Archives & Other Resources: https://pastebin.com/wETipqYwAllSync: https://cyoa.allsync.com/s/owWor64yLTngDk3Multiplayer Compilations: https://rentry.org/MCYOA_Comp_Comp (was I supposed to do this?)In Case of Emergency, Break Glass: https://rentry.org/mcyoagCanaryThreadslave Rentry: https://rentry.org/ThreadKeeping2'Undying' EditionPrevious Thread: >>92548599
>>92565023>MHA Rentryhttps://rentry.org/uhx77ys6>RULES:> Timeline: Just Another Story> Location: Japan>The Hero Students are at Shiketsu.Instructions + Template for Making Cards: https://pastebin.com/NQ6JNH8r>New Stuff:The beast sharpens its claws>The Archive Link so you can keep using the funny numbers for builds (use this before complaining about dead links)https://archive.4plebs.org/tg/thread/92498234/#92498405>CHARACTER PROMPTS (feel free to answer these whenever)Class 1-D Prompts 1-50: https://rentry.org/mhampClass 1-D Prompts 50+: https://rentry.org/mhamp2Everyone else's prompts: https://rentry.org/mhamp3Same password for all of them (mha4)>Older Prompt Links Are in Herehttps://pastebin.com/Qr3TtGa6>Fighting Style Prompt (Leaving this out because it might be useful for anyone writing a fight)https://archive.4plebs.org/tg/thread/88693730/#88693888>Class 1-D Timelinehttps://rentry.org/MHATIMELINE>Class 1-D Character Summaryhttps://rentry.org/9bf3g>Newer Version of the CYOA (Both the old and new versions are legal for builds. Use whichever one you want)Version 4.2: https://archive.4plebs.org/tg/post/92012978
>>92565034>STUDENTS:>Chihiro Mitsurugi HN Ascetic Sword Hero: Yako>>88189202>Soujyuuro Imai HN Wise Eye Hero: Mahoudeva>>88194077>Bobby Samson HN Sunlight Man>>88190591>Sora Tanaka HN Area Denial Hero: Orbit>>88191735>Kaylee Suzuki HN Flying Force>>88438219>Shinkan Sen HN Crazy Train>>88194200>Hifumi Takeda HN Warp Blade Hero: Challenger>>88196397>Minerva Kim HN Spark>>88826766>Hailey Chang HN Recoil>>88826770>Faith Kang HN Drone>>88826774>Maxine Nguyen HN Radius>>88826778>Edith Lee HN Arena>>88826782>Noah Abrams HN Archangel>>88205041>Victor Sigurd HN Hydra>>88209661>Inigo Myoga HN Dragon Hero: Ryu-kishi>>88414797>Christopher Cain HN Mirror Devil>>88217649>Son Jugo HN Aspara>>88239137>Genma Go HN Goldorado>>88353862>Ashleigh Katsuragi HN Blackout>>88268251>Atsushi Orochi HN Hard to Destroy Lizard Hero: Yamata>>88273479>Nyoro Hoge HN Maru(maru)>>88273837 + >>88758766>Yui Sagara HN Binding Hero: Capture Cloth (Held Back)>>88383012>Kyoda Hiro HN Overdose (Held Back)>>88193619+ >>91985145>Sally McCathy HN Last Rite>>88810810>Takara Tame HN Android>>89199766>Nijimura Mahoko HN Cool Boost>>91685518+>>91685973>Class 2-D>Mochi Uranus HN Smelly Hero: Stink Rat>>88196664>Kevin Rool>>88222618>Suzuki Nene HN Ghostly Cat Hero: Bakeneneko>>88707393>Hiroki Asai HN Champion of Negativity: Zetsuboy>>88755823>Class 1-E https://rentry.org/p6dwm>Students (Cont.)>Class 3-D https://rentry.org/vx255>William Dustice HN King Billy>>88192360>Johanna Hilt HN Gauntlet Hero: Weiss Schwarz>>88195437>Ganto Kanzaki HN The Clone Hero, Commander (NPC)>>89284218>Kagami Reina>>89605669>Norman “Norm” Smith HN Whatabout>>91046080>Rumi Aratsuki HN Hysteria>>91363307>Class ???>Kiki HN Yggdrasil>>91707234
>>92565046>Students (Cont.)>Class 1-C (Shiketsu)>Okimoto Chisaka>>91130422 >Isabela Nakahata>>91351414>Lilinah ‘Riri’ Inoue>>91347120>Ysmir Dragonborn>>91349452>Daniel W. Rain>>91352447>Class 3-B (U.A.)>Animata>>90990850>Synthesis>>90992108>Meadow>>90992377>Top Smile>>90992508>Ichimaki>>90994440>Nekiro Nishi>>90997317>Madoka Mikan HN Heartbeathttps://rentry.org/eesb8>Itō Sukemochi HN Warpden>>90973632>Li Yinzhen HN Jiangshi>>90978093>Katsumi Hachizaki:https://rentry.org/HeartMHA>Cormelia Busujima>>91353847>Class 1-F>Suki HN Sukeban>>91670899>Runt HN Dust Devil>>91691942>Rob Williams HN: Velvet Worm>>91728780>Haiiroshi Kinzoku HN Fullmetalhttps://rentry.org/Fullmetal-mha>Igarashi Ryosuke HN Araken>>91807240>Tatsuya Yamashita HN Bad Touch>>91808184>Azuma Hisa HN Beach Day>>91809104>Daigo Ulmeyda HN Fly 1 Million>>91814363>Kiyoura Shidehara HN Icky Hero: Slimenuts>>91782779>Higa Umeko HN Slip-N'-Slideasaurus>>91833690>Nayuki Kyoko>>91834965>??? HN Meteoric Hero: Cube>>91890433>Misato Fukushima>>92006447>PRO HEROES>U.A. Teachers:>Yunikon, the Brilliant Hero>>90998494>Dr. Seto Kawata>>91051432>Shiketsu Teachers:> Anzu Nishima HN Karaburan>>88189414> Aiko Aimi HN Motivational Hero: Rosethorn>>88190438>Pierre Vachon HN The Gentle Way Hero: Ippon>>88205924>Masanori Kitamura HN Hijack>>88219956>Yasashi Koibito HN The Laser Hero - Majestic>>88231509>Junko Hongo HN The Overly-Enthusiastic Tokusatsu Hero, LocaLoca (NPC)>>88745486>Omura Tadao HN Deceptive Hero, Conman>>88754723>Riku Washizawa HN The Steel Talon Hero: Skycarver>>91719484>Takahashi Mako, HN Ersatz>>92011019
>>92565062>PRO HEROES (Cont):>Unaffiliated Heroes>Kenji Shako HN Strongest Shrimp Hero: Magnum Shrimp (and Water Fowl Hero: Flamingal)>>88425908>Yuusei Atsushi HN Spring Dragon Hero: Seiryu>>88194386>Kalianne Sato HN "Flame Strike Hero: Honoken">>88568039>Ryuji Inoue HN Transport Hero: Rescue Ray (Principal - Sunray Troubled Youth Center)>>88195499>Akagi Sanpatchi HN "Popsy">>88204632>??? HN Birdy>>88225549>Edmund Connor HN The Tall Man>>88286518>Ryusei Sugiyama HN Smokin' Sexy>>88301887>Kevin Thompson HN The Purple Man>>88357698>Yuichi Ishida HN Slipstream>>88389419>Roland Walker HN PsyKing (Sandatsu'd)>>88616703>Ernst Hennig HN Impakt>>88616848>Junpei Ozu HN: The Standstill Hero, "Floor">>88820563>Rodion Popo HN Overman>>89015229>Ludolf Raphael Victorius, Hero Name: Fair Marshal>>89006731>Taichi Kyoryu HN Cretaceous King, Saurus>>89508780>Kurogane Keisho HN Yoshizumi>>89507063>Tosuke Jinai HN Compound>>91016593>Yosuke Shirai HN The Lustrous Hero, Wavelength>>91032513>Astra Smalls Aka Size King>>91360064>Richard Wilkins HN The #1 Hydro Hero: "Splash">>91721688>MR. BULLET>>91812743>Shōgeki Heshi HN: Crash>>92012115>Tóu Zhǎng Koie/Phys P>>92017795>Kazuya Ono>>92012443>Alpha Ueno HN: Sylph>>92014322>SUPPORTERS:>Lady Astoria Belmont>>88201576>Rika Eichi>>88209395>Yaju>>88223795>Isaiah Sibylla (Keola Ku)>>88231241>Aura Curie (Student)>>88231609>Just "The Doctor">>88721597>Fransk Brunhilde>>89014208>Endless Horizons Ltd.https://rentry.org/iptpr>Yusaku Kanzaki a.k.a. Clone Cop (NPC)>>89278250>Emilia Busujima>>89349231>Detective Risa Date>>90657164>Holden Deckard>>90913931>Brightly>>91006966>Satoru Tani (Student)>>91149772>Kuji Futoi (Student)>>91363451>Yuko Ozaku (Student)>>92025025
>>92565078>VILLAINS (Villain Name):>Turncoat Agency:>Keiichi Tano HN Racer V / VN Getaway>>88926925>Tenshi Chisio HN Caduceus / VN Sawbones>>88927453>Jack Dunn HN Three-Sixty / VN The Asset>>88931192>Pax Organization:>Eugene Kurtz VN Pax and Mercy>>88984432>Nightmare>>88984422>Unaffiliated Villains:>Bruno Garcia VN Mauler>>88206714>Karuga Ito (Teacher - Shiketsu)>>88192478>Shiori Shiratora VN Kamigami>>88192913>Recino R. Percutio>>88191385>Nakata Yumiko VN Walpurgis>>88191796 + https://pastebin.com/nMZq81Jt>hina seiyama VN panzer viii>>88226487>Giichi Mikata>>88198856>Miki Ginrei VN Fluegel>>88209242>Ginji Gō VN Desperaido>>88278735>Jack Mitchell VN Marshall>>88456239>Kazuma Oomori VN Charlatan>>88669394>Hattori Ume VN Broad Daylight>>88926931>"Blank">>91050726>Kōkishin Yuuki VN Shoggoth>>91050987>"Mammogar">>91051410>Tomiehttps://rentry.org/ddom6m82>TechVision Elite 2023 - 43Vista UltraSmart 4K TV>>91654960>JOHN DOE VN GREEN DOOR>>89018740>Suslik>>91699413>Ryuji Ayanokoji VN Overlord>>91702476>Jack Smithee VN The Gravedigger>>91702656>Zyra Mein VN Braindrain>>91702779>Rudi Brandt VN Sturmtruppe>>91703057>Bonzo Amato VN The Boss>>91703456>The Hospital Killer>>91772420>Paul Crémieux VN De Jais (Jet Black)>>91841242>Jessica Wu VN Surinam Toad Girl>>91851919>Jan Procházka VN Msr. Blanc>>91963570>Gustave Gavial VN Gnash>>92016443>Cosmo Black VN X.T.>>92016885>Kate Everly>>92016986>Sato Yukio VN Gold Man>>92385942>Horrific 5:>Samuel Wilson VN Desolator>>88917340>On Giết Năng VN Tether>>88921198>Erika Murakami VN Nox>>88923183>Maddie Griffiths VN Maddox>>88930575>Edmund Muller VN Mercury>>88923191
