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Untimely demise edition

>CYOA?
Choose Your Own Adventure. AKA Quest.

ITT:
>Discuss Current, Finished and Upcoming CYOAs
>Give advice on CYOAs
>Pitch ideas
>Get critique
>Trade art

List of stories: WIP (formerly anonpone). Your best bet is to search via desuarchive.
List of related content: https://poneb.in/JfNFvCxZ

>How do I run a CYOA?
https://web.archive.org/web/20220926062257/https://www.anonpone.com/advice
http://www.tgchan.org/wiki/Advice
https://desuarchive.org/mlp/thread/39478565/#q39551918
https://desuarchive.org/mlp/thread/40109140/#40330740
>I can't into art, but I'm a competent writer. Should I still run a CYOA?
JUST DO IT

>What day is best?
https://strawpoll.com/polls/e7ZJONmvvy3
>What time is best?
https://strawpoll.com/polls/bVg86rz02yY
>What race would you play?
https://strawpoll.com/polls/GJn4GoO0byz
>What genre are you interested in?
https://strawpoll.com/polls/XOgOJ17M0n3

>Can I run a CYOA in this General Thread?
Yes, just take care to differentiate yourself if there's another ongoing CYOA here.

>Active CYOAs as this thread was posted
Moonlight >>Here
Rise of Paradise >>40865415
Semantic Error >>40899856
Caravan Guard >>40927699
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>>40980613
>Moonlight
Should be Moonlit.
I forgot to fix the name from the last OP. Sorry Mirta.
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Regarding Mirta's Moonlit:
>>40975871
Tell them about the bird and the invitation to the forest, then go with Luna (and hope she isn't as sex crazy as the rest of the mares).
>>40977449
We already shot down Luna's attempts at bringing back her sister. Let's not crush the poor mare completely. She needs to know she's not alone in her struggle. That said I really want to check how Moonie and Sassy are doing so we should do that the next opportunity after this arises.
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>>40981443
>We already shot down Luna's attempts at bringing back her sister.
That whole conversation just felt so sudden. I mean, we've never talked about it other than being a goal we want to work towards. Feels like we haven't even reached square one yet.
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>>40981549
Yeah I didn't know our answers in the previous update would lead to that. That's why I'm voting to go with Luna this time - to reassure her and to maybe learn at what stage are we in the whole "bring Celestia back" plan.
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Life finally settled down over here after moving into my new house. I know I was a bit discouraged last time but I wanna give the case in ACP a proper conclusion at least. Anyone still remember Paracop?

https://www.critical-notes.com/campaigns/2218

I'll update the CN first before starting I think so I can also just catch up, not sure what day of the week I'll do it.
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Glad things aare goig well
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More bald ponies is always nice.
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..???
>2.5 hours since last post
wait what the fuck
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>>40987986
See you next year for more cyberpone action.
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>>40987986
So did Rise of Paradise unfortunately it seems. Guess a flood of threads at a bad time.
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>>40987986
Caravan Guard was moments away from dying too before I bumped. Lots of shitposty threads at once I think.
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I ran into some poorly timed employment issues last week, and it's still not resolved, so I'm going to be putting TSBH on indefinite hiatus because I have no idea how long it's going to take to get things back to having time to write and/or develop- and the way things might go, it might be much easier to focus on working though small bits of development rather than trying to keep the plot moving forward with daily text posts, so I'll keep you guys updated once I know which way things wind up
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Hope things get better for you soon.
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For those waiting for the return of Growing Village, there's some news in the Massive Pony thread.
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Growing Village

