Sisters from another mister edition, Thread #1189Previous thread: >>483374332>Game LinksSteam Editionhttps://store.steampowered.com/app/1150690/OMORI/Physical Edition (And Merch)https://www.omocat-shop.com/collections/omorihttps://www.fangamer.com/collections/omoriDownloadhttps://archive.is/FqpTSThe console editions (Switch, PSN, XBL, PC Gamepass) have some exclusive content.>Character Birthdays | Sunny ⋅ Omori - July 20https://pbs.twimg.com/media/EujUrE5UUAUyxku.jpg:orig>Fangames, Projects, and Etchttps://pastebin.com/XQX7CSip (OMARIO fangame)https://totally-fungal.itch.io/doomori (DOOMORI fangame)https://imgur.com/a/YJb6dTT (beta & prerelease art)https://goats.dev/omori/#KEL (game dialogue dump)https://files.catbox.moe/nxd8dm.png (faraway map)https://files.catbox.moe/3ng1by.torrent (sprite dump)https://postimg.cc/gallery/G4krtVR/13ec9e79 (Omori Official Walkthrough & Guide Art/Developer Interview & Messages)https://rentry.org/756>Modshttps://mods.one/https://files.catbox.moe/6kewkg.torrent (RPG Maker MV 1.6.2)https://rentry.org/vanillasavefilesTry _omariAU, rainy_mari_mod, omorimodreverie, omori_daydream on Twitterhttps://files.catbox.moe/5ddmjn.zip (Console content)>/omog/ Archivehttps://booru.plus/+whitespacehttps://docs.google.com/document/d/1SGf6LRkzuLpou5Neqppl3Tm7c3hPAitFhCTrIPRfC_c/ (anon's Universally Loved day-by-day guide)https://mega.nz/file/zaQXDYyQ#bG0yK3nl-w6hx5u6IOcvn3GUrGDY53X9faa7nfzC0Yk (MEGA archive 2021)https://files.catbox.moe/e5yhbo.png (Whiteboard 2021)https://rentry.org/756352 (OC Fic and Greentext)https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=tFTlbmKWh70 (/vg/ sings My Time)https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pLMZB1FzyNw (/vg/ sings Good Morning)https://rentry.org/omogtemplate2023d/ (Thread Template)Also, if you write or draw anything don't be afraid to post it, don't worry about the quality, just post that shit!
First for Sunflower
>>483632629
>>483632220I still can't get over the art style looking like ai generated.
>>483632991You can tell whoever made this is absolutely obsessed with Suselle because Kris is obviously the more Sunny-like one, no reason for Susie to be in his place other than their ship.
still thinking about how anon last thread said he doesnt like how the manga looks because it appeals to weebs without any sense of irony or self awareness when he typed that
>>483633192Are you intelligent to articulate why it does or are you just going to keep repeating it in the hopes that it becomes true
>>483592918candice paizuri
why does basil pee himself so much
>>483633631
Omog do you thing Aubrey would have a fat ass? A GYATT Or she would be a muscle mommy? Or she would be skinny?
shed be a bitch
>>483634703God I want her to cave my skull in.
>>483632929That green is still quite distracting
>>483634703She's skinny in the manga and every illustration shown in the game.
I drew Aubrey for the first time even though I hate her.
>>483634703She is skinny as a chicken boneThe only reason Sunny notes that she has a big butt in headspace is cause Sunny is emotionally attractive to her and therefore makes her sexually more appealing in his head.
AIEEEEEEEEE!!! SUNNY-SAMA I KNEEL!!!! PLEASE SPARE ME!!!!!!!
>>483635576Pretty good anonCute hips
>>483635485>>483635786I know that she looks thin in the game, I have eyes, what I mean is what kind of body she would have in real life, considering her lifestyle. She looks like she has the same idealized anime body type that Kim or Polly has.
>>483636002Thanks friend!
pollys pussy
>>483636336I do still imagine she's skinny. I mean it also depends on the Amount of food you eat. Even if a lot of Aubrey's diet is not on the healthy side she surely isn't eating enough of it to become a fat ass like Tucker.
>>483636336I would assume lean overall, given her apparent fondness for baseball and outdoor shenanigans with her friends. How well she eats is unclear, probably heavily dependent on whether her old man's alimony isn't getting spent on alcohol and how much her hooligan friends might be pitching in for her (I imagine she probably goes out to eat pizza with them often). It's probably better than Sunny and Basil's but not as consistently good as Kel or the rest of her friends
https://twitter.com/bearbrandmilkk/status/1806081839490285674
>>483635576That is indeed pretty good
>>483636781I think she would have self-destructive tendencies and wouldn't care what the hell she eats, or if she doesn't even mind going a day without eating. Either way, she would surely burn a lot of calories getting into fights and being outside with her friends all day instead of being in the dumpster she calls home.
>>483634703>>483636336aubrey would definitely be on a food stamps diet, assuming her mother doesn't blow them all on drugs or alcohol. anything else she eats would be her friends footing the bill for tasty but horribly unhealthy pizza and sandwiches, and shoplifted candy. if she didn't roll a 20 on metabolism she'd be at least overweight, but she lucked out and can stay relatively fit and good looking eating practically anything.>>483635576good art, post more when she's finished!
>>483635576for someone you hate you sure draw her cute
>>483637483That's just how naturally cute she is.
>>483634703I’d feed myself to Aubrey so that she can have some meat in her bones
>>483636165was she a good caretaker?
>>483637483>>483637414>>483637316Thanks, I'm glad you like it. I drew her mainly because I didn't really like how Nui drew her in the manga and I foolishly thought I was a better artist than her. But now I see these insufferable westerners doing the same thing, fantasizing about Omocat hiring them to draw the Omori manga and now it makes me feel dirty.
>>483639208now that you hate yourself you should draw yourself because the drawing should turn out cute if your aubrey drawing is precedence
>>483639208You do it out of love anon and that's wonderfulThey do it for "exposure"
>>483639208Stop fucking hating on the art style. You just sound like a salty bitch.
>>483639208your linework is good, really clean and readable for a wip, and so is your grasp of form and anatomy. looking at it makes me want to pick my pencil back up and do another omori drawing.
>>483639159
>>483639208Fr though>See decent manga panel redraws that make the kids look a little less chibified to fit more with a time skip>Artist is an utterly brainrotted "current thing" activist who did it purely to whinge about how there's pedophiles everywhere
>>483639412Then I would draw myself as a cute version of an anti-Semitic caricature of a Jew.>>483639412>>483639378Your post genuinely made me happy. I didn't plan to finish the drawing, because I did it on some old, dirty paper that I had on hand and not in my sketchbook, but for you I will finish this drawing.>>483640010Uhh I don't hate the style, I'm just indifferent to it, although there are panels that I loved. I admit that Nui is probably a better artist than me, I just didn't like the proportions of their Aubrey, but I still think its design is very good.
>>483642301Good to hear anon. You keep on doing you.
>>483641448And other artists draw them intentionally ugly because they despise anime.
To be honest, I hate the whole "based shotacat" shit just as much as the obnoxious twitertards whining about omocat hiring a "LiTerAl PdFiLe". I just don't care about any of it, let me just read my quirky japanese mango about depression
>>483645568Then do it and stop complaining about it on /omog/.
This game made me a pedophile
>>483633453Doubt.Anyway>weird squigglyass linework>mangled handsThere. Happy?
>>483645283Bottom middle one, final answer
>>483646250Kel tummy...
>>483647626Cute Mari, Mari, and Mewo
>>483635576Is that your fucking junior high math homework
>>483647910Where is this rare Mari from?
>>483648065Last thread
>>483647910high school/collage homework is for doodling
>>483646180Was it Dream Aubrey?
>>483647626oh hey! you bought my plush! thank you very much!
>>483648681No it was basil and omori and kel
>>483648345You have to be 18 to post here....
How tall do you think Mari. What is her chest size?
>>483648914I'm over 18...How the fuck do these kids get so get good at drawing. Motherfuckers with 17 in their profiles are drawing shit in under a week and I still can't draw a 3D shapes. and don't get me started on asian artists who's 15 minute doodle in mspaint looks like a fucking painting
is there that picture of all the omog anons still with the couch?
>>483649532They've been drawing shit since they were still in their diapers
>>483648845What do you like about them?
>>483649670I've only recently drawing 1 year ago from being inspired by Omori... Guess I have to keep practicing.
>>483649387Mari doesn't to wear a bra, she only does because she feels young women are supposed to. One time 12-year-old Aubrey forgot her swimsuit, so Mari shared one of hers. The top was a little tight on Aubrey.Mari could do the male swimsuit challenge if she cut her hair.She's a cutie but a flattie
>>483648829She cute
>>483650003>Mari doesn't to wear a bra, she only does because she feels young women are supposed to.Is this something that actualyy happens
>>483649890Yeah, that's just how it goes. A 12 year old that's been practicing and honing their drawing since 5 will naturally be more skilled than a 20 year old who's only been at it for a year.
>>483650175Fair enough
>>483650168It happens because past certain age female nipples poking through shirt become erotic regardless of flatness
>>483649387I like to believe Mari is a late bloomer.She's flat as a board until she isn't.
Test
>>483650870>I like to believe Mari is a late bloomer.This but instead of getting tits or an ass Mari becomes tall and lanky and towers over everyone in faraway.>At least Charline has someone taller than her
>>483650062u cute!
>>483647910No. Don't you use basic math in your adult life?
>>483651430kegg
>>483649532study fundamentals (value, form, shape, etc)study techniques (hatching, cross-hatching, color mixing, how to engage your arm and wrist with your tools to put down long smooth lines, etc)and copy, imitate, trace, and deconstruct everything you like until you understand how the sausage is made and can apply that understanding to create original worksi hated having assignments with stressful deadlines in my final year of high school but one of my teachers was great and really drove me to improve in very healthy effective ways and fostered my passion, structured learning environments and huge volumes of practice really pay off
>>483651996ok i'll try
>>483651474Nobody uses trigonometry in their daily lives unless it's part of their job.
