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>>41084169
>>41082348
As I said last thread, the oneshot is finished being written https://ponepaste.org/9978 so now I'll get to drawing, including whichever scenes anyone would like to suggest. Here's the anchor post for that.

>>41084171
>>41084169
Cute shys

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>>41082419
Shit I almost forgot, but thanks! Was really fun writing the Wallflower one, already know how I'm gonna shorhorn Gloriosa and Vignette into the story as well. Also I really really feel your sentiment about Celestia.
>so this livens the story up a bit
I agree. It does its part well.
>>41082587
>>41082747
I do what I can to go somewhere I haven't before. Also planning how I could possibly write a 100% non-lewd sleepover story at some point in the future if anyone would read that.
(reposting in case the post I just made last thread gets missed)

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>>41084255
AWWWWWYEAHHH Big Bewbity!!

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>>41084255
There was a story on Furaffinity about a policewoman seducing an arrested streaker until he came and passed out;
https://www.furaffinity.net/view/3413749/

I can imagine Tempest Shadow doing similar to a Canterlot High delinquent under the effects of Cadance's love magic.

>Officer Tempest Shadow was sent to investigate some strange happenings at Canterlot High.
>After a run-in with the equally strangely affectionate Principal Cadance, her body started getting unbearably hot.
>The temptation to "apprehend" male suspects was starting to interfere with her patrol.
>Tempest is frustrated with some punk kids loitering around at night, in more ways than one.
>They were the same kids she overheard were doing that NNN challenge.
>Her burning libido told her to "put them in their place" and "set them straight".
>Tempest is mentally set on doing something about the "loaded weapon" in his pants.
>Once in her custody, she empties his "concealed weapon" of its fat "load" once he she sees it pointing at her in a panic.

>>41084350
>on furaffinity
>EQG thread
>nohooves
>not even related to FiM
Go back furfag, I’m so sick of seeing you retards flood catalog to the point that something has to be fucking done to get you to finally fuck off

>>41084350
Ooh I like this premise
He must have known what he was asking for

>>41084358
Having a bad day there, Anon?

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>>41084358
>Mindbroken by merely seeing a furaffinity link
I kek'd

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>>41084610
>Fluttershy’s face

>>41084726
Eh I'm not seeing it

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>>41084610
>nohooves

>>41080545
>It takes you a second to realize what just spilled out of your mouth.
>Thankfully, it was only something verbal and not anything that could feasibly stain the carpet.
>A response comes in the form of a collective gasp from the seven girls in the room.
>”Really?” Fluttershy asks you.
>Her tone is a little difficult to parse.
>You can’t tell for sure how genuine she’s being.
>For all you know, she could be the one leaving you notes.
>Now’s not the time to interrogate her.
“Yeah, I’ve been finding these mystery letters either right under me or in my duffle bag.” You reply, presenting your most recent note as proof.
>Fluttershy analyzes the one-sentence correspondence meant for you, and the other six girls huddle close to see for themselves.
>You hold out the letter and seize the moment to study their faces.
>None of them are looking particularly guilty or like they’re hiding something, but the fact that one of these seven lovely young ladies has been secretly professing their attraction to you is incredibly compelling.
>”How many of these love letters did you get?” Twilight asks you, without any inflections in her tone of voice that would give away her being the messenger.
“Four, I think.” You answer, then going to root through your pockets to find the other notes that’ve been left for you.
>You present the previous letters you’ve received: “I have a crush on you.”, ”Sometimes I get lost in your eyes.”, and ”I could listen to you talk for hours.”
“Yeah, four so far.”
>”Ooh, how exciting! Who do you think’s your secret admirer, Nonny?” Pinkie excitedly asks you.
>You step back and place an inquisitive finger on your chin, eyeing all seven of the girls with suspicion.
“...I’ll be honest, you two were my lead suspects.” You say, pointing to Twilight and Fluttershy.
>Fluttershy looks away nervously and Twilight awkwardly chuckles.
>”W-What do you mean, ‘were’?” She asks you.
“It’s a little narcissistic to say, but it’s my belief that the reason all of you’ve been hyping me up for this sleepover was to set me up with the one of you who’s caught feelings for me. You backed off after realizing you were getting a little handsy with me, and Applejack had to pull you away from me.” You explain to Twilight and Fluttershy, then turning to Pinkie.
“Then that would mean you’d be ruled out, too. Seeing as how Twilight stopped you from… licking me.
>Pinkie gives you a guilty giggle.
>”Alright then, boy detective, who IS your prime suspect?” Sunset goaded you.
>You take a deep breath.
“Right now, it’s you.” You answer, turning to Rarity.
>Rarity softly gasped and defensively placed her hand on her chest.”
>”Why, Moi?”
>You shrug.
“I don’t know, leaving anonymous love letters for me to find is the kind of romantic thing you’d be into. That’s the best theory I’ve got right now, anyway.” You say.

>>41085039
>”He’s got a point there.” Rainbow remarked.
“Don’t get too smug, you’re in second place.” You say to Rainbow.
>”What!?” She cried out, making Rarity and Sunset giggle.
>”Why!?”
“I dunno, you’re not good with mushy romantic stuff and this is the best way you can express your feelings!” You answer.
>”Pfft, as if I’d EVER resort to doing something as dorky as THAT. Trust me, if I had any kind of crush on you, you’d know it.” Rainbow insisted.
“You mean like how you were eyeing me up earlier?” You grin at her.
>Rainbow sputters at you.
>”I didn’t leave you any stupid love letters!” She exclaims, red in the face.
“Yeah, well, the night’s still young, so we’ll see.” You remind her.
>”Hey now, don’t wanna tease her too much, there’s pretty good odds she ain’t the one.” Applejack reminded you with a grin.
“You’re in third place, by the way.” You say to her.
>”Oh, yeah? How come Rainbow’s ahead of me, then?” Applejack interrogated you.
“Because you’re a little more blunt when it comes to this kind of stuff. I feel like if you felt something for me, you’d just tell me.”
>”Aww, does that mean I’m in last place?” Sunset fake-pouts at you.
“Hey, come on, you’ve been weirdly flirty with me since we first met. I ruled out the possibility of you being into me like that a while ago.” You remind her with a grin.
>”That’s some serious sleuthing, Nonny!” Pinkie giggled.
>”Aww, you didn’t think I had any genuine feelings for you? You wound me, new boy.” Sunset teased you.
“Then how come you haven’t said anything the whole semester?”
>”Because I wanted to make the moment memorable? What, you think I’d just confess my fiery attraction to you in between classes?” Sunset rebutted.
>”And by the way, that could be why Twilight, Pinkie, or Fluttershy had to be stopped from leaping on you and giving in to their lust earlier. We could’ve spent all week planning just the moment where you two would share the most beautiful and romantic first kiss ever shared in Canterlot, can’t you imagine how disappointing it would be for your secret admirer to spoil that by tearing off her clothes and begging you to take her right here in the middle of the sleepover?”
>”H-He gets it, Sunset, you don’t have to be so descriptive.” Twilight interjected, hiding a faint blush.
>Sunset’s words made everyone else a little flustered as well.
>...And she raises a good point.
>You don’t know how much planning was done behind your back.
>You may have four love letters, but you’re not the one holding all the cards.
>The girls surrounding you two are watching you intently.
>Any one of them could have been leaving you the notes.
>You relent, nodding your head.
“...You’re right.”

>>41085046
>”You don’t know that! You could’ve been right on the money when you said Rarity’s the one you’ve inflicted many restless nights upon~” Sunset countered you.
>”That’s not what he said!” Rarity objected.
>”It’s like you said, the night’s still young, anything could happen~” Sunset reminded you, placing her hands on your shoulders and stepping close to you.
>You squint at Sunset as you lean closer to her.
“...You know who’s been leaving the notes, don’t you?”
>Sunset answered with a sinister giggle.
>”Maybe~”
>Before you could say anything, Sunset placed a finger on your lips.
>”But wouldn’t that take the fun out of the whole thing? Wouldn’t you rather spend the night getting close to each of us, looking deep into our eyes, trying to find the truth we’re trying to hide from you~?”
>Sunset has such a way with words.
>It’s making your custom-made pants snug.
>You pray the girls don’t notice.
“...If my secret admirer’s any of the girls here, I doubt she’ll appreciate you getting so touchy.” You say to Sunset, crossing your arms.
>She gives you a playful shove.
>”You can worry your pretty little head about who your secret admirer is later, right now we’ve got a sleepover to get back to! Right, girls?” Sunset proclaimed, turning back to the six.
>A group of faintly flustered sounds of agreement came from the six.
>”Now, what was it you wanted to do tonight?” Sunset asked Fluttershy.
>Fluttershy glances between you and Sunset as she tries to answer.
>”Uh… karaoke?”
>”That’s right! Everyone gets ten minutes to pick a song while Pinkie and I get everything set up.” Sunset announced, clapping her hands together.
>Everyone hurried off to a different corner of the room to scroll through their phones and pick a song they could sing.
>You spent the first few minutes sitting on the floor and staring into space, just taking it all in.
>You didn’t know what to expect from this sleepover, but it wasn’t any of this.
>Not only does one of your friends have a crush on you, all the girls are showing interest in you.
>It might be just because you’re rocking the midriff, but all this is so new to you.
>You’ve never seen Pinkie so lewd.
>Twilight seemed like she was hypnotized by your body.
>Fluttershy almost kissed you!
>Your face feels like it’s glowing.
>What else is gonna happen tonight?
>What if you’re right about Rarity, Rainbow, or Applejack?
>You can’t be wasting time, you don’t want to be called up for your song and be empty-handed.
>You scrolled through your phone’s music library, hoping something will stick out to you.
>None of them do.
>You’ve never been much of a singer.
>Especially compared to the girls.
>They’ve all got such lovely singing voices.
>You can only hope you’ll get called up first to get the rough opening act out of the way.
>”Oh, one more thing!” Pinkie called out to everyone.
>”It’s gotta be a love song!”
>Damn it.

>>41085047
>You’re running out of time.
>You don’t really listen to a lot of love songs.
>...Honestly most of the music you listen to is video game soundtracks.
>Those typically aren’t known for their lyrics.
>And while your Latin isn’t up to snuff, you’re not confident One-Winged Angel has much to do with love.
>You keep scrolling and scrolling, hoping to find something that you could sing decently.
>You’re not hitting those high notes, that’s for sure.
>”Three minutes left!” Pinkie announced.
>Come on, pick something.
>You’re coming up short.
>So many songs, so many that are debatably related to love, so little time.
>You nervously look around the room to see how everyone else is doing.
>The girls are sitting comfortably on the couch, carpeted floor, or beanbag chair.
>Pinkie’s just about set up the makeshift stage and connected the bluetooth microphone to Rarity’s sound system.
>Come on, pick something, Anon.
>Wait.
>Slow down.
>Take a deep breath.
>Remember what Sunset said.
>”Go with the flow.”
>”Focus on having a good time.”
>You inhale.
>You exhale.
>You’re worrying too much.
>Like what you’ve been doing a lot today.
>It’s not like you’re competing in front of the entire school.
>It’s just karaoke with friends during a sleepover.
>There’s nothing at stake, there’s no awards to be won or lost.
>It’s all for fun.
>It’ll all be good fun.
>You’re gonna sing your best, and you’re gonna have a great time.
>This crop top’s gonna help you do that.
>And it’s not like they’re gonna throw eggs at you if they don’t like your performance, unlike your old school…
>”Time’s up! Hope you’ve all picked something good!” Pinkie announced.
>Oh, God.
>Pick something, now.
>You shut your eyes, blindly scroll down the list of songs on your phone, and when you feel your intuition hit, you press down on your phone screen.
>...
>...You could’ve done worse.
>It’ll have to do.

>>41085050
>Pinkie giddily stands atop the makeshift stage with Sunset as the rest of you sit down in front of her.
>You end up sitting in between Rarity and Applejack, with Twilight, Fluttershy, and Rainbow in front of the three of you.
>”Alrighty, who wants to go first?” Pinkie asked.
>Before you could volunteer to be the first to sing, Pinkie spoke up again.
>”Just kidding! I’ll be going first! It’ll help get those of you with stage fright all loosened up and ready to sing your heart out!”
>Dang.
>Pinkie’s probably right about this, maybe seeing them put themselves out there will help ease you up.
>But you’re still nervous.
>You don’t have any reason to be nervous, but your hands are getting a little sweaty.
>Pinkie leaned over in Sunset’s ear to whisper something.
>Sunset giggled along with her and typed away at the nearby laptop to set up the song.
>”Hey, you nervous?” Applejack quietly asks you.
>You sigh.
“...Yeah, a little. But I know I shouldn’t be.” You admit.
>”Aw, shoot, Anon. I’m sure you’ve got one heck of a singin’ voice.” Applejack encouraged you.
>”Indeed! You’ve a nice voice, your singing is bound to be lovely!” Rarity pitched in, nudging your shoulder.
“Yeah, well, we’ll see…”
>Pinkie presses a button on her microphone, and the sound system buzzes to life.
>The sound of Pinkie breathing in and out is amplified by the two speakers set up on either side of the stage.
>The thought of your voice being amplified makes you a little more nervous.
>If you fall on your face, the entire town will know.
>Well, maybe not a TON of people.
>Rarity’s family is the only one living on Canterlot’s main street.
>”Alrighty, here we go!” Pinkie excitedly said, pressing the spacebar on the nearby laptop.
>The music starts.
>https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gJLIiF15wjQ
>Playful laughter is shared between you and the girls as Pinkie belts out the lyrics.
>She’s really into it, too.
>She’s moving around in time with the beat, making extravagant gestures to emphasize her singing, she’s right in her element.
>It’s not what you’d immediately think of when it comes to love songs, but it’s close enough for you to allow it.
>...You have to admit, the song’s a guilty pleasure of yours.
>Damn those 90’s pop stars and their insidiously catchy music.
>Pinkie puts a real flair on that song that you’ve listened to more times than you care to admit.
>It’s impossible to not get infected by how much fun she’s clearly having on stage.
>Sunset, Twilight, and Fluttershy join in on the chorus, but you decide to sit that out.
>Don’t want to upstage Pinkie, after all.
>Your time will come.
>Once the song’s concluded, Pinkie is surprisingly not out of breath.
>The six of you laugh good-heartedly and applaud her, which Pinkie responds to with a deep bow and incredibly wide smile.
>”Okie dokie, who wants to go next?” She asks you all, wiping some sweat from her forehead.

>>41085058
You certainly are keeping me guessing with the notes stuff. Though here's my latest theory.
>Sunset is placing the notes and on the notes is stuff each of the girls have said about Anon

>>41084265
Unf

>>41085058
>>Damn those 90’s pop stars and their insidiously catchy music.
That's the gateaway for Anon. He can pick a shitton of songs, like:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=tbNlMtqrYS0
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ZhIsAZO5gl0
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=EErSKhC0CZs

>>41084610
I enjoy Fluttershy’s wetsuit having the sleeves and leg pieces being removed to make it a one-piece swimsuit. There’s something about the idea that it used to be a full wetsuit that makes it now being a one-piece twice as lewd as it originally being a one-piece.

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>>41084885
That's the best part!

>>41084885
Why do people who post this pretend they didn’t have 100+ pony threads to choose from? Is your dead nhnb site not enough? /mlp/ is barely more alive than there outside of rare happenings, so I’m just confused.

>>41085525
I love the upside down skirt flip wardrobe malfunction.

>>41085675
It's low effort shitposting Anon, never give it the time of day

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>>41085058
Glad Pinkie is the type to take charge. She's such a good friend, getting them to sing a nice song like that.
>>41085132
it's obviously Rarity's mom

>>41086300
Wait, what about Rarity's mom?

>>41084248
>a 100% non-lewd sleepover story at some point in the future if anyone would read that
I’ll be honest, I don’t hate your idea but I think it’s a mistake.
Surely *someone* out there will read that but by its own design it abandons the point of what we want.
There’s a reason why most eqg sleepover fics end up glorified harem smut and Cosmic Butthole is closely following that trope set by many before him.
There’s a reason why the great general for it that once graced this board was called the LEWD sleepover thread.
Readers just want you to get them invested in the characters then have Anon fuck them one by one. It’s by no means new or original but it never was since the beginning lol.
Subtract the thing the people always wanted to see on repeat then start writing and what are you left with? What would you even write about? I wouldn’t expect many readers at all let alone replies.
It seems you already understand this but you’re proposing it anyway, why? I give you credit for not going ahead with it before asking if people want it, but is it worth the effort?
I look forward to your next update but I think you should reconsider this idea, gray. I really do not think it would work, or at least not on this website.

>>41086364
She's got it going on.

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New Canterlot Exchange devlog.
https://homeschool-studios.itch.io/canterlot-exchange/devlog/731508/a-not-so-soonish-devlog

>>41086681
Cute Adagio!

>>41086681
Hell yeah! Really looking forward to this one. Snoot Game and I Wani Hug That Gator! got me into visual novels and this is the kind of premise I'd want the most in an EqG visual novel.
Reminds me of an idea I had for my dream game of Bully set in Canterlot High: a God Hand style build-your-own-combo system where you could choose how you fight in game. Like after grappling your opponent, you could headbutt them, knee them in the stomach, clothesline them, give them a haymaker, or sweep their legs and throw them to the ground
It's way easier to dream up this stuff than actually make, but it's fun to imagine. Maybe you could even unlock new fighting moves by beating certain bosses, like beating the captain of the football team gives you the ability to tackle someone to the ground, then pick them up and throw them.
>>41085560
It's great because it's visually communicating her character development as she comes out of her shell and her swimsuit

Also, for the next OP, be sure to switch out the Story List google doc link with this one: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1zOXWA9Sk2Jx3mRzic0F-SMfBReeRLRXz/edit?usp=sharing&ouid=103506761716451555172&rtpof=true&sd=true

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>>41086515
I understand where you're coming from, and you're right but for a different reason.
I've seen how this plays out before: Someone writes something a lot of people wanted and they all read it, then a second person does it but almost no one's reading it because everyone already got what they wanted, and the juice ends up not being worth the squeeze. This is why I have a slight feeling most people reading Cosmic's green now won't be so interested once any second writer here does a sleepover green. So I feel like I might as well approach the premise completely differently anyway, then just kind of see where that goes. Because I pretty much have a moral obligation to rewrite the ones I did years ago in my hilariously shameful cringe era that I think aged super poorly:
https://desuarchive.org/mlp/thread/30863056/#30883155 (will make paste for the full thing soon)
https://desuarchive.org/mlp/thread/33298124/#33381692
I have now found both of them during my hunt for more and more content from the larger google docs dead urls.
>>41084284
I really hope you see this post because I 100% want to give it a shot, but it might not pan out at all like I said above. I don't know if you noticed, but I rarely ever write the main six/seven anymore, and do lesser known characters instead because there's more blank spaces to fill in with whatever I want. That coupled with the fact that I don't update anywhere close to every day would make it extremely difficult to get/keep people invested enough to interact. I'd have to make it a CYOA or something, which would require me to update waay more often than every two to three weeks anyway, which I do not trust I will do. But I wanna try anyway for the reason I stated in the first part of this post.
>>41086799
>Also, for the next OP, be sure to switch out the Story List google doc link with this one:
Yeah, I apologize for rushing too much to think of that. I will definitely do that. While I'm still a little mad about the character limit, the OP has indeed been getting too long in recent years. I should move/take some more old stuff out of it since I kinda don't have a choice anymore at this point. Would you be up for making a ponepaste page for storing the "Less Recent Writefags" section of the OP or do you want me to do it? Either way works for me.
>>41085058
I really felt that part about insidiously catchy music from the 90s.
https://youtu.be/15UffN8eilI?feature=shared&t=24
Karaoke night is actually perfect for sleepovers, I probably won't use that in my future green I mentioned above, but Pinkie was adorable as always here.
>>41085560
You just gave me an idea.

