Archives & Other Resources: https://rentry.co/cyoagAllSync: https://cyoa.allsync.com/s/owWor64yLTngDk3Multiplayer Compilations: https://rentry.org/MCYOA_Comp_CompIn Case of Emergency, Break Glass: https://rentry.org/mcyoagCanaryThreadslave Rentry: https://rentry.org/ThreadKeeping2Backup Rentry: https://rentry.org/ThreadKeeping3Frauds! All of you! Me too! EditionPrevious Thread: >>96864804
>>96877812>MHA Rentryhttps://rentry.org/uhx77ys6>RULES:> Timeline: Just Another Story> Location: Japan>The Hero Students are at Shiketsu.Instructions + Template for Making Cards: https://pastebin.com/NQ6JNH8r>New Stuff:>New Writefag:>Operation DESPERADO (Seiryu, Karma, Honoken, The Villain Known As Stormrazor)https://rentry.org/62g2miaz>CHARACTER PROMPTS (feel free to answer these whenever)Former 1-D Prompts 1-50: https://rentry.org/mhampFormer 1-D Prompts 50+: https://rentry.org/mhamp2Everyone else's prompts: https://rentry.org/mhamp3Same password for all of them (mha4)>Older Prompt Links Are in Herehttps://pastebin.com/Qr3TtGa6>Fighting Style Prompthttps://archive.4plebs.org/tg/thread/88693730/#88693888>Smokin' Sexy's Class Questionnairehttps://rentry.org/xudhyrnr>Former 1-D Timelinehttps://rentry.org/MHATIMELINEhttps://rentry.org/itmttw7n>Classes Compilationshttps://rentry.org/mcymha2Dhttps://rentry.org/mcymha2Eold former 1-D comp: https://rentry.org/9bf3g>Relationship chartshttps://rentry.org/MHA_Charts>Dorms PromptDorm Room Proposal v2 https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94701730>Tiermaker: https://tiermaker.com/create/mcymha-current-cast-16507969>Older Version of the CYOA (Both the old and new versions are legal for builds.)https://archive.4plebs.org/tg/post/94720077
>>96877814>SHIKETSU STUDENTS>Hero Course>1-D>Koroma Kajō HN The Time-Loop Hero: Resethttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94749389>Reiji Kawano HN The Cyber Punk Hero: Red Hathttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94782573>Ichigo Sanizawa HN Double Troublehttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94733085>Yagami Kirako HN Southpawhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94744059>Yamasaki Yuudai HN Calloushttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94745904>Nowaru Kimi HN Reibaihttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94755548>Lixdite Aquila HN Teocoatl https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94756720>Akuba Kaedabi Ohene HN Arach-Kidhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94773701>Kotoko Takata HN Abyssal Hero: Leviathanhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94782831>Gyoyu Kamiya HN The Delinquent Hero: Greasetraphttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94792250>Higana Hanasaki HN Petal Protectorhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94822590>Isao Mitarai HN Pristine Start Hero: Scourhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94824050>Ikuno Koru HN The Unbreakable Hero: Fumetsuhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94823771>Kirisuto Hiro HN Second Son: the Redeemer Herohttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94857243>Shinohara Katsuryoku HN Miraclehttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94822093>Romero Ketsueki HN Wampyrhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94821834>Iwata Yasu HN The Observant Hero: Farsighthttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94821410>Fukuchi Arai HN Musō-kahttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94832805>Atsuko Mitarai HN Splashhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94833925>Yun Jae-Seong HN Bonjwahttps://rentry.org/kr7hhe5w>Maborineko Sankai HN Cheshirehttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94848176>Taiho Kiko HN Swarm Storm Shooterhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94849244>Tsuyoi Agnellihttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94849559>Sophia Papadopoulou HN Pegasihttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94862089>1-E>Freya Frigid HN Fridge Girlhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94832729
>>96877817>2-Dhttps://rentry.org/mcymha2D>Atsushi Orochi HN Hard to Destroy Lizard Hero: Yamatahttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94700337>Christopher Cain HN Mirror Devilhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94725769>Hailey Chang HN Recoilhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/95339903>Faith Kang HN Dronehttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88826774>Minerva Kim HN Sparkhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88826766>Kyoda Hiro HN Overdose (Held Back)https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94711094>Edith Lee HN Arenahttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88826782>Sally McCathy HN Last Ritehttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94699995>Kaga Mirokazu HN Fight Man (NPC)https://rentry.org/p6dwm#k-mirokazu>Chihiro Mitsurugi HN Ascetic Sword Hero: Yakohttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94700909>Inigo Myoga HN Dragon Hero: Ryu-kishihttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94726305>Maxine Nguyen HN Radiushttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88826778>Nyoro Hoge HN Maru(maru)https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94679624>Runt HN Dust Devilhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94720560>Yui Sagara HN Binding Hero: Capture Cloth (Held Back)https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88383012>Bobby Samson HN Sunlight Manhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94716611>Kaylee Suzuki HN Flying Forcehttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94703986>Junichi Takagi VN Marrowhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88435130>Hifumi Takeda HN Warp Blade Hero: Challenger (Class rep)https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94863765>Ian Takenaka HN Rushhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/93095991>Takara Tame HN Androidhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94699336>Deckard Thorpe HN Kid Questionhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94721085>Rob Williams HN Velvet Wormhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94704394
>>96877819>2-Ehttps://rentry.org/mcymha2E>Noah Abrams HN Archangelhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88205041>Higa Umeko HN Slip-N'-Slideasaurushttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/91833690>Azuma Hisa HN Beach Dayhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/91809104>Soujyuuro Imai HN Wise Eye Hero: Mahoudevahttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88194077>Ashleigh Katsuragi HN Blackouthttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88268251>Nijimura Mahoko HN Cool Boosthttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/91685518 + https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/91685973>Nayuki Kyokohttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/91834965>Igarashi Ryosuke HN Arakenhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/91807240>Shinkan Sen HN Crazy Trainhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88194200>Victor Sigurd HN Hydrahttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88209661>Sora Tanaka HN Area Denial Hero: Orbithttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88191735>Daigo Ulmeyda HN Fly 1 Millionhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/91814363>Suki Yamada HN Sukebanhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/93511713>??? HN Meteoric Hero: Cubehttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/91890433>Other NPCshttps://rentry.org/mcymha2E>3-D>Suzuki Nene HN Ghostly Cat Hero: Bakenenekohttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94699068>Amahagene Takako HN Signing Blade Hero 'Fukukiri'https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94699401>Masayoshi Keito HN Crickethttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94788742>Mochi Uranus HN: Smelly Hero, Stink Rathttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94698518>Chizuru Hagihara HN The Tarot Hero, Arcanahttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/95149432>Tsuruya Megumi HN The Hard-Hitting Hero, Knockdownhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/95191617>Higashi Kota HN Nut Knight AKA Knuthttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/95418659>General Course>2-A>Satoru Tanihttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94719217>Support Course>3-B>Aura Curiehttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88231609
>>96877822>SHIKETSU STAFF>Pro Hero teachers>Anzu Nishima HN Karaburan (Principal)https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88189414>Ryusei Sugiyama HN Smokin' Sexy (1-D's homeroom teacher & Combat)https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94709034>Aiko Aimi HN Motivational Hero: Rosethorn (2-D's homeroom teacher & Quirk Ethics)https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94699564>Riku Washizawa HN The Steel Talon Hero: Skycarver (2-E's homeroom teacher)https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/91719484>Amahagene Himekō HN: The Iron Storm Hero: Princess Blade (3-D's homeroom teacher & PR Management)https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94704250>Yasashi Koibito HN The Laser Hero - Majestic (Heroics)https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88231509>Michelson Tyler HN The Mole Hero: Tunnel Rat (Economics)https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94733353>Jade Makura HN Flickfang (Arts)https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94723972>Junko Hongo HN The Overly-Enthusiastic Tokusatsu Hero: LocaLoca (NPC, Rescue)https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88745486>Ramona Castillo Escobar Siachoque: HN Xpresso (Spanish)https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94627644>Takahashi Mako HN Ersatz (TA)https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/92011019>Felicity Takahashi HN Cat Call (TA)https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94872485>Support Staff>Just "The Doctor" (Doctor)https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88721597>Emilia Busujima (Nurse)https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94715416>Caprice Marjorie Teel (Dorm Manager, NPC)https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94750288>Hayasaka Takahiro (Evacuation and Investigation teacher)https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94782135>Ishizawa Sentaro VN The Fraudulent Master Villain: Nine Lives (Support Course)https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94881666>Dr. Mizuki Takahashi HN The Dental Hygiene Hero: Tooth & Justice (Dentist) https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/95418431
