies either.
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>>5747946
How did you jump from 400ish to almost 900 follows overnight? And with no tags?
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>>5749113
you can do that without being a loli. follow your dreams.
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>>5749123
I was already followed by various big artists when I was at 400, they retweeted me and that was the natural outcome. Hashtags are a meme that only makes you look desperate.
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>>5749131
I figured something like that but I wasn't sure. Posting and betting on the algorithm to pick your art up is playing a fools game.
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I've been struggling with his neck for the past hour, anyone got any tips?
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>>5749129
that's only half a dream
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>>5749113
you're probably a male, if you have such problem
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>>5749143
The neck area is fine but her left shoulder seems off. It's shorter than her right.
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>>5749150
suck my COCK
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>>5749238
I'm into lolis, not shotas.
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>>5749240
would you be into me if i were a loli anon
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>>5749241
You either are or you're not; I don't bank on 'ifs'.
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>>5749243
would you be into me i were a loli anon
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>>5749244
this is getting quite complex...
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less erp, more drawing
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>>5749249
A lot of my drawings are too uoh.
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>>5749249
I'll draw after I get off work.
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>>5749261
put them behind catbox
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>>5749263
Kind of oldish but I hope this will do. Still need to color it though.
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>>5749271
uooohhh
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>>5747903
>or ref
not this time fbi
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>>5748931
A good start with anatomy and definitely an improvement. Study the arms and leg are needed still but this is a good and huge step towards the right direction. From here on out you'll most likely end up studying both the female and the male body from here on out as well as learning the very subtle/minute differences that differentiate a girl from a boys body and what makes a loli and a shota distinct - as well as not so distinct from each other aside from the very obvious down there.
Plus points for that small bump on the hip.
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>>5749244
It's a stupid kind of question to ask, because lolis are the most valuable creatures on earth. The only problem that it's illegal.
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>>5747946
reminded me what i'm doing all of this for
thanks
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>>5749440
what for?
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>>5749452
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>>5749456
It better be cunnylust
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Is it possible to draw loli if you have aphasia? I can't use reference.
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>>5749271
>no eggs
Pretty hot.
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any thoughts?
is the hairstyle pretty?
is the outfit interesting?
are the polka dots ugly?
how do the eyes look?
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May as well post one last update since last thread died.
Something you think I could fix before I finish? There's still some things to add.
I think overall it's a pretty boring picture, aside from the neutral angle, maybe I should have pushed the colors a bit?
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>>5749636
I don't like the hairstyle too much, simply because it looks like a solid mass of... something, like foam.
How would you paint it? I mean how would you shade it? because it's rather simplistic, right?
Unless of course that's what you wanted.
As for the clothes, I think it's fine, but keep it mind that it also looks very solid. As if it had a shape that's independent of what's underneath, which is not the usual case for clothes.
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>>5749669
Change the color of the bikinis if you can. It lacks a lot of contrast as it is. You can also color the background, add an outline around the characters and maybe add a simple pattern. A simple shadow on the floor around the character would also make them pop more.
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Is the perspective fucked here for the dude and girl's fingers or is it just me?
Like the both the guy's hands seems similar in size and would be way close if he was pointing at the camera, it like it's phasing through her two fingers.
Like both the index fingers are the same width and height.
The one pointing should be way bigger.
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>>5749681
Yeah, doesn't help that the hand also looks like it's holding her too. Getting rid of that thumb probably fix the picture.
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>>5749676
Yeah I can still change colors at will. For the record there are still things missing, like the girl-s horns and the halos *which I probably won-t even include( so the picture would end up more colourful regardless.
I-ll see what to do about the background, probably either a pattern or an outline
>>5749681
Maybe,if the guy's left hand is touching her check then her left hand should stand in front of his.
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>>5749685
Somehow my keyboard changed which is why all those symbols are messed up...
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>>5749669
I really like the cute girls you draw, that said the feet could use some work, like the toes just don't feel organic and aren't shapely, they just look like little protrutions rather than feet.
You can try going to sketchfab typing in feet and just try to make your ones look more like those.
Or jut copy anime girl feet until you get it.
They also look like they're kinda tiptoeing which seems like it'd be hard to balance all their weight without tipoeing more.

