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>>93156417
You're not getting Liber Juratis or killing Empedocles. You are getting 1 of 6 Holy Relics that have only recently been discovered. The Holy Relic of the Boundary, Depths, Celestial Body, Devouring Magic, Living Memories, or Paradise Lost.


>>93156552
>How about something like the slightly psychic paper from Dr Who, that proclaims its holder a cop with the appropriate jurisdiction?
I like it, something like a suggestion trick like in Star Wars.

>neutralizer from MIB
I like it.

> Or a magic analyzer
I like it, but also seems overpowered.

Thank you.

>I'm not sure rules for custom built ones are the way to go.
I see. I'll just shelve custom familiars.
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>>93157058
this is shit
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>>93157058
First /cyoag/ cyoa I remember playing.
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>>93157453
Aw, new cutie.
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>>93157391
>You're not getting Liber Juratis or killing Empedocles.
You still did not fix the cyoa until that is possible.
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>>93157485
Looks like you won't be playing it. I guess I'll just have to move on in life.
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>tfw i've been here for years
Escapism became a cell...
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Even if you can defeat Empedocles somehow, you aren't the strongest. Creation and Reason are still stronger than her. Checkmate.
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>>93157567
Escapism is a lie, there is no escape.
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I like "wish fulfillment" and "power fantasy" as much as the next guy, but I don't need every CYOA to have everything I want, and I also enjoy scenarios with difficulties, dangers, and tough decisions
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>>93158015
HARDCORE MODE

>Food - Veggies (5)
I suppose living longer isn't that bad
>Companion - Alone (2)
Don't need people.
>Electronics - AC (2)
Do need air conditioning
>Side Room - Garden (1)
Cheapest option
>Entertainment - Internet (10)
Time to brainrot!
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>>93156912
THis one doesn't appeal much to me, but I like the slickness of its layout and overall graphical design.
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>>93157391
I think you should make a familiar advantage, rate it maybe 1-3 (or maybe 1-5, maybe with the highest ranks exclusively for summonses.) With a menu of powers/natures a familiar can have (e.g. take human form, use powers in human form, use illusions, etc.) and a point budget that increases as you spend more points in the perk.

Then an optional perk after that which lets you spend an equal number of points on a second familiar (probably restrict this to Summoners) for those who want a pair of Tailed Beasts from Naruto (that turn into Kitsune chicks).

If so, make sure you balance the cosy of familiars against the cost of companions. At present a single companion point can get you a low-rank mage commoner ally or friendship with the *strongest mage in the setting*. I'd personally make normal companions cost 1 point, Archmages cost 2, and have Auctors cost more points the closer your relationship is with them:

At 1: Acquaintances. Perhaps you earned the right to attend a once a year masterclass with 19 other mages, taught by the actor themselves, and as such they they stay up to date on your doings and you're prioritised over normies if you seek an audience. Maybe they knew your parents. You have tea every midsummer with them etc etc.

At 2: Allies. You know them as well as one so young can. You might have to make an appointment to see them as they're so busy but you'll GET that appointment. You're likely to be actively working with them/studying under them.

At 3: Besties. You're either a close personal friend who can drop in at will, a trusted ally, someone they owe big time, their child, or their spouse.

Also, I have almost no idea about the personalities of most characters, they need a bit more dialogue that isn't just suspicious "oh hello cop what's up cop"
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>>93158728
*summoners
*Cost
Autocorrect.
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I want to make an MMO-themed cyoa where you play as a Tank, Support, or DPS character. What are some unique abilities to give the classes?
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>>93158959
Tank - Defend Others, Counterattack
Support - Buff, Debuff
DPS - Combo, Defense Down
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>>93158728
>they need a bit more dialogue that isn't just suspicious "oh hello cop what's up cop"
ENTER BantzLoli.
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>>93141278
>North
>Wuxian
>Fist
>Beast King
>Melody
>Dark Heaven

Melody is cute. And I am the strongest. I will just punch away my problems. Martial chads won again.
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>>93157391
>I see. I'll just shelve custom familiars.
no, custom familiars and summons are absolutely the way to go. A page with a small bestiary of types and letting the player choose is absolutely the way to go unless you're going to make familiars fleshed out characters like evoco and the auspices. Player choice is absolutely the way to go, dont let one nigger ruin familiars for everyone else
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>>93158959
depends, are you going into classes of those archetypes of those classes or are you doing literally just 'tank, support, dps'. You posted Final fantasy art, so stuff like having defensive tanks with different substyles like offensive tanks, healing tanks, buffing, debuffing and healing supports, pure immobile blaster dps or fast ninja dps, summoner or hybrid wildcards who can do some or any role, etc. You have a lot of options for different classes that fit within each archetype and are distinct
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>>93158999
Only "fake ass mage" was good.

But yes I want Bants.
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>>93156912
Husanon here I just wanted to say that I'm working on something.
It is similar to Godly Husbandry.
With a better developed power section and hopefully better characterisation for the waifus.
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>>93159106
noice
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>>93158453
Have you been mewing?
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Klt5G6qnGAY
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>>93158959
Fuckass ones.
If you don't have three or more major skills per section that give a brief glance towards their core "role" and never look back, then I am not interested.
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>>93159167
>mewing
What the fuck even is that
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Comfy-life Spare-time Assassin?
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>>93159349
This reminds me of Buddy Daddies, so you have to include something about picking up a ridiculously cute little girl/boy that you adopt in a wholesome way.
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>>93159106
Any of them adults?
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>>93159106
What sort of waifus?
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>>93159106
Finally a good author is back.
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>last post was 3 hours ago
Sooooo Magi didn't revive shit it's over
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>>93160447
Of course is did not, it was shit.
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>>93159714
Slimes

I shall ascend to slime status and become the Slime King.
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>>93159106
Did you stop being a pedo and started enjoying real women?
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>>93156926
>>93156930
>>93156933
>>93156936
One of the best
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>>93160447
>>93160665
>1 month of discussion
>Over 50 builds
>Two authors have returned
>Tok impotently spamming Dragonfall as an attempt to counter
Magi Won.
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Rolled 1 (1d5)

>>93159714
Dwarves sound like the biggest bros.
I'll encourage them to use their economic power to weaken the influence of the groups that use their economic power for nefarious/shelfish ends.
and I'll roll for one of the five princess waifus
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>>93159434
Depends on your definition of adult.

>>93159561
I'm trying to have a wide variety of them.

