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Archives & Other Resources: https://pastebin.com/wETipqYw
AllSync: https://cyoa.allsync.com/s/owWor64yLTngDk3
Multiplayer Compilations: https://rentry.org/MCYOA_Comp_Comp
In Case of Emergency, Break Glass: https://rentry.org/mcyoagCanary
Threadslave Rentry: https://rentry.org/ThreadKeeping2
Backup Rentry: https://rentry.org/ThreadKeeping3
Microscopic Tai Edition
Previous Thread: >>93885604
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>>93898435
EVEN A WORM WILL (re)TURN

SCENARIO: Gestation
RULES: We don't need rules where we're going.

OFFICIAL BUILD LIST

>Heroes
>Horikiri Takeichi, weakest hobo under the bridge
>>93282577
>Endstopper, Behemoth's little brother
>>93287472
>Buckshot is Dead, LONG LIVE BUCKSHOT
>>93293219
>The Hoper, passed on a mechanical legacy
>>93315900
>Bumble, Toymaker, and Sorcerer, teen ward squad
>>93338046
>Maeve Zimmerman, hero to zero
>>93343479
>Scribe
>>93395504
>Glory Gut
>>93432170
>Panacea
>>93432560
>Pigger/Wild Hog
>>93468629
>Roadrunner, does what the dice gods tell him
>>93475507

>Vigilantes
>Ghostboy 2, print media's last hope
>>93282414
>Dreadge, the monster in the mirror
>>93320463
>John /b/ Anonymous, /mcyoag/'s greatest soldier
>>93324361
>Singularity, "we have Sagittarius A at home"
>>93346427
>Kara Zabel, on her nth iteration
>>93372812
>Sniper
>>93498768
>Helieson/Hel
>>93519612

>Villians
>Michael Wallice, teen wolf tearing up the streets
>>93297999
>Brand Yamamoto, dead on the outside & inside
>>93294052
>Mr Skeltal, one-man gangbanger (not that kind)
>>93306308
>Gold Skull, KING of villainy and Boston
>>93312381
>The End, my only friend
>>93321800
>Babel, a pretty sound mercenary
>>93480376
>Ark, bing chilling
>>93378463
>Nemesis
>>93383435
>Cletus Pigfoot - Bacon Pile
>>93387575
>Pun-Pun
>>93388795
>Wraith, trying her best
>>93402506
>Gator, The first E88 cape and it's THIS. I'm fucking losing it
>>93412811
>The Schizophrenic Hyperborean King, POWER WORD: N-
>>93413077
>Cancer, about to make her mommy issues everyone's problem
>>93433636
>Miss Remember, literal prom-night dumpster baby
>>93445369
>Reaper
>>93461379
>Pinnacle, calm as the ocean in a painting of an insanely calm ocean
>>93455946
>Miasma
>>93469716
>Anomaly
>>93533892
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>>93898466
>Rogues
>Dr Kharnigore, Umbrella Corp CEO
>>93344872
>Fractal, Umbrella Corp RND department
>>93292281
>Carl Ridgerton
>>93387487
>Sky Captain & his crew of two
>>93456459

>Conspirators
>Dreamer, /mcyoag/'s collective id
>>93295737
Cauldron Operative
>The Vanishing Visage, look behind you
>>93379600
>Agent Administrator, Eden's mini-me
>>93385513

>Writefags
>Un spectacle de merde en relations publiques (Kharnigore, Fractal)
https://pastebin.com/m9iKA3qi
>Le choix terrible (Kharnigore, Fractal)
https://pastebin.com/q27FTMtX
>Fractal Design (Fractal, mentions Dr. Kharnigore, Hoper, and Mr. Skeltel)
https://rentry.org/Fractal_Design
>A Singular Day (Singularity, Dr Karnigore, Fractal, Appearance of many others)
https://rentry.org/8oc7vygw
>Blowing Off Steam [Dr Kharnigore Fractal]
https://pastebin.com/RGWn4mGx
>Gold Skull! Volume 1 - Backstory (Gold Skull, Jon Ible, some small cameos)
https://rentry.org/GoldSkullVol1
>Omnigirl, Bumble, Sorcerer, Toymaker, Endstopper, Pun-Pun
https://rentry.org/PunPuns_Big_Adventure
>Mentions of: Gold Skull, Mr. Skeltal, Maeve, and several others
https://rentry.org/PHO1
>Plan in Motion (M, Vanishing Visage, Dreamer)
https://rentry.org/xobo3aet
>"Guns Of Fun" (featuring Scribe, Buckshot and Pun Pun.)
https://pastebin.com/DkgaCHNC
>Ark's Arc Starts (Ark)
https://rentry.org/hv7i9wqu
>Vic Opener (Glory Girl, Panacea, Mr Skeltal)
https://rentry.org/ixe8wu3t
>A Night on the Docks, Evie's introductory write-in.
https://rentry.org/wraithch1
>Everyone Says I Have My Mother's Eyes (Cancer)
https://rentry.org/25s5vuio
>Babeling On (Babel, Fractal, Singularity, mentions Dr. Gore, Hopeman and others)
https://rentry.org/Babeling_On
>"Nightchase" (feat: Roadrunner, Horikiri, Scribe)
https://rentry.org/65gvs7ed
>Unforgettable (Babel, mentions of Fractal and Singularity)
https://rentry.org/Unforgettable_
>Chaos unleashed [Featuring, Mr Skeltal, Wild Hog, Bumble, Sorcerer, Miasma]
https://rentry.org/ynq75tu9
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>>93898488
>Writefags (Continued)
>Cops, Robbers, Capes, and Lizards (Omnigirl, The Hoper)
https://rentry.org/aupyd827
>Initiation (Wraith)
https://rentry.org/wraithch2
>Fractured (Fractal, mentions Wraith, Singularity, and more. References 'Chaos unleashed)
https://rentry.org/856p4ruv
>Swords and Sorcery, featuring Scribe vs Miasma
https://rentry.org/mw7evunv
>Ruminations and Meetings (Omnigirl, Bumble, cameos of Roadrunner and Takeichi)
https://rentry.org/vpakhemw
>Werewolf's Night Out (featuring Werewolf and Skitter):
https://rentry.org/fcdxg36z
>Sens Unique
https://pastebin.com/x7dJA9Li
>Werewolf's Next Night Out (featuring Werewolf, Bumble, Buckshot, cameo from Wraith):
https://rentry.org/395q93rc
>Scheme (Wraith, Undersiders, mentions of Fractal)
https://rentry.org/wraithch3
>Miasma and Mr Skeltal finalise a bet. [mentions Sniper, Werewolf]
https://rentry.org/v2682gn7

>Relationship Charts:
>Singularity.
https://rentry.org/cgc8rqzg
>Sky Captain's
https://rentry.org/cqdmti99
>Wraith
https://rentry.org/wraithchart

>/mcyoag/'s Worm Profiles (based)
https://rentry.org/prtterminal

ARTFAGS:
https://desu-usergeneratedcontent.xyz/tg/image/1720/59/1720590725750.png
https://desu-usergeneratedcontent.xyz/tg/image/1721/50/1721504480656.jpg
https://desu-usergeneratedcontent.xyz/tg/image/1722/28/1722287863906.png
>>93487082
>>93498256

Character Cards:
>Babel
>>93480376 + >>93481083
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>>93898527
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>MHA Rentry
https://rentry.org/uhx77ys6

>RULES:
> Timeline: Just Another Story
> Location: Japan
>The Hero Students are at Shiketsu.

Instructions + Template for Making Cards: https://pastebin.com/NQ6JNH8r

>New Stuff:
The Beast is Full

>The Archive Link so you can keep using the funny numbers for builds (use this before complaining about dead links)
https://archive.4plebs.org/tg/thread/92498234/#92498405

>CHARACTER PROMPTS (feel free to answer these whenever)
Class 1-D Prompts 1-50: https://rentry.org/mhamp
Class 1-D Prompts 50+: https://rentry.org/mhamp2
Everyone else's prompts: https://rentry.org/mhamp3
Same password for all of them (mha4)
>Older Prompt Links Are in Here
https://pastebin.com/Qr3TtGa6
>Fighting Style Prompt (Leaving this out because it might be useful for anyone writing a fight)
https://archive.4plebs.org/tg/thread/88693730/#88693888
>Class 1-D Timeline
https://rentry.org/MHATIMELINE
https://rentry.org/itmttw7n (Backup)
>Class 1-D Character Summary
https://rentry.org/9bf3g

>Newer Version of the CYOA (Both the old and new versions are legal for builds. Use whichever one you want)
Version 4.2: https://archive.4plebs.org/tg/post/92012978
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>>93898559
>STUDENTS:

>Chihiro Mitsurugi HN Ascetic Sword Hero: Yako
>>88189202
>Soujyuuro Imai HN Wise Eye Hero: Mahoudeva
>>88194077
>Bobby Samson HN Sunlight Man
>>88190591
>Sora Tanaka HN Area Denial Hero: Orbit
>>88191735
>Kaylee Suzuki HN Flying Force
>>88438219
>Shinkan Sen HN Crazy Train
>>88194200
>Hifumi Takeda HN Warp Blade Hero: Challenger
>>88196397
>Minerva Kim HN Spark
>>88826766
>Hailey Chang HN Recoil
>>88826770
>Faith Kang HN Drone
>>88826774
>Maxine Nguyen HN Radius
>>88826778
>Edith Lee HN Arena
>>88826782
>Noah Abrams HN Archangel
>>88205041
>Victor Sigurd HN Hydra
>>88209661
>Inigo Myoga HN Dragon Hero: Ryu-kishi
>>88414797
>Christopher Cain HN Mirror Devil
>>88217649
>Son Jugo HN Aspara
>>88239137
>Genma Go HN Goldorado
>>88353862
>Ashleigh Katsuragi HN Blackout
>>88268251
>Atsushi Orochi HN Hard to Destroy Lizard Hero: Yamata
>>88273479
>Nyoro Hoge HN Maru(maru)
>>88273837 + >>88758766
>Yui Sagara HN Binding Hero: Capture Cloth (Held Back)
>>88383012
>Kyoda Hiro HN Overdose (Held Back)
>>88193619+ >>91985145
>Sally McCathy HN Last Rite
>>88810810
>Takara Tame HN Android
>>89199766
>Nijimura Mahoko HN Cool Boost
>>91685518+>>91685973
>Ian Takenaka HN Rush
>>93095991

>Class 2-D
>Mochi Uranus HN Smelly Hero: Stink Rat
>>88196664
>Kevin Rool
>>88222618
>Suzuki Nene HN Ghostly Cat Hero: Bakeneneko
>>88707393
>Hiroki Asai HN Champion of Negativity: Zetsuboy
>>88755823

>Class 1-E https://rentry.org/p6dwm

>Students (Cont.)
>Class 3-D https://rentry.org/vx255
>William Dustice HN King Billy
>>88192360
>Johanna Hilt HN Gauntlet Hero: Weiss Schwarz
>>88195437
>Ganto Kanzaki HN The Clone Hero, Commander (NPC)
>>89284218
>Kagami Reina
>>89605669
>Norman “Norm” Smith HN Whatabout
>>91046080
>Rumi Aratsuki HN Hysteria
>>91363307

>Class ???
>Kiki HN Yggdrasil
>>91707234
>Tokyo Japanese Suzuki HN The King
>>93463303
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>>93898571
>Students (Cont.)
>Class 1-C (Shiketsu)
>Okimoto Chisaka
>>91130422
>Isabela Nakahata
>>91351414
>Lilinah ‘Riri’ Inoue
>>91347120
>Ysmir Dragonborn
>>91349452
>Daniel W. Rain
>>91352447

>Class 3-B (U.A.)
>Animata
>>90990850
>Synthesis
>>90992108
>Meadow
>>90992377
>Top Smile
>>90992508
>Ichimaki
>>90994440
>Nekiro Nishi
>>90997317
>Madoka Mikan HN Heartbeat
https://rentry.org/eesb8
>Itō Sukemochi HN Warpden
>>90973632
>Li Yinzhen HN Jiangshi
>>90978093
>Katsumi Hachizaki:
https://rentry.org/HeartMHA
>Cormelia Busujima
>>91353847

>Class 1-F
>Suki HN: Sukeban
>>93511713
>Runt HN Dust Devil
>>91691942
>Rob Williams HN: Velvet Worm
>>91728780
>Haiiroshi Kinzoku HN Fullmetal
https://rentry.org/Fullmetal-mha
>Igarashi Ryosuke HN Araken
>>91807240
>Tatsuya Yamashita HN Bad Touch
>>91808184
>Azuma Hisa HN Beach Day
>>91809104
>Daigo Ulmeyda HN Fly 1 Million
>>91814363
>Kiyoura Shidehara HN Icky Hero: Slimenuts
>>91782779
>Higa Umeko HN Slip-N'-Slideasaurus
>>91833690
>Nayuki Kyoko
>>91834965
>??? HN Meteoric Hero: Cube
>>91890433
>Misato Fukushima
>>92006447
>Susana Sato HN Silver Stream
>>93437588

>PRO HEROES
>U.A. Teachers:
>Yunikon, the Brilliant Hero
>>90998494
>Dr. Seto Kawata
>>91051432

>Shiketsu Teachers:
> Anzu Nishima HN Karaburan
>>88189414
> Aiko Aimi HN Motivational Hero: Rosethorn
>>88190438
>Pierre Vachon HN The Gentle Way Hero: Ippon
>>88205924
>Masanori Kitamura HN Hijack
>>88219956
>Yasashi Koibito HN The Laser Hero - Majestic
>>88231509
>Junko Hongo HN The Overly-Enthusiastic Tokusatsu Hero, LocaLoca (NPC)
>>88745486
>Omura Tadao HN Deceptive Hero, Conman
>>88754723
>Riku Washizawa HN The Steel Talon Hero: Skycarver
>>91719484
>Takahashi Mako, HN Ersatz
>>92011019
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>>93898584
>PRO HEROES (Cont):
>Unaffiliated Heroes
>Kenji Shako HN Strongest Shrimp Hero: Magnum Shrimp (and Water Fowl Hero: Flamingal)
>>88425908
>Yuusei Atsushi HN Spring Dragon Hero: Seiryu
>>88194386
>Kalianne Sato HN "Flame Strike Hero: Honoken"
>>88568039
>Ryuji Inoue HN Transport Hero: Rescue Ray (Principal - Sunray Troubled Youth Center)
>>88195499
>Akagi Sanpatchi HN "Popsy"
>>88204632
>??? HN Birdy
>>88225549
>Edmund Connor HN The Tall Man
>>88286518
>Ryusei Sugiyama HN Smokin' Sexy
>>88301887
>Kevin Thompson HN The Purple Man
>>88357698
>Yuichi Ishida HN Slipstream
>>88389419
>Roland Walker HN PsyKing (Sandatsu'd)
>>88616703
>Ernst Hennig HN Impakt
>>88616848
>Junpei Ozu HN: The Standstill Hero, "Floor"
>>88820563
>Rodion Popo HN Overman
>>89015229
>Ludolf Raphael Victorius, Hero Name: Fair Marshal
>>89006731
>Taichi Kyoryu HN Cretaceous King, Saurus
>>89508780
>Kurogane Keisho HN Yoshizumi
>>89507063
>Tosuke Jinai HN Compound
>>91016593
>Yosuke Shirai HN The Lustrous Hero, Wavelength
>>91032513
>Astra Smalls Aka Size King
>>91360064
>Richard Wilkins HN The #1 Hydro Hero: "Splash"
>>91721688
>MR. BULLET
>>91812743
>Shōgeki Heshi HN: Crash
>>92012115
>Tóu Zhǎng Koie/Phys P
>>92017795
>Kazuya Ono
>>92012443
>Alpha Ueno HN: Sylph
>>92014322
>Iwayama Kentaro HN Sisyphus
>>92947131
>Mash, Renji Kurokawa
>>93005848