>>92565095>VILLAINS (Villain Name):>Revolutionaries:>Momotaro Tachibana VN Nebulous Storm>>88376954>Mark Matuli>>88301910>Junichi Takagi VN Marrow>>88435130>Miriam Slowburn Hakase VN Prologing Evil: Big Hat (NPC)>>88736960>Kester Greenfield>>90921671>Vigilantes:>Helene Lysingen VN Noctiluca>>88197005>Takigawa Shion VN Shapeless Blade: Aquarius>>88209069>Toru Imaishi VN Kampai>>88630353>Rebecca Weber>>88722750>Yushi Taneka VN Blazing Bright>>89012707>Yoshiro>>89338457>Sasha Azanami>>91080404>Rui>>91197187>Kaori Kaoru>>91229075>Choko Yumiya, VN Eye High>>92132153>Night Parade:>Cammy Link VN Karma>>88190537>Haruka Pulch VN Tatarimokke>>88205909>Sebastian Needle VN Greenfinger>>88214481>Okane King VN Midas>>88190217> ??? VN Maw>>88250272> ??? VN Bogey>>88277889> Tomi>>88387913>Luccione>>90146415>Wild Hunt>Sandatsu Owari>>91030425>Mio Katsuragi HN Forget-Me-Not>>89250569>Hiromi Hitomi VN Feral>>88856089>Dr. Isaac Ivanov VN Drekus>>88666462>Ookami Shizukahttps://rentry.org/OokamiShizuka>Ivan Trup VN The Prophet>>91702348
>>92565113Writefags:>Early writefags here (17 Pages)https://rentry.org/noydigbk>”First Test” Comphttps://pastebin.com/66ByP2sD>Questionnaire Comphttps://pastebin.com/Ksn0zJ31Else check the rentry>Lunch Hour (1-F)https://rentry.org/LunchHour>Internship Gossip (Clique)https://rentry.org/igqhcxhy>The Symbol of Death: Part 3 (Reaper, Forget-Me-Not, Ookami Shizuka, Drekus, Hijack, The Boys (kind of))https://rentry.org/55t76vwp>With Open Hearts And Open Minds (Seiryu, Honoken, Hijack)https://rentry.org/2bqb4hiq>I Get Your Number And We Grow From There (Seiryu, Yoshizumi)https://rentry.org/4t3zcu2b>Spring Boy And Summer Girl (Seiryu, Honoken, Kotoba)https://rentry.org/yzbayxk5>Um Tempo Musical (Seiryu, Honoken)https://rentry.org/qxo4wft2>Messages From The Star (Seiryu, Yoshizumi)https://rentry.org/7rw4bbwc>Hearts Afire (Seiryu, Yamata, Blast Burn, Yamamoto)https://rentry.org/ewpc5tz3>A Hero Student's Uncertain Dating Prospects (Beach Day, Slip-n-Slideasaurus, Cube)https://rentry.org/DatingProspects>Frameless (Smokin' Sexy, Ryu-Kishi, Mirror Devil):https://rentry.org/u8snakxr>The Symbol of Death: Part 4 (Reaper, Forget-Me-Not, Feral, Drekus, Ookami Shizuka, The Prophet) https://rentry.org/igwpicub>A Kunoichi's Birthday (Ryu-kishi, Maru(maru), Marrow, 1-D, Hijack, a bunch of people)https://rentry.org/6zruhinr>Monsters (Last Rite, Yamata)https://rentry.org/ph2rfaai>The Sword of Truth(Last Rite, Archangel, Nox, Localoca, Majestic)https://rentry.org/pop2nnyq>Chase (Kampai, other people)https://rentry.org/KampaiChase>Tooth and Claw, Issue 1 (Saurus):https://rentry.org/qsrvx8>A Friend in Need (Mirror Devil, Drone, Yamamoto, Yamata):https://rentry.org/p7zrib56>How lucky we are for having each other (Yamata, Mirror Devil)https://rentry.org/d4g5buec>The 4:30PM to KIXhttps://rentry.org/qfnavcko>Everything Wrong With the Two of Them 2 (Reaper, Forget-Me-Not, Drekus, Feral and the rest of the Wild Hunt)https://rentry.org/bs79megt
>>92565130>Writefags (Final)>I Shall Not want(Archangel, Last Rite, Rosethorn)https://rentry.org/dr6wyh78>A Dragon's White Day (Ryu-kishi, Maru(maru), mention of the girls in 1-D)https://rentry.org/o3iji1n>A Multi-Dimensional Valentine's Day (Ryu-kishi, Maru(maru), Last Rite, Mirror Devil, Challenger, Sunlight Man, Android, Cool Boost, Radius, Marrow)https://rentry.org/399yrhts>News (Reaper, mentions of Forget-Me-Not)https://rentry.org/z7vhkv2s>Spectre of Revolution (Maru(maru), Marrow)https://rentry.org/m7o3zsqc>Vigilante Hunt, part 1 (Ryu-kishi, Last Rite, Marrow, Maru(maru), 1-D, 1-E, 1-F, Satoru Tani, Rosethorn, Karaburan)https://rentry.org/7qodqeyc>Rehab (Overdose, Yamata, Ryu-kishi and a cameo from Goldorado)https://rentry.org/rydady6a>Baited (Reaper, Satoru Tani)https://rentry.org/8pes8av2>Serpent (Mahoudeva, Honoken, Seiryu, Yamata)https://rentry.org/4aovibcq>The Plan (Desolator and The Five):https://rentry.org/8ageap3b>Team Wallflower, Assemble! (Yako, Drone, Blackout, Maru(maru), Capture Cloth, Mauler)https://rentry.org/TeamWallFlower_Part1>Conservation of Ninjitsu (Marumaru, Ryu-Kishi, Yako, Aura Curie, Blank): https://rentry.org/maru-blank>(Beach Day, Saurus, Majestic)https://rentry.org/TwitterBeef>Never Have One Last Score (Marumaru, Shoggoth): https://rentry.org/maru-shoggoth>If You Like Piña Coladas (Spark): https://rentry.org/upmhhgcd>The Doomed Plan (Desolator, Maddox, The Golden Age Five):https://rentry.org/akz38hz3>An Attempt in Broad Daylight (Floor, Maddox, Mirror Devil, Smokin' Sexy, Tether, Mercury, Desolator, Impakt, Sunlight Man, Challenger):https://rentry.org/qyd9d4d9>Catsu Curry (Bakeneneko, Yako, Capture Cloth, Overdose, Yamata)https://rentry.org/gmkwouxq>First Day: Ersatz, Rosethorn and a couple 1-D students make cameos.https://rentry.org/yka76xqz>Night of the Reaper prologue (Mahoudeva, Mirror Devil, Blackout, Forget-Me-Not, Reaper, Satoru Tani)https://rentry.org/48a3gma5
>>92565140>Writefags (Final):>Night of the Reaper, Part 1 (Reaper, Flying Force, Saurus, Rosethorn, Ryu-Kishi, Challenger, Cameos of Seiryu, Impakt, Sunlight Man, Mirror Devil, Mahoudeva)https://rentry.org/hb284fea>THE TOURNAMENT PART FIVE! (1-D, Smokin' Sexy, Popsy, Rosethorn, Majestic)https://rentry.org/wy5yord3>RELATIONSHIP CHARTS IN HEREhttps://pastebin.com/rsnEph0bFor Art, Memes, Tierlists, etc. check the rentry
RULES: https://rentry.org/b595h6dm>Team 1>Natsuo Uchiha >>92078251>D >>92035734>Himari Miko >>92227101 + Jutsus: https://rentry.org/HimariJutsu>Takeru Suzuki >>92037873>Team 2>Osamu >>92030854>Shimabukuro Fumio >>92034456>Kichōna >>92030925 + Jutsus: https://rentry.org/NardoKichonaJutsuList>Nodao-Douji >>92130402>Team 3>Kamiko Karatachi >>92474846>Masukuda Rarime >>92226219 + Jutsus: https://rentry.org/nbd7ikrf>Ichika Chinoike >>92224854>Kita >>92247657>Team 4>Kiko Inuzuka >>92046953>Remilia Orochimaru >>92067086>Itami Nanae >>92041809>Kazen Uzumaki (No Yin Chakra Affinity) >>92129825 + Jutsus: https://rentry.org/5kp2svbp>Team 5>Ezaki Tuto >>92143158>Jin Hyuga >>92067527>Shinrō Kamotai >>92225522 + Jutsus: https://rentry.org/ShinroJutsu>Yuma Kouda >>92056996>Team 6>Tsugumi >>92078303>Ghidorah >>92069165 + Jutsus: https://rentry.org/xant7fe2>Junki Takenaga >>92074519>Sen Yamamoto >>92132973 +https://rentry.org/mkyze5fa>Team 7>Kamiizumi Tadafusa >>92443623>Fujiwara Nobutake >>92104939>Kamare Hozuki >>92097216>Daiki Ueno >>92099009>Team 8>Rio Konoki >>92286130>Mitsuteru Chihoshi >>92243134>Kuro Blackshadow >>92091505>Choko Yumiya >>92229037>Team 9>Inaba Hyuga >>92178816>Mojo Nakasendou >>92130059>Kitsumoto Hachirō >>92312525 +https://rentry.org/i94sja>Eiken Shinzo >>92374513>Team 10>Dojuma Takiga >>92435927>Ayuka Hagihara >>92418225>Oishi Teruo >>92424132>Egao >>92425369>Team 11(?)>(Jonin-less)>Rinka Akagi >>92454180>Akaito Tenyo >>92463926>Chosuke-Chosuke Kirabokua >>92469859>Teamless:>Taihō Shiryō. >>92065120>Eiji >>92132327
>>92565169>Loners:>Ahiratsu Ōtsutsuki >>92073651>Darkbone >>92064881>Kijyo-Douji >>92092125>Engetsu Bōfū >>92101140>Insane Wild Boar >>92164715>??? >>92164855>Setsu Suru >>92181406>Sado Mazohisuto >>92181768>Kanami-Douji >>92194017>Barou >>92473683>Sekka Hakobu >>92143990>Gyū >>92157552>Yōki >>92157657>Koroko Kokoroko >>92235539>Mr. Hopo >>92411015>Lizard >>92249477>Aika Yuki >>92251220>Kondai >>92388984>Makura Hachimune >>92445626>Naruto MP Additional Archive (Writefags, Art, Relationship Charts, Info Cards):https://rentry.org/NartArchive>Chunin Exam Stage 1 Hub Post:>>92135567>Chunin Exam Stage 2 Hub Post:>>92331218>Chunin Exam Stage 2 Logistics Post:https://rentry.org/w78sxh6g + >>92321962>New StuffNew Relationship Chart:>Ayukahttps://rentry.org/NarutoEGFFirstImpressionsTiermaker: https://tiermaker.com/create/naruto-chunin-mcyoag-template-16244798
