Succubus, Level 1? edition.Previous thread: >>11493042It goes without saying, but this is a fetish thread on a degenerate hentai board and not the place to debate real-world tranny shit.
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>>11496566>just need an in universe reasons as to why the waifutrix only turns sb into super powered/ monster waifuDo you really need a reason other than the creator of the device liking sexy girls? The resulting conversation between the creator and user of the device would be comedy gold.
>>11496745Continuing from the last thread.While yes you can go with the comedy route/ just because route, i don't feel like this is enough. Now since their personalities and instincts influence the mc subconsciously, i find it amusing if one of the transformations has a crush on a guy that the mc knows so the mc turns into a tsundere when transformed into her and interacting with the guy. Meanwhile the guy has a crush...on another transformation of the mc. Now maybe the feelings carry over from transformation to transformation to base form but they vary in intensity or sth. Another transformation is basically a slut that wants to sleep around with men, women whatever is available and is in the mood for and makes the mc very confident and energetic. I already have the mc (and the transformations by extension) being bi to make it easier for the mc to want to use the transformations for lewed reasons and riding dick (since this is Porn).Some transformations are more "addictive" to turn into due to how it makes the mc feel than others.All transformation are superhuman physically and have mild durability and regen but none are fully bulletproof but the more physical focused ones like the catgirl obviously would be more enhanced+durable+regen than the more ranged transformations. The telekinetic one is the least physically superhuman because she relies on well telekinesis, i know duh. i decided to make every transformation color coded with a different hair color, each one corresponding to their selected slot color in the waifutrix (example the screen goes red if the explosive red head get's selected) The transformation time can vary 15 minutes to1 hour but more "sexual energy" can extend the transformation time. A "master control" system like Ben 10 exists that allows you to switch transformations and base male form by thought and allows the user to remain as whatever transformation he chooses indefinitely but this will appear way later.(1/2)
>>11496745Could be that thr device is a modification of another device made for mothering babies.Or they stole the genome for the device from a intergalactic clinic that helps mothers have children. Or their lab aid fucked up ans broke the male genome data device so oops, all women.
>>11496749>I already have the mc (and the transformations by extension) being bi to make it easier for the mc to want to use the transformations for lewed reasons and riding dick (since this is Porn).This is so lame.Really really lame.Listen to me, and I will help you out. The device changes the personality of the user, filtering what he says to something that wouod sound IC for said heroines. The device also makes roleplaying as said heroines pleasurable ro him, so eventually he goes on his way to "act in character". Much mroe enjoyable.
>>11496762>This is so lame.I hate to agree with a Redditspacer, but...>>11496749>I already have the mc (and the transformations by extension) being bi to make it easier for the mc to want to use the transformations for lewed reasons and riding dick (since this is Porn)....having the main character start out as bisexual is a huge mistake. Far, far more of your potential audience will be into the idea of a straight MC being corrupted by his female forms than would accept male bisexuality. Women view male bisexuality as a transitory stage to male homosexuality and men are universally disgusted by the idea, with straight men being intrinsically grossed out by dudes banging dudes and gay men assuming that bi dudes are just in denial about their true nature as gay cockwhores. I generally support writers trying something unconventional, but male bisexuality is going to be a big hurdle for readers to get past.That said, if you're willing to trade broad reach for artistic integrity, you do you.
>>11496745>>11496749(2/2)The "plot" is basically the mc using the transformations for sex and heroics, i will smooth out the villains later, for now im just going with "chaotic ahh" whatever stereotypical villain types from media you know randomly appear from time to time. Aliens? Mad scientist? Rival/doppelganger that has a waifutrix of their own? Yes to all.I wanna give every waifu transformation their own unique power/ power set but i don't want the mc to become too OP since that takes away from plot and removes stakes, makes the story boring etc. I want there to be balance between the transformations with each one being useful in their own way, each having restrictions and the powers becoming stronger the more the mc trains with them kinda like my hero academia. For that reason i avoid super OP powers like mind reading, brain washing, flash tier super speed, unrestricted teleportation, tech manipulation or powers with loose rules and no restrictions like just magic or reality manipulation. Ofcourse that's just me because im autistic and don't like my characters overpowered too easily. Anyone else that wants to make their take on the idea can do whatever they want.As for clothing. I went with the idea of the transformation gets clothes that naturally compliment their figure and are appropriately sexy the moment the henshin sequence ends. Ofcourse the clothes can be removed (its porn so duh) and each form has it's own fashion sense and style they prefer.