>SUPPORTERS:
>Lady Astoria Belmont
>>88201576
>Rika Eichi
>>88209395
>Yaju
>>88223795
>Isaiah Sibylla (Keola Ku)
>>88231241
>Aura Curie (Student)
>>88231609
>Just "The Doctor"
>>88721597
>Fransk Brunhilde
>>89014208
>Endless Horizons Ltd.
https://rentry.org/iptpr
>Yusaku Kanzaki a.k.a. Clone Cop (NPC)
>>89278250
>Emilia Busujima
>>89349231
>Detective Risa Date
>>90657164
>Holden Deckard
>>90913931
>Brightly
>>91006966
>Satoru Tani (Student)
>>91149772
>Kuji Futoi (Student)
>>91363451
>Yuko Ozaku (Student)
>>92025025
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>>93898599
>VILLAINS (Villain Name):
>Turncoat Agency:
>Keiichi Tano HN Racer V / VN Getaway
>>88926925
>Tenshi Chisio HN Caduceus / VN Sawbones
>>88927453
>Jack Dunn HN Three-Sixty / VN The Asset
>>88931192

>Pax Organization:
>Eugene Kurtz VN Pax and Mercy
>>88984432
>Nightmare
>>88984422

>Unaffiliated Villains:
>Bruno Garcia VN Mauler
>>88206714
>Karuga Ito (Teacher - Shiketsu)
>>88192478
>Shiori Shiratora VN Kamigami
>>88192913
>Recino R. Percutio
>>88191385
>Nakata Yumiko VN Walpurgis
>>88191796 + https://pastebin.com/nMZq81Jt
>hina seiyama VN panzer viii
>>88226487
>Giichi Mikata
>>88198856
>Miki Ginrei VN Fluegel
>>88209242
>Ginji Gō VN Desperaido
>>88278735
>Jack Mitchell VN Marshall
>>88456239
>Kazuma Oomori VN Charlatan
>>88669394
>Hattori Ume VN Broad Daylight
>>88926931
>"Blank"
>>91050726
>Kōkishin Yuuki VN Shoggoth
>>91050987
>"Mammogar"
>>91051410
>Tomie
https://rentry.org/ddom6m82
>TechVision Elite 2023 - 43Vista UltraSmart 4K TV
>>91654960
>JOHN DOE VN GREEN DOOR
>>89018740
>Suslik
>>91699413
>Ryuji Ayanokoji VN Overlord
>>91702476
>Jack Smithee VN The Gravedigger
>>91702656
>Zyra Mein VN Braindrain
>>91702779
>Rudi Brandt VN Sturmtruppe
>>91703057
>Bonzo Amato VN The Boss
>>91703456
>The Hospital Killer
>>91772420
>Paul Crémieux VN De Jais (Jet Black)
>>91841242
>Jessica Wu VN Surinam Toad Girl
>>91851919
>Jan Procházka VN Msr. Blanc
>>91963570
>Gustave Gavial VN Gnash
>>92016443
>Cosmo Black VN X.T.
>>92016885
>Kate Everly
>>92016986
>Sato Yukio VN Gold Man
>>92385942
>Kurogane Tetsuo VN Dreadnought
>>93176262
>Adrian Vasquez Domingiun Manolete
>>93177737
>Dewi Angkasa
>>93178283
>Kanami Shimizu
>>93179646
>Jimmy Vinchenzo VN The Indestructible Scumbag
>>93188308
>The Illustrious Illithid
>>93188460
>Stormy Day VN Dragonfish
>>93256288
>Carl Steiner VN Ennui
>>93338053
>Kobayashi Hinata VN: Neutronium Man
>>93346976
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>>93898622
>VILLAINS (Villain Name):
>Sato Akio VN Nitro
>>93390433
>Ito Itsumi VN Uplift
>>93390555
>Edith 'Eedy' Akron
>>93454930
>Ian Bal/Ironball Guy
>>93593508

>Horrific 5:
>Samuel Wilson VN Desolator
>>88917340
>On Giết Năng VN Tether
>>88921198
>Erika Murakami VN Nox
>>88923183
>Maddie Griffiths VN Maddox
>>88930575
>Edmund Muller VN Mercury
>>88923191

>Revolutionaries:
>Momotaro Tachibana VN Nebulous Storm
>>88376954
>Mark Matuli
>>88301910
>Junichi Takagi VN Marrow
>>88435130
>Miriam Slowburn Hakase VN Prologing Evil: Big Hat (NPC)
>>88736960
>Kester Greenfield
>>90921671
>Mythopoesis
>>93866867

>Vigilantes:
>Helene Lysingen VN Noctiluca
>>88197005
>Takigawa Shion VN Shapeless Blade: Aquarius
>>88209069
>Toru Imaishi VN Kampai
>>88630353
>Rebecca Weber
>>88722750
>Yushi Taneka VN Blazing Bright
>>89012707
>Yoshiro
>>89338457
>Sasha Azanami
>>91080404
>Rui
>>91197187
>Kaori Kaoru
>>91229075
>Choko Yumiya, VN Eye High
>>92132153

>Night Parade:
>Cammy Link VN Karma
>>88190537
>Haruka Pulch VN Tatarimokke
>>88205909
>Sebastian Needle VN Greenfinger
>>88214481
>Okane King VN Midas
>>88190217
> ??? VN Maw
>>88250272
> ??? VN Bogey
>>88277889
> Tomi
>>88387913
>Luccione
>>90146415

>Wild Hunt
>Sandatsu Owari
>>91030425
>Mio Katsuragi HN Forget-Me-Not
>>89250569
>Hiromi Hitomi VN Feral
>>88856089
>Dr. Isaac Ivanov VN Drekus
>>88666462
>Ookami Shizuka
https://rentry.org/OokamiShizuka
>Ivan Trup VN The Prophet
>>91702348
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>>93898638
Writefags:
>Early writefags here (19 Pages)
https://rentry.org/gqu3gnaf
>”First Test” Comp
https://pastebin.com/66ByP2sD
>Questionnaire Comp
https://pastebin.com/Ksn0zJ31
Else check the rentry

>The Blinding Lights (Desolator, Reaper, Maddox):
https://rentry.org/z8t6mmyd
>That Old Saying About Memories (Mammogar, Maru(maru)):
https://rentry.org/maru-mammogar
>Clouded Mirror (Mirror Devil)
https://rentry.org/26k39hof
>The Sickly Light of a New Dawn (Karaburan, Rosethorn, 1-D, and special guests):
https://rentry.org/hvsqpxzi
>Battle Against a True Dragon (Flying Force, Yamata no Orochi, Feral):
https://rentry.org/pmuua68n
>Nyoro Leaves (Maru, Rosethorn, and 1-D):
https://rentry.org/hwz5xxqx
>Mimic Meeting (Mash, Ersatz, Yaju)
https://rentry.org/p2iutcwd
>Rooftop Repose (Capture Cloth, Bakeneneko)
https://rentry.org/d86ivmz8
>The Surgery (Overdose, Yamata, Hijack. Small cameo of Ryu-kishi, Capture Cloth, Bakeneneko. Mentions of Reaper)
https://rentry.org/4xss2p8a
>Those Without Sin Cast the First Stone(Last Rite, Android, Mirror Devil, Agent's Law and Waver, Yako, Maru)
https://rentry.org/nhuwkiut
>Gurē (mentions of Reaper)
https://rentry.org/gce34p5o
>Introduction (Rush, Ryu-kishi, Challenger, Sunlight Man, Overdose, Mirror Devil, lesser cameos of Last Rite, Archangel, even lesser cameo of Yako and Marumaru, mentions of Reaper. Special guest star Aspara)
https://rentry.org/zs7yp3ys
>A Monstrous Premonition (Mirror Devil):
https://rentry.org/8u7epz6s
>A Flash of Green (Ryu-kishi, Luccione, Conman, Maru(maru), The Boys, 1-D, Karaburan, Rosethorn, Brightly, Agent Law&Waver, HYDRA, a bunch of others)
https://rentry.org/b7tzt2sc
>Massacre of the Innocence (Challenger, Marrow, Tomi, Recoil)
https://rentry.org/MHAMassacreOfTheInnocence
>For whom the heavens may shine (Yamata, Nabiki, Aoi)
https://rentry.org/ubnvasyd
>Everything right with the two of them (Reaper, Forget-Me-Not, Desolator, Feral, cameo of Karma)
https://rentry.org/z8ioezo9
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>>93898659
Writefags (Cont.):
>After all this time, you and I (Capture Cloth, Yamata)
https://rentry.org/b5yvec6b
>Shiketsu Loser's Club (Orbit, Crazy Train, Rosethorn)
https://rentry.org/a49q7ckm
>Happy New Year (Challenger, Recoil)
https://rentry.org/MHAHappyNewYear
>A Flash of Gold (Luccione, Ryu-kishi, Shoggoth, Bogey, Tattarimoke, Maw, Midas, Tomi, Greenfinger, Recino, Desperaido, Karma, Lilinah, Ysmir, Isabella, Okimoto, Heartbeat, mentions of 3-B / 1-C)
https://rentry.org/tq6imsr8
>Chrysalis (Rebecca Weber, Ryu-Kishi, Maru (Maru)):
https://rentry.org/5qroqtcu
>Internship gossip 2 (The Clique) :
https://rentry.org/beygrs3e
>The World She Saw (Mirror Devil):
https://rentry.org/hworbxxn
>Clown Days 1.5 (Ryukishi, Maru(maru), Challenger, Mirror Devil, Smokin' Sexy, Sunlight Man, Impakt, Popsy, Rosethorn, Android, mention of others)
https://rentry.org/PopsyTown2
>Rob Writes Home Again:
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1-w3kU8X4dBNjtfqeLgIxgNIFcDP2ns7Cldy-xaTB2Vk/edit?usp=sharing + https://rentry.org/b4wd2t6v
>Hot Sands, Interrupted (featuring Uplift, mention of Desolator): -
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1xiCdAvo-l_t00UxCIkDqdQ4_t4o2ZavxXqhi_7dvj94/edit?usp=sharing + https://rentry.org/ehfqnfe9
>Weightless Heart (Orbit, Yamata)
https://rentry.org/sm566reg
>Gentle Ruthlessness (Yako, Maru(maru), Last Rite, Marrow, Reaper, and various mentions.)
https://rentry.org/y4dpiune
>Eyes In The Dark (Ryu-kishi, Capture Cloth, Desolator, Rosethorn, Orbit):
https://rentry.org/xw5nmeyr
>A New Job (Flying Force, Saurus, Crazy Train, Desolator)
https://rentry.org/oczh8osy
>The Moon Saw (Mirror Devil):
https://rentry.org/4k5zbkzy
>Blood, Sweat, and Tears (Challenger + cameos of: Sunlight Man, Ryu-kishi, Endless Horizons Ltd., Rika Eichi, Recoil, Yako, Last Rite, Mirror Devil, Maru, Karaburan, Orbit, Flying Force, Yamata):
https://rentry.org/MHABloodSweatAndTears
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>>93898669
Writefags (final)
>The Lord is My Refuge(Part 1): (Last Rite, Yako, Android, Satoru Tani, Archangel)
https://rentry.org/dne6r8io
>Dead End Salvation 1 (Yamata)
https://rentry.org/kgy5h84q
>Sins of the Mother (Mirror Devil, Flying Force):
https://rentry.org/wqnszs8k

>RELATIONSHIP CHARTS IN HERE
https://pastebin.com/rsnEph0b

For Art, Memes, Tierlists, etc. check the rentry
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>CYOA:
https://imgchest.com/p/5xy2pz6j7ld

>New stuff:
>New writefags:
The Assoomers Casino Heist (Epiphany, Ivy Grim, Meliander, Tadhg, Mr. Smith, Duchess)
https://rentry.org/vago7rg8
>New artfags:
The Assoomers and Tadhg run away from Mr. Smith (Epiphany, Ivy Grim, Meliander, Tadhg, Mr. Smith)
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/93835241

>Builds:
>League Of Villains:
>Solomon Cole, The Red Duke, Mr Smith
>>93786368 + https://rentry.org/SolomonMaster
>Tadhg O'Donnell, Spatial Shaman
>>93791365
>Ivy Throne, Royal
>>93776891

>Assoomers:
>Epiphany
>>93774302
>Ivy Grim, Orrery
>>93777156
>Meliander, Tako
>>93779650

>Guardians:
>Titan
>>93776026
>Mike Pearson, Flesh Crafter
>>93789178
>Katia Ilyina, Phase
>>93819431

>BITE:
>Scale Thompson, The Croc
>>93784073

>Medjed:
>Lilia Borowicz, Duchess
>>93786967

>Freelancers:
>William Sharpe, Ironclad
>>93778460
>Catastrophic Electric Warrior, CEW
>>93787215
>Batch
>>93790363
>Peruere
>>93774939
>Daniel Ford
>>93786775
>Alexander Acula
>>93826502

>???:
>The Beyonder
>>93771357
>Crow Freeman, Iterator
>>93788591

>Tiermaker:
https://tiermaker.com/create/xenon-tl-16986623-3

>Writefags:
>"This is an intervention." (Tadhg, Ivy Grim, Epiphany)
https://rentry.org/XenonThisIsAnIntervention
>DeskBatch (Batch)
https://rentry.org/DeskBatch
>A Potential New Recruit pt 1 (Batch, Scale)
https://rentry.org/NewBITERecruit
>The Assoomers Casino Heist (Epiphany, Ivy Grim, Meliander, Tadhg, Mr. Smith, Duchess)
https://rentry.org/vago7rg8

>Artfags:
>The Assoomers Team(Ivy, Epiphany, Meliander)
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/93797887
>The Assoomers and Tadhg run away from Mr. Smith (Epiphany, Ivy Grim, Meliander, Tadhg, Mr. Smith)
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/93835241

>Happenings:
>>THE CUBE
>>93789498

>Relationship Charts:
>Meliander
https://rentry.org/qytv4hoe
>Scale
https://rentry.org/wuvapyan
>Tadhg
https://rentry.org/XenonTadhgRC
>Solomon
https://rentry.org/solomonrelationship
>Peruere
https://rentry.org/y9u2p2x4
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>DISCIPLES:
>Yana Wiyen
>>93873135
>Xū (虚)
>>93877386
>Shi Rèn [认识]
>>93879525
>Shīzi Dànshēng (狮子诞生)
>>93888741
>Taizhou Xiu'Er
>>93880649
>Ageratum
>>93883268
>Dong Fuai
>>93884428
>Saya Kurokami
>>93898210

>ELDERS:
>Yèwǎn
>>93872216
>Yue Qianli (月千里)
>>93872374

>Ancestors:
>Wen Wanroe
>>93883461

Prompt:
>>93895955
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>>93898934
>DISCIPLES(cont)
Tain
>>93892214
Zhimin
>>93889999

Tierlist:
https://tiermaker.com/create/kth-tier-list-16986623-5
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>>93898944
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>>93898949
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>>93898954
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>>93898958
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>>93898964
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>>93898934
>Name
Xū (虚)
>Tao: Other, Mortal, Heart Domain
"『 』"- An absence so absolute not even nothingness remains. Being nameless, the closest way to refer to such a lack of being is through silence.
>Disciple
>Qi 4
Tao Grade Spirit Root and Exotic Spirit Root, his element is 『 』.
>Body Grade 2
>Soul Grade 2
>Personal History
Loose Cultivator
>Circumstances
Bounty
Non-human
Steep Decline
Mortal Ties
Ancient Sect
>Life Encounters
Silly Mischief
Accidental Guidance
Budding Romance
>Fated Encounter
Immortal Physique
>Comprehension
Divine
>Martial Arts
Other (Life Saving, Trump Card)
Other
>Techniques
Soul Refining, Other, Body Tempering
>Advantages
Overflowing Charisma
Vicious Schemer
Perfect Efficiency
Undying Tenacity
Second Style
>Fatal Flaws and Special Perks
Exposed Encounter
Ruthless Foes
Ruthless Warrior - The Way of Killing
Abandoned by Fate - Pillaged Fate

Xū is a young disciple that has a truly unique spirit root, "『 』", which makes him highly sought after by those who understand its power. To stay hidden and safe from those who might want to use him or eliminate him, Xū joined a martial sect as a student, blending in with the other disciples.
On the surface, Xū seems laid-back, lighthearted, charismatic and a bit of a joker. However, beneath this, he has a sharp, scheming side, always thinking a few steps ahead.
Xū's ambitions stretch far beyond personal gain or survival. His ultimate dream is to challenge the very foundations of existence by ending the reign of the heavens themselves. Though his cultivation revolves around erasure, he views it not as a force of destruction but as a means to create something new: a world where suffering, pain, and despair are erased, leaving behind only a true, blessed existence. Xū believes that through his path of "『 』", he can carve out a future where the burdens of the old world no longer exist, replaced by an existence defined by freedom and fulfillment.

https://rentry.org/nope-nothing-none

there no more notorious
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>>93898934
my brain is struggling to understand the complexities of wuxia or xixia or whatever you spell it. I'm getting lost in the sauce with how much sections you got to keep up with. Am I just being stupid (answer's yes) and overthinking the importance of every option when I should just really be focusing on a few specific portions?
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>>93899066
I can't speak to the CYOA specifically because I'm opting out of it, but the genre (and more broadly, a lot of Chinese fiction) has a looooooot of emphasis on super flowery language, proverbs, and speaking in riddles.
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>>93899066
You can do a bit in every area, or you can all in on a single area.

