The general thread for Manga / manga-styled comic-making, manga-style illustration and related comic work.Support each other and talk about your work or the work of others that excites you. Inking, character design, paneling / layout, writing, planning, and other discussions are all welcome.Post resources, questions, in-progress pages, breakdowns of other works, etc. If a work is not yours, credit the maker (unless it's fucking obvious like a full page of One Piece or something).Thanks to everyone for making /mmg/ a level-headed and helpful place. Remember, drawing and making comics and manga are difficult endeavors, and we're all in this struggle together.Previous thread: >>6803350Some resources:/asg/, our stylistic sister-thread series for those focused more on illustration >>>/ic/asgBooks:Understanding ComicsMaking ComicsManga in Theory and Practice: The Craft of Creating Mangahttps://mega.nz/folder/Dd4hnZTC#EjMIcTDPLbWXkAJLPHx2KgStory: Substance, Structure, Style and the Principles of Screenwritinghttps://archive.org/details/RobertMcKeeStorypdf/Even a Monkey Can Draw Mangahttps://kupdf.net/download/even-a-monkey-can-draw-manga_58b9ca16e12e89233badd376_pdfThe Shonen Jump Guide to Making Mangahttps://mega.nz/file/i81imLpI#GcheJ9Jjk3lw1RE9nQWgL4RG4wEBNOcRmgA-iaU6WpgVideos:"Manga Senpai/Tokyo Name Tank", "SMAC! THE SILENT MANGA AUDITION COMMUNITY"Habanero Scans: https://www.dailymotion.com/HabaneroScans/videosFull MANBEN Series link: https://mega.nz/folder/9h1mUYSJ#8sJoO57nMP_JhjnujBXkpQhttps://www.naokiurasawa.com/Urasawa Channel: https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCkIFOAoFm47XOAlJwTa6Ieg/videosSource of OP image is Dorohedoro volume 11.
Some western / indie publishers of Manga:Saturday AM ( https://www.saturday-am.com/ )> Digital indie magazine, seems to be on the up-and-up> Open submissions for long-form series; also distributes series currently being published elsewhere.> Regularly publishes one-shots, making it a good potential outlet for already-finished work.Noir Caesar ( https://www.noircaesar.com/ )> Focuses on black (specifically African-American) content, but seems willing to publish anyone good enough.> Seemingly series-based only.> No "magazine" style updates; series are updated on their own schedule.> Seems less regular than Saturday AM, but also seems larger in terms of readership.Oni Press ( https://onipress.com/ )> Technically indie, but at this point large enough by comic standards to be mentioned in the same breath as other publishers.Antarctic Press ( https://antarctic-press.myshopify.com/ )> Longtime large-indie publisher of OEL / manga-esque books.> Seemingly taking submissions at present if http://www.antarctic-press.com/html/submissions.php is anything to go on.Yen Press ( https://yenpress.com/ )> Started out as a small indie publisher of original / Korean material, and has grown reasonably popular since.> As of 2016, it is also one of the western arms of the Kadokawa Corporation, with Kadokawa owning a 51% stake.> Editorial inquiries can apparently be sent to yenpress@yenpress.com, however, they apparently are not open to new submissions at this time.Viz Media / Viz Originals ( https://www.viz.com/originals )> *The* western manga publisher.> Currently in the exploratory stages of setting up an English label.> Submissions are open and several books have been announced. However, progress on the label seems to be moving very slowly.> Still might be worth a shot anyway.Shrine Comics ( https://shrinecomics.com/ )> Small indie manga publisher> Seemingly attempting to make the transition to physical volumes> Allows crossposting to other sites
Other open comic publishers:Dark Horse ( https://www.darkhorse.com )>Dark Horse still welcomes your submissions, and all submissions will still be reviewed, just as they always have been.>All unsolicited story/series proposals must have a full creative team on board. Writer-only proposals will not be reviewed.Image comics ( https://imagecomics.com/ )>Image Comics only publishes creator-owned material. They do not contract creators; they’re only interested in publishing original content for which you would retain all rights.>Image Comics publishes creator-owned/creator-generated properties and THEY DON’T PAY PAGE RATES. Image takes a small flat fee off the books published, and it will be the responsibility of the creators to determine the division of the remaining pay between their creative team members.Drawn and quarterly ( https://drawnandquarterly.com/ )>Please email a low resolution PDF with at least 20 pages of comics and cover letter to submissions. Do not send dropbox links, scripts, or proposals. Please read our submissions FAQ.Fantagraphics ( https://www.fantagraphics.com/ )>submission page: https://www.fantagraphics.com/pages/faqTop Shelf Productions ( https://www.topshelfcomix.com/ )>Regarding submissions, we're easy. Just email us a download link of what you'd like us to review. NOTE: We cannot accept cover letters, plot synopses, or scripts unless they are accompanied by a minimum of 10-20 completed pages (i.e., fully inked and lettered comic book pages).Additional publisher lists:> https://jasonthibault.com/definitive-list-comic-publisher-submission-guidelines/> https://writingtipsoasis.com/best-independent-comic-book-publishers/
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>>6834745Is this font too distracting compared to something like Comic Sans?