>What is this?Demon Eyes is a modern setting where the make-believe delusions of kids and young adults alike manifest into actual demon hunting powers. How it works is that a demon living inside you can give you powers at the cost of impacting your normal life with sin.>Rules?You can pick other builds as companions rather than choosing from the pre-made list.Ignore uniforms being gender locked.You can use custom hunter's uniform to either ignore aura requirements, or reduce the cost by -2 for a single eye type that's not wrath or lust (i.e. -2 cost to greed, gluttony, sloth, pride, or envy eyes)>DE Rentry: https://rentry.org/Demoneyes3>WrathMari Aozaki, Legion>>91469537Eiyu Isamu>>91483132Emilia Shadowsong, Battousai>>91485490Ikari Michita, The Mad Screamer>>91493870Aino Sasaki, Project Invidia>>91542925Kenji Yamada, Chuunimaxxer Supreme>>91560279>GreedNaoki Arai, Impossibility Tinker>>91483248Hayao Yamamoto>>91623423>GluttonyAkari Ichioka, Crimson Vermilion of the Night>>91457359Lem Amano, Amano Lemon>>91483342Hifumi Ishiku, @H1FVM1>>91485868>LustHinako Shimeki, The Dollmaker>>91458663Yoru Heinard, She Who Thirsts>>91471625Sezāru Ishiku>>91482768Kazuki Asahara, The Messiah>>91494741>SlothAmane Shiozaki; Amaryllis, The Grand Librarian>>91473931Makoto Nagai / Yuki Kazama, The Place-Holder>>91483765Komaru Nishitani, Buddhirupa>>91483956>PrideYoji Ryoshi>>91458024Mithran Kuro, Undefeated Knight>>91485106Haruhi Oohara, Rasalhague>>91482203Yuki Tanaka, Abyssal Sovereign>>91486160Ashton Ramsey>>91495567Yeshua, The Butterfly Man>>91556594>EnvyAki Hitoyoshi>>91481964Jace Abraxon, King of Cards>>91483191
>>92565194>WritefagsChance Encounter (Yoji Ryoshi, Akari Ichioka)https://rentry.org/5uap6He Was Never Booksmart (Aki Hitoyoshi, Amane Shiozaki)https://rentry.org/t38riHifumi Opener (Hifumi Ishiku, Sezāru Ishiku)https://rentry.org/32bs7A Whore in Church (Yoji Ryoshi, Yoru Heinard)https://rentry.org/iusr8Dollmaker's Paradise (Hinako Shimeki)rentry.org/8y8raThe Girl Inside My Head (Makoto Nagai, Yuki Kazama)https://rentry.org/ervx3The Newest Library Patron (Amaryllis, Yoji, Akari, and minor appearances of Aki, Komaru, and Yoru).https://rentry.org/DENewestPatronThese High Times Are Killing Him (Aki Hitoyoshi, Amaryllis, Akari Ichioka, Lemon Amano, Makoto Nagai, Komaru Nishitani, Mithran Kuro, Mari Aozaki)https://rentry.org/snxixus73-0 BTW (Yoji, Ikari, featuring Akari in a cameo)https://rentry.org/DE_BEJITABROBTWMaking Friends (Akari Ichioka, Hinako Shimeki)https://rentry.org/e9uk4mnuENTER (Lucifer, Haruhi, Aki, briefly Makoto)https://rentry.org/LucyHasANormalOneA Makeover and a Mixer(Yoru Heinard, Makoto Nagai, Akari Ichioka)https://rentry.org/eozqs2y3Tsun-Tsun, Dere-Dere (Ikari Michita, Mithran Kuro)https://rentry.org/xkaz4z2aA Cursed Valentines Day(Yoru, Mari, Hinako, Yoji, Mention of Amaryllis)https://rentry.org/kswi9a4iSezāru's Date (Sezāru, Akari, Makoto, Amane, Haruhi, Aki, Yoji, Hifumi, Lucifer; Mentioned Yoru, Maki)https://rentry.org/ndman3rsA response to Sezāru's Date. Happy belated VDhttps://rentry.org/679iyte9Our Dearest Librarian (Amane, Akari, Yoru, Haruhi)https://rentry.org/5b2bq44iJust Dere Now (Ikari Michita, Mithran Kuro, Mari Aozaki, Mentions of Akari Ichioka)https://rentry.org/f74au7v2White Day Blues (Makoto, Haruhi, Yoru)https://rentry.org/4pbm29u4
>>92565213>Relationship ChartsEmilia Shadowsonghttps://rentry.org/itwvpYoji Ryoshihttps://rentry.org/DEyojichartIkari'shttps://rentry.org/VeryAngryManHaruhi'shttps://rentry.org/HaruhiChartMakoto's Super Special Sugar Selection (Updated!)https://rentry.org/t7quhkMari's relationship chart.https://rentry.org/uvq7iaar>ArtfagsSloth and Gluttony Meetuphttps://archive.4plebs.org/tg/post/91495387/Makoto and Kazama Selfiehttps://archive.4plebs.org/tg/post/91507831/Makoto and Yoruhttps://archive.4plebs.org/tg/post/91510355/Messhttps://archive.4plebs.org/tg/post/91552302/reqshttps://archive.4plebs.org/tg/post/91587636/Young love is so beautiful.https://archive.4plebs.org/tg/post/91626998/girlbosses (and haruhi)https://archive.4plebs.org/tg/post/91654539/Halloween Requests Ihttps://archive.4plebs.org/tg/post/91725633Halloween Requests 2https://archive.4plebs.org/tg/post/91759065impersonation of red cross...https://archive.4plebs.org/tg/post/91759143Halloween Requests 3https://archive.4plebs.org/tg/post/91777059Halloween Requests 4https://archive.4plebs.org/tg/post/91881864Halloween Requests 5https://archive.4plebs.org/tg/post/91881869blind ragehttps://archive.4plebs.org/tg/post/91890223tall girlfriend problemshttps://archive.4plebs.org/tg/post/91928738hes_late_as_usual-1https://archive.4plebs.org/tg/post/92242556man knows bad vibes when he sees em.jpghttps://archive.4plebs.org/tg/post/92251384PSGDEhttps://archive.4plebs.org/tg/post/92267192PSG Makotohttps://archive.4plebs.org/tg/post/922672692ndSeasonhttps://archive.4plebs.org/tg/post/92357836survival not guaranteedhttps://archive.4plebs.org/tg/post/92364327>Art / Prompt reply hybrid?That One Holocure Promptrentry.org/HijackedDEPrompt>Tiermakerhttps://tiermaker.com/create/demon-eyes-2-16639737
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>>92565169Generally, what's the best specialization for Nullification Arts?
>>92565388best is subjectiveI think taijutsu nullification is coolest because it give sthe taijutsu builds something to be afraid of. By contrast genjutsu nullification just shuts down one of the cooler aspects of combat. Ninjutsu nullification is probably the strongest but also the most boring because nobody likes counterspell spammers.
>>92565448>taijutsu nullification is coolest because it give sthe taijutsu builds something to be afraid ofImagine a specialist in taijutsu nullification using an extremely soft Advanced Fighting Style like Flowing Fist. Nightmare fuel for taijutsu builds.
>>92565388I wonder if someone could pick a different specialization, like Senjutsu Nullification where they have the ability to make nature energy become inert so people can't take it in to achieve sage mode.
>>92565388Genjutsu. The others, you can more or less brute force through at least. Genjutsu though, at high levels, if you can't escape, you're pretty much fucked.
>>92565519Seems narrow and not worth it. But I would say go for it, make it a custom ability.
>>92565388Taijutsu because everyone uses it.
How df do you nullify Taijutsu? Unless it's one of those "techniques" that just straight up look like Ninjutsu (like the one Guy used versus Kisame) i don't know how it'd work.
>>92565613It might just be a set of taijutsu techniques designed to counter other taijutsu techniques.
>>92565613You start hitting like a baby like Yuma.
>>92565613Floyd Mayweather shoulder roll
>>92565613You would use your chakra to nullify taijutsu via magic.
>>92565613Kinetic Energy absorption.
>>92565718Also known as energy absorption as all energy is technically kinetic.
>>92565169What matchup do you think would be the most boring that would actually make people yawn and leave?
>>92565613>medical jutsu that rewires people's "controls" causing their hand movements to move their feet instead>ninjutsu that makes people temporarily lose muscle memory>genjutsu that causes people to lose their sense of momentum and thus severely confuse them and throw them off balance >elemental jutsu that surrounds the user in a ring of sand that automatically blocks incoming strikes
>>92565746Himari vs SenHimari throws smites and Sen throws environmental objects like rocks. Sen is more accurate and hits more, but Himari heals the damage away. This goes on for a long time. Himari eventually wins.
>>92565795Nah, they'd pull each other's hairs eventually and start wrestling.
Good news, I think I'll be done my writefag tonight!
>>92565837Nice!Hoping to hit halfway on my own tonight.