If you body max and have heaps of techniques you'll be fine. Same with Qi, or Soul. Hell you could all in on having heaps of items and still be fine.
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Yay or nay, Reincarnated Taoist (Fallen Immortal) who in their past life was consumed by their Heart Devils and became a monster. Now, upon reincarnation, they have cleaved off their corrupted Soul (Crippled Talent: Soul Refining) and now seeks to make amends and walk the path of Mercy?
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>>93899085
sounds cool
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>>93899085
Sounds cool, you made fallen immortal interesting.
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>>93899085
Go for it.
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>>93899038
At last Xu will live, and make many a friend who Xu will drag into a bloody quest to kill the heavens
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>>93899101
>you made fallen immortal interesting
Let's not get ahead of ourselves.
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>>93899085
This gave me an idea for a rival. A cultivator (not even being close to immortal maybe elder) who fought and slew this Devil but at the cost of his own life.

The monster upon reincarnation cleaved off its corruption and now wants to walk the path of mercy. But during its reincarnation, the powerful soul of the Immortal actually dragged along the soul of the cultivator who slew him. Dragged into the new life by the 'current' of the Immortals immensity.

Now he is reincarnated in the same age, thinking (falsely) that the Devil is going to be a calamity to the world. He gains enhanced comprehension from the process through he lacks the lifetime of built up skills/knowledge most reincarnated immortals have acquired. Knowing only that the beast he gave his life to slay managed to survive.
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>>93899114
I am glad too, I like the premise he is going for. It will be interesting to see if he can forge the bonds required to survive his fate.
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>wanna make a build
>know it's gonna suck
do I bite the bullet or just give up
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>>93899137
always make it.
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>>93899137
A bad build can become good through the course of the story. It's up to you if you're willing to effort your way back to redemption.
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>>93899137
Always making. Caring about making good builds is overrated.
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Giving up feels really good.
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>>93899038
Why were people saying he's a tryhard drawbackfag when he has no fucking techniques anyway.

Also you cant take steep decline with Loose Cultivator, You dont have a sect to be in decline.
Arguably probably cant take Ancient Sect with it either but thats not listed i dont think.

I see you with the charisma and budding romance and stuff.
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what do you mean by having a "rival"? is there a specific perk for it or are we just going "that guy, I wanna fight them."
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>>93899285
Its a 5 point trial and tribulation, Fated Rival.
It should be a benefit not a drawback desu, Rivals push you to new heights in this kinda setting.
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>>93899281
Or wait maybe im thinking of another type of cultivator thing not loose cultivator. Just double check, Im lazy. If it isnt loose cultivator youre fine there
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>>93899281
>Also you cant take steep decline with Loose Cultivator
You can but you don't get extra points
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>>93899289
You'll never be at the peak with a rival. If you ever reach the peak, your rival will become slightly stronger than you. Do you really want to be Vegeta forever?
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>>93899281
>you cant take steep decline with Loose Cultivator,
You can it just doesn't grant any points.
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>>93899318
Were both PCs. so its fine
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>>93899308
>>93899320
Alright so as long as he didnt take the points its fine.
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>>93899318
>Do you really want to be Vegeta forever?
https://youtube.com/watch?v=5dCUU0zs0dc
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>>93899318
>hot wife that loves him
>son that respects and adores him
>general cool
Yeah, I'd be pretty fine with being Vegeta.
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>>93899369
Rather be Krillin desu
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Is being a Fated Rival the ultimate Xianxia hack? The world will literally work for you to put you near your rival if it's a PC. You can just sit around and sleep all day. Like, an NPC Fated Rival could die, but you won't because you're a PC. Playing life on easy mode.
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>>93899369
>hot wife
porn addiction compelled me to do this
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I was close to finishing my build, then I thought of a completely different type of build that I think is far far far cooler.

Why did the heavens do this to me.
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>>93899386
This happened to me but I have inspiration again and will post my former build idea as an NPC
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I was told you guys make your own oc
How many have you made?
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>>93899408
at least two
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>>93899408
OC as in settings or cyoas
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>>93899453
How many original cyoas has mcyoag made
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>>93899471
Negative three.
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>>93899408
Only one, but I feel like it was fairly well received.
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>>93899493
Not true.
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>>93899537
Which part? That I've made only one or that I feel like it was fairly well received? Because you're right, I have crippling self esteem problems so I do not actually feel like it was well received
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>>93899553
mcyoag has made more than one and more than one was well received.
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>>93899408
No one keeps a fucking list.
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>>93899563
My autism is slipping out, I thought the question was personal. My bad.
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>>93899574
It's just some retard's new 'thing' to ask for proof of OC. Don't worry about it.
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>>93899408
I made one
No one played it
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For mortal savant professions, do you need to buy the upgraded version or is it always independent of what your cultivation is?
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>>93899715
I was explained it as your capable of making anything but the "recipe" of what you can make scales solely off the technique.
So let's take a hypothetical.
A Disciple with is in a baking competiton.

>If he has Mortal Savant and an unupgraded technique, and his highest grade is 4
He can make a grade 4 cake
>If he has an unupgraded technique and his highest grade is 4
He can make a grade 4 cake
>If he has Mortal Savant and an upgraded technique
He can make a grade 10 cake
>If he has an upgraded technique and his highest grade is 4
He can make a grade 4 cake
>He has Mortal Savant and Grade 5 Greg is helping him out and he's grade 4
He can make a grade 5 cake
>Grade 5 Greg is helping him out and he's grade 4
He can make a Grade 4 cake
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>>93899731
Okay so to access stuff in excess of what would normally be available to your tier (which I feel like is the point of mortal savant) you need to also purchase the grade 10 version.
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>>93899739
Yeaaaah I agree that it's kind lame you gotta pay the tax for the entire point but oh well
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>>93899101
>>93899117
Am I misunderstanding something, what makes Fallen Immortal all that better than the Tao Grade options?

It's definitely potent, but it doesn't seem like it's as much of a longterm guarantee of breaking the 10th realm like the others.
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>>93898934
Gale of the Gentle Breeze Clan
>Tao: Natural Element (Clouds), Mortal Tao, Heart Domain
>Generation: Disciple
>Qi Realm
>Rare Spirit Root (Clouds)
>Body Realm 2
>Soul Realm 3 Divine Talent
>Soul Scenery

>Taoist Roots: Demonic Wilds
>Circumstances: Young Master, Steep Decline
>Life Encounters: Life Saving Grace, Nameless Heroics, Silly Mischief
>Fated Encounter: Mysterious Mentor (Zephyr)

>Martial Arts
>Fighting Style: Palm
>Signature Moves: Reversal, Footwork
>Comprehension: Immortal Grade
>Cultivation Techniques:
>Qi Gathering [Revelations Within The Sky]
>Body Tempering [Breath Onto Life]
>Movement Techniques:
Footwork [Dance Amongst the Rain]
Stealth [Veil For the Misty Eyed]
Traveling [Departure Towards Open Sky]
>Auxiliary Techniques: Summoning [Claylike Clouds]
>Combined Technique: Ambush Reversal [Cloud Cutting Counter]

>Advantages:
Blessed Relations
Perfect Efficiency
Second Style (Kicks)
>Fatal Flaws:
Exposed Encounter
>Special Perks:
Hiding in Plain Sight
Gale lived the life of a wandering traveler, passing from city to city and trying to get by each day. If it wasn't for the random intervention of his master, he would have spent the rest of his life doing the same. Taken under his wing to practice cultivation, Gale now lives his life to the fullest unlike before. He may still not have a place to call his home, but a life on the move isn't so bad when you recontextualize it as embarking on a journey towards enlightenment, and you have a mentor telling you the very winds of fortune are blowing against your back.

Rentry: https://rentry.org/KTHGale
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>>93899980
Think they're just calling it boring lmao
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>>93899381
Not really, it just means your fate us to be on or around that person's level, and if you fail that you break your fate and are thus punished by the heavens until Xu works his "Kill the heavens" trick anyway
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>>93898710
Ugh, sorry about that. Finally finished up my side of the writing. Scale gets his answer.

>A potential New Recruit, Pt. 2 (Scale, Batch, mentions of the Guardians and Solomon/Atlas)
https://rentry.org/NewBITERecruit2
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>>93900019
>Trusting XPOO (pronounced like Xu but with Poo instead of u) to get the job done
lol
lmao
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>>93900019
This implies that you could beat your rival by crippling them so it doesn't work on PCs.
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>>93899471
It made MHA, which seems to be the reason it keeps being posted, and there was another one that was translated from Spanish I think, but no one really played it because magic circles were busted
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I should make a high sci-fi character for KTH
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>>93900062
Go ahead, make a New God equivalent who's magic is just sufficiently advanced technology and biology
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>>93900099
And make him shit on people's Tao
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>>93900113
>lmfao you still believe in Taos and shit?
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>>93900026
To clarify Atlas would not promise power and riches. It would deliver.
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>>93900270
Oh I figure, but this is Scale bitching about them. There's probably going to be some bias there judging by his relationship chart.
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>>93900299
I'm just messing, its a very nice write up.
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>>93899308
>>93899337
i didn't take the points, it just felt fitting thematically considering his circumstances
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>>93900437
Good on you for being able to read options! Unlike SOME people.
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>>93900532
>able to read
i wish this was true, but thanks
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>>93899980
Its not so much "better" its just boring. You start with all the knowledge that you'd normally explore in a story. For a protag in a novel its fine because they usually use that to expedite their journey but for a multiplayer cyoa I think its going to be more of a hindrance than the other encounters.
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This is probably a dumb question but if I take mundane mind does that mean I can't take professions because they are listed as techniques? I wanted a normal craftsman who seeks the Tao through supreme skill in his trade.
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>>93900832
Yes, but if you take Inherited Wisdom, you could adapt a profession technique as the special ability.
For a "normal craftsman", you'd probably be better off with the triple cripple strat, but even then, the high tier crafts are magic by nature, that's why to perform them you need to either be of a high realm yourself, or have the mortal savant perk. "A normal craft" should be reproducible without those, and that'd mean it's of a grade 0 by itself.
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>>93900832
You can't take professions with mundane mind. Then that's just a normal guy with professions, you can make a triple cripple. Take Mortal Savant three times. No cultivation, all professions. Don't forget to upgrade your techniques. You can also make your professions subsets of the same thing if you have only one specific trade in mind.
The forbidden tech is that you CAN take it as noted by >>93900864 via a Not!Technique but honestly just don't, it's just worse.
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Rolled 3 (1d4)

1. Give up, I'm too retarded for this idea, and it was dumb anyway
2. Try to bash it into place
3. Start over
4. Anon decides
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>>93900970
I know that feeling anon. I have 4 separate ideas I am trying to build concurrently in the hopes on of them works out the way I want it.
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>>93900970
what are the differences between 1 2 and 3
>>93900984
what are the builds
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>>93901021
1. Yang focused swordsman, still tossing up on special encounter.
2. Martial Empire soldier, mundane mind with a worldseed. Item maxxer.
3. Martial Empire soldier, lightning halberd edition.
4. Demonic Devourer.
I spent a lot of time trying to get the ideas to work together before giving up and trying to separate the core ideas into different characters but now I am lost at trying to finish one to a satisfactory standard.
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>>93900984
>>93901021
It's not even a build idea, really, just about a very small part of its presentation, that I for some fucking reason decided to complicate for myself.
You know like when you post a build and most of the fluff is in the rentry, but you'd still want some small description to be in the thread besides just the shopping list and a link?
Well, for some fucking reason, my sleepy yesterday self, decided to try to make it more flowery, and my retarded today self, decided to try to organise it a bit more, and started adding some random arbitrary rules to it.
So what started as just a cryptic fortune cookie tier summary, I tried to bash into some pattern of 4 paragraphs each with 4 sentences + 1 final paragraph with one sentence. Then I decided that, the first sentence of each paragraph, should start with an "a", and each sentence, besides the very last, should have a caesura. Then I thought, why not organise the length a bit more, let's make each paragraph have 29 syllables (because 2 of them were already that length). Then I thought, you know what, while I'm at it, might as well organise the sentences themself, and bash them into a 7/7/7/9 pattern, with a caesura after 4/3/3/4 syllable respectively (almost had that, but the tool I used counted syllables wrong in one line, and I fucked it up in another). Since I was already there, I thought, you know what, might as well try to turn it into a blank verse. Turns out, my stress patterns were, unsurprisingly, all over the place:

-^-^,-^-
-^^,-^-^
-^^,-^^-
-^-^,-^-^-

-^-^,-^^
^-^,^--^
-^^,-^-^
-^-^,--^^-

-^-^,^-^
^-^,-^-^
^^,-^-^-//error: caesura after 2
^-^^,-^--^

-^^,^-^ //error: 6 syllables
--^,^--^
^-^,^=-^
-^-^,^--^-

-^--^

So, the options were:
1. Leave it as is, maybe just fix the two error lines.
2. Waste more time trying to make it fit somehow
3. Start over, this time picking the metre at the start and trying to keep to it.
Why am I doing this to my ESL self? I don't know.
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>>93901038
>Martial Empire soldier, lightning halberd edition

Ayyy, another fellow Lightning Enjoyer. I was just messing around with a Flying Swords Lightning idea.
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>>93900984
I got a similar problem but I barely started on any of them, just letting them brew in my mind.
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>>93898934
>Name:
Alkaios
>Tao
Other/None
Mortal
Heart Domain
>Generation
Disciple
>Qi Gathering
Realm 4: Immortal Talent, Exotic Spirit Root (βῐ́ᾱ)
>Body Tempering
Realm 4: Tao Talent, Noble Bloodline
>Soul Refining
Realm 3
>Taoist Roots
Loose Cultivator: Any Cultivation, Attack, Footwork
>Circumstances
Bounty
Young Master
Mortal Ties
Golden Blood
Foreign Power
>Personal History
Flashy Heroics
Battlefield Brother
Budding Romance
>Fated Encounter:
Ancient Bloodline: Son of Bia- Alkaios was born from the union of a foreign goddess of force and might and the crafty king of a far-away naval empire. Such a lineage grants him an inhuman will to power, as if action alone brings all he sets out to achieve within his reach. His mere presence emanates a primordial authority, whether he intends to or not.
>Fighting Style:
Spear+Glaive (Barrage, Endurance)
>Comprehension
Divine
>Techniques
θεός (Body Tempering + Qi Gathering)
Στύξ (Soul Refining)
Κρᾰ́τος (Attack)
Vῑ́κη (Footwork)
ζήλος (Barrage)
Πάλλαντας (Endurance)
Ἀλκαῖος (Trump Card)
>Advantages
Overflowing Charisma
Blessed Relations
Perfect Efficiency
Undying Tenacity
Second Style
>Fatal Flaws
Exposed Encounter
Ruthless Foes
Fated Rival/An Odd Fate

There is a king who rules in a far off land, said to have achieved everything he ever set out to achieve. In order to earn glory of his own, the king's son, Prince Alkaios, set to the high seas in search of grand adventure. After his ship was caught in a terrible storm, he washed up on a bizarre, undiscovered continent.

Alkaios is a jovial and passionate young man, generous in his spending and a great appreciator of good drink and beautiful women. He's a cocky and showy warrior, but one who highly values honor and believes the strong have a duty to protect the weak. As expected, these qualities have mostly brought him trouble in this harsh, unforgiving new land.