>>6834962Test it out on a page. With fonts it's hard to tell what looks good until you put it into practice.Though personally looking at that I'm skeptical.
>>6835160loving your black and white work
>>6834962Unless if you’re going for a specific font, CC wild words is a better general font than comicsans.
I just really fucking love this page
>>6835637why? face sizes and head size change drastically when the mask is taken off. bane in particular is not the same person mask off. its pathetic. you can tell he loaded 3d images too.
>>6835640>the size of the head changes when you take something off your headThat is true.
>>6835640Because the panel is zooming out.
what are people's thoughts on narrators?anyone use a narrator for their manga?is your narrator a character?do you use your narrator to conveniently dump exposition you can't be bothered to write properly?
>>6835718Depends heavily on the story and the character. Light hearted narrators tend to work best in my opinion
How many of you are actually learning Japanese to publish in Japan, and how many of you aren't?
>>6835160"Good work, anon, it looks amazing
If I were to learn Japanese and be in Japan, would it be possible to submit my work to a magazine or do it online? Or is it impossible as a Gaijin? want to publish my comic, but there are really no platforms that accept seinen demographic comics, only generic shonen or romantic comics. I've been talking to a friend about it, but he says that manga companies usually can't provide work visas.
>>6835796If by "seinen" you mean gratuitous nudity/violence, then there absolutely are platforms that accept them. Not popular platforms mind you, but a lack of popularity for such works is why many platforms focus on all-ages works. If you just mean a work aimed at adult men, then just trim the explicit shit and keep the themes the same. You hardly need sex and drugs and violence and swearing to tell a story that appeals to adults.Yes, if you speak japanese and can 持ち込み without issue then you won't be held to any other standard than everyone else trying to have a career in manga is. It's intensely difficult even for natives.No, you're extremely unlikely to get a visa through manga because 1. publishers are NOT your employer, they just publish your work, and they have no incentive to pay for you to be physically present in the company -- it's simply not their problem. And 2. manga is generally not viewed as a stable career. Even quite successful authors don't feel secure in their future employment -- just because they managed to make one popular series does not mean they will achieve such a feat a second time. Notice how few authors willingly let a successful series go? It ain't just the publisher motivating that.There's nothing really stopping you from sending work to any publisher you can find, but you'll be on your own. It's not like there's a whole lot of documentation of this process, you'll have to test the waters yourself.
>>6835785I'm learning passively by reading, though I'm not actively studying. I have spoken with an editor for an eromanga publisher -- he essentially told me to find a publisher who I can have meetings with in english, but he told me that if I can't find any then as long as I bring them something workable they'll try working with me. So I'm currently storyboarding something to send in. This'll be the third time now, lol. If this doesn't work out then I think I'll just go back to commission work.I don't think I'll ever actively pursue japanese, though I might be tempted to practice enough to get by in an editor meeting. I've really only been applying to japanese publishers because there's a lack of an equivalent elsewhere.
>>6835718My first chapter had an omnipotent narrator and having one can be a valuable storytelling tool if used properly.
Just finished watching pic related and I'm asking, can comically bad writing be entertaining in it's own right if it's just fun to read or watch? Valvrave was the most "super trash but fun to watch" thing I've ever seen in general and I just want to try making an one shot to see if I can beat it regarding absurd content, ideas and execution.
>>6835640Yes, superheroes' and villains' costumes aren't realistic, I'm glad you noticed.
>>6835887Are there really no American publishers who publish in a manga style?
>>6836974There are, but not for eromanga (which I'm choosing to do here because it's essentially a quick buck -- don't need to build an audience or write a whole story to get paid). Eromanga mags have to compete with their authors going self-published, which unlike here is actual competition since people in japan actually buy manga, even porno manga. Thus they need to pay their authors well to keep them around, and plenty of them are open to first-timers to keep the content flowing.This is just my opinion, but it doesn't seem like the american publishers who specialize in manga-style original works do very well at all. Maybe it's a branding issue, maybe it's a quality issue, maybe it's a logistics issue, either way you don't really see or hear about any even minor hits in the OEL scene.
>>6835884My manga isn't violent, but it's essentially about a student who becomes a crime news photographer to make some extra money. It's more like a thriller. I've tried to censor it as much as possible, but I can't do too much without losing the original point. So, I've been in a bit of a tight spot since all the platforms where you can monetize your comic are family-friendly, or the manga websites that accept foreigners mainly focus on shonen or romance.While researching, I came across Monthly Big Comic Spirits magazine, and it seemed like the perfect fit for my work. I'm in the process of learning Japanese and exploring the possibility of submitting my comic there, but I was worried about being automatically rejected just for being a Gaijin.Thanks for your advice anon I will try to remember them and try to improve my work as much as possible.