Bad news, my artfag will not be done tonight.Good news, it's a shitpost anyway so it's no real loss.
Bad News I'm completely fucked. No writing tonight.Good News. Today's almost over!
Good news, all the bad news of other anons are feeding my existence.Bad news, I'm still hungry.
Can someone help me with Reentry? I've been working just on Word. I want to do that thing where I colour different character's thoughts and speech in different colours. How do I do that?
>>92565934Like this:%red% Colored Text %%or if you want to use hex codes:%#ACBDEF% Colored Text Hex %%
>>92565934
>>92565945Thank you!
Rolled 1 (1d2)1. shitpost artfag2. maybe later
>>92566069never mind i cant think of anything
>>92566069>>92566129>another useless rollShame on you.
>>92566129Yoru and Mari shop for high heels in a fancy store. Mari doesn't want anything.
>>92566165That's too complex for me think of something a 2 year old could reasonably draw
Anons, I'm a fraud. I haven't finished my writefag yet and the Garcia-Haney fight is starting. I promise I will deliver tomorrow morning though.
>>92566129>>92566184nta, but how about some of the jonin in naruto playing poker?
>>92566187What is this, Fighting Autism?
I'm bored of Naruto. Can we start another MP now please? Thank you in advance.
>>92566253Best I can do is MHA revival #104
>>92566253Best I can do is JJK (real)
>>92566253Magi Case? At least it's not shonen
>>92566291Nta, I would like an mp of it if we knew what we could actually do starting out.
>>92566253No
>>92565169
>>92566416lord tomoki would never get caught
>>92566291Is it not? It's not!Fate, and that's basically shonen, isn't it?
>>92566433Nuh uh it's special super awesome oc and it will breathe life into this thread and once we start it then i'll be happy
>>92566416>>92566424Who's tomoki?
>>92566424The geninnappers are working under his archnemesis, anbu proctor.
>>92566416When did this happen? Is this real?
>>92566458>he doesn't know
>>92566466>When did this happen? In my 200k word writefag you can read by climbing to the top of Mt Everest where I engraved it.>Is this real?No.
>>92566253Post something you lazy bum
>>92565169Is there another cyoa with as varied and high amount of powers to choose from?
>>92566607Worm
>>92566607MHA
>>92566607onisloptrust the program
>>92566607Black Magic
>>92565746Yuma vs Kuro at night time.
>>92565746Realistically, the only way you'd get this if you had two genjutsu focused builds face off. We just don't have enough of those for a match.
>>92565169Has anyone actually used the unofficial guide to custom jutsu https://rentry.org/wwfh679c?
>>92566892Going by the jutsu lists attached to the builds, exactly one person has used it. Himari.
>>92566892I thought about trying to but1. I'm unimaginative about jutsus I want2. It's another stat block to feed powerfagging arguments
>>92566892I didn't even know it existed.Probably wouldn't have used it anyway.
>>92566892Should we flag the threadslave and have him add this to the archive rentry?
>>92566965I think so, but what's the point of that archive when this https://rentry.org/narutogeninversionmcyoag is so much more complete? We should just use this one.
>>92566975That is more complete. Wonder why he doesn't use this?
>>92566975Why are the first bunch of artfags still in 4chan links instead of archive links?
>>92566607No, this is as good as it gets.
>>92566975Holy fuark, this one is super detailed. Props to the autist!
>>92566659that shit is gonna suck
>>92566892I'm planning on using it after we've gotten a little further into the exam, props to Sen anon>>92566975The autism on this is glorious
>>92565169Dead hours. Perfect time for draw requests.
>>92567596Draw seizaru doing architecture.
>>92567596Draw a team that doesn't have a team drawing yet.
>>92567596choko doing ichika's hair
>>92567596Draw old Jonin reminiscing about the war and complaining about kids these days.
>>92567596Draw Inaba scheming and saying "All According to Keikaku"
>>92567596Shimo build manifesting their autism/schizo auras like that autism beam pic.
>>92567596All the freaky builds together manifesting their freakiness.
>>92565169Make a doodle of your team
>>92567798Anons are too lazy.
>>92567596Draw someone who hasn't gotten art yet.
>>92567596monstar cardo
>>92567596Ryona of all the characters posted above.
>>92567596You know how MHA got a couple of these stamp/emote art pieces? I'd love to see more of those. Like Eiken in the pose of The Thinker statue, Sen hiding in bushes or drawing on a scroll, Nodao getting drunk, Shinro meditating, Natsuo snoozing on some rooftiles, etc.
>>92565169Finished it!https://rentry.org/RinkasRelationsIf anyone has anything they want to suggest, feel free!
>>92569583>genderbent character keeps 'slipping' into a female mindset
>>92569583Besides being a Kaylee-style anime ripoff character, what do you want from your build?
>>92569666>anime ripoff characteranon that doesn't really work when we're an animea lot of the builds are ripoffs of naruto characters anyway.
>>92569583He's only appeared in two so far, but it's cool that anons keep in mind that Kitsumoto doesn't have a lot of information available.
>>92569583Good job anon.>At least he got lucky, being taken in by a weaker group.nta, but if Shinro some day goes angel mode without needing to be a girl, I'll chuckle at Rinka's reaction.
>>92569666It's not a ripoff since the original is played for gags while this is anon's /trash/ build. He just wants to force his fetish onto the thread.
>>92569754>nta, but if Shinro some day goes angel mode without needing to be a girl, I'll chuckle at Rinka's reaction.Honestly i'm not sure if i'll give him angel mode, it just doesn't seem like it fits him. he just doesn't feel like an 'angel' type of character. sage mode would probably feel a lot more 'thematic', but it's kind of an overdone choice.
>>92567248Mark me, you will be proven wrong.Oni cyoa makes steady progress. I would be happy to answer any questions.
>>92569837Nta, but have you considered adding other races besides oni? Everyone being an oni sounds boring as hell.
>>92569922There's humans, yokai, undead and beast-shapeshifters in the vein of ninetailed fox spirits and tanuki. I've been calling it oni cyoa, but as a working title only.
>>92569955Alright, that sounds more interesting.
>>92569788More content than when you force your fetish onto the thread, desu ne.
>>92569583Good job on the relationship chart, anon! Doing every build was ambitious.
>>92569837Would the PCs have any kind of common goal to work towards/against? Could be quests or just a source of conflict baked into setting.
>>92565169FoD updates?
>>92570342Boar scored a mass team kill. The boobkage is dead. Inaba took over and ran the place into the ground resulting in the destruction of konoha. ??? succeeded them in spirit and has begun the construction of the village hidden in the dirt.
>>92570324Both. Factional conflict designed to rope the PCs in is a feature, as well as conflict designed to pit certain people's occupations against each other. Smugglers and Yakuzas are against the cops, Bodyguards are against Assassins, and so on. If player interaction isn't your thing, you can be an exorcist who specializes in fighting Spirits or a beast hunter who specializes in fighting monsters, though both of these can get roped into player conflict by the desperate recruitment of local factions who just need strong warriors on their side.At least, that's what I've written so far. Subject to change if playtesting reveals its not fun.
>>92570386I like this a lot. Thus I have now converted to the onislop believers faction. Ganbatte.
>>92570386By the way, broadly speaking how far along is the WIP? Is it still months and months in the making, or more a matter of weeks?
>>92570482Long time away. I'm not going to commit to a timetable yet, but I've kept progress updates regular throughout the threads. Here's your update for today. Don't want to build up too much hype prematurely.
>>92570505How much is cyoa vs lore?
>>92570505What are your other cyoas?
>>92571124Roughly 3% CYOA, 3% Lore, 94% smut.
>>92571151… I don’t think you’re that anon but I also wouldn’t be surprised
>>92571146Something about your post makes me upset.I hope misfortune comes your way.
>>92571176Nta but I hope you stop posting, you bitchmade faggot.
>>92571176>something upsets meIs it the implication that you have to have prior experience to make a cyoa before anon cares?
>>92571191Likely.I want him to touch a hot stove.
>>92571124I don't know what the exact ratio of what to what will be, but ~60 pages of it is purely powers and abilities, 8 is perks and drawbacks, 5 is trainings and skills. Equipment, where you live, quests and companions are another significant portion. I can do MORE lore if that's what people would like to see.
>>92571226>73+ pagesholy shit
>>92571226I kindof just want to see the cyoa. Part of the fun of an MP is playing with a skirt length lore. Enough that I know the world I'm in but not so much I have to tailor my character to deal with an author's 40 OCs
>>92571250>Part of the fun of an MP is playing with a skirt length lore.What about all the franchiseslop?
>>92571260The franchises that have worked have major alterations that made the world skirt length.
>>92571260we always remove every canon character and ignore in universe logicsee mha having kaiju research centers and whatever the fuck happened in every worm run
>>92571247That's pages of text, anon, don't get too hyped up. Depending on formatting, sometimes even ten pages of writing in 12 point font translates to like one image page.
>>92571276>whatever the fuck happened in every worm runThe closest to canon was Worm 1 but the main character moved to Canada before she triggered. I think we had... one effortfag playing with canon characters? I forget his name but he was on the Undersiders.
>>92571286Weird, I'd expect it to be the other way around. Images taking a lot of page space and all.
>>92571260Canonslopping has been, is, and always will be discouraged.
>>92571310Images can be made really long and lots of text will be trimmed so it makes sense that the number of images will be vastly lower than the number of pages of text.
>>92571293 (me)Should also add Robot played with canon characters but more in the public service sense of 'killed them all.'
>>92565169As promised, my pre-Forest of Death writefag which is a mix between slice of life, romance and a hint of battle. The focus was to explore the relationships between genins and their teammates and some of the other teams that they may encounter. If anons like it, I'm already developing a sequel in the Forest of Death. Any of the genins I used, if you don't like how I used your genin, please let me know.https://rentry.org/w7facihh (Team 1, Team 5, Team 6)Also, I couldn't think of a name yet. I'll keep thinking but if someone else who reads this can come up with a good name let me know.
>>92571493Please don't use purple.
>>92571493Peepee Party should be the name
>>92571566But one third of the cast are peepeelets.
>>92571493Please keep using purple.
>>92571493>Sen being the single responsbile adult >Shinro and Yuma being your average tsundere shonen couple>D being a show-off>Ghidorah being pureSOVL...
>>92571640>Sen being the single responsbile adultWas the character supposed to be responsible tho?