Sorry if this plaintext post was a bit tedious to read for some.

>>41087022
Honestly you can feel free to remove my Lightning Man green from the OP. I'll be the first to admit it isn't the best thing I've written here, I just put it on ponebin to make sure it's preserved for those who enjoy reading it.

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>>41087040
Will do.
But I am still going to see about storing the less recent writers/stories into one paste page and just having the url to that in the next OP to clean it up a little. So I might just do that with a new paste on my account unless you or someone else wants to do it. I'd much rather someone other than me (as long as they actually do it in good faith and keep things updated) store the OP links and stuff somewhere, but I'll do it on my Ponepaste if that becomes necessary.

>>41084171
The first scene where they strip Principal Celestia naked by ripping her clothes off against her will!

>>41085058
>”I’m going next! Lemme show all of you how it’s done!” Rainbow was quick to answer.
>Quicker than you.
>Be honest, you were never gonna beat her to the punch.
>Rainbow excitedly pulled up the song of her choice and gripped the microphone.
>”You all better be ready for this!” She hyped you all up.
>https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_EBvXpjudf8
>Now here’s a song you’re not embarrassed to admit liking.
>Rainbow’s head rocked in time with the beat and she strummed an imaginary guitar before the vocals came in.
>Her scratchy voice isn’t one you would’ve pegged for being good for singing, but she sings with such bravado that she basically wills it into working.
>If you had Rainbow’s confidence, you’d be way further ahead in life.
>But she’s got the skill to back up her confidence.
>You get swept up in the rockin’ music, nodding your head along with the beat.
>Rainbow’s a natural with the air guitar.
>You notice she’s accurately strumming as she sings and rocks around the stage.
>If she actually did have her guitar, she’d sweep this karaoke night.
>Something about Rainbow’s performance sticks out to you, though.
>Every now and again she’d make eye contact with you.
>It shouldn’t get to you, but it’s always during choice lyrics.
>”Down the street, I'm the girl next door”
>”I'm the fox you've been waiting for”
>Then, later in the song,
>”I'll give you somethin' to live for”
>”Have you and grab you 'til you're sore”
>Come to think of it, Pinkie was looking at you a lot when she was singing, too.
>Mainly when she was telling what you gotta do if you wanna be her lover.
>...Is this another one of Sunset’s schemes?
>Is she, or Pinkie, or whoever, trying to throw you off your investigation?
>The girls around you are enjoying Rainbow’s singing.
>To varying extents, granted.
>The Runaways are hardly Rarity’s favorite band.
>The song comes to its echoing conclusion and Rainbow throws her head back for the finale.
>You and the girls applaud her incredible performance.
>It’s difficult to say whether Pinkie or Rainbow put on the better performance, they sang such different songs in such different ways.
>You’re thinking about this wrong, anyway.
>It’s not about being the best singer, it’s about having fun.
>”Great job, Rainbow!” Fluttershy congratulated her.
“Yeah, that was awesome!” You agree, making Rainbow beam with pride.
>”I’m not entirely sure that counts as a love song.” Rarity muttered.
>”It totally does!” Rainbow insisted.

>>41087572
>”I’ll go next, this ought to be more in line with what you’re expectin’.” Applejack volunteered, getting up from the floor and getting her song ready.
>”Oh, alright, but I’m going next.” Rarity insisted.
>Man, ripping off this Band-Aid is gonna be harder than you thought.
>With a familiar drum riff, Applejack’s song began.
>https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ABfQuZqq8wg
>Rarity’s immediately more pleased by this choice.
>Applejack takes to singing the lyrics belonging to both of the singers in the song.
>She really pulls it off.
>Most people might not have thought so, but Applejack’s a lovely singer.
>You’ve never really seen much of this side of her before.
>She’s normally so focused on being the tough and humble farm girl, seeing her sing about love is new to you.
>And she’s definitely making eye contact with you while singing.
>Especially during the chorus.
>”Ain’t no mountain high enough”
>”Ain’t no valley low enough”
>”Ain’t no river wide enough”
>”To keep me from gettin’ to you, baby”
>Is this what this karaoke thing is all about?
>To give each of the girls a chance to serenade you?
>Sunset planned this karaoke stuff with Pinkie, after all.
>If that’s the case, then Applejack’s in the lead.
>Her song’s the most overtly romantic one, compared to Rainbow and Pinkie’s selection.
>Oh, God, this just got more intense.
>What are you gonna do when you go up there?
>Get it together, Anon.
>Applejack’s singing, not you.
>Her song wraps up soon enough, concluded with Applejack taking a humble bow with a smile.
>Another round of applause comes from the crowd.
>You make eye contact with her while clapping, making Applejack quickly look away from you and towards Rarity.
>”How’s that for a love song?”
>”Applejack, if I was the lucky young man you were singing to, I’d have fallen helplessly in love.” Rarity answered with a smile.
>Rainbow looked away to roll her eyes.
>Applejack’s making a compelling argument for being your secret admirer.
>Maybe third place was too low for her.
>”What did you think, Nonny? Wasn’t AJ amazing?” Pinkie excitedly asked you.
>The girls turn to face you.
>Applejack looks especially interested in what you have to say.
>You manage to smile at her despite how much pressure you’re feeling.
“You were… amazing, Applejack. I never knew you could sing like that.”
>They’re all real happy with your answer.
>Applejack gently laughs.
>”Yeah, well, I don’t really let a lot of folks see this side of me. Consider yourself lucky, city boy.” She lightly teases you.
“Oh, I do, don’t worry.” You assure her with a smile.

>>41087576
>”Now, I believe it’s my turn.” Rarity reminds Applejack, getting up on stage to get herself ready.
>Applejack obligingly returns to her seat on the carpet next to you.
>She’s sitting a little closer to you than before, and she’s still got that smile on her face.
>Rarity takes a moment to compose herself before the song starts.
>https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=LOZuxwVk7TU
>Oh man, another song you’re a little too familiar with.
>Before the lyrics kick in, you think about how the girls have such varying tastes.
>Pinkie’s song was from the 90’s, Rainbow’s song was from the 70’s, Applejack’s song was from the 60’s, and Rarity’s song is from the early 2000’s.
>Wouldn’t it be crazy if everyone ended up picking a song from a different decade.
>Come on, that’s not what you should be thinking about right now.
>The scheme is clear, Rarity’s picked this song to be all sexy and seductive.
>Well, you’re onto her.
>It’s not gonna work.
>”Baby, can't you see I'm callin'?”
>”A guy like you should wear a warnin'”
>”It's dangerous, I'm fallin'”
>Oh, God, it’s working.
>You’ve known Rarity for almost the entire semester but you’ve never heard her like that before.
>Diamond-cut sensuality.
>She knows what she has.
>She’s swaying her hips as she sings.
>Her eyes are half-lidded.
>And she never breaks eye contact with you.
>You’re feeling exposed again.
>The confidence your new look gave you turned on you.
>Rarity’s using it against you.
>You’re covered in her handiwork.
>She has you in her grasp.
>Sensuality is laced into every word of the early 2000’s hit she’s singing.
>Her soft, breathy voice ensnares you.
>It’s like Rarity forgot she was singing karaoke.
>It’s like the only thing she sees right now is you.
>Any guy at school would kill to be sitting in your position, but you’re too hot under the collar to savor the moment.
>When the instrumental break plays, Rarity’s hands slide down her body to her thighs.
>Her hands trail back up her body, dragging her pajama shirt up just enough to give you a teasing look at her midriff.
>Oh, fuck.
>Is Rarity about to start stripping?
>You nervously look around at the other girls to see what they’re feeling.
>They’ve gotta be super uncomfortable.
>But… it doesn’t look like they are.
>The girls all look like they’re waiting for something.
>Applejack’s rocking in place, Twilight’s gripping her knees, Fluttershy’s glancing at the clock on the wall.
>You want to get a better look at what Rainbow, Applejack, and Sunset are feeling, but your eyes are magnetically drawn back to Rarity’s seductive singing.
>She finishes the final chorus and sings the outro.
>”Intoxicate me now with your lovin' now”
>”I think I'm ready now (I think I'm ready now)”
>”Intoxicate me now with your lovin' now”
>”I think I'm ready now”
>Rarity’s not singing anymore.
>She’s inviting you.
>She’s daring you.
>Then the song ends.

>>41087577
>The girls give Rarity a sound of applause, but you sit this one out.
>You’re still stunned by her sexy serenade.
>You’re sure your face is as red as a tomato, you’re positive.
>The looks she gave you while singing are gonna stay with you for the rest of your life.
>”Wow, Rarity, that was super hot!” Pinkie congratulated her, completely unfazed by her salacious performance.
>”Thank you! I do try!” Rarity thanked her, completely shedding the persona she wore while singing.
>”Yeah, that was something, alright…” Rainbow grumpily mumbled.
>”What did you think, Anon?” Twilight asked you.
>Suddenly, the ceiling lights appear more like the lamp in an interrogation room.
>”I bet it was your favorite of the night~” Sunset teased you.
>Rarity leaned towards you and batted her eyes at you.
“I… Well…”
>You shakily exhale.
>You’re sweating.
>You can feel Applejack and Rainbow looking at you.
“...It- It wouldn’t be fair to say it was my FAVORITE. I mean, Pinkie, Applejack, and Rainbow did their own thing, it’s not really a fair comparison to make.” You manage to say, earning a giggle from Sunset.
“But… That was incredible.” You say to Rarity.
>She slyly covers her mouth as she responds with a flirty giggle.
>”Why, thank you, Anon!”
“Really, I’m just worried about how I’m gonna follow an act like that. You girls are making me feel like I’m about to go on stage at a concert and the warm-up act is Queen.” You remark with a self-deprecating chuckle.
>”We haven’t heard you sing yet! You could be just as good at singing, but that’s not as important as you getting up there and having fun!” Twilight reminded you.
>Yeah, Rarity looked like she was having a lot of fun up there.
>”Who’s up next?” Pinkie asked you, Twilight, Sunset, and Fluttershy as Rarity got down from the stage and sat down right next to you.
>Being sandwiched in between the two girls who serenaded you is hurting your ability to volunteer.
>You can feel their emotions radiating off of them.
>They’re infecting you.
>If Rarity’s the one leaving you the notes, you’d expect a trail of rose petals leading to her bed.
>And you almost dread to imagine what Applejack could do to you with those toned, muscular legs and hips of hers.
>Almost.
>Fluttershy still isn’t feeling up to performing, and Sunset’s clearly up to something.
>She’s hardly the type to get stage fright.
>But you’d think Fluttershy wouldn’t be having stage fright here, she’s with her friends.
>Maybe it’s the love song part that’s getting to her.

>>41087579
>”I’ll go next! Maybe it’ll get the rest of you warmed up!” Twilight volunteered as she got up.
>You’re plenty warmed up already.
>As Twilight’s getting everything set up, you feel Rarity lean into your ear.
>”You were a wonderful audience~” She whispered to you.
>You can’t turn to look at her.
>When your eyes meet again, she’ll have you under her spell.
“T-Thanks…”
>Nice one, ladykiller.
>Applejack’s hand grazes across yours.
>You freeze up.
>Twilight finishes setting up, grabs the microphone, and hits play.
>https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gM7Hlg75Mlo
>Ah, there we go.
>You’ve got a soft spot for these kinds of pop songs.
>Nice and wholesome, not brimming with sexual tension.
>”Here we go again”
>”I kinda wanna be more than friends”
>”So take it easy on me”
>”I'm afraid you're never satisfied”
>Twilight sings it so nicely, too.
>Her voice carries the lyrics in such a genuine tone.
>It feels less like a song and more like a genuine confession of love.
>You can tell she’s a little awkward being on stage.
>She’s more focused on the wall behind the group of you.
>Twilight must have more experience singing in the shower.
>When the chorus kicks in, she finds it within herself to sing a little louder.
>”Oh-oh, I want some more”
>”Oh-oh, what are you waiting for?”
>”Take a bite of my heart tonight”
>It might be because you’ve never heard Twilight really address a huge crowd before, but you’ve never heard Twilight vocalize so triumphantly before.
>Her smile is so pretty, too.
>In the brief bit of instrumental between the chorus and the next verse, your eyes meet hers.
>It seems like her confidence falters a bit, but she presses on with the singing.
>You don’t judge her, you doubt you’ll do much better.
>And her voice is better suited for singing than yours.
>As Twilight sings, she regains her confidence.
>This song clearly means a lot to her.
>The way she sings it, it feels less like a pop song you’ve heard on the radio a bunch and more like she’s genuinely confessing her feelings.
>Maybe she is.
>After the song’s chorus came the bridge.
>Twilight clutches the microphone and sings in a slightly quieter voice.
>Her eyes are shut as she sings.
>But as Twilight gets closer to the end of the bridge, she carefully opens her eyes and looks at you.
>That one, incredibly brief moment between the fourth and fifth line where your eyes meet hers freezes everything around you two.
>Twilight takes a deep breath and sings the rest of the song with passion.
>It’s almost night and day compared to how she started.
>Now it’s like she wants the entire town to hear her.
>She’s letting her body move with the music, rocking back and forth with the energetic beat.
>It’s really incredible to see.
>You can’t help but smile.

>>41087582
Rarity went for a killer immediately.
But those songs hardly about love, except for AJs, probably.
And all this time, Anon is sitting here, with his stomach at display, like a total manslut.
Damm, Rarity knows her game well.

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>>41087330
As you wish. I usually rush over two days at very most drawing something, but I'll take my time this time and spend about 4 to 5 days. I'll have it out by Monday-Tuesday if all goes well.
>>41087577
>>When the instrumental break plays, Rarity’s hands slide down her body to her thighs.
>>Her hands trail back up her body, dragging her pajama shirt up just enough to give you a teasing look at her midriff.
>>Oh, fuck.
>>Is Rarity about to start stripping?
Hell yeah, I see what you're doing here. While still drawing out the character-focus to get us invested into the girls as much as possible, using lewd moments like this to make us /feel/ like the dam containing the full-on smut is breaking even though it isn't yet. Pretty much how this anon >>41081213 put it last thread.
It's extremely great at getting readers super engaged with a story like this, I always liked this strategy.
Especially how it makes the eventual payoff feel 20x more satisfying.
>>41087582
Great use of different songs for each girl's personality. Looking forward to more.

>>41086681
>homeschool
Is this going to be a Homestuck-like? Don't get me wrong. I would've loved a pony FiM dating sim before an EqG game.

>>41084171
What the other anon said but if you do this like your Celestia downblowse pic then I can’t wait

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>>41087582
Cherry Bomb was super fitting for Dash. I took a guess she was going to go with that song and I was grinning ear to ear when it ended up being that one.
in;b4 Fluttershy tries to choose some crazy death metal shit at first

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>>41087846
Hey, Grey? Can we get a short story about a NNN winner who gets the confidence to date Rarity, but gets uncontrollably horny around her mom Cookie once he meets the latter at their house? It essentially boils down to a gradually losing struggle between his crush on Rarity vs his lust for Cookie.

>>41088081
>Homestuck-like
Not sure what you mean by that. I don't think the name of the group behind the VN means anything.

>>41088484
I know I'd always go for more milf or cougar content.

>>41087845
To be completely honest I'm not super into music stuff so picking a song for everyone to sing for karaoke was the hardest part of writing this green
I also wanted there to be a kind of escalation in the intensity of the love stuff in the songs, where Pinkie's song Wannabe is talking about how you've gotta get along with her friends to be her lover, and Rainbow's song has some intimate lines in it but isn't super focused on that stuff
>>41087846
Thank you! That's something I really wanted to focus on when writing this because I physically can't write a story where Anon gets right to slinging dick, especially in a harem story. I wanted to really make reaching the goal of turning the mane seven into his personal harem feel earned, so focusing on each girl's personalities and why they like him was essential for me. I'm really looking forward to seeing you guys read the sex stuff when we get to that at long last
>>41088081
Homeschool Studios is the name of the guys making the game, the actual game is called Canterlot Exchange
>>41087845
Rarity was real fun to write in this section, she's got that home field advantage
>>41088124
I thought so too! My initial pick was Miss Independent by Kelly Clarkson, but that got shifted to Rarity because while the theme of the song could feasibly work for Rainbow, it would be a better fit for Rarity. Of course, that ended up being replaced with Toxic, which I think worked out way better.

>>41089105
I want to imagine Rarity introducing her new boyfriend to Cookie, and Anon is fighting a huge erection the entire time being so close to her. He can't keep his eyes off the 80s-style MILF in the room, wearing her exposing tank top and tight yoga pants that show off her voluptuously pudgy body.

And now, he can't stop thinking of Cookie every time he makes out with Rarity. He wants that fat nut he saved up to go to Rarity, but a more primal part of him wants to give it to Cookie once they're alone with each othet, who's strangely passively receptive to his unconscious advances.

>>41089130
That actually reminds me of an idea I'd had. Where it's more Rarity who has a crush on him while playing hard to get and leading him on. Then Cookie Crumbles subconsciously entices him with her traditional home making skills, especially her cooking. On the surface she's just being a good and attentive host, but deep down she likes any attention she gets from him too much and wants him to herself.

>>41089167
And with Anon being a hormonal teenager with over a month's worth of nut saved up, he goes for the easier lay with the MILF?

>>41089183
Basically, also I really like the idea of a milf acting possessive with a younger guy she has no right to do that with, and even better if she denies she's doing that when she clearly is.

>>41089273
I prefer a slow burn lust where both parties try and fail to resist their powerful base urges towards each other while trying their best to act normal, especially when the sexual relationship is highly inappropriate. Examples would be a noticable age gap or already having a partner or being married, so Rarity's boyfriend losing control of himself and fucking her mom Cookie behind her back is perfect for this.

