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>>93963078

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>>93963168

>DISCIPLES:
>Yana Wiyen
>>93873135
>Xu
>>93941365
>Shi Ren
>>93904512
>Shīzi Dànshēng
>>93888741
>Taizhou Xiu'Er
>>93880649
>Ageratum
>>93883268
>Dong Fuai,
>>93884428
>Saya Kurokami,
>>93898210

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>>93963287
Regretfully, 4chan's spam filter is fighting me, so have a rentry. Hopefully we can get this sorted out by the next thread.

https://rentry.org/nx8s9ugz

>>93963323
Inb4 the patchnotes are:
>Limited amount of replies that can be done per post

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>>93963323

>>93963336
Shit, is that what is? That's extremely bad for how we do things in this thread. Did it clarify how many?

>>93963287
Anyone not listed on the post is officially designated as side character status. Say something nice about sect class 1-A.

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>>93963371

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>>93963380

>>93963378
I was just trying to figure out why the spam filter was rebelling, little bro.

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>>93963391

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EVEN A WORM WILL (re)TURN

Yep. Can't post this stuff either. No more build lists, it seems.

>Writefags
>Un spectacle de merde en relations publiques (Kharnigore, Fractal)
https://pastebin.com/m9iKA3qi
>Le choix terrible (Kharnigore, Fractal)
https://pastebin.com/q27FTMtX
>Fractal Design (Fractal, mentions Dr. Kharnigore, Hoper, and Mr. Skeltel)
https://rentry.org/Fractal_Design
>A Singular Day (Singularity, Dr Karnigore, Fractal, Appearance of many others)
https://rentry.org/8oc7vygw
>Blowing Off Steam [Dr Kharnigore Fractal]
https://pastebin.com/RGWn4mGx
>Gold Skull! Volume 1 - Backstory (Gold Skull, Jon Ible, some small cameos)
https://rentry.org/GoldSkullVol1
>Omnigirl, Bumble, Sorcerer, Toymaker, Endstopper, Pun-Pun
https://rentry.org/PunPuns_Big_Adventure
>Mentions of: Gold Skull, Mr. Skeltal, Maeve, and several others
https://rentry.org/PHO1
>Plan in Motion (M, Vanishing Visage, Dreamer)
https://rentry.org/xobo3aet
>"Guns Of Fun" (featuring Scribe, Buckshot and Pun Pun.)
https://pastebin.com/DkgaCHNC
>Ark's Arc Starts (Ark)
https://rentry.org/hv7i9wqu
>Vic Opener (Glory Girl, Panacea, Mr Skeltal)
https://rentry.org/ixe8wu3t
>A Night on the Docks, Evie's introductory write-in.
https://rentry.org/wraithch1
>Everyone Says I Have My Mother's Eyes (Cancer)
https://rentry.org/25s5vuio
>Babeling On (Babel, Fractal, Singularity, mentions Dr. Gore, Hopeman and others)
https://rentry.org/Babeling_On
>"Nightchase" (feat: Roadrunner, Horikiri, Scribe)
https://rentry.org/65gvs7ed
>Unforgettable (Babel, mentions of Fractal and Singularity)
https://rentry.org/Unforgettable_
>Chaos unleashed [Featuring, Mr Skeltal, Wild Hog, Bumble, Sorcerer, Miasma]
https://rentry.org/ynq75tu9

>>93963378
I'd be surprised if anyone ever thought my build wasn't a side character tbqh I know that's what I build for.

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>>93963433
>Writefags (Continued)
>Cops, Robbers, Capes, and Lizards (Omnigirl, The Hoper)
https://rentry.org/aupyd827
>Initiation (Wraith)
https://rentry.org/wraithch2
>Fractured (Fractal, mentions Wraith, Singularity, and more. References 'Chaos unleashed)
https://rentry.org/856p4ruv
>Swords and Sorcery, featuring Scribe vs Miasma
https://rentry.org/mw7evunv
>Ruminations and Meetings (Omnigirl, Bumble, cameos of Roadrunner and Takeichi)
https://rentry.org/vpakhemw
>Werewolf's Night Out (featuring Werewolf and Skitter):
https://rentry.org/fcdxg36z
>Sens Unique
https://pastebin.com/x7dJA9Li
>Werewolf's Next Night Out (featuring Werewolf, Bumble, Buckshot, cameo from Wraith):
https://rentry.org/395q93rc
>Scheme (Wraith, Undersiders, mentions of Fractal)
https://rentry.org/wraithch3
>Miasma and Mr Skeltal finalise a bet. [mentions Sniper, Werewolf]
https://rentry.org/v2682gn7
>Dinner (Wraith, Fractal)
https://rentry.org/3b2dtrwf
>A Business Meeting (Sky Captain, Robo Girl, Roid Rage, Fractal, and Doctor Kharnigore)
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1Xf6FyI6tP32AzI6iKrK3chW4Cd0LNobd6YRdIj3T9pM/edit?usp=sharing https://rentry.org/53sbfeun
>Optics: (Buckshot and Bumble, Mentions of Sky Captain Roid Rage and Pigger.)
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1D9gX4zNAAkoqSrZSZVtT0d-H5vniBL7JNS_j1I_brzA/edit?usp=sharing
Rentry version: - https://rentry.org/ysgtoqa5
>Attempt at Normality (Singularity, The Hopeman, Werewolf kinda, mentions Fractal.)
https://rentry.org/8vfbynf4


>Relationship Charts:
>Singularity.
https://rentry.org/cgc8rqzg
>Sky Captain's
https://rentry.org/cqdmti99
>Wraith
https://rentry.org/wraithchart

>/mcyoag/'s Worm Profiles (based)
https://rentry.org/prtterminal

ARTFAGS:
https://desu-usergeneratedcontent.xyz/tg/image/1720/59/1720590725750.png
https://desu-usergeneratedcontent.xyz/tg/image/1721/50/1721504480656.jpg
https://desu-usergeneratedcontent.xyz/tg/image/1722/28/1722287863906.png
>>93487082
>>93498256

Character Cards:
>Babel
>>93480376 + >>93481083

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>>93963447

This is it, bros. Jannies are clamping down on /mcyoag/. Say your prayers.

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>>93963463

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>>93963476

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>MHA Rentry
https://rentry.org/uhx77ys6

>RULES:
> Timeline: Just Another Story
> Location: Japan
>The Hero Students are at Shiketsu.

Instructions + Template for Making Cards: https://pastebin.com/NQ6JNH8r

>New Stuff:
>If Only He Could Walk Away (Desolator, Maddox, Nox, Mercury, Tether, Marrow):
https://rentry.org/fz2uttgz

>The Archive Link so you can keep using the funny numbers for builds (use this before complaining about dead links)
https://archive.4plebs.org/tg/thread/92498234/#92498405

>CHARACTER PROMPTS (feel free to answer these whenever)
Class 1-D Prompts 1-50: https://rentry.org/mhamp
Class 1-D Prompts 50+: https://rentry.org/mhamp2
Everyone else's prompts: https://rentry.org/mhamp3
Same password for all of them (mha4)
>Older Prompt Links Are in Here
https://pastebin.com/Qr3TtGa6
>Fighting Style Prompt (Leaving this out because it might be useful for anyone writing a fight)
https://archive.4plebs.org/tg/thread/88693730/#88693888
>Class 1-D Timeline
https://rentry.org/MHATIMELINE
https://rentry.org/itmttw7n (Backup)
>Class 1-D Character Summary
https://rentry.org/9bf3g

>Newer Version of the CYOA (Both the old and new versions are legal for builds. Use whichever one you want)
Version 4.2: https://archive.4plebs.org/tg/post/92012978

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>>93963504
Writefags:
>Early writefags here (19 Pages)
https://rentry.org/gqu3gnaf
>”First Test” Comp
https://pastebin.com/66ByP2sD
>Questionnaire Comp
https://pastebin.com/Ksn0zJ31
Else check the rentry

