Archives & Other Resources: https://pastebin.com/wETipqYwAllSync: https://cyoa.allsync.com/s/owWor64yLTngDk3Multiplayer Compilations: https://rentry.org/MCYOA_Comp_Comp (was I supposed to do this?)In Case of Emergency, Break Glass: https://rentry.org/mcyoagCanaryThreadslave Rentry: https://rentry.org/ThreadKeeping2Backup Rentry: https://rentry.org/ThreadKeeping3I AM SPEED EditionPrevious Thread: >>93186153
>>93195591>MHA Rentryhttps://rentry.org/uhx77ys6>RULES:> Timeline: Just Another Story> Location: Japan>The Hero Students are at Shiketsu.Instructions + Template for Making Cards: https://pastebin.com/NQ6JNH8r>New Stuff:New Writefag:>That Old Saying About Memories (Mammogar, Maru(maru)): https://rentry.org/maru-mammogarNew Builds:>Kanami Shimizu>>93179646>Jimmy Vinchenzo VN The Indestructible Scumbag>>93188308>The Illustrious Illithid>>93188460>The Archive Link so you can keep using the funny numbers for builds (use this before complaining about dead links)https://archive.4plebs.org/tg/thread/92498234/#92498405>CHARACTER PROMPTS (feel free to answer these whenever)Class 1-D Prompts 1-50: https://rentry.org/mhampClass 1-D Prompts 50+: https://rentry.org/mhamp2Everyone else's prompts: https://rentry.org/mhamp3Same password for all of them (mha4)>Older Prompt Links Are in Herehttps://pastebin.com/Qr3TtGa6>Fighting Style Prompt (Leaving this out because it might be useful for anyone writing a fight)https://archive.4plebs.org/tg/thread/88693730/#88693888>Class 1-D Timelinehttps://rentry.org/MHATIMELINE>Class 1-D Character Summaryhttps://rentry.org/9bf3g>Newer Version of the CYOA (Both the old and new versions are legal for builds. Use whichever one you want)Version 4.2: https://archive.4plebs.org/tg/post/92012978
>>93195604>STUDENTS:>Chihiro Mitsurugi HN Ascetic Sword Hero: Yako>>88189202>Soujyuuro Imai HN Wise Eye Hero: Mahoudeva>>88194077>Bobby Samson HN Sunlight Man>>88190591>Sora Tanaka HN Area Denial Hero: Orbit>>88191735>Kaylee Suzuki HN Flying Force>>88438219>Shinkan Sen HN Crazy Train>>88194200>Hifumi Takeda HN Warp Blade Hero: Challenger>>88196397>Minerva Kim HN Spark>>88826766>Hailey Chang HN Recoil>>88826770>Faith Kang HN Drone>>88826774>Maxine Nguyen HN Radius>>88826778>Edith Lee HN Arena>>88826782>Noah Abrams HN Archangel>>88205041>Victor Sigurd HN Hydra>>88209661>Inigo Myoga HN Dragon Hero: Ryu-kishi>>88414797>Christopher Cain HN Mirror Devil>>88217649>Son Jugo HN Aspara>>88239137>Genma Go HN Goldorado>>88353862>Ashleigh Katsuragi HN Blackout>>88268251>Atsushi Orochi HN Hard to Destroy Lizard Hero: Yamata>>88273479>Nyoro Hoge HN Maru(maru)>>88273837 + >>88758766>Yui Sagara HN Binding Hero: Capture Cloth (Held Back)>>88383012>Kyoda Hiro HN Overdose (Held Back)>>88193619+ >>91985145>Sally McCathy HN Last Rite>>88810810>Takara Tame HN Android>>89199766>Nijimura Mahoko HN Cool Boost>>91685518+>>91685973>Ian Takenaka HN Rush>>93095991>Class 2-D>Mochi Uranus HN Smelly Hero: Stink Rat>>88196664>Kevin Rool>>88222618>Suzuki Nene HN Ghostly Cat Hero: Bakeneneko>>88707393>Hiroki Asai HN Champion of Negativity: Zetsuboy>>88755823>Class 1-E https://rentry.org/p6dwm>Students (Cont.)>Class 3-D https://rentry.org/vx255>William Dustice HN King Billy>>88192360>Johanna Hilt HN Gauntlet Hero: Weiss Schwarz>>88195437>Ganto Kanzaki HN The Clone Hero, Commander (NPC)>>89284218>Kagami Reina>>89605669>Norman “Norm” Smith HN Whatabout>>91046080>Rumi Aratsuki HN Hysteria>>91363307>Class ???>Kiki HN Yggdrasil>>91707234
>>93195623>Students (Cont.)>Class 1-C (Shiketsu)>Okimoto Chisaka>>91130422 >Isabela Nakahata>>91351414>Lilinah ‘Riri’ Inoue>>91347120>Ysmir Dragonborn>>91349452>Daniel W. Rain>>91352447>Class 3-B (U.A.)>Animata>>90990850>Synthesis>>90992108>Meadow>>90992377>Top Smile>>90992508>Ichimaki>>90994440>Nekiro Nishi>>90997317>Madoka Mikan HN Heartbeathttps://rentry.org/eesb8>Itō Sukemochi HN Warpden>>90973632>Li Yinzhen HN Jiangshi>>90978093>Katsumi Hachizaki:https://rentry.org/HeartMHA>Cormelia Busujima>>91353847>Class 1-F>Suki HN Sukeban>>91670899>Runt HN Dust Devil>>91691942>Rob Williams HN: Velvet Worm>>91728780>Haiiroshi Kinzoku HN Fullmetalhttps://rentry.org/Fullmetal-mha>Igarashi Ryosuke HN Araken>>91807240>Tatsuya Yamashita HN Bad Touch>>91808184>Azuma Hisa HN Beach Day>>91809104>Daigo Ulmeyda HN Fly 1 Million>>91814363>Kiyoura Shidehara HN Icky Hero: Slimenuts>>91782779>Higa Umeko HN Slip-N'-Slideasaurus>>91833690>Nayuki Kyoko>>91834965>??? HN Meteoric Hero: Cube>>91890433>Misato Fukushima>>92006447>PRO HEROES>U.A. Teachers:>Yunikon, the Brilliant Hero>>90998494>Dr. Seto Kawata>>91051432>Shiketsu Teachers:> Anzu Nishima HN Karaburan>>88189414> Aiko Aimi HN Motivational Hero: Rosethorn>>88190438>Pierre Vachon HN The Gentle Way Hero: Ippon>>88205924>Masanori Kitamura HN Hijack>>88219956>Yasashi Koibito HN The Laser Hero - Majestic>>88231509>Junko Hongo HN The Overly-Enthusiastic Tokusatsu Hero, LocaLoca (NPC)>>88745486>Omura Tadao HN Deceptive Hero, Conman>>88754723>Riku Washizawa HN The Steel Talon Hero: Skycarver>>91719484>Takahashi Mako, HN Ersatz>>92011019
>>93195639>PRO HEROES (Cont):>Unaffiliated Heroes>Kenji Shako HN Strongest Shrimp Hero: Magnum Shrimp (and Water Fowl Hero: Flamingal)>>88425908>Yuusei Atsushi HN Spring Dragon Hero: Seiryu>>88194386>Kalianne Sato HN "Flame Strike Hero: Honoken">>88568039>Ryuji Inoue HN Transport Hero: Rescue Ray (Principal - Sunray Troubled Youth Center)>>88195499>Akagi Sanpatchi HN "Popsy">>88204632>??? HN Birdy>>88225549>Edmund Connor HN The Tall Man>>88286518>Ryusei Sugiyama HN Smokin' Sexy>>88301887>Kevin Thompson HN The Purple Man>>88357698>Yuichi Ishida HN Slipstream>>88389419>Roland Walker HN PsyKing (Sandatsu'd)>>88616703>Ernst Hennig HN Impakt>>88616848>Junpei Ozu HN: The Standstill Hero, "Floor">>88820563>Rodion Popo HN Overman>>89015229>Ludolf Raphael Victorius, Hero Name: Fair Marshal>>89006731>Taichi Kyoryu HN Cretaceous King, Saurus>>89508780>Kurogane Keisho HN Yoshizumi>>89507063>Tosuke Jinai HN Compound>>91016593>Yosuke Shirai HN The Lustrous Hero, Wavelength>>91032513>Astra Smalls Aka Size King>>91360064>Richard Wilkins HN The #1 Hydro Hero: "Splash">>91721688>MR. BULLET>>91812743>Shōgeki Heshi HN: Crash>>92012115>Tóu Zhǎng Koie/Phys P>>92017795>Kazuya Ono>>92012443>Alpha Ueno HN: Sylph>>92014322>Iwayama Kentaro HN Sisyphus>>92947131>Mash, Renji Kurokawa>>93005848>SUPPORTERS:>Lady Astoria Belmont>>88201576>Rika Eichi>>88209395>Yaju>>88223795>Isaiah Sibylla (Keola Ku)>>88231241>Aura Curie (Student)>>88231609>Just "The Doctor">>88721597>Fransk Brunhilde>>89014208>Endless Horizons Ltd.https://rentry.org/iptpr>Yusaku Kanzaki a.k.a. Clone Cop (NPC)>>89278250>Emilia Busujima>>89349231>Detective Risa Date>>90657164>Holden Deckard>>90913931>Brightly>>91006966>Satoru Tani (Student)>>91149772>Kuji Futoi (Student)>>91363451>Yuko Ozaku (Student)>>92025025
>>93195653>VILLAINS (Villain Name):>Turncoat Agency:>Keiichi Tano HN Racer V / VN Getaway>>88926925>Tenshi Chisio HN Caduceus / VN Sawbones>>88927453>Jack Dunn HN Three-Sixty / VN The Asset>>88931192>Pax Organization:>Eugene Kurtz VN Pax and Mercy>>88984432>Nightmare>>88984422>Unaffiliated Villains:>Bruno Garcia VN Mauler>>88206714>Karuga Ito (Teacher - Shiketsu)>>88192478>Shiori Shiratora VN Kamigami>>88192913>Recino R. Percutio>>88191385>Nakata Yumiko VN Walpurgis>>88191796 + https://pastebin.com/nMZq81Jt>hina seiyama VN panzer viii>>88226487>Giichi Mikata>>88198856>Miki Ginrei VN Fluegel>>88209242>Ginji Gō VN Desperaido>>88278735>Jack Mitchell VN Marshall>>88456239>Kazuma Oomori VN Charlatan>>88669394>Hattori Ume VN Broad Daylight>>88926931>"Blank">>91050726>Kōkishin Yuuki VN Shoggoth>>91050987>"Mammogar">>91051410>Tomiehttps://rentry.org/ddom6m82>TechVision Elite 2023 - 43Vista UltraSmart 4K TV>>91654960>JOHN DOE VN GREEN DOOR>>89018740>Suslik>>91699413>Ryuji Ayanokoji VN Overlord>>91702476>Jack Smithee VN The Gravedigger>>91702656>Zyra Mein VN Braindrain>>91702779>Rudi Brandt VN Sturmtruppe>>91703057>Bonzo Amato VN The Boss>>91703456>The Hospital Killer>>91772420>Paul Crémieux VN De Jais (Jet Black)>>91841242>Jessica Wu VN Surinam Toad Girl>>91851919>Jan Procházka VN Msr. Blanc>>91963570>Gustave Gavial VN Gnash>>92016443>Cosmo Black VN X.T.>>92016885>Kate Everly>>92016986>Sato Yukio VN Gold Man>>92385942>Kurogane Tetsuo VN Dreadnought>>93176262>Adrian Vasquez Domingiun Manolete>>93177737>Dewi Angkasa>>93178283>Kanami Shimizu>>93179646>Jimmy Vinchenzo VN The Indestructible Scumbag>>93188308>The Illustrious Illithid>>93188460
>>93195669>VILLAINS (Villain Name):>Horrific 5:>Samuel Wilson VN Desolator>>88917340>On Giết Năng VN Tether>>88921198>Erika Murakami VN Nox>>88923183>Maddie Griffiths VN Maddox>>88930575>Edmund Muller VN Mercury>>88923191>Revolutionaries:>Momotaro Tachibana VN Nebulous Storm>>88376954>Mark Matuli>>88301910>Junichi Takagi VN Marrow>>88435130>Miriam Slowburn Hakase VN Prologing Evil: Big Hat (NPC)>>88736960>Kester Greenfield>>90921671>Vigilantes:>Helene Lysingen VN Noctiluca>>88197005>Takigawa Shion VN Shapeless Blade: Aquarius>>88209069>Toru Imaishi VN Kampai>>88630353>Rebecca Weber>>88722750>Yushi Taneka VN Blazing Bright>>89012707>Yoshiro>>89338457>Sasha Azanami>>91080404>Rui>>91197187>Kaori Kaoru>>91229075>Choko Yumiya, VN Eye High>>92132153>Night Parade:>Cammy Link VN Karma>>88190537>Haruka Pulch VN Tatarimokke>>88205909>Sebastian Needle VN Greenfinger>>88214481>Okane King VN Midas>>88190217> ??? VN Maw>>88250272> ??? VN Bogey>>88277889> Tomi>>88387913>Luccione>>90146415>Wild Hunt>Sandatsu Owari>>91030425>Mio Katsuragi HN Forget-Me-Not>>89250569>Hiromi Hitomi VN Feral>>88856089>Dr. Isaac Ivanov VN Drekus>>88666462>Ookami Shizukahttps://rentry.org/OokamiShizuka>Ivan Trup VN The Prophet>>91702348