>>6837188Aw man that sounds cool I wish I could read it
>>6837188From what I've experienced so far, the publishers aren't at all opposed to the idea of working with foreigners. After all, they're ultimately seeking hits and a foreign perspective can help a series stand out from the crowd. What they'll be concerned with are whether or not they CAN work with you, not whether or not they WANT to. Can you meet the deadlines, and can you communicate and be communicated with (both on the page and off it) and so on. So don't be afraid to try it out, it's not you only get one shot.Best of luck with your series, it sounds interesting.
creepy old hag.
>>6834962Not a fan of that overlap. Kinda distracting.
>>6836830Try writing parody. Maybe do purposefully bad translations, like Ghost Story.
>>6836974Antarctic Press. I think Viz prints their originals, too. There’s obscure ones that publish and distribute Japanese manga, but will also do submissions on their websites. Twitter works great in discovering some of these companies.
>>6836998Some American publishers who license and distribute Japanese manga look for homegrown talent to branch off to since the distribution aspect is fiercely competitive. I don’t know who can publish ero OELs, but it can’t hurt to email or check out English publishers of hentai/eromanga just to ask if they take submissions. But I wouldn’t yet until you have enough content to fill a full-sized book.
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>>6838097This looks awesome. Can I read this somewhere?
>>6838390https://voidtenants.thecomicseries.com/
>>6838591Wow, a comic hasn't held my attention like that in a long time. This is really awesome stuff. You're not taking anything for granted here, every bit of the page is being used to set the mood. And the subject is so raw and intriguing. I would love to watch your process. I've done comics somewhat similarly, but I think you're getting a better effect from the style. I really feel inspired to start a new project now!
>>6838591I love your surealist art
Man, The impact on the face is hard. I'm not too happy with it still/. I think the hand looks good but I need to shade the dude getting punched face too so the guy punching doesn't look like a kokujin.
>>6838713wow, thanks!I would love to read your comics as well, if that pic is yours I'm very intrigued.as for my process, it's mostly just drawings and ideas from my sketchbook that I try to make a "story" out of, I think it's a mess personally but this has been a huge learning experience for me that I'll carry over to the next project.
>>6838981Here, I don't have them up anywhere. https://www.mediafire.com/file/4rc7jc9gjh6p39o/KAMIX.zip/fileIt's just silly comics done for an OCT, specifically the Goku tournament, where everyone makes slavishly copied ridiculous fan characters. I haven't done much more than that.
>>6838591Man I'm only on chapter two but your art is so fucking scary and I love it lol.
Art style practiceOriginally for something else
just 2 more pages to finish the first 6/12
At what point are you done with brainstorming plot and characters and shit and just start drawingI'm terrified of plot holes or not telling/showing something when I should have, or thinking too far ahead
>>6839942Brainstorm using drawings, if you can. Sometimes I'll have an idea for a scene and just draw it, without anything around it. Draw whenever you can.
how do you come up with an anime hairstyle that looks outrageous but still appealing?
>>6840194Pull inspiration from unusual sources ie not just other anime characters/humans. Experiment.
>>6839942once your plot is finished, thumbnail the pages, and design the characters and environment.Do short stories so you're not overwhelmed with designing and entire webcomic series
>>6838735Your panel reminded me of the punches from Baki. Did you use them as a reference?If not, then you should. Baki has dozens of punches like the one you're drawing.>Man, The impact on the face is hard. I'm not too happy with it stillMaybe you could bury the first even more in the face and do that eyelid flying that Baki does.
>>6839992That's a good idea. I'll try that>>6840203Yeah I've got my designs and general plot, I guess I was more worried about properly presenting it. Should I do short stories within the same world/story
>>6840375Just ask yourself the question if you'd be grateful to have your comic exist even in a less-practiced art style. I love going back and looking at my older work, even though I was a worse artist, just because I like my ideas and execution. All of the great webcomics have an evolving art style anyway. That's part of the fun, watching the artist grow.
Commission comic of Chie getting beaten by client's OC
>>6840210Yeah I used Hanayama punching the Sumo guy he fought as a reference as well as Uvogin from HxH punching the leach dude. I thought about doing the fist more imbedded but the line work got confusing for me.
>>6834745I made this illustration in a manga/doujin style using screentonesI want to make a few comic pages but my frames and panels are weakI'm downloading the op links to see if they help me
hey can anyone help me figure out what screentoning was used for this, like the hair, clothes, shadows, shading, etc. i just cant get it to match like pic on clip studio paint, is it a custom tone or what am i missing.
>>6841825They slapped down a value, airbrushed it to create soft edges then converted the layer to tone. Dunno what values, doesn't really matter cos you can do it with any. Background of the first panel is either a premade tone or again just something they airbrushed then converted to tone.