>>483649532this was a dream aubrey i drew back when i posted here a good year or so agoi used paint.net and a brand new 50 dollar drawing tableteveryone starts somewhere, the most important thing is to keep drawing and not be like me (a little bitch) and stop drawing
>>483653102cute, think I'll keep trying.thanks
>>483653102that took me something like 15 minutes>>483653373>>483652205this took me 5 hours to get everything right and not look like trash5 hours and 5 layers on paint.net, when any decent artist can probably crank this out in like 15mins and have it look betterto quote CabronPR: "you're not gonna shit gold on the first go"
Post your MS Paint arts
pseudo reverse IWLH au where Hikkiko finds her way into Snuuy's reality to try to comfort nuy but fails due to literally being a pale imitation of the sister he loved
>>483653606I love him
>>483653606
>>483653550essentially all im trying to say isjust like everything else, you gotta put time into ityou dont have to do what i (mega perfectionist autist) did and spend 5 hours on every single piece (and then burn out and cry), but you do have to put in the time to practice just like everything else, or you'll never get better at itself-depreciation is optional
>>483654075Wicked>>483653881Wow...
>>483647910>>483648914>there are anons over 25 hereShouldn't you be filing taxes or playing bingo with your spouse?
>>483654280I'm just here for the hangman game.
>>483654160 (me)>>483654280im 27east asians tend to marry latemy country's taxes are calculated automatically based on our income (which our employer declares to the government) and the final value is tossed to us via SMS so we can pay it off in like 2 minutesim working on my masters' essays right nowgotta get that education or mari will be disappointed
>>483654624>east asians tend to marry lateget married now old man
>>483641448Not to bring on any drama but rather to prove a point, I find it funny how two faced these people are where one day, they like it. Then the other, they hate it because they were told to. Seen it plenty of times but now I got personal proof. Pretty sure the original tweet is gone.
>>483654624Don't disappoint big sister There will be consequences
>>483654706Ps. FUCK this new captia. Was nearly impossible to complete
>>483654706>Sunny editI guess that's not bad>Kel editThat Kel needs longer arms, that's something I liked from the manga >Basil editwhy did he become retarded?
>>483654705the average age of marriage here is like 31>>483654860hello fellow oldie who came back after a long timethe captcha has been this for actual years now>>483654810yeah... she's been disappointed once before...>>483653606i have one more paint.net pic from way before before i shifted to clip studio paintthis is with heavy referencing to the omori trailer mari
>>483655092The kel pic is unedited. Funny how in the tweet above the sunny edit (probably now deleted) he said the style was always ass. Such a two-faced gaslighting mindset.
>>483655382are you the lesbian who turned ungay
>>483655568>this style is HEAT>wait the artist is a what now?>i hate the art style so much nowno separation of art from author, no separation of fiction from reality>>483655993im a guya bi guy but a guy nonetheless
I love Kimsil but I love YOU even more!!!!!
>>483657716143
>>483659297I'm glad Sunny managed to make a few friends in the city.
twitter artists are so jealous of japanese media
>>483657716Insert numeric version of 'stfu faggot'
>>483657716i hope you're doing ok kimsilanonfairly certain most of the previous anons left and were replaced by new anons
Pbbbbt.
>>483660306
>>483655993I'm the "lesbian" you're looking forI'm not a femanon goddammit, I was joking about hot Aubrey art making me not gay
>>483632220Shouldn't we add a manga link to the template?
>>483662747Radiating Strong Feminine Energy
>>483639059
>>483653606i mostly stopped using paint because it was too limited and time consuming but i still like some of the things i drew with it
Which character would you want to get vored by?
>>483666376>t.Whale
>>483666376DREAM AUBREY!!!!!
>>483666376Perfectheart
>>483666376Miss Candice
>>483667228This is why your mom left you with your father Jesse
>>483666376Omori, because he's cruel enough to actually enjoy it.
Post Crossovers
>>483666376Hero or Bowen
>>483667908Would they get along?
Sir you have to be over 18 to be on this site.
>>483668137Depends on which Miku
>>483668739Tell me which ones there are
>>483667908I would post that lobotomy corporation picture, but I have see lost it.
eepy
>>483659297Fairest Beauty in all of Headspace
>>483669576Which one? There's a fair few.
I'm going to attempt to make a OMORI demo so I can learn raylib. Let's see how fast it takes me to burn out and give up.
>>483671026Goo luck
i love snnnnnnnyyyyyyy................ so cute ad soft and hishair looks so flufy...........wish i coud give him huugs and snnggles..... cute...cute (i like this drawing because snakes are my favorite animal)
>>483672632Control yourself Mari!
>>483672632cute creature appears to suffer from brain worms, x-rays show he is merely afflicted with worm brains, more news at 11
real omori fans:
>>483675463Omori worshippers scarifice birds to their lord
Sunflower CUTE!Sunflower CANON!Sunflower THE BEST!
WAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
>>483685919sunflower is the holy truth
>>483685919Such fine knowledge...
You’re Black Mari
>>483651570No matter how you look at it, this leg is NOT hot. There's nothing remarkable about it aside from the topping. It's rather stubby and ungraceful, really.I wonder what's the story behind the pic: was it snagged from leddit or somesuch for the purpose of the pun, or was some 4chan tranny so enamored with their new lady-fat they decided to show it off?
>snagged from tumblrOf course it was
>>483669931The one where he was an anomaly in a containment cell.
So the manga really went wrong
https://poipiku.com/9167952/9920652.html
Seems like Oto's redraw of the panel is getting tractionhttps://x.com/otomerson/status/1806170945721110658?t=QLSAmiyaO1B0_n2hhUN5lQ&s=19
>>483696339I think this is the one.
>In one Universe, Sunny's mother kicks Sunny out of the house because Sunny keeps spending her hard earned money on gacha games like Nikke>In another universe, Mari's grades are slipping, and she keeps spending all her time schlicking it JJK Yaoi. Her University roommate fucking hates her
>>483698923eugh
>>483698923at least oto is saying that their not trying to fizx the art they ust wanted to draw it
>>483698923what happened to not talking about the manga anymore
IWLH updated
>>483700309
>>483700453
>>483700441https://archiveofourown.org/works/31107491/chapters/144808450
https://twitter.com/FireIGuess/status/1805843019167678729
how is sunny going to juggle his dates with basil and aubery in this episode
>>483701086
scrolling through the "omorimanga" hastag on twitter im starting to notice what anons have said about people redrawing the art and calling tnhe mangaka a pedophile while doing so
>>483701086>>483701253really cute
>>483701261What the fuck was Omofat thinking? This shit was totally preventable. If she didn't want this to happen, why didn't she just pick an artist with slightly less blatant paederastic energy, or just tell them to put in mininal effort to replicate the game's style?
20 year old Madotsuki x 16 year old Sunny
>>483649827Innocent boy butts
>>483702820https://files.catbox.moe/4ynrdf.jpgshe should be older
>>483702991Cute
>>483702719she knows what she wants
I'm starting to think the cat bitch is either terminally retarded, or more likely, she WANTED the controversy even at the expense of the Jap artist who now has to deal with the outpouring of hate from crazy Westerners. What a cunt.
>>483662747
>>483703770i think shes at the point where she just dosent care about the drama anymore and is just gonna do whatever she wants its fucking twitter, even if they do doxx her then nothing will fucking happen because they are too lazy to do anything besides sit on their ass and complain and draw
Youre just jealous of Otomerson because she draws better than all the artanons here and has real talent.
>>483704167Stop replying to the discord user
bullying my favorite twitch streamer Jawsh by posting about omori in his chat
>>483700238That's not what oto said. They said that they probably won't talk about the next chapter. They never brought up the first one or the art.
>>48370282016 year old Sunny x 12 year old Madotsuki
16 year old basil x 12 year old sunny
>>483704369Take your schizo pills
>>483704914sunny calls her mommy sometimes by accident
If you want to ragebait to get your daily kick go do it in a gacha game general like /gig/ or /hsr/ where there’s a constant flux of posts. Doing that in a dead general like here where it gets constantly pushed to page 8 because of inactivity is just sad.
>>483704854Sunny still tops
>>483705423basil cant do anything right
Someone is calling out all of the hypocrites that hate the art style but white wash Kel and Hero
>>483706180it sounds like their just callin out the original mangaka in this post
basil tastes good
>>48370485427 year old basil x 12 year old fem sunny
>>483707771this is why sunflowerfags should get decapitated (it's a blackspace reference)
>>483707771that fem sunny design fucking blows
what about 16 year old sunny x 12 year old basil
>>483707736Why does Omori like to eat him so much?
>>483708235why Basil acts like Nagito Komaeda
>>483707508Is that Herodog?
>>483653881Cute >>483654075Funny>>483659297Sexy>>483662747This is a blue board anon>>483666120Very silly
>>483708216Basil tops
>>483712207your saying sunny would let dreamworld basil take him?
>>483712370YesIt is well known that Basil is very penis
>>483713309Get off of the computer Haru
>>483713437ok
Damn, this fandom is fucking stupid
>>483714169been like this since the start honestly
>>483714338This place is probably the least stupid compared to other social media where it's always drama and polshit
>>483714595>where it's always drama and polshitAnon...
>>483714595oh yeah even omocat knows it (my evidence for this is that she played plok before) we are LITERALLY the only ones in the fandom who like her
snuuy uses domain expansion
>>483714887>we are LITERALLY the only ones in the fandom who like herAre you a newfag? This is the only place that doesn't care about the shots stuff but "omojew" is a popular stance here. She's not well liked here also for only doing events in California and Japan and anons have complained about her lack of direct involvement with the Omori brand in 2024. She's a greedy edgelord from California that met the right team and got lucky.
>>483698923Every single redraw without fail hasn't managed the same appeal as the new style in favor of rehashing what they've already seenThis really is an underage fanbase
>>483716112Aubrey tanked it
>>483716262>She's not well liked here also for only doing events in California and JapanCalifornia based artist does California based event
>>483716535What is the appeal of the new style?
>>483716712You say that then get accused of rage baiting. Just wait for the US Omori cafe to be announced in LA and this place will turn into /pol/ complaining about "commiefornia." It happens everytime.