>>93195682Writefags:>Early writefags here (18 Pages)https://rentry.org/gqu3gnaf>”First Test” Comphttps://pastebin.com/66ByP2sD>Questionnaire Comphttps://pastebin.com/Ksn0zJ31Else check the rentry>A Multi-Dimensional Valentine's Day (Ryu-kishi, Maru(maru), Last Rite, Mirror Devil, Challenger, Sunlight Man, Android, Cool Boost, Radius, Marrow)https://rentry.org/399yrhts>News (Reaper, mentions of Forget-Me-Not)https://rentry.org/z7vhkv2s>Spectre of Revolution (Maru(maru), Marrow)https://rentry.org/m7o3zsqc>Vigilante Hunt, part 1 (Ryu-kishi, Last Rite, Marrow, Maru(maru), 1-D, 1-E, 1-F, Satoru Tani, Rosethorn, Karaburan)https://rentry.org/7qodqeyc>Rehab (Overdose, Yamata, Ryu-kishi and a cameo from Goldorado)https://rentry.org/rydady6a>Baited (Reaper, Satoru Tani)https://rentry.org/8pes8av2>Serpent (Mahoudeva, Honoken, Seiryu, Yamata)https://rentry.org/4aovibcq>The Plan (Desolator and The Five):https://rentry.org/8ageap3b>Team Wallflower, Assemble! (Yako, Drone, Blackout, Maru(maru), Capture Cloth, Mauler)https://rentry.org/TeamWallFlower_Part1>Conservation of Ninjitsu (Marumaru, Ryu-Kishi, Yako, Aura Curie, Blank): https://rentry.org/maru-blank>(Beach Day, Saurus, Majestic)https://rentry.org/TwitterBeef>Never Have One Last Score (Marumaru, Shoggoth): https://rentry.org/maru-shoggoth>If You Like Piña Coladas (Spark): https://rentry.org/upmhhgcd>The Doomed Plan (Desolator, Maddox, The Golden Age Five):https://rentry.org/akz38hz3>An Attempt in Broad Daylight (Floor, Maddox, Mirror Devil, Smokin' Sexy, Tether, Mercury, Desolator, Impakt, Sunlight Man, Challenger):https://rentry.org/qyd9d4d9>Catsu Curry (Bakeneneko, Yako, Capture Cloth, Overdose, Yamata)https://rentry.org/gmkwouxq>First Day: Ersatz, Rosethorn and a couple 1-D students make cameos.https://rentry.org/yka76xqz>Night of the Reaper prologue (Mahoudeva, Mirror Devil, Blackout, Forget-Me-Not, Reaper, Satoru Tani)https://rentry.org/48a3gma5
>>93195689>Writefags (Cont.):>Night of the Reaper, Part 1 (Reaper, Flying Force, Saurus, Rosethorn, Ryu-Kishi, Challenger, Cameos of Seiryu, Impakt, Sunlight Man, Mirror Devil, Mahoudeva)https://rentry.org/hb284fea>THE TOURNAMENT PART FIVE! (1-D, Smokin' Sexy, Popsy, Rosethorn, Majestic)https://rentry.org/wy5yord3>Plan B (Mirror Devil, Desolator, Sunlight Man, Challenger, Impakt, Smokin' Sexy):https://rentry.org/t5ktcmw9>Frame (Mirror Devil, The Doctor, Smokin' Sexy, Impakt, Desolator):https://rentry.org/wbgxvk6x>Vigilante Hunt 2 (Ryu-kishi, Mirror Devil, Marumaru, Marrow, Yako, Conman, Majestic, Karaburan, Localoca, Ito, Rebecca Weber, Skycarver, Hijack, Ippon, Last Rite, The Clique, Flying Force, Yamata, others)https://rentry.org/VigilHunt22>The Monster's Aid (Desolator):https://rentry.org/v7ypkni8>Night of the Reaper Part 2 (Yamata, Overdose, Goldorado, Majestic, Desolator, Rosethorn, Reaper): https://rentry.org/wrong-answer>Devil's Counsel (Last Rite, Desolator):https://rentry.org/u8999fx9>Doing Business (Feral, Drekus, Karma, cameo of Reaper)https://rentry.org/3yuamq8i>Clown Days (Ryu-kishi, Popsy, Maru(maru), Mirror Devil, Smokin' Sexy, Popsy Team, mention of 1-D):https://rentry.org/pktzxywf>Full Circle (Rosethorn, Feral, Yamata, Overdose)https://rentry.org/um6ctydx>Recovery (Overdose, Yamata, Rosethorn and Karaburan)https://rentry.org/hp3mzyo3>Arrival (Mash, Impakt, Floor, mentions of Reaper)https://rentry.org/ay6n5m44>Full Circle II (Yamata, Flying Force, Saurus, Drekus, Feral, cameo of Rosethorn and Hiro)https://rentry.org/6ofoa93k>The Maiden and the Monster (Shoggoth, Marumaru, clamguy cameo): https://rentry.org/maru-shoggoth-thesqueakqual>Always Late (Rush, Greenfinger)https://rentry.org/2m84t35q>Full Circle III - Part I (Flying Force, Feral, Yamata)https://rentry.org/v5vupbwr>Missed you too (Forget-Me-Not, Reaper, with cameos from the Wild Hunt, Satoru Tani and Karma)https://rentry.org/eh25ik3e
>>93195699Writefags (Final):>Full Circle III -Part II A (Flying Force, Feral)https://rentry.org/ede3sq9n>Full Circle III -Part II B (Yamata no Orochi, several mentions)https://rentry.org/24vd8dm3>The Blinding Lights (Desolator, Reaper, Maddox):https://rentry.org/z8t6mmyd>That Old Saying About Memories (Mammogar, Maru(maru)): https://rentry.org/maru-mammogar>RELATIONSHIP CHARTS IN HEREhttps://pastebin.com/rsnEph0bFor Art, Memes, Tierlists, etc. check the rentry
RULES: https://rentry.org/b595h6dm>Team 1>Natsuo Uchiha >>92078251>D >>93148209>Himari Miko >>92227101 + Jutsus: https://rentry.org/HimariJutsu>Takeru Suzuki >>92037873>Team 2>Osamu >>92030854>Shimabukuro Fumio >>93186440>Kichōna >>93033948 + Jutsus: https://rentry.org/NardoKichonaJutsuList2>Nodao-Douji >>92130402>Team 3>Kamiko Karatachi >>92474846>Masukuda Rarime >>93032365 + Jutsus: https://rentry.org/nbd7ikrf>Ichika Chinoike >>93073774>Kita >>92247657>Team 4>Kiko Inuzuka >>92046953>Remilia Orochimaru >>93084258>Itami Nanae >>92041809>Kazen Uzumaki (No Yin Chakra Affinity) >>93174267 + Jutsus: https://rentry.org/5kp2svbp>Team 5>Ezaki Tuto >>92143158>Jin Hyuga >>93072884>Shinrō Kamotai >>93066678 + Jutsus: https://rentry.org/ShinroJutsu>Yuma Kouda >>93027066>Team 6>Tsugumi >>92078303>Ghidorah >>93079137 + Jutsus: https://rentry.org/xant7fe2>Junki Takenaga >>93007593>Sen Yamamoto >>93077606 + https://rentry.org/mkyze5fa>Team 7>Kamiizumi Tadafusa >>92443623>Fujiwara Nobutake >>93185043>Kamare Hozuki >>92097216>Daiki Ueno >>92099009>Team 8>Rio Konoki >>92286130>Mitsuteru Chihoshi >>>92596513>Kuro Blackshadow >>93174547>Choko Yumiya >>92229037>Team 9>Inaba Hyuga >>92642892>Mojo Nakasendou >>92130059>Kitsumoto Hachirō >>93081661 + https://rentry.org/KitsumotoC>Eiken Shinzo >>93133919>Team 10>Dojuma Takiga >>92435927>Ayuka Hagihara >>92418225>Oishi Teruo >>92424132>Egao >>92425369>Team 11>Miura Lee, Man of Iron >>92982908 + https://rentry.org/MeleebroZ>Rinka Akagi >>93116854>Akaito Tenyo >>93033931>Chosuke-Chosuke Kirabokua >>93127294>Teamless:>Taihō Shiryō. >>92065120>Eiji >>92132327>Tahaki Shiteru >>93076567>Shichirou Hyūga >>93125740>Chado Kuro >>93147948>Ankan Bidatsu >>93163286
>>93195746>Loners:>Ahiratsu Ōtsutsuki >>92073651>Darkbone >>92064881>Kijyo-Douji >>92092125>Engetsu Bōfū >>92101140>Insane Wild Boar >>92164715>??? >>92164855>Setsu Suru >>92181406>Sado Mazohisuto >>92181768>Kanami-Douji >>92194017>Barou >>92473683>Sekka Hakobu >>93146142>Gyū >>92157552>Yōki >>92157657>Koroko Kokoroko >>92235539>Mr. Hopo >>92411015>Lizard >>92249477>Aika Yuki >>92251220>Kondai >>92388984>Makura Hachimune >>92445626>The Surgeon >>92934104>Greasy P >>92955486>Brunhilde Gunther >>92974998>Ishirō Honda >>93020553>Hugh Napoleon >>93046548>Gokan Nokemono >>93101749>John Anonymous >>93105033>Vix Raiu >>93164694>Tsukusari Meikin >>93165978>Naruto MP Additional Archive but better (Writefags, Art, Relationship Charts, Info Cards, etc.):https://rentry.org/narutogeninversionmcyoag>Chunin Exam Stage 1 Hub Post:>>92135567>Chunin Exam Stage 2 Hub Post:>>92331218>Chunin Exam Stage 2 Logistics Post:https://rentry.org/w78sxh6g + >>92321962>Chunin Exam Stage 3 Logistics Post:>>92846432>The Chūnin Exams - Stage 2.5: The Preliminarieshttps://rentry.org/r54695mhNew Stuff:Updated Build:>Shimabukuro Fumio>>93186440Writefag:>Crowning of the Insect Sage (Shimabukuro, with appearances from Nodao, Kichona, Yuma, and Insane Wild Boar)https://rentry.org/CrowningOfAnInsectSageTournament Status Update:>>93165391Tiermaker: https://tiermaker.com/create/naruto-chunin-mcyoag-template-16244798
>Rules1) Play as is. Assume that the powers picked are at their starting level. Picking Learner also unlocks the second spell from the start. Don't forget to design the character and the soul they possess2) Ignore the companions section. Pick 1 build to be close to, and 1 build to be distant towards. Options increasing companions instead increase the number of builds you are close with3) Pick any starting city and bonus. The story will still start at the town of Easily>You're a native to Shower City. You don't have to be an orphaned high schooler. Pick any background within reason>None of the companions exist. Instead, everyone is part of an online friend group that, when meeting for the first time, discovered the coffee table rune>Other runes exist in Shower City that lead to different cities in case you don't want to join the main group. All runes and the objects they're inscribed on are invisible to anyone that lacks the ability to enter Gras Paada.>The goal is still to defeat the 5 warlords, but in-universe the characters only have a vague prophecy to save the world from evil>You teleport to the world Gras Paada solo during your first time to gain an adverturer's soul. Any subsequent teleport will require you to teleport with others to reduce its load on the soul>Items carried by you can be transported with you to and from Gras Paada. The smaller the item, the less likely it is to get lost during the transit. Items that fail to be transferred will return to you when you teleport back.>By default, souls only give you a themed set of powers and can talk to you after visiting Gras Paada a few times. The amount of influence they have is up to you. Most characters don't transform into their souls, but it's not the be all end all.