>>41089335
What I was saying isn't immediate fucking either. Something along these lines.
>Cookie Crumbles prepares fresh baked cookies and homemade lemonade for Anon when he comes over and presents them to him
>Insists on staying close to him and not letting go anywhere with Rarity while he eats and she fawns over him
>It's obvious to Rarity and Anon what she's doing, but she denies up and down she's doing anything wrong insisting it's 100% innocent

>>41089346
I know. I'm just saying that I prefer if Cookie wasn't consciously pursuing Anon. The latter is gravitating towards her without realizing instead because, as much as he wants to be with Rarity, his lust for her mother is slowly overpowering it. Cookie herself is mostly oblivious and being genuinely kind and motherly.

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>>41088484
That sounds like a fun idea to top off this https://ponepaste.org/9592 with. Sure, as soon as I'm done drawing. Or at least done drawing the first pic. Though I should point out that I'm too caught up doing other stuff to add any new full projects. If I'm not mistaken, I think the top three projects on my plate right now are:
>1. Wallflower/Juniper/Gloriosa/Vignette thing to finish ASAP so it's out of the way.
>2. Drawing at least 3 panels of Principal Celestia vs. love zombies by Tuesday.
>3. Writing more Bros With Benefits on FimFic by Tuesday-ish.
Out of like 5 or 6 total currently.
And these don't even include irl responsibilities.
>>41089106
Welcome, m8. I fully align with your "it must be earned first" sentiment, and hyping up readers with lewdness suspense has always been fun. I just have way too much on my plate to focus on doing that with several characters at once, which takes extra focus for me due to something I should probably confess.
As much as sleepover content is extra fun, I truly wish I was into harem content in particular like people here seem to be. It'd be easier for me to have fun with it.
Either way, I'm really looking forward to how you bring it all into full-fledged action time after all the momentum you're building up. You're doing a great job with it.
>>41089346
>>41089365
Okay, I've been reading what you guys have been saying and could probably make it work as long as it's fast-paced and doesn't take a lot of posts due to my current time constraints. Though, I'm not sure how I could make a past-paced slow-burn work. But I could try.

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>>41089831
>That sounds like a fun idea to top off this https://ponepaste.org/9592 with. Sure, as soon as I'm done drawing. Or at least done drawing the first pic.
Thanks!

I also want to imagine that the more Anon tries to focus on Rarity and her slim, busty figure, the more her mother Cookie and her objectively superior thicc bod encroaches on his thoughts instead. Displaying her assets to him obliviously through her tight shirt and yoga pants, and quickly making him erect. Unintentionally making euphemisms that bring sex to mind. Being touchy-feely over her excitement over Rarity having a boyfriend, mostly oblivious that her rubbing against him is making him ready to blow in his underwear.

It culminates in a visit to Rarity at her house for a date, just for only Cookie to be there instead due to a sudden change of plans, and a wait with her eventually leads that big load he was saving to be blown in her instead because he just couldn't contain himself anymore.

What leads to it? Maybe she invited him to do some joint yoga exercises, and they wouldn't stop grinding into each other while Cookie was mostly oblivious?

>>41089873
>What leads to it?
I would say the yoga exercises. And Cookie Crumbles has on an outfit that’s a little small on her, but she doesn’t notice just how revealing it is while inviting Anon to the room with her.

>>41089831
God, I know what you mean with that backlog. I've got a fairly hefty backlog of art that's gonna take a good while to get through, even without writing and my job

>>41087022
>I don't know if you noticed, but I rarely ever write the main six/seven anymore
I think you should sometime. As a full length green. Would be very interesting to see it done in your writing style with a unique twist you might put in.

>>41090530
got dayum

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>>41090857
Yeah. Not much feels worse than a backlog that keeps piling up higher, and higher and higher...
>>41090864
If it means anything, I semi-recently did this https://ponepaste.org/9403 though it's just a fun parody of cheap yet classic anti-premarital-sex slasher film franchises. Only reason I wrote it was because Friday the 13th and Halloween fell on the same month, which is actually pretty rare. Other than last year, the only other times that happened in the last 30 years were 2017, 2006, 2000, and 1995.
>>41089873
Rarity has to go to visit a fashion agent or something where there's an impromptu meeting and in-person attendance is mandatory. She probably knows what's going on but is trying to mitigate it but only inadvertently makes things worse (better).

>>41091664
>Rarity has to go to visit a fashion agent or something where there's an impromptu meeting and in-person attendance is mandatory. She probably knows what's going on but is trying to mitigate it but only inadvertently makes things worse (better).

Alt Idea;
Rarity still has to leave to the impromptu meeting, but she is just as cheerfully oblivious as Cookie to the impending sex between her boyfriend and her mother, and is none the wiser when the floodgates finally burst and the two rut like animals.

>>41091682
That could work too, yeah. I'll see about that.

>>41091664
>Casualestia
>muh dick

>>41092182
It's not Celestia, it's a teen girl that happens to look like her.

>>41087582
>Once the song ends you give Twilight an eager round of applause with the rest of the girls.
>Twilight’s the first singer tonight to be visibly exhausted after singing her round of karaoke.
>She’s pretty out of breath as she wipes a small buildup of sweat off of her forehead.
>”Heh… How was that?” She asked you all.
“You were incredible!” You say to her.
>”Yeah! You rocked!” Pinkie agreed.
>The rest of the girls voiced their compliments, making Twilight a little awkward on stage.
>”Aww, thanks, guys!” Twilight said, trying to hide her embarrassed blush.
“I never would’ve guessed you could be such a great singer, I might ask you to tutor me in that, too.” You half-joke.
>”Hehe, well, my door’s always open~” Twilight giggled with a wink.
>Man, where’d this Twilight come from?
>You’re liking this side of her.
>The room is filled with something of an awkward silence as you and Twilight just look into each other’s eyes.
>”Looks like I’m up next!” Sunset piped up, sashaying her way onto the stage and playfully nudging Twilight off to the side with a bump of her hips.
>Twilight stumbles off stage after being reminded that she’s not the only girl here with you and takes her seat beside Rainbow, who’s giving her a really smug look.
>”You know, I was just thinking it’d be best if Anon went last. Since we’ve never heard him sing, it could be a real fun way to end this thing!” Sunset suggested with a smile.
>Please, no.
>You were trying to get this out of the way as soon as possible, not be the main event.
>Your eyes meet Fluttershy’s.
>She’s good at reading you, she can tell you’re nervous.
>”Um, Sunset, I don’t mind going last. Anon’s awful nervous about singing in front of us.” Fluttershy stuck up for you.
>”He shouldn’t be! We’re not gonna make fun of him or anything!” Sunset assured her and by extension you.
>”Well, of course not.” Fluttershy agreed.
>”He’s only nervous because he’s never sung like this before! It’s like going for a swim at the pool! It’s not as cold if you just jump in!” Sunset argued in your favor.
>Fluttershy turned back to you with a sympathetic look.
>”...But we never really did ask you if you actually wanted to sing, so we’d understand if you wanted to sit this one out.” Sunset relented, giving you a glimpse of her more sensitive side.
>Fluttershy sits back, happy that you weren’t being pressured anymore.
>Save for her and Sunset, all the girls are looking at you with a mix of hope that you’ll say you’ll sing, and guilt about wanting you to sing.
>You’re still feeling the effects of the cider, you’re feeling brave.
>Besides, you don’t know how good of a singer you really are.
>That doesn’t really matter, anyway.
>As long as you’re having fun, the girls are happy.
>You’d hate to be a party pooper.
“Don’t worry, I’m gonna sing, and I don’t mind going last.” You answer.

>>41092495
>Fluttershy looks like she wants to keep insisting you don’t have to sing, but stops herself.
>”...Okay, I trust you.” She smiles.
“Besides, I’d hate to disappoint a bunch of pretty girls like you all.” You say with a bit of a flirty tone.
>The seven girls you’re friends with respond to your sly comment with giggles and blushes.
>You don’t know where that came from.
>Saying something like that is like flashing a slab of raw meat in a lion’s den.
>Looks like the alcohol’s doing its job.
>”Well, save the charm for your song, Anon. As for now, just sit back and enjoy the ride~” Sunset grinned at you, starting the music.
>https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Hc3XIbUuTMc
>Man.
>If there was some kind of trophy for singing as sexually charged as possible, Sunset’s really gunning for it.
>The way she sways her hips and arches her back, you’d expect her to start pole dancing.
>Her eyes, much like Rarity’s, never leave you.
>Her half-lidded eyes stay on you like a tiger lurking in the jungle.
>And like Twilight, it doesn’t even really feel like she’s singing.
>It feels like she’s talking directly to you, adding the melody to her words like cinnamon to a cup of hot chocolate.
>The lyrics leave her mouth, curled into a sinister grin, like venom from a snake, paralyzing you.
>”You can pretend you don't wanna know”
>”But I read the signs from your head to your toes”
>”Yeah, you don't need to say a word 'cause
>”Ooh, ooh your body talks”
>Rarity sang in a really seductive tone as well, but this is way different.
>Rarity sang like she was beckoning you forward.
>Sunset’s singing like she just cornered you.
>It’s what she’s best at.
>The first thing she did when you met her was corner you in the hall.
>This isn’t like her usual flirting.
>It’s more charged.
>The song got more intense, and Sunset raised her voice to match.
>She continued her sensual swaying, now matching the electric guitar and rocking beat.
>Fluttershy’s moved a little closer to you.
>You could only tell out of the corner of your eye.
>Sunset’s got you in her spell, you can’t tear your eyes away from her.
>You’ve heard this song plenty of times before.
>But never like this.
>You feel your chest tighten.
>Why even do all this?
>If all this is about getting the girl leaving you notes to confess her feelings for you, then why does it feel like they’re all trying to serenade you?
>If Applejack or Twilight was your secret admirer, then why would Rarity and Sunset be all seductive like this?
>As the song draws to a close, Sunset steps off the stage and sings the final chorus right at you without even using the microphone.
>Sunset towers over you.
>She’s radiating heat.
>You’re burning up.
>You can only adjust your legs to try to hide your arousal.
>But it’s no use.
>Sunset knows you’re aroused.
>And you’re sure Applejack and Rarity know.
>Thank God you’re going last.

>>41092496
>”What’d you think, Anon?” Sunset teasingly asks you.
>Her breathy voice tickles your skin, spreading goosebumps down your arms and legs.
>The girls are all looking at you intently.
>None of them look jealous or annoyed, they’re looking like they’re expecting you to do something.
>You clear your throat.
“...You were hypnotic.” You answer honestly.
>Sunset’s grin widens.
>She leans closer to you.
>”Why, thank you~”
>Her hand finds its way to the waist of her pajama pants and slowly undoes the knot keeping them snug on her lovely hips.
>Sunset’s pajama pants sag down just enough to give you a teasingly small view of her lavender panties hiding underneath.
>”I love the way you look at me, Anon~”
>You’re getting harder.
>You’re gonna ruin these pants that Rarity worked so hard on if this keeps going.
>The other girls get closer to you.
>Like they’re closing on their prey.
>You’re trapped between Applejack and Rarity while Twilight, Rainbow, and Pinkie back up Sunset.
>They’re all breathing so heavily.
>It’s getting harder and harder to hide what you’re feeling.
>”Um… I’m gonna sing soon…” Fluttershy meekly spoke up, saving you from Sunset’s predatory gaze.
>Sunset turns around and gives her a friendly smile.
>”Sounds great! Knock ‘em dead, Flutters!” She encouraged her.
>”Rock on!” Rainbow goaded her further.
>”I can’t wait to see what you’ve got!” Pinkie added.
>You can’t say anything.
>You’re still recovering from what Sunset did.
>As Fluttershy gets set up, Sunset doesn’t return to where she was sitting in the front row.
>She sits down right behind you.
>You can feel her breath on your neck.
>She’s playing with the idea of touching you, you just know it.
>You can’t let Sunset control you like this.
>Fluttershy’s about to sing her karaoke song, she deserves your undivided attention.
>You scooch forward a bit, away from Sunset, Rarity, and Applejack.
>You can sense their disappointment at you escaping their grasp, at least for now.
>Rainbow, Pinkie, and Twilight shift where they’re sitting just enough to close you in.
>You’re surrounded by the girls.
>You look up at Fluttershy as she gets the song ready, worried that she’d be uncomfortable with what’s going on.
>But no.
>Fluttershy looks like she’s sore about missing out on the “fun”.
>She’s clutching the microphone with both hands, but it really seems like she’d be down on the floor with you and the girls.
>Which makes sense.
>She got really close to kissing you earlier.
>The Hell is with them tonight?
>You’ve never seen any of the girls like this before.
>Just yesterday they were all acting like they always do.
>There has be a full moon out tonight.
>If one of the girls was acting up, you’d let yourself indulge in a fantasy and think she had a crush on you.
>But they’re all acting up.
>They’re not acting like they have a crush on you.
>They’re hungry.

>>41092498
>This look from Fluttershy is only fleeting, though.
>She clears her throat and gets her song going.
>https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=w0ZHlp6atUQ
>Fluttershy’s singing voice always makes your heart melt.
>It’s so soft and genuine, like the voice of an angel.
>You honestly feel pretty honored to be able to hear her sing.
>It really shows how much she trusts you, to be this open around you.
>Her eyes are shut as she sings, but her head’s pointed up at the ceiling.
>Her voice gets a little shaky when she gets to the chorus.
>”Cause you'll be in my heart”
>”Yes, you'll be in my heart”
>”From this day on”
>”Now and forever more”
>Her eyes slowly open as the chorus ends, meeting yours.
>There’s that feeling again.
>The feeling that she’s melodically revealing her feelings to you rather than actually singing.
>But it’s very different from what Rarity and Sunset were doing.
>Fluttershy’s not trying to seduce you.
>It feels like she’s genuinely confessing that she has feelings for you.
>Feelings that she’s been holding for a long time.
>You can feel the vulnerability in her voice.
>She’s struggling to maintain eye contact with you, but you can tell she really wants to.
>”Don't listen to them”
>”'Cause what do they know?”
>”We need each other, to have, to hold”
>”They'll see in time, I know”
>Her singing gets subtly louder as she continues, like she’s getting more courageous.
>She’s making you feel warmer, but in a different way.
>Now you’re the one feeling a bit flustered.
>Being surrounded by the girls doesn’t help at all.
>You think back to the day you really got to know Fluttershy.
>It was after your streak of not getting beaten up at school ended when you defended Fluttershy from those assholes.
>But you got to spend the evening with her.
>Having soup and talking and watching My Neighbor Totoro.
>You’d have taken a hundred beatings and it would’ve still been worth it.
>One smile from Fluttershy is more effective on you than a hundred punches.
>Fluttershy walks towards the edge of the stage as she sings the final chorus of the song.
>Her legs are shaking a tiny bit, but she keeps looking at you.
>Her voice becomes that much more powerful as the song crescendos.
>She’s being so genuine and vulnerable.
>It’s clearly a lot of work for her.
>You hope for her sake she’s the one leaving you the notes.
>You couldn’t bear the sight of a heartbroken Fluttershy.
>Then again, you don’t know how much she’s aware of behind the scenes.
>There’s a real possibility that she doesn’t know who the girl leaving the notes is.
>The song draws to a close, and Fluttershy’s voice grows quieter with each line.
>She holds the microphone close to her chest and sings with her eyes closed.
>”Just look over your shoulder”
>”Just look over your shoulder”
>”Just look over your shoulder”
>”I'll be there”
>She opens her eyes and looks up at you.
>”Always”

>>41092499
>As the group gives her a round of applause, you can’t help give Fluttershy a warm smile.
“Fluttershy, that was beautiful.” You softly say to her.
>”T-Thank you…” She meekly responds, returning her gaze to the floor.
>She’s shyly smiling.
>”Now we get to hear Nonny sing!” Pinkie eagerly reminded everyone, bouncing in place as she spun around at you.
>”Last chance to back out~” Rainbow teasingly reminded you.
>You smile at her and shake your head.
“Don’t worry, I’m not going anywhere.” You promise her.
>”That’s the spirit!” Twilight cheered for you.
>”Knock us dead!” Sunset goaded you, nudging both your shoulders from behind.
>As you stand up to walk to the stage, Pinkie gets a chant going.
>”Nonny! Nonny! Nonny!”
>It doesn’t take long for the rest of the girls to get into it.
>Their excitement’s awfully infectious.
>These girls, they’re supportive to a fault.
>You wouldn’t normally jump off a bridge if your friends were doing it, but you would if the girls were.
>Thank God you had some of that cider earlier.
>It’s helping you win that fight against your stage fright.
>Once you’re on stage, Fluttershy gingerly hands you the microphone.
>”You’ll be great, I just know it.” She softly assures you.
“Thanks, Flutters. I hope you’re right.”
>Your hand briefly grazes hers as the microphone passes hands.
>Fluttershy’s confidence falters as she hurries off stage and gets herself seated where you were.
>Your palms get sweatier as you look across the small crowd of girls expecting the best vocalization you could manage.
>Pinkie’s looking at you like she’s expecting you to start tossing out candy.
>Twilight’s giving you a warm, reassuring smile and a thumbs-up to match.
>Rainbow’s sitting back with her hands behind her head, expecting something entertaining from you.
>Applejack’s leaning forward with her hands on her knees, showing a surprising amount of excitement.
>Fluttershy’s still giving you that soft smile that makes you feel all warm.
>Rarity’s leaning forward and batting her eyes at you.
>Sunset’s leering at you with her signature wicked grin.
>You shakily exhale.
>Cider, start pulling your weight.
“Here I go…” You nervously say.
>The sound of your voice being magnified by the microphone made your nerves a little more shaky.
>Quit stalling.
>Time to be a rockstar.
>You move over to the laptop setup and type in the title of your song.
>Your voice is a decent fit for it, there really aren’t any high notes.
>And it’s the most romantic song you know.
>Whoever your secret admirer is, she’s sure to swoon.
>If you don’t fumble the ball.
>You gulp, clear your throat, and press play.
>https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=LWXUdqvVO8Y

>>41092501
>Rarity’s eyes light up when she recognizes the opening notes.
>Twilight and Fluttershy are leaning forward with anticipation.
>You’re in the deep end now.
>So you sing.
“I know I stand in line until you think you have the time to spend an evening with me”
“And if we go someplace to dance, I know that there's a chance you “won't be leaving with me”
>Your singing voice is no match for Frank Sinatra’s, but you’re a little surprised by how not terrible you sound.
>Much like Fluttershy, you hold the microphone close to you and sing with your eyes closed.
>You don’t have an audience.
>You’re singing to yourself.
>Like you do in the shower.
>Sometimes.
“Then afterwards we drop into a quiet little place and have a drink or two”
“And then I go and spoil it all by saying somethin' stupid like, ‘I love you’”
>The atmosphere in the room changes.
>You don’t feel so tense anymore.
>Maybe it’s the singing, maybe it’s the cider, but you don’t feel so self conscious anymore.
>In the brief instrumental portion between the refrain and the bridge, you open your eyes.
>The girls are listening to you sing intently, sitting forward and watching you with wide eyes.
>Even Rainbow and Sunset are swept up in the moment.
>You’re doing good!
>This gives you the confidence to sing with your eyes open, facing your audience.
“I can see it in your eyes, that you despise the same old lies you heard the night before”
“And though it's just a line to you, for me it's true, and never seemed so right before”
>You don’t care who your secret admirer is.
>Whoever she is, she’s hearing you sing like you’ve never sang before.
>They’ve been serenading you with varying degrees of directness tonight, this must be what the girls felt when they were up.
“I practice every day to find some clever lines to say to make the meaning come true”
“But then I think I'll wait until the evening gets late, and I'm alone with you”
>You’re not looking at any of the girls in particular.
>They’ve been giving you so many signals tonight, now it’s your turn to be the romantic one.
“The time is right, your perfume fills my head, the stars get red, and, oh, the night's so blue”
“And then I go and spoil it all by saying somethin' stupid like, ‘I love you’”
>You’re feeling good.
>It can’t just be the cider doing this to you.