>>11496765>That said, if you're willing to trade broad reach for artistic integrity, you do you.Actually i don't care about artistic integrity or whatever this was just the easiest way i could think off the top of my head for the mc to want to experiment and go dick riding but the idea of roleplay and being in character slowly corrupting the mc that >>11496762 proposed is also a good idea and a hot scenario but for me it's whatever, genderbend guys becoming a cock hungry nymphos is what im into so the faster they get to the point the better. Also would be interesting if each transformation has their own fetish and is more dom or sub in bed.
>>11496765>I hate to agree with a Redditspacer,Can we start reporting people who say reddit spacing for being under age? Spacing between sentences goes back to usenet and early email. Its such a bizarre childish comment.
>>11496745>>11496749>>11496762>>11496765And now for some more waifu ideas for the waifutrix continuing from where the last thread's number6. Blonde,tall,tan, muscle waifu. She is the strongest physically of the transformations with the best physical stats (durability, regen, strength, endurance stuff like that). She basically acts as the four arms of the playlist but you know only has 2 arms. She can lift way way more than her size. Im not into too muscular women because they look too masculine so im thinking her build is feminine but still has muscle like nana shimura from my hero academia. I was gonna give her the ability to grow stronger the more she gets hurt like metal bat from one punch man but that would be too OP so i scrapped it. 7. Pink hair "fairy" girl. It's in quotation marks because she's still human sized. She's acts as the flyer of the transformations, she has dragon fly wings that either grow or manifest from her back (haven't decided if they are actual wings or energy constructs). No idea for offensive powers other than generic "shoot energy beams"8. Cyan blue hair.She's the xlr8 of the playlist thus being in the number 8 spot. Im on the fence if her power should be generic super speed or limited time manipulation (can slow down, stop, accelerate time for a limited amount of seconds like 5-10)9. Another monster girl this time a dryad (or however you spell it) she has plant manipulation only more limited. She has slightly greenish skin because she can photosynthesize, she's half plant after all.10. Honestly i have no idea for the last one. She needs to fulfill a role that the other transformations can't so im thinking she can hide and travel inside shadows and black colored surfaces, being the stealth transformation. Black hair obviously.
>I keep doing this thing that almost everyone on reddit does, why do people keep calling me a redditor?
>>11496790There is more to the internet than reddit and 4chan you brain damaged child
>Thing happens almost all the time on reddit>Thing happens rarely on 4chan, to the point that it's glaringly obvious when it does happen>If you dare point this out, the redditor gets angryNoticing patterns continues to be mankind's #1 most important trait.
>>11496806Noticing patterns that dont exist is a sign of mental illness.
>>11496782>>11496767>>11496749I'm >>11496762 , to give my full criticism and suggestion, I'd say that you are going at it in the wrong way. You should first define your protagonist and the setting he is inserted, THEN work on the female forms. Also be a bit creative with them, I think yours are a bit generic. 6 for example is just Mirko, and there are already tons of Mirko TGsTconcept - >Go for aliens rather than human women, to avoid explaining who these exact women are and to not get into twining>Long ago, an ancient alien empire build several weapons of great power - one of them is the DEVICE - which grants you the power to turn into powerful alien races, some even lost to time. The truth lost in time tho, is that the DEVICE wasn't conceived as a weapon, but as something to give to CONCUBINES. It was meant to turn the wearer into a stereotypical highly sexual parody of different alien races, even making the wearer be inclined to act like said stereotypes (in fact, if a member of said races saw the wearer in their forms, they would feel extreme second hand embarrassement... and get kind of turned on)>The wearer has everything that he says "translated" to something fitting to the stereotype of the alien race, but leaning into it is pleasurable, so the incentive is to make the wearer eventually act that way by himself. With this solved, the most important part if figuring the cast and setting.- Is the wearer an american teenager? Who are his friends that know his secret? - Is the wearer a college guy? His allies are his roomates?- Is the wearer a 40 years old jaded secret agent, that is now forced to act like a cringy hentai anime girl? Does he have a team?I think the last one is the most fresh, but you do you.For allies/pairings: 1 silent "cool kind of edgy" guy that needs to "open up" and gets easily embarrassed, a more nerdy guy that knows a lot about aliens and super heroes, a slightly older chad-like guy. These work in all scenarios above.
