A thread to discuss any personal yuri creations you're currently working on or have ideas for, and to get feedback and advice from other anons. Tell us what you're making!This includes but is not limited to:>yuri stories (note that fanfiction has it's own dedicated thread)>yuri video games>yuri comics>yuri card games>yuri 3D modeling and/or printing>yuri fertility science (banned by the heteros at the UN)
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I got an idea a few days ago about a princess x pirate story.Shes like the captains daughter or something and wants to prove herself but she's kinda clumsy and a bit of a failure. The pirate crew has a plan to kidnap the king. Pirate girl is left out of the plans because she's such a fuckup and this pisses her off. So on the night of the kidnapping (probably a big royal ball or something), she sneaks in to try and be part of it. She ends up fucking it all up and they end up having to settle for kidnapping the princess instead. Because priate girl fucked up the plan, they make her watch the princess. Making sure she doesnt try to escape, as well as feeding her and stuff.The princess though is difficult to deal with. Like an oujo-sama with a dangerous temper. She is fucking PISSED and wants to make pirate girls life hell. I don't have much more beyond that right now, but of course they'll eventually fall in love.
> "write what you know">desnt know shitwhat do?
>>4557092Write what you like but make research or something. Just enough to not outrage people who actually know stuff.On the side note, if I wrote what I know, most likely it would be boring shit anyway.
>>4556747Sounds like a fun idea sis
>>4556747Not exactly the same setup but it reminds me of this https://dynasty-scans.com/series/love_flag_girls
>>4557092just write what interests you and let your characters explore ideas around your interest. Have a theme the helps guide you where your characters actions will inevitably go to. Also predictability is the number one killer in writing so make things interesting
>>4557229>just write what interests you Dominance and submission
>>4557233That's a big spectrum. But what part about it? Is it strong? Harsh? Or gentle? Does it have aftercare? Do they talk before the session? Do they just meet and do the deed or did they grow into it? Who is the one that initiates? Are there any fears to overcome? How resistant or whiny is the sub? How experienced or naive is the dom? Do they switch? There is a lot more open questions you can tell in your story.
>>4557093what if you just wanna write a relationship between two schoolgirls in regular world setting? like shuukura or adashima.how they do their research? how'd anyone just come up with that?do they simulate every events, interactions, every single causes and effects? then pick the most interesting storyline to be presented to readers
>>4557449>how they do their research? how'd anyone just come up with that?I attended a Japanese all-girl school.
I've always wanted to write a real story around my numerous ryona fetish fantasies but it's proving harder than expected. I have the core of the relationship down to "toxic dependent age-gap coworkers", an ambitious older woman and a depressed immortal younger girl. Why is she immortal? Well her life is so shit that I needed a reason for her to survive killing herself. She has regeneration powers, but can be taken out of action for a period of time, even days, depending on how she died.Having an immortal character means other equally powerful ability users need to exist in the world. Consequently, there's got to be some shady government-backed organization keeping tabs on them. That already sounds cliche as fuck. Now I don't care what they're fighting for/against, what other characters are doing, or what their society is like, but literally every story needs those things to be fleshed out in order for it to make any semblance of sense. It's just so mind-numbingly boring to write about things other than the fetish shit, think how to make it unique, and it kills all my enthusiasm.
>>4557473Reminds me a bit of the plot of Mnemosyne, where the immortal MC got sucked up by a jet engine and was out of action for a couple months while she regenerated. On a side note, I would not recommend that show to anyone.
>>4557473That's funny. I have almost the same concept, minus the want to die but rather it's an inevitability she dies after a period of time but gets resurrected fast (which is always after 20 min on both accidental death or after the timer is up). There is also the whole sub-plot of an accidental summoned copy of herself killing her in different ways for testing purposes (which is supposed to be important later) but t's semi-incest but not with the copy but in the long run they are? It's complicated. Also Age-gap. But it's funny we share almost the same idea, concept-sis. I like your brain.
>>4557475Funny you mention it. That anime was pretty eye-opening for me, though I can't tell you a single thing about the plot with certainty. I think they were investigators and some crazy vampire bitch went after the MC because of her immortality. Might read the source material to see if I can plagiarize something.>>4557480The death timer sounds very interesting especially in a mystery type of story, you can mess around with memory and perception, like in Higurashi. Cool idea.I'd probably have a period of time (adjustable for plot) prior to the death where she can't remember what happened at all, so when she wakes up next she has no idea where she is or why she died and has to figure it out.
>>4557487That's the spirit. Now get your noggin runnin' and your hands workin'. Every little bit counts.
>>4556714Source on pic?
>>4557525Ayame 14
>>4556714Why'd you mess up the OP so much?
