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—Giving good critiques edition—
Previous thread: >>6159242
>Welcome to /salt/
If you're looking for a place to post all sexual works, from pinups with exaggerated proportions to pornography, then this is the right general for you. Both Eastern and Western styles can coexist here.

>Rules & Guidelines
1) Any form of cartooning is welcome; so submit and receive feedback from others.
2) Please resize your images below 1000x1000 before posting.
3) Share your knowledge.
4) Remember to not be afraid of asking for critique.
5) Remember all GB3 related content such as lolicon, shotacon, furry pornography, furry and bestiality are banned on ALL boards, including red boards, except /b/ and /trash/.

>Community Resources
FellowBro's Book Collection
>mediafire.com/?i44dwzkf9j9n8
>characterdesignreferences.com/character-anatomy
>>>/ic/artbook

>Timed drawing gallery
line-of-action.com
quickposes.com/en

>Image reference
modelindexdatabase.smugmug.com/browse (pw: croquiscafe21)
hegrehunter.com
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Cringe
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>>6181094
Any anons here got comms? Please post art/amount of $ if yes
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what was it? loli?
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>>6181476
Rouge the bat.
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She should've given him a chance.
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>>6181094
What anime-derived art styles you like to cum to and which ones don't? I can't fap to moe. I just can't. The faces are too uncanny for me.
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>/salt/ thread now gets to sit on catalog without an OP image cause mods wont accept furries are as common as weebs on this site.
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I wanted to do coom art for life but it turns out coomers like big tiddy big ass curvy shit dripping cum and i like skinny women with no booba
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>>6181686
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just delete the thread and try again
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>>6181094
WIP. What do you think?
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>>6181188
Not sure what you mean. Pieces we commissioned?
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>>6182927
Asking if you take commissions and wants a look at your commission sheet with prices and examples.
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>>6182318
picking furry shit ass the OP when there were boatloads of other good pictures was retarded to begin with. OP is a retard.
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>>6182907
That's a real cute expression on her face, anon. I hope you keep that expression until the finished drawing. For now, focus on getting the hands down correctly; be careful with the left tit so that it doesn't look too lob sided like that. You could erase that strap under her left tit also, bikinis don't have that extra strap. Be careful with the right thigh bulging out like that too, maybe just draw the inner thigh line downward instead of curving it in towards the knee. Add a little more curve to her right side also, there's no need to draw the line straight down starting from her hip like that. If she's curvy on the top, don't be afraid to draw her the same down on the bottom, too.
Other than those points, and I'm sure other anons will catch something I didn't, for a work in progress, it's good, but it can use some work. I found something in my drawings collection to show you what a bikini being pulled up from the straps looks like. Hope this critique helps, good luck and enjoy the drawing.
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>>6181502
wow that's retarded. she's barely furry too
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>>6181188
60 usd
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>>6181188
I did this recently plus this WIP >>6182907

40$ full body full colour and I have very few Don'ts c:
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>>6183742
do you fix the hands before you ship it?
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>>6181188
>>6181631
I asked for 100 USD But he tipped me 25 usd before I even finished, so a total of 125usd. that was cool
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>>6181631
I like how one of her eyebrows has a bow-like shape and goes down, while the other shoots straight up.
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Good afternoon /salt/
my power supply died last night so i had to rush order another. we back in BUSINESS with a much thinner wallet.

>>6181188
I got slots open. sketches start at $30 full render is $90. loads of characters get discounts tho.
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>>6181188
$70 for full render
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>>6181502
why would that get deleted
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>>6181188
this was a $60 commission, and was tipped additional $30.
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>>6183897
what brush do you use for these? it has a really nice texture
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What's it like / are the consequences of entering the nsfw public sphere as a lesser known sfw artist?
I love drawing ero coomer shit as much as I do the usual stuff, but I've always kept it to myself.
I'm afraid being labeled a porn artist will dominate my impression and turn off some some circles I'd like to work with in the future.
I'd considered masquerading with two aliases, but my style would be a dead giveaway. Am I being irrational?
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>>6183226
>>6183742
>>6183875
You guys need to clarify if your a ukranian or not. I'm an American with 100ish followers and I get turned down by my followers who've stuck around with me for so long when I ask for 12$. I have only been commissioned twice within two years.
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>>6183930
the basic CSP oil paint brush. sometimes I use pastel brushes on my sfw emji drawings
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>>6183949
What being ukrainian has to do with anything?
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>>6183944
>I'd considered masquerading with two aliases, but my style would be a dead giveaway.