>>93195766>MagesYoshiko Matsubara | Thalia>>93161672Amaury Felix Vaugeois | Verdeus the Green>>93073497Tojo "Rooster" Kaito | Belldandy>>93073818James Blackwood | Xernes, Regent of the Empty Legion>>93182145>SwordsmenReza Lotfi | Bassil>>93071943Tomoe Sasakura | Valeria>>93072501Mike Young | Reynard Sutton, The Unrelenting>>93072681Lucianus Salvius | Daimon, Bloodstorm Angel>>93074515>Rogues>Ruy Eustáquio | Stinkleheimer>>93072182Shun Lee | Zacharia>>93073867>WritefagsBloody Beginnings, a Strange Night (Lucianus)https://rentry.org/x7ri34qwExperiments, Preparation, and Anxiety (Lucianus)https://rentry.org/t59qhu8sNew day, new life (Lucianus), (references to various other builds)https://rentry.org/r8ppg6hxAmaury's discovery of Gras Paada: https://rentry.org/the_cave_to_gras_paadaPanic at night and unforunate falls (Lucianus), (Short appearance of Shun Lee, references to others):https://rentry.org/sadcu7hdThe Innocence Of Being Unsure About The Future (Lee Shun, Amaury Felix, Lucianus Salvius, Kaito Tojo, brief appearances of others):https://rentry.org/5zdcrpcpThe Meeting at last (Lucianus, Shun Lee, Amaury, mentions of everyone else)https://rentry.org/72388ccs
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Rentry: https://rentry.org/Be_The_NobleArena Rules: https://rentry.org/ovtoupqeChargen is rules as listed + drawbacks buffed to be 1=2 2=3 and Final=5>Duke Archibald>>92769849>Quinn Smith>>92767160 >Saint Maluscomedo>>92784888 >Marquis Alric Bolivard>>92781872>Silas Nash>>92761130 >Gristletooth the Turncoat>>92761154 >Nestor Wolf>>92777414>Tanaka Haruto>>92771365>The Angel Emmanuel>>92774620 >Auria Hirpinia>>92779891>Duke-Elector Vicaro de' Barca>>92797256>Duke Harold Staggard II of Reins>>92779214>Catherinne Aisla de Lyoncaster>>92778563>Avesta, Lord of Boglands>>92770992>St. Mog, the Avaricious>>92780438>Duchess Lucia of House Carafa>>92777819>Consul Levi du Ponte III>>92780186>Emperor Aurelius>>92782129>Lord Steerpike>>92804102>Evian, Grandmaster of the Order of the Boot.>>92785307>Sir Atticus Hendrix>>92787019>Natas Reficul>>92874173>Alcyone Pertinax>>92793569>Baron Raspail>>92827032>'Archangel' Seraphina>>92815677>Magus Filius Lupa, Barone>>92856430>Piza the Conqueror>>92852127>Tiberius Rex, The Pirate King>>92860297>Giovanni Florina>>92872532>Margus Iscariot Pertinax>>92889234>Duke Pollu Contra of Sunge>>92890871>Valeria>>92892007>Robin Stormlily>>92946734>Vožd Lampys Erymanthius>>92947419>Amos Hek>>92945163>Executive Officer Armaslanta>>93028575>Kamikage of Tengokugakure>>93107583>Elector-Prince Lothar II>>93138471>Abduladi al-Maki>>93084742>The Four Kings of The Mountainshttps://rentry.org/mcyoag_btn_dwarves>Maria-Bismarck>>93153846Event:>Vožd Invitational: >>93025558
>>93195789Writefags:>Relentless walls whose darksome round contains (Ambrose XXII Arxakonte)https://rentry.org/zqufv2um>"What's in a name?"https://rentry.org/dszi3u8o>Imagehttps://rentry.org/Margiotte>Harold Receives a Letterhttps://rentry.org/px25ifxt>Groanworthy Retorthttps://rentry.org/8zo56inz>Answered Prayers (The Angel Emmanuel)https://rentry.org/z742oosi>The Arcaadji Plibtribyewhttps://rentry.org/mqk9dtmr>The Calm Before the Glorious Stormhttps://rentry.org/2i4kmxyb>To Kill Filius: Piza's Hunger (Piza, Filius' corpse)https://rentry.org/meb8uk2i> The Northern Struggle; The Joust (1/2)https://rentry.org/The_Vozd_Develops_Schizophrenia> Northern Struggle; The Joust (2/2)https://rentry.org/7p5xonz3>Selected Excerpts from "On The Orientaille Provinces of the Telorian Empire" (2)>>93145826 + >>93147418> The Northern Struggle, Qüreşhttps://rentry.org/Whatchu_Gonna_Do_When_Tanakamania_Runs_Wild_On_You_BrotherRelationship Chart:> Personal Thoughts of the Vožd on his Imperial Peershttps://rentry.org/yqz27agi>Giovanni Florinahttps://rentry.org/fc2xhqtaArtfags:Evian’s Rise to Power:https://desu-usergeneratedcontent.xyz/tg/image/1715/65/1715654334064.pngFavorite to Win It:https://desu-usergeneratedcontent.xyz/tg/image/1718/08/1718088010459.jpgMap:Latest Version (Graphic): >>93164835Latest Version (Political): >>92871022Latest Version (Emblem): >>92885956Crusades: >>92963997Build Reviews:https://rentry.org/The-Lords-Of-The-Realm-reviewTiermaker: https://tiermaker.com/create/be-the-noble-mp-characters-17234816
>SC "Wings of Pandora"Jack Steele (leader) >>93180946Engineer "Screw" Batch32 >>93185525Heyreddin Drone R3DD1N >>93177379Reth >>93186605William "Bill" Wayne >>93181127Lorik Valas >>93182573>Order of Sacred Ascension's Augustine Sector Artifact Acquisition Department>SerendipityCatherine de' Medici (leader) >>93180596Luther Vale >>93185712Mila Ryen >>93192336>NeophronEvi Weber "Spinner" >>93184373Corto Case >>93186043Sophia "Reef" Trepan >>93185370Dr. Isar Archer >>93188047>LonersMaxx Headway, the Red Fortune >>93191473Argus Mackenzie >>93190576Yak-Ta'ang >>93193260Dane "Claymore" Hoffman >>93195574>WritefagsNavarizi Tango (Reef, Spinner)https://rentry.org/p8rmoo2qFull CYOA: https://imgchest.com/p/ljyqdv9n725
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>>93195817You missed Alicia StClaire: -https://rentry.org/fs5an9yaT.L.D.R. -Alicia StClaire, former 'comfort' slave turned psychic spy looking for group. Potential good party face / diplomancer.Pic in Rentry.
>>93195879IntentionalGet a different image
>>93195879SCRAPPER is not accepting shitposts.
>>93195817Omake featuring Screw and Heyreddin on a mission:https://rentry.org/Corporate-Obstruction-Drills-of-Pandora
>>93195896Damn Screw you cant just use the cioară word on someone like that.
>stay up to 1 AM writing >Google suddenly fucks up and lose like 10 paragraphsWell, I'm going to sleep.
>>93195947(Also, by fuck up I mean it suddenly reloaded rentry Completely deleting all my progress. No idea why. But it sure feels great.)
>>93195947How many times do people have to fuck up and say this until everyone else learns to install something like notepad+?
>>93195967MobileCHAD btw.Reminds me that I have made the total progress of>the titleand>one (1) wordon my current writefag
>the last threadJesus, what is wrong with you people?
>>93196135We had to be punished for the kino that was posted unfortunately.
>>93196135There was blood in the water. The shitposters can smell weakness from a mile away.
>>93196135Last thread was an improvement over what we've had honestly.
>>93196168What kino? The meme "I'm old lol" build writefag or the meme "lol animal guy" dump writefag?
>>93195817Boutta make a fetish build for this.
>>93196208You're trying too hard. You have to bait the hook.
>>93196214You already made one though?
>>93196214We already have three though?
>>93196214You already made three though?
Hehehe... anon is sleeping... now is the perfect time to kill off his build...
>>93195896Nice. Gonna work on a writefag of the crew in the middle of a job so the dynamic between these two is useful to spice things up a bit.
>>93195880fag
>>93195817I think I will update Lorik. I just realized that despite what the cyoa says all of his mods and skills don't necessarily combine how I would want them to. The theme and goals don't change but the methods should be slightly more appropiate for a mad scientist.
>>93195817Making Space Miner now. I thought it best to go whole hog on the custom/reflavoured stuff first and then walk it back to meet thread preference rather than the other way around because it's easier to communicate. It's already looking like most stuff is just a slight reflavour but we'll see what the thread thinks.
>>93195817Why is psyonics a social skill? It seems more like a field of study to me.
>>93197959Looking forward to it. Seems like multiple ships might be vying for him already.
>>93197968I presume it's going for the Star Trek kind of psionics where it's more about intuition, personal discipline, empathy and the like when actually practicing it. It can still be studied academically but to be honest so can literally anything else.
>>93197976The skill itself is not about using psy, it's about specifically theory and phenomena. It makes it sound a lot more like something they study instead. Mastery is about teaching it and recreating the implants, so at least the teaching part I can understand as social but everything else does not make much sense.
>>93198002The only thing I can say is that much like how Explosives and Tactics are Combat instead of Science, it's probably more of a narrative theming rather than a direct admission that there isn't psionic academia. It's the classic Warrior - Rogue - Mage trifecta; technically speaking only Mage has ever had reason to stand on its own, but it works for the purposes of games by theme.
>>93195817>Grok, son of Gork, a Goz from the planet GozGrok is strong even for the standards of his race.He is over 3 meters tall and weighs 4 tons, possesses a skin as thick and dense as a rhino over a layer of chitin plates, he can eat, drink and breath anything without problem, and his unbreakable skeleton supports his huge and dense muscles. He also has superior senses, allowing him to detect and be well conscious of his surrounding at all times.While he enjoyed life on Goz, when the Empire came, his family artifact, the compass, pointed towards them. He was first recruited to guide expeditions inside the abandoned factories, but he soon became a bodyguard of imperial VIPs, accompanying them in their dangerous activities. He was effective and never struggled to find work, often joining nobles during artifact hunts and exploration missions.Despite his apparent invincibility, he had a major genetic flaw, as many of his people do. An abnormal hormone production that would have killed him without the intervention of his employers and a EndoBoost implant that now regulates his hormones and allows him to control them.He kept working for the empire loyally for years until very recently, when he was outsmarted. He was tasked with the protection of an important imperial professor but lost consciousness, only to wake up naked, buried inside a dumpster, light years away from his client.He looked at its compass, still with him by some miracle. It pointed towards a ship.Build: https://rentry.org/scrapper_grok
>>93198133cooli hope the big guy finds a nice crew
>>93198133>Another Big GuySpace Miner is happy there is someone else who is not tiny and frail.
>>93198321I'd join anyone really, I like Catherine but she already has a bodyguard, I could also join the Wings of Pandora
>>93198356We should reshuffle crews now that there are more people. There might be better fits.
>>93198397Or she could have 2 bodyguards
>>93198397More like we need more crews
>>93198133Well I was going to put out my writefag but I need rework it to include this lad.
>>93192336>talks about a ship>build skips all sections after Artifacts??
>>93197968Science already has 7 other skills. Making Psionics a social skill would leave combat at 6, social at 5 and science at 8
>>93198493Thanks!
>>93195746Rinka anon have you changed your mind on Sage Mode? If not, we're gonna have a fundamental disagreement on how the fight is gonna be written and I have no idea how that can be solved.
>>93198522Character limit I assume, everything about the ship is in the description anyway
>>93198575Just cancel the match up, find someone else to fight.
>>93198133FINALLY some good shit
>>93198575The fights already been donehttps://rentry.org/4u98gngc
>>93195817>///Decrypting Data>[Error: Datetime Data Corrupted - Estimated 23rd Century]>[Nonstandard Lingustic Base Detected - Ancient Slavoid, Sector 6 Dialect]>///Translating>[Translation Complete - Displaying Message]>"Comrades! Every day you must suffer the inadequacies of a complacent and lackadaisycal workforce! Every day you must spent your important time filling in accident forms for deceased labourers! Every day you curse those capitalist wretches for their shoddy automatons that promised relief but brought only the pain of subscriptions, maintenance fees and other tricks of the corporate leech! We at [Data Corrupted] have heard your plight, and we, as one, rise our fists with you into the sky and proclaim no more! Today we unveil the next breakthrough in labour technology - combining the science of our greatest minds with the discerning judgement of our star nation's taskmasters - the galaxy's first autonamous biorobot!">"The biorobot once again puts the tools back in the hand of the working man - far stronger, far smarter and far more loyal than any corporate tin can automaton! We have chosen only the most physically adept citizens from Gulag IV as material, so they might serve the people in redemption for their crimes. Cybernetically and biologically augmented to your specification, you too can reap the benefits of an expert engineer, a doctor of science or a battle-hardened security operative, all without the indignities of the intelligencia and their ambitions, leaving all power in the hands of the hard workers of our glorious star nation!">"Contact [Data Corrupted], ask for Ивaн, and free your operation from the grasp of the greedy and arrogant, your comrades will thank you for their new equipment!"
>>93198859now i want signalis MP, what the fuck
>>93198859>Пeтp, Ancient Mining Biorobot>Upbringing TraitLabour Force [Earther]>Origin TraitAncient Communistic Regime [Imperial Creed]>SpecializationsSalvage Operations [Ship Recovery] (Main)Resource Acquisition [Artefact Acquisition]Demolitions [Sabotage]>General TraitsCybernetic Life-Support [Critical Injury] [+1 Geneware]Pseudo-Lobotomized [Difficult Socialization] (+1 Skill)Nonperson [Identity Theft Alt] (+2 Cybermods)Psi-Dull>Skills (Programmed [VR Assisted])Athletics (Mastery)Combat TrainingExplosivesMechanicsSurvival>Cyberware (Outdated [Second Hand])Armour Plating [Subdermal Armour]Biomonitor [Trauma Recovery Implant]Cybernetic Skull [Neuro Preservation Implant]Cybernetic Spine [EndoBoost]Mechanical Joint Reinforcement [Shock Management Implant]Integrated Fission Reactor [Micro-Generator Implant]Integrated Oxygen Tank [Oxygen Storage Implant]Pain Regulator [Sensory Inhibitor]>Genemods (Outdated Bioware [Unlicensed Clinic])Artificial Heating/Cooling Organs [Dermal Insulation]Dermal Anticaustic Filters [Pollution Tolerance]Extra Kidneys [Renal Filters]Immunization TreatmentPolymer-Laced Muscles [Muscular Reinforcment]Radiation ResistanceStimulant Injector [Bio-Synthesizer]Titanium-Laced Skeleton [Skeletal Enrichment]>Weapon PreferenceDemolition Tools [Traditional Alt]>Special WeaponsDisassembler Array [Custom]>Equipment (Old Equioment [Just As New])MkIII Armoured Space Mining Rig [Abelev Hazard Suit, Ballistic Clothes, FallSafe Pack, Waylight Exo-Skeleton]Mining Scanner [CTP Data Tool]Artefact Containment Box [Korovin Safe Containment]>ArtifactsNo Artifact (+1 Genemod)>Personal ShipNo Shop (+2 Genemods)>HomebaseNo Homebase (+2 Cybermods)>Pets2x Mining Drones (твидл-дyм, твидл-ди)>CrewJoining The Crew
>>93198872tl;dr, ancient outdated cyborg that someone picked up from cryo-sleep. Immediately recognized whoever saved them as their owner and now serves them.Absolute huge, monstrously strong and tough, but clumsy and direct. Whenever something like VR Training, Second Hand or the like shows up, presume it represents brutally effective but inefficient, high maintenance and unwieldly outdated technology across the entire range (not just 2 picks).
>>93189277Forgot to answer this in the last thread.>James>How does your character react to situations with hard choices? Do they get analysis paralysis, or can they fall back to a list of priorities to pick the least terrible option?James is already excellent at prioritizing and decision making, to the point where it could seem heartless if he doesn't elaborate. He might briefly hesitate at something really hard to actually go through with, but seeing the "optimal" move is a breeze.>How decisive are they in less urgent situations? Did they have a clear idea of what they wanted to do with their lives prior to GP, or were they struggling to find direction? Do you think their time in GP will change this?Still pretty good at weighing options. He has the most trouble with the things that matter the least, like where to go out to eat in the absence of further information.>Do you think their time in GP will change this?Maybe. He might get faster at the "inner coin flip".>Anklets, ring, or necklaceJames would refuse all of these, encouraging other party members to consider them. If nobody wants one, he'll pocket it into his Inventory, then sell it at the first opportunity.Speaking of Inventory, how are the rest of you GPers thinking it would work? It already specifies that its capacity is mass-based and scales with "experience", but beyond that? I'm guessing that>Items never come in contact with one another nor are they subject to any acceleration/force exerted on the holder.>All kinetic energy is lost upon entering the Inventory. As a consequence, this could theoretically be used to catch arrows or bullets, but good luck pulling that off.That leads into my biggest question: does time pass in the Inventory? Would perishables stored away there... perish?