>>483716974sex
>>483717051people are so stupid she doesnt do stuff in california because le politics shes does stuff in california because ITS WHERE SHE LIVES YOU RETARDS
>>483716974>>483717071I mean the literal character design appeal with pushing the "cute" proportions and small tells of personality, which I think is done a lot better than the original art (Kel's eyes are now personality indicators which is a neat trick all the "character artist experts" have yet to notice)
>>483667908
>>483718194But this image isn't the style that the manga is taking
>>483721645Yes because that's not the manga art thanks for noticingI'm too lazy to highlight art book to talk about what I mean but the manga so far plays with the eye shapes more like this, compared to the og game where they all have the exact same eyes and moreso use eyebrows to tell the difference
>>483698923>>483722281If we compare it to the oto art which I feel bad about doing bc I actually like oto's shit but I'm already digging myself a hole we can see that Sunny's eyes never fully open which helps sell his emotions but at the cost of a really weird third panel where his eyes somehow gain a soft quality the rest of his panels tell us he doesn't have, resulting in that 'this looks like a different character' complaint I've seen on /omog/ a lot in the pastAnd the elephant in the room that Kel has a shrunken fuckin head
>>483698923Its nice to see that Kel doesn't look like a nip and has muscles again. The manga butchered Kel.
>>483725046Just BURSTING with muscles, muscle-bound, that's Kel alright
>>483725284He's not a stick figure. Look at any RW images outside of Sunny's POV, including promotional material that has RW kel.
>>483725284He's not as skinny as Sunny.
>>483725506Anon we can both cherrypick all we want but I think fanart has severely impaired your mental image of these characters
>>483725284>>483725506He does get more musculature in the promo artwork outside of game, as well as the addition of the leg hair he never had but i think he's supposed to be a lean musculature character in general
Doesn't look like a twig here.
>>483725284Lanky Kel my beloved >Realistically he would be pretty lanky with that sudden of a growth spurt. Wonder how much his bones ached during those growing pains
>>483726617Anon.......
>>483726617yeah actually he does look a lot bigger than sunny and aubrey
>>483726708You must get your size standards from /fit/. Not everyone has to be a Baki character to be considered muscular. Especially for a high school, Kel has muscle.
>>483727145So should he be muscular or not? It sounds like you're arguing just to argue at this point
>>483726617>>483727364I just think it's hilarious that people (both here and on twitter) are calling manga Kel less muscular when Nui is actually drawing MORE defined musculature, just because his noodle arms are simply thicker in certain game scenes and promo art.
>>483728361I think the problem is his massive head. The proportions of the body might be okay but if the head is giant then he's gonna look like a little kid anyways.
https://files.catbox.moe/ffxdy1.png
>>483726617You can't tell me that this or any of the promotional images have a better art style than the manga.
>>483730582It has a better art style than the manga.
>>483730582yeah thats way better than the manga i dont hate the manga art style but i think the melty lines look bad and kel and aubrey should look older
>>483730659>>483730830Found the twitter they/thems
>>483730582I am telling you that.Also it doesn't matter if the art style is "better" or "worse", the manga is supposed to look like the game it's based on.
>>483731084>the manga is supposed to look like the game it's based on.You're right, they should have used sprite art
>>483731084When did omocat advertise the manga being a 1 for 1 representation of the game? Can you find that for me and yourself if you don't want your point to be null.
>>483730582Omocat's style makes them look like teenagers (which they are) while Nui's makes them look like elementary school kids
>>483731554Elementary school kids as tall as a doorframe and with leg hair
>>483731693Yes it's creepy.
>>483731693Cut out the body and every frame from the manga looks like it's from a manga about 10 year olds. Do the same for omocata art style and they still look like teens that are about to be adults. Idk if you played the game but most of the cast is 16 during the game, not 10.
>>483731910>Yes it's sexy.
>>483731525>>483731084watching 4chan arguments where everybody is drawing stupid black and white lines makes me feel so fucking old at this point holy shitinstead of talking about "muh advertising" "muh 1:1" you can both point to the facts that>If you insist it should look 1:1 we've had preview art for months so why are you suprised>Omocat and Nui were not upfront about changes, but both have interviews out now saying that it's a new look and new take>which is also reflected in the plot being different>Omori's never had great consistency from the start, promo art looks different from the game art looks different to the sprite art looks different from the merch looks different from the manga looks different from the fanworks looks different from the mental apparition of a 9 foot tall sunny at the foot of your bed at 3 am
>"THE MANGA ADAPTATION OF A GAME WITH A CUTESY ARTSTYLE ALSO HAS A CUTESY ARTSTYLE WEAAAAAHHHH!!"
>Yes he should look more like his in game self >No actually what I meant was he should look like his promo self outside of the game
>>483732332No one is surprised retard.I just don't care for the art style, never did.
>>483732639And what do you hope to accomplish?
What is this new drama?
>>483732718What?
>>483732332>tfw no mental apparition of a 9 foot tall sunny at the foot of your bed at 3 amFeels bad man.
>>483732818The Moonatic and Yiik crossover is canceled
>>483732818local retard (discord raider) is physically unable to process that people can dislike parts of the manga without being a twitter faggot who wants to cancel omocat
>>483733052NOONOT MIIKATIC
>>483733124Local smart man (not discord retard) yells at voices in walls
>>483732818A single anon disliked the manga art style, another anon disagrees strongly, shitflinging starts.
>Many of the artists working for the magazine used to publish amateur doujinshi and were influenced by lolicon amateur manga. Sharon Kinsella claims that around half of all series featured in Afternoon between 1994 and 1997 were inspired by lolicon aesthetics. She lists Discommunication, Gunsmith Cats, Assembler 0X, Seraphic Feather, Aqua ańd Oh! My Goddess as examples.[5]holy shit this gets funnier and funnier the more i look into itliterally>Shota inspired artist>Shota inspired mangaka>Shota inspired magazine>West Coast Twitter kids : "Why does this feel like shota"
>>483734294Most of those twitter kids are from Europe or a flyover state. They bitch even more than this place about every omocat event being in California
>guy bitching about the artstyle was from the sharty the whole timeHonestly should've seen that one coming
>>483734294Apparently loli=shota now and 20 something men are gay for little boys
>>483734893Apparently lolisho =/= lolisho nowaubrey's pretty clearly a loli
>>483734893>20 something men are gay for little boysLiterally me
Where’s my quirky RPG about depression with a oppaloli character?
>>483735005Aubrey isn't a loli since she's not sexualized
>>483735171There was going to be Moonatic but
>>483735005It's a fucking seinen magazine. Seinen means "young adult man", because that's the magazine's target demographic.
>>483735386Yes, lolisho is a thing for japanese adults
>>483735506Men like loli, not shota. It's not a shota inspired magazine, that's an incredible stretch.
>>483735705It's also not a stretch that somebody who likes loli would see a book with loli and shota and not get utterly fucking confused like you're implying
>>483735705>Men like loli, not shotaSpeak for yourself
>>483735942AFAIK, none of the series listed are shota inspired. They're bishoujo manga with some lolis in them.
the fuck are you retards arguing about?
>>483736416Would you be happier if i said "Shota Adjacent" or used "Lolisho" in the first place? Because it seems like you're arguing to argue rather than focusing on the point
i need a shota to own my soul
PMS Mari. How would Hero deal with it? How would she be like?
>>483736528You're on a Japanese inspired forum. GTFO if you don't want references to Japanese culture
>Hey guys look this manga does shota shit all the time and people are suprised it did shota?>EXCUSE YOU THIS IS A FUCKING LOLI MAGAZINE YOU PHILISTINEactually based
>>483736908You're on an anonymous forum. GTFO if you dont want people to bitch at you for acting like a retard
>>483736213fags aren't men
>Unironic pedofags in the thread with us right now
I hate faggots so fucking much and I'm not even kidding
What the fuck is this retard arguing about?
Hi miss programmer
Why are Sunsetfags like this?
Loli and Shots are for neckbeards, trannies, fat people, and mentally I'll fags
>>483736579They are not "shota adjacent", they are barely loli adjacent. For example, Ah! My Goddess is a typical bishoujo romcom manga for men where the main guy and girl are young adults, and the main loli is a side character. Gunsmith Cats has a notable lolibaba, but the main heroine is a voluptuous adult woman and there are barely any men in the comic, much less shota. The original statement from the quoted wikipedia article was a stretch to begin with.
Indogs are the worst kind to post here
>>483737207>>483737538>"This is /omog/, sir."
Alright, can you settle your heated shota/loli debate already?
>>483737664No you see, it's pedo FAGS I have a problem with. Pedo straights are totally fine.
>>483737548This depends on how the original book which is notably a western look from the fucking 2000's even defines lolicon
>>483737548What is bishoujo and lolibaba meanb?
basil still wears diapers
>>483739280>Fetish shitWhat kind of adult wears diapers past being a kid?
woa bunces cute
>>483739409i agree. bunches cute.
>>483739409verypost stinky girls
>>483739394Women
>>483739409Mad butcher Bunches
>>483739394Crazy old people, fags with a loose anus, and women (menstrual pads are just glorified diapers)
>>483739872>>483739982Why?
>>483739982i think you mean omori pins are just glorified diapers lmao
Rare Cris artAny other rare Cris art?
>>483740209here you go, a Cris
>>483731693I mean the faces not the bodies
>>483740351Fishy
>>483739834not sure if aubrey counts, but most of the bunches art i have saved also has aubrey in it
>>483740664That’s the best kind of bunches art
>>483740051Periods and they just have weaker bladder's than men. Pro tip, never make a joke about women diaper's. My ex nearly killed me for doing so.
>>483740664>relationship with aubrey be it lesbian or otherwise thats the worst kind of bunches art
Manga redraw by someone who likes the manga
>>483740873>exnone of you ever had lovers
>>483740935is this better for you then (i only like sunflower if it involves a female)
>>483741390Someone is jealous. Go to /homog/ and you'll even find anons from here that have kids and still post on this website. Don't get mad that you're lonely.
>>483741603>/homog/go away gays. thats a fag containment area.
>>483741534yes>i only like sunflower if it involves a femalegigantopithicusly based
>>483740151>>483741390>t. seething diaper-wearing femoid
>>483742050>newfag dosent know about the omori pin incident
>>483742050Whats a femoid?
How did this thread become worse than the last one?
there was a omori general this entire time?cooli'll start browsing the old threads through the archives.btw what do you guys think of the recent manga drama?
I don't like the new artstyle because it makes Basil look too cute to spank...