>>93160890
ToT

>>93159154
>>93159881
Thanks guys I'll try to deliver a very fun CYOA.
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>>93161024
>1 month of shitposting pretending to be discussion
>clearly samefagged builds to bloat the count
>unrelated author drama
Magi did not win, it died like the shit it was.
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>>93161645
Someone seems upset at Magi Case being a successful CYOA with multiple builds and discussion. How about you stop coping and seething and go make a successful CYOA like Magi Case.
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>>93161825
I would rather not make a flop carried by hype and shitposting like that if I was an author.
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>>93161825
you should stop coping instead retard
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>>93161825
>Oh, you don't like X? Why don't you make your own X then?
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>>93158999
Why in the fuck is she so aggressive as a character?
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>Italics cares more about Magi Case, Chinese Wuxia, and some other shit.
Why is being a Lamentationsfag suffering?
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>>93161948
Yes.
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>>93160890
>HusAnon can't be a pedo
But it's okay when Italics does it?
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>>93162698
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>>93162698
Italics gets away with
>They are 1000 yo bro
While HusAnon does the
>She is 13 out of 10
Besides they are lolis not children
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>>93163109
Their age are not stated, but it's implied that they're children based on their stations in life.

Also they look and act like children
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>>93159106
i love Godly Husbandry... don't disappoint me, i trust you
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>>93163109
Italics literally le>>93162626
ts you marry and have sex with a 13/14 year old in Eternal Blue. This is not including Pokemon or his other works like Witches or Kins Wolfe with the twins.
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>>93163369
I'm curious what do you like about it?
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>>93163694
BASED
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>>93163694
anime is turning lonely autistic men into pedos
SAD!!!
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>>93163109
>Italics gets away with
>>They are 1000 yo bro
Italicssisters, we are not beating the alligations. Our response?
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>>93164031
>Our response?
To keep defending him and eating his cum, of course.
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>>93164290
Your fixation on Italics' cum is getting suspicious.
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>>93164676
Who wouldn't be fixated on that white gold of his?
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>>93159467
I honestly don't see why people got mad at this.
Can't you I dunno wait to fuck your wife a couple years?
Or treat them as an adopted daughter instead?
It kind of speaks about the people complaining.
>No I have to fuck the children the CYOA is forcing me to do it!!!! AAAAHHHH
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>>93164738
no one got mad at it
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>>93164772
I mean there's a lot of pedo accusations in just this thread.
That means someone got angry
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>>93164788
that's just banter anon
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>>93164788
Not as angry as the italics defense squad
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>>93164738
You seem like the angry one here, groomer-kun
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>>93164986
shut the FUCK up chaosfag
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>>93164738
Having to wait to fuck your wife is unironic blue balls and cuckoldry. Treating a girl you don't know as your daughter is just as bad as wanting to sex them.
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Case and point >>93165092
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>>93165275
what a retarded thing to say
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>>93165073
>No, you are mad
lol
I think we should wait till he finishes his next one
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>>93164738
It is very clearly a pedo cyoa lmao. What even is this defense.
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>>93165528
I would not call it a pedo CYOA.
I remember one basement CYOA that uses IRL pictures with an option to have a real little girl.
That is actual pedo shit
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>>93165567
Pedophilia is the sexual attraction to prepubscient girls, fictional or real.
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>>93164738
It is very very strange to ask people to pick a child to be their wife.
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>>93165599
nah, just purity crusaders jumping at shadows like always
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>>93165598
Not if you are religious fundamentalist or live in a tribal society.
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>>93165567
Here it is
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>>93165598
I mean the obvious bad guys are the ones telling you to do it.

>>93165581
And lolis are not children they are drawings
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>>93161024
Man I never posted my build. I'll pass cause the hype has probably passed, but yeah objectively people played the hell out of it. We complain about its problems because we otherwise like it. The opposite of love isn't hate, it's indifference.

>>93161486
I'm well aware that A: anime characters aren't real, at all, B: lots of 'adult' anime characters are obviously designed to look like children, C: lots of 'child' anime characters look, act and are treated as adults (Jojo I'm looking at you) and D: Being attracted to obviously attractive sexual traits on a cartoon character who looks like a hot 20-something isn't suddenly paedophilia because someone draws the number '17' next to their head. Stephen King wrote a bunch of realistically written 12 year old characters fucking in a sewer. THAT'S fucked up.

My definition of adult in this case is basically a character who looks adult, doesn't talk like a little kid, and isn't using some "SHE LOOKS 9 BUT SHE'S TOTALLY 90000 YEARS OLD" thing. I really don't care if said character uses a picture of like, 16 year old naruto or 17 year old Rin Tohsaka, they look nothing like actually children anyway.

I've met actual teenagers as an adult. They really aren't attractive. I've had child cousins. If someone had tried to do something sexual with them I'd soak them in oil and burn them.
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>>93165673
>Can't you I dunno wait to fuck your wife a couple years?
That's literally grooming. It's fantasy, not reality, but it's a grooming fantasy. If you can't see why that's suspect to some then you're as autistic as >>93165275

Not worth throwing a shitfit over but then I'm ot the one who brough it up.
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>>93161959
Because you're playing a Magi Investigator, so everyone treats you with suspicion. We get one, maybe two paragraphs of dialogue from each character, that never displays their normal personality because they're talking to a detective.

I LIKE playing a detective. I LOVE several of the cases. But the cases are like a page. And the entire character section feels like a police line up.
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>>93165917
I can see that but anons regularly commit fantasy murder/genocide and no one bats an eye.
I also agree that it should not be woth fighting over.
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>>93165839
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I've been away for a while. What has italics said he plans on changing about Magi case?
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>>93166001
>I've had child cousins. If someone had tried to do something sexual with them I'd soak them in oil and burn them.
what if that's my fetish too
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>>93156912
So talking about the curse that makes you suffer if you see other suffer.
What do you guys prefer.

That it makes you suffer in a similar to what you are withnessing?
So that you feel hunger if you see people suffering from a famine or feel sad if you see someonein deep depresion.

Or that it translates the suffering into pure physical pain regardless of the kind of suffering?
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>>93166078
First case to keep things fresh. Otherwise you might get 'used' to the weird bouts of pain and their effects wouldn't be the same.
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>>93165615
last time I played this I got ACK'd by the revolver on the first roll
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>>93166041
Neat!

-25 Intrinsic sun magic
-25 Intrinsic wind magic
-25 Intrinsic familiar (sun/'Helios')
-5 Memory ring ('Ring of Recall/Recollection')
-5 Shapeshifting ring ('Ring of Recharacterization')
-5 Inspiration ring ('Ring of Reconstitution')
-5 Telepathy ring ('Ring of Reveal/Revelation')
-5 Spirit amulet ('Amulet of the Aetherial')
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>>93165839
Then yeah there are adults, and at least one hag.
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>>93166289
dumb kot, you will never be a wizard
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>>93166394
Hag?
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>>93159057
>A page with a small bestiary of types and letting the player choose is absolutely the way to go.
This is already the idea I had in mind with the Familiar section of the CYOA. If you take Monster Caremenship (Educated Talent) or afforded other choices (Familiar Master, Etc) you can acquire familiars. Which is a list of different mythological and OC monsters based on their types (Beast, Fairy, Demon, Artificial) featuring a description and what they can do for you.