Still really cute.
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>>5749685
>Maybe,if the guy's left hand is touching her check then her left hand should stand in front of his.
The thumb still overlaps her fingers, both the dude's pinkies are the same size but the ring and middle fingers aren't, maybe if his thumb was in more, it wouldn't look like it's phasing through her fingers.
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>>5747663
reminds me of
nanashi or nlo
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>>5749695
Yeah I can't do feet, I'll keep the sketchfab thing in mind
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>>5749713
>>5749719
It's like watching a homo suck dick but at the same time he argues that sucking dick isn't gay because he didn't kiss the dude.
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>>5749729
You are gay.
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don't talk to the ironic lolicon, he's baiting.
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>>5749734
>Cartoons have nothing to do with your sexuality
You dense motherfucker there are genres which cater to sexuality look at /u/ as an example and they are all unironic hebes with mommy fantasies and wanting to be dommed by younger girls how do you think they ended up being lesbos in the first place anyway?
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>>5749759
Nobody cares how you went from fucking yourself with a dildo to moving onto the real thing.
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>>5749767
You've essentially provided an example of how you've transitioned from 2d, 3d, and ultimately to real figures. You do not get the same dopamine rush and pleasures you had from the first time you discovered the loli form you've built a tolerance to it and you moved onto more extreme measures to get that same dopamine rush you had before. You're the textbook example of a future sex offender.
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some retard really wants the thread deleted.
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>>5749777
>Create a general about 2d scat porn
>Surprised and offended to see pictures of shit being posted
Oh fuck me I haven't laughed this hard in a while
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>>5749798
Shit is shit, I don't care how many times you sugar coat it but in the end it'll still smell and taste like shit.
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>>5749802
It's not wrong, you're just in denial.
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>>5749777
You don't have to worry about that. The retards are dealt with swiftly it seems.
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>>5749821
I don't know, it seems it was just one retard replying to himself to entice a shitstorm seeing how quickly all the posts were deleted at once that only means he got banned and it was the same faggot all along.
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>>5749823
Glownigger confirmed, i'm out.
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remember to report faggots like that so we don't get dragged into their trash, be they genuine or not.
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I feel like I've missed everything! T_T
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>>5749834
You are just as filthy as they are.
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>>5749837
no one asked you
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>>5747663
mammoth!
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>>5749846
what is the appeal of mammoth ?
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>>5747663
for me, it's muk
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always remember
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>>5749842
You didn't have to, get used to seeing more of him around from others just what the fuck did you think these generals encompass anyway? Are you really surprised to see these lurking wolves in sheep clothing? Either stop making these threads or accept the fact that this genre is a gateway for attract and create more like him and if you don't like it I would seriously reflect on what exactly you're trying to draw and more importantly why.
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>>5749862
attracting and creating
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>>5749862
[citation needed]
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>>5749847
Good balance of realism/structure and an animators shape language. Also lolis.
I've seen others draw in a similar way, like kawahag1, the shota equivalent, but they're not as nearly good.
I'm pretty sure he is or was a pro animator at some point. Not a big fan of his paintings.
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>>5749862
>active moderation as displayed earlier
>we're in danger
nice try, hams. maybe try the furry general.
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>>5749669
glad to see you moving to BA anon since some of the characters there looks straight up your alley.