>>96877823>PRO HEROES>TOP #1Endeavour>TOP #2 Taichi Kyoryu HN Cretaceous King: Saurushttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/89508780>TOP #3 Ikume Sujin HN Lord Charybdishttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94794384>TOP #4Wash>TOP #5 Jiasu Maxi HN The Brilliant Hero: Yunikonhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/90998494>TOP #6 Akagi Sanpatchi HN Popsyhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88204632>TOP #7 Kurogane Keisho HN Yoshizumihttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/89507063>TOP #8 Shokushuko Ama HN Ensnaring Hero: Akkorohttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94810847>TOP #9Rosethorn>TOP #10Yamamoto>Kenji Shako HN Strongest Shrimp Hero: Magnum Shrimp (and Water Fowl Hero: Flamingal)https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88425908>Yuusei Atsushi HN Spring Dragon Hero: Seiryuhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88194386>Kalianne Sato HN Flame Strike Hero: Honokenhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88568039>Ernst Hennig HN Impakthttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88616848>Junpei Ozu HN The Standstill Hero: Floorhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88820563>Tosuke Jinai HN Compoundhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/91016593>Yosuke Shirai HN The Lustrous Hero: Wavelengthhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/91032513>Renji Kurokawa HN Mashhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/93005848>Oscar Blaine HN Nightwatchhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94790219>Juro Watanabe HN The Hypodermic Hero: Vaccinehttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94797536>Jonathan Tanaka HN The Rising Star Hero - Skywardhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94871835>SUPPORTERS>Rika Eichihttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94859766>Endless Horizons Ltd.https://rentry.org/iptpr>Holden Deckardhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/90913931>Brightlyhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/91006966>Mizuki Fuzukawa SN Crystal Clearhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94786294>Chikara Fuma SN: White Rooster Chikonhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/95490686
>>96877825>VILLAIN ORGANIZATIONS>Horrific 5>Samuel Wilson VN Desolatorhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88917340>On Giết Năng VN Tetherhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88921198>Erika Murakami VN Noxhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88923183>Maddie Griffiths VN Maddoxhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88930575>Edmund Muller VN Mercuryhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88923191>Night Parade>Cammy Link VN Karmahttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94699967>Haruka Pulch VN Tatarimokkehttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88205909>Sebastian Needle VN Greenfingerhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88214481>Okane King VN Midashttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88190217 + 94702250> ??? VN Mawhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88250272> ??? VN Bogeyhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88277889> Tomihttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88387913>Luccionehttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/90146415>Recino R. Percutiohttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88191385>Wild Hunt>Sandatsu Owarihttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94872222>Mio Katsuragi HN Forget-Me-Nothttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/89250569>Hiromi Hitomi VN Feralhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88856089>Dr. Isaac Ivanov VN Drekushttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88666462>Ookami Shizukahttps://rentry.org/OokamiShizuka>Ivan Trup VN The Prophethttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/91702348>VIGILANTES>Helene Lysingen VN Noctilucahttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88197005>Takigawa Shion VN Shapeless Blade: Aquariushttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88209069>Toru Imaishi VN Kampaihttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88630353>Rebecca Weberhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88722750>Yushi Taneka VN Blazing Brighthttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/89012707>Sasha Azanamihttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/91080404>Ruihttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/91197187>Kaori Kaoruhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/91229075>Noriko Oki VN Queen Carnivorehttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94863658>Ken Fuma HN Imposter Syndromehttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94864356
>>96877826>CULTISTS>The Red Finger>Imamu Belmitope VN Ten-ton Scorpion https://rentry.org/k7zxfzm3>Zyra Mein VN Braindrain/Zombiehttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94928988>Mochi Uranus VN Decaying Villain: Dark Weaselhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94698518>Reiji Kawano HN The Cyber Punk Hero: Red Hathttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94782573>REVOLUTIONARIES>Legion>Momotaro Tachibana VN Nebulous Stormhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88376954>UNAFFILIATED VILLAINS>Bruno Garcia VN Maulerhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88206714>Karuga Itohttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88192478>Nakata Yumiko VN Walpurgishttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88191796 + https://pastebin.com/nMZq81Jt>Miki Ginrei VN Fluegelhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88209242>Ginji Gō VN Desperaidohttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88278735>Kazuma Oomori VN Charlatanhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88669394>Hattori Ume VN Broad Daylighthttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/88926931>Blankhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/91050726>Kōkishin Yuuki VN Shoggothhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/91050987>Mammogarhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/91051410>Tomiehttps://rentry.org/ddom6m82>Suslikhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/91699413>Paul Crémieux VN De Jaishttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/91841242>Joe Dumpkin VN The Big Manhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94755400>Akka Nigawarai HN Kodokuhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94750241>KJ-007, Gashadokuro, the Fleshless Godhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94905436>Mr. Therapisthttps://rentry.org/638neg63>Rescue Rayhttps://rentry.org/yxsbmtxp>Yamada Hanako VN Buried Daggerhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94949719>Doctor Ivon Kintoborhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/94948140>Saki Fuma VN Replicanthttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/95487061
>>96877830>WRITEFAGS>Blastscar II (Yamata, Blast Burn)https://rentry.org/ak4dozbo>Blast Scar III (Yamata, Karaburan)https://rentry.org/gqgst77f>Parent-Teacher Conference (Yamamoto, Flickfang)https://rentry.org/chdorkto>Tardy Slip (Greasetrap, Fumetsu, Tunnel Rat, Scour, Takata, Smokin’ Sexy Sensei, Blast Burn)https://rentry.org/8cbcgpz5>Internship Gossip 3 (Clique): https://rentry.org/gzimb4m9>Talking to a Bat (Flickfang, Doraku):https://rentry.org/7evesekv>The Spice of Life. (featuring Southpaw, Arach-kid, Wampyr, Teocoatl, Runt, Second Son, Scour, Callous and Fumetsu).https://rentry.org/7mvc7xsi>Karen-Teacher Conference (Farsight, Smokin' Sexy)https://rentry.org/qqhxk757>Making a Splash II (featuring Impakt, Sunlight Man, Tiddy Mun, Tod Lowerie, Dead Hand and Imamu Belmitope)https://rentry.org/s9h9g53i>Clown Days 2 (Smokin' Sexy, Popsy, Tatarimokke, The Scumbag, Impakt, Saurus, Recino, Desperado, Three-Sixty)https://rentry.org/rusiv6te>Internship Gossip 4 (Spark, Recoil, Drone, Radius, Arena)https://rentry.org/vmn4sc9h>tournament fallout 2 (Recoil, Drone, Radius, Arena)https://rentry.org/xy8x4uze>Visa Enquiryhttps://rentry.org/yvwhhh98>Internship Gossip 5 (Spark, Recoil, Drone, Radius, Arena)https://rentry.org/t3fb32wt>For the Content 1 (Chat, Recoil, Drone, Spark, Arena, Radius, Karaburan, mention of Rosethorn)https://rentry.org/hvct5iab>Operation GEMINI (Seiryu, Honoken, Yamata, Mahoudeva, Lady Astoria Belmont, Various Gemini)https://rentry.org/kq7n5dde>Shiketsu Outdoors Club, Reforestation Project (Nut Knight, Pegasi, Cheshire, Flickfang, Blast Burn, Tunnel Rat, Tall Man, Dreamer, Swarm Storm Shooter, Petal Protector, Second Son, Yako, other Outdoors Club members, Greenfinger, Duck o War, mention of Buried Dagger and the Argonauts)https://rentry.org/iifohf9f>Operation HEARTBREAK (Seiryu, Honoken, Yamata, Mahoudeva, Blackout)https://rentry.org/v4agq7kb
>>96877832>WRITEFAGS (Final)>An Eventful Move (Mirror Devil, Ryu-Kishi, Mahoudeva, Drone, Rush):https://rentry.org/a8um8793>Red Finger Finds Out (Imamu Belmitope, Tiddy Mun, Tod Lowerie, Dead Hand, Gnash, Mochi Uranus, Teocoatl, Sandatsu, Feral, Drekus, Rosethorn, Endeavor)https://rentry.org/f47uhqdu>Jolly Cooperation(Last Rite, Maru-Maru, Spark, Rosethorn, Smokin' Sexy, Archangel, Satoru, Android)https://rentry.org/o4mageo6>Operation DESPERADO (Seiryu, Karma, Honoken, The Villain Known As Stormrazor)https://rentry.org/62g2miazFor more Characters, Writefags, Art, Memes, Tierlists, etc. check the rentry
>JITE Archivehttps://rentry.org/jiterentry1>BUILDS>>Student Council>Shu Jinkō, "My nigga Clark Kent"https://rentry.org/3cexovsdhttps://desu-usergeneratedcontent.xyz/tg/image/1758/47/1758477005700.png>Madoka Onguuchi, "How did those things ever fit in a kendogi?"https://rentry.org/9aedhewchttps://desu-usergeneratedcontent.xyz/tg/image/1758/42/1758421653099.png>Meliaya "Yaya" Mihama, "Is Higan Academy dwarf accessible?"https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/96462921https://desu-usergeneratedcontent.xyz/tg/image/1758/44/1758441779275.png>Ran Nejima, "Bipolar Tank"https://rentry.org/JITErnhttps://desu-usergeneratedcontent.xyz/tg/image/1758/64/1758641526880.png>Yae Zennami, "Hugo Boss™ approved Idolon design"https://rentry.org/hv6u3hy4https://desu-usergeneratedcontent.xyz/tg/image/1758/46/1758461607388.png>Kaoru Nagamine, "Tsun for the Student Council"https://rentry.co/zxon8uvhhttps://desu-usergeneratedcontent.xyz/tg/image/1761/00/1761006744282.png>>Fujiwara Senki>Momofuku Chikata, "Tsundere oni tardwife"https://rentry.org/momofuukihttps://desu-usergeneratedcontent.xyz/tg/image/1758/47/1758478700784.png>Belladonna Sola, "lol as if I'd ever date a cute hacker NERD"https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/96765123https://desu-usergeneratedcontent.xyz/tg/image/1758/56/1758563236277.png>Fumiko Furukawahttps://rentry.org/e7d4wx79https://desu-usergeneratedcontent.xyz/tg/image/1758/58/1758583422481.png>Parfaite Sukemori / La Première femme de Chambre, "Maid in heaven"https://rentry.org/qu7nqq8s>>(Former) Census Club>Alyona Rodionvova, "Mail-order bride from hell"https://rentry.co/yub2yds6https://desu-usergeneratedcontent.xyz/tg/image/1758/68/1758688900210.png>Renka Cho, "Hand her the pen she dropped, receive a picture of your death"https://rentry.org/za8grm2c>Archibald Florence, "Definitely a 16-year-old"https://rentry.org/mmwqzzpm
