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One more fic rejected! It's actually "War broke out in Heaven", but don't worry about it.
Previous thread: >>3639910

>Someplaces to fic
https://www.fanfiction.net/
https://archiveofourown.org/

>An archive of fics compiled and shared by a kind anon
https://mega.nz/#F!oaphAAaZ!6FnZFfH2f-Vx5d9A47pSow

Post links to fics and discuss them and fanfiction in general. Link fics you like, your own stuff, anything goes as long as it's yuri.
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Kitanai Kimi ga Ichiban Ukaii (Kitanai Kimi ga Ichiban Kawaii)
https://www.pixiv.net/novel/show.php?id=17418619
I mtl'd it and added illustrations, so you could fully enjoy the Gifu atmosphere.
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>https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12637113/1/Supernatural-Affairs-Nine-Cases
I can’t believe I put off reading this for so many years, it’s absolutely delightful. It’s not perfect, I’ve got a couple of nit-picky issues around persistent typos of particular words and a little ‘swallowed the thesaurus’ syndrome going on, but the world building, pacing and character interaction are just so on point. Totally recommend.

I didn’t much care for the LWA criminal AU though, I always feel like dumb anime genki heroines I say this with love, they’re my favourite anime archetype like Akko are really hard for westerners to get a handle on and she felt too OOC for me to get into it.
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>>3690777
What was the LWA one
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>>3690796
Chance of Fire
https://archiveofourown.org/works/12595836/chapters/28690092
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Any good long Bleach fics? I did read the Now You Feel Like Number None that was posted in the last thread, any more recommendations?
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>>3690823
Oh, I really struggled with that one too. Couldn’t understand the character of Akko and her cohorts at all
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>write for 25 different fandoms
>get a new user subscription
Not sure what they're looking for here.
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>>3691134
Maybe they like your writing style generally? I’ve ended up in plenty of new fandoms because I found someone I liked enough to devour everything they wrote.
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>>3689623
>I fucking hate that fic, it's so fucking bad and I hate you for reminding me that it exists. Bad!

I'm a bit late on the reply, but genuinely, I'm curious - what about it don't you like? In general I'm not a fan of amnesia plots, so, for me, the fact that I even liked it at all meant a lot.

>>3690777
I posted that list in the last thread - I'm really glad you enjoyed Nine Cases so much. I agree that it's not perfect, and with your analysis overall, but, for as much as I like it, the big strike against it IMO is that the ending is totally rushed. The last two chapters or so really soured some of my good will for the fic, although the journey, over all, was great. The worldbuilding and characters as you said especially. I wonder if you feel the same about the ending.

As for the LWA fic - understandable. It was another one where I think the ending is a real issue with it.

As someone who also loves loveable genki retards, I generally agree; I've pretty much never seen that character type done too well, with the exception of a few fics here or there, but I gave that one a bit more OOC wiggle room because it was such a far off AU in the first place.

>>3691134
Probably just a fan of your style, which is probably a better compliment than you think if you write for so many fandoms.
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>>3691886
>I posted that list
I know this sound batshit insane but I was the one that asked for the list and surprise! I read Inter Nos first, all of it. Goddamit I think it ruined all other fics for me, now I want another monster of a fic just like that but a little bit to the right. Inter Nos isn't even the best work ever, but it's length and worldbuilding is outstanding. It clicked for me way sooner than To The Stars. I know nothing of My-hime or whatever so I went to read the other shiznat work and I was devasted that the swearing gave me whiplash. I can't believe I'm almost considering watching it too, but I remember the discussion in the last thread.
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>>3691890
>and surprise! I read Inter Nos first, all of it. I think it ruined all other fics for me
Not going to lie, I actually do kind of find that insane - I've been putting off a re-read myself because I never made it to the very end when I first started it. It really does feel monolithic though; I can think of very, very few other fics with its scope of worldbuilding and consistency, etc.

This rec belongs in the 'original lit' thread, but you might enjoy: https://www.novelupdates.com/series/clear-and-muddy-loss-of-love/

It's a chinese yuri webnovel, I believe 1million plus words, that had equally great worldbuilding/characterization/etc. I spent the better part of two months reading this non-stop. Not super comperable to Inter Nos, but somewhere on the same spectrum in my opinion