>>6841869>They slapped down a value, airbrushed it to create soft edges then converted the layer to tone.Thank you so much, anon
>spend hours trying to fixing the pose of the right hand>realize that i had drawn a left hand all along
>>6841077No bullshit study Kishimoto and Toriyama paneling they're very basic but convey dynamic energy pretty well for how basic they are.But there is a flow for entire pages in general, your aim should be to make the panels (and the scene within them) guide the reader's eyes across the page. (pic related 1/3)
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>>6842260>tfw trace hands to save time when deadlines approach
>>6842269thanks brother, that's helpful
>27 of 54>i finally hit half of the draftAnd to think that i wanted to finish this in july
>>6842279as long as its not obvious it's traced, it dont matter
>have ~100 storyboarded pages that'll probably never see the light of day>read them>they're goodFuck.
>>6843926wish this was me
>>6843926post some of em?it would be cool to see more wips or incomplete pages, I like seeing the progression of pages like >>6839935I would post some of my own storyboards, but even my finished pages lower the average thread quality too far
>>6844010Post it anon, those pages you are seeing is my latest work. When I started posting here my first work was a total mess
>>6844010Okay.https://drive.google.com/drive/folders/1J3zdoZwhDmHtwzQZJt_DaOamtnEuVGZl?usp=drive_linkIt's porn btw, and of course read L<-R. I'd re-export it double-page style but I think I might have reused the canvases so it would take more time than I want to commit right now.This is the 1st version of an idea I had for a work to send in to a publisher, drawn in early 2022. It had an element to its premise that I wound up thinking was dumb, so I ended up redoing pretty much the whole thing to alter the premise to create a 2nd version. I'm nearing completion of the storyboard to a completely different idea right now, and I'm feeling pretty confident in it, so I went back to look at older stuff to compare for fun. Reading the first version of this 2022 work had me genuinely laugh out loud a couple of times (pic related), so while I didn't feel very good about it at the time I see now that I was just being negative. It's not the first time I've looked at older work and seen the positive qualities more clearly than when I was making it.I might even come back to this and ink it for fun in the future, I dunno.>>6844050repostin cos I fucked up the link
>>6844051Dude you are halfway through it keep going. Complete one page and you will feel better to do the rest
>>6844087Huh? That's not even close to halfway in terms of the work required to finish it off. It took me about a week to draw that storyboard and it would take me a couple of months to ink it.In any case I don't need encouragement to finish it, lol. I am and have been making and finishing other stuff since just fine. I was just surprised to find how much I liked it upon revisiting it after almost 2 years.
>>6844023I will eventually. I got about 1.8 pages of drafts, gonna try and get to 8 before I post anythingstarting to look like a 50-60 page deal though, intimidating to think about when my longest finished comic to date was 10 pages>>6844051not my type of hentai but damn that is goodI get that feeling about being overly negative, I wish it was easier to have a clean view of something while you're still working on it
>>684019480's hairstyles
>>6839402I liked it a lot anon, your style and sense of humour is really good, felt like it was operating on 90s cartoon logic, think Ren and Stimpy.
>>6844786Thanks! That's definitely the intention. Most of the influences and references are 90s, and as a character El Darko is supposed to represent the lost, cynical 90s protagonist, like Duckman.
any manga you read with "fake" good art. where it looks really good on a surface level but looking further reveals how lazy it is? Like I was reading Otaku Elf and while the line art and shading is really nice, it takes a few chapters to realize that most of the art is done with the symmetry tool. Which once I noticed it made a lot of the panels very uncanny to look at, where it's the same panel copied for 3 pages straight of a character staring into my soul
what are some popular manga right now with shit art? I need to cope.
>>6845595Manga with objectively shit art:>Chainsawman (weekly)>Jujutsu Kaisen (weekly)>Demon Slayer (weekly)>Attack on Titan (monthly)Manga with art that doesn't look like complete shit but still looks much worse compared to what they used to look like:>Dragon Ball Super manga (compared to Toriyama) (monthly)>Boruto (compared to Kishimoto) (monthly)>One Piece (weekly)Most of these are releasing chapters weekly so it's understandable why they look like that.Goes to show that appealing characters and attractive writing (+ an anime adaption) can excuse bad looking art.
>>6835640Seek help instead of internet attention.
>>6844051>It's porn btw>goodAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAAAHAHAHHHAHAHHAHAHAAAAAAHAHAHAHAAAAAA
>>6845801I dont get why people say JJK looks bad. I dont even like the story, I just read it for the art.
>>6845801>Manga with objectively shit art:>>Chainsawman (weekly)>>Jujutsu Kaisen (weekly)>>Demon Slayer (weekly)>>Attack on Titan (monthly)Honestly, I think these ones in particular just have very scratchy, sketchy, unrefined art. I don't really find them "bad" actually enjoyed DS and part 1 of CSM, but the art in all of these feels very incomplete and unpolished.I guess if anything, its proof that you don't need such polished refined artwork anymore to "make it."
>>6846035Yeah this just looks like the inking is bad, but the penciling is still fine. If I were to say that a comic has "bad art", that would have to happen at the penciling stage. This is just bad rendering.
>>6845595Attack on Titan has hideously terrible art but is extremely popular because of the story.