The custom part was for actual customization of companion familiars like you would see in Lamentation Comrade Add-On, but entirely different in options / presentation / materials.

>>93162065
Lamentations R~ is still in-development as some elements of the CYOA have been reorganized. The R~ Update will help present a better adventure especially since it fill feature main antagonists in the form of the Enigmas and Old Directorate. that you will face. Human companions will re-implemented instead of rush-cut like in 2.0.

>>93165966
> We get one, maybe two paragraphs of dialogue from each character, that never displays their normal personality because they're talking to a detective.
This will be addressed in Redux since some wanted more personal details and activities of mages like Elspeth (Her playing fighting games) in the CYOA.

>. But the cases are like a page.
I thought 12 cases would be enough and assumed the hidden cases would help. I was told to remove hidden cases (Make a separate page for them in the back) and to bolster case numbers from 12 to more. I now have Primary Cases (Your Job / Magi Society Related) and Secondary Cases (Companions / Character / Clan-related Cases). Elspeth's Civil War, Mircea's War on Vampires, Aozdou Conspiracy, the Evoco Sealing Project, etc are all now Secondary Cases with their own description of events and possible outcomes.
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>>93166041
> Intrinsic Stars
> Intrinsic Inspiration
> Intrinsic Creatures
> Intrinsic Spirits
Summon stuff, mind control them to work for me and make myself and them really lucky. Then spread them far and wid and hope one of them stumbles across a portal.
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>>93166500
The main narrator had a tutor, you get her as a companion if you help her out.
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>Intrinsic:
Memory, Inspiration, Debilitation, Telepathy

I'll mind control people to gather resources and find portals. I won't use the portals myself because I seek other, more beneficial, win conditions, but I'll sell their locations to others. In case I die and reincarnate, I'll take full advantage of my memory and insert extremely complex and subtle mental triggers, different for every mind slave, for easy mind control reestablishment.
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>>93166510
I'm this anon
>>93165966

And I'm happy to hear most of these changes. I'm sorry if I sound whiny considering how big magi case is and how long it took, I only gripe because I care. Now, for some advice:

>12 cases would be enough

I didn't say that it wasn't. I'm saying they were one page. I spent 25 or so pages of reading to prepare for a cases that were a few paragraphs long each, and two of them weren't cases, they were Teaching and Retiring, which are fine things, but they make the list of actual cases even shorter. One thing you could do is write a first page describing a case, and second page describing its possible outcomes. Like "unlock a secret of Ford magic" was listed as a possible reward for one of them.

What secret? Why do I care? Is it only usable by Materialisation mages?

Also:

What cocktails would Jie, Stacy, Asteris and Cynthia like?

And how do they feel about guys with abs? I need workout motivation.
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>>93166582
Oh so hag as in witch. Thought you were one of those guys who seethe about women over 20 for a second. My bad.
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>>93166669
No, I meant hag as in an older woman.
She was her main caretaker and tutor as a child.
It's not going to be her Chun-Li is just an example hag.
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>>93166510
Oh, continuing from here:
>>93166649
More details are fantastic, but I think in general we need more dialogue from each character to help establish their actual tone. One of the things I like about Cynthia is that she comes across as prim and proper in her dialogue, and the teaching stuff she asks about gives us something I can imagine actually spending time with her talking about, and how she'd sound while talking about it.

Stacy's option to be the rogue mage from her background, plus her just. Just using some slang, means she sounds distinct and there's a clear option for how to have a history with her that's easy to imagine and sets up fun interactions.

Asteris is formal like most of them, but she's an archmage, that's fine. What I don't like is that the extra dialogue for if you're a mature investigator feels pointless. It's just her stating facts when it could be something like her being informal, friendly, or even vulnerable (expressing doubts about her support of her Auctor maybe?). Though again, I like her calling us 'old friend', stuff like that makes picking mature investigator actually appealing.

As for Jie, I like her dialogue a lot. Especially her second paragraph. That bit there made me want to lock in for 'marry her and show her life outside rigid clan structure' route. However that brings me to another idea:

I think marriageable characters should have a paragraph of dialogue set aside for 'if they're your spouse' and a bit of description somewhere of what married life with them is like.

Aside from that, as I've said in the past, your magic descriptions need to use a bit less technobabble and a bit more powerscaling, and characters need a bit of info on how they like to fight, or what job they do, how they do it etc.

For example: you once said Jie's fighting style would involve her drawing her sword, then everything around her being slashed apart by sword qi.

That's awesome.

Why isn't it in her writeup?
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>>93166755
Chun li is actually an older woman so OK.
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>>93166096
thanks!
I was thinking about what to use to replace the curse that amplifies your anger if you see something you find morally enraging.
or should I leave that as it is?
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Stop attentionwhoring with your non-existing WIP.
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>>93166923
I've posted evidence of it's existence multiple times
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>>93166943
Disregard him dude. He's fishing for replies.
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>>93166649
>>93166813
*Ahem*

Your waifus a shit. A shit!
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>>93167067
I'm glad you think so. It's always good to know the homies aren't interested in your crush/crushes, makes things less awkward for everyone, so thanks for saying so bro. Boilermakers after work?
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I might update my entropist build
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>>93157453
Tok took your CYOA virginity
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>>93166983
Good point I should have known better.
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>>93167253
And I will take his vaginal virginity when /cyoag/ all gets isekai'd together
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>>93167288
>fucking t*k
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>>93167492
>has not made a single cyoa I enjoy
Impressive. Even Beri has some stuff I like and in general I hate cutseyshit
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>>93167492
I wouldn't fall in love with him (her), but pussy is pussy
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>>93167288
>when /cyoag/ all gets isekai'd together
What setting? Most of you are extreme retards btw
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>>93167552
>t. virgin
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>>93167552
Have standards. You're being isekaid, you can have whichever woman you want, don't go for tok of all people.
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>>93167067
I'm trying to figure out what they have in common for those four specifically to get picked.
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>>93167288
I am the strongest btw
Isekai'd cyoag is my kangdom
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>>93168075
Sukuna is a massive faggot, but I'll still quote him.
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>>93166649
>>93166813
Thanks.

>Why isn't it in her writeup?
I can only fit so much information.

>>93167640
The only thing I see in common with them is that they all have big boobs.