An old idea I had was a slice of life that focused on a succubi schoolHuman men were being warned now that succubi existed, and serious countermeasures were getting taken to prevent the death of the male sexSo the school started training for girls, except since most girls aren't dtf immediately, they went "well shit" and kidnapped just one girl (self insert) to help train everyoneIt's mostly just a harem. I'm honestly thinking of asexual rep somewhere in there, or just making a bit of wholesome out of something that initially sounds very not.So, thoughts? Maybe I'll pick it up and try drawing something for it
>>4559357I'm no fan of harem, more leaning towards succubus correction. https://exhentai.org/g/3022991/e344a7777e/
>>4559357an asexual succubus is like a vegan cat
>>4559675maybe she feeds on admiration and headpats instead of plain sexual energy
Pokemon yuri romhack. Premise was you play as oujo-sama or Lady class as the west calls it. Mostly to do with my love of petplay and seeing that scene in the Lets Go games where Green tries to make the Femc her pokemon. You go around collecting girls as your pokemon to build your yuri harem. Actually not really NSFW as wanted to focus on the emotional bonds of you and your girls like how the normal series tries to do with pokemon. Everyone else uses normal pokemon, you just use girls.
I remember some anon was making yuri playing cards or was it tarot cards? Does anyone have those? If not I was thinking of some concept for playing cards
>>4560756They're not finished, check back next year.
We posted about this a year ago, but we've been working on a nsfw yuri VN about an exhibitionist couple and just got listed on Steam. It's about a shy and lonely university student who discovers that her seemingly perfect crush is an exhibitionist who's into doing it in public without being caught. She has to push past her fear of getting caught to study the ways of lesbian exhibitionism and win the heart of her crush. https://store.steampowered.com/app/4724580/Exhibition_of_the_Heart/Here's some free keys for when we release in October. First come first served. Y080L-M0DYH-AAE2TCCKZR-E34X6-NBNNG7WDVN-YCR0A-DVP8V Thanks sisters have a nice day.
>>4561951Are you planing to maybe, possibly, eventually make it censored and offer a free 'DLC' on your page so it passes the no-lewd censorship law? Not begging for a key just offering a suggestions for stupid laws. I am currently crying in region lock.
>>4561951Good luck with your release anons!
>>4562141Thanks sister!>>4562140Honestly, we weren't even thinking about places with censorship laws. We were just worried about getting it on Steam at all.Valve has been cracking down on stuff like adult patches so that isn't something we're planning. Sorry if you can't buy it in your region.If you're region locked then we won't hold it against you if you just pirate it.
>>4561951Thanks anon I will make sure to review the game
I have a pretty nice bit from like a decade ago, but if I post it today under the current cultural climate I think It'd be easily misunderstood.
>>4561951Thanks for sharing! There is way too little nsfw yuri let alone exhibition focused ones.>>4562215Who cares what people think, you're already posting on a website most civilized people would consider 'problematic'.If it fits the thread, might as well share it for those people who do enjoy it.
>>4561951I'm impressed that you managed to get it on Steam.
In case anyone missed it at the end of last thread, my new VN has been released recently (about a month ago).https://spcyaya.itch.io/wildroses
Not my project but an online friend's. She's been trying to write this for years. It's toxic fujo yuri which she's very good at. Here's the cover and she says the chapter will drop on June 25th
>>4562532And a rough bio on each of the couples
>>4562532SlayI can already feel the tension between her couples
>>4562303steam is chock full of anime porn in all forms, the few that get rejected just had bad luck and got an especially prudish reviewer
>>4562615She really likes toxic yuri. She goes by niromeva on tumblr if you wanna see more of her art
>>4562712The craving for more wholesome is immeasurable at this point but to each their own. Tell your online friend that one is cute.
>>4562714Tbf, she's been writing this type of thing before the toxic yuri craze took off. I think she just likes it when homosexuals are weird to each other
>>4562714Good news for you: "omg I love the feedback HAHA and yeah 3/4 of the main couples will definitely /not/ be wholesome :') but the 4th will"So congrats on getting somekind of wholesome
>>4562803Sweet, hopefully it's the one with the child. Girls can be weird to each other but add a child in the mix and they should have their stuff together.
I’m currently making a deck-builder RPG game in Godot, and I’m curious what people think about anthro/furry × human yuri. So far, I don’t know any games that have it, and I don’t think there’s that much manga about it either. Why is one of the characters a furry? Because I’ve never drawn one before, and I think a human × non-human relationship can be interesting for the story in my game. Picrel is the characters. I haven’t finished designing the human yet. It’s an ex-knight-turned-mercenary × princess
>>4563302Furry isn't everyone's cup of tea but I think the crowd that likes it really love it, so good for you for trying to fill that niche.I think you have a better chance to succeed that way. As for your art, it is nice enough, definitely not a bottleneck. Good luck on the story and everything else.
>>4563303Thank you! I’m pretty much already done with the core combat mechanics. What’s left on the technical side are some minor and boring things.So yeah, I’m focusing on the art side atm.