>>6846212>This is just bad rendering.More like quickfinishing and no rendering Weekly manga will look like that
>>6835160>>6835579One thing I notice about beginner stuff and I did it myself for ages is your cropping is almost non existent. You think its better to fit everything into the frame, a full body, an entire face, but it isn't. if you look at other mangas and films etc, they crop half a forehead off and really do wild close ups, which is definitly the way to go, also variety of shots is good and a progression / sequence of shots, maybe from wide angle to close up with degrees in between and do a jarring camera angle for that kind of effect. A nice test is if you are able to see what the thing is if you squint your eyes.
>>6847259True. I admit sometimes I just wanna cut time than try a more dynamic angle. And I think it's a western caracteristic of paneling that way too. Focusing on the static and the japanese on the constant movement
>>6847259Not him but sometimes I feel like the opposite is more common. That is, newbies focusing on a bunch of closeups and generally needing to pull the "camera" back more. Certainly this is a problem that I've fallen into.>>6847295>And I think it's a western caracteristic of paneling that way too. Focusing on the static and the japanese on the constant movementStrong disagree here on both statements, because it highly depends on the specific comic in question. It's not about where it's from, it's about what that comic is trying to achieve. Plenty of manga focus quite heavily on achieving an atmosphere of stillness There's even a term for works like this, "mono no aware".
>>6847307>specific comic in questionWell, I grew reading old batman, disney and italian comics like tex and they all had a similar paneling structure. >Plenty of manga focus quite heavily on achieving an atmosphere of stillnessIm not saying about achieve a "sense of stillness" but an aesthetic choice in the paneling that you can tell it's western
>>6847319Making careful use of cinematic techniques such as the framing this guy >>6847259 describes is what is going on in that page you posted, and it's not something that is specific to east or west. It's simply a preference of the author (or whoever storyboarded it).In any case I really don't think it's the framing or the composition that makes these feel "western". I've certainly never seen any argument claiming such that was convincing, and I've seen plenty such arguments.
I think everyone has gotten into the weeds here. The original subject was the beginner mistake in framing. Comic panels are not the same thing as the boundaries of a painting. Because comic panels are so much more plentiful, and give multiple glimpses into the same scene, it's not as important to convey all of the information of the scene within each drawing. I've seen a lot of beginner comic panels where you can tell that the world has been constructed inside of the frame, crowding the area. What you essentially need to do is imagine the entire scene and then, as anon originally said, "crop" it. Cropping out a lot of pertinent information is fine, because other panels will give more opportunities to show that information. That's why establishing shots are nice to have, and then each subsequent panel can show only the changing elements within the context of the establishing shot. Or, in reverse, smaller panels can reveal information selectively to keep the reader in suspense, and then they're followed by an establishing shot which provides the context to resolve the suspense.
>>6847345>>6847333Yeah I've only got into Ito and Shuzo Oshimi and if you look at any page they've spent a lot of time figuring out the composition of panels and their linear movement through time. Oshimi blends reality and surreality illuminating the main character's psych so uniquely well, you can see how manga has its' own form that no other art could doAlso Fincher's a good one to look at for composition, https://youtu.be/QPAloq5MCUA?si=9tpLj9CmAdMNzie5
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>>6834745The mega link for Manben is dead. Removed for violating content policy. . .
>>6845130Congrats anon, your manga got promoted by NamiComi on their Insta today. Should bring more views to you.
>>6848185>NamiComiholy shit I totally forgot that place
>>6844051>porn>r>loof
>>6844051>porn>r>lnoice
>>6848231They're small and this forgettable at this stage, but IMHO they're trying really hard to aggressively expand. My manga suddenly popped onto a bunch of those third-party manga reader sites, proper accreditation and all, and I think they're the ones that have been doing it. They're at least responsible for the MangaDex uploads, I know that much.
>>6848265>work to send in to a publisher
>>6848388>western >porn>publisher L O L
>>6848390Yes anon, I used jp sfx, wrote it L<-R and set the porno comic in a school because I wanted to send it to a western publisher.
>>6848396yeah, that’s not what that refers to
Chapter 2 is out: https://tapas.io/episode/2959316>>6848325> MangaDex uploadslmao even mine is there
In the year 2472 a number of magical beings escaped their permitted residence in the Ash Wood Natural Preserve, Two years later in 2474 they were responsible for the death of six people after a 18 month grooming period of [redacted], The incident occurred on [Redacted] where they murdered [redacted] and using illusion magic forced [redacted] to eat [redacted]. Shortly after wards the Venator Society landed and exterminated all escaped magical creatures in the region with approved magical and scientific force. [Redacted] was placed in a mentally disturbed youth group but never recovered. Sorry I liked this so much I had to share it, I always end up looking forward to writing the next arc instead of the one I'm working on.
>>6848396Porn is boring.
>>6848669I agree with you. Gotta eat though.
>>6848742Drawing porn comics was the best you could think of? Go be a burglar or something.
>>6848783To make money making comics? I've tried all kinds of things. Right now I'm trying porn comics. Try not to hurt yourself straining to think of a way this is somehow a bad thing.