>>93166923
Hopefully, you don't consider them non-existing soon. I'm close to finishing Ecclesiastes CYOA. All that is left is mostly Companion profiles and Catastrophes (Main Antagonists, think Overlords from JRPG Traitor) then throwing it all into Photoshop. Though, I'm flip-flopping on companions as I have great images for near-contemporary characters and then character art with more fantasy aesthetics, and I sort of don't want to waste them but also not clash with the CYOA's presentation. The CYOA takes place in a JRPG fantasy world that progressed to near-contemporary times (it's honestly a mix-match of technology from different eras.), but has trappings of the Renaissance period and existence of nobility socially-politically-militarily, and most armies are still fielding swords/crossbows/pikes.
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>>93167607
>Magi case isekai
>Marry Jie, Stacy, Asteris and Cynthia
>Solve wizard crimes and relax in a hot tub with three bodacious bard babes and a thick cultivator honey
>no Tok

Easiest choice.
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>>93168219
I understand only so much information will fit but 'how a mage does magic' is rather important to how you imagine them.

>>93167640
They're gorgeous, glamorous, interesting, feminine, have cool powers, interesting stories and-

>they all have big boobs.

They all have REALLY big boobs. So big.

But jokes aside I think being married to all four would just be amazing. Whatever led up to it would have to be amazing. Married life with them would be amazing. Our kids would be badass.

>>93168219
I don't think I've heard much about Ecclesiastes. What's it about?
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>>93167585
>when /cyoag/ all gets isekai'd together
>What setting?
Generic fantasy world, something everyone can enjoy.
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>>93166041
ULTRA LUCKCHAD

>Lifebound Stars
Luck AND teleportation. This is good shit
>Lifebound Familiar x9
So I have 9 familiars with Stars powers, which means I can superluck myself or superjinx someone. I'll have them all be doting members of my harem.

So superluck myself and I'll probably stumble into a portal under the rock I'm sitting on. ANd if anyone attacks me, I 10fold curse them until Wonder of U stares in awe.
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I need to hear you guys opinion.
What edelgard design should I use?
This one?
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>>93168394
Actually, I've got an even better idea now.

>Item Stars
>Item Familiar x24
Same deal as the above, but the items are a set of 24 false teeth replacing my own. Now I get 25x luck instead of just 10x!
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>>93168434
Or this one?
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>>93168434
>>93168441
I'm partial to the first one
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>>93168434
Second one, its hotter
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>>93168434
>>93168441
First looks more commanding, 2nd is more feminine. I'd go with the second.
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>>93168233
I'm going to satre it and ruin your adventure. Now tok's soul is trapped inside your 3 waifus. Have fun faggot.
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>>93168300
>What's it about?
It's a CYOA set in a near-contemporary fantasy world where the authority of nature has been overthrown by humanity and children of the gods (Beasts) are forced to wander as outcasts of the land after the Mythological War countless centuries ago. You take on the role of a Marshal Lord, an autonomous lord (Warlord) who is responsible for keeping the wandering Beast Tribes in check (Genocide / Calamity War) so they cannot revive their slain gods / re-establish dominance and is called upon as a neutral arbiter to affairs done by city-states / other Lords.

The meat of the CYOA is about building yourself up as the Marshal Lords are confirmed as humanity's strongest (The only ones that can rival them are: Divinity and Heroes from the Mythological Era, both which are incapacitated and dead). Organizing your Marshal Forces / the official policies you hold, selecting the Beast Tribes that will be your Nemesis (Recurring antagonists), taking on different inquiries (Intermissions) that lead you to travel with your Subordinate Officers to distant cities / settlements / places to confront ancient / nascent evils or lords threatening the peace or taking part in transpiring events, and lastly confronting a Catastrophe that will attempt to overturn the world's order to spill doom for the era.

The waifu options are either your Vice-Lord (Commander) and Subordinate Officers (Party Members). Don't know about including Divine Beasts since that's been getting negative feedback since people don't want to take an actual drawback from making a deal with divinity to gain a free waifu and conceptual power-up.
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>>93168492
I un Sartre your Sartre. And I have four. Not three. So cope.

>>93168434
>>93168441

I favor the first. You might find an excuse for the second too though.

>>93168536
Sounds based. I think there must be a snappier name than 'Divine Beasts' though. Maybe "Titans"?

The waifus look fantastic, artstyle looks good, I loved magi case, the basic premise sounds fun and interesting? I'm looking forward to it.

And picturing Asteris, Cynthia, Stacy and Jie in those uniforms.

Because I'm predictable.

Thanks for the information Italics. One question though, what do you enjoy most about making cyoas?
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>>93167790
I really like Fairy Queen, although I'd have liked to see a section on what the fairies of each element tend to be like. Not knowing is making me hesitant to pick certain elemental options, since (you) will be surrounded by them for the rest of (your) life.

Oh, and if (you) really want to build an empire, and fully live up to the "queen" title, pick "Twinned Element" twice. With the ability to mix-and-match, a Fairy Queen with five elements would have 125 unique fairy types they can make. One with six elements has 726 options . . .

(Anyone have any idea how to Save Solaea? Or Crush the Core without getting all life on Earth wiped out by solar radiation?)
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>>93168434
>>93168441
The thing is that the first one fits better with the theme but I like the second one more
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>>93167790
Also, is it just me, or does Beri seem to be building a shared setting? Particularly with his interest in doing angel and titan CYOAs?
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>>93168615
Several seem to be related to each other, if nothing else. Including:

*New Summoner
*New Avatar
*New Elemental
*Fairy Queen

And possibly New Assassin, maybe even New Magical Girl, seem to reference each other.
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>>93167585
A setting where magic demands actual effort and/or understanding of the world. 90% of /tg/ would be completely gatekept from dickwaving, then.
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>>93158015
HARDCORE GIMMIE THAT CASH AND LIFESPAN
>Food: Tasteless- 1
Honestly I've always been fine with bland food
>Companions: Alone- 2
The options here are terrible and I'm sure ten years in a room with anyone would make it so only one of them leaves at the end
>Electronics: Surround sound system- 4
I sure hope this is enough to stave off insanity
>Side Room: Library- 5
Might be a good time to learn Japanese. What else am I gonna do?
>Entertainment: Skylight -1
It's cheap
>Services: Lab Research- 7
I am obligated to take this life extension even if that means I'll go crazy in the basement with nothing but books and music

Well I probably won't make it long before I make a noose out of book pages but think about the benefits if I do survive!
>>93158453
Internet's a service. You still need an entertainment which would put you overbudget.
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>>93168864
FUCK you're right.

