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Previous Thread: >>5788689

What is /ALT/?
If you're looking for a place to post your cartooning then you've found the right general. This is /ic/s 1st and only merged hub where both Eastern and Western stylization can coexist peacefully, hence the double title. However, by community demand and long history, this is favorably an Anime general.
>Rules & Guidelines
(1) Any form of cartooning is welcome; so submit and receive feedback from others. (2) Please resize your images before posting. (3) Share your knowledge and (4) Remember to not be afraid of asking for critique. Most importantly I encourage you to keep discussion at a civil level, but you're more than welcome to share your opinions.
>I came for anime. Why does the image OP say cartoons general?
To distinguish from the anime study thread (janitor supported). Please post your studies there and personal work goes here.
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>Community Resources
Hitokaku Index
>https://www.asahi-net.or.jp/~zm5s-nkmr/
List of active livestreams
>Use twitch #art
>yoshikadu2011https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCUx5dpO6d5gQ4KWNPc24CKw
FellowBro's Book Collection
>https://mediafire.com/?i44dwzkf9j9n8
Tutorial & Reference Collection
>https://pinterest.com/characterdesigh/
Japanese Tutorials & Documentary
>https://www.pixiv.net/member_illust.php?id=59317(0033)
>https://iradukai.com/
References
>https://www.onairvideo.com/croquis-cafe-photos2.html
>https://www.eggazyoutatsu.net/eng/atarichan.html
>https://senshistock.com/sketch/
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>>5826267
really cute stuff, anon
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>>5826158
bro what is going on with that face
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>>5826317
Stop being antisemitic
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>>5826267
can u teach me bro thats so sweet
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done with the omori stuff for now
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>>5826596
alt colors
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My hand writing is shit

does the perspective for the guy on the right look like crap?
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>>5826965
The feet size difference seems lil off on the right guy but that's only after scanning the pic to find something to nitpick so not a big deal.
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>>5826155
jan 1
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I feel like my art is shit I’m in the infancy of my tattoo apprenticeship, should I just give up? My mentor is a tough guy to fucking please kill me.
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>>5826158
You are slowly turning into the new tumblr queen, steadily regressing and constantly sperging about muh art-style while putting out the ugliest drawings imaginable.
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>>5827290
> while putting out the ugliest drawings imaginable
Fuck you, I make the ugliest drawings. That title is mine
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Comic dump, gonna draw this week. I’m so excited.
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>>5826158
how are you this inconsistent, are you fucking tracing or something?
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>>5827360

Bet you're getting sextuplets.
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alright folks is this better
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miichan
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>>5827360
congrats on the kid anon,
I've enjoyed reading your journey through this basket weaving forum, please post more
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>>5827606
>>5827856
Beg
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>>5826155
ive never really liked the way i color but i think im getting a style down, i want it to be more solid/flat and thinner lines
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>>5827684
based Mionfag
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Does /alt/ have a mascot? Is she alt?
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>>5826310
Thank you bro :)
>>5826587
Sure, what do you want to know?
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>>5829007
blog?
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>>5829016
Don't have social media for my art, but thank you for reminding me to make one
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wip, gna finish tomorrow night if i'm lucky
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>>5827684
Blogu?
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I never post but here goes
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>>5827606
>>5827856
Don't listen to crab, you aren't beg. Though I agree that face need more work, do you study favourite artists? Just do it, no need to reinvent the wheel
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>>5829332
it's pointless trying to help him. He never takes any advice and has been doing the same shit for over a year now. Check the archives if you don't believe me, same whining about artstyle but no attempts to actually improve in every /alt/ thread.
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>>5829140
I feel there should be more overlapping of her Infront of the car and there is a bit extra empty space on the left
>>5829244
Needs a fez hat and a pipe
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>>5829340
You're lying now
Why do you hate me so much
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>>5829363
don't tell me you lack self-awareness that much
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>>5829371
All I ever wanted is critique of my drawings
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>>5829375
your clothing folds are shit, study clothing folds

your colors are shit, study your favourite artists and borrow their color palletes to fit your design
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>>5829379
Alright good.thank you finally
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>>5828209
I like rena more tbqhwy senpai
>>5829144
don't have
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>>5829375
Translation: All I ever wanted is people to tell me exactly what I did wrong and exactly how to fix it on a silver platter so I don't have to actually learn anything.