>>96877834>>Kurobane Group>Reiji Kurobane, "Will fire my dad if I put anything bad here"https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/96777753>Itsuki, "Ultimate fujo slayer"https://rentry.org/6fs8w6ashttps://desu-usergeneratedcontent.xyz/tg/image/1758/57/1758576139400.png>Sophia Alexandria Newtonia IV Chie Igarashi, "Future ruler of Akiba"https://rentry.co/8xxtuscc>>Misc.>Ai Suishi, "My sleep paralysis demon if life was fair"https://rentry.org/sgunn9vehttps://desu-usergeneratedcontent.xyz/tg/image/1758/45/1758453903714.png>Takumi Wright, "Your uncle after a few beers"https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/96442943>Liú Měi, "Shì de, buns and thighs!"https://rentry.org/fgr4iihuhttps://desu-usergeneratedcontent.xyz/tg/image/1758/57/1758578417440.png>Tetsuya Abe, "Just your average futafag"https://rentry.org/5gvkba7d>Sayaka Koujin, "Oh no not another triangle choke"https://rentry.org/e225aqhdhttps://desu-usergeneratedcontent.xyz/tg/image/1758/58/1758582662075.png>Takaishi Kuroda, "How it feels to chew sweet potatoes you grew yourself"https://rentry.org/takajite> Kazu Morino, "Those dick pills made it way too big to use. Worth it tho"https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/96445363>Cato, "Literally every kid in a movie theatre"https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/96469569>Sumi Ayaka, "brb gonna hang myself for singing flat in the school musical"https://rentry.org/bohemianidol>Tomaki Warumachihttps://rentry.org/ShaltZoiJITEhttps://rentry.org/WarlordKakitohttps://desu-usergeneratedcontent.xyz/tg/image/1758/49/1758494337764.png>Matsunaga Keihttps://rentry.org/JITE_Swordsman>Jinguuji Kanaehttps://rentry.org/jiteshugenja>Chê Ngiêmhttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/96582901https://desu-usergeneratedcontent.xyz/tg/image/1758/92/1758920350712.png>Sarah Rheehttps://rentry.org/2wp9qpachttps://desu-usergeneratedcontent.xyz/tg/image/1758/98/1758984555340.png>Teruma Arakawa:https://rentry.org/fa5459sq
>>96877838>>ID Gang.>Fukuzawa Kohaku>Uesugi Aida>Okabe Takeohttps://rentry.org/6asdeuco>>Humanity Lost>Satoru Rin, "Nah, I'd fix her"https://rentry.org/JITE-facelessgirlhttps://desu-usergeneratedcontent.xyz/tg/image/1758/43/1758433358207.png>Kenji Kurosawahttps://rentry.org/skab2shhhttps://desu-usergeneratedcontent.xyz/tg/image/1758/56/1758563707678.png>Arakawa Itsurōhttps://rentry.org/arakawajitehttps://desu-usergeneratedcontent.xyz/tg/image/1758/56/1758568393768.png>Tachibana Kentarō, "Act 2 Monster"https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/96688090>>Other>Kirigawa Marisa "Cute and Silly NPC"https://desuarchive.org/tg/post/96811207>>RECENT WRITEFAGS>Fumiko's Business (Fumiko, Madoka)https://rentry.org/hwpzkq46>Rendezvous (Momofuku, Itsuki, Shu)https://rentry.org/w4d9q2ay>Fumiko's Business (Fumiko, Madoka)https://rentry.org/hwpzkq46>An Offer He Couldn't Refuse (Kenji, Rin, Itsuro)https://rentry.org/mozfts4u>Stray Cats (Itsuki, Reiji)https://rentry.co/7n42wvvr>Obligatory Cafeteria Scene (Sarah, Madoka, Kenji, Itsuro, Rin [debatable])https://rentry.org/hsakxn59>Idea Incursion 2 (Shu Jinkō, Madoka Onguuchi, Ran Nejima, Yae Zennami, Momofuku Chikata, Ai Suishi, Takaishi Kuroda) Bonus Scene with the Humanity Lost Trio Satoru Rin, Kenji Kurosawa and Arakawa Itsuro)https://rentry.org/gad82fsp>Welcome to the freak show (Kentaro, Itsuro, Kenji, Rin, Shu) https://rentry.org/syi7x4u9>The Price of Principals(Alyona, Renka, Archie, Rin, Sumi)https://rentry.co/gi2g2n4g>A Miserable Little Pile of Secrets (Kaoru Nagamine, Shu Jinko, Yae Zenami, Meliala Mihama, Ran Nejima, Madoka Onguuchi, Ai Suishi, mentions of Humanity Lost)https://rentry.co/62nd7wnf>Voice to cry suffering, and Will to rise in Afternoon's Night (Itsuki, Reiji)https://rentry.org/2ib4izwk>Haunted home visit (Shu Jinkō, Madoka Onguuchi, Meliaya "Yaya" Mihama, Ran Nejima, Yae Zennami, Kaoru Nagamine, Momofuku Chikata, Ai Suishi, Liú Měi, Sayaka Koujin) https://rentry.org/cgae7rsv
>>96877839>Writefags (Cont.)>Morning, or something like it (Ai Suishi, Madoka Onguuchi, Kaoru Nagamine, Shu Jinkō and cameo of Momofuku Chikata)https://rentry.org/qsp934x3>Nature (Renka, Alyona, Archie)https://rentry.org/tmc2uxy5>Conspirators (Arakawa Itsurō, Satoru Rin, Kenji Kurosawa, Tachibana Kentarō, cameos of Kazu Morino and Shu Jinkō)https://rentry.org/hlaschemes>Stillness given Motion (Itsuki, Grandmei)https://rentry.org/k2wq3rnr>Coward (Takaishi Kuroda, Shu Jinko, cameo of Kaoru Nagamine)https://rentry.org/qrsxtpaa>The hunt for the black wings (Kei, Yae cameo, Mentions of Mei)https://rentry.org/BlackWingHunt>Love And The Russian Winter, Act 1 (Momofuku, Alyona, Madoka, Yaya, Renka, Takaishi)https://rentry.org/reh4y365>Love And The Russian Winter, Act 2 (Momofuku, Alyona, Fumiko, Belladonna, Madoka, Itsuki, Renka, Shu, Yae, Archie)https://rentry.org/ev3446rs>Love And The Russian Winter, Act 3 (Momofuku, Alyona, Yae, Shu, Renka, Meliaya, Madoka, Belladonna, Fumiko, Kaoru, Itsuki, Archie, Kenji, Itsuro, Ran)https://rentry.org/dtn4bkdb>Love And The Russian Winter, Epilogue (Momofuku, Alyona, Shu, Fumiko)https://rentry.org/hgyb2aa6>Love and the Russian Winter, Act 4.5(Alyona, Renka, Archie)https://rentry.co/eqrfcnuz>It's Dark Outside (Tetsuya, mentions of other characters (don't expect much LMAO))https://rentry.org/xwh7tvkn>Bond of Two Sisters (Meliaya “Yaya”, Alyona, Yae, Madoka, Chê Ngiêm, Dawn, Kaoru)https://rentry.org/sg3g9kt4>Momo and Shu's day out (Shu Jinkō, Momofuku Chikata)https://rentry.org/fcuzegmc>Freak in the Streets (Kohaku, Kuroda, Kaoru)https://rentry.org/5s3z2wyk>Departing and Homecoming (Itsuki, Madoka)https://rentry.org/y8gvvf5o>Epilogue (Itsuki, Momo, Shu, Nejima, Yaya, Yae, Madoka)https://rentry.org/5qrqi8nd>The Usual Suspects (Rin, Kenji, Itsuro, Kentaro)https://rentry.org/m8mhkzgk>The Man or the Mask (Kohaku, Kuroda, Meliaya, Shu, Marisa)https://rentry.org/any88sth
>>96877842>Writefags (Cont.)>Into the Fire (Kaoru, Takaishi, mentions of Shu and Kohaku)https://rentry.co/9hd6ccsy>Meditations and Tribulations (Mei, Itsuki, Grandmei)https://rentry.org/623vp8d3>Worm in the Sheets (Kohaku, Kaoru, Kenji, Marisa)https://rentry.org/5s3z2wyk#episode-2-worm-in-the-sheets-kohaku-kaoru-kenji-marisa>"Managing" (Yae Zennami, Madoka Onguuchi, Ran Nejima, Shu Jinkō, Kaoru Nagamine, Ai Suishi. Small cameos of Meliaya "Yaya" Mihama, Sayaka Koujin, Tomaki Warumachi, Takaishi Kuroda)https://rentry.org/wzqy2bpm>Court Martial (Tetsuya, Shu, Yae, Kaoru)https://rentry.org/getp64wy>Letters From Esther (Tomaki Warumachi, Shu Jinkō)https://rentry.org/LettersFromEsther>Sayonara Bye Bye (Itsuki, Shu, Ai, Cameo of Momo)https://rentry.org/7abgrccn>It Take Two to Tango (Sumi, Reiji, Itsuki)https://rentry.org/tksb4ofk>Waltz in (Itsuki, Sumi)https://rentry.org/gu23mtra>>RELATIONSHIP CHARTS>Satoru Rinhttps://rentry.org/JITEloserchart>Kenjihttps://rentry.org/hymz4apv>Kaoru Nagaminehttps://rentry.co/kcwb63id>>OTHER CONTENT>Map of Kageokahttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/96482982>JITE pointing meme(Alyona, Meliaya Mihama)https://desu-usergeneratedcontent.xyz/tg/image/1757/49/1757490481679.png>JITE Q&Ahttps://rentry.org/ui7zzsvq>height charthttps://desu-usergeneratedcontent.xyz/tg/image/1757/64/1757642902812.png>Card templatehttps://files.catbox.moe/t1g8ih.xcf>JITE Charthttps://desuarchive.org/tg/post/96703033>Tier Makerhttps://tiermaker.com/create/jite-tier-18744126>Unofficial Assault Reworkhttps://rentry.org/o6d76h9f>Idolon Ability Datahttps://rentry.org/JITEcelReference
>>96877844
*rolls in fashionably late*
I have three questions:1. How long does a cycle last here, in regards to the cyoas you guys play2. Are the future cyoas you guys are going to play already planned out or do you just wing it?3. Would you be interested in playing Demon Eyes after the JITE cycle is over?
>>968779271. There is no set date, it lasts as long as anons have interest (JITE) or as long as it keeps being posted (MHA). The average MP can last from a few weeks to a few months.2. Mix of both. Sometimes a cyoa gets posted out of nowhere and people start playing, sometimes anon pitches an idea and people make plans before the whole thing launches.3. Personally, no. I would like a change of pace, demon eyes' premise of school kids in magic shenanigans the adults don't notice would be too close to the deceased JITE.
>>96877927>1. How long does a cycle last here, in regards to the cyoas you guys playHighly variable. But for those that aren't stillborn, usually around 3 months, I think. You can browse through threadslave rentry and compare between first and last writefag or something.We can have more than one cyoa at the same time, but depending on the population even 3 might be pushing it.MHA is an aberration that went on for years, but it's hibernating right now as it tends to have activity cycles. It still gets posted because having a single cyoa is a bit annoying to threadslave, and a core of our population is MHAfags that still hold on to hope of it returning.>2. Are the future cyoas you guys are going to play already planned out or do you just wing it?Mostly when someone is working on OC and gives progress updates, it gives us something to look forward to. Without that, it's mostly just someone pushing hard enough for something. There are also memes >3. Would you be interested in playing Demon Eyes after the JITE cycle is over?Personally, no, because I don't like it. Others did, but it also had multiple runs already so I don't know if they would want to revisit it.
>>96877927It is unfortunate that the cyoa you want to play has had some runs in the past while also being too close the the current popular run. If it was a bit different thematically it could've ran along side JITE if other anons were willing. I personally like and wouldn't mind making a new character especially if the fan dlc ever releases.
>>96878025>the fan dlc ever releases.never ever, we'll get echoes psy before that drops, so don't expect it any sooner than 2036
>>96878056I don't doubt that since we've not heard from the guy writing it, but we should still have the templates for the pages.On a slightly related topic, what MP would you guys want after this/right now?
>>96878110Martial path
>>96878110Capeshit or fantasy, unfortunately none of the interesting fantasy cyoas I can think of fit this place
>>96878110Fairy Tail............. vgh...
>>96878132horrible settingdanmachi is so much better
>>96878137Terrible ragebait
>>96878140im srs
Fairy Tail isn't autistically "no you cannot do that" so it's superior to Shitmachi.
>>96878124What kind of capeshit or fantasy are we talking about here? Grim or bright?