>The Blinding Lights (Desolator, Reaper, Maddox):
https://rentry.org/z8t6mmyd
>That Old Saying About Memories (Mammogar, Maru(maru)):
https://rentry.org/maru-mammogar
>Clouded Mirror (Mirror Devil)
https://rentry.org/26k39hof
>The Sickly Light of a New Dawn (Karaburan, Rosethorn, 1-D, and special guests):
https://rentry.org/hvsqpxzi
>Battle Against a True Dragon (Flying Force, Yamata no Orochi, Feral):
https://rentry.org/pmuua68n
>Nyoro Leaves (Maru, Rosethorn, and 1-D):
https://rentry.org/hwz5xxqx
>Mimic Meeting (Mash, Ersatz, Yaju)
https://rentry.org/p2iutcwd
>Rooftop Repose (Capture Cloth, Bakeneneko)
https://rentry.org/d86ivmz8
>The Surgery (Overdose, Yamata, Hijack. Small cameo of Ryu-kishi, Capture Cloth, Bakeneneko. Mentions of Reaper)
https://rentry.org/4xss2p8a
>Those Without Sin Cast the First Stone(Last Rite, Android, Mirror Devil, Agent's Law and Waver, Yako, Maru)
https://rentry.org/nhuwkiut
>Gurē (mentions of Reaper)
https://rentry.org/gce34p5o
>Introduction (Rush, Ryu-kishi, Challenger, Sunlight Man, Overdose, Mirror Devil, lesser cameos of Last Rite, Archangel, even lesser cameo of Yako and Marumaru, mentions of Reaper. Special guest star Aspara)
https://rentry.org/zs7yp3ys
>A Monstrous Premonition (Mirror Devil):
https://rentry.org/8u7epz6s
>A Flash of Green (Ryu-kishi, Luccione, Conman, Maru(maru), The Boys, 1-D, Karaburan, Rosethorn, Brightly, Agent Law&Waver, HYDRA, a bunch of others)
https://rentry.org/b7tzt2sc
>Massacre of the Innocence (Challenger, Marrow, Tomi, Recoil)
https://rentry.org/MHAMassacreOfTheInnocence
>For whom the heavens may shine (Yamata, Nabiki, Aoi)
https://rentry.org/ubnvasyd
>Everything right with the two of them (Reaper, Forget-Me-Not, Desolator, Feral, cameo of Karma)
https://rentry.org/z8ioezo9

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>>93963515
Writefags (Cont.):
>After all this time, you and I (Capture Cloth, Yamata)
https://rentry.org/b5yvec6b
>Shiketsu Loser's Club (Orbit, Crazy Train, Rosethorn)
https://rentry.org/a49q7ckm
>Happy New Year (Challenger, Recoil)
https://rentry.org/MHAHappyNewYear
>A Flash of Gold (Luccione, Ryu-kishi, Shoggoth, Bogey, Tattarimoke, Maw, Midas, Tomi, Greenfinger, Recino, Desperaido, Karma, Lilinah, Ysmir, Isabella, Okimoto, Heartbeat, mentions of 3-B / 1-C)
https://rentry.org/tq6imsr8
>Chrysalis (Rebecca Weber, Ryu-Kishi, Maru (Maru)):
https://rentry.org/5qroqtcu
>Internship gossip 2 (The Clique) :
https://rentry.org/beygrs3e
>The World She Saw (Mirror Devil):
https://rentry.org/hworbxxn
>Clown Days 1.5 (Ryukishi, Maru(maru), Challenger, Mirror Devil, Smokin' Sexy, Sunlight Man, Impakt, Popsy, Rosethorn, Android, mention of others)
https://rentry.org/PopsyTown2
>Rob Writes Home Again:
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1-w3kU8X4dBNjtfqeLgIxgNIFcDP2ns7Cldy-xaTB2Vk/edit?usp=sharing + https://rentry.org/b4wd2t6v
>Hot Sands, Interrupted (featuring Uplift, mention of Desolator): -
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1xiCdAvo-l_t00UxCIkDqdQ4_t4o2ZavxXqhi_7dvj94/edit?usp=sharing + https://rentry.org/ehfqnfe9
>Weightless Heart (Orbit, Yamata)
https://rentry.org/sm566reg
>Gentle Ruthlessness (Yako, Maru(maru), Last Rite, Marrow, Reaper, and various mentions.)
https://rentry.org/y4dpiune
>Eyes In The Dark (Ryu-kishi, Capture Cloth, Desolator, Rosethorn, Orbit):
https://rentry.org/xw5nmeyr
>A New Job (Flying Force, Saurus, Crazy Train, Desolator)
https://rentry.org/oczh8osy
>The Moon Saw (Mirror Devil):
https://rentry.org/4k5zbkzy
>Blood, Sweat, and Tears (Challenger + cameos of: Sunlight Man, Ryu-kishi, Endless Horizons Ltd., Rika Eichi, Recoil, Yako, Last Rite, Mirror Devil, Maru, Karaburan, Orbit, Flying Force, Yamata):
https://rentry.org/MHABloodSweatAndTears

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>>93963534
Writefags (final)
>The Lord is My Refuge(Part 1): (Last Rite, Yako, Android, Satoru Tani, Archangel)
https://rentry.org/dne6r8io
>Dead End Salvation 1 (Yamata)
https://rentry.org/kgy5h84q
>Sins of the Mother (Mirror Devil, Flying Force):
https://rentry.org/wqnszs8k
>Dead End Salvation 2 (Mirror Devil, Overdose, Yamata)
https://rentry.org/haa4sma9
>If Only He Could Walk Away (Desolator, Maddox, Nox, Mercury, Tether, Marrow):
https://rentry.org/fz2uttgz

>RELATIONSHIP CHARTS IN HERE
https://pastebin.com/rsnEph0b

For Art, Memes, Tierlists, etc. check the rentry

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>>93963561

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>>93963573

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>>93963581

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>>93963595

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>>93963606

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>>93963624

Does anyone have Saberfag's list of example techniques and his lore rentry?

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Ser Angelica The Third
>>93901986

Ariel Nowell
>>93902289

Liliana Foti
>>93904156

Melianca
>>93917966

Kou Yoshinori
>>93920708

Cullinan Diamond
>>93953064

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>>93963739

>>93963739
None of you tried

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>>93963745

>>93963737
>Saberfag's list of example techniques
Doesn't exist. It's the thing that kept him from finishing the CYOA.

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>>93963755

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>>93963762

Alright, it's time to start shipping.

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>>93963767

>>93963758
>Doesn't exist
Funny way to spell incomplete

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>>93963780

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>>93963794

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>>93963737
This is it.
Note from Saberanon,
>Some of those techniques are questionable

>>93963895
>Author cant even come up with 3 techniques each
>But were expected to come up with all of ours

>>93963921
>20 types of techniques
>3 techniques each
>60 techniques total
You're welcome

>>93963737
https://rentry.org/KTHstoragechamber#how-to-design-techniques
https://rentry.org/xianxiarants

I honestly forgot about the "qualitative" boost from Cultivation Techniques, I'll have to edit mine later.

>>93963746
they feared it was a stillborn and didn't want to put in effort for it, so inevitably it was a stillborn

>>93964419
It is also a cityanon's CYOA.

>>93964419
I actually did put real effort into a build but just never posted it because I knew it was a stillborn. So I just dumped another build instead. I’ll just have it in my back pocket for TRAC 2. Real Academy City has never been tried after all…

>>93963746
Lmfao why would I

>>93964477
TRAC 2 will also be a stillborn HOWEVER

>>93964419
I didn't fear anything. I just didn't want to play an objectively bad CYOA where no one really planned to have fun.

So is the new filter 'no dead links'?

>>93964509
Then I’ll just wait till TRAC 3

>>93964443
I can't honestly tell when his cyoa is in its final version or not. It always seems like there is some sort of consistency error or ESLness that could be fixed with an update but wasn't. They're kinda alright for single player since you could just headcanon when it's unclear but you'd be mostly relying on the author to make sure everyone is on the same page for multiplayer.

>>93964537
>>1
Let's find out.

>>93964598
... did the thread slaves hit a filter on the nicknames and thought it applied to all dead links?

>>93964605
The working theory is that's it's a mass reply filter.

>>93964611
ohhhhh, that makes sense.

Strongly considering a KTH npc for no reason other than me liking to build

>>93964611
It seems to check out.