I think their inner ankles looks weird desu, probably a bit too pronounced/wrong positioned
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>>5749870
Meanwhile we have shit like
>>5749100
>>5749113
and
>>5747920
>>5748145
>>5748175
So you mean to tell me all this ERPING about being a loli and wanting to be in sexual relationships with older men does not constitute as a red flag for these generals? Be in denial all you want you cannot negate the fact you will attract more like the guy that just got banned and you will continue to see more erotic roleplaying by faggots unless the resident tranny quits making these threads it's fucking stupid.
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>>5749898
quit whining faggot we can handle it
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>>5749898
There's always going to be some unhinged crazies in a degen-esque environment.
When I was a kid I was sentenced (vandalism) to do some social service for a local parade group and they have a tranny-type guy there who just acts like a creepy weirdo who drops hints of his weird fetish in normal conversations while the other fags in that place acts relatively normal, literally nobody cares unless the crazy decide to act out his fantasies IRL.
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>>5749898

your 2 dads are resident trannies, bitch.
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>>5749898
Fuck off already mikutrash
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Do you guys wanna draw on jackbox?
You basically connect to their server, and make up a name.
It's all sfw stuff btw, i don't think they'd allow nsfw.
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>>5749910
Is it something that’s in a web browser?
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stop it with the bullying
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>>5749911
yeah, it's got a bunch of games about trivia, wordplay, lying, and so on, a few are drawing related/
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>>5749910
>>5749934
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>>5749965
schizo
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>>5749910
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>>5749934
sorry i'll pass. But if you want to have me put something fun / any kind of theme / a challenge / whatever you can think of to put in my next drawing. i'll try my best!
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>>5749976
>>5749970
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https://twitter.com/nobeta_staff/status/1463028384628240390?t=-dcJBfrjVrKANv0hitNfGQ&s=19
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>>5749965
>>5749976
you literally can use a vpn, and connect to Jackbox servers, you can even put cunnymuncher and nobody would give a fuck.
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>>5747946
You made it bro
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>>5749681
Sasha.... T_T
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Damn. A lot happened.

>>5749530
Yet.~
I still plan to draw more and post more of my stuff if the thread is cool with it. I still do not know what is considered safe and risque here.
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>>5750042
>tfw i still only have 2 followers.
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>>5750053
you have us
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>>5750069
nta but that's wholesome as hell
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>>5749100
same, it’s the only reason i draw em
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do you know the artist?https://files.catbox.moe/b2lxg1.png
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>>5750125
chicke iii
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>>5750053
2 really? I thought I have the least amount of followers Lol
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>>5749143
>>5748931
did some redlines of these, idk if it helps was just bored
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posting my work.
reminder to not fall for triple letter agents trying to get you to "debate" them.

>>5750172
interesting, why did you give the character breasts
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>>5747946
I saw this retweeted on my timeline and I don’t even follow you.
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>>5750224
>everyone who disagrees with me is actually a federal agent
must be nice to never have to confront your world view or be wrong or think for yourself
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>>5749135
Not him but still be sure to tag for fandoms/characters/bandwagon. Make sure your post is searchable in some way on default Twitter so you aren't relying purely on the algorithm and your grandpa to retweet it for you. Hashtags are okay in moderation. Consider the difference audiences over seas (JPN vs ENG tags). Often drawing a popular character and tagging even just their single character tag is enough. Once you get big enough to have a constant flow of traffic and dedicated consoomers, then you can slowly ditch the tags... But I'd still suggest a series and/or character tag for exposure in the long run.
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>>5750255
I tried doing tags and it only seldomly worked by attracting bots and people using sub4sub techniques. It's like throwing pennies into the ocean one by one hoping it'll stack big enough to form an artificial island. Yeah, I'll get 4-10 new followers each time but it's not as effective as someone getting 100 new followers every post. And if it's a FOM character or some waifu from the current season then most anime fans will know who it is thus the tag being very redundant.