it doesnt matter if your style is a dead giveaway you still have plausible deniability which is all you need to stay in SFW circles.
eg, zone/redminus doxy/onta

i switched from sfw to just posting everything i drew on one account and my coom stuff got really popular but has never been my main focus, so my followers are all waiting for stuff i rarely deliver and acting like coomers on all my SFW posts. so its a bit weird. i wish i had kept them apart.
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>>6183906
Nice colors.
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>>6184311
Thank you! We getting better, slowly but surely
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>>6183803
Uhh is a doll so yeah I dont usually draw the hands like that
>>6183949
No im not Ukrainian
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>>6184225
I see, thanks for sharing
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collection of some recent work
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I didn't good morning /salt/ post today oh god

>>6185699
very good work
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>>6185787
nut
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>>6185787
Damn that's a great pose. Sexy
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>>6185699
give the girl hands you monsta
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it was a productive day
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>>6186366
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>>6186368
will paint this tomorrow
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>>6184065
They get to play a pity card. “Buy art from me or else you carry water for Putin.”
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>>6186627
I've been earning money years before the war. Also if anything, I lost more clients than gained due to war, because when I warned people that I live in a city under constant shelling and bombing, some clients decided not to move forward with the commission due to concerns that I might not live to finish it.
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>>6186638
kek'd
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good morning /salt/ work hard today!

>>6185787
oops I gave the porn character dreams and ambitions again.
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>>6187424
Good afternoon
I look forward to the day when character design/world building is feasible for me
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>>6181094
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>>6187497
I came from manga so it comes natural I guess. It's a problem though because I keep filling doujin projects with story instead of porn
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>>6187500
That's not bad though, I think it's better to have more build up and development, as long as you don't forget to actually include the payoff. I'm hesitant to make characters because I'm afraid they'll be a boring as me kek. Plus I'm not good enough at drawing yet
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would you guys post one of those "share this to enter a raffle" thing if you've got ongoing comms? i've got one nearly a month old still unfinished but my acc is so dead, haven't posted in weeks
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>>6187601
finish ur comm anon stop bein lazy
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>>6187611
i have no argument, I have been lazy, also unreasonably scared of how the finished thing is gonna look
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>>6187682
been there many times it sucks to feel that way
I dont know if itll help but you gotta remember the commissioner came in with an expectation already. They know what your previous art looked like and as long as it lives up to that it'll be fine and I'm sure they'll be happy with it
Push through the fear anon we are only holding ourselves back from greatness
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does the anatomy in the torso make sense? Mug is floating for now while I decide where to place it, just want a check on the torso and pelvis
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>>6183919
epic
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>>6183919
Literally the only good one from the replies, you should charge more
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>>6188126
this is looking cute and promising but honestly it's too early to tell. once you start drawing definitive outlines and how forms are interacting we can help you better
>>6188335
damn son gimme blog. i love this, I really love how it's coming together. do you sketch and then paint on top of the lines? I'm having trouble figuring out a workflow I like. pic rel started with lineart, then I started painting to help figure out the forms and anatomy, now the face looks all distorted and it's like I forgot how to draw them entirely
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>>6181188
I started doing guro commissions, charged 70 dollars for this including a variation where she's penetrated

>>6184945
>>6188335
>>6183919
blogs please?
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>>6188744
You first
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>>6188829
https://twitter.com/Ratsandworms_
https://www.pixiv.net/en/users/8057545

i must stress, don't click if you're not into hardcore gore.
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>>6188841
@juste_vu
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>>6183919
aren't those your characters? did someone commission you to draw your own ocs?
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>>6188126
>Does the anatomy in the torso make sense?
A little bit. I would be careful with how the tits look, unless you want her to portray breast implants, or the infamous Playboy Centerfold hamburger bun tits from back in the 80's and 90's. The rolls around her belly look alright, it adds extra love handles in the right places. When I first saw the work in progress, I saw the body in the shape of a pear, and that's how I interpreted in my sketch. Thanks for inspiring me to draw something based off your work in progress, anon. Keep going with yours.
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>>6188335
thanks! great coloring so far!