>>4563302Depends on the style of furryFurry-lite like pic, fuck yes, but full on animal head on human body is too much. I think cartoony furry like pic is ok too
>>4563320Cartoony furry like your pic*
>>4563320Quite interestingly, when I was doing some research, I found out furry art is a spectrum, from literally an animal to almost fully human. And yeah, I think I’ll stick with mine, but I’m pretty sure some adjustments or changes will happen later during development
>>4563337Yeah and honestly you don't have to worry about not finding an audience with furryThere are fans for literally everything on the furry spectrum, if anything it being humanxfurry might give real furfags the ick
>>4563302>Khajiit has wares, if you have coinAs a tiger will she chuff?
Not sure if this is the right place for /r/equests. Anyway does such thing as age gap selfcest even exist, outside of oneshot doujins? I don't know if I somehow found untapped niche, or the idea itself is just terrible.
>>4564808Well yes this is probably the wrong thread as this is for projects people are working on.There is at least this one old H hentai that had that. First part had a girl who got some 'help' masturbating for the first time by a younger version of herself. The second part had her being seduced into having sex with an older version of herself
>>4564946>who got some 'help' masturbating for the first time by a younger version of herself>younger version of herselfIt's like she got into some wormhole parallel universe of herself that forgot how to masturbate. And the younger one had to remind her how to do it so she could do it to her later on the line. And that's when she ended up with amnesia. The cycle repeats on this certain spot in the timeline continuously for all eternity until she had sex with her younger self.>part 3?>Gilf-cest
>>4564946Apologies. I don't know why I forgot to mention this, but I want to make a VN around that theme.I was asking about longer running series, just to see how others have approached the selfcest. Characters (or just a single one?) developing. Self-reflection. The ego and it's own. Topics like these
>>4564951Well the actual 'plot' is as follows, spoilers part one and two:First part is about how she should except her own sexual feelings and not push everyoneon away. This is why her younger self appears and more or less mind controls her to masturbateSecond part is about her being way too lewd all the time. Her 'kinky' self disguises herself as her older self and has sex with herIt ends with her slapping her older self-kinky self, who regresses back to her younger self and merges again with her other younger self who helped her masturbate in the first part.It was the 80s, shit got weird a lot.>>4565051It depends on what aspects you want to explore, As a kink it might have limited appeal, but if it's something you love I wouldn't let that stop you.If you want to bring up stuff like how someone has changed as they grow up, or how their younger or older self appeals to them, then there is a story to be had.Older self might travel back in time and keep her identity a secret from herself.There are lots of ways she can screw herself. I think the trick with a story like this is to be a little bit more clever then anyone expects it to be.
>>4565181I like the idea myself and I already know what I want to achieve. I have the main plot planned out already.As I've said I was just looking for the examples on how the longer selfcest story was done before, but damn, it's near impossible to find.I guess I'll have to write it blind, which isn't that much of a problem. Thanks for your time.
I am in the inspiration-gathering and planning phase of my next VN, which takes place in a magical higher-education institute. Does anyone have neat ideas about events or intrigues for my characters to interact with which I may possibly steal for my own purposes?I have my own list of ideas of course, but I thought it might be interesting to read what others may consider for such a setting.
>>4566826What kind of magic/setting?
>>4566826Hilariously horrible witches battle of background NPCs.>I cast helium boobs>I cast flat-as-a-board-chestOr some such. Imho most VNs forget the comedy aspect of the tragedy duo.
>>4566828I was being vague because I'm just casually fishing for inspiration, but the basic setting is a remote boarding college-type research institution. Any kind of magic is acceptable but in the setting there is a distinct separation of vocation between a Witch, a Wizard, and a Mage.
>>4566836>a Witch, a Wizard, and a Mage.are these innuendos of evil teachers, christmas cake teachers and married teachers?jokes aside, how much of an inspiration is Little Witch Academia?
>>4566839I've never watched it. The inspiration was re-reading Harry Potter eighteen years later.
>>4566840I see. I'm not sure if you want to have a strict worldbuilding and magic system or just as a plot device, but if the later then consider a student magically growing her bangs to cover her eyes when she's too shy to face her beloved
>>4566836It was just that without the somewhat less vague explanation it's hard to recommend ideas because there's a pretty broad spread between like D&D/Elder Scrolls style "colleges" of magical academia and stuff like LWA or Harry Potter where it's more or less modern day but rural. Sorta informs whether suggestions are stuff like "the local village has a festival where the witches help peasant farmers with their harvest" or "the students sneak into the nearby town to go to the movies and shop at a mall for cute stationary"
>>4563302I think we need more furry x human...