>>93198872>Disassembler Array - Custom Special WeaponLess weapon and more implement of industrialized destruction, this colossal device epitomizes the inelegant, brutal tools of Humanity's far ancestors. Essentially a colossal plasma beam projector designed to precisely cut through rock, metal and other obstacles with sheer heat, it is more powerful than most weapons in use today. Despite this, the thing's unwieldly cable-laden mechanism, clumsy ergonomics and massive power draw were designed for deliberate demolition operations rather than combat, and as such is nigh-unusable in mobile conflict. Woe be to those who make the mistake of being struck by such a destructive tool, for it was designed to cut through things far thicker and far tougher than mere cyborgs.
>>93198930I think inventory acts more like a hammer space where items are in stasis and don't react with each other despite being stored in the same place.
>>93198746So be it.
>>93198859Cool, anon. Good to see him.
>>93198966Well, yes, then we're in agreement on the "space" aspect. My hesitation is on the "time" aspect, and the exploitability that would bring. Holding onto one or more of Hana's cookies for a long time, after she enters her coma Also, looking back at it, >Items YOU ownSo scratch the part about catching projectiles.
>>93199002Thanks. I'm still not 100% sure on a few things, was considering taking Industrial Equipment Operation (Pilot/Drive Alt) over Combat Training, would've changed the Mastery for it if I could. Otherwise this is mostly the finished product unless people would rather I pulled back on the mass reflavouring.Now I need to read through the other builds and figure out his place in all this, was Spinneranon still thinking of adding him to the crew as dumb muscle?.
>>93198872Cool. You should specify which options have the reduced efficiency, VR training Second Hand and Unlicensed Clinic only apply to the 2 things you get with them.
>>93199047Honestly? I'm good with it just applying to all of them. Every part about him is outdated, malfunctioning, or programmed into his head. Unless people would rather otherwise I'd generally just presume;>Skills lack creativity from programmed learning, it's very robotic>Equipment, Cybernetics and Geneware is just as effective (if not a little more in terms of brutally) but are extremely unwieldy, high maintenance and inefficient
>>93199071I would be fine with it, but that makes him reliant on someone else to try and keep him running.
>>93199136As designed, he was made to be someone else's muscle a long time ago and that's only become even more apparent now that he's out of time from a more primitive age. With Mechanics, Survival and all his other stuff he's decently autonomous but only for mid-term, he always needs a boss to return to.
>>93199033In case it wasn't clear I meant that time would just stop for that object while in the inventory which would prevent it from rotting. I'm not sure how you would think it's exploitable since it's limited to items only and not other people or something.
>>93198930>this could theoretically be used to catch arrows or bulletsIt says you can only store stuff out of combat.>does time pass in the Inventory? Would perishables stored away there... perish?I'd say no but I wouldn't mind. There is also time magic so you might need to be a temporal mage to do that.
>>93198930I would assume it's like game inventories, so they go in stasis. But as you noticed it's your items so no bullet catching, unless you find a way to decree the bullets as yours as they get close to you.
>>93199235I meant yes, time perishables perish.But I wouldn't mind if they didn't.
>>93193991Пeтp technically has the capacity to use guns and probably wields things like full-scale shotguns as a sidearm. He's not a terrifically good shot though and prefers to get up close and personal with the kind of tools only someone of his size could use. Breaching axes/hammers, drills, rock saws, metal cutters and other industrial equipment that would absolutely ruin anyone's day but is usually too unwieldy for people to use in combat. Anyone with a good sense for tactics and fighting knows he'd probably do better with real weapons but it scares the shit out of most people.As for how it's stored, since he's at least a little more advanced in real-life I presume he has an omni-applicable motor and swaps out the heads between drills, chainsaws, cutters, pneumatic hammers and the like. He carries it all in boxes, he's not going anywhere quick anyway.
>>93198859Is he powered by ethanol?
>>93199071Based. The big boys of this thread have been solid gold.
>>93198575Can you fuck off. All you do is start pissing contests and it derails the thread. Your gimmick character is not interesting enough to justify all the powerfagging you've subjected the general to. It's not even just this stupid fucking tournament, I still remember your wank about speed and infinite rock-eating regen in the forest. You're a pest. You couldn't even wait an entire day before you started needling someone again about how unstoppable your gay statue husbando is. No one else is as fascinated with your tiny-dicked Galatea, you pygmy.
>>93199303Ethanol and uranium, comrade.
>>93195879>>93195880This anon isn't me, but it was intentional. I don't link builds that have to hide their faceclaim in a rentry. You don't have to discard your build's theme (I've linked worse fetishes), but he does have to survive the jannies.
>>93198859Oi Vozd, when's the horse archery coming?
>>93195817How big is the difference between VR trained skills and normal ones?
>>93199381>I still remember your wank about speed and infinite rock-eating regen in the forest.Link?
>>93199395It's like downloading a skill to your brain. You know, but you'd lack the necessary muscle memory and experience to make it the best.
Are the matchups for the Nardo tournament decided? Can I see the bracket if so?
>>93199405So you can catch up with time?
>>93199395VR skills suck a bit at because while VR is a good ass tool, it lacks the instability of the real world and the consequences for fucking up, along with the physical elements to put them into play. Basically in normal operations you should be good to go, but the moment something scuffed happens you're gonna crack faster with how simulations are limited.
>>93199407We'll be sorting out the bracket today once the attentionpost starts, today was the deadline for people to update.
>>93199410Absolutely. It's a good starting bonus, but you still need to accumulate necessary experience like characters who mastered their skills naturally.
>>93199395Doesn't say, but considering they're worth half as much, I'd say they're again half as effective.You're still better than somebody who never took it, just not as exceptional as someone who did, and certainly not a master.Let's take In-Gravity Piloting as an example.>Didn't takeYou can drive a car through a city without breaking any traffic laws.>Took VRYou can probably evade the cops while cutting your travel distance by a third.>Took the skillThe cops would need helicopter support to even keep track of you. You're a speed demon that's there in minutes when it should take hours through traffic.>Took masteryYou drive circles around law enforcement until each of them drives themselves into concrete trying to catch you. Package's already delivered, you're just playing on overtime.
>>93199417Oh, well I'm not going to be around today. So, whomever gets matched up with Masu can decide the outcome. I'm okay with her being freed up for that subplot Sen-anon was talking about.
>>93199442Senanon here. It's doubtful that we'll be able to sort out the entire bracket in one day but we'll definitely start with the pickings and ideally have it done before next week so we can jump right in, so don't worry overmuch about it.Writing the post right now, will be with you all in about 30 minutes depending.
>>93198575I have a question for eiken anon. Why do you think you'd win? You both have deep reserves and enhanced body to handle the physical strains, but Rinkas entire build is based around maxing out angel mode, so why would she not win when it comes to the modes?
>>93199440It sounds to me like you're overhyping the skills and mistaking what the mastery does. In the case of piloting, base skill means you're trained and experienced, so at most think like a professor race driver (and even that might be a bit of a stretch), not some urban legend speed demon. Mastery is also more of a sidegrade, focusing on exotic vehicles rather than upgrading your skills with the standard ones.
>>93198133>>93198859I cannot tell you how much I need to see these two based retards standing next to a normal build, ideally flexing.
>>93199559Height chart when?
>>93199575>ManПeтp/Grok.>ManletEveryone else.
Well, shit, now i gotta rush out my training arc writefag. This is what i get for procrastinating.
Fundamentally, both Eiken and Rinka are shitty meme builds practising the same power wanking tribalism, just this time they went into their writefags fully confident there will be a stomp because "muh transformation!!"Insane how many frauds this MP has.
>>93199585>Man>a machine and a mutant
>>93199602Who's not a fraud?
>>93199614>MachineWorse, Пeтp is a sl*v.
>>93199602Rinka paid the points to wank angel mode, Eiken dumped the bare minimum and wants to walk. Not the same.
>>93199626My build, the builds I have a crush on.
>>93199638*slave
>>93195746Rinka Update.>Rinka Akagi>City of Ogres, Will of Faith>C Rank (30)>Perks: Bloodline Limit, Enhanced Body (40), (Deep Reserves) (45)>Drawbacks: Gender Bender (51), Sentimental Item (56), Overconfidence (61), Bad Habit (Self-Flagellation) (65)>Chakra Nature: Yin, Yang (58), Water>Basics: Unarmed Combat++ (53), Subterfuge, (Utility Jutsu), Body Flicker+(+) (48), Chakra Flow++ (41), (Book Smarts: Religion.)>Advanced: Advanced Taijutsu+(+) (37), Divine Arts++ (28), (Advanced Fighting Style: Flowing Fist) (25)>Hidden: Purification (22)>Secret Special: Angel (7)>Kekkei Genkai: Dark>(Item: Super Mystic Bell Charm (0))Changelog: Dropped the extra points in the charm, put them into body flicker 3 and flowing fist 1.Put the fluff into a rentry: https://rentry.org/qcm4bxb4Also updated the jutsus: https://rentry.org/RinkaJutsu
>>93199705>Enhanced Body is just a bunch of conveniently covered tattoosLol, lmao.
>>93199534Rinka is better at Angel Mode than Eiken is at Sage Mode, I never said otherwise. However, Rinka anon said that Eiken is bad at Sage Mode because only the minimum cyoa requirements were taken, which is nonsense because the Animal Companion and Summons has no effect on Sage Mode in any way.The two modes are not all that matter anyway, I don't understand why people are so fixated on them.Anyway, this fight isn't gonna happen since I don't think any side is gonna change their mind no matter what is said.
>>93199723I say Eiken wins by deadnaming him.
>>93199722Shut the fuck up, it's well within the description for enhanced body, stop being a retarded dipshit.
>>93199723If that fight ain't happening, I don't envy whoever gets the unlucky draw of having to fight Rinka. What an awfully unfun build to fight. The whole playset is just>I am immune to everything!!!!Powerful for sure but good luck making a fun fight. And no, wanking about how you are oh so strong is not fun.
>>93199746It's a cheap cop-out
>>93199747You can tell how much of a fun person he is just by his updated build, enhanced body asking for an inhumane feature which can add something cool to your character's design, and she chooses boring ass tattoos.Eiken is shit, but he takes the win in my opinion. For one, his build is not reliant on divine kek to produce whatever OP ability he so desires.
>>93199754No, that would be if they had weird eyes, which would also be within the scope of enhanced body. Just because you've got your dick in a knot doesn't mean shit.
>>93199765It's a cheap cop-out because it's something completely invisible that doesn't matter and only exists so you can say you filled the quota.
>>93199763>adds the angel markings from a form thought to be a mythIt's a feature that fits the fluff, fuck off.>>93199776Enhanced body can cause something as small as weird eyes, stop acting like a retard. And of course it's going to be covered if she's wearing clothes, so would a gem embedded or even weird musculature so long as you aren't in a gimp suit. Fuck off.
>>93199810Cope. It's a weak cop-out. Doesn't matter since no one's gonna want to fight your build anyway.
>>93199810>It's a feature that fits the fluffAnd has 0 effect at all. You took the points and didn't want any of its drawbacks, so now you have to cope.
>>93199810>It's a feature that fits the fluff, fuck off.Your build has no interesting and consistent fluff beyond what Rinkaanon bought in hopes of powerfagging. Look at Eiken, his thing is being a stone punchfag. So what does his Enhanced Body do? Give him the body of a Greek marble statue with the mind of a boy, giving it interesting implications and supporting his fluff far better than Rinka had done.Your argument is also retarded because it says "inhumane feature". Why not get angel's wings or halo? Why not try to tap into Buddhism? Why use a literal human feature that won't weird out anyone? This is a boring cop-out that's illegal according to the wording.Cope about it, and try to run defense for a better build next time you cock gobbler.
>>93195817I changed my build and I decided that it was thematic to have VR skills so now I have one more skill. What I am not sure about is between the thematic option, but then people will tell me I can't fight or the fighting skills but it's less thematic. My character is supposed learn how to fight with his specific style over time as he still does not have it yet.
>>93199854Which build? I'm a sucker for thematics first but I might have a different opinion depending on who.
>>93199869I have a feeling people will shit on it more by knowing but whatever. It's Lorik, as I said I figured out that some options fit more and that I misread something.
>>93199854Everyone can fight. Taking the Combat Training skill just makes you exceptional at it.If you don't take Medicine, you still know how to do first aid.
>>93199722It seemed fitting, with such markings being accepted with other builds. If I'm being dumb, then I'm asking for help. >>93199846That's not me, I'm trying to improve, but everything I do just makes it worse.
>>93199933It's most likely not you because there are people who do run defence squads for people they like.All I suggest is for you to fix up that part and make the divinity bit more fitting.
>>93199933>I'm trying to improve, but everything I do just makes it worse.The big issue with Rinka is that it feels as though she's just powerful for the sake of being powerful. Like, I understand you wanted to fit the reference image, but saying "tattoos that you can't see" just makes it feel like you're trying to avoid having to do it.It doesn't help that her fighting style makes it kinda hard to have a cool fight with her. You can't use genjutsu, you can't use ninjutsu, she's got a giga-boost to Taijutsu...
>>93199854I'd use VR for athletics and combat training, and leave the masteries for mas scientist stuff. That way you still have your focus but also the VR skills as base to improve as time goes.
>>93199960I am never writing something involving Ghidorah thanks to the fact that poisonfags are the most obnoxious guys btw.
>>93195817Didn't link any of the art. Why?>Wings of Pandorahttps://desu-usergeneratedcontent.xyz/tg/image/1719/52/1719527564780.png>Screwhttps://desu-usergeneratedcontent.xyz/tg/image/1719/53/1719534131770.png>Serendipityhttps://desu-usergeneratedcontent.xyz/tg/image/1719/59/1719593998001.png
>>93199918>>93199964I guess I will do that. I wanted to take VR medic instead of combat training, but I guess it fits more not taking it at all with my idea of "he was supposed to learn it but did not pay attention".
>>93199854Why not make it so he's an egghead who's trying to get better at fighting with his gear?No reason to start out at the end of your journey. Matter of fact, it can be more interesting to start out weaker and grow over time.