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“No, that's fine by me. There's just one thing.”
>You turned to look at Fleur.
>She had her mouth full of food and was busy spearing another bit of eggplant with her fork.
“Fleur, do you still have the letter we found?”
>”Mmh?”
>Glancing at you, she chewed for another second before gulping down what she had in her mouth.
>”It should be in my saddlebag. Probably crumpled somewhere on the bottom. We're lucky the cream didn't get smashed.”
>She set her fork and the bit of food on it down on her plate.
>Her saddlebags, wreathed in her magic, floated to you from the corner of the room.
“You didn't need to do that, but thanks!”
>You stuck out a hoof and let her hang the bags on it.
>Flipping the flaps open, you indeed found a crumpled piece of paper on the bottom of one of the bags.
>Fortunately, it wasn't torn.
>You placed it on the floor and smoothed it out with a hoof the best you could.
“Ah. Excellent! It's still readable.”
>The corners of your mouth curled into a smile as you presented the letter to Luna.
“Here. We found this while out there. That, and a magpie that definitely wasn't a wild one.”
>The princess stared at you for a second and blinked twice.
>”Oh? You ran into somepony else?”
>She fell quiet for a few seconds as her pupils whizzed from left to right while reading the letter.
>”'If you want to find my hollow, the bird you should follow.'”
>Pursing her lips, she tapped her chin with a hoof.
>”A rhyming enchantress living in a hollow? I might know who this... pony? is. And if it is indeed who I believe it is, 'tis imperative you recruit her for our cause. I heard she is wise far beyond her years.”
>She stood up and stuck a hoof out as she stated her declaration.
>For a split second, she stood there like she'd made some grand decision, then blinked and let her hoof fall back to the floor.
>”Ahem. But all that is for tomorrow. I believe it is time we retire for the night now.”
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>Some time later, after you'd had time to clean and tidy up everything the admittedly very rough day had left on you, you trotted into Luna's bedroom.
>The mare herself scooped her crown off her head and placed it on her desk just as you came in.
>”Ah, you are done?”
>Her horn flashed and you heard a click.
>Her chestplate made a metallic clunk as it fell onto the floor.
>She lifted it onto her desk as she stepped out of her shoes.
>You nodded as you ran a comb through your still damp floof.
>”Do go ahead. I will join you shortly.”
>Luna's horn flashed again as the covers on her bed were pulled back.
>”Um. Okay?”
>You got the feeling you'd just seen something very few had.
>But, as the princess strode out of the room and towards the bathroom, you were left with little to do apart what she said.

>The bed was just as exquisite as you remembered it being.
>Like sleeping on a cloud, if you had to guess.
>The whoosh of a shower getting turned on suggested that Luna would be a while.
>You were starting to feel tired, but wanted to wait for her since she seemed like she had something to say.
>But, just as soon as you finished the thought, your eyelids got droopy and you had to shake your head to stay awake.
>That was unusual.
>It wasn't quite yet the time yet.

>Shod hooves clicked on stone as somepony approached.
>They stopped right next to you for a second before the mattress you lay on deformed by a heavy weight.
>Something soft and warm brushed against your cheek.
>”I can smell her on you.”
>A harsh voice.
>”How is she? What have you been so busy with you haven't had time for me?”
>You cracked open your eyelids and rolled onto your other side to face the source of the voice.
>A night black mare with slit pupils stared at you.

What would you like to do?
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>>41000651
>What have you been so busy with you haven't had time for me?
Dream exploration! Tell her how we fell face first into Fleur's nightmare and explored its soft cute underbelly. Nightmares are her thing, maybe she'll find it exciting.
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>>41001512
We also spent a little while as a monster and nearly killed her.
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>>41000651
>How is she?
Same old, same old. She's still wary about our meetings, and desperate to have her sister back. Why do you ask?
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>desperate to have her sister back
Anon, I'm not sure she knows about Celly's predicament. Are you sure we should tell her that?
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Well, NMM seemed to possess a certain amount of awareness of the other realm, so I figured Celestia's predicament isn't something that'd have escaped her notice. I'm hoping that broaching the subject with her might yield some useful information for us.
Are you worried that Nightmare might actively try to sabotage our attempt if she knows?
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>She set her fork and the bit of food on it down on her plate.
Why all unicorns have a fixation to focus on the food?

>”A rhyming enchantress
Is it Zecora?

>”Ahem. But all that is for tomorrow. I believe it is time we retire for the night now.”
Plap plap plap plap Get sleep get sleep get sleep get sleep

>>41000651
>You got the feeling you'd just seen something very few had.
Horse-shoe less Luna. Rare specimen. Specimare, even.

>A night black mare with slit pupils stared at you.
Open your legs so she can hug you if she want.
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>I figured Celestia's predicament isn't something that'd have escaped her notice
That might be the case, but unless I missed something, she never commented on that.
>broaching the subject with her might yield some useful information for us
I don't have my hopes up in Nightmare willingly sharing any information that could help Luna or Celestia. She gets angry by the mere mention of their names for fucks sake.
>Are you worried that Nightmare might actively try to sabotage our attempt if she knows?
Maybe not something that extreme (who knows though), but she might become more insistent that we abandon Luna's group and join hers permanently, instead of this jumping back and forth that we're doing now.
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>>41000651
>”How is she? What have you been so busy with you haven't had time for me?”
Tell her that Luna is fine and that she can stop worrying about her (I wanna see her reaction). Also, tell her we've been helping the group in the Night World get by and that they're dead set on fixing this mess but it doesn't look like they've got a solid plan yet. Ask her how her and Sassy are doing.
Also this >>41001512 if time allows.
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>she never commented on that
true, that's more of a supposition on my part
>willingly sharing any information
I didn't mean asking her directly, but she might reveal something in passing if we get her talking.