>>92571656I mean, it sure seems like it. Isn't her whole thing wanting to protect her team because she failed her previous one?
>>92571493Extremely non canon. D doesn’t fight over girls, girls fight over him. It’s a nice piece of fanfiction by Himari though.
>>92571493>Silver: YumaI see no difference from normal text.
>>92571493This is KINO. The fact that its making D anon seethe makes it even better
>>92571710Kek
>>92571493>my build isn't includedAwful
>>92571727Perfect Irrelevant pun, innit?
>>92571794Indeed, kek.
>>92571493>claims to have team 6>junki is NOWHERE to be found
>>92571735Aside from the one glaring error, it characterizes D pretty well. Before anyone could even think about fighting D, they had to ambush him with a second team AND poison him to stand a chance. Even still he was ready to face them all head on. It actually worked out for him since D hates picking on people weaker than him. Unfortunately that encapsulates almost everyone other then himself. It’s hard to fight fair when he’s the strongest, even going base would’ve been too one sided. At least this way they can feel like they might’ve been able to win.
>>92571493Truly the power of big booba is immense. I wasn't expecting that much development in terms of ships. Himari and Ghidorah seems like a cute ship too.
Just a reminder that D-anon is a fraud:https://archive.4plebs.org/tg/thread/92087594/#92096674
>>92571493>>92571710>>92571735>>92571891This is setting up a D-Ghidorah showdown where Ghidorah overcomes D with the power of friendship and SOVL
Why don't my writefags get that many (You)s....
>>92571994I'm surprised mine get any at all desu.
>>92571994You write to wank your character instead of wanking other characters
>>92571994Because you are bad at writing.
>>92571994I can only read writefags that are presented in formats that I can copy paste into TTS programs. Is yours written that way?
>>92571970>I, Jin-Anon, I don't care about power wankery arguments>In an attempt to end this [power wankery argument] argument, I wrote something>I made myself into a retard and wanked D
>>92572050It's not my fault anons don't make characters worth wanking.
>>92571493>Jin spent the written exam staring at Himari's boobaTop kek. Good shit anon
>>92571994Probably because you post while everyone's asleep.
>>92572087If Jin-anon doesn't care for power-wankery why did he make a build that's only good for power-wankery?
Well, we got the relationship chart, and the slice of life comfy writefag...now all that's left is for 3-way-fight anon to deliver on his FoD combat, and we'll have hit the trifecta.
>>92572168He's not even top 5 strongest.
>>92572190You're kidding.
>>92572194It's a fact. Cope.
>>92572206Prove it then.
>>92572190Who are the strongest?Why are they the strongest?What makes them the strongest?How are the strongest?
>>92572190Name the top 5
>>92571970I never fail to deliver. It's simply been slow cooking... in the freezer... since March 5th...My timeframe is looking like Oni CYOA's right now...
>>92572227JinDEikenShinroGhidorah
>>925722241. D2. Power Gap3. Power Gap4. Power Gap5. D's Shadow Clone (10% Chakra Allocation)
>>92572087>>92572168Jin-anon has Dullest Kunai irl
>>92572224>Who are the strongest?Your Momma>Why are they the strongest?She so fat that if she learned calorie control, she would have more chakra than a Bijuu
>>92572241>D>Shinro>EikenThey're all super jobbers. D and Shinro are weak while Eiken just sucks.
>>92572227GhidorahIchikaNodaoEikenFujiwara
1. Yuma2. D3. Miko girl whatever he name was4. Ichika5. EikenObjective list. Everything taken into consideration.
>my build isn't in the top 5 strongestIt's joever.
>my build isn't in the top 5 strongesthell yea finally
>>92572224I'm not getting into a dumb powerfag argument, so i'll just repeat it, in a cyoa setting where we don't have protagonist plot armor, strength is relative. Ghidorah is very strong, but his strength would quickly fall off if he faced someone who had a way to counter his poison (Tough, Divine Arts, Poison Style, etc)
>>92572305>t. Jin-Anon
>>92572305Sorry, Kita is actually T0 and breaks the ranking.
>>92572320nahbarou
>no Kichona>no Itami>Ichika being there>D being there>Shinro being thereYour guys' lists suck ass. You can't powerscale for shit.
>>92572309Cope. Ghidorah is the strongest.
>>92572335LITERALLY WHO
>>92572345>KichonaJobber>ItamiActually fair. He should be there.>IchikaWhat you going to do when she touches you and makes you explode?
>>92572353He gets mogged by Shimabukuro.
>>92572367>What you going to do when she touches you and makes you explode?Touching you is the last thing Ichika would do. She's a long ranged blood blade spammer. She gets fucked at close range.
>comfy SoL discussion is derailed by yet another powerfag argumentThis is why nardo will never be good
>>92572360The guy who couldn't join the exams because he's in Special Ed
>>92572367>JobberNah I'd wank
>>92571640We have atleast a few responsible adults.Though some people have weird ideasa about responsibility
>>92572378Who wins in the battle of blood blade spam, Ichika or Ghidorah?
>>92572378Getting close range means either btfo'd by genjutsu or exploded. She doesn't have to be able to beat you in close range to do either.
>>92572395It's actually the MHAfioso who's whining about the Nardofags engaging in their mp at all
>>92572224Mr. Hopo could no diff my build.
>>92572404Ichika has more control over her blood and can spam for longer because of blood production, Ghidorah's blood is more deadly because of Black Salamander Poison and he has some other tricks too. Would be an interesting matchup.
>>92572385Should've included my build.
>>92572404Ichika wins the spam but Ghidorah wins the fight because JOBchika jobs to CHADmonculi Clay.
>>92572389i dont feel like him joining the exam would be any funill find some other way for him to interact with the mp
If your build isn't fast enough they're a jobber.The top 5 strongest are the top 5 fastest.
>>92572440Not really. Speed doesnt matter because eventually you have to hit them, then they can hit you back.
>>92572428Based. Make your own path anon.
>>92572448>uses a ranged moveWhat now?
>>92572464Name one ranged move that's relevent and scales with speed.5000*0 is still 0 li'l bro. Your shuriken spam exists to make us look cooler when it doesnt hurt us.
>>92572448All the fastest one are taijutsu builds, meaning relatively tanky, so exchanging hits is good for them.
You guys are forgetting prep time.>Kichona>GhidorahHomonculi Clay apparently lasts forever and you can make an army. >EikenIf he eats enough rocks he can be a giant mountain guy for a short time before he dies of a heart attack>Kamare>EgaoSame thing as above but with water.Everyone else is a jobber.
>>92572479Probably true. Then again everyone ends up tanky eventually.
>>92572478Chakra Flow (3).
>>92572478You'll get hit by shuriken because I wrote it so. None of the speedfags are effortfags so all your builds are jobbing.
>>92572486Kuro has shadow tentacles which means she has a conceptual advantage against other female builds.
>>92567596Saurus wearing sunglasses in this pose
>>92572505Didn't Kichonaanon just writeShe's probably one of the faster ones
>>92572503>Stop holding it>Chakra flow stops>>92572505Anon im shitposting against speedbuilds not for them. Check your fire. Blue on blue.
>>92572525Who said anything about shurikens?
>>92572522nta, but based on one of the anons who replied to that writefag, I think that writefag was an anonymous donation. I.E. someone wrote without including a build of their own.
if you can't survive exploding you're a jobbersimple as
>>92572596Does that mean we should just give everyone Fury for free?
>>92572367>JobberKiCHADna is top 3 actually.>He should be there.WRONG! He's fodder.>What you going to do when she touches you and makes you explode?Not gonna happen. She's fodder.Y'see, builds with Forest of Death writefags are the only strong ones. So Shinro, Kichona, and Jin are the strongest.
>>92572525>Chakra flow stopsThat's not how Chakra Flow works retard, they literally throw them in the episode explaining Chakra Flow
>>92572615You forgot Ghidorah, who canonically beat Kichona in the Forest of Death
>>92572596Who can survive exploding?
>>92572585Not the Chris chan shitpost, the anon didn't post their FoD writefag not to long ago
>>92572615>Y'see, builds with Forest of Death writefags are the only strong ones.Ichika has two.
>>92572622Genin
>>92572639Boar-sama and no one else. GODchika stomps.
>>92572638>jobbed to 1 (one) clay doll>jobbed to a sword fight>didn't get to be abused by Bofuhe lost
>>92572646She has two but she didn't fight anyone so she's a jobber.
>>92572647>Chakra Flow (3)If Sasuke can coat shuriken in fire style I don't see why another build couldn't do something similarhttps://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pkKI9HBp9Vg&ab_channel=Bushidobrown954
>>92572679>got to feel Himari's big boobaHe won.
>>92572696She fought Jin.
>>92572639Nodao (if her organs are left relatively intact), Kamare, Eiken, Egao. They can just tank it via their hax.
>>92572714Wait, I thought Shinro anon wrote that?
>>92572713WHOREmari's boobs are fake and she has a pp.
>>92572714Offscreen and Kita had to have plot induced stupidity to make it happen.
>>92572639Which builds are most likely to explode?https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=r1cTTsjPH-g&ab_channel=BruvaAlfabusa
>>92572745Yuma, don't be jealous.
>>92572748>wtf, why didn't this 12 year old immediately try to murder the other 12 year olds and then wager his friend's lives??? is he stupid???
>>92572773>WHOREma has smaller boobs and a smaller ppI cachinnate.
>>92572725He did, but if you're going be builds who have written themselves a FoD fight then Jin and Kichona are jobbers >>92572748Tbf, she had to have plot induced stupidity to not molly wop Jin.
>>92572785Yes. He would never make it in a war. He shouldn't be promoted due to his failure to make sacrifices for the mission.
>>92572785The stupidity is him chasing after Yuma instead of going 2v1 against Jin.
>>92572799A real slobberknocker you could say
>>92572799>Jin and Kichona are jobbers>wanking IchikaCHADin? Beat Ichika and only lost the minigame.KiCHADna? Got her team a scroll. They're winners.
>>92572799>FoD fight then Jin and Kichona are jobbers Huh? Didn't they both write fights?
>>92572860Jin only wrote himself jobbing before FoD. I don't know who wrote Kichona jobbing.
>>92572838JOBin only one because Shinro anon can't resist wanking his build and Jin's. There's no reason she should've lost.Kichona's real win is making friends. You'd know of you read the lore.