>>41092503
>As the instrumental break plays, you survey the audience’s reactions.
>Rarity, Fluttershy, Pinkie, and Twilight are absolutely enthralled.
>Applejack and Rainbow are putting up greater resistance to showing such mushy emotions, but their wide eyes and rose-tinted cheeks give them away.
>Sunset looks… strangely proud of you.
>Like this is something she’s been expecting from you all night.
>The song is approaching its end.
>Time to really stick the landing.
“The time is right, your perfume fills my head, the stars get red, and, oh, the night's so blue”
“And then I go and spoil it all by saying somethin' stupid like, ‘I love you’”
>Your singing’s making you do something really dumb.
>You're gonna end up regretting this.
>You just know it.
>But your heart's got your brain beat.
>You're too swept up in the emotion of the moment to think twice about this.
>You're gonna go all the way.
>As the outro calls for you to repeat three choice words in your softest singing voice, you cast your eyes across your enraptured audience.
“I love you” You sing to Fluttershy and Twilight.
“I love you” You sing to Pinkie and Rainbow.
“I love you” You sing to Applejack and Rarity.
“I love you” You sing to Sunset.

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>>41092505
Nice work, dumbass, you just sold your soul to a seven succubi.

>>41092674
Or maybe he’ll flip it and own their souls since this will technically take the harem route?

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>>41093167
It better be like that, or else

>>41087022
First anon you quoted here. Not sure I agree with your hypothesis that no one will read a possible sleepover green by you because another writefag already did it before you.
I think they will as long as you share the readers’ love for the humane 7 as characters, build up their connection with Anon first before actual smut, and keep frequently updating like Cosmic Butthole does. Look how engaging his green got just because of that.
100% no lewd I think would be shooting yourself in the foot here. This thread and board wants to fap to wish fulfillment.
I don’t see the logic behind your approach, no offense.

>>41093455
Most of grey’s fics have been whatever he feels like doing clashed with coomshit anons want him to write kek

>>41093520
That’s actually kind of what I mean.
Doesn’t help that as soon as the green is apparently only what gray wanted to write, there’s no lewd and the characters and setting are different from most EqG content. Not much of an interesting read for the type of anons this place gets despite being incredibly well written as a story.
In my opinion the problem is no one ITT encourages gray to write until they want quick smut. I think that’s a waste.

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>>41093455
>>41093520
>>41093646
The main reason I've been so focused on these fast one shots is because that's all I have time and patience for right now. I tend to lose interest in writing something after a few days. I still really do want to rewrite my old sleepover greens, but I also really do think that whatever desire for something like that from the readers is already being met. On the other hand, I've been getting tired of writing lewd for a while now.
I guess I feel like I missed a chance to leave this smut-fueled feedback loop I've been in with writing for this thread. A lot of which is probably my fault but whatever. I feel like I'll manage to make it work somehow.

Would still be GREAT if more people here did what you're doing. Letting me know if they want me to write what they want to read outside of smut oneshots. I do want to be wrong.

>>41092505
Getting really strong "Anon just sealed his fate" with those last few lines. I'm sensing possible lewd truth or dare next.

>>41092201
Her name's Summer Solstice iirc

>>41094369
Fun fact, she's the daughter I had with Celestia

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>>41094220
I want to just write again, I want to finish my Sunset Shimmer Pro Wrestling story and I want to do my Alanamous/Cheating Elements green but I may tweak that with a more slice of life with the G5 cast since they haven't been explored much. I also had another harem smut idea where Anon live in a trailer park with the main 6 and one by one he gets them pregnant and other trailer park boys shenanigans with a tentative title 'Trailer Park Girls' But I just feel so... empty and can never get that motivation back. Also, nowadays I feel like my writing has been lacking in many ways in my recent stories and writings.

>>41094369
>>41092201
>>41094451
Still pretty mad about staff members going on Twitter saying she and Celestia aren’t related when there was no reason to. I think it shouldn’t count when they do that. I love fandom headcanons especially when they’re simple and obvious like that one.

>>41094562
I blame Rally Flag. Not sure why or how but that autist might have single handedly influenced their decision to do that.

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>>41094490
I believe you still got the spark in you. If it's enough to reminisce on past ideas and want to finish them, then it's enough to write as soon as inspiration suddenly shows up unannounced. And it probably will sooner or later, I know this personally. Also those are some neat sounding ideas.
>Also, nowadays I feel like my writing has been lacking in many ways in my recent stories and writings.
I've been there. My best advice for that would be to try writing in a way where you couldn't tell it was you if you didn't know. At least that's what worked for me.
>>41094562
I think I remember hearing about this, but I don't think it matters.
>>41094609
I wouldn't blame the Rally Flag guy for it. He wasn't doing what he was doing maliciously or anything. The staff on Twitter just didn't know when to let the fandom have their fun, is all.

Also getting myself to start drawing right now has been annoying, but I'm just now starting. Why am I cursed to keep somehow waiting until the last minute?

>>41092505
>That feeling that elevated you to such heights as you sang faded from your being along with the music.
>The feeling that kept you from singing before the music started soon arrived to steal its seat in your mind.
>Time seemed to freeze for a minute.
>You went too far at the end.
>For fuck’s sake, you have ONE secret admirer.
>Singing those three magic words to ALL the girls isn’t casting a wide net, it’s carpet bombing.
>You were worried before about infighting between them about this stuff, you really should have known to not pour fuel on the fire.
>Before you could spiral into this abyss of doubt and regret, you’re met with the most enthusiastic applause you’ve ever received in your life.
>You’re frozen.
>You were expecting some polite applause at best, but this is more than that.
>They loved it.
>They loved your singing.
>”Oh, Anon, that was marvelous!” Rarity swooned, standing up with her hands clasped.
“...Really?” You ask.
>You’d ever accuse the girls of lying to you, you don’t think you were THAT good.
>”Heck yeah! You’ve been holdin’ out on us!” Applejack was quick to assure you.
>”You sure you don’t sing in your free time? You’ve got a beautiful voice!” Twilight rhetorically asked you.
>”Your singing was AMAZING!” Pinkie gushed, leaning forward at you.
“Oh, come on…” You humbly downplay their praise.
>You’re sure you’re blushing, but you’d be lying if you said you didn’t want them to keep going with this.
>”I’m serious! If you sing like that during the big music competition in the spring, you’d make Principal Celestia blush!” Twilight insisted.
>”If I didn’t know you before just now, I’d believe in love at first sight!” Pinkie added with a giggle.
>”See? What’d I tell you all? Anon makes one heck of a show-stopper!” Sunset reminded the group with a smug look.
>”He sure does.” Applejack agreed with a chuckle.
>You’ve never been praised like this.
>You can’t take much more of this.
“Thank you all, really.” You sheepishly smile.
>”Really, it’ll be your secret admirer who’ll be thanking you for that lovely serenade! Whoever she is, she’s a very lucky lady!” Rarity reminded you.
“Yeah, well, that song kind of does work better as a duet. I hope I’ll be able to sing with her in the future.” You admit, glancing across the room to see if any of the girls have a tell.
>Pinkie looks like she’s about to burst, Applejack’s looking flustered, Twilight awkwardly chuckles, Fluttershy’s blush deepens, and Sunset’s still looking faintly smug.
>Rainbow’s sitting cross legged, staring down at the floor with her hand firmly clamped over her mouth like she’s afraid of what might spill out if she isn’t careful.
>Fluttershy looks like she’s working up the courage to say something.
>After a moment of her moving her lips, she looks up at you.
>”I’d… uh… r-really like to listen to you sing more…” She quietly admits.

>>41094768
>”Then let’s have him sing more!” Sunset beams.
>Fluttershy’s eyes immediately widen.
>”Anon doesn’t have to sing anymore if he doesn’t want to! I’d never pressure you into doing anything you don’t want to!” She hastily assured you, feeling super guilty about how she complimented you.
>You know what?
>You’re in a good mood.
>You’re a great singer, apparently.
>You wouldn’t mind doing an encore.
“You know what? I’ll do another song!”
>”Yay!” Pinkie cheered, leaping to her feet.
>The girls all look excited at the prospect of hearing you sing some more.
>”Really?” Fluttershy carefully asked you.
“Yeah! Karaoke’s a lot of fun, turns out!”
>”Is it that, or do you just like being complimented?” Rainbow finally spoke up, asking you with a grin.
“That’s a fringe benefit.” You cheekily admit.
>”Fine, but I’m picking the song!” Rainbow demanded.
>”Rainbow!” Twilight scolded her.
“No, no, it’s fine! I trust her judgment.” You say.
>You open up your phone’s music library and hand it over to Rainbow, who gets to scrolling through it like a nosy parent looking for weed or nudie mags in their teenager’s room.
>”I’m awful interested in seeing what Rainbow’s gonna pick.” Applejack admitted to Rarity and Sunset.
>”Can’t imagine it’ll be as touching as Anon’s choice…” Rarity muttered.
>You can’t help but get a little nervous the longer Rainbow takes to pick something to subject you to.
>What if she picks something really awful just to see you squirm?
>If she picks anything by The Bloodhound Gang you’re gonna make her pay.
>That wouldn’t be something you’d expect your secret admirer to do.
>Unless she was trying to get you separated from the competition…
>”Would it be too late to suggest Anon sing something like what he just sang?” Fluttershy asked Rainbow.
>”Yep! Anon’s gotta flex those vocal chords of his, he can’t ALWAYS sing that lovey-dovey stuff!” Rainbow insisted, not taking her eyes off your phone screen.
“Sure I can!” You argue.
>”I’m on Rainbow’s side, pick something with real energy!” Sunset enabled Rainbow.
>”Pick something sexy!” Pinkie made sure to add, earning a stern look from Twilight, Applejack, and Fluttershy.
>Rarity and Sunset aren’t opposed to the idea.
>A moment later, Rainbow stops scrolling and grins.
>Oh, man, you’re nervous again.
>You grip the microphone a little tighter.
>Her fingers fly across the laptop’s keyboard and the music starts.
>https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vgQKF62sym4
>”Floor’s all yours, stud.” Rainbow grinned at you, tossing your phone back to you.

>>41094770
>Man, this song.
>It’s got some high notes, that’s for sure.
>It’s a little more… charged than your last one.
>...Fuck it.
>You’ve got this.
>You grip the microphone and sing the opening lyrics.
“I’m not the kind of red and blue you see on TV”
“I’m not gonna lock you up, I’m setting you free”
“Supersonic super trooper on a lover patrol”
“I’m a LoveCop (LoveCop)”
>It’s… a lot of fun.
>You don’t feel nearly as vulnerable.
>It’s way more cheesy, so you feel more comfortable singing your heart out.
>A much better fit for karaoke with friends.
>Maybe that’s what helps you hit those high notes in the chorus.
>Rainbow picked a good song.
>By the second verse, you’re really getting into it.
>Your movement is way more choreographed.
>You’re wiggling your elbows in time with the guitar riffs.
“Do you swear to rock the house, and nothing but the house?” You sing in a more gentle tone, rocking your hips to the music.
>The second time the chorus comes in, you’re really rocking.
>This music combined with your manslut getup makes you feel like a rock star plucked straight from the 1980’s.
>At this point, the girls aren’t even visible to you.
>You’re in your own world.
“I’m a LoveCop! (My pearls and shiny leather)”
>A world with neon lights and electric guitars.
“I’m a LoveCop! (fit perfectly together)”
>You’re rocking a denim vest, tight pants, and hair at a length that would make any authority figure shake their head in disapproval.
“Put your hands up! It’s now or never-ever!”
>But you don’t care.
“I’m a LoveCop! Here comes the LoveCop, baby!”
>Just beyond your reach is an army of fans, screaming your name.
>The softer instrumental section of the song comes in.
>You just let the music move you.
>Your body rocks and sways in time with the gentle beat.
>The electric guitar comes in.
>The energy of the song courses through you, bringing you shred your fingers on your trusty air guitar.
>At least, that’s how it looks to those viewing you on the material plane.
>But you’re in your own world.
>You’re tearing up the most magnificent electric guitar.
>There’s lightning coursing through your veins.
>You’re breathing fire.
>The chorus comes back to close out the song and you sing more triumphantly than you’ve ever sang before.
>You’re screaming the lyrics to the high heavens.
>You earlier concerns of being heard by the whole town have vanished.
>You want to be heard.
>You’re a rockstar.
>You’re hitting high notes you’ve never hit before.
>Your body’s moving on its own.
>If you had any less restraint, you’d toss your shirt off.
>But the song has to end.
>You wish you could stay in this world, but the world of the sleepover beckons you.
>You give your air guitar one last, powerful solo before you throw your head down as the music stops.
“...And you’re under arrest.” You growl in a low voice at your audience, ending the song.

>>41094771
>Your confidence doesn’t fade when silence returns to Rarity’s bedroom.
>You’re looking at the girls, covered in sweat and breathing heavily.
>You know what kind of effect you had on them.
>They’re staring at you, eyes wide, cheeks pink, and breathing heavily.
>They don’t make you feel self conscious.
>You savor their gaze.
>Fluttershy’s staring at your heaving chest and stomach.
>Rarity bites her bottom lip.
>Applejack twirls her hair in her finger.
>You stand up and take a deep breath.
“I’m gonna feel self conscious if none of you say something.” You tease the girls.
>”Anon, that was the hottest-” Pinkie starts, but is silenced when Twilight clamps her hand over her mouth.
>”Y-You were great!” Twilight said to you with an awkward smile.
>”Where’s THIS Anon been all semester?” Sunset asked you with a grin like she got exactly what she wanted from you.
“I dunno, just never had any opportunities to sing before tonight, I guess.” You say with a shrug.
>”I know I joked about this before, but you seriously should go out for the big music competition in the spring. I really think you’d be great!” Twilight insisted, her hand still firmly covering Pinkie’s mouth.
>Pinkie’s still trying to talk.
“I’ll think about it.” You smile, using the hem of your incredibly short shirt to wipe some of the sweat off your forehead.
>You quickly realize what you’re doing and hastily fix the shirt Rarity made for you.
“Sorry! I should use a paper or towel or something to clean myself-”
>”No, no, no! It’s perfectly alright! The shirt can be easily washed!” Rarity quickly assures you, slightly flustered.
“Well, okay then!” You say to her, intentionally not paying attention to how close she is to you as you turn to Rainbow.
“Nice job picking the song, by the way!” You cheekily thank her.
>”Yeah, yeah, whatever.” Rainbow grumbles, not meeting your eyes.
>”Say, now seems like a good time to get to using Rarity’s hot tub!” Sunset cheerily suggested.
>”Oh, yeah! Definitely!” Twilight agreed, keeping her hand on Pinkie’s mouth.
“A hot tub in freezing weather like this?” You ask.
>”It’s a really nice experience! The cold weather makes you appreciate the warmth of the water even more!” Fluttershy says to you with enthusiasm in her voice.
>Pinkie resorts to licking Twilight’s hand, who retracts her hand in disgust and wipes the saliva off on her pajama pants.
>”Eww, Pinkie!” Twilight scolded her.
>”OhmygoshNonnyyoursongwasthehottestthingI’veeverseenImeanohmygoshI’veneverseenanythinglikeitbeforeyoutotallyneedtosingmoreforusandatschoolbecauseyou’dtotallykickbuttinthecompetitionandmorepeopleshouldhearwhatanamazingsingeryouareandIthinkthehottubisatotallygreatideaIhopeyoubroughtyourswimtrunksbutifyoudidn’tthat’sokaybecauseyoudon’treallyneedaswimsuittousethehottubwhateverworksit’salluptoyou!” Pinkie rambles out at a speed you’ve never seen before.

>>41094773
>She shoots forward, gripping your shoulders and staring into your eyes.
>Thanks to your experience with talking to Pinkie, you get the gist of what she said.
“Okay! A hot tub sounds great! Especially with you all!” You eagerly agree.
>Pinkie beams at you, letting go of you and backing up a bit.
>”Pfft, you just wanna see all of us in our bathing suits.” Rainbow smugly deduced.
“Hey, it’s only fair. I’ve been dressed like THIS for half the night, plus I’ll be wearing less than you all in the hot tub!” You remind her, motioning to your exposed stomach.
>Rainbow’s face sours at your rebuttal.
“Aww, don’t tell me you’re shy.” You tease her.
>Rainbow’s head whips around at you.
>”I’ve got nothing to be shy about! I’ve got the most amazing body you’ve ever seen! And I know because you keep staring at my ass in P.E.!” She shoots back at you.
>All eyes turn to you.
“No, I don’t! I don’t stare at you! You’re just always ahead of me in the mile run or the pacer or soccer!”
>”Dude, come on, we’re all friends here. I know I’ve got a pretty amazing ass, nobody’s gonna judge you if you admit you sneak a peek every now and again.” She mockingly says to you.
“You wanna talk about staring, we could talk about how you were looking at me during karaoke.” You counter her.
>”Oh, no, don’t change the subject. We’re talking about YOU right now.” Rainbow is quick to retort.
“Alright, what makes you so sure I’ll be staring at YOU in the hot tub? Maybe I’m more into Sunset or Applejack or Fluttershy!”
>”Or me!” Pinkie jumps in.
“Yeah, or Pinkie!” You agree.
>”Oh, but what about me, Anon?” Rarity teasingly asked you, batting her eyes.
>”Rarity, you’re not helping!” Rainbow sternly says to her.
>”Personally, I wouldn’t mind if Anon admired my body. I’ve put so much into maintaining it, it’s nice to receive appreciation.” Sunset took your side, shooting Rainbow a wicked grin.
>”I dunno about starin’, but I’ll have to agree with Sunset here.” Applejack chimed in.
>Rainbow sputters, looking around at the other girls for backup.
>”What about you, Flutters? How’d you feel if Anon was looking you up and down while you’re in your bathing suit?” She interrogated her, making a blush appear on Fluttershy’s cheeks as she cast her gaze down guiltily.
>”Um… Well… I suppose if… Anon, would you stare at me if you found me attractive in… that way?” She carefully asked you.
“Of course, not! I don’t want to make you uncomfortable or anything.” You promise her.
>”Then, in that case… I don’t think I would mind-”
>”Ugh, fine! Fine, fine, fine! I’m gonna get changed into my swimsuit, then I’m gonna say ‘I told you so’ when you stare at my amazing body, because I know you will!” Rainbow relented, throwing her head back in frustration.
>You’d never say it, but Rainbow’s really cute when she’s annoyed like this.