>>483745515Read the thread and you'll see. Overall most anons here hate canceling anyone and will back the person being canceled. Some anons don't like the art style other anons do. Both sides are loud here.
>>483685919Sunflower in practice
Go play the sunburn modhttps://mods.one/mod/pinktintedlove
>>483745515Cute Mari
>>483746373no i do not wanna read 10 paragraphs about them talking about a ham and pepper jelly sandwich
>>483746373I still wonder about that statue in the pond.>10 paragraphs about them talking about a ham and pepper jelly sandwichI will now play the mod
>>483744786Someone released a bot on it or is doing his best to achieve a comparable level of retardation
>>483746864Well it is Summer
>>483746835>doxing a minor They probably use Robux since they aren't old enough for a bank account.
>>483746590seriously though sunny is pretty ooc in that he talks so much i get hes mentally healing and growing up and shit and hed be less quiet but this is way too much in the opposite direction
>>483746835And yet it still looks better than the manga "art" KEK!!!!
>>483747314Why don't you send them some Robux to redraw it then
You stop that.
Some of you are actually fucking retarded. Don't do that shit.
>>483685919such powerful wisdom...
retard momentlets stick to the brown haru one and moonie
I bet its that same retard before who did it. Take a shower and fuck off from here forever.
>>483746835I know "le epic 4channers" think theyre better than everyone but what he said isnt even that bad. Who gives a fuck, youre just as bad as the xitter tards with this shit.
>>483746835you cant say this and then not post the redraw
This just sounds like some Discord tranny seething at someone and using 4chan to do their dirty work. You even talk like a caricature of what people think 4chan outside of /pol/ sounds like.
BPDsil my beloved...
>>483749092omog did those exact things at some point actually
>>483749280It was one retarded fuck and everyone knows who it was.
I actually preferred it when /omog/ was a bit more slower than having all the unironically fucked up people come back from the early days. Some of you need therapy or some shit.
>>483749607
>>483749786*just* some of us?
>>483749847>completely nonsensical image reply
>>483749786i'm just trying to post good art :c
>>483749847And I never said it was a good thing back then. Im saying its probably the exact same person doing it again because hes a schizo.
>>483749786I've been on this site a while but new to /omog/. How fucked up were the early days?
ehehe
>>483750281quitedon't ask
I really, really, really, really like this image
>>483750281The anon people are referring to above involved in that incident would probably be arrested if the person affected actually reported it. So yeah dont ask. It was fucked up even by the low fuck ass standards of this site.
>>483750281It was mostly just more direct drama and beef with people on twitter and fanfic authors (kokomi, Heromari, etc.) Over time I feel like people developed the good sense to just not bother (or all the shitstirrers eventually got bored and left) but with the manga exposing the game to a wider audience and renewing interest I feel like certain people are coming here and noticeably affecting thread quality.
Man I hate Summer
>>483750281Still above /b/ or /pol/ for sure but there was stuff like shipping wars and drama (yes like those teenage girls from tumblr, but in 4chan), stuff like a woman shoving Omori pins up her pussy until she bled from it, porn of real people to piss them off, people really dedicated to spamming specific things all day, it was weird
>>483750859rule #1 don't talk about fight clubrule #2 DON'T talk about fight clubSeriously though just lurk moar
>Maromi Ika had to post the anti shipper article again>Talking about racism against artistsWhat the fuck happened this time?
>>483751294Usual shit on Twitter. What do you expect?
>>483751294a lot of artists are getting harassed by antis again and some of it has turned into some antis being so terminally online that theyre automatically saying being an asian artist means youre a pedo. no one learned from when that one omori artist tried to take her own life because of some joke she made with her friends that got leaked.
>all that shit is still upIf it bothers you guys so much why don’t you report it?
>>483750281it was a lot of fun dumbass shit but at the same time there was shipping fags (almost always sunflower and sunburn with suntan and sunshine taking every opportunity to make fun of them) fighting eachother all kinds of shit happened back then >the nutso ass omori femanons one of which shoved a pin of omori into her period blood filled vagina>lotta smut greentexts >lotta outside drama involving kokomi (blob porn lmao) heromari snazzy and some others>a lot more artfags which i do miss >the appi stream where someone donated 200 dollars to say sunburn kimsil double date which not only spawned a funny ass meme but got the donator to ragequit the fandom (i bet hes one of the people shitting up the place right now actually) >some basilfag (no idea if its the same one who now has a wife and child) was getting stalked for a while and some dude named wither was involved>starting the entire kimsil and sunfish ships >omega fallon and the katetastrophie >mandella effecting kel gaming into thinking he was a good writer >otomerson came here at one point and people actually kinda liked her fic before she went full retard with it >sunny really liking plok to the point where omocat played it (very likely she came here at least once) >that one blue guy who made sunny becomes furious getting laughed out of the room when he came here trying to think of what else of note
>>483752467Erm, actually: The sunburn kimsil double date donated $1 and pissed off the /neg twitterite.The guy who donated $200 was a seething Basilfag and he got mad because the donation became pointless after Aubrey took first place while Basil took second Kel got second actually lol Basil got third
Would Omocat be likely to have browsed 4chan even before /omog/? I thought she was a Tumblr girl.
>>483752817yeah thats probably right its been a while
>>483752467Wasn't there some "/omog/ sings My Time" event, and the Buttermilk incident (r34 of some minor's OC that I think was specifically requested to not be drawn), and also I think Aozora (Moonatic guy and renowned creep) may have come here and we decided Moonie should be femSunny/Haru's friendAnd also a couple of Hunger Games simulations done with random characters>>483752867Those things are not necessarily mutually exclusive
>>483752467BlueTenit got mad because his shitty fic had Sunny's daughter named "Little Mari" and when he found out about /omog/'s Mary he thought we had copied him, then when he found out we did it first he didn't want to admit Mary was a better name and threw a tantrum
>>483753147>Those things are not necessarily mutually exclusiveWhy not? Those two hate each other and Tumblr is all gay SJWs isnt it?
>>483739409Just about the cutest
>>483753381Still hilarious that he basically nuked his entire online presence and became entirely irrelevant after trying to larp as a microceleb
>>4837534834chan can be a safe space for gay sjws. visit /cm/
>>483753381I mean to be fair there’s like 5 or 6 different Little Mari’s/Mary/Melody/ etc. it’s not exactly a hard concept to think of.
>>483753483>>483753147Old tumblr was full of extremely vindictive and vengeful retardst. my friend was doxxed by tumblr once
To be fair, OMORI is basically Homestuck without superpowers>oh noooo he ignored me so i'll bully him for yearsOnly difference is that in Homestuck they kill each other instead
>>483754183Also irony, there’s a lot more irony
>>483752817Imagine being that guy
>>483749092It’s someone pretending to be a discord troon to ragebait people and shilling controversial figures like oto. literally the local shitstirrer’s schtick here.
>>483754502Never forget
>>483753698There's even a Little Mari as Mari!
>>483755554U
>>483753147oh yeah i can say more>multiple /omog/ my time events, the first one went fine but the second instead of having omog images flash up on screen it was just a bunch of mid twitter memes and reaction images because he thought everything in here was "soulless" where he then got rightfully bullied out of the general >toothgap mari>azoras weirdly widespread connections over the fandom including:>getting CnDed by omocat herself for making twitch stream donation money using kel (holy fuck that voice was annoying) sunny and basil >making a bunch of (surprisingly really good) paizuri art of mari and shota omori while samefagging as a new artist >trying to make his own shittier omori focused on escapism vr i guess and somehow successfully got kokomi to draw a shit ton of fanart of his characters for basically free>at this same time he also was trying to be her e boyfriend and bought her a vr headset >that game probably had a new charatcre every time youd see concept art for it but moonie, one of the main ones had a bunch of porn drawn of her because literally everyone in the thread (including myself) at the time thought it would be funny to make art and greentexts of her being publicly raped to fuck with azora (also she had boobies) which basically segmented her as another thread oc down the line >for some fucking reason one of our artfags also tried to be kokomis e boyfriend which led to another person leaking almost (i say almost because some of it was out already) her entire nsfw art folder because she wouldnt draw him blob porntheres still so much more shit i need my memory jogged on
dont forget about our queen hornydaddy
>>483755996The whole Kaiko was Aozora revelation is still flooring to me. It's such an out there connection to exist.
>>483722281What the fuck are you on about? They all have the exact same eyeshape in the manga, it just varies slightly between panels when characters emote and because the mangaka can't stay on model. We exchanged Omocat's cutesy sameface for Nui's cocksucking sameface, which is even more samey than Omocat's art because it ignores subtle differences from the game like Kel's mouth being wider than the other kids' or Sunny being perpetually dead-eyed and half-lidded. Nui's Sunny doesn't even look like Sunny with how much he emotes and all the retarded "OwO what's this" expressions she draws. Basil also doesn't look like Basil, she made the headspace version who's supposed to be sweet and innocent look like a seamon demon. Teenage Aubrey used stand out from the others including her younger self because of her piercing tsurime, now they ALL have tsurime. Teenage Kel's eyes and head are so huge he now looks like a 12 year old girl.This shit is an actual downgrade.
>>483756316I can post twitter screencaps, too
You know... I'm just noticing... In the introduction panel for Basil... He has a tranny face...
>>483756784its not like i can post hornydaddys art here i would get banned
>>483756945Hornydaddy's drawn stuff you can post in a blue board
who is hornydaddy?
I have a ugly prototype of a main menu done. Maybe.Should I make a dialogue system first or deal with character movement around the map first? I'll try to post here to hold myself accountable for progress for this OMORI prototype.
>>483757509The first or loudest enjoyer of Basil being miserable, drew lots of art of Basil getting raped by basically everything in the game. Threw a fit when someone replaced Basil for Aubrey in one of her drawings, later had her account banned and moved on to MHA, then Hazbin Hotel as of now.
>>483757818I still don't know what you're trying to achieve or prove here.
>>483757818Maybe dialogue first. Seems like a good thing to get down.