>I can't believe I'm almost considering watching it too, but I remember the discussion in the last thread.
That other nee-san in the thread was wrong - I think it's worth the watch, with the understanding that it's got quite a host of problems. At the very least, it may help to get you into other Shiznat fics, and there are at least a couple other possible pairings you might find that you like. It's not a super long show or anything anyway, and there are enough enjoyable things about it
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>>3691900
>spoiler
lol I've read all of those novels, I think they're at best 6/7. I don't really enjoy how the author always crumble in the 3 act and has too much drama without they characters properly talking about their feelings, haha. My ranking would be ruzhui > fgep > jwqs | but all are like, cool concept, shit execution.
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>>3691890
If you dug Inter Nos despite not having much MaiHIme knowledge, you can try Elementary Dear Natsuki too
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>>3691900
>spoiler
does anyone have a file of this? seems like the translation is exclusively hosted on a google doc and i rather not take like, 2-3 mins every time i want to get to the next chapter.
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>>3691996
Found this online, dunno if it's good. Alternatively, at the end of each chapter you can go to the next so I don't see the problem with the google docs, I read it no problem (it even has 'dark mode)'. Yes I retrieved it from a weird site and just hosted it so quality might be dubious.

https://drive.google.com/file/d/1iuLPhY39rhDBnGDuGn1mSP6Sjd2FV8Ht/view?usp=sharing
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Jesus, they really must be struggling.
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>>3692004
>not having an ad-blocker
Hasn't that site been dying for years at this point?
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>>3692005
It's been a while since I've read from ff.net. I don't remember it having ads at all.
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>>3692004
>phoneposter
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>>3692007
if you are on a phone then just download their app, it doesn't have ads
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>>3691145
>>3691886
I didn't even think of that but you're both right, I got some wonderful concrit today that said exactly that. It gave me the warm fuzzies for sure but I honestly don't think that I do anything special, I just follow the basic conventions of writing fiction and try to improve whenever I get concrit. I really want to quit my job for three months and see if I can get a book published though, I want to shove more yuri into the world.
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>>3692547
>i want to shove more yuri into the world

i just like writing female characters

I haven't properly written anything yet but i've got two settings i've been working on for a couple years that are like super female heavy but one of my many worries that if/when i actually get to putting it out there it'll attract the fucking nuts that think the likes of touhou is a blatant feminist propaganda or such nonsense....
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>>3692610
>but one of my many worries that if/when i actually get to putting it out there it'll attract
Dude, who cares. Write for yourself first and foremost. If you're happy with it you will find people that will appreciate it the same as you do.
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>>3692610
>propaganda
That's literally every otaku and weeb if you wanna be broad in definition of propaganda. They're also some of the shittiest people in existence that actively avoid niche shit 8 times out of 10
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>>3692610
>touhou is a blatant feminist propaganda
You've no idea how much I wish it was.

Feminist propaganda is good, anyway, so go for it. Making hoards of subhuman incels seethe is just a fun bonus.
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>>3692610
>it'll attract the fucking nuts
If it attracts an audience, it'll attract nuts regardless of the spectrum. It's the internet.
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>>3691890
>I'm almost considering watching it too,
If you do, watch the edits made by some /u/ anon, they remove some of the het. It can't fix all the other flaws though.

https://mega.nz/folder/mk9BRLxa#yqh0l2rSwahL02zAVYB_dw
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>>3692004
Hello fellow brazilian anon.
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>>3692610
Of all of the things I've ever seen 2hu criticized for, feminist propaganda isn't one of them.

>>3691935
Agreed with the rushed ending on Clear and Muddy - though I still really enjoyed the "journey", even if the ending was meh. I intend to read "female general" next. A 6/7 is still pretty good for a translated Chinese webnovel, all things considered.
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>look up f/f ship
>find fics where the actual ship is a m/f/f ship
How fuckin irritating.
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Writing dirty talk for two dorks is hard. I don't want them to make love, I want them to fuck like two gay cats in heat.
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>>3697249
I feel like dorks getting down and dirty like that would just skip talking and keep it physical as much as possible.
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>>3697211
>look up f/f ship
>60% of the works are actually m/m with the f/f as a side couple who get mentioned like twice each 5th chapter
Fujos can't tag for shite.
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>>3697373
That's why I usually filter m/m out
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>>3697523
>filter m/m out
>lose huge chunk of fanfics with f/f front and center that also happened to tag m/m as a side couple
Unfortunately this is not the best solution.
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>>3697526
Their sacrifice is acceptable.
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>>3697373
>>3697526

something like i proposed in >>3650883 would be a good solution to this, but that's unlikely to be implemented, i THINK you can do something like this in Hydrus but unless as a community we decide to mirror AO3/FF onto it, such a thing is a pointless effort
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>>3697211
I find it irritating that even if you only filter f/f, multi works appear too and you have to exclude everything but f/f for it to properly work.
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>>3691886
>I'm a bit late on the reply, but genuinely, I'm curious - what about it don't you like?
It's both that I find the story bad as well as not liking the author's style of or skill in writing. There's something off when it feels like I can see the puppetstrings dangling from giant god-hands in the sky - sort of takes one out of any scene. Their stories are always forced, constrained, railroaded and convenient with the characters being shallow and fake, half-baked and utilized not unlike sockpuppets.