>>41094776
>”So we’re all good for the hot tub?” Twilight asked the group.
>Pinkie, Fluttershy, Rarity, and Applejack voiced their agreement, making the decision unanimous.
>”Great! We’ll all get changed and meet by the back porch in five minutes!” Twilight decided, clapping her hands together.
>You’re about to make your way over to your duffle bag, but then you notice another one of the mystery notes you’ve been receiving all night.
“Wait, check this out.” You say, picking up the folded piece of paper with the heart sticker.
>”Nonny got another love letter!” Pinkie excitedly announced.
>”Ooh, how exciting!” Rarity said.
>”She must’ve slipped it here for you when you were up there rocking out.” Sunset surmised.
“Yeah, probably.” You agree.
>With the seven girls behind you eager to see what the message is this time, even though one of them already knows what the message is, you carefully unfold it.
>”Your smile makes me feel all warm inside.”
>”Aww, that’s so sweet!” Fluttershy said.
>”Who do you think wrote it?” Twilight asked you.
“Good question…”
>You turn around and eye up each of the seven girls.
>It’s getting tougher to say.
>The note doesn’t help.
>All the girls are giving you signals of varying intensity.
>And they were all pretty enraptured when you were singing karaoke.
>But to pick one?
>You’ve smiled with them before.
>They make you smile.
>That’s part of why they’re such great friends.
>”Tell you what, you think about it more while you get changed. I kinda really want to get into that hot tub.” Twilight sheepishly admitted.
“Yeah, good idea. It’s gotten awful hot in here, I’ve been dying to get out of these clothes.”
>”You’re telling me…” Twilight mumbled.
“Huh?”
>”Nothing!”
>”Well, I’d best be getting it all set up. Ta-ta~” Rarity gracefully exited the room, waving goodbye to you and the girls.
>You notice the extra sway in her hips before she shuts the door behind her.
>When you turn back around, you see Rainbow grumpily rifling through her bag and the rest of the girls looking at you expectantly.
>”Y’Know, Anon, since we’re all friends here, you shouldn’t have to feel uncomfortable gettin’ changed with the rest of us…” Applejack offered, her shifty eyes betraying her true motive.
>”Yeah, totally! We don’t want you to feel left out or anything!” Pinkie assures you, wrapping her arms around you in a hug.
>”W-We won’t peek or anything!” Fluttershy promises you.
>Rainbow just rolled her eyes, you could tell.
“Thanks, girls, but I think I’ll take the bathroom again.” You awkwardly chuckle, placing your latest note in your bag and grabbing your swim trunks.
>You could almost taste the disappointment in the air.
>”Your loss~” Sunset said to you, batting her eyes.
“Don’t worry, I won’t be gone long.” You promise the girls, wrenching yourself free of Pinkie’s hug and heading out into the hall.

Damn these character limits, I'd be able to flesh out my paragraphs better if I was allowed another thousand characters or so
>>41094490
It might sound weird, but what helped me get out of a writing slump in the past is writing with a different program like Notepad or Google Docs or using a different font. The bit of difference adds some rejuvenation to the process, like something of a breath of fresh air.
It's not anything that'll inspire you to write the novel of a generation, but in my experience at least it'll help get the ball rolling
Getting started with writing's always the hardest part, at least for me
>>41094609
Rally Flag's not particularly offensive to me. He does cringey self insert art and always shows up in the comment section of any Celestia post on Derpibooru, but I've people get seen way worse on the internet. Unless there's something particularly offensive he did that I don't know about.
>>41094562
I don't really regard anything staff members say on Twitter about their shows or movies as canon. It's really easy to say after the fact that this character was such and such, but it needs to be integrated into the story if you want it to really "count"

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>>41094780
Good shit. How do you write this much content so fast?

>>41094562
>Twitter
Their opinion already means nothing

I might have an idea of how to write a non-lewd sleepover involving the dazzlings.
I'm not much of a writer, but I hope you like the opening excerpt nonetheless.

>Today is Friday.
>It's been a long week, but you've finally made it to the weekend.
>Your new job took some getting used to, but it was well worth it for the pay.
>Now, there's nothing more you'd like to do but sit back and relax.
>Until your return on Monday, but that's a problem for future you.
>Present you is currently rummaging through the fridge.
>You /could/ make something to eat, but you're feeling particularly lazy.
>You decided to order some pizza.
>As you pull your phone out to order the italian delight, there was a knock at your door.
>You wonder to yourself how the pizza place was able to get your order delivered without you even putting in an order.
>However, upon opening the door, you are not met with delicious pizza, but three girls.
>Before the one with poofy hair speaks, you quickly slam the door on her face.
>This was supposed to be a calming weekend, but it seems like trouble was just outside your door.
>You've met these three a couple times, and they've been nothing but a headache.
>Adagio, the one with poofy hair, seems to be the eldest.
>She always bosses the other two around and reprimands them for doing something stupid.
>The ditsy one's Sonata, she's loyal to a fault and seems to order tacos at every fast food place you see them at.
>Some places don't even serve tacos, so you're not sure how she keeps getting them.
>Aria always looks like something's up her ass whenever she looks at you.
>You've never even met her, you only know her and the other two's names because they say it so often.
>In fact, you've had no relations with these three in all the times you've seen them.
>So that begs the question of why they're here, at this hour of the day, localized entirely at your front door.

>>41094974
>The knocking returns, this time more forceful.
>You pray they just lose interest, but you don't want them to break down your door either.
>For three girls they've accrued quite a lot of property damage.
>You still wonder how they managed to break open that fire hydrant.
>Reluctantly, you open the door a tad before Adagio pushes it wide open.
>"WHAT THE HELL WAS THAT?! Is that how you treat three beautiful women who show up at your front door?"
"Yes."
>Taken aback by your quick response, she clears her throat and restores her composure.
>"As I was /about/ to say--before I was rudely interrupted--was that we decided to throw some poor sap a bone and let him have the privilege of hosting us for the night. You should feel lucky."
"...What."
>"I /said/ you should feel lucky that you'll be in the prescence of three beautiful ladies for a whole night."
"Well where are they?"
>"OH FOR THE LOVE OF- Just let us in already, or I'll stick my foot up so far up your ass you'll be wearing diapers for the rest of your life!"
>Aria explodes out of nowhere, grabbing you by the collar and giving you tinitus.
"Man, your breath stinks. Did you even brush your teeth this past month?"
>Before Aria could give you a black eye, Adagio was able to swoop in and hold her back.
>The blue one was staring at you, tears in her eyes.
>"Oh please please please please pleeaaase let us in, we /really/ need a place to stay! We got kicked out of our apartment weeks ago, and there's nowhere else for us to go! We've had to resort to eating from the d-"
>After calming Aria (or as close as she can get), Adagio quickly clasped Sonata's mouth shut.
>"D-Don't mind her! We just decided, on a whim, that we humor some lonely--a-and charitable--young man! We're not some weak, desperate-"
>-GRRRRGGGGHHHGGRRHRHH-
>In the middle of her explanation, Adagio's stomach decided to betray her.
>She's frozen solid, on the precipice of crying her eyes out.
>You may not want these troublemakers oblitering your home with a toaster, but it's not like you can just leave them to starve.
>You're not a monster, you've done your fair share of charitable work.
>Looking at the sad state of these girls, you've grown to pity them.
"You know, I was just about to order pizza. You girls can wait inside while I go and grab some."
>The three give you puzzling looks.
>Well, two of them do, Sonata breaks free of Adagio's hold and tightly hugs you, thanking you over and over again.
>You're starting to see how the fire hydrant broke open; you might need your doctor to confirm how many ribs were broken after this.
>After pulling free from Sonata's python hold, you switch places with the girls and make your way to the pizza place.

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>>41094780
>“Yeah, good idea. It’s gotten awful hot in here, I’ve been dying to get out of these clothes.”
>”You’re telling me…” Twilight mumbled.
Turboslut is THIRSTY, damm.

>>41089831
>>41094729
Don’t set up pointless deadlines silly

>>41095218
if you don't set deadlines and get in the practice of respecting them, you'll rarely get anything done

>>41090176
>>41091682
>>41091756
>Cookie invites Anon to try yoga with her.
>Cookie is, at most, mostly oblivious to how she's making Anon feel, teasing about how an "old lady" is making him shy.
>For some reason, joint yoga involves one partner holding the other down.
>Copious amounts of humping and grinding between pelvis and posterior ensues.
>Cookie is initially none the wiser.
>Anon can't hold it any longer.
>Cums.
>Cookie wonders why her sweatpants suddenly feel damp.
>Suddenly, her sweatpants are pulled down.
>Plapping ensues.

>>41087022
>>41091664
So you’re the kind who’s more into lesbo than you are into harems. Even though they’re both great and it is only a matter of taste at the end of the day, I still have to say that’s a little based.

>>41091756
>Rarity introduced you to Cookie.
>The two women are jarringly different.
>They still gush about you dating Rarity.
>Contrasting your confident stride earlier, you're oddly quiet and fidgety the whole time.
>They attribute it to nervousness and find it adorable.
>You've secretly been nursing a huge erection the entire time.
>You thought Rarity was attractive, but there was something about Cookie that REALLY aroused you.
>Maybe you were secretly into pudgy women, older women, 90s women, good old-fashioned MILFs, or some combination of those.
>Whatever it was, you were currently fighting a much stronger physical attraction to Rarity's mom than you had towards her.
>A fight that you were currently losing.
>Completely oblivious to the raging hard-on you were nursing, Cookie was touchy-feely with the new boyfriend of her daughter, who was simply happy that their meeting was simply going swimmingly.
>Feeling Cookie's assets rub and squish against you (those soft breasts, that belly pudge, those plush thighs), you had to resist the strong urge to hump the affectionate mom who was intent on getting physically familiar with you while Rarity watched.
>(Un)fortunately, it was time for you and Rarity to leave for your date, but thoughts of Cookie never left your mind, and kept your wang uncomfortably stiff.
>Hopefully, you would have a better time controlling yourself around Cookie next time you found yourself around her...

>>41091756
>You felt a constant reluctance to get intimate with Rarity.
>Thank God Rarity herself, melodramatic at times she was, thought you were just playing hard to get.
>Despite wanting to give the fat load you were saving up for over a month to her, a more primal part of you felt like it didn't "belong" to her.
>It truly "belonged" to Cookie, despite her being Rarity's mom, and already married on top of that.
>You knew just how inappropriate it was to lust after your girlfriend's mom, but you just couldn't shake off the powerful lust you felt.
>It was a constant, losing struggle between your affection for Rarity and your lust for Cookie, the latter's deliciously chubby MILF body persistently remaining in your mind, it's owner obliviously teasing you with how thicc and breedable she was.
>As desperately you tried to resist your base urges, you NEEDED Cookie.

>>41094780
Pinkie is based af in this. I love hornball ponka.
I'm even going to give you props for doing the annoying puttingabunchofwordstogether thing because, when Twilight clamped down on Pinkie's mouth, it only made sense that all of her words would just build up like that. They would need to come out that fast, given the situation. In a Pinkie sorta way, there's logic to it.

Plus, we had got the gist of what she wanted to say already.
>”Anon, that was the hottest-” Pinkie starts, but is silenced when Twilight clamps her hand over her mouth.
This was the part I liked so much, lel.

I've been reading these greens a long time, and an old piece of advice used to be "Never have Pinkie putallherwordstogetherlikethis because it's annoying." So it's rare that I find an instance where I actually like it in a green.
please don't do it again tho, lel
>>41094791
Man, don't you remember when the character limit was only 2k?

>>41094976
Pretty good so far. Honestly, I figured the Dazzlings were gonna be the pizza girls, or be the ones trying to steal the pizza or something.

I'll bet they eat anchovies.

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>>41095688
Just saying - Rarity will eventually turn into the same shape as her mom, after a pregnancy or two. Just work for it, boy.
Hornyness is temporary, your own handcrafted MILF fashionista is forever.

>>41094220
I mean, this one is my favorite green of yours, and while it is kinda lewd (which was appreciated still), that's not what I really liked about it. I just thought Pinkie was cute and relatable in it:
https://ponepaste.org/7310
>>41094490
>trailer park main 6
>trailer park RD
>trailer park Ponka
>trailer park milfs
What the fuck, what a great idea. You should do it.

>>41095758
I know, but Anon's primal instincts combined with his heavily backed up load and possibly Cadence's corrupt magic have caused him to lust after the most breedable woman in the immediate vicinity, which is Cookie. He can't help himself.

Plus, if he plays his cards right, he might have two, and later maybe even three hot women in his life.

>>41095063
The nerdy ones are the freakiest, you know
>>41094804
By doing literally nothing else with my free time after work lel
>>41095738
Thank you! I definitely see how that could get annoying in stories, and don't worry, I don't plan on doing that again, but I do hope you'll keep liking what I write!.
And yeah, I do. Man, those were some dark times.
>>41095688
I like to imagine the inciting incident was Rarity inviting Anon over to her house before a date or something and he said something like "Hey, Rarity, I thought Sweetie Belle was your only sister" upon meeting her mom to flatter her

>>41094976
Ooh, that's a fun scenario! Looking forward to more!

>>41094791
Do you get that feeling where you have lots of ideas to happen later in a story, but writing what comes immediately next just doesn't come to you as easily?
>Shy girl club and Harshwinney Anon here
>Trying to come up with exactly how I'll introduce Anon and establish him as a timid guy who wants to be more bold and outgoing
>Have lots of ideas for after he joins the club but writing this intro with Anon is eluding me right now

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>>41096064
God, do I ever
That's something I deal with in writing all the time, especially with this one and another story I've got on the backburner: Captain N and the Super Smash Bros. I feel like that's something a lot of writers struggle with, we've all got those big scenes we really want to get to but you've gotta build the bridge that gets you from where you are now to where you want to be.
Picrel's an example that shows getting writer's block like this is normal, but it's not insurmountable
My advice would be to step back and come back to the story the next day, that way you're looking at it from a fresh perspective and might see something you didn't see yesterday because you burned yourself out racking your brain trying to come up with something
I'll help you out with that idea:
>Anon is friends with Flash Sentry because they worked together well during a class project last year
>Flash pushes Anon to start going to the club because he's convinced that Anon's got a lot to offer and could be doing a lot better with his social life if he knows how to put himself out there more
>Anon isn't entirely convinced by this, but is too meek to come up with any real counter arguments and ends up caving to his insistence
>Bonus points if Flash has to literally shove Anon through the classroom door for the first club meeting
Can't wait to see what you write!

>>41096121
I actually like that. Though it's especially funny imagining if Flash literally pushed him into the club thinking it's a normal club not knowing what the girls including Harshwinney are like in the club, what they've been talking about, or what'd happen to Anon after going in.

>>41095758
Source?

>>41094780
You’re in Rarity’s bathroom for the third time tonight.
>It doesn’t take you long at all to switch into your swim trunks.
>They’re dark blue with white drawstrings.
>But it doesn’t escape you that you’re gradually exposing more and more of yourself over the course of this sleepover.
>First you were in your pajamas, then you were in that exciting shirt, and now you’re down to your swim shorts.
>You’re nervous.
>Earlier tonight you would’ve been more comfortable with the idea of using Rarity’s hot tub with the girls.
>Even looking forward to it, to be completely honest.
>Getting the kind of look at Rarity and Sunset that the guys at school would be dying to get.
>But there’s all this love letter stuff muddying the hot tub’s water.
>You’re not even really worried about accusing the wrong girl of being your secret admirer because all seven of them have been showing interest in you.
>Even beyond their reactions to your singing and new look.
>Their comments, the way they’ve been looking at you…
>Fluttershy invited you to get changed into your swimsuit with the rest of the girls!
>To think it took her an entire week after first meeting her for her to say an entire sentence to you…
>Under any other circumstances, that would be the smoking gun you’d need to accuse Fluttershy of being your secret admirer, but Pinkie’s been drooling over you all night, Rarity put on that little show for you during karaoke, and the comments Twilight made under her breath didn’t escape you.
>Sunset, Rainbow, and Applejack have been giving you some eyebrow-raising signals, too…
>Stressing about this isn’t getting you any closer to solving any of this.
>You turn on the faucet and rub some cool water on your face to clear your mind.
>You check the time.
>10:07 PM.
>The night’s still young.
>Not young enough to avoid being carded, but young enough to give you plenty of time to solve this mystery.
>You step back and look at yourself in the mirror.
>At the risk of sounding narcissistic, you look pretty good.
>In the months since you’ve started having P.E. with Rainbow and helping Applejack with some farm stuff every now and again, you’ve slimmed down your gut a bit and got more muscle definition on your chest and arms.
>Actually, you don’t need to worry about sounding self-absorbed.
>You’re sure Pinkie or Rarity would be delighted to compliment your body.
>What friends you’ve got.
>You take a deep breath and step out of the bathroom.