>the one janny who hated sunburn so much he would 3 day you if you posted aubrey which we actually fucking managed to get kicked off the 4chan mod team i think what happened if there was either some weird day where nobody could get banned or there were just so many people but:>we actually manage to get the janny kicked off the mod team by spamming this one innocent to anyone else aubrey image when he banned (or tried to) ban so many people in one day one of the main mods saw it and kick him off >that one thread where everyone just started posted their dicks as catbox links (i was one of them) which almost got the whole general deleted>the buttermilk incident where some dude from here made a mod of another thread oc (basically a bratty little sister to sweetheart which would lust over omori like how SH did to hero) and the celilyspace mod creator basilly shat on him for it and mocked him by making a better (soulless) version of it which was then responded to by some dude who drew celiy sticking her ass through a gloryhole fence >he also drew moonie at some point but just to fuck with him a bunch of people said moonie was a minor which made him go insane because he was terrified of being canceled
>>483757991Didnt she randomly start to hate sunny out of nowhere?
>>483758170I should've gave more context outside of >>483671026I've made some OMORI mods in the past and I hated the experience(mainly due to JavaScript). I'm going to make prototype game like OMORI just using a framework that lets me read input, draw to a window, and play music. I found that modding OMORI might even be harder than just making a fangame from scratch.I just want to see how fast I can get a working proof of concepts of OMORI's game systems without RPG Maker MV. I'll just post some updates here to keep me accountable but I'll stop if that's considered "annoying."
>>483758703I don't think it's annoying. I just don't know why you're wasting your time with this.
>>483758884Not sure, it's a waste of time for that anon. They are working on a skill. Coding for fun is probably more productive than most things that a typical anon does, AKA shitpost and argue.
>>483758703That’s neat anon.>>483758884Don’t be so rude.
Wow
I forgot how entertaining these Avvy screencaps were, the right mix of interesting and unhinged
>>483759916How would Sunny fare in the fabricated world?
>>483762225Sunny falls asleep on the Final Stage and dreams a happy dream he never wakes from
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>>483764034Bunches loves her bagel One eyed monster
Sleepy medicine
>>483753967I still wonder how much of it migrated to Twitter sometimes, I think a lot of users took off after the admins 1. Banned pronogaphy and 2. Tried to enforce it with an early neural network/AI that took down posts at random (and failed to notice actual porn bots) while 3. Having appeals for the process also be automated by poorly trained AI>>483765083Her favorite trampoline>>483766819He is being executed
>>483758884Gives me something to do that's better than laying in bed all day.Player movement is done. I'm probably going to set up a basic party system then attempt to get mapping working.I'll try to post updates that I find interesting from now on. Hopefully I have more to share as days go by. No promises. This is way funner than modding. This at least keeps me engaged.
>>483768812Video attached.
>>483768812Which mods did you used to work on?
>>483769096which language are you using? From what I can see that looks like C or C++ but I might be wrong
still still tired
>>483769516talk to your friends
>>483769516Play on a trampoline
>>483768812>going to set up a basic party systemthis is gonna sound retarded but what if you made pikmin in omori
>>483769275 Maybe I'll talk about it another time. >>483769490Nim. It's kinda like a compiled Python. It's like Python and TypeScript. Very fast and fun to develop in(IMO). A lot of metaprogramming abilities which makes coding fun for me.
>>483770260Can you talk about it now? I'm only here for the manga and will probably not return. My brainrot for this game is pretty dead.
>>483740351I'll just use this
>>483770827cute little fishy in the sea
>>483769815
>>483770590Nta but the number of people who have worked on multiple Omori mods and are willing to post on 4chan is not many.
>>483770590 I made two mods for myself to learn modding.I then got in as a programmer for Requiem and worked with someone else I knew. Requiem fell apart due to writers not being able to find the time to write and one of the leaders getting caught up with their personal life before my skills were needed. My friend bailed on me due to personal issues. I've wiped my old hard drive and never shared the 2 mods I made to learn RPG Maker. I just never enjoyed the process of using the engine and every team I've been in fell apart.
>>483771643>RequiemMy condolences. This looks good though. Good luck on it.
post art
>>483773232Pet pet
>>483757416>cheerleaderBasil...bunches?
>>483774830Styled by an expert bunch stylist
Post cute hats
>>483741390We're not all kissless virgins, you know
>>483775653>Haru dresses basil up in cute/sexy outfits then bounces on his trampoline
>>483778025I know what you mean, but I also like the image of provocative cheerleader Basil both embarrassed yet apathetically cheering on Haru who's ecstatically bouncing on a trampoline
Portable cheerleader
>>483781212How stinky?
>>483781625Depends on how hot it gets outside
Don't you like your gift?
>>483672632UUUOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOH
>>483728287dumb creature
>I won't let him updatedFuck yeah!
>>483750397Well shit happens. To be fair, Sunny shouldn't have abandoned him.
>>483786187sunny didnt deserve that...
>>483786121Sentiment echoed
>>483786121 Mari won't let him out of the house after that...
>>483788409She's going to flip out. I wonder if she's going to blame someone...or herself.
>>483639817momaso
SOMEBODY SAVES THEM
>>483792154They need a hero
>>483793083Dork
>>483793769Every Aubrey a cute Auby
Can Sweetheart fart?
>>483788409She won’t let him
>>483797003shes hunched over though
I cook for Sunny
>>483797260She's not that smart
>>483796950ba dum crash
>>483797340EAT
>>483797340the swarm
Whatever will make him happy again?
>>483798378He needs his special candies
>>483798378Therapy Mariblob that lost her Snuuy.
>>483798734They're good at that.
>>483798378Steak, just not microwaved steak
Do you want your own cat maid?
this is one of the worst threads we've had in a while and i worry that this will be the new normal
>>483799825>worst threadI have seen far worse than this
>>483799825It seems like we've calmed down. It could be a time of day thing.
>>483796950What are some Omori fics where there’s a title drop somewhere in the story?
>>483798927Therapy or losing Snuuys?
>>483800061Drying on the Steps
>>483800173Huh...I can't think of any fics that title drop asides from this one
>>483800492>Sunny becomes FURIOUS
>>483799825>>483799980It's because of the summer, old and newfags returning because of the manga, and retards derailing it. We will go back to our daily schedule eventually.
>>483802628Left: Pedophilic sloppaRight: SOVL
Why did the manga turn Sunny into a pussy?
>>483803251He killed his sister
>>483800131Yes
>Mari, I can't do this anymore. Sunny's dead. You need to accept that. If you can't, then I'm afraid we can't be together anymore.
It’s Brandi time
>>483803251Because 4 years in his house made him a fucking pussy
>>483804058When I read this, I imagined Dub Nishiki saying it.
>>483800492>Hero puts a wig on Sunny>"You're back, Mari"
Mewo watching Omori masturbate in White Space
>>483804163Makes me think of Sunny having a nice chat with him over some ramen at a restaurant when he ends up confessing having spent 4 years as a hikki and Nishiki just instantly thinks to Kazuma spending years in the big house, goes from a sympathetic "oh man, spending 4 years in the house-" into screaming "MADE YOU A FUCKING PUSSY" and suckerpunching Sunny so hard he goes flying across the room, then storming out of the place to look for unfortunate random lesser thugs to take his sudden anger out on
>>483802897Funny you say that. Does manga Omori make you feel all tingly inside?
>>483654706fuck off
>>483810301uuohhhhhhhhhh!!!
https://x.com/its_omocat/status/1806615663554748506?t=avraQ99F6TPZfZCkyls_1A&s=19
>>483818024
>>483828163Anime in 2-3 years is pretty much guaranteed then?
>>483829556No.
>>483829556Yes
>>483829556Maybe
>>483829556I dont fucking know, the anime industry is turning like almost every mildly succesful manga in a anime.But Omocat is also mildly incompetent and she could get scammed
>>483833124Everybody knows that you don’t scam a scammer. That shit’s not going to fly.
>>483833124>I dont fucking knowCan you repeat the question
Now that I'm thinking about it, it would probably make more sense for Mari to vanish instead of Basil.First of all, I think this could give the game's anti-escapism message a bit more... weight, ig? Sure, Sunny can dream up a world where his sister is alive and well all he wants, but the reality of his situation will make itself known by ripping the imaginary Mari away from himSecondly, it'd allow Basil to be a playable party member. The picnics could be hosted by Hero instead (which IMO would make a lot more sense since he's the team's chef) and Basil would just replace him in that case lol. Dude needed more time in the spotlightThirdly, I think it'd make Omori's journey more personal. I doubt he'd be able to simply make his friends forget her the same way he made them forget Basil in the original game :)Alternatively, Mari could be made into the damsel in distress Sunny rescues time and time again to alleviate his guilt over his inability to prevent her suicide - make her the Princess Peach to Omori's Mario, so to speak. Maybe she could end up being snatched away by some other villain (or just separated from Omori and co. by happenstance) right before the gang could save her. Because of course the running theme of Omori not being fast enough to help his sister wouldn't be meant to reflect anything about Sunny himself, prommy :)Finally, Mari's absence from Headspace wouldn't really change it all that much desu. You can bash me by citing the Thematic Relevance™ of her presence all you want, but it's undeniable the only noteworthy thing she does is just Sitting There near the save points. I admit that making Mari a plot device to kickstart Headspace's plot wouldn't be the most optimal way to make her relevant either, but at least it'd be something (pun partially intended)
>>483834050almost the entirety of headspace doesnt contribute anything to be honest
>>483834948Fucking moron
Someone should write a fic where Omori takes over Sunny’s body after the game and comes back to Faraway Town disguised as a different person after his friends abandoned him.
>>483835124the existance of headspace does but the majority of the things you do in headspace mean nothing
>>483837340Without Headspace, none of the interactions Sunny has with his friends in the real world have any impact. There’s a reason why the manga switching Headspace and Faraway’s introduction was met with heavy criticism.
boober
>>483838176bobr
>>483837850as i saidheadspace existing the way it does means a lot but everything you actually DO in there doesnt mean anythingfighting spaceboygoing through sweethearts castle all that stuffi LIKE headspace but it does kind of make a lot of segments feel pointless nad like their not progressing anythingi dont knowthats just how i feel
>>483841382Brat needs (penetration) correction
I finally have free time this weekend, should I spend time reading the manga? I've never been much of a manga person.