>>96878179I'd love to do an X-Men cyoa where we pretend the rest of the MCU doesn't exist and it's just mutants.Wait, that's just Facility...
>>96877967>>96877971I appreciate you guys taking the time to respond. I've been lurking in these threads for weeks now, but I just can't get into JITE and it's so along it's lifetime that I don't want to jump on the bandwagon too late.>>96878025It is what it is. Personally I also think that demon eyes have too little eye options for a good and varied multiplayer but I would be willing to work on it if there was demand. My image editing skills are garbage but I could probably compile and write more options if an anon was interested in doing the editing part. I will just keep lurking this thread and hopefully there will be some multiplayer I will feel like getting into in the future.Also, I'm one of the anons from the old OR and Fairy Tail days, I took a years long break after some irl stuff happened and I still feel bad because I didn't get to finish the writefags I promised the anons here.
>>96877971MHA is rapidly descending into that typical 4chan homebrew void of nostalgia where everyone remembers it, but no one has the energy to continue it and it's gotten snarled up in its own specific history/culture. It could use a refresh and reset sooner rather than later.
>>96878179>capeshitI'm cool with any>fantasyAll the cyoas I'm somewhat interested in are lewd and don't fit how we play anyway, the only one that's not either of those is a jumpchain thing(Ravenwood, if only it weren't made for jumpchain)
>>96878184>Fairy Tail >the writefags I promisedGojo anon?
>>96878182X men without the rest of marvel makes no sense. Without other heroes to potentially stop the mutie menace, the civilians wouldn't dare to treat the walking nukes like shit.
>>96877967>>96878110Sci fi cyoa when?
>>96878195Yeah, I missed you bros
>>96878197>other heroesAll canonically job to sentinels
>>96878205... in my non canon x-wank.
>>96878204The GOAF (greatest of all frauds)....
>>96878204You need to carry a fairy tail run to absolve yourself of your sins
>>96878216I will never forgive myself for missing out on the intense shitposting that would've come out of that if I was still here. I even missed on the shitstorm on /a/ too lol
>>96878209Okay, then let's talk about the times the mutants(controlled by Sinister) CANONICALLY took over the universe instead
>>96878226Look at it this wayYou have returnedYour faceclaim didn't
>>96878224Do you guys still the old rentry with all the builds and stuff? I would be down to write the tournament I've promised. Some of the ideas never really left my brain.
>>96878204Join JITE with the same faceclaim and don't fraud this time
>>96878231>He doesn't knowGojo's reincarnation will show up in the sequel any day now
The trick to manage to get an MP going is to lure the right anons on boardThat way you can make almost any cyoa work
>>96878242Who are the right anons?
>>96878243MeAny MP I join and write for lives for monthsThe ones I ignore wither and die
>>96878237There's too much shit going on with JITE if I join now I will suffer profusely from all the time wasted. Also catching up with all the writefags will take too much time.
>>96878243Not me, not him >>96878242, not you
>>96878184>I could probably compile and write more optionsThat was what a previous anon was doing for angel eyes. We even got the files from doll anon to make our own pages>hopefully there will be some multiplayer I will feel like getting intoBest thing to do is actually to try it or drum up enough of a response for whatever you're into. This place is too slow and you'll be waiting around for forever at this rate. What do have to lose in this situation?
>>96878251You just moved to Kageoka from Tokyo, there's your justification, now pay your penance
>>96878251There actually isn't that much happening. Only thing is that the census club has been disbanded and people have just learned about the death mark. That's it for overarching plot development.
>>96878243Get three or four know effortfags and you're set.
>>96878250Confirmation biasHow can you know you're not a bus rider following on the actual anons coattails instead of the bus driver carrying the MP
>>96878193>I'm cool with anyGot a CYOA in mind or something?>All the cyoas I'm somewhat interested in are lewdNo I'm curious. What are the lewd ones? Why would you be interested in writing for that setting?Jumpchains might be doable for multiplayer but no one has really tried it.
>>96878261I'll just keep lurking and jump onto whatever bandwagon is next. The main reason why I had a problem with JITE is because it seems to be right in the middle of it's life cycle. If I keep lurking the opportunity will present itself eventually. The only cyoa I don't see myself ever playing is MHA probably because I fucking hate the manga too and cannot separate the two in my head.>>96878262I will pay my dues, even if FT is dead it still lives on my heart. I shall give it a swan song.
>>96878237But do we get a high school geto faceclaim to you bait him with?
>>96878294In the time you've spent lurking you could have been catching up with writefags to join in
>>96878294There's nothing to catch up with tho?
>>96878294Barely anything has happened which makes it easy to jump into this era, and this is coming from someone who skipped out for more than a month or so.
>>96878314Makes it easy to what now?
>>96878305>>96878312>>96878314Sigh... Fucking fine, I will make a build for it after I read a bunch of writefagging so I can get a sense for the characters and what's going on.It will take some time since I'm working on a cyoa right now and also the FT tournament super project writefagging.
>>96878251>>96878294Toilets clogged and the pool is full, same as it ever was. Start new or don't start at all.
>>96878332What's your cyoa about
>>96878346Wuxia battle royale
>>96878335sybau doomer
>>96878276>What are the lewd ones?Isekai repopulation and its unfinished sequel, I'd rather not say for the rest>Why would you be interested in writing for that setting?The setting itself isn't lewd; the cyoa is because of its premise. Outside of that, it's an interesting original fantasy setting>JumpchainIt's just not balanced for it. Here are the links for it if you want to see it for yourselfRavenwood material realm jump: https://drive.google.com/file/d/1fBgRygAyApz6lfDiLP0AQv2FwsWmWf9c/viewRavenwood demiplane jump: https://drive.google.com/file/d/1H9N1DY3cUofI26EqLwY783XN8h7Acwbl/viewSetting supplement: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1P9J2MImLRGSoulH1GILxM8R9vCDQW99QTZBR8hARt7M/edit?tab=t.0#heading=h.7unlzh2wp2aPower source supplement: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1EYI8z9kK9phHuwX4bJgKlphuIYHVlhMTfsxCzG8fQHc/edit?tab=t.0#heading=h.v1uxfdqehxz1Lineage artifacts of power: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1Rl3zn7zZeHdps6ejnDRhynirUEpF5C612V441KWnypo/editIt's a kitchen sink setting, I don't care about that, but I know some people do
>>96878353Eww
>>96878353How is this different from regular wuxia when everyone is already aggressive towards each other by default?
>>96878356There's something about the power sources and artifacts of this jump that really piss me off. I have how gamey it feels. I much prefer something more organic in itself description.
>>96878353Were you the guy on cyoag asking for suggestions?
>>96878360Fair enough kekI'm still considering if it's a ancient world type of deal or if it will be like jjk and it's modern setting + masquerade situation>>96878365It's basically a bunch of clans across the martial world dumping their teenagers and young adults into an island to beat each other to death until one is left standing. Whoever wins gets a lot of shit.
>>96878372One anon pretended to be me and added a bunch of cheats and asked for suggestions. I think he was just attwhoring but his ideas were good so I kept them lol
>>96878385I think a modern world setting could be more interesting, but I guess it would probably look too much like jjk in that case, no?
>>96878356Are you willing to compromise the fantasy one with something else? I don't think jumpchain would be on the menu regardless of balance.
>>96878110Mecha musume or at the very least tiny humanoid battle bots
>>96878110>On a slightly related topic, what MP would you guys want after this/right now?FATEcility MHAverlord PMDairy KTHail with a side of Worm, please
>>96877834Can builds with World Lost open Bleeding Zones at will of they have some way to control their emotions?
>>96878110I’d love Witcher, but it would never work.
>>96878760The setting will always be boring
>>96878775Then change the setting, DOY.
>>96878110Something using a cyoa we haven't used yet, medival-esque and low magic.
>>96878806Name one time that shit has workedWyrm?Otome naruto?Fairy Tail colonization?Abyss PMD?
>>96878833>Fairy Tail colonization?It never got a chance>Abyss PMD?Worked>OtomeShitpost>WyrmI told you guys it was a bad idea
>>96878775I find school slop more boring, but understand it’s useful for an MP’s survival. I want Witcher for monster hunting fightkino, but most builds would probably go Mutant or Mage cause they’re stronger.
>>96878863>Mutant or Mage cause they’re strongerYou know it's bad when the author had to make Path to COPEacy so people had a reason to go Witcher
>>96878863fightslop is boringI'd rather be a swordsmith harassing w*tcher fags for being shit at taking care of their sword.
>>96878909There's really no reason to go pure Witcher.>hmm, should I be you average witcher fodder?>or should I be a witcher who can rip open portals and a bunch of other cool shit?The answer is obvious.
>>96878833>Fairy Tail colonizationKino that never a got a real chance.
>>96878911Craftercels be like "yeah my only source of interaction is staying in the cuck chair while combatBVLLs have fun with the things I made, what about it?"
>>96878950WRONGThe only acceptable swordsmith is one who's a swordmaster. If you want you want you blade fixed, you're gonna have to duel me chud. Try no to fall in live when I kick your ads OFFSCREEN.
>>96877834OK, got the start of an Idolon tierlist.First, this is not internally ranked. In the Enemies section, we're told how many 3-Star enemies each type of Idolon is equivalent to, from 1 to 3. Taking those, and averaging the position of the hybrids, resulted in this. I'm planning to update this with internally ranked tiers, but need more feedback for what to take into account.
>>96878991This tierlist was made by an assaultkek
>>96879008This seethe was made by a cuckmander
>>96878991>need more feedback for what to take into account.The chad move would be to try and judge the movesets to see who built up good kits and who didn't instead of the system you went with.Otherwise it'd be things like who used drawbacks to buy more idolon options, who has mission frontpays that buff idolon, and if they have SHSL Soul which buffs idolon.
>>96878991Itsuki is raw Curmudgeon, tho, with a side specialization in Assault. I think you used the version in the rentry again, Tierlist anon.
>>96878991Che-sama will awaken, I can feel it!!!
>>96879008Assault and Destruction are explicitly 3 3-Star>>96879026I intend to try to do that, this is just an outline. With how many Averages there are, this is far from done.>>96879031Son of a bitch. Updated his position into 3 3-Star.>>96879054If/when he does, he will be tiered.
>>96879019>>96879026The version he went with is literally how it's described in the cyoa.
>>96879031Different tier list anon, but I was working on my own Idolon tier list as well
>>96878853>>96878937Upon seeing this, I've been working The Millenium Quest rentry, more specifically on it's Rule Changes as I've discovered upon further reading the CYOA that most all Origins don't really do anything for multiplayer asides from flavor and that some Guild Amenities have to change to fit the context of the new setting.
