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>>7726210
This isn't bad, just stylized, and it's phenomenal. I miss when MJ was hot.
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>>7726201
I recall watching a video that explains how the Cap image was made, and its anatomy actually isn't terrible, but the inclusion of the shield makes everything look wonky and terrible.
I also recall that Liefeld was warned that it was a shitty image, and Liefeld wasn't fussed because it isn't anything important, just a quick marketing piece to let people know he'll be working on the cap series, and he didn't think many would see it anyway... and now it's probably his most well known drawing, lol.

I guess the moral of the story is to always be paranoid that your very worst public drawing will be the one that follows you everywhere, haha.
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>>7726201
There's plenty of examples of bad anatomy in the capeshit industry, specially in the 90s when most pro artists learned to draw comics by tracing them.
Roger Cruz even admited to it, he said that tracing Jim Lee x-men comics is how he learned the craft...
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>>7726223
>Phenomenal
Oh really..

Collarbone is a straight line, right leg just popping out of torso and the head looks stiffly pasted on top of body as an afterthought and needs some overall work. Muscles are static (especially noticable around the neck area).

Meanwhile this spiderman has extra superpowers with his elongated limbs, left shoulder in an uncomfortably unatural angle. Not to mention his back which lacks general construction due to lack of anatomical knowledge.

It sure is stylized but if he had a more advanced knowledge of figure drawing and anatomy it would carry over in this one.

Good example of iconic bad anatomy.
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>>7726259
That's it.
Looking at it; lowering the arms (behind the shield and his own body) and having the pecs flexed like that, is probably still 'anatomically incorrect', but it's not the absolute insane mistake everyone thought it was.

Really, his biggest mistake was not giving taking the warning onboard and using that image regardless, not noticing how goofy it looked.

Ah well, at least we all got a funny image out of it.
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>>7726253
it was a rush job too for heroes reborn. the ink wasnt even dry on the contracts and they needed some pieces for promo at comicon or some shit. the image was never used in any comic, yet still posted all the time.
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how has nobody posted this anatomy kino yet?
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>>7726271
Let's see your redraw.
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>>7726201

After AI these kind of shit doesn't matter anymore.
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>>7726618
If you can't quicky glance at the drawing and see that it's wonky then that's a solid indicator that you're not competent enough to judge whether something is well constructed or not. You simply lack the technical knowledge and mileage to speak on matters like this with any kind of authority.
I'm not bashing the artist. I'm just making an obvious observation and disputing your over the top opinion that it's "just stylized" and "phenomenal".

You go first. PYW and I'll post mine. Why would I need to prove myself for critiquing this drawing? Why doesn't the same apply to you? If it's so good and my critique is just bs then prove it by showing me your own skill level.
If it's so phenomenal then I'm sure you know what you're talking about...
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>>7726733
>You simply lack the technical knowledge and mileage to speak on matters like this with any kind of authority.
Wanna show us that you have the authority? I'm not making any claims about the piece but want to see if you have the ability to back up your words and improve the piece.
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>>7726271
I don't see the problem with the anatomy being innacurate in a stylized artwork as long as it's appealing, and this is.
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>>7726868
lol it’s only appealing if your a retarted coomer
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>>7726881

Didn't Proko draw that?
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>>7726875
>liking beautiful women with feminine features = being a "coomer"
Sure, have it your way.
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>>7726614
What's wrong with this one? Her legs being straight instead of following the curve of her torso? Despite that I actually think this cover is fantastic, doesn't bother me one bit. I file this under "artistic license" because the forced perspective is at least cool.
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>>7726614
Is it just as egregious for mainstream webcomics
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>>7726907
Webtoon is what happens when you value sparkly anime faces and tracing over life drawing
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>>7726907
>webtroonz
>anything to do with anime
t. low cognitive resolution
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>>7727250
ayyyy lmao
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Pre and Post rcdart mentalboom. Always makes me laugh
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Yaoi shoulders also provides a source of joy to me
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>>7727250
who tf draw this
bad anatomy final boss
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>>7726733
If you were /int/ or above, you would know that the artist prioritized gesture over anatomy. Brutal ngmi.
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>>7727407
Post full page next time.
Indeed a classic of bad anatomy.
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>>7727250
I don't think anyone in the thread can beat this. Every aspect of the figure has something awful going on.
I held up my loomis books toward the screen while looking at it, and the book started to smoke a bit.
Truly Awful.
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>>7727243
you're right they're chinese comics instead of cartoons you fucking faggot ass weeboid
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>>7727250
I live in constant fear that I’m just as bad and too /beg/ to recognize it.
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>>7727250
>just draw
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>>7727457
make me. lol
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>>7727250
I remember this thread, I participated in it. I can't for the life of me find the image it's been so long. You think if someone threw it into AI now like they did back then it would look better?
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>>7727650
What did you participate in? Was the guy posting progress pics and you all were giving bad advice or what?
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>>7727250
even though this is terrible the background is kinda good
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>>7727659
>What did you participate in?

It was a year or two back and this person was asking how to get better or something. Someone else drew it over which made more people do it (as these threads usually goes) and then the AI bros came and ran it through AI which changed a lot of it, I think picrel was the only one with an accurate background. I remember it being a fun thread but again it was 2 years ago
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>>7727688
>how to get better
No I actually think someone took that from deviantart or something and we were all shitting on it and that's why we tried to redraw it.
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>>7727250
atleast its a complete piece
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>>7727243
its crazy how i can tell exactly who you are because you keep spamming that exact image each time someone offends the honor of your gook cartoons, even when you seemingly dont understand the point its making
its not an insult or saying people who dont identify anime are stupid, its saying that they just dont have a close knowledge of anime so they can only judge it in broad strokes; they simply havent put time into anime, so they are bad at identifying it, same way you'd suck shit at separating the different eras of art made before the 1900s
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>>7728202
he thinks webtoons have anime faces. it's indicative of even lower cognitive resolution than simply seeing anime in broad strokes, which is understandable for people without close knowledge.
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>>7727457
these are some attack on titan tier proportions
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>>7727688
soulless
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>>7726614
There's literally nothing wrong with this apart from a lengthened neck and exaggerated foreshortening. Her chest occludes her lower torso and most of her legs

I fucking hate Riri
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>>7728213
>anime faces
What is an 'anime face', what are its identifiable features - which the example webtoon posted does not have?
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>>7727688
looks as generic as slop does
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>>7728488
> I fucking hate Riri
Racist!
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>>7727250
Are we allowed to post other anons art? Because if so, I have a collection.
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>>7728580
post everything immediately
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>>7726223
I love this template
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hell yeah finally some proper fucking garbage
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>>7726271
>Collarbone is a straight line
It's literally not, didn't even read the rest of your post because you are just a lying nigger. Kill yourself.
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>>7727407
HASAN PIKERRRR
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I promise there's no hard feelings anons. We all have to draw terribly in order to draw good.
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>>7728687
but this guy never improved
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>>7728680
fucking lol
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>>7726210
this has got to be slop
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>>7726271
shut up faggot
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>>7728700
Sorry you have no taste and no understanding of the body, retard.
>>7728689
Classic permabegsyndrome.
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>>7728680
This is based, not bad
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>>7728669
I mean this isnt even inherently bad, not sure if this is supposed to be one of the characters or an OC but it looks like anon had fun making it and I have fun lookin at it, not bad



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