>>4566841>>4566842There are no right or wrong suggestions as I was merely curious about what ideas others might draw from such a concept. These are all equally valid!But if you want to know, it is a rigid magic system somewhere between "scholarly magical academia" and "magic high school". There is both room for helium boob spells and the practical application of the arcane toward agriculture.
>>4566843die
>>4566843Live.
>>4565471Haha, damn. Turns out the biggest obstacle so far is how are the main characters supposed to refer to each other. At this moment there is three versions of the main character (or just one, that's why it's awkward) aged 25, 16 and 9.I don't want to deprive them of the core identity that they are the same person so I'm calling them "ms. Greenwall", "Sophia" and "Soso". Setting is fairly realistic, aside from two time-travels, which leaves the problem that the neighbors might find suspicious that three girls named the same and looking similar are living in one place, so I might have to develop them some alternate personas, just for bystanders.
>>4566843Agreed as long as you specifically mean furry x human yuri. HMOFA is an absolute blight.
>>4566826Substitution. Tatoeba, if MC shares a room with another girl, you can make her sometimes be replaced by impostor. Depending on the angle you want to approach it can be something like:1) Its a spy from enemy faction and she decided to infiltrate via identity theft.2) It's an obsessive yandere that's interested in MC in particular.3) It's an eldritch abomination that only mimics humans.Switching back and forth is preferable to one-time replacement. The keyscene the whole plot spins around woud be MC fucking that character not knowing about the replacement. Or you can try different angle - by the time sex starts MC already knows about the substitution thing or at least highly suspicious, but can't tell if she fucks her roommate or the impostor.
>>4566866wow, there's an actual Japanese person on /u/
>>4566862No, and I also hate the dumbass meme that formed around it. Why would I mean anything besides yuri?
>>4566866>3) It's an eldritch abomination that only mimics humans.Ero-Itou typed this post. Ero-Itou for galactic president.
>>4566843Furry or no but I'm obsessed with kemonomimi girl x human girl stuffI have yet to put my ideas to paper however
>>4566995Moshikashite u mad, gaijin-kun?
>>4566826I can't find it right now but I read some stuff a while ago where the magic college had a dueling system where the one who wins a duel makes the other their familiar and gains total control over them. Stuff like physical sensations including pain and pleasure, their physical shape, even pltheir personality and consciousness I think it was a bit extreme for a romance story, but a more toned down version could be fun for an edgy, kinky, master/familiar romance
>>4566848They should have to raise some sort of magical creature in pairs as part of a long term assignment.
Decided to participate in this year's Toxic Yuri VN Jam in order to finally motivate myself to finish a whole visual novel project. Here's some tentative art I did for the MC and her main love interest. Although calling what they have "love" is maybe a bit of a stretch, since these two bring out the absolute worst in each other.The MC, Meliora, is about to ascend to the highest ranking position in the city, but she's left behind a dark past of betrayal and backstabbing in order to get there. The LI is Viscerine, a notorious serial killer who preys exclusively on young women. After Meliora captures her, she plans to torture Viscerine to atone for a personal grudge. But Viscerine's over sadomasochism and dark worldview start to awaken something in Meliora's heart, and soon she finds herself drawn to this woman she knows she should hate.The script is finished, at about 10k words long, and now I'm going to try and fill out as much art for it as possible before the jam ends. It's got a ton of girls hurting each other and generally being evil, overt sado-maso fanservice, and some attempts at real meditations on grief and sin.Definitely won't be for everyone, but if that sounds like your thing, it'll get posted for free on Itch.io once it's finished, most likely in early July.
>>4561951We now have a trailer for this up on Youtube!https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=i0O8L7D7_7oWe had to crop the hell out of Alice's tits to get the CG in there.
>>4567824Toxic Yuri in general isnt for everyone. It's a niche within a niche. Just gotta deal with that.
Would anyone ever read a horror/action story about a psychic tomboy with a soft center and a girly girl who's surprisingly tough falling in love and protecting their small town? Ghosts, demons, lots of fighting, exorcism, spooky paranormal stuff, etc? I've been workshopping this story for longer than I care to admit, and I just feel like I can't get it to where I'm satisfied with it.
>>4569372In what format?
>>4569378Honestly, I think it would work best as a comic or manga, but I have zero drawing capabilities whatsoever. So I try and try and try to write it out in a novel format, but I just can't get it to where I'm satisfied with it. It just makes me incredibly frustrated with myself.
>>4569384Perfect is the enemy of good, etc. Get it vaguely complete first and then start asking what's wrong with it.
>>4569372I read this as "psychotic tomboy" and I was like, yes, please.
>>4569384>>4569438Yeah write it out first then you can nitpick honestly would be interested in reading it
>>4570420>>4569438Thank you both kind anons. I'm going to do my best, and I'm gonna endeavour to have something posted at some point in the next couple weeks.>>4569496If you like psychotic, you might like a certain character I have planned. Or maybe not.