>>96879740Ganbatte
>>96879740We are so back
ANONS WHAT ARE YOU WORKING ONROLLCALL
>>96880107Playing dress up!
>>96880107The next 3 act bloat-fest
>>96880107CYOA making.
>>96880107Trying to write and failing to get enough done before I have to go wage. I should have something done in 1-2 days. Side note: Dandadan has been a good inspiration for writing JITE stuff. I guess re-requsitie Halloween prompt: What's everyone wearing to the Higan Halloween party? Any group costumes?
>>96880107Planning ahead when my in narrative relationship chart will be
>>96877927JITE is going pretty strong. I predict its death in two months. Before JITE there was a stretch where new MPs were only lasting for a few weeks.>Are the future cyoas you guys are going to play already planned out or do you just wing it?Nope.>Would you be interested in playing Demon Eyes after the JITE cycle is over?Eh, fuck it, why not? Unfortunate that it's so similar, but whatever. As most creative anon in the general, I never run out of builds. Personally I don't like the cyoa that much but I'd at least make a build, and I'd write if I felt enough inspiration.>>96878110KTH unironically, but it'll never happen. Second tier is some battle shounen. If it's low power or boring I will pass.I have an idea for sci-fi rentryslop that is probably terrible but we'll see if it comes to fruition.
>>96880107Frauding right now, but will get to working on my next piece soon. Still need to figure out what I want - probably an investigation piece with Team Ken looking into the Fujiwara Senki, which turns south and results in Kentaro starting a fight.>>96880156Kenji goes as Seth Brundle from The Fly, and goes to the bathroom several times throughout the party to put on makeup and look more fucked up each time. Grosses out most of the other students.>>96878863Witcher fightkino would be awesome, but yeah it'll probably never work out.
>>96878863unironically witcher is too boring because its too low power
>>96880107Back at the writefag mines after celebrating Halloween.
>>96880107Still 'Tetsuya Meets The HLC'. Should be done within the next 3 days, hopefully. Then I think I'll have him "team up" with the Census Club to fight the CEO Nightmare in my next one.
>>96880347[spouler]What's the slop premise?[/spoiler]
>>96880156I've seen someone throw an idea of Student Council going as some sort of undead, but my first thought for Ran was a pirate.
>>96880156Parfaite would follow the lead of the rest of the Fujiwara Senki, but if left up to her, she would suggest that they all dress as knights of the round the table.
>>96880107Working on Uma Musume champions>For /mcyoag/what the hell, being productive in a collaborative writing community? are you insane? what kind of blasphemy is this
>>96880529The way you soon tho into productivity is having your build be into horse racing.
>>96880425>spouler
>>96880533*spin this
>>96880533that sounds like a lotta work for little return, the complete opposite of gambling on horse races.
>>96880445I'm intrigued. Momo is obviously Arthur, but what about the others? Dawn as Gawain or Bedivere? Fumiko as Kay/Lancelot or maybe Tristan because he's depicted as the archer of the bunch? What about Parfaite herself?
>>96880529I swear to God I was gonna suggest an Umamusume CYOA as a joke.As for me, I MUST FINISH THIS WRITEFAG!!!!!
>>96880563who cares about that, I wanna know who goes as Guinevere
>>96880563>Kay/LancelotWill... Fumiko steal Momo's girl or boy after she gets engaged? The lore deepens...
>>96880568>I MUST FINISH THIS WRITEFAGNo, you don't. You can leave it for tomorrow, or whenever you feel like it. No one will know or punish you for it.
>>96880575Itsuki
>>96880591Yeah right. We can all tell it's Kaoru anon. I can and I will shame anons.
>>96880626I swear to God I've been sitting on it and I keep procrastinating. I also recently got a MIDI keyboard (I'd make music for MPs, but nobody would care) so I've been having fun with that. Also helps this writefag might be my biggest one yet
>>96880649Make an anime opening/ending for our MP with your music and people will care.
>>96880649>>96880662dont fall for it anonmaking long form animations or music for an MP is a scam that will burn you out extra fast for very little reward
Ok so how do we do the exploration aspect of The Millennium Quest? I have a reference map (pic rel) that I "borrowed" from Toriko, with the main Three Continents/Starting Zone being in the red circle. I was primarily thinking about doing a polling/DM/QM thing where we make a trail with each of the guilds and their journey, building the world as we go with labelling the landmasses and seas as we go further and further out.
>>96880672https://files.catbox.moe/xnsmie.mp4This was kino, albeit.
>>96880676I thought it'd be a single good guild and a single dark guild
>>96880676That sounds cool. Of course, the Pseudo-Arena anon technique is ripe for destruction. Maybe an 'honor system' where anons just include locations and worldbuilding in their writefags and we update a rentry to reflect that? By the end it would be cool to see how in-depth the continent ended up being.
>>96878991>what to take into accountA list for anons to consider. Not complete.Perks:Martial Arts/Ancient Martial Arts: Knowing how to fight helps no matter the formMediation: Controlling emotions should help power up Roaring Flare/Stalwart Radiant/Faustian Bargain/Tesouro de Monte Cristo: Demi-Idolon powers presumably workSHSL Soul: States it makes Idolons stronger. Is no longer listed though.Missions:Belly of the beastMysterious Bleeding Zone (Man-Monster) Death Mark (No mark)Hollow AtaraxiaHumanity Lost (Top tier)Paradise Lost (Top tier)World Lost (Top Tier)Spirit Lost (Top Tier)All of these have some way to power up Idolons. The Losts are best imo, followed by Man monster and Death mark with no mark.Drawbacks:Incompatibility gives a buff, but it's accounted for with points. Overconfidence is an open nerf.Not going over all Idolon perks, only Normal onesMagician if you also have Spirit LostCharge Attack depending on chargeAbsolute Resonance is the big one for 120% starting powerBeast if you have a way around the dumbing downCogito Ergo SumFreakish up to 2 without SHSL Athlete otherwise 3
>>96880772I feel instead it should be taken on a case by case basis. Give each option a score depending on how strong/useful you think it is and then go from there, including bonus points for options that synergize well. Ie Adaptation and Bloodsoaked (which is strange and you'd think the cyoa would mention Lusus Naturae instead?) or Wuxing and Elemental give bonus points. Not sure if anyone has the former but I'm pretty sure multiple have the latter.I also think this is an idiotic and pointless endeavor because all fight outcomes would be match-up based but you do you.
>>96880772>Freakish up to 2 without SHSL Athlete otherwise 3The term there is "something like SHSL Athlete" so there are likely other perks that could help mitigate the recoil.
>>96880816>I also think this is an idiotic and pointless endeavorI agree but once I started I wanted to post something
>>96880708I mean it can be, but I was gonna make it be a main International Guild, any Dark Guilds anons wanna make, and any Independent Guilds anons wanna make. I could limit it >>96880731That could work to, it just changes a bit if anons know where they are going beforehand or if they make it up along the way.
>>96880563I think Lucan would be the obvious pick for Parfaite since he's meant to be Arthur's servant.
>>96880860>it just changes a bit if anons know where they are going beforehand or if they make it up along the way.I feel like both of these will happen either way. Inevitably, set-pieces will be planned and spontaneously created.
>>96880816>Not sure if anyone has the former but I'm pretty sure multiple have the latter.Our resident blackpillcel Tetsuya has both after his update where his anon sovlessly powergamed Kino Slayer away for more useful options I believe.
>>96880816>Wuxing and ElementalI don't really know that they would benefit each other in any special desu. Having both would mean you have competency in controlling ice or something while also having control over another element that's more unique.
>>96880873I guess so. I'll make an Exploration section in the rentry to outline how its gonna work, as each landmass has an elemental theme and synergies with chosen Magics, thus needing at least a little bit of prepwork for that. the rest of what lays within anons can describein their own writefags whenever appropriate.
>>96880816I feel like you could look at most builds and they've had some picks that were supposed to combo off each other.
>>96880906You could pick the same element for both no? Pick fire for elemental and then superfire for wuxing.
>>96880952Yeah, but it'd just be two different versions. Having one doesn't seem like it'd enhance the other.
>>96880708I think that I'll make the International Guild into a single ship, and the Dark Guilds into a "united" pirate fleet, with each dark wizard or group of dark wizards being on their own air or water ship travelling alongside eachother.
>>96881024Wait is this not mythic lands instead of FT
This reminds me of how shitty Elemental I is.>maybe it can generate fire or release small bursts of water>it is weak, but still above mere cosmeticsWow. Not even the other tiered normal skills have this level of "don't get your hopes up, chump" energy radiating from it.
>>96881054? This is FT just with vastly different mechanics. I'll post the rentry (in progress) to clarifyhttps://rentry.org/ftdarkcon-concept
>>96881073Why waste the effort when you could make something that isnt dragged down by the lame ass fairy tail setting?
>>96881094we're already ignoring the setting albeitpersonally, I think its coolI also have an actual build in mind instead of my garbage one last time
>>96881054Now that you mention it, mythic lands makes sense for that premise and only requires very minor tweaking. Even cityanon's water world would require less tweaking.
>>96881127Mythic lands is way more poppy as a cyoa albeit. That stat system is dogshit
>>96881131Nether cyoa is beyond poop tier, but you're probably right that Mythic Lands is worse.
>>96881112Because to be perfectly honest having to design the Magic System, Magic Power Ranking, Guild System, Setting Background, and of course the general vibe of the setting from scratch when I can just add cool worldbuilding things without having to do too much hard work.>>96881127Mythic lands is about ruling over places, not exploring/colonizing them. Plus, Fairy Tail is actually doing this with the 100 Year Quest saga, so it has a basis in the setting to be built off of and just needs stuff to support it.
The problem with Mythic Lands is that it's the most boring slop imaginable. At least Fairy Tail says "okay you can do whatever" and you can shoot wizard kamehamehas and have wizard domain expansions. Mythic Lands just sucks. So does City anon's Water cyoa too, that slop was deservedly never glanced at.
Tonight, I'll try to writefag again.
>>96881200imagine being so shit that you're even worse than fairy tail
>>96881247PMD...
>>96881203I think you should feature my build. My build is really good and will elevate your writefag to the next level.>>96881247Worm...
>>96881247Danmacheese…
>>96881247MHA.....
>>96881267>doesn't name his buildCOWARDLY behavior
>>96881267You haven't named your build, so I guess neither of us knows whether it'll be featured.
>>96881247Overlord...
>>96881261>>96881267>>96881268>>96881277>>96881290https://youtube.com/watch?v=YmKEBW1OXzE&t=8
Anons, I failed. I spent the whole day being productive rather than writing my writefag.
>>96881564That's it! 200 words written in your writefag as punishment, NOW!
>>96881203I've written 256 words. It's all slop as usual. I think I should just scrap it. Maybe this hobby just ain't for me.