>>483842140It's pretty short being only one chapter so far, go for it
>>483753381There was also that gangster Sunny fic (Sunny became Furious I think?) where he wrote an "alternate end" in the middle of it where a guy shoots Basil, Charlene, Kel, and Sunny in the head, then kidnaps Aubrey to presumably be a sex slave but he insisted she wasn't going to be a sex slave
The seething over Popsicle Stand and Gotta Knock and the discussion over what the definition of cuckolding and NTR are is also a real bad early /omog/ moment
>>483845163Sunburnfags calling every Kelbrey art they see NTR and creating alternate threads whenever the thread image was Kelbrey was hilarious
>>483845163I don't remember reading either of those, but from what I remember Popsicle Stand actually deserved some of it. The concept of Maraschino and Aubrey thinking of it is so awful.>>483845536Thread 663...
>>483752467what happened to the femanon? was she the one who did the period blood ritual to summon omori then never returned?
>>483846052She got put in the box
>>483845163>>483845536Honestly, that there has been serious discussion about it shows that the minds of several people here have been severely affected by porn. Also, I don't remember Gotta Knock having anything that could be considered NTR.
https://twitter.com/its_omocat/status/1806697067185914035/
>>483846708If I remember right the chapter where Aubrey and Sunny got together initially had a line about Aubrey having had past relationships, some of which involved sex. That was changed after some backlash, but the 18+ chapter still implied it by saying that Sunny was a virgin but implying Aubrey was not
>>483845163I forgot about this one
>>483846708That's because the author changed it the very day there was backlash. The romantic climax at chapter 12 mentioned something along the lines of being with Sunny being better than the "bad sex" she has gotten before, which most people threw a fit about.
>>483847842EAT
>>483847842They cooked for Sunny
>tfw no Omori cup to drink out of
Wanna know what would make Woodchipp even cooler? If they still stood with melonkid even after all their bullshit revealed Omocat wasn't some abusive bosshttps://www.tumblr.com/woodchipp/736317794969436160/seems-like-ill-have-to-try-and-dissect-omocats?source=share
>theres a flashing typing indicator on every line of the site right nowwha
>>483850114schizophrenic anon...
blobs
>>483850332cute little blobaroos
>>483848141>the hikkikomori loser for 4 years was less experienced in sexual matters than the delinquent girl who’s got many friendsI mean, what did they expect?
>>483847842extra drawings from Nui
>>483851072My waifu is pure
>>483850219i meant any time i click on text or something it appears as if i can type something
>>483851072For Aubrey to lose her virginity to Sunny
>>483848994>>483846708Also, in the R18 chapter, the writer wouldn't stop the implications of her having slept with other people before, and even stated in the comments that she wanted her to talk about the people she slept with before but "knew that wouldn't go down well". Meanwhile, Sunny is still the uwu cute blushing mysterious asian boyYou can't write a romantic fantasy and apply romantic fantasy ideals to one side and then apply realistic ideals to the other side, that's bad writing, no matter how many white knights in the comments, calling people porn addicts etc want to claim otherwiseSunny in that fic should have just gone with (Mado)Tsuki
>>483848141>>483851072>>483851846yeah it may not have been as realistic (but who cares when its a game with fucking ghosts) but i feel like it would have been more romantic and cuter if its a couple of dorks who barely know what they are doing taking each others virginities
aubery lost her virginity to basil first sunny was too slow
>>483852624Heart-Throbbing Love Life has a NSFW chapter that does that
>>483852402>sexually experienced woman absolutely rocks the world of a boy if this was shotacon itd be based
>>483852402I'm not saying the fic isn't bad, I'm saying that people's reaction was exaggerated at the slightest implication that Aubrey had a romantic interest in someone other than Sunny.You could tell people were traumatized by the hydration event.
>>483853284and ironically because it never had any controversy, nobody remembered it or talked about it, yet mediocre shitfics like the furious one or gotta knock still has people remembering it>>483853712kek>>483854048in the first couple of chapters, there were implications, but the response was positive
i still think the picrel of >>483753054 is the most hilarious fic i was actually in a discord with that guy and you could instantly tell he had autism motorcycle pfp, mortorcycle ms paint drawings of what heros and sunnys bikes, helmets and rider suits looked like
>>483853712shotaburn
>>483855061>motorcycle pfp, mortorcycle ms paint drawings of what heros and sunnys bikes, helmets and rider suits looked likeextremely based
>>483852402>You can't write a romantic fantasy and apply romantic fantasy ideals to one side and then apply realistic ideals to the other side, that's bad writing, no matter how many white knights in the comments, calling people porn addicts etc want to claim otherwiseWhile it's not "good writing", it's also not really that unusual either. A realistically flawed person matched with a perfect ideal lover is pretty much the essence of 99% of self-insert romance/harem fiction. Aubrey was obviously meant to be the author's self-insert, and Sunny the cute asian twink that worships the ground the "author" walks on while also not caring about her previous lovers. I found the backlash the fic only partially justified, because while it was definitely out of character, it was also clear to me that it was a wish-fulfillment fic, and fanfiction in general is known for being self-indulgent.
>>483855412shell make him feel better
>>483855412>17 year old Aubrey x 12 year old Sunny
shotaburnshotasetshota side upshotaflowershotatan
>>483856169kelseys too stupid to know all the child molestation laws
>>483856169shotashineshotafishshotathirdthingeveryone loves snuy
>>483856359kel is stupid enough to go off with strangers
>Kel 16 x Haru 12
>>483857465haru doesn't need to be 12 to be significantly smaller than kel
>Haru 49 x Sunny 21
>>483855730I understand this, but to call the other side "loser virgins" who have "never been in a relationship before" amongst other things is not being fair to them, especially when they had a point.Unironically if they had just said "yeah its wish-fulfillment fanfiction" instead of trying to defend it so hard, I'd bet the backlash would be 10% of what it was.I think people just wanted the other side to show a little empathy, ya know?
>>483856558>sunflower is shota/shota
The problem I have with Aubrey having past experiences is that personally doesn’t really fit in with the Aubrey we see in game and I often thought that it fell into the trappings of people only seeing Aubrey as a girl boss not realizing that most of that was just a coping mechanism.Of course in a fanfic that really doesn’t matter as they often go off in their own headcannon for the characters.It’s >>483859131 that really caused the most damage. I often wondered why some of these people even interact with comments they know won’t agree instead of ignoring it or just turning off comments from the get go.
kel and hero sandwich
>>483845163Popsicle Stand was written in bad faith, the writer said she was "motivated by spite" when she "fixed" what the other writer was setting up in the first few chapters.
>>483860234Aubrey is probably the hardest character to write. Every other fanfiction either portrays her as an actual bully or makes her regress into a Dream Aubrey with tits when she's just an average teenage girl going though shit.
>>483863220she's not even supposed to have tits either
>>483863298Yeah lmao I was gonna say "Dream Aubrey with pink hair" but in a lot of fanfics she lets it turn black, so whatever.
if Basil had a daughter
>>483863757basil raised an emo
>>483863220take a shot every time you see a fic that makes a character swear, two if they make Aubrey do it.you'll end up with liver failure before long
>>483864149he always liked to be around emos
>>483849936You know when you read some awkward political boomer ranting and they insult like they're talking directly to their political target?Like if you go on a twitter page for a divisive figure like Trump or Trudeau, there's guaranteed people in the comments writing like Trudeau himself is reading?This many years out "With all due respect your game isn't shit" feels like the same kind of derangement
>>483859131>>483860234You guys were just as annoying as the "loser virgin" people. A shitty fanfic doesn't need multiple posts paychoanalyzing the author and going over the definition of cuckolding. There was even some dipshit who used "if you look at NTR on hentai sites you will find similar situations" as a defense. Its fucking pathetic. The losers riding this fic's dick and the losers coping about a Mexican's take are equally autistic and retarded. Don't blame the "defenders" if you were equally autistic enough to get in a fight with them.Never mention this shit fic ever again. I don't want to see it shitting up the general
>>483864250She didn't even swear in the game if I recall
>>483864719I think both sides blew it out of proportion. Yes it shouldn't have been a big deal but the writer made it even worse by not being able to handle the bantz, you know?
>>483863220I think the Dream Aubrey one is what bothers me most. It happens more often than you'd think in both fics and fanart. I just can't see Aubrey ever returning to being that person.
>>483860234>16 year old girl (or older?) with past boyfriends=girlboss???????>that personally doesn’t really fit in with the Aubrey we see in gameAs in, the whole ship? Aubrey we see in the game is not romantically interested in Sunny, this whole entire ship is wish fulfillment fantasy. Aubrey we see in the game is also mentally damaged white trash who dresses provocatively, and we don't really know what she's been up to for the past 4 years.
>>483865121The reaction to it was the same as that Bluefuck's fics and he couldn't handle the bantz even worse. Just call the Gotta Knock bitch a Mexican slut and move on. I don't want to see you queers talking about the definition of NTR outside of /d/
>>483864862To be fair it's a kiddie game (+obligatory content warning at the beginning no one cares about). Still don't think she'd swear though. Maybe she'd scream What the fuck when Sunny pulled out a knife? But she would not talk like those Vivziepop characters.
>>483862218One boy for each bunch
>>483865237>What is the swing set scene>What are the glances between them during the picnic and Hobbeez>What is the scene where Aubrey tries to talk to Sunny 1 on 1
>>483864862She does say hell one time
>>483865550>unironic shipper copeEw
>>483865706>Show evidence where Aubrey shows an interest in Sunny>"c-cope"
>>483865237It's not just "past boyfriends", that'd be pretty understandable and that's why no one really cared when the idea was being thrown around early on. Then she was established as someone who hooked up with strangers at parties and then broke their hearts, which is just unhealthy and well, is kind of out-of-nowhere for a lovey dovey fic, no?
>>483865706>>483865898Fight, fight, fight!
Madomori in the thread
>>483865208I can understand why it happens, honestly. Like people are saying, most fics are written for wish-fulfillment and everyone wants their good ending where it "all returns to normal".It's a shame that not only they often make characters act like their Headspace selves, but that a lot of people don't even realize Headspace isn't always an accurate depiction of Sunny's friends.
>>483865917> is kind of out-of-nowhere for a lovey dovey fic, no?I could be entirely wrong but didn't the fic advertise itself as having some drama and angst elements in it? It wasn't purely lovey-dovey like Heartthrobbing lovelife
>>483865917>Then she was established as someone who hooked up with strangers at parties and then broke their hearts>strangers>broke their heartsHow the fuck does one do that? Was the sex just that good?