HARDCORE ROUND TWO

>Food - Groceries (3)
Ramen and veggies, some meat every now and then.
>Companions - Kitten (3)
Awww kitty.
>Electronics - A/C (2)
As before.
>Side Room - Garden (1)
Cheapest option.
>Entertainment- Skylight (1)
Cheapest option.
>Services - Internets (10)
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>Comfy-life Spare-time Assassin?
New Assassin?
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DOES ANYONE HAVE THE CYOA WHERE YOU HAVE TO TEAM UP WITH A LORD OF THE RINGS VILLAIN TO TAKE OVER EARTH?

That cyoa was so fucking baller.
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>>93158015
>Tasteless Meal Bar
as a staple
>Alone
The other anon is right that it would be maddening to be trapped with someone
>Old Radio
News, music, weird AM stuff. a really cheap way to connect with the outside world
>Garden
place to grow my shit (food) to augment the meal bar diet, calming hobby, craft materials
>Skylight
>Workshop+
sunlight, weather, and place to improve my environment - could make furniture, tools, clothes, whatever
>Medical Care
>Education
making sure I survive the stay and can learn whatever seems relevant to remain sane and make the most of the time
this one's easy...
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>>93169074
>DOES ANYONE HAVE THE CYOA WHERE YOU HAVE TO TEAM UP WITH A LORD OF THE RINGS VILLAIN TO TAKE OVER EARTH?
. . . Any chance that you're thinking of Rule 34 Economy?
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>>93169102
Nah.
The premise was that Sauron found you on earth (I think) and was going to send you one of his generals to help you take over earth.
Witch king was godlike at war, Saruman could teach you magic and make orc grunts, the mouth of sauron was good at diplomacy
It was sick
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>>93168536
LET ME MARRY HAGS! AAAAAAAAAAAH

Since turning 30, Christmas cake just doesn't do it for me anymore man. I need me some of those sexy 40yo's that have kept fit and active and aged gracefully.

I wish that when I was 20, someone had sat down and told me I had a finite amount of time to pursue Christmas Cakes. Why didn't anyone tell me bros. . .
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>>93169128
Sauron's Minion?
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>>93169145
That's the one.
Huh, I thought there was more of a setup to it. Oh well.

Thanks dude.
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>>93168536
Why do they all have big boobs? Do we have any younger party members? JRPGs are supposed to be about being a teenager saving the world.
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>>93168536
Have you considered making a separate blog for your WIP discussions?
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>>93169182
Cringe
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>>93169194
Ignore him if you don't like him and his content. Grow some balls.
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>>93169258
Why so angry? Wouldn't it be better for you to get your Italics WIP newsletter from one place?
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>>93169102
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>>93169139
Why don't you just still date women who are 25-30?

>>93169182
Why would they be? Probably. No they aren't.
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>>93169439
Too young.
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>>93157391
>I see. I'll just shelve custom familiars.
stop shelving customization you already shelved spellcrafting reee
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>>93169520
He'll selve this comment too.
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>>93169539
AIEEEEEEEEEEEEEE
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>>93169439
>No they aren't.
JRPGs are literally defines by youths saving the world from danger. What the fuck are you talling about? Dragon Quest and Final Fantasy, two of the grandfathers of the genre literally has this as their most famous plots. Then you have JRPGs of today that continue the default trope.
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>>93168300
cute dog
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>>93168633
A new adventurer is clearly set in some setting tied to the titanlands from a new summoner. Branching heart is the "prime setting" of a lot of different beri cyoas, and the existence of globe keepers means that many of these different worlds may be actually in the possession of some girl living a normal life in a modern world somewhere.
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>>93168615
ye
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>>93159139
Updating this a bit: >>93147449
>Awakening
Early
>View of self
Pragmatism
> Facility
The Institute
Now necessary for certain memories.
>Memories
The Experiments, Games
I decided that the powers I could get with these points were worth much more than the alternative. Knowledge can be gained later, but powers are much harder to get (if it's at all possible) and are more useful to actually survive, especially since I can use Absorption to boost them to the stratosphere.
>Stats
Control 1, Discretion 2
I figure Control 2 isn't truly necessary anymore as I can calm myself down with Organic Response at will.
>Companions
Elizabeth, Elie, Mariana
Replaced Chloe with Elizabeth as she clearly needs out more.
>Powers Type
Psionic
>Mind Control
Suggestion (M1), Defence (M1 M2 M3)
> Precognition
Insight (M1 I2), Probability Detection (M1)
> Body Manipulation
Organic Response (M1)
> Enhancement
Peak Body (M1)
> Elemental Manipulation
Absorption (M1 Cold), Cold Generation (M1 I1), Freezing (M1 M2 I1), Cryomancy (M1 I1)
>Reality Warping
Probability Manipulation (M1), Luck Augmentation (M1 I1)
I've shored up my weaknesses a bit with an always on danger sense and a peak human body. Probability Detection is also incredibly useful for only 1 point, always knowing whether what you're doing is actually likely to work is huge. Finally, as mentioned Organic Response lets me bypass the need for Control 2 and is very useful for dealing with the stresses of my situation.
>Revelation
The Chamber
Still a major problem, still has to be stopped.
>Decision
Escape
>Getting out
Teamwork
>Complications
Police Activity, Men in black, Mobsters, Military Mobilisation, Black Ops Soldiers, We have your parents
Hate to do this to them, but my build isn't really made to hide from literally everyone. I'll go save them once I've built up enough of a community to keep them safe long term.
>What's the Plan Now?
Fight, Join Others
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>>93169520
>stop shelving customization you already shelved spellcrafting reee
He didn't technically shelve spellcasting. He in fact made it better by not constraining us to a ruleset allowing us to make our own magical spells using a generalized topic of magic.

Magic should never be constrained to a ruleset of creation.
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>>93171546
If all I wanted was to be told 'do it yourself' I wouldn't even bother playing a cyoa in the first place. He should've just went the Power Creator Xenon route and have a list of pre-created spells while also allowing us to make our own. That way if you don't want to do it yourself you don't have to, and if you do it's even easier because you have others to compare it to.
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>>93168434
Second is a princess, first a queen. Go with the queen.
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>>93168434
Use the first one. Do not listen to the coomers.
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>>93168440
>False teeth
Replace your bones.
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>>93171546
Still, seeing Drac people being forced to choose between 'ice spear' and 'fireball' would have been funny.
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>>93168536
>Don't know about including Divine Beasts since that's been getting negative feedback since people don't want to take an actual drawback from making a deal with divinity to gain a free waifu and conceptual power-up.