>>96881881post it and i'll rate it and give tips
>>96881881If people think my slop is good, anyone can make it bro.
>>96881881It doesn't have to be a writefag bro. Almost any efforfag would be appreciated and falling under the pressure will only make it less fun.
>>96881923This. Edit a shitty meme. I WILL call it Kino
>>96881908https://rentry.org/nwy7y4hr
got an insane hag pull
>>96882049Here's a review of what you've got, anon.https://rentry.org/npn38d58
>>96880156Meliaya yaya would embrace her other nickname, that being of a gnome, and she shall dress in a garden gnome costume.Trick or treat! Happy Halloween! Maybe you can show me a trick or a talent of yours instead of candies. I have lots of money to buy candies anywayCaptcha:h2pattHeadpat yayaHeadpat yaya
>>96881600Sorry anon. I failed you, I'm so sorry. I couldn't stop myself from being a productive member of society!
>>96877834>Midnight Merchants (Rin, Aida, mention of Kotaro, Tomaki, Itsuro)https://rentry.org/g3zfm5cu
>>96882049I'm also giving a review https://rentry.org/hbge95rm.
Music on loop? Check.Keyboard? Check.Rentry? Check.18 bots that have somehow already read this? Check.Yep, it's writing time.https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=s0YR0G5qFIE
>>96882461Friendly tip, instrumental tracks work better since your brain's language centers will be occupied by lyrics. Lyrical is great to work up to the writing, but can be distracting during the writing.Personally, I use calm jazz.
>>96882495No that's not ACTUALLY what I'm listening to. It's a cryptic hint as to what the writefag is about. I know I keep referencing very obscure things with Kaoru so I want to make sure anons have a little taste of all of that beforehand.
>>96882512In that case, it's a peak song and I'm hype.
>>96882515It's an absolute PAIN to find full live recordings of this because it's a very obscure musical, even if the book is very influential. I am basing the entire character on a very specific kind of autism I have about this.https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-Zwf7WhlBpE Here's a live performance so you get a taste of the context.I'm not going to bed until I finish this writefag, I'm VERY close.
>>96882550Not gonna lie, I only know about the name from Tenacious D, and I assumed it was a porno.
>>96882562I can't blame you. If it makes any sense, The Scarlet Pimpernel inspired Batman. It's a story about an 18th century English aristocrat that takes on Robespierre's Reign of Terror and rescues people from the guillotine while pretending to be a posh snob back home. One of the first examples of a secret identity in modern fiction, and a huge inspiration for Bruce Wayne and Batman. Blakeney, Kaoru's Idolon, is straight-up just representing Percy Blakeney, the protagonist of the book. Like Arsène from Persona 5, kinda. I've talked about this a few times but I think anons don't really get this most of the time because it requires a lot of autism.
>the Feds track down Shu's mysterious pasthttps://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fa-pk1anZcY
>>96882417Give Rin the Oscar for that acting. She's making the HLA proud.
>>96882603They are really salty ever since he stopped 9/11
>>96880676>>96881073Ok I finished with the Exploration part of Millenium Quest (its at the bottom), so anybody interested can look at that and give me feedback on it. https://rentry.co/ftdarkcon-concept
>>96882622>helping w*sternersHe should be tried as a traitor.
>>96882656Japan has an obvious fondness for America
>>96882721Japan and America kissing sloppy styleno Russians invited
>>96882721Liking Americans and Disney, isn't the same as liking their government.
>>96882724Japan hates Russians, and they only seem hate them more as time passes.
>>96882735Well that's good because the Chinese currently economically skullfucking them see the Russians as a warrior race. So an island with 30 times less the population of both of these nations is starting shit. Wonder how that plays out.
>>96882751The population that defects at the earliest opportunity? The one who have gotten their beat my Japan every time they tried starting shit in the area?Very fearsome warrior race lol.
>>96882751chinks hate russians too because mao fell out with stalinthey're pumping and dump them as soon as the relationship no longer benefits them
>>96882767Once again the ESLs of this general prove they didn't graduate a history class.
AIIIEEEEEE WHY DID I WANT TO WRITE SUCH A BIG ENSEMBLE WRITEFAG I HAVE TO JUGGLE SO MANY PEOPLE
>>96882783They got their fleet sunk and got embarrassed trying to pass trinkets from London off as technological wonders from Moscow. You're crying won't change that.
>>96882792Just make some of them have to leave in the middle of the writefag for some reason.
>>96882792Just kill off half of them in the middle of the writefag for some reason.
>>96882792Just make some of them have orgy in the middle of the writefag for some reason.
>>96882812I accept your concession.
>>96882751Don't kid yourself. Uncle Sam is the Divine Wind. Hurricane America will give the Mongols their dues.
>>96882792just kill off a few of themwe have too many cast members so you'll do us all a favor
>>96882812You're not entertaining.
>>96882812a real yt bot would call him Pablo or Jose, you're not fooling anyone
>>96882792Preoccupy them with a random fodder attack, possibly falling debris. Let them quip a few lines. That's what the rest of fiction does for the unimportant extras.
Since we've ranked the racism/xenophobia of the cast, I think we should consider hoe they would react to Alyona, Mei, and Archie being hospitalized.Damn, that sucks?Visits everyday?Folding a thousand cranes?Doesn't even realize they're absent?Think they had it coming?
>>96882810>>96882835Do we think Hussie is a hack or based for killing off massive list of characters he introduced when he decided he was to lazy to wrap of their respective plotlines?
>>96882875Definitely a hack. The opposite on the spectrum is Oda One Piece, who is a hack for introducing too much irrelevant fodder and then proceeding to NOT kill them, at detriment of the story.
>>96882732And?
>>96882783You're both ESLs
>>96882867Kohaku:>AlyonaHe sends her borscht. Ukrainian borscht.>MeiHe sends her rice congee and a few photos of the school sports teams' latest games.>ArchieHe sends him a double decker monte christo sandwich and notes on missed classwork.
>>96882888Hussie is a hack for basically the same reason. His later characters fucking sucked major ass whether they were eventually killed off or not
I may have written the best story beat I've had in all of JITE until now. I'm almost done
>>96882925I'm salivating, anon.
>>96882925I'm cumming, anon.
>>96882925I'm edging and ready to bust.
>>96882925It's not better than mine. Faggot. Fuck you!
>>96877834The Riddle, Part 1 (Kaoru, Shu, Yae, Meliaya, Ran, Madoka, Marisa, Momofuku, Takaishi, Ai)https://rentry.co/xy6bgwuiIT'S FINALLY FUCKING DONE Part 2 will be far quicker. I promise
>>96882655Here's a rentry with my thoughts. Overall, I think you did a really good job and these are pretty much all nitpicks, except for a few.https://rentry.org/fp6pvtasI hope the MP pans outI think it would be cool to come up with specific important NPC factions and maybe a beastiary to give ideas about cool monsters to fight, especially since there was some interest in a monster hunting MP/Setting
>>96883208Why is Kaoru trying to aura farm while everyone else is fighting?
>>96883208holy FUARKING kinoreading NOW
>>96883215Because it’s MY writefag and I get to show off MY character as the cool one. I am TIRED AS SHIT but I also have a much cleaner idea of how to proceed with Part 2. Please let me know your thoughts, anons, and stay tuned for Part 2.
>>96883224gonna be a whille because its 20k words but I'll post a more in-depth review either tonight or tomorrow since you earned it
>>96883208This was a really fitting send-off for Yae, I'm glad she got to go out on a high note like that.
>>96883208Fantastic job, anon! Extremely high quality writefag. I'm going to do my duty as a good anon and give what I believe any anon craves (or at least what I crave...): criticism.Parts you did well on: characterization. I feel that every character was pretty accurately represented and that all of them felt quite balanced, even considering that Kaoru was the lead. Quite impressive given the character amount. I also felt that you did a good job with pacing, and the story beats didn't feel particularly rushed. I didn't spot any grammar or spelling errors beyond a single accident, though I am tired so there could be more. Not like perfect spelling or grammar is required anyway. I also enjoyed that a relevant theme to multiple buids was explored: the theme of trust. It may be actually possible for anons to work together to actually explore this theme!The few parts I feel need work: the combat scenes were alright-to-meh. That's a thing I noticed a lot: "and then they did this". Less like reading a story, and more like reading leaked spoilers for an upcoming chapter of a manga if that makes any sense. Fight scenes are quite difficult however, and I feel like few (if any) anons do them well. While the fighting scenes suffered the most from this, I feel like the karaoke scene suffered from that as well, like any segment where a character was about to sing. Obviously, this is not a small writefag, so I believe the culprit is the amount of characters. Maybe in the future you should try and reign in the amount of characters involved? It's quite difficult to juggle all at once, and even when successfully doing so- as I feel you did here- it can result in the writefag suffering overall. Finally, I feel like there's a lack of 'impact'. Maybe if the emotions and reactions of the characters were detailed more, more impact could shine through? Not so sure on that myself.Overall, again, an incredibly high quality writefag.
>>96883208Is the image mirrored? If not, Ran's colors should have been the other way around, right?
>>96883208Quality song pick. Writefag too.
>>96883641Anon I swear a lot of the choppier prose is just that I’m so TIRED of juggling everyone but this one needed to be an ensemble. Next one will probably be smaller. Not Part 2, that one’s gonna be just as big. But there will be more self-contained scenes, so maybe that helps with things. Props to you for noticing the theme, I’m trying to make sure all my previous Kaoru interactions can be wrapped into a neat package as the arc goes on.Woah, 20K words? I wasn’t keeping track.>>96883664No, the image isn’t mirrored. My bad, when I doodle a lot of characters in the background I’m prone to fuck up something eventually.>>96883711I went with what other anons gave me for their characters, unless you mean Don’t Go Breaking My Heart or Tasogare.
>>96883809>TasogareThis
>>96883989Ah. Well, I thought it was something that would fit the moment, and it just makes sense for Japanese teenagers in 2000 to crank out at least SOME city pop with a karaoke machine. I guess to some it’s the kind of music their parents would’ve enjoyed, but Kaoru was raised by her grandparents, so I thought the middle ground made sense.Man I’m gonna be real I feel like I made more mistakes with the prose than I did good things lmao I know you guys think the writefag was good but I’m sitting here like “damn, I gotta write the next one a lot better” in terms of actual prose. That said, my main focus was characterisation and plot beats so I’m glad I got that right. I tend to imagine my stories as TV episodes, and I took scriptwriting classes in university, so I think some of that shined through.
I wanna do martial path again, not KTH, Martial path.
>>96884158Same
GAAAAAAAH EUROPEAN HOURSARISE, EURO ANONSI CAN’T BE THE ONLY ONE
>>96884212Die European! You don't belong in this world!