>>93963168
imgchest: https://imgchest.com/p/lqye33v9q4d

>DISCIPLES:
>Yana Wiyen, Couldn't Wait For Onikino
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/93873135
>Xū (虚), One Drawback From Death
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/93941365
>Shi Rèn [认识], Don't Go To The Light
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/93904512
>Shīzi Dànshēng (狮子诞生), Anon's Build, Other Anons Decide
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/93888741
>Taizhou Xiu'Er, Games Workshop
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/93880649
>Ageratum, Is The Kool-Aid
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/93883268
>Dong Fuai, Purposely Generic
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/93884428
>Saya Kurokami, Bloody Sword Lady #2
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/93898210
>Tain, Who?
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/93892214
>Zhimin, Hedonist Sword Lady
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/93904644
>Gale, Gear 5th At Home
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/93941558
>Alkaios, Ancient Greek Man Finds Himself In World Populated By Twinks
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/93901361
>Hóngxīng (紅星), An Actual Sword
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/93905696
>Zheng Yao, Rock Hard Pacifist
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/93916022
>Xiang Chang Fresh as a spring chicken
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/93925623
>Zhou Yun, also known as Yunyun
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/93933897
>Yue, Monkey D. Buddhist
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/93937326
>Tora, Should See a Dermatologist
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/93941134
>Batudai (把毒台), Chinese Edgar Allen Poe
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/93947848

>ELDERS:
>Yèwǎn, How Many Licks to The Center of the Library?
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/93872216
>Yue Qianli (月千里), Anon Doesn't Think She's Canon
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/93872374
>Zào Zhēn, Gets Carded When Trying to Buy Wine
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/93923801

>Ancestors:
>Wen Wanroe, Slaanesh, Made In China
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/93883461
>Húndàn, Failed at NG+
https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/93958453

>>93964605
Also, it likely wasn't dead links since KtH was being a problem too, and most of it's links aren't dead yet.

>>93963078
Convince me not to make a second build.

>>93965601
This CYOA is very recyclable, why would you not make a second build

>>93965601
I can't, I have even already made one.

>>93965601
I already made every KTH build you currently see. It's a great CYOA if you're a paranoid schizophrenic!

Builds getting laid frequency tier list when
Penis size tier list when
Ass or tits tier list when
Whatever-girls-like tier list when
Dom or sub tier list when

>>93965601
Help me make my first one instead.

Need some names for some Grade 10 Barrage and Footwork techniques that revolve around Lightning and Dragons

>>93965957
>Barrage
Summer Heaven Shower
>Footwork
Godspeed Dance

>>93963078
Which builds would you want to see fight?

>>93966039
Xu and Shin
Yana and Says
Tian and Yunyun
Zhimin and Hongxing

*tumbleweed rolls on by, stops, looks around, yawns, continues to roll*
*laugh track plays*

>>93966533
The MHAfia is in a gang war over the purged builds right now, sorry.

Rolled 13, 13, 9, 17, 17, 1, 5, 16, 9, 14 = 114 (10d19)

>>93966039
>>93964643
Every two rolls is a pair, they shall fight.

>>93966911
Damn worthless dice roller. How hard is it to NOT roll two of the same numbers?

>>93966911
>Hongxing vs Hongxing
>Tain vs Yue
>Yue vs Yana
>Taizhou vs Yunyun
>Tain vs Zheng
interesting lineup

>>93966951
No
Tell me how that mirror match would go

>>93966965
...the chance to dual cultivate with yourself is a once in a lifetime opportunity?

>>93966965
Hongxing was "cultivating her yin" with a cactus and hurt herself, bless her heart

>>93966965
Hongxing would win and Hongxing would lose

>>93967011
Unlikely scenario.

Rolled 3 (1d3)

>>93963078
1. Evil chuuni who is definitely not putting on an act.
2. Foreign priest who's trying to proselytize.
3. Anon decides.

>>93967299
Evil chuuni but it's a cute girl.

>>93967299
Make a cute christian nun girl who acts pure and innocent who is actually a devil sect.

Rolled 3 (1d4)

Might not do it but
1: Cultist
2: Necromancer
3: Priest(/Paladin?)
4: Wizard

>>93967299
Both at once

>>93967299
Foreign Priest sounds like a lot of fun. We've had Chuuni's before but not priest/nun in this setting.

>>93963323
>Regretfully, 4chan's spam filter is fighting me
THE HEAVENS ARE ONTO US.
IT IS WAR!

>>93967299
make a cute devil sect girl who acts evil and chuuni but is actually a pure and innocent christian girl

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>>93963078
>https://rentry.org/KTHTianRui
Made some changes to better fit the fluff and how I was trying to present him. I also changed his Tao from chivalry to sword because I want to focus his personality on being noble but not have it be his only thing. I've also included Ageratum as his fated rival. I want to lean into a really fated aspect of this where the two are so diametrically opposed it seems fitting that they will be each others downfall or something.

>Changelog
>Tao: Mindset (Chivalry) -> Object (Sword)
>Gain: Tao Heart: Heartforce
>Body Tempering Talent (Immortal) -> (Divine)
>Soul Refinement Talent (Immortal) -> (Divine)
>Remove: Circumstance (Ancient Sect)
>Gain: Circumstances (Eccentric + Bounty)
>Change: Techniques.
>Gain: Fatal Flaws (Ruthless Foes + Fated Rival (Ageratum).

>>93967882
Haha, I definitely have some plans for Ageratum. In them, his opposition to Tian could definitely cause his downfall...
I really need to get to updating his chart, I should do that soon.

>>93965957
Barrage: Lightning Flash
You deliver swift and certain destruction in the blink of an eye!
Footwork: Thunderclap Step
Like thunder that follows lightning you disappear in the blink of an eye.

>>93968009
Neither of those seem very Dragon-y tho

>>93967944
>his opposition to Tian could definitely cause his downfall
Funny I saw it the other way round. Tian in my mind is more of a of deutera-tritagonist. Someone like a lancelot or at his best a Glorfindel, someone who is on the good guys side and good at what he does, but he doesn't have "save the day" energy. Where Ageratum have BBEG vibes.

That said, I think there conflict should be kinda low level for the most part as students, just something that is foreshadowed or alluded to. Like Clark & Lex in smallville, the audience knows they are destined to be rivals but the characters dont think its that big of a deal.

>>93968130
Agreed. I think it should be an ironic defeat on both of their parts. And yes, they most definitely should be "low level" rivals for now.

>>93968009
Thanks for the suggestion but it's all good. I settled on "Veridian Storm of 100,000 Strikes".

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>>93963078
I made a card based on the old template,

>>93968286
Now you need to make cards for the rest of us. Thems the rules.

>>93968286
... there was a template?

>>93968310
But Tian and Zhimin have cards too! And theirs are fancier and have more fields.
>>93968310
From the previous run:
>Card Template: >https://files.catbox.moe/bgwmn0.xcf

>>93968353
>And theirs are fancier and have more fields.
mine is a horrid mismatch of fonts and font sizes. I just stole Zhimins and used mspaint to make it.

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>>93963078
>Your chosen Tao is a source of great strength, and in many cases a form of magic unique to yourself alone. With nothing more than the wisdom you've comprehended on the topic, you can perform acts of mysticism without the need for any specific techniques.
>WITHOUT THE NEED FOR ANY SPECIFIC TECHNIQUES

>>93968372
YunBros we rise

>>93968372
Yeah you can piss in a way that conveys the Tao but who cares

>>93968376
You FOOL lost in the mouth of failure
Its another Inherited Wisdom argument

>>93968372
Who has the most powerful tao when considering how they interact with it.

>>93968379
How can my mouth be failing when I already succeeded???

>>93968379
You're about to "inherit" my fist to your face.

>>93968405
My unposted build with the Tao "being the strongest"

>>93968415
AITA for punching my pregnant wife so our baby will have a Mundane Mind and Inherit my fist's Wisdom?

>>93968405
I thought of this myself but when I started to compare them its pretty hard to say. I think most characters have been designed around matching their Tao.

>>93968405
My unreleased Sovereign build with Tao "Cuckold Lord". He's the strongest but he'll never win because he can't get his wife to have sex with another man.

>>93968438
Then the answer is found in line two of the line that we just quoted
>Moreover, you may lend the might of your Tao to your techniques to enhance them in some way- perhaps gaining the sharpness of a sword or the swiftness of the wind
Perhaps there is a secret higher tier of not only getting techniques which match your Tao, but getting techniques which may have nothing to do with your Tao but are changed by it.

>>93968454
My fireball techniques kicking themselves rn when they have to figure out how to carry my Fire Extinguisher Tao through them

>>93968151
>Flash forward a number of centuries.
>Ageratum is known as the Heavenly Demon, his cult rivalling the Orthodox Sects combined.
>Has some fucking weirdo plot going on. Sacrificing innocents and such to reach apotheosis.
>Tian is all like "nah fuck that"
>Fucks that shit up
>But at what cost! At least an arm, maybe his eyes? His life?!
>The plot is foiled
>The cult is crippled
>The Orthodox sects rally to prey upon the weakened cult and drive off

>>93966076
I have a sort of outline for a Tian and Yunyun fight but writing it has proved painfully challenging.
Idk how writefags manage.