>>92571493Which buildanon wrote this anyway so I know who to glaze
>>92565023MHA was created with one purpose. To find her a mate who could match her combat autism and libido. You all failed.
>>92572954kill yourself canonslopping mhanigger
>>92572954An anon claimed her but he pussied out.
>>92572954I second >>92572963This goes for all canonsloppers
Wageslavss are so afraid of going back to work that they start their meltdown on Sundays now?
>>92572644>Not the Chris chan shitpostI think I missed this, when was it?
>>92573116I think some other anons missed it as well, here you go anon:Kichōna posts a new video to NinTubeKichōna House Tour (Kichōna, Osamu)https://rentry.org/Kichona-House-Tour
>>92573116A couple nights ago I think.
>>92565149>>THE TOURNAMENT PART FIVE! (1-D, Smokin' Sexy, Popsy, Rosethorn, Majestic)>https://rentry.org/wy5yord3So how will that work now? Sandy won, but then got disqualified. Kaylee is begging Karaburan to let her fight him, but she refuses. So will Kaylee get a free win in semi finals? And in general what Sandy did is criminal charges tier, and with how openly it was done, it would be real hard to cover it up. Also a possible lawsuit by Minnie's family and a big wrench thrown in between the Boys. This sounds like something that'd need a solid explanation to not break up the continuity.
>>92571994You just have to catch anons in a shitposty mood. A slow Sunday is probably the best for simple (you) farming.
>>92573288We'll have to wait for next time.
>>92573216Thanks anon! Bit nostalgic won't lie.
>>92573353I really hope the tournsment-anon has some good explanation for the Sandy situation because that is bordering on non-canon. I jumped back in the archive to when it was posted, and the Doctor explanation really does not work. Even if it was assumed that he can heal it without much complications, that's still an attempted murder from the legal point of view, torture and a lengthy injury for Minnie, and definitely not something that the Boys could overlook.
>>92573501He got an ear full about it the thread he posted it in. I'm pretty sure he's brainstorming a resolution to it or a retcon.
>>92573501The tournament has never been canon in the first place
>>92573501best thing that comes to mind is sandatsu lying and using the excuse that all that electricity fried his brain and he wasnt in control. but yea its a bit of a mess
>>92573522Based.
>>92569663That's literally part of the drawback. >Your mannerisms will be subconsciously altered to fit your new sex; you’ll realize what’s happening and how your speech and movements are different, but you will not be able to resist these new ‘natural’ behaviors.>>92569666I disagree with the comparison, but I guess it depends where the cyoa goes. For now, I'm planning on doing a FoD writefag.>>92569686I hope you didn't mind that I made Rinka irritated with him, since she wouldn't know he's deaf!>>92569754Thanks! Rinka would be pissed, but at least that's not a concern until B rank at the earliest!>>92570295It did take a while, but quite a few builds have so little to work with, I could do pretty much whatever with them.
So...anyone wanna talk about somethin'?
>>92573288I'm expecting some WWE shit after what happened.
>>92574018Pick a topic. What do you want to talk about?
>>92574127Something about naruto that isn't powerfaggotry.
>>92574109>Sandy just accepting itKEK
>>92574131What makes a character interesting? How can we incorporate character arcs into the tournament in a way that's not about getting stronger?
>>92574153>What makes a character interesting?That's a pretty broad question, there's not really an specific answer.>How can we incorporate character arcs into the tournament in a way that's not about getting stronger?By making the fighting seeds interesting beyond just putting rivals close by so their victories aren't assured by people wanting to see them fight. There are more ways to have an interesting matchup than a rivalry.
>>92574131what are your thoughts on the emerging ships? personally I'm a big fan of the D-Ghidorah-Jin-Himari love quadrangle and the Shinro-Yuma tsundere ship
>>92574197I can't say i care for love geometricals, but the Shinro/Yuma pairing is amusing, the literal monk might be the first of the genin boys to get a girlfriend.
>>92574197>quadrangleThose are called squares retard.
>>92574197>Shinro-Yuma tsundere ship???Where are you seeing this ship exactly?
>>92574246You seen the latest writefag?
>>92574242Nta, but use google before posting so confidently. Have the humility to double check.
>>92574256No. It was really bad so I stopped reading it halfway through.
>>92574256Yuma got offscreened and Shinro was baffled at her stupidity.
>>92574197I'm all in on Ichoko OTP.
>>92573288Not tournament anon, so take this ramble with a grain of salt:On the Sandy beatdown, I don't see a problem, at least when it comes to healing and legal. Quirks changed society drastically, to the point that anything short of dismemberment can be healed, and that changed how society viewed injuries in general. If a quirk doctor can have you walking out of the emergency ward that night after getting hit by a car, then standards of injury are going to change. Quirk schools have also been shown to allow insane levels of violence done to their students, including letting them cripple themselves and launch explosions at their opponents. The issue with Sandy isn't what he did, it's that he did it when Majestic called the fight. That's the bit that has serious consequences. As for the boys, I can see Sandy pulling a pity card and Inigo defending him from Bobby, who gets called away for his next fight. With the last few lines, I highly doubt that tournament anon is going to deny Kaylee her fight, considering they've talked about 32 matches from the start, but I reckon she'll take him out to close that page.
>>92574263Not all quadrilaterals are squares you stupid fuck.
>>92574354Obviously? You ok?
>>92574383Apparently it's not obvious since you think love square is synonymous with love quadrangle you retard. And then you have the gall to correct me? Kill yourself.
>>92574414We are all anonymous here. You don't have to double down on your mistakes like a retard. You can just shut up after accidently making yourself look stupid.
>>92574439>hurrr durrr you should just stop respondingIt's actually my personal duty to correct retardation, including yours.
Which shale fits each build?
>>92574456Shale? As in fine-grained, clastic sedimentary rock? Alright, how many types of shale should I use? Just the classic 3?
>>92574456*shape
>>92574455You didn't know what a quadrangle was and sperged out in your confusion. Just stop embarrassing yourself. It's sad.
>>92574475I know what a fucking quadrangle is. Love quadrangles don't exist. They're not a thing. And you can stop embarrassing yourself by learning how to spell "accidentally", you stupid fuck.
>>92574495If you knew what a quadrangle was, you wouldn't have posted "those are called squares" like a dumbass. Just like someone who knows what a dumbass is wouldn't try to correct me by calling you a retard, even though you are one.
>>92574520Quadrangle is NOT synonymous with squares, you dumb bastard. Even if it was, you don't say "love rectangle." You don't say "love trapezoid." And you don't say "love rhombus." It's a SQUARE. A love square does not have any synonyms. Retard and dumbass are synonymous. Now shut the fuck up, you numbskull. Can't believe you're lecturing me when you can't fucking spell correctly. I thought you were supposed to shut up after your mistakes?
intelligent person: >>92574495midwit: >>92574520Know the difference.
>>92574472Yeah, just use the classic 3. I wanna see your shale list.
>>92574562It's not synonymous with a square, which is why your post was retarded. Nor is a dumbass synonymous with a retard. I'm lecturing you, because you continue to defend your stupidity and I enjoy mocking you. I will say "love quadrangle" every time now as a reminder to you of how arrogant you were in your own stupidity. A quadrangle is not a square. Their post was completely fine, but you jumped in to call them a retarded because the word confused you. Every reply you make only makes you look dumber.
>>92574564nuh uh
>>92574495I googled it and see the term used in everything from newspapers to periodicals to social media. Movies, short stories, TV specials, and trashy novels have it as part of their name. And it logically extends from "love triangle," itself a more popular idiom.Says here you're a faggot.
>>92574596
>>92574663claystonebros, where we at?
>>92574612>which is why [CONJECTURE]Sure, bozo. That was a whole bunch of nonsense you just spouted. So you agree that I'm right? Retardation works in strange ways. And yeah, retard and dumbass are synonymous, dumbass-retard.The only thing you're mocking is yourself, because you still haven't followed your advice.>>92574653I looked it up and I've only found articles made by dumbasses. The stupid bitch who made that retarded Velma show uses quadrangle. Now I know that it's only used by retards. And it does not matter if it logically extends from triangle because square already exists, is more popular, is simpler, etc. Triangle and square are both used commonly as general shape names. The reallogical extension is square, anyway, because of the reasoning that was mentioned beforehand. Go outside and talk to someone for once, maybe you would know that love quadrangle is nonsense.
>>92574197>>92574236>>92574297>>92574663explain
>>92574612>call them a retarded
>>92574728>MudstoneIn between the others.>ClaystoneThey don't have a very silty vibe.>SiltstoneThey have a silty vibe.
>>92574726>he still thinks retard and dumbass are synonymousMan you are really bad at using google. Seriously, just look up words you don't understand. You did it for quadrangle after I pointed out your mistake. Try doing it again!
>>92574762what's a silty vibe?
this has to be a top 3 most pointless argument in mcyoag history
>naruto finally gets a half decent writefag and its derailed by shit flinging argumentsNaruto is doomed to fail
>>92574909I think you meant silt flinging
Why are mhafags so salty?
>>92574909What else would you expect from the type of person who still cares about Naruto in current year?
>>92574948No one does tho.
Is anyone working on something BASED AF?
>>92574973Shale CYOA
>>92574973every time I work on something I get 200-1000 words then scrap it
>>92574973I only make cringe.
>no one talked about my build againof course....
>>92574973Probably not, there's feelings and shit.
>>92575038>feelingswhat kind
>>92575047love and anger
>>92575047Me feeling up some fat titties.
>>92575057D...
>>92575057Kita...
>>92575057Shinro...
>>92575057Natsuo, Takeru, Osamu, Shimabukuro, Itami, Kazen, Ezaki, Jin, Ghidorah, Junki, Kamiizumi, Fujiwara, Kamare, Daiki, Inaba, Mojo, Kitsumoto, Eiken, Dojuma, Oishi, Egao, Akaito, Chosuke-Chosuke, Taihō, and Eiji...
>>92575057Tsugumi...
>>92565169Does Sage/Angel Mode have a time limit? Are they exhausting to use?
>>92575196Sage: Yes, unless you cheat somehow.Angel: Who knows.
>>92574909>finally gets a half decent>implying the others weren't goodRude.
>>92575177Every build not mentioned here likes men btw
>>92575196Sage Mode doesn't exhaust you. It does run out though.Naruto himself was able to use 3 elemental rasengans before his was burnt through, but that was his ultimate finishing move at the time.
