This is About Writing This
>>97094615inb4 "This page doesn't do anything!"Aside from setting up a tone shift, which some of you will disregard, look at the last panel. This really is a transition into more serious matters.
>>97094615Haley's comment is funnier than the actual punchline at the end.
>>97094665Good callout, I actually hadn't noticed Nale's souls leaking through. We're almost certainly in for a repeat of this.
>>97094615>call backs to 20+ years agoHeh, they just went down a level
>>97094665>>97094758I'm not sure I grasp how Nale got there so fast. My best guess is the threads of creation that blocked the main route disappeared in the meantime.
>>97094665Yeah, it coulda been worse
upscale.
>>9709466>inb4 "This page doesn't do anything!"I mean you are not wrong. It is boring and unfunny. Not every comic writer is able to be so consistent in this regard.
>>97094886Don't forget that they have access to teleport tricks too. They might've just gone right past the threads if they were thin in places.
>>97094915Thanks, anon!
>>97094615I think it's a decent pagenot amazing, but it worksit actually moves the plot while delivering a jokeand it doesn't make me want to bleach my eyeballs like the last two pages
>>97094665Unfortunately, it's just simply not very good.
>>9709466Why were these deleted?
>>97097356They're posts from 2010. Anon quoted 9709466 instead of 97094665.
>>97094615wait what the fuck are those things on the ground, like little stick figures or homunculi
>>97094615Order of the Stick and Outsider on the same day?!
>>97094665oh shit!well, looking foward the resolution of this. See you guys on boxing day
>>97097575They're the soul energy being pumped into Nale. He has an aura of it now.
>>97097575>It's only 8 pages ago since this was introduced>It was shown as recently as 3 pages ago>Anon has already forgotten