Oh well, I guess you're right, now's probably not a good time to mention Celestia.

>>41000651
I take back the second part of >>41002462, maybe ask whether she'd like us to deliver any message to Luna instead. (still holding out hope for a diplomatic solution between the two, this should at least get the ball rolling)
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Does she enjoy it herself or it's just another source of angst?
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I hope Buffy's QM is doing well.
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Slinky or 'locked Bright Eyes. Bats are for for being far away from home.
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Definitely Willow. Though Hollow Honor is growing on me fast.
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Midnight from Space Hunter. She was a fun character.
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I love Willow, but lust after Aether's toned muscular flanks.
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Da one that does the gem identification or something and has the witch for a wife
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She's got no mane/short fur because of all the sealing tattoos on her which limit what knowledge she can share of the Qa'yi, which she obviously dislikes. Although even once she gets the tattoos removed she'll probably keep it short anyway since she personally likes the look (in a wow so punk way). Gives her more real estate for her own Tattoos too.

Also I may run this weekend depending still.
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Hello Mirta, I was rereading the ponepaste and noticed that you skipped a post on line 363, here's the missing bit: https://desuarchive.org/mlp/thread/39617687/#39620610
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Have the rarest of Whispens.
Did anyone save all the fanart on anonpone? If not there's literal hundreds of images lost forever if you don't count thumbnails.
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wasn't that from the site itself? meaning it should be saved on desuarchive somewhere?
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wait a sec, has anyone tried to contact the guy who hosted the damn site?
I know bath has a post saying he did and that the host fucked the site in an update, but as long as he didn't litelary delete the database in it, it should be salvageable by someone else

so what's the problem?
why aren't the files on, idk, mega, for download, so people can try and bring that bitch back online
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>litelary delete the database in it
Unfortunately, from the post made by >>39461681, it sounds like that's literally the case.
What they didn't mention was whether the code for the website also got nuked. If it survived, really wish Amm would release it, even if it's an old or partial backup.
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I've replaced the whole thing with a copy of my local file. Do tell if there's any more missing lines.

Also I've had too much work to do among other issues there so I haven't had the energy to write. I've made a bit of progress but things are going to be slow for a while.
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Thanks for the heads up. Don't worry about the updates, IRL always comes first and the quest can wait. Hope things improve for you soon!
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The board's pickied up speed.
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Aww, Caravan guard dropped.
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womp womp
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The one time I forget to bump before bed
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What CYOAs had human MCs? OSNYIPV, RITS, and what else?
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Phone pones, technically, for a while.
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Persona did. I also remember there was a CYOA from before the 2015 hype that was simply just called a green text about Anon in a horror game world. Despite the premise it was very well executed and made good use of video game mechanics/tropes.
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Gonna try to run a quest again, want to keep this board alive even if I'm an subpar QM
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What's your favorite thing about quests?
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Favorite moment in any quest?
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That works too
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>>41043860
Fatelocked. Seeing other characters reaction to the players cracking the coded notebook on the spot was amusing to say the least.
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The chaos of the retreat into Las Pegasus, especially when Byline tackled us and called us out for being emotionally compromised when we lost our shit when we learned Whispen might be dead in RGS.
Second would probably be the ending of Heat, when we finally returned to our party after dying immediately to a grunt after killing the BBEG. The way JD! writes the scene with everyone laying on the bed and staring up at the vines growing on the ceiling are 10/10. But now that I think about it, the scene where we have our last dance with Silver before we leave the party is the closest any pony content has come to making me cry.