>>93199964>VR for athleticsThat's the one skill I don't see being trained in VR. Sure you can learn how to do an exercise with a good form but 99% is about training your physical body. Unless the VR is combined with some machines to boost your body.
>>93199992Tired thread mamaluks maybe. I know I missed the middle one, so thanks for catching that anon.
>>93200016Nah, the base Athletics teaches you how to use your body ("well educated"). Only the mastery gives you the actual muscles to back it up.
>>93199559In case it's needed, Bill is 1.93m tall, so he reaches about to Grok's elbow.
>>93200015That was the plan, he does not even have his special relic yet. The idea was that he finds the relic and learns to use that mostly.
>>93200027Wich is useless when you don't have muscles.
>>93195817>NameLorik Valas>UpbringingMilitary Outpost/Lost Colony>Polity of OriginHorsehead Federation/FreePenultimate Frontier>HistoryIntellectual>A New LifeNeed/Hope>SponsorIndependentCode Of Honor>SpecializationArtifact Acquisition (main)Asset DenialExploration>General TraitsLeft For DeadIdentity TheftPsy SensitiveDifficult Socialization>SkillsCombat Training (VR)ArcheologyCybernetics (M)Mechanics and Electronics (M)Athetics (VR)>CyberwareUniversal Limb Mount (Multitool Fingers)Shock ManagementLogic Processor AssistantMemory AssistantPsionic ImplantMicro Generator ImplantNeural Preservation ImplantCyber Tail>Gene ModsRejuvenation TreatementRapid ResponseNeural Bridge>Psy AbilitiesPsy TracingPsy Infusion>Weapon PreferenceTraditional weapons>Special WeaponsNone>EquipementBalistic Clothes>ArtifactsNone (for now)>PetsA Cheerful SAR Drone X2No ShipNo Base>Backstoryhttps://rentry.org/ysnycgwxUpdated build to be more appropiate to my vision of it and to address different situations. I dropped athletics from mastery to just VR because I actually misread it the first time and I was sure it made you stronger when it does not. I dropped 2 gene mods because I realized that stronger muscles and stronger bones are useless if you don't have either of those, and I took Cybernetics mastery instead. I also found and edited a better picture that has the tail too. Mechanically he is pretty much the same, just better at the things he was supposed to do before. Now with 50% more mad scientist and 50% less misreadings.
>>93200043>Hamster_Eating_Banana.jpgActually thanks anon, good to have this as a reference point.
>>93200099Mastered athletics does make you stronger
>>93200043Based.
>>93200043Are we doing height charts now? Is that a specific site that does that image? I saw similar things around.
>>93200116Not if you don't have muscles to train. Lorik is now going to be full metal and cybermods.
>>93200072Yes? You already have muscles. Everyone does. Base level Athletics teaches you how to best apply them (best technique to throw a disk, how to pace yourself in a race, etc). Mastery Athletics (which you can't get through VR) actually gives you better muscles than the average SCRAPPER.
So are all of these builds taking a shit ton of "General Traits" going to actually take into account the disadvantages listed on them or just ignore them in favor of more points?
>>93200099Yeah now he feels like a scientist. Good update anon.
>>93200146Most of the traits directly take something from you anyway, right? They're mostly non-narrative and have immediate build consequences.
>>93200146Drawbacks don't matter anymore lil bro
>spend 5 points on body flicker>"I am now faster than Minato"
>>93200146considering almost every build took either psi-sensitive or identity theft, no>>93200163psi-sensitive, the most popular general trait by far, doesn't have a direct consequence just a narrative one which should be a hefty consequence but likely won't be treated as such
>>93200146ignore, i didn't come here to play with shitty point economy that doesn't let me get what i want
Psi-sensitive cucks will job
>>93199722One of the examples given is Naruto's metrosexual eyeshadow. It's valid. There's more annoying things about Rinka to focus on.
>>93200124I used this: https://www.heightcomparison.com/ it has avatar options so I just used one of the big guys under endomorph for Grok and some medium guy from Mesomorph for Bill.
>>93200133Everyone has muscles to train. Not taking Athletics doesn't mean you're unathletic. You're just not going to compete in the olympics.
>>93200193Naruto's eyeshadow was from Sage Mode not from enhanced physique (Hashirama also got some makeup in it). The examples given mention inhuman eyes, but not that specifically from what I see, so I'm not sure where you got that from.
>>93200197>>Everyone has muscles to train.Don't we have a robot?
>>93200224Пeтp isn't actually a robot, 'biorobot,' is just easier for an ancient communist regime to say than 'lobotomized slave.'
>>93200146>>93200179Psi-sensitive does have a mechanical malus, that being that>they get tired more quickly>are more vulnerable to others' psi powersSo not only do they have less stamina to use their powers with, but fighting against another psi ability user is more risky for them. I'd imagine using a Psychic Scream on them renders them nigh-catatonic with pain, as an example.Higher offense, lower defense. They become glass cannons where psionics are concerned.
>>93200255How many builds which took psi-sensitive (which by my count is about 80%) are actually going to take into account the fact that they are highly vulnerable to other psi powers?
>>93200354>builds which took psi-sensitive (which by my count is about 80%)your count is shit
>>93200354>>93200255Psi sensative keks when the psi dull Chad renders their build inoperable
>>93200160Thanks, I tried to go more for the future approach this time.
>>93200388Psi dull only makes you less affected by psi powers. It doesn't make you immune, and it doesn't actually give you any kind of extra strength against psi ability users in and of themselves. Whoever's quicker on the draw would win that engagement.There's also psi abilities that increase your own abilities (Infusion and Endurance) which won't be affected by the psi dull, and would arguably have an even greater effect on yourself if you're psi sensitive.
>>93200255they get phisically tired more quickly, not psionically.
>>93200370NTA, went to check quickly, looks to me like there's ~37% (7/19). Also the same amount of Psi-dulls surprisingly.
>>93200388Lone wolf little men when big strong Пeтp protects psychic comrade and psychic comrade helps Пeтp with funny powers.
>>93200443>have an even greater effect on yourself if you're psi sensitive.exactly the point
>>93200451Psionic abilities explicitly tire their users, so I feel it would do both.
>>93200464it's a different tiredness. It's the difference between mental exaustion and phisical exaustion, psy users are effectively mages
>>93200462Which crew are you joining? I think you fit for all of them, so you can freely pick.
>>93200479Not sure, reading through all the builds now to figure which would be most interesting. He has an easy in to fit with everyone, as you said, it's more how the rest of the crew would respond to an eerily loyal ancient piece of junk.
>>93200477It explicitly affects both your physique and mental state.Stop it with your naked attempt at shitposting and go back to crying about naruto or whatever, readlet.
>>93200462Lorik can now inadvertedly mantain you.>>93200479For now all crews are technically still allied so there will be overlap possible. He does fit with everyone tho, but maybe the Spinner crew is slightly better because she is used to gathering slaves apparently considering the builds that joined that.
>>93200496Psy abilities affect both, but Psy sensitive only makes you phisically less enduring.
>>93200461The setting presumes that everyone is a little bit psionic at this point but that makes Psi-Dull a very easy pickup if you don't want to be magic man. Can't fault them either.
>>93200524And does it say that in the trait?
>>93195746DShimabukuroKichōnaMasukudaIchikaRemiliaKazenJinShinrōGhidorahSenFujiwaraKuroKitsumotoEikenRinkaAkaitoShichirouAnkanVixWhich fights do you want to see?
>>93200585Jin vs Eiken to see Gentle Fist vs Living Statue but with fated rivalry we ain't getting that.
>>93195817I got another build:Lazarus Morton - a born-and-raised spacer.>Upbringing:Spacer>Polity of origin:None / anarchy>History:Independent worker>A new life:Betrayal>Got robbed very badly, so I had to become a SCRAPPER to make ends meet.>Sponsor:Independent>Specialisation:Ship recovery (main) / Asset transport>General traits:Left for dead (got robbed) - +2 cyberware / Identity theft (they took everything!) - +2 genemods / Psi-dull / Critical injury (from being left for dead) - +1 skill / Difficult socialization (from the psi-dull autism) - +1 skill>Skills:In-gravity piloting / Void piloting (mastery) / Survival / Astro-engineering / Mechanics and electronics>Cyberware:3D manouvering assistant / Trauma recovery implant / Oxygen storage implant / Palm spectrometer / Magpads>Gene mods:Dermal insulation / Radiation resistance / Immunisation treatment / Renal filters / Micro-gravity adaptation>I am fully optimised for space survival.>Psi Abilities:None>Weapon Preference:Assault rifles>Special Weapons:Experimental laser rifle>Luckily I didn't have this on me when I got robbed.>Equipment:None>I got robbed! (Have I mentioned that before?)>Artefact:None - +1 ship upgrade>Again; robbed.>Ship:Industrial transport>The Trevithick is the ship I was born on, believe it or not.>Ship Weaponry:Thermic based>Ship Upgrades:Small med bay / Basic fabricator (free with ship type) / I.D. mask / Emergency heat sinks / Magnetic net / Repair drones / Secret compartments / Auxiliary reactor>Homebase:None - +2 ship upgrades>Homebase upgrades:None>Connections and favours:None>Somebody stole my trip-code and ruined my rep with too much shitposting.>Pets:An elegant Mimir>I call her Celeste - If you break down in deep space and you send out a distress call, chances are that Lazarus and the Trevithick will show up to help patch you up.For a fee, of course.
>>93200611There's only room for one astronaut-themed build in this cyoa
>>93200577Yes. The cyoa refers to mental strain and tiredness as "stress", in the trait it only says you get tired, so it's only phisical.
>>93200513Yeah looking at Spinner crew there's the Spinner picking up slaves angle, Archer being 'reduced,' from cutting-edge cybernetics to patching up a 200 year old shitbox, a potential bro-rivalry dynamic with Case in the field and mandatorily carrying Sophia and her pets on his back when they're tired.It fits a little better than the others and I think that was the plan anyway.
>>93200611>Void piloting (mastery)
>>93200221Probably misremembered related options. There's too much eyefagging in this franchise.
>>93200653Aha, it specifies the stress if from overuse, but the tiredness is not specified to be physical nor mental, just general tiredness. Try again.
>>93200670>Spinner is an unintentional slaverlmao
>>93200729Bro no just let him have his magewank bro please bro don't take this away from him bro let psi-users be gods bro don't do this to him bro
>>93200255>>they get tired more quickly>>are more vulnerable to others' psi powersThese are narrative malus. Mechanical ones are like start with 0 cyber mod.
>>93199854Doesn't matter. Your apparent victim mentality means your character will suck regardless.
>>93195746>NameKazushi (Zushi) Sakuraba>VillageYugakure>RankC>PerksBloodline Limit x2, Prodigious>DrawbacksSentimental Treasure (Pipe, Jewelry), Bad Habit (Overeating, Smoking “Leaves”), Unwanted Attraction (Inaba)>Chakra NatureEarth, Wind, Fire>BasicUnarmed Combat++, Stealth, Subterfuge, Body Flicker+, Utility Jutsu, Chakra Flow+>Advanced JutsuAdvanced Taijutsu++, Advanced Fighting Style (Flowing Fist)+, Oil Style, Ash Style>Hidden JutsuCalorie Control/Multi-Size++, Elemental Spear>Kekkei GenkeiPhysique Modification, Chakra Absorption>Backstoryhttps://rentry.org/k2iduok9TLDR: A fairly chill ninja who loves to eat, smoke and relax because there's nothing else to do in his "pacifist" home village, with a boring upbringing, having been raised by two untalented journeyman ninja who relied completely on their Kekkei Genkei. Zushi has inherited those Kekkei Genkei, but he actually has the innate talent to use them effectively. He discovers the thrill of bloody combat in the Chunin exams and it opens up a whole new side of him. He's been recruited by Inaba but has no particular moral inclination for doing so - he just wants to fight and eat and smoke and enjoy the finer things in life. Zushi's fighting style is built around Taijutsu, using his Multi-Size and Physique Modification to fight at a range that his opponent's can't match, using stretched out limbs to hit from unusual angles. He's a counter-striker, and is starting to develop the ability to further change his physique with elemental spear to nullify opponent's blows and answer with his own. He can use Ninjutsu against long-range attackers, using Oil Style and Ash style to slow down opponents and mess with their line of sight, as well as throwing fireballs and gusts of wind. He's also developed his own unique version of grappling, which he uses to incapacitate opponents and drain their chakra. Relationship Chart incoming.
>>93200585D vs Vix to see D get smacked by someone faster.
>>93200788Vix anon here, I saw D's build I think while I was trying to catch up. The main difference I saw is that Vix has the Yamato so unlike d he does not even need to move to hit him.
Jesus. Is every single Naruto player a power wanking faggot? Is a single one of these fuckers redeemable?
>>93200782Make this guy fight Eiken, he'll win by crushing his head with his fat ass cheeks.
>>93200782You have 5 points left over, feel free to use them however you see fit.>>93200824>he does not even need to move to hit himThat sure isn't wank at all and absolutely is balanced for a 7 point enchanted tool.
>>93200782Oh shit, it's Ichika's uncle.
>>93200834The ones that don't powerwank usually just post/respond to prompts and writefags so they get into fewer arguments and generally have a smaller thread presence. That's not to say everyone who posts often is a powerwanker, but powerwankers always have something to talk about.
>>93200834these people cannot imagine having fun if it doesn't involve them at forefront
>>93195746Okay I need some help here, finally getting to the ending of my training arc writefag...but I need to decide what my character's chakra mode will look like. I have absolutely no idea.
>>93200869Sure, which character?
>>93195817>Xat's Bar: the Disassemblyhttps://rentry.org/Xats_Bar_DissassemblyJust a little thing about all the loners and the trouble they're getting into looking for work; Maxx, Argus, Ta'ang, Claymore, and Grok.
>>93200146Grok's story for left for dead + identity theft is that the assassin who eliminated his client impersonated the bodyguard to get close to his target and sent Grok far away alive so he could blame the murder on him to cover his tracks. So now Grok not only lost his connections, but he is wanted by the Empire for treason.It's a bit more extreme than the actual drawback so I don't plan to be hunted forever to death, it's just a way to create a story for him. He'll eventually clear the misunderstanding and will try to find the real assassin to prove his innocence.But yeah he is illiterate and bad with modern tech.