9 Cases was mentioned earlier. Now that's a story which beats whatever this bad one was called in every aspect. The characters are strong and feel like actual people with human personalities. The pacing is pretty good and the tension feels real and earned. Another mammoth rwby story, what was it, let me be your poison?. That one does characters better as well. Like I hated Blake from that one, but she was a real character at least and not just a shadow on the cave wall. A super annoying and a truly awful woman woman deserved a comeuppence which never happened due to the authors' own political views, presumably. But she was an actual character. I could easily imagine meeting and hating her in real life.

With the bad one it feels like everything in the story is construed for the purpose of the plot and the scenes and nothing exists outside of it. The set just ends and the author doesn't care. While technically true for every piece of fiction by definition, good stories can sell the illusion of the depicted worlds being actual worlds filled with people and happenings of all sorts which we don't see. This author doesn't do this at all in any of the stuff I've read from them. All they care for is hitting the next thing in their bulletlist on their way to whatever resolution they had planned.

Everything is just so fake and shallow. Like a... a soap compared to good kino. Just bad! But this is just like my opinion which I shared on this our mongolian public forum.
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>>3697290
I can see that. But the smut in Summer's End was so good that it made me want to step up my own game. Making an OL beg for release is such a power move.
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>>3697526
Give some prominent examples, I also filter m/m out
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Any fics where protagonist goes back in time with knowledge of events and unfucks the canon?
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>>3697851
I am obligated to fight you. Name the time and place.
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>>3700489
Unfucking the canon sounds less interesting to me than the protagonist completely fucking up the canon by throwing self-insert-kun in front of a bus and comforting the grieving waifu character with tribadism.
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>>3700510
don't bother posturising, i'll be heading for the bridge soon anyway
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https://archiveofourown.org/works/38212159
An x Kohane (Project Sekai)
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>>3699601
If you don't filter m/m & m/f most of the pages are full of it. Only tags I leave unfiltered are f/f, gen, and multi. Gen with f/f are usually some of the best fics since you get a real story with the Yuri - rather than some generic coffee shop au crap where none of the characters are in character.
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>>3700921
>Gen with f/f are usually some of the best fics
Ahaha, yeah no.

>>3700489
I've only been reading sylvaina recently, so that's why.

Love Forgotten, Life Reclaimed
>https://archiveofourown.org/works/28614828/chapters/70133427
This doesn't exactly match what you asked for but it's good. Basically, Sylvanas is an undead and doesn't want to be anymore so the time-being provides her with an opportunity. Her body and mind retrocedes in time and she goes back to being the Ranger-General before all shit went down, but Jaina remembers. It's them navigating this, will Jaina tell Sylvanas or not? That type of thing. Has a happy ending.

The Girl Who Escaped Hell
>https://archiveofourown.org/works/20784044/chapters/49391903
Basically what you want.

Lacrymosa
>https://archiveofourown.org/works/16403030/chapters/38398064
Lacrymosa : Requiem
>https://archiveofourown.org/works/38048353/chapters/95037574
I will be honest, I don't like this author and I find these fics confusing and kinda bad, you might like them though. They do go back in time and as you want and unfucks the canon but it happens mid-fic but the fights doesn't last long (in the original). Requiem might be better but there's only one chapter so time will tell (get it? ahah).

Eternal Return
>https://archiveofourown.org/works/5512940/chapters/12843055
Not what you want but a good time-travel fic.

Fixed in Time
>https://archiveofourown.org/works/23237794/chapters/55640161
A Hermione and Narcissa work. They are, clearly, OOC. The author really hammers down their opinions on things (you guys would call it sjw I believe) and they tend to have block of paragraphs. However, if you find in yourself to get past these eccentricities, you will be rewarded with a amazing story. Hermione goes back in time and Narcissa reluctantly follows to save the world. Hermione helps Narcissa overcome an abuse marriage and they talk about boundaries. They get together and then they help their current-time versions get together.
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>Actually sat down and wrote out a fairly competent, complete outline

Let's just see if I can actually do the hard part now and write the story. I never really made such an in-depth outline for myself.
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Any good rape fics from the rapist's pov?
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>>3702865
https://archiveofourown.org/works/15688557/chapters/36453264
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Looking for the best Mercy/Pharah fic recs you have
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>>3702797
Keep up the good work, onee-sama
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>never finished the Harry Potter series, written or cinematic
>in love with the Hermione/Narcissa pairing
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>>3704173
I watched only the movies and despite the het I still liked Bellamione and Hermione x Fleur back in the day
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>>3704361
Somebody told me Loony Lovegood gets together with a man, which is fucking bullshit she has the aura of a hyper dyke. Fuck.
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>>3690041
Any good bdsm stories? Less torture more exploring dominant submission sex. Especially if the dom is more outgoing and sub is more quietly good natured and kind. Not so much breaking and torturing the sub but nurturing and dominanting I guess.
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>>3704422
I wrote a story about a lesbian couple going on a movie date and having public sex where one gets dommed. Read it if you like.