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Never played Fatelocked. Was the notebook supposed to be a big macguffin?
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It was supposed to be a bigger puzzle, but anons were too fast. So in-universe it looked like our normally retarded schizo protagonist took one look at it and cracked it immediately.
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>retarded schizo protagonist
A bit redundant, isn’t it?
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Technically, maybe, but it happened naturally.
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I dunno about favourite, but some that are up there are probably Dandy and Foozle finally making out to save the day, Muffin and Daring hugs, comfy haunting with Willow at Blackstone Fields (also meeting Anon, lmao), screaming at the storm with Shale and Rush (I think this last one is a good candidate for favourite right now, it's simple and not super impactful, but it's just such a good heartfelt moment). I'm not even sure these are the best scenes and those quests have great action moments, too (defeating the first skinwalker in Fatelocked without losing anyone was great), but I can't choose and this is what came to mind first. Also it's not really in a quest but immediate ASCII porn is still funny to me.
mammoth for favourite pain

>>41043892
There's so much good shit in these stupid quests. Willow sexo is also a candidate not just for the obvious but just for the sheer hilarity of those rolls. ACU dice in general.
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Boring question. What quest had the hottest smut?
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Phone pones. Now if only we actually got to read it
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Good morning peebles A Land Beset is going steadily, which is good. Morale is high and plot thickening.
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Yeah, admittedly a boring question. Here's a more interesting question to the QMs that still roam here.
How do you deal with, punish, and/or adjust to anons who think with their horny brain primarily and fail to actually think, like what happened in here: https://desuarchive.org/mlp/thread/40996849/#41010200
You can kinda tell in that thread that Growfag adjusted by making the mc have more degenerate thoughts and actions without player input to reflect the impact of that choice, which makes me curious on how other QMs deal with it.

Another question to anons who played that last Growing Village thread. What the hell are we going to do now with Verdant? Are we going to actually remain faithful to her, break up with her, or be an evil bastard and continue to do unfaithful acts? Wanted to personally have a whole teasing game with Black Fang to play around with that turmoil back and forth, but the unprompted kiss sort of ruins that.
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>What the hell are we going to do
Heavily depends on what Black Fang's philosophy is once we confront her again. If she still intends to kill off or severely harm ponies in the midst of her own self pleasure, then that's a big no. If she's instead interested in creating a world which basically consists of being similar to something like MGE, then there are worst fates out there for ponies to have when it comes to having a god of monsters in the world, and we can improve relations with ponies and monsters by giving in to her. Just don't know how we'll separate from Verdant, especially after dropping the "love" admission.
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>How do you deal with, punish, and/or adjust to anons who think with their horny brain
It’s only happened once so far and I’m the one who facilitated it. The players already agreed to romance one of their companions, Hollow, but I already had a preplanned scenario where they could easily sleep with another character, Lemonade. When Lemonade proposed having sex (https://desuarchive.org/mlp/thread/40927699/#40942534) enough of my players were eager to comply despite knowing it could damage their potential relationship with Hollow. After that I had Hollow be a little upset about the situation and changed the way their other companions thought of them. Spoiler for my players: The real fallout of hooking up with Lemonade hasn’t happened yet. Everyone that’s aware of the situation is keeping it in mind for one reason or another. The path with Hollow remains open but you’re going to have to resolve some issues with her first.

As for how I’d react to that scene in Growing Village? I don’t know the character but I imagine I’d have them react the same way. I’d have a character warm the MC explicitly that polyamory won’t fly with them and if the players kept pushing the subject then the relationship would be severely damaged with effects on how the rest of the characters view them.
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Corrupting Verdant so she's willing to form a primal horse herd.
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>>41052266
Only concerning sign from Fang is her mentioning that ponies have potential to be monsters and that she'll make sure they'll enjoy it. Hopefully her definition of a monster doesn't consist of the more brutal aspects when we ask and just consists of uncontrollable desire. Makes me really anticipate meeting her as soon as possible so we can get answers when the thread comes back.
Still undecided of going along with her if her method of monsters is just peacefully deviant, but it is admittedly fun to come up with future transformations to push her towards.
>>41052694
Interesting to hear Caravan Guard is facing consequences for fooling around too soon. Mind giving a spoilered summary of what's happened so far? Forgot to join in early and might jump in when I have time.
>>41052780
Corrupt Verdant. Corrupt the village. Corrupt Black Fang.
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>Interesting to hear Caravan Guard is facing consequences for fooling around too soon.
I suppose it is kinda early. I haven’t kept up with CYOAs for a few years but it seems like most of the ones still around go for a lot longer than mine has so far. Still, we’re about 150,000 words into the story, which is about 300 pages.