Did you cheat on your tests at school a lot too?
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>>5829435
what is the point of posting here then?
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>>5827856
I don't understand how you're this fucking blind man. Get your eyes checked seriously do you need glasses?
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>>5829450
You ask this every time like it changes anything. People have given you responses to this very question countless times. It doesn't change the fact you aren't actually learning and instead expect everyone else to do the thinking for you for free.
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>>5829461
no, actually >>5829460 these are the only responses I'm ever getting
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>>5829461
>>5829471
>>5829460
>>5829435

alright guys I'm sorry I got a little frustrated with this discussion
you are right, I am just very stupid, that is why I get upset when I am not told what exactly is wrong
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Almost done with this.
Tried doing some mottled light to make it look like he's below a grove of bamboo, but it just made it look flat so I removed it.

>>5827684
idk why it's sideways but it looks great
>>5826267
>>5829007
Great style, very appealing colors
>>5825091
@Melkobox on Twitter
>>5825168
Only advice I can give is you might want to work on figure drawing and construction more, rather than anatomy. I remember Vilppu saying that these are two different aspects you have to train at the same time.
Try doing studies in tone more too, it taught me a lot and I feel it improved my drawing ability even when I'm only working with line art.
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>>5829351
>I feel there should be more overlapping of her
>and there is a bit extra empty space on the left
oh the bg is a placeholder, i couldn't find a good garage pic ref last night so i'm doing that part today to save sanity. thanks for the input tho, i'll make sure everything is layered nicely.
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Stop deleting your tweets asukafag you moron
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Mantis enthusiast

>>5829941
Looks like he's having a moment lol
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dumb sketch for today

>>5829007
>>5827684
>>5829974
really cute

>>5829522
I'd like to see you keep going further on it... but if you're done you're done. Fix the horns though, it pains me seeing them next to how good everything else looks. gj
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>>5829978
ty anon went back and messed with them a bit hopefully they look better.
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>>5830127
Sorry if it's too late, but the raised arm looks like they've got Popeye syndrome and it also feels a little flat because of the way you connected the inner elbow. Maybe add a highlight on the elbow tip because the arm is intended to poke out.
Add some highlights on the top-bottom of the hair loops around the ears (but not under the ear)
Darken the horn's bottom half just a little but more to match the shadow line of the top of the head's hair lights. Just go over it with a very light multiply layer.
Speaking of the top of the hair, carry the light down the tops of the formed hair clumb-strands. Just some quick strokes following their path so the tip of your brush tapers off naturally. Adjust tip transparency as needed.
If you want to go the extra mile, you could add some subtle highlights to your shadows. Light bounces after all!
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>>5826158
you're getting a lot of shit, but if you just move the closer eye into a better place you'll be good
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>>5829351
>fez and pipe
Brilliant. Thanks anan
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>>5829495
>I am just very stupid
Honestly I think you just have ADHD.
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>>5830262
As someone with adhd, he has more than just that if he has it
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>>5830278
Some people have milder ADHD symptoms than others but it's true, he could have BPD or something too or instead.
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>>5826596
Would work better with a slightly larger textbook and having the text stay on screen as it progresses.
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>>5830297
>he could have BPD or something
kek
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>>5827856
hey man, i think you need to work on proportions a bit more. don't be afraid to take more time in the sketching phase to plan things out. use measurements and primitives if needed. it'll help you be more consistent from drawing to drawing. with practice, you'll be able to construct characters faster when you will be ready to leave that process behind. id recommend you try to fill a page's worth of poses and try to make the proportions consistent. you can find poses through gesture drawing sites, pinterest or any other image search engines
id like to add that you could work a bit more on expressions. im not quite sure what emotion she's trying to portray. try to find references of actors' expressions when making a new piece.
your colors are fine, don't worry about that for now.