>>41096661
>When you’re back in the hall with your clothes bundled under your arm, you hear some commotion in Rarity’s bedroom.
>You can’t make out any specific words or phrases and you don’t want to be a creep, so you decide against pressing your ear against the door to listen closer.
>It sounds like some kind of back-and-forth is going on between Sunset and the rest of the girls.
>Despite their debating and pleading, Sunset’s staying resolute in her position.
>No matter how much pleading Pinkie does, or how much arguing Rainbow does, Sunset doesn’t budge an inch.
>You can only hope this isn’t about anything real bad.
>This sleepover’s been doing really well, all things considered.
>You’d feel terrible if there was a huge argument between them, considering how long they’ve been friends with each other.
>The door swings open before you could worry more, revealing a triumphant looking Sunset.
>She’s wearing a dark red bikini, generously revealing her cleavage.
>”Great timing, Anon! We were just talking about you!” She beamed, pointing you in the direction of the other girls.
>Fluttershy’s wearing a teal one-piece swimsuit, Applejack’s got a green bikini on, Pinkie’s wearing a bright yellow bikini, Twilight’s got an indigo one-piece, and Rainbow’s got a black sports bra and spats to match.
>They all look amazing.
>Don’t stare, Anon.
“Really? You ask Sunset, turning back to her.
>”Yeah! We were talking about how much you’ve grown since your first day here. You were so nervous and awkward back then, and look at you now! You’ve really come a long way, emotionally and physically~” Sunset answers with a grin, eyeing you up and down.
>The other girls have their eyes on you, too.
>Seems like they forgot what they were debating.
>But you’re still getting used to being looked at like this.
“Well, thanks.” You smile. “I couldn’t have done it without the help of you girls.”
>”Ooh, yeah! Hey, Applejack, doesn’t Anon look incredible?” Sunset turns the spotlight to Applejack, who takes an awkward step back.
>”Uh… I- I mean, he’s certainly lookin’ a lot better.” She admitted with an uncharacteristic clumsiness, her eyes darting around the room.
>”I’ll say!” Pinkie chimed in.
>”Oh, and we can’t forget you, Rainbow! You’re the best personal trainer he could ask for!” Sunset agreed, turning her attention to Rainbow, keeping her hands on your shoulders to present your half-naked form.
>”O-Of course I am! I’m the one who made Anon so fun to look at!” She boasted.
“Hm?” You raise an eyebrow.
>”Whatever! Let’s just get going, already!” Rainbow rapidly shifted gears, pushing past you to get down the stairs.
>Sunset giggles to herself at having successfully gotten those two flustered.
>Seems like that’s what she’s best at.
>”Oh, wait a minute!” Sunset said before bending over and reaching for your waist.

>>41096663
>You freeze up and feel a chill run down your spine.
>What’s she doing?
>Here?
>Now?
>Turns out she just tied up the drawstrings on your swim shorts.
>”There you go! Wouldn’t want you to lose your swim trunks in the hot tub!” Sunset giggled.
>”Y-Yeah, we wouldn’t want that to happen…” Fluttershy muttered, playing with her hair while looking down at the floor.
>You feel embarrassed just thinking about the possibility.
>”We should get going, Rarity’s probably waiting for us down there.” Twilight suggested.
“Right, good idea. Lead the way?” You ask Twilight.
>”You got it!” She giggled, heading down the stairs after Rainbow.
>”I’ll help you find your way through the house! It can get so spooky here at night!” Pinkie offered, clinging onto your arm.
>”I better help, too. Two’s better than one!” Sunset jumped in, grabbing ahold of your other arm.
>It’s basically impossible to turn down their generosity now.
>They’ve both got a surprisingly firm grip on you.
>And their chests are pressed against your shoulder.
>The only thing separating your skin from theirs is a thin swimsuit.
>No, stop it.
>Don’t start thinking about this stuff now.
>Your arousal’s gonna be harder to conceal like this.
>”On we go!” Pinkie declared, marching you down the stairs with Sunset’s help.
>You could’ve sworn you just heard Applejack and Fluttershy grumble about something behind you.
It’s a little tricky to keep up with those two as the three of you walk as a unified entity.
>They know how to get around Rarity’s house better than you do, and it’s a little difficult to predict where you’ll go.
>The warm, fun atmosphere of the sleepover fades behind you as the three of you return to the ground floor where the lifeless mannequins haunt the boutique.
>You steal a glance out the front windows to see what the world outside this house is like.
>It’s snowing like crazy out there.
>There’s gotta be at least a foot of snow on the ground with no sign of it stopping.
>The wind seems to have died down, though.
>It’s looking even more dead outside.
>You’ve never seen the town of Canterlot like this before.
>It’s a little eerie.
>Maybe Pinkie was right.
“Geez, it’s really coming down out there.” You note.
>”No kidding! You think we’ll get buried in the snow out there?” Pinkie asked you with a hint of nervousness.
“That’s not gonna happen. I’ll dig you out of the snow if I have to.” You jokingly assure her.
>”Aww, you’d really do that for me?” Pinkie swooned, leaning into you even more.
>”Come on, they’re gonna get frozen solid if we keep them waiting!” Sunset reminded her.
>”We better hurry, then!” Pinkie realized, tugging you through the rest of Rarity’s house.

>>41096666
>As you try to keep up with her, you can barely make out your surroundings.
>Vague shapes of a kitchen and dining room pass you by as you’re ushered by your two friends.
>You don’t have time to dwell on this spooky environment because before you know it, you’re standing in front of the back door.
>There’s a buildup of frost on the window, but you can make out footprints in the snow outside.
>Is it really a good idea to go out like this?
>You’re not even wearing shoes.
>”Come on, let’s go!” Sunset pushed you outside after opening the door.
>You’re blasted by a gust of cold wind the moment the door opens, chilling you even more now that you’ve spent the past few hours in the warmth of Rarity’s heated home.
>Pinkie and Sunset don’t mind the cold at all.
>They’re determined to get you out through the cold and into the hot tub.
>You’re weakened by the harsh weather, so you let them drag you.
>On the other side of the porch is the hot tub, bubbling with fresh water pumped in by the jets and steaming hot.
>Twilight and Rainbow are already in the water, leaning back and enjoying the warmth without even noticing the three of you arrived.
>You hear Fluttershy and Applejack shut the door behind you.
”Hey, where’s Rarity?” You wonder aloud.
>”Yoo-hoo~” You heard her voice call out to you from behind.
>When you turn to face her, you feel some warmth return to your body.
>Rarity’s bent over a small control panel at the edge of the patio, facing away from you.
>She’s wearing a purple bikini that you’re confident reveals more of her body than the swimwear of any of the other girls.
>If you were feeling any braver, you’d describe Rarity as “presenting”.
>”Just had to make some adjustments. Feel free to take a dip!” She giggled.
>You quickly return your gaze to the hot tub when Rarity stands back up.
>Pinkie lets go of your arm and does a cannonball into the water.
>Everyone ends up splashed with the heated water as a result
>Rainbow and Twilight are rudely drawn out of their relaxation when they’re soaked by Pinkie’s splash, motivating both of them to give her an annoyed look.
>Applejack and Fluttershy join them in the hot tub, both releasing a relaxed sigh upon sinking into the tub.
>The longer you’re out here in the cold, the more tempting the hot tub looks.
>You’re tempted forward with each lick of the steam rising from the water, and your freezing feet are crying out to you to give in and join the girls.
>But before you could take a dip, Sunset steps in front of you with her signature sinister look.
>”I bet you’re having a good time~”
>Oh, God, she’s onto you.

>>41096668
>The girls are all looking at you.
>You glance around with an awkward laugh.
“Well, yeah! This is the best sleepover I’ve ever been on!” You say to her.
>”Oh, come on, new boy. You know that’s not what I meant~”
>Sunset takes a step closer to you.
>You stand firm.
>You’ve been on fire tonight, you’re not gonna let her get all wily on you.
“Then, what DID you mean?” You ask her in a lower voice.
>”Getting to see us all in our bathing suits, dummy!” Sunset giggled.
>Rarity, Pinkie, Twilight, Applejack, and Rainbow giggled.
>Fluttershy averted her eyes from you.
>You feel your face warming up again, but you stomach the feeling.
“I don’t know what you’re talking about, I’m just focused on having a good time with my friends.” You insist, giving her a firm look in return.
>Sunset let out a hearty laugh.
>”Oh, come on, Boy Scout, Live a little! None of us would mind if you admired us a little! In fact, I’d bet we’d all find it flattering! Isn’t that right, girls~?” Sunset grinned at you, then waving to your friends in the hot tub.
>”I know I would!” Pinkie was the first to answer, popping out of the water enough to show off the cleavage spilling out of her bikini top.
>”I wouldn’t mind, I trust you to not be too salacious~” Rarity batted her eyes at you.
>”You’ve already been eyeing me up in P.E., you might as well commit to it.” Rainbow chuckled at you.
>”Well, I dunno a ton of guys who appreciate a physique like mine, so I’d appreciate a pair of admirin’ eyes like yours.” Applejack admitted.
>”B-Besides, we’ve kinda been admiring you when you were singing your heart out, so it’d only be fair!” Twilight argued, faintly embarrassed about admitting that she was eyeing you up during karaoke.
>Sunset’s eyes fall to Fluttershy, who’s remained silent this whole time.
>”Well? Don’t leave dear Anon waiting!” Sunset pushed her.
>Fluttershy gulped as the blush deepened on her cheeks.
“...Hey, it’s okay if you don’t feel comfortable with me… looking at you that way.” You try to comfort her.
>She looks up at you and quickly shakes her head.
>”No, no! I wouldn’t mind!”
>Her response surprises you.
“...Really?”
>Fluttershy carefully nods.
>“...I kind of… like the way you look at me…”

>>41096671
>”There you have it! We’re giving you a golden opportunity here, new boy! Let yourself enjoy it!” Sunset insisted, taking another step closer to you.
>She clasps her hands in front of her, compressing her breasts together for you as she gives you a smile to go with her half-lidded eyes.
>The girls are all sitting out of the hot tub, looking at you anxiously and with varying levels of flirtiness and confidence.
>You exhale.
>...Fine.
>You force your eyes to drift downward from Sunset’s eyes to her bikini-covered boobs.
>...They’re really nice.
>She’s gotta be a C-cup.
>This gets a victorious giggle from your oldest friend at your new school, subtly pushing them up further for your viewing enjoyment.
>...You’re getting harder.
>”There you go, that didn’t hurt, did it?” She teased you further.
>You sigh and shake your head with a half smile.
“No, I guess not.” You admit.
“I’m just worried I’d pick wrong and not eye up the one of you that’s been leaving me those love letters.”
>”Gosh, Anon, we’re all really proud of your detective work, but just enjoy yourself! Just sit back, relax, and enjoy the pretty sights~” Sunset insisted.
>She stepped back into the hot tub and gestured to a vacant space between Rarity and Fluttershy.
>”Best seat in the house~” She invited you.
>Your freezing feet command you to take the invitation.
>With your legs shaking (from the cold, no doubt) you carefully slip into the water between your two friends.
>God.
>You have no idea how much you needed this until now.
>You feel your entire body relax the moment you make contact with the water.
>You allow a content sigh to escape your lips as the water swirls around you.
>Then you notice there aren’t any other spaces left for Sunset to sit.
“Hey, Sunset-”
>Before you could fully voice your concern, Sunset finds a seat.
>On your lap.
>”There we go~” Sunset happily sighs, draping her arms around your shoulders and resting her cheek against your head.
>Oh, fuck.
>It’s getting hotter.

>>41096673
IT'S HAPPENING

>>41096673
I'll bet before Anon returned with his swimsuit on they were arguing about Sunset's plan to sit on his lap. Either way I'd be shocked if things didn't rapidly escalate towards sex now.

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>>41096673
>Sunset making the power move where she knows what she'll feel happening under the water.
This is perfect for mind-reading shenanigans too.
I also like how you moved the action to a hot tub, the premise you're working with for this green has a lot of different directions for the story to turn.
>>41095218
Deadlines suck when they make one rush and fuck up how the final product was supposed to be, so if that's what you meant, then I agree. I still think this guy >>41095225 also has a point.
>>41094976
Huh, never considered anything about one with the Dazzlings before.
>>41095338
>>41095506
>>41095688
Just to be clear, can it be the same Anon from the steamed up locker room?
>>41095439
I imagine having to give each girl equal attention to a tiring degree, or else they'll start having their feelings hurt thinking they're not as attractive as the others. I overthink too much.
>>41095759
I really appreciate you saying that. I wanted to set up the vibe and her character just how I wanted it to be.
I still honestly think I overdid my thing for the simple "bouncy Penka on a pogo stick" premise in particular, and made the plot for it way more busy than it needed to be.
But:
I'm still going to make a lewd animation of Pogo Penka like I previously said I would. Would you like to see that soon?
--
I'll post a WIP sketch of Principal Celestia getting her clothes ripped away tomorrow on catbox.
This is gonna be more work than I thought.

>>41096744
>Just to be clear, can it be the same Anon from the steamed up locker room?
I envisioned this as an alternate universe thing to the locker room incident. But if you have to, sure.

>>41096750
Sure. Sorry I deleted the first post, quoted someone's post twice by accident.

>>41096748
>I'm still going to make a lewd animation of Pogo Penka like I previously said I would. Would you like to see that soon?
Yes please.

>>41097176
>Patreon link for ai art
NOW it’s gone too far

>>41097199
this must be the work of vtuber/gachafags. i cannot imagine anyone else who would actually pay for someone else to make generic bikini ai pics, nor anyone else who when given a tool that could theoretically be used to easily make any kind of porn would just choose to make infinity pics of anime girls in bikinis with neutral expressions and post them all online as if anyone else wants to see them. their brain disease is all over it.

>Be Anon
>Finally start attending Crystal Prep
>Have two deadbeat parents who never got past highschool and were unremarkable working class
>You've long since determined to not be like them
>You want to climb to the top and make something of yourself
>Through willpower, hard work and strategically applied grants, you were able to snag a spot
>Necessarily, this means most of the other kids don't accept you
>After all, most of them come from prominent families and you're just some prole they've never heard of
>You can't say all this hasn't given you a bit of a napoleon complex
>But your ambition will not be checked, and you're going all in
>This is certainly going to earn you a few enemies, but nothing motivates someone quite like having a rival to soundly beat
>But to your surprise it may have also earned you a secret admirer.

>>41097257
Yes. AI should be used against paypiggy simp culture, not for it.

>>41096673
Human body be damned, you just know Sunset's still got that pony ass, and she knows how to work it. Anon's in for a real time, here. Best seat in the house, indeed.
>>41096666
what the fuck are these repeating numbers, damn!

>"There you go! Wouldn't want you to lose your swim trunks in the hot tub!" Sunset giggled.
>"Y-Yeah, we wouldn't want that to happen..." Fluttershy muttered, playing with her hair while looking down at the floor.
lel
>>41096740
yeah, they probably saw there weren't enough seats for all of them, and that was Sunset's solution
>>41096748
>This is perfect for mind-reading shenanigans too.
Yeah, I've had an idea for this before myself. Make sure she's got the magic geode with her somewhere, if you do go that route.
women have more hiding places than men

>I still honestly think I overdid my thing for the simple "bouncy Penka on a pogo stick" premise
I get it. I feel like I do that too. I've gotten a little better at editing since then, and I like to think I don't overwrite as much as I used to, but it's still a problem for me, lel.
Your green dragged a little in some spots, but I wanted to see what was gonna happen so I stuck with it. A cute Pinkie will do that to me. I liked the dialogue too.

>Would you like to see that soon?
Yeah, it sounds awesome. It sounds like a lot of work too. Hope you're not pushing yourself too hard, you and Butts.

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>>41097436
>Your green dragged a little in some spots
Out of curiosity, which parts had that happening? I want to make sure I don't do that in future greens.
>Yeah, it sounds awesome. It sounds like a lot of work too.
I'll try my best. What I'm currently doing is tiring enough as it is.
>Hope you're not pushing yourself too hard
My main problem is that I have way too much to worry about and I'm also super easily distracted. It's easy to tell most of what I write or draw was done at the last minute, I imagine. If I had actual discipline for once, I could probably type 10,000 words a day if I had the time. Used to get close to that several years ago, when I had less clutter in my life.
>>41096769
Could try to get something out before June. Like I said above, what I'm currently doing is tiring enough as it is. Will try to have that in particular out by no later than sometime tonight (the Celestia WIP sketches).

Asking this to everyone:
Anyone know of good animation programs I can get for free? I'm kinda poor and using photoshop layers for it is so fucking tedious.

>>41097257
>>41097199
>>41097330
worst of both worlds.
at least paying artist get you better than this slop.

>>41097266
Now that's a story I'm interested in
I was tossing around ideas on getting Crystal Prep involved in my story but nothing's nailed down yet. Very interested to see who could be underdog Anon's secret admirer
>>41096748
I've got a couple more twists and turns in mind that I'm looking forward to seeing you all react to
>I imagine having to give each girl equal attention to a tiring degree, or else they'll start having their feelings hurt thinking they're not as attractive as the others. I overthink too much.
I've thought about including that kind of thing in the story, but I reeled back and decided that this is gonna be a largely self-indulgent green that doesn't get too bogged down in drama. I kind of used what Sunset said to Anon after they got out of school as a thesis statement for the green
>”Just focus on having a good time. Don’t stress your cute little head about anything, just go with the flow and you’ll have the time of your life~”
Looking forward to that sketch!
>>41096740
You'll have to see!
>>41097436
I've seen people make charts comparing the sizes of the six's boobs but you don't really see anything like that for their butts. I'm sure Sunset's on the higher end of that scale, nice and shapely and she knows it
>Hope you're not pushing yourself too hard
Not really, I stay up later than I should anyway, I just like making something with my hands, like writing or drawing. I tried to take time off and focus on getting through Cyberpunk 2077 but I honestly felt a little restless about drawing or writing some more lol
>>41097639
Mullvad VPN is like 5 or 6 dollars a month and you can use that to get whatever program you want

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>>41097639
>which parts had that happening?
I went into it a little here:
https://ponepaste.org/10062

>It's easy to tell most of what I write or draw was done at the last minute, I imagine.
I actually didn't see this until after I finished my little review. I haven't read a lot of your stories. I don't know what your writing process is like, but I'd be interested to know. You've been writing green here a long time, after all. I feel like you've always been in Fingerbang for as long as I've lurked.
>>41098295
indeed

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Fucking hell this post got long. Too long even for the character count. Splitting it into two parts.

>>41098640
Thank you so much for the feedback.
You raise a lot of good points in this document, and I suppose the cause of me talking like that in the story is because I both have difficulty staying focused and sometimes get unnecessarily verbose without realizing.
I know I must have made it hard to tell in the story, and that's my own fault, but I feel like it's worth trying to explain what I was trying to convey with:
>"but can't help those things being forced to assert how big and soft they are under there"
I was getting at the fact that Pinkie's tits' soft volume always asserted its presence through her clothing solely from how much they obviously move around, and the pogo hopping was like an extra kind of movement that made that even more unavoidable on her part.
It was evidently a lot clearer in my head than it ended up on paper, and probably still is now that I read it back to myself. It really frustrates me when I come up with something and try to translate it into concise words, but words just don't work for what I'm trying to get across. I'm sorry if that just now happened again.