>>6848791You just agreed it was boring. I don't know how you're ever going to compete with the true believers.
>>6848794In your mind, is petty crime better than making your living through relatively uninteresting creative work?>I don't know how you're ever going to compete with the true believers.I dunno if I'll ever be as good as the guys who love it, but I don't need to be. Plenty of food to go round.Besides, at this point, I'm far from bad at it, and I'm only getting better.
>>6848805Okay fine, go be a hitman or a mercenary. Sorry if the crime was too petty for you. I just don't understand why you would ever want to try to compete in a creative field when you don't even love the work. How does that make any sense? Doing art for money is supposed to be a dream job which you succeed at by working to make your art worth money. You're selling the embodiment of your passion. But you want to make money at it by treating it like writing copy for a catalog, or painting signs on buildings?
>>6848837>why you would ever want to try to compete in a creative field when you don't even love the work.Well, that's what you get for assuming I don't love the work. I love making comics. I love making porn comics less than I love making all-ages comics for sure, but it's still the same basic activity. A mechanic who works on farm trucks might rather be working on sports cars, but that doesn't mean they hate their job.>You're selling the embodiment of your passion. But you want to make money at it by treating it like writing copy for a catalog, or painting signs on buildings?I agreed with you that it's boring. That does not mean that I do not put passion into the work at all, that's a conclusion you leapt to all on your own. You're searching for contradictions where there are none.
I hate how many ideas i get to make oneshots or series, but then i can't even finish what i'm doing right now...I watched the last one of the puss in boots a while ago and since then the idea of solving crimes in some fairytailland with red hood as the detective, rumpelstiltskin as the one that is a scammer and knows what's going on the streets and goldie as a teen assistant to the detective hasn't left my mind I wish i was healty to blow myself off doing manga
>>6848847Yeah, just leaping to assumptions. I don't know how I'd ever arrive at these conclusions when you're saying things like >I dunno if I'll ever be as good as the guys who love it>I agree with you [porn is boring]. Gotta eat though. No idea how I got the impression that you're phoning in work you don't care for just to make a buck. It wasn't until now that you said that you love making comics. Could have said earlier "Yeah porn is boring, but it's worth it to make comics for a living." So do you have a long-term goal to make a comic you're more passionate about, after you've put in your time making porn?
>>6848861Okay, fair points. I could have worded previous posts better. I don't usually respond to seemingly bad-faith arguments by professing my love for my profession though, and it is true that I AM drawing porn because I need money. Otherwise I would be working on any one of the the passion projects I'm sitting on.And how about you? Any comics you want to make?
>>6848871Awesome. Actually I gotta say, if you are making regular money at it, congratulations. Yeah I would love to do a comic adaptation of Alien. It's a really dreamlike story, and I have a lot of ideas for expanding the nightmare and making it more vivid. Reading the novelization really stimulates the imagination.
>>6848851Why not just work on a page right now? I've been sitting on the first 7 roughs of my manuscript for a two weeks. Gonna draw them before I continue the rest. Having milestones is good for progress imo. After I'm done with this oneshot, I've got several other outlines I'm mulling over.
>>6848876Oh i'm working right now, is just that i have been doing some changes to some pages and i still unsure if it good that they will look like this sometimes
>>6848876Man you're right. That would be awesome, just to do a page. I'm grinding an overdue illustration at the moment, but I'll work on that to shake things up. I always think, if I'm going to be a pro at this, I can't be the kind of guy who does art when he needs to and then does other stuff for fun. This has got to be the main thing, to be both a hobby and a profession.
>>6848883Nice, I like your backgrounds. It's got the handmade touch.
>>6848893Anon that's gintama, that it's the reference for what i'm aiming
>>6848883I've embraced a yolo attitude with manga work. I'll do my first as good as I can think of at that moment and if it's shit I'll redraw once everything else is done. It's more important to finish than it is to get it good.>>6848888Godspeed, my man. Find a schedule that you can work with. Have some sort of minimal time you have to invest in it every day and set clear goals for the week.
>>6848900Ha, that does make more sense. >>6848909Yup, that's the only way to do it. Most of the great comics start with worse art than they end with. They never would have been made if the artist had waited until he could have "done them justice". That's funny, I just had the thought that this would be good advice to >>6848851 and then realized >>6848876 was addressing him, not me.
Man where does the time go. I spend hours on one page but when I look at it, it's just 5 or 6 simple drawings
>>6835640its because they are weaker when their mask comes off. What is a metaphor? You stupid ignorant fuck
>>6847634That mega has been down for months but the pirate website with a lot of the episodes streaming is also down now. Your only hope now is to learn Japanese, get a Japanese VPN, and pay the $9.99 for a month of NHK.jp on demand.
Scenes of people getting ganged up by reporters? I'm stuck with just 1 panel that has that and i haven't a composition or reference that i like it
>>6847634I downloaded them all some time ago, here u go>https://mega.nz/file/RMJQQLaT#kbQXjQArBHPhFdqSLMVc5FtQJwhYiIRRW5U4y1Nh-oQ
>>6849886Mind if I replace the link in the OP with this one?