>>6188338
I don't do it all that often, and its mainly for repeated customers, the price is a continuity but also because demand is low.

>>6189241
yeah, one of my earliest commission was for my OCs as well.

>>6188744
@ac120rfw
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>>6188393
Thanks guys. Two questions:
How is the general pelvis/torso/legs area looking?
Which style of booba do we prefer? Not necessarily which one is better drawn here and now, but which has a more appealing idea behind it?
>>6189790
>mulder risks it all for the ayylmussy
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>>6189803
i prefer A but i know most people will prefer B
i like saggier realistic tits but more shapely ones are nice too
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>>6181631
>>6189790
Blogs?
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>>6189841
maybe something like picrel?
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where do you guys get reference? is it okay to reference a still of a porn scene and swap characters in and then post it online/profit from it?
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>>6191168
As long as you're not tracing
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>>6183139
Oh dang just now I read this. Thanks for the observations anon c:
This is my latest update to the WIP.
>Add a little more curve to her right side also
>I found something in my drawings collection to show you what a bikini being pulled up from the straps looks like
Oh nice, I'll work on that
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>>6189790
Can I request a pic of a virgin woman showing off her hymen
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>>6191320
Not trying to be a hater but it's so odd to me how much better your dicks are than your faces. Like that's a masterful dick and then the white girl's face looks like you spent thirty seconds on it. I guess you have priorities
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spider rape incoming
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should I post side by side study of 2D porn in this thread or anime study general?

my plan is to copy features I like until I learn how to make them myself
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>>6191612
We don't like filthy anime here.
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Why is connecting the tits to the latissimus dorsi so visually appealing
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>>6191717
Because it tends to only happen with very large breasts. Adds a lot of believability imo
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>>6191563
>draw l*li
>add wings and pointy ears
>call it a fairy
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>>6191789
cope roastie
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>>6181094
do you guys know any art books for studying pussy/ass?
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>>6191563
That sounds pretty hot.
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>>6191988
Stop chicken scratching
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>>6192078
But chicken scratching is my fetish.
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>>6191320
what direction is the light source coming from?
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>>6191565
Cute!
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>>6191789
Cope + seethe = u
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>>6191086
its better
try to make them perkier and not have the connection on the left side tit near the armpit be so apparent

>>6191332
depends which girl
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>>6191789
Those chests are a little full for lolis.
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>>6191789
that's adult proportions you faggot nodraw
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>>6192230
>try to make them perkier
No
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>>6192296
make them fuller then
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>>6192303
I like the shape as it is, they already look full and heavy. How would you make them fuller without making them look fake?
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>>6192236
Right, I forgot women don't get tits until the exact moment they reach adulthood
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>>6192230
>depends which girl
Completely up to you. As long as there's a visible cherry, I'm happy. If you'll accept a request though, I'd love to see you redraw this scene from a classic called Twin Angels (canon virgins)
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>>6192313
id do something like this with the shape of the tits
at the end of the day though its a matter of personal taste in shape with what you want

