This is one of the pages of the comic I'm working on. Can you give me your honest opinion?
This is another page.
My IQ is not high enough to decipher what's going on
>>6943414It's understandable, I haven't written the texts yet.
Reminds me of Bluefluke
>>6943409>>6943411Chris Ware fan?Anyway, it's very original, pretty phunky phresh, ya know? I like all the little abstract figures and details, hands are well drawn, characters are cute. You got a blog, anon?
>>6943419>Chris Ware fan?Thought the same.It also reminded me Nori Okawa (even if that's not comics).I like your artstyle OP, do you plan to add some colors?
>>6943419:) I greatly respect Chris Ware's extremely personal work, but his 'labyrinths' give me a headache. I have more affinity for George Herriman's (Krazy Kat) 'minimalist freedom'. >You got a blog, anon?No, but I am developing a website on neocities. I opted for this site because it gives total freedom in the presentation of my drawings.>>6943423It's complicated... I feel that the composition loses 'cohesion' when adding colors. For now I only use a gray scale to avoid 'monotony'.
>>6943409I like this a lot. You fully take advantage of the medium of it being a comic,and have some very creative methods of paneling and composition of the page as a whole.Your lineart is very clean and it compliments the linework of the paneling, and (presumably) the letters, once you add them in. Overall, I think this looks very promising, and would love to see more.A bonus for me is the cute characters, as they are very cute.
>>6943485Thank you, I really appreciate your kind words. When I finish the comic I will publish it on this board.
>>6943418I don't know that author/work, but you're right: the use of extravagant forms is similar.