>>6849926not at all
>2 panels and remake 1 scene and i will finally ofiicially over with the 1st half of the chapterThe ride never ends, the harder part is that you either have to remake it in the space of that scene or have to remake and rearrange the whole story from that point on
>>6849804You could do close ups of yelling mouths and microphones or a close up on the gaggle of heads. Also what the main character is seeing, the flash of cameras maybe and peoples feet rushing round as he looks down.
>>6850168Is another character flashback, but i mostly have trouble how to draw the crow of reporters
>>6850188Ps. It would look like that
>>6850188Just don't fit them all in one panel, get real close up and if you do a wider shot just make most of them a sillouette, up to you
>>6850191Is that the flashback is 4 pages long and like 19 panels so i want to make each panel count, in that one i want to show that the character is doing fine working as a hero, saving a people, and the reporters taking her as a prodigy in the field wich makes the teammates envy her
>>6849886Does it have the episode with Katuysa Terada?
>>6850168I like this.
Fuck i made myself giggle with some little chance in a page, now i wanted to post some pages to compare the new version with the one that i was making last year, but i just realized how bad the last one was
>>6850316Why are you posting about not posting something? Are we supposed to beg you for it?
>>6850316oh sir please sir show us sir
>>6850316spoiler alert: the new one is also bad
>>6850318Nah i think that posting in the sketch phase would make a waste of time for you people, but the think is that i remembered when some anon told me that i should take time off and doing better next year (which i forcefully had to do since i miss the deadline anyways) and i didn't want to hear him that time, but now time have prove him right
>>6848940They're deceptively simple, not actually simple.
Currently on my I NEED TO IMPROVE stage, but I want to finish this chapter before I take measures.
>>6851301links do subscribe or read or whatever.I'm also up for adventure/fantasy/action series recs.https://tapas.io/episode/2932056https://wingsofdaera.cfw.me/
Should each page be able to be enjoyed on its own by someone who has no idea what it is?
>>6851344That's a benefit of having good looking pages, not a requirement, per say but definitely a noble goal to work towards
>>6851302Yoo anon I saw you updating on tapas but not here so I thought you had quit /ic/. Seeing fidah intimate desires was cool
thought i'd share a wip herepage 2 out of 4
>>6849886>>6849926I updated the folder so you can download each season separately, plus there's an episode guide of what's actually in them now.Please use this link instead in the next OP>https://mega.nz/folder/YQYAGJTR#1PAs3gRYTMoerPapIZTXGg>>6850306sorry, no. Manben Neo was only up to episode 13 before the site was taken down
do people actually read oneshots? it just seems like a weird concept, if you like it you’d want more of it, but you know there isn’t anything more, seems like a losing proposition either way
>>6851874Clean lines and good paneling. Good work anon
>>6851874what kinda brush do you use for the lines
>>6851926I guess this is why manga magazines bundle them into the rest of the weekly releases
>>6851372heey thanks for reading!yeah I was not posting here for a while. Almost done with current chapter.
project I've been meaning to start for a while. I'll try to make these 6 pages to the best of my abilities. I need to make character sheets for the characters tho...
>>6846201The humans in AOT legitimately look like shit by both technical and appeal factors to the point I wonder how it's even possible than Isayama never improved his permabeg level figure drawing skills and proportions in 14 years of drawing. Pic related is from very late in the series so it's not something that applies only in the beginning.
>>6846035Less technically bad and more like just very shallow and forgettable going purely by art direction when compared to something like MHA which has both objectively good art and interesting character designs (even if the story is shittier). Doesn't help that zoomers hype up like it's some sort of revolutionary series when everything else outside of the fights is pretty bog standard.
>>6846035>I dont get why people say JJK looks badIts the line art, its shaking and no variation in width
I've been wanting to start a publishing company but I dont know if i want to deal with the headache of dealing with other artists egos kek, but not sure i want to stick with my current publisher
>>6852531kino
>>6835160>>6851301AECAST author is not here, but I like the anon's comic. I wish to add more characters, but for now, the others are still writing their first chapters and I probably missed other works.
>>6845801>>6846282thank you.
>>6853216>no bardmanneat idea though, would be cool to have a faux periodic magazine
>>6853216oh man, love this! Asha can be the team muscle there.I read Aecast and I really love what the anon put so far too, I want to see more. Gives me a feeling like Heretic but with cute girls.Link for the other two?
>>6853294
>>6853231>>no bardmanHolyshit I forgot tales of bardic fury. Gonna add later.>>6853294Void tenants: https://voidtenants.thecomicseries.com/Altarusia(mine):https://altarusia.thecomicseries.com/archive/https://m.tapas.io/series/Altarusia---Comic/info
>>6853317 meant for>>6853291
>>6834745Besides what is recommended in the OP what are some good manga drawing guide books for the beginner? Preferably from Japan and translated into English too. Videos just don't do it for me. I've found books easier to follow.