i left some other notes as well just in case they end up helpful
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>>6192684
Yeah, this is hugely helpful, thanks. Can you elaborate what you mean by "can be droopy without as steep of a curve towards the fatter part of the bottom"? I might just need to go to bed but I can't make sense of what you mean.
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>>6192932
yeah that was a bit ambiguous my bad
i mean these areas on the breasts where they connect up towards the chest can be a gentle curve down towards the bottom as opposed to more concave/angular
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>>6193030
Ohh, I see what you're saying. Yeah, yours looks way more appealing. I think the reason I did that was I'm a fan of angular shape design like in picrel, it seems solid and visually interesting, but I think I need to keep the appeal and avoid "blockiness." It will take some time and experimenting.
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>>6193061
yeah in that pic the girl is very muscular so the pecs would be more distinct
if thats what youre aiming for then thats totally fine too otherwise you might want to make it more fatty
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will paint tomorrow
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>>6192684
You have really nice brush work. Whatever it's called. Too bad there won't be a head attached. By chance do you draw with grey? I'm terrible with digital.
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>>6193110
nah i draw with black but the brush has density (flow in photoshop) set to pen pressure
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>>6193100
>>6192642 here. I'm assuming it's a no?
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>>6192642
>As long as there's a visible cherry
Perma Virgin here, have always heard of the term cherry but never quite understood what it's in reference to.
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Some person on Twitter called albedohentai messaged me suggesting he'd help me by telling me what characters to draw in specific poses so I can get a good following, is this a scam or what.
My coom account is new after all.
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>>6192326
No child has a 10+ inch waist to hip ratio, that's literally a post-pubescent feature.
If it doesn't look like a classical child, it's not a loli. It might be a hormone-ridden American calf in their five minutes of looking hot before becoming 400 pounds. But they're not a loli.
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>>6193386
nvm this dude just wants free drawings, beware the scam.
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>>6193450
Then this is an adult, too? After all, she may still be an infant, but the tits make her legal.
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>>6193450
6 years old
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>>6193450
11 years old
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>>6193930
>>6193933
Oh but don't worry. Even though they're canonically underage, the tits make them perfectly legal. Because no female ever has breasts and a narrow waist until adulthood.
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>>6193937
>waist to hip ratio is a post-pubescent feature
>BUT TITS AAAAAAAAAAAAAA
Puritans really are brainless.
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I finally did some shortstack, I wanted to give her some big bobbies but I realized that the model was actually pretty smol. so I played on that. Also, Vex even in game has some delicious toes.
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>>6193952
>no you see, even though she's 7 in canon, her thunder thighs make her perfectly legal
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>>6193343
yeah i realize im not gonna do it

i guess i was looking for some way to convince myself to do it if the character given was enticing enough but left to my own brain and given any option i cant really pick one off the top of my head that id want to do it for
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>>6192326
>>6193930
>>6193933
>>6193926
All of these examples of “children” with tits are fictional. Literally anyone can draw whatever the fuck they want and say it’s whatever age they want. Doesn’t change reality.
What even is your point? Your argument makes no sense
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>>6194241
I mean, why not just draw something generic like the example given?




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>>6194456
Stop trying to get free art, it's pathetic. Other guy is too nice to tell you to fuck off.
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>>6194456
the generic example isnt something id convince myself to want to draw on top of all the other things im already backed up on
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Tani on Patrol
>>6194065
I fucking love this, nice work dude.
Vex is either drawn with GIANT tits or a small tits with a bit of chub, thats what i've noticed. No one can agree on which is "canon"
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Painting soft things with a soft brush
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>>6195029
Is that mommy Mal?
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>>6195029
nice, I really like the rim light as well
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>>6195029
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been ironing this out all day but still feel like something off. thoughts?
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>>6195440
maybe her neck is a bit squat? Although I don't really think so. Also her belly button sort of looks like a keyhole when it could be a good opportunity to imply that sort of "four corners" fat distribution that women have on their bellies, if you know what I mean.
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>>6183949
100ish followers isn't really enough to take commissions (unless you're running a cult, lol) you'd probably need roughly ~1000.

Even that might not cut it depending on whether these people see you as their idol; or just background noise.
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>>6195458
you could take them but youd most likely be paid poor wages
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>>6194428
>Doesn’t change reality.
I needed a good laugh
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>>6195711
Ok, moron.
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>>6193094
Okay, so thanks again for the redline, it was really helpful.

