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>>7765774
Color it.
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>>7765774
Get a mirror. Do the pose. Draw what you see.
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>>7765774
well, the only thing that jumps out is the tiny malformed hand, so maybe work on that
I have no idea what she's wearing, so I can't say much about it. is that a kermit collar?
honestly, if this was part of a manga or a web comic, it would probably be good enough
if that's your goal I would just get on with it
except for the hand. fix that hand
good luck
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>>7765972
idk how to draw hands :(
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>>7765778
im not good at that :(
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>>7766193
He was referring to its size. An extended palm is the same length as a person's face. Try it with your own hand.
Now look at your drawing. What do you see?
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>>7766204
fr, im really bad at this, im not good at anything desu
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>>7766593
Nigger, you just made a mistake. Man the fuck up and draw it again.
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>>7766604
ive tried many times i allways make a mess, im 24 man i migth not have wat it takes...
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>>7766204
but ill def be trying again soon thanks all for feedback thus far
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>>7765774
pay attention to shape of head, the hair shape you should focus on to make it look like hair .
clothes look too baggy without enough definition
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>>7765774
cute, is it an existing character or something you designed?
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>>7765774
made hand bigger and made part of the sleeve match the arm.
90% of your problem was the hand
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>>7766593
As the other anon said, the size of the hand was by far the biggest (no pun intended lol) offender here. You just need to practice your proportions more by learning some of the tricks on ratios between the different parts of the human body.
Otherwise this is pretty appealing. No need fo reslf deprecation.
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>>7768819
>fo reslf
jfc lmao

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