Alright /co/, I'm gonna be real. This guy literally only exists because Marvel thought it'd be cool to have a story where someone stops the Juggernaut but couldn't think of who could do such a thing. How do you actually make this guy an interesting/compelling villain?
I really like the concept of "all repressed evil just turn into something and it wants revenge".It really makes you think that choosing good is not enough. Our inherent flaws, our unavoidable proclivity for evil, in itself harms the world and ourselves. True cleansing of the world would destroy humanity altogether. Only Christ could save us.
>>154603522Okay.Go with the whole xavier represses his true negative feelings as well as his full powers. Ditch the magneto infection bullshit and go with him being affected by his battle with the shadowking and ultimately succumbing to his worst nature while having a full mental break. He seeks the empowerment and protection of mutant kind and sees genosha as foolish and ridiculous. A way to put mutants in one place to be destroyed and further alienate mutants as something other rather then humans with the xgene. He knows the xgene is going to die out and is only a way to further enhance all of humanity through it's descendants and that it will inevitably lead to war and genocide of one side or the other and ultimately the death of both.Will begin to lay the ground work for the destruction of all who oppose mutants as well as mutant and human co-existence. Starting with the destruction of krakoa...I mean genosha, magneto and the acolytes then ultimately his greatest hope to help mutants...the Xmen. AND CHANGE HIS GODDAMNED COSTUME!!Black and White/Gold. Just change the magneto glaze helmet and cholor scheme and design language would be best.
>>154603661>CHANGE HIS GODDAMNED COSTUMEthey did that years ago
X men 97 is setting up well, just have all of Xavier’s repressed anger and rage funnel into magneto’s helmet
>>154603522I'd personally say that he should be moreso a representation of Xavier's worries and fears that his dream is unfeasible and impossible to achieve without forcing it upon others. Apocalypse is "strong eat the weak", Onslaught is "all will be equal, whether they like it or not". Think Miquella from Elden Ring if he wasn't a gay little twink or whatever.
>>154603675HEY LETS MAKE IT ABOUT THAT OLD KIKE AGAIN!No fuck that. It's 100% xaviers rage ditch the retarded associations with magneto beyond seeing him as a fool he lets live because he was his best friend at one point and some part of him sees him as a necessary evil. Outside of that nothing.>>154603669You mean that retarded SO EDGY SO HARDCORE bullshit towards the end of onslaught where he looked more monster then human? Fuck that dindu nuffin bulslhit. Xavier loses and has to deal with his repressed rage and anger and leaves with his bird wifey to find peace and occasionally sends his astral body to help the xmen.
>>154603522Give him badass lines and let one shot the cast and everyone will love him for aura farming
>>154603703I don't think Charlie X lets Erik liveI think they genuinely can't kill each other
>>154603522Put some skull in there.
>>154603718nobody loved him back then when he did that
Needs more Xavier influence in the design. And then have his origin come about as more of the result of Magneto and Xavier selfishly fighting each other instead of for mutants. So the character ends up as the worst elements of the 2 combined.
>>154603522Make him the final boss of a crossover fight game and give him a cool theme>https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=WCU4K4qyYOc
>>154603973THE DREAM IS DEAD
>>154603777He crushed the fucking juggernaut like a tincan and broke the nearly unbreakable mystical link between marko and the gem of cytorrak. Magneto litterally can't do shit against xavier if he uses his full power and wants him dead. Brainwiping him was the LEAST of what he could have done to him. He can pulverize his head inside of his helmet that's not even a challange for him. There is no level of electromagnetic force that can protect him from full power xavier. That's a fact. Magneto lives for the same reason any villain that should have been and could easily be killed by the heros lives. Economics. >>154603718Insane xavier floating like an end boss horror movie villain standing in front of the defeated xmen. He easily walks through his magnatic forcefield and grabs his throat with his psychic armor covered arm. Pulls off his helmet and says "The dream is dead" before pulverizing his head. He then mutates the helmet into something more befitting himself and puts it on. Before he leaves. Slowly. Not a single person there powerful enough to stop him. He seemingly teleports heading into space . An A bright explosion that brightens the air above america to the point that it looks like a local supernova occurs. Asteroid M or what's left of it falls to the earth into multiple places. He was nothing but a string of aura moments and "Oh shit xavier is coming" scenes. Till they realized he was broken as fuck and needed him to carry the idiot ball rather then write a satisfying conclusion.
in a sense onslaught is kinda like a proto-batkekhero and his arch-enemy fuse into an unstoppable villain who just kinda wants to kill everything
>>154603522If you HAVE to keep the Magneto-style design (and that's probably necessary) just make him Magneto's unlocked final form after Chuck does the wrong thing in his brain.