I can see tags being useful for things that are obscure, rumors on developing content, or day to day global trends. But as he said, it comes off as desperate when there is no description of the image or passing comment.
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>>5747663
Fizrot
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>>5750172
That's not what a redline is.
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>>5750511
redline it better, crab
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>>5750518
That's not what crabbing is.
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>>5750172
The original was more soulful.
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I am finally free from banland, here's the stuff i worked on while away
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https://files.catbox.moe/egee3a.png
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Just an attempt at Alke style.

>>5750806
I still wonder why I can't open catbox links.
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>>5750816
What do you mean you can't open them? The links just don't work? What happens?
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>>5750295
It's depressing
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>>5750044
Isn't it that angel girl from Blue Archive?
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I want to bring up the topic of legs length once again...
I agree that I have a problem with making them too long, but I think it may be more about the way I do it (maybe in relation to the rest of the body, maybe in the relation between lower and higher part of it)
Look at the picture on the right for example. That seems like a fairly long leg, and I think it's something like what I want to achieve.
Has anyone here ever focused on that?
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>>5750172
I drew the mouse.This wasn't the kind of redline i was used to seeing but i like it,shes adorable and dorky lookin like i hoped. I also like what you did with the clothes, it's different then what i was aiming for but it's probably better
I also like the girl one on the right, she looks perky and happy

>>5747946
congratz. it's cute.

>>5750224
The body is alot too long, shorten it by a decent bit at the waist. also the thighs shouldn't bend that way. Draw it like a subtle oval. Thicker at the waist and thinner at the knee
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>>5750991
Anon, that's why I was asking you if you drew long legs on purpose, it's a matter of style, long legs are used to give a supermodel emphasis to the character, it's completely valid to draw long legs even if your character is a loli, personally it never bothered me, more than the legs I think you should work more on your feet and hands, you could increase the level of your illustrations a lot, after the face, hands are the second most important thing when drawing a character,
>https://sketchfab.com/3d-models/abigai-4ffa31ae779343108816e55631683ff9
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>>5747946
>>5748131
which brush are you using to do the lineart bro? a gpen?
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>>5751041
>it's a matter of style
Sure, I understand that, but I still think I have a problem with it.
I agree that the original pic I posted had the legs look unnaturally long, and in fact the first sketch I made had them even longer, I shortened them before posting here.
To summarize, I do want to make somewhat long legs (like in the picture I posted), but I need to figure out how to make them look good.
And yeah I know about the feet and hands, I also have to improve on perspective and backgrounds, I have a lot to work on, kinda want to focus on the legs at the moment.
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>>5747946
ZAMN! ToT
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stagnant again
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>>5750991
Who's the artist on the right?
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>>5750224
These are the proportions I normally use, it's definitely not a hard rule, but all you do is alter the head and neck depending on the person and but keep the rest of the proportions roughly the same.
I learnt it from Loomis and it seems to work for most bodies though there can be be some slight differences as not everybody is the same. The human body mostly follows this pattern of proportions, regardless of age, but for females only. It won't work for all males, but it sometimes may.

Remember to work at the bottom of the body to up, when doing these proportions, as heads and necks can vary a lot more than the rest of the body.
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>>5751219
ymm007xx
https://gelbooru.com/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=6503086
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well
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>>5751284
That's honestly really really good imo. I wanna see how it turns out
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>>5751284
very nice
though the index on the hand there is a bit wonky (the left one)
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do you know where this is from? it looks familiar
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>>5751284
both looks really good
right's right leg is bending too much to the right though

>>5751325
Milky Holmes, S1 is a legit good show, S2 is decent but not as good as S1 and S3 is unwatchable.
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>>5749673
I'm not going to lie. I was kinda going for that kind of hairstyle. I like lots of hair, long hair, crazy hairstyles, and "cotton candy" / foam-like hair. But the person who redlined it above did an excellent job before i could think on it. So i'm gonna make it look less mass-like

I was also going for what you described for the clothes. but reading your post and seeing what the redline looks like i'll probably try something different. Something that's not plain but alot cuter.
I appreciate your imput
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The powerful and feared Demon Lord was banished to the human world, as a Loli! - Now Hello Work is forcing her to attend elementary school!!