>>96884212What do you need?
>>96884242It was not by my hand that I am once again given flesh. I was called here by AMERICAN SLEEP HOURS, which wish to pay me tribute.>>96884244say nice things about my writefag I don’t really need anything. I’m just trying to keep the thread alive in euro times
>>96884259I already did.
>>96883208Look at Kao kao and Ai, getting all buddy buddy like that! Jokes aside not just talking, nut sitting next to her is probably the closest to a normal human gesture Ai did in years. They'll be sharing gossip and shopping together in no time. As others said the dialogue and characterization was on point. My favorite thing was seeing how much power Yae has over Kaoru though, the mindgames are real.Hyped for part 2 already.
>>96884266I wanted to acknowledge Ai’s insistence on the Death Marks and Kaoru’s change of mind about Ai after Yae’s latest writefag. Plus, I really wanted to progress their relationship a little closer to actually being friends. I don’t know if you might think Ai was progressing too fast or something, you can probably manage this better in your own writefags
>>96883208Damn it, that artwork is peak, and shows my rotting has led to being upstaged!I was writing a battle with Mei, Itsuki, and the Student Council fighting a powerful enemy. I don't want to step on your toes though, so I won't post anything until your next part is out, and do my best to make them match up.
>>96883208I'm somewhat new to this thread, how much context do I need to read and enjoy this?
>>968843932 or 3 wirtefags worth I think
>>96884386Anon, I don’t own the trademark to the idea of big group fights. Go ahead! I was planning on starting Pokémon Legends ZA later today but I think Part 2 will take less time to write because the scenes are stronger in my head already. I’ll finish it as soon as possible, mark my words. I hope the writefag is to your liking in any case, I can’t wait to read yours I hope Kaoru’s in it>>96884393Only a little more than average for most MPs. I’d say all you need to get started with a build is to get a sense of the landscape, the active groups and some of the characters in them, and decide where you want your character to land on the chess board.
>>96884397Ah, I didn’t understand the other anon’s question at first. If you want to, for some reason, understand EVERYTHING in this story, you have a couple of writefags to read. But the only obligatory ones are:>A Miserable Little Pile of Secrets>Love and the Russian Winter (it’s got 4 parts, oof)>Into the FireOther than that, optional reads are:>Morning, or something like it>Coward>ManagingBut honestly that’d be a crazy level of dedication to just understand ONE writefag in its entirety. It sucks for you that this is basically a story that happens in the middle of a character’s arc that has already been spanning a few stories, some of them written by other people. But just read the essentials and you’ll probably be fine
>>96883208>pic relatedYey! bravo! everyone sang well and with their hearts. I was worried that some characters may be out of character but their dialogues were very in character. Juggling that many character must have been hard, do not falter miss Kao-Kao you are doing a good job!>>96883347>pic unrelatedOOC: YOU JUST GAVE ME MINI HEART ATTACK WTF BRO?! I WAS WORRIED SICK!
>>96884557The fact that her eyes are so fucking large violently triggers my autism. 90% of her face is covered by her eyes.
>>96884557I'm tempted to draw (or even animate) a little thingy with Yaya and Madoka singing Don't Go Breaking My Heart, actually. I really wanted to make sure that every character more or less stuck to their true incarnation, but that came at the cost of not everyone having much spotlight. I hope to remedy that in Part 2. Also NO WAY I'd just kill off someone else's build like that lmao
I'm not sure if I'm cursed or this place is cursed, things happened and I had to disappear for a while, then I got sick. Things finally clamed down and I remembered about this place, I decided to try and participate again and immediately got sick again the moment I started writing something.
>>96885117Popsy-anon? Are you becoming your character?
>>96885117bro caught the fanfic writer curseget checked for cancer bro
>>96885187No, didn't Popsy-anon already say he wasn't coming back? Anyway I am pretty sure nobody noticed I was missing, I am not that popular, just easy to spot.>>96885194It's not that bad, I always had a bad constitution, it's just the timing that keeeps surprising me. It was also not just health, or lack thereof, that kept me away.
>>96885117Welcome back Lixdite anon!
>>96885117I'm kinda cursed too. I have the most freetime whenever this place is dead but I get super busy as soon everyone finally decides they want to have fun.
>>96885356>No, didn't Popsy-anon already say he wasn't coming back?Did he? I remember him saying he was done with Popsy as a character and didn't plant to ever pick her back up, but I don't remember if he said anything about never coming back to the thread.
>>96885414I thought Popsy anon was Satoru anon?
>>96885363I am starting to get used to this. Yes, it's me, for what that's worth nowadays.>>96885414I was sure it was an indefinite break, sounded pretty final, but it could have been just a character thing.
>>96885783Nice to see you around again. I just started coming back around too.
>>96877834Cooking Cousins (Ai Suishi, Momofuku Chikata) https://rentry.org/ciughc2nAi and Momo reconnecting a bit, some sweet SoL before I move on to the creepy unhinged stuff.
>>96886145That was pretty cute. Cool to see her with her family, it gave off an entirely different vibe from the usual Ai.Also every time I read about her place I'm like pic related.
>>96886145I thought that said Kissing Cousins, shame it didn't live up to expectations.
>>96883208Good work. The standout factors were Kaoru's byplay with her Idolon, and her growing bonds with Takaishi and Ai. One weird part is where Shu questions Kaoru on her mark. It was already established with Mei and Sayaka when they saved thay bystander that the mark can appear on anyone, not just Awakened, and they even mentioned it during Haunted Home Visit, so the infection theory is narrowing the scope of the mission for the sake of giving Kaoru more mental anguish, which was unnecessary as her struggle with her dual identity was already well developed.But outside of that, it was nice. The fight was easy to follow, the karaoke moment was cute, and my build (Momo) was in character when featured, so nice job.>>96886145Peak fiction. You captured Momo's awkward side perfectly. It has less of the usual tension Ai carries when she's socializing, which tracks, since unlike the new bridges Ai is making in Higan, this is something she had built long ago, she only needs to reach out and meet her cousin halfway there. I will follow this up as soon as I have a chance to.
>>96880156>>96880445Oh yeah also I approve of this, their aura would be off the chartsFor one day momo will refer to her masamunes as Excalibur and Caliburn
>>96886596>It was already established with Mei and Sayaka when they saved thay bystander that the mark can appear on anyone, not just Awakened,I knew there was talk about this, I remembered something like that, but I wasn't 100% sure. I'm a little retarded. I just wanted to address the "odd one out" factor that Kaoru has, but I think I can change that piece of dialogue to be about something else. I dunno what Shu would question Kaoru on to make it seem like he MIGHT have an idea as to what's going on with her, any ideas?
>>96886744Maybe she says something she shouldn't know about yet that she witnessed as Scarlet Senshi, like the pancakes incident, and needs to play off how she learned it.
>>96886744Her seeing the marks at all? The normies may have it, but they probably don't even realize their doom like with most idea world stuff, or else this sort of thing would have made the news already
>>96886744Just because it CAN appear on anyone, doesn't mean that it can't be far more likely to appear on Awakened.Who's to say that bystander wasn't Awakened?Maybe it can also appear on those with the potential to awaken?Just a few ideas as to deal with it
>>96886793The normies all know about it but they just assumed they got them on Higan's Mandatory Womb Tat Wednesday and forgot about it.
>>96877834>PROMPTHas your build's views on spirituality/religion changed at all since they came into contact with the Idea World? How do they feel knowing stuff like ghosts and yokai exist?
anons are all tuckered out from being spooped on halloween...
>>96887926It really do be like that. These threads basically slow to a crawl during the weekends and holidays. At least we know they have lives and a healthy social circle or they're using any break they have to writefag and shitpost during company time.
>>96887926I'm busy writing (managed, or at least, will manage 500 words today).Give a character a W and suppress my kill/torture your darling impulse so he can get better.
>>96887190Parfaite's pretty casual about religion and spirituality, revering the Kami and the Buddha as most do, but also having some things she's picked up from her travels mixed in. Notably, bits of Christianity from her mother, though she's not the type who regularly attends Church as much as she is it just something that part of her identity. Not lacking faith, but not a devoted follower either. Knowing about the Idea World and yokai is a bit spooky, but it's more interesting than anything. It does make her slightly worried about how she should approach things going forward. What's else is true? Should she pay respects to all practices? It's all pretty confusing, but she already tries to be good, so so she hopes that's enough to please any relevant deities and spirits. If they're the kind that want sacrifices... well, she's definitely not comfortable hurting people.
>>96887190Before he encountered Tai, Kohaku wasn't very religious. His family aren't, so he just absorbed the vaguely agnostic respect most Japanese have towards shrines and holy sites. Now he worships a worm. More broadly, he now considers Idolons to be important for a person to have, and that their role is to help you be your best self. He would be very cross with someone who doesn't value their Idolon, or an Idolon that misguides its Awakened.
>>96887190Momo went from believing in them during her childhood thanks to her grandma's stories, then started thinking it was nonsense as she grew older, then had no choice but to believe again after she awakened. As for how she feels, decidedly unworried because Simply Red can kick yokai asses if they try anything with her. She pays respect to the local kami when it's appropriate, but doesn't worry about concepts like heaven/hell or karma because she has no intention of dying yet. However, if the threat is something untouchable like the ghosts haunting Shujinko's house, she will get properly spooked, but will try her best to hide it with bravado.
Starwars cyoa but we all play Jedi or ''Jedi'' during the clone wars and clones and stuff when
>>96887190Madoka didn't particularly believe in them, mostly because she felt some cues from the adults around her growing up- that they were pretending rather than serious... but that also means she grew up with the mindset that the supernatural is something 'fun', like a game being played. She'd find things like Shu's house quite fun as a result.Kukurihime made it a point to drive home that Yokai are mostly actively evil, which put a damper on her spirits and forced her to take them seriously. She's still got a somewhat light-hearted and mischievous outlook though. For example when she prays at a shrine for new years, she'll be cheeky like she's talking to a peer rather than with the reverence you'd expect of someone who thinks gods are a real thing now.
>>96877834Is Reiji Anon alive, or am I allowed to puppeteer his corpse for my purposes?
>>96882417Really liking the ID gang so far, they feel like they'd be the 'Neutral' faction in an SMT game. Going to be interesting to see how Tomaki and Aida are connected, whether they're just friends or its something more supernatural. >>96883208MASSIVE piece, Kaoru-Anon. Really good read, and you juggle a lot of builds better than most. Would have liked a bit more background or context on Kagayaki, but it makes sense they're not going to get that in the middle of a fight. Other than that the interactions were nice, and I was a fan of the karaoke scenes.Looking forward to part 2!>>96886145Weird to see Ai so 'normal'. It makes sense that she'd be more comfortable with her family though. Still managed to add a few bits of her usual crazy though, with her nasty room and picking through the garbage for Shu's lunch scraps. Nice writefag!>>96887190Kenji has a lot more faith than he used to - he thinks everyone that dies will just be reborn in the Idea World, since that's what happened for his Idolon. He might be coping and trying to make excuses for the Nurarihyon though. Very pro-Yokai, and is in love with a ghost. He enters Bleeding Zones very frequently so he can hang out with Tokiwa-chan, so he interacts with Yokai more often than most builds. Likely prefers the company of demons over humans.