Rolled 2 (1d2)1. update relationship chart2. back into the writefag mines
>>92575242>Sage Mode doesn't exhaust you.Shit, I'll have to cut that part out and come up with something else.
Rolled 1 (1d2)>>92575267It's my turn.1. update relationship chart2. my life is like a bideo game, trying hard to beat the stage (play bideo games)
>>92575239insane wild boar bros...
>>92575273Who even has sage mode as a genin??
>>92575239Dbros... Kitabros... Shinrobros...
>>92575289Wait for it, I'm almost done, you'll see.
>>92575289Darkbone my KING
>>92575289Tomoki.
>>92565169Here's my promised writefag about how Akaito got Rinka to be his political mascot and mouthpiece:One Step Closer to World Unification and Regaining Manhood (Akaito, Rinka)https://rentry.org/chmoipnh
https://rentry.org/ShaleCYOAHere's a Shale cyoa.
>>92575420FemaleEliteT3 Pickaxe
>>92575479AAAAAIIIIIEEEEEEEEEEEmeant for >>92575443
>>92575443>Male>Middle Class>Tier 3 Drill
>>92575443>NameBoonwood Shaleburrow>GenderMale>Social ClassElite>Shale MiningTier 2 PickaxeTier 3 PickaxeBoonwood Shaleburrow, a wealthy shale owner, has declared war on the President of Shaleland.
>>92575443>NameOld Man Pickaxes>GenderMale>ClassExtremely Poor>Shale MiningT1 Pickaxes x20
>>92575443>he edited itlmao
>>92575535He needed to prevent my infinite drill strategy
>>92575553Actually he needed to nerf females
>>92574726tri-angle, the shape with three angles, becomes quad-angle, a shape with four angles. It extends because it RHYMES you fucking glass-eater.
>>92575443Too limiting. I can't make the build I want to make.
>>92575591Dawg if you really wanna continue that argument I'm afraid you should just be put into a dumpster, and then that dumpster should be lit on fire.
>>92575593Same, I want to make a build but she NEEDS 20 pickaxes and that just can't happen.
>>92575633For me it's the limit on social class options. I want to be extra extra rich.
>>92571493So what's next for the love quadrangle?
>>92575690*square
>>92575420Feels like you just forced Rinka into being what you wanted without reading her relationship chart, where it says she avoids politics with Akaito.Also just dumping the "lol u didn't need to become a grill" bit is both forcing their backstory to conform to you as well as poorly handled in general.Wouldn't be surprised if Rinkanon says this is noncanon.
>>92575420This is terrible. I cannot wait for akito to get BOARd
>>92575769cope
>>92575690D and Jin get into a powerfaggotry argument while Ghidorah has sex with Himari and infects her with poison AIDs
>>92575815can't, i'm too busy being in a love square with your mom, sister, and grandma
>>92575797>>92575813Sorry, I'm totally fine with this being noncanon. I kinda just wanted to make do on what I said, I know my writing is shit.
>>92575845Now you're making me feel bad
This is Akaito anon's second strike. I shall not disclose what happens on the third.
>>92575860You'll make a jonin for him?
>>92575420This doesn't involve my build and I'm indifferent other anons builds are represented. Therefore I declare it KINO.
>>92575874>not declaring anything that doesn't feature your build as being automatically cringePretty cringe desu
>>92575420This doesn't involve my build and I'm indifferent to how other anons' builds are represented. Therefore I declare it CRINGE.
>>92575927It's too late to cover your tracks now. You're on the list.
>>92575833Not what that phrase means.
>>92575944Yes it is, you come from an incestuous family of lesbians. That's the only way you came out so retarded.
>>92575935I'm not that anon, I don't forget words or grammar.
>>92566975I forgot to mention this until now, but thank you for reminding me that this archive exists. Not only is it more complete, now I have one less job to do since someone else is managing the archive.
>>925651693 way fight anon, it is time to deliver.
>>92576232Didn't we get that earlier
>>92576257I am referring to the FoD writefag Untitled (Team 4 vs Team 8 vs Team 9).
>>92572954it's clearly saurus
>>92576269oh then yeah he should do thar
>>92576279oh then yeah he should do her
>>92576279Saurus IS married and he hasn't said to whom...
>Natsuo- 62 points (40 base + 15 perk + 7 drawback)- 107 points spent (17 natures, 4 basics, 6 advanced, 35 kekkei genkai, 40 entity)This guy's build is extremely illegal.
>>92576358Nobody cares about the non-genins desu
>>92576358>Still pushing his retarded narrative where Jinchuuriki costs points.
>>92576358Ahem. Technically he's 110 points spent because you can't purchase elemental rasengan without base rasengan.
>>92576358>17 natures, 4 basics, 6 advanced, 35 kekkei genkai, 40 entity17+4+6+35+40 = 102. You jobbed at basic addition. And as >>92576429 pointed out, the 40 point entity cost is just a delusion on your part. That brings the cost down to 62 even. You're just an idiot.>>92576487This is a legit complaint though.
>>92576588It was just meant to be a purchase of Rasengan. I added the Scorch part for flavor since that's the only version he really uses, and [Elemental] options come free anyways. It was meant to be like how Kakashi can use the Rasengan, but he only ever uses Raikiri. Just his preferences.
>>92565194This is probably my favorite CYOA ever. What are the chances of Demon Eyes getting an update or "DLC" like some others have?
>>925767300
>>92573530You’re making it too complex. Inigo refuses to believe sandy would do that despite all evidence to the contrary, finds out about the remote sandy’s mom used ltells Hifumi, they destroy it together then tell bobby and sandy they can fight for fun. I’m not tournament anon but that seemed the path of leaste resistance
>>92565169>>92576232Alright anon, I have to apologize because I wasn't able to finish in time and only wrote up everything leading up to the major fight but there's still a lot of work I'm proud of so here it is. I'll either keep writing/make more adjustments to it or make it into a two parter. Feel free to give any input for your build. Also in Asia the Number 4 is associated with DeathThe Number of Death (Remilia, Kazen, Itami, Mojo, Eiken, Choko, Kuro, Mitsuteru, Tomoki, Mentions Kitsumoto)https://rentry.org/az2nk6q8
>>92576999IT'S HERE, IT'S REAL!
>>92576999Nice trips, anon. I'll get to reading this right now.
>>92576730Someone's working on it, but they haven't made much of an update since. They even have the files from doll anon.
>>92576999>TomokiWHO IS HE?????
>>92577019The only improvement I would make is have Choko crying and Mitsu leaving a blood trail. Otherwise, I love the piece.>>92576999I'll get to reading this: gotta know how the genin are doing.
>8 characters into a relationship chart>already 1000+ words and has taken multiple hoursHuh. Never realized I was this inefficient.
>>92577347which character?
>>92576999I liked it, mostly, kinda. Lots of criticisms.>Timeline:Mojo vs Remilia and Kazen -> Mojo returns to his team -(maybe happened at the same time?)> Team 9 vs Team 8 -> Eiken chases Choko -> Itami interferes -> Mojo gets the jump on Choko and then Remilia gets the jump on MojoDid I get this right?1. Why did Mojo try to go 1v2 against Remilia and Kazen? Where's the rest of Team 9? The only possibility I can think of is that Eiken and Kitsumoto were busy fighting Choko, but if so, there's the problem of why Mojo would leave his team and go alone against Remilia and Kazen.2. Did Choko attack Team 9 alone without informing her team or did she get discovered by Kitsumoto, so Eiken chased her? Where's Mojo during this? Mojo being busy fighting Remilia and Kazen would run into the problem of him going alone for no reason.2. Mojo isn't good at transformation, had little knowledge of who he was impersonating, has Genius, and doesn't have Overconfidence and his Concealment is meh, so I don't think he would believe himself to be able to fool Remilia and Kazen, or any genin, really, into giving him their scroll and successfully escaping.3. I really don't think Mojo could have escape from Remilia and Kazen like that. He isn't fast and has little stealth. He can't turn invisible either, so "invisible target" is weird.4. Mojo not preparing any golems is crazy. He should have at least a few.5. Kitsumoto will surely appear at some surprising moment latter to be useful, but as of now, he should have slit Choko's throat during Eiken's fight with Itami.
>>92577352Kita. At this pace don't expect it any time soon.
>>92577357>Mojo vs Remilia and Kazen -> Mojo returns to his team -(maybe happened at the same time?)> Team 9 vs Team 8*Mojo vs Remilia and Kazen -(maybe happened at the same time?)> Team 9 vs Team 8*Former ended before the latter.Meant this. And Mojo returned to his team somewhere in between those two events.God, formatting this was hard. Maybe I even messed this post up, idk anymore.
>>92577405>somewhere*sometime
>>92577357>>92577405>Team 9 vs Team 8Fuck, this is more like Eiken (and presumably Kitsumoto) vs Choko.I need sleep.
>>92577361No problem. Looking forward to it.
>>92576999Itami is not good at Clone. He shouldn't have been able to use clones like that. 4 clones, indistinguishable except for being unable to interact with anything, at 0 investment is nuts.>'Conentrate. Concentrate. Remember how he flowed his chakra' Blood begins flying off Itami's fist but with every hit his arm get harder and stronger. 'REMEMBER!'>imitated my Smashing Fist styleWhat is this? Itami has Smashing Fist to begin with.Another thing, why did Itami and Eiken not use their Advanced Fighting Styles whenever given the chance? They seem to have held off on it like a trump card when it should be their default way of combat.
Maybe Naruto powersets are just too complicated
>>92577549Probably. It could give rise to amazing logical scenarios, especially fights, that take everything into account. Or it could degenerate into writefags forgetting partial amounts of builds' kit (especially Genius). It's been mostly the latter for fights and I'm not just talking about the recent writefag.
