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I got an idea a few days ago about a princess x pirate story.Shes like the captains daughter or something and wants to prove herself but she's kinda clumsy and a bit of a failure. The pirate crew has a plan to kidnap the king. Pirate girl is left out of the plans because she's such a fuckup and this pisses her off. So on the night of the kidnapping (probably a big royal ball or something), she sneaks in to try and be part of it. She ends up fucking it all up and they end up having to settle for kidnapping the princess instead. Because priate girl fucked up the plan, they make her watch the princess. Making sure she doesnt try to escape, as well as feeding her and stuff.The princess though is difficult to deal with. Like an oujo-sama with a dangerous temper. She is fucking PISSED and wants to make pirate girls life hell. I don't have much more beyond that right now, but of course they'll eventually fall in love.
> "write what you know">desnt know shitwhat do?
>>4557092Write what you like but make research or something. Just enough to not outrage people who actually know stuff.On the side note, if I wrote what I know, most likely it would be boring shit anyway.
>>4556747Sounds like a fun idea sis
>>4556747Not exactly the same setup but it reminds me of this https://dynasty-scans.com/series/love_flag_girls
>>4557092just write what interests you and let your characters explore ideas around your interest. Have a theme the helps guide you where your characters actions will inevitably go to. Also predictability is the number one killer in writing so make things interesting
>>4557229>just write what interests you Dominance and submission
>>4557233That's a big spectrum. But what part about it? Is it strong? Harsh? Or gentle? Does it have aftercare? Do they talk before the session? Do they just meet and do the deed or did they grow into it? Who is the one that initiates? Are there any fears to overcome? How resistant or whiny is the sub? How experienced or naive is the dom? Do they switch? There is a lot more open questions you can tell in your story.
>>4557093what if you just wanna write a relationship between two schoolgirls in regular world setting? like shuukura or adashima.how they do their research? how'd anyone just come up with that?do they simulate every events, interactions, every single causes and effects? then pick the most interesting storyline to be presented to readers
>>4557449>how they do their research? how'd anyone just come up with that?I attended a Japanese all-girl school.
I've always wanted to write a real story around my numerous ryona fetish fantasies but it's proving harder than expected. I have the core of the relationship down to "toxic dependent age-gap coworkers", an ambitious older woman and a depressed immortal younger girl. Why is she immortal? Well her life is so shit that I needed a reason for her to survive killing herself. She has regeneration powers, but can be taken out of action for a period of time, even days, depending on how she died.Having an immortal character means other equally powerful ability users need to exist in the world. Consequently, there's got to be some shady government-backed organization keeping tabs on them. That already sounds cliche as fuck. Now I don't care what they're fighting for/against, what other characters are doing, or what their society is like, but literally every story needs those things to be fleshed out in order for it to make any semblance of sense. It's just so mind-numbingly boring to write about things other than the fetish shit, think how to make it unique, and it kills all my enthusiasm.
>>4557473Reminds me a bit of the plot of Mnemosyne, where the immortal MC got sucked up by a jet engine and was out of action for a couple months while she regenerated. On a side note, I would not recommend that show to anyone.
>>4557473That's funny. I have almost the same concept, minus the want to die but rather it's an inevitability she dies after a period of time but gets resurrected fast (which is always after 20 min on both accidental death or after the timer is up). There is also the whole sub-plot of an accidental summoned copy of herself killing her in different ways for testing purposes (which is supposed to be important later) but t's semi-incest but not with the copy but in the long run they are? It's complicated. Also Age-gap. But it's funny we share almost the same idea, concept-sis. I like your brain.
>>4557475Funny you mention it. That anime was pretty eye-opening for me, though I can't tell you a single thing about the plot with certainty. I think they were investigators and some crazy vampire bitch went after the MC because of her immortality. Might read the source material to see if I can plagiarize something.>>4557480The death timer sounds very interesting especially in a mystery type of story, you can mess around with memory and perception, like in Higurashi. Cool idea.I'd probably have a period of time (adjustable for plot) prior to the death where she can't remember what happened at all, so when she wakes up next she has no idea where she is or why she died and has to figure it out.
>>4557487That's the spirit. Now get your noggin runnin' and your hands workin'. Every little bit counts.
>>4556714Source on pic?
>>4557525Ayame 14