>>93966951
Very interesting matches

>>93968434
Depends. Did it work?

>>93968493
Partial success, he only got Mundane Mind.

>>93968499
I give your wife the right to turn you into a eunuch.

>>93968434
>AITA
Go back.

>>93968460
https://youtu.be/8zSODUOoE8w

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Liang Shen

>TAO
True Dragon Tao (Mortal)
>TAO HEART
None
>GENERATION
Disciple
>CULTIVATION
Qi Gathering: Realm 4
Imm. Grade Rare Spirit Root (Lightning)

Body Tempering: Realm 4
Tao. Grade Ancient Bloodline (True Dragon)

Soul Refinement: Realm 4
Imm. Mind Sea
>TAOIST ROOTS
Martial Empire
>CIRUMSTANCES
Bounty (Lei Imperial Family)
Mortal Ties (Old War Buddies)
Ancient Sect
Steep Decline
>LIFE ENCOUNTERS
Flashy Heroics
Battlefield Brother
Sudden Betrayal
>FATED ENCOUNTER
Ancient Bloodline
>FIGHTING STYLE
Fists
>COMPREHENSION
Divine Grade
>TECHNIQUES
Jade Clouds Thunderous Chorus [Grade 10 / Qi Gathering]

Crucible Of The Azure Scales [Grade 10 / Body Tempering]

Golden Horizon Over Misty Seas [Grade 10 / Soul Refining]

Veridian Storm of 100,000 Strikes/Steps [Grade 10 Barrage + Footwork]

Sky Shattering Fist [Grade 4 Attack]

Lodestone Mantle [Grade 4 Endurance]

>ADVANTAGES
Overflowing Charisma
Blessed Relations
Perfect Efficiency
>FATAL FLAWS
Fated Rival
>SPECIAL PERKS
An Odd Fate

Full (WIP) Build: https://rentry.org/Liang-Shen-Dragon

I hope Yunyun's nickname becomes canon. God have mercy on the fool that decided to court death by calling him that.

>>93968678
Based on the relationship chart I'm cooking, your wish will come true. There is at least one person who's going to call him that to his face regularly, damn the consequences.

>>93968678
I think it was Xu, which honestly seems fitting

>>93968678
>>93968751
>>93968741
As arbiter of all canon, it is now canon.

>>93968479
how do write fight scene.

>>93968796
Look at other fight scenes in writing and model your own after it.

>>93963078
I kinda want to make a build for this but it would take me ages and then I would have to catch up too, and most discussion was in-thread so it would be harder too.

>>93968877
There's at least one builds that skipped their techniques entirely and still got accepted. And just this thread someone changed their Tao. Start with a quick build that has the general idea and save the nitty gritty for later.

>>93968622
Who are his Batlefield Brothers and stuff I wonder

>>93968877
It took me ages too.
There is only a few prompts so far, maybe 3 or 4 so there isn't a huge amount to catch up on.

The big thing you need to know is:
>The mouth of success is a river of failure
>Inherited wisdom is either WAAAY better than cultivation or WAAAY worse. Just pick a side and start making memes.
>Court death daily

>>93968796
I'm tempted to go the hobbit route and just skip the fight scene. I've done the lead up, and the post fight conclusion.

>>93968622
>Tao of Dragon
Sique I hope Shenbro makes it, a dragon man would be dope af

>>93968909
I like fight scenes, but if you just want to get things over with quickly that's not a bad idea.

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>>93963078
>Name
Méi Xiǎnyuè

>Tao: Other, Mortal

The Ideal, 理想 (Lǐxiǎng). That which is existing only in the imagination; desirable or perfect but not likely to become a reality

>Heart Domain

>Generation
Disciple
>Qi Grade 4
Her element is the same Ideal from her Tao.
>Body Grade 3
>Soul Grade 3

>Personal History
Barbarian Tribes: Body Tempering, Attack, Endurance

>Circumstances
Bounty
Ancient Sect
Steep Decline
Mortal Ties

>Life Encounters
Silly Mischief
Former Taoist Sibling
Budding Romance

>Fated Encounter
Immortal Physique

>Comprehension
Divine

>Martial Arts
Other: Footwork and Trump Card

>Techniques
Qi Gathering, Soul Refinement

>Advantages
Overflowing Charisma
Perfect Efficiency
Undying Tenacity
Technique Innovation

>Fatal Flaws
Exposed Encounter
Ruthless Foes
Fated Rival

>Special Perks
Hiding in Plain Sight

She is a cheerful, sweet girl who grew up in a distant barbarian tribe. Méi is new to the world of cultivation and often feels out of place with its customs and formalities. She's a happy-go-lucky country bumpkin at heart, who has a natural grace and elegance to her depsite her playful, tomboyish nature.

Rentry with her full background and technique descriptions: https://rentry.org/c75sofpk

>>93968889
Battlefield Brothers was chosen mostly to represent his old war buddies who he now travels with, probably as some trumped up mercenary company. For the purposes of the MCYOA, anyone who would potentially have fought in a larger scale conflict before joining the Open Sect School could have hired and/or fought alongside him.

>>93969036
That's some high shipping potential.

>>93963078
What time period is KtH closest to? It's not super important for my build but it will be useful to know for some backstory details.

>>93969210
Tang Dynasty.

>>93968796
Try and make sure it flows well. If it's wordy to read and gets stuck on something for too long, it'll be bad. If too many things happen at once, same. Leave wordy explanations for pivotal moments and defining moves that will have rippling effects throughout, like a crippling blow or one that opens up a win-con. Giving it a mind game aspect can work well, where they each strive to achieve a win-con and face hang ups. If they plan something out and discombobulate someone like the Sherlock Holmes scene, it usually won't flow well in writing. There's a reason he wasn't discombobulating every single bad guy. For writing fight scenes, I personally believe that suspense and changing circumstances are what you should focus on. This makes fights in writing between "less tactical" fighters more difficult, but still very possible. Funnily enough, think about it almost like a fighting game. While Wizard Willy can cast Surrounding Lightning Ring that will fully close in on Fighter Frank in TEN seconds unless he figures out how to escape, Fighting Frank can knock Boxing Bill on his ass and Boxing Bill better figure it the fuck out before he gets a haymaker to the teeth. Mixing up losses/wins and taking Pyrrhic or partial victories are important, too. If every time you write your build the fight goes the same way every time, it'll get more predictable, which you don't want. Don't be afraid to wank a little, and make some iconic moments, but don't make the opponent or a bystander look like shit unless it's sanctioned. If Fighter A parries that super fucking cool attack somehow TWICE it's far more impressive if Fighter B had gotten his health bar down to 1/1000 beforehand, even if Fighter A does lose in the end. But remember: if everyone starts parrying that super fucking cool attack people are gonna wonder why Fighter B keeps using it. Writing about how the characters feel and how badly they want to win will help make it kino too, but don't let them talk/think too much.

>>93969119
>blonde
>seems like she has phismosis
I'm not seeing it.

>>93969629
>genki
>tomboy
How can you not see it?

>>93969649
Nta. He doesn't know how his jade beauties can compete.

>>93969657
Where are our shipping rankings?

>>93969649
No one wants a phimosis dick with ugly hair.

>>93969657
My jade beauties all have proper cocks. It's not a competition.

>>93968887
I will try, at least this time I somewhat remember the cyoa unlike the last time this was attempted. I have some ideas, I need to see if I can make them fit tho.
>>93968908
>Inherited wisdom is either WAAAY better than cultivation or WAAAY worse. Just pick a side and start making memes.
I finally read Inherited Wisdom better so I understand what it means. I think it's not better or worse, it's situational. It allows you to not bother with techniques and still be strong, but you have way less variety, you have only 4 techs vs the potentially unlimited ones of someone else. I guess my reasonable response is not as funny as a meme tho. I am considering it because conceptually it alligns with the character I have in mind but at the same time my chracter requires more variety to function properly, I may have a workaround in mind but I am not sure if it's worth it or if it's interesting enough to try, but I have time before I need to finalize my decision.

>>93969629
>>93969667
>>93969671
Futakeks you're embarrassing yourselves

>>93969695
>no defense
I accept you concession. Next, huff led blonde pubes.

>futabros trying to appropriate average blonde anime woman
futafags exclusively like to be dominated by muscular women with cocks, you people are fake as fuck

>>93969762
least homosexual futakek

>>93969762
>doesn't want to ball bust a bitch
cringe

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>>93969820
By that point, I can shove a busty boy in your face and you won't notice a thing. Cock controls your mind.