>Pattern exists on reddit so thoroughly, so absolutely, that for well over a decade now it's gained a well used sitewide nickname here with countless users of it>"Yeah well it's sometimes used outside of that site too so you're not allowed to use the nickname to shame me or I'll call the mods!">"It also wasn't invented there, please ignore that it's the most prominent and egregious example of people overusing it, and things don't have to be named specifically after the first ever location they happen in, calling me that makes me sad :("
You're really showing how much you are only on reddit and 4chan and nothing else if you frame the entire internet before reddit as "sometimes"
>>11496762While I don't like transformation when it's just emasculation/humiliation, I agree that it's more fun when there is some degree of friction/discomfort. A straight guy turned into a straight girl is entertaining, it's a proof the transformation goes to the core of the person's mind. >>11496749>While yes you can go with the comedy route/ just because route, i don't feel like this is enough.A trope I like in fiction is "the technology/magic was designed for women, or by a monogender species, so men using it get affected".While I don't like crossdressing, I also like the idea that "some roles are gender exclusive", like the eldars in 40k treating banshees as women, or the qunari in dragon age having no concept of a female warrior. A story in a world where jobs are always gender exclusive might be fun. For exemple, a guy down on his luck applying to a company for a secretary job, knowing he'll be a woman for his entire contract. For flavor, we could have that the religion or society expects everyone to live through several human aspects, and looks down on people who've never genderswapped
>I'm just going to ignore most of your post because it destroys me, I'm also so thoroughly reddit to my bones and seethe so absolutely when somebody points it out that I will never ever stop taking the bait
>>11496848The selection of 10 alien babes would be picked by the DEVICE. I suppose it scams the brain of the user, and picks forms closer and more fitting to his specie, with stereotypes that can be understod by humans, to prevent really weird species. And I say for you to be more creative, your heroes look too much like Ben's. Why not have the strong alien be a small bratty girl with a big ass?>Nnnngh~! This stupid form again?! Why do I always end up as a flat-chested midget with this ridiculous jiggle butt?! >K-Keisuke?! Is that seriously you?! You… you turned into a girl! >It’s Mimi now, dummy! And yes, this is my hero form. “Sparkle Butt Mimi,” defender of justice or whatever. But I’m stuck at half power like this… (Mimi spins around, showing off her ridiculously short skirt and heart-shaped panties) "…which means I need an emergency power-up. Right now! A good, firm slap charges me up. The harder you hit it, the stronger I get~ "("Please just do it. I’m dying of embarrassment here… but at the same time I really want you to slap it hard. Shit, the transformation is making me enjoy acting like this more and more…")>Y-You’re joking, right?! I can’t just… slap my best friend’s ass! Even if it’s currently tiny and magical and… really bouncy! I mean NO! >Heeey~ What’s the matter, Takashi? Scared of my butt? Or are you just embarrassed because you’ve been staring at it for the last ten seconds? Pervert. C’mon~ Just one good smack. Make it sting. I’ll even say “please, Onii-chan~” ("’m begging my best friend to slap my ass … This is the worst day of my life. And yet the city is getting destroyed!")>D-Don’t call me that! >Pleeeease, Takashi-kun? Your cute little Mimi needs her power-up. If you don’t slap my butt right now, the villain’s gonna win and it’ll be all your fault~ >O-Only because the city needs saving… I swear…See, a different take on a "super strenght" alien.
>>11496849>>11496806>>11496804>>11496790Okay calm down both od you.First, yes, redditors deserve the rope - but if you look the archives people have included paragraphs on their posts here since before reddit was a thing. Sometimes its just easier to read.Second, I like doing it because its good to put emphazis on certain phrases, in my country not a single soul uses reddit. Really, critcize redditors by the content of their post and for having reddit-tier opinions (they using reddit or not) - not by post format.
>>11496856>I'm just going to ignore most of your post because it destroys meWhy would I humor your ignorance? What is there to comment on? You honestly think reddit invented spacing between paragraphs and sentences. Would you humor a child that thinks taco bell invented tacos? Hershey invented chocolate? You're an idiot who doubles down when told very clearly you're wrong
>>11496859He just likes to argue. Probably the same person who shit up the last thread
>>11496848>>11496858Now for alien species, here is my suggestion:1 - “Sparkle Butt Mimi” - flast chested with wide hips and big ass - has super strenght the more her butt is slapped2 - Bounce Bustia - Ultra-busty onee-san type - her breasts can be filled with liquid that makes her bounce fast, by groping herself she can always shoot the liquid that explodes 3 - Nekopaw - Catgirl ninja in a spy-catsuit - her tail is her weak spot, grabbing it makes her orgasm4 - Twisty - Genki, kind of insane, pink elastic girl - she can take several forms and envelop her enemies, but her entire body is an erogenous zone 5 - High Princess - stereotypical ojou look, massive ego - has powers over gravitty, if she feels confident and amazing she can make objects lighter, if she gets angry she can make them heavier, if she has low self steem she can barely get up from the ground - She craves praise. 6 - Thunderthighs - Sporty, stacked, tanned tomboy with yellow hair - She if fast and can do eletric kicks. 7 - Maidrina - stacked ara ara maid, “This maid is very sorry for being such a perverted girl…” - aquatic creature, she can shoot bubbles. Being degraded turns her own, sometimes she will ask villains to do it. 8 - SparkleLove - Classic cute idol with twin tails - can shoot sonic attacks when doing lewd dances. Give her wings, she can also fly. 9 - Arcana - Stacked shy bookworm with glasses - she can make force fields and light constructs. 10 - Giga Robo of Darkness - chunni goth girl, has magnetic powers,mostly fights by creating a mecha with whatever is around her. Let me know what you think
>>11496861Trannies are like that.