This is a demon loli i drew for funs :D
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>>5751339
ToT, very nice just clean up them lines
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>>5751332
>Milky Holmes

thanks
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>>5750295
>messed up the greentext
for fuck sake
>And if it's a FOM character or some waifu from the current season then most
anime fans will know who it is thus the tag being very redundant.
>I can see tags being useful for things that are obscure, rumors on developing content, or day to day global trends. But as he said, it comes off as desperate when there is no description of the image or passing comment.
am retarded, if you don't use hashtags in the first place how do people find your art?
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>>5751422
>if you don't use hashtags in the first place how do people find your art?

They can't, doubly so if you don't put any description into your tweet including the image

Hashtags isn't as bad as those anons claims it to be as long as you don't over do it (making more than 3+ tags to a single image), a lot of competent artists I follow will at least have 1 hashtag on their art if they want to let it be seen, the people who don't use hashtags are either doing it because a) it's parody porn and they don't want it to be directly associated with the thing they are parodying b) they are confident because they already have a large follower base or c) they don't care.

IMO there's a lot of luck involved with getting your art exposed on twitter and hashtags can help mitigate that somewhat.
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>>5750991
Anon who redlined you. I said before but the main problem was that the femur was too short compared with the rest of the leg, not that the leg was too long. You can make them longer as long as you pay attention to that. By the way I think you drew the crotch a bit too low on the right.

>>5751043
Real gpen, yes.
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anybody here use skeb?
Have you gotten paid from it?
Any weird comissions?
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Are there any decent shota artists to use for reference? Trying to get a better grasp for shota proportions without summoning a party van
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>>5749850
you mean rustle 2.0?
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>>5751741
Pretty sure you need JP bank account for that. Pixiv request is the one for guyjeans
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>>5751438
>the main problem was that the femur was too short compared with the rest of the leg, not that the leg was too long
But isn't the femur on the picture on the right even shorter compared to the rest of the leg?
Even if the crotch is supposed to be higher, don't you think the lower part of her leg is notoriously longer than the upper one?
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>>5751846
It's a bit longer but not that much. It feels longer because the feet are pointing down instead of being straight on toward the viewer.
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>>5750886
I really dont know. This problem of mine when it comes to opening catbox links has happened for sometime like half a year already.
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I need help with the feet anons, and possibly with the hands. please
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>>5751925
My views on it. Maybe its just me but her upper arms seems to be a tad short. A tiny bit of meat is also needed on her fore-arms just to give it a little more contour/definition and not make her arms look like its bending like rubber. Feet will most likely be hidden because of that pose though, although you can make it that her feet are splayed at the side and not resting on its sole, which allows you to draw her toes and a part of her feet too.
Everything else look solid however and definitely uoh. ToT
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>>5751966
Baby fat... ;_;
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>>5751925
give her a bit of fat on her tummy, a very thin person sitting in that position will still show a bit of visible stomach bulge.
I think the hands are fine but her forearms are a little bit fucked, do what that anon said on both the forearms and feet.