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>>5827373
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>>5829461
you're all acting like women who expect everyone to read their mind. use your fucking words instead of bitching and moaning.
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>>5830374
damn, no need to act out just because she hurt your feelings, anon. Maybe try being less retarded next time and maybe your next girlfriend won't leave as fast as this one did.
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>>5830391
>implying he ever had a gf to begin with
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>>5830374
First time on /alt/? I remember the day I first met Asukefag too
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>>5830637
>filename
kek, good one mr shredder of undergarments
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What makes something like this so appealing?
Everything about it is fairly basic, the gesture is there but tame, the rendering is minimal, the outfit is nothing amazing and the skirt is just a blob honestly.

But I like it, and even if I try to emulate it I'm sure it'd fall flat. But why?
Why is this so much better than me?
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>>5830833
And I don't literally mean me, I know why I'd suck if I did it. But I've seen much better artists still lack the appeal of something that simple but still somehow feels really good.
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>>5830833
>Everything about it is fairly basic
That's your answer. Simplify, nigga.
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>>5830833
appeal, notice how the face is more treated and has more dedication than the rest of the body, the other important thing here is the colors, it has a very pleasant color palette, good reds, desaturated black, this pale skin with saturated and hue changing shadows, it contrasts very well,
tl;dr good head, good hands, good color palette
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>>5830833
The drawing itself is a bit loose but all the fundies there are good. It's mainly the really good use of shapes.
>the gesture is there but tame
You don't get gesture if you say this kind of stuff.
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>>5830857
>you just don't get it
That's because gesture posters are a meme. It's a straight line nigga.
You could say the composition is there and the roughly inverted triangular composition draws your eyes to her face but their ain't shit for gesture in that form unless you bullshit hard.
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That winter break was too long. I am so fucking rusty. I had the hardest time drawing (1) and I couldn’t ink it for shit. I guess i better bank some studies.

On a scale of 1-4 how much tableguy do you like in your Dee Dees?
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>>5830929
2 is solid for keeping the original style in there and adding your own flare... But the mouth is a little lackluster. I think the eyes in 3 are a little big, but I like it. The legs on 3 are also really nice. And I enjoy 4 because you pushed the expression and forms. I like your style a lot so I enjoy 4 too. Makes it hard to choose, but I think some middle ground between 2 and 3 would be good for future Dee Dee's? 4 does feel a little too exaggerated for casual use, but your style has so much of the jhonen vasquez charm to it that I think they all look good
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>>5829974
ultra cute :D
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Line-art of my chef / waitress. not 100% on what colour im gonna render the chick.
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>>5829140
kinda lost patience at the end but i think it's still presentable
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>>5829244
>ISTANBULDOZER
I love that anon
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another sketch o.o

>>5830637
cool!

>>5830929
3 is my fave, but they're all looking nice, cool expressions
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>>5831450
Fix those legs, they look ridiculous, the forearm and hand holding the phone(?) are completely broken. Also her breasts look like bolt-ons kek
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>>5830929
schizophrenia progression timeline
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>>5831076
Neat looks like character concept art
>>5831108
I like the Miku and the Car nice style could do with less stuff on the background but nevertheless it's neat
>>5831450
Neat cute Chiaki the forearm holding the Switch could be lower
>>5831642
This
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Happy to start drawing again
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>>5827360
I’ve been drawing really slowly recently, i dont know why. This also took 4hrs to typeset and dialog. This cold weather is slowing my metabolic drawing rate

>>5827413
Nowadays they only transfer one embryo at a time. It feels more like a sniper as opposed to a shotgun.

>>5828020
Thanks, it’s still too early to call. The chance of miscarriage is quite high until 20w. But it was exciting to finally be done with IVF

>>5830929
I was having a lot of problems stylizing the face. I think its because i don’t draw a lot of faces. The size of the eyes and location of the mouth were throwing me for a loop. I also realized I can’t ink the face because the curves are too tight, and i was tearing the paper when i tried to fix the divots in the lines.