Are you going to elaborate on what you mean by this? What drawbacks? What power-up do we get? And what kind of waifu do we get?
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>>93172168
shitalics
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>>93172168
DracGODS would just be recreating Noble Phantasms from Fate, shitter. We rule over the Elements that make up the universe and planet. You should be thankful we just don't delete you.
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>>93168536
>Don't know about including Divine Beasts since that's been getting negative feedback since people don't want to take an actual drawback from making a deal with divinity to gain a free waifu and conceptual power-up.
They don't matter italics. Listen to me. KEEP THEM.
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>>93172602
Assume my answer is between
>but Ford will win THOUGH
>but Evoco can summon a BETER GOD
>but Meirin IS IMMUNE
>but Galileo is BEYOND
Or something like that.
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>>93168536
I concur with the other guy. If there is a serious drawback & a serious boon gained by picking a Divine Beasts, it's a net-positive addition to the CYOA.
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>>93172773
Evoco summoning gods is an anti-thesis to their goals. Also, DracGODS solo
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>>93172891
I'm still convinced a Fordfag would write a whole paragraph about how they win anyway.
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>>93172910
>>93172891
>>93172796
>>93172773
>>93172710
>>93172602
Totally natural italics discussion
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>>93172932
All mine.
I'm trying to discredit Italics' fans to prepare the place for our true Lord and Master, Tokhaar Gol.
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>>93172910
Because FordFags are deranged and hype the shit out of their jobber founder, clan, and magic.

Their magic loses against Alchemy (Forma De True) and their Clan got busted by the feds and went "Sorry for the trouble, Sir." When their furry glowie leader was going to get executed.
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>>93172999
Perhaps.
I never understood the hype, since a magic like that will probably fail if the opponent use multiple schools of magic at once (Yggdrasil) or use it in a way that wasn't observed before (Galileo) or time fuckery and more.
Even for utility Utility sounded more useful with prep time.
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>>93173095
Magic like Ford fails because it has a giant filter. Either know the technology or invent it from scratch. If you want to make a gun or sword, easy. Want to go blow-to-blow with someone summoning eldritch tentacles lmao gonna need to asspull some.advance tech and know how it works.
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>>93173154
One of their spells is to understand tech anon.
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>>93173265
A bit useless if they don't know/have the tech needed to win beforehand.
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>>93173298
But they would. Because they have that spell.
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>>93173316
>they have that spell
Let's say a Ford is faced with a Drac-Atman asshole that burns souls. Unless his 'Know-Tech' spell comes with a mental library OR he already saw a way to combat that kind of magic, he won't know what to materialize to deal with the aggressor.
Or at least that's my understanding of their limitations.
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>>93159106
Please make some of them adults, thanks.
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>>93159106
Missed you my dude.
Anons were retards for not reading the WIPs and then complaining about no adults in godly husbandry lmao.
Ah important question.
Cunny?
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>>93173265
>>93173316
You can only understand if you get the tech in the first place and OC tech is literally invented by effort and you can't cheat your way into it.
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>>93173457
>>93173498
Don't worry there will be lolis, hags and those in between.
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>>93173524
Go to a library.
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>>93173648
Just because you read something doesn't mean you understand it.
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>>93173697
I have a spell for that.
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What is the best EVIL cyoa? I want to make an antagonist for myself, as busted and malevolent as possible
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>>93173893
Entropist eclipses all.
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>>93173906
I don't know dude, IIRC Sons and the Father were big on family values, which lessen the malevolent aura in my opinion.
I'd say one of the Dark Lord/Overlord CYOAs fits more.
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>>93173893
idk prolly some sadistic /trash/ cyoa
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>>93173893
Well maybe not the BEST, but some CYOAs that come to mind would be The Poisoned Citadel, Big Evil Magical Overlord or Big Bad Evil Guy.
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>>93173893
I wouldn't really consider this one the best, but it is pretty pure as far as a setup for evil.
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>tfw i don't want to be the strongest anymore
it's over for me bros
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>>93174268
You never were the strongest in the first place. But you were alright, stand proud.
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>/cyoag/ seething over FordGOD superiority yet again
Crazy. One might even say OBSESSED.
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>>93174391
Your bitch ass Clan lost to some underpowered glowies and your bitch ass founder got slapped around by Ostane and KNEELED. Literal "Aieeeeee, forgive me Ostana-sama, I'm Gomensorry."
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>>93174420
>lost
they killed the glowies though. they just got brought to a tribunal over it where all the auctors pressured them into kneeling
>slapped around by ostane
a friendly bout, one he would've won if ostane didnt have auto-revive hacks thanks to her relic
in short, ford wins actually
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>>93169102
None of these nerd settings appeal particularly to my tastes.
>Earth 12 (125)
A cartoon universe will give me good ending most of the time.

>>93169407
>Supergirl (100)
Both brains and brawn.
All of these are hot girls, one isn't superior to any other in the looks department. Got to go for power.

>>93169433
>Good times (90)
Not that I think I'm some sort of pick-up god, but this is the only option that doesn't look villainous to the superheroes I've chosen to share a world with. I simply start a romantic relationship with someone.
>>True love x2 (70)
>>Adjustments (55)
I guess this is a waify cyoa. Better embrace it.

>>93169437
>Genderflip x5 (50)
All the major male characters. Superman, batman, darkseid, etc.

>Native (45)
I only have 1 companion and DC is already known for time-fuckery anyway, but it's just easier this way.
>Oh yeah, him (40)
>Local Power (30)
I'd like to fit in. What can local DC powers give me? Gadgeteering?
Just being a kryptonian would already be OP.

>>93169447
>Lover boy (29)
It's my propogation method after all.
>Optimization (28)
>Magical Brilliance (3)
Would have gone for technology, but Kara is already pretty advanced in that.
I'll fill in the last gap we have, magic.

>>93169453
>Unity Engine (-17)
Fine. It's an infinite scaling option.
>>93169491
>Blending in (-16)
>Propagation 1 (-15)
>Light Fantastic (0)
Time to start a magic cult.
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Give me a cyoa about being an evil devil that buys souls.
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>>93167790
I wonder how long it took Beri to find the word, "sysle". It literally means to screw around in a situation that's already a chaotic mess (or - more charitably - to improvise in a situation that's too chaotic to plan). Seems like an excellent choice, particularly if fairies are supposed to be antithetical to the Titans and their championing of Order. Embrace the madness, young fairy queen.
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>>93174551
What do demons want human souls for anyway?
Is it just damning them to hell out of sadism, or do they get something out of it?
Maybe souls are just the only currency that can cross the border between worlds. (Until fiat currency is invented.)