>I don't know what your writing process is like, but I'd be interested to know.
On a larger scale for the sake of clarity, it's basically like this:
>It's Monday.
>Deadline for 15,000 words minimum is Friday.
>Most other people: 3,000 words on Monday, same on Tuesday, etc. until comfortable and proofread 15,000 to 20,000 words on Friday night.
>Me: Looking up accuracy of old 50s movies on Monday for said story then discover a 70s movie I've been looking for for years, photoshop my own grainy 70s camera edits of thing I'd have loved to see in the 70s movie out of curiosity on Tuesday, having nothing to do with the story, type some of another story because the deadline for that was about to come up on Wednesday, do something else that distracted me on Thursday while forgetting to open 4chan and remind myself, stay up all Thursday night and Friday typing 14,500 words, effectively ruining my sleep pattern for the next month.
>Without proofreading.
>It ends up being like 25,000 words on Saturday afternoon after a bunch of random rambling I added in.
>Take up 3 more projects on Sunday because that's a great idea.
Also, what I just described is basically how the process went for the animated WIP sketches I just started. Only officially started it like this morning despite having the last five fucking days (and typing this post took more of that time away). Pushing myself to get as much of it done as possible by midnight in my timezone. But thank you very much for the feedback, I appreciate the help a lot. I'll remember what you said, namely in my other stories with Pinkie such as the late 90's Pie sisters one.

tl;dr: my process is a fucking mess. I lack discipline, unironically. But I still manage somehow.

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Part two:
>>41098168
>I've got a couple more twists and turns in mind that I'm looking forward to seeing you all react to
Nice to hear. I envy your freedom to write lots of green every single day if you want to. I miss that.
>but I reeled back and decided that this is gonna be a largely self-indulgent green that doesn't get too bogged down in drama
Yeah, over-considering those types of things in story ideas is something I should probably just kinda get rid of the best I can. That's probably another fault in my writing process that could have been added to my post above. Though, it only happens with a handful of ideas I come up with. My Luna ATV one for example was just start to finish having fun writing it.
>spoiler
I'll look into that.
I'm about to finish as much of the Celestia thing I'm doing in the next hour or so, but will post these responses to you guys now so as to not get in the way of your incoming update with it.
>>41098295
Absolutely.

>>41098824
>I'm about to finish as much of the Celestia thing I'm doing in the next hour or so
Can’t wait

>>41096673
>Your breath is caught in your throat.
>You can’t move.
>You can barely think.
>You can hear the blood rushing through your ears.
>Sunset’s sitting on your lap.
>In a bikini.
>She’s teased you with her body before, but never like this.
>Even beyond this being your first time in Rarity’s hot tub, you’re in uncharted waters.
>You don’t know what to do with your hands.
>You’ve got Rarity and Fluttershy on either side of you, and they’re just about as exposed as Sunset is.
>If you accidentally touch any of the girls crowding you, you’re gonna get yourself even deeper.
>You’re already making plenty of contact with Sunset.
>...Man, Sunset has a really nice ass.
>It’s so soft and shapely.
>You’ve never gotten a good look at it before, except that one time you scored an upskirt look at her when she dropped her pen that one time.
>You’ll always remember the sight of her lavender panties beneath her skirt.
>But this is on a whole other level.
>...No.
>Oh, God, no.
>Don’t do that.
>Not now.
>Sunset can feel everything.
>Everything.
>Come on, Anon.
>Fight it.
>Don’t let Sunset win.
>A boner is the last thing you need right now.
>But it’s no use.
>You can’t stop the forces of nature.
>The other girls are staring at you.
>You can’t see them through your unfocused vision, but you can feel their gaze burning into your exposed body.
>Say something witty!
“...So, what would you like for Christmas?” You ask Sunset, forcing the best grin you can manage onto your face.
>Sunset cackles at your joke.
>”Can’t think of anything, I’ve got everything I got for Christmas right here~” She grins at you.
>You lose your grin like you were holding a pose.
>Sunset wiggles her hips against you.
>And with Sunset resting her cheek against your forehead, her half-exposed breasts are right at eye level.
>Fuck.
>You’re losing.
>You’re getting harder.
>Sunset can feel it.

>>41098899
>How are none of the girls saying anything?
>You’re practically suffocating on Sunset’s aura.
>How come none of them are put off at all by Sunset being so openly sexual in the middle of this friendly hangout?
>You have to sit on your hands to make sure you don’t set off any of the depth charges keeping you cornered.
>Do something.
>Fast.
“S-So, Rarity, this is all really nice! I can’t remember the last time I was in a hot tub.” You shakily say, managing to get your neck to turn to face her.
>”Thank you! I wish I could’ve shared this with you earlier, but I just knew it had to be saved for a special occasion.” Rarity said to you, leaning slightly closer to you.
>Rarity, you’re not helping.
>Time for another topic change.
“So, winter break! Any of you got any special plans?” You ask the group, trying to ignore Sunset getting comfortable on your lap.
>”Sleepin’ some more, now that farm work’s gonna be slowin’ down for the season.” Applejack answered with a chuckle.
>”I’ve gotta get to work planning the big new year’s blowout! I’m gonna make it my best new year’s party ever!” Pinkie excitedly let you know.
“That sounds fun!”
>”It will be, that’s for sure!” Pinkie gushed.
>”I’ve got some books I got this past Black Friday that I’ve been meaning to get into, and curling up under the covers with a cup of hot cocoa and snow outside is perfect for reading!” Twilight spoke up.
>”Of course you’d spend your time off from school reading.” Rainbow snickered.
>”Aren’t you sitting on that new Daring Do book?” Twilight countered her.
>Rainbow couldn’t come up with a witty comeback.
>”Sh-Shut up.” was the best she could manage.
>You and Sunset chuckle at her a bit.
>”I’ll be spending a bit more time at the animal shelter. Those little guys could get awfully sick in this weather.” Fluttershy said with some concern in her voice.
>”We’d all love to help you out if you need it!” Twilight reminded her.
>”I know, I really appreciate it.” Fluttershy softly thanked everyone.
>”I truly wish I could be more available to help you, but my schedule’s rather filled with all the outfits I’ve got on my plate.” Rarity sighed.
>”What about you, Anon? Got any big plans?” Sunset turned the spotlight to you, wiggling in your lap to add some emphasis to her question.
>It takes a moment for you to compose yourself enough to answer.
“...N-Nothing, really. Mainly just relax at home, except for stuff like helping Fluttershy every now and again. Honestly, helping you girls is my biggest hobby.” You answer with a small chuckle.
>”I know! You could practice your singing!” Pinkie eagerly suggested.
>”Now that’s a good idea! You’ve got a good voice, with some practice you’ll be great!” Sunset concurred.

>>41098902
“I dunno, Rarity said I was marvelous.” You cheekily reminded her.
>”You were! You were passionate and powerful, but rather unrefined. Nothing practice can’t fix!” Rarity clarified for you.
>”Passionate’s an understatement.” Sunset added, grinding against you a tiny bit.
>Only two small layers of swimsuit fabric are all that are keeping you from literally fucking Sunset right here in the hot tub.
>Your breath hitches again.
>”God, Anon, you should see yourself, you’re red like it’s harvest season on the farm!” Applejack giggled.
>You sputter trying to come up with a response, earning yourself a few giggles from the girls.
>Sunset, especially.
>You can feel all her little movements.
“Hey, come on, I’ve never had to deal with stuff like this before!” You defend yourself, inadvertently dyeing your face another hue darker.
>”Well, you better get used to it! You make for an awfully comfy seat~” Sunset said to you, rocking her hips just enough to get a shiver from you.
>You clench your teeth.
“S-So that’s what all of this is about, huh? Just seeing if I’ll make for a good chair?” You ask her with mock seriousness.
>”I don’t hear you complaining!” Sunset grinned at you.
>You look around at the six other girls occupying the hot tub with you.
“What about you all? Looking to make me your chair, too?” You ask them in a nervous voice.
>The six girls exchange glances with each other instead of actually answering your quarter-serious question.
>Sunset drags her fingernails across your shoulder.
>You never would have thought the sleepover would get this intense.
>You’re filled with so many mixed emotions.
>”...Well, I mean, you’re a really cool guy-” Twilight finally answers.
>”No, he’s not, he’s a total dork.” Rainbow butted in.
>”He’s a cool dork!” Fluttershy defended you, clinging onto your wrist to show her support.
>”My point is, you’re really handy and stuff, and we all feel so safe with you that we kind of… think you’d be good for some… stuff…” Twilight trailed off, losing confidence in her answer as she spoke.
“...What kind of stuff?” You press Twilight further.
>Twilight gazes down at her lap through the water.
>”Y’know, stuff like… I dunno…”
“Like being your chair?”
>”Y-Yeah! B-Because, uh, you’re pretty tall and stuff, we could get a better look at the stage if we were at a concert or something!” Twilight answered with a clumsy laugh.
>”Or if we need help applying suntan lotion!” Pinkie added.
>”Yes, indeed! Anon, give me your hand.” Rarity commanded you.

>>41098904
“Huh?” You ask, feeling more self conscious.
>Rarity leans into you further, pressing her lovely chest against your shoulder.
>”Come, now, I promise I won’t bite~” Rarity whispered to you with sultry eyes.
>Her eyes are hypnotic.
>Fluttershy’s gripping your wrist tighter.
>You can feel her heavy breathing on your exposed torso.
>Sunset’s hips rock against yours again.
>You’re outnumbered.
“Okay…” You relent, releasing your hands from underneath your thighs.
>The moment your hand emerges from the water, Rarity seizes it for herself.
>Her delicate, intricately cared-for fingers trace along your hand like a careful inspector.
>”Your hands, they’re so firm, but with a gentle touch. They’re perfect for applying suntan lotion to a very lucky young lady’s body~” Rarity sighed, delicately holding your hand in hers.
>You would say this is getting overwhelming, but you crossed that line when Sunset got herself situated on your lap.
>Rarity’s hands are like the finest silk dancing across your skin.
>You’re not rich enough to afford what she’s showing off.
>”Oh, yes! Anon handles the critters at the animal shelter so wonderfully, those hands of yours are really special!” Fluttershy agrees, taking your other hand and gently holding it in hers like she was handing a baby bird.
>Sunset gently scratches her fingernails against your back.
>Your breath is getting heavier and shakily.
“I dunno, I think I’d be the lucky one for getting to rub lotion on a girl.” You try to argue.
>”Don’t undersell yourself, darling! You’re handsome, charming, caring, funny, everything a girl would want in a boyfriend!” Rarity challenged you.
>You can’t help but gently laugh at her bold claim.
“Really, everything?”
>”Why, sure! Granny and Big Mac are real good judges of character. They wouldn’t let me date any guy they didn’t like.” Applejack gently chuckled.
>Fluttershy nestles into your arm like she’s snuggling into bed.
>Her hair is so soft.
>It’s like her head’s covered in a blanket.
“Oh, yeah? If I’m such a catch, then how come none of you ever made a move on me?” You ask the group.
>”Remember, you’ve been getting love letters all night, new boy. Maybe the girl’s been too shy to approach you before now, so be nice!” Sunset rebutted you, pressing her body closer to you.
“Yeah, good point…” You admit.

>>41098907
>You’d be amazed if it wasn’t Sunset leaving you those notes.
>She’s just openly flirting with you.
>Even though they’re kept restrained by that bikini top, Sunset’s boobs feel amazing against you.
>You want to touch her.
>A lot.
>You want to touch her boobs and her stomach and her thighs.
>You want to turn your head up and kiss Sunset.
>There isn’t any other girl you’ve ever known that’s given you attention like Sunset has.
>Your arms are still being held by Rarity and Fluttershy, but if you were free of them, you doubt you’d be able to stop them from touching Sunset.
>You wouldn’t do anything too forward, just kind of rest your hands on her waist.
>Like a hug.
>You’d just be hugging her.
>...Your second-in-command has other ideas, though.
>The flag is flying at half mast.
>And it’s comfortably positioned between Sunset’s legs.
>Every small motion of her body makes you tingle down there.
>Her fingernails dig into your back more and more each time.
>You can barely make out the sound of the girls talking to each other.
>It’s amazing how they don’t seem to care at all that Sunset’s rubbing up on you.
>Fluttershy and Rarity aren’t helping at all.
>Rarity’s still gently caressing your left hand, and Fluttershy’s snuggled up on your right arm.
>They’re both so pretty.
>All your friends are so pretty.
>They like you and trust you.
>But tonight you learned that they’ve all got such lovely bodies.
>Pinkie’s nice and thick, Applejack’s muscular build is a thing of beauty, Rainbow’s lean body is something you could admire for hours, Twilight’s got a cute, petite build, Fluttershy is surprisingly curvy, and Rarity has the body of every Sports Illustrated swimsuit model you got to sneak a peek at.
>You’re intensely grateful you’re sitting in this hot tub, the steam’s hiding your nervous sweat.
>Or making it worse.
>”Hey, Anon!” Rainbow called out to you from across the hot tub.
“Huh?” You turn to her, thankfully being rescued from Sunset’s hypnotic powers.
>”I was saying I’d be down to help you practice singing. Pay attention next time, this offer’s limited time only.”
>You release an awkward laugh, which is the best you can do with the girls rubbing up on you.
>”What? What’s so funny?” Rainbow leered at you.
“Nothing! I just didn’t expect the offer.” You clarify.
>”Well, while you were off thinking about who-knows-what, Twilight and I figured that I’d be best suited for that, since we like the same kinda music and all.” Rainbow continued.
>You feel a chill at being reminded about the kind of thoughts you were thinking.
“Thanks, Dashie. I’d really like that.” You say to her with a soft, genuine tone.

>>41098911
>”You keep calling me that and you’re not getting anything from me.” Rainbow sternly reminded you with a hint of blush on her cheeks.
>”Ignore her, new boy. She secretly likes that nickname.” Sunset insisted.
>”I do not! It’s a little kid’s nickname!” Rainbow insisted, blushing deeper.
>Rainbow’s doing that really cute thing where she scrunches up her face when she’s annoyed.
>You can’t help but giggle at her with Twilight, Pinkie, and Applejack.
>”W-What’re you laughing at, Twiggles?” Rainbow directed her frustrations at her, invoking the nickname you came up with in a drunken haze.
>This only gets Twilight to laugh more.
>”Honestly, the name’s kinda grown on me.” She revealed.
>Before Rainbow could get even more indignant about this nickname drama, Rarity hurriedly pulls her arm from yours to cover her chest with a sharp gasp.
>Her horrified sound surprises you enough to make you sit up, and at first you’re confused because she’s still got her bikini top, but then you see the strings of her bikini top dangling from her shoulders.
>Oh.
>There’s that stiffness again.
>But you can’t let too much time go by without saying something.
“...You okay, Rarity?” You ask her, trying to not embarrass her further.
>”Y-Yes, darling, it’s just a minor… wardrobe malfunction, is all.” She nervously assures you, keeping her arms wrapped around her chest to remain covered.
>Incidentally pushing her chest.
>With a better look at her cleavage than you’ve ever gotten before.
>God damnit, Anon, not now.
>”Anon, would you be a dear and help me?” She gently asked you, turning her back to you.
>Fluttershy obligingly releases your right arm from her grasp to let you work.
>Sunset finally gets up off of your lap so you can use both of your arms easier.
>God.
>This is the most exposed you’ve ever seen Rarity.
>Her bare back is facing you, save for the dangling strings of her bikini top.
>You almost don’t trust your hands.
>Sunset’s been working you up all night.
>This is the first time you’ve gotten to touch a girl like this.
>But you can’t keep Rarity waiting.
>Time to put those highly praised hands of yours to work.
>You reach out and grasp the lower strings that wrap around underneath her chest like you’re playing Operation.
>In the brief moment where your fingers meet Rarity’s back, you can barely hear the sound of her softly gasping.
>Please, don’t do this now.
>You’re only getting harder.
>Don’t you dare poke Rarity with it.

>>41098916
>Although you’re not super up-to-speed on your knots, you fashion the two strings into a nice, study knot.
>Now for the shoulder straps.
>This requires getting closer with her.
>Your hands are almost trembling, but you’re making good progress.
>You carefully reach over Rarity’s shoulders and take a shoulder strap in each hand.
>Rarity is unable to stifle a shiver as her head tilts back when your thumbs graze her neck.
>The flag is flying at three-quarter mast.
>Focus.
>You surgically take the shoulder straps and tie them securely behind Rarity’s neck.
>Your fingers fumble a bit in the process, but you manage to not let the shoulder straps escape your grasp.
>Once you retract your hands, Rarity gives her bikini top a test tug to make sure she isn’t at risk of being exposed again.
>She’s convinced that it’s not going anywhere.
>”Oh, my hero~” Rarity swoons, leaning into you and resting her head on your shoulder to look up at you and bat her eyes.
>Please don’t rub into your dick.
>Please.
“Come on, I was just being a good friend.” You try to downplay your actions.
>”Hush, now! You saved me from public indecency once again! It seems like I have trouble keeping my clothes together around you. How ironic~” Rarity giggled.
>Boner pls.
>You might not be blushing too bad because of all the blood going down there.
>Don’t think about Rarity naked.
>Don’t think about how Rarity was almost naked in front of you.
>But then you’re smacked in the face by something that blocks your vision.
>You peel it off to inspect it.
>...It’s Pinkie’s bikini top.
>”Whoopsie! Lost my top, too!” Pinkie giggled, not even trying to appear embarrassed.
>Twilight and Applejack nervously laugh.
>Fluttershy looks down at her lap through the water.
>Your eyes make their way over to Pinkie.
>She’s covering her nice, juicy boobs in a way that’s really pushing them up.
>She’s not even being subtle about it.
>She’s biting her lip and leaning towards you.
>Sunset’s fingers return to your shoulders.
>You’re drowning in these emotions.
>You’ve never felt this overwhelmed before.
>You toss Pinkie’s bikini top back to her before you end up too frozen to do something.
“Here you go, try not to lose it again!” You say to her, politely averting your eyes so Pinkie can redress herself.
>You could almost taste Pinkie’s disappointment that you didn’t ogle her huge boobs.
>”We’ll see!” Pinkie slyly answered.