I've got two options I'm deciding between now. A is more like what you showed, B is sort of a mix between the originals and A, sort of softened up and plumper. I think A is really appealing, but I feel bad about just copying (or trying to copy) what someone else did, and it makes placing the coffee cup awkward, and B has some interesting shape language, at least to me. What does /salt/ think?
Oh, and the belly notes were super helpful too, thanks for that
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>>6195828
>the Jaws Effect
>the Slenderman killings
>people buying exotic pets
>people feeding carrots to rabbits
Guess these never happened. As you say, fiction doesn't change reality.
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>>6194428
Listen buddy. I get that it's fictional.
But the fact you get off to "drawings" made to look like child-- sorry, "fairies" is pretty telling.
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>>6196024
Dawg, just draw what you like. Get the drawing done, then look back at it later
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>>6195103
The one and only
>>6195191
Thanks a lot
>>6195216
Nods
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>>6196024
id say go with B and dont feel bad about copying
the intention was to help so as long as you improved thats all that matters
follow ur heart
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>>6196195
>As you say, fiction doesn't change reality
Yes
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>>6189640
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is the anon that needed help with the rouge image around? Id like your permission to post that page. I think it had enough info that applicable to other situations so Id like to share it
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>>6197169
Anon, what is going here?
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>>6197207
small breasts pushed upwards
im not saying its correct im just saying what it is
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>>6191632
Oh dude I love this. What is your beg advice and what is your blog?
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>>6197207
unironically have sex
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>>6191563
I hope that poor spider is ok after getting plowed into by 3 fairy cocks
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I feel like this is kind of a dumb question, but I want to ask anyway.
I was looking at Hamada Yoshikazu's art (picrel) and noticed that the lines aren't hard black all the way. There's parts where they are thinner, and parts where they are colored. How do you think he achieves this effect? Drawing a solid black linework all the way around, then erasing it in places afterwards? Or coloring over it? Or is it some sort of emergent property from his process?
And in general, I really struggle to get linework as good as this, even as my rendering is slowly but surely improving... any tips to getting it to look like this?
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>>6197169
>>6193100
Could you explain what's going on with vagina?
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>>6197169
this would be even hotter if that were poop instead of meat
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>>6197511
Seconding this
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>>6183919
scarra??
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>>6197511
I've seen this done with the line work on either an overlay or multiply layer, varying opacity and sometimes drawn with colored lines. At some point the artist will merge the layer with the rest of the colored work and pull the paint to blend with the lines more or continue building the piece.
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>>6197169
That’s some wonky ass proportions on the bottom chick
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Thoughts on this? I was disappointed in it enough to delay posting it for the day. I may be a little biased cause the first strip image was really good. I just don't want to rush out bad drawings with this. I just wonder if whatever issue I have can be fixed or if I need to reink/color
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>>6196238
Thanks, you're right
did nothing but draw and redraw her hand tonight
oh well
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>>6197526
Be more specific
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>>6197577
True I shoulda spent more time on it
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>>6193509
nice stuff
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>>6181631
I thank dee anon for inspiration for this one. Needed to restart my NSFW portfolio, and really liked this concept.
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What can i improve from this ?
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I'll never be good
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>>6197242 #
Thanks, I dont have a blog... Yet. I just got into digital about a month ago and still trying to figure it out. That was the first piece that I thought was worth posting. If thats your work, your linework and construction look really good. I dont think I can give you any super specific advice, other than using references, but dont be a slave to them. I used multiple references but didnt exactly copy them. Picrel is the one I used for shading, a separate one for the pose/angle, and different ones for the props. The further along I get in the process the less I rely on them.
When it comes to coloring, I start with flat colors, use an airbrush layer for hue shifts around key areas (red around cheeks/nose/elbows/hands/feet, blue/purple around eyes, darkening sun exposed areas like lower arms/shoulders etc). I then painted the shading on a separate multiply layers.
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I like to keep my linework seperate, then have a clipping layer above it to blend with whatever the color below is. I also use a mask and soft brush to fade it in certain areas. As far as the line thickness, thats a stylization thing, and comes down mostly to taste
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>>6199428
Not with that defeatist attitude bro.
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Current sketch
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>>6199605