>>93200869They are surrounded by stinky green gas because they smell bad
>>93200879Kitsumoto. He's training with Mr.Hopo, who is the only jonin that has Chakra mode and would be willing to train him.
>>93200853I'm not sure I've seen a single build posted or discussed without powerwank.
>>93200895That's because my build is too strong, powerwank follows me wherever I go.It's not my fault...
>>93200700I liked itI think they just didn't add it to the list because the pic was not sfw enough (which I disagree but well)
>>93200255yeah that's why i picked options to increase Reth's stamina like endoboost, athletics mastery and even the sleepless drug and the psi blockers to reduce the sensitivity to external psychics if I'm making a psionic fighter i might as well fully specialize
I'm writing something about the Shiketsu student body's reaction to Sandatsu's school quirking and a thought occurred to me. This isn't the first time the security measures were heightened on the campus this year, what with the foiled invasion of villains that we had to handwave over. Back then, a bunch of the nameless and faceless student NPCs transferred out and there was a PR nightmare. Now, with one of the kids murdered and it being a major news item, the families who were on the fence about it definitely put their foot down, and there's undoubtedly a lot of parents of Hero course students that are having the danger of the occupation thrown in their face in a very real way. A lot of them are going to force their kid out of the program and probably out of the school entirely out of fear that they'll end up dying young - whether in Shiketsu, which they no longer trust, or as a low-ranked pro in adulthood. No one wants to outlive their kid.So here's the question. Who gets pulled out of the school? I have some ideas in the NPC classes already (though if anyone particularly wants So-and-So ejected, I'll write it in) but does anyone in 1-F or 1-D get removed? Is it with or without the kid's consent? Do they give up their dream or do they try to go pro without the training or do they even go full vigilante? I'll keep tinkering but I want to know other people's thoughts too.
>>93200893Tough one but have you considered taking the cloak and messing with the usual consistency? Naruto's cloak is like boiling liquid to represent his anger, Lee's is more explosive energy to represent his personality. What about some kind of misty/inky energy that flows outwards or downwards instead of burning upwards? Almost like a liquid that stains the air as it drips or something.
>>93200869If you can't think of anything, a cloak is a neutral choice.
>>93200895The ones that don't hang around the thread have noticeably less though because their anons refuse to weigh in and condemn themselves to eternal shitposting.Personally, I'm just gonna say my build loses regardless of my thoughts on a matchup. It's less trouble.
>>93200782I like funni villain gangsta man.
>>93200948>t. Jin
>>93200948Nerd, no one shitposts about me because my build is too forgettable AND I've been wanking my build to win the entire time! It's lonely at the top...
Chakra Mode op
>>93200733>>93200670Spinner here. What can I say, I find myself drawn to those in a similar situation as myself: Damaged, down on their luck and in need of a second chance that isn't going to explode in their face.I'll have some writing here in a bit, just rereading Reef's writing to get a good feel for her character..
>>93200939Well the part about the consistency is cool, but the issue I'm having is deciding of what the shape of the cloak should be. Like, the original image is an weird cat thing, right? It feels like it shouldn't just be a simple power aura.
>>93200968Doesn't mean they're working wings albeitAnd what's your obsession with wings anyway
>>93200983>Doesn't mean they're working wingsYea, they're probably decoration.>what's your obsession with wings anywayFlight is powerful. Wings = flight. Wings are powerful.
>>93200895Mine wasn't because I've never tried to establish thread presence and posted whatever writeups I could get out. I appreciate the lack of shitposting so I can focus more on writing what I like, without having to compromise my vision for the people that ultimately don't care and don't help me enjoy my creations.
>>93200782sovlful build anoni'm rooting for him to smother D with his belly
>>93200982Many of the chakra modes in the canon were just normal auras, equally as many took on animalistic characteristics like the cat or the peacock in the filler episodes about the space rock. Pretty much anything works so long as it's obvious and represents chakra leaking from the body.
>>93200895RemiliaSenHimari
>>93201036>is ignorant of the Speed Queen of Rootmilia
>>93201036Himari solos every male build by flashing them with her tits, forcing them to fly off in a geyser of nosebleed.
Wankbro here. Not going to wank monhun because it's ass.>>93201036I've wanked these before, but let's go.>RemiliaShe wins her match-up with an excellent understanding of poison and medicine, the ability to summon snakes that can transport it, and Genius which certifiably makes her the Queen of Toxins. You'll weaken faster than you'll be able to find her. >SenShimogakure + Genius + Knowledge = Infinite chakra. Boom. She won the MP. You can all go home now.>HimariContrary to popular belief, Himari has no Attractive or charming, so she cannot slut her way into winning a fight. What she can do is use poisons and be far more stealthy than Remilia, and have a better handle on Divine Arts, giving her access to some truly crazy shit in terms of abilities. She solos her match easily.
>>93200884I don't want to jinx it but this MP is starting with pure unaltered kino
>>93201100wank the new fatty
If you match Eiken and Rinka and eliminate what they have in common, here's what remains.>EikenTalented TaijutsuEarthTortoise companion 1, Special skill: stone shaping, improvAdvanced Taijutsu, Advanced fighting style 2Chakra mode 3, master earth chakra cloak, petrifysage>RinkaWill boostSentimental Item (bell charm), OverconfidenceYin, Water, DarkChakra Flow, Body Flicker 2, Utility jutsu, book smartsDivine arts 2Purificationmaster angelThey've already agreed that Rinka's angel mode is higher skill than Eiken's sage mode, so that's in R's favor. Obviously, Eiken's Taijutsu is way better than Rinka's, so that's in E's favor. Their speeds are about the same, and Rinka's fighting style is dodgy anyway.Water chakra beats Earth chakra. That's in R's favor. The village will is boosted more in Rinka's case, so chakra juicing is in R's favor. Normally, Eiken's special skill and chakra moding would be a big benefit to his Earth jutsus, but Dark fully counters physical emanations like that, so it's in R's favor. They have comparable chakra pools so Eiken can't win on magical endurance. Eiken can't summon, so the companion animal is irrelevant. Eiken's petrification allows him to outlast in physical conflicts, so endurance and regeneration are in E's favor.E: 2R: 4The only way Eiken can even make it an even fight is to specifically abuse Rinka's drawbacks. If there were odds being placed on the matches, Rinka would be the favorite to win, and Eiken would be the long shot that gives a better payout. It is less logical for Eiken to win the match if you objectively compare their abilities.
>>93200977Makes sense, consider Пeтp in if you'll have him. In case he turns up in the writeup at all (no pressure) I've considered him only being able to speak very distorted machine Russian as part of the bit so he otherwise has to communicate through action but I'm not sure yet. Otherwise he's the classic gentle giant 'robot,' workaholic monster at the moment but there's room for him to be fleshed out.
>>93201131>Water chakra beats Earth chakraYou got this backwards thoughbeit.
>>93201131>Water chakra beats Earth chakraOther way around
>>93201100>Not going to wank monhun because it's assNot going to demand you wank MonHun, but that's a treasured piece of CYOA history, and calling it ass is preposterous.
>>93201141>>93201143Fuck, really? Are you sure? I didn't check the pdf but I remember that water beats earth because erosion and earth beats lightning because it swallows it up. If you're right, then that would make it 3 v 3 and an even fight. Eiken can win if he mashes on Rinka's drawbacks.
>>93201100Wank Ankan, Fujiwara, and Shimabukuro.
>>93201176Again, backwards. Lightning beats Earth.
>>93201148Bro I think there's maybe three people, including me and you, who care about MonHun. I enjoyed myself but I wouldn't call it treasured.
>>93201131Eiken>All is right here.>Beats Water, also fine.>Fits in with his theme and it's quite powerful.>Right.>Can combine with his sage mode for greater effect and petrify the opponent.>Powerful in its own right.>Rinka>Where is this boost stated?>All is right here.>Yin is not that much of a boon that'll help her win, Water is countered, Dark is not the automatic solution that lets her absorb everything.>A pretty alright combo.>Himari is better than her at this lol>Is not going to do anything against Eiken.>Her ace in the hole.Rinka doesn't stomp for shit, her build is a boring fetishfuel that'll never get relevant after the tournament, and her abilities are vastly overblown by everyone. She gets mogged on these parameters.Eiken, while being a wankfag himself, can match Rinka in almost every way because his fundamentals are more solid and he relies far less on memey abilities. Plus, his character is more interesting and writefags he's been involved him painting a better picture of him.This matchup will ultimately never happen because both sides cannot embrace the idea of losing, and will be boring as fuck.
>>93201176It's dumb but yeah. Fire beats Wind beats lightning beats Earth beats Water beats fire.
>>93201194No way does lightning beat earth. Lightning hides in earth because it's a little bitchboy element.
>>93201199>This matchup will ultimately never happen because both sides cannot embrace the idea of losing, and will be boring as fuck.True. They should fight my build 2v1 and lose.
>>93201176>water beats earth because erosion and earth beats lightning because it swallows it up.You're thinking of Pokémon which reveals your identity as a PMDfag. I knew it.
>>93201199You need to disguise yourself better, Eikenanon. It ruins your pretense at being rational and polite.
>>93201207Sorry to say, but in Narutoland lightning cracks through the earth
>>93201210Insane Wild Boar...
>>93201148lmao look at this dorkMonHun was ASS
>Eiken and Rinka turn into tools for shitpostingI knew this would happen.
>>93201215Eiken's a bitch too, he wanked himself as an immortal stone guy and his flavour is only really better in comparison to someone like Rinka, a character that's had many reworks and been inconsistent and unfun so far. If the fight must happen, he should win to calm down divine keks and cursepedo about their non-canon bullshit, but ideally, they should job to Sen and Kitsumoto respectively.
>>93201197I'm number 3 btw
Rolled 2 (1d2)>>93201217Dumb. Okay, then it's a coin flip.1: Eiken wins and whining reigns for 1000 years2: Rinka wins and fetish reigns for 1000 years3: They both have a simultaneous heart attack and die and their names are forgotten by everyone that knew them
>>93201197Wish I did more for MonHun tbhdesu
>>93201253An inch away from greatness...
>>93201253>didn't roll a d3I hate this dumb world we live in
>>93201266I haven't figured out how to make coins land on their edge, but I'll keep trying.
>>93201270Kain...
>>93201134Sure! I think we can take in Пeтp as our last crew member. I think I can even squeeze him into this writing, I've got an idea.Quick question: Does he understand English being directed at him?
>>93201288He seems to, at least to a degree, but sometimes it might take an extra repetition or a gesture.
>>93201327Noted. I've got a good idea now.
>>93201341Neat, looking forward to it.
>>93201115The loners could absolutely form up their own crew. Argus has a good setup with Claymore for a partnership. Grok and Yak compliment each other pretty well. Someone just needs to get them an actual ship because Claymore has a damn newspaper delivery shuttle and Yak has an armoured mobile home.
>>93200911Nothing wrong with making choices based on synergy to try and offset some weaknesses when making a build. Beats trying to wank a character to the point their limitations are ignored.
Comparing stats is really autistic.What should be done is guessing how the fight would go.The main thing is Dark, and a direct Dark palm strike (because Apotheosis is retarded) bypasses durability by sending whatever it hits to the Dark realm. So, what Eiken has to do is beat Rinka while avoiding as many Dark attacks as he can, or, drain her chakra to the point where Dark is too expensive for her to use.Eiken needs to focus on his approach. He needs to either zone Rinka out enough for Dark to no longer be a viable option due to chakra use, or approach her in a way where he can absolutely dodge a Dark attack. Eiken's fighting style, and lack of combat intelligence related skills, do not suit this approach at all. His best bet in this strategy would be to strike from underground, OR increase his size in a way in which he can strike her from more directions than she can suck, while not dying/being neutralized in the process. He then must neutralize her arms in some way, such as a hold, or completely breaking/removing them.As for the zoning strategy, this is as simple as Eiken throwing normal non-chakra infused rocks, and running away as much as he can. This would also include retreating underground whenever he can. In truth, this is a really lame strategy, despite it being really safe.All in all, this is a boring fight between two boring characters, mostly because of Dark. Holy shit, Dark is such a lame option. In an all out brawl, Rinka most certainly wins because Eiken just can't avoid every Dark attack. So, Rinka's goal is to rush down Eiken and make him fight her. Eiken's goal, if he wants to maximize his chances of victory, is to run away to waste her chakra and throw normal fucking rocks (he has more endurance via Chakra Cloak Stage 1). This is super boring. Not to say that Rinka can't win; she could rush him. Eiken's goal seems more feasible due to his speed, endurance, and elemental advantage, and I'd rather him continue anyway because Dark fucking sucks.
>>93200931I'm not spherethirst but I feel like the clique would be the first ones to be pulled out by their families.
>>93201485Dark is a jobber EKKG lil bro
>>93201485This. Ignoring all powerfag tribalism, it's not a fun fight and both characters are shit, and the ability to instantly suck in chakra (Dark Release, Chakra Absorption 2) makes the fight so much sluggish and quick. Even our stealthfags, who could go for "nothing personnel approach", cannot instantly win fights and have picks that make them ever so slightly fun.
>>93201242curses are actually canonyou talk like one if the fags wanking rinka and eiken btw so you should try harder "switch sides"
>>93200931From 1-D, if anyone would have to be removed, I think a character that'd make a let of sense pulling out would be Sora. His original goal was just to get a licence to use his quirk, wasn't it? He has that (kind of), so him transferring out might be easier now. I would much rather see the kids redouble their efforts and convince their parents to let them stay.>>93201502While it would make sense, please don't.
>>93201534>curses are actually canonNo.>you talk like one if the fags wanking rinka and eiken btwYou're a schizophrenic, btw. I am the guy who's been saying that Eiken is more interesting, but they're both shit in numerous ways. Kill yourself alongside your non-canon cursepedo and divine keks.