https://archiveofourown.org/works/38864331
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>>3704173
me with every single pairing from a non f/f series
i dont really consume any videogames/mainstream tv shows
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>>3704422
here's a Life in Strange chasefield fic of that nature, was pretty good when i first read it back when it finished, sounds just like what your looking for.

https://archiveofourown.org/works/8226214
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>>3703456
Much appreciated, nee-san
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>>3704422
>Any good bdsm stories? Less torture more exploring dominant submission sex. Especially if the dom is more outgoing and sub is more quietly good natured and kind. Not so much breaking and torturing the sub but nurturing and dominanting I guess.
I've got a couple of short Betty/Veronica stories that fit the theme:

https://archiveofourown.org/works/17195711
https://archiveofourown.org/works/10466676
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>>3704642
>>3704839
>>3705271
Super appreciate you guys.
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>>3703447
>Looking for the best Mercy/Pharah fic recs you have

Short: https://archiveofourown.org/works/7827472
Long: https://archiveofourown.org/works/14147922/chapters/32606685
Porn: https://archiveofourown.org/works/15144842/chapters/35120207
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>>3702918
>600k words
extremely impressive but im not very far in and bella has already flipped, so idk where the story could go from here that would actually be interesting from a character development perspective
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Any fics about pregnancy, but that was done via science and not futashit?
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>>3708689
Sorry, I've only written magical pregnancy.
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>>3708691
That's fine too, as long as it doesn't involve magical dicks.
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>>3708789
No magical dicks, just a magical experiment that went awry.
https://archiveofourown.org/works/38233900
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>>3708954
That was a fun and cute fic, thanks anon.
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>>3708691
I really the 00’s era of magical pregnancy before futa ascended for various reasons. It leant itself to cute and funny fic that’s just not possible with the alternatives.
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>>3708689

Fleurmione

>Tender is the Night
https://archiveofourown.org/works/28588152
Note: For the sake of what you're asking this is a sort of spoiler but you will want to know the child was magically conceived because both Hermione and Fleur wanted it, kind of, so the child is Fleur's but it takes a while to get there, enough for some angst and misunderstandings. Hermione's fling is barely mentioned desu.

>One Step at a Time
https://www.fanfiction.net/s/6148504/1/One-Step-at-a-Time
Note: Doesn't fit what you asked since the child isn't Hermione's and Fleur's ( I believe it's Bill's) but he's pretty out of the picture and the fic focus mainly in the Hermione and Fleur budding romance. I remember it being alright.

Elsanna

> With you by freudianslip(?)
Note: I believe this one is in the archive's of this thread. Deleted due some drama back in the day, it's been so long but I think the kid was a magic kid from both Anna and Elsa.

Supercorp

>Supergirl in Training
https://archiveofourown.org/works/9802709/chapters/22012490
Note: tag pretty much sums it up, lighthearted read: supercorp baby from the future accidentally drops in pre-relationship

And you can take a look at this too if you want: https://supercorpbookmarks.tumblr.com/post/165894397172/supercorp-kid-fics

These days I seem to be reccing and remembering and all it makes me is want to write one for myself, I daydream so much but I'm a terrible writer. Sometimes I think of starting an archive/rec site, because the only way a fic won't be lost is if someone remembers and recs them. Sure AO3 tag's is cool, but so much fics were written pre-AO3 and fanfiction's net is shit to find specific femslash (don't even get me started on other sites!). Can you believe I found a wild X-men longfic of an cannibal OC and Emma frost and damn, how was I supposed to find it if a random person didn't rec it in a femslash forum? We have it good nowadays to find yuri but I wonder...
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Okay, can you guys give me some fics/rewrites where male MC mrguy is written out or replaced with a girl so the whole thing is /u/ now? There are so many things I simply not bother with because of all the self-insert otaku pandering shit. The longer the better
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>>3709974
Overlady by Earthscorpion drops the male MC of Familiar of Zero and pulls off a lot of other changes to the setting due to the crossover. However it doesn't become full /u/ as the MC turns out to be bi and doesn't fully figure out or accept that she likes girls till fairly recently. Even if it does seem like her upcoming lesbian relationship will last and generally be a whole lot healthier.

It's an excellent fic in general though and worth reading even though it's not pure /u/. Also long as fuck.
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Any notable long Strike Witches fics? I don't think I've read a single one.





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