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>>5751916
If you can't describe the problem, I can't give you a solution. Do the links work? Do you get taken to some 404 page? Use your words man
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What's the difference between Western and Japanese loli/shota?
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>>5751925
in my opinion, the hands look great. but as the other anons said the arms may not be long enough. But to me it also depends on where you end up placing the feet. The hands look like they're placed on the floor but from where it looks like you're placing the feet it makes the prospective of the hands look like they're floating. I'd say to plan on where your placing the legs/feet first so we can get a better idea.
Drawing looks great though
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>>5752416
westerners can't draw legit looking anime
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>>5752540
some people ITT can draw legit looking anime though
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>>5751757
thebrushking
Lunaflame
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>>5747657
Rate please?
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>>5751916
I have the same problem. Use a proxy to get around it.
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>>5752540
*Americans can't draw legit looking anime
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>>5752753
uncen version ?
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>>5752800
I hope baraag image links work to people without accounts
https://baraag.net/system/media_attachments/files/107/302/141/103/786/529/original/f05cc35ddd97508b.png
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>>5752753
>the uoh hat
nice
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>>5752753
not my style but still pretty good
could use a lot more work on the feet though and I am not even a footfag.
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>>5752862
Thanks, my style is pretty weird I don't even know what it is and I'm kind of a footfag, I think this pic has more detailed feet https://baraag.net/system/media_attachments/files/107/228/363/042/800/953/original/c443bbc3dcb96c09.png
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>>5752805
>>5752879
Cute. That vagina in the last one looks like an open wound though
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>>5752951
Thanks, I usually draw for a friend that really likes spread vaginas, I think this one looks more normal but it's cub so I don't know if I should be posting this in the furry general
https://baraag.net/system/media_attachments/files/107/259/829/245/291/488/original/472db867d2ad3a89.png
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I don't know how to do lineart
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>>5753231
I'm not particularly good at it either but it seems to me that you should either make it bolder or have blend better with the colors that you have.
Try that and see if you like it better.
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>>5752779
Castlevania, RWBY, etc, retard.
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>>5753231
cute painting though, i think you should just drop the lines completely
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>>5753494
RWBY looks like shit and you know it, shut the fuck up liar
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>>5753517
It’s still better than lots of CGI anime Japan did in the past. What has your country produced?
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>>5753529
Nothing! That's what I thought.
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>>5753539
Fuck off Rwby is shit and woke
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How do i go from loomis to lolis?
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>>5753560
>woke
lmao what
of all the criticisms you can aim at rwby (poor storytelling, unused character potential, no world building, being a wholesale ripoff of avatar), you level "muh sjw" at it? jesus christ there aren't even any black characters other than WEAPON: TRUMPET and like one or two of the white fang members
or are you so intimidated by the mere presence of female characters that you label the entire thing "woke" for having them? pathetic.