>>483866343I get that, but usually drama and angst elements in a fic take place, well, during the fic. If there were some chapters about something like, I don't know, Aubrey's toxic ex-boyfriend harassing them to make them break up and angst stemmed from that, I'd totally get it. But since it's Aubrey's past it's really out of nowhere. It never impacts the plot in any way either, so at the end of the day it just feels tacked on.
>>483865993dreamy girl
>>483864862the only swear in the entire game is "I fucking love air conditioning."
>>483866838>Was the sex just that good?It's Aubrey. Of course not
>>483866838I think the implication was that the hookups turned into relationships that lasted for like one week? I have no clue man, I don't think even the writer herself thought about it as anything more than being autobiographical.
>>483867215So, "past boyfriends."
>>483866838>That ass was fat
>>483866950Why can't it be part of the backstory? Why can't it be used to show how Aubrey moved on with her life for a while? Should she have remained stagnant in terms of relationships until the time the fic takes place? I didn't like the inclusion of the line either but the way you're phrasing it suggests that every fic needs to take place, if not chronologically, emotionally after the game.
Damn Ramona Flowers sure is a bitch... Wait, who are we talking about?
>>483867215I thought the implication was more one night stands and very brief relationships that never got past a few days at most
>>483865393you should tell that to the people who started it by saying >nooo its not NTR!!
>>483867452Pretty much, yeah. I could argue about how relationships born from hookup culture are unhealthy by default and why people took it worse than just Aubrey having a boyfriend, but that's neither here nor there now is it?
>>483867849I'm telling that to then and I'm telling it to you too. Stop it. You're fucking pathetic. Imagine caring this much about what a Mexican wrote
>>483867806Maybe someone should ask Manul what relationships she's had (don't actually)
>That one fanfic where it was a normal sunburn fanfic until randomly in the middle of it Aubrey quit her job and took up being a stripper behind Sunny’s back for no reason
>>483868049If anything I think that would add to Aubrey's backstory by looking into how she sought shallow hookups to try and find a modicum of happiness after the truth. It could have been a tragedy in of itself.
>>483867657The Maverick is pretty similar to the first boyfriend huh? The zesty brown guy with superpowers
>>483858383How stinky?
>>483868313That was Popsicle Stand, it was mentioned at the beginning of this discussion but overlooked for Gotta Knock
>>483859131>I think people just wanted the other side to show a little empathy, ya know?>People on the other side responding right here with 0 empathyBig wonder why the threads were being shat up to begin with
>>483868291Already did. If she's going to write Aubrey as a whore and apparently also write Kim as a whore in her sequel, then we deserve answers
>>483868764They're defending NTR of course they have zero empathy.
Would Boybrey also be a manwhore?
>>483867629>>483868336I don't think it's that bad of an idea, and I agree that it's an interesting of showing Aubrey's growth. I just personally don't think it was a good concept for that kind of fic, specially not when it came out of nowhere, and *specially* not the way it was show, which was right after Sunny confessed. I don't remember the exact words of the scene, but it was something like>Aubrey couldn't believe Sunny wanted to be her boyfriend. Before, she'd had a bunch of random hookups and relationships that left a bad taste in her mouth, but now she could be happy!I just don't think it was done right, and if it was meant to signal Aubrey's growth I'd wish at least it was introduced differently even if I wouldn't have rolled with it either way.
>>483868961You know, fair
>>483868551I don't know why when Popsicle Stand eas objectively worse. There was also another fic I forget the name of where Aubrey actively cucks Sunny by dating one of his bullies, and only breaks up with him when Sunny interrupts them about to have sex and tells Aubrey he loves her and then the bully beats him up and she steps in
>>483869062the exact phrase was this iirc >>483848994
>>483868551The thing with Popsicle Stand is that it's so ridiculous you can't even argue about it in good faith.>Aubrey becomes a stripper because she's poorOkay.>She does this while having a situationship with an unknowing SunnyUh...>Her stripper name is Mari by the way???It's just too out there. And that's saying a lot considering what OMORI fics deal with.
>>483869210fuck i know which fic you're talking about, it's been memory-holed somewhere, iirc its 3 words and the first word starts with the letter B doesnt it
Why do people love making Aubrey a whore? Just cause she shows some skin? That’s just how girls dress now >Pokémon designers when asked about Hilda’s outfit
>>483869053casual sweaty sex with kelseysex with bunchesbullies girlsil into submitting to demandsmoved in on heroine after her boyfriend diedone big manwhore
>>483868961>>483869183This is the only thing I'm going to say about this.I enjoyed GKALH and thought that scene was okay.I never called anyone a virgin or loser and played ball when people said they didn't like it.But just like you don't like being lumped up all as "virgin losers", I don't appreciate being lumped up with "cucks".
>>483869210Ohhh yeah I remember that one! Man that was weird. I can't see Aubrey being abused in a relationship the way she was in that story. After all she's had to put up with I really can't. I can however see her as an abuser, unfortunately
>>483869923>Aubrey physically and emotionally abusing Sunny into never leaving her>Aubrey hitting Sunny and then apologizing before having dub-con sex with himHot
>>483869841That's what I'm saying, both sides blew it way out of proportion. I totally understand why people would dislike that scene while others wouldn't care, but there was no way a civil discussion was gonna come out of it when "IF YOU LIKE IT YOU'RE A KEK" and "IF YOU DISLIKE IT YOU'RE A LOSER VIRGIN" are much easier to say.
Anyone remember Sadburn? The one where Sunny and Aubrey are unhealthily codependent?
>>483869210>>483869637>>483869923I'm sure you guys are just making a ragebait.if not, where is the link?
>>483870295I do, why?
>>483870083>>483869923>That one fanfic where she has Sunny tied up in her house and when he tries to escape she hits his leg with her nail batWeirdest thing about that fic was how in character Aubrey was.
aubrey is devoted to christ and sex before marriage is a sin. she would never.
>>483870295Nope, forgotten forever
>>483870271"Agree to disagree" is a lot less words but is somehow harder to type for some people.
>>483870358If I wanted to ragebait I'd cry about the hydration greentext or something. This one was very real, and very unfunny. It was one of the early fics so if you really want to find it you can start looking from Oldest, but I wouldn't recommend it. It wasn't even finished AFAIK.
>>483870473>Aubrey and Sunny marry with a candy ring
>>483870480so sad
>>483869730theres like 5 known fics that do it, out of a few thousand or so>>483869841see, that's alright, you can be alright with the fic, and i understand that for some people they're ok with it for any list of reasonsbut when people start coming out with the sweeping >>483870271 "you are all [insert insult of choice]", thats when shit just hits the fan>>483870358found it. title is Back in Sessionfor everyone's sake its as bad as everything mentioned here, i'm specifically not providing a link because id rather we dont talk about it
>>483870410Link
>>483870295>That one fic where they have sex in the bathtub
>>483870917This onehttps://archiveofourown.org/works/43393987
>>483870917He come to town
>>483870805 (me)i shall change subjects abruptlybehold, headspace colours that wont be done because the manga is printed in black and white anyway
>>483871221Come to SAVE
>>483871296The Princess Zelda
>>483871238Damn, I still wish we had more OMORIBOY comics. The colors and artstyle were very pretty and the game's pixel style just doesn't do them service in my opinion
>>483870358If the guy above won't link it I willhttps://archiveofourown.org/works/30418977/chapters/74997240Enjoy. The scene is in chapter 8
Maintained
>>483871871wasn't Dream Kel's shirt actually supposed to be a full disco ball of colors that kept shifting? that was pretty cool
>imagine playing omori the shota game >made by a shotacon >in a fandom filled with shota lovers >reading a manga made for it>then getting mad that the mangaka is into shotathank god i'm not that retarded
>>483870480Cute Sadbrey
>>483872271Yeah exactly! Also Neighbor's Room/OMORIBOY's Headspace was way more vivid. I get OMORIBOY had no Headspace and so his equivalent of Neighbor's Room had to be massive and full of stuff because that's all he had, but OMORI's feels pretty dull in comparison. I wish it at least had the snake waterslide or something. Only being able to play cards in there sounds a little boring
>>483871986Well, I looked for shit and I found shit
>>483873463>“Ugh… Theo, he’s done this before, all he does is date one girl, and then when he’s bored of… observing the merchandise… he moves on, and then he just comes back. I’m glad he at least didn’t… go window shopping with you.” What the hell is this writing holy kek
>>483858383i will barge into her life and make her happy again
>>483858383>Twin tailsNo
I wish someone had saved Sunny Becomes Furious before it was taken down
>>483873104imagine if minigames were coded in>play blackjack>play poker>play Triple Triad>play [brand-name] card gameimagine going around headspace and fighting and winning against npcs in a children's card game, reflected in the real world by running around and winning against npcs in pet rocksi would like to have had more optional headspace locations, desu. A waterpark that you can you go to before you face your fear of drowning, which will prompt different dialogue, a steakhouse-themed place maybe? the school section in black space could have been a section as well
>>483876309Surprise, it did get saved!https://files.catbox.moe/h6xtdb.pdfNot by me
>>483876787BASED. Thank you
>>483876787I think this one is still missing the "bad ending" where everyone gets shot and dies and Aubrey is implied-raped by the bad guy
>>483876549Damn yeah that would've been so cool. And yes, who knows what OMORI could've been if those 6 years of development were full of actual development. I know there was concept art with tsundere and yandere fox schoolgirls and there's also the vegetable enemies having "RAIN TOWN" above them, and I feel like Omori's three old imaginary friends were going to do something at some point. There's for sure more things but I can't remember them now. I can only hope for a rerelease down the line with even more content, or most likely a new project more focused even more on all the whimsiness of a dream world.
>>483877395Good news: This version has 8 more chaptersBad news: They only archived the first half of the bad ending, so the Aubrey slave stuff isn't there. It ends shortly after she says she'll check up on him, but you can still read the edgekino of Sunny and co. getting shot.https://files.catbox.moe/by5sd1.pdf
>>483877754the game was very different in alpha and in beta; they deffo removed and reworked loads of things that would have been nice to see in an "extra content" sorta thinglike Dream Basil's house being actually his Dream Grandma's house (the old lady that lived in a shoe), the 3 "friends" that were supposed to exist (picrel)they could even call it "one cycle ago" or something, and let you go through it before Omori resets it
>>483853284>>483854340>>483866343Tell me about this Heart Throbbing Love Life fic. Good? Bad?