I've always been fond of the pyramid scheme concept for soul traders.
>If you can sign up 5 other sinners, your soul goes free! And you only have the profits of the initial deal.
But you can take it in so many directions.
>False god getting cultists to swear their soul to him
>Human sacrifice for a forceful damnation
>Some sort of drug pusher theme of addicting people to magic until they sign away their soul
>The good old fashioned fine print
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EntropistGODS how come our cyoa killed every other cyoa?
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>>93174920
Stop shilling Entropist.
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>>93174929
Stop taking baits.
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>>93174945
Then why are (You) taking one, anon?
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>>93174739
Shut up, Tok.
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>>93174739
>What do demons want human souls for anyway?
Power. Eating souls, using souls for enchantment, taking the knowledge in souls, etc.
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>>93174739
Tokmaballs, retard
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>>93173637
Good
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>>93174739
In the traditional Western/Christian take, Lycifer and his followers do it to prove a point - basically the same point as in the Book of Job. That humans aren't actually good beings, but are just sucking up to God for all the nice things He does for them. And that those same humans will switch sides if someone "outbids" God.

In a fantasy setting, though, almost anything is possible. The Rachel Morgan series of novels had it so that demonic magic was inherently corrosive, and her demons bought souls to use as toxic waste dumps.
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>>93176503
>sucking up to God for all the nice things He does for them
>all the nice things He does for them
Like what? Creating evil people for the lolz to make them suffer in hell for eternity?
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>>93176541
God is beyond comprehension!... or something.
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>>93169563
10 years old to keep me in elementary school. That helps make my job a lot easier
>Bust the Bullies -6
>World: Modern
>Athleticism (strength will be very important)- 3
>Super Sugar Candy (endurance is fun, and practical)- 4
>Little Steel Blade (for stealth, which is vitally important)- 3
>Wealthy- 3
>Alone- 1
>Back Row Seat (just for fun)- 4
>Rival- +1
>Stalker- +2
>Obsession- +1
The challenges are way too expensive, and the goal is strict. I don't want to have to do this, but it's time to show this world how Earth handles things.
The stalker should go first as he's not just a threat to me, but also is keeping an eye on my actions which would be a big problem. I don't expect dealing with him will be too difficult though. With my rich parents, I can get myself a silenced weapon and track down where the troublesome teacher lives. It won't be hard to eliminate him after that.
As for the bullies, I don't know if every little girl student is immortal or just me, but if they're immortal too they're gonna wish they weren't. I'll stalk the bullies, find the easiest target, learn her schedule, and eventually make my move. While disguised, I'll capture her, torture and mutilate her, and make sure she gets the memo to tell her bully friends to quit or I'll come for them next and I'll be even more brutal then. That should stop them, but it's possible they'll need one more example. After that, I'm sure bullying will never be an issue again.

I'm sure the goddess won't have a problem with this. After all, she created this bully scenario, and even proposed having children be abducted or the pleasant city being invaded by soldiers. Honestly she's the real monster. All she had to do was let me live out my cute new little life in peace, but she had to do this game while toying with me and everyone else in this world, so I will make sure to succeed in my mission at all costs, just like she told me to.
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>>93171119
I kind of want to update my chap too.

GIGA LUCKCHAD

>Awakening
Late
>View of self
Pragmatism
> Facility
The Center
Cann't beat combat training.
>Memories
Combat Training, Games
>Stats
Potential 2, Versatility 1
>Companions
Anton, Alice, Michael
>Powers Type
MUTANT (to leave humanity behind)
>Precognition
Insight M1 (1)
Prescient Reflexes M1 (3)
Fun thing about Prescient Reflexes and my teleportation is that I can Flash Step some distance away from myself to evade bullets. I removed the Battle Precog because you don't need much strategy with super strength.
>Body Manipulation
Organic Response M1 (1)
I forgot that OR could calm yourself down. That's handy.
>Enhancement
Peak Body M1 (1)
Metabolism M1 (1)
Muscle Density M1 M2 (2)
Super Strength M1 (3)
Hyper Durability M1 (3)
>Mobility
Jump M1 I2 (7)
Flash Step M1 I1 (4)
Teleportation M1 (3)
>Elemental Manipulation
Absorption (Fire) M1
Fire is the most common offensive energy type, the only kind used by the regular human militaries, and absorbing it will power me up even more. Makes for spectacular battles amidst fiery ruins and lets me Flash Step at max speed indefinitely.
>Reality Warping
Probability Manipulation M1 (1)
Luck Augmentation M1 I1 (4)
This is the replacement for battle precog. Protects me from hostile luck manipulation AND allows me to just punch/teleport wildly and rek people anyway.
>Revelation
The Test
I am reminded of the finale of God of War 1, after Kratos defeats Ares. You wanted to make me a great warrior? You succeeded.
>Decision
Escape
>Getting out
Teamwork/Mass Breakout
>Complications
Police Activity, MIBs, Nemesis, Black Ops Soldiers, Breach of Secrecy, Military Mobilisation, The Inquisitors
Talking Alice over to my side in a climactic showdown ought to be fun.
>What's the Plan Now?
Join Others, Search For Answers.
I'll help others out, but really, I want to know more about the Facilities and how I got these powers. Naturally, I want to grow them too.
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>>93176541
Serious response, although I'm really only saying this purely because I'm tired of seeing that point tossed around as some supposed catch-all anti-proof of divine love.

The "point" of evil is choice. If you have no choice but to be good, then there is no meaning to choosing it. If you cannot even conceive of evil at all, there is no meaning to conceiving of good. Similarly, actions must have consequences for them to be meaningful. Therefore, for the good/evil dichotomy to have meaning whatsoever, there must necessarily exist evil actions that warrant punitive consequences. Whether eternal suffering is a worthy consequence for anything less than perfect good is a different argument entirely, but the basic state of humanity in an imperfect world serves some purpose in a philosophical sense that's not merely "for the lolz," and there are certainly people who choose to be evil in a way that renders them culpable for their actions.

This isn't really any form of proselytization; I'm just saying there are more nuanced ways to think about it (and any other religion, whether real-life or fantasy-based) than the typical braindead take of "evil exists therefore a God who allows it to cannot be good" that the modern age is so enamored with despite how it crumbles under the scrutiny of five seconds of critical thinking.

>>93176568
Unironically you can identify spiritual infants by overuse of that phrase. There is so much that can be known, but people don't want to fuckin READ anything these days. They park their asses in the pew, and then it goes in one ear and out the other, and then they spend six and a half days living like the rest of the world. A true shame.
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>>93176952
There is no choice. God created everything and knows how things will play out, God chose for everything, so choice is fake. Unless God is not omniscient, this is the logical conclusion.
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>>93177062
Correctly predicting the choice of another is not the same as deciding for them, anon.
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>>93177086
I see that God made you too retarded to see simple logic.
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>>93177136
>>93177148
He certainly made me autistic, but that is more of a boon here than anything. Whether you believe in free will, random will, or absolute fate, there's no reason that "knowing the future/all possible futures at the moment of creation" removes choice from the actors who live within that future. They choose as they will, and it is simply known up above what that choice will be before it happens. Free will and omniscience can coexist just fine. There is no reason they cannot.
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>>93177195
>there's no reason that "knowing the future/all possible futures at the moment of creation" removes choice from the actors who live within that future
Oh but there is. God made everything while knowing what will happen, God chose to make things the way they are, God chose everything, God chose for everything.