>>41098918
>”Man, this hot tub’s being a real jerk! Look at what I found!” Rainbow said with a sinister grin, holding up…
>...Applejack’s bikini bottoms.
>Applejack recognizes what Rainbow has.
>She looks down at her lap.
>Her eyes widen.
>”Give that back right now!” Applejack cries out with a fierce blush, trying to grab her bikini bottom back from Rainbow, who cackles victoriously as she holds it just out of reach.
>Applejack’s covering her lower half with her other hand, making it harder for her to reach out.
>While Rainbow’s facing away from Twilight to play her raunchy game of keep-away with Applejack, Twilight seizes the moment and tugs down the back of Rainbow’s spats.
>”Hey! Watch it!” Rainbow whips around at Twilight, her cocky demeanor having vanished in an instant.
>Sunset, Pinkie, and Rarity share laughter at Rainbow’s comeuppance, but you’re too thrown to join them.
>Because in that instant, you saw a teasingly small glimpse of Rainbow’s bare ass.
>It’s amazing.
>It’s so tight but curved so nicely.
>It’s everything you imagined it would be.
>Applejack’s able to snatch her bikini bottom back from Rainbow while she’s recovering from being given the Coppertone treatment.
>You try to ignore the tiny peek at her bush and keep to yourself.
>Things are getting hot.
>Really hot.
>”Enjoying the show~?” Sunset whispered in your ear, almost making you jump.
“What? I- You- They didn’t-”
>While you’re spilling your spaghetti, Sunset climbs back into your lap and gets comfortable.
>Your erection is standing straight up as it’s caught between Sunset’s thighs.
>She feels it.
>There’s absolutely now doubt about it.
>”Shh, you don’t need to say anything.” Sunset hushes you in the midst of the other girls laughing at their racy antics.
>You try to get some solace from all of this by looking over at Fluttershy.
>But that doesn’t help.
>Her one-piece swimsuit has made its way down to her stomach.
>She’s covering her chest, but is unable to match the confidence of Rarity or Pinkie.
>All Fluttershy can do is press her body against yours, hiding her face behind her hair.
>What is happening to them?
>You’re unable to brainstorm an answer because Sunset grabs your attention again.
>She carefully guides your hand onto her thigh.
>She sneaks your fingers underneath the strings of her bikini bottom.
>”Come on, new boy~” Sunset whispered, pressing her entire body against you.
>She guides your finger around the drawstring of her bikini.
>”You know you wanna~”

>>41098824
Really, I'm saving the relationship drama stuff for Life Flutters By because that's the slice-of-life romance story with some lewd stuff sprinkled in.
This is a story where Anon makes the seven girls into his harem, we're all here for the lewd scenes. Relationship drama would get in the way.

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Okay, so to make up for the fact that I only started this barely 12 hours ago, I decided to make it a gif and it turned out way better than I thought it would. I won't need catbox yet since I now didn't have time to draw/animate the NSFW part(s) yet.
Sorry the hands are a little weird, I'll fic this up after putting each slide into Krita where vector tools can be used. So far, this was made using layers in photoshop.
Hope you guys like it.
>>41098921
Fuck yes, dude. Things are getting really spicy now. I'm really glad you took the green in this direction in this way. I think it's working out absolutely wonderfully. Amazing work.
>>41098929
I see, I gotcha. Maybe I really should reconsider my idea for non-lewd in my possible story down the road since that's pretty much completely true that we're all here for the lewd scenes.

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>>41098921
>>41098963
>The unf levels of this thread have increased tenfold
Ultra Based, both of you

>>41098295
This

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>>41098921
You've sentenced into a harem serving.

>>41098963
Pls make the rest soon

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>>41098921
I just finish reading all this green and I need to tell you that my dick is reaching critical mass, good fucking job

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>>41098963

I'm gonna repost the prologue from last thread before adding my intro with Anon I finally managed to write and get going with it.
Prologue:
>Be Mrs.Harshwinney
>You approved a request to form a club as a member of the school staff
>It's a club meant to serve as a support group for overly shy people
>You hope to help them become more confident like yourself so they can go on to have succesful careers
>You go to the first meeting of the new club feeling optimistic
>Once you get there and see the four girls in attendance they all look as shy and skittish as you imagined
>Though one thing you didn't expect is they all have enormous chests
>Even bigger than yours
>Still, you keep your professional composure and do a formal introduction before seeing what they want to do here
"So, girls, what made you decide you want to become more confident?"
>They might not answer so easily, but hopefully asking them directly will get somewhere
>One of them you recognize speaks up first
>"I'm... I'm Fluttershy, and I was hoping to become more confident so I could get a boyfriend..."
>You internally sweat because that'd probably be the one thing you aren't prepared to help with
>The other girls nod and press the issue further
>If you tell them you've never had a boyfriend you doubt they'll take you seriously at all
>Then you wouldn't be able to help them be more confident in other pursuits like career goals
>So you decide to pretend to have knowledge and experience with dating
>It's not like you've never heard advuce about it you could retell and you know about having non-romantic relationships with people
>That should be enough to at least help them get their foot in the door
"Sure, I could help you with that."
>The green one among them speaks up now
>"Hi, uhhmmm, I'm Wallflower... Are you sure? No boys even seem to notice I exist..."
>That's normal if she doesn't make herself known
"If they don't approach you, then you need to find a boy you like and make the first move yourself."
>It's common sense to you, but all of them practically seem to have an anxiety attack thinking about it
>A girl with a more gray color theme to her clothes and hair is next to speak up
>"I... I couldn't possibly do that! I hardly ever leave home! How could I 'just' walk up to and talk to a boy?!"
>She starts to hyperventalate and takes out a paper bag to start breathing into it
>Fluttershy pats her back while trying to calm her, "It'll be okay Marble, that's why we're here after all."
>THe anxiety in the room rises before the last girl who hasn't spoken yet speaks
>"What if I get rejected?! I don't think I could handle that..."
>All the girls seem to agree with her, but you don't think they have that much to worry about considering their 'assets'
>You've got to turn things around and quick
"Alright girls, let's just take a deep breath here..."
>You do some exaggerated deep breathing to help them follow your lead
>It does seem to help a little
>"I'm Moondancer by the way..."

>>41100025
>The last girl introduces herself after calming down a little
"You girls really don't have that much to worry about. You're all very beautiful girls with great figures."
>Marble fidgets with a blush before asking, "D-do you really think so?"
"Of course I do, if you approach a nice boy and talk with him. He'll be head over heals for you in no time."
>She seems very happy to hear that
>In fact, all of them seem very willing to listen to you now
>Maybe if you could just shift the topic away from boys you'll be able to get to more familiar territory
>Talk about securing a good job instead
>Though for the rest of the club meeting boys is all they want to talk about
>How to talk to boys
>What boys like and what do they do for fun
>How can they get involved in those activities with boys
>Once talking with a boy, how do they get them to stick around
>You try to answer the best you can, but you feel like blind leading the blind here
>You project the best air of confidence you can, but you feel like the longer you talk about it the more cracks will start to show
>How long before they realize you don't have any actual experience with dating?
>You hope they don't find out, and that you really will get to talk about something besides boys
>Though hearing their worries about boys does remind you of a younger you
>Back then you devoted yourself to work instead of worrying about securing a boyfriend
>Was being a workaholic even back then the real reason, or was a part of you shy like them?
>You can't help feeling a sense of comradery with them hearing their concerns and wanting to help them

>>41100031
>Be Anon
>You are at lunch sitting in a back corner practically hiding by yourself
>Like you usually do
>When your attention is caught by the mention of your name
>You look in the direction to see Flash Sentry looking for you
>Recently you'd done a class group project with him
>You both needed to create a powerpoint presentation about something and do a presentation on it
>You did most of the research and explained it to him so he'd know what to talk about
>He wrote the script for the presentation based on your research and you made the powerpoint based on the script
>Then he gave the presentation while you sat at the computer and moved the powerpoint along as he spoke
>You think the arrangement worked quite well
>Especially since you'd have frozen up in front of the class trying to give a presentation
>So you wonder why he's looking for you now
>Out of curiosity you leave the table and sheepishly get his attention
>He notices you quick enough to realize where you'd been sitting
>"Hey, Anon, why sit all the way out here by yourself?"
>You feel put on the spot, but need to say something
"Well... I don't know very many people and don't feel comfortable sitting at a table people are already at. Back here I can consistently find an empty table."
>Flash stays positive and gives you a few firm slaps on the back
>"There's no need for that, come sit with me."
>He takes you with him more towards the center of the caffeteria
>All the noise from people talking around you is making you feel on edge and anxious
>After sitting down he says more about why he looked for you
>"I thought you were an alright guy during the project we worked on, and was wondering how you're doing. I hadn't seen you at all since. Now I think I know why."
>You definitely don't put yourself out in the open often
>You're a bit like a mouse that way
>Though you wish it didn't have to always be that way
"How do you just put yourself out there in front of people and talk like that?"
>Asking him hoping there's some kind of secret to it
>He looks at you a little confused
>"It just comes naturally to me. If anything I'd want to ask why you seem to have so much trouble with it."
>Sometimes you wonder what you'll do after graduation if you can't get over your social anxiety
>Since you've heard how important networking is for getting a job
>You're only a sophmore, so you have some time, but you can't not think about it
>Without even saying anything further about how much this worries you Flash can tell how troubled you are
>He then seems to remember something
>"I remember seeing an announcement about a new club that started for helping really shy people, like a support group kind of thing."
>That sounds interesting, but maybe too good to be true
>"I may not know how exactly to help you be more social, but maybe they can."
>Maybe, but will they?

>>41100037
"I... I don't know... Are you sure they're legit? I hear most things that promise help like that are scams..."
>Flash laughs
>"Come on, Anon. It's a school club, how would they make any money tricking anyone? It's not like you pay to join."
>He's got you there
>The more Flash thinks about it the more sure he seems that you should join this club
>"I'm pretty sure they meet every day after school. Let's go then and check it out."
>You feel nervous about and and shake a little wondering how to tell him you don't want to
>Though before you can he assumes you will as he leaves after the bell rings ending lunch saying, "See you then, Anon!"
>The rest of the school day you feel a knot in your stomach considering trying to avoid him after the end of the last class
>You almost feel like you'd trained for this the way you'd always practically hug the walls as you went around the hallways and avoid any attention
>Yet...
>Once school ended even your best efforts didn't stop Flash from finding you right away
>He got behind you and started pushing your back to get you going towards the club room
>Having apparently found it before school ended
>You want to resist more, but you don't work out and it's not like you want him to get hurt
>Once the door with a sign for the club on it comes into view you reflexively dig in your heels and Flash has a much harder time pushing you
>"It's for the best Anon! Just get in there!", Flash says with a strained voice as he stubbornly pushes you the rest of the way to the door and opens the door before shoving you in
>Inside you see four girls and a woman you recognize as Mrs.Harshwinney
>All of them have huge chests and kind of impressive figures in general that make you flustered and almost makes it feel like a trap for beautiful women to be at a club like this
>You're the only guy here and their stares at you feel like they pierce into your soul
>You panic and turn around trying to turn the doorknob and leave
>It's useless because Flash is holding the door shut
>You freeze when you hear Mrs.Harshwinney address you
>"There's no need to be so nervous, you're here to join the club, right?"
>Letting go of the knob, you turn around and answer her while staring at the ground, "Well... Uhmmm. Y-Yes..."
>She gives a frustrated sigh before speaking again
>"Alright, come take a seat over here and introduce yourself, Anon."
>It seems she remembers you well enough as well to remember your name
>You look back up enough to see where an empty seat is before moving over to it and sitting down
>The seat is next to Mrs.Harshwinney, and after you sit down you hear the girls whispering to each other about you being a boy
>Making you worried that you're unwelcome because they expected only girls to join
>"Go on and introduce yourself."
>Mrs.Harshwinney prods you again as you sat there feeling like coming here was a mistake

>>41100041
"I'm... I'm Anon, nice to meet you all. I, well, I always have trouble speaking up, especially in front of people... I kind of hope to fix that before I graduate because I don't know what I'll do after graduation otherwise..."
>Looking up a bit to see how they reacted to their reaction to their introduction they seem more understanding and sympathetic to what you described rather than like they want you to leave
>Bringing your head all the way up, you can't help but smile a little at the thought of being accepted and welcomed
>Mrs.Harshwinney pats you on the head lightly
>"You're the exact kind of person this club was made for, welcome aboard."
>You hear murmurs of agreement from the girls before Mrs.Harshwinney prods them to introduce themselves as well
>They all blush profusely and seem reluctant to do it
>So Mrs,Harshwinney introduces them instead seemingly unwilling to wait for them to do it themselves
>"First we have Fluttershy, the founding member of the club. Although she's still very much shy, I'd say she's normally the one who has the least amount of trouble with her shyness."
>She meakly waves to you before saying, "Hi, Anon."
>"Next we have Marble, she's homeschooled but still allowed to join the school club because her sister Pinkie attends the school. In fact, it was Pinkie who reccomended to Marble she join the club after Fluttershy told Pinkie about the club since they're friends."
>Marble hides behind her hair as she waves to you much more meakly than Fluttershy, in fact it was hard to tell she did it at all
>"Then Wallflower here joined the club after seeing a poster for it. Honesetly she hasn't said much about herself and nobody has been around to say more for her. So my introduction for her is a little lacking, I'm sorry about that."
>She waves to you with a bit more of an energetic jerkyness to her hand while blushing and averting her eyes
>"Finally we have Moondancer. As far as I'm aware the last member to join before you. She's been ignored by people she tried to make friends with before and feels burned by that, but hopefully we can help her be more comfortable with opening up to people."
>Moondancer gives a quick huff while waving to you, apparently not exactly liking the introduction given for her
>After everyone is introduced there's a silence that feels awkward
>You're forced to say something
"So... What do you normally do here?"
>The girls clam up again and avert their eyes even more from you
>Are they always like this?
>You guess it makes sense given the nature of the club, but they're making even you feel outgoing by comparison
>More surprisingly though, even Mrs.Harshwinney seems reluctant to answer that question
>It seems like she's even blushing a little before she coughs uncomfortably and turns her chair to directly face you rather than the center of the group
>"I'm going to demonstrate something with you for the rest of the club."

>>41100044
>The air feels tense as even Mrs.Harshwinney takes time to prepare herself for what comes next
>You'd never seen her apprehensive about anything before now
>"How are you going to ask him to be your boyfriend?!"
>Moondancer blurts out as you feel your face burn up like you got red hot coals shoved in your face
"What?!", you yell without thinking
>Mrs.Harshwinney glares at her sharply and Moondancer cowers immediately
>"You can't just ask a boy to be your boyfriend right away! You need to talk about other stuff first to get to know him better!"
>She retorts while sounding upset and very uncomfortable with a clear blush on her face
>"For all you know when you just meet him he could be dangerous!"
>Adding before glancing back at you
>"Anon here is a gentle boy who wouldn't hurt a fly, obviously, but just for the sake of argument what if it was a farce, and he had a dangerous and violent side to him deep down he was hiding until you realize too late?!"
>Clearly trying to scare them into not trying to just jump into a relationship as you sit there completely shocked
>"That's... kind of hot...", Marble mumbles before adding, "D-do you think he'd choke me, just a little, not too much...?"
>Mrs.Harshwinney goes into a full rant after hearing that
>"Don't be like that! What's the matter with you?! Women get killed that way! By abusive boyfriends! It's terrible!"
>Calming down a little after, but stil continuing
>"It'd be one thing if he just pretended to be a bad boy, but you shouldn't want a guy who's actually dangerous. You should want a respectful guy who'll treat you right."
>Marble is clearly very embarrassed and nods in agreement with what Mrs.Harshwinney is saying
>Mrs.Harshwinney actively calms herself down before addressing you again
>"So, what do you normally do for fun?"
>Asking you about a much more normal topic
"I like video games. More specifically I like turn based games like strategy games or RPGs. Since they give me plenty of time to think about what I'm doing. If it gets too hectic I get nervous."
>Mrs.Harshwinney seems to get more comfortable as she asks you some follow up question about specific games you've been playing and what they're like
>You find yourself feeling more comfortable as well talking about the games
>Everything is going smoothly until a lull in the conversation happens, and Moondancer raises her hand
>"Yes, Moondance?", Mrs.Harshwinney asks in a very teacherly fashion
>"Are you going to ask him to be your boyfriend now?"
>Mrs.Harshwinney sighs wearily and shakes her head face down in her palms
>"You know what" Fine, I'll demonstrate what happens if you just ask out of the blue like that."
>She then turns back to you
>"Will you by my boyfriend?"
>You blush fiercely and feel put on the spot
>How could you deny her?
"Y-Yes!", you respond nervously feeling like it's what you should say
>Mrs.Harshwinney blushes a deep crimson before scolding you

>>41100044
>"That's not how you should respond after a quick conversation like that! You should say you don't know me well enough to give an answer yet! You should talk more, hang out a few times, go to a cafe or something, a first date before you decide if you'd date for real!"
>She looks away and trails off while clearly imagining a scene in her head
>"On that first date you'd feel the romance in the air... Talk about your feelings for each other... Maybe go back to one of your places... Get comfortable with each other on the couch, and decide if your truly right for each other while in each other's arms..."
>She then stops to look you in the eyes like she's wondering if your 'yes' was serious
>"You shouldn't toy with a girls emotions like that by saying 'yes' unless you really mean it
"I... I'm sorry...", you respond feeling bad about it
>Mrs.Harshwinney pats you on the head a couple times
>"It's okay, Anon, I did kind of put you on the spot there, and we're learning here. So it's expected to make mistakes."
>She then places a hand under your cheek, holding your head as she clearly thinking about what she said earlier about going on a date
>Mrs.Harshwinney then abruptly shifts gears by getting out of the seat she was sitting in
>Gesturing for Fluttershy to come sit in the seat
>"Let's have Fluttershy come over and try having a normal conversation with him. Just talk about something completely mundane. Like maybe the animal shelter."
>Flutershy is reluctant as expected, but with further prompting Mrs.Harshwinney manages to get Fluttershy to take the seat next to you and facing you
>She whimpers a bit cutely before starting to say something
>"Like she mentioned... I volunteer at an animal shelter... I really care about the animals and like taking care of them..."
>You actually think you've heard about her and the animal shelter before
"That's very nice, I wish I had something so noble to be passionate about..."
>You say praising her as she blushes and hides behind her hair a little
>"You could... Uhmmm... Join me and help out too sometime. If-if that's okay with you..."
"That sounds fine... When would be a good time for it?"
>Fluttershy mumbles and seems too nervous to say a specific time
Mrs.Harshwinney tries to help her out
>"Maybe you could try talking about video games with him as well?"
>Fluttershy then brings up she has a few games she plays as well
>Mostly games that have to do with caring for animals or otherwise very cutesy games about animals
>Definitely nothing where anything bad happens to any of them
>Not quite your cup of tea, but it's already obvious to you why she'd like those games
>She mentions one time she was playing one of her favorite games with one of her friends, and they got mad because they were competitive and Fluttershy was too good at the game
>Fluttershy of course felt bad about it
>Only intending to have fun with a friend rather than be competitive about it

>>41100047
This is what I've got so far. Really hope to have more sooner rather than later now that I have some momentum starting here.

>>41100047
>>41100049
Really cute idea, I love these gals. Would give each of them a hug. Looking forward to the next part whenever you get it out. I’m readin’ it.
>>41099924
Pinkie: “Wowie super cool wipeout nonny!”
Maud: “Are you okay?”
Limestone: “Ha loser looks like I’m the better surfer!”
Cloudy: “Anon I warned you to be careful”
Marble: “He’s cute at this angle”

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>>41098963
>draw/animate the NSFW part(s)

>>41100047
I really liking this, and not only because I have a soft spot for Harshwinney, hopefully there are mor of this green

>>41100047
>>41100049
Defo looking forward to more! I like the little cast of characters you've assembled, it's gonna be fun to see how they bond and develop

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>>41099924
>Four equally hot sisters
>Breeds their mom instead