>>92577357Criticism is perfectly welcome>1Reading Mojo's build, traps and setups seemed to be what he excelled at. He would know that he'd have a limited amount of time to get close enough to another nearby team AND make all the preparations for his trap setup since Ritual Arts/Trap Seals/Makeshift Traps are all dependent on prep time so when the exam started he rushed as far out as he could and began his preparations. More on this at your second 2>2It could be either or for the first two, my original intent was that Choko went to scout out the area since she has her Dojutsu and hunting skills and thought she could easily snipe two unsuspecting genin but didn't realize that her arrows wouldn't have any effect on Eiken who then chased her down with the help of Kitsumoto's Sensory Arts. Kitsumoto and Eiken got separated since Kitsumoto hanged back because Choko's arrows could actually kill him and Eiken was intent on chasing her down>2 againMojo is a Genius and was able to memorize many of the mannerisms of the genin he encountered before the exam. Itami is just an oddball with a lot of idiosyncrasies he couldn't have known. If he was impersonanting someone else there's a good chance he could've fooled them. He wouldn't know which squad would have which scroll but because he needed a squad with an Earth Scroll, he figured if he showed off a Heaven Scroll they'd want to start heading towards the tower, which would lead them further from his team. His main intent was to either fool a team into trusting him, then lead them straight into his traps and completely annihilate them, since they wouldn't be suspecting anything and would take their scroll for himself. Or his other plan would be to gain their trust and lead them to his own squad and then betray them.
>>92577549Seems more like a problem of juggling like 9 characters.I don't think it really matters tho. Narrative > statfagging and builds like Itami have been abandoned so they're better thought of as props.
>>92577357>3Concealment Arts says you could create a cloak to bend light around yourself so that was the main inspiration since he doesn't have a jutsu list of how he uses it. I could change it but I think specing into Concealment could very much allow you to gain an advantage from running from a battle>4For the Trap Seals, it was intended to be a massive onslaught attack that he'd lure them into, and his original aim wasn't a prolonged fight. So when he got found out he only activated his traps so he wouldn't use up any more of his chakra then only used jutsu for getting away. A Golem could've stalled but making one on the fly like that would've cost him a of of chakra>5Killing Choko doesn't benefit Kitsumoto since his objective is Inaba's tasks for him as well as passing the exam. Its implied he was doing some funny business when his teammates got away from him
>>92577612>Narrative > statfaggingThere is no conflict between narrative and "statfagging". They are inherently intertwined.You can write whatever outcome you want, but you need to come up with HOW ("statfagging") it happened. Plot holes (bad narrative) happen when the HOW doesn't make sense.
>>92577657This doesn't change that builds should be ignored outside of broad strokes for dumpers.
Who the hell is Mojo? Isn't that a dumped build?
>>92577687Some grandpa. I wouldn't consider him a dumper but he doesn't seem to post with any regularity.
>>92577593>>92577639It seems like the real problem is not explaining all these background actions. You should put them in, somehow. Maybe have a small scene of Mojo putting traps and talking to his team about him fooling Remilia and Kazen for their scroll, another scene about the start of the Eiken and Kitsumoto vs Choko, and another scene for Kitsumoto "doing some funny business".
>>92577507Every build has access to basic jutsu like Clone, even without investment. However Itami doesn't actually use Clone, he's making afterimages with his Swift Style similar to how Shisui uses his speed.https://naruto.fandom.com/wiki/Afterimage_Clone >Itami has Smashing Fist to begin withThis was to heighten the suspense and to make Eiken more of an indomitable monster. If Itami could use Smashing Fist from the start, then it kind of steals Eiken's thunder of being a terrifying stone tank. It was also for more backstory on why Itami even has Smashing Fist style when it doesn't really fit his Wind themed build and to reflect his Genius Perk>Another thing, why did Itami and Eiken not use their Advanced Fighting Styles whenever given the chance?Eiken is using a combination of Smashing Fist style along with Petrification for most of his hand to hand combat. I only named it when he does something really impressive with it, but the thunderclap and ripping through the wind dragon was him using Smashing Fist. After Itami figures it out he's also using it from then on
>>92577739>Eiken is using a combination of Smashing Fist style along with Petrification for most of his hand to hand combat.This was poorly communicated. The problem being:>I only named it when he does something really impressive with itwhich makes it seem like he only used it then.>This was to heighten the suspense and to make Eiken more of an indomitable monster. If Itami could use Smashing Fist from the start, then it kind of steals Eiken's thunder of being a terrifying stone tank. It was also for more backstory on why Itami even has Smashing Fist style when it doesn't really fit his Wind themed build and to reflect his Genius PerkThat's certainly a... creative liberty you took. I'm not against it, but you should have done something like put an authors note there or at the start of the writefag to inform readers of this as it is VERY eyebrow raising.
>Mike Jonin>B Rank>Skilled>Talented>Prodigious>Deep Reserves>Distinct Look>Bad Habbit>Water>Unarmed 3>Ninja Tools 3>Weapon Art 3 (Steel Wire)>Chakra Flow 3>Advanced Taijutsu 3>Howling Mountain Style 3>Chakra Impact 3>Genjutsu Nullification 3>Chakra Thread 3Behold! Generic jonin man. He fights with spools of steel wire enhanced with chakra thread.He tries to loop the wire around people's necks and behead them.He's really simple to write for because he just does one thing.
>>92577791Cringe garbage, not funny, never cook again.
>>92577829>cringe>cookI'd feel a lot more offended if you spoke like a normal person.
>>92577727>Maybe have a small scene of Mojo putting traps and talking to his team about him fooling Remilia and Kazen for their scrollThis would really kill the the reveal of the encounter in the beginning, and it was also a matter of maintaining different perspectives throughout the story. Following Squad 4 in the beginning, then switching over to Choko and Itami and then Squad 8/Mojo near the end. I tried to reflect more of Mojo's thought process on the last part, but didn't want to derail the current plot too much. Altho I did consider following Mojo's perspective from directly after his skirmish with Kazen and Remilia, to knocking out Choko but thought it would take too much time and ruin the pacing>Another scene about the start of the Eiken and Kitsumoto vs ChokoJust another issue of maintaining a natural flow of the story, it was easier to imply the situation rather then halt the story and go over every detail that led to her current predicament. Altho you are certainly welcome to write about that encounter if you think it'd be interesting>And another scene for Kitsumoto "doing some funny business"This is something I intend to delve into further down the road
>>92577788>This was poorly communicatedI felt it would've become really tiresome to write "Smashing Fist Style this", "Smashing Fist Style that" every other time they attacked each other but I might have Eiken explain that the strength and hardening was the core aspect of the fighting style.>Like put an authors note there or at the start of the writefag to inform readers of this as it is VERY eyebrow raisingI could go back and say I took some creative liberties but my thought process usually aligns with >>92577612
Ah damn I should've spoiler tagged all of those
>>92576999Good job, anon! I'm not good enough at combat or well read enough into the other builds to critique it any, but I found it entertaining to read. Given she's being chased by Eiken, yeah, I can totally see Choko being at her wit's ends and screaming bloody murder. The interaction with Itami was funny, and I feel like you did Choko well in this. Choko is eighteen though.>>92577265>The only improvement I would make is have Choko crying and Mitsu leaving a blood trail.Here's an alt version, sensei.
>>92576999I like the fight scenes it went really well. I like that you incorporated Remilia's lisp, it was really cute.very kino anon.
>>92576999Everyone assumes Kuro is full of shit and its great.Shes too autistic to brag about any of her actually useful techniques, she only mentions the one that works during night, so nobody expects her to have the actually useful shadow techniques aswell.
>have a better idea for my build's moveset that will be much easier to write for>it's too late to change everything now because of how much of a change it isWomp womp.
Threadslaves?
>>92576999That's pretty cool, anon, but as others said it feels a bit confusing. It feels weird that Team 9, which has *two* geniuses, would just go around splitting themselves. If Kitsumoto's plan is to just pass, why is he letting his teammates go around alone, get jumped, and lose? They just lost two fights in a row because they were completely divided.
>>92579385In fact, Team 9 is basically fucked, aren't they? Eiken is cleaved in half and Mojo was bitten by a snake. They basically already lost completely because for some reason the two geniuses decided to split.
>>92579403Now that you mention it, Eiken getting cleaved in two in one hit is like wtf. Also, Itami said something about hurting his fist when first punching Eiken, so even if the one shot was possible, his leg should have been fucked due to the durability difference.
>>92579458This, I don't want to be accusatory or imply this was on purpose, but it just feels like Team 9 got hit with the stupid ball. The team with *two* geniuses got outmaneuvered. Eiken getting literally cleaved feels weird. And Mojo didn't even use his giga-nigga golems he has access to.I mean, no offense, juggling 9 builds is hard. But it feels like team 9 got the short end of the stick here.
I'm okay with Team 9 getting the short end of the stick because I don't like them. However, anon's writing being shit means that mine is better by comparison. I have won with this outcome.
>>92579870>>92579870>>92579870Hogs, the threadslaves are dead. Enjoy my slop.
I hate corpo execs.
>>92580032Wait for my corpo exec mp.
>>92580044Expect an "everyone dies" type of a weitefag.
>>92580139Expect 100k words of pure tearjerking kino.
>>92575196Angel Mode is a cyoa original, so we can't compare to canon like Sage Mode >>92575242From the text, it doesn't drain, but is dependent upon the user's skill in Divine Arts. Since killing a build from it would be cringe, having it run out inversely depending on how skilled the user is with Divine Arts, and possibly other divine skills like purification or exorcism.
>>92566756>I'm more comfortable typing run-ons once bump limit or secret hours hit.A fair point, thus I tried to wait until such a time to reply!>how do you visualize resistance to instagibs without outright no-selling them?Very tricky, so I don't think there's a consistent answer. It'd have to be a case-by-case basis. For example, something like the Mirror World Eye would either result in the clone being an inferior copy or it could mean the Mirror World Eye needs time to activate and 'break through' the target's resistance- I.E. they'd need to buy time for their win condition instead of using it immediately. Something like Draconic Overlord is more annoying. Strictly speaking, it's a self-target ability. Best you could do is say that it's strength and durability is magical in nature and that resistance means having a counter against that- like if the dragon was wearing invisible magic armor or something.Best you could really do as a rule-maker is something vague and more result-oriented. Basically defining resistance by the goal of 'no instagibs' rather than trying to describe exactly how that's supposed to work.>That's usually the case. Though, AU like the schoolslop was an exciting peek into questionable canonicity that allows others to explore aspects of the character that wouldn't normally surface, but you could only go that route when there's been a bit of ground established.Strong agree. AU schoolslop was a really fun prompt. The conversations were fun, the ideas were fun, etc. I think even for us it was a sort of turning point where we changed gears narratively for our characters- namely with how Akari just wanted to chill and be normal. Perhaps it was a goal before that point, but the AU brought that idea to the forefront.>That, and also so that the height gap between Lucifer and Mari could be reversed.I mean... Fair. Very fair. Can't argue with that logic.