>>93969870
No, it's important that it's a she cock being put in its place. No matter what, a woman try to pretend to be a man.

>>93969859
shi ren x xu is just buck breaking: chinese edition

>>93969859
The girl that started this discussion is not even ranked. Updated the tiermaker plz.

>>93969859
>Kokoro connect
So you like toxic yuri I see.
>Girl trying to rise above her bloodlust laying just beneath the surface
with
>Girl whose entire thing is encouraging people to give in to the bloodlust

>>93970070
Ship Theme
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=CXRxRTW6nXg

>>93970075
https://youtu.be/uIrV31uNryM
I almost posted this but people get mad when I post Jap in the Chinese cyoa.

>>93970104
>people get mad when I post Jap in the Chinese cyoa
they're getting a little too in-character

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>>93970191
I cant believe all that Saya said after 3 minutes of Shizi prefight banter was "Tigger"

>>93970075
"Oh no, there will be bloodshed! It is the only thing I've ever known!" Hits so hard in this ship.

>>93970191
Xiu'Er...my death courting yap god...

>>93970245
Which characters would say 'He's a lion' and totally miss the insult.

>>93970191
>Yue and Wen are both yap queens
the yap genes run strong even after reincarnating in another body

>>93970314
Losing my identity
Wondering, "Have I gone insane?"

Absolute most toxic of yuri.

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>>93963078
I have survived the relationship chart writing process.
https://rentry.org/KtHYueChart

>>93970191
Seems accurate. Yue does in fact yap and she does in fact court death on the daily.

>>93970191
xū would definetly be a yapper though

>>93970453
>I like to call her Dayue (Big Yue). That'd make me Xiaoyue (Little Yue)
That's perfect I love it

>>93963078
Here's Shizi's intro into the Open Sect:
https://rentry.org/qpyi47i4
(Shizi, Yewan, with mentions of Tian and Yue)

>>93970811
>picked up in his talons by the scruff like he was a cub
Glorious. Good stuff anon.

>>93970811
Neat. The part about the mutations made me think that the sect brings the students out in sort of school trips to fight against corrupted beasts

>>93970811
Excellent intro, especially the ending. Poor lion bro was just too thirsty for a fight. He couldn't help himself.

>>93968870
>Look at other fight scenes in writing
What are some writers that do good figthing scenes

>>93971334
Homer

>>93971549
You mean like the time he fought Peter Griffin in the Family Guy cross-over?

>>93972216
The giant chicken fights >>>>>>>

>>93972216
I did not.

>>93972234
Chicken fights are absolute kino. Peter would wipe the floor with everyone in this thread.

>>93970811
Well done lionbro

>>93970191
The secret Big Mount Tai doesn't want you to know about is everyone is secretly a yapper

>>93970453
Nice chart.
>>93970811
Nice writefag.

>>93963078
Prompt: What was your build told the most as a child? How happy was their childhood?

>>93963561
>>93914438
>>Dead End Salvation 2 (Mirror Devil, Overdose, Yamata)
>https://rentry.org/haa4sma9

Have a review in a rentry: https://rentry.org/k7y4phcv
Disclaimer: As usual, these are just opinions of an ESL. Also, I caught a cold, so I feel like shit, so I'm crankier than usual.

>>93973632
No way an ESL wrote a whole ass review for another ESL

>>93973673
It's not anything new.

Is writefagging a competition

>>93973823
It is to me (I'm losing BIGLY)

>>93973632
Thanks for sounding harsh. It helps me to avoid repeating (some) mistakes in the future.

>>93973823
If you're talking about MHA, it has the "who can write the most bloated, unintelligible writeup" competition. If you're talking about KTH, it's got the "who can write the hottest smut involving swords" competition.

>>93973823
Yea, and I'm not placing on the leaderboards

>>93973848
>yunyun

Do we have KTH ships yet

>>93973925
We've got a white boy and a black boy getting all zetsy.

>>93973932
Lifestyle: Tao of The Buckbreaker

>>93973823
No, it's mutual pleasure.

>>93973925
See >>93969859

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>>93969859
sorry but no time to camp with shi ren cause he still needs to write his techniques

>>93969859
So many of my favs are paired. This is the definitive edition.

>>93974199
Someone get bro a bed

>>93974199
>admitting his gay love for the scarred ghoul buddha man
Now I want them to kiss and form the Alpha and Omega.

>>93974251
They're abandoned by GAYte they can't be gay.

Has everyone picked their rivals already?

>>93969859
>Gale anon gave his character the brown tomboy waifu and called everyone else a faggot
Honestly I respect it.

>>93974433
Everyone is everyone else's rival. EZPZ

>>93974433
I believe there are a few anons who have Fated Rival listed but don't have it chosen yet.
I don't know who but I'm sure they exist.

>>93973925
I'm bad at shipping my own characters, and I've been busy lately so I haven't had time to think of any for the others.

>>93974433
I don't know if Rèn has any fitting candidates, no one seems to hate him outright. I think it'll be Wen or Húndàn as I am planning to add some interesting lore regarding his interactions with certain characters during his short past lives.

>>93974433
does zhou yun have a rival alreay? if not then what about having him and xū be rivals

>>93974558
Not Yun anon but those two give me Dante and Vergil vibes, I think it'd be pretty great.

>>93963078
I have two ideas, one is more "grounded" to a degree, the other is more out there. They would both be foreigners but I have a neat idea for one of them to still have a chinese name, I am not sure I can make it fit for the other one. I am not sure what to do.

>>93974593
Don't make a foreigner.

>>93974619
Why?

>>93974593
This tells us absolutely nothing, why even bother asking if you won't give enough information for people to provide you with genuine advice?

>>93974633
I don't want you to.

>>93974633
My build still needs a jade beauty.

>>93974558
Nta but Xu seems so chill it would be weird to see him bloodlusted.
They both have killer instinct or whatever as well so that could be very messy.

>>93974659
Then he shall make a jap or a gook

Tierlist for the gayest KTH males (Gale ranks the highest because he's made by a One Piece fan)

>>93974593
Idk between Chinese name Foreigner and Non-Chinese name Foreigner I'm thinking I don't really give a shit

>>93974680
Shizi gets pretty high up there too, then.

>>93974659
Hows this
>Jade
Tian has Jade spirit root
>Beauty
Look at that motherfuckers drip
>Cock gobbling skills
You didn't mention it explicitly but we know you want it, and we know he has it.

Thank you for coming to my ted talk

Realising it might have been a dick move to take An Odd Fate in a MCYOA...

>>93974785
We LOVE tsundere rivals here.

Ancestor Hundan can be everyone's without one rival.

Just shows up at the most unfortunate moment and makes things worse for them. He revels in their frustration and takes it as a compliment.

Disciples and Elders can only really endure his tests and grow until they become God's themselves. Other Gods can be rivals in earnest that Human would temper himself against.

>>93974815
Hundan sounds like a Japanese car brand.
This doesn't mean or imply anything, I just wanted you to know.

>>93974659
I don't make those.
>>93974635
I only now realized I deleted 70% of my post before posting somehow.

For the first idea I have a tao. Something to do with shooting stars, so a fast fighter based on evasion and maybe some star based magic. For this one I am not sure which of the 3 cultivation styles would be the best to have at tao grade, bloodline would work as the incarnation of a star but a star root could also fit. I have no ideas for cultivation tech but some ideas for combat ones. This one does not need to be a foreinger but I like it more as one.

For the second one it's a pseudo potentialman but not really. I have no idea what tao would be appropiate but the character is essentially a weapon built to kill gods that escaped control and now is in search of a purpouse and identity. I have a cool reason for a chinese name for this one. It would have tao level bloodline, with good spirit root but not much mind sea. It would be based on learning and adapting, making it's own version of the techs used against it. I was considering inherited wisdom for this one but making my special power the power to copy other techs and adapt them kinda feels like an exploit so probably not. And for this I have a vague idea foe cultivation techs.

>>93974785
I'm jealous, my rival isn't tsundere, they just hate me :(

>>93974901
Actually, they're a sadodere.

>>93974815
>Rival with an ancestor
>Someone who is doing their best to "push you to the limit"
I guess it doesn't specify their limit or yours so it's conceivable that he knows the actual objective peak of your performance at any time and sets up tests that require 100% optimal solutions or lead to your death.