Full Build: https://rentry.org/m64kpmhp
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I can't think of a good way to end my writefag and I'm worried it'll be boring because there are no fight scenes or anything.
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>>93901361
>someone else made a greek foreigner
This is a sign...
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>>93901422
Then promise future fight scenes in the writefag? Hype ppl up?
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>>93901457
It never worked.
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>>93901422
I do not read fight scenes.
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>>93898435
No one is going to play it, but well.
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>>93901638
>GROWN UPS CANNOT TO REACH PAST MASTERY 4
Besides the ESLness, I still believe this sucks.
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>>93901643
>booster packs are expansionsa
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>>93900817
1. You assume that they wouldn't want more/different knowledge. Even in real life this pretty. No one get a a degree and goes "guess I'm done learning anything ever."
2. No one care about you perfecting a technique. It's something that should be given a single line in a more scene.

It's boring but not fire reason you gave.
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>>93901663
Later I fix it.
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>>93901669
cityanon...
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>>93901615
Woah, some of these are exactly what I wanted.
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>>93901715
You wish I wasn't an EOP.
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>>93901615
Where's the changelog?
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>>93901756
Nothing major for the main CYOA. I just fixed a few typos.
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>>93901655
for ants?
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>>93901775
You might want to try not mobilefagging.
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>>93901615
We did make builds for it.
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>>93901788
I'm on pc, this is the problem
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>>93901775
The fuck happened to that page?
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>>93901528
You just suck. I think!
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>>93901615
>>93901643
we could do Agravanas schoolslop?
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>>93901805
Holy Silver Wing, all the poorfags and subhumans got in through scholarships and recommendations
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>>93901805
>>93901815
Im not making a new build, port the old ones.
Then again I think atleast a few of us made them vague enough/school related in the first place.
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>>93901615
Any reason to play this City/FHV/WDW reskin?
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>>93901830
I was planning to port mine too
>>93901815
HSWA is also fine, but I'm curious as to why you would prefer it. Is it the focus on teaching combat?
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>>93901838
I was just joking around, Agravanas is probably the best option for this.
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>>93901361
>Exposed Encounter
>Ruthless Foes
comrade!
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>>93898934
>3 builds took ruthless foes
>2 of them also have exposed encounter
>sect master is only an elder
So this is why disaster strikes
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>>93901929
2, actually. One of those is outdated.
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Maitreyi, my beloved, how can the knower ever be known?
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>>93901939
Shi Rèn updated to remove ruthless foes? Since Xū and Alkaios both still have it
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There are no bargains between lions and men.
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>>93901957
No, but I'll be updating my build for something else later today.
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A single strand does not make a thread.
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>>93901615
Slight changes, but still ready for school.

Name: Ser Angelica The Third
Gender: Female
Age: Young
Strength: 3
Dexterity: 2
Endurance: 0
ESP: 2
Control: 0
Grit: 0
Ability: 5
Class: Subhuman (Not taking the Perk or Limit Break)
Super: Super Power
Location: Multiplayer
Adventures: Against All Odds, Amnesiac, Demon Crash, Ultimate (Bonus Strength)
Perks: Instinct+, Self Perfection+ Get Rage+, Veteran+, Extraordinary+ (Get Rage, Self Perfection), Artificial Esper+, Breadth+

Martial Style: Dauntless Knight
Mastery: 6
Stance: Power, Flash
Style: Mountain, Old Knight Style, Thousand Attacks, Delayed Attacks
A style that focuses on slow heavy blows that build up momentum as the battle continues until it becomes a deadly onslaught of heavy blows with no moment of respite inbetween. Its practitioners tend to hunt monsters almost exclusively because a smarter foe can easily render them unable to fight before they have 'Casus Belli' but it's still very much renowned for its simple effectiveness and potential.

Esper Power: Adaptation
Template: Malleable Flesh
Type: Properties
Manifestation: Transformation
Duration: Long
Extras: Regenerator
An artificially implanted Esper bestowed upon a Knight-Errant to assist in their hunting of mankinds greatest foes. It causes their body to - while remaining visibly human - improve drastically through training and combat and recover quite a bit faster from any injury but it lacks any noteworthy active effects to take advantage of.

Items: Costume 3
The Armor of a Knight-Errant who seeks to crush mankinds foes, thought to be made by master smiths or perhaps have been worn in ancient wars. It's quite protective nomatter how you look at it. And totally wasn't chosen because the weapon section gives me a headache to look at!

The End: Battle
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>>93901986
>Esper Power: Adaptation
>Template: Malleable Flesh
why did she lie?
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As prana leaves the eye, it ceases to see.
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>>93902000
Its the power name.
Malleable Flesh is just the template.
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>>93898934
Copying what I said last thread during secret hours:
>>93896843
>>93897130
>>93897479
Then perhaps we make it a free for all match with you three, plus a Wen representative to keep things fun? Its more manageable if its one big stupid fight.
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>>93901615
Name: Ariel Nowell
Male
Age: Young
Class: Subhuman
Superperk: Limit Break

>Stats
STR = 0
DEX = 0
END = 0
ESP = 5
CTR = 1
GRT = 2
ABI = 1

>Life Events
Against All Odds
Demon Crash
School Days
Olympics

>General Perks
Charismatic
Demon Child
Precious
Instinct
Self Perfection P1
Leap Step

>Combat Perks
Critical
Get Rage
Binge Eater
Friendship
Extra Ordinary: Self Perfection
Imposed Challenge (Demon Child)
Wave Breaker

>Esper Perks
Catharsis
Breadth

>Martial Style
Mastery Level 4
Refined Stance, Power Stance
Esper Effects, Mountain, Transformation

A kickboxing style that uses telekinesis to coat the user's limbs and move them freely in three dimensions, allowing them to strike with maximum force even without proper footing.

>Academies
Agravanas School For The Gifted

>Items
Fake ID
Costume (Refined)

>Powers
Telekinesis
Type: Materialization
Quantity: Large
Range: Medium
Extras: Movement, Shape

An aura that serves as a manifestation of his mind over matter. It can transform into any solid or fluid shape Ariel imagines, and also coat existing objects to reinforce or manipulate them.

>Demon Child
Demonic flames with the ability to seek out enemies and corrupt anything they touch.

>Imposed Challenge
His demonic flames can only be wielded against an enemy of humanity.
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>>93902289
>Bio
A young man with a strange fire in his eyes who talks little about his past. Currently living in some run-down Outer Ring apartment he took from a local gang, and taking classes in the Middle Ring's Agravanas School while the dorm paperwork goes through.

The surname Nowell isn't inherited from his parents, but something he gave himself after leaving the Underworld to find a better life, as per their last wishes.

After a few months of living amongst the humans of The Ringed City and seeing what they have to offer, Ariel has chosen his path.

He utterly despises the Old Nobles, who worship Heroes while hunting down their descendants from the Underworld. From his point of view, the knights who accepted corruption for the sake of humanity were the true heroes, and the ones who remained in The Innermost Ring were cowards too high on their own self-righteousness. Thus, his goal is to destroy the Elder Council and make The Ringed City a fairer place. He doesn't care if it happens through revolution or by buying his way into a political position.

Right now, he's training to be a warrior while trying to find like-minded allies. However, while his power is increasing at a steady pace, his cause lacks followers because his personality is rather garbage.

Ariel has a massive ego and expects most people to bend over to his whims. When speaking to someone he doesn't respect, he will not address them by name but instead a demeaning nickname. It's the youthful bluster of someone who was born in hell and had to crawl his way out only relying on his own skills, unlike the nobles, who have an inflated sense of self due to their blood.
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>>93902289
Anal sex with your faceclaim

And the build is fine too I suppose
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>>93901056
I ended up going for something between the 2 and 3, with big parts completely rewritten but reusing some bits from the previous version, and the overall themes of stanzas. I ended up trying to go for an iambic tetrameter, with a caesura in the middle. I didn't attempt rhyming because that's just way above my skill level.

>A mighty tribe, now wretched husks.
>Bereft their home, a rabid pack.
>Their blades are cheap, and sullied names.
>When work is done, discarded tools.

>A baby's born, to little joy.
>A dragon's blood, in veins his flows.
>For great a price, the Heaven's bless.
>His spirit gone, for evermore.

>A blade in hands, now stained with blood.
>Boy taught to kill, but not to live.
>Estranged from kin, among yet lone.
>Continued hope, still heart alights.

>With teachings passed, away he's sent.
>His lonesome steps, into the Wilds.
>Before him gates, of Open Sect.
>Despite his past, can he belong?

Probably still trash, but for my ESL self, who was never into poetry, I'd say it could have gone worse. Hopefully, I didn't make any mistakes that were too horrible. Besides just deciding to waste hours on that in the first place, I mean.
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>>93902307
least homosexual mcyoag anon
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>>93902307
I'll take the compliment
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>>93898435
Kharnigoreanon, does the Doctor have an office, and if so what does it look like?
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>>93902289
>A pretty boy!
>He is subhuman trash
EVERY SINGLE TIME! I SWEAR! IT HAPPENS EVERY SINGLE TIME!
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>>93902134
G'morning!
Having a good day so far?
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>>93902432
not too bad yeah. right now I'm trying to finish up this writefag and get it beta'd. it's at 2700 words but I feel like it needs a little more substance before I'm done with it
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>>93902418
The subhumans will inherit the earth, noblechud
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>>93902418
Subhuman is the main interesting option, everything else is boring, or give irrelevent bonuses in multiplayer, or both.

So we have a subhuman that doesnt even have the subhuman perks and a subhuman prettyboy.
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>>93901643
Cityanon you fucked up, raw the Old Worlders get the subhuman perk as well as their golden age perk.
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>>93902637
It says Limit Break perk not superperk, but there is no Limit Break perk so there are 4 possibilities

1. the formless perk that gives new forms
2. the extra ordinary perk that gives limit break at potential 2
3. they do have 2 super perks
4. a mystery only known to the esl mind
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>>93902654
>It says Limit Break perk not superperk
which is also what the subhuman class says, logically they obviously don't get it but raw with how he made the cyoa they do
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>>93902654
*brazilian mind
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>>93902637
I know what happened. The editor closed on its own before it could save, despite me clicking on ctrl+s repeatedly to avoid losing the saves.
It is an +1 Unlocked Perk Potential, not a Limit Break. The base was the Subhuman Class, so this is why it happened since the image editor hadn't saved the changes despite my best attempts.
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>>93901986
Wanna be classmates at Agravanas?
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>>93899408
I made 1, the other 2 don't fucking count.
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>>93901361
I should probably add "Foreign Power to Shizi huh? I'm not gonna do that "officially but just assume that its the case
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>>93902899
Why won't this happen to my build...
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>>93902899
They job to half the builds realistically.
Were so much stronger than normal worm builds that they would underestimate us and get gibbed.
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>>93902915
Who is that on the right supposed to be?
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>>93902960
Chuck Tingle.
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>>93902960
My self insert, John Anon
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>>93902960
Roboute Guilliman
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>>93902970
Warhammer MP when?
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>>93902982
Need a usable cyoa for that. The only one I recall is the rogue trader cyoa.
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>>93902982
when someone makes a good warhammer cyoa or this thread finally accepts jumpchain into it's heart
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>>93903032
I would rather die
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Can you guys make some builds for ringed city, please? ok thanks
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>>93903032
Jumpchain will never work because it's not detailed. You're supposed to jump from world to world, accumulating power, and there's no time on designing your build to fit within the world, only broad strokes.
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>>93903043
I will only start joining MPs again next week, starting tomorrow.
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>>93902918
Contessa's power wins against most or all builds that didn't take a 25-red power.
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One day, I shall make my Waifu Catalogue MP and it shall be glorious.
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>>93903053
>Jumpchain will never work because it's not detailed
NTA, but I've seen handful that you if someone just ripped and put into a 3-4 pages, no one would bat an eye. I'm still against jumpchain but the level if detail can vary to the point of being a stand alone cyoa.
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>>93903031
We have this
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>>93903043
I have 2-3 ideas and can't settle one one.
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>>93903116
Tell me more about them, maybe I can help.
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Can you guys not make any builds for ringed city, please? ok thanks
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>>93903106
Oh, some Jumpchains have a great level of detail, like the one for Anita: Battle Angel. It's just that most of them aren't that useable.
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>>93903053
>Jumpchain will never work because it's not detailed
My rebuttal https://drive.google.com/file/d/1qTtWMc-dkzZ-mlN3E-rGoO_pVH3xtQBC/view?usp=drive_link
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>>93903261
Nihilus was great, but it doesn't take away from my point that most aren't good enough. But then again, I am the guy who would delusionally claim we can run Primarch jumpchain as an MP because I am really tired of the franchiseslop drought in CYOA space.
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>>93903302
>but it doesn't take away from my point that most aren't good enough
same with most cyoas, that doesn't mean that mcyoag can't work
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>>93903302
>franchiseslop drought
we already have wormspam and MHA's undying body enshrined on the threadslave throne, what the fuck are you talking about?
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>>93903125
The first idea is subhuman with a focus on a bunch of transformation stuff. Idea was that that they were actually the remnant of demon that became more human. Haven't settled on what the demon child ability should be.

Second idea is a robot/cyborg that's able to control and upgrade object/machines. Was going be based around soul transposition and some cobbles together templates, but technopathy exists now and should mostly cover it.

Third idea is a noble with midas and whatnot since that I haven't thought much about honestly but found somewhat appealing. Maybe I'd make them some disgraced noble trying to recollect their families treasures.
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>>93903043
Not until cityanon gets over his ageist prejudice.
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>>93903320
I think he means franchises he likes
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>>93903320
I am talking about CYOAs in general.
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>>93903335
The potential thing or them being capped at mastery 4?
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Old "people" should be mocked and beaten, Cityanon did nothing wrong.
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>>93903335
Just make a student.
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>>93903350
Facts. Elder "abuse" isn't abuse. It's just reminding them of their place.
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>>93903346
Mostly the mastery cap. Potential I can understand, as since it's not something the young dudes unlock straight from the get go, but the fact they can start with mastery higher than the experienced dudes sucks. Also, it would be good if old people could choose one of the youth classes as backgrounds besides just "grown-up" even without freebies, just for sake of fluff and qualifying for stuff. Do you automatically lose the noble status once you finish high school?
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>>93903331
Go with the first idea
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>>93903331
What sort of character do you imagine for the others? Is the demon just there to socialize/feel like a real human bean?

Power wise, I feel like the demon and noble are the more interesting ones, tech stuff just doesn't appeal to me that much.
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I am worried for Cityanon, bros. His addiction to futa grows with every single day.
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>>93903384
I'm probably half of a the posts you think are cityanon if not more desu.
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Edgelords aren't interesting.
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>>93903403
We never thought you were.
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There hasn't been enough edgekino in recent MPs
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>>93901643
I was scratching my head over the Limit Break stuff on Old World. It turns out I forgot to export the updated version and sent an Old one. Anons, crush my skull with the comically large spoon.
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>>93903440
what level are the free firearm weapons golden age gives you?
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>>93903477
Premium.
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>>93901361
His dad sounds based af.
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>>93903381
Yeah, I probably will.

>>93903383
Tech guy would probably be the most antisocial. An "I only trust machines type" that interacts with the world through them.
Noble is a post humbling arrogant young master more or less.
Demon is trying to understand humans and becoming a knight as a part of that,
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>>93903043
Not until Cityanon gets over his phobia of making good cyoas
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>>93898435
Dinner (Wraith, Fractal)
Umbrella's head of R&D goes to her employee's house for a very normal dinner with his very family.

https://rentry.org/3b2dtrwf
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>>93903114
>no chaos
UNPLAYABLE
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>>93901649
Question about Adaptation. What's the difference between Duration and Memory? They both seem like they determine how long it lasts but I can't really get what Memory does. Why cant someone take Everlasting Duration and just do short Memory since there's no need for it anymore? I can't affects capacity to damage types either seeing as how Type already covers it too.
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>>93903416
We need a setting with built in massive casualties because KTH anons ain't doing it
I'm talking battle between Build 1 and Build 2, 800 Billion Casualities as side effects.
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>>93903742
Why?
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>>93903742
The closest I can think of were arenas like WGWL, African Warlord, etc.
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>>93903742
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>>93903740
Duration is how long the effect of the adaptation lasts. Memory is the esper power storing information for further usage.
Ex: If you face a thing it had adapted for weeks later, the body can immediately recall the adaptation it used rather than learn it all over again.
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why the hell does it take so long to make a KtH build
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>>93903751
I think it would be cool. I want my build's Dragon Ball FighterZ Destructive Finish to wipe out the population of several planets. Shame there isn't a good Dragon Ball cyoa. But it would be cooler if it was a single giant heavily populated city with population in the hundred quadrillions.
>>93903755
No it needs to be mere side effects of 1v1s.
>>93903771
That's not even close.
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>>93903742
You can write whatever you want, but that's up to you. We could be dicking around in a setting where our farts eras continents and I still won't bother writing it.
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>>93903836
Yeah but I need a good setting, if you wouldn't write you're irrelevent to me anyway. If anons don't want to write big numbers then what's the point?
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>>93901929
I'm tempted to make an ancient so I can be the lucky one who harvests them for their Encounters.
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>>93903797
Because you're mentally slow
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>>93903864
yes but that's not the problem here
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>>93903114
No Admech?
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>>93903868
Nah, I could make a KTH build in 3 minutes.
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>>93903885
ok, you have three minutes
go
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>>93903714
>mfw Evie's entire awkwardness during this event
Absolutely delicious. Evie's got a crash course into the potential insanity of Fractal.