Everything you do is dictated by your creator, God, right from the start and He chose all you will ever choose. I say this invalidates all choice, you may think otherwise, but either way, whether one has choice or not is irrelevant as you will do what God made you to do.

God made us discuss this.
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>>93177350
Once again, that does not prevent you from also choosing and happening to make the exact same choice.

Envision a box. Everything in that box is real. it is filled with people and life and a whole world full of will and choice. Then, a creator comes by when all is said and done in the box, declaring that he, indeed, created the box and all that was in it. That does not just invalidate the choices made within the box.

Logically, God "choosing" whatever happened at the start (however much that is or is not true is irrelevant) does not preclude you from also having true choice and merely happening to choose whatever your creator predicted you to choose. Yes, it is astronomically unlikely... for an imperfect being to do. But anything that is capital-G God, by definition, is an apex existence. Perfect. Infinite ability.

To make a very modern example out of it, imagine making a Minecraft world from a random seed, but because you know the noise algorithms in your head, you can 100% predict what each block will be as you arrive at it. You did not choose what each block is. You merely set the initial conditions and yet can know, omnisciently, with 100% accuracy, what each block will be. That does not mean you are deigning, declaring, or choosing what each block is. That is simply not how the logic flows.
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>>93177411
>anything that is capital-G God, by definition, is an apex existence. Perfect. Infinite ability.
At that point, throw logic out the window because omnipotence.

>imagine making a Minecraft world from a random seed, but because you know the noise algorithms in your head, you can 100% predict what each block will be as you arrive at it. You did not choose what each block is. You merely set the initial conditions and yet can know, omnisciently, with 100% accuracy, what each block will be. That does not mean you are deigning, declaring, or choosing what each block is. That is simply not how the logic flows.
This is just a long winded way of saying God maybe chose to not know everything for whatever reasons, which would make him not omniscient (unless the above). Major cope.

Anyway, whatever, my interest in this has passed.
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>>93169182
>Why do they all have big boobs?
Civilization.

>Do we have any younger party members?
Yeah. The youngest party member you can recruit in the CYOA is 15, since that is the age needed to volunteer for the Marshal Forces.


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>>93172796
>Are you going to elaborate on what you mean by this? What drawbacks? What power-up do we get? And what kind of waifu do we get?
The drawback is that if you want to keep relying on power of the divines, you will need to fulfill their commandment which is related to their nature.

For example, one divine beast represents nature Consumption (Pic Related) (The actual impulsive need/desire to eat and general overindulgence) for her Commandment, you basically need to feed her what she asks. You can't just go to the grocery store, throw a steak on the grill, and then toss it on a plate in front of her. She'll still eat it, but that's not what she wants from you.

You'll have to spice-it up, if she wants something specific (Ex: Dragon), you'll have to go find a Dragon, shoot it down from the sky, rip out its wings, kill it, then cut off the Round of the beast, then prepare it and turn it into a gourmet meal with some kind of side dishes and show for her to enjoy while eating. There is also a chance she might ask for something special like preparing an innocent child's heart as a refined meal in a ritual as a sign of continued devotion to her. In return for doing her tasks, not only do you get her as a Summon you also get her power to devour anything, literally just bite it out of reality or "eat" anything in range to place them in a series of endless bottomless pocket-dimensions stomachs that can store anything without any form degradation.
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>>93177670
They will be like most waifus, where you'll take them based on whether they resonate with you or not.
I still see no reason to shelve them.
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>>93174920
Entropist was too powerful
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>too powerful
>failed to kill even ancient neverever
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>too powerful
>only ever mentioned for shitposting purposes
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>>93177670
>you will need to fulfill their commandment which is related to their nature.
Sounds pretty fun, as long as there's a decent enough amount of beasts with different contracts (so even if they're fairly extreme, there's at least one that you might find it worth it to do.). The idea of keeping some sort of absurd Commandment for power is enticing so it would be neat to have that as an option(or maybe i'm just a chuuni who enjoyed avesta of black and white).
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>>93174551
There's that neat line-node your-soul's-been-sold demon one with a soul-broker tree splitting off the general taboo/"radical freedom" feeding, but I can't find it.
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Finished up the first page of my new psychotically-lewd-yet-inexplicably-worksafe CYOA. Dropping it as a WIP for feedback, since it's more-or-less enough to give you a firm idea of what it's about and a taste of the rest of the options.

Balancing has not happened as of now, so ignore specific numerical values. With the vast amount of space each magical girl entry takes up, it wouldn't surprise me if this ended up being like five pages long, but we'll see. It definitely won't be done any time in the next couple weeks.
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How does it feel to be dead?
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>>93179251
Like this: >>93179225
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>>93179360
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>>93179225
Good. Needs more water.
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>>93179225
absolutely horrid. roshitanon has learned nothing
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>>93179225
ADD MATERNITY PANTIES FOR A PREGNANT OPTION
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>>93176952
Firstly, there are already plenty of evil acts we can't choose to do, so by this logic being good already has no meaning.
Secondly, this doesn't solve the problem of natural evil. There are plenty of bad things in this world that don't happen as a result of human choice.
Thirdly, God already has to pick and choose which humans he's going to create, and he already knows exactly how each of them is going to turn out. He could very easily just create more Gandhi's and less Hitlers for instance.
Finally, God already mind controlled a dude to do evil in the bible. He literally admitted to creating evil.
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>>93179225
how am i supposed to feel about this?
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>>93176793
I think it might be better to drop some of the mobility powers to get mental defences.
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>>93177670
Hey Italics, still looking forward to Ecclesiastes - think you could tell me about far right in >>93168536. I need to know about her.
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>>93179225
btg-shit so no
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Is this hell or paradise?

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>>93177411
I actually agree with your position but that argument doesn't make any sense.
>You don't believe a created world has free will?
>Just imagine a created world. Logically it should have free will, right?
>QED
Instead of hypotheticals, let's start with examining what makes a choice a choice. And what properties in the world you think would dequalify it.
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>>93177670
don't shelve them i wanna go eat with hungy cunny
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>>93179901
That comes from Potential points. I should have included them. But yes, I see your meaning.



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