Bold to take him as as a rival but if you do survive It probably is the equivalent of power leveling

>>93974888
>For the first idea I have a tao. Something to do with shooting stars, so a fast fighter based on evasion and maybe some star based magic. For this one I am not sure which of the 3 cultivation styles would be the best to have at tao grade, bloodline would work as the incarnation of a star but a star root could also fit. I have no ideas for cultivation tech but some ideas for combat ones. This one does not need to be a foreigner but I like it more as one.
If you don't have any ideas for techniques aside from combat ones why not have them be a non-human inherited wisdom build? Like an actual star that fell to this planet(maybe sent by the sovereigns?) and gained a human form?
>For the second one it's a pseudo potentialman but not really. I have no idea what tao would be appropriate but the character is essentially a weapon built to kill gods that escaped control and now is in search of a purpose and identity. I have a cool reason for a chinese name for this one. It would have tao level bloodline, with good spirit root but not much mind sea. It would be based on learning and adapting, making it's own version of the techs used against it. I was considering inherited wisdom for this one but making my special power the power to copy other techs and adapt them kinda feels like an exploit so probably not. And for this I have a vague idea foe cultivation techs.
Make it a saber that gained human form too

Either idea could work in the setting and mp depending on how you do it, which one do you like more?

>>93974888
>Can we stop to get some yunyun
>We have yunyun at home
>Yunyun at home:
>essentially a weapon built to kill gods that escaped control and now is in search of a purpouse and identity

>>93975006
copying another anon's homework and changing it up a little is a time tested mcyoag tradition(no it's not)

>>93974674
yea it could be very dangerous, but it's not like they'd be beating each other up first thin in the morning every day
it's not that xū doesn't have any bloodlust, it's more like he does avoid going straight to fighting, but once the battle starts he doesn't have qualms about going for the kill

>>93975100
Yeah, rival just says they're willing to surpass them, even at the cost of their life. Fights between rivals would realistically only happen whenever one of them makes a breakthrough, in order to test their new toys. All our builds are effectively geniuses though so breakthroughs and notable developments should happen often. Like, once a month.

>>93974888
Nta but starman sounds cooler. Sharingan are lame and for you to pull it off would require 1000x more effort. Stars however are an untouched concept for this run so it's unique and can be done in several different ways.

While I'm updating my chart, I'd like to ask KTHanons:
How does your build fight? Slow, methodical? Fast, unrelenting? Flashy? What tricks do they pull off, or do they not use gimmicks?
Other than being a fightfag I wanna do a fighting game archetype tier list or chart.

>>93974995
I like the second one slightly more and I have more material and a more concrete storyline for it. When I say weapon I mean in a more conceptual way. It's more like a puppet powered by a soul, it was supposed to be just a generator but the sould rebelled somehow and gained sentience. I am not sure what tao it would follow, something like "freedom" to never be enslaved again or something more in line with it's original purpouse, maybe both? I am not sure if there is a "Loose cannon" tao equivalent.

I do like the idea of the other one being an actual star, and it sounds like it would upset people less than the other.
>>93975028
>>93975006
I have read nothing of the current lineup or discussion apart from the early school pitch, I was too preoccupied with making a character.

>>93975100
Xu might not be but our little yunny seems like the sort to start fights over nothing and if neither of them back down and both go for the throat it could be a problem. But I'm not Xu anon or Yun anon so my opinion isn't worth anything

>>93975179
Starman is conceptually closer to what I assume xianxia is about, I have a tao for it and techs and even cultivation now somewhat, but I have less of an idea for a storyline. The other one is the opposite, I have a very clear character and story in mind but it does not really have a clear tao or xianxia feel. I guess I should start gathering images and stuff for starman now, it's going to be hard.

>yunny

I was gonna write "Does the yunny or the xussy hit better" but I think instead I'm going to go outside.

>>93975321
>"Does the yunny or the xussy hit better"
When someone asks this kind of question you know they haven't touched a spec of grass in the last 72 hours

>>93974433
I'm still waiting on another inventor type to be my rival for Zao.

>>93975182
>Tian
If I had to describe his entire schtick simply, it would be "economic" or "precise". He doesn't duck a blow when a simple head tilt would cause it to miss as well. To him dodging by a hairs breath is as good as dodgy by a mile. He doesn't throw his entire weight into a swing when just the right amount of force would achieve the same thing.
This is shown through his sword form which is based upon the art of calligraphy, where each stroke needs to be measured, precise, and full of intent.
And reinforced by his supporting techniques in footwork and perception.
That's not to say he isn't capable or unwilling to deliver powerful blows or leap onto a tree tops, he can and does, but only to achieve specific purposes. Never to be flashy and wasteful.

>Flaws
If he was to be criticised by the teachers it would be for a lack of ruthlessness or ambition. Which means he can be exploited, him going for disarms or inhibiting wounds when his opponent might be going for the kill.

>Qi/aura sense
his is a soft white radiant glow. It feels warm and has the properties of calmness, tranquility, and serenity. When focused it gains a vorpal sharpness as befitting a sword cultivator.

>>93975182
Shen is domineering and fast in combat. Overwhelming force is the best way to put a stop to any fight and he relies on his Barrage and Footwork attacks to relentlessly assault an opponent until they've reached compromised state. Then he'll use his Sky Shattering Fist to finish the battle with a bang (This is a bit of an ego move, as the technique is hardly something on the strength of a Trump technique, but the thunderous boom of the strike adds a dramatic flair that he enjoys).

>>93963380
When fusing techniques with second style do they have to be the same grade or am I free to mix and match?

>>93963078
Updated my chart. Liang anon, I couldn't finish your entry due to lack of information, but your build is WIP so you can't be blamed.
>>93975182
>Ageratum
If you ever played Blazblue I imagine he's kinda like Arakune. Using his runes to grant mutations and increase his stats. Since he isn't very skillied, he mostly has to rely entirely on the raw stats and gimmicks the mutations would give him. As for what those runes could do? Anything from letting him change color like a chameleon, or turning him into metal, or breathing fire. Also, since he has to make runes before combat starts, he isn't very adaptable without downtime and he runs on limited resources. He can also make terrain more favourable for himself or others and have "penalties" in it for doing some actions, but unless you're fighting him in his hut or somewhere he had gotten VERY familiar with before, this won't come up often. He also can make deals with the Evening Gate demons, so him deploying a Pokeball with one isn't out of the realm of possibility. As for what the Evening Gate demon could do? I'm planning on fleshing out the realm to give a better idea of it, but any he would have on hand wouldn't be that powerful, and would likely have no gimmicks.

>>93975638
Free to mix and match.

Sometimes I am tempted to just go into a game and make my character there just to take screenshots.

>>93975649
Also, I feel inclined to mention I updated my build to add Blessed Relations, Fated Rival, and I audited myself. Apparently I forgot to inlcude Steep Decline, so that's there now. Not sure how I missed that.
>>93975695
You should do it.

>>93975649
>Liang anon, I couldn't finish your entry due to lack of information

The WIP is mostly for the techniques, but I intend to get to the previous thread prompts after those. As for if he brought his warbuddies to the Sect; he absolutely would have, they're his bros. I'm not sure if the teachers will allow them entry into the Sect itself but if not imagine they're hanging out in one of towns near the Sect, doing odd jobs for the locals and waiting for Shen to sneak out when he can to join them in the local watering hole.

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>>93963078
>Name
Imperishable Red Star, The Fallen Sage Sword
(Hóngxīng, 紅星)

>Tao
Tao of (Western) Dragons
Mortal

>Generation
Disciple

>Qi
R4
Immortal Talent
Rare Roots - Blighted Wood

>Body
R4
Immortal Talent
Noble Bloodline - Yezi Pattern Jian

>Soul
R3
Soul Scenery

>Taoist Roots
Loose Cultivator
Eccentric Non-Human Foreigner from an Ancient ‘Sect’ with a Bounty and Mortal Ties

>Personal History
Flashy Heroics
Silly Mischief
Battlefield Brother

>Fated Encounter
Fallen Immortal

>Fighting Style
Other: Self
Other: Assist

>Comprehension
Tao

>Techniques
Raga: Poison of Sick Attachment [Reversal 10]
+Avaritia: Treasured Rusted Copse [Body Tempering 4 + Qi Gathering 4]
+Luxuria: Dance of Birds and Sparks [Soul Refining 4 + Support 4]

Moha: Poison of Bewildered Ignorance [Ambush 10]
+Superbia: Queen of Poisons [Summoning 4]

Dvesa: Poison of Hateful Aversion [Trump 10]
+Ira: Forest Scouring [Attack 4]

>Advantages
Overflowing Charisma
Perfect Efficiency
Technique Innovation
Second Style

>Fate
Pillaging 10

>Custom Treasure
The Fallen Sage Sword (that’s her)
Rank 10
Weapon
Perfect Quality
Like Divine Steel
Treasure Spirit (that’s her too)
Tao Treasure
Lifebound Treasure (to herself)

>Flaws
Ruthless Foes - Foolish Foes
Fated Rival - An Odd Fate (third-wheeling the Saya/Zhimin Rivalry)

Techniques - https://rentry.org/KtHDragonSword

>>93975998
Much like mortals, the gods too seek to Kill the Heavens. One attempt to breach the gap of power was the Five Emperors Forge, which attempted to create weapons worthy of a Sovereign, that 11th Realm.

