Thoughts on this character as a whole going off both design and backstory? Would you read a comic featuring her as the MC?
>>1522854Yes, I would love to see her become a goblin's bride. Remove the motocycle and modern stuff, though.What are her 3-sizes?
>>1522854>175cm170cm is better>she drives a motorcyclewalking and alternately mounted on her donkey "clero">travelling around the continentthe continent must be a cross between australia and the grand canyonit is more interesting an adventure focused on survival in this hostile environment rather than permanent fights with monsters or bandits
>>1522854Why do you write 4 so weirdly?Looks cool, I agree with the other vy that the motorcycle is kinda weird......unless you've got some kind of steampunk thing going on, should add that into the story somehow, like an EMP reset us few hundred years electronically so computers don't work anymore but hard stuff like motors and incandescent light bulbs still do.Fun fact: some military equipment uses vacuum tubes so if a nuke or EMP goes off they can still fly jets and drop bombs.
>>1522856>Remove the motocycle and modern stuff>Unless you've got some kind of steampunk thing going onThat's pretty much it btw, it's a Science-Fantasy kitchen sink setting in the same vein as Final Fantasy 7/8 (which also has an important story reason for being the way it is, but I won't spoil)
That is a weird sword design.The shape of the grip suggests it's a sword made for cutting or chopping, like a machete or a sabre or maybe something like a yatagan. But the shape of the blade and the point in particular suggests it's designed primarily for stabbing into a decently resistant target, like a gladius. The combination seems like it would be awkward at either technique. What sword usage style do you have in mind for her?On more minor notes, swords that have their narrowest point near the base just make it easier to break them for no useful purpose, though this is less of an issue with modern steels; and that scabbard does not look like it fits that sword.
>>1522854faux anime style baddraw bigger craniums
>>1522854Honestly, it sounds like kino discount.>princess avoiding marriageOverused>iron maiden nickOverused>princess on the fugueOverused>woman that fights on brutal waysOverusedI like the concept of using scraps from different armours, but after 10 years it doesnt look realistic. Also, she looks overly Asian for such name and concept.