>>5831450
I like the legs and feet on 3

>>5831642
I think dee dee is the best 90’s era cartoon for me to redraw because she is so unhinged. I will probably do some more today
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Only usable sketch from today. Was trying to do a cuddling scene that didn't work out.
Wanted to draw a happy sort-of expression with some exaggeration in the arms, not sure if the long arms/big hands are appealing though

>>5830179
Thanks anon I really appreciate the critique.

I can see what you mean by the the hair highlights and strands, was being a bit conservative with them there
The popeye arms are (sort of) intentional, just a characteristic of the monster to have massive forarms. If they look bad then that's on me
>some subtle highlights to your shadows
Do you mean reflected light? desu I'm not sure how I'd handle that. As in I'm trying to visualize it on the piece but idk how to use it
I've already posted it though so I'll have to keep your comments in mind for the next piece
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>>5832565
>(sort of) intentional
In that case I would increase the size of the other forearm. Since that one looks more proportionally accurate to the average beefy forearm. The other one just seems a little *too* bulbous and disjointed from the upper arm and feels a little flat/lacking in form/volume. If it's a key characteristic, you may want to emphasize it more as a key point of focus in their design. It can be hard to find a good balance when you leave the realms of realistic proportions, but I think you overall did a good job.
>reflect light
Yes! Unfortunately it's not something I can explain well over text, but I highly encourage studying it. I think it would give your shadows some extra pop.

Keep up the good work!
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>>5826155
Baby got back
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>>5832663
>broken anatomy
>washed out muddy colors
>overused shit meme
>massive watermark
awful
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>>5832682
Thank you
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>>5832842
Kill yourself.
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>>5832012
very cute drawings anons
>>5828189
pretty good, but the tits and the tights look weird.
>>5831108
pretty fuckin good! miku is fucking awesome looking. background is a bit rough but it k, u lost patience anyway.
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>>5833374
Reddit: The .png
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>>5833399
what is that supposed to mean?
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Is there any saving this piece considering the perspective is abysmally wrong (without redrawing the entire thing)? I could cut out the characters near the back if it helps. I'm terribly inexperienced with drawing scenes in perspective. Also you can ignore the guidelines as I don't think they're even placed correctly.
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I got one of a drawing doll and I really think it helps a lot!
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>>5833458
nice! Which kind did you get?
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>>5833468
body-chan from aliexpress...

pic related is what I was able to draw yesterday without any reference, I coulkdn't really draw their lower body at all
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>>5833475
cool I'm glad it's been helpful! I've been wanting to get something like that
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>>5826155
i guess this could fit here idk? I dont really paint but here
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are the eyes fucky or does it look fine?
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>>5834652
looks great
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>>5834652
Looks fine to me. Maybe the left eye's pupil could be covered juuuuust a hair more over the top with the eyelid? Similar to the right eye. But it's just a few pixels and I don't think it's a big deal when he already has the crazy-ish vibe thing going on a little so it fits
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>>5834652
Left eye (iris) looks weird, but good overall
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>>5834976
If I could suggest anything, I think the girl being lifted's inner foot could be angled better. It's at a very awkward side angle and while the leg isn't pointing back as much as her other leg, but it definitely isn't far enough to show the side of the foot so prominently. I think the toe tip could point down or down left.
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>>5833475
trace it
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>>5834976
hey pantsu draw this toilet girl character. thx
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>>5835101
Commission me, bitch.
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>>5835101
Okay I will do it friend
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>>5835101
I would draw this… but you didn’t ask me…
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>>5835151
It does have table guy written all over it
Or toilet governor
(I think it's you anyway)
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>>5835159
FUCK HOW DID YOU KNOW IT WAS ME!?