>>5753529
>>5753539
my country produced dicks and balls inside your mothers mouth, pussy and ass. and also your dad fucks me on the weekends he told you he was too busy to meet up with you on.
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>>5753494
>Castlevania
>anime
Might as well call the Witcher: quippy bara edition made for disgusting roasties an anime too.
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>>5753579
Absolutely nothing. That’s what I thought.
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Went back to pen and paper as I'm continuing with Michael Hamptons video lectures and the pen tab is slowing me down with ctrl z-ing. I'm not sure if I should stop at his week 2 or 3 videos where he simplifies the figure into boxes and cylinders or continue until I finish all his videos. Week 4 video onwards is about placing muscles, my issue is lolis dont have that much muscle definition so this would be useless(I think?) and I'm thinking of dropping it and just go to the anime study general, take resource/ learning materials and continue to learn from there.
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first time trying loli, be gentle
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>>5753626
a lot of problems but overall it's ok
most prominent one is the placement of the eyes and the general flatness of the face, also not a fan of how you handle her left (our right) leg but I guess it can be a muh style thing.

Also don't post picture with nips if possible, the resident trannies and some of the mods aren't a fan of that.
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>>5753357
i can bet 20 dolans that someone alredy made a hentai out of this
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My attempt with Alke's style.
Also the uoh version.
https://i.imgur.com/ZB6KDSZ.png
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>>5754040
Try studying alke sketches, and use the hard round brush he uses.
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>>5753643
how about now
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>>5754378
do a second pass (or third pass) with cleaner lines
also attach her right shoulder ibecause it looks dislocated and define the clothing a bit more
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So where are you supposed to find art models? Do they not exist anymore? How do real artists learn how to draw children?
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>>5753954
Its comic LO...
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how do you make lips not look shit? Do you just curve it and ignore they exist? putting human lips doesn't look that good.
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>>5754424
anon... you're glowing
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>>5754469
Fuck it, I don't care. I'm genuinely interested, where are you meant to find models? Not CP, you retard, models like you use when you're trying to draw adult women and men.
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>>5754424
>>5747919
>>5749976
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>>5754471
instagram
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>>5754472
>>5747928
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>>5754424
private life drawing sessions
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>>5754471
just search for nn galleries
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>>5754378
looks better but the facial proportions are still kind of wonky, I feel a tinge on my dick so you are doing something right.
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>>5754471
Don't be vague so you don't get zapped by the mods.
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>>5754578
I'm not trying to be vague, I'm specifically asking about models, as in people who pose for artists to learn anatomy from.
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>>5754582
There is a free, completely legal and completely safe website that has adult men and women and elderly and dogs/cats/tigers, etc. It's one of those gesture drawing websites.
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>>5754480
nn galleries?
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MOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOODDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS
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>>5754426
no dummy i meant from this imformative pamphlett not from LO
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>>5754645
Oh right. The plot seems extremely generic so very likely.
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>>5754044
Does sadpanda has his sketches? Do you know his pixiv btw?
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>>5754424
just rent one
you can rent child from any child renting shop just like you can buy a tank from any tank selling shops
dummy
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>>5754592
Am I supposed to shrink those models down and ignore the differences in proportions?
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>>5754424
You could try https://line-of-action.com/
or just go on pinterest.
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have you guys played recettear, the loli mc won queen 2021 on /v/, and she's the queen now
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>>5754480
>nn galleries
fuck why did i look i don't even like lolis
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>>5755058
enjoy the prison time
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>>5747657
As an enjoyer of both, I wish there was a MILF sister thread to this one...
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>>5753564
you need more loolis
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I am currently in the process of adding lineweight before moving on to coloring it
please crit me
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>>5755159
lacks cunny energy. they all have old hag proportions
that being said, I like girl 3's design but I think you fucked up the arms foreshortening. the upper arm should be longer and overlapping the lower arm in this case due to it being in front
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>>5755188
I can't take credit for their designs as these are pre-existing characters from the uma musume game (1. mayano top gun, 2. agnes digital 3. tamamo cross).
>they all have old hag proportions
That's on me, I haven't drawn anything younger than a JK so this is me trying something new. I don't want to use the other threads like /asg/ because they have sensitive people who will go bonkers if they see a girl drawn in a suggestive age.
>foreshortening
Yeah, I have no idea what I was doing there and the whole arm there was a mix of imagination and referencing an action figure I have at home since I can't find a reference of this pose I am trying to do, I thought the coat can hide it a little but I guess it still shows.
Now that you mentioned it this problem seems way more apparent now and I will try to fix it come her turn.
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>>5754707
Actually I’ve been browsing /v/ more and it’s actually a lot of fun and the anons there are very cool.
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she has hair now
I think I'll study black and white rendering now. starting to get bored of my lineart-only comfort zone
>>5755208
fair enough. I'm having trouble learning loli proportions too, especially with the legs but hopefully studying oyari ashito's work will shed me some light
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>>5756030
>legs still stubby
>unable to notice it before posting
how do I stop dumb
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>>5756030
>oyari ashito
I get you like him, but his proportions are anything but standard.
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>>5756060
it just works
lanky lolis are too good
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https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xCgDd-JY0QE
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>>5756231
>those names
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I also such at physical drawing, I fucked up at the chin/cheek here, I wanted to make the eyes a bit lower and mouth lower>>5756231
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>>5756231
>those names
>Labor

jesus christ NZ
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Do these rules hiro said apply to here?
Can we post loli butt?
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>>5756480
Is that for blue boards? Is that an actual endorsement or just a shitpost? Where was this posted?
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>>5756303
>NZ
NSW (New South Wales) is in Australia, it’s the province (state?) around Sydney





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