Here’s my attempt at a quick summary: You play as the leader of a small team of caravan guards that are hired by various companies or private citizens to escort ponies through the Badlands and the lands further south, sometimes fight bandits or Diamond Dogs along the way. Most of your customers are settlers leaving the Equestrian mainland for the new colonies deep in the Mysterious South. For unknown reasons the Badlands have become much more violent than normal recently with an increase of attacks on caravans. Over the course of the last month you’ve investigated the issue, learning that in addition to the war against Sombra’s Crystal Empire in the north the Equestrian military has been secretly battling a growing faction Diamond Dogs under the desert surface as well as a group of rebels in the southern colonies. Both of those factions have been largely responsible for the destabilization of the Badlands, especially over the last year or so.
Most recently your team and a team from a rival company have been hired by the Equestrian Rehoming Project, which is the organization primarily responsible for promoting and managing the migration to the southern colonies, for a publicity stunt to restore the Project’s reputation. Your company was specifically hired to escort one of the Project’s leaders, Fleur de Lis, and her entourage while the rival company escorts the settlers that are joining Fleur on her journey to the southern colonies. As you left the Badlands and traveled through a canyon to the southern colonies you were threatened by a large pack of Diamond Dogs and were forced to hide in an ancient Diamond Dog temple. After a battle which killed most of the other company’s guards, a few of the settlers, and possibly permanently crippled one of your companions you were trapped by a cave in caused by your own dynamite with the only way out being an underground river in the back of the temple. After taking the river some more ponies were lost and now everyone is hiding in an underground Diamond Dog city. Right now the players are trying to find a way to escape while also rescuing the missing settlers.
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“Luna? She's the same as always: trying to fix this whole thing and return the world to normal.”
>Nightmare rolled her eyes and stuck her tongue out with a quiet 'bleh'.
>You spread your legs out wide and beckoned her in.
>She sniffed at you, scrumched her snoot, but then leaned in anyways.
>You wrapped your hooves around her and pulled her in.
>Well, more pulled yourself to her.

>She was warm and soft.
>Relatively soft.
>On a scale from de Lis to commander Tempest, Nightmare was somewhere in between but definitely closer to Tempest.
“Overall she's doing fine given the circumstances.”
>Reaching back with a hoof, you stroked the alicorn's neck.
“No need to worry about her. She and our group are trying to fix this mess, but I don't think we have a solid plan yet.”
>The alicorn remained both tense and quiet for a second.
>She then relaxed and leaned onto you, her weight pressing you onto the mattress you laid on.
>”That is good news. Perhaps we have enough time to complete my plan, then.”
>She nuzzled your cheek before pulling herself off of you.
>”But, we should proceed with all haste.”
>Her horn lit up as you were lifted off the bed and plopped onto your hooves.
>She had a sly smile on her lips as she swung around and beckoned you to follow her.
>”Come. We shall eat and get you caught up.”