>>154603522make him the final boss for a crossover arcade fighter with a japanese company
>>154603906Times are different now
>>154603703no I mean when they made him into a 16 year old girl you fucking casual
>>154604068Fuck you. Magneto sucks and I'm sick of this bitch hanging around. If Onslaught isn't full power Xavier after a massive mental breakdown from carrying the entire mutant and human balance on his back then it doesn't need to be done. He'll just be magneto glaze + big dumb shitty villain to beat up.
>>154604128Suck ass faggot shit made by people who should be fired and blackballed? Hot damn. Tell us all about this cool new direction for the character you fucking wiki reading cuck.
>>154603619heh, true.
>>154604158no you fucking casual
>>154603522I always thought he was super magneto, still have no idea who is he tho.
counterpoint he looks cool as fuck
>>154603522Make Onslaught humanity's hatred towards humanity + Magneto's hatred + Professor X's repressed dark side/ hatredAlternatively, make Onslaught a cosmic entity that punishes Earth when human- mutant tension gets too high. Make it a recurring cycle: human-mutant tension reaches its peak, Onslaught appears and devastates the planet, wrecking both sides. Make it clear that Onslaught will return if things get that bad again. If one faction dies out or gets genocide by the other, Onslaught will wipe out the other faction.
>>154603661>CHANGE THE COOLEST THING EVER!!!You have AIDS
Just came up with an idea. I likethe angle of evil being made manifest. However the Xavier angle always bothered me and the method of creating him is a bit weird.What if it was just Magneto being corrupted by merging with something like Apocalypse's armor and the techno-organic virus? That way it keeps its look and has a simpler origin.
i am so glad no one of you write comics for a living because all your ideas are retarded
>>154603522I mean, the concept of a fusion of professor x and magneto is cool.
>>154603522which marvel vs capcom game is this guy from?
>>154609465Indeed he is. Even in video games.
>>154609499this has to be one of my favorite looks for him, something about those oversized samurai looking shoulder pads is just doing it for me and I genuinely don’t know why.
>>154609782Something about the way they designed these visuals poses and attack animation back then were really unique, fun and enjoyable to look at. Even old 2D games like Darkstalkers and Street Fighters 3rd Strike had astounding animation pattern that makes modern 3D animation less enjoyable for me.
>>154609499>>154609782>>154609929Reminds me of a batshit idea:What if onslaught was just another form of THE VOID? Like I kinda like the idea the void may or may not just be a traveling entity of darkness that got to be onslaught from feeding off of both chuck and magnetos power and stuff, you know?
>>154605327YES
>>154609492Killer Combat vs King of Streets Turbo II
>>154609499Yeah, he must be magento thoughts + xavier thoughts + evil
>>154603522I feel like we are being asked to rough draft the 97 writing teams work...
>>154603619Amen.
>>154609929Sure but Megaman and Roll can pretty much shoot him in the shins in his first form.
>>154611582Well, they had to be useful for something
>>154603522What is this guy's deal and why does he look like Xtreme Magneto?
>>154611582>>154612018
>>154604052Onslaught did that with telepathically boosted magnetism, you're thinking of the Phoenix with your telekinesis ideas.
>>154603619Based and same
>>154612173>>154610424
>>154609465It is quite honestly the worst part about Onslaught and the thing everyone, including me, fucking loathed about it. It was fucking shit.It's still fucking shit.
>>154608423I don't think I would had conceived Onslaught if I were a comicbook writer.
>>154609465this is the same thought process that led to batkek taking over the DC universe
So is this just trying to advertise for X-men 97?
>>154612215>telepathically boosted magnetismMagneto at no fucking time nor any mutant with magnetism powers at any time has NEVER shown the ability to do anything to mystical anything particularly. Psionics however are so instrumental to magic powers that everyone who learns it has to have basic psionic ability to even use any of it and defend themselves from magic and psionic attacks. Xavier ripping juggernauts gem out is 100% within xaviers wheelhouse.
>>154603522I liked it when CHADulk beat his ass.
The seeds of Onslaught already exist in the cartoon, with the Phoenix Saga having Xavier lose complete control, and his ID came out to terrorize his X-Men. They can easily magnify it after all the events of season 2 of 97, with him not only losing control this time but having a mental breakdown trying to replace Magneto now that he's died.
The interesting part to me is that Xavier having a bad side isn't exactly something that was a new concept before Onslaught.Claremont had the X-Men fight Xavier's repressed dark side, Dark Xavier, while Mantlo had him appear as The Entity as part of a crossover with the Micronauts.