>>6853145>no variation in widthAre these people blind?
>>6853155tysm anon.Were you able to understand anything of the story? I'm focusing on making sure people turn the pages at the end of every page.Thanks to this video:https://youtu.be/LvJE4p9moLs?si=sVnTxxsZ4xRKvbUm
What advice do you have for finding dynamic reference images to use for covers?
>>6853883Composition is key
>>6853294Heretic? You mean like the original FPS game?
>>6853317Alright just read the first two updates. Trad art is soul, enjoying that. Please try to upscale your pages a bit though, bigger IS better. The ghost girl was cute, hope she reappears in some way.>>6854295The very same. I don't know why, Aecast always gave me Heretic vibes. But again, with cute girls.NOW THE RAVENS SHALL CHECK YOUR FLESH.
>>6854505aah this is so cute! It's actually all digital, I downscale a bit and ad some other filters to get this effect, but I think I can make it a bit bigger without losing the effect. >hope she reappears in some way.spoilers...she will!
>>6844051>it’s pornVery based
>>6853291as promissed
>>6854724Das it mane.
Update from the anon courting an eromanga publisher: had a meeting with the editor (we'll call him K-san). The short of it is: it apparently would take around a year to debut even if I lived in japan and could have face-to-face meetings, and as it is our meeting covered the same ground in 90 minutes as would normally take 20 minutes over the phone (his words) so that alone would slow things down a lot.Obviously, that's bad news for me, who can't afford to wait what will likely be well over a year.He also seemed to have concerns about how to actually pay me, and the tax situation. I'm about 80% sure they can just pay me through direct wire transfers and all the tax stuff is my problem rather than theirs, but he said he wanted to research further. If I had to guess his concerns stem from paying royalties to a non-resident of japan, which apparently might get tricky. I don't really know.Now the good news: K-san does seem to like the work, praising the paneling and character designs. He says "I like you, you have much more passion and motivation than new Japanese artists. Your drawing skill, too." He might just be gassing me up, but I'm choosing to take this at face value... which might just be a cope, lol. He seems to believe my work would do well sold as doujinshi, and he spent quite a lot of the conversation going over the numbers and essentially trying to confirm (paraphrased) "you're sure you want to work with a commercial magazine even though going doujin might be the better choice for you?" so that does give me hope I don't need to rely purely on commissions for income while I continue to pursue this.[1/3]
>>6854947His feedback for the comic itself (which can be read here https://drive.google.com/drive/folders/1nqtLnCYCHXr1PYNUu12OlfyxyPEhhsvh?usp=sharing for reference) is as follows:It's well drawn and easy to read. The work is excellent for a new author, but if I want to draw regularly for a commercial business then it needs to be even better. As it is it meets the minimum level, so I should aim to make it even better so they get what they'd be paying for. However, it would still need to be "adjusted for the japanese market" (his words).For example, the protagonist, despite having a very lucky experience doesn't seem very happy about it. He more or less expresses that the readership would not really relate with the protagonist on that front. He also points out that there's no change in the relationship between the characters by the end, which he feels makes it monotonous.He suggests I change it so that, for example, the relationship changes during the sex so that the girls end up falling in love with the teacher rather than apparently only treating him like he's just a penis to play with like it is now.K-san goes on to say that if they were to "formally commission" me to do this work, he would add another 20 pages. 4 before the sex starts to elaborate on the heroine's relationship to the protagonist, and 16 "to have the heroines fall in love with the hero after they are defeated by his penis during sex."He tells me that the theme for the book (bisexual ffm threesomes) is much better suited for doujins, as in japan it's really more of a niche than something fit for a commercial magazine like theirs where they want to attract a more general audience (within their demographic of course) to hit sales targets (which he described in detail with the numbers -- they aim for 15k sales, and he adds that pays the author out 1.5million yen (~10k USD) in royalties). He seemed pleased when I suggested that I could instead make the book around a more popular theme.[2/3]
>>6854949This meeting ended without me really getting a clear idea of what he needs me to do to make progress toward being published. He seems to be taking me seriously despite his clear uncertainty about working with a foreigner online, but I'm also left without clear instruction on what he needs from me. So I guess all I can do is rework the storyboard to address his critiques and send it in again and do research on the tax/payment situation so I can give him a clear solution to that problem (which I'm reasonably sure isn't a problem, but whatever).In the meanwhile, I'll take his advice regarding trying out doujin publishing by throwing some previous works up for sale. This field is just as mysterious to me as working with this publisher is, so I expect there'll be plenty of problems there... I really wish that some of this would be easy and simple, but I can't really complain when I'm trying to swim against the current here, lol.Anyway hopefully some of you anons found this rambling recount useful, or at least interesting.[3/3]
>>6834745First mega link is broken, you got a back up?
>>6854951What are your thoughts on selling it on dlsite/fantia? Do you think it'd help to get published with an eromanga if you already had an audience and sales stats through those first?Also do you have an assistant or would the publisher have supplied you with one?