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tell me whats wrong with this image and how do i fix it
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*please
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the front wheel is way more near the viewer than the other breaking its perspective
but its a cool angle, just be aware of that.

made that on paint, pretty rough, but you can understand it.
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>>5848367
understood. what to do and how do i fix it? i imagine the VP is wrong or something
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>>5848380
you can try just doing an 2d plane with 2 circles before giving it more form so you avoid one wheel going further than the other till you get better intuitive notion

check some kjg stuff if you wanna freehand things
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=SiKofjjtSv0
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>>5848390
yeah so where do i put these two circles
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>>5848404
>>5848404
just... imagine the frame of the bike man
then you put it in perspective
even a straight line can help, so you follow it and do the 2d plane
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you dont need two threads
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>>5848348
The back of the bike is not even connected to the front. There's not enough drawing to even critique
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Tell me about this image
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>>5848426
...you know this statement is very vague, right?

>>5848453
yes, i need ten

>>5848454
okay maybe focus on the front tires/steer

>>5848475
huh?



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