The Heaven-Cleaving Sage Jian was one of those weapons, designed to use the wisdom and power of an ancient dragon’s soul. However, not only was the blade a failure, but the soul used was mistakenly taken from another world - one where dragons are natural disasters of fire and greed.

Treated as a flawed, cursed blade and discarded to the lower reaches of the world, the treasure spirit of the Fallen Sage Sword gradually took on the colors of a dragon, becoming Hóngxīng. Servitude and a human mind awakened bestial pride and cunning, becoming an alloy of both.

Hóngxīng is proud, gluttonous, lustful, lazy, envious, wrathful, and extremely avaricious, the polar opposite of what a sage should be. Her wielders rarely keep her for more than a week, whether she decides to ditch them or her personality makes them throw her down a well. Surprisingly simple to get along with, just play to her desires, but she’ll still be annoying even if she likes you. After all, in her mind, all of her wielders are ‘her treasures’, for her to do with as she wishes.

But if you can put up with her, you’ll find a sword unlike anything under heaven. Just don’t mention those Immortal Armament whores…

>Likes
Being praised, anything shiny or valuable (if she can have it), being amused, getting into fights, getting oiled properly, adding memories to her hoard

>Dislikes
Being stepped on or used for cooking, Immortal Armaments, Stoics, birds

>Goals
0) Amuse herself
1) Find a proper wielder
2) Reobtain her proper, draconic form
3) Pillage Heavens-Chan

This cyoa makes me want to kill myself

>>93976007
>This cyoa makes me want to kill myself
git gud lmao

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>>93976007
>forgot pic
whatever, here's a different one

>Changelog
uhhh
>Realms: 1/4/4 to 4/4/3, +qi talent
>Element from Fire to Blighted Wood
>Soul Scenery (still can't think of something for this one)
>Added Eccentric to better fit the character/change around techniques
>Dropped three techniques for various reasons, and also to increase shenanignas
>Techniques 'inherited' from creators are at 10, techniques she's patched together at 4, which makes a lot more sense
>Fated Rival Three-Way
>finally wrote up the techniques

>>93976017
No, I'm gonna try to write a relationship chart instead. If I don't come back, assume I'm dead of xianxioverdose.

If a blessed relations character with a Grade-10 fate becomes bros with a character with Grade-0 fate, are they able to lift their fortune-retarded friend out of the muck, or are they getting crab bucketed?

>>93976193
Crab Bucketed
Maybe some True Saints can avoid that?

>>93976193
Blessed relations Grade 10 fate + fate 0 bros would be:
>2 bros walking down the street, a car swerves into them hitting the 0 fater. The driver is a Jade beauty who falls for the other as they bond over caring for the now injured fateless pleb

>>93976193
A bit of both I think. When they're hanging out, crab bucket. When they're away from each other the lucklet gets a luck buff.

>>93974835
The literal chinese meaning is asshole(insult).

>>93975182
Redpill me on fighting game archetypes.

>>93976193
Depends on my whims

>>93976489
Redpill you how?
Explain what they are?
Explain why you should you care?

>>93975182
>Alkaios
His style is a large, showy one honed as much by extravagant tournaments as it was 1 v army conquest. His movements do not appear especially efficient nor his strikes particularly measured, but there is a method to his madness. His style of fighting is mentally and physically exhausting to face, utilizing momentum, acrobatics, and reckless adaptability to keep the opponent off-balance, open up opportunities for overwhelming attack, and present false ones of his own. Long engagements against him are suffocating tests of will which reveal a surprisingly calculating foe.
>Flaws
Alkaios has a certain code of honor which leads him to refuse easy kills or advantages others would probably take. He may postpone a bout against a worthy foe if he believes they aren't in top form or even handicap himself to even the odds. Likewise, he may deny someone the glory of a warrior's death if he feels they haven't earned it. He is also unfamiliar with this land and its history, as well as the ruthlessness and caliber of combatant he is likely to face. Though his earliest days here did offer him something of a crash course in this new jump in ability. Kinda like the start of a new arc in a shonen which reveals the last arc's enemies weren't shit.
>Qi/aura sense
Even when unfocused, his presence is like a steady pressure which both demands and assumes fealty from those around him. Those who reconcile their own will with his may find his presence uplifting, as if Alkaios himself were the rising tide lifting their boat. When focused, it charts an immutable course forward, bringing into its fold or shattering all in its way.

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>>93963078
I'm never breaking free of the cycle of not writing anything and just making shitposts instead.
>Following the alignment of their Tao... each of these cultivators have brought out 120%... of their potential!!!

>>93977569
Kino, but who's the third one?

>>93977736
It’s supposed to be Alkaios but making his generated jewelry and clothes remotely close to the faceclaim was a pain and I phoned it in.

>>93977772
Oh, I can see it now.

>>93977772
Kek you probably should have just simplified the weird neckless piece to something you think looks better. Thank for the art tho.

KTH has so many cute girl builds.

>scroll
>scroll scroll scroll...
>.....scroooooll

>>93978433
I haven't made one because I don't like the Chinese. Gonna wait for the next hit CYOA.

>>93978579
I don't get it.
>>93978636
Just make a Inherited Wisdom Foreigner and deck all the Cultivators in the teeth and make fun of their Taos.

>>93978650
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=TqfVTv74e3Q
The ultimate technique.

Throw Hands

>>93963078
>>93953028
Dong Fuai will arrive at the same time as another disciple, having travelled with them before arriving, as for how their dynamic works, that would depend on who he travelled with, and how many, I have some ideas, but until I finally write a rentry for one of these.
>>93948530
>Benevolence: 10/10
Dong will help out anyone he runs into, this stems from his past with his parents, but also because it tends to lead to interesting shenanigans like his Fated Encounter (What he doesn't know is that, as a heavenly Taoist, Karma is playing a massive roll in his cultivation, and he keeps gaining more so the heavens have to even it out)
>Righteousness: 5/10
Dude was raised a peasant so he doesn't have a real sense of justice outside of "Remember your manners/Be courteous", this is not to say that he's okay with injustice, which will drive him to action, though normally in an "Explain yourself" way
>Propriety: 3/10
As a vagrant child, you get what you can find, and If someone says it's theirs, they better have proof, but if it obviously matters he'll drop it
>Wisdom: 4/10
He gets battle tactics, he gets bants, and he gets having empathy, but that doesn't mean he's smart, especially if he can have fun with something
>Sincerity: 10/10
The boy can't lie to save his life, but that also means that if he gives you his word, you have it
>Loyalty: 5/10
If he's made you an ally, he'll always be beside you, but if being beside you hampers him with nothing gained, or worse, you get in the way of his fate, he will leave, which the Cobalt Crane learnt the hard way
>Filial Piety: 10/10
Dude's family is still alive, all travelling around the mortal empires, being (Mortal)doctors, he sends letters
>Honesty: 10/10
Read Sincerity
>Self Discipline: 6-10/10
Dong is fated to expand Cultivation, which is why he is influenced so heavily by it, so his self-discipline is a weird cross between, "I wanna be here" and "The voices in my head say 'Do this now, we demand it'"

>>93973406
Dong was raised in the Mortal Empires, and was raised on stories about heavenly generals and daring officers facing off against the hordes of hell, it's what made him join the empires in the first place

>>93978917
>Dong was raised
ヽ༼ຈل͜ຈ༽ﾉ raise your dongers ヽ༼ຈل͜ຈ༽ﾉ

Which anons have shared Life Encounters so far?
Also threads have been really dead lately.

>>93979215
Work picked up so less time to shit post and make memes unfortunately.

>>93979215
Ageratum scammed Batudai.