>>6200048
cute
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>>6196765
I accept your concession and pray that you never step foot near a school
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>>6196761
Thanks again for the feedback, this is where it's at now. What does /salt/ think?
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>>6201352
and a quick mock-up for lighting (didn't spend too long on it, just to give an idea of where I want to take it. Hopefully it looks like morning light)
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>>6201352
>>6201354
Not bad, and maybe it's just me, but your drawings still give me the feeling like I'm looking at a thumbnail
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>>6201512
Thanks, but I'm not sure what you mean. I draw them in a big canvas and scale them down to 1000x1000, maybe that has something to do with it? Or you mean they have all the sexual allure to you of a literal human thumbnail
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>>6201520
No lol, you were right the first time. Yeah like I said maybe it's just me. I would just ignore my opinion unless some other more experienced people agree with me and can explain it. I don't want to lead you in the wrong direction just because of my personal preference
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>>6201527
It's fine lol I don't really know my way around the software so who knows
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>>6201529
It's me again, btw. I definitely like this piece better than your poison one, but the ass on your last piece was pretty enticing despite the difficulty with the pose
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>>6201532
Thanks, yeah the Poison one was my first real attempt so I'm fine with it being a little rough. And hey as long as the ass is looking dumptrucked and smackable it's all good lol. Nice musclegirls anon, you're doing well to avoid that pack of hotdogs looking uniform line weight that I see so often in that genre. Hope my coffee milf perked up your morning
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>>6197511
you simply pixel-lock the lineart layer, either, color it with the color you want or create a new overlay/color layer clipped to the lineart layer and adjust it there.
btw, everyone is doing it.
Kairu is the master of it imo
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Hey bros, after all these recent AI advancements, what's your motivation to continue?
I'm basically a NEET in his 20s who sorta hoped I could become a hentai artist and make money on patreon. I felt it was my one hope at making money, since I'm not good at anything else. But I feel like my one hope is being taken away as pretty soon (probably in a year tops) everyone who has never picked up a pencil in their life will be making their own hentai art and my chances of making money are gone.
I'm pretty ultra depressed about this, as making a career of art was not only my dream but also 'my one shot.' So I don't know what to do.
How are you guys coping with all this AI stuff?
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>>6202597
PLEASE do not bring AI shitposting into this thread, fuck off to the million other ones.
The answer is that people who commission art are people who like being patrons of the arts, and have enjoy making connections with the artists they commission. AI will cause people to whip up generated art for free, sure, but 99% of those people aren't doing that INSTEAD of commissioning art, they're doing it instead of begging for free art in twitter replies. Think of it like media piracy, just because someone downloads a movie doesn't mean that movie "lost a sale," if that person wasn't going to pay to see it in the first place. The overwhelming majority of people who want to commission artists are still going to commission artists. Besides, if any branch of art is insulated from AI takeover it's NSFW art.
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>>6202597
I'm coping by not giving a shit. don't pretend as if these shitty wet ass ai images are ever going to replace real porn. we live in a post-climate change era, you have more REAL shit that will end your career to be worried about, dumbass.
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>>6202709
I would very much like to see that old hag's sweaty butthole
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>>6202597
It's almost like you want to be noticed and confronted, and deem it as a win. Fuck man, get help, or just kill yourself already, this is sad,
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>>6202757
the squeaky wheel gets the oil