You also got Fractal down pat. Really enjoyed this!
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>>93903847
Fights are boring without any emotional through line. Saying 5 billion people died especially doesn't mean anything on its own.
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>>93903893
Sorry anon I only saw this six minutes later but I promised I made Labkas in 3 minutes
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>>93903956
>almost 10 minutes
osoi
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>>93903962
YOU DON'T KNOW MY STRUGGLES
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>>93903962
cool cock
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>>93903898
...Huh? You think I want it to mean anything other than "big number"?
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So which builds should objectively be blamed for the Sect's destruction
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>>93903956
If this is meant to mock capefags, I applaud you.
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>>93903989
No, I don't think you want it to mean anything else. I'm telling you that it's just you kayleefag that don't. Therefore no will write that and so there is no point to such a setting.
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>>93901929
We need to buff the owl.
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>>93904026
I will write it and also the fun anons will. Finally, you're stupid and forgot words.
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>>93904015
Xu (He's the only black man in China)
Shi Ren (Literally everybody in Heaven hates him because he's Jesus)
Dong Fuai (Sovereigns will get jealous of his massive Dong)
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>>93904044
>the fun anons will
last two times somebody's tried DBZ it stillborned so hard it makes FHV look like MHA lol
your demographic doesn't exist
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>>93904044
>fun anons will
If that was true, the mp would already exist.
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>>93904061
It was dbz ignoring/capping power tiers, which isn't dbz at all
Unironically, TRVE DBZ hasn't been tried.
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>>93904061
>>93904062
They just need a good cyoa, duh.
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>>93904067
Yes it has. It was stillborn then too
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>>93904061
>>93904062
Have you considered that anons aren't fun
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>>93904061
DBZ CYOA is kinda shit. You get a huge amount of powers and abilities to choose from, which is neat, but there's this retarded tier system and your race has a tier cap you cannot surpass no matter what. Also, Power Morpher exists and it lets you reach the highest tier possible at no cost for your build because money is irrelevant.

If you want a proper DB MP, you need a CYOA that doesn't let you start with power to bust multiverses, removes all caps on power growths, and focuses on giving your build a diverse set of abilities.
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>>93904097
>and your race has a tier cap you cannot surpass no matter what
huh
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>>93904061
If what you believe makes someone fun is engaged with by no one I'd question whether it's actually fun first.
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>am I a manchild who gets his kicks out of edgeshit and pointlessly high numbers?
>no, it's other anons who aren't fun
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>>93904124
You're not being very fun.
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>>93904124
Why are you proving him right
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>>93901615
>Name: Liliana Foti
>Age: Young
>Class: Delinquent
>Superperk: Determinator

>Stats:
>STR: 2
>DEX: 1
>END: 1
>ESP: 0
>CTR: 0
>GRT: 0
>ABI: 3

>Life Events: Cemetery, Mentor, Code of Brawl

>Perks: Leap-Step, Get Rage, Daedalus P.1, Willpower, Landing P.1, Hard Work, Programmer, Storage

>Combat Style:
>Mastery: 3 (3)
>Stance: Power (-1)
>Style: Mountain(-1), Mega-Jump (-1)

>Item: P.Weapon, Home, Supplies

Weapon: P.Sword (2 Blade, 1 Guard, 2 Handle)

1x Blade: Hallowed Metal
1x Blade: Adamantine
1x Guard: Lightning Gem
2x: Handle: Mithrill

>Overall Weight: In my head, it is just "heavy" because most components are Light
Insaley Heavy +1
Medium +1
Light +3
>Overall Durability: It is very durable given most of the weapon is Everlasting, and it has Adamantine.
Adamantine +1
Everlasting +2
Sturdy +1
Normal Endurance +1

>Weapon Art:
Technology Overhaul
Combo

Total Scaling: B scaling with STR, C scaling with ABI
Adamantine: +1 STR
Hallowed Metal: +1 STR
Mithril: +1 STR
Mithril: +1 ABI
Combo: +1 ABI
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>>93904156
Very Cute and Funny
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>>93904164
Gokanbro...
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>>93904156
>Backstory:

Liliana comes from wandering mercenaries in the Peregrinos, alongside her foster father. Her group has been harassed by machines corrupted by the Invaders a lot of times, scarring most people unfortunate to be caught in the crossfire, including her. She grew up with a lot of scars from the attacks her group suffered, forcing her to take on arms early on to fight against the machines, either for her own survival or to dismantle them before they could do any damage. By practicing and dismantling the machines dealt with by the Peregrinos, she grew to understand some of the secrets behind using said machines and technology. She never managed to get a complete understanding of the machines, given her group was always traveling to avoid becoming a stationary target for the corrupted machines. This sparked a desire to learn more about machines in Liliana. Worried about his foster daughter, her foster father taught her techniques to help her run away and get out of situations unscratched while doing so.

Given the state of the world, she had found a cemetery of weapons dating back to the days of the Reckoning, including weapons of that time. With her foster father, she managed to score one of those weapons back to the nomad settlement. While it took time, she managed to repair it and get the weapon, a sword, back to a functional state. This was enough for Peregrino's Figurehead to strike a deal and send Liliana and her father to TRAC to learn more and help her hone her craft.

Liliana is a girl who has zero filters in her mouth, saying whatever she thinks about the situation, and not caring about choosing her words to avoid hurting someone. She dislikes making things needlessly complex and likes watching old cartoons and walkthroughs from centuries-old games.
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>>93904124
I'm not even necessarily against big numbers and I love edgy shit. I do think they're fun. I just don't think most of the anons who day they want them are actually fun.
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>>93904156
Revy, my beloved...I will get your sailor uniform...
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>pedo samefagging about his build
wake me up when the cool anons show up
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>>93904256
those are just the local naruto vultures, pay them no mind
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>>93904256
bros going into cryosleep
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>>93904256
>>93904267
I'm the local non-cityanon gachafag actually. Play Alchemy Stars btw.
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>>93904277
>gachafag
you should play russian roulette with all the bullets loaded btw
it's for your own good
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>>93904280
The bullets aren't cute so no thanks. I'll lose my title when games enters EOS anyway.
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This is some disgusting behavior. Have you guys no shame? For fuck's sake, have some dignity.
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>>93901615
Why doesn't cybernetics give stats?
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>>93904297
Yeah, fucked up how anons are desecrating Gokan's name so soon after his anon died.
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>>93898934
Who's working on a build still?
Any good potential rival pairings?
ships?
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>>93904330
>Who's working on a build still?
me
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>>93904330
All the rivals will end rivals in bed.
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>>93904330
>Who's working on a build still?
Also me.
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>>93904332
>>93904346
What should we expect?
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>>93904358
slop
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>>93904330
I am.
I don't know, since I'm late, I haven't considered it much. Wouldn't want to get hyped, and then it turns out the character already got rivalled or shipped before I even release my build.
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>>93904360
Clearly the solution is shill for the rivals that aren't the one you want for your build so you can monopolize them later.
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>>93904358
Slop, like the other anon said, but if you want a still strongly unfinished WIP, then here https://rentry.org/KTHBatudai I'm currently working on the fluff, and I have ideas for the techniques and such, but I need to write them down and come up with names.
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>>93904358
I'm with >>93904359 again. Going for a fallen immortal build personally. Former empress who got tied down by administrative work her entire life and died to a coup when she couldn't keep up with it. Now she's just a carefree poorfag with a crippling fear of responsibility.
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>>93901649
question about adaptation, is that AGI there meant to be DEX or ABI?
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Bros, I love slop.
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>>93904330
Just finishing up my teacher build. Not very happy with the faceclaim but I don't really have a choice.
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>>93904418
Typo. I don't even know how it ended there. it ESP and CTR.
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>>93904419
We know, TRAC bro
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>>93904426
The faceclaim market is brutal these days.
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>finally sorted all of my points
now I just need to fluff it all out
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>>93904441
nta, but doesn't help that Xianxia faceclaims are especially hard to find. I feel like it's why we got so many A.I. art faceclaims.
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>>93904330
Ageratum is still open for any rivalries if anyone wants.
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>>93904441
In my case it's especially bad because there are plenty of pics that WOULD work if my build was a either a foreigner or if I was making a disciple, or my build was male or I was ok with using cheesecake as my faceclaim.
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>>93904428
second question, does it have to scale with GRT and END instead of CTR and ESP or does it scale with all of them?
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>>93904330
Considering making another build.
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>>93904475
It scales with all of them. It also scales alongside GRT and END for you to survive getting hit by stuff.
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>>93898934
>Name
Shi Rèn [认识]
>Tao: Facet of Reality, Mortal, Heart Domain
[संसार] - Saṃsāra, the wheel of life, the summit of all existence. To seek is to find enlightenment above all of creation, the truth that will liberate the spirit from earthly matters and impart final understanding.
>Generation
Disciple
>Qi Talent
Divine
>Body Talent
Divine
>Soul Talent
Divine
>Personal History
Loose Cultivator
>Circumstances
Bounty
Mortal Ties
Notorious
Steep Decline
>Life Encounters
Accidental Guidance
Silly Mischief
Brief Apprenticeship
>Fated Encounter
Fallen Immortal
>Fighting Style
Palm
>Comprehension
Tao
Techniques
Qi Gathering
Attack
Reversal
Footwork
Life Saving
>Advantages
Overflowing Charisma
Blessed Relations
Perfect Efficiency
True Wisdom
Undying Tenacity
>Fatal Flaws
Ruthless Foes
Fated Rival
Abandoned by Fate - Pillaged Fate

https://rentry.org/skin-six-billion-cultivators
Just added a picture and swapped out Trump Card for Life Saving, cause it fits my technique theme much better. Threadbro, please link this post now.
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>>93902213
Yeah, sure! The faster it paces, the better.
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>>93904512
>my technique theme
And what is that? Since Makima (was that her name?) plushie doesn't tell me much.
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>>93904330
Still working
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>>93904526
Eggkima is a funny placeholder image. And the theme? A combo of cultivation media I've been getting into and interacting with the greater world and its cyclical nature.
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>>93898934
Zhimin is a curious and genial sort who is always in search of something new. New nooks, new drinks, new meals, and new people with which she might enjoy them. It may seem a little strange for one who has experienced a full life to take such great joy in such small things, but such an observation does not recognize the extent to which the woman she was had been divorced from all that did not fall under the purview of her obsession. She only read in search of hidden wisdom, drank to quench her thirst, ate so that she might not starve, and used others to further herself without ever knowing them. That foolish woman could not hope to understand the value in the world she shunned. The only value it provided was fodder against which to test her blade.

Now, the girl is quite the opposite. While she too pursues the Sword Tao, it is on the path of the scholar and not the warrior. By no means is she a pacifist, but she has little interest in even sparring. This is, in part, due to her nature. Her blade is her, yet it is also her sister. Conflict may be the fate of a sword, but that doesn't mean she will treat her carelessly. The second reason is the result of the knowledge that one attained. If Zhimin is drawn then she must fulfill her purpose and strike true.

The Library of the Great Wilds is an attractive place for one such as her. Thus, she became a student. One would not be faulted for forgetting that fact, however. When she is not enjoying a wine-induced nap or nose deep in a thrilling drama, she often lets slip tidbits of the wisdom she has accumulated. Yet, she seeks to learn from others as she believes new truths might suit her better. She also hopes that one of the cultivators aligned with the Library might be worthy of wielding her.

https://rentry.org/Zhimin
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>>93904644
Would you mind putting the build in text in the rentry? Keeping the data from it only on the card makes it less convenient to access.
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>>93904667
@everyone
fantasysisters.... assemble!
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>>93904667
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>>93904662
Sure, give me a few.
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>>93904676
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>>93904667
Planeswalkerslop where a build wins instantly if they bought everything in Metamagic tree.
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>>93904689
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>>93904673
This was stupid but I laughed
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>>93904697
How? Spell Creation is about having a few one-use spells that are a sidegrad from your current powerset but not necessarily an upgrade and Omnimancy allows you to cast spells 10 levels above your own but you can only have two or three in store at any time and it takes weeks or months to cook up a single one.
If you think that this is an instant win card, you're too limited intellectually to survive the multiverse, just like that guy who thought that turning air into toxic gas with transmut was too broken lmao.
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>>93904745
That's how jobbers think.
*STRONG OMNIPOTENCE*
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>>93904745
>Spell Creation is about having a few one-use spells
...spells which you derive from powerful disciplines like Telekinesis, Divination, Chronomancy or Mind Control. It can already boost the flexibility of powerful shit to the highest degree, and Omnimancy is just the cherry on top that lets you prepare a spell to break the rules and put yourself into an advantageous position right away. This is what the CYOA is all about.
>you're too limited intellectually to survive the multiverse
Is this coming from a guy who posted a sloppy CYOA out of nowhere with a genuine expectation that someone will play it, and will write pages of headcanon about "surviving the multiverse" in a glorified daydream scenario that doesn't even have enemy descriptions but a vague "you need a lot of time to get strong"? Go back to /cyoag/ and argue with the guy you brought up as an example, you two retards are built for each other.
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>>93904830
>in a glorified daydream scenario
anon...
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>>93904830
nigga who cares why are you even talking about this DOGSHIT cyoa
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>>93898934
I will make a sovereign build for this. Give me your funniest faceclaims
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>>93904864
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>>93904864
Got u bro.
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>>93898934
>no writefagging
>in thread discussion died down aside from people talking about making a dump for it
I have faith
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>>93904886
First we get a rushed tournament and now the boobkage v2.0. This really is another nardo run.
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>>93904912
Nobody is doing the tournament
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>>93904911
It's the only thing that's gotten discussion this thread besides some ringed city stuff.