>>96888503Kagayaki is, if you didn't know, the same Shinigami servant that Madoka and Itsuki defeated in Marisa's intro writefag. I'll add some more context in Part 2, but I played a lot of Pokémon ZA today. Gomenasai. The HLA karaoke did inspire me, although I breezed through those sections compared to that one.
>>96888503>Going to be interesting to see how Tomaki and Aida are connectedAs the SHSL Best Friend, Aida is everyone's friend! Or so he likes to think. I saw Tomaki is 19, and was likely in the same class as Itsuki, Kohaku and Aida, but he failed his sophomore year and got held back. Aida just wants to help bro out.I plan to expand more on how they feel about other builds in my relationship chart, but in narrative that will take place after they get picked up by the glowies for questioning about their extremely laissez-faire attitude towards Awakening secrecy.
>>96888442Puppeteer that corpse anon; you deserve a little treat.
>>96887190Tetsuya is a reddit tier atheist and unironically believes it all has a 'scientific' explanation since he believes God and magic isn't real. Like, he believes they're all in a simulation that was coded to have an 'Idea World' which is one of the only possible explanations for something to be so ridiculous, or that aliens created it with advanced technology eons ago. He's a retarded contrarian, I know.
>>96882417Always nice seeing more Rin, the straight woman of the HLA.>>96883208Amazing work, Kino, no other words work. Excited to see where things go.>>96886145Cute>>96887190Alyona LOVES Japanese myths and has lots of books on Yokai and folk tales. However, she was raised as an atheist and thinks Christianity is a complete sham designed to trick the proletariat.>>96888864"God isn't real, Rodionova""I know, but stop offending the Yuki-onna!"
I have an idea for an NPC. It's a surprise tool that will help me later, and it makes more sense for him to be introduced now than come out of nowhere. Which clubs are taken? I'm gonna give him Miss Perfect so I think it makes sense for him to be a club leader. Maybe a music club or a chess club. Also, if anyone wants to chime in with any connections their build would have with a super charming popular really nice guy, so nice he almost seems fake, I fully implore you to do so, so he fits in better. Like if they just like the guy or do any recreational activities with him, or maybe he was active in a life event or something. He's a people pleaser, rat of sunshine, voice of reason type.Finally, would a custom perk that makes him appear trustworthy to unshakable faith be too dumb, or should the unshakable faithers just be kinda weirded out by him deep down?
>>96889925Ngl, asking people to go along with a npc on a mp general is kinda fouls the vibes. Can't you use a pc that feels close to the idea you had?
>>96889925Use a pc or be ready to pilot multiple characters like Kohaku anon, why would anyone dump one of their life event slots into a NPC you're making for presumably 1 or 2 plots
>>96889925Does he really need to be a build? If it's a disposable character then he doesn't need stats. You'd be hard pressed to find someone here wanting to connect to an NPC when the point is featuring other player's characters in your story rather than just your own builds.
>>96889925ngl this role sounds like it would suit Itsuro
>>96890244Some people have trouble using other PCs, the pressure is less when you know you don't have to worry about stepping on other narratives. I do aggree that a whole build is a bit excessive, but there are merits to having NPCs at least listed somewhere. Of course trying to get over that problem would be better, but that takes time.
>>96890776>Some people have trouble using other PCsAnd they won't get better at it by doing this
>>96890593He even has protection against Unshakeable Faith if I remember correctly.
>>96877834Following Tomaki-anon's example, I have made a build for my character's Evil Star Yokai as a named member of the 100 Demons.>Kiro no Kawa, the Demon of the Evils of Love, aka Saito Mimi, Higan Dorm Managerhttps://rentry.org/tbpmkp54
>>96891155oh
>>96891155Insanely peak. I'm already imagining The special episode where other 100 Demons have to be disguised and act on-site for whatever reasons to ambush or intimidateYou'll have to do Kakito's makeup sometime. I do like how you gave her a title too!
>>96891155Abysmal dogshit
>>96891155>-> {400px:500px} <->735x1058 imageAnother one. Why do y'all keep doing this? Do you not see how squished the image is?
>>96891155We are so cooked if she gets her hands on Ai.
>>96891267Thanks, Tomaki-anon. I thought your idea of building the Evil Stars was really cool.I look forward to having the Yokai begin to interact with the HLA, too. Kenji is Kiro's little darling and if anyone hurts him the streets will run red with blood.>>96891284Don't worry anon, she'll be in worm form for you if you really want it.>>96891304I just guess the aspect until it looks mostly right.
>>96891155As much as I love it when anons define their character's Evil Star drawback, I think letting it exist in the real world (even if it's not the main body) crosses the line. One of the few cornerstones of the mp we have is that yokai and the like aren't supposed to show up in our world without a bleeding zone.
>>96891433Maybe she’s the one behind the Mysterious Bleeding Zone mission? Used it to enhance her ability to act in the real world, until the other builds find the zone and destroy it.
>>96890178>>96890182Trust me. If a PC would work for this, I would use it. Anyway, all I asked was if I can write "he and Shu play bowling on the third weekend of the month", "he supported Alyona's club racket", or "Parfaite and him have tea parties biweekly", some shit like that. I don't care if I can make anons care about him, I just asked if I could get any of the builds in universe to give a slight shit. I'll also defend the wasted life slot part by saying he's an NPC, so he could just not count towards the total, duh?>>96890244Making him as a build scratches an itch. Not only is it fun for me, it creates a shorthand in case anyone wants to use him for whatever reason.>>96890593I really, really do not think Itsuro anon would agree for his build to be involved in this plot if he knew what it was. It would make very little sense for Itsuro.
>>96891433That's what the Garganta is for. There's a tiny Bleeding Zone hidden inside the projection allowing it to exist.
>>96891499If she exclusively showed up at night when the city wide bleeding zone was active, that would make sense.
>>96891355does this look right to you?
>>96891562nta, but yea
>>96891562damn she's a bad shorty
>>96891584That's a worm, bro
>>96891155When’s the HLA’s next casting call, I need to join for the wormussy
>>96891504>"he and Shu play bowling on the third weekend of the month", "he supported Alyona's club racket", or "Parfaite and him have tea parties biweekly"These definitely sound like things Itsuro would do to make sure he has a finger in every cookie jar. He hates Shu, but he can pretend to be friends for the bit.
>>96891511I think having a job makes that difficult. The dormmaster or whatever you call her only showing up at night would get her fired methinks.
>>96887190>MeiHasn't changed at all. She was bought up in the traditions of spiritualism, of the mystic arts, and the world beyond. If anything, coming into contact with the Idea World just confirms that her religion is the correct one.Now having met the supernatural, she has come to agree with what she was taught; that what is able to be controlled by mankind must be, and what cannot be controlled must be destroyed. Ghosts must be put to rest; their time here is over. Yokai must be exterminated; they are abominations. Demons? Banish them back to the pits of darkness, before they tempt a weak poor person into selling their soul.
>>96891624I mean, sure? But it's not about if Itsuro would fit for the character or not, I'm not choosing to use him over Itsuro for something they both fit. The closest character that would actually fit this plot would be Reiji, and that's still 'modifying' a build too much for my liking. It would be extremely strange for Itsuro and this character to share the same plot.
>>96891631She should not have that job in the first placeThe build cheeses awakened to have a walking bleeding zone with no one the wiser and it implies itself as someone responsible for multiple city wide missions like serial killer or rioting. It's trying to make an antagonist at a higher scale than the Humanity Lost bunch but with the same rules, which the cyoa just wasn't built for. And the worse part is that its powers end up the same as an Idolon's instead of something novel to challenge the builds. There was 0 benefit to this character sheet.
>>96891687I ultimately agree and do not vibe with her either.
>>96891687>with no one the wiserThere's going to be an arc with the Student Council detectives figuring it out and working to get rid of the mole, actually.
>>96887190>RenkaIt changes nothing for her. From her perspective, there is no great revelation to be made because she has always been certain of such things. All that has occurred is the attainment of an enhanced understanding of the world's makeup. The fact that the barriers separating the realms are created rather than natural gives confirmation to her diagnosis of the mortal realm's sickness: humanity exists in a diminished state due to living in speration from their spiritual halves, causing a rot of the soul to occur.
>>96891819NOOOO THE CATGIRL VIRUS YOKAI INFECTED HER
>>96891837Idea: Catgirl is too powerful...
>>96891849I'm a 2005bab, were catgirls even really a popular thing in the year 2000? I can't think of anything that really had them.
>>96891985I don't remember any, but I was 5 back then, so not that great of a source. Maybe some digimon stuff?
>Most anons are zoomersFeel old yet, Gramps?
>>96892017There's Gatomon, but she's more cat than girl. Tamers comes out in a year with Renamon, but again she's a fox not a cat.>>96891985Pilot Candidate and Tokyo Mew Mew both started that year.
>>96891985We ALL watched Tank Police.
>>96892139No one tapping in these #PreHistoricGoons unc
>>96892160'PreHistoricGoons'? We call them Velociraptors.
>>96891819Sounds like she rides on the same kind of vibe as Kohaku towards the Idea World.
>>96892228She would indeed be quite open to assisting to Kohaku and the Ideal Destroyers if approached. She's also vulnerable to being prayed on by Humanity Lost builds for similar reasons, with the difference being her doubts of her place among humanity playing a larger role. Betraying what few friends she has is a large barrier, however.
>>96891155Ngl, this is a bad character and a bad take. Kakito works because he is merely a representation and illustration of what he is capable. This is just a blatant case of PC+/they are stronger because they are VILLAIN, and somehow they still use the same character sheet as a player.This villain can somehow infiltrate Higan, with both Kaoru and Yae there, who have Extra Memory and Detective, and them do nothing while it is infiltrated?It is a named yokai, 5 star threat at least, even with a spare body, it is more than enough to lure out the SC and student body to a trap and kill them there as nothing stops it from interfering directly in a Bleeding Zone or The Idea World. It has access to the bloody door. It can reverse search for the location of the door and ambush the SC and everyone else the moment they step out to fight or explore.Besides it having an actual player sheet, which means it can be killed by pcs.
>>96892448>somehow infiltrate Higan, with both Kaoru and Yae thereJudging by >>96891716 that's not going to be very successful.