>>93201557https://naruto.fandom.com/wiki/Jujutsuyou're obviously just wanker wanking both sides before trying to distance yourself tbqh
>>93201538>While it would make sense, please don't.Hifumi anon, you're never going to write for MHA again, stop trying to make it so nothing bad can happen to builds that aren't yours just because you have a crush on them.
shitposters have ruined this threadI blame cyoag
>>93201583You'd be correct to.
>>93201580Don't crush my hopes like that, anon. I did write a little bit for it this month.
>>93201424>and Yak has an armoured mobile home.I'm sure Grok will fit, he'll just tuck in his shoulders a bit
>>93200931I did like the idea that Shinkan was having issues keeping up with the hero course and his studies at the same time and is in danger of dropping. I could see a scene where 1-D tries to help him. Maybe the Koreans are having trouble staying in the country after Dec and their bfs have to pitch in to help them, they could defy their parents to stay in Japan. Another thing someone suggested was Sora just being in the hero course to get his exam license so he can use his quirk, and doesn't realize it's not a full license. Could be funny.As far as Shiketsu's response and the public outcry, they remind me of anime/manga and UA's response. I wasn't a big fan of the heroes basically having to beg the public to let Deku in the walls and the pro heroes were big pushovers through the entire arc. Japan / the World just became really incompetent as soon as the villains started rampaging, which is around the time I started tuning out of the series. I blame the UA Rat's weak response. I'd like to see a different stronger response from Principal Karaburan, and maybe some resolve and unity from the people of Kyoto. The Kansai region is full of hardy folks. A step towards a more militant Shiketsu would be a good idea too. Also dorms.
>>93201580Nta, but this is just dumb. He could very well finish something in the future with how much he's already written, and not wanting a character so tied up with his own to completely move away is entirely fair.
>>93201608Sure, but he's also voiced complaints about them even moving out of 1D to 1E or support classes because he doesn't want his precious waifu group to be separated from each other or him for even a few hours at a time. It's just his unhealthy obsession.
>>93201583/cyoag/ shitposting is a symptom. The real problem is anons acting like retards and then being surprised retards flock around them.>I'm bored so I reply to shitposters>Just let them have fun bro>The shonenspic memes are ironic, we won't attract actual shonenspics
>>93201424Grok and Argus' interactions could be verbatim Ogryn-Veteran dialogue from Darktide and it'd be fully in character.
>>93201629>don't respond the shitposters>have never involved myself with powerfagging even when attention is drawn to one of my builds>call others who do retardsWhat else am I supposed to do?
>>93201645If you don't, then good on you. Too bad about the rest.
>>93201645Make higher quality posts to cause good discussion to distract those who do.
>>93201671People just ignore my high quality posts and effort though.
>>93201679post build
>>93201628I guess you could make that argument, but I'm generally against making big changes to the classes myself unless a new build comes out that I actually really like and it's replacing a genuine dump that never did anything or was used for much. Either way it's a separate issue from the builds completely moving away. I don't think it's unreasonable for him to be against that.
>>93201679Example?
Half of 1-D dumps chosen randomly should be killed.
>>93201485This post is the most autistic one in this thread.
>>93201671That might have worked before, but not anymore. Too many shitposters now.
>>93201635He is now 'Big Man' to me.
>>93201740Oh yeah? Watch this.>>93195591>>93195746>>93195766>>93195789>>93195817Who does your build pick in Mario Party?
>>93201782Christopher
>>93201782Waluigi, he's a pretty fun character.
If I ever update my build, I'm going to make it extremely weak just to spite powerfags.
>>93201782Tyrone from Backyardigans
>>93201817make it a cute crippled girl so i can molest her
>>93201719I won't argue with you on the first part since that's a subjective thing and we won't agree on it (I think big changes to class layout are good and the school quirking is the best opportunity for that so far). But I will concede that in this case, it's not too unreasonable to want to wish against having the Koreans move away, even if it would be in character to do so (which he himself admitted to). I suppose I was just being vindictive and was annoyed with his behavior.
>>93201817oooh, I'll be so mad if anon nerfs himself to make for less competition in the powerscaling rants
>>93201605What kind of stronger response were you hoping for? So far I have new surveillance equipent, more pros on campus/in the halls, Anzu taking the attack very personally, and the student body being suspicious of loners and new transfers.
>>93201817I'll wank your options picked to be extremely strong btw
>>93201628I mainly would dislike them leaving Shiketsu completely, but I wouldn't support them transferring to 1E either, because I don't really see it adding anything (especially in the current context since it was someone that transferred to 1E that got killed). As for transferring them to other courses, it'd be a bit of a shame to split the group up, but I could see it, especially at the stage when it would be them switching courses with the start of the new school year (and they could still hang out outside of classes, so it's not like the hivemind gets split up completely). It would help to establish them opening up more since it shows they need to cling to each other less. I think I even mentioned that I think Faith transferring to support would make sense when we had a prompt like that. I guess Hailey transferring to management would make sense too. Minerva transferring out of a hero course is something I don't see happening since she's from a legacy family and her stepping away from that would require a buildup we don't really have. Edith I could see going to any of the courses honestly. Maxine I'm not sure, but I feel like the hero course suits her the most.But you're right about me not releasing MHA writefags in quite a while causing my voice to be of little importance. How about this, if I don't complete that writefag I was stuck on for months by 15th next month, I lose all right to complain about transfers, but until then please hold off on them? Would that be alright? This will hopefully help motivate me to get my shit together. Maybe I need more of a stick than a carrot approach.
>>93201881Nigga you don't lose the right to an opinion because you haven't released a writefag within a certain amount of time. This isn't a job.
>>93201601I double checked and she has a single room and an airlock. It could work but that is some clown-car shit.
>>93201912He does because I want to do things and he doesn't want me too, meanwhile I actually do things and he doesn't.
>>93201942Don't pretend to be me.
>>93201956Or what? Gonna writefag my favorite NPCs disappearing in the night?
>>93195817>>93198872Aight, finally finished it. I hope I got characterization right.Fallout (Spinner, Reef, Пeтp) (Mentions Dr. Archer and Corto)https://rentry.org/kmqq4bc6
>>93201782Rosalina
>>93201782DONKEY KONG
>>93201782>KichōnaMario or Yoshi>OsamuFucking degenerate picks a character at random
>>93201782Is Kirby in Mario Party?
>>93201972Cute. Good starting point.
>>93201967No, I'll [insert homoerotic threat here].
>>93201972Oh right, >>93200670 can get a look at the story too.
I was supposed to writefag but instead I fell into a rabbithole of choice game novelsfuck you xianxia anon
>>93202122>choice game novels>xianxia anonWhat connection do these two have?
>>93202122No problem. Admittedly 99% of Choice Games stuff is crappy slop, but I've never tried venturing beyond best-sellers like Zombie Exodus. I hope we'll get a zombie MP sooner or later, or that somebody reads some choice games and makes an inspired CYOA off them.
>>93202122I was supposed to writefag but fell into a rabbithole called "UGGGH I don't have the motivation..."
>>93202153If anybody's interested, only play Zombie Exodus. There's an official CYOA game by Choice of Games called Choice of Zombies, and it's fucking ass. What's worse, they offer you a DLC that lets you play as spec ops soldier as opposed to mostly civilian occupations and gives you an assault rifle with grenade launcher that allows you to solo any horde you meet.
>>93202122Ive been there... gotten horribly into superhero slop with both Choice and Hosted games... it's an addiction. I'm personally in the rabbithole of the Fallen Hero series.
>>93202162I wasn't supposed to writefag and I have diarrhea anyway
>>93201972>>93202092Awesome and a great introduction for Пeтp (Pyotyr, in case the cyrillic gets annoying). In terms of characterization I've imagined that he comes in layers; at first glance he's the horror cyborg monster, then when you get past skin depth he's the boisterous gentle giant, then when you get even deeper he's a sad, broken half-man looking for belonging and also actually a horror cyborg monster when pushed too far. I like the idea that Spinner has known him for a while and probably picked up a little bit of ancient dead slavic, her being the one to wake him up also makes it an easy bond since she's technically his employer now, whether she realizes it or not.The description of his voice is fine but I realized exactly where I got the idea from in my head, he sounds like Rasputin from Destiny (but without the grandiose volume or echo), very distorted, glitching, digital Russian;https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=nsTBjuXxIqEIt's also a very strong introduction for Spinner and Reef. Although we haven't gotten to see their whole character yet you can already tell that Spinner is genuinely trying not to be awkward, even if she can't quite pull it off yet. Reef's past is also very tangible with how she speaks.Overall, very good early showing, it'd be good to see these characters in different scenarios and even better when we see them in situations that make them uncomfortable, angry or otherwise lose their composure.
>>93202135this mf >>93191200>>93202153>>93202190>>93202192thanks for the recs but also fuck you
>>93202205I'm writefagging.
>>93202205>>93202225I'm jealous...
>>93202225I'm just fagging.
>>93202230Don't be, I'm mid at it.
I wasn't supposed to writefag but I should probably think about it. Instead I thought about builds for cyoas that don't exist.
>>93202219oh shit aura clash, I just played the demo a few days ago. Yeah I see why you got sucked into it, its pretty good. Now its time for you to become just as bad as I.
>>93202255Mid at having diarrhea? Impressive.
>>93202258Maybe I'll dump for Naruto. Sounds like a plan...
>>93202267You pay for them?
>>93202303The giant and the golden goose but it's me and anon and I force him to produce SoLslop.
>>93202284The other one
>>93201972I forgot to answer before when I read the other one. They are both really good, thye show the characters really well, it also does a bit of world building.
>>93202208>sounding like RasputinAlright, noted! I'll keep that in mind for the future. Funny enough I had initially thought of that, but I worried it would be too obvious a reference. Ah well, I know better now.>In terms of characterization I've imagined that he comes in layers; at first glance he's the horror cyborg monster, then when you get past skin depth he's the boisterous gentle giant, then when you get even deeper he's a sad, broken half-man looking for belonging and also actually a horror cyborg monster when pushed too far.Oh good, I at least caught onto that part. I was getting immense 'Iron Giant' vibes from poor Пeтp. I also figure part of the reason Spinner is very quick to establish who is an ally and who isn't is because Пeтp has painted the walls with boarders more than once, so you really gotta get on that.>lthough we haven't gotten to see their whole character yet you can already tell that Spinner is genuinely trying not to be awkward, even if she can't quite pull it off yet. Reef's past is also very tangible with how she speaks.>Overall, very good early showing, it'd be good to see these characters in different scenarios and even better when we see them in situations that make them uncomfortable, angry or otherwise lose their composure.>mfwYaaaaaaaaaaaay.
>>93202042>yoshiKichōna is gay? I never realized
>>93202311If I like em enough yeah. I like getting it to support the authors a bit since it takes so long to get stuff out even without considering whatever real life obligations they got. Only a few I didn't follow that mindset by during sales and such.
>>93202458bitches love yoshi
>>93202458Why does Yoshi make you gay?
>>93195817>>93201424>someone mentions loners making their own crew>they're all named and mentioned except for youwhat an interplanetary feel...>>93200884Cool writefag anon, thanks for including me, I liked it. Grok is based.
>>93202498Maxx is kind of the odd one out. He's technically got a lot of experience but he doesn't have an easy partner.Which kind of suits him as the most visible member of the Loners. But it leaves me without much to comment on in terms of interactions.
>>93201782>JamesDonkey Kong
>>93201782Shimabukuro plays Kid Koopa in 5 & 6, Blooper in 8, and Goomba in Super Mario Party.
>>93199507Uhh it's been about 14 30 minutes
>>93202498>>93200884It's a good thing to jump off from for sure. I'll probably do character evaluations for the Scrappers we have next and make that resume.Wouldn't be opposed to a Loner crew though that's for sure.
>>93202782I killed Senanon, sorry guys.
>>93202794El Hermano here. I must satisfy my sister's incestous hunger or she'll destroy us all. Please wait.
I wish you were as funny as you think you are.
>>93202884I wish not giving (You)s had the effect you think it does.
Wait is Chihiro supposed to be qi+hero
>>93195817Second writefag's ready. Will post next thread.
>>93202969She's supposed to be Chi + hiro actually.
>Mr. MHAfioso, a second writefag has hit S.C.R.A.P.P.E.R.
>>93203028More like C.R.A.P.P.E.R lmaoMHAfiosos will have it buried in <2 weeks anyway.
>>93203028Summon the janny. Ensure that stillborn NEVER reaches the next thread.
>>93203040>>93203067
>>93203016?That's what I said though?
>>93201972Nice work!Excited to see crew coming together. You got Sophia down very well in the formality of her speech.I’ll take a break for tonight l, but tommorow I’ll see if I can think of a good premise to use everyone’s skills in a job.
>>93202969>>93203016Nah. I just looked up names until I found something I liked the sound of and had a meaning I also liked. Her name is pretty chuuni though. It essentially means "Thousand Fathoms, Heavenly Sword".
>>93200884That's pretty cool, anon. I didn't expect to be included so early. Nor did I expect Dane to be a smoker due to the whole mask thing. I'm not opposed to joining this crew. He can bounce off of Argus due to a shared background, and handle some of the techie stuff for Grok and Ta-ang. I could even see his jokes going over everyone's head in different ways.There's also the options of having them split off after the encounter so that the existing crews have a connection to one another. An example would be like if one of the groups need a bit more muscle for a job, and we can bring up the others and potentially the crew they joined.>>93201424>Someone just needs to get them an actual ship because Claymore has a damn newspaper delivery shuttleDane could probably expand his own ship due to having Astro-Engineering and Electronics, while also having a few unselected ship upgrades if we go the path of the loners joining up. We'd probably need an actual void pilot, though. And a good amount of credits just to buy the parts.
>>93195817Is there any reason not to take a ship?
>>93203458If you give it up, you get more options in other sections.
>>93203477...It appears I am a dummy. I accept the drill.
>>93203382I could see Claymore picking up a fake hook-on cigarette cartridge just to look a little more hard boiled. There isn't anything in it and it looks cool on the mask.>>93203458>Don't want to take care of the thing in terms of maintenance and protection>Willing to rely on a crew to take care of transport>Not specced into flying it>Trading it to specialize elsewherePlenty of reasons, I still think it's a bit better than a hide-out but that's just me.