I can’t even write anonymous shit posts. Maybe next week. Kinda busy with these cow drawings
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>>5835166
I am afraid of what you will do to the poor toilet loli
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>>5834652
looks pretty vunderbar to me bro
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Tried some new stuff, some styles are just not meant to be mixed together. Feel free to vote or comment, and i will incorporate it into my next cartoon reboot.
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>>5835568
They are all cursed except for the first one
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>>5835021
Anon. I thing you aren't flexible enough to give your opinion on little girls ankles
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>>5835568
first one is best
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>>5828987
I lost five followers over this drawing, was it too furry? I thought it came out nice.
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>>5835709
Ehehe, you deserve it
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>>5835709
Don't worry anon, I lose followers all the time, it doesn't and shouldn't mean anything, just focus on drawing what you like. Twitter mostly only likes coom art, so who cares.
>>5835899
Good fisheye perspective on the top right, I think you should draw the other v fin, would make it look more striking. And don't be a soul pulled down by gravity and laugh at the other anon
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>>5835709
probably because it looks like shit. Why is everything so rushed? Especially that face/head wtf
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>>5835946
oops , I forgor about the other side of the v fin
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>>5835568
They are all blessed child
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>>5835709
your style is so ugly and boxy and the sloppy unfinished quality just makes it worse
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>>5834976
love your distribution of detail, man
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>5836052
You can't fucking draw.
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>>5830833
>But I like it, and even if I try to emulate it I'm sure it'd fall flat. But why?
>Why is this so much better than me?

because they can render this piece and make it 10 times better, they use fraction of their ability.

You are light years behind in skill simply and effort "if i tried im sure i would flat"
Yes browsing ic will help with that mate
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>>5836142
neither can you obviously
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did some pokemon today
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>>5836134
thanks friend
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>>5836610
i like ur style anon i like the way u draw hands
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>>5835709
The face is unappealing desu
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>>5834976
bruh i think i follow u on twitter
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>>5837085
>>5834976
*///big fan
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>>5836742
Love this,
honestly thats pretty damn close to how I want to draw women, which brings me to what I was gonna ask in thread.


How can I make my women look better? I've drawn many many many more guys than girls, and feel alot stronger drawing them, but drawing girls is a weak point for me. Anything that stands out that makes it look bad? Or anything I can improve on?
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>>5833428
ok i overhauled the bg, found a 3d room on sketchfab & screenshotted the angle i needed so i could trace the perspective lines for it, was helpful :) still re-working the composition a bit too
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>>5837138
Less boxy hips and work on drawing feminine head shapes and faces. Her knees are also too low
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>>5835899
I like your style. What's your blog?
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>>5833682
>>5834976
fucking cute, post blog now
>>5836403
also fucking cute but i already follow you
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>>5835709
Share your blog and you'll gain one to make up for it.
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>>5837317
The perspective is definitely better but the scale of each figure is still a little wonky. Is the person bottom-right supposed to look like elf-sized?
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>>5837492
Thanks! Theyre supposed to be a kid and the lady is a goddess, but yeah I do feel weird about the scale. Still figuring it out and working on the BG
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>>5837497
One way that might work is basing things off the background. If that fireplace for instance is sort of average sized like maybe 3 ft or 4ft tall then the kid looks way too small in comparison and the goddess looks normal size next to it. If you reference things off of each other that way it might be a little easier to scale everything properly.
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>>5837499
Oh that is a helpful tip, thank you!
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>>5837528
You're welcome anon, and good luck.
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>>5837317
I know another anon is helping you out, but I'd like to point out that on one side of the fireplace it is flush with the wall, but the other side isn't.
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>>5837541
oh youre right, TY for pointing that out! fortunately I happened to add some stuff that ends up blocking it anyway haha
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>>5837138
I love your style. Saved
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>>5827856
mid beg
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>>5838377
I really appreciate that friend, thank you
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>>5827684
this is nice
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>>5827262
It looks good. I say keep going
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I've improved a lot over the last month but I find things still lacking. what stands out the most?
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>>5839291
The fact that you put more detail into their faces and NONE into the props they're holding? Or their clothes? These look traced.
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>>5836163
I hate this meme that if you spend 30 seconds venting on /ic/ it means you literally never raw.
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>>5839344
I mean, I used a photo of myself as reference for the upper half of the right one because not everyone can rest their head like that and it's hard to find pictures like that.
I put more focus on the faces so that the eyes would go there first, that's why the stars are there too. but you thinking it's traced says that that isn't a good way to go about moving the eyes, so I guess composition is something I should tackle.
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>>5839433
Watch your color values
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>>5837377
Don't have a blog, but i'm pretty active on the oc thread if you wanna hop in
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>>5839449
thanks friend, I I usually try to keep the colors close in saturation and brightness but I think these are all over the place... i am done though so mission failed :^)
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>>5840447
i like your stuff but i feel as thought the faces could be structured better
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>>5840447
really cool, made me hungry
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>>5836202
>>5836204
love these, super cute
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>>5832870
Pyw nigger
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>>5841728
No. Go die from drinking contaminated water or something you fucking thirdie.
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>>5840781
thanks, I absolutely agree, I hate the guy's face a lot I struggled a lot with it
>>5841193
thanks friend
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>>5826267
>>5827118
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>>5828189
>>5829007
>>5829140
>>5829978
>>5830637
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>>5842563