>>93977569
oh my xū looks so handsome good shit anon

>>93975182
>fighting
Zhou Yun is a ferocious but cunning fighter. He uses his high level skill and immense strength, speed, and durability to launch blitzing attacks where he seeks to cut and slash enemies. He is a prolific user of heart force/domain and Having less "tricks" compared to traditional cultivators has worked more extensively to truely master what he does have.

For example, as he is hard to perceive with divine sense he will often tightly control the aura he has to feint, tricking enemies into parrying attacks that never comes whilst leaving an opening elsewhere.

Likewise, he consciously controls the shape, intensity, and flow of his Terminus Aura to erode enemy focus, willpower, and induce mistakes in their plans/execution as even the most stout hearted warrior has a fundamental and intrinsic fear of death.

overall though he is very much dependant on the attack/footwork/barrier enhancement.

>flaws
it's pretty obvious. He doesn't have techniques, only physicality, skill, speed, and some natural endowments in the form of bloodline, soulsea, and immortal physique.

>Aura
Zhou Yun if viewed through Qi is covered in a black-purple mist. While his blade glows with eerie green light. He is strongly aligned to the Netherworld Sword Sovereign who embodied the Laws of Life and Death. This manifests, when he is a foe as an impending sense of doom. Like a grim reaper or other more culturally relevant psychopomp.

>>93975182
Méi's fighting style is very balanced overall, and this solid base is improved through her adaptability. In fights she often starts fighting much in the same way someone with the palm or dist style would, and after she has checked out the capabilities of her opponent she'd change her moves as needed, like spamming her techniques from a distance, or focusing on her mobility to outmaneuver them.
Her main weakness is, as often is the case with her, how naive she is. It's not that she'd fall for feints, but she'd fall for lies, as she has this mental image of cultivators as noble fighters that wouldn't do things like lie in combat.

>Qi/Aura
Hers is hard to describe, as it seems to change depending on who is perceiving it. However it always seems to be extremely alluring, sometimes to the point of feeling overwhelming.

>>93975182
xū doesnt fight at the start and mostly just runs around and dodges while yapping
if he actually commits to the battle then his style would basically be like the one described in his rentry

>Xū’s fighting style is a paradox—a non-style that exists only because of the absence of style. It is "other" not because it is new or different but because it lacks the defining traits that any other technique or method possesses. It cannot be replicated, taught, or even fully understood, as it does not rest on a foundation of what "is" but rather on what "is not."
>His fighting style is defined by the absence of any specific form or pattern. Unlike the precise strikes of a saber technique or the fluid movements of a spear art, his actions do not follow any learned sequences or refined motions. Instead, they are characterized by a lack of predictability, as if he operates in the negative space of conventional combat.

he also does all sorts of weird shit while fighting, like erasing the perception of a chance to strike from the mind of his opponent so they dont notice it and can't capitalize on it, or erasing the air around them to cause vacums that mess with their movements
or straight up use his life saving and trump card techs at the same time kek

he doesnt have a qi or aura, and doesnt even look like a void through senses made to perceive things like that, instead he simply isnt there

>>93975182
Dong tends to fight in mid-to-close range, focusing on overwhelming his opponents by using the [Three Sisters Swords] to effectively cage them, at which point he uses both the flying sword skills and some much weaker (As he isn't proficient in them) punches and kicks to keep the opponent in his "Zone", tending to focus on his barrage and footwork techniques to keep them off-balance while occasionally throwing in one of his Attack techniques while off-sided-ly using his Endurance technique to outpace his opponent and exploit their weaknesses.
Outside of that, he tends to avoid outright killing opponents, and will usually fight till either the opponent yields or they fall unconscious.
Also, expect the odd Jackie Chan moment where he screws around and TK's a bench into someone's head.

>>93979555
cont:
>Flaws:
While Dong's fighting style is about creating an area where he and his opponent can go at it: "You're also trapped in there with him" and can get right to beating him up if you're also quick enough, and while he's technically fighting as a team of four, Dong's personal strikes are less effective since he's not swinging the swords he's flinging at you, and his reluctance to use lethal force means you'll be hit with the flat of his blades as opposed to the edge, outside of that, if an opponent keeps their distance, or can simply shrug off his hits, he'd be hard pressed to win without the aforementioned "TK BS".
>Qi/Aura Sense:
Dong's aura takes the form of a noticeable Yellowy-green that flickers off his body like fallen petals when he's exerting it, aside from that it tends to overwhelm people's nasal senses with a string flowery aroma and has a warming effect like direct sunlight on an otherwise cold day.

>>93979531
I like Xu but he feels very difficult to write for pretty much anything. How does someone who always fights to kill and has the ability to remove concepts (such as his opponents perception of him) and can erase matter (creating vacuums) not just wave his hand and wipe his opponent from being.

also it seems a bit busted to say he is 100% invisible to qi detection it would make sense for him to be a void of qi since that is his whole null thing this is even more hacked than that.

Like what in this post holds true if his opponent is an elder or ancient?

>>93979688
Rule of Jool (jobber cool)
He can do stuff that sounds cool despite the implications, and then he can't do what those things imply.
it's like asking why can't a teleporter teleport into/away his enemy's brain. They... they just can't. As for why? The Tao supplants and resists the void or something.
Agree on the qi detection complaint, even if he could absorb the void that would be seen there should still be an anomaly, like a pulling effect where he would be. If his Exotic Spirit Root was "Stealth" or something I could see the argument for Total Qi Detection Immunity but giving Void that AND all that other shit? Naaaaaw.

>>93979688
thats fari honestly
the invisibility part is completely useless against any sort of detection technique though, and if the opponent releases a bunch of qi or life force or whatever around them then they'll feel him as a blindspot, like throwing flour at an invisible man

the concept part is the weakest, like only useful for minor clutches on the level of tao heart force for example

>what in this post holds true if his opponent is an elder or ancient?
everything depends on grades so he's cooked

>not just wave his hand and wipe his opponent from being
his erasure attack is still an attack technique, so the speed is moderate and gets countered by barrier techniques, or the target is faster than him and they use a footwork technique to dodge

>>93979797
>Exotic Spirit Root was "Stealth"
hmm that is fair
then sure let him be a void

>>93979802
>on the level of tao heart force
So basically you paid points for a redundant Heart Force that requires spending energy. That's dumb.

>>93979688
did you forget who you were talking to?

>>93979806
>spending points on useless options
That's the definition of based actually. Not saying I do agree with the dumb accusations.

>>93979802
>useless against any sort of detection technique
Considering pretty much everyone can brute force simple effects similar to techniques then this doesn't seem specially hard to deal with. It can also be countered by the sight from Soul Refinement Grade 1 since you can just see him.

>>93979883
Technique Innovation chads when their enemy goes invisible so they just modify their attack technique mid fight and use it as a wide range detection move

>>93979890
Barragechads just attacking the entire area and feeling for their enemy

>>93979797
I guess. Its just very inconsistent to me to be a ruthless killer who also "just isnt". I think it stems from the absolutist way its written, rather than for example "targeting the weak minded to remove the perception of a vulnerability" its just "erases their perception" no ifs, ands, or buts. For most characters you dont have to specify "oh yeah the other guy gets to resist being stabbed" but when you are just erasing shit it comes off as kinda whack
>>93979802
>and if the opponent releases a bunch of qi or life force or whatever around them then they'll feel him as a blindspot,
Thats essentially what Qi/life/soul/divine sense or whatever the fuck you want to call it is though. Cultivators don't need a technique to do it, its part of them interacting with the world.
>everything depends on grades
It doesnt read that way to me but okay.
>countered by barriers
huh I didn't think it was a rock-paper-scissor situation, especially when its so conceptual in nature.

Its possible Im just understanding it wrong

>>93979923
>Thats essentially what Qi/life/soul/divine sense or whatever the fuck you want to call it is though
Nta but where is that in the cyoa? Genuinely wondering if I missed it

>>93979923
>huh I didn't think it was a rock-paper-scissor situation, especially when its so conceptual in nature
That's the failings of flavor and fluff. You can say your Attack technique rends the Heavens and erases the history of whatever it hits but my Barrier technique that is a fart cloud will block it just fine.
I think you have a serious issue of "didn't fully read the cyoa"

>>93979945
Jokes on you, you cant do anything either while casting a barrier.

The only technique that can be multicast is endurance. Whoever has the most active endurance techniques really wins.

>>93979923
>>93979945
So if I make a Attack Technique that flies through a fourth dimension and only returns when it would hit the opponent, it actually doesn't bypass Barrier techniques at all? Is this a CYOA or a Videogame?

>>93979954
Just Second Style bro lmao