>>11496859There's definitely legitimate reasons to use proper paragraphs, even multiple of them in a post. Hell I've sometimes had as many as three or four in the same post, but those were actually warranted uses; meanwhile this guy puts one after every sentence and even after the post number quote because reddit tranny.
Prageaphs can be as short as one sentence. You start a new paragraph when you start a new idea. It is not depended on number of sentences
>>11496848The reason i didn't go with aliens is because i didn't just want to ripoff Ben 10 too much. I was thinking they are like genetic experiments and they don't really exist as people. > Is the wearer an american teenager? Considering this is supposed to be smut no none of the characters are under age but i get what you mean i should flesh out that part first. As for 6 being mirko, well i was going for more 4 arms role but again i get what you mean. >>11496858>your heroes are like Ben'sYeah that's true and the reason is im not into lolis and stuff like that so i avoid these body types and the second reason is because it's a nod that it is reference to Ben 10 and third im not thinking too hard about it and just take elements from media i watched that i knew work and made things inspired by them. Im writting smut. Should i have tried to be more creative? Yes but this is the first draft. The ideas your proposed >>11496879 are interesting so i might add some of those in on the second draft.
>>11496886The funniest thing about the concept of reddit spacing to me is (granted, it's been... oh man, a decade since I had a reddit account? Time flies) that reddit spacing achieves the look of normal 4chan spacing. The double new line just moves it down one, so you could reasonably argue that doing it likethis is reddit spacing, because you're creating the same look as reddit.
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A better question is why do some of you even know that reddit spaces text? What are you doing over there?
>>11496976>>11496977>>11496978Good premise. It's a common monkey's paw, but usually the author contrives some sort of tortured phrasing that allows the wish to get misinterpreted. This one is maybe still a bit contrived, but it feels plausible that like, the alien would misunderstand in that way.I think also that the main character having a moment of "oh this is a monster. I let my guard down. It's going to kill and eat me right now." is good.
>>11496985It was a decade ago, I was still in school and all my friends used it. I dunno what else to tell you, man. I lost track of it and the password by the time I graduated.
Does anyone remember the manga (I think it was in an anthology) where the guy bought gender bending pills but they kept wearing out faster and faster so even after getting married he had a giant pile of pill bottles at the end?
>>11496985>why do some of you even know that reddit spaces text?They're lying and using reddit for porn. Just a quick Google shows that reddit has gender bending groups, futanari groups, etc. They know what reddit looks like because they go there to beat off
>>11497025>>11496985Tbh its much more likely that people know it by osmosis by seeing people complain here. I for one, as I never was on reddit.This said, I already posted my opinion - give people shit for having reddit-tier cuck opinions, rather than formating.
>>11497025>They know what reddit looks like because they go there to beat offWhy would I do that? I wait for the secret redditors among you to bring it all to me.
>>11496720This is fucking stupid
Last thread was deliberately shit up with a tranny argument. This thread is deliberately being shit up with a Reddit argument. Do not take the bait and engage with this pointless retardism, just post porn.
>>11497088>socks hugging thighshhnnggg
>>11497115Nahoyan draws that a lot.
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>>11496996>134225615this is translated by an indonesianthe original is a lot more monkey's paw-y with the language, what with asian languages dropping subjects and relying on implied context left and righttl-kun could have still accomplished the same by doing something like "I can perform magical transformations for you!" instead of "transform for you"tldr tl-kun is an esl seamonkey hack and should level up their english writing skills
>>11497153RIP. The alien being ESL was actually a better concept IMO.
>>11497127does great workthe girls are so fucking cute
>>11496720This is fucking great
>>11497053It's fucking peak is what it is
>>11497088>>11497127Love his art but he's a terrible writer out of these one-shots, I still think he should be locked into the light novel adaptation mines or his editor link him up to a competent writer
>>11497202I like the one-shots, the weirder and sillier ones especially. The thing I don't like are his attempts at ongoing series, which are all bland wish-fulfillment wank.
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