daily reminder you pedos deserve the rope.
drawing little girls is not art you pedo fucks.
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>>5842569
You
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I dont even need to run a poll for this one… more style practice. That fucking chibi took me so fucking long to draw and it is by far the worst one. I dont know what that means. It’s so fucking disgusting looking. It actually takes me more time to draw from reference than from imagination now.

These are unprecedented times
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anything i need to fix before i do anything more with this? the hands and feet i can fix its the glasses/perspective of them that i think i fucked up on
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What are some good ways to add expressive poses to shy or more meek characters?

Typically when you think expressive or dynamic, you think the big movements and outstretched limbs you'd see in a more assertive character. But a shy character is naturally more hunched down and withdrawn. There's still expression you can capture with that pose, but its not really what one would consider dynamic so it doesn't really draw you in as well.
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comm wip

>>5840447
good stuff as always
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What the fuck. When did /alt/ become /beg/?
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>>5843332
pyw
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What kind of layers do people use to get this bloom effect?
I've started to notice that a few artists use it to achieve that early 2000s anime style.

https://twitter.com/nyamofe/status/1480900810594975744/photo/1
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>>5843368
copy the layer -> gaussian blur
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>>5842952
Today was better
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>>5827360
And comic part 2 of the “discord” one
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>>5843330
Thank you! Your drawing is really cute. Really cool and clean lines

>>5843634
I would love to see you do it with an animey chracter
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>>5843790
some more
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>>5843332
when your begass started posting here
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>>5826158
I want to fuck Angel.
move the closer eye towards the nose or something.
The bottom of the nose look a bit janky though.
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>>5843798
disorienting, i love this a ton.
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>>5843055
Personally when I think expressive what comes to mind is the entire body is taking part in that expression. So not only the face, but the body language conveys that a character is shy or uncomfortable in some way.
Some examples that come to mind are -
>twiddling fingers/fidgeting
>turning body away
>averting gaze
>closed legs/arms or defensive posture
To get a better idea you should see how both irl people and 2d characters display different emotions. If possible, I’d recommend saving pictures of these expressions you happen to like for future reference and study
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still messy but close to done.. i didn't have time these days to paint p_p
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>>5845582
c-cute
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>>5845716
>>5840167
>>5836742
>>5836202
>>5834652
>>5831108
thread favorites
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>>5845716
Don't encourage him you fuckin mexican, he'll never improve otherwise, the only thing he can do is render, he's fuckin lazy. want to break his face ffs
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>>5845752
wish I could render my face into a girl's ass
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>>5843634
Done, this was more difficult than I thought it would be.