>>483878389That's a very good idea, actually. Now that I think about it it makes perfect sense in-universe for Headspace to have so many things that feel unfinished or random because most of it is Sunny's subconscious mind hazaphardly putting things together to distract himself and delay the inevitable, while completely banishing other more elaborate areas like the library. In that sense, I think I'd actually like to play a game about the first cycle since potentially everything about Headspace would be different then
>>483878367What chapter was it again? These both end at the same place and I thought the bad end was after the whole "Basil becomes murderous" thing.>>483878823Good if you like pure fluff and Sunburn.
>>483878823good. read it
>>483879132Shit, sorry dude. I saw it said "Chapters 1-16" and I thought that's where the first archive ended. But both have 24.Honestly though maybe it's for the best that it's lost.
the arguments in this thread were something else...
>>483883180It was neat asides from the manga artstyle complaints
I impulse-bought a plushie at FiveBelow today
>>483877754The thing about 6 years of actual development instead of the funny crunch rush we got is there's no guarantee that version would have been good eitherI feel like considering the state the game is, devving a version for 6 years straight would have become a lumbering behemoth of old code and old art that kept getting updated
Buying a Meta Quest 3 who wants to be my Kokomi
the virgin Game!Aubrey: No! It's not true! It's bullshit! I did not bully him, I did not... oh hi Herothe chad Manga!Aubrey: You're a coward, Sunny. I hate you. Die.ngl I'm actually interested in the direction the manga will take her since she's so no-nonsenseno sloppy internal conflict. no hooligans. she really just went 'four years in your house made you a fucking PUSSY' and I like that a lot
>>483870974Link or name?
>>483883740bagel shall now have enough rations to survive the winter
>>483883837>devving a version for 6 years straight would have become a lumbering behemoth of old code and old art that kept getting updatedhaha...
>>483871986Just read it, its dogshit lmao
>>483878389>>483879128i had a similar idea to this where after the true ending headspace and blackspace would merge together and his old imaginary friends would be their headspace versions
>>483885256Star citizen, except star citizen is making millions of dollars in crowd funding
>>483885256ok what game is this
https://youtu.be/kKQEIXCSMko?si=jCyZdvonL0cON1Ny
>>483886974helps me forget about my grandma dying...
>>483886517it's my game, it was meant to be a 'test project' while i learned how to use rpg maker but i kept getting more ambitious and now it's an actual game. i will publish it for sure later this year but it's crazy how long it's taken, i've learned a lot
>>483885256Redrawing the RPG XP default hero for 6 years is crazy
>>483888158yeah tell me about it, but i don't feel bad about it since i think the xp rtp designs are better than vx/ace/mv/mz
>>483887857 are there cute wizard girls in your game?
>>483885256soul vs soulless
>>483887857nice to hear, keep up the grindset anon
>>483888425yes, there is a cute blue one who leans heavily into the "novice" archetype to hide the fact she knows more than she's letting on, there's also a currently NPC witch who was cursed with cat ears and she brews potions to try to get rid of them, if you count that as a wizard girl>>483889432thank you anon
>>483852402If Sunny was the one who had sex with other girls before the whiners wouldn’t even say anything. It’s just Sunny self-inserter incels throwing a fit because their waifu isn’t pure anymore. An alarming amount of Sunburn shippers see Aubrey as nothing more than a reward for Sunny once he gets better.
I'll volunteer this image for next unless someone has a different oc or manga picture to suggest
>>483889816Yes please use this one
>>483890250Give me a moment
>>483889815Really, all of human history and fiction can be viewed through the lens of men being afraid of getting cucked.
Hello afterhours. Is that how you do it?
>>483890395Really when you get down to it marriage and other monogamous practices are LITERALLY cuck insurance (ignoring the other practical benefits of a stable partner and a two-parent family structure)
Sorry for the delay, it gave me a 300 second cooldown for some reason>>483891029>>483891029
>>483889815You got that backwards faggot, Aubrey's gotta cuck a little harder is Manul self insert and she confirmed in the comments of smut chapterSunny is also the perfect Boy of her dreams that never dated anyone before her
>>483890909>monogamous practices are LITERALLY cuck insuranceI don't get it
>>483891136I probably could've worded that better, I guess more like cuck protection. See: the DC Flintstones comic
>>483891075And I’m saying that Sunny self-inserters whose perfect dream girl is someone who has never had sex with anyone before couldn’t handle it
>>483891471The DC Flintstones comic is a masterpiece
>>483864719>>483889815Behold for yourself, the perspective of he who starts the shitflinging.
>>483891471Barry was a real good one with Bam Bam
>>483891705Just saying the truth
>>483892423You're a faggot. Just saying the truth!
>>483892423>source: made it the fuck up
>>483892423>>483892626I think you two should re-enact the critically acclaimed chapter 13 "Kinda Hot" of fanfiction Gotta Knock A Little Harder, written by the renowned author Manul.
>>483892626Yes? I wouldn’t be here if I wasn’t.
>>483869841 you too, have a look for yourself at the guy who is the reason why you had shit threads. everyone else was willing to talk in a reasonable manner.>>483891705
>>483891503More like she was write like a whore, and sunny like a total virgin loser, despite the qualities and opportunity(Tsuki for example) There is a lot of popular fics in AO3 that Aubrey dated people before Sunny and people handle it just fine, Gotta cuck was just badly written
>>483893790Hard to believe when Sunburnfags here would throw a fit every time Aubrey got shipped with someone who isn’t Sunny.
They're still going at it huh
>>483894220Yes, there were some people who saw Aubrey as a trophy.No, that's no reason to discret any and all criticism of GKALH as "crying from virgin losers". We had a four-hour talk about it earlier, perhaps you should read it.
>>483894691When most of the criticism boils down to “I don’t like that Aubrey had sex with others before while Sunny is still a kissless virgin therefore it’s NTR!” then it is absolutely worthy of ridicule. I was here too when all that shit happened three years ago you know, when losers would often derail threads by crying about that fic out of nowhere.
>>483894359Blame me, I encouraged them to fight, fight, fight
>>483895138I won't deny that. But I do think that stuff about Aubrey's past was introduced at an extremely inconvenient moment, so I'm not surprised people didn't like it.I think it's also important to mention it wasn't just "Sunny self-inserters" who hated it either, since you're kind of making it sound like that. Aside from me not liking it, Kel Reviewer only ever let us know one thing about his personal life and it's that he was a gigantic fag, so how come he wrote a lengthy review criticizing Gotta Knock without being a sunny self-inserter? It's because the fic is bad in many ways, and Aubrey's past is one of many traits in that fic that turn her into an overall toxic person (yes, having many short relationships is toxic. It means you're the problem), similar to a cheap version of Ramona Flowers (as was said in this thread).But if you disagree with me still, then let's do what was advised earlier and agree to disagree.
>>483895367but what if they kissed instead
>>483895797The part of the fic where Aubrey's mom forces her to break up with Sunny was much worse than any NTR shit and I wish more people talked about how bad that was instead of how the confession chapter made them feel
>>483898546boys kissing detected. deploying homophobic sprout mole kill squad
>>483904113counterposting more boys kissing
After this thread I never want to see anything about "Gotta Knock A Little Harder" ever again. You faggots shit up a thread bitching about something a beaner wrote.
>>483895138the fact that you strawman that one point and harp on it over and over while insulting people and ignoring everything else is very intellectually dishonest and says more about you than the people youre trying to shittalkin a romantic fantasy story, you shouldnt write about either the hero or heroine having slept with other people literally during the romantic climax, thats horrible writing. you especially shouldnt write about that in a smut chapter either. even if youre ok with being told "oh, youre second best of all the various guys ive slept with", what non-cuck wants to hear that in the middle of sex?this is in the same vein as building up to a final battle in a fighting fantasy story, and the villian is just deus ex machina'd or killed offscreen by a side character, it breaks the climax for 0 reason. it's horrible writing, and people have also shit the bed with this, to the point where "deus ex machina'd" is a term that even existsyes there's a bunch of other shit in the fic as well that wasn't talked about here either>you shouldnt turn an established character into a different race>you shouldnt apply romantic fantasy logic to one side and then apply 'its totally realism' logic to another side>you shouldn't play up stupid drama out of nowhere (see: giving shit to sunny for, god forbid, working on a college project with another girl, random aubrey-dad/mom comes in to fling shit because 'its totally realistic', etc)but the reason why that part was talked about so much was because it just randomly shattered the climax of the story for seemingly no reason>>483903581bet you the reason why theres little discussion is because many people dropped it after chapter 12.>>483905638it was a proper discussion with the occasional angry person coming in out of nowhere to tell us off for having a proper discussion, and one shitter just before and during AH. that's nowhere near shitting up the thread
>>483905638Shitting up a thread? I'm not a fan of "ONE GUY"-posting but I thought it was pretty civilized with a couple of exceptions almost everyone ignored.
>>483907969fair, all writing rules shouldnt be a hard rule for every story - ive even seen deus ex machinas done right. but generally speaking, it takes a skill of writing that most writers do not have, which is why as a general rule, one shouldn't do thissee, the thing is the line depends on context; fact of the matter is, if that line was written as she's reflecting after the confession a chapter later, or any of the chapters before chapters before as she's reflecting on the relationship it's building up to, sure, that's reasonable, i can buy that. but to tell the reader 'yeah, so she had sex with multiple other people before' while literally in the middle of the confession scene? that's not something most readers would want to hearthe smut scene dropped a few implications about how sunny compares to the people she's slept with before, and the writer commented something along the lines of wanting her to directly tell sunny about said people but she 'thought it wouldnt go down well'... so she posted the scene in the comments anyway.the second bit of what i said about the smut chapter refers to that in particular
>>483909536Exactly! It could've been written that, way before the confession, Aubrey was feeling conflicted about her budding romance with Sunny because she was scared it would end up badly just like her other relationships. I can totally get behind that.But when you write "In this moment Aubrey felt so happy, unlike when she was hooking up at parties" in the moment the entire fic had been building up to for 11 chapters, well it's unique to say the least. But it's not good unique.
