Jesus, that millenial dialogue writing
>>154291557that's genuinely fucking awful>dude i can do the world of cardboard speech too! check this out :Dthis is why comics is a dying media
>>154291557>>154291580Superboy Prime is a millennial that says dumb things. That's a core part of his character
>>154291589It's still cringe regardless
>>154291557there are plenty of great millennial writersthey're not getting hired to write big 2 capeshit
This could have been written better even to get the same result
>>154291557>it's fuckin' prime time, babyo shid nigga
>>154291557It’s Prime
>>154291557jesus christ you can feel the looks of the soiqueers who wrote this being all omfg its just my cool stark marvel quips. hue hue hue. can we purge everyone under 35 and start over without this quip queer mindset
>>154291557>millenial>Joshua Williamson (born 1981)every fucking time, I wish we could split pre-1990 and post 1990 Millenials. It's so bizarre thinking I'm the same generation as someone who was 18 when Pokemon came out or didn't browse Newgrounds in school or just plain wasn't exposed to the internet before high school.
>>154291921Why do you say this like you think it will convince us offhand he always talked like a quirky 4th wall reddit deadpool?Worlds apart
>>154291557Lmao he should've stayed in his bedroom making SBP redemption threads on forums instead, what a downgrade
>/co/'s idea of good writing
>>154291965Deadpool is an idiot, SBP is a child throwing a tantrum.
>>154291979Absolutely no one defends or cites ASM for good writing you cheeky lad.
>>154292072Whats the difference.
>>154291646/thread
>Johns has been writing Prime since 2005>he used "Prime Time" a single time in 2011, in a tie in of a secondary book.>immediately became one of the most iconic catchphrases of the modern era of comics, to the point it's always referenced when Prime appearsIsn't it weird?
>>154292130>>154291646We have such needy desperate craving from the Big 2 for young persons engagement and appeal.And always writing by people who are at their very youngest mid-forties. Most often approaching their sixties. Buscemi is the rule not the exception.
>>154292277"Prime Time" manages to be both cool and corny at the same time. It just werks.
>>154291956This post was made by a 15 y/o larper
>>154291557What is wrong with this? Seriously, what is the problem?
>>154291557Superman is highly satanic because he's a false messiah
>>154291979>mansplainyim getting real tired of male's being attacked over things. fuck off with this male hate sexism and womansplain talk which is always anti male.fuck womansplaining at men but seething if you tell them they did something wrong in theory.
>>154291979You mean OP's idea of good writing
>>154292689Kys, faggot
>>154292689He's not the messiah, he's a very naughty boy.
>>154291557The new ASM issue did something similar. Aunt May said "mansplaining"And considering the context it didn't even make sense
>>154295191Are you implying something sexual?
>>154291557Brutally clashing with the seriousness of the pic.
>>154291557Same guy>>154291589
>>154291557That's literally what Prime would say. He's not supposed to be eloquent, he's kind of a shallow geek.
>>154291589He's a zoomer now
>>154296035One would expect a meaningful moment in a redemption arc where a character accepts responsibility for mass murder not to be written so stupidly goofy.
>>154292446What's the context of this page?
>>154296835Manchester Black is making Prime relive Infinite Crisis in an attempt to make Prime punch reality again.
>>154291557This isn't real...right?
>>154295219No, something cultural.Browns wouldn't understand.
>>154296764Explain why without sounding like a pretentious tard.
>>154297117Character development. Gravitas. Literacy.
>>154291557Joshua Williamson>>154291979Joe KellyAvoid them at all costs.
>>154297131>failed miserably>couldn't even provide rudimentary explanationWhat's it like being a pseud? I'll never know.
>>154297117>>154298750Calling someone a pretentious pseud for having different tastes in comic book from you is the pseudest, most pretentious thing of all.
>>154291557gotta be an edit
>>154291557I can't wait until we get the genius that is zoomer writing.>Finna dead ass whoop Darkseid. Rocky ahh bruh fr.
>>154296991Imagine having the super strength but not durability to punch your own arm off kwab
>>154301301They're retconning it I guess to make Prime's redemption more palatable unless that's just supposed to be the way Prime remembers it to try and absolve himself of any blame. Prime ripped his arm off, the entire sequence in IC is Prime being a retarded manchild throwing a tantrum and maiming and killing a bunch of people while he was doing it.Johns would then turn this whole thing with Risk into a running gag where he became a criminal because the trauma and pain from his injury made him addicted to pain pills and then Prime just casually rips his other arm off in what was clearly intended to be a comedic moment.
I forgot that getting his other arm ripped off was the last time Risk was ever seen until Taylor randomly used him in his Nightwing run and had a random fucking mook kill him because Taylor is a hateful little fag.
>>154291557Im ESL so I might be wrong, but shouldnt it be "I have been afraid of losing control and of that happening again" ?Also isnt "A bunch of people" very casual for what he is saying / how it influenced him? Shouldnt it be "Many" or a more specific ammount?
>>154301467>They're retconning itThey're not, this whole thing is Manchester trying to bait Prime into old habits.
>>154291557This could've been a cool scene but that writing is atrocious wow
>>154298838Not a single statement was made about your taste, you utter retard.
>>154301545Why's he drawn like a fucking shota twink? Goddamn why are modern DC comics written and drawn for gays?
>>154301745So, yours isn't the 'hot take' he's talking about, obviously.
>>154301745Same reason why he's wearing his old suit?
>>154301693Your exchange with the other anon came down to a difference in taste. He thought the comic should've been written another way because his tastes are different from yours, and you insinuated he was pretentious then called him a pseud over it.
>>154301511>Also isnt "A bunch of people" very casual for what he is saying / how it influenced him?Yes, it is intentionally sounding casual for that tone. Whether it should have been going for that or not is another question.
>>154291557it's prime time is a cool catchphrase tho
>>154302392I asked him(You) to explain his position, which he(You) couldn't, only spouting more pretentious pseud speak.It is what it is.
>>154301745Every stupid decision the big two have made post recession has been based on the belief that comics will eventually somehow align with the rest of publishing and attract a predominantly female audience. “Not working? Make it gayer!”
>>154305395If they wanted a more female audience, they need to bring a lot more relationships into their stories.Look at Spider-Mans recent runs, they are infamously shit at it. Slott and the BND boys are not bringing women in the door.
>>154301745Because he’s supposed to be younger in this memory I guess
