what's up, I'm a published comic artist but the industry is basically a dying aids patient right now. so I'm trying to branch out in to a daily comic called Chaotical, if that's your thing check it out. this is early access material, too.
>>153896325Not bad. Got a laugh out of me. Good luck on your work. It's a nightmare out there.
>>153898966Thanks man
>>153896351Okay this one made me lol despite being the stupidiest and most overdone of the lot
>>153896325lol. I like your artstyle
Eh, it's a little edgy
>>15389630112 years ago, in the bathroom at the dental building on Marine Corps Recruit Depot San Diego, someone drew a highly detailed anime girl spreading her pussy in one of the stalls and I still think about her sometimes. Just saying I understand how these cavemen feel.
>>153896351Is that the line to the girls bathroom?
You may wish to focus on your writing. The art is really good, but the writing isn't hooking me and I really want to like it.
>>153901417Go buy a thesaurus, like right now
It's decent stuff, feels on par with a lot of online joke a day comics that I see on instagram and twitter.
>>153896301tits too small, no wonder it took 30000000000 more years before it took off
>>153901467>12 years ago, in the bathroom at the dental building on Marine Corps Recruit Depot San Diego,Did they get you?Did the drawing influence your decision in any way?
>>153901575I thought they went extinct 65 millions years ago wtf
Great start. Feels like a combination between The Parking Lot is Full and early Jhonen Vasquez. Keep doing it and I'll read.
last one in my arsenal. Gotta make more. Hopefully one of these catches fire on plebbit or something. I’m thinking the caveman one might. Thanks for reading, gents. Til next time
>>153902697Poor bastard. Hitting rock from that height is like hitting water.Good luck, OP.
For what it’s worth, your style is good, you actually do cartooning instead of talkathons >>153896406Heh
>>153902529What do you mean, like did it get me to sign up? I was in the dental building at boot camp. I was already in.
>>153896301>>153896351>>153896406Got some heartly laughs, thanks.
>>153903051>you actually do cartooning instead of talkathonsThat is probably the strongest aspect to these. The concepts themselves could use some refinement.
>>153902697Looks good anon and keep trucking these are kinda like a modern mother goose and Grimm strip. Just trust yourself, you’ve got decent instincts
>>153896301Lean into the more absurd ones, that's where you shine, and lay off the sorta obvious low hanging fruit that may as well come from reactionary boomers at local papers.
>>153903201Top tier advice.
>>153903109San Diego should have been my tip offAnd what did you learn?
>>153904919The big green weenie doesn't discriminate.
>>153896301I respect the grind and these gags aren't half bad >>153896325>>153896351
>>153896440Kek I like some of the additional context to the joke with the step dad t shirt