>>93203488It could make sense with his character to fake it. Trying to impress his crew by smoking that doubles as a way to remind everyone that he's actually a human and not a robot, despite never taking off his suit.
>>93195817Posting a ship captain next thread. She may have an invite to the current solo scrappers
>>93200463Everybody gangsta till the psy build goes Plus Ultra and punches them through their ships hull because they are both psi sensitive and the psy build has every psy upgrade
>>93203961Psy builds think they're all that and a box of chocolates till I fucking shoot them in the face and they die.
>>93200982If you want to lean into the teacher, you could make it more like chakra literally flowing through your veins and leaking out of your chakra points or something.
>>93203973
>>93203973*psy endurances*
>>93204036My rifle is uncommon BITCH
>>93203178Spinner here, good to hear! I was worried about whether I'd miss something with Sophia or not. I hope I captured her reaction to Пeтp well enough, along with her companions' reactions.If Corto and Archer can get me some personality tidbits to work with, I can do some writing about them too.
>>93204036>>93204044*blows your head off with a plasma weapon*
>>93187600Fun little action intro that quickly gives the reader a good sense of the characters' personalities while also fleshing out the universe some more. I was a bit surprised by how quickly Sophia took to the impromptu combat situation. She's got some potential with that gun.>>93201972Cool look into Spinner's head. Not sure if it's a writing style thing or a product of you highlighting Sophia's slave mentality, but the play-by-play of Spinner's thoughts and reactions to others had her coming off as a bit of an awkward overthinker in social situations. Not a bad thing; it's about what I expected, and it contrasts nicely with her no-nonsense approach to everything else. Overall, I'm liking how the different character dynamics are shaping up! Archer will have a fairly similar response to Sophia's slave situation, probably with even more discomfort for reasons he keeps to himself. He'll not make it too obvious, but he will try to nudge her towards thinking more for herself when he can. Also, no complaints here with the direction you seem to be going with Archer's eventual addition to the crew. Even before including Pyotyr, I figured Spinner would see Archer as an obvious boon with how you described her medical implants in your build post, and she'd be one of the few to believe him and look past his reputation on account of her own history. So that all lines up with what I was picturing. And now that we have a bioengineered metal monstrosity onboard, I'm sure Archer will keep plenty busy. Still, that's exactly what he wants. Uncovering the universe's many oddities (like Pyotyr) and adding obvious value to a ragtag group of broken weirdos is more his jam than bearing the responsibility of leading an evil megacorporation's top secret biocybernetics team. He gets to be something of a big fish in a small pond while commiting far fewer ethics violations!
>>93204070Cant attack the noosphere where my conciousness resides controlling my body like a meat puppet until my energy runs out.We both die here.
>>93204081*casts fireball jutsu and then puts you in a genjutsu with my sharingan*
>>93201782Giovanni picks Wario. He admires the man's entrepreneurial spirit and impressive physique.
>>93204071>Not sure if it's a writing style thing or a product of you highlighting Sophia's slave mentality, but the play-by-play of Spinner's thoughts and reactions to others had her coming off as a bit of an awkward overthinker in social situations. Not a bad thing; it's about what I expected, and it contrasts nicely with her no-nonsense approach to everything else.In this case, it was to emphasize Spinner's drawback of not being very good with social situations. Add that along with how she was burned, and hyper-tuning herself for the role of piloting an obscenely dangerous xenos vessel? It's clear that Spinner and Пeтp are two broken peas in a busted pod. I'm glad that I was able to convey that!>Also, no complaints here with the direction you seem to be going with Archer's eventual addition to the crew. Even before including Pyotyr, I figured Spinner would see Archer as an obvious boon with how you described her medical implants in your build post, and she'd be one of the few to believe him and look past his reputation on account of her own history. So that all lines up with what I was picturing. And now that we have a bioengineered metal monstrosity onboard, I'm sure Archer will keep plenty busy. Sick, that gives me plenty of ideas on how to take the next line of writing. Quick questions: Would you say he has anyone who would want to attack him considering his desire to get on a ship super quick, and what do you think his first reaction would be to seeing Пeтp?
>>93195927His helmet reflects the pitch black of space.>>93197081Nice. Which job?
>>93204168>Which job?nothing too complicated. Just a short generic "deal gone wrong" kind of scenario where they have to fight their way out of a sticky situation while they bicker through commshopefully it will serve as kind of a silly intro to such a chaotic crew
>>93204334Well I uh... was writing the same thing.Hopefully yours comes out better than mine.
>>93204069Oh I missed this. Not too sure what to say about his personality other than he's a little eccentric. Spinner might not be the type to pick up on it due to her also having the Difficult Socialization 'tism, but he may come off to some like someone going through a midlife crisis. Mostly in that he seems a little too in his element when shit hits the fan for someone fairly lacking in combat chops. He wants to experience what the universe has to offer, and even if he's screaming in terror while being chased by pirates or whatever, one might catch a brief smile when he recounts the story later. It's just a bit hard to pick up on because he's typically a rather careful man. But there are cases where one might wonder if he has a screw loose. Like when he tracked down the guy who planned his assassination and stole his identity, walked into his office, shot him in the head, fed his body to Franklin, and then left through the front door.>Would you say he has anyone who would want to attack him considering his desire to get on a ship super quickI mostly said that because it seemed funny at the time, but I suppose it could be due to the situation above. He cleaned up the body, but maybe he was seen entering the building around the time gunshots were heard and his doppleganger went missing. Or you could do something completely different. That's just off the top of my head, and I'm not attached to any particular circumstances for their meeting.>and what do you think his first reaction would be to seeing Пeтp?Probably complaining about the shoddy workmanship. But overall extreme curiosity to see what's under the hood. I imagine there'd be things only someone like him would notice. And not sure what Пeтp's anon wants for the character, but I had an idea that maybe he's in constant pain that he's grown numb to/ is unable to vocalize. That seems like the sort of thing Archer could fix without "fixing" away everything that makes Пeтp an interesting character.
Would anons play an Elden Ring CYOA? Been working on one on and off and if it's something people would be interested in I'd be motivated to finish it soon.
>>93199705Done some changes in the rentry; reworked the enhanced body alterations and changed the charm.I don't care about the tournament anymore. I'm working on a SoL piece with Akaito and Chosuke assuming that Rinka lost. If either of them want to chime in on how they are post tournament and promotion, that'd be welcome.
>>93204543As long as I get to spec fully into Scarlet Rot to rot on everyone else.
>>93204415>I mostly said that because it seemed funny at the time, but I suppose it could be due to the situation above. He cleaned up the body, but maybe he was seen entering the building around the time gunshots were heard and his doppleganger went missing. Or you could do something completely different. That's just off the top of my head, and I'm not attached to any particular circumstances for their meeting.See, this just makes me think of him having arranged for the Neophron to pick him up after he's done. Expecting it to be in and out, only for dock scum to try shaking him down expecting an easy payout (it's always the angle you least expect). Cue panicking and events causing Spinner to politely ask Пeтp to "fetch their new friend".
>>93204543I just can't get into CYOAs for preexisting works. It's a large part of why I haven't stuck my nose into Nardo or MHA.
>>93204610This is a you problem.
>>93204614For some reason, I read that in a russian accent. I don't speak Russian, and I can't replicate the accent. What the fuck just happened now?
>>93204614You literally asked for anons' opinions.
>>93204543Kino setting for mp. We can freely kill each other with minimal consequences since everyone just revives.
Naruto beach episode WHEN?!
>>93204543Terrible setting for an MP. No schoolslop whatsoever.
>>93204671Raya Lucaria Academy mp
>>93204543Yeah, I'd be up for it. It's even got guildshit for anons.
>>93204637When you- *snickers*When you make- *giggles*WHEN YOU MAKE IT! HAHAHAHAHAHA!
>>93204552Sounds like a bit too early for post-tournament things, no?
>>93204415>>93204128Forgot to link this post too.Also for some additional info, Archer would react to Пeтp similarly to how he'd react to Sophia in that they remind him of the past he's running from, especially if we did go with Пeтp being in constant pain from what was done to him. But I don't think that'd be so apparent from Archer's outward reaction. It'd probably come off more like an egghead indirectly bragging about his own skills or something.As a side note, Franklin is basically the opposite of Пeтp as far as cyborgs go. The ares has cybernetics so subtle and well integrated that less experienced augmenticists would confuse them for genetic mods or miss them completely. He has genetic mods that he wouldn't have been able to handle if he wasn't gene edited from the very beginning to accept them, and have integrated to the point of being indistinguishable from natural biological functions. Even his base physiology is something beyond the norm, and his brain is much larger than average. He's as perfect a combination of machine and biology as you'll find outside of some incredibly rare ancient tech. He's also unusually friendly for an ares (when he's not ripping out throats). Like a big puppy.>>93204607Works for me. Keeps it as one of his rare bouts of careless impatience without it seeming too dumb for mr smart science man. Plus there's ample opportunity for fun, snappy dialogue.
>>93204691Anon is going doomermode so he won't listen to reason
>>93204543My instincts tell me it'd be cooler if it was pre Elden Ring with us replacing the godly noble families. Like a more fucky game of thrones. But fighting bosses together could be cool too.
>>93204563>>93204543You will. Available options right now will include:>RacesHuman (subraces of Tarnished, Numen, Nox)Beastmen of Farum AzulaDemi-HumansMisbegotten & OmensAlbinaurics (First & Second Gen)TrollsManserpentsPestsAncestral FollowersThose Who Live in Death>"Corruption"/"Alignment"/Affinity with certain entities, gained from various choicesFormless Mother - Blood SorceriesRot - Rot Incantations, Pests start with increased AffinityTwinbird - Death/Ghostflame Sorceries, TWLID start with increased AffinityFrenzied Flame - Madness/Frenzied Flame IncantationsGreater Will - Pretty much everyone but humans starts with lowered affinity, Tarnished have an affinity capDragon - Dragon cult incantations, dragon communion is an option, FA Beastmen start with increased AffinityBlood Star - Aberrant Sorceries, Briar Sorceries, decreases affinity with multiple other entitiesFell God - Fire incantations, decreases GW affinity, Trolls start with decreased affinity due to betraying Fire GiantsSerpent God - Manserpant increased AffinityBestial - not really an but makes you more savage and increases your physicalityGlintstone - not really an entity but too much of this turns you into a ball but you get to understand the secrets of the universe or something>LocationsPretty much every major location from the game>The restSeparate combat & non-combat skills, equipment section, PerksNo drawbacks for now.>>93204627That anon wasn't me.
I just don't think an Elden Ring MP can work. It's too story-centric. Doesn't work for an MP made by a lot of people
>>93204741True. Not a lot to do. But anon can write Zanzifart... fuck me... which would be kino
>>93204741>dark souls>story centriclol, lmao even
>>93204725>no shardbearer shitkino but I'm sorry to say the powerwankers will call it garbage
>>93204763Holy shard, shards from worm? I sharding love shards.
>>93204552>that's all it took for him to go doomer>so fragileinb4 he quits mcyoag altogether
I feel like something grabbing parts of Altering History and Times of Troubles wouId be kino.
>>93204762yeah I'm pretty sure we could make a bunch of vague shit and even if we contradicted each other some dark souls youtuber could turn it into a lore video.
>>93204762Yes, dude. What are you going to do in an MP like that? Backstabbing circles? Speak in an fancy english accent and then die when your questline is finished?
>vaati talking about my oc's secret relation to the dung eaterk...kino...
>>93204069Corto likes to give off a stereotypical gruff, hardboiled detective personality He's very paranoid, and showing no weakness is critical when dealing with the Fangli. But behind that gruff exterior Corto is actually a nature lover, enjoying spending time with his pets and his garden. He's also insecure about his lack of formal education, having grown up on a feral world and then a prison world.
>>93204552Miurabro here. Would there be a place for the Jonin in that SoL?
>>93204825My build, Dung Eater Jr, likes to hang out with your's and eat dung btw.
>>93204543Don't make it MP-only, add a time period for before and after the shattering with adjusted costs. Let us play noble families and be demigods struggling for the attention of our numen daddies abd mommies.
>>93204834Unironically, don't answer anything, don't encourage him. He is not in the right state of mind and it is too soon to say anything about post tournament things when it hasn't even started yet.
>>93204868Apologies, just feeling excited to hear that my Team is trying to do something in spite of tournament stuff. >He is not in the right state of mindWhat did I miss?
>>93204868Nobufag meltdown part 2?Is there a connection?
>>93204876Like >>93204718 said, he's going doomermode because people shat on him recently (just scroll up or look at the past thread if you weren't there). He's saying that he doesn't care about what is arguably the most important event of the entire mp, so his mind must muddled right now.Just let him cool down and don't encourage.
>>93204914I'll peek occasionally, but the negativity some posters give off here is a good deterrent. He'll chill out and be fine, I hope.
Go go gadget threadslave!
>>93200884Oorah, anon. Rule of thumb: don't touch Argus' knife. Also, he isn't that old.>>93201424>Two veterans, a mutant, and a Goz in a souped-up space RVIt's peak.>>93203568Medical inspections are gonna be fragging tough, aren't they?
>>93204713Oho, noted!>>93204829Nod, also noted. Would you prefer Corto to have his own pick-up story?
I'll go get started I guess.
>>93205165Thank you. Very few of us would put in that much work.
We love threadslaves around here, if you don't you can fuck off
>>93205240I hate them because they keep posting MHA and other MPs I don't like.
>>93195817What does the SC stand for?
>>93205301Sexy Catgirls
>>93205301Stooges Congregation
>>93205301Shit Cock
>>93205173>>93205173>>93205173Hogs!!! I'm off to bed.
>>93198133How would you feel about getting a RIVAL in the form of the assassin who got past you?Everyone gets along too well so far.
>>93202208>PyotyrFrom what is left of my Russian it's pronounced Pietr or Pietro. Or Peter.So you're Spinner, Lucianus-anon?
>>93205692Nevermind I didn't see who you were responding to
Can't believe Sen anon is fucking dead...Who will be our logisticschad now Nardolords?
Tournament never ever.