I wrote shitty fluff for techniques that will never be brought up instead of writing. You're welcome.
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>>93904911
I posted a prompt yesterday that got good engagement. Writefagging is a slow process IF it starts and there is absolutely no requirement for it to start.
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>>93901628
> Almost every adventure gives a mechanical benefit as well as a fluff one
> Except for most of the 3rd-row ones
Why did cityanon do this?
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>>93904937
>It's the only thing that's gotten discussion this thread besides some ringed city stuff.
WormGODS please explode his balls
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>>93904948
There is Code of Brawl and Monster Hunter for fluff, Treasure Hunt that gives an item, and Demon Crash for S*bhumans. The only one that gives "Nothing" is Wastelands.
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>>93904911
I don't.
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I wanna play an interactive CYOA with anons but they're all kinda crap.
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>>93898934
How do I come up with technique names?
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>>93904985
Watch kung-fu movies and steal from there.
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>>93904985
Find a theme, then go deep on synonyms and correlated words or concepts
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>>93904975
Something about being able to add more options so easily (Plus each choice being a bit too big by default) makes the authors lose track and they become obnoxiously bloated.
t. Played like 2 so far
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>>93904975
Then why do you want to play one?
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>>93904911
Now that all the builds that will be posted have been posted we will get into kino
First we need SoL so that it hits harder later, this is a science
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>>93904999
I'm gonna post my build today :(
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>>93904973
most perks give fluff + a mechanical bonus, they join wastelands in being outliers. Also, demon crash only benefiting subhumans isn't a good thing since most adventures like that also give something to everyone else. the third row is ass when compared to the 4th row.
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>>93904975
What's even the appeal?
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>>93904975
RWBYsisters, now is our chance!
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>>93905011
the RWBYcord.... is weak.
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Something I find funny is that one anon whined about my new slop being another Arknights reskin, when that idiot couldn't even see it takes from fucking Destiny of all places rather than Arknights.
Big Good Entity descending from the skies to save humanity as darkness preys on them? Check.
Bunch of possessed enemies with a void theme? Double check because The Taken King was the most epic shit I've seen at the time.
After Destiny, it takes from Nikke (And thus Honkai Impact 3rd) with all the technology and corruption of it. Although I've only played Nikke. There is a minor inspiration from that other game from WuWa's company, but I just read a little of it to get context since it takes from Hi3rd.
My main gripe is that anon missed where I took the ideas from since Destiny 1 was one of the best gaming experiences I had. I hadn't touched much of Destiny 2 tho.
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>>93905018
>she thinks we use the 'cord
Our dark magics lie elsewhere
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>>93904997
They all have good ideas behind them but like the anon above you said, they almost always transform into multiverse shit.
>>93905011
I won't even bring that one up. It's made by a tranny who makes the most bloated interactives ever and made a tranny pill picker.
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>>93905022
I'm not reading all that whining Cityanon, please just fuck off.
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>>93905030
>It's made by a tranny who makes the most bloated interactives ever and made a tranny pill picker.
All I hear is "perfect for this general"
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>>93905024
>"She"
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>>93905022
You have terrible taste in games.
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>>93905022
Based
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>>93905022
Why do you insist on embarrassing yourself constantly?
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>>93905022
>anon whined about my new slop being another Arknights reskin
Because aesthetics are always the same dark future gachashit, and because you cannot move on from your infantile fantasies.
>Destiny, Nikke
I am glad that in addition to attention whoring, you use the lowest denominator possible for your works, and they come out just as awful. Grow up and stop playing looter shooters or gacha games, faggot.
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I never saw anyone call TRAC arkslop, they called WDW arkslop
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>>93905070
That was directed at WDW, yeah. I never said anything about TRAC, I didn't care enough.
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Can't we talk about cyoas that AREN'T City anon's?
Like KTH. Who does your build have a crush on?
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>>93905068
Only decrepit old men olay destiny because they're coping about how bungie is still a good company.
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>>93905068
I'm sorry for your bad taste, but nine years ago, Destiny 1 was fire, especially when the Taken King DLC dropped and added the swords as heavy weapons.
Maybe when you are reborn you can appreciate good gameplay.
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>>93905079
My build NEEDS Big Owl Lymphatic Penis
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>>93905070
I might have called it that because I can't be bothered to learn to differentiate all the shitty games he plays.
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>>93905079
Rèn would have a brief crush on Taizhou, but then he'd realize he's a guy and curse destiny for messing with his perceptions.
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>>93905094
Xū...
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>>93905106
Understandable. Each time I see his pic, I think it's a girl.
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>>93905089
>Only decrepit old men
You little!
>Destiny Release Date: 09/09/2014
I... i am not that old. It can't be.
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>>93905079
>crush
The only Zhimin would be interested in are sword users. Can't have them on her with some spear whore
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>>93905090
>m-muh old times!!
If you're unable to move on and recognize that the game has turned to shit, it's your fault. Destiny was only good when it came out, the same way early Warframe was a good game before they started tackling shit onto a fundamentally flawed formula.
And let us not pretend that you took any good lessons from Destiny. All of your CYOAs are gachashit and you only mention gachashit, so I'll suspect that you live in your poor Brazilian favela due to your addiction to these kinds of games.
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>>93905150
*cheat on
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>>93905158
Warframe has been and still is better than Destiny albeit.
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>>93905158
Hop off my goat Warframe
Yes it's a slog to get anything you want, but the gameplay is so cool that it doesn't matter
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>>93886286
>Singularity
He is learning how to be more human, trying to interact with civilians without being discovered. He is also reflecting on what it means to be a real hero, which combined with the previous point should be a good setup for interactions with a lot more builds down the line. Attempst at stalking and "incognito" interactions where everyone knows who he is but he does his best to pretend to be human.

>>93893684
I am not sure who would nominate him. He is a thinker but he is not particularly helpful in that regard, he is not biological so he cannot be studied. Maybe Jack would be interested just because he is strong? He also lacks common sense so he could be seen as easy to manipulate, regardless of how true that actually is, but nobody should be particularly aware of that yet. Even if some future developements may change that.
As for his plans, he does not really have much of a reason to confront them normally, he can just go into space and nobody should be able to find him. Nobody should be aware of his connection to Fractal specifically and Umbrella is used to attacks so that should not be exploited, not yet anyway. The general populace should not be aware of how much he cares about them so that should not be easy to exploit either. Generally avoidance should be his plan, but in the case some way to force engagement is found he will start using his powers in very dangerous ways, especially if the 9 start killing a lot of people. He has been studying on the distorion part of his powers and has a couple more tricks now, he also is not above spacing people if necessary, he did see it work with the unnameable lizard.

On a meta level I know that Jack is unlikely to actively participate because Singularity has way too many ways of killing him by chance as a consequence of his powers.
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>>93905158
My friend, I played Destiny up to the Taken King DLC. Year 1 still. I haven't seen Destiny decay because I didn't stick around to see said decay, and I barely touched Destiny 2.
You can play gacha and not spend a single penny on it. It is being called F2P. The only people who spend money in gacha in Brazil are rich people, or those who have YouTube channels. I am neither, so I'm stuck with my F2P status.
As far as I had played Destiny 1 at the time, there was little microtransactions and the shit at the time.

The thing with most gachas is that they run even in the most basic potatoes most of the time. If you lack any gaming platform, those games become your go-to because you can't run anything else.
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>>93905167
It's gotten worse when devs tried doing shit the game wasn't meant for, but I'll agree that it's significantly better than modern Destiny. I still play it from time to time again, anything is better than loot goyslop.
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>>93905192
I forgot to mention that he would not worry if they start killing people because then he does not have to worry about collateral damage. If he does nothing those people die anyway so he may as well be the one to kill them instead, those lives would be on his conscience either way. I also ran out of characters for this clarification.
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>>93902134
>>93902432
I don't know why but this puts a smile on my face.
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>>93905204
>b-but emulation!
I also got stuck for three years without internet access at the time, so I was stuck playing the same emulated games for three years on a loop. I'm sick of Pokemon games and Perfect Dark.
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>>93905004
I truly thought that yesterday
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>>93905150
So does she turn into a literal sword?
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>>93905283
Same. Today too. But in a way, I did post it, even if it was just a WIP. BTW, I think I finished the Backstory section, and the part about the bloodline if anyone was interested. I'm gonna leave the rest for tomorrow (and maybe a day after that too or more, I'm running out of optimistic ETAs). Maybe I should post it normally before I even write down the techniques fully. Some people did that.
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>>93905308
>somebody made the living sword build before I did
it's so fucking over
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>>93901615
Is there seriously no point in picking Old? It just seems so dogshit for no reason. FHV balanced being old by giving you greater strength that you plateaued at but here being old is an option if you want to purposefully cripple your build. Starting with 3 potentials right out the gate is terrible when you can get unlocked perk potentials from Life Events instead, and its even worse because you can't stack those potentials on extra unlocked ones because you're also capped at three, and you're locked out of even getting potential 2's. The only way Old would even be considered worth it is if it gave every perk you chose potential 1 or something because it loses out on everything. They got the worst superperk, only life event bonus is +1 Item, and only after the Booster Pack do Old builds actually have the chance to get more variety, but even still they'd get dogged on by other builds choosing those new classes instead.
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>>93905308
Yea, shes living the Reincarnated as. Sword life.

>>93905332
They can be friends.
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>>93905335
You forgot about the Mastery 4 cap and styles that require classes they don't have access to.
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>>93905335
You are there to be a wise jobber mentor, not to do any fighting
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>>93905362
Just as Togashi intended...
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>>93905335
Also why is Martial Mastery capped at 4? I wasn't going to bring it up since people have already complained about it but it's like the one area that Grown Ups could possibly have an edge in as it could represent their experience. Instead you're flat out told that you can't be stronger. So you can't get any Potential 2's which represents future growth, you can't have any options that show off your current experience because your capped potentials can easily be unlocked at the start by Young builds, and you lose out on any unique variety because you're locked into a single class unless you choose not to be human.

>>93905358
Yeah you caught me just as I was typing up about it. It's absurd, I really don't get the appeal. It's basically just the dump build option.

>>93905362
Its fucked that you can't even be the best at teaching since Veteran and Master Potential 2's are locked to you. A mentor that can't fight against opponents younger then them or even lend experience to them because whoever they are teaching can be right out the gate as strong as them and only going to get stronger.
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>>93905362
You mean mentor kids who have higher mastery than you do?
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>>93903714
Really cool. I liked the little references to powers and interactions between them, and the dynamic of the family.

The secret mission is a neat addition, I suck at geography so I have no chance but it was a cool idea.
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>>93904912
>>93904920
There's only one anon capable of writing a tournament, and that's ME!

TOURNAMENT UPDATE!

It's been a long time! Life has been kicking my ass these past few months and my writing progress slowed to a crawl, but I'm back!

Still working on Sandatsu v Kaylee, it's all planned out, and a lot of it is written. I wanted it out weeks ago, but the aforementioned life asskicking hampered that.

This part is currently at 6969 words, putting the overall count at 54,950! It's strange to think I've written a novel for what is in effect a single day, but I hope that it's been enjoyable, and that the next part will be well received!
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>>93905373
Do you know that you can just ignore the CYOA? if you dislike those limitations that much, ignore them.
No one will take offense to you breaking cityanon's slop.
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>>93905416
i am not reading 54k words slop about a shitty AFO expy and a saiyan expy and i sincerely hope you're just joking
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>>93905427
People get mad when someone makes a powerful build following the rules.
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>>93905435
Anon, he meant that the Tournament saga as a whole is at 54k words.
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>>93905416
pfft... hahahaha....
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>>93905435
cool thanks for providing your highly valued opinion
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>>93905427
There's nothing to break though. It's just anyone can play the game as a Youth instead for better results. If Grown Ups didn't exist and we were just left to choose a Class instead, absolutely nothing about the CYOA would be different. Actually it'd be even better because I could see people choosing Grown Up for the Life event, perk, and item and accept the drawbacks of having more responsibilities and less free time. It'd be way more worth it without the potential cap.
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>>93905416
That's great news! Too great indeed. I need proofs. Update one of the tournament rentries that are already out, so we know you're who you claim you are.
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>>93905440
then i am not reading that part
>>93905448
seethe more lol
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>>93905079
I've been thinking about Night Ride lately.
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>>93905449
And? Then taking grown-ups would be better anyway since they get +1 Stat, Life Event, and +3 Perks. Without Potential Cap, they are strictly better than any other class.
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>so lost in the timeline that it doesn't matter
>nothing came out of it except some vague comments because no one knew who the winner was
>only being written at this point to satisfy the author's ego so he can say he completed a tournament
It wasn't enjoyable and I won't be reading it, also no (You) for you lil nigga
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>>93905477
Did you consider that it may be a shitpost?
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>>93898435
A Business Meeting: - https://docs.google.com/document/d/1Xf6FyI6tP32AzI6iKrK3chW4Cd0LNobd6YRdIj3T9pM/edit?usp=sharing
Rentry version: - https://rentry.org/53sbfeun
Featuring Sky Captain, Robo Girl, Roid Rage, Fractal, and Doctor Kharnigore.
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>>93905416
Good luck anon!
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>>93905505
Even if it wasn't, it's just attention whore behavior that I refuse to directly reply to. You shouldn't be talking about a writefag you haven't even finished unless someone specifically asked you about it, or you want help with writing a certain moment. Just post that shit or fuck off, you don't need to tease it like it's an actual chapter of mha.
>b-but I need the replies to motivate me
fix your psyche
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>>93905476
Yeah but it wouldn't be so strong to make taking the other options a bad choice. I still think it might be one of the weaker options too. Just +3 Perks makes Prime Self the worst Super Perk, so most people would just dump that for one of the general Super Perks. Limit Break is the strongest in raw power, Determinator stacks with several emotion based perks, Baseline gives you incredible potential, and Right of Royalty gives you a completely different way to scale through charisma and status maxing. Having a completely unique perk like those is more than worth it the extra item or perk you'd be losing out by choosing it over Grown Up.
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>>93905531
Your argument convinced me.
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>>93905555
>Forgot to download it as a GIF
>Get a fucking quad
What does it mean? How? WHY?
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>>93905476
NTA, imo the fixes, I'd make:
1. No potential 2 for oldfags, but either more free potential 1 unlocks, or limit the unlocks for Young's, so the oldfags have an edge there.
2. Raise the mastery limit for oldfags, but possibly not to max. Make level for the unlocked cap for youngs, but they have potential to go beyond that.
3. Let oldfags pick another class from which they don't get any mechanical benefits, other than qualifying for its requirements.
Basically, just do what it was supposed to do: oldfags are stronger right now, but they have no more potential left, while the youngs have so much of it, that when they realize it, they'll be stronger than the oldfags are right now.
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>>93905562
Quads choose worthy retards.
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>>93905530
It's a big enough of an event in-universe that I appreciate getting some news about it, especially after so long (though I'd still prefer if he gave us a summary of how it's gonna go. Having to write around it devalued the event quite a bit, since we couldn't really reference it.)
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>>93905531
>>93905573
+You can take as many Potential 1 Perks as you can afford.
+You can come from any background or Ring, this class just means you are a Grown Up.

+Grown Up now can get up to Mastery 5.

Since you convinced me, are those changes enough?
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>big enough of an event in-universe
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>>93905605
>+Grown Up now can get up to Mastery 5.
No, the issue here is specifically that the Young's can start with higher mastery than the old dudes. If the case was just that the young dudes can go above them in time, it'd be fine, but if they don't have the starting limit, then neither should the oldfags.
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>>93905644
Everyone starts at 1, dude. Just choose your life events such as Dojo/Sword Saint/Old Master to get a higher starting level.
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>>93905523
drive off a bridge
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>>93905644
nta, but what if someone wants to make an adult that isn't a martial arts master? If adults are locked to being mastery 4 or higher it'd be awkward for some kinds of builds.
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>>93905670
My exact thoughts. Now I'm giving the chance for Grown Ups to get a higher starting ceiling, but you still have to build up for that.
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>>93905655
Start with as in when you finish a build but before you realize your potential knt he story and such. You can make a young character that right out of charge has mastery 6 or 7, the oldfags have the artificial cap for some reason, which disqualified them from the mentor roles for them really.
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>>93905677
No? Everyone has a cap, anon. I don't think I've let in a typo that states otherwise. The 4 cap applied to everyone except a few NPCs. Everyone stopped at Mastery 4 as there was no way to get past it.
The other classes can come to grow PAST Mastery 4, but you do not start above Mastery 4.
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>>93898934
>Name
The Fallen Sage Sword, Imperishable Red Star
(Hóngxīng, 紅星)

>Tao
Tao of (Western) Dragons
Mortal

>Generation
Disciple

>Qi
R1
Common Fire Roots

>Body
R4 +1
Immortal Talent
Noble Bloodline - Yezi Pattern Jian

>Soul
R4

>Taoist Roots
Loose Cultivator
Non-Human Foreigner from an Ancient ‘Sect’ with a Bounty and Mortal Ties

>Life Encounters
Flashy Heroics
Silly Mischief
Battlefield Brother

>Fated Encounter
Fallen Immortal

>Fighting Style
Other: Self
Other: Assist

>Comprehension
Tao

>Techniques

Raga: Poison of Sick Attachment [Reversal 10]
+Avaritia: Treasured Golden Corpse [Body Cultivation 10 + Soul Cultivation 4]
+Luxuria: Dance of Birds and Sparks [Support 4]
+Gula: Endless Gaping Maw [Other 10]

Moha: Poison of Bewildered Ignorance [Ambush 10]
+Superbia: Queen of Poisons [Summoning 4]
+Acedia: Laughing Scales [Barrier 4]

Dvesa: Poison of Hateful Aversion [Attack 10]
+Ira: Scouring Hell [Trump 4]
+Invidia: Rising Star Dreams [Footwork 10]

>Advantages
Second Style
Overflowing Charisma
Perfect Efficiency
Technique Innovation

>Fate
Pillaging 10

>Custom Treasure
(her body)
R10
Weapon - Saber
Perfect Quality
Like Divine Steel
Treasure Spirit (that’s her)
Tao Treasure
Lifebound Treasure (to herself)

>Flaws
Ruthless Foes +Foolish Foes

Rentry (very rough outline of techniques, will complete later) - https://rentry.org/KtHDragonSword
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>>93905696
Much like mortals, the gods too seek to Kill the Heavens. One attempt to breach the gap of power was the Five Emperors Forge, which attempted to forge weapons worthy of a Sovereign, that 11th Realm.