>”Hey! Nice to see you again!”
>Sassy, with a clean white apron on, waved a hoof at you as you trotted into the kitchen.
>”How have you been?”
>She had a large pot on the stove in front of her.
>Steam rose from the pot and the room was filled with a scent of tomato sauce.
>You really didn't feel hungry at all since you ate not long ago in the other world.
“I've been better. I kinda went berserk and turned into a monster and nearly killed Fleur. But apart that bit I've been good.”
>The unicorn blinked twice and cocked her head.
>”Fleur... de Lis?”
>You nodded as you hopped onto a chair next to the dining table.
>”Ah. I'm... not sure how to feel about that. She’ll be fine, right?”
>You nodded again.
>Sassy patted her chest with a hoof and let out a sigh.
>”She is perhaps not quite a friend, but a regular customer and a most welcome face whose visits I enjoy.”
>Sassy's eyes twitched as Nightmare trotted in behind you.
>”An acquaintance of yours? What is she like?”
>The unicorn stared at the alicorn as the latter pulled back the chair next to you.
>Sassy's lips then curled into a very practiced customer service kind of a smile.
>”She is a model and a most pleasant individual to be around. Buys a lot of dresses, both for modeling and because she likes them.”
>Nightmare hopped onto the chair she'd pulled back and reached out to stroke your cheek with a hoof.
>”More good news, then. We'll have more time if she's not good for much apart looking good.”
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>You had a small portion of very basic tomato sauce and spaghetti on a plate in front of you since you’d thought it too rude to decline entirely.
>Nightmare twirled her fork on her plate to gather up a bunch of pasta and sauce, then shoved it in her mouth.
>”Mmh.”
>She nodded in approval as she chewed and swallowed.
>”Much better. But.”
>Her fork, wreathed in her magic, spun in the air and pointed at you.
>”We got so engrossed in getting food on the table that you never had time to tell what had you so occupied you didn’t have time to visit.”
>You set down the little bit of pasta you’d been nibbling on and turned to look at her.
>She didn’t look quite as intimidating as she usually did with a faint ring of red sauce stains around her plush night black lips.
“Oh, that? We were busy… exploring dreams. It wasn’t the most interesting one about a weird and twisted supermarket, but then Fleur fell into a bottomless void and it turned into a nightmare of a memory. I think.”
>Rubbing your chin with a hoof, you thought back to yesterday.
>It felt like it’d been much longer with how much had happened since.
>”You, exploring nightmares?”
>She covered her mouth with a shod hoof and let out a chuckle, then glanced at Sassy.
>”I wish I were there to see it. Was that all you did?”
>You shook your head.
>”I wish it was. We ran into trouble on our way back and one thing led to another and I kinda turned into a monster and hurt her real bad.”
>Nightmare’s ears twitched as she stared at you in silence for a second.
>”Oh. I… ‘m glad you turned out fine in the end.”
>She stuck her fork into the pile of pasta on her plate.
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>Water sloshed around and metal clinked against porcelain as Sassy washed the dishes in the sink.
>Nightmare still sat on her seat with a beaming smile on her lips.
>”That was truly excellent. Thank you ever so much, miss Saddles.”
>Sassy glanced back with a brow arched.
>”That was extremely simple and not much of anything at all, but thank you.”
>The alicorn waved a shod hoof at the unicorn.
>”I haven’t ever had time to enjoy culinary delights of any kind. Anyways…”
>Her shoes clopped on the floor as she hopped off her chair.
>”…as to today’s plan. As I just had time to say on your remarkably brief visit last night, we have found something. Namely, a sealed vault in the caverns beneath the castle. Are you aware of how this world and the other came to be?”
>She nodded at you.
>You thought back to Luna’s explanation about a spell that was meant to turn the world into a dream going horribly wrong and nodded back at her.
>”Most excellent. The reason why this vault is so important is that, I believe, this vault holds the spell scroll – or at least a copy of it, likely thought to be the only one in existence – of the spell responsible for the situation Equestria is currently in.”
>She spun around and took a few steps towards the door leading to the stairs.
>”I would like to acquire this scroll and enough power to cast the spell to undo it. However-”
>Whack!
>One of her shod hooves stomped on the floor.
>”-a certain individual has cast protective spells around the vault. I managed to dispel the first one, but there are however many more that I cannot get past for the time being.”
>Turning around, she had a hint of a smile on her lips.
>”And that is where you two come in. Neither of you were specifically named when the magic wards were created and should have a much easier time.”
>You and Sassy glanced at each other.
>The unicorn had her ears put back and her well practiced smile on her lips.
>”So, what do you say? Would you be willing to help me?”

What would you like to do?`

Apologies for the delay! Things are looking better now with a more manageable workload so I'm hoping to get back to a more regular schedule of updates.
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>>41053868
>You spread your legs out wide and beckoned her in.
Ara ara~

>Reaching back with a hoof, you stroked the alicorn's neck.
The audacity of this serf.

>She then relaxed and leaned onto you, her weight pressing you onto the mattress you laid on.
YOU DIED.

>Sassy,
I forgot she exists. Can't get mad at the tall mare.

>I kinda went berserk and turned into a monster and nearly killed Fleur.
What the fuck, don't tell her that

>”Ah. I'm... not sure how to feel about that. She’ll be fine, right?”
She... isn't worried about what 'going berserk' is?

>We'll have more time if she's not good for much apart looking good.”
Will we need an adult?

>>41053872
>with a faint ring of red sauce stains around her plush night black lips.
How kissable are we speaking about?

>”I wish it was.
Misplaced '>' mark

>>41053875
Interesting relations between NNM and Sassy. One seem to be relatively friendly, another reserved if not outright disbelieving her eyes.

>Are you aware of how this world and the other came to be?”
Nope. Celestia fell into cake induced coma?

>”-a certain individual has cast protective spells around the vault. I managed to dispel the first one, but there are however many more that I cannot get past for the time being.”
Who? Who did it? Whomst? Whomsn't? Whomsn'tsn't?

>”So, what do you say? Would you be willing to help me?”
Yes, but I don't think we want to piss off Luna or harm Celestia.
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>>41053875
Sounds like a plan. All Luna seemed to have was waking up Celestia.
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>>41053875
"Will you have enough power to cast the spell once you acquire it? What will happen if the casting fails another time?"



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