>>6202958
good perspective. she really feels in place.
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>>6203014
Oh fuck SNIFFFFFF
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>>6202597
Even with AI advancements, I'm extremely happy when I draw, and with what I draw. I'm sorry to hear that you've lost the motivation to draw some smut just because technology is catching up to us. AI was inevitably going to happen. It's nice that AI can help those who want something drawn for them, without them having picked up a pencil. They get exactly what they're describing, and it makes them happy. If you thought drawing porn was going to make you wealthy, I highly advise you get the proper training in order to get a real job. Make drawing porn your passionate hobby, one that when you get good enough, could definitely become supplemental income aside from your real job. Or if you choose not to make any money at all from your smut, but it makes you happy, then that's fine too. If AI can help you make your work better, much like computers have done since about 1988, embrace the technology. Don't let it depress you, anon. We're gonna be fine. Go draw some smut. :-)
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>>6194958
Hey, anon, do you mind if I drew some fan art of your OC? I always wanted to do it.
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will finish drawin and paint tomorrow
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>>6197672
What do you think is wrong with it? I think that'll give someone a better idea on how to help you if you tell us what you think is wrong with it first.
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>>6204753
really lovely line art, although might want to check the alignment of her neck from shoulder up in the background figure. I felt that it is to far to the viewer's right.
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>>6205170
Yeah that's a good idea
Need to be careful on that side when lining to not copy exactly what's there
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I don't draw dudes very often so some crits on the anatomy would be good, I'm trying to keep him looking soft for the commissioner though
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>>6203014
quickly colored version
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>>6197175
I dont understand you sometimes. Sometimes you make the absolutely hottest stuff and sometimes its all wonky and awkward looking. Whats up wit that?
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>>6205826
some art he does while horny some art he does not horny
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>>6205649
Not bad for your rare attempt at a dude
I'd say his dick is a little off-center, like that tentacle detached it from his pelvis almost
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>>6205670
This is really good, very appealing.
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>>6205911
I kinda want to finish it but Id rather just draw more stuff like it. I don't usually just DRAW A BUTT
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i finished this comm a while ago, seeing so much nice art in this thread made me want to go draw instead of playing league, thank you all guys
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>>6205670
*SNIFFFFFFFFFFFF*
how often do you add backgrounds to these? even just simple ones
i think it adds a lot to it
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>>6205994
your drawing makes me wanna play league
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>>6206202
I don't often add backgrounds to a sketch unless I plan to complete it. Sometimes I start with a background/photo especially in my web-comics but sketching them is the most work I guess so I only do it when I'm dedicating to a piece.
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>>6206816
thats fair yeah
sometimes even if its just loose it can be nice to add some context to the image
i want other coom artists to do more backgrounds too i think theyre great :-)
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>>6205896
thanks anon you helped me see it and fix it.
I went full try-hard on the rendering and it's not too bad man feels good
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All I had the chance to do today, cleaned up the lines and did a little rendering. How is it looking?
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>actually jacked off to my own art tonight

Have- have I made it?
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todays sketch
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>>6207731
Nah, I've been doing that since about two months in
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mirror as an afterthought. and it shows.
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>>6207788
Hey, so you still have your msgs turned off on twitter. Is there any way I can hit you up?
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>>6207731
Nope I'm pretty much same like >>6207779
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>>6208025
>only 9.5 more years of drawing like trash before I can reach this level
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>>6208008
Got a blog?
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>>6208025
Hey, haven't seen you post since forever
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>>6208025
This is the best composition but the shirt looks like it is cut off halfway down around the waist for some reason. Good stuff though man.
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painted
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Anyone have anatomy resources for how much any given joint can rotate?
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>>6207655
tried something a little more involved just for fun, just wanted to experiment since I don't do a lot of rendering
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whoops left the pit hair on lol probably not everyone's thing
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>>6209518
Pretty interesting, I think the breasts bring such a different color is a little odd. Maybe make the color a little less saturated?
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>>6209542
This isn't right. Where's the chastity cage?
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>>6209548
in the first pic, she keeps the cage on to keep it from getting in the way during fights
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>>6209549
>she
I'm guessing Goldlewis supplied the "girl candy"
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>>6209559
prolly, government job's gotta be good for the hookup after all
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>>6181686
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>>6191563
sketching the aftermath
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>>6210064
this has an intimate feeling that a lot of sexual art is missing out on, I really like it. I think polishing the background more, tying them into it & making the lighting more dramatic would tie it all together
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>>6209544
Something like this?
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>>6207948
it literally isn't. this feels like a bit at this point.
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>>6211132
Yeah, that's definitely better, but I think it would be best if it was basically the same color as the rest of the skin, maybe slightly warmer. Are you just trying to make them an area of focus?
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>>6211228
A little bit, yeah. I haven't worked with color before besides playing around with gradient layers and stuff. I want it to look like morning sunlight is hitting them or something. This was really just supposed to be an exercise so the final one will probably be B&W but I figure as long as I can learn something from it might as well.
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>>6209549
oh what a fuckin bummer
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>>6185699
wow the top left one is unbelievably good do you have a full size of it?



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