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im struggling rly hard rn with this. can someone redline me or tell me what's wrong? i really love the face, but everything else sux for some reason and im losing the will and want to finish it because ive redraw it several times.
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>>7783556
you're just lazy and complaining here is your excuse

finish the drawing
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Throw some test colors on it and see how it looks. Sometimes adding color helps hide imperfections and makes the raw values blend together more naturally.
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>>7783556
unless he’s supposed to be a midget, that arm is short
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Looks great, anon. I tried making his head slightly smaller and gave him a little bit more neck, what do you think?
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>>7783566
this is actually better, i guess thats what i needed.
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>>7783556
Looks pretty solid overall, just some small stuff is off like the small clothing folds being flat, collar lacks tridimensionality as well, I suggest studying those

Hand pose is a bit off too, feels more like he's holding a flat object like a wallet rather than a glass



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