>>5843677
Man style grind is so painful, i gotta take a breather. But which character?
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>>5845582
How do u render, teach me ur ways
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>>5843798
>>5843790
some more, because yes. Do you think this is unique in any way??
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>>5842569
At least half of those are adults and some not even human wut
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>>5845877
Dno if it'd unique but your b&w stuff is nice, don't like your colouring though.
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>>5846094
Can you specify why and how can I get it better
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>>5842569
Get a life
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doing my first comm

>>5845716
ty wey ^_^

>>5845752
why are u so mad lol, i'm not even a dude...
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>>5845758
huh what u mean
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>>5846636
marry me
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>>5846636
>i'm not even a dude...
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>>5846650
Thats a T___n_
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>>5846711
we're not talking about you.
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>>5846711
prove it
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Finished this thing today.
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>>5846865
Doesn't look finished to me. Why are the clouds so flat looking? If you're gonna do a simple bg then make it blurry and soft so the viewer doesn't focus so much on it.
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>>5846890
Yeah, you're right. I wanted to make them kind of stylized, but they do look off compared to everything else.
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Is this a good foundation to move forward with or is anything really off?
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>>5846908
uh no, it looks great, don't listen to this retard with poor taste in aesthetics >>5846890
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>>5846973
I think her left arm is wierd - it doesn't look like her shoulder and elbow connect and overall it looks too short.
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>>5846984
Agreed

>>5846908
It does look stylized nicely and overall it looks good

>>5846973
The right hand looks like it has a long pinky everything aside from arms and that hand looks neat
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>>5846985
>>5846993
Thanks anons, I'll work more on the arms/hands.
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>>5847063
I really like your coloring technique.
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>>5845770
Scariest bad guy ever made, wearing that meme swimsuit thing
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>>5847174
NOICE
>ps2
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>>5847063
ooh yeah that really is an amazing coloring friend... you are great!
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>>5847603
thank you!!
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>>5833428
>>5837317
>>5837546
Here's the finished thing if anyone's curious
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>>5845716
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it done

>>5845775
i paint in one layer, only add a few if i don't want it to mix and then merge, i suck at explaining though lol

>>5846865
great utener, love it

>>5848627
i dunno anything abt chainsaw dude but so far what you've done looks v gud
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>>5826965
Onions boy
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>>5846865
Everything but the waist down looks great
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>>5826155
(Posted this in ASG by mistake) What do you guys think of never (or rarely) using solid black outlines for your digital drawings? Using a dark color for outlines instead.
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>>5846865
Love the colors, great job!
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>>5849373
You can use whatever color you want for your lines, it doesn't really matter. You can use black, a dark color, color the lines according to the adjacent colors, no lines, what have you. Just up to your preference.
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Some feedback? First time using tablet.
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Wife called me a cuck yesterday then proceeded to laugh about it for like 30 minutes. She thought it was really funny that they made me watch.
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done

>>5847063
>>5846865
really good work bros
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>>5849713
Actually funny, but i really hope that didn't actually happen.
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>>5849688
It kinda sucks desu. I can tell you were most likely guessing most aspects of this drawing. I suggest getting a grasp on the fundamentals before attempting any sort of stylization if you actually want to learn how to draw.
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Some more tf2.

>>5834670
>>5834815
>>5834830
>>5835247
>>5845732
Woah, thank you sm!
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>>5847611
Comfy
>>5848646
Hard to tell what this is but interesting
>>5849274
>>5849796
Cute
>>5850177
Nice
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>>5849796
Pretty cute.

Your hair vents need work as do a lot of those joints. Especially on the blue hair girl, the side bangs just look stupid, hair vents usually start from near center and not the actual sides.

The joints are another big area, blue hair again the shoulder needs to be larger especially with a jacket due to how the clothing connects to the torso piece. But in general the folds at these parts seem to be lacking, right on the left's should looks wonky too because of how you handled folds


And of course, sausage fingers. Which I'd normally ignore but its the focal action of the image so it should be drawn better.