The Heaven-Cleaving Sage Jian was one of those weapons, designed to use the wisdom and power of an ancient dragon’s soul. However, not only was the blade a failure, but the soul used was mistakenly taken from another world - one where dragons are natural disasters of fire and greed.

Treated as a flawed, cursed blade and discarded to the lower reaches of the world, the treasure spirit of the Fallen Sage Sword gradually took on the colors of a dragon, becoming Hóngxīng. Servitude and a human mind awakened bestial pride and cunning, becoming an alloy of both.

Hóngxīng is proud, gluttonous, lustful, lazy, envious, wrathful, and extremely avaricious, the polar opposite of what a sage should be. Her wielders rarely keep her for more than a week, whether she decides to ditch them or her personality makes them throw her down a well. Surprisingly simple to get along with, just play to her desires, but she’ll still be annoying even if she likes you. After all, in her mind, all of her wielders are ‘her treasures’, for her to do with as she wishes.

But if you can put up with her, you’ll find a sword unlike anything under heaven. Just don’t mention those Immortal Armament whores…

>Likes
Being praised, anything shiny or valuable (if she can have it), being amused, getting into fights, getting oiled properly, adding memories to her hoard

>Dislikes
Being stepped on or used for cooking, Immortal Armaments, Stoics, birds

>Goals
0) Amuse herself
1) Find a proper wielder
2) Reobtain her proper, draconic form
3) Loot Heavens-Chan
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>>93905696
My sword fanatic cultivator just bloody nose fainted reading this.
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>>93905703
City anon...
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>>93901615
Do the old man free potentials come with their associated perks or do I have to purchase them separately?
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>>93905670
Then you can do that? The issue is specifically for adult martial arts masters, since they are the ones that for some reason get hit with the rule that they cannot reach above mastery 4. >>93905688
Pic related. As for high mastery start:
1. Be young
2. Purchase level 4 mastery with points.
3. Take super power for +2 mastery
4. Unlock veteran potential 1.
Ta-dah! You're a young character with mastery 7.
Wasn't the first build this got a young build with mastery 6?
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>>93903714
A good read, and now I know how Fractal eats!
I think the waterfall was Niagara falls, no idea about the castle or the floral flag, though.
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>>93905661
But I don't drive!
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>>93905712
That's what I was hoping for, though she's kind of a handful to deal with

>>93905718
You got the wrong guy
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>>93905712
Are you bad enough to create a sword harem?
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>>93905727
This probably was an interpretation on the anon's part, since Mastery 4 was meant to be a hard cap. Already changed it, and thanks for bringing it to my attention

>The max level obtainable is Mastery 4, Mastery 5 for Grown Ups. Mastery stacking options do not go past Mastery 4, and 5 for Grown Ups.
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>>93905727
Pretty sure that's a case of power gamers taking advantage of poor wording, not an intended function. Mastery 5+ is clearly meant to be just like max level perks. Adults not being able to achieve any mastery over 4 just means that they can't train hard and go any higher, but young builds can, just like the potential on perks.

The CYOA should probably clarify that though so the powergamers don't have any excuses to make.
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>Tain will develop a sword harem
He's too powerful...
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>>93905756
>>93905760
I wouldn't blame the powrgamers when you remember how the stats work or worked. There were caps for purchases, and then going above it with bonuses. Mastery working like that too was just an extrapolation.
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>>93905696
I'll waifu her up in my writefag through dick stabbing.
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>>93898934
How do heart domains and heart force work?
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>>93905782
They don't.
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>>93905782
Exactly as they say. They make your attack(s) have a chance of landing despite having no right to. Basically le lucky hit
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>>93905696
Dang, guess Zhimin is gonna have all her potential masters stolen. Neat build.
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>>93905782
Have you ever seen stuff in martial arts media where someone does stuff, and it seems like nothing they did connected, but then all of a sudden their opponent falls over anyway? Like samurai running by each other and slicing at their enemy, or fist of the north start style BS. It's basically that.
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>>93905782
I wanted not get stabbed more than you wanted to stab me, therefore your attack failed.
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>>93905789
nta, but clearly there is only one answer... it's time for dual wielding.
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>>93905782
Largely they dont. Feel free to ignore.
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>>93905789
Time to expand the target group. If there are not enough sword users left, you just need to go and turn others into sword enjoyers.
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>>93905765
TainKINGs thriving
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>>93905801
A forbidden technique...

>>93905814
Time to break break some arrogant young master's saber in half.
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>>93905834
Uohhhhhhhhh!!! I'm fencing!
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>>93905789
Just checked your build out, wanna be Fated Rivals?
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>sword waifus fighting over CHADain
non-sword bros...his rizz...it's too strong.....
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>>93901799
For the weapon maker are we able to choose any tier of materials as long as we don't hit the Tier 3 material cap, or does weapon quality influence what materials we can take? Also I assume the Free Weapon Art/Part stacks at each level, so a Premium Weapon has by default +3 Weapon Art/Parts on top of the weapon type bonuses.
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>>93905956
I already agreed she'd be Saya's rival, but if you don't mind a rivalry triangle then sure.
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>>93906020
I got no problems with that.
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>>93906016
You can take any tier of material, the cap is there only for T3. Free Weapon Art/Part stack, so at Premium you have +3 like you assumed.
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>>93906031
I will clock out earlier today. I will check the (next) thread after I get back from work. See ya.
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Rolled 1 (1d3)

Inspiration has struck.
1. Build right away.
2. Wait till later.
3. Anon decides.
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>>93906053
what's your concept?
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Rolled 2 (1d3)

1. Say I'll write but don't
2. Rot even harder
3. Go to bed
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>>93906056
It's not finalized completely yet but it's gonna be sci-fi, out of place, and probably cringe.
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>>93906065
What if instead you made a shy cute waifu with massive tits
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>>93906098
What if you didn't rely on /mcyoag/ to jerk off and used a site made for that?
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>>93906098
No good faceclaims for that, sorry.
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>>93906003
>>93905833
>>93905765
Righteousness is its own reward.

Tain is certainly not ready for women to show an interest in him. My boy grew up in a library, studying calligraphy, art and poetry.
>one of the 9 paths is self-restraint
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*sniffle*
W-Why don't anons like my build as much as that FAGGOT Tain...
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>>93906155
Because you didn't follow my instructions when making a build.
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>>93906155
Use swords and chicks will be all over your dick, bro.
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>>93906105
It's just a boobie. You gay or somethin?
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>>93906160
Do we have any ZFJs this KTH run
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>>93906155
Odds are you chose to be a virgin muscle body cultivator rather than the chad twink qi cultivator.
Its just the staple of the genre. You know the more difficult it is to tell if they are a man or woman, the more they will be loved.
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>>93906183
no one likes your build taizhou anon
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>>93906180
Ageratum under the mask
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>>93906189
I can't keep up with these chinese names, in one ear and out the other
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>>93906210
I suffer the same with this genre. I continually have to look up who is who when characters are mentioned.
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>>93905523
Good stuff. I especially really liked the corporate speak in this (the stuff about the contract clauses) and the distinct voice each character has. Looking forward to seeing what this crew gets up to.
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>>93906210
You can't remember the names because they're Chinese.
I can't remember the names because I'm not playing this MP.
We are not the same.
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>>93906294
no one asked, pmd rat
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>>93906290
Thanks, glad you liked it!
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>~< cute lil PMD rats driving in their cute lil PMD rat cars...
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>>93898934
I've finally narrowed down to two ideas I like
>inchling knight from nippon with insect based abilities
>western astronomer with buff/debuff abilities named after constellations
Which sounds better for a build?
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>>93906383
The tiny mfer is NOT a good idea
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>>93906385
you're right, he's a GREAT idea
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>>93906385
Bro what an inchling ever do to you?
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>>93906385
Why not he's just a little guy
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500 words into my TRAC slop, I will make this into an mp tomorrow but for now i must sleep
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>>93906535
OMG Who da hell cares!
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>>93906540
>>93906189
>>93905661
>>93905610
>>93905477
>>93905530
>>93905453
>>93905435
all me btw
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>>93906564
I haven't made fun of MHA in a while, it's too pathetic.
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>tournamentfag has a mass reply meltie
Funny.
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>>93906540
Me.
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>pretending sameCHADS don't rule this place
Pathetic.
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>>93906595
>eight replies
>"mass reply"
boy this board is sheltered
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My tummy hurts Anons.
Can you help?
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>y-you're all sooo fragile and sheltered!!
Meltdown? Meltdown. Now with a taste of a salty MHAfag!
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>>93906613
oh make no mistake I fucking hate MHA
but I despise spiteshitters even more
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>>93906607
*kisses your tummy*
:)
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>>93906607
better watch your tummy, or you might drop shounen fanfiction from the depths of your bowels
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>>93906628
Thanks Anon
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>>93906621
go cry about it
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>>93906633
He is.
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Reminder tomorrow you have to go to work.
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>>93906644
Uhhh
How do I put this
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>>93906644
And?
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>>93906644
Did you forget that /mcyoag/ is exclusively used by middle schoolers?
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You chose a means to an end, not a proof.
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>>93906664
It's filled with sheep... and then the wolves
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>>93906644
>he doesn't work from home
Pathetic
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>>93906666
>Satan mumbling nonsense to himself
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>>93906683
Gogoo gaga, motherfucker.
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>>93898944
When is the tierlist getting updated? Also, why are a couple of the images massive?
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>>93906712
>When is the tierlist getting updated?
When you bully Marakanon enough.
>Also, why are a couple of the images massive?
Marakanon wasn't bullied enough.
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>>93906664
I'm middle-aged and long-term unemployed, thank-you-very-much.
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>>93905523
Fractal here, sorry for not writing down this story idea earlier. But man oh man am I a little glad because this is a really good look into that trio. Loving how blase you have her in regards to the super materials to make it obvious she knows her way around the subject.

I think Fractal would get lawyers to draw up contracts and try to get the trio hired by Umbrella. She absolutely sees potential in all three of their work for various applications, even if she'd keep some of those applications secret.
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>>93906829
I'm glad to hear I did her justice! I don't think they want to become full employees or anything like that, they're just looking to license out their inventions.
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>>93906896
Then licensing works! She'd be fine pushing the company to make that happen as well, if only because some of those gases could make both parties disgustingly rich.

Fractal would also want to hire the trio for some contracting work. She's got some ideas and their work plays very nicely into it.
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>>93906756
what did happened this time?
The only posts I did was thredslaving for KtH, then I left.
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KTH anons tell us about your Master.
Who are they?
Why did they take you as Disciple?
How do they feel about you going to thr Wild Library.
Why did they teach you the techniques you know, why not something else?
Where do they sit within the Sect?
Do you have Martial siblings? Martial Aunts/Uncles?
If you have no master, then how did you learn what you know?
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>>93906756
>>93906716
>>93906995
Here you go
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>>93906756
>>93906716
ohhhh ok, sry but Tierlist fucks up the imgs If you crop it any other way, so it'll be a bit fucky.
I'll go update it now
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>>93898934
https://tiermaker.com/create/kth-tier-list-16986623-4

ok here's the updated list with Gear 5 At Home and Another Fucking Sword. All the images are now same sized squares but its cropped a bit weirdly and I ain't fuckin fixing it.
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>>93907021
You could crop it around their faces so the proportions are better
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>>93907008
They are the multiplayer school because 90% of us didnt write our builds to have ex-masters and shit. Stop asking us questions about stuff before the school when none of us are sect-kids.
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>>93907047
I can't be fucked to do that shit
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gonna have sects with them kids
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>>93907045
You're missing swordbro and greekbro.
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>>93898934
needs more jadelike beauties
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I got the greek now, and I'm pretty sure the sword is there, but lets do a test run
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>>93907109
Jade skinned beuty
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>>93907109
Taizhou is RIGHT there.
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>>93907156
>beauty
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>>93907173
Its subjective.
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>>93907152
Tain is the one missing. For some reason he and Zhimin were banished by the threadslave to the second page of the cyoa.
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>>93907186
For the record, I know that its actually akin to more western artists saying 'skin like porcelain' or whatever and it just means pure and without blemishes and stuff.

But its funnier to take it literally
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>>93907109
UOOOOOOH goblin onahole erotic ToT
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>>93907050
So you are starting without knowing anything, or learning everything only since they got to the school?
In that case
>how did you find the techniques
>how many other techniques did you attempt before settling on them
>how long have you been at the school
>how do you study and practice them? Do you need owlbros tutelage or do you train with other students
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>>93907059
Disciple only Sect would be a pretty funny background
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>>93907008
Gale's master is Zephyr, the Gentle Breeze. A Great Wind Sprite who concerns themselves with the lives of mortals for no discernable reason other than curiosity. It was by pure chance Gale stumbled across him, or rather Zephyr descended onto him. Gale still doesn't know why he was chosen out of any number of wandering travelers, but he's grateful that he was given the chance to become a cultivator rather than a street rat.

Although he's got his own personal mentor, it doesn't stop his desire to join a real sect as he's mostly living the life of a loose cultivator despite belonging to a clan. Its quite lacking when it comes to a professional relationship of student and teacher, as Zephyr mostly follows Gale around and doesn't directly instruct him beyond some vague proverbs, pushing Gale to learn by imitating what little he can glean from his master's higher level techniques. Right now he can only see a cloud as a cloud, so his replicated techniques are limited to his perception of the physical world and are very basic and straightforward as a result. He's got no blood relations that he knows of so any other possibilities for cultivation is between what he's got right now or nothing at all, so Gale considers himself pretty comfortable with the current situation.
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>>93907196
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>>93903714
>>93903894
Oh, right. Forgot.

The building is the Château Frontenac, isn't it? If that's correct, I'd like to see a writefag of Evie's reaction/freakout post-Dinner, I'm interested to see how she loses her shit to her team.
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>>93907050
> barbarian tribes
> ancient sects
> Devil sects
> Scholar sects
> reincarnated immortal
I think those who have masters outnumber loose cultivators.
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>>93907050
Oh I'm in the middle of making my build, should I be going Loose Cultivator to do the whole school thing?
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>>93907395
The point is that you can take any sect background and still be part of the school
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Rolled 6 (1d6)

1 for starting an MHA writefag
2 for starting a KtH writefag
3-4 and I rot
5-6 and anon decides
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>>93907482
Fairy Tale writefag. Grab your shovel and start digging.
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>>93907195
>But its funnier to take it literally
Even literally, it refers to white jade.
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>>93907482
1
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>>93907493
FT was pretty comfy, guess I can try my hand at necrophilia
after seeing the worm revival I'm not sure I'd want FT to come back like that, it'd be too depressing

>>93907514
but I think I'll start with this
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Question. Making my "reincarnated former-devil on the path to redemption" character and was going to have some physical traits that show some of the corruption of their past life (skin like cracked stone and horns).