>>154614578>having a mental breakdown trying to replace Magneto now that he's died.Replace him how? The fucking hell importance does magneto have outside of being the guy that they know will help during a bad end event...that he probably caused by being a racist elitist terrorist fucktard.No really.
>>154614702Did you gloss over the fact that Magneto is Xavier's best friend? Did you also forget that, despite all the shit he caused being a racist elitist terrorist, he trusted him to lead the X-Men in hopes of him turning over a new leaf?
>>154614636What if this was the origin for Onslaught?
>>154614781Who gives a fuck. I've had best friends and friends I had to cut off for doing or saying really out of the way stuff. Magneto being an unironic nazi supremacist terrorist who's killed millions should be something he cuts him off for and they should be real enemies. His attempts at maintaining his friendship only a part of his attempts to maintain his own good nature.Once the dark repressed anger frustration hatered and his more evil nature breaks free he should give up on that bullshit and magneto should be the first one he kills in a spectacular over the top fashion. A one sided battle that shows magneto only exists because he allows it.
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>>154614964You don't seem to get my point. Erick being Charles ' friend is why his dark side would replace him, as he would be on his side for showing how superior a mutant kind is, but will also demonstrate him surprising Magneto by not only proving his superiority to humanity but also to the very mutants he swore to help. His replacing Mageto is to show he is better than him in his dark mind rather than thinking of him as his best friend.
>>154614636>>154614921Xavier's bad side was also in the cartoon >>154614578; the Entity design also became his astral plane battle form in the later seasons of said cartoon.
>>154615128What do you mean by replace? There's a designated villain role or something? That doesn't make any sense. There's no white hat black hat trading between each other in this. Can you explain this too me?
>>154608189Fuck I was half-asleep when I wrote this so that's why the typos are there.I guess Onslaught is really cool as a look. But the same telepathy/telekinesis shit and energy blasts always bored me. That's partly why another take on Apocalypse is why I suggested it and perhaps could focus his vague moveset further with adding Magneto into it. Then the story implications of merging him and Apoc's tech could be a better way of returning him to an evil version instead of what they did with him and Fatal Attractions. But if we go with the timeline that they did have, you could make my idea interesting by using the techno virus to infect the sentinels and also have Magneto now have access to centuries of knowledge and go after people like Mr. Sinister and other mutant threats like reavers and purifiers. In the process, Onslaught becomes so powerful and goes against every hero like the one we got but now Magneto has to contend with the fact that it took all this power concentrated in himself and everyone now becoming even more fearful of him, backfiring on his goals and Charle's goals for mutants.
>>154615128read this as a kid. awesome then. awesome now. simple as.
>>154615368>You always think too small, Erick, for I think too much.>I WILL succeed where you have FAILED in ushering in a new age of mutant kind as its new GODIt's not that deep.
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>>154614921This evil side looks like something out of Star Trek TNG. Did that influence the comics at all way before Patrick was cast? Like did Chuck and other stuff get influenced by Picard or other Star Trek ideas at the time?
>>154603522Didn't he get a huge redemption arc by being the final boss of one of the most beloved fighting games by autists in the 90s?
>>154603522>This guy literally only exists because Marvel thought it'd be cool to have a story where someone stops the Juggernaut but couldn't think of who could do such a thing.You've got it the wrong way around. The original idea was simply "the most powerful foe the X-Men have faced since Dark Phoenix", and they opened with having him easily beat Juggernaut to build up his threat level.>How do you actually make this guy an interesting/compelling villain?He's a big crossover endboss villain, he's already everything he needs to be, he doesn't need deep characterization or le tragic backstory any more than any of the others do. And as others have said, this thread does have the distinct smell of the cartoon writers looking for ideas.
>>154615603Onaslaught being Xavier's dark-side using Celestial tech and styling itself after Magneto would work perfectly IMHO.
>>154616088I'm pretty sure it predates TNG
>>154603522he only exists because marvel was scrambling from the bankruptcy and needed something to happened to explain the upcoming heroes reborn storyline
>>154616088Thats probably true. The Shi-ar and Phoenix Saga was probably influnced by StarTreks federation as well as from DCs Legion.
>>154617099No, Onslaught was already in the works as an X-Men storyline, it got expanded into a Marvel-wide event when Marvel editorial learned Heroes Reborn was definitely going ahead and they suddenly had to remove the FF and Avengers from 616.
>>154616827>Didn't he get a huge redemption arc by being the final boss of one of the most beloved fighting games by autists in the 90s?If you mean exposing him to the wider audience that grew up with the X-Men cartoon, then yes.
>>154614578>IDYou mean The Id?
>>154618535Yeah, more or less.
>>154603619Didn't this nigga turn into a tree?
>>154615128Honestly works
>>154603619Amen. Christ is King.