The biggest travest is the blue hair girl's hair though, fix those hair vents.
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>>5850212
thank you for the critique, glad to hear someone actually give criticism rather than just saying "this is bad"..! I'll try to fix it up.
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>>5849373
never use solid black. it always looks amateurish. use a dark brown, blue, or purple
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>>5850403
Not sure if you're joking but I have no idea what you're talking about
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I'm pretty happy with how it turned out in the end.
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>>5850920
post blog weebtard
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>>5850921
pixiv.net/en/users/27563939 I'm definitely not very consistent so the quality can jump around quite a bit.
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>>5850929
thank you weeb god
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>>5850920
Practice painting skirts and legs more. Their soft airbrush/gradient like shading is distracting when the rest of your drawing involves harder shading and definition.
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>>5850920
I actually like muzzles on anime girls from a side view of their face, the shark faces actually fit pretty funily with them.

Not really a critique just a thought.
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>>5850920
Where do you go to learn how to render like this?
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Sketches from yesterday
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>>5851392
Your animal cock anatomy could use some more practice.
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>>5851395
Yeah thanks. This is just all off the dome. I was trying not to use references and draw for fun but when that happens I tend to get a bit creative instead of accurate
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>>5851395
Will look into it though
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Trying to get better at drawing women, any tips would be greatly appreciated.
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>>5851549
From a glance maybe work on your poses. She is standing like a teenage male holding his first beer at a party where he knows no one. Women tend to not stand with their legs spread apart
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>>5846865
absolutely based utena fan
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>>5830833
you need that Asian jeans
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this is what the pros don't tell you
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>>5849713
PUSTULIO!!

>>5849814
I mean… it kinda did happen..
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tried cleaning up my sketch instead of sketch on one layer then lining on top of it. i am happy with the results
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>>5852476
well shit, guess i dont have a good hand then
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>>5852476
next level is using precision/stabilizer to make actually decent art, not those scribbles
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>>5852476
never thought of it like that
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>>5853902
hi firned


look at this fucking pic am I fucking retarded? I can't figure out the fucking legs...

I am just gonna crop them up to the thighs but wanted to show you how fucked up it is...
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>>5853654
(you)
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friends told me to draw my candle character in an among us suit, so here's a half-colored WIP
what do you guys think, is he cute?
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>>5846636
progress, close to done

>>5852474
>>5853902
>>5850920

love these
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>>5855064
you are gay
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>>5854922
maybe try smthn like this? i posed them according to the mood
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>>5855064
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>>5855868
ohh I really like that anon thank you so much for the help!

some times it feels impossibly hard... like I am missing the part of the brain that can draw their lower half
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>>5842569
blue crossed post wtf
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>>5830351
he's just a cow begging for attention
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>>5855943
im the same anon workin on the catgirl comm heh

and np use it if u want, and i feel u lol
for poses especially women just think they would overdo them a bit, to look more femenine and stuff. good luck and happy to help
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>>5855910
>>5855864
i dont know what i expected
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>>5854922
hey pantsu how do you get good at backgrounds save my soul guey
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>>5856303
see >>5852476
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>>5856364
t-thank you
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garbage panel... i have no idea how people make funny comics
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a witch

>>5856336
love this
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>>5856916
blog?
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>>5856423
its not funny but possibly a fun character
i dont think you can make a joke in 1 panel
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>>5856930
thank you, I agree and it isn't meant to be a joke i just could not think of anything else...
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>>5856925
https://twitter.com/Malchapalm

Quality varies, so don't be surprised.
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>>5856861
thank you... that witch owns, too
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>>5858001
>>5858001
>>5858001
New thread, make it count
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>>5855863
cute, but you could really sharpen your forms a lot more.
notably the fingers, they look like sex doll noodle fingers and not like realistically jointed fingers. my old sex doll used to do that with it's pinkie too.

Its also notable on her breasts where her right boob looks like a torpedo. Could round that out a bit.
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Any pointers/critique? Throw it all at me ic
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>>5830833
>crisp, precise lines that describe accurate volumes
>subtle curves indicate anatomic landmarks
>interplay between shape and line, natural transition from tight to loose
>solid sense of shape design, appealing ratio of detail to negative space
it might look simple, but minimalist would probably be a better word.
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>>5858522
Head seems too big



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