Would this fall under the Non-Human circumstance or would I be looking some Bloodline manifestation?
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>>93907574
None of the above unless you want it to be. No one would give you shit for it.
...Except Cranky Anon.
But since you want an answer go for Non-Human.
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>>93907574
Is it supposed to do anything or just for looks?
If it's supposed to do something, like skin like stone makes you durable, then either the bloodline ability, or a technique (endurance, side effect of body tempering, or a supporting cultivation).
Otherwise, pretty much up to you, but based on what I remember, after the reincarnation it is more human than not, so I'd go with a bloodline effect, unless you're not taking devil as a noble/royal bloodline.
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>>93907574
Non-Human if female, Bloodline if male. Don't ask why, just trust me.
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>>93907008
>Who are they?
Ageratum's master was simply named Lord Eudicot. Bit of an egotistic fellow.
>Why did they take you as Disciple?
Ageratum was gullible, and Lord Eudicot wanted power.
>How do they feel about you going to thr Wild Library?
If he could feel he would be very displeased but he has been very obliterated as of late.
>Why did they teach you the techniques you know, why not something else?
Because a cult should be stealthy!
>Where do they sit within the Sect?
He was the master. He is no longer the master due to his current circumstances. (Those are being dead.)
>Do you have Martial siblings? Martial Aunts/Uncles?
No, those guys probably completely gave up cultivation due to getting crippled by Lord Eudicot. Since Ageratum snatched all the important knowledge and treasure the cult had, they didn't have anything left to help in Mortal Savantry. Maybe he has a lone sibling who's dedicated to Body Tempering or a craft he discovered on his own, but it's unlikely. Similarly, Lord Eudicot's agenda made it so there wouldn't be any Martial uncles or aunts.
>If you have no master, then how did you learn what you know?
He was actually able to figure out his Body Tempering technique all on his own from watching Lord Eudicot. It isn't a very impressive technique, but it's something to help out with his Body Cultivation.
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>check MHA post
>no replies
>close thread
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>>93905416
This doesn't count as an update. There's no proof of life.
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>check MHA post
>no replies
Ahhhhhh... feels good for MHA to finally be dead...
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>>93907008
>Who
His master was an enigmatic scholar, a poet, painter, and artisan, most famous of course for his martial pursuits rather than his artistry. The foremost master of the Brushstoke Blade known as Zi Yu. Tian considers him a contender for the title of worlds strongest swordsman, though Zi Yu would be quick to contest he is humble skill.
>Why
Zi Yu did not initially want to take Tian as his disciple. Instead he was asked repeatedly by the elders and sect master to do so. A venerable himself within the sect, they wanted him to foster who they considered the brightest spark. Zi Yu quickly grew fond of his young and noble disciple however and took to the field of teaching quickly.
>How
It was Zi Yu who pushed for Tian to leave, against the wishes of the sect elders and sect leader. But as Master, none truly could nay-say his wishes for the development of his disciple.
>Why
He taught him the Brushstroke Blade because he thinks its most suitable for one of Tian's disposition. The Nine Paths of Truth because it is uniquely suited to Tian. Where to others it is a trash skill for him it is a heaven sent gift. The other skills drawn from the immortal scriptures he did not so much choose to teach as, they were the facets of it Tian first understood and could draw upon. As for the Eight Meridians and Illusionary Dream Method, neither were taught by Zi Yu and instead learnt by Tian for the sake of his master. The meridian art allowed him to care for his old and growing sick Master like none other. The Illusionary Dream Method was learned out of fear. Knowing his Masters time is almost up, he sought a method to preserve him. It also turned out to be a great way to read scrolls which was a pleasant surprise.
>Within
Within the Sect his master is a venerated Elder, previous Hall Master (or Dean) of the Academy of Ink and Edge. A peerless swordsman and distinguished gentleman. He retired his seat on the Elder council and now spends his days painting.
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>>93907008
>Martial Siblings
No Martial siblings, though he does have a number of martial aunts and uncles. The hierarchy was initially somewhat muddied given his Masters advanced age, but Tian is quick to assert his position as junior whenever such matters arise.
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>>93907008
For Dong Fuai
>Who is your master?
On a technicality it was an old woman who gave him the scrolls to jumpstart his cultivation, and for a time he was looking for one in the Mortal Empire of the Cobalt Crane, but in reality he doesn't have one, and due to the nature of his Tao, he probably won't get one, since the sect kept getting wiped out whenever it started up because Sects exposing and encouraging mass cultivation tends to piss off other sects.
> Why did they take you as a disciple?
Because Dong Fuai was trying to bring hope and joy to the old woman through a game, and practitioners of [Sunrise Praising Flower] tend to hand out their techniques at the drop of a hat.
> How do they feel about you going to the Wild Library?
She doesn't care, even if she is still out their cultivating somewhere, but the Cobalt Crane Empire is pretty shitted off that Dong abandoned his post.
> Why did they teach you the techniques you know, why not something else?
I assume it's because those were the only texts she had on her at the time when she gave them to Dong, and the Cobalt Crane barely gave him anything outside of the Three Sisters Swords and some marching orders.
> Where do they sit within the Sect?
Considering that [Sunrise Praising Flower] is almost exclusively Loose Cultivators, I'd say she sits kind of high because she's managed to live so long, but not really a master because those tend to get killed pretty quickly.
> Do you have Martial Siblings? Martial Aunts/Uncles?
Dong Fuai has living family, like his parents and a sister, but they're all regular people just being travelling doctors, he does write letters to them though, as for fellow practitioners, he has Luan Xiao, his sworn brother from the Cobalt Crane Empire, though they have since parted ways.
> If you have no Master, then how did you learn what you know?
Because BS-tier profession techniques make brain go *Harmonize your Meridians*
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>>93907008
>Who are they?
xū’s early years were shaped by a mentor who, while not necessarily a cultivator, imparted deep wisdom that would guide him on his path
he often speaks of her as "a beautiful light," a radiant and kind
looking back, xū realized that she was also his first love, though he only came to understand this after they parted ways
>Why did they take you as Disciple?
he doesn't know
>How do they feel about you going to the Wild Library?
she isn't aware of it, as far as xū knows, since they were separated long before he decided to join
>Why did they teach you the techniques you know, why not something else?
she didn’t teach him the techniques he has, but her insights are a big reason as to why he has embarked on the path he currently follows
>Where do they sit within the Sect?
she isn't part of the sect, in fact xū doesn't even know if she's still alive
>Do you have Martial siblings? Martial Aunts/Uncles?
none, but hopefully he will meet some at the school
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How did you guys decide on your ching chong names? With the amount of chinese baby names I've gone through the CIA 100% thinks I've knocked up an asian hooker and I'm no closer to settling on a name.
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>>93908511
Sometimes I just mix and match names from some "close-enough" period.
Sometimes I just pick by characters. For chink, I used this: https://www.mdbg.net/chinese/dictionary?page=chardict
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Original plan was for people to get all three but people have only guessed two (separately) so far, and I think the third one might be too niche, so I'll consider this good enough.
I was planning on doing this scene already though, so you can pick again.

The three locations were Niagara Falls, Chateau Frontenac, and Canada's Wonderland.
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>>93898435
Should have everything up to date on the terminal. If I missed anything, let me know.
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>>93902385
I was trying to find a decent image for how i picture her office but honestly Sky Captains description was essentially on point

>>93905523

An enjoyable ready, those poor interns cant catch a break.
Internship at the Umbrella corp is a perilous journey but with promises of financial independence for the lucky few who survive unspoiled.

A few thoughts came to mind after reading this, wouldn't the bimbofication gas raise some legal concerns since it has some extensive transformative ability I imagine it would make for a great disguise for criminals.

And what would it do to case 53's, male participants, test animals etc etc.

As for Dr Kharnigore's opinion on the trio is that their work seems very promising, they would be given the usual starting contract where for the first 8 months profit being split 60% to Umbrella 30% to the Sky captains crew and 10% kept as a security fun in case the tinker products provided turn out to backfire or cause extensive damage.

The argument being that it is not just the companies distribution network they are also using the companies name to public image and trust in quality, so during what is essentially the trial period Umbrella is arguably carrying most of the danger if their products fuck up horribly. If after that period everything is in the green it drops to 40% to Umbrella corp and 60% to the other party with
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>>93908707
>60% to Umbrella
holy Roblox-tier profit split
probably still ends up being worth it for the Captain just because he's getting access to a distribution network he otherwise wouldn't have, but wowie
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>>93908720
considering how tinker tech works, trying to sell anything from a third party is a big risk and nothing tanks a company faster then say, a facial cream that melts your bones or gives you cancer 5 months down the road. But if it clears and its safe then your getting access to a global distribution network with a trusted brand name.

>>93908730
I was thinking it would be like the Oglaf comic and the two people hunting for the fountain of eternal youth but end up finding the fountain of Hot girl.. and lament having let the donkeys drink from it.

>>93908658
so, out of curiosity I clicked the link at the bottom of the entry and... I am terrified to ask, but i have to know, did you write that whole thing?
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>>93908747
If you're talking about the 49 page document, that was written by Wildbow for a quest he did on Spacebattles.
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>>93908707
give it to gore, give us the big lizard mommy
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>>93908757
I mean the power level catagorization and listing of various parahumans and their relevant threat levels.

>>93908720
to be fair she would probably supplement the pay disparity by buying their other products for personal company use but purchased at a much higher price then they would other wise sell them at.

Not to mention the 60/40 spit would only apply to the medical related stuff, super materials have a easier split since they shouldn't end up causing a plethora of lawsuits that would cause harm to the "pharmaceutical" image the company is trying to maintain.

>>93908816
no
Verification not required.
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>>93908658
Tattletale wasn't gay iirc
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>>93898435
>WORM
How long do endbringers live?
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>>93908952
Oh. Yeah I did that.
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>>93909111
Hard to answer without really diving into lore, but the short answer is ~300 years, less if they use their powers to the full extent.
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>>93909222
Endbringers drain Eidolon's shard, and Eidolon is already quite drained by the Gestation start, right?
Probably not a good pick for longevity, then.
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>>93909280
>Probably not a good pick for longevity
I've got really bad news about this setting for anyone who was planning for their build to live past 2013.
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>>93909303
>Gold Morning
Nah, my boys Takeichi and Endstopper will win
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>>93909303
Nah, I'd win.
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Where are the threadslaves?
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>>93909326
I EATED them.
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>>93909309
>Endstopper
Slows him down for a while but ultimately loses (see Leviathan).
>Takeichi
Dead from Stilling.
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>>93909339
>Endstopper
Survives because of power of friendship and time-bending.
>Takeichi
Can literally one-shot anyone according to his power description. Can probably outspeed/tank Stilling.
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>>93909326
Liberated. They now live free and fulfilling lives, without fear, without the despair which has defined their existence for so long. This is the final thread. An institution which can only survive by the sweat of slave labour, does not deserve to survive.
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>>93909303
To live past 2013, you only need to kill Jack, which isn't too difficult. Hell, a bomber plane drops bombs on the general area Jack is located -> problem solved. The Scion problem remains, but probably won't matter for a few decades.
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>>93909326
Eh, I'll get to it.
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When will we finally be free of lorefags?
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>>93909466
When we stop franchiseshit. Franchises necessarily bring a baggage of lore with them.
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>>93909489
Nah, lorefags will then just say "this custom setting is inspired by [shit series]" to justify their continued lorefagging.
We need to execute them.
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>>93909466
You "fix" it by making the lore non-existent or uninteresting to engage with. If that's preferable to you, you may have brain damage.
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>>93909466
Break the lore in your writefags
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>>93909554
>the lore non-existent or uninteresting to engage with
bro lorefags are going on about WORM in this very thread this would change nothing
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Why people care about lore so badly? If you don't like it, just break it to increase your enjoyment.
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>>93909466
The only escape is death. Come to oblivion, we have better mcyoag there.
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>>93909466
When we kill the Wormfags. That will cull the lorefag population by atleast 70%.
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>>93909525
I don't think I've seen that happen, and even if it does it's not quite the same.
Most fictional settings with supernatural elements have a plot that involves barely averting an apocalypse (there's no need for this cliche to be the plot, but what can you do, it's the slop that the audience keeps wanting). And averting the apocalypse happens a very specific way (specific people, specific places, specific seemingly innocuous events leading up to it), so only lorefagging prepares you for it. I think a lot of the worst lorefagging comes from this. But if the setting is original and not based on a franchise, then there is no incredibly specific barely-avoiding-the-apocalypse plot to lorefag about, that's a win enough for me.
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>>93909624
You're forgetting the powerfags who lorefag to justify their options being the strongest
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>>93909643
I think that's powerfagging at its core, not lorefagging. The lore part doesn't really matter there.
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>>93909489
You realize that it happens just as much with OC slop too right?

Its just the writer goes 'I meant it to be X'
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>powerfags
>lorefags
Whatever. They all job to the writefag.
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>>93909619
There's like 2 lorefags amongst the wormfags though.
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>RTHsissy is having a wormshit induced meltie again
Kek, what a bitch. He really can't stop whining about literal whos writefagging for their capeshit MP, huh?
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>>93909668
Incomprehensible, may god have mercy on your wretched soul
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>>93909668
Ruth Theta Haspsburg...rest your soul.
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African Warlord can only have the based kind of lorefagging (real life lore).
Just saying.
One merely needs to let go of the curse of shounen and embrace realistic settings.
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>>93909658
There's only 3 wormfags
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>>93909643
lorefagging is only one of the methods, writefagging is considerably more effective because anons are too lazy to write a counter story of your build jobbing to theirs
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>>93909710
Yeah but the most based writefags write their own build jobbing.
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>>93909704
Kill yourself you'll have to take away my shonen slop from my cold dead hands.
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>>93909704
That would require shonenspics festering in this general to start writing something good.
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>>93909710
>erm... non-canon!!!
Writefagbros? Your response?
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>>93909470
>>93909470
>>93909470
Hogs, don't forget. You're here forever.

I committed some fuckups, but I tried to fix them as I went along, so hopefully nothing major was left.
I haven't posted Worm in quite a while.
Xenon, kind of hit page 2. When I added the new writefag, it hit the limit, but then I realized it's because I haven't updated the new stuff part, with that, it would fit, but I left it as 2 pages in case more stuff comes.
I added KtH to the rentry. It was a bit disorganized, so I tried to gather it together. There was the prompt listed, so I kept it. Another similar one was posted this thread, so I added it, but it didn't like the cyoa, so keep that in mind in the future or they might be missed.
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I've never powerfagged but I've multiple builds powerfagged despite being designer jobbers.
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>>93909704
Arena shit sucks. Make a better real life setting.
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>>93909727
canonicity is dependent on popular opinion, i can write an entertaining piece and people will have no problem proclaiming it canon, especially if you start whining about it
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>>93909727
That's a nuclear option. You only use it if your character was grossly mistreated in the writefag. IF you use it because 'nah, I'd win' it'll just convince people to never use your character.
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>>93909704
MHA had some realistic lorefagging about Kyoto.
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>>93909748
>i can write an entertaining piece
the why haven't you?
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>>93909755
This. If you dare to reference real locations or cultures I will lorefags about how you're monkey brain who doesn't understand real life lore.
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>>93909769
i already have, chud
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>>93909704
I wanna play a zombie MP with anons, and I want us to build our own slave empire.
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>>93909792
I'll lorefag about the real life inspirations of zombies in pop culture.
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>>93909800
I'd prefer Cordyceps zombies, or something similar. A threat that slowly evolves over time so we don't get bogged down by "humanz r real monsters!!" shit.
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>>93908707
>the bimbofication gas raise some legal concerns since it has some extensive transformative ability I imagine it would make for a great disguise for criminals.
You could make the same case for just about any really effective cosmetics. It's just first trigger Cosmetic Shapeshift from the powers list in a can, but temporary. That's what most of his gasses are; one-point powers. The regeneration gas is by far his most powerful creation.

>for the first 8 months profit being split 60% to Umbrella 30% to the Sky captains crew and 10% kept as a security fun in case the tinker products provided turn out to backfire or cause extensive damage.
>...
>If after that period everything is in the green it drops to 40% to Umbrella corp and 60% to the other party
I think they'd jump at that contract.

I'm glad you liked the writefag and I think the Iron Cloud Tinkers and Umbrella have a bright future together!
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>>93899133
>Surprising how it can live up to its name from time to time.
Really not wrong...

>It might have to be a mechanical append
Probably not a bad idea. I know I tend to pay more attention to those than pure fluff, so it's a good way to make the reader pay more attention. (I try to pay both attention, but priorities are what they are.)

>What about you, how's things on your end?
Good to hear you've got some progress. Not too much on my end, but not nothing either. A little progress on the writing, but the bulk of my small progress was image editing. (pic related). Not sure if I'll just set text onto this background directly to really ape Pathfinder's style, or if I'll try to make some kind of frame to put in between. Experimentation is needed.

>it might be trying to return to when you slept much later compared to what you were trying last time.
Maybe?



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